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Update - 117 ~ It's been a while, Sis!
Update - 117 ~ It's been a while, Sis!
Ab tak...
*Ding*
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Aur uske baad Veer ke mann me ek nayi awaaz sunaayi dii,
[Allow me to service you...! Master!!!]
Ab aage...
Kya kuch nahi hua tha kal? Kal raat ki ghatna chaar deewaaro ke andar ghatit hui aur uski khabar bhi kisi ko nahi lagi.
Kyuki dhamaka toh agli subah hone waala tha. Jo ki hua bhi,
"Y-Ye mein kya padh rahi hu??"
Ragini subah subah haatho me akhbaar liye apni phati aankho se headline padh rahi thi. Aur usme saaf saaf likha hua tha,
Mumbai sthit high court me kaam kar rahe jaane maane vakeel Rajat Tiwari Paradise hotel me do ladkiyo ke saath dushkarm karte hue pakde gaye.
Ragini : Y-Ye toh tumhari Ma'am ke woh, Husband hai na? Veer?
Veer jo chai ki chuski ka aanand le raha tha usne haami bharte hue jawaab diya,
Veer : Hmm!
Shweta : Kya aaya hai?
Ragini : Ye dekhiye na! Do ladkiyo ke saath dushkarm karta hua pakda gaya hai Paradise hotel me.
Ragini ne akhbaar thamaate hue Shweta ko diya. Poora ka poora lamba paragraph chhapa hua tha usme. Saath hi kuch pictures bhi dali hui thi. Jisme chehre blurred kar diye gaye the.
Shweta : Chhiii!! Patni se talaak liya toh ye sab karega?
Ragini : Wahi toh! Mujhe toh pehle se hi pata tha ki woh aadmi theek nahi hai. Accha hua tumhari Nidhi ma'am ne talaak le liya Veer uss aadmi ke saath. Warna woh kabhi sukhi nahi reh paati.
Aabha (khuspusaate hue) : Kya saare pati aise hi hote hai?
Uski dheemi sii awaaz sunn, Shweta, Ragini aur Suman teeno ki nazre uss par tik gayi. Aur teeno hi shaant reh gayi. Zaahir hai teeno yaha apne apne patiyo se dur thi. Ek prakaar se unse rishta khatam kar ke baithi hui thi. Aabha ka bhi yahi haal tha.
Veer : Nahi! Aisa nahi hai! Saare ladke aise nahi hote.
Sonali : Haan haan! Bade aaye!! Hmph!
Sonali ne chidhaate hue jeebh dikhaayi aur waapas se apni chai peene lagi.
Bhumika : Par kitni ajeeb baat hai.
Shweta : Kya ajeeb baat hai?
Bhumika : Mom, ye Nidhi ma'am ke husband jo hai woh boht famous lawyer hai. Toh obviously inke kitne connections honge. Uske baad bhi koi inke hotel room me ghus gaya aur matlab pakad hi liya. In fact police bhi direct pakadti toh I'm sure ye Rajat police ko bhi mana leta. Lekin woh aisa kar nahi paaya.
Shweta : Toh?
Bhumika : Toh ye ki, kisi strong party ne usse pakda hai. Maybe koi conspiracy? Koi shadiyantra? Politics? Aapko kya lagta hai?
Shweta : M-Mujhe kese pata hoga bhala?
Suman : Ye sab uske karmo ka nateeja hai. Kyu? Hai na maalik?
Suman Veer ko dekh aankh maarte hue boli. Kya woh jaanti nahi thi ki Rajat ka ye haal kisne karwaaya tha? Kyu Veer kal derr se ghar aaya tha? Veer ke dil me Nidhi ki kya jagah thi? Sab jaanti thi woh!
Veer : Ahem! Bilkul!
Veer ne punaah haami bhari aur woh uth ke khada ho gaya.
Ragini : Arre? Abhi naashta ready ho raha hai. Abhi se kyu uth gaye?
Veer (smiles) : Mujhe ye dene jaana hai. Isliye nikal raha hu.
Ragini : Arre par naashta?
Veer : Wahi kha lunga. Aap chinta mat kariye.
Ragini : P-Par-
Veer : Din me aaunga na bhabhi! Tab khana parosiyega! Chalta hu!
Aur Veer waha se nikal gaya. Ragini udaas mann se apne kaamo me lag gayi. Woh zyada se zyada samay Veer ke saath bitana chaahti thi. Par aisa ho nahi paa raha tha.
'Mere dil ki baatein ye ladka samajhta kyu nahi hai? Jaanti hu ki isse business me dhyaan dena hai. Jaldi aage badhna hai. Par! Par apni bhabhi ko kyu bhul jaata hai ye?'
Woh khud ke vichaaro me leen ho gayi,
'Ek minute! M-Mein bhi toh Veer ki madad kar sakti hu na? Veer zyadatar baahar rehta hai. Aise me agar mein uske kaamo me madad karu toh...! Hume zyada se zyada samay ek dusre ke liye mil payega. R-Right! Mujhe Veer se baat karni hogi.'
"Kya soch rahi ho?"
Woh mann hi mann muskura rahi thi jab peeche se ek achanak awaaz aayi toh woh darr ke maare ucchal gayi,
Ragini : Aahhh!!!??? Ohhh! A-Aap ho!
Shweta : Hmm! Kya soch rahi thi?
Ragini : K-Kuch bhi nahi! Bas ye Veer apna naashta kiye bagerr hi chala gaya. Wahi soch rahi thi.
Shweta : Hmm! Apni sehat par bilkul dhyaan nahi de raha hai. T-Tum chinta mat karo. R-Raat ko mein usse garm doodh ka glass jaake de aaungi aur usse pilwa dungi.
Ragini : O-Ohhh!
Shweta : Tum mere bete ke liye na, woh chane aur badaam bhigo ke rakha karo. Aur subaah diya karo isse. Agar ye dhyaan nahi de raha toh hume hi iski sehat par dhyaan dena padega.
Ragini (smiles) : J-Jii! Wese, Hai toh woh harr taraf se fit. Fufu~
Shweta : Sirf baahri fitness koi fitness nahi hoti Ragini. Andar se bhi insaan ko fit hona chahiye. Nutrients, Vitamins, toh shareer me jaane hi chaahiye. Mein uske liye acchi diet prepare karungi. Apne haatho se.
Ragini (smiles) : Jesa aapko theek lage.
Aur dono hi mahilaaye apne kaamo me vyast ho gayi.
***
Par akhbaar toh sabhi ke ghar aata tha. Aur sabhi khabre padte the. Jaha kuch log iss khabar se khush the toh wahi kuch naraaz bhi.
"Iski maa ki choot behanchod!!!!"
*Thak*
Newspaper ko zorr se zameen par patakte hue ek ladka chillaaya. Subah subah usko akhbaar me kuch aur dekhne ki gunzaaish thi. Laga tha ki jo woh barso se chaah raha tha woh aaj subah dekhne ko milega.
Par aisa na hua. Ulta uska saare bhaanda phoot gaya.
"Madarchod! Ek kaam nahi hota inn lavdo se!!!"
Woh fir se garja. Ye koi aur nahi Pranjal hi toh tha. Usse laga tha ki aaj newspaper ke front page par Veer ki khabar chhapi hogi. Par uska paasa palat chuka tha.
'Kaha galat reh gaya mein? N-Nahi!! Sab kuch toh sahi tha. Y-Ye zaroor! Ye zaroor uss chutiye vakeel ke kaaran hi hua hoga. Bhadve ne mera naam bhi ugal hi diya hoga. Behanchod! Iski maa ki...!! Shit!!! Kya karu?? Dad ko phone!? Nahi! Woh aur bhadkenge.'
Sochte sochte woh idhar se udhar tehelne laga.
'Unhone toh pehle hi mana kiya tha. Unhe call nahi kar sakta. Fir bhi unhe pata toh chal hi jayega. Veer!!! Veeeerrr!!! Veeeerrr!!! Maan'na padega gandu tujhe! Maan'na padega. Tu behanchod harr baar mere bichhaaye gaye jaal se bach ke nikal jaata hai.'
'Pakke se pichle janam me chuuha raha hoga tu. M-Mujhe kuch toh karna hi hoga. Right! Raat ko yaha se nikal jaata hu. Sheher chorr ke kuch din baahar rehta hu. Jab yaha sab shaant ho jayega tab hi return karunga. Hmm! Ye theek hai!'
Aur tabhi usse Karunesh ka bhi call aa gaya. Karunesh ne buri tarah usse lataada aur antatah uski baat maan uske liye reservation karwa ke Pune ki ticket raat ki karwa dii. Kam se kam thode din wahi rahega toh yaha ki musibat se bacha rahega.
***
Nidhi's Apartment.
Morning ~ 8:16 AM
"Dekh lii uski kartoote? Haivaan hai woh aadmi. Haivaan! Mein kab se aapko kehti thi. Par tab aap meri baat sunti nahi thi. Ab dekh liya na aapne?"
Idhar se udhar gusse me chalte hue Shreya ki awaaz Nidhi ke kaano me padi.
Aur Nidhi bechaari!? Woh toh bas aankhein phaade newspaper ko dekh rahi thi. Woh jaanti thi ki Rajat ek behad bura insaan tha. Par Rajat dusri ladkiyo ke saath ye sab karega? Iss baat ka andaaza usse bilkul bhi nahi tha.
*Ding Dong*
Door belll baji aur Nidhi apne khayalaato se baahar aayi.
"Mein dekhti hu!"
Kehte hue Shreya ne darwaza khola. Aur saamne khade vyakti ko dekh uski aankho me chamak aur hontho par muskaan sajj gayi,
Shreya : Veeeeerrrrr???
Veer (smiles) : Andar aane nahi kahogi?
Shreya : Arre! Aao na! Ye bhi koi puchne waali baat hai!?
Veer ke aate hi Nidhi apni jagah se uth darwaaze ke nazdeek aayi. Veer aur uski nigaahein ek dusre se mili. Harr baar yahi hota tha. Itne parichit hone ke baad bhi, jab bhi dono ek dusre se milte the. Dono ke beech ek khamoshi si chha jaati thi.
Shreya ne Veer ko gale se lagaaya aur uska haath pakad usse andar laayi.
Shreya : Ye itna saara samaan? Aur subah subah aaj?
Veer : Mein Vegas gaya tha na toh-
Shreya : Ye mat kehna ki isme ham sab ke liye gifts hai.
Veer : Well! Yes!
Shreya : Ohh God! Thank you so much!!!
Woh uchhalte hue ek baar fir kass ke Veer ke gale lag gayi aur jazbaati hote hue usne,
*Muuuuaaaaahhhhhhh*
Zorr se Veer ka gaal choom liya.
Nidhi (hairat me) : Sh-Shreyaaaa!?
Shreya (blushes) : W-Woh! I was just excited.
Sharmaate hue usne forun hi apna chehra chhupaaya. Khud par itni sharmindagi ho rahi thi abhi usse. Bhavnao me behke usne
Veer ko choom liya tha. Woh ye kese bhool gayi ki Nidhi theek peeche hi khadi thi uske!?
Shreya : Ohh! Tumne news padhi?
Veer : Ma'am ke ex-husband waali? Sure! Sure! Bilkul padhi.
Shreya : Dekha na? Kesa darinda nikla woh. Theek hua uske saath. Ekdum sahi hua. Ab sadta rahega jail me zindagi bhar. Hmph!
Woh turant hi apna gift kholne me lag gayi. Aur Veer chup chaap sofe par baith gaya.
Veer : Juhi kaha hai?
Shreya : So rahi hai woh abhi tak.
Veer : School nahi gayi?
Shreya : Kal uski tabiyat thodi theek nahi thi. Isliye aaj usse nahi bheja.
Veer (frowns) : Kya hua?
Shreya : Kuch nahi! Seasonal change. Aur bas halki fulki khaasi, sardi bukhaar.
Veer : Ohhh!
Shreya : Ruko mein jagaati hu abhi.
Veer : Arre nahi! Rehne dijiye! Sone dijiye usse.
Shreya : Arre raat 8 baje hi so gayi thi. Tab se so rahi hai. Uthaane hi waale the hum usse. Gifts dekh ke khush ho jayegi. Oh my goooddd!!!?? Ye mere liye? Dii look!!! High heels!!! Tumhe size kese pata chala?
Veer (smiles) : Jab yaha rukta tha tab dekha tha. Tab se yaad tha.
Shreya (blushes) : T-Tumhe yaad tha?
Veer : Mm-Hmm!
Shreya : Burberry?? Ohhh myyy goodddd!!! Pagal ho kya tum? Itni mehngi high heels? Wait!!!! Dii ka kya hai fir? Ohhh fuccckkkk!!!
Nidhi : Shreyaaaaaa!!! Ye kya tareeqa hai baat karne ka?
Shreya : Oops! S-Sorry!!! Par dii dekho na!! Versace!!!? Aapka handbag Versace ka hai. Holy shittttt!!!! Tumhari lottery lag gayi kya? Veer?
Veer (smiles) : Gifts lete time mene prices check nahi kiye the. Jo pasand aaye unhe choose kar liya. Suhana ma'am saath me thi. So, unhone kaam asaan karwa diya tha. Warna mein varieties dekh ke hi confused tha.
Suhana ka zikr aate hi Veer ka dhyaan pal bhar ke liye uss khubsoorat aurat ki orr chala gaya.
Nidhi : Ye sab kya hai Veer?
Veer : !!?
Nidhi : Tumhe pata hai tumne kitna kharcha kiya hai?
Shreya : Umm! Dii! Woh itne pyaar se laaya hai. How can you-? Aap uske sentiments ko thes pohucha rahi ho. Mujhe dekhne do kitne ke hai ye. Aapko aisa nahi bolna chahiye. Ye toh sirf-!!!???????? Hein??? What the fucccckkkkk??? 30 hazaar ka bag???? Veeeerrrr??
Shreya jo ab tak Veer ke support me thi. Price dekhte hi uski haalat kharaab ho gayi.
Shreya : V-Veer?? This is too much! Upar se meri sandals?? Ohhh goddd!!! 28 thousand??? Kya kar rahe ho tum??? Dii sahi hai. Itne mehnge gifts ki kya zaroorat thi? Meri monthly pay bhi itni nahi hai.
Veer ne koi jawaab nahi diya bas halke se muskuraaya toh Shreya kuch bhaanp gayi.
Shreya : I'm- I'm sorry! Really! Mujhe pehle kabhi kisi ne itni mehngi gift nahi dii. Isliye mein...! Par ab tum itne pyaar se laaye ho toh mein kese mana kar sakti hu!? Hehe~
Nidhi : Shreya tum-!!?
Shreya : Agar mein nahi lungi toh usse bura lagega! Isliye mein toh ye le rahi hu. And Thank you so much Veer!
Veer (smiles) : Welcome!
Shreya jaanti thi ki Veer ko asli khushi tab hi milegi jab woh gift ko accept karegi aur wahi hua bhi. Veer sabke liye ye prem se laaya tha. Isse dhutkaarna keval Veer ke dil ko ahaat pohuchaane jesa tha.
Woh gift ko khushi khushi lete hue andar gayi aur Juhi ko jagaane lagi. Toh idhar sofe par hi Nidhi aur Veer agal bagal baithe gaye.
Veer : Khabar padhi na aapne?
Nidhi : Mmm~
Veer : ....
Nidhi : Uss vyakti se aur umeed bhi kya kii jaa sakti hai?
Veer : Toh...
Nidhi : Woh vyakti mere jeevan me koi sthaan nahi rakhta. Jo bhi hoye uske saath. Mujhe kya farq padta hai.
Veer : Aur ab aap...
Nidhi : ??
Veer (smiles) : Nishchint ho. Na hi woh ab aapko taqleef de sakta hai aur na hi aapke khilaaf koi qadam utha sakta hai.
Nidhi : Hmm!
Veer : Dhruv kaha hai?
Nidhi : Andar hai! So raha hai.
Veer : Ohh!
Nidhi : Kya zaroorat thi?
Veer : Kiski?
Nidhi : Itne mehnge gifts laane ki?
Veer : Kabhi toh kuch diya nahi. Kam se kam inhe toh accept kariye.
Nidhi : Bag aur sandals kam daam ki bhi toh le sakte the na? Ya kuch chota mota bhi toh laa sakte the na?
Veer Nidhi ki daant sunn bas muh ferr liya. Aur iss baar, Nidhi ko ek taqleef hui. Aisa laga jese dil me kisi ne sui chubhoyi ho. Ek toh Veer itne pyaar se laaya tha gifts, aur upar se woh usse hi suna rahi thi. Ye dhyaan me aate hi woh andar glaani se bhar gayi.
Nidhi : M-Mein...! Maaf karna! Mein kuch zyada keh gayi.
Veer (smiles) : Koi baat nahi! Aapka haq hai!
Sunte hi Nidhi ke gaalo ka tapmaan badh gaya.
Nidhi (blushes) : O-Ok!
Nidhi ko tabhi baithe baithe ek baat yaad aayi. Hey bhagwaan! Woh ye kese bhul sakti thi? Veer ki sagi behan uske ghar aayi thi kal hi. Kya kare woh? Kya Veer ko bata de? Par Tejal ne toh mana kiya tha. Toh ab?
Ye kaha phass gayi thi woh!?
"Maaaaamuuuu!!!"
Aur Juhi ki cheh-chahaati awaaz ne uski soch ko bhang kar diya. Woh koodati phaandti daudate hue aayi aur Veer ki goad me baith gayi.
Veer (smiles) : Kesi hai Juhi?
Juhi : Juhi ekdum mast hai!!! *sniff*
Nidhi : Ye dekho! Naak beh rahi hai. Aur khud ko mohtarma mast bata rahi hai.
Veer : Mein tumhaare liye chocolates laaya hu Juhi!
Juhi : Sacchi???
Veer : Mucchii!
Juhi : Yaaaayyyy!!! Do jaldi!! Jaldi dooo!!!
Aur Veer ne jab ek behad bada packet thamaaya toh Juhi toh kya Nidhi bhi hairaan reh gayi.
Nidhi : I-Itni saari chocolates? Veer ye tum-
Veer (smiles) : Roz ek hi diya kariye. Uss se zyada nahi!
Nidhi : Jese ki woh meri baat maanegi.
Veer : Mein samjha dunga.
Veer Juhi ko samjhaane laga toh dono ko iss tarah dekh Nidhi kahi kho sii gayi. Veer bilkul aisa tha jese ek pita ko hona chahiye apne baccho ke prati.
Shreya andar ke andar hi washroom me ghus gayi thi toh baahar ab sirf wahi teeno the.
Jab jaane ka samay hua toh Veer ne Nidhi ko dekha,
Nidhi : Kya hua?
Veer (smiles) : Aap boht sundar lag rahi ho.
Nidhi : Ohh accha? Subah subah uth ke kaun sa insaan sundar dikhta hai bhala?
Veer : Aap!
Uske ek taq jawaab se Nidhi bechaari jhep sii gayi,
Nidhi (blushes) : H-Huhhh?? M-Makkhan lagaane ki zaroorat nahi hai. B-Bolo? Kya chahiye? Sessionals me A+ chahiye? Ya kuch aur?
Veer (smiles) : Mene genuinely kaha hai. Kisi favour ke liye nahi!
Nidhi (blushes) : Tum-!!!
Veer (sighs) : Anyways! Chalta hu! Fir milenge!
Veer uth ke waha se jese hi jaane laga toh Nidhi bhi uth ke aayi,
Nidhi : R-Ruko!!
Veer : Hmm?
Nidhi : Bina khaaye piye kese jaa rahe ho? Idhar aao! Chup chaap baitho idhar. Mein fatafat kuch prepare karti hu. Khaa ke jaana!
Veer : Par iski koi-
Nidhi : Shut up! And sit down!
Woh order deke andar kitchen me chali gayi. Par iske baad, dono hi Veer aur Nidhi ke hontho par ek santushti bhari muskaan thi.
***
System level up ho chuka tha. Pari ka level badh chuka tha. Jaha ek taraf Pari ki nayi personality aayi thi toh wahi dusri taraf Pari ki purani cutesy wali personality jaa chuki thi.
Par jo khaas baat thi abhi, woh thi level up hone ke baad aane waale faayde.
Sabse pehla fayda jo mila tha Veer ko woh tha Translator function ke upgrade hone ka. Veer ab koi bhi bhaasha samajh sakta tha aur bol bhi sakta tha. Uske liye ab language barrier jesi cheez khatam ho chuki thi.
Dusra fayda mila tha system ke paas World knowledge aane ka. Zaahir hai ki agar hume aaj kuch bhi cheez ki jankaari praapt karni hoti hai toh hum Google, internet, inka hi sahaara lete hai. Inke hi paas poore vishv ka knowledge hota hai.
Parantu ab, Veer ko ye karne ki bhi zaroorat nahi thi. Wahi knowledge system ke paas tha ab. Agar Veer ko kuch internet pe dhundhna hai toh woh seedhe system se hi puch sakta hai.
Yadi iska uttar hamaari prithvi me kahi bhi paaya jaata hai. Toh system Veer ko jawaab dene me saksham rahega.
Aur akhiri aur sabse bada faayda. Isse paake toh Veer jese jannat me tha.
Limit eradicate ho chuki thi. Veer jo apne cards ko slot me lagaane ke baad 24 ghante intezaar karta tha, woh intezaar ab khatam ho chuka tha.
Woh ab asaani se alag alag cards ko jab chaahe tab switch kar sakta tha. Ek deadly benefit tha ye.
Aur isliye woh ab thoda calm tha. Bilkul Pari ki new personality ki tarah.
***
Evening ~ 7:27 PM
Shaam ka samay ho raha tha aur halka halka andhera bhi chhaa chuka tha. Veer ke puraane ghar me sabhi apne apne kaamo me vyast the.
Jab baahar ho rahe ek shor ne unka dhyaan kheecha.
"Baahar niklo!!! Kaha reh gaye sab ke sab? Kaayaro ki tarah chhupke baith gaye kya? Niklo baahar!!!"
Baahar khade jo guards the woh dono bhi stabdh reh gaye.
Ek anjaan ladki aake na jaane kya kya bake jaa rahi thi.
Guard : Ayye ladki! Paagal hai kya? Chal jaa yaha se.
"Arre jao jao! Mere raaste me mat aana warna anjaam accha nahi hoyega."
Guard : Teri toh-! Dhamkaati hai? Kaun hai tu? Kya kaam hai tujhe?
"Hmph~ Oye kaayaro! Haath me chuudiya pehen rakhi hai kya? Baahar niklo!"
Jab ladki ne fir bhi na suni, toh dono hi guards uth ke uske paas aaye par iss se pehle ki woh usse pakad paate, ghar ka darwaaza khula aur andar se ghar ke kayi saare sadasya baahar nikal ke aa gaye.
"Y-Ye kya shor hai?"
Manorath jo apni wheelchair par baithe araam kar rahe the, unhe Kavya lete hue baahar aayi.
Sumitra Arohi bhi baahar aa chuki thi. Saath hi Brijesh aur Karunesh bhi. Vivek ghar par tha nahi. Woh apni company me hi laga hua tha abhi.
Manorath : Kaun hai ye ladki?
Guard : Sarkaar! Kab se isko samjha rahe hai par samajhne ka naam nahi le rahi. Badtameezi karte jaa rahi hai. Aap kahe toh-
Manorath : Mujhe baat karne do! Kya hua beta? Kyu ghar ke saamne chillaa rahi ho? Aur kaun ho tum?
Ladki muskuraayi aur fir hasste hue boli,
"Kamaal hai. Aap apni poti ko hi nahi pehchaane? Hahahaha!"
Beshaq, ye ladki koi aur nahi Tejal hi thi.
Manorath : Meri poti?
Tejal : Haan aapki poti! Mein Tejal Singh! Bhavna Singh ki eklauti beti! Aur Veer ki badi behan!
*Boom*
Ek bada sa bomb unn sab ke sarr jese aake phata. Ye ladki kya badbadaaye jaa rahi thi?
Brijesh ki aankhein phati hui thi. Toh wahi Karunesh hairaan tha. Sumitra chakit aur Arohi, Kavya dono hi confused.
Manorath : Bhavna ki beti?
'Bhavna? Ye tumhari beti hai? Kaise?' Manorath ek chinta me doob gaye.
Tejal ne ungli dikhaate hue unn sabhi ko gusse se dekha aur woh fir chillaayi,
Tejal : Sharam nahi aayi tum logo ko? Itni ghatiya aur ghinoni harqat karte hue?
Brijesh : Ye kya badbadaye jaa rahi hai ladki?
Tejal : Mere bhai Veer ko issi ghar se dhakke maar ke nikaala gaya tha na? Bolo? Hai na?
*Silence*
Manorath : Mujhe ek baat batao beta. Kya tumhari Maa, Bhavna? Kya unhone dusri shadi kii thi?
Tejal : Hmph! Kaash kii hoti. Toh kam se kam ek accha baap toh mil jaata.
Tejal ke iss hamle se waha khade sab ke hosh udd gaye. Swayam Brijesh ke bhi. Kyuki ye baat Tejal ne usse hi dekh ke kahi thi. Woh jese jaan gayi thi ki yahi uska baap hai.
Par yaha ab sab ulta samajh rahe the.
'Huh? Bhavna ne dusri shaadi nahi kii? Toh ye ladki? Ohhh! Accha! Hmm! Toh ye baat hai! Ye goad lii hui bacchi hai. Aur isse bhi ye baat shayad nahi pata hai.'
Manorath ne mann me soch dheere se Brijesh aur Karunesh ke kaano me ye baat daali. Aur unhe bhi maajra samajh aaya.
Manorath : Tumhara maqsad kya hai beta?
Tejal : Mera maqsad!? Haha! Woh jaan'ne ke liye aap qualified nahi ho.
Karunesh : Tameez se baat kar ladki!!! Kya tu jaanti nahi ki bado se kese baat kii jaati hai? Kya yahi sanskaar diye hai tumhari Maa ne?
Tejal : Hmph! Woh sanskaar mein unhe hi dikhati hu jo uske yogya hota hai. Par tum sab...! Hmph!
Woh unhe neecha dikhaate hue muskuraayi,
Karunesh (chillaate hue) : Badtameez!!!!!
Kavya : Aisa nahi hai....!!!!
Kavya ki awaaz sunke Tejal shaant ho gayi. Usse dhyaan aaya ki Nidhi ne Arohi aur Kavya. Ye do naam liye the.
Tejal : Kya naam hai tumhara?
Kavya : Kavya! Aur aap jesa soch rahi hai wesa nahi hai. Haan past me mene bhi unke saath accha behave nahi kiya. But mene ye hamesha regret kiya hai. Aur mein aur Arohi dii hum dono hi Veer bhaiya ko dil se pyaar karte hai. Hum unka bura kabhi nahi chaahenge.
Kavya ke desperate attempt me Arohi bhi shamil ho gayi.
Arohi : Kavya sahi keh rahi hai. Didi! A-Aap hume galat samajh rahi hai.
Tejal ne ek smile dii aur woh aage badhi aur achanak hi usne Kavya ko apne gale se laga liya,
Kavya : Huhhh??
Tejal (smiles) : Thank you! Thank you for being there with him. Mein tumhari badi behan hu. You know? Aaj mujhe do do choti behne mil gayi.
Kavya : M-Mein-
Tejal : Ab ye batao! Woh Pranjal tumhara bhai hai na?
Kavya : Hmm!
Tejal : Kaha hai woh?
Kavya : U-Unhe...!
Karunesh : Kavyaaaaa!!!!
Aur apne pita ki awaaz sunn, Kavya darr ke maare chup ho gayi.
Arohi : Usse ghar se baahar nikaal diya gaya hai.
Karunesh : Arohiii!??
Tejal (surprised) : Hmm? Kyu bhala?
Arohi : Kyuki Dada jii ko usne mandir ki seedhiyo se girwaaya tha. Jaydaad ke liye. Veer ka naam hataane ke liye.
Arohi ke bol na sirf Tejal ko stabdh kiye balki Karunesh samet uska khud ka parivaar bhi Arohi ke be-jhijak haazir jawaabi sunn ke baukhlaya hua tha. Saari andar ki pol woh yu kholti jaa rahi thi. Jaante toh sabhi the ye baat par koi iss baat par baat nahi uthata tha. Par Arohi ne aaj nidar hoke sab bebak bol diya.
Tejal : Ohh? Toh ab kaha hai woh?
Arohi : Amrit Niwaas!
Uske muh se abhi nikla hi tha ki peeche khade Karunesh ke hosh udd gaye. Ye information toh sirf woh jaanta tha. Woh hi apne bete ko ab tak bachaaya hua tha. Fir uski badi ladki ko ye baat kese pata lag gayi?
Woh chaah ke bhi Arohi ko iss samay kuch nahi keh sakta tha.
Manorath : Amrit Niwaas? Pranjal waha kya kar raha hai? Karunesh? Mujhe jawaab chahiye!
Karunesh : Mujhe khud nahi pata Papa jii! Sh-Shayad usne uss ghar ki chaavi jaane se pehle leli. Warna-
Manorath ne bas ek baar usse ghoor ke dekha aur fir Tejal ki orr usne nigaah kari,
Manorath : Beta tum-
Tejal : Mujhe jo jaan'na tha woh pata lag gaya. Ab mera yaha koi kaam nahi! Sorry Dada jii! Par abhi aapki baatein sunn'ne ke liye mere paas waqt nahi!
Aur jis hawa ke jhoke ki tarah woh yaha aayi thi utni hi tezzi me woh yaha se nikal bhi gayi.
Waha maujood sabhi logo ko confusion me daal ke. Sab bas soch me pad gaye. Ye abhi abhi hua kya tha? Woh ladki yaha aayi kyu thi? Aur itne saal kaha thi? Bhavna ki beti? Toh kya Bhavna bhi idhar hai?
Brijesh jo ab tak maun tha, uske andar na jaane kya kya baatein chal rahi thi. Par ek baat spasht thi. Woh ye ki uska jee bhi andar se michla raha tha.
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Night ~ 8:16 PM
"Saala jald se jald yaha se nikalna hoga warna dikkat ho jayegi."
Pranjal, jo Pune jaane ke poore bandobast me tha. Apne suitcase me woh saari zaroori saamagri rakhne me laga hua tha. Lagbhag saara sab kuch uska pack ho chuka tha.
"Madarchod hai saale sab ke sab. Behanchod Veer!! Saale jis din tu mere haatho me aaya na, kasam se aisa maslunga na tujhe. Gid-gidayega saale tu mere perro par."
"Par uske liye, mujhe thode din underground hona hoga. Luck is on your side Veer. I admit! Tumne ye paari jeeti hai. Lekin jung mein hi jeetunga."
*Click* *Click*
Suitcase band kar usne mirror me ek antim baar khud ko dekha, apne baal sawaare aur bas woh abhi jaane hi waala tha ki,
*Ring* *Ring*
Uska phone baj utha.
"Kiska phone aa gaya behanchod ab?"
Caller tha Karunesh.
"Shit!! Dad ka hai-!!"
Pranjal : Hello? Dad!??
Karunesh : Mein jo jo keh raha hu usse dhyaan se suno. Veer ki koi muhboli behan hai shayad! Mujhe nahi pata woh itne saalo se kaha thi par Veer ki asal maa, yaani tumhari Tai jii ne ek beti goad lii hai shayad.
Pranjal : Huh? Ye sab aap mujhe kya bata rahe ho? Dad mein late ho raha hu! Ye faaltu ka family chart aap baad me bhi bata sakte ho mujh-
Karunesh : NIKAMME CHUTIYE!!! MERI BAAT DHYAAN SE SUNN!!!
Pranjal : H-Huhh? D-Dad? Chill!
Karunesh (screams) : EK BAAR KI BAAT TERE BHEJE ME NAHI GHUSTI KYA? BOLA NA MENE KI JO KUCH BHI KEH RAHA HU USSE DHYAAN SE SUNN!
Pranjal : O-Okay! Kahiye! Bhadak kyu rahe ho? Baat kya hai?
Karunesh (lambi saas lete hue) : Veer ki ek behan hai jo abhi abhi kuch derr pehle ghar aayi thi. Gusse me thi aur usse sab kuch pata hai Veer ke saath hamaare ghar ka kya ravaiyya tha.
Pranjal : Toh?
Karunesh : Usne yaha aake kaafi badtameezi se baat kii aur usne tumhare baare me pucha.
Pranjal : Mere baare me?
Karunesh : Hmm! Pucha ki tum kaha par ho.
Pranjal : Haha! Toh surely aapne bataaya thodi hoga.
Karunesh : Par Arohi ne bata diya hai.
Pranjal : Huhhh??
Karunesh : Mujhe nahi pata usse ye baat kese pata chali, par usne Amrit Niwaas ki jankaari dedi hai.
Pranjal : What the hell?? Y-Ye Arohi dii ko aap log control me nahi rakhte ho na ussi ka nateeja hai. Pata nahi meri dono behno ko uss chutiye Veer me aisa kya nazar aata hai jo paaglo ki tarah uske peeche peeche lagi rehti hai.
Karunesh : Tumhari Maa pe jo gayi hai dono! Kherr! Unhe jo karna hai karne do. Balki accha hi hai woh inn cheezo se dur rahe. Dekho! Tumhare Dada jii ko mere upar shaq hai ki mene tumhe waha rehne ko jagah dii hai. Mujhe Papa jii se milna hai abhi. Tumhare Tau jii bhi honge waha. Unn sab ko jawaab dena hoga mujhe. Tum abhi ke abhi waha se nikal jao. Kahi aisa na ho woh ladki tumhe dhundhte hue waha tak pohuch jaaye. Kyuki mein abhi kuch derr ke liye tumhara koi bhi phone nahi utha paunga. Samjhe?
Pranjal : Hmm! Toh ye Veer ki behan? Koi bigshot hai kya? Wazandaar?
Karunesh : Dekh ke tumhare jitni hi lagi. Ek aam ladki hi maalum hoti hai. Par gusse se bharpoor hai. Jitna jaldi ho sake nikal jao. Aur mein rakh raha hu ab.
Pranjal : Okay! Theek hai dad!
Karunesh : Sambhal kar jaana! Mein thodi derr se phone karta hu.
Pranjal : Hmm!
Aur call cut ho gaya.
'Veer ki behan? Hmph~'
Pranjal fatafat apna suitcase utha ke waha se darwaaze ki orr aaya aur usne jese hi darwaaza khola,
"Huhh??"
"Toh yaha ho Tum!!!" Ek madhur awaaz usse saamne se aayi. Dekha toh paaya ki ek sundar sii ladki seedhiya chadhte hue uske hi qareeb aa rahi thi.
Aur Pranjal ko agle hi shan abhi abhi apne baap se hui baat yaad aa gayi.
Kahi aisa na ho woh ladki tumhe dhundhte hue waha tak pohuch jaaye.
Aur wahi hua.
Ye Tejal hi toh thi. Of course, aur kaun ho sakta tha bhala?
Tejal : Toh tum ho woh gandi naali ke keede? Hmm?
Pranjal : Huh?? Tum kaun ho?
Tejal : Tum nahi bacche! Aap kehke bulao. Aur abhi kuch derr me jaan jaoge mein kaun hu.
*Crack* *Crack*
Apni hatho ki ungliyo ko aapas me chatkaate hue Tej ne apni shirt ki sleeves upar chadhaayi aur andar aane lagi.
Pranjal ke perr apne aap peeche chale gaye. Jab tej darwaze ke andar aayi toh usne darwaza atka diya.
Pranjal : Kya chahiye tumko? Saaf saaf kaho!
Tejal (screams) : Haram khor!!! Besharam ki aulaad kahi ke. Teri himmat kese hui mere chote bhai ke saath aisa karne ki? Haan?
Aisa pehli baar hua tha jab Pranjal kisi sundar sii ladki ke muh se apne liye aisi baatein sunn raha tha. Saaf tha ki woh thoda jhep gaya tha.
Tejal : Chaman chutiye!! Jis thaali me khaata hai, ussi me chhed karta hai? Apne hi parivaar waalo ko dhoka deta hai? Unke khilaaf shadiyantra rachta hai? Aaj agar teri haddi pasli nahi todi na, toh mera naam bhi Tej nahi!
Pranjal (smiles) : Heh! With just you? Aunty jii! Badi ho isliye last baar samjha raha hu. Jaha se aayi ho seedhe tareeqe se wahi se nikal jao. Warna anjaam-
Tejal : Toh ab ye aunty hi tujhe paath padhayegi mere bacche! After all, horrid kids like you, must be taught a lesson.
"Haaaaaaaaaa~"
Aur Tej josh ke saath achanak hi furti me aage badhi. Pranjal ne jese hi usse itni speed me aate dekha toh usne ek pal na gawaate hue apna suitcase side me phek diya. Usse bilkul bhi andaaza nahi tha ki ek akeli ladki uss se bhidne ki bhul karegi.
Kyuki zaahir hai ki aam taur par ek ladka aur ladki agar ladte hai toh jeet kiski hogi, ye swabhaavik hi rehta hai. Siwae kuch cases ke.
*Whoooosssshhhhhh*
Ek laat zorr se hawa me udte hue Pranjal ke seedhe muh ki orr aayi aur woh fauran jhuka.
Par iske pehle ki woh neeche jhuk ke hamla kar paata, Tej agle hi pal peeche ho gayi.
Ek baar fir woh daudte hue aayi. Pranjal ne khud ko dusri kick ke liye prepare kiya par,
Tejal ne na hi koi ghoosa chalaya aur na hi koi laat, woh seedha aake Pranjal par jhapat padi.
Dono ek dusre ke upar haawi hone ka prayaas karne lage,
"Y-Youuu bitchhhhh!!!"
"Fuck offf! Chutiye!!! Aaj toh teri kherr nahi...! Urrggh!"
"Kutiyaaa! Rukkk! Abhi bataata hu tujhe!"
Woh Tejal ke gale ki orr lapka aur haawi hona shuru hua toh Tejal ne bhi Pranjal ke baal pakde aur jese ek paudhe ho jadd se ukhaadte hai, utni hi taaqat se ukhaadna shuru kiya,
"Aaaaaaarrrgghhhhh!!! Kutiyaaaaaaa!!!!"
Ek dard bhari cheenkh kamre me phel gayi.
"Ch-Chorrr baal!!!! Maaaadarchoddd!!! R-Randiii ki bacchiii!!! Chorrrrr!!!!"
"Suar ki aulaad saale! Mujhe aam ladki samajh raha tha na chutiye!! You fuckerrr!! I'm a green belt in Karate!!! Kismat teri jo abhi brown aur black belt haasil nahi kiya. Warna tu toh-!! Hmph~"
"Aaarggghhhhh!!"
Ab paasa palat raha tha. Tejal haawi ho rahi thi.
*Klaaaanggggg*
*Craaaashhhhhh*
*Thuddd*
Iss chheena jhapti me, aas paas ki cheezein bikharti jaa rahi thi. Par Tejal ne Pranjal ko ek deadlock me phassaya hua tha. Aur saath hi woh uske baal ko kheechte jaa rahi thi.
"Mere maasoom se bhai pe atyachaar karta hai tu? Teri himmat kese hui? Haan!!? Shukr mana jo mein yaha nahi thi. Warna meri aankho ke saamne agar tune ye sab kiya hota na toh kasam se... Tere haath perr tod deti mein...! Aankhein noch leti!"
"Kutiyyaaaaa!!! Ch-Chorrr!!!!!!!"
"Bak le jitni gaaliya bakni hai!! Tujhe jab tak besudh na chorr du tab tak rukungi nahi mein. Ek hi bhai mila badi mushqil se. Laga tha usne mujhse behtar zindagi guzaari hai. Ek mein hi abhaagan thi. Par nahi!!! Tum chutiyo ne toh uski zindagi nark bana ke rakhi hui thi. Parivaar aur bhai ke naam pe kalank hai tu haraam khorrr!!!!!"
"Aaaaarrrgghhhhhh!!! Chorr deee!! Chorr de nahi toh maar daalunga tujhe aaj randiii!!"
Par Tejal ne apni pakad bilkul nahi chorri!
Na jaane kitne baal toh Tejal ne ukhaad hi liye the Pranjal ke.
Jab woh dono ek table se takraaye toh Pranjal ka haath table par firna shuru hua aur kismat se uske ek choti wali scissor haath lag gayi.
Na dekha na suna aur bas usne woh kaichi utha ke seedhe Tejal ki baah me de maari,
"Aaaaaahhhhhhh!!!!!"
Dard me Tejal chillaayi aur pakad dheeli ho gayi,
"Chal nikal kutiyaaa!!!!"
*BAAAAANNNNGGGGG*
Aur ek zordaar laat Tejal ko seedhe pait me aale lagi, jis kaaran se uska shareer peeche dhakil gaya,
Chuki peeche darwaaza tha jo atka hua tha aur uske neeche seedhiya,
*Craaaashhhhhh*
Tejal darwaaze se bhid ke seedhe seedhiyo se neeche hawa me giri jab,
*Clasp*
"Huhhhhh!!??"
Ek jaani maani sugandh! Ye familiar sii feeling, ye anubhooti...! Do mazboot bhujaao ne usse jakad rakha tha. Inhi haatho ne usse girne se bhi bacha liya. Ye sparsh...!
Kcuh shan ke liye jese waqt tham gaya Tejal ke liye.
Aur jese hi usne apna sarr upar kar dekha toh,
Woh chehra! Jisse dekhne ke liye woh kabse itna tadap rahi thi. Woh saamne tha. Uske hontho par ek rehesyamayi muskaan thi.
Aur fir uske muh se kuch shabd nikle, jisse sunn, Tejal ki aankhein apne aap paani paani ho gayi,
"It's been a while...! Sis!!"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
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Dhanyavaad!
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Nice update.....finally veer ne mar mar ke rajat ki suja di...lekin abhi main culprit pranjal to bacha huwa hn....
Jabardast update bhai
Werewolf "Allow me to service you master"...
Wow मज़ा आ गयामित्र...
वीर ने फाइनली निधी का बदला ले लिया है एक हद्द तक अब तो इन्तेज़ार हैं कि वकील अपनी वकालत कैसे भूलता है
भावना पूर्वी तेजो की बातचीत बहुत संवेदनशील रही.. देखते हैं कि उसीका क्या योजना है...
रागिनी तो पूरी वीर मय हो गई है
माँ बेटे बहन की मुलाकात कैसी हालत में होती है.. ये एक रोचक अपडेट होगा..
जय हो..
Awesome, beautiful
That's to good one update bro
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To PURVI ne bta dia VEER ki Maa BHAVNA or TEJ ko mulakat ke bare me
Or Bhavna ko dukh or Khushi hue apne bete ke bare me jaan ke
Lekin BHAVNA poore such se anjaan hai abi
Jbki TEJ ko sbse jada duk hai VEER ki bite kal ke lye bhot jada
.
MUJHE SAMAJ NI AAY EK BAT
.
KI TEJ NE BTAYA Q NI PURVI OR BHAVNA KO KI VEER KO APNE GHR ME KHUSHI MILI HAI JBKI USKA ULTA HAI USE DUKH KE SIVA KUCH NI MILA
Q NI BOLI TEJ
.
Idhar VEER hotel ke ander RAJAT ka such me FUNERAL krne me lga hai
.
Lekin RAJAT bi km ni hai jaanbooj ke VEER ko uksaa rha hai taki or bura kre VEER
.
Shyad mera vaham ho ye Q ki esa hota to Balhar na aata hotel ke room me
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Lekin fursat to Hamari RAGANI madam ko bi ni hai VEER ki dahee jo khani hai mithii wali
.
Ab dekhna ye hai BHAVNA ky krti hai kaise milti hai apne bete VEER se
Or
VEER ky krta hai BHAVNA apni Maa se milne pr pyar se milta hai
Ya
Itne waqt tk doori ka hisaab lega apni Maa se
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Ky VEER sb kuch bhol ke maaf krdega Bhavna ko
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MOT IMPORT QUESTION HAI
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UPDATE MAST NAHI
SUPER SE BI UPER HAI BRO
BOLE TO JHAKAASSS
Bahut hi kamaal aur shandar update hai bro
Mast update h bhai...
Fire update
Awesome update
Awesome Fabolous update
इसका क्या मतलब है, की वीर कोई भी language बोल सकता है, हिंदी और english से काम चल तो रहा था
शायद आगे हिंदी और english के आलावा कोई 3rd language इस कहानी में use होगा और वो शायद जूलिया के लिए होगा जो रसियन बोलती है।
और जैसा की wolfie ने कहा है की इस कहानी में कोई भी कैरेक्टर useless नही है तो शायद जूलिया का इस कहानी में role kaira को normal करने के लिए होगा
इस कहानी में बार बार जो चीज देखने को मिली है वो ये की वीर को almost सभी ने understimate किया है,
चाहे वो आतिश,slogan, night Walker सभी ने और यही उनके मरने की वजह भी बना, रजत ने भी वीर को understimate कर गया और अब वीर के शिकंजे में है।
बलहार उसे साथ ले गया है वीर आगे का क्या प्लान है पता नहीं लेकिन उम्मीद है की जहां लेकर जा रहे है वहा निधि को मौका मिले रजत को same to same torcher करने का जैसे रजत निधि को किया करता था
मजा बढ़ जाएगा यदि वीर और निधि रजत के सामने ही अपनी सुहागरात मनाएं
खैर अब प्रांजल थोड़ा ज्यादा सतर्क हो जायेगा अपने प्लान को impliment करने में, और शायद वो वीर को understime ना करे, देखते है प्रांजल के प्लान में आरोही कैसे help करेगी।
Well सच कहूं तो वीर अपनी मां भावना से जब मिलना हो तब मिले लेकिन तेज से जल्दी जल्दी मिल जाए क्योंकि हर problem वीर अकेले ही face कर रहा ना तो अब थोड़ा सा कम मजा आ रहा
तेज के आने से कहानी में extra flavour आएगा
साथ ही ये भी की तेज आने से क्या वीर की बहनों में bonding बढ़ेगी या फिर उनके बीच खींचतान होगी, क्योंकि सब veer का attantion चाहेंगी
एक spolier दोगे क्या pleaseबस ये बता दो की वीर का incest सारी बहनों के साथ होगा या फिर किसी special के साथ ही (वैसे वीर की सारी बहनें special हैं)
उम्मीद करता हुं की इतना spoiler तो दे ही सकते हो, इस से कहानी में ज्यादा फर्क भी नही पड़ेगा
Wolfie without a doubt की अपडेट की quality बहुत अच्छी है but कहानी थोड़ी slow लग रही है जैसे सब कुछ धीरे धीरे से चल रहा है
हालंकि पढ़ने में मजा तो उतना ही आ रहा but थोड़ा pace आएगा तो ये कहानी peak पर पहुंच जाएगी
हो सकता है बाकी readers ऐसा ना सोचते हो या बस मुझे ही ऐसा feel आया है।
please अगले अपडेट stats दिखाना वीर के कितने कितने है
Keep it up, you are doing wonderful
ऐसे ही जल्दी जल्दी अपडेट देते रहिए and
As always waiting for next update
Dhamkata hai readers ko
Awesome update
Amazing
Amazing Upadate....!
Agle bahot hi ansune update ka intjaar rahega....!
Keep Writing...!
Ek aur fantastic update..
Yaha sab apna apna game khel rhe hai. Veer, Bhavna, Tejal aur Purvi. Veer jaha Purvi ko apne side krna chah rha toh purvi Veer pe apni sari mamta daan krna chah rhi. Idhar Bhavna jald se jald apne khun apne bachhe Veer ko seene se lagana chahti hai toh Tejal apne chhote bhai se jald se jald milna chahti hai.
Idhar Veer ne jo eda banke peda khane ke liye Purvi ko bada bada emotional bomb diya hai wo udhhar Bechare Bhavna aur Tejal pe dil pe phut rhe hai...
Idhar Purvi mamta ke "Bhavna" me itna beh gai ke bechari apne sister cum friend "Bhavna" ka hi katne lagi thi.
Idhar Tejal ka dil bhi apne bhai ke liye tadapne laga hai aur wo apna alag plan bana rhi hai. Dekhna hoga wo ab kya karnama krne wali hai.
Waise Bhavna bhi ab apne atma glani ke charam pe pahuch gai hai aisa pratit hota hai.
Inka milan bahut emotional hone wala hai lagta hai.
Ab baat kr lete hai Rajat ki jiska kissa kahani khatam hota mahsus hota hai...
Sala ekdum dhith aur neech kisam ka admi hai jo jarurat padne pe apne maa ko bhi bech de itna maar kha ke bhi uski hekdi nai nikli.
Khair Ab Veer ne Rajat ko Balahar ko shaup diiya hai aur uski niyati bhi tay kar di hai. Dekhna hoga ab Rajat ka khel yahi khatam ho jayega ya aage isko aur jaleel hona hai.
Lekin ye plan asal me toh Pranjal ka tha kya usne jaan ke Rajat ka use kiya ki agar plan me gadbad hui toh sab kuch Rajat pe aa jayega aur wo bach jayega ya Rajat aage chalke apne partner ka bhed khol dega.. ?? Dekhna hoga aage kya hoga. Lekin Pranjal ka game bhi jaldi bajana hoga.
Ab aate hai main topic pe. Veer Bhai Jaldi jao Dairy ki shop band ho jayegi fir mithi dahi nai milegi khatti se kam chalana padega haha.
Waiting for next update.
Awesome updates
Superb update
Superb update
nice update ..maja aa gaya ..
bhawna aur tej ko sab baate bata di purvi ne jo veer ke saath huyi thi .veer thoda naraj hai apni maa behan se ki kyu wo usko chhodkar chali gayi .
veer ke jhooth ko pakad liya tej ne ki uske pariwar wale uska bahut khayal rakhte hai jabki aisa kuch bhi nahi tha ,tej ne sab jaan liya tha nidhi mam se .
rajat ko dhund hi liya ki wo kaha par hai aur veer ne jo uske saath kiya wo ekdam sahi tha ..
itne dard ke baad bhi rajat ka ghamand kam nahi hua par veer ne uski achche se khatirdari kar di .
dono ladkiyo ko pari ke salah se istemal kar liya aur rajat ke L laga diye..
aur ab balhar bhi aa gaya jo rajat ko nark ki sair karayega .
ragini ko avoid karne ke liye best rasta chuna veer ne jiski badaulat ragini ke khud hi call cut kar diya .
Outstanding mind blowing
Ding apko shabdon ka jadu chalana khoob ata hey apki kahani kavya ban sakti hey reeders khood judtey jaingey ,
himmetey marda madedey khuda
zhot boltă hai, ,,
Great update Werewolf bhai.
Kaera ke sath mulakaat bhi ho gayi. Kaera ke swalo ke badle veer ne ek hi sawal kiya aur wo chup. Veer ko bhi wahi mission mila he jo wo chah raha tha. Ab kese karega wo dekhte he.
Purvi se milke veer ne uske dil me jagah bana li he. Ab ye dekh ke achha laga ki wo dusro ki choti choti cheej ka fayda utha raha he. Bio me purvi ke bare me sab likha tha ki ye pyaar bahut karegi to usko to apni side Karna hi tha veer ko. Aur masi bol ke veer ne wo kar diya.
Ab wo ghar aayi he to maa beti ke sawal to honge hi. Purvi ne bhi sab bata hi diya. Aur Tej sab chup chap sunn liya. Par wo kese khud ko roke jab wo veer ke bare me unn dono se jyada janti he. Purvi ko to veer ne jo bataya wo sach nahi tha ye janti he Tejal aur isiliye usse aansu na roke gaye apne. Aur kisi tarah kal milne ke liye taal diya. Ab tejal ka khud ka bhi to plan he to kese wo apne plan ko kharab hone de. Lagta he wo kisi tarah veer se milna chahti he ya uske kareeb aayegi par Veer ko pata nahi lagne degi wo. Nidhi aur Juhi se to wo mil hi chuki he aur lagta he Nidhi ek biwi ki tarah Veer ko sab bata degi ki tejal usse milne aayi thi. Wo na bhi bataye par juhi he na.
Wahi dusri taraf veer rajat ko thikane ke liye apna kaam kar raha he. Rajat to sab set karke betha tha ki aaj wo veer ko range hath pakad ke Nidhi ke samne nanga karega par ab wo khud usme fasne wala he. Chinta me dono ladkiyo ko bhi dara diya aur ab wo bhi uske khilaf ho gayi jab veer ko samne dekha. Ab pari ke sujhav pe veer unka use karega. Aur jarur rajat ka character assassin karega taki wo apna naam, kaam, sab kho de, aur baki kasar puri karne ke liye suman, niharika he hi.
Ragini ke sath bhi masti shuru ki he usne. Ab pehle ke jese sirf kaam aur ghar ki baate nahi karta par ab ragini se masti ho rahi he.
Ab sab kaam to pura kar diya. Mission ke rewards bhi mile aur sath me pari ki ek nayi personality. Ye personality to master keh rahi he. Jarur maid costume me hogi agar pic hui to
Lekin ab majha aayega. Bhavna kese samne aayegi veer ke, Tejal apne plan or kaam kar rahi he, Aarohi-kavya pe kya asar padega jab tejal samne aayegi ?? Tejal janti he ki kese sab ne veer se nafrat kari he. To tejal jarur chahegi ki uss ghar ka koi bhi veer ke aas paas na aaye.
Baki to shweta ka mooh dekhne layak hoga, aur bhumika bhi piche reh jayegi agar usne kuch na kiya veer ke dil me jagah banane ke liye.
Nidhi aur shreya ko bhi ab time dena he veer ko. Nidhi ke sath bhi relationship me aana he usko. Aur Nidhi bahut important he veer ki life me.
Fir aayegi ye suhana, Sonia wali baat aur tab kya pata Ava bhi aa jaye.
Teeno ke bich betha hoga veer aur Sonia, Ava, kaera sab haq jatayegi veer pe to usse behtar kya hoga veer ke liye
Waiting for next update.
Ding werewolf bhaiapna stock mein arrange kar liya bas aapke
update ka intazar rahenga
Update 117 has been posted guys!Ok
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BEING STRANGE
"We're in the Endgame now."
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Update - 117 ~ It's been a while, Sis!
Ab tak...
*Ding*
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Aur uske baad Veer ke mann me ek nayi awaaz sunaayi dii,
[Allow me to service you...! Master!!!]
Ab aage...
Kya kuch nahi hua tha kal? Kal raat ki ghatna chaar deewaaro ke andar ghatit hui aur uski khabar bhi kisi ko nahi lagi.
Kyuki dhamaka toh agli subah hone waala tha. Jo ki hua bhi,
"Y-Ye mein kya padh rahi hu??"
Ragini subah subah haatho me akhbaar liye apni phati aankho se headline padh rahi thi. Aur usme saaf saaf likha hua tha,
Mumbai sthit high court me kaam kar rahe jaane maane vakeel Rajat Tiwari Paradise hotel me do ladkiyo ke saath dushkarm karte hue pakde gaye.
Ragini : Y-Ye toh tumhari Ma'am ke woh, Husband hai na? Veer?
Veer jo chai ki chuski ka aanand le raha tha usne haami bharte hue jawaab diya,
Veer : Hmm!
Shweta : Kya aaya hai?
Ragini : Ye dekhiye na! Do ladkiyo ke saath dushkarm karta hua pakda gaya hai Paradise hotel me.
Ragini ne akhbaar thamaate hue Shweta ko diya. Poora ka poora lamba paragraph chhapa hua tha usme. Saath hi kuch pictures bhi dali hui thi. Jisme chehre blurred kar diye gaye the.
Shweta : Chhiii!! Patni se talaak liya toh ye sab karega?
Ragini : Wahi toh! Mujhe toh pehle se hi pata tha ki woh aadmi theek nahi hai. Accha hua tumhari Nidhi ma'am ne talaak le liya Veer uss aadmi ke saath. Warna woh kabhi sukhi nahi reh paati.
Aabha (khuspusaate hue) : Kya saare pati aise hi hote hai?
Uski dheemi sii awaaz sunn, Shweta, Ragini aur Suman teeno ki nazre uss par tik gayi. Aur teeno hi shaant reh gayi. Zaahir hai teeno yaha apne apne patiyo se dur thi. Ek prakaar se unse rishta khatam kar ke baithi hui thi. Aabha ka bhi yahi haal tha.
Veer : Nahi! Aisa nahi hai! Saare ladke aise nahi hote.
Sonali : Haan haan! Bade aaye!! Hmph!
Sonali ne chidhaate hue jeebh dikhaayi aur waapas se apni chai peene lagi.
Bhumika : Par kitni ajeeb baat hai.
Shweta : Kya ajeeb baat hai?
Bhumika : Mom, ye Nidhi ma'am ke husband jo hai woh boht famous lawyer hai. Toh obviously inke kitne connections honge. Uske baad bhi koi inke hotel room me ghus gaya aur matlab pakad hi liya. In fact police bhi direct pakadti toh I'm sure ye Rajat police ko bhi mana leta. Lekin woh aisa kar nahi paaya.
Shweta : Toh?
Bhumika : Toh ye ki, kisi strong party ne usse pakda hai. Maybe koi conspiracy? Koi shadiyantra? Politics? Aapko kya lagta hai?
Shweta : M-Mujhe kese pata hoga bhala?
Suman : Ye sab uske karmo ka nateeja hai. Kyu? Hai na maalik?
Suman Veer ko dekh aankh maarte hue boli. Kya woh jaanti nahi thi ki Rajat ka ye haal kisne karwaaya tha? Kyu Veer kal derr se ghar aaya tha? Veer ke dil me Nidhi ki kya jagah thi? Sab jaanti thi woh!
Veer : Ahem! Bilkul!
Veer ne punaah haami bhari aur woh uth ke khada ho gaya.
Ragini : Arre? Abhi naashta ready ho raha hai. Abhi se kyu uth gaye?
Veer (smiles) : Mujhe ye dene jaana hai. Isliye nikal raha hu.
Ragini : Arre par naashta?
Veer : Wahi kha lunga. Aap chinta mat kariye.
Ragini : P-Par-
Veer : Din me aaunga na bhabhi! Tab khana parosiyega! Chalta hu!
Aur Veer waha se nikal gaya. Ragini udaas mann se apne kaamo me lag gayi. Woh zyada se zyada samay Veer ke saath bitana chaahti thi. Par aisa ho nahi paa raha tha.
'Mere dil ki baatein ye ladka samajhta kyu nahi hai? Jaanti hu ki isse business me dhyaan dena hai. Jaldi aage badhna hai. Par! Par apni bhabhi ko kyu bhul jaata hai ye?'
Woh khud ke vichaaro me leen ho gayi,
'Ek minute! M-Mein bhi toh Veer ki madad kar sakti hu na? Veer zyadatar baahar rehta hai. Aise me agar mein uske kaamo me madad karu toh...! Hume zyada se zyada samay ek dusre ke liye mil payega. R-Right! Mujhe Veer se baat karni hogi.'
"Kya soch rahi ho?"
Woh mann hi mann muskura rahi thi jab peeche se ek achanak awaaz aayi toh woh darr ke maare ucchal gayi,
Ragini : Aahhh!!!??? Ohhh! A-Aap ho!
Shweta : Hmm! Kya soch rahi thi?
Ragini : K-Kuch bhi nahi! Bas ye Veer apna naashta kiye bagerr hi chala gaya. Wahi soch rahi thi.
Shweta : Hmm! Apni sehat par bilkul dhyaan nahi de raha hai. T-Tum chinta mat karo. R-Raat ko mein usse garm doodh ka glass jaake de aaungi aur usse pilwa dungi.
Ragini : O-Ohhh!
Shweta : Tum mere bete ke liye na, woh chane aur badaam bhigo ke rakha karo. Aur subaah diya karo isse. Agar ye dhyaan nahi de raha toh hume hi iski sehat par dhyaan dena padega.
Ragini (smiles) : J-Jii! Wese, Hai toh woh harr taraf se fit. Fufu~
Shweta : Sirf baahri fitness koi fitness nahi hoti Ragini. Andar se bhi insaan ko fit hona chahiye. Nutrients, Vitamins, toh shareer me jaane hi chaahiye. Mein uske liye acchi diet prepare karungi. Apne haatho se.
Ragini (smiles) : Jesa aapko theek lage.
Aur dono hi mahilaaye apne kaamo me vyast ho gayi.
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Par akhbaar toh sabhi ke ghar aata tha. Aur sabhi khabre padte the. Jaha kuch log iss khabar se khush the toh wahi kuch naraaz bhi.
"Iski maa ki choot behanchod!!!!"
*Thak*
Newspaper ko zorr se zameen par patakte hue ek ladka chillaaya. Subah subah usko akhbaar me kuch aur dekhne ki gunzaaish thi. Laga tha ki jo woh barso se chaah raha tha woh aaj subah dekhne ko milega.
Par aisa na hua. Ulta uska saare bhaanda phoot gaya.
"Madarchod! Ek kaam nahi hota inn lavdo se!!!"
Woh fir se garja. Ye koi aur nahi Pranjal hi toh tha. Usse laga tha ki aaj newspaper ke front page par Veer ki khabar chhapi hogi. Par uska paasa palat chuka tha.
'Kaha galat reh gaya mein? N-Nahi!! Sab kuch toh sahi tha. Y-Ye zaroor! Ye zaroor uss chutiye vakeel ke kaaran hi hua hoga. Bhadve ne mera naam bhi ugal hi diya hoga. Behanchod! Iski maa ki...!! Shit!!! Kya karu?? Dad ko phone!? Nahi! Woh aur bhadkenge.'
Sochte sochte woh idhar se udhar tehelne laga.
'Unhone toh pehle hi mana kiya tha. Unhe call nahi kar sakta. Fir bhi unhe pata toh chal hi jayega. Veer!!! Veeeerrr!!! Veeeerrr!!! Maan'na padega gandu tujhe! Maan'na padega. Tu behanchod harr baar mere bichhaaye gaye jaal se bach ke nikal jaata hai.'
'Pakke se pichle janam me chuuha raha hoga tu. M-Mujhe kuch toh karna hi hoga. Right! Raat ko yaha se nikal jaata hu. Sheher chorr ke kuch din baahar rehta hu. Jab yaha sab shaant ho jayega tab hi return karunga. Hmm! Ye theek hai!'
Aur tabhi usse Karunesh ka bhi call aa gaya. Karunesh ne buri tarah usse lataada aur antatah uski baat maan uske liye reservation karwa ke Pune ki ticket raat ki karwa dii. Kam se kam thode din wahi rahega toh yaha ki musibat se bacha rahega.
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Nidhi's Apartment.
Morning ~ 8:16 AM
"Dekh lii uski kartoote? Haivaan hai woh aadmi. Haivaan! Mein kab se aapko kehti thi. Par tab aap meri baat sunti nahi thi. Ab dekh liya na aapne?"
Idhar se udhar gusse me chalte hue Shreya ki awaaz Nidhi ke kaano me padi.
Aur Nidhi bechaari!? Woh toh bas aankhein phaade newspaper ko dekh rahi thi. Woh jaanti thi ki Rajat ek behad bura insaan tha. Par Rajat dusri ladkiyo ke saath ye sab karega? Iss baat ka andaaza usse bilkul bhi nahi tha.
*Ding Dong*
Door belll baji aur Nidhi apne khayalaato se baahar aayi.
"Mein dekhti hu!"
Kehte hue Shreya ne darwaza khola. Aur saamne khade vyakti ko dekh uski aankho me chamak aur hontho par muskaan sajj gayi,
Shreya : Veeeeerrrrr???
Veer (smiles) : Andar aane nahi kahogi?
Shreya : Arre! Aao na! Ye bhi koi puchne waali baat hai!?
Veer ke aate hi Nidhi apni jagah se uth darwaaze ke nazdeek aayi. Veer aur uski nigaahein ek dusre se mili. Harr baar yahi hota tha. Itne parichit hone ke baad bhi, jab bhi dono ek dusre se milte the. Dono ke beech ek khamoshi si chha jaati thi.
Shreya ne Veer ko gale se lagaaya aur uska haath pakad usse andar laayi.
Shreya : Ye itna saara samaan? Aur subah subah aaj?
Veer : Mein Vegas gaya tha na toh-
Shreya : Ye mat kehna ki isme ham sab ke liye gifts hai.
Veer : Well! Yes!
Shreya : Ohh God! Thank you so much!!!
Woh uchhalte hue ek baar fir kass ke Veer ke gale lag gayi aur jazbaati hote hue usne,
*Muuuuaaaaahhhhhhh*
Zorr se Veer ka gaal choom liya.
Nidhi (hairat me) : Sh-Shreyaaaa!?
Shreya (blushes) : W-Woh! I was just excited.
Sharmaate hue usne forun hi apna chehra chhupaaya. Khud par itni sharmindagi ho rahi thi abhi usse. Bhavnao me behke usne
Veer ko choom liya tha. Woh ye kese bhool gayi ki Nidhi theek peeche hi khadi thi uske!?
Shreya : Ohh! Tumne news padhi?
Veer : Ma'am ke ex-husband waali? Sure! Sure! Bilkul padhi.
Shreya : Dekha na? Kesa darinda nikla woh. Theek hua uske saath. Ekdum sahi hua. Ab sadta rahega jail me zindagi bhar. Hmph!
Woh turant hi apna gift kholne me lag gayi. Aur Veer chup chaap sofe par baith gaya.
Veer : Juhi kaha hai?
Shreya : So rahi hai woh abhi tak.
Veer : School nahi gayi?
Shreya : Kal uski tabiyat thodi theek nahi thi. Isliye aaj usse nahi bheja.
Veer (frowns) : Kya hua?
Shreya : Kuch nahi! Seasonal change. Aur bas halki fulki khaasi, sardi bukhaar.
Veer : Ohhh!
Shreya : Ruko mein jagaati hu abhi.
Veer : Arre nahi! Rehne dijiye! Sone dijiye usse.
Shreya : Arre raat 8 baje hi so gayi thi. Tab se so rahi hai. Uthaane hi waale the hum usse. Gifts dekh ke khush ho jayegi. Oh my goooddd!!!?? Ye mere liye? Dii look!!! High heels!!! Tumhe size kese pata chala?
Veer (smiles) : Jab yaha rukta tha tab dekha tha. Tab se yaad tha.
Shreya (blushes) : T-Tumhe yaad tha?
Veer : Mm-Hmm!
Shreya : Burberry?? Ohhh myyy goodddd!!! Pagal ho kya tum? Itni mehngi high heels? Wait!!!! Dii ka kya hai fir? Ohhh fuccckkkk!!!
Nidhi : Shreyaaaaaa!!! Ye kya tareeqa hai baat karne ka?
Shreya : Oops! S-Sorry!!! Par dii dekho na!! Versace!!!? Aapka handbag Versace ka hai. Holy shittttt!!!! Tumhari lottery lag gayi kya? Veer?
Veer (smiles) : Gifts lete time mene prices check nahi kiye the. Jo pasand aaye unhe choose kar liya. Suhana ma'am saath me thi. So, unhone kaam asaan karwa diya tha. Warna mein varieties dekh ke hi confused tha.
Suhana ka zikr aate hi Veer ka dhyaan pal bhar ke liye uss khubsoorat aurat ki orr chala gaya.
Nidhi : Ye sab kya hai Veer?
Veer : !!?
Nidhi : Tumhe pata hai tumne kitna kharcha kiya hai?
Shreya : Umm! Dii! Woh itne pyaar se laaya hai. How can you-? Aap uske sentiments ko thes pohucha rahi ho. Mujhe dekhne do kitne ke hai ye. Aapko aisa nahi bolna chahiye. Ye toh sirf-!!!???????? Hein??? What the fucccckkkkk??? 30 hazaar ka bag???? Veeeerrrr??
Shreya jo ab tak Veer ke support me thi. Price dekhte hi uski haalat kharaab ho gayi.
Shreya : V-Veer?? This is too much! Upar se meri sandals?? Ohhh goddd!!! 28 thousand??? Kya kar rahe ho tum??? Dii sahi hai. Itne mehnge gifts ki kya zaroorat thi? Meri monthly pay bhi itni nahi hai.
Veer ne koi jawaab nahi diya bas halke se muskuraaya toh Shreya kuch bhaanp gayi.
Shreya : I'm- I'm sorry! Really! Mujhe pehle kabhi kisi ne itni mehngi gift nahi dii. Isliye mein...! Par ab tum itne pyaar se laaye ho toh mein kese mana kar sakti hu!? Hehe~
Nidhi : Shreya tum-!!?
Shreya : Agar mein nahi lungi toh usse bura lagega! Isliye mein toh ye le rahi hu. And Thank you so much Veer!
Veer (smiles) : Welcome!
Shreya jaanti thi ki Veer ko asli khushi tab hi milegi jab woh gift ko accept karegi aur wahi hua bhi. Veer sabke liye ye prem se laaya tha. Isse dhutkaarna keval Veer ke dil ko ahaat pohuchaane jesa tha.
Woh gift ko khushi khushi lete hue andar gayi aur Juhi ko jagaane lagi. Toh idhar sofe par hi Nidhi aur Veer agal bagal baithe gaye.
Veer : Khabar padhi na aapne?
Nidhi : Mmm~
Veer : ....
Nidhi : Uss vyakti se aur umeed bhi kya kii jaa sakti hai?
Veer : Toh...
Nidhi : Woh vyakti mere jeevan me koi sthaan nahi rakhta. Jo bhi hoye uske saath. Mujhe kya farq padta hai.
Veer : Aur ab aap...
Nidhi : ??
Veer (smiles) : Nishchint ho. Na hi woh ab aapko taqleef de sakta hai aur na hi aapke khilaaf koi qadam utha sakta hai.
Nidhi : Hmm!
Veer : Dhruv kaha hai?
Nidhi : Andar hai! So raha hai.
Veer : Ohh!
Nidhi : Kya zaroorat thi?
Veer : Kiski?
Nidhi : Itne mehnge gifts laane ki?
Veer : Kabhi toh kuch diya nahi. Kam se kam inhe toh accept kariye.
Nidhi : Bag aur sandals kam daam ki bhi toh le sakte the na? Ya kuch chota mota bhi toh laa sakte the na?
Veer Nidhi ki daant sunn bas muh ferr liya. Aur iss baar, Nidhi ko ek taqleef hui. Aisa laga jese dil me kisi ne sui chubhoyi ho. Ek toh Veer itne pyaar se laaya tha gifts, aur upar se woh usse hi suna rahi thi. Ye dhyaan me aate hi woh andar glaani se bhar gayi.
Nidhi : M-Mein...! Maaf karna! Mein kuch zyada keh gayi.
Veer (smiles) : Koi baat nahi! Aapka haq hai!
Sunte hi Nidhi ke gaalo ka tapmaan badh gaya.
Nidhi (blushes) : O-Ok!
Nidhi ko tabhi baithe baithe ek baat yaad aayi. Hey bhagwaan! Woh ye kese bhul sakti thi? Veer ki sagi behan uske ghar aayi thi kal hi. Kya kare woh? Kya Veer ko bata de? Par Tejal ne toh mana kiya tha. Toh ab?
Ye kaha phass gayi thi woh!?
"Maaaaamuuuu!!!"
Aur Juhi ki cheh-chahaati awaaz ne uski soch ko bhang kar diya. Woh koodati phaandti daudate hue aayi aur Veer ki goad me baith gayi.
Veer (smiles) : Kesi hai Juhi?
Juhi : Juhi ekdum mast hai!!! *sniff*
Nidhi : Ye dekho! Naak beh rahi hai. Aur khud ko mohtarma mast bata rahi hai.
Veer : Mein tumhaare liye chocolates laaya hu Juhi!
Juhi : Sacchi???
Veer : Mucchii!
Juhi : Yaaaayyyy!!! Do jaldi!! Jaldi dooo!!!
Aur Veer ne jab ek behad bada packet thamaaya toh Juhi toh kya Nidhi bhi hairaan reh gayi.
Nidhi : I-Itni saari chocolates? Veer ye tum-
Veer (smiles) : Roz ek hi diya kariye. Uss se zyada nahi!
Nidhi : Jese ki woh meri baat maanegi.
Veer : Mein samjha dunga.
Veer Juhi ko samjhaane laga toh dono ko iss tarah dekh Nidhi kahi kho sii gayi. Veer bilkul aisa tha jese ek pita ko hona chahiye apne baccho ke prati.
Shreya andar ke andar hi washroom me ghus gayi thi toh baahar ab sirf wahi teeno the.
Jab jaane ka samay hua toh Veer ne Nidhi ko dekha,
Nidhi : Kya hua?
Veer (smiles) : Aap boht sundar lag rahi ho.
Nidhi : Ohh accha? Subah subah uth ke kaun sa insaan sundar dikhta hai bhala?
Veer : Aap!
Uske ek taq jawaab se Nidhi bechaari jhep sii gayi,
Nidhi (blushes) : H-Huhhh?? M-Makkhan lagaane ki zaroorat nahi hai. B-Bolo? Kya chahiye? Sessionals me A+ chahiye? Ya kuch aur?
Veer (smiles) : Mene genuinely kaha hai. Kisi favour ke liye nahi!
Nidhi (blushes) : Tum-!!!
Veer (sighs) : Anyways! Chalta hu! Fir milenge!
Veer uth ke waha se jese hi jaane laga toh Nidhi bhi uth ke aayi,
Nidhi : R-Ruko!!
Veer : Hmm?
Nidhi : Bina khaaye piye kese jaa rahe ho? Idhar aao! Chup chaap baitho idhar. Mein fatafat kuch prepare karti hu. Khaa ke jaana!
Veer : Par iski koi-
Nidhi : Shut up! And sit down!
Woh order deke andar kitchen me chali gayi. Par iske baad, dono hi Veer aur Nidhi ke hontho par ek santushti bhari muskaan thi.
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System level up ho chuka tha. Pari ka level badh chuka tha. Jaha ek taraf Pari ki nayi personality aayi thi toh wahi dusri taraf Pari ki purani cutesy wali personality jaa chuki thi.
Par jo khaas baat thi abhi, woh thi level up hone ke baad aane waale faayde.
Sabse pehla fayda jo mila tha Veer ko woh tha Translator function ke upgrade hone ka. Veer ab koi bhi bhaasha samajh sakta tha aur bol bhi sakta tha. Uske liye ab language barrier jesi cheez khatam ho chuki thi.
Dusra fayda mila tha system ke paas World knowledge aane ka. Zaahir hai ki agar hume aaj kuch bhi cheez ki jankaari praapt karni hoti hai toh hum Google, internet, inka hi sahaara lete hai. Inke hi paas poore vishv ka knowledge hota hai.
Parantu ab, Veer ko ye karne ki bhi zaroorat nahi thi. Wahi knowledge system ke paas tha ab. Agar Veer ko kuch internet pe dhundhna hai toh woh seedhe system se hi puch sakta hai.
Yadi iska uttar hamaari prithvi me kahi bhi paaya jaata hai. Toh system Veer ko jawaab dene me saksham rahega.
Aur akhiri aur sabse bada faayda. Isse paake toh Veer jese jannat me tha.
Limit eradicate ho chuki thi. Veer jo apne cards ko slot me lagaane ke baad 24 ghante intezaar karta tha, woh intezaar ab khatam ho chuka tha.
Woh ab asaani se alag alag cards ko jab chaahe tab switch kar sakta tha. Ek deadly benefit tha ye.
Aur isliye woh ab thoda calm tha. Bilkul Pari ki new personality ki tarah.
***
Evening ~ 7:27 PM
Shaam ka samay ho raha tha aur halka halka andhera bhi chhaa chuka tha. Veer ke puraane ghar me sabhi apne apne kaamo me vyast the.
Jab baahar ho rahe ek shor ne unka dhyaan kheecha.
"Baahar niklo!!! Kaha reh gaye sab ke sab? Kaayaro ki tarah chhupke baith gaye kya? Niklo baahar!!!"
Baahar khade jo guards the woh dono bhi stabdh reh gaye.
Ek anjaan ladki aake na jaane kya kya bake jaa rahi thi.
Guard : Ayye ladki! Paagal hai kya? Chal jaa yaha se.
"Arre jao jao! Mere raaste me mat aana warna anjaam accha nahi hoyega."
Guard : Teri toh-! Dhamkaati hai? Kaun hai tu? Kya kaam hai tujhe?
"Hmph~ Oye kaayaro! Haath me chuudiya pehen rakhi hai kya? Baahar niklo!"
Jab ladki ne fir bhi na suni, toh dono hi guards uth ke uske paas aaye par iss se pehle ki woh usse pakad paate, ghar ka darwaaza khula aur andar se ghar ke kayi saare sadasya baahar nikal ke aa gaye.
"Y-Ye kya shor hai?"
Manorath jo apni wheelchair par baithe araam kar rahe the, unhe Kavya lete hue baahar aayi.
Sumitra Arohi bhi baahar aa chuki thi. Saath hi Brijesh aur Karunesh bhi. Vivek ghar par tha nahi. Woh apni company me hi laga hua tha abhi.
Manorath : Kaun hai ye ladki?
Guard : Sarkaar! Kab se isko samjha rahe hai par samajhne ka naam nahi le rahi. Badtameezi karte jaa rahi hai. Aap kahe toh-
Manorath : Mujhe baat karne do! Kya hua beta? Kyu ghar ke saamne chillaa rahi ho? Aur kaun ho tum?
Ladki muskuraayi aur fir hasste hue boli,
"Kamaal hai. Aap apni poti ko hi nahi pehchaane? Hahahaha!"
Beshaq, ye ladki koi aur nahi Tejal hi thi.
Manorath : Meri poti?
Tejal : Haan aapki poti! Mein Tejal Singh! Bhavna Singh ki eklauti beti! Aur Veer ki badi behan!
*Boom*
Ek bada sa bomb unn sab ke sarr jese aake phata. Ye ladki kya badbadaaye jaa rahi thi?
Brijesh ki aankhein phati hui thi. Toh wahi Karunesh hairaan tha. Sumitra chakit aur Arohi, Kavya dono hi confused.
Manorath : Bhavna ki beti?
'Bhavna? Ye tumhari beti hai? Kaise?' Manorath ek chinta me doob gaye.
Tejal ne ungli dikhaate hue unn sabhi ko gusse se dekha aur woh fir chillaayi,
Tejal : Sharam nahi aayi tum logo ko? Itni ghatiya aur ghinoni harqat karte hue?
Brijesh : Ye kya badbadaye jaa rahi hai ladki?
Tejal : Mere bhai Veer ko issi ghar se dhakke maar ke nikaala gaya tha na? Bolo? Hai na?
*Silence*
Manorath : Mujhe ek baat batao beta. Kya tumhari Maa, Bhavna? Kya unhone dusri shadi kii thi?
Tejal : Hmph! Kaash kii hoti. Toh kam se kam ek accha baap toh mil jaata.
Tejal ke iss hamle se waha khade sab ke hosh udd gaye. Swayam Brijesh ke bhi. Kyuki ye baat Tejal ne usse hi dekh ke kahi thi. Woh jese jaan gayi thi ki yahi uska baap hai.
Par yaha ab sab ulta samajh rahe the.
'Huh? Bhavna ne dusri shaadi nahi kii? Toh ye ladki? Ohhh! Accha! Hmm! Toh ye baat hai! Ye goad lii hui bacchi hai. Aur isse bhi ye baat shayad nahi pata hai.'
Manorath ne mann me soch dheere se Brijesh aur Karunesh ke kaano me ye baat daali. Aur unhe bhi maajra samajh aaya.
Manorath : Tumhara maqsad kya hai beta?
Tejal : Mera maqsad!? Haha! Woh jaan'ne ke liye aap qualified nahi ho.
Karunesh : Tameez se baat kar ladki!!! Kya tu jaanti nahi ki bado se kese baat kii jaati hai? Kya yahi sanskaar diye hai tumhari Maa ne?
Tejal : Hmph! Woh sanskaar mein unhe hi dikhati hu jo uske yogya hota hai. Par tum sab...! Hmph!
Woh unhe neecha dikhaate hue muskuraayi,
Karunesh (chillaate hue) : Badtameez!!!!!
Kavya : Aisa nahi hai....!!!!
Kavya ki awaaz sunke Tejal shaant ho gayi. Usse dhyaan aaya ki Nidhi ne Arohi aur Kavya. Ye do naam liye the.
Tejal : Kya naam hai tumhara?
Kavya : Kavya! Aur aap jesa soch rahi hai wesa nahi hai. Haan past me mene bhi unke saath accha behave nahi kiya. But mene ye hamesha regret kiya hai. Aur mein aur Arohi dii hum dono hi Veer bhaiya ko dil se pyaar karte hai. Hum unka bura kabhi nahi chaahenge.
Kavya ke desperate attempt me Arohi bhi shamil ho gayi.
Arohi : Kavya sahi keh rahi hai. Didi! A-Aap hume galat samajh rahi hai.
Tejal ne ek smile dii aur woh aage badhi aur achanak hi usne Kavya ko apne gale se laga liya,
Kavya : Huhhh??
Tejal (smiles) : Thank you! Thank you for being there with him. Mein tumhari badi behan hu. You know? Aaj mujhe do do choti behne mil gayi.
Kavya : M-Mein-
Tejal : Ab ye batao! Woh Pranjal tumhara bhai hai na?
Kavya : Hmm!
Tejal : Kaha hai woh?
Kavya : U-Unhe...!
Karunesh : Kavyaaaaa!!!!
Aur apne pita ki awaaz sunn, Kavya darr ke maare chup ho gayi.
Arohi : Usse ghar se baahar nikaal diya gaya hai.
Karunesh : Arohiii!??
Tejal (surprised) : Hmm? Kyu bhala?
Arohi : Kyuki Dada jii ko usne mandir ki seedhiyo se girwaaya tha. Jaydaad ke liye. Veer ka naam hataane ke liye.
Arohi ke bol na sirf Tejal ko stabdh kiye balki Karunesh samet uska khud ka parivaar bhi Arohi ke be-jhijak haazir jawaabi sunn ke baukhlaya hua tha. Saari andar ki pol woh yu kholti jaa rahi thi. Jaante toh sabhi the ye baat par koi iss baat par baat nahi uthata tha. Par Arohi ne aaj nidar hoke sab bebak bol diya.
Tejal : Ohh? Toh ab kaha hai woh?
Arohi : Amrit Niwaas!
Uske muh se abhi nikla hi tha ki peeche khade Karunesh ke hosh udd gaye. Ye information toh sirf woh jaanta tha. Woh hi apne bete ko ab tak bachaaya hua tha. Fir uski badi ladki ko ye baat kese pata lag gayi?
Woh chaah ke bhi Arohi ko iss samay kuch nahi keh sakta tha.
Manorath : Amrit Niwaas? Pranjal waha kya kar raha hai? Karunesh? Mujhe jawaab chahiye!
Karunesh : Mujhe khud nahi pata Papa jii! Sh-Shayad usne uss ghar ki chaavi jaane se pehle leli. Warna-
Manorath ne bas ek baar usse ghoor ke dekha aur fir Tejal ki orr usne nigaah kari,
Manorath : Beta tum-
Tejal : Mujhe jo jaan'na tha woh pata lag gaya. Ab mera yaha koi kaam nahi! Sorry Dada jii! Par abhi aapki baatein sunn'ne ke liye mere paas waqt nahi!
Aur jis hawa ke jhoke ki tarah woh yaha aayi thi utni hi tezzi me woh yaha se nikal bhi gayi.
Waha maujood sabhi logo ko confusion me daal ke. Sab bas soch me pad gaye. Ye abhi abhi hua kya tha? Woh ladki yaha aayi kyu thi? Aur itne saal kaha thi? Bhavna ki beti? Toh kya Bhavna bhi idhar hai?
Brijesh jo ab tak maun tha, uske andar na jaane kya kya baatein chal rahi thi. Par ek baat spasht thi. Woh ye ki uska jee bhi andar se michla raha tha.
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Night ~ 8:16 PM
"Saala jald se jald yaha se nikalna hoga warna dikkat ho jayegi."
Pranjal, jo Pune jaane ke poore bandobast me tha. Apne suitcase me woh saari zaroori saamagri rakhne me laga hua tha. Lagbhag saara sab kuch uska pack ho chuka tha.
"Madarchod hai saale sab ke sab. Behanchod Veer!! Saale jis din tu mere haatho me aaya na, kasam se aisa maslunga na tujhe. Gid-gidayega saale tu mere perro par."
"Par uske liye, mujhe thode din underground hona hoga. Luck is on your side Veer. I admit! Tumne ye paari jeeti hai. Lekin jung mein hi jeetunga."
*Click* *Click*
Suitcase band kar usne mirror me ek antim baar khud ko dekha, apne baal sawaare aur bas woh abhi jaane hi waala tha ki,
*Ring* *Ring*
Uska phone baj utha.
"Kiska phone aa gaya behanchod ab?"
Caller tha Karunesh.
"Shit!! Dad ka hai-!!"
Pranjal : Hello? Dad!??
Karunesh : Mein jo jo keh raha hu usse dhyaan se suno. Veer ki koi muhboli behan hai shayad! Mujhe nahi pata woh itne saalo se kaha thi par Veer ki asal maa, yaani tumhari Tai jii ne ek beti goad lii hai shayad.
Pranjal : Huh? Ye sab aap mujhe kya bata rahe ho? Dad mein late ho raha hu! Ye faaltu ka family chart aap baad me bhi bata sakte ho mujh-
Karunesh : NIKAMME CHUTIYE!!! MERI BAAT DHYAAN SE SUNN!!!
Pranjal : H-Huhh? D-Dad? Chill!
Karunesh (screams) : EK BAAR KI BAAT TERE BHEJE ME NAHI GHUSTI KYA? BOLA NA MENE KI JO KUCH BHI KEH RAHA HU USSE DHYAAN SE SUNN!
Pranjal : O-Okay! Kahiye! Bhadak kyu rahe ho? Baat kya hai?
Karunesh (lambi saas lete hue) : Veer ki ek behan hai jo abhi abhi kuch derr pehle ghar aayi thi. Gusse me thi aur usse sab kuch pata hai Veer ke saath hamaare ghar ka kya ravaiyya tha.
Pranjal : Toh?
Karunesh : Usne yaha aake kaafi badtameezi se baat kii aur usne tumhare baare me pucha.
Pranjal : Mere baare me?
Karunesh : Hmm! Pucha ki tum kaha par ho.
Pranjal : Haha! Toh surely aapne bataaya thodi hoga.
Karunesh : Par Arohi ne bata diya hai.
Pranjal : Huhhh??
Karunesh : Mujhe nahi pata usse ye baat kese pata chali, par usne Amrit Niwaas ki jankaari dedi hai.
Pranjal : What the hell?? Y-Ye Arohi dii ko aap log control me nahi rakhte ho na ussi ka nateeja hai. Pata nahi meri dono behno ko uss chutiye Veer me aisa kya nazar aata hai jo paaglo ki tarah uske peeche peeche lagi rehti hai.
Karunesh : Tumhari Maa pe jo gayi hai dono! Kherr! Unhe jo karna hai karne do. Balki accha hi hai woh inn cheezo se dur rahe. Dekho! Tumhare Dada jii ko mere upar shaq hai ki mene tumhe waha rehne ko jagah dii hai. Mujhe Papa jii se milna hai abhi. Tumhare Tau jii bhi honge waha. Unn sab ko jawaab dena hoga mujhe. Tum abhi ke abhi waha se nikal jao. Kahi aisa na ho woh ladki tumhe dhundhte hue waha tak pohuch jaaye. Kyuki mein abhi kuch derr ke liye tumhara koi bhi phone nahi utha paunga. Samjhe?
Pranjal : Hmm! Toh ye Veer ki behan? Koi bigshot hai kya? Wazandaar?
Karunesh : Dekh ke tumhare jitni hi lagi. Ek aam ladki hi maalum hoti hai. Par gusse se bharpoor hai. Jitna jaldi ho sake nikal jao. Aur mein rakh raha hu ab.
Pranjal : Okay! Theek hai dad!
Karunesh : Sambhal kar jaana! Mein thodi derr se phone karta hu.
Pranjal : Hmm!
Aur call cut ho gaya.
'Veer ki behan? Hmph~'
Pranjal fatafat apna suitcase utha ke waha se darwaaze ki orr aaya aur usne jese hi darwaaza khola,
"Huhh??"
"Toh yaha ho Tum!!!" Ek madhur awaaz usse saamne se aayi. Dekha toh paaya ki ek sundar sii ladki seedhiya chadhte hue uske hi qareeb aa rahi thi.
Aur Pranjal ko agle hi shan abhi abhi apne baap se hui baat yaad aa gayi.
Kahi aisa na ho woh ladki tumhe dhundhte hue waha tak pohuch jaaye.
Aur wahi hua.
Ye Tejal hi toh thi. Of course, aur kaun ho sakta tha bhala?
Tejal : Toh tum ho woh gandi naali ke keede? Hmm?
Pranjal : Huh?? Tum kaun ho?
Tejal : Tum nahi bacche! Aap kehke bulao. Aur abhi kuch derr me jaan jaoge mein kaun hu.
*Crack* *Crack*
Apni hatho ki ungliyo ko aapas me chatkaate hue Tej ne apni shirt ki sleeves upar chadhaayi aur andar aane lagi.
Pranjal ke perr apne aap peeche chale gaye. Jab tej darwaze ke andar aayi toh usne darwaza atka diya.
Pranjal : Kya chahiye tumko? Saaf saaf kaho!
Tejal (screams) : Haram khor!!! Besharam ki aulaad kahi ke. Teri himmat kese hui mere chote bhai ke saath aisa karne ki? Haan?
Aisa pehli baar hua tha jab Pranjal kisi sundar sii ladki ke muh se apne liye aisi baatein sunn raha tha. Saaf tha ki woh thoda jhep gaya tha.
Tejal : Chaman chutiye!! Jis thaali me khaata hai, ussi me chhed karta hai? Apne hi parivaar waalo ko dhoka deta hai? Unke khilaaf shadiyantra rachta hai? Aaj agar teri haddi pasli nahi todi na, toh mera naam bhi Tej nahi!
Pranjal (smiles) : Heh! With just you? Aunty jii! Badi ho isliye last baar samjha raha hu. Jaha se aayi ho seedhe tareeqe se wahi se nikal jao. Warna anjaam-
Tejal : Toh ab ye aunty hi tujhe paath padhayegi mere bacche! After all, horrid kids like you, must be taught a lesson.
"Haaaaaaaaaa~"
Aur Tej josh ke saath achanak hi furti me aage badhi. Pranjal ne jese hi usse itni speed me aate dekha toh usne ek pal na gawaate hue apna suitcase side me phek diya. Usse bilkul bhi andaaza nahi tha ki ek akeli ladki uss se bhidne ki bhul karegi.
Kyuki zaahir hai ki aam taur par ek ladka aur ladki agar ladte hai toh jeet kiski hogi, ye swabhaavik hi rehta hai. Siwae kuch cases ke.
*Whoooosssshhhhhh*
Ek laat zorr se hawa me udte hue Pranjal ke seedhe muh ki orr aayi aur woh fauran jhuka.
Par iske pehle ki woh neeche jhuk ke hamla kar paata, Tej agle hi pal peeche ho gayi.
Ek baar fir woh daudte hue aayi. Pranjal ne khud ko dusri kick ke liye prepare kiya par,
Tejal ne na hi koi ghoosa chalaya aur na hi koi laat, woh seedha aake Pranjal par jhapat padi.
Dono ek dusre ke upar haawi hone ka prayaas karne lage,
"Y-Youuu bitchhhhh!!!"
"Fuck offf! Chutiye!!! Aaj toh teri kherr nahi...! Urrggh!"
"Kutiyaaa! Rukkk! Abhi bataata hu tujhe!"
Woh Tejal ke gale ki orr lapka aur haawi hona shuru hua toh Tejal ne bhi Pranjal ke baal pakde aur jese ek paudhe ho jadd se ukhaadte hai, utni hi taaqat se ukhaadna shuru kiya,
"Aaaaaaarrrgghhhhh!!! Kutiyaaaaaaa!!!!"
Ek dard bhari cheenkh kamre me phel gayi.
"Ch-Chorrr baal!!!! Maaaadarchoddd!!! R-Randiii ki bacchiii!!! Chorrrrr!!!!"
"Suar ki aulaad saale! Mujhe aam ladki samajh raha tha na chutiye!! You fuckerrr!! I'm a green belt in Karate!!! Kismat teri jo abhi brown aur black belt haasil nahi kiya. Warna tu toh-!! Hmph~"
"Aaarggghhhhh!!"
Ab paasa palat raha tha. Tejal haawi ho rahi thi.
*Klaaaanggggg*
*Craaaashhhhhh*
*Thuddd*
Iss chheena jhapti me, aas paas ki cheezein bikharti jaa rahi thi. Par Tejal ne Pranjal ko ek deadlock me phassaya hua tha. Aur saath hi woh uske baal ko kheechte jaa rahi thi.
"Mere maasoom se bhai pe atyachaar karta hai tu? Teri himmat kese hui? Haan!!? Shukr mana jo mein yaha nahi thi. Warna meri aankho ke saamne agar tune ye sab kiya hota na toh kasam se... Tere haath perr tod deti mein...! Aankhein noch leti!"
"Kutiyyaaaaa!!! Ch-Chorrr!!!!!!!"
"Bak le jitni gaaliya bakni hai!! Tujhe jab tak besudh na chorr du tab tak rukungi nahi mein. Ek hi bhai mila badi mushqil se. Laga tha usne mujhse behtar zindagi guzaari hai. Ek mein hi abhaagan thi. Par nahi!!! Tum chutiyo ne toh uski zindagi nark bana ke rakhi hui thi. Parivaar aur bhai ke naam pe kalank hai tu haraam khorrr!!!!!"
"Aaaaarrrgghhhhhh!!! Chorr deee!! Chorr de nahi toh maar daalunga tujhe aaj randiii!!"
Par Tejal ne apni pakad bilkul nahi chorri!
Na jaane kitne baal toh Tejal ne ukhaad hi liye the Pranjal ke.
Jab woh dono ek table se takraaye toh Pranjal ka haath table par firna shuru hua aur kismat se uske ek choti wali scissor haath lag gayi.
Na dekha na suna aur bas usne woh kaichi utha ke seedhe Tejal ki baah me de maari,
"Aaaaaahhhhhhh!!!!!"
Dard me Tejal chillaayi aur pakad dheeli ho gayi,
"Chal nikal kutiyaaa!!!!"
*BAAAAANNNNGGGGG*
Aur ek zordaar laat Tejal ko seedhe pait me aale lagi, jis kaaran se uska shareer peeche dhakil gaya,
Chuki peeche darwaaza tha jo atka hua tha aur uske neeche seedhiya,
*Craaaashhhhhh*
Tejal darwaaze se bhid ke seedhe seedhiyo se neeche hawa me giri jab,
*Clasp*
"Huhhhhh!!??"
Ek jaani maani sugandh! Ye familiar sii feeling, ye anubhooti...! Do mazboot bhujaao ne usse jakad rakha tha. Inhi haatho ne usse girne se bhi bacha liya. Ye sparsh...!
Kcuh shan ke liye jese waqt tham gaya Tejal ke liye.
Aur jese hi usne apna sarr upar kar dekha toh,
Woh chehra! Jisse dekhne ke liye woh kabse itna tadap rahi thi. Woh saamne tha. Uske hontho par ek rehesyamayi muskaan thi.
Aur fir uske muh se kuch shabd nikle, jisse sunn, Tejal ki aankhein apne aap paani paani ho gayi,
"It's been a while...! Sis!!"
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