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[Werewolf]

Tejal veer se do strike se mil Sakti h

Pahle to tej veer ke college jayegi Jha use college m koi students ya teachers milengi jiske jariye Kavya ya arohi se milegi to use veer ke bare m sab pta chal Jayega

Ohhhh!!!

Dusri bajah tej Kisi musibat me padegi to veer ki system ki taraf se tej ko bachane Ka mission milega to tab dono mil jayenge

Dayummm! That is indeed true! Both are possible ways.

वीर का वो अल्फ़ा इंस्टिंक्ट का अपडेट होना ... भले ही उसके आत्मविश्वाश और व्यक्तित्व को और निखारा है, पर एक डर ये भी रहता है की कहीं उसके कारण वीर कुछ ऐसा न कर दे जिससे उसे बाद मे पछतावा हो ।

Agar fayde rahenge toh nuksaan bhi rahenge

Bahut hi Shandaar Update diya hai Bhai . Veer Aur Purvi jab milege Tab dekhna Shandaar hoga aur usse bhi shandaar Tej aur Veer ka Aamna Saamna . Ye dekhna bhi Dilchasp hoga ki karunesh kya chaal chalta hai ! Eagerly Waiting !

Aur ye sab hone hi waala hai.

Bhai Crimson to ek color h or wo bhi specially science walo ko pata hoga jisne chemistry ache se padhi hogi or bhai mere hisab se appko chemistry bohot pasand or appka favorite subject hoga isiliye phele Nightwalker ke time pe appne periodic table use ka use kiya or abb crimson red color k upper pora arc bana rage ho...

Behad hi shandaar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Dhanyavaad bhai!

 

[Werewolf]

Superb fantastic amazing mind blowing update bhai...

Pari or veer k bich hui halki si an band sahi nahi thi dono ko ek dusre ko samaj na chahiye or veer ajj jo kuch bhi h wo sab hasil karne me pari ne uski help ki h or insaan gusse m hota h to wo jo nahi khehna chahta wo bhi bol deta h yahi hua veer ne pari pe kuch questions utha diya pari ko ye baat kharab lagi or usi ka karan h wo us kand k baad sleep mode pe chali gaye thi or jab veer Mumbai arrive hua uske dusre din morning m pari sleep mode se active hue par jab pari sleep mode m thi tab veer ko bhi realize hua ki usne jada h bol diya pari ko or jab pari active hui to veer ne usko sorry bola or pari ne bhi apni galti samaj te hue sorry bola...

Pari ko Veer ki baat ka bura nahi laga bhaaya. Woh khud se niraash thi. Aur udaas thi. Isliye sleep mode me chali gayi. Usse guilty feel ho raha tha.

Bhumika ko bhi apne past m ki gaye galati ka ehsaas ho gaya h or usi galti ko sudhare m veer se ab ache se baat karne lagi h usko bhi ek bhai ki kami khalti h or ussne jo hotel m kiya uske bawjuud veer ne bohot kuch kiya h dono Maa beti k liye jaha tak mujhe lagta h veer ko jitna Shweta k liye nafrat h usti bhumika ko leke nahi h or Agar bhumika ese hi try karti rahe to veer usse maaf bhi kar dega jaha dusri or ragini veer k Anne se bohot khush h or uske jaane k phele jesa time usne Veer k sath spend kiya tha wesa h time wo phir se veer k sath spend karna chahti h isliye usne Veer se kahi or veer ne usko beech pe le jana ka khaha h ab dekhna h last time to kiss or book pressing hua tha is baar kya hota h jab dono beach pe jayenge wahi jab veer Balhaar se milne gaya to balhaar ne usse kuch information di h jo veer ne h usko karne k liye khaha tha jaha tak mujhe lagta h usne balhaar ki pranjal or nidhi mam k pati k upper nazar rakhne ko khaha hoga kyu ki uske or koye dusman nahi h jo usko problem de sake kar to kuch ye log bhi nahi kar sakte phir bhi alert rehne m koye problem nahi h or isi bich Balhaar k vichaar yaha tha ki wo ab veer k liye kam nahi karega or just tabhi usse veer se javab mil gaya jisee sunte h usske rongte khade ho gaye the k ye koye mamuli ladka nahi h...

Mann me ye sab bhaav toh aaenge hi agar ek ladka aap ko apne under rakhe. Balhaar itne bade underworld ka aadmi hote hue bhi Veer ke neeche hi hai. Issi baat ko lekar usne socha ki kyu na Veer ko hi uda de. Parantu, usse uska javaab agle hi pal mil gaya hai.

Tej bhi sab jaga search kar chuki thi phir bhi usko kuch information nahi mili thi veer k bare m isliye uska sabar ka bandh tut gaya bhavna per or jada hone laga tab bhavana ne uske number k bare m bataya jiske pata chalte h purvi ne call kiya or usse baat k veer n voice sunke teeno k dil Jor se dhadakne lage the jaha bhavna to apne bete ki awaaz suun ki shant thi wahi jo tej itna garam ho rahi thi wo veer ki awaaz sunke shant pad gaye uske muu se kuch sabad h nahi nikle per purvi ne himat karke baat ki or usse milne ka fix kiya or jab cal cut hone k bad truecaller pe veer ka asli naam dikha or tej uska asli naam jane k bad social media se sari detail nikal li lekin dekhne layak tab hoga jab purvi k na khehne k bawjuud wo veer se milegi or tab kya hoga or jab purvi milegi tab veer se milne k bad kya reaction hoga uska ye sab to agge story m pata chalega...

Ye toh abhi doubtful hai. Ki kya Tej veer se Purvi ke pehle milegi ya baad me?
Thank you so much bro for such an awesome revo!
Keep supporting!

 

[MAD. MAX]

Ye mere saath bhi hua tha. Registered ho gaya tha par pata baad me chala tha.
Kherr! Ab jab jud gaye hai, toh safar me saath saath chalte rahiyega bhai!
Dhanyavaad boht boht!

Don't worry hum sath sath hai

 

[Werewolf]

Read last update again. Pari's statement was absolutely correct, Veer needs to solve all the problems around him, one after the another. Only then he'll be able to face the “Unknown Man” with his complete focus. But, there are a lot of things that he has too look at, at the same time...

But what if time runs out!?

> Pranjal & Rajat.. Pari said that Veer should focus on Rajat first, but I think he'll be able to dismantle both the fools together

One at a time! (according to Pari is best)

> Pranjal's story, that needs to be explored, means another beautiful & hot girl will enter the story!

Are you sure about that?

> Karunesh.. Veer is unaware that this bastard is also on the same side as of junior bastard ~ Pranjal. What kind of approach Veer will have while handling him.

Veer is focusing on Rajat first.

> Sumitra.. completely unexplored till now. Though I felt that she's a good woman, because of the way she behaved in front of Ragini while convincing her to come back. Her husband + both her sons, would be interesting to see how she'll react.

React for what!?

> Vivek's bastardism is still hidden in front of the family. Ragini's incident has hampered his image in the house as well as in the business, but they all are unaware about the plans he executed alongside the junior bastard. What's cooking in the story for him?

Who knows?

> Niharika, though she just needs a couple of more drilling sessions, but would be interesting to see, what Veer has in store for her.

We will see in the next update!

Alongside these negative prospects, Veer has to deal with his sister & mother too! Bhavna being the most suspicious character right now in the story (excluding the another system guy), might just create chaos when she finally meets Veer. Especially, the face-off of Shweta & Bhavna. I still feel that Bhavna will be having an upper hand in that, not because she did anything better than Shweta, but it's just a gut feeling that Veer might tend towards Bhavna.

A faceoff will happen! And it will happen soon! But who will have the upper hand? Bhavna? Coz she's his real mother? Veer will tend towards her? But Veer's alpha instincts are stronger. Or will he go for Shweta instead?

Shweta.. she deserves a good life now. Husband being a cheat, her son's incident, being broken, marrying a pig Brijesh, and then being in a family of such fools! She was understandably desperate to secure her daughter's future.. though it's incapable of justifying her behaviour towards Veer but as they say, “andhon ke shehar mein kaana raja”.. what other's did with Veer, keeping that in mind, Shweta's behaviour becomes a tiny thing in front of that. I know that Bhavna will come up with something that might prove her to be a “Balidaani” but thinking practically, a kid whose own mother, left him, how can we expect his stepmom to give a fuck about what he does and what he doesn't..?

Well! Shweta is trying hard. She's doing everyt possible thing to make a place in Veer's heart. However, it will get tough for her. Veer's alpha instincts is one of the reasons and Bhavna being the other.

Though, Shweta did try to accept Veer as her own child in the start, but some “unknown plans” made sure that Veer has a useless image in front of her. Let's see how Veer is going to treat her especially when the Alpha Trait is soaring high in the sky. On the contrary, Bhumika being a complete puppet, that was controlled by Shweta, has brought herself in such a situation where she just cannot come up and say that, “Okay Veer! Let's forget those dark shades and move to a new source of light, a new relationship”! As far as I've understood her, she might be similar to that “shy” or “timid” version of Arohi. If it is so, then the path ahead, isn't going to be an easy one for her. Yeah! In case Veer somehow just approaches her on his own, then it's a different case, but Bhumika showing the courage on her own, looks like a difficult thing! Though, I don't think “Sigma Veer” would do that..!!

Bhumika has a very different personality. She will seem like some of the other characters but no. She ain't anyone like them.
She focuses on work a lot. Not like Sonia who wants to prove that she's still on par with Kaera. But Bhumi genuinely loves her work. A workaholic indeed. She is one of those characters who feels guilty instantly. If a beggar comes to her and starts saying she owe him. She didn't give anything to him. Blah blah blah. A few more ranting and she'll give in. Immediately, feeling guilty for not giving anything to the beggar. And promptly, she'll hand over a couple of bills to him. That's how she is.

And Shweta is teaching her to work on that part of her personality. Because as an owner of a hotel, you cannot give in easily.

Coming to Ragini.. beaches!? Bikinis!? Jokes apart, I think this beach trip might trigger a new relationship between Ragini & Veer. She kissed him, removed her top in front of him, made her breasts feel comfortable in his hands, but still after that Vegas trip, there must be some ice between them, that needs to be broken! Ragini seems to be the perfect candidate in such a situation, who knows how to show her feelings and thoughts, without hesitating. But would be interesting to see how “Sigma + Stronger Alpha” Veer will react to that teasing this time. The ending scenes to start a new story for them, is close, really – really close!!

She wasn't wearing any petticoat inside that day. All her meat was squeezed and deformed into various shapes by Veer to his heart's content. :Troll:

Veer's reaction to Suhana being shot, as explained in the flashback scene sums up the place Suhana holds in Veer's life currently. Though,we cannot call it love right now, neither from Veer' side nor Suhana's.. But that too isn't too far away! Veer's conversation with Pari, points towards the fact that he's feeling guilty because of what happened with Suhana.. On the contrary, Suhana kissing him to fulfill the last favour points towards something serious cooking inside her head. Suhana feeling thankful towards Veer for saving her + Veer feeling guilty because she got shot.. quite a strong combination to strengthen that particular future relationship!!

It's not love. Yes!! However there is something special between them now. They share those stand alone moments with each other. When no one else was there. Other know about it, but only the scarce details. Suhana knows everything. No one knows about the kiss. Even Divya doesn't know right now. So there's something special. It's not love. But something is there.

Tej is cute! She hasn't shown her cutesy side till no, still she's cute! Her love and desperation for her brother is unmatched.. She'll find him soon, because of the new inputs and that's where the fun will begin! As you mentioned in one of your comments, that she envies Veer, a bit, because she lived without a complete family... But as soon as she'll know the truth, that's where we'll see the real sister inside her! I expect her to stand up and destroy each and every of those who tortured Veer, only through her words. She might stand up in front of Bhavna too, and ask why she did what she did, but will she answer? That's the real question.

There's a reason why she's has been named Tej! within just 2-3 updates you'll witness something great.

Bhavna, as I said, we'll know the reason for her sacrifice but would be interesting to see how Veer will behave in front of her, taking into consideration, his modified personality. She hails from a royal family, means powerful enemies, means danger for Bhavna as well as her family. But the question is still the same, why she left Veer? In case she thought Veer will be in danger, staying close to her, then why not Tej? She wasn't in danger, is it about the hierarchy? Veer is the last hope of that fallen royal family, and that's why he's on the radar? But again, why Bhavna wants to meet him now? Are the black clouds done & dusted now? Let's see what her clarification and history holds.

We'll witness some past in this arc. That will explain us all the things. All the doubts will be cleared. Mostly!!!

Pari holds the damn secret! Won't say much because every assumption will fall badly as soon as this cutesy and loving personality is replaced by the other one. But I'm sure that Pari or Pari's another personality knows every damn thing about that other system. Veer ain't qualified enough to access that information now, i guess..

But just how many personalities she has? Will it keep changing as Veer level ups?

The update was really beautiful! Seems like a lot of things are going to happen simultaneously in this arc! Especially handling the emotional matters alongside the repair and restoration of negative prospects. The build-up to the main part seems exciting and what's coming next seems to be more exciting! Keep going man, waiting for the opening up of that arc, which seems to remain my favourite throughout the story...

Outstanding Update Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Oh thanks a lot man!
Yes! Indeed! Arc will show you how emotional scenes will blend with the treatment for negative characters. So yeah, a bunch of different scenarios we'll get to see. And then something great will start, which is the essence of this whole arc. The one which we want to see the most. Thanks so much for a detailed and an awesome revo!
Keep supporting like usual bro!

 

[Werewolf]

Ragini me din ba din hote badlao ne mujhe
mentally bohat disturb kia hai 1 negative
character jo shiro se kuch khas rol ta hi nahi
ab achanak se itni importance kyu?
ye bohat hi weird feeling hain

Yes! Mein samjhaata hu Aisa kyu hai.

Ragini ne bhai bohot Kiya hai. Ragini ne uss samay Veer ko apnaaya jab Veer ke paas Manorath ka diya kuch bhi nahi tha. Uske paas gaadi bhi nahi thi aur koi business bhi nahi tha. Woh Nidhi ke ghar reh zaroor Raha tha par uske andar rinn ki bhavnaaye thi. Nidhi ki aarthik paristhiti sahi nahi thi aur Veer ko ye baar baar feel hota tha. Ragini ne uss waqt usse iss feeling se azaad kiya jab usne apne ghar usse rehne ke liye bulaaya.

Ragini hi thi jisne sabse bada gift Aaj Tak uske b'day par usse diya tha. Ek bike! Ragini ne hi uske saare credit cards, IDs Ghar se mangwai thi, if you remember. Usne hi Veer ke liye saari grehesti banaayi. Chaahe kapde ho ya kuch aur. Wahi thi jisne food truck ka inauguration Kiya tha. Jab Veer ghaayal hota tha toh Ragini hi uska dhyaan rakhti thi. Usse college bhejna aur uske liye choti choti cheezein ready rakhna. Itne dino se saath reh rahe hai woh. Aise achanak se thodi hi sab kuch hua hai. More than 80 updates ka development hai ye. Hope ab samajh gaye honge aap.

starting se hi hume Nidhi ko main leading
me dikhaya gaya hai story incest based pe
hai to is bat me koi shak nahi k bohat se characters involve hu ge lakin story ki stability banaye rakhna b utna hi zarori hai

Nidhi ko main lead me dikhaya gaya hai par iska matlab ye nahi hai ki she's the only one in the main female lead.

Nidhi k bad bohat se characters introduce
howe like Sonia or uski friends phir sath hi
Suhana&Divya jinhe major rol nibhate dikhaya gaya hai jaise k humen pta hai ye koi simple log nahi hain bare bare nam k sath wasi hi unki pehchan hai to ab point ye hai k
Ragini compare ki bat karen to kisi k sath
b koi match nahi hai we know jis tarah ki
situation me wo thi Veer ka usey protect
kerna it's a good thing for her but the main reason is after that why she is behaving like a teenager? can u explain me.....

Ragini teenager ki tarah behave kar rahi hai? No bro! Teenager jesa behave karna Kavya ke liye Maan sakta hu. But Ragini? Woh kaha se? She's acting possessive and bold. But not like any teenager. Latest update humne ye bhi dekha ki usne Anya ladko ke saath baat karne ki koshish bhi kii thi taaki dusri shadi karke settle ho sake but it didn't work out. After divorce, uska zyada se zyada samay Veer ke sang guzarne laga. She came to know more about him and as she proceeded, she fell for him. Especially when Veer gifted her that necklace.

Mujhe is bat se koi matlb nahi hai k Ragini
kia kerti hai lakin some times kisi aise
character ko itna highlight ker dena b hazam
nahi hota or specially jab bat aa jai Nidhi ki
to phir to chahe koi b ho Kaera&Sonia chahe
koi b faraq nahi parta kyu humare hath kuch
b nahi hota ye sb writer ka kamal hai
jis tarah se Nidhi ko highlight kia gaya hai
dosre kisi character ko le ker itna craze feel
nahi howa abhi tak she's like a God level
character beyond the imaginations

Of course! Harr character me ek alag baat hoti hai. Nidhi being the first female potential romantic character has her own charm. Sabhi unique hai.

ajtak kisi or story me kisi or writer ko 1 married lady ko itna ziada sarahte howe
nahi dekha ye khud me bohat bari effort hai
Nidhi ki life me kuch b simple nahi ta but still
she never give up or at last Veer ne uske
dukhu ka madawa ker diya jo bohat hi ziada
impressive hai(topis lamba hota ja rha hai to bat ko mukhatiser kerta chalu)

Veer respects her a lot.

abhi current situation me Nidhi ka filhal koi
rol nahi or zahir c bat hai k aise hi to achanak
se to entry nahi karwa sakte jitna ziada character ki hype utna hi effort

Exactly!

Ragini k mamle me bs thora sa ehteyat ki
zarorat hai chezu ko bohat ache se manage
karne ki zarorat hai i hope k ap meri bat ko
understand karen ge mujhe na to story se koi
issue hai or na hi kisi character se bs jo feel
kia wo bata diya ise koi negative comment
jaisa na lena ye meri thoughts hain jo story ko pharne k bad mere dimagh me chalti rehti to maine unhi batu ko share kia hai

Koi baat nahi bhaaya! Thoughts are always welcomed.

Or 1 akhri bat k Suman ka Sonali ko force
kerna ye bohat hi awkward feel kerwata hai
theak hai Veer ne un logu k liye bohat kuch kia ahai chalo ye maan lia k Sonali uska 10% to choro 1% b nahi lota sakti but yahan bat ho rahi hai Suman k behavior ki Veer se v jitni b loyal rhe per usey ye right nahi milta k wo
Sonali ko kisi b bat k liye force kre she's a human not a Robert k jaisi instructions do ge waisa kerta jai ga bina kisi bat k Suman Veer ki slave hai to rhe us se koi matter nahi

Iska bhi ek bohot bada kaaran hai bhai ki kyu Suman Sonali ko force karti hai. Aage pata lagega. Issi arc me...!

Food truck shiro karne se le ker ab tak Sonali
hi manage kerti aa rhi hai to Veer ko hi ab uske liye kuch kerna chahiye or kaise b ker k Suman pe ye bat wazia ki jai k wo kisi ko is tarah se force nahi ker sakti ye meri personal
request hai sir isme sudhar kia jai

Aise hi nahi Suman force karti bhaya. Keval uski beti hone ke naate woh itna haq nahi jataati hai. Baat kuch aur bhi hai jo Sonali ko nahi pata hai. Aur na hi hume. Saamne aayega ye bhi.

Overall ab tak k jitne b updates read kiye
sabhi 1 se barh ker 1 te last kitne time se
maine koi b reply nahi diya yad nahi per ye kuch baten thin jo main kerna chah rha ta hope so ap understand karo ge


Ajke liye itna hi.....!


Keep goig......

Bohot bohot dhanyavad Bhai!
Itna pyaara revo Dene ke liye tahe dil se shukriya. Kaafi baatein rakhi hai aapne. Aur kaafi baato me Jo sawaal aapne rakhe hai uske uttar hume jald hi mil jayenge. Toh saath Bane rahiyega. Ye arc hume ek naya safar karwaega. Aane waale revos ka intezaar rahega.
Dhanyawad!

 

[Werewolf]

Ye jaankar aacha laga ki aapne daily life ki responsibility, tention aur writing se door hokar family aur doston ke saath injoy kiya. Ham sabhi ye samajh sakte hai. Agar koi nahi samajhta to wo nahi jaanta ki priority (Life) kya hoti hai.

Zaroori hai mitr! Personal life ko samay Dena bohot zaroori hai. Samajhne ke liye shukriya!

Dimag tho intazaar karega Bhai ek din kya pura week rukega aapke liye par ye dhil ka kya he wo tho nahi suntha kisi ka bahut ziddi he Bhai puchta rehta he kab aayega kab aayega karke it's unavoidable Bhai pyar aur zung me sab kuch chalta he

Agla update Aaj hi aaega Bhai. Aur jaldi aayega.

कुछ ज़्यादा ना बक रहे लोग यहाँ पर!!!

मैं समझता हूँ यहाँ ज़्यादातर reader कामकाजी लोग होते हैं!!
वैसे कुछ तो नल्ले और ठलवे भी होंगे ही, जो एक हाथ में phone और एक हाथ में लंड पकड़े ख़ाली बैठे बस update आने का ही वेट करते रहते हैं!!!

Most of the cases me yahi hota hai.

अबे अपने profession में भी कई बार लगता है कि बस file या assignment या नक़्शा (मैं architect हूँ), बस बन ही गया, थोड़ा polish करना बचा है...
उसी हिसाब से आगे boss को या client तो टाइम दे देते हैं ....
पर कई बार polishing और presentable बनाने में सोच से ज़्यादा टाइम लग जाता है। या कोई नया idea आ जाता है जिससे end product पहले से बहतर बन जाता है...

इस सब में टाइम लगता ही है!!!!

Exactly! Time lagta hai kis tarah se scenes ko present Kiya jaaye. Isme!

अपना राइटर भी perfectionist बंदा है, कच्ची खिचड़ी कभी नहीं परोसेगा!

उसको अपना काम करने दो भाई !!!

Indeed! Mujhe halka fulka pasand nahi. I try my best to make each update as best as possible.

और readers उसकी लुगाई नहीं हैं बहनचोद जो बार बार कितनी देर लग रही है बताता फिरे !!

अबे इतना उतावलापन भी healthy नहीं!!!

अपन लोगों को भी अच्छा नहीं लगता जब कोई बार बार जल्दी कर जल्दी कर बोल के टोके, चाहे वो client हो या बीवी!!

India में हम लोग आधा घंटा लेट होना तो टाइम पर होना मानते हैं...
और gentleman promise गया गधे की गाँड में !!
Writer ने promise किया कब??
उसने केवल tentative time दिया था!!!

ऐसे लोग ही लड़की के मुस्कुराकर बात करने पर उसे पटा हुआ मान लेते हैं और फिर अपना दिल तुड़ा लेते हैं....

इतनी छोटी बात पर इतना aggression दिखाना ठीक नहीं!!

writer ने मेहनत करी, पूरा time दिया इसलिए उसकी story hit हुई....
उसके commitment पर चोट मत करो...

Some people think I gave regular updates that's why story got hit and now I'm slacking off. They don't understand that earlier size of the updates were smaller, system wasn't evolved much. There weren't that many characters to manage. Plot was easily progressing. I wasn't used to edit system's full status pictures then.

commitment नहीं होता तो story itni दूर नहीं आती!

आप भी story से committed हो तो ऐसी बकचोदी ना करके in-depth reviews से writer का मनोबल बढ़ाओ!!!

Writer’s time is his own, kindly respect this small concept.

He is in no way liable to inform about his schedule...

All updates regarding schedule to posting are suggestive timings and not promises so plz keep this in mind..

Don’t stalk the writers plz

Thanks a lot man for understanding!
Sometimes it doesn't goes the way we plan. So it takes time. It takes hardly 10-15 minutes to read an update. But to write that it takes a lot of time. Kabhi aisa hota hai ki mood nahi banta type karne ka. Ya Jo requirement rehti hai update ki wesa hamaara mood nahi rehta. Aur fir woh writing me antar aata hai. Agar update sad hai aur aap khush ho haal hi me. Toh sad update likhne me dikkatein aaengi. But anyways, Thanks for supporting and understanding the troubles.
Aise hi Bane rehna man!

 

[Werewolf]

Nice update Werewolf bhai.
Suhana ko hospital le jake uski dekhbhal karke jese hi veer ko pata chala ki wo safe he wo nikal pada. Aur tab tak to message bhi aa chuka tha uss dusre system user ka. Ab aur kisi ko wo khatre me nahi daal sakta. To achha yahi he ki abhi ghar jaye.

Yup! Usne wahi Kiya bhi hai. Usne department me se black sheep dhundh ke Divya ke hawaale kar dii. Aur Suhana ke sabhi family ko bula ke uski security badhwa ke woh waha se nikal gaya.

Pari par bhi gussa aaya usko jo uss circumstances me thik bhi tha. Ese achanak koi esi baat keh de to jhatka to lagna hi tha.
Par ye alpha sigma ka mel jhol bana ke rakhna padega usko. Aur iss baar bhumika ne bhi dekh liya uska alpha mood. Bhumika ko kuch aur nahi kaha veer ne balki sachai hi kahi he mooh pe. Usne khud inkaar kar hi diya tha veer ko pehchaan ne se to ab kya expect karti he wo ki veer sab bhula ke baate karni shuru karde ?? Shweta bhumika ko to bahut kuch Karna hoga ab Veer ke mann me apni jagah banane ke liye.

Jii Jaan lagani hogi tab jaake kuch hoga. Warna...

Wahi pari ne bhi sujhav diya he. Par Veer ke mann me ye baat khud aani chahiye. 120 ka intelligence kis kaam ka fir.

Arre Bhai intelligence abhi badha hi kitna hai. Kabhi Kaera ka dekhna!

Rajat jarur kuch kar raha he par ab inn sab me Veer ko pareshani nahi aani chahiye. Pranjal ko bhi thikane lagana he. Par mujhe lagta he pranjal aakhir tak rahega aur wo veer ke har dushman ka sath dega.

Maybe! Or maybe not?

Sonali ke liye bhi ab wo soch raha he. Jarur admission ke bare me hi baat hogi. Par sonali ko lag raha he jese ek aur food truck, aur jyada kaam , suman thik se samjhati he usko. Sonali ko bhi pata he veer aur uski maa ke bare me. Apne Malik ka pura khayal rakhti he wo. Wahi ragini ne bhi apni ek date pakki kar li he veer se. Ab ragini bhi samay maang rahi he aur aage chalke haq bhi jatayegi. Wahi shweta ne ek naya hi rashta liya he veer se kareeb rehne ka. Wo veer ko wahi degi jo uske hisab se veer ko nahi mila. Doodh to abhi usko bhi nahi aayega par wo scene majhedaar hoga jab bhavna aur shweta samne hogi. Purvi bhi kyuki doodh pilaya he usne apna veer ko

Purvi ne bhi pilaaya hai, Sumitra ne bhi. Shweta pila hi Rahi hai. Na jaane kitno ka Piya hai Veer ne. Aur mazedaar baat ye hai ki bechari Shweta ko nahi pata ki Veer ne kitno ka Piya hai. Woh samajhti hai ki Veer ko bachpan me Kami hui thi doodh ki. Kya hoga jab usse ye pata chalega ki Veer toh aneko thano se dugdhpaan kar chuka hai.

Wahi agli mulakaat bhi badi rochak rahi veer ki balhaar ke sath. Balhaar ne kuch baate jarur batayi he jesa veer ne kaha tha. Par mann me wo lalach ka bhaav aahi gaya usme. Sare samikaran bhi laga diye balhaar ne par Veer ki agli baato se hi uski hawa tight ho gayi. Ab aage wo mann me ye vichar lane se pehle bhi darega.

Wahi purvi ke ghar me behas ho rahi he. Tej roj dhakke kha rahi he Veer ke liye wahi bhavna uska phone number dabaye bethi rahi. Ab gussa to aana hi tha Tej ko. Aur ab samne hi veer ko phone laga diya he. Baat bhi kese karti bhavna jab shabd hi na nikal rahe. Purvi ne hi baat sambhal li he. Aur ab veer se milne ka bhi pakka ho chuka he. Kuch baate jarur prashn utha rahi he jese bhavna ka satta, shashan jese. Jarur Raj pariwar se hogi bhavna. Tej bhi khush nahi he apni maa mausi se par wo unke bataye chup bhi nahi rehne wali. Veer ka naam jaan ke hi usne apne tarike se jaanch kar di. Aur ab lag bhi raha he ki inn teen mese Tej hi usko pehle milne wali he. Aur college me milegi to majha aayega. Aur aarohi, kavya ke samne mile to mooh dekhne layak hoga unka.
Baki to ab Nidhi, juhi, shreya, aarohi, kavya hi baki he veer se milne ko.
Waiting for next update.

Tej is ahead. Woh zyada efficiently work kar rahi hai. Aur sahi disha me jaa rahi hai. Bas koi anhoni na hoye.
Thanks a lot bro for a lovely review.
Bas yu hi saath Bane rehne. Ye arc ju ko kaafi hadd tak mazze bhi dega aur santusht bhi kar dega.

 

[HPR 2020]

Awesome update

 

[Werewolf]

Kafi acha update tha Werewolf bhai. Matlb abhi tak is story me veer ka sbse milna chal hi rahe hai. Aur sayad se aage ke kuch Updates me aur bhi ye chalta rahe.

No! Ho gaya ab. Bas Nidhi se milna baaki hai but woh aage ho jayega. Agle update se romaanch shuru hai.

H lakin ye bhi hai ki sbse milne ke sath sath yaha story bhi apne pace se aage badhati kar rahi hai. Jaise pari kaRajeev ko choose karna aur sath me uska valid reason bhi dena.

Rajeev? You mean Rajat?

Fir veer ka kavya aur arohi se milna. Uske baad veer aur Ragini ka encounter batao baat sari ko uthane tak pahuch cuki hai. Aur ending to kamak ki hi thi aakhirkar update me sbko jisbaat ka intejar tha wo last line me aapne dikha hi diya.

Veer ka apne business keliye future planbhi aapne dikha diya. Sath me sonali ke liye veer ka sochna bhi aapne sahi dikhaya.
Ye baat bhi confirm hai agar veer hotal chain open krega to sweta aur bhumika hi use sambhalengi. Sath me sayad sonali ko bhi study puri hone ke baad kisi chij me laga skta hai veer.

Yes! They are the most experienced ones after all.

Dekhte hai aakhir veer ke baree me tej kya kya pata kar pati hai. Aur nidhi ko bhi kya kuch pata chlta hai.

Dhanyawad Bhai!
Agla update Aaj hi aa jaega. Saath Bane rahiyega!

 

[Werewolf]

Bahot behtareen shaandaar update bhai
Yeh achcha kia aapne jo sara status ko fir se edit kia
Ragini k saath beach per masti kerne wale h dekhte h beach or kitni garam hoti h dono k jaane se
Balhaar k paas kia jaankari thi jise sunker mathe per bal pad gaye
Balhaar n socha yeh bachxha h ise maar ker khud boss ban jaye lekin ab dubara uske dilo dimag m kabhi nahi aayega yeh thought jis tarah veer n uske kaam m kahi
Tejas bechari apne bhai ko dhoondhne k liye dar dar bhatak rahi or yaha maa ji namber rehte huwe bhi call nahi ker rahi Purvi k samjhane per call kia bhi tow baat nahi ki purvi n sambhal lia baherhal dekhte h ab Pirvi ki mulaqat jab hogi tab kia baat hogi or Tejas n kia plan banaya lia apne laptop se jaankari naikal k Veer ki
Dekhte h kia hota h
Bahot khoob shaandaar
Lajawab update bhai

Dhanyawad Naik Bhai!
Tejal pohuch gayi hai Nidhi ke ghar. Aaj dekhne milega Hume ki kya hua uske aur Nidhi ke beech. Saath Bane rahiyega!

Waahhh..kahani ab aage badh rahi hai badhiya tarike se..karan kritika ka v scene badhiya hai.. Ragini ke sath khul ke baat aage badhaya Jaye .. veer aur tejal ka interaction ka intezar hai...

Thanks bro! Keep supporting!

Uttam Lekhni ka Prayog Werewolf bhai...Waiting for Next Update Eagerly...

Thanks bro.

Update waqi acha ta sir ye bat i don't know in logu ko samjh kyu nahi aa rhi jaisa k apne bola k basic updates te next arc se pehle to jahan tak meri samjh me ye bat ai hai us hisab se ap sahi ja rhe ho i know k as a writer bohat hi ziada tuf job hai ab her bar thori na goli ki tarah bhage ja sakte writer b insan hai usey b zarorat hoti relax ki mentally ab her waqt suspense or thrill to nahi continue rakh sakte

Sabhi ki apni apni pasand hoti hai bhaaya!

Thanks for update bade bhai
It was a beautiful update

Dhanyawad!