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इसके लिए मुझे फ़िर से पीना पड़ेगा ।Wah wah
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It doesn't matter in which Language you writeकसम है उस यम की, मेरा मन इतना वाक्य पढ़ कर कहीँ और ही आसमाँ मे भर्मा गया था, किन्तु...
शुक्र है, आगे के वाक्य मुझे वापस धरती पे ले आये
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वैसे, मुझे अंग्रेजी नही भाती, इसलिए ही मै हिंदी मे लिखना सुविधाजनक समझता हूँ ।
I deeply appreciate your writingकसम है उस यम की, मेरा मन इतना वाक्य पढ़ कर कहीँ और ही आसमाँ मे भर्मा गया था, किन्तु...
शुक्र है, आगे के वाक्य मुझे वापस धरती पे ले आये
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वैसे, मुझे अंग्रेजी नही भाती, इसलिए ही मै हिंदी मे लिखना सुविधाजनक समझता हूँ ।
Thanks a lot dear.Update 110.....
ab ispe kya kahu main...
ye update mild tha honestly...
mild isliye kyuki isme zyada kuch nhi tha.
3 points were important in this update. First to ye ki wo unknown dude. That guy is giving me creeps since the moment he has appeared in the story.Seriously what is wrong with him? Are baba itni kya padi h hamare Veer ko maarne ki? Aur ye ekdum se kaha se aa gaya? Where was he for the past few months?
veer k paas system aaye more than an year ho gaya h... H na? Werewolf Sir??
to tab kaha tha ye stupid??Ab jab Veer finally apni mom and sisoo se milne k liye ready h to ye aur peeche pada h...
I can feel why Veer is annoyed over this.
second point tha Alpha and Sigma traits. Hmm... Very interesting sir... Very interesting... I must say... Aapne kuch firse hatke laaya h... You can create different situations here based on these traits.
third point tha Shweta ki regret nd closeness. I don't know why... But I felt very bad...I don't know kyu... I mean Shweta ne obviously Veer ke sath bohut bura kia... Ye hum sab jante h...
Par jab uske hath se katori giri aur wo saloni meethi jagah jagah fel gayi floor par... Aur uska ro k bhagna... I don't know why... I just felt it. I felt very bad for her. Mujhe wo scene bohut dil pe laga. I almost shed a tear.
shayad apki phrasing ka kamal tha ye.. maybe it was because of the way you wrote that made me feel sad. Actually... I really do want Veer to to call shweta mum...
pata nhj kyu... Shayad main hi hu jo shweta ko asani se maaf kar dii... I really want her to be happy... She's giving her best...
update mild tha because i think mild update ki requirement thi. Las vegas k itne mind boggling scenes k baad ek mild update required tha to ease out the things.
But ab aapke liye challenges h Werewolf Sir...Las vegas me aapne itne din ghuma dia... You have not registered yourself with the characters who were absent in las vegas.
Hum readers bhi kaera, sonia, nidhi, shreya, arohi, kavya etc jese characters ki familiarity se thoda dur ho gaye h... Ab ye aapke upar h ki aap kitne behatreen way me unhe dobara se hamare samne present karte h... To make them feel more alive... Aise na lage hume ki woh itne din tak kahani se gayab the... Zara sii bhi woh feeling hamare andar nahj aani chahiye ki iss character ka impact kam ho gaya h ab... Absence affect na kare kuch bhi...
aur ye sab handle karna ab aapke upar h...
Too many challenges for you...
Kaera itne din baad aayegi... Her presence should be as strong as it was earlier...
waiting for further updates Sir... Ab aaj to nhi aane wala...Hope kal definitely aa jaeyga new update. Keep writing Sir...
as always... Love you work...![]()
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Aao toh fir chalo ab...
May I know when will be next update