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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

    Votes: 1,312 83.1%
  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 27 1.7%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 204 12.9%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 35 2.2%

  • Total voters
    1,578
3,064
27,024
173
Update - 107 ~ The Secret Practice
Ab tak...

Car me ghuste hi usse aisa mehsoos hua jaise usne kuch kho diya tha. Aisa lag raha tha jese uske dil me koi sui chubho raha tha. Peeda!!!

Jaise woh himmat hi haar chuki thi.

'N-Nooooo!!!!'

Accelerator par perr rakh usne ek jhatke me gaadi aage bhaga dii,

*VRRRRROOOOOOMMMM*

Abhi abhi...

Ye kya ho gaya tha?


Ab aage...

"Haah! Haah! Haaaahhhh! Urrggghh!!"

*Thud*

Ladkhada ke ek shareer achanak neeche zameen par gira. Saasein tezz, dhadkane tezz, aankhein ekdum laal, poora badan paseene se lathpat, aankho me dhundhapann aur nirantar khaase jaa raha tha woh shaks.

*Cough* *Cough*

*Cough* *Cough*

*Gwaaakhhhhhhhhh!!*

Khoon!! Muh se uske dherr saara khoon nikla.

[Nooooooooooo~ Masterrrrrrr!!!!!!!]

Pari zorr se cheenkhi. Beshaq, ye Veer hi tha. Wine peene ke kuch derr baad hi Veer ke shareer ke andar na jaane kya kuch hone laga tha.

Woh jese hi gira, Pari ki cheenkhe bhi dheere dheere dheemi sunaayi padne lagi usse.

Usne apne honth khole kuch kehne ke liye par thar-tharaate hue woh waapas band ho gaye.

[Maaaaassssttttteeeerrrrrrrrr~]

Ek dard bhari akhiri awaaz hi Pari ki sunn paaya woh. Aur agle shan hi,

Uski aankhein band ho gayi.

[Nooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!]

***

"Aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhnnnnnnnn~"

Achanak jhatke ke saath ek ladki apne bistar se uth gayi. Din ka samay tha. Lagbhag 1 baj rahe the. Woh apne kamre me hi thoda araam farmaane ke liye laiti hui thi jab uski halki neend lag gayi thi. Aur neend me usne na jaane aisa kya dekha jiske chalte woh hadbadaate hue uth ke baith gayi.

Shayad, ek bura sapna tha.

Uske kapde paseene se bheege hue the. Khubsoorat se chehre par bhi paseene ki boonde saji hui thi. Haafte hue usne apne chehre par se ek towel se paseena pocha. Aur ek gehri saans lete hue woh kitchen ki orr chal padi.

Ek glass thanda paani peene ke baad woh waapas aayi, kamre ka darwaza andar se band kiya aur bistar par baith gayi.

'Ye bechaini...!'

Usse kuch theek nahi lag raha tha. Usne fauran hi apna phone uthaaya, usme gallery kholi aur uski nazre ek tasveer par jaake theher gayi.

'Thode din aur... Thode din me hi... Tum meri aankho ke saamne hoge. Aur fir uske baad... Tumhe kahi nahi jaane dungi mein!'

'Hum firse ek saath rahenge. Mom se saare raaz khulwa ke rahungi mein. Just wait a bit more. I will come to you. Very soon! My younger one!!'

Aur khud mann me ek lakshya thaan, woh waapas se bistar par lait gayi.

***
Las Vegas ~ 1:47 AM

*VRRRRROOOOOOMMMM*

Ek gaadi sann-sanaati hui raaste par tezz raftaar me bhaagti jaa rahi thi. Derr raat ka samay tha. Lekin, roads par abhi bhi kuch gaadiya aati jaati maalum pad rahi thi. Ye Vegas tha, jo jaana hi apni night life ke liye jaata tha.

Divya ka perr accelerator par tha aur woh saaye-saaye gaadi bhaga rahi thi. Aankho me ek nami chhaayi hui thi,

'Why?? Why Veer?? Kyu kiya tumne aisa? Tum bewakoof nahi ho. You solved the Nightwalker's case. Th-Then how can you just...!? God damn it!!! Tum aisa qadam kese utha sakte ho? J-Just why?? Just tell me you were acting. Just tell me!! I just can't...!!!'

Apne hi mann me uth rahe sawaalo ke woh khud hi uttar dete jaa rahi thi. Ye achanak se kya ho gaya tha? Sab kuch theek chal raha tha. Fir eka-ek Fred ki maut aur ab Veer ki haalat ne unhe chinta me daal diya tha.

Kisi ne bhi Veer ko glass se wine peete nahi dekha tha. Lekin sabhi jaante the ki usne kya kiya tha. Camera uski chest ki pocket me laga tha. Aur jab usne wine ka glass neeche rakha tha. Woh khaali ho chuka tha. Zaahir hai ki usne wine pee thi. Aur fir woh khoon...!!

Itne logo ke beech bhala kese kisi ko murkh bana sakta tha woh?

Aur yahi baat Divya ko bechain kare jaa rahi thi.

Jo Divya Veer ki firki lene ke liye aatur rehti thi, usse chidhaane ka koi mauka nahi chorrti thi, uske saath nakli flirting karte hue zara bhi peeche nahi hatati thi, aaj wahi Divya uske liye aasu baha rahi thi. Ye naina roye jaa rahe the uske.

Kyu bhala? Divya ki khud nahi samajh aa raha tha. Woh kabse itni emotional bann gayi? Lekin fir kyu ye nain baar baar aasuo ko pochhne ke baad bhi bheeg rahe the?

Ek jo kaaran tha woh tha subah ka unka milan. Bhale hi baahar se Divya kitna hi kyu na keh de ki uske aur Veer ke beech ye sab nahi hona chahiye tha. Par andar hi andar kahi na kahi jese woh khud chaahti thi ye aur khush bhi thi.

Aur sangam hone ke baad, thoda sa bhi Prem na jaage, aisa bhala kese ho sakta tha? Uske dil me ab Veer ke liye ek alag jagah bann chuki thi. Jiski jagah ab koi dusra nahi le sakta tha.

Usne turant gear neeche kar gaadi chauthe gear me daali aur speed aur badha dii.

Aur kuch hi minutes ke andar woh doori bhi tay kar lii.

*Screeeeeeccccchhhh*

Brakes maarte hue zorr se usne gaadi roki.

*Thud*

Aur darwaaza band kar woh seedha daudi andar kii orr.

Baahar security guards nahi khade the, aur toh aur andar se kayi log bhaagte hue baahar nikal rahe the.

Mike team aur police ke sang shayad pehle hi andar ghus chuka tha.

Andar se baahar nikalte logo ko ignore kar woh daudte bhaagte hue seedha hotel me andar ghus gayi.

Saamne ka nazaara shaant pada hua tha.


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Neeche toh koi chahal pahal hi samajh nahi aa rahi thi. Bas upar se neeche aa rahe log hi dikhaayi de rahe the usse.

Jo ki swabhaavik tha. Veer bhi toh second floor me hi gaya tha. Ye dhyaan me aate hi Divya tezz qadmo ke saath seedha stairs ki orr bhaagi.

Lift lene ke liye samay nahi tha. Aur wese bhi, second floor par jaldi pohuchne ke liye khud ke perr hi sabse accha vikalp the.

Andar ghuste hi Divya ki aankho ke saamne chaka-chaundh kar dene waala drishya tha.

Detectives aur police ki team sabhi maujooda logo ko rok ke unhe baithane ki koshish me lagi thi. Sab ke sab under arrest me the. Nolan ke nirdesh ke baad hi Mike samet sabhi ne andar dhaava bol diya tha.

Ek bhi bach ke jaane na paaye, jitne masks lagaaye the woh sabhi iss party ka hissa the. Police ki madad se inn sabhi logo ko giraft me le liya gaya tha.

Divya ki nazre idhar se udhar duvidha me daud rahi thi. Aur tabhi usse dhyaan aaya,

'The washroom!!! Right!!!!'

Aur woh fauran bhaagi...

Aage badhte hi usse Mike nazar aaya. Toh Divya ne ek tezz awaaz lagaayi,

"Miiiiiiikkkke!!!!!"

Mike : We got this!!!! Go and search for him instead!!!

Usne chillaate hue bataaya.

Police aur uske seh karmiyo ne yaha ki paristhiti sambhaal lii thi. Mike ne fauran hi Divya ko Veer ko dhundhne ke liye kaha.

Aur Divya turant haa me sarr hilaate hue sarpat daud laga dii,

Samay badhta jaa raha tha. Kahi aisa na ho ki waqt ret ki tarah uski mutthi se fisal jaaye aur Veer....!

'Nahiiiii!!!! Nahi!!!! Veeeeerrrr!!!'

Woh mann me chillaayi,

Uske dil ki dhadkan tezz ho rakhi thi.

*Thud*

Pohuchte hi usne washroom ka ek darwaaza khola. Jidhar usse koi dikhaayi na diya.

'Ye waala nahi...! Damn it!!!'

Aur uski ghabraahat aur badh gayi.

Beshaq usne screen par Veer ko washroom jaate dekha tha. Par usse ye yaad nahi tha ki washroom kaun sa tha. Kyuki yaha line se 8 se 10 washrooms the. Aur sabhi ke sabhi behad bade.

"Veeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrr!!!!!"

Woh usse pukaari!!! Veer ka naam le le kar woh darwaaze kholti rahi. Ek na ek me toh milega hi Veer.

*Thud*

'God damn it!!! Where are you....!!???'

4 darwaaze khol ke usne chaaro washrooms check kar liye the, Par Veer kahi bhi nazar nahi aa raha tha.

*Dhak* *Dhak*

Aur na hi woh jawaab de raha tha. Uski bechaini aur badh gayi.

Agar usse kuch ho gaya toh? Toh kya jawaab degi woh Suhana ko? Khud Divya iss buri khabar ke liye taiyaar nahi thi.

"Veeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrr!!!!!???"

Usne punaah pukaara aur jese hi usne paachve darwaaze ko kholna chaaha,

*Click*

Darwaaza apne aap khul gaya.

Divya : Haahhh??

Aur Divya ki aankho ke saamne tha, Veer!!

Jeeta jaagta Veer. Apne jyo ke tyo haal me.

Lekin baal thode bikhre hue the uske. Saath hi aisa lag raha tha jese kahi bhaag daud karke aaya tha woh. Aankhein bhi halki halki laal maalum pad rahi thi.

"Ohhh God!!!"

Jo bechaini, jo ghabraahat, jo darr Divya ko abhi inn chand pal pehle pareshaan kar raha tha. Woh Veer ko apni nazro ke saamne dekhte hi jese chhumantar ho gaya.

Aur agle hi shan,

Woh aage badh Veer se kass ke lipat gayi. Apne haath uske baalo ke peeche le jaate hue usne Veer ke sarr ko zorr se pakad apne kandhe par tika liya.

Iss waqt aisa prateet ho raha tha jese ye ek badi behan ka chote bhai ke prati prem tha. Divya iss samay Veer ki badi behan ki tarah hi lag rahi thi.

Divya : Ohhhh thank god!!! Thank god! You're okay!!!

Aur kuch pal bas khamoshi chhaayi rahi. Divya aur Veer ek dusre ke aalingan me bane rahe.

Kuch derr baad akhir kaar usne Veer ko chorra aur usse dekhte hue apne sawaalo ki jhadi laga dii.

Divya : Kya tha ye sab haan? Veeerrr??? Bolo kuch? Why did you do that?? Kyu kiya aisa Veer??? Kaho? What really happened? Tell me!!!

Veer ki aankhein adh khuli thi. Woh Divya ko dekh zaroor raha tha. Par jese uske bol par uska dhyaan hi nahi tha. Uska dhyaan toh kahi orr hi tha.

*Ding*

[Mission : 'Assassinate the Pitcher' has been completed.]

*Ding*

[4000 Points have been rewarded.]

*Ding*

[500 Fame points have been rewarded.]

*Ding*

[Scroll ~ Profit Path has been rewarded.]

[Maaaaaaaassssttttteeerrrrr~]

Pari ki ek chintajanak pukaar uske mann me goonji.

[Why did you do that???? I told you not to-- ]

'Pari! I'm okay!' Veer ne ahista se jawaab diya usse.

Na chaahte hue bhi Pari ko shaant hona pada. Aisa laga jese woh ro rahi thi. Waqai me. Uski udaasi aur niraasha saaf uski awaaz me jhalak rahi thi.

Aur tabhi,

"Kaha kho gaye??? Veeerrrr!???"

Saamne se Divya ki awaaz sunn Veer ko hosh aaya. Woh apne khayalaato se baahar aaya.

Divya uss se jawaab maang rahi thi.

Divya : Bolo? Kya tha ye sab Veer? Kyu pee tumne woh wine??

Veer : Kya aapne mujhe wine peete hue dekha?

Divya (jhepte hue) : Huh?

Veer : Mene pucha ki kya aapne mujhe wine peete hue dekha?

Divya : ??? T-Tumne wine nahi pee toh kya piya tha? Bewakoof mat samjho Veer! We all saw it. Bhale hi tumhe directly nahi dekh paaye hum kyuki camera tumhari chest pocket me tha par humne dekha tha kese tumne glass hawa me upar uthaaya aur waapas rakha toh wine nahi thi usme. Where did it went?

Veer : It went right here!

Veer ne apni coat ki inner chest pocket ke andar se kuch nikaalte hue usse dikhaaya.

Aur usse dekhte hi Divya ke hosh udd gaye.

Divya : T-This...!

Veer : Yes!!!

Divya : Y-You--

Uske haatho me ek chota sa container tha.

Divya : N-No!!!! Tumhara matlab hai...!?

Veer : Hmm!

Kisne kaha Veer wine ko pee raha tha? Veer muh me zaroor bhar raha tha wine ko lekin bharne ke baad woh aise dikhaata jese woh wine ko gutak chuka hai. Par mauka dekhte hi woh apni inner coat ki pocket me usse thook ke uss container me daal raha tha.

Divya usse bhoot bann ke dekhe jaa rahi thi. Usse vishvaas hi nahi ho raha tha.

Divya : T-Tumne ye kiya tha asal me!?

Veer : Mein paagal hu kya jo woh wine piyunga? Hmm?

Divya : R-Right! T-That was really smart! Par... Par itne logo ke beech tumne kese...!?

Veer : I just got lucky!!!

Divya : I-I see~ Ye boht hi acchi baat hai. Kisi ko kuch pata nahi chala tumhaare iss container ke baare me. Y-You did great Veer. Jab screen me tumhe wine peete dekha toh hum logo ki jaan halak me atak gayi thi. I swear. Suhana bechaari toh... I hope she's alright! It's... It's really good that you're fine.

Usne Veer ke kandhe par haath rakh thodi bheegi aankho se jataaya.


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Veer ne haami bhari.

Divya : But wait!!!! Y-Your blood!!! Khoon kese aaya tumhe?? Agar tumne nahi pii toh...

Veer : That was a facade!!

Divya : Wh-What?

Veer : Woh khoon nahi tha!

Divya : Toh kya tha?

Veer : Just some color!

Divya : Color???

Veer (nods) : Right!!!

Divya : Par...

Veer : I prepared it beforehand.

Divya : K-Kya matlab!?

Veer : Woh emergency ke liye tha. I needed help. Lekin aenn waqt pe communication device kaam karna band kar diya tha. Meri awaaz aap tak nahi pohuch rahi thi. Uske liye ye sab karna pada taaki department fauran hi help bhej sake.

Divya : Ahhh!!! I-I see!!! T-Toh ye baat thi. Thank god!!! Everything is fine!

Divya ne kehte hue uske coat se woh communication device nikaal liya aur usse halki muskaan dwte hue boli,

Divya : You don't need this now.

Veer haan me sarr hilaate hue aage badh gaya.

Veer : Come! Aur bhi kuch baatein jaan'ni hai abhi.

Divya : Right!!!

Divya usse jaate hue dekhti rahi. Par akasmaat hi uska dhyaan Veer se liye gaye communication device par gaya. Aur,

Divya : H-Hello? Divya speaking!! Can anyone here me??

Aur uske itna bolte hi,

"Yes!!! We can hear you! Loud and clear!!!"

Dusri orr se department ke seh karmi ki spasht awaaz sunaayi dii. Divya hairat me apne haatho me uss device ko dekhti reh gayi.

'This... This is working fine!!!'

Kabhi woh Veer ki peeth ko dekhti jaha Veer dheere dheere apni jebo me haath daale araam se corridor me jaa raha tha. Toh kabhi uss device ko dekhti.

Antatah usne ek baar fir daud lagaayi,

Divya : Veeeeerrrrrrrr!!!!!

Woh chillaayi,

Veer (palat'te hue) : Hmm?

Divya : Ye... Ye toh chal raha hai. It's working fine!!!

Veer : Ohh!? Is it? Well that's good! Kuch derr oehle nahi chal raha tha.

Kehte hue woh ek baar fir aage badh gaya. Machine thi. Kabhi chalti toh kabhi nahi.

Parantu, Divya usse bas jaata hua dekhti rahi. Uski kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha. What just happened?

Bhaagte hue woh bhi Veer ki chaal se chaal milaayi aur corridor ke baahar nikal gayi.

***

Baahar aate hi nazara kuch aisa tha ki police ne sab apne control me le liya tha. Aur toh aur Mike ne unke saath milke kayi raaz bhi khol ke rakh diye the.

Mike fauran hi Divya ke paas aaya aur usse sab kuch bataaya.

Jo log yaha masks pehen ke party manaane aate the. Ye darasal koi aur nahi wahi log the jo Nightwalker ke mansion me ho rahe khoon ke khel ko live dekh uska lutf uthaate the.

Udhar Nightwalker ka poora live session dark web par daala jaata tha aur idhar log aankho dekhi hatya ka maza lete the. Yahi inki fetish thi. Na keval woh ye sab dekhte the balki iss par kaafi paisa bhi fekte the. Bets bhi lagti thi. Jiska poora fayda Nightwalker aur Pitcher ko hota tha.

Pitcher ki bhi fetish thi jo unn se aur hatke thi. Usse sundar se sundar actresses, models aur celebrities ko maarne ka shauk tha.

Udhar Nightwalker ka maut ka nanga naach jab khatam hota toh idhar uski khushi me Pitcher party rakhta, jisme woh fir kisi ko maut ke ghaat utaarta.

Yaha do tarfi hatya ka kaand chaalu tha.

Udhar se Nightwalker toh idhar se Pitcher.

Dono hi ek dusre ke sang business me bhi the. Woh jo cameras Mansion me the. Woh isliye the. Unke zariye hi ye log masks pehen ke yaha masoom ki bali ka maza uthaate the.

Chuki aisi footages kisi platform par nahi daali jaa sakti thi isliye Dark web ka sahara liya jaata tha.

Aur inhi cameras me se unhe Veer ke baare me pehle hi pata lag chuka tha.

Par ek satya aur tha. Jiski wajah se poora department maat khaa gaya tha.

Woh ye ki...

Nat ne jo invitation card diya tha. Uss par ek serial number bhi tha. Ye serial number card par bhi rehta tha aur...

Aur unke paas data sheet me nhi feed rehta tha. Jab Fred uss card ko leke entry kiya tha.

Toh serial number match karte hi unhe pata lag chuka tha ki Fred ke paas jo card tha woh darasal Natalia ko bheja gaya tha.

Poori chori yahi pakad gayi thi unki. Security ne Pitcher ko sachet kar diya tha. Lekin uske bawajo Pitcher ne usse bulaaya. Ab koi darwaaze tak aaya ho toh bhala uski khaatir daari kese bhul sakta tha woh?

Aur Fred bhi...

Maut ke ghaat utaar diya gaya. Khel khatam.

Yahi haal Veer ke sang bhi hua. Card toh uske paas bhi wahi tha. Nat ka.

Aur usse dekhte hi unhe fir abhaas ho chuka tha. Saath hi Veer ki photo bhi unke paas thi.

Lekin Veer ke mann me jo baat abhi bhi khatak rahi thi woh ye thi ki unko khabar kisne dii thi ki woh yaha aane waala hai? Aur mask pehen'ne ke bawajood bhala kese pehchaan liye woh usse? Iska jawaab woh dhundh raha tha. Aur kuch kuch usse samajh aa chuka tha.

Mike ne ye saari jankaari jese hi bataayi toh Divya ekdum gusse se laal ho gayi. Ab inki chori pakdi gayi thi toh zaahir hai kisi na kisi aadmi ne saara sach ugal hi diya tha Mike ko.

Par iss khel me jin maasumo ki jaan gayi unka kya? Daniel, Chester, Jacob, Fred kese kitne hi maare gaye. Woh toh ab waapas nahi aa sakte the na.

Mike : I have something to show you! Hurry!

Mike ne kehte hue unn dono ko hi kahi le jaane ke liye kaha.

Jaldbaazi me woh uss dining table par pohuche jaha Veer baitha hua tha.

Par jese hi woh waha aaye,

Divya ko ek bada sa jhatka laga,

Divya : Y-Ye toh...!!!

Neeche ek dead body padi thi. Aur ye koi aur nahi tha. Wahi tha...

Pitcher!!!!

Muh se uske dherr saara jhaag nikla hua tha. Saaf tha ki woh zeher se marra tha.

Divya : Isn't he the...!?

Mike (nods) : Yes!!! The same guy who served the wine.

Divya : This...!!

Mike : He used poison to kill others. That wine bottle contains poison.

Mike ne wahi rakhi wine bottle ki orr ishaara karte hue bataaya jo Pitcher ne Veer ke liye kholi thi.

Divya (bauhe sikodte hue) : We are still missing something. How did he die?

Veer : I know it.

Veer ke kehte hi sabhi ki nazre uss par focused ho gayi. Hairaani me woh sabhi usse dekhe,

Divya : Whaaattt???

Veer : The secret practice...!!!

Mike : Secret practice?

Divya : Veer saaf saaf shabdo me kaho!!! Please be quick!!!

Veer : Wanna know the name?

Divya : *gulps*

Mike : !!!???

Aur fir Veer ke muh se ek shabd nikla,


"MITHRIDATISM"

Jisse sunte hi Divya ke poore badan ke raungte khade ho gaye.

Aur uske kaanpte haatho se Veer ka woh device gir gaya. Kyuki woh jaanti thi. Woh bhali bhaati jaanti thi iss ek shabd ka matlab kya tha.

Mike ki samajh me na aaya. Usne apna phone nikaal google kar uss ek shabd ka matlab search kiya aur jese hi usne uske baare me jaana. Uska badan khud kaanp utha.

Mithridatism, ek aisi practice jisme insaan kam maatra me khud zeher leta hai. Maatra itni ki jaan ke liye ghaatak na bane.

Mithridates VI jo Pontus ke Raja the. Maana jaata hai ki woh apni maut ko lekar itne darre hue rehte the ki unhe harr samay yahi lagta tha ki koi unhe chalaaki se zeher deke maar dega. Ye puraatan kaal me ek aam baat thi. Raja maharajao ko ye bhay aksar bana rehta tha ki kahi koi unka apna hi unke saath vishvaas-ghaat na kar de.

Toh zeher unka kuch bigaad hi na paaye isliye Raja Mithridates VI ne kam maatra me khud hi zeher lena shuru kar diya tha. Iss umeed me ki ye kam zeher lete lete ek na ek din unka shareer iss zeher ke khilaaf rog pratirodhak shakti paida kar hi dega. Yaani ki immunity bana hi lega.

Jese aksar hum navjaat shishu ko injections lagwaate hai, fir chaahe woh polio ke ho ya tetanus ke ya anya koi. Inka uddeshya hi yahi rehta hai ki shareer inn rogo ke khilaaf ek immunity bana le. Raja Mithridates ne bhi yahi karne ka socha tha.

Zeher le le ke uske khilaaf ladne ki shakti banana. Parantu ye daav ulta pad gaya tha. Zeher baar baar nirantar lene ke baad wahi zeher unke shareer me ikhatta hone laga tha, jo baad me aage chalke unki maut ka kaaran bann gaya.

Pitcher ka bhi uddeshya wahi tha.

Aur Pitcher...

Ye karne me qamyaab ho gaya tha.


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Aisa nahi tha ki aap yadi iss practice ko apnaate ho toh aapki maut nischit hai.

Hargiz nahi! Yadi non-biological poisons ko liya jaaye toh ye sambhav hai ki aap kuch poisons ke khilaaf immunity nirmit kar sakte ho.

Jo vish ka pyaala hum dusro ko dete hai woh ek na ek din hume khud bhi peena padta hai. Ab tak ye baat Pitcher par sahi se laagu nahi ho rahi thi. Par Veer ke aate hi...

Kaam tamaam ho chuka tha.

Divya : Quick!!! We have to get back to the department. There are still many questions that are left unanswered.

Woh kehti hue aage badhi, Mike bhi haami bharte hue peeche peeche gaya. Parantu idhar Veer ki aankhein Pitcher ki laash par hi tiki hui thi.

Unn aankho me bhayanak gussa tha. Ekdum laal ho rakhi thi woh. Aisa lag raha tha Veer abhi uski laash pe bhi toot padega aur cheer phaad dega.

'I almost died, you bastard!!!'

Woh mann me hi gurraaya.

Uska heart rate bhaiyankar zyaada ho rakha tha. Container?? Kaahe ka container??

Veer Divya ke jaate hue figure ko peeche se dekh raha tha. Siwae Mithridatism ke, jo kuch bhi usne Divya ko bataaya tha.

Woh sab jhooth tha.

Uska asal sach toh uske khud ke antar mann ki gehraiyo aur uske zehen me hi dafn hoke rehne waala tha.

Asli sachhaayi toh kuch aur hi thi...

Jab Veer hotel me ghus neeche Beowulf se check kar raha tha. Tab usse nahi pata tha ki upar balcony me uski photo ko idhar se udhar kiya jaa raha tha.

Parantu...

Ek uss se bhi badi sansani macha dene waali khoj kar lii thi usne.

Neeche uski nazar dur ek aise vyakti par padi thi jo ek wine ki bottle me powder jesa kuch mila raha tha.

Aur ye kya tha ye bataane ki zaroorat hi nahi thi.

Beshaq, zeher!!!!

Veer ka maqsad saaf tha. Na keval usne jaa ke iss baat ka pata kiya balki, usne uss vyakti ke jaate hi wahi powdered substance ki maatra aur badha ke uss wine me daal dii.

Ye sab usne tab kiya tha jab woh vyakti andar kuch lene gaya tha.

Bheed itni thi ki kisi ko kuch nahi pata tha ki kya ho raha hai. Sirf pitcher hi Veer ke baare me jaanta tha aur chand aur log jinhone Veer ki live footage dekhi thi. Par kuch aise bhi the jo Veer ke pehle ke murder footages dekhe hue the. Woh bhi party ka hissa the.

[Maaastttteeerrrrr!!! Wh-Whaattt are you doing??? Aap usme kyu mila rahe ho?]

'Agar mein sahi hu, toh aaj Pitcher nahi bachega!!!'

[N-Noooo!!! Don't tell me you...!!]

'Yes!! I will do it!!!'

Woh waapas se apni jagah par aaya. Aur Veer ne dekha ki kese woh vyakti dobaara se uss wine ki bottle me packing chadha raha tha taaki aisa lage wine ki bottle ekdum nayi hai.

'This motherfucker...!!'

Aur inn chand lamho me, Veer ne ye saara kaam iss prakaar se kiya tha ki uske jeb ka camera saamne ki orr focused tha. Department waalo ko screen me dekh ye katayi pata nahi lag paaya tha ki Veer ne aisa bhi kuch kiya tha.

Fir aaya woh waqt, jab Pitcher ne Veer ko bulaaya.

Uske saath baith ke jab usne Veer ko woh wine offer kii, Pitcher ke chehre par haivaani waali kapti muskaan thi. Kyuki woh jaanta tha ye Veer marrega hi uske haatho.

Par woh nahi jaanta tha... Ki Veer ek aam insaan nahi tha.

Veer ne jese hi wine se bhare glass ko check kiya,

*Ding*

[A glass full of poisoned wine. Don't drink it.]

Sab kuch saamne tha. Ye wahi wine thi. Jisme ferr badal kiya gaya tha.

Aur isliye Pitcher ab tak pakda nahi gaya tha. Kyuki woh bhi same wine peeta tha.

Parantu woh iss zeher se ladne me saksham tha. Lekin aam vyakti nahi.

Aur aise hi sabhi maut ke ghaat utar rahe the.

What a way to kill.

Woh abhi bhi shaitaano ki tarah muskuraa ke Veer ko dekh raha tha.

'This sly bastard!!!'

Lekin aaj khel kuch alag hone waala tha.

'Pari!!! Open the shop!!'

[Yes Master!!!]

'Find me a skill which can cure this poison.'

[Whaaaatttttt??? Nooooooooo!!! Maaassttteeerrrr!!! Aap aisa nahi kar sakte. I'm tell you please stop!!! Please!!! I'm begging you~]

'Pari...!!!'

[Nooo noooo nooooooo!!!!? How can I??? Mat kariye.... Please!!!! I...]

'DO IT!!!!!!'

Jab Veer mann me zorr se cheekha toh Pari ek baar fir apne master ke saamne haar gayi.

[Master! This is the one but...]

'Kitne points? Ohhh! 5000 Points? One time use only? Fine then! Purchase this.'

[O-Okay but...]

'DO IT!!!!'

*Ding*

['Sylvia's Venom Cure' is now available.]

*Ding*

[Host can only use this skill for one time only.
Warning : Beware of extreme pain, vomit and increased heart rate.]

*Ding*

[Sylvia's Venom cure has been activated.]

Aur agle hi pal, Veer ke andar bhaari maatra me white blood cells bann'na shuru ho gaye. Bann toh pehle bhi rahe the par unki process kayi guna badh chuki thi.

Veer ne fir woh kiya jo sabko hairaan kar doya tha.

Usne wine pee lii thi. Par wine toh container me gayi thi?

Laude ka container! Woh container toh washroom ke soap dispenser ka ek toota hua bhaag tha jo Veer ne washroom se nikalne se pehle hathyaa tha.

Woh color? Ghanta color! Woh toh uska khoon tha jo white blood cells ne poison ke roop me usse baahar fikwaaya tha.

White blood cells hi toh immunity ka kaaran hai hamaare shareer me.

Aur uske baad utha tha Veer ko atyant dard, uska nervous system itne khatarnak sthiti se guzar raha tha ki uska andhruni dard aseem hota jaa raha tha.

Aisa laga tha ki woh ab nahi bachega. Aur behosh hone se pehle usse bas Pari ke bol yaad the.

"Veeeeerrrrrrrr!!!???"

Divya ki awaaz usse hosh me laayi.

Veer : Coming!!!

Veer ek akhiri nazar Pitcher par daal aage badh gaya.

Aur baahar aate hi,

*Screeeeeeccccchhhh*

Gaadi ruki aur Suhana aur Nik usme se baahar nikle.

Suhana ki nigaahein jese hi Veer par jaa kar tiki uski aankhein felti chali gayi,

"Veeeeerrrrrrr!!!"

Woh daudte hue aayi aur zorr se kood ke uski baaho me ucchal gayi.

Uske baad wahi hua. Sawaal pe sawaal. Veer ne jese tese maamla shaant kiya.

Par...

Veer : Huh!!??

Woh aashcharya chakit reh gaya jab usne apne bagal me Suhana ko dekha toh...



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Woh ro rahi thi. Unn aankho me pehli baar Veer ne kabhi apne liye itne strong emotions dekhe the.

'Miss Suhana...!?'

Veer : Aap ro rahi ho?

Suhana (muh ferrte hue) : Who's crying? Get lost!

Veer : *smiles*

Divya : Tum dono? Take my keys! Mujhe aane me late ho jaega.

Divya ne car ki keys fekte hue kaha.

Aur kuch derr me hi Veer aur Suhana dono Divya ki car me sawaar hote hue waha se ravaana ho gaye. Udhar ki tehkiqaat lambi chalne waali thi.

Idhar car me,

Suhana (smiles) : I'm happy!

Veer : Why so?

Suhana : Duh!!! You dumb! Kyuki tum sahi salaamat ho.

Veer : Par jab mein waha se jaa raha tha tab toh aap gussa hoke bhaag gayi thi bacchi ki tarah perr patak ke.

Suhana (blushes) : Wh-What do you mean by bacchi ki tarah??? I was looking out for you!! Par tum ho ki... Kherr! Chorro!!! Wait!!

Veer : Kya hua?

Suhana : Udhar park hai!

Veer : So!?

Suhana : Stupid! Stop the car! Mujhe thodi fresh air chahiye.

Suhana ki baat maan Veer ne gaadi park ke paas rok dii.

Ye ek open park tha.

Aur dono hi utar ke kuch derr uss khamoshi me tehelne lage. Koi baat nahi.

Jab achanak se,

Suhana palti aur Veer se zorr se chipak gayi.



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'Huh?'

Suhana : I thought something will happen to you!!!

Usne usse dekh ke bola!!


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Veer : But I'm right here! Hai na?

Suhana : Hmm! And that's what matters.

Kehte hue woh uske kandhe par sarr rakh uss se chipki rahi.


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Jab achanak hi usse dhyaan aaya...

Ki Veer uska pati nahi tha.

Suhana : Ahhh!!! S-Sorry about that...!!

Kehte hue woh dur hatt gayi aur mud gayi.

Veer ko yu akela chorr woh waapas se car ki orr chal dii.

Idhar sheetal leher me, halki hawao me Veer ki lehraati zulfein uski aankho ke saamne fir rahi thi aur nazre tiki hui thi Suhana ke naate hue figure par.

'You are hiding something. Aren't you? Miss Suhana?'
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Update - 107 ~ The Secret Practice
Ab tak...

Car me ghuste hi usse aisa mehsoos hua jaise usne kuch kho diya tha. Aisa lag raha tha jese uske dil me koi sui chubho raha tha. Peeda!!!

Jaise woh himmat hi haar chuki thi.

'N-Nooooo!!!!'

Accelerator par perr rakh usne ek jhatke me gaadi aage bhaga dii,

*VRRRRROOOOOOMMMM*

Abhi abhi...

Ye kya ho gaya tha?


Ab aage...

"Haah! Haah! Haaaahhhh! Urrggghh!!"

*Thud*

Ladkhada ke ek shareer achanak neeche zameen par gira. Saasein tezz, dhadkane tezz, aankhein ekdum laal, poora badan paseene se lathpat, aankho me dhundhapann aur nirantar khaase jaa raha tha woh shaks.

*Cough* *Cough*

*Cough* *Cough*

*Gwaaakhhhhhhhhh!!*

Khoon!! Muh se uske dherr saara khoon nikla.

[Nooooooooooo~ Masterrrrrrr!!!!!!!]

Pari zorr se cheenkhi. Beshaq, ye Veer hi tha. Wine peene ke kuch derr baad hi Veer ke shareer ke andar na jaane kya kuch hone laga tha.

Woh jese hi gira, Pari ki cheenkhe bhi dheere dheere dheemi sunaayi padne lagi usse.

Usne apne honth khole kuch kehne ke liye par thar-tharaate hue woh waapas band ho gaye.

[Maaaaassssttttteeeerrrrrrrrr~]

Ek dard bhari akhiri awaaz hi Pari ki sunn paaya woh. Aur agle shan hi,

Uski aankhein band ho gayi.

[Nooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!]

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"Aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhnnnnnnnn~"

Achanak jhatke ke saath ek ladki apne bistar se uth gayi. Din ka samay tha. Lagbhag 1 baj rahe the. Woh apne kamre me hi thoda araam farmaane ke liye laiti hui thi jab uski halki neend lag gayi thi. Aur neend me usne na jaane aisa kya dekha jiske chalte woh hadbadaate hue uth ke baith gayi.

Shayad, ek bura sapna tha.

Uske kapde paseene se bheege hue the. Khubsoorat se chehre par bhi paseene ki boonde saji hui thi. Haafte hue usne apne chehre par se ek towel se paseena pocha. Aur ek gehri saans lete hue woh kitchen ki orr chal padi.

Ek glass thanda paani peene ke baad woh waapas aayi, kamre ka darwaza andar se band kiya aur bistar par baith gayi.

'Ye bechaini...!'

Usse kuch theek nahi lag raha tha. Usne fauran hi apna phone uthaaya, usme gallery kholi aur uski nazre ek tasveer par jaake theher gayi.

'Thode din aur... Thode din me hi... Tum meri aankho ke saamne hoge. Aur fir uske baad... Tumhe kahi nahi jaane dungi mein!'

'Hum firse ek saath rahenge. Mom se saare raaz khulwa ke rahungi mein. Just wait a bit more. I will come to you. Very soon! My younger one!!'

Aur khud mann me ek lakshya thaan, woh waapas se bistar par lait gayi.

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Las Vegas ~ 1:47 AM

*VRRRRROOOOOOMMMM*

Ek gaadi sann-sanaati hui raaste par tezz raftaar me bhaagti jaa rahi thi. Derr raat ka samay tha. Lekin, roads par abhi bhi kuch gaadiya aati jaati maalum pad rahi thi. Ye Vegas tha, jo jaana hi apni night life ke liye jaata tha.

Divya ka perr accelerator par tha aur woh saaye-saaye gaadi bhaga rahi thi. Aankho me ek nami chhaayi hui thi,

'Why?? Why Veer?? Kyu kiya tumne aisa? Tum bewakoof nahi ho. You solved the Nightwalker's case. Th-Then how can you just...!? God damn it!!! Tum aisa qadam kese utha sakte ho? J-Just why?? Just tell me you were acting. Just tell me!! I just can't...!!!'

Apne hi mann me uth rahe sawaalo ke woh khud hi uttar dete jaa rahi thi. Ye achanak se kya ho gaya tha? Sab kuch theek chal raha tha. Fir eka-ek Fred ki maut aur ab Veer ki haalat ne unhe chinta me daal diya tha.

Kisi ne bhi Veer ko glass se wine peete nahi dekha tha. Lekin sabhi jaante the ki usne kya kiya tha. Camera uski chest ki pocket me laga tha. Aur jab usne wine ka glass neeche rakha tha. Woh khaali ho chuka tha. Zaahir hai ki usne wine pee thi. Aur fir woh khoon...!!

Itne logo ke beech bhala kese kisi ko murkh bana sakta tha woh?

Aur yahi baat Divya ko bechain kare jaa rahi thi.

Jo Divya Veer ki firki lene ke liye aatur rehti thi, usse chidhaane ka koi mauka nahi chorrti thi, uske saath nakli flirting karte hue zara bhi peeche nahi hatati thi, aaj wahi Divya uske liye aasu baha rahi thi. Ye naina roye jaa rahe the uske.

Kyu bhala? Divya ki khud nahi samajh aa raha tha. Woh kabse itni emotional bann gayi? Lekin fir kyu ye nain baar baar aasuo ko pochhne ke baad bhi bheeg rahe the?

Ek jo kaaran tha woh tha subah ka unka milan. Bhale hi baahar se Divya kitna hi kyu na keh de ki uske aur Veer ke beech ye sab nahi hona chahiye tha. Par andar hi andar kahi na kahi jese woh khud chaahti thi ye aur khush bhi thi.

Aur sangam hone ke baad, thoda sa bhi Prem na jaage, aisa bhala kese ho sakta tha? Uske dil me ab Veer ke liye ek alag jagah bann chuki thi. Jiski jagah ab koi dusra nahi le sakta tha.

Usne turant gear neeche kar gaadi chauthe gear me daali aur speed aur badha dii.

Aur kuch hi minutes ke andar woh doori bhi tay kar lii.

*Screeeeeeccccchhhh*

Brakes maarte hue zorr se usne gaadi roki.

*Thud*

Aur darwaaza band kar woh seedha daudi andar kii orr.

Baahar security guards nahi khade the, aur toh aur andar se kayi log bhaagte hue baahar nikal rahe the.

Mike team aur police ke sang shayad pehle hi andar ghus chuka tha.

Andar se baahar nikalte logo ko ignore kar woh daudte bhaagte hue seedha hotel me andar ghus gayi.

Saamne ka nazaara shaant pada hua tha.


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Neeche toh koi chahal pahal hi samajh nahi aa rahi thi. Bas upar se neeche aa rahe log hi dikhaayi de rahe the usse.

Jo ki swabhaavik tha. Veer bhi toh second floor me hi gaya tha. Ye dhyaan me aate hi Divya tezz qadmo ke saath seedha stairs ki orr bhaagi.

Lift lene ke liye samay nahi tha. Aur wese bhi, second floor par jaldi pohuchne ke liye khud ke perr hi sabse accha vikalp the.

Andar ghuste hi Divya ki aankho ke saamne chaka-chaundh kar dene waala drishya tha.

Detectives aur police ki team sabhi maujooda logo ko rok ke unhe baithane ki koshish me lagi thi. Sab ke sab under arrest me the. Nolan ke nirdesh ke baad hi Mike samet sabhi ne andar dhaava bol diya tha.

Ek bhi bach ke jaane na paaye, jitne masks lagaaye the woh sabhi iss party ka hissa the. Police ki madad se inn sabhi logo ko giraft me le liya gaya tha.

Divya ki nazre idhar se udhar duvidha me daud rahi thi. Aur tabhi usse dhyaan aaya,

'The washroom!!! Right!!!!'

Aur woh fauran bhaagi...

Aage badhte hi usse Mike nazar aaya. Toh Divya ne ek tezz awaaz lagaayi,

"Miiiiiiikkkke!!!!!"

Mike : We got this!!!! Go and search for him instead!!!

Usne chillaate hue bataaya.

Police aur uske seh karmiyo ne yaha ki paristhiti sambhaal lii thi. Mike ne fauran hi Divya ko Veer ko dhundhne ke liye kaha.

Aur Divya turant haa me sarr hilaate hue sarpat daud laga dii,

Samay badhta jaa raha tha. Kahi aisa na ho ki waqt ret ki tarah uski mutthi se fisal jaaye aur Veer....!

'Nahiiiii!!!! Nahi!!!! Veeeeerrrr!!!'

Woh mann me chillaayi,

Uske dil ki dhadkan tezz ho rakhi thi.

*Thud*

Pohuchte hi usne washroom ka ek darwaaza khola. Jidhar usse koi dikhaayi na diya.

'Ye waala nahi...! Damn it!!!'

Aur uski ghabraahat aur badh gayi.

Beshaq usne screen par Veer ko washroom jaate dekha tha. Par usse ye yaad nahi tha ki washroom kaun sa tha. Kyuki yaha line se 8 se 10 washrooms the. Aur sabhi ke sabhi behad bade.

"Veeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrr!!!!!"

Woh usse pukaari!!! Veer ka naam le le kar woh darwaaze kholti rahi. Ek na ek me toh milega hi Veer.

*Thud*

'God damn it!!! Where are you....!!???'

4 darwaaze khol ke usne chaaro washrooms check kar liye the, Par Veer kahi bhi nazar nahi aa raha tha.

*Dhak* *Dhak*

Aur na hi woh jawaab de raha tha. Uski bechaini aur badh gayi.

Agar usse kuch ho gaya toh? Toh kya jawaab degi woh Suhana ko? Khud Divya iss buri khabar ke liye taiyaar nahi thi.

"Veeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrr!!!!!???"

Usne punaah pukaara aur jese hi usne paachve darwaaze ko kholna chaaha,

*Click*

Darwaaza apne aap khul gaya.

Divya : Haahhh??

Aur Divya ki aankho ke saamne tha, Veer!!

Jeeta jaagta Veer. Apne jyo ke tyo haal me.

Lekin baal thode bikhre hue the uske. Saath hi aisa lag raha tha jese kahi bhaag daud karke aaya tha woh. Aankhein bhi halki halki laal maalum pad rahi thi.

"Ohhh God!!!"

Jo bechaini, jo ghabraahat, jo darr Divya ko abhi inn chand pal pehle pareshaan kar raha tha. Woh Veer ko apni nazro ke saamne dekhte hi jese chhumantar ho gaya.

Aur agle hi shan,

Woh aage badh Veer se kass ke lipat gayi. Apne haath uske baalo ke peeche le jaate hue usne Veer ke sarr ko zorr se pakad apne kandhe par tika liya.

Iss waqt aisa prateet ho raha tha jese ye ek badi behan ka chote bhai ke prati prem tha. Divya iss samay Veer ki badi behan ki tarah hi lag rahi thi.

Divya : Ohhhh thank god!!! Thank god! You're okay!!!

Aur kuch pal bas khamoshi chhaayi rahi. Divya aur Veer ek dusre ke aalingan me bane rahe.

Kuch derr baad akhir kaar usne Veer ko chorra aur usse dekhte hue apne sawaalo ki jhadi laga dii.

Divya : Kya tha ye sab haan? Veeerrr??? Bolo kuch? Why did you do that?? Kyu kiya aisa Veer??? Kaho? What really happened? Tell me!!!

Veer ki aankhein adh khuli thi. Woh Divya ko dekh zaroor raha tha. Par jese uske bol par uska dhyaan hi nahi tha. Uska dhyaan toh kahi orr hi tha.

*Ding*

[Mission : 'Assassinate the Pitcher' has been completed.]

*Ding*

[4000 Points have been rewarded.]

*Ding*

[500 Fame points have been rewarded.]

*Ding*

[Scroll ~ Profit Path has been rewarded.]

[Maaaaaaaassssttttteeerrrrr~]

Pari ki ek chintajanak pukaar uske mann me goonji.

[Why did you do that???? I told you not to-- ]

'Pari! I'm okay!' Veer ne ahista se jawaab diya usse.

Na chaahte hue bhi Pari ko shaant hona pada. Aisa laga jese woh ro rahi thi. Waqai me. Uski udaasi aur niraasha saaf uski awaaz me jhalak rahi thi.

Aur tabhi,

"Kaha kho gaye??? Veeerrrr!???"

Saamne se Divya ki awaaz sunn Veer ko hosh aaya. Woh apne khayalaato se baahar aaya.

Divya uss se jawaab maang rahi thi.

Divya : Bolo? Kya tha ye sab Veer? Kyu pee tumne woh wine??

Veer : Kya aapne mujhe wine peete hue dekha?

Divya (jhepte hue) : Huh?

Veer : Mene pucha ki kya aapne mujhe wine peete hue dekha?

Divya : ??? T-Tumne wine nahi pee toh kya piya tha? Bewakoof mat samjho Veer! We all saw it. Bhale hi tumhe directly nahi dekh paaye hum kyuki camera tumhari chest pocket me tha par humne dekha tha kese tumne glass hawa me upar uthaaya aur waapas rakha toh wine nahi thi usme. Where did it went?

Veer : It went right here!

Veer ne apni coat ki inner chest pocket ke andar se kuch nikaalte hue usse dikhaaya.

Aur usse dekhte hi Divya ke hosh udd gaye.

Divya : T-This...!

Veer : Yes!!!

Divya : Y-You--

Uske haatho me ek chota sa container tha.

Divya : N-No!!!! Tumhara matlab hai...!?

Veer : Hmm!

Kisne kaha Veer wine ko pee raha tha? Veer muh me zaroor bhar raha tha wine ko lekin bharne ke baad woh aise dikhaata jese woh wine ko gutak chuka hai. Par mauka dekhte hi woh apni inner coat ki pocket me usse thook ke uss container me daal raha tha.

Divya usse bhoot bann ke dekhe jaa rahi thi. Usse vishvaas hi nahi ho raha tha.

Divya : T-Tumne ye kiya tha asal me!?

Veer : Mein paagal hu kya jo woh wine piyunga? Hmm?

Divya : R-Right! T-That was really smart! Par... Par itne logo ke beech tumne kese...!?

Veer : I just got lucky!!!

Divya : I-I see~ Ye boht hi acchi baat hai. Kisi ko kuch pata nahi chala tumhaare iss container ke baare me. Y-You did great Veer. Jab screen me tumhe wine peete dekha toh hum logo ki jaan halak me atak gayi thi. I swear. Suhana bechaari toh... I hope she's alright! It's... It's really good that you're fine.

Usne Veer ke kandhe par haath rakh thodi bheegi aankho se jataaya.


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Veer ne haami bhari.

Divya : But wait!!!! Y-Your blood!!! Khoon kese aaya tumhe?? Agar tumne nahi pii toh...

Veer : That was a facade!!

Divya : Wh-What?

Veer : Woh khoon nahi tha!

Divya : Toh kya tha?

Veer : Just some color!

Divya : Color???

Veer (nods) : Right!!!

Divya : Par...

Veer : I prepared it beforehand.

Divya : K-Kya matlab!?

Veer : Woh emergency ke liye tha. I needed help. Lekin aenn waqt pe communication device kaam karna band kar diya tha. Meri awaaz aap tak nahi pohuch rahi thi. Uske liye ye sab karna pada taaki department fauran hi help bhej sake.

Divya : Ahhh!!! I-I see!!! T-Toh ye baat thi. Thank god!!! Everything is fine!

Divya ne kehte hue uske coat se woh communication device nikaal liya aur usse halki muskaan dwte hue boli,

Divya : You don't need this now.

Veer haan me sarr hilaate hue aage badh gaya.

Veer : Come! Aur bhi kuch baatein jaan'ni hai abhi.

Divya : Right!!!

Divya usse jaate hue dekhti rahi. Par akasmaat hi uska dhyaan Veer se liye gaye communication device par gaya. Aur,

Divya : H-Hello? Divya speaking!! Can anyone here me??

Aur uske itna bolte hi,

"Yes!!! We can hear you! Loud and clear!!!"

Dusri orr se department ke seh karmi ki spasht awaaz sunaayi dii. Divya hairat me apne haatho me uss device ko dekhti reh gayi.

'This... This is working fine!!!'

Kabhi woh Veer ki peeth ko dekhti jaha Veer dheere dheere apni jebo me haath daale araam se corridor me jaa raha tha. Toh kabhi uss device ko dekhti.

Antatah usne ek baar fir daud lagaayi,

Divya : Veeeeerrrrrrrr!!!!!

Woh chillaayi,

Veer (palat'te hue) : Hmm?

Divya : Ye... Ye toh chal raha hai. It's working fine!!!

Veer : Ohh!? Is it? Well that's good! Kuch derr oehle nahi chal raha tha.

Kehte hue woh ek baar fir aage badh gaya. Machine thi. Kabhi chalti toh kabhi nahi.

Parantu, Divya usse bas jaata hua dekhti rahi. Uski kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha. What just happened?

Bhaagte hue woh bhi Veer ki chaal se chaal milaayi aur corridor ke baahar nikal gayi.

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Baahar aate hi nazara kuch aisa tha ki police ne sab apne control me le liya tha. Aur toh aur Mike ne unke saath milke kayi raaz bhi khol ke rakh diye the.

Mike fauran hi Divya ke paas aaya aur usse sab kuch bataaya.

Jo log yaha masks pehen ke party manaane aate the. Ye darasal koi aur nahi wahi log the jo Nightwalker ke mansion me ho rahe khoon ke khel ko live dekh uska lutf uthaate the.

Udhar Nightwalker ka poora live session dark web par daala jaata tha aur idhar log aankho dekhi hatya ka maza lete the. Yahi inki fetish thi. Na keval woh ye sab dekhte the balki iss par kaafi paisa bhi fekte the. Bets bhi lagti thi. Jiska poora fayda Nightwalker aur Pitcher ko hota tha.

Pitcher ki bhi fetish thi jo unn se aur hatke thi. Usse sundar se sundar actresses, models aur celebrities ko maarne ka shauk tha.

Udhar Nightwalker ka maut ka nanga naach jab khatam hota toh idhar uski khushi me Pitcher party rakhta, jisme woh fir kisi ko maut ke ghaat utaarta.

Yaha do tarfi hatya ka kaand chaalu tha.

Udhar se Nightwalker toh idhar se Pitcher.

Dono hi ek dusre ke sang business me bhi the. Woh jo cameras Mansion me the. Woh isliye the. Unke zariye hi ye log masks pehen ke yaha masoom ki bali ka maza uthaate the.

Chuki aisi footages kisi platform par nahi daali jaa sakti thi isliye Dark web ka sahara liya jaata tha.

Aur inhi cameras me se unhe Veer ke baare me pehle hi pata lag chuka tha.

Par ek satya aur tha. Jiski wajah se poora department maat khaa gaya tha.

Woh ye ki...

Nat ne jo invitation card diya tha. Uss par ek serial number bhi tha. Ye serial number card par bhi rehta tha aur...

Aur unke paas data sheet me nhi feed rehta tha. Jab Fred uss card ko leke entry kiya tha.

Toh serial number match karte hi unhe pata lag chuka tha ki Fred ke paas jo card tha woh darasal Natalia ko bheja gaya tha.

Poori chori yahi pakad gayi thi unki. Security ne Pitcher ko sachet kar diya tha. Lekin uske bawajo Pitcher ne usse bulaaya. Ab koi darwaaze tak aaya ho toh bhala uski khaatir daari kese bhul sakta tha woh?

Aur Fred bhi...

Maut ke ghaat utaar diya gaya. Khel khatam.

Yahi haal Veer ke sang bhi hua. Card toh uske paas bhi wahi tha. Nat ka.

Aur usse dekhte hi unhe fir abhaas ho chuka tha. Saath hi Veer ki photo bhi unke paas thi.

Lekin Veer ke mann me jo baat abhi bhi khatak rahi thi woh ye thi ki unko khabar kisne dii thi ki woh yaha aane waala hai? Aur mask pehen'ne ke bawajood bhala kese pehchaan liye woh usse? Iska jawaab woh dhundh raha tha. Aur kuch kuch usse samajh aa chuka tha.

Mike ne ye saari jankaari jese hi bataayi toh Divya ekdum gusse se laal ho gayi. Ab inki chori pakdi gayi thi toh zaahir hai kisi na kisi aadmi ne saara sach ugal hi diya tha Mike ko.

Par iss khel me jin maasumo ki jaan gayi unka kya? Daniel, Chester, Jacob, Fred kese kitne hi maare gaye. Woh toh ab waapas nahi aa sakte the na.

Mike : I have something to show you! Hurry!

Mike ne kehte hue unn dono ko hi kahi le jaane ke liye kaha.

Jaldbaazi me woh uss dining table par pohuche jaha Veer baitha hua tha.

Par jese hi woh waha aaye,

Divya ko ek bada sa jhatka laga,

Divya : Y-Ye toh...!!!

Neeche ek dead body padi thi. Aur ye koi aur nahi tha. Wahi tha...

Pitcher!!!!

Muh se uske dherr saara jhaag nikla hua tha. Saaf tha ki woh zeher se marra tha.

Divya : Isn't he the...!?

Mike (nods) : Yes!!! The same guy who served the wine.

Divya : This...!!

Mike : He used poison to kill others. That wine bottle contains poison.

Mike ne wahi rakhi wine bottle ki orr ishaara karte hue bataaya jo Pitcher ne Veer ke liye kholi thi.

Divya (bauhe sikodte hue) : We are still missing something. How did he die?

Veer : I know it.

Veer ke kehte hi sabhi ki nazre uss par focused ho gayi. Hairaani me woh sabhi usse dekhe,

Divya : Whaaattt???

Veer : The secret practice...!!!

Mike : Secret practice?

Divya : Veer saaf saaf shabdo me kaho!!! Please be quick!!!

Veer : Wanna know the name?

Divya : *gulps*

Mike : !!!???

Aur fir Veer ke muh se ek shabd nikla,


"MITHRIDATISM"

Jisse sunte hi Divya ke poore badan ke raungte khade ho gaye.

Aur uske kaanpte haatho se Veer ka woh device gir gaya. Kyuki woh jaanti thi. Woh bhali bhaati jaanti thi iss ek shabd ka matlab kya tha.

Mike ki samajh me na aaya. Usne apna phone nikaal google kar uss ek shabd ka matlab search kiya aur jese hi usne uske baare me jaana. Uska badan khud kaanp utha.

Mithridatism, ek aisi practice jisme insaan kam maatra me khud zeher leta hai. Maatra itni ki jaan ke liye ghaatak na bane.

Mithridates VI jo Pontus ke Raja the. Maana jaata hai ki woh apni maut ko lekar itne darre hue rehte the ki unhe harr samay yahi lagta tha ki koi unhe chalaaki se zeher deke maar dega. Ye puraatan kaal me ek aam baat thi. Raja maharajao ko ye bhay aksar bana rehta tha ki kahi koi unka apna hi unke saath vishvaas-ghaat na kar de.

Toh zeher unka kuch bigaad hi na paaye isliye Raja Mithridates VI ne kam maatra me khud hi zeher lena shuru kar diya tha. Iss umeed me ki ye kam zeher lete lete ek na ek din unka shareer iss zeher ke khilaaf rog pratirodhak shakti paida kar hi dega. Yaani ki immunity bana hi lega.

Jese aksar hum navjaat shishu ko injections lagwaate hai, fir chaahe woh polio ke ho ya tetanus ke ya anya koi. Inka uddeshya hi yahi rehta hai ki shareer inn rogo ke khilaaf ek immunity bana le. Raja Mithridates ne bhi yahi karne ka socha tha.

Zeher le le ke uske khilaaf ladne ki shakti banana. Parantu ye daav ulta pad gaya tha. Zeher baar baar nirantar lene ke baad wahi zeher unke shareer me ikhatta hone laga tha, jo baad me aage chalke unki maut ka kaaran bann gaya.

Pitcher ka bhi uddeshya wahi tha.

Aur Pitcher...

Ye karne me qamyaab ho gaya tha.


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Aisa nahi tha ki aap yadi iss practice ko apnaate ho toh aapki maut nischit hai.

Hargiz nahi! Yadi non-biological poisons ko liya jaaye toh ye sambhav hai ki aap kuch poisons ke khilaaf immunity nirmit kar sakte ho.

Jo vish ka pyaala hum dusro ko dete hai woh ek na ek din hume khud bhi peena padta hai. Ab tak ye baat Pitcher par sahi se laagu nahi ho rahi thi. Par Veer ke aate hi...

Kaam tamaam ho chuka tha.

Divya : Quick!!! We have to get back to the department. There are still many questions that are left unanswered.

Woh kehti hue aage badhi, Mike bhi haami bharte hue peeche peeche gaya. Parantu idhar Veer ki aankhein Pitcher ki laash par hi tiki hui thi.

Unn aankho me bhayanak gussa tha. Ekdum laal ho rakhi thi woh. Aisa lag raha tha Veer abhi uski laash pe bhi toot padega aur cheer phaad dega.

'I almost died, you bastard!!!'

Woh mann me hi gurraaya.

Uska heart rate bhaiyankar zyaada ho rakha tha. Container?? Kaahe ka container??

Veer Divya ke jaate hue figure ko peeche se dekh raha tha. Siwae Mithridatism ke, jo kuch bhi usne Divya ko bataaya tha.

Woh sab jhooth tha.

Uska asal sach toh uske khud ke antar mann ki gehraiyo aur uske zehen me hi dafn hoke rehne waala tha.

Asli sachhaayi toh kuch aur hi thi...

Jab Veer hotel me ghus neeche Beowulf se check kar raha tha. Tab usse nahi pata tha ki upar balcony me uski photo ko idhar se udhar kiya jaa raha tha.

Parantu...

Ek uss se bhi badi sansani macha dene waali khoj kar lii thi usne.

Neeche uski nazar dur ek aise vyakti par padi thi jo ek wine ki bottle me powder jesa kuch mila raha tha.

Aur ye kya tha ye bataane ki zaroorat hi nahi thi.

Beshaq, zeher!!!!

Veer ka maqsad saaf tha. Na keval usne jaa ke iss baat ka pata kiya balki, usne uss vyakti ke jaate hi wahi powdered substance ki maatra aur badha ke uss wine me daal dii.

Ye sab usne tab kiya tha jab woh vyakti andar kuch lene gaya tha.

Bheed itni thi ki kisi ko kuch nahi pata tha ki kya ho raha hai. Sirf pitcher hi Veer ke baare me jaanta tha aur chand aur log jinhone Veer ki live footage dekhi thi. Par kuch aise bhi the jo Veer ke pehle ke murder footages dekhe hue the. Woh bhi party ka hissa the.

[Maaastttteeerrrrr!!! Wh-Whaattt are you doing??? Aap usme kyu mila rahe ho?]

'Agar mein sahi hu, toh aaj Pitcher nahi bachega!!!'

[N-Noooo!!! Don't tell me you...!!]

'Yes!! I will do it!!!'

Woh waapas se apni jagah par aaya. Aur Veer ne dekha ki kese woh vyakti dobaara se uss wine ki bottle me packing chadha raha tha taaki aisa lage wine ki bottle ekdum nayi hai.

'This motherfucker...!!'

Aur inn chand lamho me, Veer ne ye saara kaam iss prakaar se kiya tha ki uske jeb ka camera saamne ki orr focused tha. Department waalo ko screen me dekh ye katayi pata nahi lag paaya tha ki Veer ne aisa bhi kuch kiya tha.

Fir aaya woh waqt, jab Pitcher ne Veer ko bulaaya.

Uske saath baith ke jab usne Veer ko woh wine offer kii, Pitcher ke chehre par haivaani waali kapti muskaan thi. Kyuki woh jaanta tha ye Veer marrega hi uske haatho.

Par woh nahi jaanta tha... Ki Veer ek aam insaan nahi tha.

Veer ne jese hi wine se bhare glass ko check kiya,

*Ding*

[A glass full of poisoned wine. Don't drink it.]

Sab kuch saamne tha. Ye wahi wine thi. Jisme ferr badal kiya gaya tha.

Aur isliye Pitcher ab tak pakda nahi gaya tha. Kyuki woh bhi same wine peeta tha.

Parantu woh iss zeher se ladne me saksham tha. Lekin aam vyakti nahi.

Aur aise hi sabhi maut ke ghaat utar rahe the.

What a way to kill.

Woh abhi bhi shaitaano ki tarah muskuraa ke Veer ko dekh raha tha.

'This sly bastard!!!'

Lekin aaj khel kuch alag hone waala tha.

'Pari!!! Open the shop!!'

[Yes Master!!!]

'Find me a skill which can cure this poison.'

[Whaaaatttttt??? Nooooooooo!!! Maaassttteeerrrr!!! Aap aisa nahi kar sakte. I'm tell you please stop!!! Please!!! I'm begging you~]

'Pari...!!!'

[Nooo noooo nooooooo!!!!? How can I??? Mat kariye.... Please!!!! I...]

'DO IT!!!!!!'

Jab Veer mann me zorr se cheekha toh Pari ek baar fir apne master ke saamne haar gayi.

[Master! This is the one but...]

'Kitne points? Ohhh! 5000 Points? One time use only? Fine then! Purchase this.'

[O-Okay but...]

'DO IT!!!!'

*Ding*

['Sylvia's Venom Cure' is now available.]

*Ding*

[Host can only use this skill for one time only.
Warning : Beware of extreme pain, vomit and increased heart rate.]

*Ding*

[Sylvia's Venom cure has been activated.]

Aur agle hi pal, Veer ke andar bhaari maatra me white blood cells bann'na shuru ho gaye. Bann toh pehle bhi rahe the par unki process kayi guna badh chuki thi.

Veer ne fir woh kiya jo sabko hairaan kar doya tha.

Usne wine pee lii thi. Par wine toh container me gayi thi?

Laude ka container! Woh container toh washroom ke soap dispenser ka ek toota hua bhaag tha jo Veer ne washroom se nikalne se pehle hathyaa tha.

Woh color? Ghanta color! Woh toh uska khoon tha jo white blood cells ne poison ke roop me usse baahar fikwaaya tha.

White blood cells hi toh immunity ka kaaran hai hamaare shareer me.

Aur uske baad utha tha Veer ko atyant dard, uska nervous system itne khatarnak sthiti se guzar raha tha ki uska andhruni dard aseem hota jaa raha tha.

Aisa laga tha ki woh ab nahi bachega. Aur behosh hone se pehle usse bas Pari ke bol yaad the.

"Veeeeerrrrrrrr!!!???"

Divya ki awaaz usse hosh me laayi.

Veer : Coming!!!

Veer ek akhiri nazar Pitcher par daal aage badh gaya.

Aur baahar aate hi,

*Screeeeeeccccchhhh*

Gaadi ruki aur Suhana aur Nik usme se baahar nikle.

Suhana ki nigaahein jese hi Veer par jaa kar tiki uski aankhein felti chali gayi,

"Veeeeerrrrrrr!!!"

Woh daudte hue aayi aur zorr se kood ke uski baaho me ucchal gayi.

Uske baad wahi hua. Sawaal pe sawaal. Veer ne jese tese maamla shaant kiya.

Par...

Veer : Huh!!??

Woh aashcharya chakit reh gaya jab usne apne bagal me Suhana ko dekha toh...



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Woh ro rahi thi. Unn aankho me pehli baar Veer ne kabhi apne liye itne strong emotions dekhe the.

'Miss Suhana...!?'

Veer : Aap ro rahi ho?

Suhana (muh ferrte hue) : Who's crying? Get lost!

Veer : *smiles*

Divya : Tum dono? Take my keys! Mujhe aane me late ho jaega.

Divya ne car ki keys fekte hue kaha.

Aur kuch derr me hi Veer aur Suhana dono Divya ki car me sawaar hote hue waha se ravaana ho gaye. Udhar ki tehkiqaat lambi chalne waali thi.

Idhar car me,

Suhana (smiles) : I'm happy!

Veer : Why so?

Suhana : Duh!!! You dumb! Kyuki tum sahi salaamat ho.

Veer : Par jab mein waha se jaa raha tha tab toh aap gussa hoke bhaag gayi thi bacchi ki tarah perr patak ke.

Suhana (blushes) : Wh-What do you mean by bacchi ki tarah??? I was looking out for you!! Par tum ho ki... Kherr! Chorro!!! Wait!!

Veer : Kya hua?

Suhana : Udhar park hai!

Veer : So!?

Suhana : Stupid! Stop the car! Mujhe thodi fresh air chahiye.

Suhana ki baat maan Veer ne gaadi park ke paas rok dii.

Ye ek open park tha.

Aur dono hi utar ke kuch derr uss khamoshi me tehelne lage. Koi baat nahi.

Jab achanak se,

Suhana palti aur Veer se zorr se chipak gayi.



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'Huh?'

Suhana : I thought something will happen to you!!!

Usne usse dekh ke bola!!


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Veer : But I'm right here! Hai na?

Suhana : Hmm! And that's what matters.

Kehte hue woh uske kandhe par sarr rakh uss se chipki rahi.


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Jab achanak hi usse dhyaan aaya...

Ki Veer uska pati nahi tha.

Suhana : Ahhh!!! S-Sorry about that...!!

Kehte hue woh dur hatt gayi aur mud gayi.

Veer ko yu akela chorr woh waapas se car ki orr chal dii.

Idhar sheetal leher me, halki hawao me Veer ki lehraati zulfein uski aankho ke saamne fir rahi thi aur nazre tiki hui thi Suhana ke jaate hue figure par.

'You are hiding something. Aren't you? Miss Suhana?'
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Awesome update

Nyc fabulous update bhai kuch locha chod ke gaye ho pura kar dete

Mast update bhai

Extraordinary update bro,

Super thrilling update.

Kya जबरदस्त update diya hey bhidu,

Divya ka to kam Kar hi dala verr ne aur uske hi bedroom mey shi hey

Aur freid to party enjoy kr ke chala gaya bichara

Ye nik bohot Shana samjata Tha hey khud ko jan bhuchke usko bhejne ko bola hoyenga, uski akal thikane par Lana hoga bhai

Veer to party mey gaya bhi aur sab dekh bhi raha tha, ye veer ki pic kese unhe mili 🤔🤔🤔

Veer ne pitcher ko to Dekh Liya tha fir bhi usne ohh drink pi Liya glas mey to khuch nhi tha matlb wine mey hi kuch gadbad thi, jo veer ko khun ki omet hone se pata chala hoga..

Ab age dekhna padega kya hota hey, veer ke pass ye log pohoch pate hey ya nhi

Aur suhana inks Jo hal krege ohhh alag hey


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Choro unhe wo khud hi krenge koi nhi update enjoy krne ka

क्या ही कहूँ मै इस अंश के बारे मे, आधे घंटे से ज्यादा का वक़्त लगा पढ़ने मे, और जब तक मै इसे पढ़ता रहा, तब तक किसी और ही दुनिया मे रहा ।
वो कहते है न... अविश्वशनिय.... अति अविश्वशनिय..

जल्द ही इसका विश्लेषण दुंगा ।

Zabardast update :applause:

Hamko or mangta hai man itne me ji nhi bhara abhi hmara...
Pichere David miya hain vo jinki fatish hai prasiddh logo ko marna
Veer ne niche ke floor ko check kiya pr upar ke floor ko najarandaj kr diya Jiska natija hai ye sab ki use sarab pilai gyi or Vo pita bhi rha Lekin aas pass ke logo ko nhi jaan saka, mujhe lagta hai David ka jo secret practice hai vo hai phycosis (psychology se related)
Abhi tk vo dikha jo divya or suhana ne dekha pr agle update me vo padhne milega jo veer ne vha kiya mahsus or dekha... Veer ke muh se khoon nikalna or veer ka last me pari se puchhna ki kya hua tha abhi uske sath ye sari bate indicate karti hai ki Vo apne control me nhi tha...
Divya jisko lekr yha khub hungama hua tha ki bich me hi kho klpd kr diya unke msg padh kr werewolf bhaya khub hase honge man hi man me or aaj ka update padh kr mujhe bhi hasi aa rhi hai unke reaction soch kr, Bahut hi jabarjast tarike se khela hai ju ne jajbato ke sath mujhe to bahut maza aya padh kr bhai... Divya madad ki situation subah vali padh kr sirf yhi gana fit baithta hai - na na karte pyar tumhi se kar Baithe



Or sath me mujhe Charlie Chaplin ka gana bhi yaad aa rha hai - Jana tha Japan pahuch gye चीन samajh gye na...
Haule Haule pyaar hoo gya..


Kya baat karu main Uski Jisne yeh update racha gif photo itne perfect the situation ke hisab se ki mai Dave ke sath kah sakta hu 99%log amazed ho gye honge...
Mujhe yha pr Madhuri dixit ka dialog 👌 "Perfect" ki yaad aa gyi
Kya hi divya ki siskiya nikali hai aapne, log muh se nikalte hai or aapne wordo se siskiya nikali hai vo bhi perfect 👌
Superb amazing update bhai jabarjast sandar lajvab or Yadi ek word me bole to awesome jhakkash

Fantastic mind-blowing update

Unka gift mai dunga chinta mat kro just wait and watch for gift

Suhana mam ko dar laga ki agar veer phans gaya to uska secret bahar aa jayega.par veer ne chuk kardi is baar
Awesome update 💥💥💥💯💯💯

Zabardast update

Super bro

Bro. Ek dam faadu update h. Too much thrilling and full of excitement.
Waiting for the next mega update 😂

Blockbuster update. Superb.

Bro kya hi kanhi is update k bare m super se bhi bhut uper update th ye

Wow excellent Update. Epic one kya hi kahu bahut jyada acha Update tha. Use I must admit it is update me aapko mehnat saaf show ho rahi hai.
Ab aate hai phle aapki tarif pe to aakhirkar Divya ka sikar veer ne kar hi liya aur mai dawe se kah sakta hu veer aaj ke Update me divya ki lega ye to kuch logo ne socha tha. Lakin aapne usne thoda alag kar diya aur M9 me kya good morning karwayi hai har koi bas yahi kahta hai uski M9 aisi hi ho. Divya aur veer ka sex scene such me ab tak ka sbse best sex scene tha aapke story ka.
Ab aata hu mai apne sawalo par jiske answer mujhe janane hai aapse :-
1. Most important Fred kaise mara.
Ab ye to jahir si baat hai vine aur glass me kuch nahi hoga. Quki aisa hota to veer ne jahir si baat hai check to kiya hi hoga dono ko. To ye possibly to khtam lakin mujhe lagta hai kahi aisa koi vodka to nahi hai jo glass ya kisi chij ke sath mix hone par poison ban jata ho.
2. Veer ne vo vodka piya kyu
Jahir si baat hai agar poison hota to veer aisa kabhi nahi karta.
Lakin aisi possibly mujhe lag rahi hai ki veer ne jaan bujh kar wo piya. Aur turant hi usne bahar kisi ko pata chalne se phle washroom me womit krke use nikal diya.
3. Veer ki photo ya jis bhi person ko marna hai wo kaise inko milti hai ki aaj ye aaya hai. Ye information kaha se aati hai.
4. Kya waha ke sare log aapas me mile hue hai. Aur her party me log same hi rahte hai marne wale ko chod kar ya Change hote hai. Aur aisa hua hoga to veer ne is baat ko notice kiya hoga.
5. Kisko marna hai ye subko kaise pata chlta hai. Koi code word hai kya unka. Aur veer ko pahchante kaise hai quki mask to wo bhi lagaye tha.
6. Most important baat veer ne picher ko jab pahchan liya to usne usko pakda kyu nahi. Range hatho pakdna cahta tha. Ya baki sub ko dikhane ke liye.
Ummid hai next update me in sub ke bare me pata chal jayega.

Bhai yah Vegas tour jaldi khatm kar do ismein maja nahin a Raha India wapis bhej do

Congratulations on 2000 Pages!

Kya hi tareef kru. Ab tk ka sabse best update lga mujhe... Nik ne to bomb ki pin nikal ke veer ke hatho me pkda diya ki ja bete apna our apne parivaar ka name Roshan krna 🤣... Veer ne Divya ki Mari badle me Nik me veer ki mar Li :sex: hisab barabar ... Bs dekhna ye he ki ab suhana Nik ki kb our kis pose me Marti he... But ye baat samajh me nhi aai ki jb veer ne wine check ki to usme poison show kyo nhi hua ?? Kuch alag sa suspence to jarur he jo Veer ki smart approch se milo dur he ... Kuch to unusual he edherich

Khair ab aisi situation create ho gaii jisse ane wale update me kya hone Wale he, ye janne ki curiosity our jyada badd gaii he ... Agle update me nightwear ka tisra lawda pela jata he ya Veer ki our pelam pelai hoti he... Our abhi tk ye bhi pta nhi chla ki veer ke mind ke kya plan chal rha he ? ... Btw es update me shuru me behad nirash kiya... I mean Veer our Divya ke bich sexual incounter ne... Aisa lga jaise Wolfie esko jald se jald end krna chahta he... Utha ke bed pe fenka after than adha lawda gusheda after than kabhi deewar ke sahare chipkali bna ke pela to room ke bicho bich mendaki bna ke pela to kabhi bed pr kutiya bna ke pela... Bs channd lines me... Hume to ye bhi pta nhi chka ki Veer ke mandak ne Divya ke कुवे me adhi hi dubaki Mari ya puri ... Bs etne me hi sex complete ::sex:... Our to our bahut modern tarike se likha gya... Koi dohraii nhi he ki kahani badiya nhi he... Ek umda kahani he... But romance our sexual seen me behad kanjusi barti gaii he.... "Akhir kyo " !!!! Me en 2 gerne (sexual+romance) ko Etna bakhubi likha ki kya hi tareek ki jaye usme काम रस bharpur tha to Esme वीर रस ... Ummid krta hu ki Esme " Veer rass + kam rass " ka santulit mishran ho....

Overall ye update bhi baki updates ki trahh behtreen tha... update pdhne ke baad NXT update pdhne ki lalsh bdh gaii

(Note.... Jis trahh kabhi kabar late update dekar surprise krte ho usi trahh update ke schedule ke pehle update dekar kam se kam ek baar double surprise kr do 😀..... Well. Early warning for nxt update Wolfie)


Edited .... Nhi bataunga 🤐

Mast update h bhai...👌🏻

Congratulations for 2000 pages bro

Congratulations for 2000 pages bro

Congratulations for 2000 pages bro

Dil ho cuka bhacen 😮
Raj Na ay kuc!!!
Agle update ka intezar.....

:congrats: For completed 2k pages on your story thread....

Mind blowing update bro

2k pages + 5M views.. :bow:

Well well well.

Akhir Veer or Divi ahan! maza agaya :devil:Divi NY veer KY agy haar man li Akhir :yes1:. or wahi suhii ka veer KY prati lagao Kuch Ziyada hi ho gaya Vegas Mai Hun Hun:akshay: .or wahi ferd mara gaya par kaisy ? na wine Mai Kuch tha na Glass Mai koi kharabi ak normal glass tha han!:dquestion: wahi gaando Nik ki waja Sy veer ki lagi padi phir Sy . veer ko Akhir Kiya HOA? Jo wo washroom bhaga or importantly waisy pitcher Bada heavy Banda hai secret bhi hai usky pas Kuch chalo dekhty Hain veer kaisy survive krta hai.

and lastly update was awesome...

Let's see agy Kiya hota ....

smash.:sip:

And 20,000 messages :sip:

Fantastic mind-blowing update

Fantastic update bro💯😍🔥💗👍

Shaandar update bhai maza aa gaya. Lagta hai ye veer ki koi trick hai camera se peecha chudane ki ab dekhte hai age kya hota .

Awesome update bhai keep posting

romanchak update ..divya ki saari hoshiyari nikal di veer ne jo wo flirt karne me istemal karti thi ladko ko 🤣..
achche se chodke maja diya divya ko aur wo naa naa kehte huyi maja lene lag gayi .

bura laga ki divya ki gaand bach gayi veer se 😁 par nik se bach gayi divya aaj warna pakdi hi jaati.

fred ko jasoos banake bheja par aisa laga hi nahi ki waha kuch gadbad hai par baadme fred maara gaya poison se .
ab mission pura karna hai to veer ko rukna hi padega yaha pe .suhana ka tension lena bhi sahi hai ,usne apne jimmedari par yaha laya hai veer ko .

nik ke liye to bahut saari gaaliya hai suhana ke paas 🤣🤣.

pitcher kaun hai ye pata chal hi gaya veer ko jab wo jasoos banke gaya party me .
par ab ye tension wali baat ho gayi ki veer ko bhi poison de diya hai ,

par ye veer ki skill activate kyu nahi huyi jo detox karti hai body ko 🤔🤔🤔🤔..
veer ko kis cheej me jehar diya hai pitcher ne ye bhi abhi pata nahi chal paya .
par ek baat hai ki pitcher ka network kaafi strong hai jo pehle fred aur ab veer ke aane ki baat us tak pahuch hi gayi .

kya waqt rehte veer ko madad mil payegi 🤔. divya aur suhana ka tension lena bhi sahi hi hai jab veer poison pi liya hai .

It was a awesome update just awesome


Wonderful update bhai ☺️😊

Are tu ja re 1 month baad aana jabtak veer india aa jayega itna incest se pyar hai gril(girl):hinthint::aetsch:

Ye kaise hua
Veer ka chutiya kaise kat sakta hai bhala
Jab system ne kush nhi dikhaya to?

What a thrill
Intresting

Nice update...

Awesome update bro

Nice behtarin mast awesome update bro

bhai shandaar update mazza aagya
and congratulation for 2k pages

Congratulations for 2000 pages :bounce:

Zabardast Update Werewolf Bhai

Super update hai Bhai

Jabardast update bhai.. 💥

Bhai apne suspense + thriller update de diya iss baar to control nhi hoga next update ke liye 👏👏

What a suspense in this story amazing update...pata hi nhi chala ki kab Maine update padh liya awesome update thanks...werewolf bro....👍

Bahut achhe yaara....

Superb update bro ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Update jetni rangeen suruwat say suru huwi khatma utna hee sungeen huwa kahi yea veer kee chall tuu nahi kun Kay woo kisi bhi nasay yaa zaher say tuu buch sukta hay dekhay hay kya huta hay

please yaar update jara fast do bro

Bahut hi behtareen romanchak lajawab aur uttejak update Werewolf bhai......

Maaza aayega.

Aisa update aaye toh ek week bhi wait karna galat nahi lagta hai poora Paisa vasool update hai...


Dhashu update
But bhut late update diya 1 hafta ho gya
Or agle update jaldi de dena bro....

Very nice. Ragini emotionally veer ko usse izhar-e-ishq kr chuki hai. Nidhi ke liye acha lag rha hai. veer or nidhi ke darmiyan jo anchahe deewar thi tootti ja rhi hai. Niharika ko sudharna itna asan nhi hai bachpan ke chhote dimag me baitha hua woh nfrt aise aise hi nhi khtm hone wale. Suman ne bhi apne dil ki baat keh Di hai. Pranjal or rajat ki jodi Kya gul khilayegi ye to ane wala wqt hi btaeyga. Pranjal ko uske baap krunesh ki Shay prapt hai.

Very nice. Ye update kavya Madam ke naam rha. Jhumke laya tha kavya ke liye MIL arohi ko gya. Veer asmanjas me hai ki woh kisse pyar krta hai Teen ke naam liye usne jo ki teeno hi khas hai uske liye system ke according woh alfa male hai jo sbki surksha chahta hai khush dekhna chahta hai. Suhana kyo paresan Ho gai divya ki help wali baat se aisi Kya baat ho gai divya ke sath jo uske pas wqt ki kami hai.

So first mission, mission Divya complete and with flying colours. Saara attitude rakkha rah gaya Divya ka aur ab wo bhi list mein add ho gayi.

Now it's time for Mr Pitcher. "He does some secret practice." Looks like Pitcher has knowledge of chemicals and he knows which compound converts as toxic agent after reaching into the body. That's how without consuming poison, people get poisoned. What an idea Sirji if really is the idea behind this, it's my thought.

Now point is Fred was fine when he was out from party but Veer started vomiting which means either chemical agents were different for Fred and Veer or Veer's system is in alert mode so as soon toxic chemical reactions were started in the body, system took precautionary measures and start cleaning system by vomiting toxic agents along with impacted blood.

If that is what it is than its mind blasting concept and very smart and clever writing. Superb Werewolf bro. :applause:

Nice update :congrats: for complete 2k page

Awesome update

Superb update bro....
Waiting for next

Fantastic update

Bhai please update time se diya karo yaar please

Super wonderful awesome update

Congratulations for 2000

Bhai Agla update jaldi dena aap to suspens Mein Chhod Diye

Nice update.

Congrats on 2000 pages

बहुत ही शानदार लाजवाब अपडेट भाई
वीर ने दिव्या की मार ली नीक कों पता भी नहीं चला
मजा आ गया भाई
फ्रेड मारा गया किसी को कुछ समझ नहीं आया की कैसे मर गया

मुझे तो लगता हैं भाई
गड़बड़ ना वाइन में हैं नाहि ग्लास में हैं भाई

तीसरी चीज भी हैं टोस्ट मुझे इसी में गड़बड़ी लग रही हैं भाई

वीर को खुन की उल्टी बायोवोल्फ एक्टिव होने से हूई हैं
क्यूंकि भेड़िया हों या कुत्ता जब जहरीला कुछ खा लेता हैं तो वोमिट करके जहर बाहर निकाल देता हैं भाई


बहुत ही शानदार लाजवाब अपडेट भाई
मजा आ गया भाई

Detoxification ki bhi ek limit hogi bhai or uska process bhi Sayad slow ho ya ye bhi kah sakte hai ki jyada pila di gyi or kam detox hui Utne Samay me...
Ek reason ye bhi ho sakta hai ki jb jyada poison sarir me ho gya to use bahar nikalne ke liye vomit karne ka tarika hi sahi lga... Kyo kya kahte ho Werewolf bhaya

Awesome update bhai waiting for next update

Bro next update kab tak aayega ek date bata do

Zabardast update

I have no more words to say now. 😶 Words khatam ho jaa rahe h mere paas ab Sir...
Mne socha tha update 100 hi ab tak sabse kamaal ka h... Aur ab aapne ye de diya.
You are dropping bombs one after another. And each bomb is getting more lethal... 😶


  • The first scene with Divya. :blush1: Okay... Ahemm ahemmm... It was very sensual. I was not expecting anything like that. Socha tha Divya ke saath smooch ho gayi h ek. Ab kuch updates k baad hi kuch dekhne ko milega. I was wrong. Right from the get go you showed us such a turned on scene. :blush1: Ahemm... Iske baare me zyada baat nhi...
  • The morning scene with Suhana. The pics you have used again. I'm telling you, your pic game is insane. :shocking: Aisa lagta h jese yahi characters h real me. Suhana aur Divya ki images to itni perfectly dimaag me baith gayi h... Ab lagta h pics me wahi dono ye characters h. Agar unki koi aur photos mujhe kahi dikhengi na to mere muh se yahi niklega... Arre suhana... Arre divya 🤣🤣
  • Suhana was cute. :blush1: Jis tarah se usne Veer se pucha... She was doubtful about it. Kahi Veer raat me kuch karke toh nahi aaya? :roflol: Also Nik got cuckolded. 🤣🤣 Also the Wordplay you used. 🤣🤣

The presence of mind here to connect a villian's name with an erotic scene. :applause: :applause:Jab mne ye padha tha meri hasi nikal gayi thi... 🤣🤣🤣
  • The way you use, sound effects is just amazing. Like swoosh, whoosh, thud, click... Ye sab scenes ko aur realistic feel dete h... We can hear the sounds in our mind whenever we read it. Truly awesome!!! :wooow:
  • Fred was like the scapegoat. Bechara enjoyment me hi tapak gaya. :shy: but kuch kar k gaya atleast... Ye proof ho gaya ki Divya ki baat sach thi aur next hotel k baare me bhi information mil gayi.
  • But then he died in the same way as Charlotte. Jab Divya ne car me kaha tha na ki wo Charlotte k jaise mara... I got chills. 🥶
  • Fir vahi hua... Ab to Pari aur Suhana k jese mujhe bhi Nik k upar bohut gussa aa raha h .... :mad1: Nik ka Nickelodeon bana dungi main agar saamne aaya toh... Wait... What a dialogue I have delivered... 🤣🤣🤣 Isse aap use bhi kar sakte ho uski insult k liye. 🤣🤣 Nik ka Nickelodeon. Imagine Suhana saying this on his face. 🤣🤣 Itna accha dialogue de dia. Thank you kehne ki zaroorat nhi mujhe. Main to hu hi khaas... :makeup:
  • Veer toh wese bhi jaata hi... Mission tha uska. But damn Suhana... :what1: Ye ladki toh ekdum bomb h...🤣🤣 Muh pe bol dia yaar Divya ko tumhara husband ek number ka chutiya h... 🤣🤣 I laughed so hard. Kya hi gaaliya di h usne... Aur iss baar toh kamaal hi ho gaya. Divya ne palat k kuch bola bhi nahi. She agreed ki uska husband chutiya h... This is massive development. 🤣🤣 But damn... Damn damn... Suhana is getting into my favourites list. :awoo: Already Arohi k saath ab wo meri favourite ho chuki h... Her boldness is on another level. Aur uska care karte hue dikhana... Wowwwww... This part always makes me read more and more about her being defensive for Veer. She was giving an elder sisterly vibes there. Too lovable!!! :angel1:
  • The end scene. Just woooowwwww... Hotel k scenes party scenes jese aapne show kiye h na .... Commendable!!! :applause: veer k saath bhi vahi hua h... Fred jese... We got to see the glass. It wasn't poisoned. But what about the wine? Kon si secret practice ki baat ho rahi thi yaha? Ye Fred mara kese? Veer ko vomitting kyu hui blood ki? And why the hell veer drunk that wine? Mike ne kaha bhi tha kuch bhi mat peena... Then too... Suhana bechari... She almost collapsed right there... I can feel her emotions. Wo apni responsibility pe leke gayi h veer ko. She cannot let happen anything bad to veer.
This update was on whole another level. Mujhe toh half an hour se bhi zyada time lag gaya ise padhne me.... :what1:
you are too good. :bow: Plus 5 million views and 2000 pages k liye congratulations Sir. I'm assuming this story will go above 200 updates. Since we haven't even heard anything about main villian yet. It's giving me goosebumps already. Who's this main villian? Abhi se itna sab kuch ho raha h... You were right! We aren't ready for him I think. 🥶 Aise hi updates dete rahiye Sir. You are our precision gem. :love: :blush1:
Keep entertaining us. :dance2:

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Bhai tum mil jaao kabhi toh maar khaaoge h...,
Itna chabook update hein mein padh raha tha or padhta rahu or yeh update 3rd killer ko arrest karne ke baad khatam ho, or isi soch ke saath dhadaam se meri soch khatam tata bye bye ho gai jab tum ne likha ki “yeh kya ho gaya tha”....!
Mummy kasam bahot gussa aaya tum pr....!😡🤬
Again & Again adhoora update..!😞
Keep Writing....!☺️

Awesome update bhai waiting for next update

Superb update nd :congrats: 2000

Excellent update 😍🥰

Bhai aapka update week mein kon kon se din aata hai ?

Veer n Divya ko bhog lia aakhir kaar dono n jam k maza lia
Fred pahoch gaya party m maza bhi lia party ka wine bhi pi kuch huwa bhi nahi waha or gher aaker mar gaya kaise iska saaf matlab tha zaher pehle se hi glass m tha tabhi kisi ko kuch nahi huwa or Fred mara gaya
Baherhal Nik ki gandi chaal n ek baar fir se Veer ko fasa dia lekin Veer ko tow khud waise bhi jaana hi tha tow Nik ka ek bahana mil gaya
Lekin sabse aham sawal jab Veer n sab kuch chek kia or uske system n nhi yahi dikhaya ki poison nahi kahi per tow kaise Veer k sharir m poison pahoch gayi or woh khoon ki ultiya kerne laga or jabki veer kisi bhi tarah ka nasha ya poison pi ya fir kha le uska kuch aser nahi hoga tow yeh fir huwa kaise ya fir veer sabko dikhane k liye aisa ker raha h
Baherhal sawal bahot h or jawab ab agle update m hi milega dekhte h kia hota h
Bahot khoob shaandaar lajawab update bhai

Crazy updates bruh.
Mre sb se 3 favorite updates the ye. Simply magical words, narration and creativity.

Can say ke KNIGHTWALKER mein jitni cheeze muje pasand nahi ayi thi usse zyada in updates mein pasand achuki hain.

Lets talk about updates.

104 ~ update
This update is whole for a creativity. Mean itna simply kisi simple event ko likhna. You're a Picasso in it.

The way you uses the pics are just fab. And as per the scenes. I can just feel the situation.

Dialogue between Suhana and Veer. Bhot se nahi kareeb arhe ye. Huhh.

Zoey ki help krdi like a true gentle man. Nhi to koi or deta to pta nhi kia hi intentions hoti. Madad krne ka tarika bahtreen tha. And I don't think je Zoey bhoole gi.

People do change and Nat just fullfill the theory. Kal hi simple si AVA niw as emerging star Natasha. And the Queen aura. So Suhana ka jalna bnta bhi hai.

Jo shahid kal tak Suhana did didi kehti hogi aj Dominate kr rhi hai.

Iski ankho mein bhi dhuk "Haye Laale yaha to sab DILJALE hain" dialogue from the movie DILJALE.

Dhuk kis baat ka. Maybe yehi reason ho attitude change ka bhi.

105 ~ Update

SSo 3rd killer bhaiya bhi achuka hai " THE PITCHER". Best! And Pitcher bhiaiya ko fetish hai actresses ko marne ka sorry khubsurat actresses. And not surprisingly Nat shamil hai.

But but she's smart. Pehle hi bandobast karliya hai. Or bilkul right time pe right bnde ke pass ayi hai.

OOhhh yes yes yes! Finally!! Chirya jaal mein achuki hai isi part keliye to oper itni tarif ki hai bruhh.

My darling Divya. What a lusty kiss it is. Muje apne honth jalte hue mehsus ho rhe hain.

106 ~ Update

BBaby regret kiss baat ka. Ohhh kiss ka hi to regret hai but na to Veer ko regret hai or hi tmhe hoga kuch dair baad Divya darling.

Jo chirya zyada parpharati hai uske par kitarne hi padte hain. Or aisi chirya ho to fir kia hi baat hai.

Bhot amazingly likha hua scene. Like resist and dry humping. Even I can feel her curves.

IS scene ki tarif krne keliye words nhi hain mere pass bus smj lo bhot enjoy kiya hai.

And Nik jeliye just perfect revenge.

Let's wrapup. Fred marchuka hai jo kuch free ka kuch zyada hi enjoy kr aya tha so free ki punishment bhi deserve krta hai.
But jinko Divya ki baato par yqeen nhi tha so finally agya hoga ek bnde ke marne ke baad.Mean itna irresponsible koi kaise hoskta hai. Jb pehle hi poison se mout hochuki hai to fir kuch khana peena banta hi nhi tha agr kuch pee bhi liya to checkup ko kra lete. Ajeeb

So finally bali ka Bakra apna Veer hai but inko pta nhi Veer Shikar nhi balke shikari hai. Or uska jana banta bhi akhir mystic touch koun pagal loose krna chahe ga.

SSuhana do care for you Veer. And Divya bhi now. But Nik ki khulji bhi mitani pade gi. I think divya ki jga iski gaand na khoni pad jye. But homo ban hai. Swcchhh bach gya bsdk.

Veer poncha. Veer ne scan kiya. Veer ko pitcher dikha. Veer ko bulawa aya. Veer gul mil gya. Veer ne drink kiya. Veer koi chutiya hai kia jo without plan kuch bhi kare ga.

Suhana jaan ap hmari jaan lijye but pershan na hua kijye. So relax. Muahh
Muje kuch theek se yaad nhi Veer ke pass koi detoxification ki koi skill hai ya nahi. Bta dena.

HHaan song ki linez bhi achi thi bro bhot. Yaqeen kar.

Waiting for next

Nice update

Mast bhai
Waiting for suspence end

यार, आपका रिव्यु, मात्र रिव्यु नही होता है....
ससुरा.... ई तो जैसे कोनो विशेषज्ञ का विश्लेषण होता है ।
बहुत सारे वैसे बिन्दुओं की आप तह तलाशते है जिनपे अमुमन हम पाठक न के बराबर ही ध्यान देते है ।

Ek reason revo me bhi diya tha or ek bhai ne bhi diya tha skill use hone vala janvaro ki habbite karke...

Jabardast update.... Exciting end... Ab Aage jaane ke liye ek week Ka Intezar karna padega😔😔😔😔😔

Suspense thrill and many more…superb update 👌

super awesome update

Nice updates

Nice update

Fantastic update

jabardast fantastic update

Ding nicely done veer ne khudko bait bana ke picher ko assinate karne ke liye bada risk liya hai dekhte hai werewolf bhai kya interesting plot karte hain

Koi btaayega bhai ki
Next update kab aaye ga ?

Mast update bhai..... Dekhte hai veer ke condition peh suhana ka kya hoga?

Jabardast thriller

small correction "Jis trahh kabhi kabar late update dekar frustrate:bhoi: karaate ho usi trahh update ke schedule ke pehle update dekar kam se kam ek baar double surprise kr do":akshay:

क्या आज अपडेट आयेगा मित्र.. !!

वीर के साथ आखिर क्या हुआ अंतिम भाग में,
क्यों उसे भागकर जाना पड़ा बाथरूम,

शीघ्र अपडेट दीजिए,
और अधिक प्रतीक्षा नहीं...

Werewolf



Mast update Bhai

ग्लास में प्वाइजन नहीं । जिस बोतल में शराब थी , उसमें भी प्वाइजन नहीं । और शराब में भी प्वाइजन नहीं ।
वीर न किसी से हैंडशेक किया और न ही उसकी उंगलियों ने अप्रत्याशित जैसी किसी चीज को छुआ ।
फिर ऐसा क्या हुआ जिससे प्वाइजन उसके शरीर में प्रवेश कर गई ?
यह गौर करने वाली बात है कि फ्रेड की मौत की कैसे हुई , जानता था वो । और सबसे बड़ी बात कि उसके पास ऐसी शक्तियां हैं जिससे वो मात्र एक नजर भर देखकर व्यक्ति या किसी वस्तुओं की गुण दोष की विवेचना कर सकता है ।

फिर भी ऐसा हुआ तो क्योंकर हुआ ?

मुझे लगता है वीर ने कोई ट्रीक खेला है । और अगर ऐसा नहीं है तो वेयरवोल्फ भाई ! आपने एक बेहतरीन सस्पेंस क्रिएट किया है । हम जानना चाहेंगे , ऐसा हुआ तो कैसे हुआ !

दिव्या मैडम और वीर के बीच जो सेक्सुअल सम्बन्ध बना वो नो डाउट बहुत बढ़िया लिखा । लेकिन फिर भी आप ने इन अंतरंग लम्हों को लिखने में शब्दों की कंजूसी कर दी ।

सुहाना का वीर के लिए फिक्रमंद होना ऐसा था जैसे वो उसके परिवार का कोई अभिन्न अंग हो । शायद इतना फिक्र वो अपने हसबैंड के लिए भी नहीं करती । वो शर्तिया वीर को चाहने लगी है ।
सुहाना का बेवाक अंदाज भी मुझे बहुत पसंद आया । जब अपनों को संकटग्रस्त देखते हैं तो जुबान कंट्रोल से बाहर हो ही जाती है ।
ये अपडेट सुपर से भी उपर था । बहुत खुबसूरत लिखा आपने ।

आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग एंड
जगमग जगमग अपडेट वेयरवोल्फ भाई ।

Maenblonigh update bhai dimag ka dhahi kar diya bhai

Superb update Bhai

Congratulations for complete 2000 pages

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Superb update bro maza aa gaya

Nice update bhaii bhit Awla Maza Aya gya par Kar ab new update Ka intazar ha

Waiting bro 🤗🤗🤗

waiting for update bro

Werewolf g sex scene r totally outstanding nd amazing. And the veer's encounter with pitcher also awesome.
I m not guessing any thing kia or kesey howa hoga Best luck 4 next update

Awesome update bro maza aa gaya

Bhai ap ye btao agla update kb ayega

I like your attitude. Highly optimistic and positive approach. Bahut dur tak jaoge brother. Bas bhul mat jana kabhi........

Great update Werewolf bhai.
Last update me bhi Nat aur Veer ki Baato se suhana thodi jealous hui thi. To wahi divya ne amount shabd sunte hi deal kar di. Intimidating presence skill party ya kisi social gathering me bahut kaam aa sakti he jaha veer ko apni chaap chhodni ho sabke mann me. Suhana ab Veer ko leke chinta kar rahi he. Wahi divya apna flirting jari rakhe hue he.
Mystic touch khaas samay pe hi On hota he ye to pata hi tha. Par lagta he ki wo mahol bhi dekhta he. Jese Veer aur Divya akele the, uper se raat ka samay, divya ke mann me veer ki image ye sab dekh ke mystic touch On hoti he. Divya ki jagah veer ki koi aur close hoti to jyada gehra asar hota uss aurat/ladki pe. Nidhi aur Aarohi pe mystic touch dekhne layak hoga 😁😁.
Divya agli subah wahi sab soch rahi he ki kya jo hua to thik tha. Ab suhana se baat karegi to bawal pakka machega. Veer ne hi baat apne hatho me li. Kamre me le jake divya ko aaj uski sari flirting ka jawab de diya Veer ne. Divya bhi chahti he veer ke sath ye sab Karna par kahe kese. Ab veer aage badha he to wo bhi sath degi pura. Ab baar baar veer wo chahegi ki veer uske sath rahe. Last me uske andar hi apna sperm gira diya par sex protection ON he jiska pata divya ko nahi isiliye sab sawal kar rahi he. Par wo shayad samne se na kahe ki veer aaj andar hi release Karna aur Veer bhi Sex protection Off karke bhar dega apna maal uske andar, aur 9 mahine baad divya suhana ko ek pic send karegi uske bachhe ki😂😂. Tab suhana ka chehra dekhne layak hoga.
Nik chutiye ne bhi galat samay pe awaj laga di. Veer ko ese kamre me dusre ki biwi ko pelna achha lagne laga he😂 niharika aur ab divya aur dono ke pati chutiye jese bahar se baate kar rahe he. Nik to andar bhi aaya par kese pata lagta usse ki abhi kya chal raha tha kamre me.
Suhana ne Divya ke badle behaviour pe dhyaan diya aur sawal sidha veer se. Ab veer ne ek tarah se aadha sach bola he. Kal raat kiss hui aur aaj subah sab kuch hua. suhana bhi veer ki taraf ab khichi chali aa rahi he. Veer ka usse support Karna, uska sath dena bina sawal kiye, sab suhana ko achha lag raha he. Wahi divya ko ek aur tabadtod round chahiye jisse uska dhyaan kaam me rahe na ki subah hui ghatna pe.
Suhana ab nikalna chahti he yaha se. Bahut kaam kar liya yaha. Sahi bhi he vesa wo. Idhar aake khud ka kuch fayda ho nahi raha uper se uski aur Veer ki life daav pe lagti he. Fir kyu ruke wo yaha. Veer ki bhi chinta he usko kyuki usko kuch ho gaya to kya jawab degi wo sabko. Sonia, Kaera, Ragini ke sawalo ka kya jawab degi wo ?? Aur ab to suhana ko veer ki maa ke bare me bhi pata he. To veer ko bachana chahti he wo. Par divya ne aake bomb fod diya. Aur kaam shuru.
Ab kaam pe dhyaan de to. Fred ko agla bali ka bakra bana ke bhej diya. Aur kesa department he ye Bc har mission pe ek do casualties pakki hoti hi he. Har mission pe ek banda gaya fir chahe wo department is ho ya private detective😑. Chutiya department he.
Aur uper se ye chutiya Nik. Apni biwi ki baat pe bharosa nahi aur ab Fred ko kho chuke to ab Veer ko aage kar diya. Ye Nik jese chutiye bahut hote he. Kaam Karna nahi, risk lena nahi par credit full lena he. Koi na veer ne jarur kuch soch rakha hoga uske liye. Divya ke pet me apna bachha deke jayega aur Nik palega veer ke bachhe ko.
Nik pe to suhana pehle se hi gussa thi aur ab jyada ho gayi aur ab to divya bhi kese sath we Nik ka jab Nik ne jaanbujh ke veer ka naam aage kar diya he. Par Veer ready he kyuki mission mila he. To usko to jana hi tha. Par nik ka ese veer ka naam aage Karna saaf dikhata he ki wo Veer ko fail hote dekhna chahta he.
Ho sakta he suhana kuch ateet bhi dekhne ko mile kyuki usne kisi ko pehle mara he. Ab kya circumstances honge uske ? Kise mara ? Wo dekhte he.
Mike se thodi baat karke nikal gaya veer apne mission pe. Mission bada he kyuki ek skill bhi chali jayegi agar wo fail hua to.
Veer ki tasvir ghoom rahi he aur agla target wahi he. Aur Fred ke jese hi veer ko bulaya gaya usko wine di, veer ne check bhi kiya. Udhar wine veer pi raha tha wahi tension divya suhana ko ho raha tha.
Veer ne wine pi aur uska asar bhi hua uspe?? Detoxification ?? Par abhi to veer pada hua he washroom me aur suhana yahi soch rahi he ki kya ho raha he sab ?
Divya to jese uska pati gira ho waha ese bhagi udhar. Nik chutiya dekh raha hoga sab aur mann me khush ho raha hoga. Par divya ki halat kharab he abhi. Gadi me bethe soch rahi hogi ki aage kya hoga?
Veer ke liye khaas jagah bann gayi he uske andar.
Sala pitcher ne to hila diya. Esa kya use kiye he ki Pari ki pakad me bhi na aaya.
Ab next update me dekhenge sab ke haal.
Yaha veer pada hua he. Wahi pe Nidhi, Ragini, Aarohi, Suman aur baki sab ko thodi bechaini hogi veer ko leke. Ye scene bhi dikhana bhai agar ho sake to. Veer aahat ho aur uski chahne wali ko aabhas hoga hi. Aur bhavna Tej ka bhi mann nahi lagega. Unka veer se milna kahnai ka ek important part hone wala he kyuki tabhi veer ko apne nanihal ke bare me bhi pata chalega.
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Agle romanchak update ki pratiksha mai🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

Oh my god 😍

Always improving keep it up ✌🏼✌🏼

Thank you so much for actress pics.
I didn't know about this actress.

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Superb update bro

Waiting for next update bro

Kya haal hain janab
Kya story update hain navab
Kya taarif kare hum apki
Bus ye duaa ki apka poora ho khawab

Ham dono ek saath kai thread par hai aur maine hamesha aap ke review ko saraha hai. You are such a great reader n critics.
Aap ka review bahut bahut badhiya lagta hai mujhe. :hug:
Waise jitne naam aapne tag kiya hai wo sabhi universal likers hai. :D

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Werewolf Bro big fan of you and your story
Ab tak ke story bina id ke parhe the akhirkar id bana he le maine be and my 1st comment on your story coz love your writteng skill bro

Story read krte waqt esa lagta hai jese samne beth kar koi movie dekh raha hun evry update apky skills mai izafa hota jaa raha hai its that like a wrriting master s true skills joke aapko born se he mile hai

So jitne taref kro km he hogi coz story pe ek pore film ban sakte hai wo be hollywood mai

So likhte rhye hamara revo ab milta rhega aapko

Wairing for next update kill the pitcher

Waiting for next update bhai


Ummid krte hai Werewolf bhai ki aap aaj definitely Update de de.
Quki mere tarah hi aapki story ke die hard fans log apna apna intejam kiye baithe rahenge aaj ke Update ke liye. To Please hme nirash mat kariyega. Ek aap ki hi to story hai jiske update ke liye sare readers pani maar maar kr kud ko late night tak jagaye rakhte hai.

Waiting for next update 🙁

master mind nik hi niklega killers main se

Werewolf Bhai kab update aayega.....

Werewolf bhai aaj update aayega?

Aaj update ke kitne %%%%%%% chances he Wolfie vro ? :waiting:


Bhai aaj hi dena kal IND vs Pak hai

Kab Tak ayega Bhai Update??????
Update 107 has been posted.
 

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Update - 107 ~ The Secret Practice
Ab tak...

Car me ghuste hi usse aisa mehsoos hua jaise usne kuch kho diya tha. Aisa lag raha tha jese uske dil me koi sui chubho raha tha. Peeda!!!

Jaise woh himmat hi haar chuki thi.

'N-Nooooo!!!!'

Accelerator par perr rakh usne ek jhatke me gaadi aage bhaga dii,

*VRRRRROOOOOOMMMM*

Abhi abhi...

Ye kya ho gaya tha?


Ab aage...

"Haah! Haah! Haaaahhhh! Urrggghh!!"

*Thud*

Ladkhada ke ek shareer achanak neeche zameen par gira. Saasein tezz, dhadkane tezz, aankhein ekdum laal, poora badan paseene se lathpat, aankho me dhundhlapann aur nirantar khaase jaa raha tha woh shaks.

*Cough* *Cough*

*Cough* *Cough*

*Gwaaakhhhhhhhhh!!*

Khoon!! Muh se uske dherr saara khoon nikla.

[Nooooooooooo~ Masterrrrrrr!!!!!!!]

Pari zorr se cheenkhi. Beshaq, ye Veer hi tha. Wine peene ke kuch derr baad hi Veer ke shareer ke andar na jaane kya kuch hone laga tha.

Woh jese hi gira, Pari ki cheenkhe bhi dheere dheere dheemi sunaayi padne lagi usse.

Usne apne honth khole kuch kehne ke liye par thar-tharaate hue woh waapas band ho gaye.

[Maaaaassssttttteeeerrrrrrrrr~]

Ek dard bhari akhiri awaaz hi Pari ki sunn paaya woh. Aur agle shan hi,

Uski aankhein band ho gayi.

[Nooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!]

***

"Aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhnnnnnnnn~"

Achanak jhatke ke saath ek ladki apne bistar se uth gayi. Din ka samay tha. Lagbhag 1 baj rahe the. Woh apne kamre me hi thoda araam farmaane ke liye laiti hui thi jab uski halki neend lag gayi thi. Aur neend me usne na jaane aisa kya dekha jiske chalte woh hadbadaate hue uth ke baith gayi.

Shayad, ek bura sapna tha.

Uske kapde paseene se bheege hue the. Khubsoorat se chehre par bhi paseene ki boonde saji hui thi. Haafte hue usne apne chehre par se ek towel se paseena pocha. Aur ek gehri saans lete hue woh kitchen ki orr chal padi.

Ek glass thanda paani peene ke baad woh waapas aayi, kamre ka darwaza andar se band kiya aur bistar par baith gayi.

'Ye bechaini...!'

Usse kuch theek nahi lag raha tha. Usne fauran hi apna phone uthaaya, usme gallery kholi aur uski nazre ek tasveer par jaake theher gayi.

'Thode din aur... Thode din me hi... Tum meri aankho ke saamne hoge. Aur fir uske baad... Tumhe kahi nahi jaane dungi mein!'

'Hum firse ek saath rahenge. Mom se saare raaz khulwa ke rahungi mein. Just wait a bit more. I will come to you. Very soon! My younger one!!'

Aur khud mann me ek lakshya thaan, woh waapas se bistar par lait gayi.

***
Las Vegas ~ 1:47 AM

*VRRRRROOOOOOMMMM*

Ek gaadi sann-sanaati hui raaste par tezz raftaar me bhaagti jaa rahi thi. Derr raat ka samay tha. Lekin, roads par abhi bhi kuch gaadiya aati jaati maalum pad rahi thi. Ye Vegas tha, jo jaana hi apni night life ke liye jaata tha.

Divya ka perr accelerator par tha aur woh saaye-saaye gaadi bhaga rahi thi. Aankho me ek nami chhaayi hui thi,

'Why?? Why Veer?? Kyu kiya tumne aisa? Tum bewakoof nahi ho. You solved the Nightwalker's case. Th-Then how can you just...!? God damn it!!! Tum aisa qadam kese utha sakte ho? J-Just why?? Just tell me you were acting. Just tell me!! I just can't...!!!'

Apne hi mann me uth rahe sawaalo ke woh khud hi uttar dete jaa rahi thi. Ye achanak se kya ho gaya tha? Sab kuch theek chal raha tha. Fir eka-ek Fred ki maut aur ab Veer ki haalat ne unhe chinta me daal diya tha.

Kisi ne bhi Veer ko glass se wine peete nahi dekha tha. Lekin sabhi jaante the ki usne kya kiya tha. Camera uski chest ki pocket me laga tha. Aur jab usne wine ka glass neeche rakha tha. Woh khaali ho chuka tha. Zaahir hai ki usne wine pee thi. Aur fir woh khoon...!!

Itne logo ke beech bhala kese kisi ko murkh bana sakta tha woh?

Aur yahi baat Divya ko bechain kare jaa rahi thi.

Jo Divya Veer ki firki lene ke liye aatur rehti thi, usse chidhaane ka koi mauka nahi chorrti thi, uske saath nakli flirting karte hue zara bhi peeche nahi hatati thi, aaj wahi Divya uske liye aasu baha rahi thi. Ye naina roye jaa rahe the uske.

Kyu bhala? Divya ki khud nahi samajh aa raha tha. Woh kabse itni emotional bann gayi? Lekin fir kyu ye nain baar baar aasuo ko pochhne ke baad bhi bheeg rahe the?

Ek jo kaaran tha woh tha subah ka unka milan. Bhale hi baahar se Divya kitna hi kyu na keh de ki uske aur Veer ke beech ye sab nahi hona chahiye tha. Par andar hi andar kahi na kahi jese woh khud chaahti thi ye aur khush bhi thi.

Aur sangam hone ke baad, thoda sa bhi prem na jaage, aisa bhala kese ho sakta tha? Uske dil me ab Veer ke liye ek alag jagah bann chuki thi. Jiski jagah ab koi dusra nahi le sakta tha.

Usne turant gear neeche kar gaadi chauthe gear me daali aur speed aur badha dii.

Aur kuch hi minutes ke andar woh doori bhi tay kar lii.

*Screeeeeeccccchhhh*

Brakes maarte hue zorr se usne gaadi roki.

*Thud*

Aur darwaaza band kar woh seedha daudi andar kii orr.

Baahar security guards nahi khade the, aur toh aur andar se kayi log bhaagte hue baahar nikal rahe the.

Mike team aur police ke sang shayad pehle hi andar ghus chuka tha.

Andar se baahar nikalte logo ko ignore kar woh daudte bhaagte hue seedha hotel me andar ghus gayi.

Saamne ka nazaara shaant pada hua tha.


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Neeche toh koi chahal pahal hi samajh nahi aa rahi thi. Bas upar se neeche aa rahe log hi dikhaayi de rahe the usse.

Jo ki swabhaavik tha. Veer bhi toh second floor me hi gaya tha. Ye dhyaan me aate hi Divya tezz qadmo ke saath seedha stairs ki orr bhaagi.

Lift lene ke liye samay nahi tha. Aur wese bhi, second floor par jaldi pohuchne ke liye khud ke perr hi sabse accha vikalp the.

Andar ghuste hi Divya ki aankho ke saamne chaka-chaundh kar dene waala drishya tha.

Detectives aur police ki team sabhi maujooda logo ko rok ke unhe baithane ki koshish me lagi thi. Sab ke sab under arrest me the. Nolan ke nirdesh ke baad hi Mike samet sabhi ne andar dhaava bol diya tha.

Ek bhi bach ke jaane na paaye, jitne masks lagaaye the woh sabhi iss party ka hissa the. Police ki madad se inn sabhi logo ko giraft me le liya gaya tha.

Divya ki nazre idhar se udhar duvidha me daud rahi thi. Aur tabhi usse dhyaan aaya,

'The washroom!!! Right!!!!'

Aur woh fauran bhaagi...

Aage badhte hi usse Mike nazar aaya. Toh Divya ne ek tezz awaaz lagaayi,

"Miiiiiiikkkke!!!!!"

Mike : We got this!!!! Go and search for him instead!!!

Usne chillaate hue bataaya.

Police aur uske seh karmiyo ne yaha ki paristhiti sambhaal lii thi. Mike ne fauran hi Divya ko Veer ko dhundhne ke liye kaha.

Aur Divya turant haa me sarr hilaate hue sarpat daud laga dii,

Samay badhta jaa raha tha. Kahi aisa na ho ki waqt ret ki tarah uski mutthi se fisal jaaye aur Veer....!

'Nahiiiii!!!! Nahi!!!! Veeeeerrrr!!!'

Woh mann me chillaayi,

Uske dil ki dhadkan tezz ho rakhi thi.

*Thud*

Pohuchte hi usne washroom ka ek darwaaza khola. Jidhar usse koi dikhaayi na diya.

'Ye waala nahi...! Damn it!!!'

Aur uski ghabraahat aur badh gayi.

Beshaq usne screen par Veer ko washroom jaate dekha tha. Par usse ye yaad nahi tha ki washroom kaun sa tha. Kyuki yaha line se 8 se 10 washrooms the. Aur sabhi ke sabhi behad bade.

"Veeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrr!!!!!"

Woh usse pukaari!!! Veer ka naam le le kar woh darwaaze kholti rahi. Ek na ek me toh milega hi Veer.

*Thud*

'God damn it!!! Where are you....!!???'

4 darwaaze khol ke usne chaaro washrooms check kar liye the, Par Veer kahi bhi nazar nahi aa raha tha.

*Dhak* *Dhak*

Aur na hi woh jawaab de raha tha. Uski bechaini aur badh gayi.

Agar usse kuch ho gaya toh? Toh kya jawaab degi woh Suhana ko? Khud Divya iss buri khabar ke liye taiyaar nahi thi.

"Veeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrr!!!!!???"

Usne punaah pukaara aur jese hi usne paachve darwaaze ko kholna chaaha,

*Click*

Darwaaza apne aap khul gaya.

Divya : Haahhh??

Aur Divya ki aankho ke saamne tha, Veer!!

Jeeta jaagta Veer. Apne jyo ke tyo haal me.

Lekin baal thode bikhre hue the uske. Saath hi aisa lag raha tha jese kahi bhaag daud karke aaya tha woh. Aankhein bhi halki halki laal maalum pad rahi thi.

"Ohhh God!!!"

Jo bechaini, jo ghabraahat, jo darr Divya ko abhi inn chand pal pehle pareshaan kar raha tha. Woh Veer ko apni nazro ke saamne dekhte hi jese chhumantar ho gaya.

Aur agle hi shan,

Woh aage badh Veer se kass ke lipat gayi. Apne haath uske baalo ke peeche le jaate hue usne Veer ke sarr ko zorr se pakad apne kandhe par tika liya.

Iss waqt aisa prateet ho raha tha jese ye ek badi behan ka chote bhai ke prati prem tha. Divya iss samay Veer ki badi behan ki tarah hi lag rahi thi.

Divya : Ohhhh thank god!!! Thank god! You're okay!!!

Aur kuch pal bas khamoshi chhaayi rahi. Divya aur Veer ek dusre ke aalingan me bane rahe.

Kuch derr baad akhir kaar usne Veer ko chorra aur usse dekhte hue apne sawaalo ki jhadi laga dii.

Divya : Kya tha ye sab haan? Veeerrr??? Bolo kuch? Why did you do that?? Kyu kiya aisa Veer??? Kaho? What really happened? Tell me!!!

Veer ki aankhein adh khuli thi. Woh Divya ko dekh zaroor raha tha. Par jese uske bol par uska dhyaan hi nahi tha. Uska dhyaan toh kahi orr hi tha.

*Ding*

[Mission : 'Assassinate the Pitcher' has been completed.]

*Ding*

[4000 Points have been rewarded.]

*Ding*

[500 Fame points have been rewarded.]

*Ding*

[Scroll ~ Profit Path has been rewarded.]

[Maaaaaaaassssttttteeerrrrr~]

Pari ki ek chintajanak pukaar uske mann me goonji.

[Why did you do that???? I told you not to-- ]

'Pari! I'm okay!' Veer ne ahista se jawaab diya usse.

Na chaahte hue bhi Pari ko shaant hona pada. Aisa laga jese woh ro rahi thi. Waqai me. Uski udaasi aur niraasha saaf uski awaaz me jhalak rahi thi.

Aur tabhi,

"Kaha kho gaye??? Veeerrrr!???"

Saamne se Divya ki awaaz sunn Veer ko hosh aaya. Woh apne khayalaato se baahar aaya.

Divya uss se jawaab maang rahi thi.

Divya : Bolo? Kya tha ye sab Veer? Kyu pee tumne woh wine??

Veer : Kya aapne mujhe wine peete hue dekha?

Divya (jhepte hue) : Huh?

Veer : Mene pucha ki kya aapne mujhe wine peete hue dekha?

Divya : ??? T-Tumne wine nahi pee toh kya piya tha? Bewakoof mat samjho Veer! We all saw it. Bhale hi tumhe directly nahi dekh paaye hum kyuki camera tumhari chest pocket me tha par humne dekha tha kese tumne glass hawa me upar uthaaya aur waapas rakha toh wine nahi thi usme. Where did it went?

Veer : It went right here!

Veer ne apni coat ki inner chest pocket ke andar se kuch nikaalte hue usse dikhaaya.

Aur usse dekhte hi Divya ke hosh udd gaye.

Divya : T-This...!

Veer : Yes!!!

Divya : Y-You--

Uske haatho me ek chota sa container tha.

Divya : N-No!!!! Tumhara matlab hai...!?

Veer : Hmm!

Kisne kaha Veer wine ko pee raha tha? Veer muh me zaroor bhar raha tha wine ko lekin bharne ke baad woh aise dikhaata jese woh wine ko gutak chuka hai. Par mauka dekhte hi woh apni inner coat ki pocket me usse thook ke uss container me daal raha tha.

Divya usse bhoot bann ke dekhe jaa rahi thi. Usse vishvaas hi nahi ho raha tha.

Divya : T-Tumne ye kiya tha asal me!?

Veer : Mein paagal hu kya jo woh wine piyunga? Hmm?

Divya : R-Right! T-That was really smart! Par... Par itne logo ke beech tumne kese...!?

Veer : I just got lucky!!!

Divya : I-I see~ Ye boht hi acchi baat hai. Kisi ko kuch pata nahi chala tumhaare iss container ke baare me. Y-You did great Veer. Jab screen me tumhe wine peete dekha toh hum logo ki jaan halak me atak gayi thi. I swear. Suhana bechaari toh... I hope she's alright! It's... It's really good that you're fine.

Usne Veer ke kandhe par haath rakh thodi bheegi aankho se jataaya.


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Veer ne haami bhari.

Divya : But wait!!!! Y-Your blood!!! Khoon kese aaya tumhe?? Agar tumne nahi pii toh...

Veer : That was a facade!!

Divya : Wh-What?

Veer : Woh khoon nahi tha!

Divya : Toh kya tha?

Veer : Just some color!

Divya : Color???

Veer (nods) : Right!!!

Divya : Par...

Veer : I prepared it beforehand.

Divya : K-Kya matlab!?

Veer : Woh emergency ke liye tha. I needed help. Lekin aenn waqt pe communication device kaam karna band kar diya tha. Meri awaaz aap tak nahi pohuch rahi thi. Uske liye ye sab karna pada taaki department fauran hi help bhej sake.

Divya : Ahhh!!! I-I see!!! T-Toh ye baat thi. Thank god!!! Everything is fine!

Divya ne kehte hue uske coat se woh communication device nikaal liya aur usse halki muskaan dwte hue boli,

Divya : You don't need this now.

Veer haan me sarr hilaate hue aage badh gaya.

Veer : Come! Aur bhi kuch baatein jaan'ni hai abhi.

Divya : Right!!!

Divya usse jaate hue dekhti rahi. Par akasmaat hi uska dhyaan Veer se liye gaye communication device par gaya. Aur,

Divya : H-Hello? Divya speaking!! Can anyone here me??

Aur uske itna bolte hi,

"Yes!!! We can hear you! Loud and clear!!!"

Dusri orr se department ke seh karmi ki spasht awaaz sunaayi dii. Divya hairat me apne haatho me uss device ko dekhti reh gayi.

'This... This is working fine!!!'

Kabhi woh Veer ki peeth ko dekhti jaha Veer dheere dheere apni jebo me haath daale araam se corridor me jaa raha tha. Toh kabhi uss device ko dekhti.

Antatah usne ek baar fir daud lagaayi,

Divya : Veeeeerrrrrrrr!!!!!

Woh chillaayi,

Veer (palat'te hue) : Hmm?

Divya : Ye... Ye toh chal raha hai. It's working fine!!!

Veer : Ohh!? Is it? Well that's good! Kuch derr oehle nahi chal raha tha.

Kehte hue woh ek baar fir aage badh gaya. Machine thi. Kabhi chalti toh kabhi nahi.

Parantu, Divya usse bas jaata hua dekhti rahi. Uski kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha. What just happened?

Bhaagte hue woh bhi Veer ki chaal se chaal milaayi aur corridor ke baahar nikal gayi.

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Baahar aate hi nazara kuch aisa tha ki police ne sab apne control me le liya tha. Aur toh aur Mike ne unke saath milke kayi raaz bhi khol ke rakh diye the.

Mike fauran hi Divya ke paas aaya aur usse sab kuch bataaya.

Jo log yaha masks pehen ke party manaane aate the. Ye darasal koi aur nahi wahi log the jo Nightwalker ke mansion me ho rahe khoon ke khel ko live dekh uska lutf uthaate the.

Udhar Nightwalker ka poora live session dark web par daala jaata tha aur idhar log aankho dekhi hatya ka maza lete the. Yahi inki fetish thi. Na keval woh ye sab dekhte the balki iss par kaafi paisa bhi fekte the. Bets bhi lagti thi. Jiska poora fayda Nightwalker aur Pitcher ko hota tha.

Pitcher ki bhi fetish thi jo unn se aur hatke thi. Usse sundar se sundar actresses, models aur celebrities ko maarne ka shauk tha.

Udhar Nightwalker ka maut ka nanga naach jab khatam hota toh idhar uski khushi me Pitcher party rakhta, jisme woh fir kisi ko maut ke ghaat utaarta.

Yaha do tarfi hatya ka kaand chaalu tha.

Udhar se Nightwalker toh idhar se Pitcher.

Dono hi ek dusre ke sang business me bhi the. Woh jo cameras Mansion me the. Woh isliye the. Unke zariye hi ye log masks pehen ke yaha masoom ki bali ka maza uthaate the.

Chuki aisi footages kisi platform par nahi daali jaa sakti thi isliye Dark web ka sahara liya jaata tha.

Aur inhi cameras me se unhe Veer ke baare me pehle hi pata lag chuka tha.

Par ek satya aur tha. Jiski wajah se poora department maat khaa gaya tha.

Woh ye ki...

Nat ne jo invitation card diya tha. Uss par ek serial number bhi tha. Ye serial number card par bhi rehta tha aur...

Aur unke paas data sheet me nhi feed rehta tha. Jab Fred uss card ko leke entry kiya tha.

Toh serial number match karte hi unhe pata lag chuka tha ki Fred ke paas jo card tha woh darasal Natalia ko bheja gaya tha.

Poori chori yahi pakad gayi thi unki. Security ne Pitcher ko sachet kar diya tha. Lekin uske bawajo Pitcher ne usse bulaaya. Ab koi darwaaze tak aaya ho toh bhala uski khaatir daari kese bhul sakta tha woh?

Aur Fred bhi...

Maut ke ghaat utaar diya gaya. Khel khatam.

Yahi haal Veer ke sang bhi hua. Card toh uske paas bhi wahi tha. Nat ka.

Aur usse dekhte hi unhe fir abhaas ho chuka tha. Saath hi Veer ki photo bhi unke paas thi.

Lekin Veer ke mann me jo baat abhi bhi khatak rahi thi woh ye thi ki unko khabar kisne dii thi ki woh yaha aane waala hai? Aur mask pehen'ne ke bawajood bhala kese pehchaan liye woh usse? Iska jawaab woh dhundh raha tha. Aur kuch kuch usse samajh aa chuka tha.

Mike ne ye saari jankaari jese hi bataayi toh Divya ekdum gusse se laal ho gayi. Ab inki chori pakdi gayi thi toh zaahir hai kisi na kisi aadmi ne saara sach ugal hi diya tha Mike ko.

Par iss khel me jin maasumo ki jaan gayi unka kya? Daniel, Chester, Jacob, Fred kese kitne hi maare gaye. Woh toh ab waapas nahi aa sakte the na.

Mike : I have something to show you! Hurry!

Mike ne kehte hue unn dono ko hi kahi le jaane ke liye kaha.

Jaldbaazi me woh uss dining table par pohuche jaha Veer baitha hua tha.

Par jese hi woh waha aaye,

Divya ko ek bada sa jhatka laga,

Divya : Y-Ye toh...!!!

Neeche ek dead body padi thi. Aur ye koi aur nahi tha. Wahi tha...

Pitcher!!!!

Muh se uske dherr saara jhaag nikla hua tha. Saaf tha ki woh zeher se marra tha.

Divya : Isn't he the...!?

Mike (nods) : Yes!!! The same guy who served the wine.

Divya : This...!!

Mike : He used poison to kill others. That wine bottle contains poison.

Mike ne wahi rakhi wine bottle ki orr ishaara karte hue bataaya jo Pitcher ne Veer ke liye kholi thi.

Divya (bauhe sikodte hue) : We are still missing something. How did he die?

Veer : I know it.

Veer ke kehte hi sabhi ki nazre uss par focused ho gayi. Hairaani me woh sabhi usse dekhe,

Divya : Whaaattt???

Veer : The secret practice...!!!

Mike : Secret practice?

Divya : Veer saaf saaf shabdo me kaho!!! Please be quick!!!

Veer : Wanna know the name?

Divya : *gulps*

Mike : !!!???

Aur fir Veer ke muh se ek shabd nikla,


"MITHRIDATISM"

Jisse sunte hi Divya ke poore badan ke raungte khade ho gaye.

Aur uske kaanpte haatho se Veer ka woh device gir gaya. Kyuki woh jaanti thi. Woh bhali bhaati jaanti thi iss ek shabd ka matlab kya tha.

Mike ki samajh me na aaya. Usne apna phone nikaal google kar uss ek shabd ka matlab search kiya aur jese hi usne uske baare me jaana. Uska badan khud kaanp utha.

Mithridatism, ek aisi practice jisme insaan kam maatra me khud zeher leta hai. Maatra itni ki jaan ke liye ghaatak na bane.

Mithridates VI jo Pontus ke Raja the. Maana jaata hai ki woh apni maut ko lekar itne darre hue rehte the ki unhe harr samay yahi lagta tha ki koi unhe chalaaki se zeher deke maar dega. Ye puraatan kaal me ek aam baat thi. Raja maharajao ko ye bhay aksar bana rehta tha ki kahi koi unka apna hi unke saath vishvaas-ghaat na kar de.

Toh zeher unka kuch bigaad hi na paaye isliye Raja Mithridates VI ne kam maatra me khud hi zeher lena shuru kar diya tha. Iss umeed me ki ye kam zeher lete lete ek na ek din unka shareer iss zeher ke khilaaf rog pratirodhak shakti paida kar hi dega. Yaani ki immunity bana hi lega.

Jese aksar hum navjaat shishu ko injections lagwaate hai, fir chaahe woh polio ke ho ya tetanus ke ya anya koi. Inka uddeshya hi yahi rehta hai ki shareer inn rogo ke khilaaf ek immunity bana le. Raja Mithridates ne bhi yahi karne ka socha tha.

Zeher le le ke uske khilaaf ladne ki shakti banana. Parantu ye daav ulta pad gaya tha. Zeher baar baar nirantar lene ke baad wahi zeher unke shareer me ikhatta hone laga tha, jo baad me aage chalke unki maut ka kaaran bann gaya.

Pitcher ka bhi uddeshya wahi tha.

Aur Pitcher...

Ye karne me qamyaab ho gaya tha.


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Aisa nahi tha ki aap yadi iss practice ko apnaate ho toh aapki maut nischit hai.

Hargiz nahi! Yadi non-biological poisons ko liya jaaye toh ye sambhav hai ki aap kuch poisons ke khilaaf immunity nirmit kar sakte ho.

Jo vish ka pyaala hum dusro ko dete hai woh ek na ek din hume khud bhi peena padta hai. Ab tak ye baat Pitcher par sahi se laagu nahi ho rahi thi. Par Veer ke aate hi...

Kaam tamaam ho chuka tha.

Divya : Quick!!! We have to get back to the department. There are still many questions that are left unanswered.

Woh kehti hue aage badhi, Mike bhi haami bharte hue peeche peeche gaya. Parantu idhar Veer ki aankhein Pitcher ki laash par hi tiki hui thi.

Unn aankho me bhayanak gussa tha. Ekdum laal ho rakhi thi woh. Aisa lag raha tha Veer abhi uski laash pe bhi toot padega aur cheer phaad dega.

'I almost died, you bastard!!!'

Woh mann me hi gurraaya.

Uska heart rate bhaiyankar zyaada ho rakha tha. Container?? Kaahe ka container??

Veer Divya ke jaate hue figure ko peeche se dekh raha tha. Siwae Mithridatism ke, jo kuch bhi usne Divya ko bataaya tha.

Woh sab jhooth tha.

Uska asal sach toh uske khud ke antar mann ki gehraiyo aur uske zehen me hi dafn hoke rehne waala tha.

Asli sachhaayi toh kuch aur hi thi...

Jab Veer hotel me ghus neeche Beowulf se check kar raha tha. Tab usse nahi pata tha ki upar balcony me uski photo ko idhar se udhar kiya jaa raha tha.

Parantu...

Ek uss se bhi badi sansani macha dene waali khoj kar lii thi usne.

Neeche uski nazar dur ek aise vyakti par padi thi jo ek wine ki bottle me powder jesa kuch mila raha tha.

Aur ye kya tha ye bataane ki zaroorat hi nahi thi.

Beshaq, zeher!!!!

Veer ka maqsad saaf tha. Na keval usne jaa ke iss baat ka pata kiya balki, usne uss vyakti ke jaate hi wahi powdered substance ki maatra aur badha ke uss wine me daal dii.

Ye sab usne tab kiya tha jab woh vyakti andar kuch lene gaya tha.

Bheed itni thi ki kisi ko kuch nahi pata tha ki kya ho raha hai. Sirf pitcher hi Veer ke baare me jaanta tha aur chand aur log jinhone Veer ki live footage dekhi thi. Par kuch aise bhi the jo Veer ke pehle ke murder footages dekhe hue the. Woh bhi party ka hissa the.

[Maaastttteeerrrrr!!! Wh-Whaattt are you doing??? Aap usme kyu mila rahe ho?]

'Agar mein sahi hu, toh aaj Pitcher nahi bachega!!!'

[N-Noooo!!! Don't tell me you...!!]

'Yes!! I will do it!!!'

Woh waapas se apni jagah par aaya. Aur Veer ne dekha ki kese woh vyakti dobaara se uss wine ki bottle me packing chadha raha tha taaki aisa lage wine ki bottle ekdum nayi hai.

'This motherfucker...!!'

Aur inn chand lamho me, Veer ne ye saara kaam iss prakaar se kiya tha ki uske jeb ka camera saamne ki orr focused tha. Department waalo ko screen me dekh ye katayi pata nahi lag paaya tha ki Veer ne aisa bhi kuch kiya tha.

Fir aaya woh waqt, jab Pitcher ne Veer ko bulaaya.

Uske saath baith ke jab usne Veer ko woh wine offer kii, Pitcher ke chehre par haivaani waali kapti muskaan thi. Kyuki woh jaanta tha ye Veer marrega hi uske haatho.

Par woh nahi jaanta tha... Ki Veer ek aam insaan nahi tha.

Veer ne jese hi wine se bhare glass ko check kiya,

*Ding*

[A glass full of poisoned wine. Don't drink it.]

Sab kuch saamne tha. Ye wahi wine thi. Jisme ferr badal kiya gaya tha.

Aur isliye Pitcher ab tak pakda nahi gaya tha. Kyuki woh bhi same wine peeta tha.

Parantu woh iss zeher se ladne me saksham tha. Lekin aam vyakti nahi.

Aur aise hi sabhi maut ke ghaat utar rahe the.

What a way to kill.

Woh abhi bhi shaitaano ki tarah muskuraa ke Veer ko dekh raha tha.

'This sly bastard!!!'

Lekin aaj khel kuch alag hone waala tha.

'Pari!!! Open the shop!!'

[Yes Master!!!]

'Find me a skill which can cure this poison.'

[Whaaaatttttt??? Nooooooooo!!! Maaassttteeerrrr!!! Aap aisa nahi kar sakte. I'm tell you please stop!!! Please!!! I'm begging you~]

'Pari...!!!'

[Nooo noooo nooooooo!!!!? How can I??? Mat kariye.... Please!!!! I...]

'DO IT!!!!!!'

Jab Veer mann me zorr se cheekha toh Pari ek baar fir apne master ke saamne haar gayi.

[Master! This is the one but...]

'Kitne points? Ohhh! 5000 Points? One time use only? Fine then! Purchase this.'

[O-Okay but...]

'DO IT!!!!'

*Ding*

['Sylvia's Venom Cure' is now available.]

*Ding*

[Host can only use this skill for one time only.
Warning : Beware of extreme pain, vomit and increased heart rate.]

*Ding*

[Sylvia's Venom cure has been activated.]

Aur agle hi pal, Veer ke andar bhaari maatra me white blood cells bann'na shuru ho gaye. Bann toh pehle bhi rahe the par unki process kayi guna badh chuki thi.

Veer ne fir woh kiya jo sabko hairaan kar doya tha.

Usne wine pee lii thi. Par wine toh container me gayi thi?

Laude ka container! Woh container toh washroom ke soap dispenser ka ek toota hua bhaag tha jo Veer ne washroom se nikalne se pehle hathyaa tha.

Woh color? Ghanta color! Woh toh uska khoon tha jo white blood cells ne poison ke roop me usse baahar fikwaaya tha.

White blood cells hi toh immunity ka kaaran hai hamaare shareer me.

Aur uske baad utha tha Veer ko atyant dard, uska nervous system itne khatarnak sthiti se guzar raha tha ki uska andhruni dard aseem hota jaa raha tha.

Aisa laga tha ki woh ab nahi bachega. Aur behosh hone se pehle usse bas Pari ke bol yaad the.

"Veeeeerrrrrrrr!!!???"

Divya ki awaaz usse hosh me laayi.

Veer : Coming!!!

Veer ek akhiri nazar Pitcher par daal aage badh gaya.

Aur baahar aate hi,

*Screeeeeeccccchhhh*

Gaadi ruki aur Suhana aur Nik usme se baahar nikle.

Suhana ki nigaahein jese hi Veer par jaa kar tiki uski aankhein felti chali gayi,

"Veeeeerrrrrrr!!!"

Woh daudte hue aayi aur zorr se kood ke uski baaho me ucchal gayi.

Uske baad wahi hua. Sawaal pe sawaal. Veer ne jese tese maamla shaant kiya.

Par...

Veer : Huh!!??

Woh aashcharya chakit reh gaya jab usne apne bagal me Suhana ko dekha toh...



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Woh ro rahi thi. Unn aankho me pehli baar Veer ne kabhi apne liye itne strong emotions dekhe the.

'Miss Suhana...!?'

Veer : Aap ro rahi ho?

Suhana (muh ferrte hue) : Who's crying? Get lost!

Veer : *smiles*

Divya : Tum dono? Take my keys! Mujhe aane me late ho jaega.

Divya ne car ki keys fekte hue kaha.

Aur kuch derr me hi Veer aur Suhana dono Divya ki car me sawaar hote hue waha se ravaana ho gaye. Udhar ki tehkiqaat lambi chalne waali thi.

Idhar car me,

Suhana (smiles) : I'm happy!

Veer : Why so?

Suhana : Duh!!! You dumb! Kyuki tum sahi salaamat ho.

Veer : Par jab mein waha se jaa raha tha tab toh aap gussa hoke bhaag gayi thi bacchi ki tarah perr patak ke.

Suhana (blushes) : Wh-What do you mean by bacchi ki tarah??? I was looking out for you!! Par tum ho ki... Kherr! Chorro!!! Wait!!

Veer : Kya hua?

Suhana : Udhar park hai!

Veer : So!?

Suhana : Stupid! Stop the car! Mujhe thodi fresh air chahiye.

Suhana ki baat maan Veer ne gaadi park ke paas rok dii.

Ye ek open park tha.

Aur dono hi utar ke kuch derr uss khamoshi me tehelne lage. Koi baat nahi.

Jab achanak se,

Suhana palti aur Veer se zorr se chipak gayi.



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'Huh?'

Suhana : I thought something will happen to you!!!

Usne usse dekh ke bola!!


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Veer : But I'm right here! Hai na?

Suhana : Hmm! And that's what matters.

Kehte hue woh uske kandhe par sarr rakh uss se chipki rahi.


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Jab achanak hi usse dhyaan aaya...

Ki Veer uska pati nahi tha.

Suhana : Ahhh!!! S-Sorry about that...!!

Kehte hue woh dur hatt gayi aur mud gayi.

Veer ko yu akela chorr woh waapas se car ki orr chal dii.

Idhar sheetal leher me, halki hawao me Veer ki lehraati zulfein uski aankho ke saamne fir rahi thi aur nazre tiki hui thi Suhana ke jaate hue figure par.

'You are hiding something. Aren't you? Miss Suhana?'
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Update - 107 ~ The Secret Practice
Ab tak...

Car me ghuste hi usse aisa mehsoos hua jaise usne kuch kho diya tha. Aisa lag raha tha jese uske dil me koi sui chubho raha tha. Peeda!!!

Jaise woh himmat hi haar chuki thi.

'N-Nooooo!!!!'

Accelerator par perr rakh usne ek jhatke me gaadi aage bhaga dii,

*VRRRRROOOOOOMMMM*

Abhi abhi...

Ye kya ho gaya tha?


Ab aage...

"Haah! Haah! Haaaahhhh! Urrggghh!!"

*Thud*

Ladkhada ke ek shareer achanak neeche zameen par gira. Saasein tezz, dhadkane tezz, aankhein ekdum laal, poora badan paseene se lathpat, aankho me dhundhlapann aur nirantar khaase jaa raha tha woh shaks.

*Cough* *Cough*

*Cough* *Cough*

*Gwaaakhhhhhhhhh!!*

Khoon!! Muh se uske dherr saara khoon nikla.

[Nooooooooooo~ Masterrrrrrr!!!!!!!]

Pari zorr se cheenkhi. Beshaq, ye Veer hi tha. Wine peene ke kuch derr baad hi Veer ke shareer ke andar na jaane kya kuch hone laga tha.

Woh jese hi gira, Pari ki cheenkhe bhi dheere dheere dheemi sunaayi padne lagi usse.

Usne apne honth khole kuch kehne ke liye par thar-tharaate hue woh waapas band ho gaye.

[Maaaaassssttttteeeerrrrrrrrr~]

Ek dard bhari akhiri awaaz hi Pari ki sunn paaya woh. Aur agle shan hi,

Uski aankhein band ho gayi.

[Nooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!]

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"Aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhnnnnnnnn~"

Achanak jhatke ke saath ek ladki apne bistar se uth gayi. Din ka samay tha. Lagbhag 1 baj rahe the. Woh apne kamre me hi thoda araam farmaane ke liye laiti hui thi jab uski halki neend lag gayi thi. Aur neend me usne na jaane aisa kya dekha jiske chalte woh hadbadaate hue uth ke baith gayi.

Shayad, ek bura sapna tha.

Uske kapde paseene se bheege hue the. Khubsoorat se chehre par bhi paseene ki boonde saji hui thi. Haafte hue usne apne chehre par se ek towel se paseena pocha. Aur ek gehri saans lete hue woh kitchen ki orr chal padi.

Ek glass thanda paani peene ke baad woh waapas aayi, kamre ka darwaza andar se band kiya aur bistar par baith gayi.

'Ye bechaini...!'

Usse kuch theek nahi lag raha tha. Usne fauran hi apna phone uthaaya, usme gallery kholi aur uski nazre ek tasveer par jaake theher gayi.

'Thode din aur... Thode din me hi... Tum meri aankho ke saamne hoge. Aur fir uske baad... Tumhe kahi nahi jaane dungi mein!'

'Hum firse ek saath rahenge. Mom se saare raaz khulwa ke rahungi mein. Just wait a bit more. I will come to you. Very soon! My younger one!!'

Aur khud mann me ek lakshya thaan, woh waapas se bistar par lait gayi.

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Las Vegas ~ 1:47 AM

*VRRRRROOOOOOMMMM*

Ek gaadi sann-sanaati hui raaste par tezz raftaar me bhaagti jaa rahi thi. Derr raat ka samay tha. Lekin, roads par abhi bhi kuch gaadiya aati jaati maalum pad rahi thi. Ye Vegas tha, jo jaana hi apni night life ke liye jaata tha.

Divya ka perr accelerator par tha aur woh saaye-saaye gaadi bhaga rahi thi. Aankho me ek nami chhaayi hui thi,

'Why?? Why Veer?? Kyu kiya tumne aisa? Tum bewakoof nahi ho. You solved the Nightwalker's case. Th-Then how can you just...!? God damn it!!! Tum aisa qadam kese utha sakte ho? J-Just why?? Just tell me you were acting. Just tell me!! I just can't...!!!'

Apne hi mann me uth rahe sawaalo ke woh khud hi uttar dete jaa rahi thi. Ye achanak se kya ho gaya tha? Sab kuch theek chal raha tha. Fir eka-ek Fred ki maut aur ab Veer ki haalat ne unhe chinta me daal diya tha.

Kisi ne bhi Veer ko glass se wine peete nahi dekha tha. Lekin sabhi jaante the ki usne kya kiya tha. Camera uski chest ki pocket me laga tha. Aur jab usne wine ka glass neeche rakha tha. Woh khaali ho chuka tha. Zaahir hai ki usne wine pee thi. Aur fir woh khoon...!!

Itne logo ke beech bhala kese kisi ko murkh bana sakta tha woh?

Aur yahi baat Divya ko bechain kare jaa rahi thi.

Jo Divya Veer ki firki lene ke liye aatur rehti thi, usse chidhaane ka koi mauka nahi chorrti thi, uske saath nakli flirting karte hue zara bhi peeche nahi hatati thi, aaj wahi Divya uske liye aasu baha rahi thi. Ye naina roye jaa rahe the uske.

Kyu bhala? Divya ki khud nahi samajh aa raha tha. Woh kabse itni emotional bann gayi? Lekin fir kyu ye nain baar baar aasuo ko pochhne ke baad bhi bheeg rahe the?

Ek jo kaaran tha woh tha subah ka unka milan. Bhale hi baahar se Divya kitna hi kyu na keh de ki uske aur Veer ke beech ye sab nahi hona chahiye tha. Par andar hi andar kahi na kahi jese woh khud chaahti thi ye aur khush bhi thi.

Aur sangam hone ke baad, thoda sa bhi prem na jaage, aisa bhala kese ho sakta tha? Uske dil me ab Veer ke liye ek alag jagah bann chuki thi. Jiski jagah ab koi dusra nahi le sakta tha.

Usne turant gear neeche kar gaadi chauthe gear me daali aur speed aur badha dii.

Aur kuch hi minutes ke andar woh doori bhi tay kar lii.

*Screeeeeeccccchhhh*

Brakes maarte hue zorr se usne gaadi roki.

*Thud*

Aur darwaaza band kar woh seedha daudi andar kii orr.

Baahar security guards nahi khade the, aur toh aur andar se kayi log bhaagte hue baahar nikal rahe the.

Mike team aur police ke sang shayad pehle hi andar ghus chuka tha.

Andar se baahar nikalte logo ko ignore kar woh daudte bhaagte hue seedha hotel me andar ghus gayi.

Saamne ka nazaara shaant pada hua tha.


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Neeche toh koi chahal pahal hi samajh nahi aa rahi thi. Bas upar se neeche aa rahe log hi dikhaayi de rahe the usse.

Jo ki swabhaavik tha. Veer bhi toh second floor me hi gaya tha. Ye dhyaan me aate hi Divya tezz qadmo ke saath seedha stairs ki orr bhaagi.

Lift lene ke liye samay nahi tha. Aur wese bhi, second floor par jaldi pohuchne ke liye khud ke perr hi sabse accha vikalp the.

Andar ghuste hi Divya ki aankho ke saamne chaka-chaundh kar dene waala drishya tha.

Detectives aur police ki team sabhi maujooda logo ko rok ke unhe baithane ki koshish me lagi thi. Sab ke sab under arrest me the. Nolan ke nirdesh ke baad hi Mike samet sabhi ne andar dhaava bol diya tha.

Ek bhi bach ke jaane na paaye, jitne masks lagaaye the woh sabhi iss party ka hissa the. Police ki madad se inn sabhi logo ko giraft me le liya gaya tha.

Divya ki nazre idhar se udhar duvidha me daud rahi thi. Aur tabhi usse dhyaan aaya,

'The washroom!!! Right!!!!'

Aur woh fauran bhaagi...

Aage badhte hi usse Mike nazar aaya. Toh Divya ne ek tezz awaaz lagaayi,

"Miiiiiiikkkke!!!!!"

Mike : We got this!!!! Go and search for him instead!!!

Usne chillaate hue bataaya.

Police aur uske seh karmiyo ne yaha ki paristhiti sambhaal lii thi. Mike ne fauran hi Divya ko Veer ko dhundhne ke liye kaha.

Aur Divya turant haa me sarr hilaate hue sarpat daud laga dii,

Samay badhta jaa raha tha. Kahi aisa na ho ki waqt ret ki tarah uski mutthi se fisal jaaye aur Veer....!

'Nahiiiii!!!! Nahi!!!! Veeeeerrrr!!!'

Woh mann me chillaayi,

Uske dil ki dhadkan tezz ho rakhi thi.

*Thud*

Pohuchte hi usne washroom ka ek darwaaza khola. Jidhar usse koi dikhaayi na diya.

'Ye waala nahi...! Damn it!!!'

Aur uski ghabraahat aur badh gayi.

Beshaq usne screen par Veer ko washroom jaate dekha tha. Par usse ye yaad nahi tha ki washroom kaun sa tha. Kyuki yaha line se 8 se 10 washrooms the. Aur sabhi ke sabhi behad bade.

"Veeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrr!!!!!"

Woh usse pukaari!!! Veer ka naam le le kar woh darwaaze kholti rahi. Ek na ek me toh milega hi Veer.

*Thud*

'God damn it!!! Where are you....!!???'

4 darwaaze khol ke usne chaaro washrooms check kar liye the, Par Veer kahi bhi nazar nahi aa raha tha.

*Dhak* *Dhak*

Aur na hi woh jawaab de raha tha. Uski bechaini aur badh gayi.

Agar usse kuch ho gaya toh? Toh kya jawaab degi woh Suhana ko? Khud Divya iss buri khabar ke liye taiyaar nahi thi.

"Veeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrr!!!!!???"

Usne punaah pukaara aur jese hi usne paachve darwaaze ko kholna chaaha,

*Click*

Darwaaza apne aap khul gaya.

Divya : Haahhh??

Aur Divya ki aankho ke saamne tha, Veer!!

Jeeta jaagta Veer. Apne jyo ke tyo haal me.

Lekin baal thode bikhre hue the uske. Saath hi aisa lag raha tha jese kahi bhaag daud karke aaya tha woh. Aankhein bhi halki halki laal maalum pad rahi thi.

"Ohhh God!!!"

Jo bechaini, jo ghabraahat, jo darr Divya ko abhi inn chand pal pehle pareshaan kar raha tha. Woh Veer ko apni nazro ke saamne dekhte hi jese chhumantar ho gaya.

Aur agle hi shan,

Woh aage badh Veer se kass ke lipat gayi. Apne haath uske baalo ke peeche le jaate hue usne Veer ke sarr ko zorr se pakad apne kandhe par tika liya.

Iss waqt aisa prateet ho raha tha jese ye ek badi behan ka chote bhai ke prati prem tha. Divya iss samay Veer ki badi behan ki tarah hi lag rahi thi.

Divya : Ohhhh thank god!!! Thank god! You're okay!!!

Aur kuch pal bas khamoshi chhaayi rahi. Divya aur Veer ek dusre ke aalingan me bane rahe.

Kuch derr baad akhir kaar usne Veer ko chorra aur usse dekhte hue apne sawaalo ki jhadi laga dii.

Divya : Kya tha ye sab haan? Veeerrr??? Bolo kuch? Why did you do that?? Kyu kiya aisa Veer??? Kaho? What really happened? Tell me!!!

Veer ki aankhein adh khuli thi. Woh Divya ko dekh zaroor raha tha. Par jese uske bol par uska dhyaan hi nahi tha. Uska dhyaan toh kahi orr hi tha.

*Ding*

[Mission : 'Assassinate the Pitcher' has been completed.]

*Ding*

[4000 Points have been rewarded.]

*Ding*

[500 Fame points have been rewarded.]

*Ding*

[Scroll ~ Profit Path has been rewarded.]

[Maaaaaaaassssttttteeerrrrr~]

Pari ki ek chintajanak pukaar uske mann me goonji.

[Why did you do that???? I told you not to-- ]

'Pari! I'm okay!' Veer ne ahista se jawaab diya usse.

Na chaahte hue bhi Pari ko shaant hona pada. Aisa laga jese woh ro rahi thi. Waqai me. Uski udaasi aur niraasha saaf uski awaaz me jhalak rahi thi.

Aur tabhi,

"Kaha kho gaye??? Veeerrrr!???"

Saamne se Divya ki awaaz sunn Veer ko hosh aaya. Woh apne khayalaato se baahar aaya.

Divya uss se jawaab maang rahi thi.

Divya : Bolo? Kya tha ye sab Veer? Kyu pee tumne woh wine??

Veer : Kya aapne mujhe wine peete hue dekha?

Divya (jhepte hue) : Huh?

Veer : Mene pucha ki kya aapne mujhe wine peete hue dekha?

Divya : ??? T-Tumne wine nahi pee toh kya piya tha? Bewakoof mat samjho Veer! We all saw it. Bhale hi tumhe directly nahi dekh paaye hum kyuki camera tumhari chest pocket me tha par humne dekha tha kese tumne glass hawa me upar uthaaya aur waapas rakha toh wine nahi thi usme. Where did it went?

Veer : It went right here!

Veer ne apni coat ki inner chest pocket ke andar se kuch nikaalte hue usse dikhaaya.

Aur usse dekhte hi Divya ke hosh udd gaye.

Divya : T-This...!

Veer : Yes!!!

Divya : Y-You--

Uske haatho me ek chota sa container tha.

Divya : N-No!!!! Tumhara matlab hai...!?

Veer : Hmm!

Kisne kaha Veer wine ko pee raha tha? Veer muh me zaroor bhar raha tha wine ko lekin bharne ke baad woh aise dikhaata jese woh wine ko gutak chuka hai. Par mauka dekhte hi woh apni inner coat ki pocket me usse thook ke uss container me daal raha tha.

Divya usse bhoot bann ke dekhe jaa rahi thi. Usse vishvaas hi nahi ho raha tha.

Divya : T-Tumne ye kiya tha asal me!?

Veer : Mein paagal hu kya jo woh wine piyunga? Hmm?

Divya : R-Right! T-That was really smart! Par... Par itne logo ke beech tumne kese...!?

Veer : I just got lucky!!!

Divya : I-I see~ Ye boht hi acchi baat hai. Kisi ko kuch pata nahi chala tumhaare iss container ke baare me. Y-You did great Veer. Jab screen me tumhe wine peete dekha toh hum logo ki jaan halak me atak gayi thi. I swear. Suhana bechaari toh... I hope she's alright! It's... It's really good that you're fine.

Usne Veer ke kandhe par haath rakh thodi bheegi aankho se jataaya.


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Veer ne haami bhari.

Divya : But wait!!!! Y-Your blood!!! Khoon kese aaya tumhe?? Agar tumne nahi pii toh...

Veer : That was a facade!!

Divya : Wh-What?

Veer : Woh khoon nahi tha!

Divya : Toh kya tha?

Veer : Just some color!

Divya : Color???

Veer (nods) : Right!!!

Divya : Par...

Veer : I prepared it beforehand.

Divya : K-Kya matlab!?

Veer : Woh emergency ke liye tha. I needed help. Lekin aenn waqt pe communication device kaam karna band kar diya tha. Meri awaaz aap tak nahi pohuch rahi thi. Uske liye ye sab karna pada taaki department fauran hi help bhej sake.

Divya : Ahhh!!! I-I see!!! T-Toh ye baat thi. Thank god!!! Everything is fine!

Divya ne kehte hue uske coat se woh communication device nikaal liya aur usse halki muskaan dwte hue boli,

Divya : You don't need this now.

Veer haan me sarr hilaate hue aage badh gaya.

Veer : Come! Aur bhi kuch baatein jaan'ni hai abhi.

Divya : Right!!!

Divya usse jaate hue dekhti rahi. Par akasmaat hi uska dhyaan Veer se liye gaye communication device par gaya. Aur,

Divya : H-Hello? Divya speaking!! Can anyone here me??

Aur uske itna bolte hi,

"Yes!!! We can hear you! Loud and clear!!!"

Dusri orr se department ke seh karmi ki spasht awaaz sunaayi dii. Divya hairat me apne haatho me uss device ko dekhti reh gayi.

'This... This is working fine!!!'

Kabhi woh Veer ki peeth ko dekhti jaha Veer dheere dheere apni jebo me haath daale araam se corridor me jaa raha tha. Toh kabhi uss device ko dekhti.

Antatah usne ek baar fir daud lagaayi,

Divya : Veeeeerrrrrrrr!!!!!

Woh chillaayi,

Veer (palat'te hue) : Hmm?

Divya : Ye... Ye toh chal raha hai. It's working fine!!!

Veer : Ohh!? Is it? Well that's good! Kuch derr oehle nahi chal raha tha.

Kehte hue woh ek baar fir aage badh gaya. Machine thi. Kabhi chalti toh kabhi nahi.

Parantu, Divya usse bas jaata hua dekhti rahi. Uski kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha. What just happened?

Bhaagte hue woh bhi Veer ki chaal se chaal milaayi aur corridor ke baahar nikal gayi.

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Baahar aate hi nazara kuch aisa tha ki police ne sab apne control me le liya tha. Aur toh aur Mike ne unke saath milke kayi raaz bhi khol ke rakh diye the.

Mike fauran hi Divya ke paas aaya aur usse sab kuch bataaya.

Jo log yaha masks pehen ke party manaane aate the. Ye darasal koi aur nahi wahi log the jo Nightwalker ke mansion me ho rahe khoon ke khel ko live dekh uska lutf uthaate the.

Udhar Nightwalker ka poora live session dark web par daala jaata tha aur idhar log aankho dekhi hatya ka maza lete the. Yahi inki fetish thi. Na keval woh ye sab dekhte the balki iss par kaafi paisa bhi fekte the. Bets bhi lagti thi. Jiska poora fayda Nightwalker aur Pitcher ko hota tha.

Pitcher ki bhi fetish thi jo unn se aur hatke thi. Usse sundar se sundar actresses, models aur celebrities ko maarne ka shauk tha.

Udhar Nightwalker ka maut ka nanga naach jab khatam hota toh idhar uski khushi me Pitcher party rakhta, jisme woh fir kisi ko maut ke ghaat utaarta.

Yaha do tarfi hatya ka kaand chaalu tha.

Udhar se Nightwalker toh idhar se Pitcher.

Dono hi ek dusre ke sang business me bhi the. Woh jo cameras Mansion me the. Woh isliye the. Unke zariye hi ye log masks pehen ke yaha masoom ki bali ka maza uthaate the.

Chuki aisi footages kisi platform par nahi daali jaa sakti thi isliye Dark web ka sahara liya jaata tha.

Aur inhi cameras me se unhe Veer ke baare me pehle hi pata lag chuka tha.

Par ek satya aur tha. Jiski wajah se poora department maat khaa gaya tha.

Woh ye ki...

Nat ne jo invitation card diya tha. Uss par ek serial number bhi tha. Ye serial number card par bhi rehta tha aur...

Aur unke paas data sheet me nhi feed rehta tha. Jab Fred uss card ko leke entry kiya tha.

Toh serial number match karte hi unhe pata lag chuka tha ki Fred ke paas jo card tha woh darasal Natalia ko bheja gaya tha.

Poori chori yahi pakad gayi thi unki. Security ne Pitcher ko sachet kar diya tha. Lekin uske bawajo Pitcher ne usse bulaaya. Ab koi darwaaze tak aaya ho toh bhala uski khaatir daari kese bhul sakta tha woh?

Aur Fred bhi...

Maut ke ghaat utaar diya gaya. Khel khatam.

Yahi haal Veer ke sang bhi hua. Card toh uske paas bhi wahi tha. Nat ka.

Aur usse dekhte hi unhe fir abhaas ho chuka tha. Saath hi Veer ki photo bhi unke paas thi.

Lekin Veer ke mann me jo baat abhi bhi khatak rahi thi woh ye thi ki unko khabar kisne dii thi ki woh yaha aane waala hai? Aur mask pehen'ne ke bawajood bhala kese pehchaan liye woh usse? Iska jawaab woh dhundh raha tha. Aur kuch kuch usse samajh aa chuka tha.

Mike ne ye saari jankaari jese hi bataayi toh Divya ekdum gusse se laal ho gayi. Ab inki chori pakdi gayi thi toh zaahir hai kisi na kisi aadmi ne saara sach ugal hi diya tha Mike ko.

Par iss khel me jin maasumo ki jaan gayi unka kya? Daniel, Chester, Jacob, Fred kese kitne hi maare gaye. Woh toh ab waapas nahi aa sakte the na.

Mike : I have something to show you! Hurry!

Mike ne kehte hue unn dono ko hi kahi le jaane ke liye kaha.

Jaldbaazi me woh uss dining table par pohuche jaha Veer baitha hua tha.

Par jese hi woh waha aaye,

Divya ko ek bada sa jhatka laga,

Divya : Y-Ye toh...!!!

Neeche ek dead body padi thi. Aur ye koi aur nahi tha. Wahi tha...

Pitcher!!!!

Muh se uske dherr saara jhaag nikla hua tha. Saaf tha ki woh zeher se marra tha.

Divya : Isn't he the...!?

Mike (nods) : Yes!!! The same guy who served the wine.

Divya : This...!!

Mike : He used poison to kill others. That wine bottle contains poison.

Mike ne wahi rakhi wine bottle ki orr ishaara karte hue bataaya jo Pitcher ne Veer ke liye kholi thi.

Divya (bauhe sikodte hue) : We are still missing something. How did he die?

Veer : I know it.

Veer ke kehte hi sabhi ki nazre uss par focused ho gayi. Hairaani me woh sabhi usse dekhe,

Divya : Whaaattt???

Veer : The secret practice...!!!

Mike : Secret practice?

Divya : Veer saaf saaf shabdo me kaho!!! Please be quick!!!

Veer : Wanna know the name?

Divya : *gulps*

Mike : !!!???

Aur fir Veer ke muh se ek shabd nikla,


"MITHRIDATISM"

Jisse sunte hi Divya ke poore badan ke raungte khade ho gaye.

Aur uske kaanpte haatho se Veer ka woh device gir gaya. Kyuki woh jaanti thi. Woh bhali bhaati jaanti thi iss ek shabd ka matlab kya tha.

Mike ki samajh me na aaya. Usne apna phone nikaal google kar uss ek shabd ka matlab search kiya aur jese hi usne uske baare me jaana. Uska badan khud kaanp utha.

Mithridatism, ek aisi practice jisme insaan kam maatra me khud zeher leta hai. Maatra itni ki jaan ke liye ghaatak na bane.

Mithridates VI jo Pontus ke Raja the. Maana jaata hai ki woh apni maut ko lekar itne darre hue rehte the ki unhe harr samay yahi lagta tha ki koi unhe chalaaki se zeher deke maar dega. Ye puraatan kaal me ek aam baat thi. Raja maharajao ko ye bhay aksar bana rehta tha ki kahi koi unka apna hi unke saath vishvaas-ghaat na kar de.

Toh zeher unka kuch bigaad hi na paaye isliye Raja Mithridates VI ne kam maatra me khud hi zeher lena shuru kar diya tha. Iss umeed me ki ye kam zeher lete lete ek na ek din unka shareer iss zeher ke khilaaf rog pratirodhak shakti paida kar hi dega. Yaani ki immunity bana hi lega.

Jese aksar hum navjaat shishu ko injections lagwaate hai, fir chaahe woh polio ke ho ya tetanus ke ya anya koi. Inka uddeshya hi yahi rehta hai ki shareer inn rogo ke khilaaf ek immunity bana le. Raja Mithridates ne bhi yahi karne ka socha tha.

Zeher le le ke uske khilaaf ladne ki shakti banana. Parantu ye daav ulta pad gaya tha. Zeher baar baar nirantar lene ke baad wahi zeher unke shareer me ikhatta hone laga tha, jo baad me aage chalke unki maut ka kaaran bann gaya.

Pitcher ka bhi uddeshya wahi tha.

Aur Pitcher...

Ye karne me qamyaab ho gaya tha.


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Aisa nahi tha ki aap yadi iss practice ko apnaate ho toh aapki maut nischit hai.

Hargiz nahi! Yadi non-biological poisons ko liya jaaye toh ye sambhav hai ki aap kuch poisons ke khilaaf immunity nirmit kar sakte ho.

Jo vish ka pyaala hum dusro ko dete hai woh ek na ek din hume khud bhi peena padta hai. Ab tak ye baat Pitcher par sahi se laagu nahi ho rahi thi. Par Veer ke aate hi...

Kaam tamaam ho chuka tha.

Divya : Quick!!! We have to get back to the department. There are still many questions that are left unanswered.

Woh kehti hue aage badhi, Mike bhi haami bharte hue peeche peeche gaya. Parantu idhar Veer ki aankhein Pitcher ki laash par hi tiki hui thi.

Unn aankho me bhayanak gussa tha. Ekdum laal ho rakhi thi woh. Aisa lag raha tha Veer abhi uski laash pe bhi toot padega aur cheer phaad dega.

'I almost died, you bastard!!!'

Woh mann me hi gurraaya.

Uska heart rate bhaiyankar zyaada ho rakha tha. Container?? Kaahe ka container??

Veer Divya ke jaate hue figure ko peeche se dekh raha tha. Siwae Mithridatism ke, jo kuch bhi usne Divya ko bataaya tha.

Woh sab jhooth tha.

Uska asal sach toh uske khud ke antar mann ki gehraiyo aur uske zehen me hi dafn hoke rehne waala tha.

Asli sachhaayi toh kuch aur hi thi...

Jab Veer hotel me ghus neeche Beowulf se check kar raha tha. Tab usse nahi pata tha ki upar balcony me uski photo ko idhar se udhar kiya jaa raha tha.

Parantu...

Ek uss se bhi badi sansani macha dene waali khoj kar lii thi usne.

Neeche uski nazar dur ek aise vyakti par padi thi jo ek wine ki bottle me powder jesa kuch mila raha tha.

Aur ye kya tha ye bataane ki zaroorat hi nahi thi.

Beshaq, zeher!!!!

Veer ka maqsad saaf tha. Na keval usne jaa ke iss baat ka pata kiya balki, usne uss vyakti ke jaate hi wahi powdered substance ki maatra aur badha ke uss wine me daal dii.

Ye sab usne tab kiya tha jab woh vyakti andar kuch lene gaya tha.

Bheed itni thi ki kisi ko kuch nahi pata tha ki kya ho raha hai. Sirf pitcher hi Veer ke baare me jaanta tha aur chand aur log jinhone Veer ki live footage dekhi thi. Par kuch aise bhi the jo Veer ke pehle ke murder footages dekhe hue the. Woh bhi party ka hissa the.

[Maaastttteeerrrrr!!! Wh-Whaattt are you doing??? Aap usme kyu mila rahe ho?]

'Agar mein sahi hu, toh aaj Pitcher nahi bachega!!!'

[N-Noooo!!! Don't tell me you...!!]

'Yes!! I will do it!!!'

Woh waapas se apni jagah par aaya. Aur Veer ne dekha ki kese woh vyakti dobaara se uss wine ki bottle me packing chadha raha tha taaki aisa lage wine ki bottle ekdum nayi hai.

'This motherfucker...!!'

Aur inn chand lamho me, Veer ne ye saara kaam iss prakaar se kiya tha ki uske jeb ka camera saamne ki orr focused tha. Department waalo ko screen me dekh ye katayi pata nahi lag paaya tha ki Veer ne aisa bhi kuch kiya tha.

Fir aaya woh waqt, jab Pitcher ne Veer ko bulaaya.

Uske saath baith ke jab usne Veer ko woh wine offer kii, Pitcher ke chehre par haivaani waali kapti muskaan thi. Kyuki woh jaanta tha ye Veer marrega hi uske haatho.

Par woh nahi jaanta tha... Ki Veer ek aam insaan nahi tha.

Veer ne jese hi wine se bhare glass ko check kiya,

*Ding*

[A glass full of poisoned wine. Don't drink it.]

Sab kuch saamne tha. Ye wahi wine thi. Jisme ferr badal kiya gaya tha.

Aur isliye Pitcher ab tak pakda nahi gaya tha. Kyuki woh bhi same wine peeta tha.

Parantu woh iss zeher se ladne me saksham tha. Lekin aam vyakti nahi.

Aur aise hi sabhi maut ke ghaat utar rahe the.

What a way to kill.

Woh abhi bhi shaitaano ki tarah muskuraa ke Veer ko dekh raha tha.

'This sly bastard!!!'

Lekin aaj khel kuch alag hone waala tha.

'Pari!!! Open the shop!!'

[Yes Master!!!]

'Find me a skill which can cure this poison.'

[Whaaaatttttt??? Nooooooooo!!! Maaassttteeerrrr!!! Aap aisa nahi kar sakte. I'm tell you please stop!!! Please!!! I'm begging you~]

'Pari...!!!'

[Nooo noooo nooooooo!!!!? How can I??? Mat kariye.... Please!!!! I...]

'DO IT!!!!!!'

Jab Veer mann me zorr se cheekha toh Pari ek baar fir apne master ke saamne haar gayi.

[Master! This is the one but...]

'Kitne points? Ohhh! 5000 Points? One time use only? Fine then! Purchase this.'

[O-Okay but...]

'DO IT!!!!'

*Ding*

['Sylvia's Venom Cure' is now available.]

*Ding*

[Host can only use this skill for one time only.
Warning : Beware of extreme pain, vomit and increased heart rate.]

*Ding*

[Sylvia's Venom cure has been activated.]

Aur agle hi pal, Veer ke andar bhaari maatra me white blood cells bann'na shuru ho gaye. Bann toh pehle bhi rahe the par unki process kayi guna badh chuki thi.

Veer ne fir woh kiya jo sabko hairaan kar doya tha.

Usne wine pee lii thi. Par wine toh container me gayi thi?

Laude ka container! Woh container toh washroom ke soap dispenser ka ek toota hua bhaag tha jo Veer ne washroom se nikalne se pehle hathyaa tha.

Woh color? Ghanta color! Woh toh uska khoon tha jo white blood cells ne poison ke roop me usse baahar fikwaaya tha.

White blood cells hi toh immunity ka kaaran hai hamaare shareer me.

Aur uske baad utha tha Veer ko atyant dard, uska nervous system itne khatarnak sthiti se guzar raha tha ki uska andhruni dard aseem hota jaa raha tha.

Aisa laga tha ki woh ab nahi bachega. Aur behosh hone se pehle usse bas Pari ke bol yaad the.

"Veeeeerrrrrrrr!!!???"

Divya ki awaaz usse hosh me laayi.

Veer : Coming!!!

Veer ek akhiri nazar Pitcher par daal aage badh gaya.

Aur baahar aate hi,

*Screeeeeeccccchhhh*

Gaadi ruki aur Suhana aur Nik usme se baahar nikle.

Suhana ki nigaahein jese hi Veer par jaa kar tiki uski aankhein felti chali gayi,

"Veeeeerrrrrrr!!!"

Woh daudte hue aayi aur zorr se kood ke uski baaho me ucchal gayi.

Uske baad wahi hua. Sawaal pe sawaal. Veer ne jese tese maamla shaant kiya.

Par...

Veer : Huh!!??

Woh aashcharya chakit reh gaya jab usne apne bagal me Suhana ko dekha toh...



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Woh ro rahi thi. Unn aankho me pehli baar Veer ne kabhi apne liye itne strong emotions dekhe the.

'Miss Suhana...!?'

Veer : Aap ro rahi ho?

Suhana (muh ferrte hue) : Who's crying? Get lost!

Veer : *smiles*

Divya : Tum dono? Take my keys! Mujhe aane me late ho jaega.

Divya ne car ki keys fekte hue kaha.

Aur kuch derr me hi Veer aur Suhana dono Divya ki car me sawaar hote hue waha se ravaana ho gaye. Udhar ki tehkiqaat lambi chalne waali thi.

Idhar car me,

Suhana (smiles) : I'm happy!

Veer : Why so?

Suhana : Duh!!! You dumb! Kyuki tum sahi salaamat ho.

Veer : Par jab mein waha se jaa raha tha tab toh aap gussa hoke bhaag gayi thi bacchi ki tarah perr patak ke.

Suhana (blushes) : Wh-What do you mean by bacchi ki tarah??? I was looking out for you!! Par tum ho ki... Kherr! Chorro!!! Wait!!

Veer : Kya hua?

Suhana : Udhar park hai!

Veer : So!?

Suhana : Stupid! Stop the car! Mujhe thodi fresh air chahiye.

Suhana ki baat maan Veer ne gaadi park ke paas rok dii.

Ye ek open park tha.

Aur dono hi utar ke kuch derr uss khamoshi me tehelne lage. Koi baat nahi.

Jab achanak se,

Suhana palti aur Veer se zorr se chipak gayi.



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'Huh?'

Suhana : I thought something will happen to you!!!

Usne usse dekh ke bola!!


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Veer : But I'm right here! Hai na?

Suhana : Hmm! And that's what matters.

Kehte hue woh uske kandhe par sarr rakh uss se chipki rahi.


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Jab achanak hi usse dhyaan aaya...

Ki Veer uska pati nahi tha.

Suhana : Ahhh!!! S-Sorry about that...!!

Kehte hue woh dur hatt gayi aur mud gayi.

Veer ko yu akela chorr woh waapas se car ki orr chal dii.

Idhar sheetal leher me, halki hawao me Veer ki lehraati zulfein uski aankho ke saamne fir rahi thi aur nazre tiki hui thi Suhana ke jaate hue figure par.

'You are hiding something. Aren't you? Miss Suhana?'
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Update - 107 ~ The Secret Practice
Ab tak...

Car me ghuste hi usse aisa mehsoos hua jaise usne kuch kho diya tha. Aisa lag raha tha jese uske dil me koi sui chubho raha tha. Peeda!!!

Jaise woh himmat hi haar chuki thi.

'N-Nooooo!!!!'

Accelerator par perr rakh usne ek jhatke me gaadi aage bhaga dii,

*VRRRRROOOOOOMMMM*

Abhi abhi...

Ye kya ho gaya tha?


Ab aage...

"Haah! Haah! Haaaahhhh! Urrggghh!!"

*Thud*

Ladkhada ke ek shareer achanak neeche zameen par gira. Saasein tezz, dhadkane tezz, aankhein ekdum laal, poora badan paseene se lathpat, aankho me dhundhlapann aur nirantar khaase jaa raha tha woh shaks.

*Cough* *Cough*

*Cough* *Cough*

*Gwaaakhhhhhhhhh!!*

Khoon!! Muh se uske dherr saara khoon nikla.

[Nooooooooooo~ Masterrrrrrr!!!!!!!]

Pari zorr se cheenkhi. Beshaq, ye Veer hi tha. Wine peene ke kuch derr baad hi Veer ke shareer ke andar na jaane kya kuch hone laga tha.

Woh jese hi gira, Pari ki cheenkhe bhi dheere dheere dheemi sunaayi padne lagi usse.

Usne apne honth khole kuch kehne ke liye par thar-tharaate hue woh waapas band ho gaye.

[Maaaaassssttttteeeerrrrrrrrr~]

Ek dard bhari akhiri awaaz hi Pari ki sunn paaya woh. Aur agle shan hi,

Uski aankhein band ho gayi.

[Nooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!]

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"Aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhnnnnnnnn~"

Achanak jhatke ke saath ek ladki apne bistar se uth gayi. Din ka samay tha. Lagbhag 1 baj rahe the. Woh apne kamre me hi thoda araam farmaane ke liye laiti hui thi jab uski halki neend lag gayi thi. Aur neend me usne na jaane aisa kya dekha jiske chalte woh hadbadaate hue uth ke baith gayi.

Shayad, ek bura sapna tha.

Uske kapde paseene se bheege hue the. Khubsoorat se chehre par bhi paseene ki boonde saji hui thi. Haafte hue usne apne chehre par se ek towel se paseena pocha. Aur ek gehri saans lete hue woh kitchen ki orr chal padi.

Ek glass thanda paani peene ke baad woh waapas aayi, kamre ka darwaza andar se band kiya aur bistar par baith gayi.

'Ye bechaini...!'

Usse kuch theek nahi lag raha tha. Usne fauran hi apna phone uthaaya, usme gallery kholi aur uski nazre ek tasveer par jaake theher gayi.

'Thode din aur... Thode din me hi... Tum meri aankho ke saamne hoge. Aur fir uske baad... Tumhe kahi nahi jaane dungi mein!'

'Hum firse ek saath rahenge. Mom se saare raaz khulwa ke rahungi mein. Just wait a bit more. I will come to you. Very soon! My younger one!!'

Aur khud mann me ek lakshya thaan, woh waapas se bistar par lait gayi.

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Las Vegas ~ 1:47 AM

*VRRRRROOOOOOMMMM*

Ek gaadi sann-sanaati hui raaste par tezz raftaar me bhaagti jaa rahi thi. Derr raat ka samay tha. Lekin, roads par abhi bhi kuch gaadiya aati jaati maalum pad rahi thi. Ye Vegas tha, jo jaana hi apni night life ke liye jaata tha.

Divya ka perr accelerator par tha aur woh saaye-saaye gaadi bhaga rahi thi. Aankho me ek nami chhaayi hui thi,

'Why?? Why Veer?? Kyu kiya tumne aisa? Tum bewakoof nahi ho. You solved the Nightwalker's case. Th-Then how can you just...!? God damn it!!! Tum aisa qadam kese utha sakte ho? J-Just why?? Just tell me you were acting. Just tell me!! I just can't...!!!'

Apne hi mann me uth rahe sawaalo ke woh khud hi uttar dete jaa rahi thi. Ye achanak se kya ho gaya tha? Sab kuch theek chal raha tha. Fir eka-ek Fred ki maut aur ab Veer ki haalat ne unhe chinta me daal diya tha.

Kisi ne bhi Veer ko glass se wine peete nahi dekha tha. Lekin sabhi jaante the ki usne kya kiya tha. Camera uski chest ki pocket me laga tha. Aur jab usne wine ka glass neeche rakha tha. Woh khaali ho chuka tha. Zaahir hai ki usne wine pee thi. Aur fir woh khoon...!!

Itne logo ke beech bhala kese kisi ko murkh bana sakta tha woh?

Aur yahi baat Divya ko bechain kare jaa rahi thi.

Jo Divya Veer ki firki lene ke liye aatur rehti thi, usse chidhaane ka koi mauka nahi chorrti thi, uske saath nakli flirting karte hue zara bhi peeche nahi hatati thi, aaj wahi Divya uske liye aasu baha rahi thi. Ye naina roye jaa rahe the uske.

Kyu bhala? Divya ki khud nahi samajh aa raha tha. Woh kabse itni emotional bann gayi? Lekin fir kyu ye nain baar baar aasuo ko pochhne ke baad bhi bheeg rahe the?

Ek jo kaaran tha woh tha subah ka unka milan. Bhale hi baahar se Divya kitna hi kyu na keh de ki uske aur Veer ke beech ye sab nahi hona chahiye tha. Par andar hi andar kahi na kahi jese woh khud chaahti thi ye aur khush bhi thi.

Aur sangam hone ke baad, thoda sa bhi prem na jaage, aisa bhala kese ho sakta tha? Uske dil me ab Veer ke liye ek alag jagah bann chuki thi. Jiski jagah ab koi dusra nahi le sakta tha.

Usne turant gear neeche kar gaadi chauthe gear me daali aur speed aur badha dii.

Aur kuch hi minutes ke andar woh doori bhi tay kar lii.

*Screeeeeeccccchhhh*

Brakes maarte hue zorr se usne gaadi roki.

*Thud*

Aur darwaaza band kar woh seedha daudi andar kii orr.

Baahar security guards nahi khade the, aur toh aur andar se kayi log bhaagte hue baahar nikal rahe the.

Mike team aur police ke sang shayad pehle hi andar ghus chuka tha.

Andar se baahar nikalte logo ko ignore kar woh daudte bhaagte hue seedha hotel me andar ghus gayi.

Saamne ka nazaara shaant pada hua tha.


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Neeche toh koi chahal pahal hi samajh nahi aa rahi thi. Bas upar se neeche aa rahe log hi dikhaayi de rahe the usse.

Jo ki swabhaavik tha. Veer bhi toh second floor me hi gaya tha. Ye dhyaan me aate hi Divya tezz qadmo ke saath seedha stairs ki orr bhaagi.

Lift lene ke liye samay nahi tha. Aur wese bhi, second floor par jaldi pohuchne ke liye khud ke perr hi sabse accha vikalp the.

Andar ghuste hi Divya ki aankho ke saamne chaka-chaundh kar dene waala drishya tha.

Detectives aur police ki team sabhi maujooda logo ko rok ke unhe baithane ki koshish me lagi thi. Sab ke sab under arrest me the. Nolan ke nirdesh ke baad hi Mike samet sabhi ne andar dhaava bol diya tha.

Ek bhi bach ke jaane na paaye, jitne masks lagaaye the woh sabhi iss party ka hissa the. Police ki madad se inn sabhi logo ko giraft me le liya gaya tha.

Divya ki nazre idhar se udhar duvidha me daud rahi thi. Aur tabhi usse dhyaan aaya,

'The washroom!!! Right!!!!'

Aur woh fauran bhaagi...

Aage badhte hi usse Mike nazar aaya. Toh Divya ne ek tezz awaaz lagaayi,

"Miiiiiiikkkke!!!!!"

Mike : We got this!!!! Go and search for him instead!!!

Usne chillaate hue bataaya.

Police aur uske seh karmiyo ne yaha ki paristhiti sambhaal lii thi. Mike ne fauran hi Divya ko Veer ko dhundhne ke liye kaha.

Aur Divya turant haa me sarr hilaate hue sarpat daud laga dii,

Samay badhta jaa raha tha. Kahi aisa na ho ki waqt ret ki tarah uski mutthi se fisal jaaye aur Veer....!

'Nahiiiii!!!! Nahi!!!! Veeeeerrrr!!!'

Woh mann me chillaayi,

Uske dil ki dhadkan tezz ho rakhi thi.

*Thud*

Pohuchte hi usne washroom ka ek darwaaza khola. Jidhar usse koi dikhaayi na diya.

'Ye waala nahi...! Damn it!!!'

Aur uski ghabraahat aur badh gayi.

Beshaq usne screen par Veer ko washroom jaate dekha tha. Par usse ye yaad nahi tha ki washroom kaun sa tha. Kyuki yaha line se 8 se 10 washrooms the. Aur sabhi ke sabhi behad bade.

"Veeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrr!!!!!"

Woh usse pukaari!!! Veer ka naam le le kar woh darwaaze kholti rahi. Ek na ek me toh milega hi Veer.

*Thud*

'God damn it!!! Where are you....!!???'

4 darwaaze khol ke usne chaaro washrooms check kar liye the, Par Veer kahi bhi nazar nahi aa raha tha.

*Dhak* *Dhak*

Aur na hi woh jawaab de raha tha. Uski bechaini aur badh gayi.

Agar usse kuch ho gaya toh? Toh kya jawaab degi woh Suhana ko? Khud Divya iss buri khabar ke liye taiyaar nahi thi.

"Veeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrr!!!!!???"

Usne punaah pukaara aur jese hi usne paachve darwaaze ko kholna chaaha,

*Click*

Darwaaza apne aap khul gaya.

Divya : Haahhh??

Aur Divya ki aankho ke saamne tha, Veer!!

Jeeta jaagta Veer. Apne jyo ke tyo haal me.

Lekin baal thode bikhre hue the uske. Saath hi aisa lag raha tha jese kahi bhaag daud karke aaya tha woh. Aankhein bhi halki halki laal maalum pad rahi thi.

"Ohhh God!!!"

Jo bechaini, jo ghabraahat, jo darr Divya ko abhi inn chand pal pehle pareshaan kar raha tha. Woh Veer ko apni nazro ke saamne dekhte hi jese chhumantar ho gaya.

Aur agle hi shan,

Woh aage badh Veer se kass ke lipat gayi. Apne haath uske baalo ke peeche le jaate hue usne Veer ke sarr ko zorr se pakad apne kandhe par tika liya.

Iss waqt aisa prateet ho raha tha jese ye ek badi behan ka chote bhai ke prati prem tha. Divya iss samay Veer ki badi behan ki tarah hi lag rahi thi.

Divya : Ohhhh thank god!!! Thank god! You're okay!!!

Aur kuch pal bas khamoshi chhaayi rahi. Divya aur Veer ek dusre ke aalingan me bane rahe.

Kuch derr baad akhir kaar usne Veer ko chorra aur usse dekhte hue apne sawaalo ki jhadi laga dii.

Divya : Kya tha ye sab haan? Veeerrr??? Bolo kuch? Why did you do that?? Kyu kiya aisa Veer??? Kaho? What really happened? Tell me!!!

Veer ki aankhein adh khuli thi. Woh Divya ko dekh zaroor raha tha. Par jese uske bol par uska dhyaan hi nahi tha. Uska dhyaan toh kahi orr hi tha.

*Ding*

[Mission : 'Assassinate the Pitcher' has been completed.]

*Ding*

[4000 Points have been rewarded.]

*Ding*

[500 Fame points have been rewarded.]

*Ding*

[Scroll ~ Profit Path has been rewarded.]

[Maaaaaaaassssttttteeerrrrr~]

Pari ki ek chintajanak pukaar uske mann me goonji.

[Why did you do that???? I told you not to-- ]

'Pari! I'm okay!' Veer ne ahista se jawaab diya usse.

Na chaahte hue bhi Pari ko shaant hona pada. Aisa laga jese woh ro rahi thi. Waqai me. Uski udaasi aur niraasha saaf uski awaaz me jhalak rahi thi.

Aur tabhi,

"Kaha kho gaye??? Veeerrrr!???"

Saamne se Divya ki awaaz sunn Veer ko hosh aaya. Woh apne khayalaato se baahar aaya.

Divya uss se jawaab maang rahi thi.

Divya : Bolo? Kya tha ye sab Veer? Kyu pee tumne woh wine??

Veer : Kya aapne mujhe wine peete hue dekha?

Divya (jhepte hue) : Huh?

Veer : Mene pucha ki kya aapne mujhe wine peete hue dekha?

Divya : ??? T-Tumne wine nahi pee toh kya piya tha? Bewakoof mat samjho Veer! We all saw it. Bhale hi tumhe directly nahi dekh paaye hum kyuki camera tumhari chest pocket me tha par humne dekha tha kese tumne glass hawa me upar uthaaya aur waapas rakha toh wine nahi thi usme. Where did it went?

Veer : It went right here!

Veer ne apni coat ki inner chest pocket ke andar se kuch nikaalte hue usse dikhaaya.

Aur usse dekhte hi Divya ke hosh udd gaye.

Divya : T-This...!

Veer : Yes!!!

Divya : Y-You--

Uske haatho me ek chota sa container tha.

Divya : N-No!!!! Tumhara matlab hai...!?

Veer : Hmm!

Kisne kaha Veer wine ko pee raha tha? Veer muh me zaroor bhar raha tha wine ko lekin bharne ke baad woh aise dikhaata jese woh wine ko gutak chuka hai. Par mauka dekhte hi woh apni inner coat ki pocket me usse thook ke uss container me daal raha tha.

Divya usse bhoot bann ke dekhe jaa rahi thi. Usse vishvaas hi nahi ho raha tha.

Divya : T-Tumne ye kiya tha asal me!?

Veer : Mein paagal hu kya jo woh wine piyunga? Hmm?

Divya : R-Right! T-That was really smart! Par... Par itne logo ke beech tumne kese...!?

Veer : I just got lucky!!!

Divya : I-I see~ Ye boht hi acchi baat hai. Kisi ko kuch pata nahi chala tumhaare iss container ke baare me. Y-You did great Veer. Jab screen me tumhe wine peete dekha toh hum logo ki jaan halak me atak gayi thi. I swear. Suhana bechaari toh... I hope she's alright! It's... It's really good that you're fine.

Usne Veer ke kandhe par haath rakh thodi bheegi aankho se jataaya.


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Veer ne haami bhari.

Divya : But wait!!!! Y-Your blood!!! Khoon kese aaya tumhe?? Agar tumne nahi pii toh...

Veer : That was a facade!!

Divya : Wh-What?

Veer : Woh khoon nahi tha!

Divya : Toh kya tha?

Veer : Just some color!

Divya : Color???

Veer (nods) : Right!!!

Divya : Par...

Veer : I prepared it beforehand.

Divya : K-Kya matlab!?

Veer : Woh emergency ke liye tha. I needed help. Lekin aenn waqt pe communication device kaam karna band kar diya tha. Meri awaaz aap tak nahi pohuch rahi thi. Uske liye ye sab karna pada taaki department fauran hi help bhej sake.

Divya : Ahhh!!! I-I see!!! T-Toh ye baat thi. Thank god!!! Everything is fine!

Divya ne kehte hue uske coat se woh communication device nikaal liya aur usse halki muskaan dete hue boli,

Divya : You don't need this now.

Veer haan me sarr hilaate hue aage badh gaya.

Veer : Come! Aur bhi kuch baatein jaan'ni hai abhi.

Divya : Right!!!

Divya usse jaate hue dekhti rahi. Par akasmaat hi uska dhyaan Veer se liye gaye communication device par gaya. Aur,

Divya : H-Hello? Divya speaking!! Can anyone here me??

Aur uske itna bolte hi,

"Yes!!! We can hear you! Loud and clear!!!"

Dusri orr se department ke seh karmi ki spasht awaaz sunaayi dii. Divya hairat me apne haatho me uss device ko dekhti reh gayi.

'This... This is working fine!!!'

Kabhi woh Veer ki peeth ko dekhti jaha Veer dheere dheere apni jebo me haath daale araam se corridor me jaa raha tha. Toh kabhi uss device ko dekhti.

Antatah usne ek baar fir daud lagaayi,

Divya : Veeeeerrrrrrrr!!!!!

Woh chillaayi,

Veer (palat'te hue) : Hmm?

Divya : Ye... Ye toh chal raha hai. It's working fine!!!

Veer : Ohh!? Is it? Well that's good! Kuch derr pehle nahi chal raha tha.

Kehte hue woh ek baar fir aage badh gaya. Machine thi. Kabhi chalti toh kabhi nahi.

Parantu, Divya usse bas jaata hua dekhti rahi. Uski kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha. What just happened?

Bhaagte hue woh bhi Veer ki chaal se chaal milaayi aur corridor ke baahar nikal gayi.

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Baahar aate hi nazara kuch aisa tha ki police ne sab apne control me le liya tha. Aur toh aur Mike ne unke saath milke kayi raaz bhi khol ke rakh diye the.

Mike fauran hi Divya ke paas aaya aur usse sab kuch bataaya.

Jo log yaha masks pehen ke party manaane aate the. Ye darasal koi aur nahi wahi log the jo Nightwalker ke mansion me ho rahe khoon ke khel ko live dekh uska lutf uthaate the.

Udhar Nightwalker ka poora live session dark web par daala jaata tha aur idhar log aankho dekhi hatya ka maza lete the. Yahi inki fetish thi. Na keval woh ye sab dekhte the balki iss par kaafi paisa bhi fekte the. Bets bhi lagti thi. Jiska poora fayda Nightwalker aur Pitcher ko hota tha.

Pitcher ki bhi fetish thi jo unn se aur hatke thi. Usse sundar se sundar actresses, models aur celebrities ko maarne ka shauk tha.

Udhar Nightwalker ka maut ka nanga naach jab khatam hota toh idhar uski khushi me Pitcher party rakhta, jisme woh fir kisi ko maut ke ghaat utaarta.

Yaha do tarfi hatya ka kaand chaalu tha.

Udhar se Nightwalker toh idhar se Pitcher.

Dono hi ek dusre ke sang business me bhi the. Woh jo cameras Mansion me the. Woh isliye the. Unke zariye hi ye log masks pehen ke yaha masoom ki bali ka maza uthaate the.

Chuki aisi footages kisi platform par nahi daali jaa sakti thi isliye Dark web ka sahara liya jaata tha.

Aur inhi cameras me se unhe Veer ke baare me pehle hi pata lag chuka tha.

Par ek satya aur tha. Jiski wajah se poora department maat khaa gaya tha.

Woh ye ki...

Nat ne jo invitation card diya tha. Uss par ek serial number bhi tha. Ye serial number card par bhi rehta tha aur...

Aur unke paas data sheet me bhi feed rehta tha. Jab Fred uss card ko leke entry kiya tha.

Toh serial number match karte hi unhe pata lag chuka tha ki Fred ke paas jo card tha woh darasal Natalia ko bheja gaya tha.

Poori chori yahi pakad gayi thi unki. Security ne Pitcher ko sachet kar diya tha. Lekin uske bawajood Pitcher ne usse bulaaya. Ab koi darwaaze tak aaya ho toh bhala uski khaatir daari kese bhul sakta tha woh?

Aur Fred bhi...

Maut ke ghaat utaar diya gaya. Khel khatam.

Yahi haal Veer ke sang bhi hua. Card toh uske paas bhi wahi tha. Nat ka.

Aur usse dekhte hi unhe fir abhaas ho chuka tha. Saath hi Veer ki photo bhi unke paas thi.

Lekin Veer ke mann me jo baat abhi bhi khatak rahi thi woh ye thi ki unko khabar kisne dii thi ki woh yaha aane waala hai? Aur mask pehen'ne ke bawajood bhala kese pehchaan liye woh usse? Iska jawaab woh dhundh raha tha. Aur kuch kuch usse samajh aa chuka tha.

Mike ne ye saari jankaari jese hi bataayi toh Divya ekdum gusse se laal ho gayi. Ab inki chori pakdi gayi thi toh zaahir hai kisi na kisi aadmi ne saara sach ugal hi diya tha Mike ko.

Par iss khel me jin maasumo ki jaan gayi unka kya? Daniel, Chester, Jacob, Fred jese kitne hi maare gaye. Woh toh ab waapas nahi aa sakte the na.

Mike : I have something to show you! Hurry!

Mike ne kehte hue unn dono ko hi kahi le jaane ke liye kaha.

Jaldbaazi me woh uss dining table par pohuche jaha Veer pehle baitha hua tha.

Par jese hi woh waha aaye,

Divya ko ek bada sa jhatka laga,

Divya : Y-Ye toh...!!!

Neeche ek dead body padi thi. Aur ye koi aur nahi tha. Wahi tha...

Pitcher!!!!

Muh se uske dherr saara jhaag nikla hua tha. Saaf tha ki woh zeher se marra tha.

Divya : Isn't he the...!?

Mike (nods) : Yes!!! The same guy who served the wine.

Divya : This...!!

Mike : He used poison to kill others. That wine bottle contains poison.

Mike ne wahi rakhi wine bottle ki orr ishaara karte hue bataaya jo Pitcher ne Veer ke liye kholi thi.

Divya (bauhe sikodte hue) : We are still missing something. How did he die?

Veer : I know it.

Veer ke kehte hi sabhi ki nazre uss par focused ho gayi. Hairaani me woh sabhi usse dekhe,

Divya : Whaaattt???

Veer : The secret practice...!!!

Mike : Secret practice?

Divya : Veer saaf saaf shabdo me kaho!!! Please be quick!!!

Veer : Wanna know the name?

Divya : *gulps*

Mike : !!!???

Aur fir Veer ke muh se sirf ek shabd nikla,


"MITHRIDATISM"

Jisse sunte hi Divya ke poore badan ke raungte khade ho gaye.

Aur uske kaanpte haatho se Veer ka woh device gir gaya. Kyuki woh jaanti thi. Woh bhali bhaati jaanti thi iss ek shabd ka matlab kya tha.

Mike ki samajh me na aaya. Usne apna phone nikaal google kar uss ek shabd ka matlab search kiya aur jese hi usne uske baare me jaana. Uska badan khud kaanp utha.

Mithridatism, ek aisi practice jisme insaan kam maatra me khud zeher leta hai. Maatra itni ki jaan ke liye ghaatak na bane.

Mithridates VI jo Pontus ke Raja the. Maana jaata hai ki woh apni maut ko lekar itne darre hue rehte the ki unhe harr samay yahi lagta tha ki koi unhe chalaaki se zeher deke maar dega. Ye puraatan kaal me ek aam baat thi. Raja maharajao ko ye bhay aksar bana rehta tha ki kahi koi unka apna hi unke saath vishvaas-ghaat na kar de.

Toh zeher unka kuch bigaad hi na paaye isliye Raja Mithridates VI ne kam maatra me khud hi zeher lena shuru kar diya tha. Iss umeed me ki ye kam zeher lete lete ek na ek din unka shareer iss zeher ke khilaaf rog pratirodhak shakti paida kar hi dega. Yaani ki immunity bana hi lega.

Jese aksar hum navjaat shishu ko injections lagwaate hai, fir chaahe woh polio ke ho ya tetanus ke ya anya koi. Inka uddeshya hi yahi rehta hai ki shareer inn rogo ke khilaaf ek immunity bana le. Raja Mithridates ne bhi yahi karne ka socha tha.

Zeher le le ke uske khilaaf ladne ki shakti banana. Parantu ye daav ulta pad gaya tha. Zeher baar baar nirantar lene ke baad wahi zeher unke shareer me ikhatta hone laga tha, jo baad me aage chalke unki maut ka kaaran bann gaya.

Pitcher ka bhi uddeshya wahi tha.

Aur Pitcher...

Ye karne me qamyaab ho gaya tha.


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Aisa nahi tha ki aap yadi iss practice ko apnaate ho toh aapki maut nischit hai.

Hargiz nahi! Yadi non-biological poisons ko liya jaaye toh ye sambhav hai ki aap kuch poisons ke khilaaf immunity nirmit kar sakte ho.

Jo vish ka pyaala hum dusro ko dete hai woh ek na ek din hume khud bhi peena padta hai. Ab tak ye baat Pitcher par sahi se laagu nahi ho rahi thi. Par Veer ke aate hi...

Kaam tamaam ho chuka tha.

Divya : Quick!!! We have to get back to the department. There are still many questions that are left unanswered.

Woh kehti hue aage badhi, Mike bhi haami bharte hue peeche peeche gaya. Parantu idhar Veer ki aankhein Pitcher ki laash par hi tiki hui thi.

Unn aankho me bhayanak gussa tha. Ekdum laal ho rakhi thi woh. Aisa lag raha tha Veer abhi uski laash pe bhi toot padega aur cheer phaad dega.

'I almost died, you bastard!!!'

Woh mann me hi gurraaya.

Uska heart rate bhaiyankar zyaada ho rakha tha. Container?? Kaahe ka container??

Veer Divya ke jaate hue figure ko peeche se dekh raha tha. Siwae Mithridatism ke, jo kuch bhi usne Divya ko bataaya tha.

Woh sab jhooth tha.

Uska asal sach toh uske khud ke antar mann ki gehraiyo aur uske zehen me hi dafn hoke rehne waala tha.

Asli sachhaayi toh kuch aur hi thi...

Jab Veer hotel me ghus neeche Beowulf se check kar raha tha. Tab usse nahi pata tha ki upar balcony me uski photo ko idhar se udhar kiya jaa raha tha.

Parantu...

Ek uss se bhi badi sansani macha dene waali khoj kar lii thi usne.

Neeche uski nazar dur ek aise vyakti par padi thi jo ek wine ki bottle me powder jesa kuch mila raha tha.

Aur ye kya tha ye bataane ki zaroorat hi nahi thi.

Beshaq, zeher!!!!

Veer ka maqsad saaf tha. Na keval usne jaa ke iss baat ka pata kiya balki, usne uss vyakti ke jaate hi wahi powdered substance ki maatra aur badha ke uss wine me daal dii.

Ye sab usne tab kiya tha jab woh vyakti andar kuch lene gaya tha.

Bheed itni thi ki kisi ko kuch nahi pata tha ki kya ho raha hai. Sirf pitcher hi Veer ke baare me jaanta tha aur chand aur log jinhone Veer ki live footage dekhi thi. Par kuch aise bhi the jo Veer ke pehle ke murder footages dekhe hue the. Woh bhi party ka hissa the.

[Maaastttteeerrrrr!!! Wh-Whaattt are you doing??? Aap usme kyu mila rahe ho?]

'Agar mein sahi hu, toh aaj Pitcher nahi bachega!!!'

[N-Noooo!!! Don't tell me you...!!]

'Yes!! I will do it!!!'

Woh waapas se apni jagah par aaya. Aur Veer ne dekha ki kese woh vyakti dobaara se uss wine ki bottle me packing chadha raha tha taaki aisa lage wine ki bottle ekdum nayi hai.

'This motherfucker...!!'

Aur inn chand lamho me, Veer ne ye saara kaam iss prakaar se kiya tha ki uske jeb ka camera saamne ki orr focused tha. Department waalo ko screen me dekh ye katayi pata nahi lag paaya tha ki Veer ne aisa bhi kuch kiya tha.

Fir aaya woh waqt, jab Pitcher ne Veer ko bulaaya.

Uske saath baith ke jab usne Veer ko woh wine offer kii, Pitcher ke chehre par haivaano waali kapti muskaan thi. Kyuki woh jaanta tha ye Veer aaj marrega hi uske haatho se.

Par woh ye nahi jaanta tha... Ki Veer ek aam insaan nahi tha.

Veer ne jese hi wine se bhare glass ko check kiya,

*Ding*

[A glass full of poisoned wine. Don't drink it.]

Sab kuch saamne tha. Ye wahi wine thi. Jisme ferr badal kiya gaya tha.

Aur isliye Pitcher ab tak pakda nahi gaya tha. Kyuki woh bhi same wine peeta tha.

Parantu woh iss zeher se ladne me saksham tha. Lekin aam vyakti nahi.

Aur aise hi sabhi maut ke ghaat utar rahe the.

What a horrifying way to kill.

Woh abhi bhi shaitaano ki tarah muskuraa ke Veer ko dekh raha tha.

'This sly bastard!!!'

Lekin aaj khel kuch alag hone waala tha.

'Pari!!! Open the shop!!'

[Yes Master!!!]

'Find me a skill which can cure this poison.'

[Whaaaatttttt??? Nooooooooo!!! Maaassttteeerrrr!!! Aap aisa nahi kar sakte. I'm telling you please stop!!! Please!!! I'm begging you~]

'Pari...!!!'

[Nooo noooo nooooooo!!!!? How can I??? Mat kariye.... Please!!!! I...]

'DO IT!!!!!!'

Jab Veer mann me zorr se cheekha toh Pari ek baar fir apne master ke saamne haar gayi.

[Master! This is the one but...]

'Kitne points? Ohhh! 5000 Points? One time use only? Fine then! Purchase this.'

[O-Okay but...]

'DO IT!!!!'

*Ding*

['Sylvia's Venom Cure' is now available.]

*Ding*

[Host can only use this skill for one time only.
Warning : Beware of extreme pain, vomit and increased heart rate.]

*Ding*

[Sylvia's Venom cure has been activated.]

Aur agle hi pal, Veer ke andar bhaari maatra me white blood cells bann'na shuru ho gaye. Bann toh pehle bhi rahe the par unki process kayi guna badh chuki thi.

Veer ne fir woh kiya jo sabko hairaan kar diya tha.

Usne wine pee lii thi. Par wine toh container me gayi thi?

Laude ka container! Woh container toh washroom ke soap dispenser ka ek toota hua bhaag tha jo Veer ne washroom se nikalne se pehle hathyaya tha.

Woh color? Ghanta color! Woh toh uska khoon tha jo white blood cells ne poison ke roop me usse baahar fikwaaya tha.

White blood cells hi toh immunity ka kaaran hai hamaare shareer me.

Aur uske baad utha tha Veer ko atyant dard, uska nervous system itne khatarnak sthiti se guzar raha tha ki uska andhruni dard aseem hota jaa raha tha.

Aisa laga tha ki woh ab nahi bachega. Aur behosh hone se pehle usse bas Pari ke bol yaad the.

"Veeeeerrrrrrrr!!!???"

Divya ki awaaz usse firse hosh me laayi.

Veer : Coming!!!

Veer ek akhiri nazar Pitcher par daal aage badh gaya.

Aur baahar aate hi,

*Screeeeeeccccchhhh*

Gaadi ruki aur Suhana aur Nik usme se baahar nikle.

Suhana ki nigaahein jese hi Veer par jaa kar tiki uski aankhein felti chali gayi,

"Veeeeerrrrrrr!!!"

Woh daudte hue aayi aur zorr se kood ke uski baaho me ucchal gayi.

Uske baad wahi hua. Sawaal pe sawaal. Veer ne jese tese maamla shaant kiya.

Par...

Veer : Huh!!??

Woh aashcharya chakit reh gaya jab usne apne bagal me Suhana ko dekha toh...



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Woh ro rahi thi. Unn aankho me pehli baar Veer ne kabhi apne liye itne strong emotions dekhe the.

'Miss Suhana...!?'

Veer : Aap ro rahi ho?

Suhana (muh ferrte hue) : Who's crying? Get lost!

Veer : *smiles*

Divya : Tum dono! Take my keys! Mujhe aane me late ho jaega.

Divya ne car ki keys fekte hue kaha.

Aur kuch derr me hi Veer aur Suhana dono Divya ki car me sawaar hote hue waha se ravaana ho gaye. Udhar ki tehkiqaat lambi chalne waali thi.

Idhar car me,

Suhana (smiles) : I'm happy!

Veer : Why so?

Suhana : Duh!!! You dumb! Kyuki tum sahi salaamat ho.

Veer : Par jab mein waha se jaa raha tha tab toh aap gussa hoke bhaag gayi thi bacchi ki tarah perr patak ke.

Suhana (blushes) : Wh-What do you mean by bacchi ki tarah??? I was looking out for you!! Par tum ho ki... Kherr! Chorro!!! Wait!!

Veer : Kya hua?

Suhana : Udhar park hai!

Veer : So!?

Suhana : Stupid! Stop the car! Mujhe thodi fresh air chahiye.

Suhana ki baat maan Veer ne gaadi park ke paas rok dii.

Ye ek open park tha.

Aur dono hi utar ke kuch derr uss khamoshi me tehelne lage. Koi baatein nahi.

Jab achanak hi,

Suhana palti aur Veer se zorr se chipak gayi.



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'Huh?'

Suhana : I thought something will happen to you!!!

Usne usse dekh ke bola!!


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Veer : But I'm right here! Hai na?

Suhana : Hmm! And that's what matters.

Kehte hue woh uske kandhe par sarr rakh uss se chipki rahi.


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Jab achanak hi usse dhyaan aaya...

Ki Veer uska pati nahi tha.

Suhana : Ahhh!!! S-Sorry about that...!!

Kehte hue woh dur hatt gayi aur mud gayi.

Veer ko yu akela chorr woh waapas se car ki orr chal dii.

Idhar sheetal leher me, halki hawao me Veer ki lehraati zulfein uski aankho ke saamne fir rahi thi aur nazre tiki hui thi Suhana ke jaate hue figure par.

'You are hiding something. Aren't you? Miss Suhana?'
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