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Nahi!! Ju ne koi update nahi miss Kiya hai. Suman ne baat chhipaayi thi jiske chalte uski thukaayi Hui hai. Aur ye baat Veer ko kese pata chali? Ju Jaan hi gaye hoge. Balhaar!! Usne yahi baat batayi thi Veer ko ki Suman ke samiti ke saamne virodh pradarshan Kiya gaya hai. Jiske chalte Veer tensed tha.Chlo acha hai kuch pyar kii boond Raghini ko mil gya aakhirkar kb se to trapa rha tha Werewolf usko to
Karan or Kritika ka nain mattaka bi masti me hai
Kavya Arohi ka jaisa chl rha tha waise he line pe hai abi bi
Social network ke jreyee Tejal ne PTA lga lia apne bhai Veer ki class teacher ka Nidhi madam ka
Or
Pari ki smjdari me kuch jada he improvement bi hogya Kamal hai
Or 1 baat Werewolf ye Veer ne Suman ko punishment Dene wali bat boli iska ky mtlb hua yr
Ky mai kisi update ko dhyan se ni read krpaya to btao plz yr
Thanks!A very big salute to you from my heart
Dheere dheere limelight me aati Jaa Rahi hai woh. Kyuki achanak se nahi aa sakti. Veer ne apna jawaab nahi diya hai abhi.Thank you so much for Ragini episode
At the same time sad because just at the start of the action scene update finished
Very well written
Keep it up
Again thanks a lot for Ragini
Yes . Story is getting complex day by day .
So take your time
Do your best .
Sanju bhaaya ab sanvaad zyaada dikhayi denge. Kyuki ye arc hi conversation based hai. Dherro batein ujaagar hoengi. Aur kayi saare pyaare pyaare scenes banenge.That is it...outstanding update.
संवाद द्वारा एक परिवेश का निर्माण किया आपने इस अपडेट मे जिसमे मस्ती भी थी थोड़ा सिडक्सन भी था और थोड़ी कामुकता भी।
Sonali ka muhfat andaaz lagta hai sabhi ko pasand aa raha hai.सोनाली और वीर का चैप्टर जहां वात्सल्य और हास्य रस का पुट लिए हुए था वहीं काव्या और वीर के चैप्टर मे वात्सल्य और सिडक्सन दृष्टिगोचर हो रहा था।
Dhanyawad bhaaya!कामुकता की बात करें तो निस्संदेह रागिनी और वीर वाला प्रसंग था जब दोनो प्रेमी एकांत पाकर कुछ ज्यादा ही इन्टिमेट हो गए ।
इन तीन तरह की खुमारी से अभी हम उबरे ही नही थे कि अंतिम पैराग्राफ मे कहानी अचानक से सस्पेंस मोड़ पर ला अपडेट का द एंड कर दिया। गुड वर्क तेजल ! वेल डन !
बहुत बेहतरीन अपडेट वेयरवोल्फ भाई।
Outstanding & Amazing & brilliant.
Awesome fantasticUpdate - 113 ~ Blunder (1)Ab tak...
Nidhi iss ladki se vaakif nahi thi. Usne sawaaliya nazro se dekha toh uss ladki ne sawaal kiya,
"Miss Nidhi!?"
Nidhi : H-Haan! Nidhi mein hi hu. Kahiye!
Toh saamne maujood ladki ne ek hi vaakya kaha,
"Tejal here! Kya mein andar aa sakti hu?"
Nidhi : Huh!!?
Ab aage...
Khamoshi!
Jo kamre me chhayi hui thi. Aur iss kamre ki chaar diwaaro me agar koi shor tha, toh woh tha upar lage pankhe ka. Jo maddham maddham ghoom ke halki karkash awaaz ko anjaam de raha tha.
"Kya mene jo kuch bhi abhi abhi suna, woh sach tha?" Dheemi aur thodi ladkhadati hui ek ladki ki komal awaaz aayi.
Awaaz thi Tejal ki. Single seat sofe par woh virajman saamne divaan par baithi Nidhi ki orr dekh rahi thi. Aankhein poori naam! Jo kuch bhi abhi abhi suna, usse pacha paana mushqil maalum ho raha tha.
Nidhi ke chehre par bhi mayusi thi. Usne dheere se sarr haan me hilaaya aur nazre jhuka lii.
Tejal : Ye aapki beti hai?
Usne kamre ke parde ki orr ishara karte hue pucha, jaha Juhi uss parde ke peeche chhip ke khadi hui thi. Apna thoda sa mukh bas dikhaaye woh jhaak rahi thi. Anjaan logo ke saamne woh aksar aisa kiya karti thi.
Nidhi ne fir haami bhari aur Juhi ko ishaare se apne paas bulaaya. Bechari Juhi apne nanhe kadam lete hue sehme sehme divaan se chipak chipak ke Nidhi ke paas aayi.
Nidhi ne uski peeth par haath rakh Tejal ki taraf aage kiya toh Tejal ne Juhi ke dono haath thaam liye.
Tejal : Kya naam hai aapka?
"Juhi!!!" Woh dheeme se boli!
Tejal (smiles) : Juhi! Boht pyaara naam hai. Aap mujhse friendship karogi?
Juhi bina kuch kahe ahista se sarr hilaayi toh Tej punah muskuraayi.
Tejal : Boht cute hai aapki beti! Toh kya aap apni beti ki kasam khaa ke keh sakti hai ki aapne jo kuch abhi abhi kaha woh sab... Ek ek baat sach thi.
Tejal ki baat par Nidhi hakki bakki sii reh gayi.
Nidhi : Huh!!?
Tejal : Meri baat ka bura laga ho toh mujhe maaf karna. Par mujhe ye jaan'na boht zaroori hai. Please! If you can! Agar aapko dikkat hai toh mein abhi issi waqt yaha se chali jaungi.
Nidhi kuch derr shaant rahi, fir gehri saans lete hue boli,
Nidhi : Agar koi aur hota, toh mene usse ghar se nikal diya hota. Par aapne bataya ki aap Veer ki sagi behan hai. Aur iss baat ki bhi pushti nahi hui hai abhi bhi. Sirf aapke photo dikhaane se ye saabit nahi hua hai. Mujhe abhi bhi sanshay hai. Toh pehle aap-
Iss se pehle ki Nidhi aage keh paati Tejal ne usse wahi tok diya,
Tejal : Ye rahi meri Maa ki ekmaatr dii hui sone ki chain.
Usne apne gale se ek khubsoorat sii chain utaarte hue Nidhi ke haatho me thama dii.
Tejal : Mere paas abhi aur kuch nahi hai apni baat prove karne ke liye. Jab tak mein apne bhai se mil na lu aur ye baat sach na saabit ho jaaye ki woh mera bhai hai. Ye chain aapke paas rahegi.
Nidhi : N-Nahi!! Nahi nahi! Isse aap apne paas hi rakhiye!
Nidhi darr ke maare chain waapas karne lagi. Dherro frauds aise hote hai jidhar insaan apni marzi se aapko apni keemti cheez deke jaata hai aur baad me police complaint kar aapko andar karwa deta hai. Kahi ye ladki bhi unme se ek toh nahi thi!? Nidhi thoda ghabra gayi.
Tejal : Please!! Meri baat ka vishvaas kijiye! Mein aapki baat abhi apni Mom se nahi kara sakti. Please! Trust me! Trust me ma'am! I beg you! Ye mere liye boht important hai.
Woh ghutno pe baith Nidhi ko pakadte hue boli,
Nidhi : M-Mein aise kese...!?
Tejal : P-Please!!!
Uske chehre ke haav bhaav dekh pata nahi kyu, Nidhi ka mann andar se kehne laga. Ki ye ladki shayad jhooth nahi bol rahi thi.
Jo desperation tha iss ladki me. Uss desperation ne Nidhi ko sochne par majboor kar diya.
Nidhi : Th-Theek hai!
Aur woh maan gayi!
Tejal (beams in joy) : Thank you so much!
Nidhi : Par aapko ye chain dene ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Mujhe yakeen hai!
Tejal : Huh!? Par!?
Nidhi : It's fine!
Tejal : O-Okay! Now please~ Mujhe aapse ek favour aur chahiye!
Nidhi : Kesa favour?
Tejal : Mere bhai ka address kya yahi hai jo mentioned hai idhar!
Usne apna phone dikhaate hue pucha. Phone me Veer ki social media profile thi. Aur uss me kuch details padi hui thi. Address unme se ek tha.
Nidhi (nods) : Ye uske puraane ghar ka address hai. Woh ab waha nahi rehta hai. Jesa ki mene bataya woh ab apni bhabhi ke saath dusre address par-
Tejal (smiles) : No! Thank you ma'am! Mujhe yahi jaan'na tha. Aur yahi chaahiye mujhe! Thank you so much once again and please ek last promise aur~
Nidhi : !??
Tejal (smiles) : Aap ye baat usse... I mean mere bhai Veer ko nahi bataengi!
Nidhi : Lekin kyu? Agar aap uski behan ho toh fir intezaar kesa? Woh toh jaan ke behad khush-
Tejal (smiles) : Kuch cheezein surprise rehne dijiye! I hope aap apna vaada rakhengi! I'm leaving now! Take care!
Woh palti aur jaate jaate Juhi ke sarr par pyaar se haath ferr waha se baahar ho gayi.
Nidhi daud ke darwaaze par aayi, lekin tab tak Tej apni tezzi me pehle hi lift se neeche jaa chuki thi.
'Mene sahi toh kiya na? Veer ki sagi behan...! Iska matlab uski maa bhi yahi aas paas...! Kya mene sab kuch bata ke sahi kiya? Kahi koi musibat na khadi ho jaaye! Veer...!'
Woh mann me soch wahi bas dekhti reh gayi! Na jaane kya hone waala tha.
Baahar nikalte hi Tej ne cab book kari aur waapas Purvi ke ghar ki orr nikal padi. Gaadi toh chalti jaa rahi thi. Aur manzil par pohuch kar ruk bhi jaegi. Par inn aasuo ka kya? Jo uski aankho se nirantar behte jaa rahe the?
Inhe kese roke woh?
Woh jitni baar aasu pochti, utni hi baar woh chhalak uthate.
Nidhi ke ghar me woh khud ko kese control kii hui thi ye wahi jaanti thi. Accha hua jo woh aaj Nidhi se milne aa gayi. Aur usse itni saari baatein pata chal gayi. Warna na jaane aur kitne samay tak woh andhere me rehti.
Kuch derr pehle...
"College toh yahi dikha raha hai profile me!"
Cab se utarte hue Tejal andar college me gayi. Campus me usse dherro ladke ladkiya nazar aaye. Kuch canteen me baithe the toh kuch playground me the. Kuch aa rahe the toh kuch jaa rahe the. Ek chahal pahal waala ilaaka.
Bina derri kiye woh seedha andar main building me ghusi.
Aur saamne hi usse fee counter dikh gaya.
Tejal : Excuse me!? Mujhe jaan'na tha ki ye person issi college me hai na?
Person : Andar Sir se miliye!
Tejal andar gayi toh usse ek peon nazar aaya,
Tejal : Suniye! Mujhe pata karna hai ki ye student issi college se hai ya nahi?
Peon : Madam ye toh aapko Sir log hi bata payenge. Ya bacche log. Kis department me hai?
Tejal : Sorry! Yaha ye toh mention nahi hai.
Peon : Aapko yahi nahi pata!?
'Pata hota toh mein tum se kyu puchti bewakoof?' woh mann me hi khud se boli aur usse ek look dete hue nikal gayi.
'Aise nahi hoga kuch! Mujhe khud se hi confront karna hoga...!'
Aur woh department to department jaane lagi. Woh harr department ki classes me se kisi na kisi student se puchti aur harr koi usse naa me hi uttar deta.
Umeed ghatati jaa rahi thi.
Par tabhi,
Jab usne ek random ladki ko pakadte hue photo dikhaate hue pucha toh woh ek baar me Veer ko pehchaan gayi,
Ladki : Ye toh veer hai! Hamari class me hi hai. Par regular nahi aata. Kuch kaam tha kya?
Tejal : Dhyaan se dekho! Kya sach me yahi hai?
Ladki : Arre haan na baba! Hehe~ Mein follow karti hu usko. Toh mujhe pata hoga na!
Tejal : Okay thank you! Kya koi teacher nahi hai? Veer ka koi friend hai? Ya teacher jis se uski pehchaan ho?
Ladki : Veer ka friend? Tch!! Uska koi friend nahi hai. Mene try kiya par ab woh kisi se baat hi nahi karta hai. Haan! Mene usse Nidhi ma'am ke saath aate hue zaroor dekha hai. Hehehe~ Kitni afwaahe udii thi tab toh! Pata hai kya hua tha?
Tejal : Nidhi ma'am!? Inke saath uski pehchaan hai?
Ladki : Arre haan! Arre mene toh ye bhi suna hai ki dono saath me rehte the. Ek hi ghar me. Aur upar se aapko pata hai? Nidhi ma'am ka divorce hone waala tha tab. Hehe! Ek teacher aur student ki-
Tejal : Kaha milengi ye Nidhi ma'am?
Ladki : Sorry! Par woh toh ab nikal gayi. Too bad! Aaj unhone early leave liya tha.
Tejal : T-Toh ab?
Ladki : Ab kuch nahi ho sakta. Kal aaiyega! Simple!
Kehte hue woh palti,
Ladki : Unless you know her address! *Yawns*
Aur yu hi carefree andaaz me woh nikal gayi. Par uske muh se nikli ye akhiri baat Tejal ke kaano me ghanti zaroor baja gayi.
"Her address huh!?
Par saath hi ek dwesh ki bhaavna bhi jaag gayi.
'Top notch colleges me se ek hai ye city ke according to the Google. Hmm! Itna paisa! Upar se regular nahi aata... Ma'am ke saath rehne ke charche...! Agar mujhe itni facilities mili hoti toh...! No! I can not...! Tejal! Ateet ki baat ateet me. Let's move forward!' usne ek gehri saans lii.
Fir shuru hua jhooth ka silsila.
"Sir! Mein Veer ki sister hu. College me studies se related Nidhi ma'am se aaj baat honi thi. Par woh aaj chali gayi hai. Shayad bhul gayi."
"Meri flight hai aaj! Jaane se pehle unse milna tha."
"Agar aap mujhe unka address dede toh ghar jaake abhi mein unse mil lungi!"
"Nahi nahi! Mein samajhti hu aap aise hi kisi teacher ki details nahi dete haha ~ Par ab situation hi aisi bann gayi hai Sir!"
"Unhone tab apne cabin ke phone se shayad mujhe contact kiya tha, apne number se nahi! Isliye ye problem arise ho gayi. Jii! Toh aap thoda agar~"
"Thank you so much sir!! Ab mein unse time se mil sakti hu. Thank you!"
Bas!
Kuch jhooth ki baatein, aur uska kaam nikal chuka tha.
Address milte hi Tejal Nidhi ke bataaye address par pohuchi. Raat ke 8 baj chuke the.
Aur Nidhi ko saari baatein bataane ke baad jese tese usne usse convince kiya. Nidhi bhi bechaari akhir kaar sach bataane par majboor ho gayi.
Jo jo usse pata tha Veer ko leke, woh poora chittha khol ke rakh diya usne.
Nidhi ke bol ab bhi Tejal ke mann me goonj rahe the.
"Mene dekha hai usse. Tootate, haarte, rote, ghaayal hote!!! Veer...! Sach me Veer hai!! Uske jaisa mene aaj tak apni poori zindagi me aisa ladka nahi dekha...!"
"Paapi hai woh log! Uske pita...! Sharm aati hai mujhe uske pita ke baare me sochte hue bhi. Chhiii!! Thuu hai aise pita par!! Woh ladka... ICU ke ward me kese tadap raha tha mene dekha hai apni nazro se... *sniff* Pucho mat!"
"Koi bhi usse dekhne tak na aaya! Koi bhi nahi! Na uske pita, na sauteli Maa, na behne, na bhai, na uske Dada jii! Koi bhi nahi! Kya fayda aise parivaar ka jidhar... *sniff* Jidhar apne hi na ho? Dhitkaar hai aise logo pe!"
"Mene usse apne saath rakha tha. Poore 1 mahine 13 din raha hai woh idhar. Uske baad woh apni Bhabhi ke ghar shift hua. Nadaan hai na. Samajh raha tha ki uske rehne se mujhe aarthik roop se dikkatein aa rahi hai. *sniff* Paagal kahi ka...! Ab bhi usse t-toh ek lappad maarne ka-"
Aur woh ro padi.
Bilakh bilakh ke royi!!! Hatheli se aasu poch usne aage kehna jaari rakha,
"Koi kese... K-Koi kese itna nirdayi ho sakta hai? *sniff* Na koi dost, na koi apna, na parivaar. Arre bolne batane wala koi bhi nahi tha uske paas. Fir bhi uske chehre par hamesha muskaan rehti thi. *sniff* Yaha jab tak woh raha... Mujhe kabhi bhi woh bojh ki tarah nahi laga. Hamesha hi *sniff* mene usse apna hi maana hai. Iss ghar ka sadasya!! Aaj woh qaabil hai. Kama raha hai. Khud ka business bhi shuru kiya hai. Toh dekh ke... *sniff* Dekh ke accha lagta hai. Dil ko sukoon milta hai. Khushi hoti hai."
Woh rote hue muskuraayi,
"Aur ye sab jo mein bata rahi hu ye sab toh sirf baahar ki baatein hai. Na jaane andhruni baato me kya kya jaan'ne ko milega. *sniff* Bechaare ne kitna kuch saha hoga ateet me. Ye koi nahi jaanta. Mujhe bhi nahi bataya hai usne. Aur uska parivaar...!"
"Thuu hai aise parivaar par!! Khaas kar woh Pranjal! Kalank hai woh kalank! Veer ne mujhe sachet kiya hai...! Ye ladka... Uska bhai nahi aasteen ka saanp hai. Kya aap yakeen kar sakti ho? Ki ek ladke ne apne hi Dada jii ka haadsa karvaya taaki woh apne bhai ko jaydaad se baahar kar sake. Soch sakti ho?"
"Iske kaale karnaame mujhe pata hai. Accha hua ki Veer ne iss ghatiya insaan ki pol khol ke rakh dii. Lekin abhi bhi... *sniff* abhi bhi mujhe uska parivaar kuch khaas pasand nahi hai."
"Hmm! Uski bhabhi pehle se kaafi sudhar chuki hai. Woh ab acchi hai. Samay rehte jaag gayi. Yaha tak ki... Uski do behne Kavya aur Arohi! Ye dono bhi behad acchi hai. Meri mulaqaat hui hai kayi baar. Same college me hai. Lekin baaki? Unke baare me mein kuch nahi keh sakti...!"
Aur fir...!
Khamoshi!
Jo kamre me chhayi hui thi. Aur iss kamre ki chaar diwaaro me agar koi shor tha, toh woh tha upar lage pankhe ka.
*Honk* *Honk*
Yaaddaasht dhundhli hui, aur waapas se Tejal ko saamne ka nazaara dikhaayi diya. Purvi ka ghar aa chuka tha.
Apne aasu poch woh utri aur cab wale ko pay kar ke woh andar society me jaane ke liye hui.
Chalte chalte, uske haatho me phone ki screen par wahi Veer ki tasveer thi jo usne chupke se Egypt me kheechi thi.
'Aur mujhe laga tha... Ki meri zindagi hi battar guzri hai. Now that I compare my life with yours. It's laughable!'
'The pain you've endured...! Tumhe dhundne ki talaash toh ussi din se thi jis din tumhare baare me pata chala tha. Bachpan me mene kya kuch nahi jhela. Mom ka akelapann, mera family ka na hona, aur roz roz taane sunn'na. Financial conditions, and what not. Aur sochti thi... Ki mere paas jab bhai hai toh uski zindagi kesi guzar rahi hogi? Milna chaahti thi tum se.'
'Par yaha aake Purvi Maasi se pata laga ki tumhari family hai. Ek joint family. Aur mein akeli... Bas maa ke saath... Tum hassoge agar mene ye baat tumhare saamne kahi toh. Mujh me jalan jaag gayi thi. Haan! Tumse jalan! Aur thodi nafrat bhi...!'
'Mein yaha akeli aur tumhe itne bade parivaar ke saath rehne ko mila? Itna paisa? Itna accha college? Itna pyaar!? Par ab...!'
'Ab jab jaani hu... Toh khud par hassi aa rahi hai. The pain I've suffered is nothing compared to yours... How many wounds are you still hiding? Veer!?'
Sochte sochte woh gate par pohuxh doorbell bajaayi toh Purvi ne gate khola. Aur usse dekh khush ho gayi.
Purvi (smiles) : Aao! Tumhe hi yaad kar rahe the.
Kehte hue woh palat ke andar chali gayi. Parantu, Tejal wahi khadi rahi. Apni maasi ko jaate hue dekhti rahi,
'Maasi! Aap lucky ho! Filhaal kal ke liye... Mein apne plan ko anjaam nahi dungi. But after that...! I will do it!'
*Click*
Aur usne andar aake darwaaza band kar diya.
***
Next day...
Afternoon - 12:36 PM
Mahila mandal samiti...
"Aaj fir wahi hua hai. Humne toh waha poora support dikhaya tha na? Fir waha ke log hamare khilaaf aisa kese ~!?"
Kareeb ek 34-35 saal ki aurat kheejte hue boli. Dikhne me theek thaak thi. Par mahila mandal me aurto me uski bhumika bhi aham thi.
"Baat kuch aur bhi hai Sarika!"
Ek vinamrta bhari awaaz uske bagal se aayi.
Sarika : Aur kya baat ho sakti hai Suman jii?
Suman muskuraayi!
Suman : Agar humne uss shetr me apna poora yogdaan diya hai logo ko. Toh woh kabhi hamaare khilaaf morcha nahi nikaalenge. Aise awaaz nahi uthaenge. Par aaj ye do baar ho gaya hai. Kuch din pehle bhi hua tha. Tum khud socho!? Ki woh aisa kyu kar rahe hai? Zaahir hai ki unhe bhadkaaya gaya hai.
Suman ki baat sunn, Sarika ke maathe par lakeere chhaa gayi.
*Click*
Tabhi, kamre ka darwaaza khula aur ek khubsoorat sii saree me ek khubsoorti ki bala pravesh kii. Uske jism me maans harr uss jagah me sahi se bhara hua tha jaha ek mard ko chaahiye hota tha.
Chuttad, than, unn dono jagaho me maans ki koi kami nahi thi. Shayad isliye Veer ko iss aurat ke jism ko chakhne me itna maza aata tha.
Niharika roz ki tarah apni bhaari gaand matkaate hue andar aayi aur uski nazre sabse pehle Suman par padi,
Niharika : Suman ka kehna sahi hai. Mujhe ek ghinone shadiyantra ki buu aa rahi hai.
Sarika : Par didi! Humne kabhi kisi ka bura jab kiya hi nahi toh-
Niharika : Humne nahi kiya. Par hamare kaaran kuch logo ko mirchi zaroor lagti hai. Khaas kar raaes-zaado ko. Koi wajah hogi jiske chalte hum aade aa rahe honge. Bas! Hume hataane ka bahaana hai ye.
Sarika : Par kaun ho sakta hai akhir!?
Niharika : Yahi hume pata lagana hai!
Woh kuch raay rakhti ki ek baar fir darwaza khula par iss baar koi mahila nahi thi.
"Jii Suman jii se kaam tha. Unse milna tha thoda. Kya mein mil sakta hu?"
Kisi ko jhatka lage ya na lage par Niharika ko ye awaaz sunn ke zaroor jhatka lag chuka tha.
Woh bhi high voltage wala.
Uski sitti pitti gum ho chuki thi. Kyuki awaaz kisi aur ki nahi balki, Veer ki hi thi.
Bechari Niharika ka garam badan poora ekbaar me thanda pad gaya. Woh jaanti thi Veer ke saath akhiri baat kya hui thi uski. Usne Veer ka phone hack karna chaaha tha. Par woh nakaam thi. Veer ne kaha tha ki woh aake waha uski khabar lega. Aur ab uski rooh kaanp rahi thi.
Sarika : Suman jii? Ohh! Suman jii ke ghar se ho na?
Veer : Jii!
Sarika : Haan yahi hai Suman jii! Baat karlo!
Veer : Woh zara akele me baat karna thi.
Suman bhi khud hairat me apne maalik ko dekh rahi thi.
'Maalik yaha? Bhala kya kaam hoga?'
Uske dimaag me abhi ye nahi aaya tha ki Veer ne uski chori pehle hi pakad chuki hai.
Sarika : Akele me? Accha theek hai. Par zara jaldi!
Niharika : Sarika! Aur baaki sabhi, chalo baahar chalo. Jaldi!
Kehte hue woh sarr jhukaaye palti aur tezz kadmo ke saath bhaagne lagi. Uski nazre milaane tak ki himmat nahi ho rahi thi.
Veer (smiles) : Mujhe aap se bhi kaam hai Niharika jii!
Aur bas, ye sunte hi Niharika ke kadam wahi theher gaye. Darr ke maare!
Sarika aur baaki sabhi baahar jese hi nikli.
*Click*
Veer ne darwaza andar se band kar liya.
Aur ye dekhte hi Niharika ka badan kaanp utha.
Veer (smiles) : Suman! Meri pyaari Suman!
Suman (smiles) : Maalik~
Woh bina kuch jaane khush hote hue daud ke Veer ke nazdeek aayi par iske pehle ki woh khud ko uski baaho me saup paati, Veer ne uss thaama aur usse palat ke deewaar se sata diya.
Suman : Maalik!!??
Veer uske kaano ki orr jhuka,
Veer : Itni badi baat ho gayi aur tumhare muh se kuch nikla tak nahi? Hmm? Apni safaayi me kuch kehna chaahogi?
Suman : Ahhh!
Ab pata chalte hi Suman ki khud ki haakat patli ho gayi. Usse samajh aa gaya tha ki kyu Maalik naraaz the. Jhooth bolegi toh saza toh milni hi thi.
Jab Veer ne Suman se pucha tha ki sab kuch kesa chal raha hai? Toh Suman ne Veer ko koi taqleef nahi bataayi thi.
Jabki...
Musibatein toh thi!
Kisi basti ke log kuch hafte pehle ek din aake naari shakti ke khilaaf haaye haaye ke naare laga ke gaye the.
Sab kuch ast vyast kar diya tha. Log zyada bhi the toh mahila mandal kuch kar na saki. Bas tamasha dekhti rahi.
Jaha unki image ki dhajjiya udti rahi. Uss se badi baat ye thi ki ye wahi shetr ke log the jaha mahila mandal ne pehle avedh roop se paani chori hone ke liye awaaz uthaayi thi.
Kisi mahila ke ghar paani nahi aa raha tha aur usne mahila mandal se madad maangi thi. Mahila mandal ne poori madad kar, awaaz utha ke ye maamla sambhaala tha aur waha pani ki sahi tareeqe se supply chalu karwayi thi.
Par dekho. Jis thaali me khaaya, ussi me chhed kar diya.
Wahi basti ke log aaj poore mahila mandal ko gaali de rahe the.
Khaas kar Suman ko. Kyuki wahi thi jo aage thi uss waqt. Tab Suman nayi nayi thi. Aur usse kaam sambhaalna sikhaaya jaaye iske chakte usse ye zimmedari saupi gayi thi.
Aur ab nateeja? Usse gaaliya khaani pad rahi thi.
Apne maalik ko chinta me na daala jaaye, isliye Suman ne apne maalik se ye baat chhipa lii. Par Veer ko ye bilkul bhi pasand na aaya.
Aur kese aata? Suman uska parivaar thi. Sirf ek slave nahi! Koi maans ka tukda nahi thi woh jisse bas istemaal karne ke liye rakha jaaye.
Veer ne Suman ki saree uthaayi aur agle hi pal uske aur Niharika ke saamne uske nange nitambh ucchal ke ujaagar ho gaye.
Niharika hakki bakki sii sab dekh rahi thi.
Niharika : Y-Ye!!? Ye!? Panty k-kaha hai iski...!?
Veer (smiles) : Tumne aaj bhi panty nahi pehni hai? Na hi petticoat? Boht daring ho rahi ho aajkal! But it's good for me!
Niharika : wh-what!!?
Niharika ko ignore kar, Veer ne apne jeb se ek chota whip nikaala.
Aur fir,
*Chataaaaaakkkkkk*
"Aaahhhnnnnmmmmm~"
Ek zordaar cheenkh goonjti. Agar Veer uska muh band na karta toh. Usne zorr se whip ghumaate hue Suman ke nange chuttado par ek ke baad ek vaar kiye. Aur harr baar, Suman bechari ka shareer hil ke reh jaati.
Bas kuch hi maar me, uski cheekhein uttejna se bhari kaamuk siskiyo me badal gayi.
*Chataaaaaakkkkkk*
*Chataaaaaakkkkkk*
Uske kulhe laal pad gaye. Veer ne apne haatho se unn pato ko alag kiya toh usse manmohak drishya nazar aaya.
Do lazeez-daar chhed!!
Usne Suman ki gadaayi chamdi ko fela fela ke darshan liye. Uski choot geeli hui padi thi.
Mauka dekh Veer ne apna hathiyaar nikaala aur seedha Suman ki choot me pel diya.
"Nnnnnggghhhhhh~"
Darwaaze ke peeche khade hoke woh dono tabadtod chudaayi me lag gaye. Aur idhar bechaari Niharika ka sirr phata jaa raha tha. Woh stabdh hoye? Ya darre? Ya fir uttejit hoye? Uski samajh me kuch nahi aa raha tha.
*Phattttt* *phattttt* ki awaazein udhar aa rahi thi. Veer ka lund zorr zorr se dono chhedo ko bhogne me laga hua tha.
Veer : Ye hai tumhari saza!!
Suman : M-Maalik!! Ye saza nahi hai... *huff* *huff* Ye toh inaam hai!!
Veer (smiles) : Inaam hi sahi! Inaam se yaad aaya. Nayi slave ko bhi toh inaam dena hai na?
Niharika : A-Ahhh!
Niharika ka badan thitur utha.
Veer ke dhakke idhar tezz hue aur usne pucha,
Veer : Shittttt!!!! I'm close!! Kidhar chahiye tumhe Suman!
*Phattttt* *Phattttt* *Phattttt*
Suman : Ahhhnnn~ Maalik!!! M-Maalik!!! Dono chhed aapke hai... Nnnghhhh!!!? J-Jidhar daalna ho. N-Nahi!!! Rukiye! Mene... *huff* Mene tay kar liya hai. Choot me maalik. M-Meri choot me daaliye...!
*Splurrrttttttt*
Aur ek dhaar nikalte hui Suman ki andhruni diwaaro ko rang dii.
*Plop*
Jese hi lund uss chhed se baahar aaya Suman agle hi shan palat ke ghutno ke bal baith lund muh me bhar chusne lagi. Kyuki woh jaanti thi.
She knew it. A cocksleave must know its place. No matter from which hole Master's dick came from. A cocksleave's job is to clean it thoroughly and keep sucking it most of the time.
Jab Veer ne Niharika ko punaah dekha toh woh ghabraate hue peeche jaa rahi thi.
Par aisa hua na...
Veer ne usse bhi dabocha aur uske dono chhed chod chod ke apne veerya se bhar diye.
Uski chuttad laal the. Zaahir hai acchi khaasi spanking aur whipping hui thi. Balki deepthroat aur sandwich blowjob bhi mila tha Veer ko apni dono slaves se.
Suman apne maalik ke liye paani lene gayi thi. Par darwaza lagana bhul gayi. Jese hi pata laga ki koi aane waala hai. Veer ne apni dono naukraaniyo ko table ke neeche bhej diya. Aur woh upar Raja ki tarah baitha hua tha.
Do aurte uske lund athwa tatto ko choosne me lagi hui thi. Tabhi Sarika aa dhamki,
Sarika : Hmm? Didi kaha hai? Aur Suman jii!?
*Slurrrrpppp*
'Ohhh fucccckkk!!! Suman dheere!!! Uggh!!!'
Veer : Woh dono baahar gayi thi.
Sarika : Tum idhar kya kar rahe ho? Aur ek minute! Suman jii ki kursi par kyu baithe ho?
*Slurrrrrpppppp* *slurrrrrpppp*
*Kisssss* *lick*
Idhar woh baate kar rahi thi. Par usse kya pata tha ki uski mahila mandal ki Head aur nayi member Suman, ek mard ke saamne table ke andar ghus uska lund choosne me lagi hui thi.
Niharika thi man hater! Aur woh apne hi area me baith ke, ek mard ka lund choos rahi thi.
Veer (smiles) : Mein yaha? Hahaha! Ahem! Mujhe Suman jii hi baitha ke gayi hai. Aati hi hongi.
Bina kuch kahe Sarika toh nikal gayi. Par idhar Veer unke sarr ko baalo ke bal pakadta aur khilaune ki tarah istemaal kar unke mukho ko chodta.
Niharika ka toh poora chehra lund ki mehek se mehek raha tha.
Aur jharrne ke baad usne dono ke hi muh me thoda thoda hissa gira diya. Jisse majbooran Niharika ko gutakna pada.
Ye sab samapt hote hi, Veer ne important baat rakhi,
Veer : Koi hai jo hamare khilaaf hai. Aur agar mein sahi hu. Toh jesa kar raha hu wesa hi hona chahiye. Niharika tum!
Niharika : A-Ahnn? M-Mein ..!?
Veer : Tum!!! Aaj mere saath kahi chalogi!
Usne itna kaha hi tha ki tabhi uske phone par do messages aa gaye.
Veer : huh!?
Veer ne check kiya toh paaya ki, ek purvi ka tha aur dusra... Miss Kaera ka!!!
Purvi : Hum shaam ko 6 baje milenge. Vikram!
Kaera : Tonight!! Come to my home @ 7 PM!!!
'Ahh! Shit!!! Firse nahi! The timing...!'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Update consists of 4.4k words. Ab koi supporting updates nahi hai. Ye update padh ke samajh aa gaya hoga. Iss update se hi ye arc tezz pace pakad chuka hai. Toh like thok ke jaane ka. Aur revos rakhne ka bhaaya.
Baaki, dhanyavaad!
Bhai Kishor ke paas bohot Paisa hai.To sabse pehle hi karan na scene karan kafi time baad veer se mila or baate ki ek a che dost ki tarah wese veer ki hi wajah se karan krutika se bhi mil paya
Or bro lagta hai karan ke dad yani ki kishor ke pass lagta hai lagde level par paisa hai or ghamand bhi kishor main itna hai well jab kishor ko pata chalega ki karan krutika se shadi karna Cahta hai to wo kya sound karega ye dekhne layak hoga
Yes!Or sonali aakhir ise bhi padhne ka or aage badhne ka moka diya veer ne ye mujhe bahut accha laga or sonali bhale hi gussa nikale par kahina kahi use bhi ye kaam accha lagne laga tha
Naya update padh ke maalum pad gaya hoga. Balhaar ne Veer ko khabar de dii thi ki Suman ke mahila mandal me kaand hua hai. Bas! Fir kya tha...!Now ragini aakhir kaar jiska sabko intezaar hai us Scene ki starting hogyi ragini ke veer ko propose karne se well accha hai
But bro mujhe ek baat samjh nahi aayi ki veer ne aisa kyu bola ki suman ko bhi punishment deni hai usne kya kiya jo use saza doge well ye to tum reply main bata hi doge nahi to update main pata chal jayega
Arohi introvert hai. Kam bolti hai.Well mujhe veer or aarohi ka normal talk bahut jyada pasand aaya a actually pure update main mera wahi favourite scene tha khaas kar aarohi ka veer ko dumbo kehna
Naah! Isharo pe toh nahi nacha sakti. Par Veer ko pataa zaroor sakti hai apne cute andaaz se.Well ab aate hai kavya par aakhir veer ne use bata hi diya ki veer uski har baar nahi maan sakta varna kavya to veer ko apne isharo par nachane lagi
Dhanyavaad bhaaya!And last scene jiska mujhe 75 % andesha tha ki tejal veer ke college paguchegi nidhise veer ke bare main puchegi then uske baad veer ke yani ki ragini keghar pahuchegi agar aisa huva to sach main bhai bahen ka milan main dekhna cahunga
Well outstanding update bro maza aagya
Already whipping ho gayi hai. Hardcore nahi thi. But kya pata... Maybe in future!?Excellent update but what does he mean to say "suman ko punishment deni ha"
I think writer is going to introduce BDSM or agar aesa ha to is story ko char Chand nahi cahlees cahnd lag jayn gy...
Thanks a lot Bhai!Sonali ko usko apna dream poora kerne ka mauka de dia Veer n jo tha study kerne ka hala ki thoda dukh huwa ki ab woh apne hatho se khana bana ker kisi customer ko nahi khila payegi lekin padhna bhi zaroori h
Kavya n tow seedha order de dia ki yaha aake milo ab bahen h tow itna faida tow uthana banta h
Ragini n aaj khule k apne dil baat bol di ab Veer ko bolna h halanki ab Veer bhinpeejhe hatne wala nahi yeh dono yaha apni masti m lage huwe h or waha Tejal pahoch Nidhi mam k gher Tejal tow bahot hi Tez nikli ab dekhte h Tejal yaha kon kon se swalo k taar chhodti h Nidhi k ooper
Bahot zaberdast shaandaar
Lajawab update bhai
Hein? Ye mene kab likha?Fantastic update bhai...veer ki shadi kab he,
Thanks a lot mate!Tezal veer ke bare me jane ke liye pahunch gaya hai nidhi ke pass dkhte hai kya jankari ouch puchna chahti hai tezal....
Ragini or veer ka wo hot moment wow maja aagya brother awesome...
Sonali b bahut akward me fas gaya hai dekhte hai wo kya decision leta hai....
Lajawab update Werewolf bhai
Naah Bhai! Tejal Veer ke college me admission kyu legi bhala? Woh already uss se badi hai. Aur upar se uski field hi alag hai. Aap bhul gaye kya? Bhavna archaeologist hai. Aur Tejal uske under hi sab kuch seekh Rahi hai. Toh zaahir hai uski field bhi wahi hai. Veer ka college archaeologists ki shiksha thodi pradaan karta hai.Superb fantastic update to akhir Kar ragini Bhabi veer ki goad me aa he gai ek taraf veer bechara ane wale mushkil Palo ki planning kr Raha hy wahi tej b shayad apne Bhai k sath college me admission Lene k liye Nidhi se help Leni aai ho par veer to college Jata he nhi dekhte hy agy Kia Hoya hy eagerly waiting for next update
Ju pehle bande ho jisne update 112 ko tabaahi update kaha hai.Tabahi Update.
Arre abhi male characters sahi se enter nahi hue hai. Kayi dekhne ko milenge Hume jinka tagda build up hai aur postive characters hai.Karan Aur Karitika ka ilu ilu full force se chal rha. Chalo accha hai thoda logical relation bhi banna chaiye bina soche sab londi khali Veer ko hi milte rhega toh baki male character ka kuch development hi ni ho pata.
Kavya ne bhi chummi lii hai. Agar bhul gaye ho toh...Kavya toh bahut innocent hai Veer aur Uske rishte ne abhi uss mithas ko sungha bhi nai hai jo Arohi aur Veer ke rishte ne chakh liya hai inka relation bhi abhi under construction hai.
Iss baat par khaas dhyaan Diya jaata hai.Aur Yehi baat is story ki isko khas banati hai Bhale hi kisi kisi character me thodi bahut similarities hai but Sabhi character ka apna alag individuality hai. Isiliye sare characters aur relationships ka development aur uska experience bahut unique aur special lagta hai.
Sonali ka character build under construction hai already.Wahi Solani ke character ko kafi samay se side me rkha gya tha fir bhi uske character me badlav dekha ja sakta hai. Wo pehle se ab kahi jyada tolerent, grateful aur understanding ho gai hai. Aane wale samay me uski story ek naye mod se gujregi ab dekhna hai uske character me kya badlav aate hai. Mai usko strong character me dekhna chahta hu aisa na ho ke wo Veer ke ekhaas tale dabi hui ban jaye khair aisa uska charater hai bhi nai.
Mein tave ko gas pe rakhta hu bhai. Fir paani chhidak deta hu. Jab tava acche se dish banaane laayak ready ho jaega, toh lazeez dish chakhne ko milegi.Ab aate hai Ragini par jo sare niyam bhandhan todh kr Veer ki ho jana chahti hai. Lekin lekhan sahab yaha sabko Blue Ball dene pe tule huve hai. Jabhi Ragini Ki bari hoti hai Warewolf bhai sabko Garam krke Thanda hi chhod dete hai. Khair isme bhi apna ek maza hai. Dekhte hai jo dhire dhire pyala bhara ja rha hai iska ras paan kab kiya jayega.
Dhanyawad bhaaya!At last Tejal pe aate hai jo apne mission pe lagta hai kamyab hone hi wali hai wo pahuchi bhi ai toh aise jagha manna padega. Agle update ka besabri se intezar rhega.
Waiting for next update.
Dhanyavaad Bhai! Koshish poori rehti hai bhai update ke antral ko kam rakhne ki. Par paristhitiya beech me aa jaati hai. Ab mein abhi kuch personal problems share nahi kar raha hu jinse mein abhi joojh Raha hu. Nahi toh updates aur late ho jaaye. Jese tese thoda thoda jaha se samay nikaal paa raha hu woh nikaal Raha hu. Aur poora samay updates par hi Jaa Raha hai. Anyways! Keep supporting!एक बेहतरीन और मस्त अनुच्छेद। इस अनुच्छेद मे सबसे पहले देखे की करण जैसा दोस्त के संग वीर का समय बिताना, उसी क्रम मे सोनाली का स्वप्न पूरा करने के संग अपना फूड ब्याबसा का आगे बढ़ाना। इस अनुच्छेद के तहत सबसे महत्वपुर्ण बात रहा है की १) रागिनी का धमाकेदार उद्घोष वीर के प्रति और एक तरह से वीर को हतिया लेना लेकिन सबसे बड़ी बात ये है की २) तेज का निधि के घर पहुच जाना। तेज बहुत तेज तो था ही लेकिन इतना तेज मैं उम्मीद नहीं किए थे। लाजवाब। तेज और निधि मैडम दोनों का आपसी बार्तालाप का क्या असर होता है ये देखने के लिए उत्सुक रहेंगे। अगला अनुच्छेद से लगता है की वीर का गाड़ी एक तरफ रागिनी के संग जबर्दस्त दौड़ेगा और दूसरे तरफ तेज-भावना के गाड़ी बगल बगल रहेगी। बहुत मस्त जगह पर कहानी को ले आयें है मित्र। कोशिश कीजिएगा अनुच्छेद के बीच का अंतराल कम करने का। धन्यबाद।
Ahan! Sab see pehly TU update ak dam mast tha bhaya .
Money talks!Veer apny business badhany KY chakkar main hai usy bhut achy Sy pata hai AAJ Kal har masly ka Hal one an only money.
Sonali ka future uske haatho me hai. Hume aage aur bhi females dekhne ko mil sakti hai jo Sonali ki hi tarah muhfat ho.Veer or uski behno ko mulaqat hogaii Jo KY bhut amusing thi perfect Kuch nuok jhok or mazak Mai.
Veer ka apny food business ka tour bhi acha Raha or Sonali ka wo rawiya Bada mazakiya tha ye BAAT dekhny layak thi uska behavior ( tone) veer KY prati ak dhons jmana or veer ko Zara bhi bura Nahin Laga Ulta veer Thoda bhut amuse HOA usy I don't think k veer ki personality jab Sy change hoii hai Kisi ladki,aurat NY veer par rob jmaya ho ( Niharika ki BAAT or hai or uska end kaisy HOA k kaisy veer NY USKO apni slave bna Liya )or veer ka Sonali Ka future decision bhi acha tha k wo ye Sab chor kar apna future baiy padhy likhy.
Chup thodi baitha hai woh. Kuch planning chal rahi hai.Wahin ab TU rajat KY bhi din shuru hony waly Hain iska bhi chapter I think jaldi hi close ho jaiy ga or phir aain gy I think apny choty Sy piyaary Bhai pranjoo par wo bhi Kuch ti plan kar KY beitha hi hoga or is baar I think koi sold plan hoga uska ho bhi kiu na? Veer NY uska Sab Kuch barbaad kar diya bechara achi khaasi property hadpny ko tha iska chapter shaiyd close ho maybe.
Rajni?Wahin aty Hain apni RAJNI par ayee hayee ye aurat badi sexy Nahin Nahin badi hot Nahin ye bhi Nahin ye ak tarha ki bomb hai maa qasam mujhy bhut Pasand aati hai ye chambaili wahin iska in counter bhi jaldi hi ho jaiy ga I think. Akhir inki ak hot Beach date bhi hogaii wahin RAJNI NY Akhir apny piyaar ka bta hi diya veer ko I think veer ko pehly hi is Bary main koi idea tha? Veer bhi kafi attracted that RAJNI Sy or veer ki wo kiss Nahin Nahin wo smooch or milap is BAAT ko gawahi tha .
Nava update padhne ka agar abhi tak nahi padha hai toh. Tej bohot tez nikli!Wahin Tejo bhi punch gaii Akhir NIDHI ma'am k pass ab TU usky liy bhi ye asaan tha bas veer ka nam social media par dala or fatak Sy jankaari nikal li or wahin college Sy maybe? Punch gaii address ly kar NIDHI ma'am k pass ab agiy inki Kiya conversation hoti hai ye dekhny laiyak hogii or I think NIDHI wo Sab Nahin btaiy gi mean veer ka past I think k kaisy wo Ghar Sy lada or usky saath Raha right? Ye itni jaldi I think Tejo ko pata Nahin lagny wala or maybe address dy dyy RAJNI k Ghar ka . Tej ko Maza aay ga veer ko janny main NIDHI ma'am Sy I think! Or ye Tejo ka veer KY pechy apni Bua maa Sy chup kar unki BAAT na maan kar NIDHI k Ghar punchna is BAAT ka sboot hai k wo Kitna chahti hai apny Bhai veer ko.
Dekhte hai. Saath Bane rahiyega!Kul Mila KY BAAT ye hai k yehi hai ( dhmaal movie Sy yaad agaya )
Chalain agy dekhty Hain next update main k veer rajat ko kaisy handle karta hai NIDHI ki Tejo Sy batain maybe something else like that unknown system holder usky relat koi BAAT ya koi naya katta khol du aap kia pata ? .
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First of all, thanks a lot! AndHi Guys!!!
I am a new member here and Werewolf You are one of my favorite writers on this forum.
Iss se badi khushi ki baat mere liye aur kya ho sakti hai yaha? Thanks for joining us!Mein isse pehle sirf as a guest hi stories padhta tha but your story made me to logIn and comment here, specially Baadshah.
Ohh! Dhanyavaad uske liye bhi!Mene isse pehle aapki "Akhir kyun?" bhi padhi he aur wo bhi mujhe kaafi pasand aai thi.
Ab ju dusre bande ho jisne ye baat kahi hai. I appreciate it a lot!For the latest update, village arc ka sabse best update tha yeh. Sabse jyada curiosity to ab Tej ko lekar he.
Iska jawaab naye update me hai. Agar padha nahi hai abhi aapne toh padhiyega zaroor aur apne raay rakhna na bhuliyega.Kya wo purvi se pehle veer se mil payegi?
Ye bhi ujaagar ho chuka hai. Latest update me hai ye baatein.Nidhi ka kya reaction hoga jab use pata lagega ki tej Veer ki sagi behan he? Kya Tej use yeh batayegi?
Sonali's future is in her own hands. Only she can decide where she wants to go.Veer ne sonali se ji vada kiya tha use aage padhane ka, wo ab pura karne ja raha he. May be sonali has a bigger role on veer's business in future?
Maybe!? Or maybe not!?Ragini bhi ab veer ke sath aage badhne lagi he, shayad Veer uske sath jaldi hi relationship mein aa jayega.
Ohh! You'll see something great!Dusri taraf Shweta aur bhumika ko veer khari khoti suna chuka he but there is a movement in their relation too. Personally I think, ki jaldi hi unka matter sudhar jaana chahiye.
Ohh! Ek toh abhi dikh jayega! Ya shayad more than one!?Interesting yeh dekhna hoga ki Kaera, Nidhi, aur Shreya ka kya reaction rahega jab Veer se akele mein milega. Kyunki Sonali ka to bahut hi majedar tha