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Amazing Update Bro.
Agla update kab???
Bro first time i read ur story its amazing story mind blowing its was awesome its a good quality time with read ur story nd thanx keep it up cintinur the story nd by the way apki akhir kyu story be read ki hee mane
Nice update... Ab bas 7 baje wala dhamaka dekhana hai
Super duper dhamakedar behtreen update bhai
Vai ek line
"Kiska hain intezaar ye tumko main hoon na"
Lekin main kaha hu, jiske liye e intezaar o sob chor ke sob ho raha hain, vai pls itna details mat dalo, or last part bohut eeee accha tha, lekin 1st part or 2nd kuch khaas nahi tha, bura lage to maaf kar dena
Ding werewolf bhai next mission ?????
Jabardast update bhai
We do understand so don't worry and take care and update was superb
Good update ! Thanks
Jabardast update bhai
Awesome fabulous update bro
Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Werewolf bhai....
Nice and lovely update....
Bahut hi behtareen aur anth aate aate Jo emotional scene tha bilkul sone pe suhaaga Werewolf bhai....
Just loved it...
Chalo dekhen hai veer ab kya karega apni maa se milega yaa usase pahle keara pohach jayegi Hotel
10 min bache hai veer to late hone wala hai bas keara use dho naa de
Nice update bhai
Amazing update bhai..ab sala rajat or pranjal kisko use krke veer ko badnaam krne ki kosshis kr rhe hai khi fs hi na jae is baar veer
Hmm to sabse pehle aate hai suman par bhai ye bala khubsurati ke sath sath itni aggressive hogi ye to maine guess bhi nahi kiya tha bhai kya hi suman ne apna roop badla hai
Niharika ko najane kitne mouke de raha hai veer par ye sali maane tab na use pata hai ki wo kuch nahi kar sakti kyu ki agar usne kuch kiya to veer puri duniya ke samne use nanga karega wo ye bata janti hai or bhai sahab suman kya hi galiya peli hai Niharika ko yaar aisi to maine aaj tak nahi suni or suman ne apni loyalty proof ki
Or ek bar to veer bhi dang reh gaya suman ki is personality se or sabse badi baat suman ki favourability badh gayi or kya hi sahi badhi hai yaar 170 ye chota ank nahi hota bro
Well veer ne us bashti walo ke aise morche ke sargana ko pakad ke aisa maroda ki uski gaand mud gayi sab rajat ki aisi gaand fategi ki usme carry ka rip moniter bhi bina thook ke ghuss jayega but d3khte hai carry bhai wo moniter dete haiya nahi
Chalo ek bar ke liye hi sahi Niharika ko laga to sahi ki mard ki taqat kya hoti hai ab shayad kuch to sudhar aaye
Well uske bad humne dekha ki do suar kaise satranj ka game baja rahe hai par inhe kya pata ki veer inka hi game bajane wala hai well advocate nam ke suar ke jate hi jjangli suar ka phone aaya or usne baat kar ne ke sath hi amrit nivas ka naam liya
Meybe sure ki amrit nivas ka ek aham raaz hai past se well ye suar veer ko galiya to badi achchi bak raha tha but kya kare veer veer hai inki tarah suar nahi haina rajat bete teri to chhaya chudne wali hai well iske sath jo hoga wo dekhna bada hi dilchasp hoga dekh te hai ye or pranjal plan main kamyaab hote haiya nahi
Or koi to tha jisne karunesh ke muh se amrit nivas sun liya lagta hai ek familiar toofan aane wala hai maza yega
Ab aate hai meeting ki taraf to purvi ne aate hi ek bomb fod diya ki use pata hai uska naam veer hai vikram nahi well usse koi ghanta far nahi padta par dheere dheere purvi flow flow main flow hogyi
Or veer ne apni bhi pareshani batayi aakhir ye haq tha uska apni maa se naraz hone ka apni maa ke rahasya janne ka or ye sawal puchne ka ki kyo use wo chorr ke chali gayi
Par yaha veer ka alpha instinct firse triggered huye usne ye saaf boldiya wo itna kamzor nahi hai wo bhi ek aisa parson hai jo is duniya main hai
Well purvi ki favourability to aise badhti ja rahi hai jese seconds ke number badhte hai lagta hai veer ka ab uski real mom and sister ke prati behaviour thoda narazgi bhara hoga dekhte hai kese raaz khulte hai sab ke
Well isbaar bhi kendell jennerrr... Ahem matlab ki keara ki entry aate aate reh gayi
Well bro ek baat puchu kya is arc main bhavna ke gunehgaaro ko saza milegi and kya is wale arc main pranjel orkarunesh ka chapter finel close hoga ya fir koi New arc socha hai iske liye well jo bhi ho apan to story padhenge or janenge wese bro tumne is arc ka name village arc kyu rakkha
Baki outstanding update wolfi bro bahut jyada maza aaya padhke
Or ha last main maine padha ki aapne kisi famil member ki death hogyi hai bro mujhe nahi pata ki aapkon ho kaha se ho but inshaniyat ke naate bolunga ki bhagwan unki divyatma ko shanti dei om shanti
Nyc update bhai
Jabardast bro
Brilliant... niharika ne suman ko apni taraf karne ki koshish ki par ulta usse hi ye karna bhari pad gaya..
Thandi kulfi dusri jagah par khani pad gay..hahaa..
Rajat or pranjal ne plan kiya tha mahila mandal ke khilaf virodh karne ke liye ..
Khair ye wala matter to veer ne sulja diya basti me jake par ye pranjal kuch jyada hi hoshiyaari kar raha hai..
Ye veer ko kisi ladki ke sath s*x karte hue wala video bana ke blackmail karne ka plan bhi bana diya hai.. Plan success to nahi hoga par iss pranjal or rajat ko sabak nahi sikhaya to ye aise hi aage or pareshaniya khadi karte rahenge..
Or kisi ne pranjal ke baad ko apne bete se baat karte hue sun liya hai or place ka name bhi sun liya hai..ab dekhte hai kon tha voh.
Wahi purvi se mulaqat ho gay..apne maa ne usse itne saal tak dudhne ki koshish nahi ki iss liye kafi sare sawal to hai uske paas par uska jawab purvi ne nahi diya woh to bhavna hi degi.. tab pata chalega kyu veer ko chhod kar ghar chhoda tha.
Ab ye kaera ka msg aa gaya bhai ab loada fas gaya hai .. kono rasta nikalna padega..
Or bhai parivarik samsya se free hoke phir idhar time dena.. abhi apke parivar me apki jyada jaroorat hogi.
Outstanding...shandar...update..bhai.
Nice update bro
Shandar or jabardst update bhai jhakkas update diya h ab jbki purvi ne bhavna or tejal ke aane ke bare me bta diya h to shayad jldi hi veer ki mulaqat tejal or bhavna se hone wali h aisa lgta h.
Super update hai Bhai
Fantastic mind-blowing update
Very brilliant update
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Purvi jo apne hero Veer ki mooboli Massi hai emotion se he shi but VEER ne acha fayda uthaya or puvi ki fabourbilti bd gy Veer ke prati
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Achi bat ye hai bhot he mushkil hota hai emotion scene create krna or ye honour he write ke bs ki baat bi ni hoti but apne forum ke ginee chune he write ne esa krke dikhaya hai apni story me mai kisi ka name ni looga but is story me maine bs unique chijee he dekhi hai jaise enemies ke last day scene
Wo kehte hai na jb insaan ki maut samne hoti hai to use apni jindgi ke kuch chuninda pal yaad aajate hai esa scene ko kalpana karna or sath me write krna apne aap me bhot he bdi baat hai ye but writer ne krke dikhaya hai yha pe yhe ni haal he me SUHANA pe aatack hua jb hospital me SUHANA ko apne bachpan ka wo time yaad aaya TITLEEYAA ka or uske bare me Q Suhana ko pasand ni Titleeyaa ye bi ek apne aap me UNIQUE scene tha story me or kuch journey ke sath me kuch CODES or PIC jo apne write ki he deen hai q ki usne khud bnaya hai..etc etc etc
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Maine kafi story pdi hai but kisi me esa scene ni pda hai
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Sbse bda Challange agar kisi ne poora kia hai Werewolf ne kia hai abi tk apni story me
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Ab kuch members soch rhe hoge lo ek or aagya bdli jldi comments kr dia isne us scene ke lye jo bitee hue mahino hogy hai
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Hai na
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Ye bi alg kahani hai meri but sunoge koi ni boor hojayge ye pdte pdte sooo jaoge
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Kher aakhir kaar Werewolf ko VEER pe dyaa agy or moboli masi Purvi se milaya jo jld he hero ki asli maa or bhen se milaygi
Or
Mai ye smj rha tha action romance love ke chkkar me story ke end me maa or bhen se hero ko Milan hoga or story end hojaygi
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Update me pranjal or Rajat jo apne plan me lge hai Veer ko fsane me taki Nidhi ki najroo me Veer gir jay jo hona ni hai
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Suman ki fabourbilti achi khassi bd gy hai
Whe Niharika ka ghamand abi tk khtam ni hua hai
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Or ab Miss Kayera ka number lagna hai jo intzaar me hai VEER ke
Dekhna ye hai aagy Werewolf ky krta hai update me
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Q ki mere ya member ke imagination se kuch ni hona wala
Whe hoga jo manjooree Werewolf hoga
mera comments ki koi bat glt lge ho to thee dil se sorry
Let's see how he will meet kaera at time....overall emotional update....
Mind-blowing update
Nice one
lovely update .suman ne ekdam sahi kiya niharika ke saath..
Nice
Amazing Update
Superb updates
Super fantastic update
Vary vary nice update bhai! App hat update main koi na koi suspence rakh dete ho veer aur uski masi ka conversation dekh ke aakhe nam ho gayi sad sa feeling aayi! Aur yaha pranjal ke saajish! Ek baat batana bhai yeh Amrit niwas kya hai???
Ab maja aayega jab veer pranjal ke banaye plan me jaan boojkar fasne ka natak karega or pranjal ke bichaye jaal me rajat ko fasayega Qki Jo pranjal ki baate sun raha h Bo koi or nhi balhar ke gang ka aadmi hoga to usne veer ko sab bata dega or fir veer pranjal ke jaal m rajat ko fasa kr apne 50 laakh rupye basul karega or use sabak bhi sikayega
Nice update ab maa betey ke milne per kya kya Raaz khulte hai
Awesome update
Super fantastic update bro
मित्र, लाजवाब और शानदार अनुच्छेद। अनुच्छेद शुरू ही होता है निहारिका और सुमन से। सुमन का ये रौद्र रूप ताज्जुब कर देनेवाली है। ऊपर से उनकी अनुकूलता मानक १७० जो बहुत भयानक है। इतना अनुकूलता मानक मतलब इस औरत अपना मालिक के लिए कुछ (मतलब कुछ भी) भी करने की क्षमता रखती है। इसका अनुकूलता मानक कहाँ पहुचता है देखने लायक होगा। इस अनुच्छेद का अगला पड़ाव मतलब रजत,इसको तो वाट लागने वाला है। लेकिन समझ मे नहीं आया की कौन सा होटल के बारे मे बोल रहे है ये दोनों बदमाश। देखते है। वीर और पूर्वी का बातचीत आशा के अनुरूप ही हुआ। लेकिन जाते जाते आपका ७ बजे का धमाका मिल ही गया। क्या होगा क्या पता। सब तो ठीक है लेकिन आप और ज्यादा प्रशंग्सा के पात्र है जिसको बोलते है हैट्स ऑफ। आपके पारिबारिक समस्या के अंदर रहते हुए इतना शानदार अनुच्छेद पेश करना अपने आप मे बहुत बड़ा बात है। भगवान से प्रार्थना करेंगे की दिबंगत आत्मा को शांति मिले। अगर अगला अनुच्छेद देने मे थोड़ा देर भी होगा तो भी कोई दिक्कत नहीं। परिबार के समस्या का समाधान पहले करिए मित्र। लेखनी तो आते रहेगा। धन्यबाद।
Ab to veer ko Har second count karke chalna parega......
Very emotional & lazzatdar
Jabardast dhamaakedaar update pls. bhai able update ke liye itna lamba intijar mat karwaana
Awesome update bhai
Mast update h bhai...
The narration of this update...
And the conversations.
Hats off...
Mujhe bohut sari baate kehni h... Main baad me kahungi... Maybe tomorrow...
Jabardast update bhai..
udate mazedaar tha ,. but man nahi bhara hahaha
Amazing update
Nice n awesome
Ekdam jordaar update bhai....
Mai na de rha revo, ab itne imotional or erotica se bharpor update Jise Apne werewolf bhaya ne very well written kiya hai, Mai Uski summery likhkr apna maza kirkira nhi karna chahta...
Suman or niharika vale part me Suman chha gyi guru Har angle se...
Vahi purvi Ji vale part me imotional kr diya pr pari ne vo bta diya jisse purvi Ji veer ke taraf ho gyi or unki favourability ka graph Jo aapne dikhaya hai, aisa abhi tk kisi ke sath nhi hai...
Jabardast superb mind-blowing update awesome bhai...
Or apne death king bhaya ki tarah apna bhi hide hone ka man kr rha hai
Brilliant update
Nice behtarin mast awesome update bro
Zabardast update
nice1 as always
Amazing updade Zabardast updade Awesome updade mind blowing updade
awesome update hai Werewolf bhai,
Behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai,
Suman is now become protector of Veer, a guardian, a lover aur ek Humsafar jo bina kisi rishte ke safar mein har kadam saath deta hai. She is too good, selfless and loving but not possessive which is best part.
Niharika wo poonch hai jo seedhi nahi ho sakti hai magar usne galti kar di Veer ke sabse bade chahne waale ko uske khilaaf bhadkaane ki aur kya mast saza mili usko aisa karene ki. Magar akal to abhi bhi nahi aayi hai usko.
Suman ki problem solve karne mein Veer ko kuch hi minutes lage do baar limbo aur issue resolved, magar us kutte ke pille Pranjal aur us gandi naali ke keede Rajat ko sabak seekhana abhi baaki hai.
Poorvi se bhi mulakaat ho gayi aur Veer ne apna dard bhi jaahir kar diya jisse Poorvi ki favorability aur badh gayi Veer ke liye. Shayad wo aayi bhi isiliye thi ki pahle ye dekhe ki Veer apni maa aur bahan ko le kar kya sochta hai aur usko thoda cool down kar sake taaki jab Veer apni maa aur bahan se mile to dil mein bhadas naa ho.
Ab Veer ko Kiara se bhi milne jaana hai to kya wo Poorvi se meeting beech mein hi khatam karke jayega yaa fir Kiara se meeting cancel ya reschedule karga kyonki ki agar Kiara se nahi mila to bhi bhadak jayegi. Very beautiful update.
Fantastic update bro
Suman Masha allah. Maja aaya Bhai update me.
Bhai mast majedar lavely update bhai waiting for next update jaldi dana bro
bhut bhut shandar update bro
Well done
Bohat hi vadia update
Shandaar bhai ab jald hi family milenge
to rajat ke kehne par us basti wale ladke ne target kiya tha mahila mandal ko aur veer ne usko aisa sabak sikhaya ki wo dobara kabhi taang nahi adayega .
pranjal ne apni taraf se veer ko target kiya hai jabki karunesh aisa nahi chahta kyunki usko ye sahi waqt nahi lag raha ,pranjal udd raha hai rajat ke dam par ,par usko ye pata nahi ki veer ab wo nahi raha jisko koi bhi maarke chala jaaye ..ab veer saksham hai apne dushmano ko jhukane me .
purvi ke saath emotional meeting huyi jisme veer ne apni favourability badha li .
ab ye maa se milke hi pata chalega ki kyu wo veer ko chhodke chali gayi .
aur wo kaun shaks tha jisne karunesh ki baate sun li aur amrit niwas ke baare me jaan gaya .
Gjb story me full maja hai...
Ummid hai.. aese hi bane rahega.
Or update nirntar milege
Superb update
Nice update bhaii bhit Awla Maza Aya gya par Kar ab new update Ka intazar ha
Superb fantastic update brother keep posting such great updates.
Nice update
Nice update
Nice update...
Wooah awesome Bhai maza aa gaya yrr ye Niharika bansal to kuch jyada hi uchal kood mcha rakhi thi kab se or suman ne kya latada lafad or baal bhi keench kr man nhi bhara to seedhe thandi khulfi hi choot Mai ghusa kr penty dlwa di or dusri kulfi khud neeche se kha kr us ko chatwa bhi di maza hi aa gaya us portion ko read krke. Or veer ne bhi ache se bajaya Dono ko first office Mai or uske baad asli culprit tk pahunchne ke liye or kya dhunai kari uski ki Ek pal ke liye to Niharika bhi kayaal ho gyi Apne hero ki or ye harami krunesh Abhi tk Apne bete ka sath de rha galat kamo Mai, ye rajat to jayega ab Jaldi hi ye pakki baat hai. Or veer bhi Apni massi purvi se mil liya or gille shikwe bhu door kr liye pr ab khatre ki ghanti Miss kaera k@ msg aa chuka "10 min left for 7" Ab dekhte hai apna hero heera laal kha tak bhagta hai or kya time se pahunch Bhi payega miss kaera ke pass ya wait kr rhi koi or musibaat uske raste Mai Uska intezaar rahega
Awesome updates
तो करुणेश,रजत और प्रांजल फिर से प्लान बना रहे,
देखते है कितना successful होते है,
veer अपने stats को और बढ़ाना शुरू कर देना चाहिए
वीर 10 मिनिट में kaira के पास पहुंच पाएगा ??
क्योंकि traffic वीर को 10 मिनिट में पहुंचने की इजाजत नहीं देगा
और kaira एक well disciplined women है,
अगर वीर late हुआ तो उसकी खैर नहीं
अब जब kaira almost 36–37 update बाद वापस आ रही है तो मैं उम्मीद करता हूं की, उसके और वीर के बीच एक अच्छा अपडेट देखने को मिलेगा, एक अच्छा conversation
ये पक्का आरोही होगी, और जैसे उसे प्रांजल के ऊपर शक हुआ था वैसे ही अब उसके पापा के ऊपर भी हो जायेगा लग रहा
शुरू में लगा था की पूर्वी बस time pas के लिए add की गई कैरक्टर है लेकिन अब लग रहा की वो भावना के past में काफी important part play करेगी
but awkward ये लगता है की पूर्वी इतने सालों से मुंबई में ही थी, उसने वीर को बचपन में गोद में खेलाया है अपना दूध भी पिलाया तो वो कभी वीर से मिलने क्यों नहीं, कभी हाल चाल भी नही पूछा
that's weird
Over all a good update
Well dost to be honest आज का अपडेट कई गुना अच्छा हो सकता था
Personally I felt like की अगर सुमन और निहारिका वाला सीन थोड़ा छोटा करके पूर्वी के साथ एक बेहतरीन conversation डाला होता तो ये अपडेट सुपर डुपर होता
I was expecting a bit lengthy conversation between veer and purvi
I mean हम सब को मालूम है निहारिका वीर का कुछ नहीं उखाड़ सकती,
तो फिर बस बस्ती वाला एक छोटा सा कांड निपटाने के लिए अपडेट का इतना बड़ा पार्ट देना थोड़ा frustrating लगा
I wish वो कुल्फी वाला part cut करके न, उस time को पूर्वी के साथ use करना था
या शायद मैं ही ज्यादा expect कर गया पता नहीं but
I felt like इनकी meeting कुछ ज्यादा ही short हो गई
ऐसा भी हो सकता है ये बस मुझे feel हुआ, maybe बाकी सब या wolf ऐसा ना सोचते हो
Well मेरा काम है अच्छा या बुरा बताना जैसा मुझे feel hua, बाकी आपको जैसी कहानी ठीक लगे आप वैसे चलाइए
Sorry yadi bura laga ho to
Excellent update sir g
Bahut hi behtareen update hai bhai
Awesome, beautiful❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Nice update
Dil Ka Rishta kahi pe restart h yaa discontinued ho gayi h?
Fantastic zabaradast update waiting for next update
मित्र,क्या इस बार कोई mega अनुच्छेद मिल सकेगा हम लोगो को? आपका पिछला mega अनुच्छेद आया था अनुच्छेद १०९ मे १३/०९ को। इस बार उम्मीद कर सकते है। आगे आपका मर्जी। धन्यबाद।
Ab aayega maza
Another mind blowing update
Ab asal family drama start hua hai. Lakin sath me aur bhi bahut kuchh ho raha hai. Ab kya hi kahu is Update ke bare me starting bikul mind blowing hui hai. Aur mujhe to laga tha is Update me Kayra se bhi veer mil lega lakin nahi. Yaha to itne matter veer ko suljhane hai ki lagta hai ab wo next update me hi possible hoga. Lakin ye kayra massage send krke remainder kyu karwa rahi hai. Lagta hai kuch to aisa hone wala hai jo hum nahi soch sakte hai. Dekhte hai aakhir kya hota hai ?
Aur suman ki favourability aakhir kaha ja kar rukegi. Wiki jis tarah wo increase ho rahi hai wo bahut hi jld 200 paar ho jani hai. Nd mujhe pura yakin hai 200+ hone par jarur koi na koi feacher isme aur add ho jayega. Ab to aisa lagta hai agarveer ko kuch ho gaya to sbse jyada gehra sadma to Suman ko hi lagega. Aur jaha tak mujhe lagta hai ki ye Suman to veer ki maa ko bhi janti hogi na. To iska bhi is family drama me jarur aage koi bada role hoga.
Aur Suman ki veer ke prati vafadari ki to baat hi nahi karni cahiye aakhir puri duniya veer ke khilaf khadi ho jaye lakin wo mar kayegi but veer ke khilaf kabhi nahi jayegi. Aur uska wo icecream kaand ke bare me to kya hi kahu epic tha. Niharika ko bhi ab ache se smjh me aa gaya hoga suman se panga nahi lena haim lakin wo bhi kuch kam nahi hai jarur kuch na kuch plan to abhi karegi hi. But ye baat bhi hai ki wo veer ke taraf attract ho rahi hai. Lakin apni female ego ke karan wo ise bokul bhi accept nahi karegi.
Baki ye vakil ke sath veer kya karta hai ye dekhna hoga. Lakin ye pranjal ne kya idea laga kar plan banaya hai. Dekhte hai kitna safal hoga wo ?
Sath me ye karunesh ki baat aakhir kisne suni jarur ye Arohi hi hogi aisa mujhe lagta hai. Aur wo hi pata laga kar aage veer ko batayegi. Lagta hai thode time baad karunesh ka bhi farda faas hone wala hai.
Uttam Lekhni ka Prayog Werewolf bhai...Waiting for Next Update Eagerly...
Superb update
Nice update
Lajawab update Werewolf bhai
nice update bro apka har update awesome hai but 1week me 1 hi update aata hai
Ek aur Blunder update
Niharika Ko pata nai kitna time lagega samjhne me ke Suman Veer ki sirf slave nahi hai usne apna tann mann dhann sab khuch Veer ko saup diya hai. Lekin iss baar Suman ne Niharika ko andar tak hila diya hai waise Iss Suman-Niharika ke backseat encounter pe maine 4 line banaya hai... Gaur kijiyega.
From Suman's POV
"Chikni chut teri jaise chappal ka chamda.
Chut pe rkhungi kulfi toh kregi bhagda.
Veer ka lund tagda, aaja isko choos ke iska juice pi.
Ek kaam kr aake mera chut pi.
Bus nake pe rail faate pe aur Niharika tu mere jhante pe."
Khair Veer ne apne jalve toh Niharika ko pehle bhi dikhaye hai but abhi usne dekha Veer koi aam ladka nahi jisko paiso aur takat se haraya ja sake. Dekhte hai kab tak Niharika ka akad bacha rehta hai.
Ab baat krte hai Pranjal-Rajat Ke jugal bandi ki. Ye dono pe ye kahawat sahi baithti hai ke Kutte ki dum ko 13 baras nali me daal kr rkho toh nali tedhi ho jayegi but inki dum sidhi nahi hogi. Waise Veer toh inke chutiya chaalo ko asani se tod sakta hai lekin jaisa abhi samay hai aur Veer ka dhyan jis tarah abhi faila hai toh fuck up hone ke chance bane huve hai. Waise jo bhi hoga exciting hi hoga. Aur ye mc Karunesh bahut bada khuladi malum padta hai. Aur mujhe shaq hai Veer ke halat ka bahut had tak jimmedar yehi hai.
Ab aate hai Veer aur Purvi ke Meeting cum date pe. Jaha Veer eda banke peda khane ke koshish me hai. Aur alpha-sigma stats ko jaisa werewolf bhai ne story me blend krna start kiya hai wo kabile tarif hai. Veer jaise pehle hi mulakat me Purvi ko apne our jaise kheecha hai lagta bahut jaldi hi apne baaho me bhi le lega.
Now for the final words...
"10 minutes are left for 7" toh Veer ka bulava aa chuka hai. Ye Veer aur Kaera ki mulaqat bahut dino baad hone wali hai dekhna hoga is mulaqat ka anjaam kya hone wala hai.
Aur ye bhi dekhna hoga ke Pranjal-Rajat ki jo Veer ko badnaam krne ki planning hai uska kya hoga.
Waiting for next update..
Nice update
Suman ne to niharika ki keh ke le liuse acha Maja chakhaya .....
Pranjal Sala harmajada bahut uchla raha hai usko to av bahut pachtana padega ...karunes ko kon follow kar raha hai .....
Veer basti ke basi ko b acha sabk sikhya ...
Purvi bahut hi achi malum padti hai or to wo bahut soft hatred hai ...veer ka alfa male bahut hi khtrank Nak lag raha hai.....
अगले कुछ अपडेट में जरूरत है वीर का तेजल और आरोही से bonding को बढ़ाने की
ठीक है वीर के पास system है और उसकी वजह से वो सबसे ज्यादा intelligent और strong है
जिसकी वजह से वो सारे difficulties का सामना अकेले ही कर लेता है।
अब एक side तो ये काफी fascinating और अच्छा भी लगता है की main character में वो सारी qualities है जो एक lead character में होनी चाहिए but parallel ये थोड़ा unrealistic भी लगता होगा किसी किसी को
क्योंकि अब सब एक जैसा तो सोचते नहीं है,
मुझे तो ये बहुत अच्छा लगता है की वीर problems अकेले handle कर लेता है, अपनी और पूरी family को हर बार बचा लेता है तो
उसके लिए मैं writer की impractical चीजों को ignore कर देता हूं, ताकि कहानी का पूरा मजा ले सकू
लेकिन जरूरी नहीं की सब मेरे जैसा सोचते हो, कुछ लोगों को ये चीजें पचती नहीं होंगी,
तो तेजल और आरोही को as supporting roles में डाल कर कहानी को उन लोगो के लिए इसे more realastic बना सकते हो
क्योंकि वीर की पूरी फैमिली में तेजल और आरोही ही सबसे ज्यादा inteligent है
आरोही ने पहले ही प्रांजल के wheelchair से दादाजी को गिराने वाले प्लान का investigation करके काफी हेल्प की थी, वो already अपनी intelligence प्रूव कर चुकी है,
अब यदि वो फिर से करुणेश और प्रांजल के प्लान के against Veer की help करेगी तो वीर को काफी support होगा,
इस से एक फायदा और होगा की वीर को आरोही के साथ ज्यादा टाइम बिताने का मौका मिलेगा जिस से उसकी shyness Veer से थोड़ी कम होगी और हमें real आरोही देखने को मिलेगी
अभी तक जितना आरोही इस कहानी में आई है उस से लगता तो यही है की आरोही काफी cute है लेकिन शर्मीली है
And तेजल के करीब जाने के तो कई कारण है।
एक तो वो सालों से एक बहन के प्यार से दूर था, तो at least भाई बहन के रिश्ते को अच्छे से समझ पाएगा
(काव्या उसकी बहन कम,gf की तरह ज्यादा behave करती है और आरोही अपने शर्मीलेपन के वजह से ज्यादा खुल नही पाती तो एक तरह से वीर भाई बहन के रिश्ते से ठीक तरह से वाकिफ नहीं है and सारे रिश्ते ठीक है लेकिन siblings सबके लिए spacial होते है)
तेजल निधि के मुंह से वीर का past सुन चुकी है और उसे अच्छे से मालुम है की वीर ने क्या क्या face किया है और किसकी वजह से किया है
तो उसके मन में भी ये भड़ास होगी, अपने भाई के दुखों का बदला लेने के लिए
अभी से ज्यादा अच्छा मौका और क्या सकता है को तेजल प्रांजल के खिलाफ अपने भाई के प्लान में शामिल हो
तेजल यदि वीर के करीब आई तो आगे viilage arc में काफी improtant हो जायेगी, क्योंकि भावना के past से सिर्फ वीर ही नहीं तेजल भी जुड़ी होगी
और इस पूरे arc में वो वीर की काफी मदद कर सकती है क्योंकि तेजल अपनी मां भावना के ज्यादा करीब है और ज्यादा अच्छे से जानती है वीर की तुलना में
अभी तक कहानी शानदार रही है और बहुत अच्छी जा रही है And
as a reader ये बस मेरे कुछ suggestions है की ऐसा भी सकता है मानना या ना मानना सबकुछ आप पर है
आप कहानी अपने हिसाब से चलाओ, and
Keep it up you are doing wonderful
Mast update
Nice story is awesome and going through this fact may also help in story
Update to bhaut jada dhasu hain nice
Stories bhut achi hai But Update Bhut Slow Aa Re la Hai Bro
Dhansu update
Rihanna Ma'am, iska ek simple sa jawab hai ki aisa kahin nahi likha hai ki bachcha sirf ek sal tak hi breastfeeding kar sakta hai? Bahut se bachche kaafi long period tak breastfeeding karte hai. Main khud ek aisa example raha hoon. To jab Veer ek saal se upper ka hua hoga tab Poorvi ne usko breastfeed karaya hoga. Hope this reply answers your query.
Werewolf bhai mera jawaab dena agar bura laga ho yaa ye aapki kahani ke hisaab se sahi jawab na ho to maafi chunga ki maine aapki jagah jawab diya hai.
Waiting for next update bhaiya ji
Amazing update bro
Finally the reunion part but sigma aur alpha ki confusion m moment aur nikhrega great
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Superb fantastic amazing mind blowing update Werewolf bhai...
Niharika ye soch k Suman se Veer k phone se video delete karne k liye bol rahi hogi kyu ki usko laga hoga ki Veer ne Suman ko bhi niharika ki tarah blackmail karke appni slave bana k rakha h or esi ki wajah se usse Suman ka wo ruup dekhna pada jo ajj tak Veer n bhi nahi kiya tha or appka idea bhi unique or special hote h kulfi ka usse kiya niharika ko sabak sikhane k liye it was next level bhai or usske bad Suman ko favourability wo to jese favourability ka meter hi thod ka rakh deka ek time jis hisab se Suman ki favourability badh rahi h itne to mere hisab se nah kabhi usi mom ki hoga in future or iske wife ki hogi jitne favourability Suman ki hogi at the end of the story no one can reach at that level of favourability which Suman have ...
Pranjal or Rajat dono m kuch solid plan banaya h veer se revange lene k liye phele ye mahila mandal walo k khilap morcha just because Suman veer k kaha sab kuch manti h jis wajah se wo uss morche m vyast ho jayegi or idhar wo log veer ko sex scandal m fast denge to ussko bachane k liye mahila mandal bhi nahi aa payegi or wo Rajat nidhi mam ko Veer ke sex scandal k baare m bata k usse apni side karke bacha le lega lekin uske baad bhi wo nidhi mam k sath kuch karne wala h ab ye kya h ek badi problem h lekin dono ne plan perfect banaya h per unhone ne veer ko kacha khiladi samaj liya h upper se veer k pass pari h or veer ne Las Vegas jane se phele Balhaar ko in sab pe nazar rakhne ko kaha tha or usse veer ko Rajat or Pranjal ki harkat k bareme bhi bataya h matlab veer ne bhi kuch soch rakha h in logo k bare me...
Purvi veer ko dekh k bhavuk ho gaye sahi bhi h ab jis insaan ko appne bachpan me appni goad m khilaya ho appna doodh pilaya ho uske baad suddenly kuch incident ya kuch matter ki wajah se usse appse dur hona pada or jab wo ek handsome,strong personality jesa ho gaya ho tab app usse mile do definitely appki ki feelings bahar aa jati h bahle app kitne bhi koshish kare usse rokne ki per bahar aa hi Jata h wahi haal purvi ka tha usske baad dono ne baat karte karte thode misunderstanding dur kiye per matter bohot bada h jis wajah se bhavna ko veer ko chood k jana pada ab kya h ye to agge hi pata chalega or last me Kaera ka msg lagta h appni kaera madam bechain ho rahi h veer se milne k liye ab kya h or kyu h yeto next update m pata chalega tabtak waiting Werewolf bhai...
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Overall fabulous update... Pranjal ka gandapa din be badta ja rha he, lgta he apna Kalyan karvake he dum lega... Karunesh ka charecter kuch samajh nhi aya bhi... Veer se uski khunnas/ dushmani samajh nhi abhi tk... Kuch to locha he, Thoda alag sa
Beherhal tejal apne investigation me Satabdi express ke mafik badti ja rhi he... Dekhna dilchusp hoga ki bhawan our tejal dono me se pehle koun veer se mulakat kr pata he... We know vo part kafi intresting n emotional hoga... Tejal ka to pta nhi but bhawna apne ander bahut se Raaz n sawal chipaye hue he... Vo khud hi ek misterious person he... I think vo jo Raaz chpaye bethe he vo us unknown person se bhi shocking honge jiske ke ander veer ke mafik system moujud he
Swal bahut he, etne ki vkt kam pdh jaye, better yhi he ki sab vkt ke sath samne ate jaye... Jaisa atmosphere abhi bna hua he usse lagta he age ane vale updates me bhi bahut se unsuljhe swalo dekhne ko milnege... Beherhal dekhna dilchusp hoga ki Veer n kaira ki mulakat kaisi rehegi n usse bhi intresting vo pal rehega jab suhana our veer ki mulakat hogi... Ab tk kahani shandar chal rhi he... Bs kahani me agar mujhe kahi Kami lg rhi he to vo he Niharika ke scane... Samajh nhi aa rha ki usko Etni screen time me importance kyo mil rhi he ? Ek bhi vajah abhi tk samajh me nhi ki usko Etna jyada role diya jaye... Sayad use Kaira n soniya se bhi jyada screen time mil chuka he... Agar uski es kahani me koi khass role he to please use describe kro taki Niharika ke scane boring na lge... Mene es kahani ki kisi part ko skeep nhi kiya sivaye Niharika ke
We know that ju are something lost...god se prey krte he ju usse jald se jld ubhro... Intezar rehega NXT update ka
Adbhut akalpaniya update dil ko 6u gaya yeh update ka purvi vala portion....!
Aage lagta hein rulayega tu pagle...!
Keep Writing....!
batane ki jaroorat nahi hai bro...pehle pariwaar phir kahani...kyunki kahani to kabhi bhi likhi ja sakti hai ......isiliye kehta hoon pehle pariwaar phir kahani.........
बहुत ही शानदार लाजवाब अपडेट भाई
भावनाओं से ओतप्रोत एक्शन रोमांस का तड़का
मजा आ गया भाई
Fabulous outstanding excellent quality update brother
Ye suman ne to full alg hi roop dikhaya hey usne
Ye do chu..... Kabhi nhi sudhrenge, ab Unki vat to lagana to padega ab dekhna padega veer kya krta hey unka.
Aur purvi Ko to वीर Ne apne tarf तो kr hi liya hey emotional blackmail krke massi, Ko
werewolf bhai.....niharika jaisi aurton ke sath yahi hona chahye .....jo dusron ko ghulaam samajhti hain....wahin prinjal pata nahi kaun si chaal chalne wala hai....veer ne Jab purvi ko check kiya to paaya ki wo kitni emotional ho jaati hai.aur apno par dil khol kar pyar lutaati hai......dekhte hain aage kya hota hai.....beautiful update......
Awesome update
Ok bro we will wait....try to give asap...whenever the update will be ready...wtw...have a nice journey....
Ohh shayad asthi visarjan ke liye achcha hai no problem enjoy your trip
Wating new update
Yeh Niharika tow apne rutbe apme paise or apni mardo se nafrat ki wajah se neeche hi nahi aa rahi ab Veer ae bas nahinchala tow Suman ko wargalane koshish ki lekin use nahi pata saari duniya ko warglaya jaa sakta h lekin suman ko nahi
Suman n kuch alag hi autar dikha dia jise dekh ker Niharika ki hawa tight ho gayi or Veer shock ho gaya ki yeh kon se Suman h wahi uski bholi bhali auman ya ya koyi or
Niharika n tow soch bhi nahi hoga ki Suman uske saath aisa bhi ker sakti h
Idher hamare chutia Pranjal wakeel sahab k saath alag hi plan banane m lage huwe h dekhte h inka plan kamyab hota h ya iss baar bhi muh ki khaani padti h
Purvi ji or Veer ki mulaqat ho gayi Veer n dekhte h Purvi ji saari history mil gayi Purvi ji ki apne bhaneje se milte hi favorability badhti hi jaa rahi h baherhal dekhte h kab milega Veer apni Maa or Bahen se or Kaera se mulaqat m kia hota h
Bahot khoob shaandaar
Lajawab update bhai
Waiting for next update bhaiya ji
Sir update soon please
Eagerly Waiting for the next update
Werewolf मित्र..
जीवन चलने का नाम
चलते रहो सुबह-ओ-शाम
के रस्ता कट जाएगा मितरा
के बादल छट जाएगा मितरा
के दुःख से झुकना ना मितरा
के एक पल रुकना ना मितरा
ये जीवन चक्र से हम सभी को गुजरना होता है...
ध्यान रखिए
Bhai update aaj aa jayega kya
Waiting bro
Waiting
Intezaar rahega bhai
Waiting for update bhai
Update ?
??
Waiting Bhai
Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
Good one keep going
Weldon bro
Intro acha hy age phar k umed hay k or bhi acha lgy ga kunk baqi k doston k commints bhi zabardast he
SUPERB AWESOME FANTASTIC LOVELY AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI
SHAANDAAR MIND BLOWING EXCELLENT HOT AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI
Awesome update
JABARDUST EXCELLENT MARVELOUS MIND BLOWING FANTASTIC LOVELY AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI
Updt kab aayega bhai
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Waiting for the next update bro
Waiting for next update bhai
Fabulous update bhai
Intezaar rahega Werewolf bhai....
Jab free ho tab de Dena
सभी मित्रों को धन त्रयोदशी के पावन पर्व पर मंगल बधाईयाँ 
Early waiting for Megha update
Waitimg up bro
waiting for update bro
Awesome update bhai
Nice update bhai
Ok sirji
Nice update bhai
Waiting bro
Waiting
Supper hot and fantastic story janab .
Waiting
I know when update will come I will say der aaye durust aaye bilkul mast aaye.
सभी पाठकों को दीपावली की हार्दिक शुभकामनाएं
Waiting
Werewolf Bhai update kab aayega
Waiting bhai
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Yaani kal ki date me
Waiting bro
ha to wo kal hi hua date wise 12bje se phle do tb n............... Werewolf
Hamko notification jarur bhijwaiyega Wolfie bro apke yantra se
Werewold bhai Kaera ka sex kab dekhne ko milega story mein please btao
Or half an hour for updade
Bro kitni der lagegi orr??
Waiting
bhai update dedo
Inteha ho gyi intezaar ki....
Waiting
daldo aise hi bina edit ke
Ding funeral Rajat tho gaya what's next abUpdate - 115 ~ Turn the tides (1)
Ab tak...
Purvi ne Veer ke maathe ko pyaar se choom liya.
Veer ka mobile agle hi pal vibrate hua aur screen par message saaf saaf usse dikhayi de raha tha.
'10 minutes are left for 7.'
Message tha...
Kaera ka!
'Shitttttttttt!!!!'
Ab aage...
Darr! Ek aisi anubhooti hai jis se insaan aksar bachne ki koshish karta hai. Khud ko vipreet paristhitiyo me bhi nidar dikhaane ka prayaas karta hai.
Par Veer filhaal chaah ke bhi apne upar mandra rahe bhay se khud ko nikaal nahi paa raha tha.
Kyu? Kyuki woh 20 minute late ho chuka tha. Shaam ke 7 baje Kaera ne milne ke liye usse bulaaya tha. Aur yaha 7:20 ho rahe the par Veer traffic ko haraane me nakaam tha. Mumbai ke traffic ke aage toh almighty system aur Pari ne bhi haath khade kar diye the apne. Aur ye hone wali meeting ka samay aur lamba khichta jaa raha tha.
Kaun thi Kaera? Ek multi-talented business lady jisne na keval apne akele ki dum pe poori company ki kaaya-palat kar ke rakh dii balki, anya businesses ko upar uthaane me bhi usse mahaarat haasil thi.
Woh ladki, jiska baap Kishor poore Bharat aur baahri desho me ek jaani maani shaksiyat tha. Uska rutba, uthna baithna, paisa, pehchaan, sab kuch hi alag starr pe tha. Ek aam aadmi jo jeevan me sapne dekhta tha, Kishor jesa vyakti usse roz-marra ki zindagi me jee raha tha. Koi tulna hi nahi!
Fir aisi hassti ki beti Kaera ko kese ignore kar sakta tha Veer? Saath hi akhir woh uski pehli intimate partner bhi toh thi. Veer ke andar naturally hi Kaera ko protect karne ki bhavnaaye aa jaati thi. Fir uski baat nakaarna toh dur ki baat thi.
Jese tese 7 baj ke 23 minute par woh Kaera ke ghar pohucha aur pohuchte hi uski aankhein surprise ke maare fel gayi.
[Itna bada bunglow?? Ab isse bunglow kahe ya building Master? There are more than 6 floors! Let me count...! E-Ehhh!? Freaking 8 floors!? What the hell? What is going on? ]
Pari akeli nahi thi. Veer bhi sehmat tha. 8 floor ka ghar? 8 floor ka ghar kaun banwata hai bhai?Ghar tha ya building? Bhala kitne log reh rahe the isme?
Woh abhi car se utra hi tha ki itne me usse saamne hi ek khubsoorat blonde lady dikhaayi dii.
'Check!'
*Ding*
[Name : Julia
Age : 31
Bio : Julia! Ek Russian maid! Pichle 5 saalo se Kaera ke liye kaam karti aa rahi hai. Pehle se hi Julia ke purvaj bade gharano ke servants rahe hai. Aur ye kaam unke khoon me hai. Kaera jab Moscow gayi thi Kishor ke sang toh Kishor ne khud Julia ko Kaera ke liye hire kiya tha. Ek beautiful, well-behaved, meticulous, aur amicable personality waali lady hai. Kaera ke prati poori tarah se loyal hai. Aur khud ki zyada koi icchaaye nahi rakhti.
Favourability : 39
Relationship : Familiar.]
Status padhte hi Veer taajub me reh gaya. Isliye nahi ki status koi hosh udaa dene wala tha. Balki isliye kyuki favourability aur relationship usse chakkar me daal rahe the.
'Wait! Ye favourability 39? Aur Pari? Ye relationship Familiar kyu show kar raha hai? Mein toh iss se mila tak nahi hu. Ye pehli hi baar-'
[Master~ Shayad Kaera ne aapki baatein Julia se share kii hai. Aur isliye uske mann me kuch favourable impression hai aapke prati. Yahi conclusion ho sakta hai.]
'I see! So she has heard about me!'
[Seems like it!]
Veer aage badha aur jese hi Julia ki nigaahein uss par gayi, uski aankho me ek chamak sii aa gayi.
Julia (smiles) : Young Master Veer?
Usne confirm karte hue pucha. Par Veer stabdh hote hue usse dekha.
'E-Ehhhh!??? Y-Young Master? Young Master who??? Wait! Usne mujhe hi bulaaya na Pari?'
[Hehehe~ Yes! Young Master Veer! ]
Julia ke hontho par poore samay smile saji hui thi. Aur Veer ka reaction dekh woh na keval ye samajh gayi ki yahi Veer tha balki uska reaction dekh woh mann hi mann muskura bhi uthi.
Veer : That...! About parking!?
Julia : Don't worry Young Master! Please! Pass the keys to me. Servants will do their job.
Usne ahista se kaha toh Veer ne gaadi ki chaavi usse saup dii. Aur agle hi pal wahi kuch duri pe khada ek ladka daudte hue uniform pehne aaya aur Julia ke haatho se car ki key lekar car park karne chala gaya.
[The life of debauchery, Master! The life of debauchery! ]
'Yeah! Yeah!'
Julia (smiles) : Please! Follow me! Young Miss is waiting for you for quite a long time!
Usne Veer ko jataate hue kaha. Baat sach thi. Kaera Veer ke liye 20 minute ke upar se baith ke intezaar kar rahi thi. Kaha uske liye log ghanto tak intezaar kar lete the par yaha woh Veer ke liye intezaar kar rahi thi.
Veer jese hi Julia ke sang andar enter kiya usse na jaane kya kya dekhne ko mila. Entrance pe hi 4 guards the. Aur woh bhi aise wese nahi. Ladne me saksham guards. Veer ne unke stats dekh ye pata kiya tha.
Ground floor pe jo hall tha usse dekhte hi uske hosh udd gaye. Itna vishaal jhoomar ceiling se latak raha tha ki uski keemat ka anumaan bhi karodo me hi lagaya jaa sakta tha.
Lift me ghuste hi Veer ki nazar buttons par gayi,
Veer : There's even basement?
Julia : Yes Young Master! It's for parking and emergency generators.
Veer : Umm! Y-You can drop the honorifics! Just call me Veer!
Veer ne kaha. Baar baar young master sunn'ne me usse thoda ajeeb lag raha tha isliye usne Julia ko apne naam se hi pukaarne ke liye kaha.
Julia : It's my own wish to call you like that Young Master. Please! Allow me to do so!
Veer : Th-That's...! *sigh* Fine!
Haar maante hue Veer ko maan'na pada. Julia ki khwaaish hi yahi thi. Toh ab bhala woh kese inkaar kar sakta tha?
Lift me ek madhur sangeet bajta raha aur unki lift jald hi 1st floor par aake ruki.
Veer : I-Is she mad?
Julia (smiles) : Young Master should see for himself!
'Fuckkkkkkk!!!'
[Lagta hai Kaera waqai gussa hai. Wait! Iska matlab woh emotions feel kar paa rahi hai? Hahaha! That's good master~]
Julia ke response par Veer kuch na kaha.
Chalte chalte usse bas mehngi se mehngi cheeze hi nazar aati rahi. Aur Julia usse baaki details se fill kar rahi thi.
Julia : This whole floor belongs to Miss. Young Master! She don't like to travel in lifts. That's why, her floor is right above the ground floor.
Veer : I see!
Julia : Second floor belongs to her Father! The owner of this house. A very respectable person.
Veer : And let me guess, third one belongs to Karan, right?
Julia (smiles) : That is correct!
Veer : What about the fourth one?
Julia : It has a huge gym!
Veer : Fifth?
Julia : Fifth includes the huge kitchen. This is where renowned chefs makes delicious and tempting dishes for Miss and the others.
Julia ke jawaab par Veer ki bolti hi band ho gayi.
Veer : S-Sixth?
Julia (smiles) : Sixth floor contains the Mart. Shopping Mart. It has everything there. From fresh vegetables to staples, grains and other daily needs.
'Holyyyy fuckkkkk!!!'
[Y-Ye ghar hai ya society Master?]
Bechari Pari bhi baukhla gayi thi ab toh.
Veer : Seventh?
Julia : Seventh is where servants like us resides Young Master.
Veer : And eighth?
Julia : It has a table tennis, a movie theatre, a mini hall for party and some other games.
Veer : Don't tell me there's something on the terrace too!
Julia (smiles) : Ohh of course! A swimming pool for the view. Isn't it amazing?
Woh Veer ko mazakiya dhang me chidhaate hue boli toh Veer bas haami hi bhar saka.
Ghar tha ki kya tha behanchod? Pehli floor Kaera ke naam, dusri uske baap ke aur teesri uss Karan chutiye ke. Chauthi me poora ka poora gym hi ghused diya tha. Paachvi me langar tha ki kya? Skilled se skilled chef khana banaate the udhar.
Chhatvi? Chhatvi me toh Mart hi khula hua tha. Chefs chhatvi floor se samaan lete aur neeche paachvi floor par khaana banaate aur waapas jaake so jaate jaha unke room saatvi floors par the.
Aur last floor? Saala cinema laga diye the. Table tennis? Games? Aur kuch bacha ho toh woh bhi add kar dete. Terrace pe swimming pool alag.
Ye saare vichaar Veer ke mann me hi chal rahe the.
Aisa nahi tha ki usse ye ayyaashi aur paisa pasand nahi tha. Baat sirf ye thi ki woh ek aam choti thodi rich family se belong karta tha. Aur itni ayyaashi ke liye itne paise befaaltu lagaana? Ye thoda usse ajeeb lagta tha. Karna toh woh bhi chaahta tha just to experience. Lekin antatah uska antar mann yahi kehta tha ki ye paiso ki barbaadi thi. Sadupyog nahi!
Par woh nahi jaanta tha ki jald hi Alpha Instincts uski soch ko kis tarah se badalne waale the.
Julia : Ohh! We are here!
Julia ki awaaz usse punaah hosh me laayi.
Aur andar aate hi usse ek jaana maana chehra nazar aaya. Wahi puraani soorat, wahi puraana andaaz, wahi mijaaz, aur wahi bhaav.
"You are 26 minutes late!"
Wahi parichit awaaz uske kaano me padi. Kitne samay baad woh aaj Kaera se mil raha tha. Veer ne fauran hi apni derri ke liye maafi maangi,
Veer : Really sorry! Mein-
Par uski awaaz halak me hi atak ke reh gayi jab usse aage aate hue Kaera ki haalat nazar aayi,
Kaera ne ek checked pattern ki black n white tube top aur panty pehni hui thi. Aur tube top ke upar hi behad chota ek white crop top tha.
Uska makhmal pait aur nangi twacha saaf saaf dikhayi de rahi thi. Veer ek naujavan tha. Zaahir hai Kaera jaisi haseena ko iss haalat me dekh uske andar ka josh ubaal lena shuru ho gaya tha.
Julia : Ahhh!! M-Miss!? You are still like that? Please! Get changed! How many times I've told you to~
Kaera : Huh? What?
Julia : Young Master has come! How can you!?
Kaera : So? What is it?
Kaera ki samajh me nahi aaya ki Julia uske aise kapdo par itna kyu bhadak rahi thi bhala? Veer hi toh aaya tha. Toh kapdo me kya dikkat thi?
Woh ye nahi samajh paa rahi thi ki Veer ek mard hote hue usse uss haalat me dekh raha tha. Jo ki normal behaviour nahi tha. Aur yahi Julia batlaane ki koshish kar rahi thi.
Par bechaari Kaera!! Kese samajhti itni sii baat bhala? Emotions jo nahi feel kar paati thi. Veer ke saamne sharam kya thi usse pata nahi tha. Aur ye baat Veer ne jese hi realise kii. Uska dil ro utha.
'Kya kuch bhi nahi kar sakta mein Kaera ke liye!? Kya kuch nahi kar sakta? Kab tak iss bechari ko iss qadar dekhta rahunga mein Pari? Kab tak? Ab mujhse aur dekha nahi jaata. I want to do something for her! Koi toh aisa tareeqa hoga jis se-'
Aur jese system ne bhi Veer ke mann ki baat sunn lii, kyuki agle hi shan,
*Ding*
[Mission : Reawaken Kaera.
Time limit : 1 month.
Rewards : ??? Points.
Mission failure penalty :
1) Kaera will never get her emotions back.
2) Losing Kaera.]
Mission padhte hi Veer ki mutthi dridhta me kass gayi. Penalty kya thi? Kaera kabhi bhi apne emotions ko waapas paa nahi sakegi agar mission fail hua toh?
Hargiz nahi! Veer ne khud ke mann me thaana. Woh aisa hargiz nahi hone dega. 1 mahine ke andar usse Kaera ko waapas se pehle jesa karna tha. Par sawaal tha.
Kaise?
Julia : Young Miss Please! Come with me and get changed.
Julia jabardasti usse ghaseet ke andar leke gayi aur usse taiyaar kar ke baahar laayi.
Kaera : Have a seat! Veer!
Iss baar woh kaali dress me thi. Usne Veer ko dekha aur ek tanj kassa,
Kaera : Tum Las Vegas gaye the!
Veer : Well! Yes!
Kaera : Kyu?
Veer : Kuch kaam th-
Kaera : Suhana ke saath gaye the jaha tumhari mulaqaat Ava se hui.
Uske tapaak se bolne par Veer hairat me reh gaya. Bhala Kaera ko iski khabar kese lagi?
Veer : Hmm!
Kaera : Business related work tha. Right?
Veer : Right!
Kaera : Kya seekha waha? One week se bhi zyada derr tak ruke the tum waha. So? What have you learnt?
Veer : Business ko aage kese badhaaya jaaye. I'm thinking of investing.
Kaera : Itne dino tak bas yahi seekha?
Veer : Y-Yeah! Kinda...!
Kaera : Toh Suhana hospital me kyu hai?
Ye sawal sunte hi Veer samajh gaya tha ki Kaera ka information collect karne ka connection kitna strong tha. Aur woh bas jaan boojh ke uss se ye sawaal kar rahi thi. Pata toh usse pehle se hi sab tha.
Veer : Why waste time? When you know everything!
Kaera (frowns) : You should let me know where you are going!
Veer : And why?
Kaera : Because...!
Aur iss baar woh maun reh gayi. Veer usse ye sab kyu bataaye ki woh kaha jaa raha hai, kya kar raha hai, kis se mil raha hai!?
Kaera hoti kaun thi uss se ye sab jaan'ne waali? Yahi baat woh Kaera ke muh se sunn'na chaahta tha. Par Kaera maun reh gayi. Kese bataati? Veer ke prati uski feelings andar toh thi par zubaan par samjhaane ke liye shabd nahi aa rahe the.
Julia : Young Miss! Young Master! Tea is here!
Julia itne me ek serving trolley me chai ke cups lete hue aayi aur unn dono ko dii.
Kaera ki jaha green tea thi toh wahi Veer ki normal milk tea.
Aur chai ki chuski lete lete Kaera fir ek baar usse dekhi,
Kaera : Karan ne bataya tum invest karna chaahte ho. You are thinking of a hotel?
Veer : Hmm!
Kaera : Do you want me to invest?
Veer : Kya ye possible hai?
Kaera (smiles) : Of course! No one can restrict me.
Veer : Toh? Conditions kya rahengi?
Kaera : Mein ek shareholder rahungi. I will invest. In return, mujhe annually 10% chaahiye from whatever will be the maximum earning. Aur dusri condition...!
Veer : !!??
Kaera : You will teach me different things. Lekin iss baar ye agreement official hoga. A signed contract. Do you agree?
Veer : I agree!
Veer ne bina kuch kahe hi haan keh dii. Kyuki khone laayak usme aisa kuch bhi nahi tha.
Kaera : Alright! Pehle decide karo ki kya karna hai. Agar scratch se hotel banana chaahte ho, then look for a place. Warna kisi forfeited hotel ko khareed ko changes kar sakte ho. Decide on that first. And then we'll sign the contract.
Veer ne firse haami bhari aur kuch idhar udhar ki baatein kar woh waha se nikal gaya. Neeche tak usse Julia hi chorrne aayi.
Jab woh waapas Kaera ke floor par gayi toh usne dekha ki uski Miss haath me ek kitaab pakde bade dhyaan se usse padhne me lagi hui thi.
Par kitaab ka naam padh Julia ka ka maan firse maayus ho utha.
Kitaab ka naam tha~
What is friendship?
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Veer udhar se nikal ghar ki orr jaa raha tha jab Ragini ka call aaya aur usne Veer ko kuch samaan laane ki zimmedaari saup dii.
Market me jaa kar jab Veer samaan khareed ke lauta toh ek khubsoorat sii ladki uski orr achanak hi aa dhamki.
Ladki : Sir! Kya aapke paas 2 minute ka samay hai.
Veer : Hmm!
Ladki : Ye aapke liye.
Achanak hi uss ladki ne Veer ko ek card thamaaya,
Ladki : Woh waha Paradise hotel ki taraf se aapko ye lucky pass mila hai.
Veer : Hmm?
Ladki : Actually, hotel harr saal 3 pass banaati hai. For lucky customers. Inhe randomly hi kisi ko bhi diya jaata hai. Jisse mil jaaye. Aap teesre aur akhiri customer hai. Please! Isse accept kariye aur hotel me jaake dikhayega. Woh aapko entry turant de denge.
Veer : Ohhh! Aur fir?
Ladki : Ek kamaal ka night stay Sir! Saath hi lazeez khaana. Entertainment aur full on drinks. Koi limit nahi. Sirf ek night ke liye.
Veer : So no charge?
Ladki : Y-Yes! Free of cost hai sab Sir!
Veer (smiles) : Alright Thank you!
Ladki (smiles) : You are welcome!
Woh ladki palti aur fudakte hue waha se jaane lagi par uski muskaan turant hi hatt ke ek shaitaani muskuraahat me tabdeel ho gayi.
'Mera kaam ho gaya! Sorry boy! Mujhe nahi pata tumhare saath kya hoga. But that's not my problem!'
Woh sochte hue nikal gayi.
Idhar uske jaate hi Veer ke chehre par jo smile thi woh gaayab ho gayi.
Woh toh pehle hi check kar ke baitha hua tha usse. Aur upar se,
*Ding*
[Mission : Turn the tides.
Time Limit : 2 hours.
Rewards : ??? Points.
Mission failure penalty :
1) Losing Nidhi and Juhi
2) 10,000 Points deduction.
Location : Paradise Hotel.]
Mission padhte hi uske daant gusse ke maare aapas me pisne lage.
Losing Nidhi and Juhi? Never!
Aur woh tezz qadmo ke saath Paradise hotel ki orr chal diya. Andar ghuste hi jese hi usne pass dikhaaya, uska fauran hi aadar satkaar ke saath swaagat kiya gaya.
Ye sab kuch, ek dhong tha.
Veer ko khaana peena khilwa ke ek aalishaan room me enter karvaaya gaya. Agar Veer pehle ki tarah bina system ke hota toh aaj pakke se apna muh kaala karwa ke yaha se jaata.
Par ab? Sawaal hi paida nahi hota.
Jald hi uske room me teen khubsoorat ladkiya bhijwaayi gayi. Aur room ki landline par usse call aaya jisme usse enjoy karne ke liye kaha gaya.
Aur dekhte hi dekhte,
Veer ke ird gird ladkiya usse rujhaane me lagi hui thi. Aise handsome naujavan bohut hi kam unke haath lagte the. Aaj toh jese unn teeno ladkiyo ki chaandi ho chuki thi. Paise toh pehle hi unhe de diye gaye the. Woh teeno hi Veer ke sang raate rangeen karne ke liye taiyaar thi.
Yaha tak ki Veer ki shirt bhi ab tak utar chuki thi. Aur unn teen me se do toh uske seene ko choomne bhi lagi. Jagah jagah uski chaathi par lipstick bhari kisses ke nishaan dene par aatur ho gayi.
*Muaaaaahhhhhh*
*Muaaaaahhhhhh*
*Slurrrppppp*
"Mmmmm~"
"Fufu~ Tum kitne handsome ho~ Meri saasein tezz ho rahi hai jaanu! Mehsoos karke dekho na!"
Kehte hue ek ladki ne Veer ka haath pakad apni mast sudol chuchhi par dabwaaya.
"Aaj ki raat hum teeno tumhe woh maza dengi jisse tum saari zindagi bhula nahi paoge baby~"
*Puch*
Dusri uske gaal ko choomte hue boli.
Par Veer khamosh tha. Uske mann me kuch aur hi chal raha tha.
Veer : Tum teeno! Zara idhar hi ruko!
Kehte hue jab woh uth ke jaane laga toh ladkiya naraaz hote hue uska haath pakad usse manaane ki koshish karne lagi.
"Mat jao na Raja~"
"Kidhar jaa rahe ho hume chorr kar? Hum teen hasinaaye tumhare liye hi hai yaha babu~"
"Itna kya sharmaana baby~!? Aao na darling! Hehe~"
Veer : Nothing much! Bas ek gehri saas lene balcony me jaa raha hu. Abhi aata hu.
"P-Par~"
"Accha theek hai! Jaldi jao! Par ab aur na tadpao!"
"Abhi saari sharam utaar denge tumhari fufufu~"
Woh teeno aapas me Veer ke sharmaane par khil-khila kar hassi. Veer muskuraate hue apne kamre ki balcony ke gate ko khola aur baahar gaya.
Usne baahar aate hue balcony ke gate ko ahista se band kiya aur,
*Whooooosssshhhhh*
Uska haath agle hi pal tezz raftaar se badh bagal me latke parde ki orr gaya,
"H-Haaahhh!!?"
Parda hatt'te hi uske andar se ek aadmi saamne dikhaayi pada. Veer ke achanak hamle se uss aadmi ki gaand phat gayi. Ye ladka toh andar tha. Achanak se baahar balcony me kese aa gaya?
"Gwaaakhhhhh~"
Ek mazboot haath apne panje felaate hue fir turant hi uske gale par aake jhapta. Uss aadmi ka saas lena hi mushqil ho gaya. Aisa laga jese ek pinchis ne chote se screw ko jakad liya ho.
Aur kabhi bhi ghoom ke tod marod ke alag kar de. Woh aadmi apne kaanpte hue perro ko roka par koi fayda nahi.
Andhere me uske saamne do laalam laal aankhein uski rooh me jhaakte hue dekh rahi thi.
"Tu khud batayega ya mein dusre dhang se puchu?"
Veer ki shaant par jhakjhor kar rakh dene waali bhayanak awaaz sunn uss aadmi ke perr aur ladkhada gaye. Woh khaali Veer ki pakad se jaan gaya tha ki iss ladke ke saamne uska koi match hi nahi tha.
"B-Bataata hu!", Usne kaapte hue jawaab diya.
Idhar Veer ke mann me alag alag notifications ki dhun lag gayi,
*Ding*
[Basic Enemy Tracker was able to locate the enemy.]
*Ding*
[Basic Enemy Tracker is now deactivated. No more enemies were detected.]
*Ding*
[Map path will close now.]
Parantu, Veer ka dhyaan inn maamuli notifications par tha hi nahi. Uska poora dhyaan toh saamne khade iss chutiye par tha.
"Jaldi bol!!!!" Usne punaah gurraate hue kaha toh woh vyakti aur darr gaya.
"Huuuu~ M-Mujhe maaf kar do! M-Mujhe paise diye gaye hai. M-Mujhe nahi pata woh kaun hai. Usne apna naam galat bataaya tha. P-Par mene chupke se uska asli naam pata kar liya."
*Chataaakkkkkkk*
"Toh bata jaldi!!!!" Veer ne ek laafa usse raseed ke diya toh uss aadmi ka kaan hi jhanna gaya.
"U-Uska naam Rajat hai. M-Mene khud uske purse me rakhi ID me dekha tha. Huuuuu~ M-Mujhe jaane do! Mein haath jodta hu. Perr padta hu."
Naam sunte hi Veer ki aankho me gussa saaf jhalka. Bechaare aadmi ki gaand aur bhi zyada phat gayi. Woh mann hi mann Rajat ko gaaliya dene laga. Ki akhir kis chutiye ke kaam me fass gaya bhala woh? Iss se accha toh ande bech ke paise kama leta roz ki tarah.
"Poori baat bata!!!" Veer fir gurraaya.
Aur majbooran, sehme hue vyakti ne fauran hi poora gud gobar kar diya. Saari baat ugal ke rakh dii.
"W-Woh aadmi! W-Woh aadmi tumhe fassana chaahta hai. Kamre me ek camera laga hai. Woh...! Woh issi hotel me kisi kamre me baith ke sab kuch dekh raha hai. A-Abhi tum yaha aaye ho toh zaroor woh pareshan ho raha hoga. A-Abhi uska phone aayega jese hi tum wapas kamre me jaoge toh."
Apni aankho ko band kar Veer ne apna gussa shaant karna chaaha! Kya hi plan banaaya tha iss Rajat ke bacche ne.
"Hmm! Aur fir? Fir kya karega?"
"F-Fir? M-Mujhe nahi pata! Par... Par camera lagaya hai toh zaroor recording...! M-Mera koi dosh nahi hai. M-Mujhe maaf kardoooo~"
Veer ka maatha aur bhi zyada thanak gaya, gusse me usne apni aankhein fir band kari,
[Master~ Be calm! Focus on Sigma instincts. Please~]
Pari ki baat maan antatah usne wahi kiya. Jis naam ki usse umeed thi wahi naam saamne aaya. Rajat! Chalo! Accha hi tha. Wese bhi Veer uske hi peeche laga hua tha. Aur yaha Rajat ne khud ko thaal me paros ke Veer ke saamne apne aap ko rakh diya tha.
Ab Veer annya ka apmaan kare? Aisa toh ho nahi sakta tha? Woh acchi tarah se Rajat ko kaccha chabaane waala tha.
Las Vegas me Nightwalker, Pitcher jeso se woh bhid ke abhi haal hi me aaya tha. Aur ye ek chutiya Rajat usse dum dene par tula hua tha. Ab jab shaant mann se usne aisa socha toh usse khud par hi hassi aa gayi.
Ek jhaatu! Ek jhaatu usse hilaane ke sapne dekh raha tha aur shadiyantra rach raha tha.
There wasn't any need to restrain himself!
Veer ne apne aap se kaha. Aur uski aankhein firse khuli, par iss baar woh laal nahi thi. Unme itni gehraayi thi ki woh aadmi zyada derr Veer ki aankho me na jhaak saka.
*Swiiiirrrrllllllll*
Parde ki rod se parda fadfad karke nikla aur Veer ne uss aadmi ko parde se poora baandh daala.
"Uuummphhh~!!????"
Uske muh me bhi parda lipta diya Veer ne. Aur agle hi shan,
"Uuuunnnrrrrrmmmphhhhh!!!???"
Uss aadmi ko ek second me apne saamne jese swarg dikhayi de gaya. Kyuki Veer ne usse railing se jo palta diya,
Kamar se bandha woh banda, railing par parde ke zariye latak raha tha. Floor first thi, aur neeche bas kabaad ka dherr.
Haath perr aur muh bhi bandhe hue the. Agar yaha se gira toh haath perr me se kuch na kuch toh tootna hi tha.
Aur ab woh pacchta raha tha. Par ab pachhtaaye kya hott jab chidiya chug gayi khet?
Veer ne Sigma par focus kar apne gusse ko shaant zaroor kiya tha. Par ek cheez uske andar ab bhi barkaraar thi. Aur woh thi,
Ruthlessness!
Jo stronger Alpha Instincts ka nateeja tha. Par ussi ke sang ab ek aur cheez jud gayi thi. Aur woh thi, Sigma Instincts ki,
Calmness!
[That's it Master~ Aapko aise hi karna hai. You don't have to become a hot-headed bull. But a calculated beast!]
*Click*
Balcony ka darwaza khula aur Veer apni wahi saumya muskaan liye andar aaya.
Teeno ladkiya usse dekh firse khush ho gayi. Par unhe kya pata tha ki abhi abhi balcony ke baahar kya hua tha. Agar teeno ne Veer ka woh roop dekha hota toh teeno ki rooh kaanp uthati.
'Iska matlab woh yahi kahi hotel me hai. Pari?'
*Ding*
[Beowulf's blessings has been activated.]
"R-Raja kaha jaa rahe ho?"
Veer muskuraaya aur dheere se bola, "On a funeral!"
*Slam*
Darwaaza khula aur woh baahar nikal gaya.
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