Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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[Mr.x 2.0]

Update - 9 ~ First Time​

Ab tak...

Ladki : Heyyyy! Let's go there...

Aur wo ladki kheechte hue usse wahi ek counter ke paas le gayi,

Ladki : I want a room!

Aadmi : Jii!

Aur pal bhar me hi Veer uss ladki ke saath room me tha.

Usne Veer ko yu dhakka deke litaaya aur uske upar aake baith gayi,

Ladki : Don't you want me??

Ab aage...

Jab Veer shaam ko Nidhi ke ghar se nikla tha, uske kuch shan baad hi Nidhi ghar aa chuki thi. Wo kaafi thaki hui thi aur thake bhi kyu na? College ki bhaga daudi hi aisi rehti hai ki students kya teachers khud thak jaate hai.

Jab wo lauti toh usse Shreya dwaara pata chala ki Veer kahi gaya hua hai aur wo bata ke bhi nahi gaya ki kaha gaya hai. Bas! Issi baat pe Nidhi bechain ho uthi.

"Arre! Shreya! Tune usse roka kyu nahi? Arre puchna toh chaahiye tha at least. Uska koi friend nahi hai Shreya."

Wo bauhe sikodte hue boli. Uska aisa ravaiyya dekh Shreya bhi hairaan reh gayi. Ye akhir uski behan ko achaanak kya ho gaya? Kyu Veer ke liye wo itna tension le rahi hai?

Shreya : Arre but... Ab usne bola ki usse kuch kaam hai aur jaana hai toh mene zyaada nahi pucha. Ho sakta hai apne ghar gaya ho?

Nidhi : Nahiiiiii!!! Wo apne ghar nahi jaega. Tumhe pata hai na uske gharwalo ne usse ghar se nikaal diya hai. Toh fir kyu jaega wo ghar? Aur aisa kya kaam aa gaya usko ekdum se? Shaam ke 7:30 ho rahe hai Shreya aur abhi tak uska kuch pata nahi hai.

Shreya : Chill Dii! Aap itna kyu tensed ho rahi ho? Gaya hoga kahi. Aa jaega.

Nidhi : Arre uska phone bhi bigda hua hai Shreya. Na hi uske paas koi paise hai aur na hi koi phone, kahi bhatak gaya toh? Mere khayaal se wo bhatak hi gaya hai. Na jaane kaha ghum raha hoga abhi...

Shreya : Shit! Mujhe laga uske paas phone aur paise honge...

Nidhi : Kaha se honge? Kal se wo hamaare saath hai. Mujhe usse kuch paise de dene chaahiye the, emergency ke liye.

Uski baat sunn Shreya usse ghur ke dekhne lagi toh Nidhi ne sawaaliya nazro se uss se pucha,
"Kya hua? Aise kya dekh rahi ho?"

Shreya : Dekh rahi hu ki aap kuch zyaada hi parvaah kar rahi ho uski. Yaha tak ki aap apni life ki problems tak ko neglect kar rahi ho...

Nidhi : I'm... I'm not neglecting my problems Shreya. Mujhe pata hai mein kya kar rahi hu. And rahi baat Veer ki toh... I know how it feels... Bas isliye mein uski madad kar rahi hu. Nothing else. Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai jesa tum soch rahi ho.

Shreya : Well! If you say so...

Nidhi : Mein gaadi leke dekh ke aati hu usse. Ho sakta hai aas paas hi ho.

Shreya : No way Dii! Aap yahi rahiye, thak gayi ho aap, Juhi ke saath rahiye... Mein jaati hu dekhne.

Aur Shreya Nidhi ki scooty liye Veer ko dhundne nikal padi. Ek taraf jaha Nidhi ke mann me bechaini thi toh wahi dusri taraf Shreya ke mann me keval gaaliya hi nikal rahi thi Veer ke liye.

'Shit! Pata nahi kaha nikal gaya ye bhi bina bataaye. Iske kaaran mujhe ghum ghum ke dhundna pad raha hai. Koi baccha bhi gumta hai toh jaldi mil jaata hai par ye janaab toh... Ye dii bhi boht bholi hai. Aane do usko... Aisa maza chakhaungi na...'

Aur wo yahi sochte sochte aas paas ki galiyon me chakkar lagaane lagi. Par Veer ka koi ata pata na laga.

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Idhar Veer uss kamre me bed pe pasra hua tha aur uske upar wahi ladki baithi hui thi.

Veer uski sundarta itne paas se dekh ke hi mantramugdh ho gaya. Kya hi sundarta thi. Wo haseen chehra, poori uttamta se taraasha gaya wo badan, wo nain naksh jo ek jhalak me kisi ki jaan lele.

Aisi sundar ladki uske upar baithi hui thi. Par ye baat bhi sach thi ki wo iss waqt poore hosh me nahi thi apne. Yadi wo hosh me hoti toh kya wo ladki uske saath aisa vyavhaar karti? Shayad nahi!?

'I think I don't deserve her. She's too beautiful.'

[What the hell? Apni ahamiyat mat bhulo master. You have me inside your body. I mean... Ahem! Mein aapke andar hu. Aapki value ab pehle jese nahi rahi.]

'Really? Damn! But ye hosh me nahi hai. I don't want to take advantage of her.'

'Check'

Veer ne usse check karna hi behtar samjha. Par jese hi usne uss ladki ko check kiya. Saamne window me result dekh usse ek zorrdaar jhatka laga. Hairaani ke maare uski aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi.

Uss ladki ke sar par window khuli toh usme likha tha ~

[System is unable to access this person's identity.]

'What the hell Pari? Mujhe iska status kyu nahi dikh raha?'

[Ahem! Mein apne shabd waapas leti hu. This girl is more than I expected.]

'What do you mean Pari? Mein usse check kyu nahi kar paa raha?'

[Aisa ek hi kaaran se hota hai master.]

'Aur kya hai wo?'

[Wo ye hai ki mera level low hai. Aur ye ladki ka status lagta hai boht high hai. Jab kisi ka pad aur status boht high hota hai aur mera level low toh uss maamle me aap unn logo ki jaankari nahi dekh paoge master. Aur ye ladki kisi boht bade gharaane se lagti hai. Aapki toh lottery lag gayi!]

'Lottery lag gayi? Fuck! Meri gaand marne waali hai. Didn't you see those two bodyguards? Yadi galti se bhi isne bata diya toh mujhe zinda nahi chorrenge wo log. I'm leaving! I cannot do it with her.'

[Nahi! Master! Ye kya keh rahe ho. Aapke paas time kam hai. Aur aisi ladki aapko fir kabhi nahi milegi. Aap usse force nahi kar rahe. See! Wo khud aapke upar baithi hui hai.]

'Pari! You don't understand...'

[System is going in sleep mode. Enjoy your first time master.]

'What the hell?? Pari!? Hey!!! Fucccckkkkk!!'

Veer ko uske haal chorr Pari toh sleep mode me jaa chuki thi. Ab sab kuch Veer ke upar tha ki wo kya karne waala tha.

Tabhi wo ladki neeche jhuki aur Veer ke chehre ke paas apna chehra laayi. Uski garam garam saasein Veer ke chehre par pad rahi thi jo usse kuch galat karne par majboor karti jaa rahi thi.

Usne bade hi pyaar se Veer ke gaal par apna ek angutha firaaya aur uske chehre ko nihaarne lagi,
"You know? No one... No one has ever touched me. You are the first one."

Veer : Huh??

Ladki : Never ever I have kissed anyone.




Veer (blush) : .......

Aur agle hi pal usne jhukte hue Veer ke honth apne gulaabi hontho me bhar liye.

Dono ke honth aapas me milte hi ek zordarr jhatka dono ke hi shareer ko laga. Ye dono ki hi pehli kiss thi.

Veer ko jaha ladkiya dekh ke ignore kar diya karti thi, aaj Veer ko aisi ladki apne neeche litaaye uske honth choom rahi thi.

Ye kisi sapne se kam nahi tha uske liye. Ye adhbhut ehsaas Veer kabhi nahi bhul paega.

Shayad ab usse samajh aa chuka tha ki kyu wo ladke ladkiya neeche aise ek dusre ko choom rahe the. Ye anubhav tha hi aisa ki kisi ko bhi iski latt lag jaaye.

Veer ne jee bhar ke uss ladki ke honth chume. Wo nahi chaahta tha ki wo kabhi bhi iss feeling ko bhule. Kya pata usse aisi ladki dubaara mile bhi ya nahi?

Aaj Veer khud ko boht hi lucky maan raha tha jo aisi khubsoorti ki bala uss se chipak ke uske saath chumban kar rahi thi.

Aur isliye usne jee bhar ke uss ladki ke honth chuse. Jab dono ke honth ek dusre se alag hua toh dono ki saasein ek dum tezz thi. Ladki poori tarah se ab nashe me lag rahi thi.

Usne Veer ka haath pakda aur usse raasta dikhaate hue wo apne stano par le aayi.

"Touch me...!!"

Usne badi hi kaamuk awaaz me bola.

Ye pehli baar tha jab Veer kisi ladki ke doodh ko apne haatho me feel kar raha tha. Aur ye kehna galat nahi hoga ki ladkiyo ke doodh ab uski pasandeeda cheez bann chuke the.

Bina samay gawaaye aur bina hichkichaate hue Veer ne uss ladki ke stano ko dress ke upar se hi zorr se bheenchte hue unhe nichodna shuru kar diya.

"Aahhhhnnn... Mmmmmmmm"

Aur wo ladki lambi lambi siskiyaa lene lagi.

Veer ne usse pakadte hue apne upar se hata ke usse litaaya aur uske upar chadh gaya. Usse sharam bhi boht aa rahi thi kyuki ye sab wo pehli baar kar raha tha aur wo bhi itni sundar ladki ke saath.

Par saath hi saath usse josh bhi utna hi chadha hua tha. Ladka tha aakhir. Javaani me kadam rakh chuka tha aur ab uske andar ke jangli bhediye ko sambhaalne ke liye ek ladki chaahiye thi jo ki theek uske saamne thi.

Neeche sar jhukaate hue usne uss ladki ki gore nange kandho ko chumna shuru kar diya aur dheere dheere upar jaate hue wo uski gardan ko apni chummiyo se geela karne laga.

"Aaaaahhhnnnn!"

Usse pata tha ki ye sahi nahi hai. Kyuki wo ladki nashe me thi par wo zabardasti bhi nahi kar raha tha ek prakaar se. Wo ladki khud usse yaha lekar aayi thi.

'Sorry! But I have to do it.'

Usne mann me hi apne aap se maafi maangi kyuki wo ab iss ladki ke saath sambhog karne jaa raha tha.

Apne haatho ka istemaal karte hue pal bhar me hi Veer ne uss ladki ki wo kaali dress uske badan se alag kar dii. Aur ab uske saamne wo ladki keval ek black panty me thi.

Bra toh usne pehni hi nahi thi jis kaaran uski gori narm chuchhiyo ke darshan Veer ko ho gaye.

Apne gale me thook ka niwaala nigalte hue wo aage badha aur unn narm chuchhiyo ko usne jee bhar ke pehle dekha uske baad unhe dheere se magar pyaar se chhua aur fir agle hi pal usne apna muh khol ek chuchha muh me bhar liya.

"Aaaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!"

Ladki siski lete hue apne haatho ko Veer ke sar ke peeche lapet lii aur uske baalo me apni ungliya ferr usse apni orr kheechte hue apne stano par uska sar rakh dabaav badhaane lagi.

Jese kehna chaah rahi ho ki chuso inhe. Jee bhar ke chuso.

Aur Veer ne bhi jese uske mann ki baat sunn lii thi. Usne theek wahi kiya. Ye adhbhut ehsaas wo kabhi nahi bhul paega. Unn narm narm chuchhiyo ko usne jee bhar ke chusa, unhe nichoda, dabaaya aur nipples ke saath khela.

Kabhi wo unhe kaat'ta toh kabhi unpe jeebh firaata, kabhi muh me bharta toh kabhi daato tale daba ke usse kheechta.

Aur harr prahaar par ladki sihar ke reh jaati. Wo Veer ki gardan aise chus rahi thi maano jese khaa hi jaegi.

Pal bhar me dekhte dekhte hi dono hi nagn ho chuke the. Jab Veer ne uss ladki ki yoni ke darshan kiye toh shan bahr ke liye toh wo stabdh bas dekhta hi raha. Kya adhbhut drashya tha.

Wo chikni patli si gori choot usse uskaa rahi thi. Keh rahi thi ki aao aur chuso isse. Tabaah kar do isse.

Itni patli gulaabi choot usse har pal madhosh karti jaa rahi thi.

Veer ne porn dekhi thi, par asli me wo ek ladki ko yu nagn pehli baar dekh raha tha.

Ladki bhi usse itni nasheeli aankho se dekh rahi thi jo Veer ko bekaabu kar raha tha.



Paseene ke maare uss ladki ke baal bhi bheeg chuke the.

Veer apna chehra uss choot ke paas le gaya aur pehle usne ek baar zorr se uss madak khusboo ko sungha aur fir apna muh khol uss choot ko apne muh me bhar liya.

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaa..."

Uss ladki ki aankhein fati ki fati reh gayi aur usne apni taangein zorr se Veer ke sar par ird gird kass lii.

Aisa ehsaas usse aaj tak nahi hua tha. Wo toh jese alag hi duniya me jaa chuki thi.

Kuch hi minute ki chusaayi ke baad uski choot rass chorrne lagi aur skhalit hote hue wo ladki jhatke pe jhatke lene lagi.

'This is the time...'

Veer ne sochte hue apna lund uski choot rass se bhigoya aur uski choot ke dwaar par dastak dete huye wo apna lund malne laga. Uska lund taiyaar tha andar ki gufa ko khojne ke liye.

Apna ling choot ke dwaar par set karte hue usne ek zorrdaar dhakka maara aur uska topa jhat se choot me pravesh kar gaya.

Dard ke maare bechaari ladki iske pehle ki zorr se chillaa paati, Veer ne uske muh par haath rakh uski awaaz ko rok diya.

'Shit! Aaarghhhh...'

Halka dard toh usse bhi ho raha tha. Par uss ladki ke dard ke saamne uska dard kuch bhi nahi tha.

Kuch derr baad usne fir do dhakke maare aur Veer ka lund uski choot ki gehraaiyo me jaa chuka tha.

Halke halke aasu uss ladki ki komal palko ko bhigone lage the. Veer ko ab waqai bura lag raha tha. Wo toh iss ladki ka naam tak nahi jaanta tha. Kaha se aayi hai, kis ghar se hai, kya naam hai, kya kaam karti hai, Veer kuch bhi nahi jaanta tha.

Usse bas itna pata tha ki yadi usne abhi ye kaam nahi kiya toh wo Pari ko kho dega aur wo aisa bilkul bhi nahi chaahta tha. Pari inn kuch dino me uski zindagi ka aham hissa banti jaa rahi thi.

Kuch derr yu hi bina hile dule wo apna lund uski yoni ke andar hi rakha raha. Aur jab ladki shaant hui toh Veer ne haule haule hi apne ling ko aage peeche karna shuru kar diya.

"Aahhnnnn...mmmmmm"

"Shit!!!!! Damnnnnn..."

Choot andar se itni garm thi ki aisa lag raha tha maano Veer ka lund ussi waqt andar hi pighal jaega.

Kisi bhatti se kam nahi thi wo. Ye alaukik aur anootha ehsaas wo kabhi nahi bhul paega.

Choot itni tight thi ki uska lund badi hi mushqil se andar baahar ho raha tha.

Chut ke andar ki twacha ki deeware uske lund ko kass ke jakde hue thi aur apne taapmaan se uske lund ko kisi garam lohe ki rod me parivartit kar rahi thi.

*Thap* *Thap*

Ki awaaz kamre me fel gayi aur iss adbhut chudaayi ke baad Veer ab skhalit hone ke nazdeek tha.

'Mein andar nahi gira sakta. Kahi ye pregnant ho gayi toh dikkat ho jaegi. Shit! But I want to cum in her so bad... Noooo! Baahar Veer... Baahar!!'

Aur agle hi pal usne apna lund baahar nikaal apne veerya ki ek tezz pichkaari chorri, jo seedha uss ladki ki nangi chuchhiyo, uski chhaati, aur uske pait par jaake giri.

Apni aankhein band kar Veer iss pal ko apne dil-o-dimaag me utaarne laga. Taaki ye pal usse hamesha yaad rahe.

Jab kuch seconds baad usne neeche dekha toh ek jhatka aur laga usse.

Neeche bedsheet par aur uske lund par khoon laga hua tha. Yaha tak ki ladki ki yoni me bhi khoon laga hua tha.

'Fuck!!! Ye bhi virgin thi????? Gaya... Mein gaya ab! They will kill me.... Pariii?? Are you there?'

Par Pari ka koi jawaab na aaya.

'Shiiitttt!!!'

Usne uthte hue uss ladki ko yuhi nagn apni baaho me leke uthaaya aur forun hi bathroom me le gaya.

Ladki behosh ho chuki thi. Veer ne fatafat uski choot aur apne lund ko acche se saaf kiya. Ladki ke shareer par laga veerya bhi usne saaf kiya.

Aur usse baahar laake dubaara bistar par lita diya.

Usne khud ke kapde pehne aur sabse pehle usne bedsheet ka wo tukda faada jaha khoon laga hua tha aur uss kapde ko apne jeb me rakh liya.

Abhi wo uss ladki ko kapde pehna hi raha tha ki tabhi...

*Bang*

Ek tezz awaaz uske kaano me padi. Aur usse kuch shor bhi sunaayi dene laga.

Ye awaaz neeche se aa rahi thi.

Par Veer ke shareer ke ruye iss waqt khade hue the. Kyuki wo jaanta tha...

Ki jo awaaz usne suni...

Wo kisi aur cheez ki nahi balki...

Ek gunshot ki thi...

Iss maamle me wo kabhi galat nahi ho sakta tha. Usne pehle bhi real life me ye sound suna hua tha aur wo bhali bhaati iss awaaz se parichit tha. Wo awaaz...

Wo galat ho hi nahi sakta tha.

Wo awaaz pakke se ek gunshot ki thi...

Uske baad wo shorgul...

Zaroor neeche kuch hua tha. Aur ye shor zaroor gunshot ke baad machi afra tafri ka tha.

'Ohh! Noooo!!!'

Uske andar ek darr umadna shuru ho chuka tha. Apna thook nigalte hue usne forun hi uss ladki ko kapde pehnaaye aur wo usse dekhne laga. Usse dhyaan aaya ki uske haath me aate waqt ek bag bhi tha.

Veer ne forun hi wo bag khola toh usme bas kuch cash tha aur 2 credit cards. Aur ek choti sii diary jo ki ekdum khaali thi. Saath hi ek pen bhi tha...

Veer ne ek panna faada aur usme apna naam aur mobile number likh uske bag ke andar hi daal diya.

'I know ki jab tum hosh me aaogi tab tum mujhe hate karogi... Shaayad tum mujhe maarna bhi chaaho. Aur mein maanta hu mene tunhaare saath galat kiya hai. Isliye mein apna number chorr raha hu. Baad me tum jo chaahe mere saath karna chaahogi mujhe manzoor rahega...'

Mann me sochte hue wo uss ladki ko uthaake baahar nikalne ke liye taiyaar tha.

'Mujhe ek phone jald hi lena padega.'

Sochte hue usne uss ladki ko apni peeth par utha liya.

Par wo ye nahi jaanta tha ki neeche kya ghatna ghatit hui hai.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!!

Oh bhai akheer kaar bhai ki virginity lose ho hi gaya maja usse bhi aaaya Or hum bhi aa gaya oh bhai kitna awesome hai......

 

[Werewolf]

Update bahot hi romanchak tha laajavaab...,
But these update end don't like bro..,
Hindi mein laat guse khaane hein bhai tumhe phir se aadha update...!
Keep Writing...!

Aadat daal lo. Aise hi rahenge updates.

Rajat ko jel me bhijva diya par abhi wo mara to nahi hai to phir se kuch jugad kar ke jel se chhut jayega or dubara veer or nidhi ki life me problem create na kare.

Uske saath kya hua hai pehle ye toh jaan lo

Vaise tejal ki manchha achhi thi apne bhai ke sath jisne julm kiye usse saja khud dene nikal padi par.. pranjal harami hai to akela jana nahi chahiye tha.. Khair parivar walo lo to pata hi nahi hai ki bhavna ki beti bhi hai.. par veer se badi hai to un logo ko kaisa pata nahi hai? And kya sach me god liya hua hai tej ko bhavna ne?

Yahi toh pata lagega baad me

Tejal sidiyo se girne wali thi par end vakt pe veer aa gaya hai aisa lag raha hai.. Ab pranjal ki to achhe se pitay kar de to maja aay.

Superb update bhai.

Thanks! Keep supporting!

What an update man, fucking osome. Sabkuch to daal diya iss update mein

• Breaking news - Rajat ki
• Care part - Ragini, Shweta, Suman
• Emotional - Shreya, Nidhi
• Surprise - Tejal ka apne dada ke Ghar Jaa kar hungama aur gayab hona
• Tension - Karunesh, Pranjal
• Fight with full on gaaliya - Tejal, Pranjal
• Last but not the least: Sibling love, care and pain of separation - Tejal, Veer

Dhanyavaad bhai!

I don't think any other update covered so much in one update. Isi ko kahte hai shayaad "देर आए दुरुस्त आए"

Ab ye update aise mod par end hua hai ki agle update ke jaldi aane ki ichcha abhi se hone lagi hai.
Werewolf bro, agla update thoda jaldi de do yaar.

Agla update bhi wese hi mod pe end hua hai haha
Thank you btw! Keep supporting!

तेजल की पहचान को आखिरकार सस्पेंस मे डाल ही दिया आपने वेयरवोल्फ ब्रो!
वो वीर से ही नही बल्कि अपनी एक चचेरी भाई बहन से भी उम्र मे बड़ी है फिर भी उसके परिवार वाले उसे गोद ली हुई संतान समझ रहे हैं।
यह क्या गोरखधंधा है ?

Vivek se choti hai woh. Sirf Prannjal se badi hai aur ek saal shayad Arohi se. Uska status check kar sakte ho aap egypt waale updates me.

वैसे तेजल का प्रांजल के खिलाफ तेज एवं तर्रार रूप समझ नही आया। उनके घर जाकर गाली-गलौज की भाषा इस्तेमाल करना और फिर उससे भीड़ जाना , किस तरह की सोच थी उसकी ?
उसकी प्राथमिकता होनी चाहिए थी कि वो सबसे पहले अपने भाई से मिलकर गिले शिकवे दूर करती।

Agar normally soch ke chale toh woh tej thodi hai. Veer aur uska jab convo hoga tab samajh aayega.

खैर, भाई बहन के मिलन की बेला आ ही गई है और हम भी उनके इस इमोशनल मोमेंट के उनके साथ ही खड़े हैं।

बेहतरीन अपडेट वेयरवोल्फ भाई ।
Outstanding & Amazing & brilliant.

Dhanyavaad!! Saath bane rahiyega!

 

[Mr.x 2.0]

Update -10 ~ Almost Died​

Ab tak...

Mujhe ek phone jald hi lena padega.'

Sochte hue usne uss ladki ko apni peeth par utha liya.

Par wo ye nahi jaanta tha ki neeche kya ghatna ghatit hui hai.

Ab aage...

Jab Veer uss ladki ke saath uss room me pravesh kiya tha tab usse nahi pata tha ki neeche kya chal raha tha. Wo unn sabhi baato se anbhigya tha.

Uss waqt Raghu aur Jassi, uss ladki ke dono bodyguard club ke baahar hi neeche khade hue the.

Dono waqai boht wafadaar the. Aur apni duty ke prati poori tarah se samarpit the. Yahi kaaran hai ki wo apni Miss ko yu akela uss Club me chorr baahar nahi aana chaahte the.

"Jassi! Miss theek toh hongi na? Sirf tere kehne pe hi baahar aaya hu mein. Warna Miss ko aise akela nahi chorrta mein. Yadi unhe kuch hua na toh bade maalik ko mein jawaab nahi dene waala."

Raghu ne thoda bechain hote hue kaha. Usse ye darr sataa raha tha ki kahi unki Miss ko kuch ho na jaaye. Warna kya muh dikhaenge wo apne bade maalik ko?

"Tum tension mat lo. Mere hote hue Miss ko kuch nahi hoga. Infact, mein unpe ek kharoch tak nahi aane dunga. Kisi ki himmat hai jo Miss ko chhu ke dikha sake?"

Jassi ne apni chhaathi thap thapaate hue kaha.

Par usse kya pata tha ki jis Miss ki wo baat kar raha tha ki koi unhe chhu tak nahi sakta, ussi waqt upar Veer unki Miss ki choot me lund daale dhakke pel raha tha.

Vidambna dekho!

Raghu aur Jassi dono hi ekdum hatte katte bodybuilder the aur fight lene me ekdum aage. Jaha Raghu judo seekha hua tha toh wahi Jassi karate me black belt tha.

Kisi ki himmat hai jo unn dono ke hote hue unki Miss ko koi haath bhi laga sake?

Siwae Veer ke...

Abhi wo dono aapas me yu hi baat kar rahe the ki kuch derr baad hi unhe ek teevr awaaz sunaayi padi...

*Bang*

Aur awaaz sunte hi dono ke hi aankhein phail gayi.
Awaaz andar se aayi thi, aur andar hi unki Miss thi.

Aur iss awaaz ko dono hi badi acchi tareeke se pehchaante the. Ek gun shot ki awaaz.

Dono ne ek dusre ki taraf dekha aur agle hi pal dono apni poori gati ke saath bhaagte hue andar pohuche...

Andar pohuchte hi unhone jo dekha toh unke hosh hi udd gaye.

Jis baat ka darr tha, wahi hua.

Andar chaaro taraf afra tafri machi hui thi. Shor aur cheekho se club me uthal puthal fel gayi

Log darr ke maare ghabraaye hue dubak ke baithe hue the toh kuch sofe ke neeche chhupe hue the.

Aur saamne do aadmi revolver liye khade hue the. Unhi me se kisi ek ne goli chalaayi thi lagta.

Raghu aur Jassi ke andar aate hi unn do aadmiyo ki nazre unn par gayi.

Aur unhe dekhte hi woh aadmi chaukanne ho gaye.

Forun hi unpe revolver taan wo unn dono ko surrender karne kehne lage. Aur yahi hua bhi.

Raghu aur Jassi dono ko hi apne haath khade karne pade. Tanaav unke chehre par saaf nazar aa raha tha. Kyuki na toh unhe unki Miss kahi dikhaayi de rahi thi aur na hi aisi sthiti me wo unhe dhundne jaa sakte the.

Paseene ki boonde dono ke chehro par saji hui thi. Aur andar se dono ghabraaye bhi hue the.

Kya unki Miss sahi salaamat hongi ya nahi? Kahi unhe kuch hua toh nahi hoga na?

Aise aneko sawaal se unke mann me uthal puthal machi hui thi.

Raghu (dheemi awaaz me) : Jassi! Ye uske hi aadmi lag rahe hai.

Jassi : Hmmm!

Raghu : Hume jald hi kuch karna hoga. Dekho! Miss waha baithi hui thi par wo nahi hai ab waha. Na jaane kidhar gayi hai.

Jassi : Shayad wo upar hongi...

Raghu : Upar? Aise me toh... Yadi uske aadmi upar pohuch gaye toh dikkat ho jaegi Jassi! Jaldi, kuch karna hoga...

Raghu ki awaaz me chinta aur ghabraahat thi.

Wo jaanta tha ki yadi galti se bhi Miss ko kuch hua, toh bade maalik na jaane kya kar denge.

Raghu : Kya kehte ho Jassi? Mein... Shoot karu?

Jassi : Nahi!!!

Unn dono ke paas bhi revolvers the. Par ye baat wo do aadmi abhi nahi jaante the. Unhe laga tha ye do club ke bodyguards honge aur ye soch wo dono bas unhe surrender karne ke liye kehne lage.

Raghu : Shayad ye dono hume nahi pehchaante Jassi. Toh kya ye dono uske aadmi nahi hai?

Jassi : Ya toh ye dono naye hai ya fir jesa ki tumne kaha, ki ye dono uske aadmi nahi hai.

Raghu aur Jassi kis aadmi ki baat kar rahe the, ye toh wahi dono jaante the. Par inki khuspusaahat unn do aadmiyo ko kuch raas na aayi.

Aadmi : Ayyyee! Tum dono... Yadi ek bhi awaaz aayi na ab, toh seedha udaa dunga.

Dono ko baat karte dekh unn do aadmiyo me se ek bola.

Bhale hi Raghu aur Jassi ko uski baat se asar na hua ho par aam janta ko zaroor hua tha. Kaapte hue wo sabhi neeche dubke pade the.

Disco lights jal zaroor rahi thi club me par disco jesa koi mahaul nahi tha waha.

Jaha thodi derr pehle maze kiye jaa rahe the, khaan paan ho raha tha, naach gaana chal raha tha wahi jagah ab ekdum se shaant sii pad gayi thi.

Ye darr tha logo ka apni jaan khone ke prati. Bhala kise apni jaan pyaari nahi rehti?

Raghu : Iski toh...

Jassi : Shhh! Shaant!

Abhi Jassi Raghu ko shaant rehne ke liye hidaayat de hi raha tha ki tabhi...

*Bang*

Ek aur gunshot ki awaaz aayi...
Iss baar ye awaaz upar se aayi thi.
Aur ye awaaz sunte hi dono ka hi shareer sihar utha.

Upar unki Miss ho sakti thi. Kahi ye gunshot!?

Sochte hi dono ekdum ghabra gaye...

Raghu : Tumne suna na Jassi? Wo upar pohuch gaye hai. Ab toh mein daawe ke saath keh sakta hu ye uske hi aadmi hai.

Jassi ne bina kuch bole hi dheere se sar apna haa me hilaaya. Iss waqt wo khud kaafi ghabraaya hua tha. Usse apni jaan ki parvaah nahi thi. Parvaah thi ki kahi unki Miss ko kuch ho na jaaye.

Raghu : Isliye!! Isliye mein keh raha tha ki Miss ko akela nahi chorrna chaahiye... Ab dekha na...

Jassi : Ye samay unn sab baato ka nahi hai Raghu...

Raghu : Fine....!! Ab bas aur nahi! Jassi! Mein shoot kar raha hu. Tum dusre waale ko shoot karna... Perr thik?

Jassi : Thik!

Haami bharte hue iss baar Jassi bhi Raghu ki baat se sehmat ho gaya. Dono hi ek dusre ka ishaara samajh gaye the.

Aur agle hi pal...

Palak jhapakte hi dono ne apni pant ke peeche khuse revolver ek jhatke me nikaale aur...

*Bang*

*Bang*

Dono ne revolver ka trigger dabaate hue seedha prahaar unn do aadmiyo ke perro par kiya.

Achaanak se huye iss hamle ki unn aadmiyo ko na hi umeed thi aur na hi wo iske liye taiyaar the. Aur nateeja wahi...

Bullets unki chamdi ko phaadte hue unke perro ke andar sama gayi aur tezz cheenkh ke saath dono wahi gir pade...

Keval wahi nahi, waha maujood baaki sabhi janta bhi cheenkhne lagi. Shor machaate hue wo apni jaan ki guhaar lagaane lage.

Darr ke maare unke shareer kaanp rahe the. Par agle hi pal jese unki muraad puri ho gayi,

Raghu : Jao! Niklo fatafat... Baithe kya ho... Bhaago!!

Ye baat sunn jese logo ki jaan me jaan aa gayi. Aur kisi ne bhi ek shan nahi gawaaya waha se bhaagne me.

Girte padte wo hadbadi me forun hi baahar ki orr bhaage. Na hi unn ne palat ke peeche dekha aur na hi iss baat ki chinta kari ki kahi woh koi samaan bhul toh nahi rahe andar?

Iss waqt logo ke mann me jo tha, wo tha apni jaan bachaana. Jo ki sahi bhi tha.

Aur pal bhar me saari janta waha se bhaag gayi.

"Phew!!"

Saas lete hue Raghu aage badha jaha Jassi tha. Jassi ne unn do aadmiyo ke girte hi unke revolvers hathiya liye the.

Ab keval wo do aadmi, Raghu, Jassi, aur club ka manager hi neeche bache hue the.

Jassi : Tum!! Idhar aao!!

Jassi ne forun hi manager ko bulaaya. Wo bechaara darrte hue dheere dheere aage aaya.

Jaasi : Dekho! Ambulance bulao aur inko bhijwao par dhyaan rahe... Yadi koi bhi tumse jaankaari le toh tum yahi kahoge ki tumne kuch nahi dekha. Kehna ki tum darr ke maare chhupe hue the. Aur iss kaaran tum kuch bhi nahi dekh paaye. Theek?

Manager ne sehme hue haa me gardan hilaayi aur dono , Raghu Jassi upar ki orr jaane lage.

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Jab Raghu aur Jassi neeche unn halaato me phasse hue the tab Veer ke saath upar kuch aur hi kathin paristhiti bani hui thi.

Jab wo ladki ko kapde pehna kar usse apni peeth par taange baahar nikal raha tha.

Darwaaza kholte hi usse ek zorr ka jhatka laga...

Jese hi usne darwaaza khol ke mundi apni daayi taraf corridor me daali toh usne dekha...

Kareeb 4 se 6 aadmi teezi se seedhiyo se upar aaye aur harr ek ke haath me ek revolver tha.

Sab ke sab upar tezz kadmo ke saath aaye aur unke haatho me gun dekhte hi waha baithe counter pe aadmi ki hawa tight ho gayi.

Ye wahi aadmi tha jo rooms deta tha.

Veer ne dekha ki wo sabhi aadmi aaye aur ek ne uss counter waale aadmi ki collor pakad ke usse hilaane laga aur kuch puchne laga.

Veer ka room stairs se dur tha jis kaaran usse kuch bhi sunaayi na diya. Aur fir wo hua jisse dekh uske perr ladkhadaane lage.

*Bang*

Ek aadmi ne counter ke upar lage cctv camera ko ek jhatke me uda diya.

Ye wahi awaaz thi jo Raghu aur Jassi ko neeche sunaayi padi thi.

Aur uske baad toh jese afra tafri mach gayi...

Unn aadmiyo ne aage badh rooms ke darwaaze todte hue thok peet ke khole aur andar se couples ghabraate hue baahar aake hahakaar machaane lage. Cheenkhne lage, chillaane lage...

Kuch toh adhnangi awastha me the...

Veer ko pehle laga tha ki ye koi police ki raid thi shayad par uska wo vichaar saamne iss drashya ko dekh udd chuka tha.

Aur keval yahi bas nahi tha. Abhi jese usse jhatke pe jhatke lagna baaki the.

Apne perr aadhe khule darwaaze ke peeche jamaaye usne apna sar nikaal daayi orr nazar maarte hue dekha ki koi upar aa raha hai wahi seedhiyo se.

Aur tabhi Veer ko ek mouth organ ki dhwani sunaayi dii.

Seedhiyo se upar ahista ahista aate hue ek insaan dikhaayi diya.

Safed hat, safed pant, safed coat, andar ek laal shirt aur coat ki breast pocket me ek gulaab ka phool.

Kuch iss prakaar ki dress pehne woh aadmi apne ek haath se mouth organ baja raha tha aur dusre haath me wo ek hockey ki stick liya hua tha.

Jaha budhe buzurg laathi ka istemaal karte the chalne ke liye wahi ye aadmi laathi ki jagah hockey stick ka istemaal kar raha tha.

Aur usse dekhte hi Veer ke badan me ek siharan se mach gayi. Uska shareer kaap utha.

Usse dekh ke utna darr nahi lag raha tha, jitna uske mouth organ ki wo dhwani sunn kar lag raha tha.

Upar se wo hockey ke sahaare chalne ka dhang.

Apna thook nigalte hue Veer kuch soch hi raha tha ki tabhi uske saamne wo hua jiske chalte uska dimaag kaam karna hi band kar diya.

Uss safed coat waale aadmi ne apni dhwani bajaana band kari aur, counter pe baithe aadmi ko dekh wo uss se pucha.

Aadmi : Kesa tha? Pasand nahi aaya na?

Aur wo counter waale aadmi ne darr ke maare na me sarr hila diya.

Ye sawaal hi aisa tha. Yadi wo puchta ki kesa laga? Toh beshaq wo counter waala banda haa me hi sar hilaata. Ye sawaal usse phassaane ke liye hi pucha gaya tha.

Aur jese hi usne apna sar naa me hilaaya. Uske agle second hi usse apne jeevan ka sabse bada pachtaava hua.

Kyuki agle hi pal uss safed coat pehne aadmi ne badi hi shaitaani si muskuraahat dii aur dheere se apna mouth organ apne jeb me rakha.

Fir peeche se ek pistol nikaali aur bina koi samay gavaaye hi seedhe uss counter waale ki khopdi udaa dii...

*Bang*

Bullet khopdi me ghusi, aur kaam tamaam...
Khoon ke chheete yu nikalte hue zameen par bikhar gaye...

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa...."

Aur corridor me firse kohraam mach gaya. Cheenkhe goonjne lagi...

Aadmi : Mujhe bilkul bhi pasand nahi hai jab koi meri bajaayi gayi dhunn ka mazaak udaaye...

Ye nazaara dekh log toh bhaybheet the hi par jo sabse zyaada bhaybheet tha wo tha Veer.

Uske perr kaanp rahe the. Wo na hi aage badh paa raha tha na hi peeche jaa paa raha tha. Darwaaze ke kaaran uska shareer chhupa hua tha. Keval mundi hi baahar thi.

Aur uski samajh me kuch bhi nahi aa raha tha.

Kuch aaye samajh me ya na aaye par ek baat wo bhali bhaati jaanta tha...

Aur wo ye ki wo ye drashya kabhi nahi bhul paega...
Na hi uss safed coat waale aadmi ko...
Aur na hi uss dhwani ko...

Uski pakad paseene ke maare ladki par se chhuth rahi thi. Par uske bawajood wo apne mann me ek sankalp liye usse apni peeth par laada raha.

Yadi wo chaahta, toh issi shan ladki ko room me chorr apni jaan bacha ke bhaag sakta tha par usne aisa nahi kiya.

Kaaran?

Kaaran tha wo ladki... Uss ladki ke kaaran hi wo Pari ko khote khote bacha tha.

Ussi ladki ke kaaran aaj wo ek ladke se mard ban chuka tha.

Aur sabse badi baat...

Usne uss ladki ke saath ye sab uske nashe me kiya tha. Glaani ke bhaav toh zaroor the Veer ke mann me. Toh bhala kese wo aise me usse yu chorr bhaag sakta tha?

Club me upar jaane ke liye do raaste the. Ek tha daayi taraf jaha se Veer khud aaya tha aur jaha se abhi ye aadmi log aa rahe the.

Aur ek tha uski baayi taraf.

Zaahir sii baat thi, ki Veer baayi taraf ka raasta hi chunn ne waala tha.

Kyuki daayi taraf jaana toh khud ki maut ko aamantran dena tha.

Ye decide karte hi wo kisi bhi waqt bas mauka dekh ke bhaagne ka wait karne laga.

Tabhi uss aadmi ne apne chelo se bola,
"Yahi kahi hogi! Kisi room me! Saare check karo!"

Aur bas...

Sabhi shuru ho gaye...

Ek baar firse afra tafri mach gayi...

Aur corridor me logo ke idhar udhar hone se bheed sii mach gayi. Jab Veer ne dekha ki uske saamne aur agal bagal ke rooms se log nikal rahe hai aur bhaag rahe hai, toh yahi mauka dekh wo forun hi tezz kadmo ke saath baayi orr bhaaga jaha neeche jaane ke liye seedhiya thi.

Ab ya toh isse kismat kahe, ya ittefaaq par Veer unn admiyo ki nazro se bachne me safal tha.

Par ek musibaat tali nahi, dusri uske saamne thi.

Neeche jaati seedhiyo par pehle se hi ek aadmi revolver liye khada hua tha.

Aur jese hi usne Veer ko neeche aate dekha, usne forun hi apni gun Veer par taan dii...

Aadmi : Ayyeee...?! Neeche... Neeche rakh ladki ko...

Veer : K... Kyu??

Aadmi : Sawaal jawaab karta hai saale? Neeche rakh! Aur chup chaap yaha se nikal le warna bheja udaa dunga samjha?

Iss se pehle Veer kuch keh paata, uski nazar neeche se aate Raghu aur Jassi par gayi...

Uss aadmi ka chehra Veer ki taraf tha toh usse nahi pata tha ki uske peeche se kaun aa raha hai.

Aur idhar apni Miss ko Veer ki peeth par dekh Raghu ekdum bhadak utha. Wo ye soch raha tha ki Veer ne uski Miss ko kidnap kiya hai.

Par Jassi ke mann me kuch aur hi tha.

Ek jhalak me hi usne bhaanp liya tha ki maajra kya hai.

Aur iss se pehle ki Raghu koi galat kadam uthaata, Jassi ne uska haath thaam liya.

Jassi ke aisa karte hi Raghu ki bhi fir samajh aa gaya ki baat kya thi.

Aur ishaaro hi ishaaro me baat karte hue Raghu aur Jassi peeche se uss aadmi par toot pade...

Par hamla hote hi uske haatho me gun ka trigger dab gaya...

Aur bullet nikal ke theek Veer ke kaano se thodi dur se guzarte hue peeche diwaar me sama gayi.

Tackle karte hue Raghu ne uss aadmi ko daboch liya aur gardan pe waar kar usse behosh kar diya.

Jassi ne forun aage badh Veer ki peeth se apni Miss ko thaama...

Veer : Wo... Wo... Ek safed coat aur safed pant me ek aadmi... Shayad inhe hi dhund raha hai...

Usne kaapte hue kaha toh Jassi ne agle hi pal Raghu ko dekha...

Raghu ko pata tha usse kya karna hai...

Usse gaadi nikaalne ko keh raha tha Jassi...

'Ye wahi hai... Damn it!!!'

Mann me soch Jassi ne ek aakhiri nazar Veer par daali aur bola,
"Thanks! I'll remember this... I hope tum yaha se safely nikal jaoge."

Aur bina fir peeche mude wo tezz kadmo ke saath neeche bhaag gaya.

Veer waha khade khade sab kuch dekhta raha.

Usne dekha saamne wo aadmi jisne gun chalaayi thi wo behosh dala hua tha.

Usne palat ke dekha jaha deewaar par bullet se hole ho chuka tha.

Aur ye dekh uske shareer ke ruye khade ho gaye...

'I... I almost died!!'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!!

Bhai bach gaya nahi bada wala L.....
Lag jata.......

Update - 12 ~ Shopping
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Ab tak...

Wo ladki kamre me baithe baithe hi kuch kuch soch rahi thi. Na jaane kya chal raha tha uske dimaag me.

Usne ek akhiri jhalak firse apne phone me naye contact Veer par daali aur fir apna phone band kar wo bathroom me ghus gayi.

Ab aage...

Pari se Veer ko 60 points mile the, jinme se 50 points usne skill khareedne me laga diye the. Aur baaki ke points apne stats me laga diye the.

Usne 5 points strength me daale, 3 points intelligence aur 2 points appearance me.

Ab uske stats kuch iss prakaar the.

[ Stats :
Strength - 15/100
Intelligence -11/100
Agility - 3/100
Endurance - 7/100
Appearance - 9/100]

Agli Subah Veer ko apne aap me halka fulka change mehsoos hua aur aaj Shreya ne jab usse dekha toh wo bhi usse dekh ke sawaal karne lagi thi.

Shreya : Oye! Raat ko facewash pot ke soya tha kya? Kuch khila khila sa lag raha hai chehra.

Veer : Nahi toh!!!

Naashte ke time Nidhi naashta serve karte hue college jaane ke liye ready thi aur wo bhi bas naashta karne baithne hi waali thi.

Dining table par Veer aur Shreya ko wo pehle hi serve kar chuki thi aur saath me baithate hue usne apna naashta shuru kiya.

Juhi pehle hi school jaa chuki thi toh uski koi tension nahi thi. Auto aata tha aur Juhi ko le jaata tha.

Abhi Nidhi kha hi rahi thi ki usse apne upar kisi ki nazro ka abhaas hua aur usne chehra uthaate hue dekha toh paaya ki Veer usse hi dekh raha tha. Dono ki nazre milte hi Veer ne apni nazre jhuka lii aur Nidhi ne bhi yahi kiya.

Kal se pata nahi kyu, wo Veer ka saamna nahi karna chaahti thi. Wo chaahti thi ki sab kuch pehle jesa ho jaaye aur wo normally baat karne lage but uske bawajood uski himmat nahi ho rahi thi ki wo Veer se baat kar paaye.

Usse bada hi atpata lag raha tha. Kese wo jaaye aur Veer se firse normally baate kare. Par kal ke uss scene ke baad se Nidhi bechaari bilkul bhi himmat nahi kar paa rahi thi.

Aur yahi haal Veer ka bhi tha. Wo Nidhi se baat karna chaah raha tha par wo khud iss conversation ko kese start kare usse samajh me nahi aa raha tha.

Harr baar wo muh kholta kuch kehne ke liye par alfaaz nikalte hi nahi the.

"Mein chalti hu." Aur Nidhi agle pal hi apni naashta khatam kar uth gayi.

Kuch zyaada hi jaldi me thi wo, jese jald se jald ghar se nikalna chaahti thi.

Veer ek baar fir kehne ke liye hua par uske honth khulte hi band ho gaye aur Nidhi uski nazro se darwaaze se baahar nikal ke ojhal ho gayi.

'Damn it!'

Mann me usne apne aap ko kosa...

Sirf baat hi toh karni thi. Fir kyu usme himmat nahi aa rahi thi? Glaani sabko akhir baandh hi deti hai.

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Idhar Nidhi kuch derr baad college pohuch chuki thi par uske mann me na jaane kya chal raha tha.

Veer ki class me wo enter karte hue pehla lecture lene lagi. Black board me haath toh zaroor chal rahe the uske par dhyaan kahi aur hi tha.
"Ma'am! Aapne 4th step galat kiya hai..."

Uske kaano me ek ladki ki awaaz padi. Palat ke usne usse dekha aur fir waapas se apne likhe gaye solution ko. Aur waqai, usne galat solve kar dii thi ek equation.

"Ohh! Sorry! Students! Ye step galat hai. Sorry!"

Kehte hue usne wo mitaara aur waapas se usse solve kar sahi kar diya ki tabhi,

"Ma'am! 6th step bhi galat hai..."

"Huh??"

Nidhi ne firse apne solution par gaur kiya aur firse usne mistake sahi karte hue dobaara se sudhaar kiya.

"Sorry! Students!"

"Ma'am aap theek ho na? Kuch pareshaan sii lag rahi ho."

Saamne baithi ussi ladki ne uss se sawaal kiya toh Nidhi bhi uski desk ke paas aa gayi.

Nidhi : Itna obvious dikh raha hai?

Ladki : Haa Ma'am! Saaf dikh raha hai aap pareshaan ho.

Nidhi (sar jhukaate hue) : Haa beta! Bas thodi idhar udhar ki baatein dimaag me chalti rehti hai.

Ladki : It's okay! Ma'am! Sabhi ki life me ye rehta hai. Aap yadi chaaho toh rest kar sakti ho. Hum sabhi apna work kar lenge.

Nidhi : Sach? Koi shikaayat toh nahi hogi na tumlogo ko?

Ladki : No ma'am! Wese bhi boht pending work hai humaare paas.

Aur Nidhi ne fir saare students se confirm kar unhe apne period free period ke roop me de diya. Bacche apna koi bhi work kar sakte the. Nidhi wahi saamne rakhe podium ke paas hi khadi rahi aur apne vichaaro me khoyi hui thi.

Lunch hua aur wo staff room me apni seat par baithe lunch karne hi jaa rahi thi ki tabhi uske kaano me kisi mard ki awaaz padi,

"Kese rahe morning lectures Nidhi Jii!"

Palat ke Nidhi ne dekha toh paaya ek uske hi jitni umr ka professor uske peeche khade hue tha.
Ye bhi same department me tha.

Nidhi : Acche the Vikaas Sir!

Vikaas ne ek jhalak Nidhi ko neeche se upar dekha. Laal aur kaali saadi me gazab ki lag rahi thi woh. Bilkul qayamat. Upar se abhi abhi paki hui thi. Vikaas jaanta tha Nidhi ki married life ast vyast hai. Usse bhi ye doubt rehta tha ki saala aisa maal chorr ke aadmi kese reh sakta hai bhala?

Bhale hi Vikaas ne badi chaturaayi se Nidhi ke jism par nazar maari thi par Nidhi thi toh ek aurat. Ek hi jhatke me usne Vikaas ki nazro ko pakad liya tha ki wo kaha ghum rahi thi. Aur uska abhaas hote hi Nidhi ke chehre par pal bhar ke liye ghrina ke bhaav aaye par agle hi pal usne apne aap ko waapas se normal kar liya.

Vikaas : Aaj Sweety Miss, Jatin Sir, Komal Ma'am, inn sabhi ko mein party de raha hu canteen me. Chaliye aap bhi!

Nidhi ne ek smile dii aur boli,
"Sorry Vikaas Sir! Mein aaj wese hi thodi thaki hui hu. Aur Tiffin bhi aise me waste ho jaega."

Vikaas : Arre! Aapka tiffin mein waste nahi hone dunga. Laaiye! Apake haatho ka khaana aaj mein khaa lunga. Aur aap sabhi aaj jo bologe wo canteen me mein khilwaunga.

Nidhi : Baat wo nahi hai Sir! Mene kaha na, aaj mein kaafi thak gayi hu. Toh aap rehne dijiye...

Iss se pehle ki wo apni baat poori kar paati, Vikaas ne usse beech me hi kaat diya.

Vikaas : Chaliye! Aap thak gayi hai na? Aur tiffin bhi waste nahi hone dena chaahti. Toh mein aapke liye yaha canteen se pack karwa ke laata hu aur aapka ye tiffin mein yaha baith ke aapke saath kha lunga. Ab theek? Isme toh koi dikkat nahi hai?

Bechaari Nidhi ab badi hi duwidha me phass chuki thi. Ye Vikaas toh uska peecha hi nahi chorr raha tha.

Abhi wo kuch uttar de paati uske pehle hi usse kandhe par ek haath mehsoos hua jo ki kisi aur ka nahi Vikaas ka tha.

Aur haath ko mehsoos karte hue wo ekdum se peeche ho gayi,

Nidhi : Ye kya kar rahe ho aap?

Vikaas : Mein toh bas aapko comfort de raha tha.

Nidhi : No! I'm fine! Aapko koi zaroorat nahi hai.

Vikaas : Fine! Fine!

Vikaas apne dono haath khade kar waha se nikal gaya.

Aur Nidhi idhar boht hi bekaar feel kar rahi thi. Kese dekh raha tha wo Vikaas usse. Upar se tab jab wo khud already shadi shuda hai.

Nidhi ne nazre daudaayi toh paaya ki kuch lady teachers baith ke usse dekh dekh ke khuspusaate hue baatein kar rahi thi.

Ye sabhi dikhne me bilkul bhi sundar na thi aur jab inhone dekha ki kese Vikaas Sir uss Nidhi ke paas jaa jaa kar usse mana rahe the aur kese uss Nidhi ne unhe mana kar diya toh bhala ye baat kiye bina kese reh sakti thi?

Teacher 1 : Dekha tumne? Vikaas Sir aake usse kitna manaaye fir bhi harqate dekho uski... Muh pe mana kar diya.

Teacher 2 : Aur nahi toh kya... Bhaav kitna khaati hai ye. Khud ko badi hi actress samajhti hai. Nakchadi kahi ki.

Teacher 3 : Pati bhi chorr ke chala gaya iska toh... Ab mein samajh gayi kyu gaya... Iski harqate hi aisi hai.

Teacher 1 : Haa! Attitude toh dekha iska. Ek toh Sir yaha tak laane ke liye lunch taiyaar the par dekho toh...

Teacher 2 : Aisi aurte hoti hi aisi h... Apne husn se dusro ko fassaati hai. Aur saamne aisa dikhaengi jese bilkul raani ho par peeth peeche na jaane kya kya karti hai...

Bhale hi ye teeno teachers dheere baat kar rahi thi. Par uske bawajood Nidhi ko sab kuch sunaayi de raha tha.

Apna nichla honth daato se dabaaye wo uthi aur bina lunch kiye hi washroom me chali gayi.

Andar washroom me jaate hi usne gate band kiya. Uski aankho se ek aasuo ki dhaar nikal, gaal se fisalte hue neeche giri aur uski rulaayi chooth padi.

Sar jhukaaye aur apne nichle honth ko zorr se daato tale dabaaye wo aankhein bheenchte hue unhi sab baato ko sochne lagi.

Vikaas ki wo gandi nazar...
Uska usse haath lagaana...
Unn teachers ki baatein...

Fir usse achaanak hi Veer ke saath wo pal yaad aaya jab usne uss se kuch baatein kahi thi...
'Tumhari aankhein kabhi bhi nahi bhatki... And that's why... I believe you!'

Ye vaakya usne Veer ko kaha tha. Wo pal yaad karte hi Nidhi ka dil shaant sa hone laga. Araam sa mehsoos karne laga. Wo anjaane me hi muskuraane lagi.

Aur fir achanak se usse kal ka scene yaad aaya,

Wo Veer ke gale me lage hontho ke nishaan....

Ye sochte hi usne apna sar zorro se hilaaya.

'What is wrong with me? Wo mera chota bhai jesa hai. Aur iss umr me toh ye sab hota hi hai. Koi hogi uski gf jo usne kal banayi hogi. Mujhe kya karna? Infact mujhe toh khush hona chahiye uske liye. Finally, usse koi mila aur ab uska saathi bana. Fir mein kyu itna tension le rahi hu? Right! I need to confront him.'

Aur yu hi aaj ka din uska inn sab se guzra.

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Shaam ko Nidhi jab thak haar ke waapas lauti toh teeno Veer, Shreya aur Juhi aapas me hi gapshap me lage hue the.

Nidhi : Kya baatein ho rahi hai?

Shreya : Kuch nahi! Bas avayii

Juhi : Mummy!! Aaj special dinner banega na??

Nidhi : Ohh noooo....

Juhi ki baat se usse yaad aata hai ki wo toh samaan khareed ke laayi hi nahi.

Nidhi : Mein aati hu samaan leke...

Tabhi Veer khada ho jaata hai,

Veer : Ma'am! Aap rehne dijiye... Mein chala jaata hu. Aap thak gayi hongi...

Nidhi : Nahi! Tumhe nahi pata hoga kya laana hai aur kese dekh ke laana hai.

Veer : Umm... Shreya jii ko pata hai?

Nidhi : Usne toh apne jeevan me aaj tak sabzi bhi na lii hogi.

Shreya : Heyyyyyy! Mene ek baar lii hai okay?

Nidhi : Aur wo bhi kharaab leke aayi thi...

Shreya (blushes) : Sabke saamne batana zaroori tha kya?

Ek gehri saas lete hue, Nidhi khud jaane hi waali thi ki Veer fir se bol pada,
"Toh fir mein drive karta hu Ma'am. Aap peeche baith jaana. Aap thak gayi hongi. Aap bataati jaana wo wo samaan mein rakhwa lunga."

Uski baat sunn pal bhar ke liye Nidhi usse dekhi...

Nidhi : O... Okay!!

Badi hi dheemi awaaz me wo boli aur kuch hi palo me wo dono ab raaste me the. Nidhi Veer ke peeche baithi hui thi aur uski scooty Veer drive kar raha tha.

Par dono ke beech distance tha, jo Nidhi ne jaan bujh ke banaaya tha. Wo Veer se kaafi dur baithi hui thi. Veer ko aisa lag raha tha jese maano peeche koi baitha hi nahi hai.

'Pari! Nidhi Ma'am ki favourability kitni hai?'

[Utni hi hai master! 25]

'Shit! Wo mujhse zaroor naraaz hai. Kuch na kuch karna hi hoga.'

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Iss waqt Nidhi aur Veer mart me se khareed-daari kar rahe the. Wese toh Nidhi baahar se kuch manga ke khila sakti thi but ab jab usne pehle hi bol ke rakha tha toh bhala wo apne vaade se peeche kese hatt sakti thi?

Veer masaale ke kuch packets dhund raha tha toh wahi dusri jagah Nidhi kuch aur samaan dhundne me lagi thi aur dono hi counter ek dusre se alag alag jagah the.

Aap bhi yadi bade mart me jaate hoge shopping karne toh aapne dekha hi hoga ki kese alag alag stands me samaan rakhe rehte hai aur log apni apni trolley liye ghumte hai aur samaan uthaate hai jo unhe chaahiye rehta hai.

Nidhi ne Veer ko kuch samaan bata diye the jinme usse dhundne me dikkat nahi jaane waali thi.

Abhi Nidhi ek packet me uski manufacturing date dekh rahi thi ki tabhi uski trolley par kisi ne haath rakha aur uske kaano me ek jaani pehchaani awaaz padi,

"Kya hi ittefaaq hai. Mujhe nahi pata tha aap bhi yaha hongi Nidhi jii!"

Nidhi nee nazre uthaayi aur agle pal hi uski bauhe chinta ke maare sikud gayi.

"Vikaas Sir aap yaha?"

Wo jise bilkul bhi nahi dekhna chaahti thi wo shaks uske saamne khada tha.

Vikaas : Aapne din me hume boht hi buri tarah thukraaya tha... I mean humaare invitation ko...

Nidhi : Mera koi galat intention nahi tha. Mein accha feel nahi kar rahi thi uss waqt aur isliye...

Vikaas : Isliye toh hum aapki baato ka bura nahi maante hai, Nidhi Jii! Hum jaante hai naaaa...

Usne kehte hue nazre ek baar fir Nidhi ke badan par daali aur usse neeche se upar tak taada.

Uncomfortable feel karte hue Nidhi thoda peeche hati par boli kuch nahi.

Vikaas : Wese aapne abhi tak kapde bhi nahi badle?

Nidhi (bauhe sikodte hue) : Kapde toh aapne bhi nahi badle hai.

Vikaas (hasste hue) : Jii haa! Jii haa! Kya karu? Biwi ki baat maan'ni padti hai Nidhi jii! Aur ghar me khaane me bhi help karni padti hai warna ghar se baahar...

Nidhi : Toh ye toh accha hai na? Ghar me pati patni ko ek dusre ki madad karni hi chahiye...

Vikaas (paas jhukte hue) : Yadi aaapke jesi biwi ho toh mein toh khud khaana banau aapke liye...

Uski baat sunn Nidhi ekdum jhep sii gayi...

Nidhi : Jii???????

Vikaas : Mera matlab hai... Aap kitni caring ho... Dekhiye! Aap turant yaha kaam se chuuth'te hi shopping karne aa gayi. Aur waha meri wife hai jo bas kaam pe kaam diye jaati hai. Usse bhi aapki tarah hona chahiye...

Nidhi (peeche khisakte hue) : Jo khubiyaa unme hai wo mujhme nahi... Harr vyakti ka swabhaav alag hota hai.

Vikaas : Humse puchiye... Aapme saari khubiyaa hai...

Vikaas ki baat sunn Nidhi ganda sa muh banaate hue usse dekhti hai, Vikaas ki nazre uske stano par thi...

Vikaas : Wo saari khubiyaa jo ek mard ko chaahiye...

Nidhi : Kya kaha aapne?

Nidhi toh wese yaha chaata maarna chaahti thi usse par wo jaanti thi iska anjaam kya hone waala tha aur isliye usne Vikaas ki baat ko yu ansuna kar uss se sawaal kiya taaki Vikaas ko hosh aaye ki wo kitni ghinoni harqat kar raha hai.

Vikaas : Mera matlab... Aap me harr wo quality hai Nidhi jii, jo ek mahila me honi chahiye.

Nidhi ne bina jawaab diye, waha se aage badhna hi behtar samjha...

"Jii! Ab mein chalti hu."

Bolke wo aa toh gayi agle stand par ye soch ke ki Vikaas chala jaega par usse kya pata tha ki jaha jaha wo jaegi wahi wahi Vikaas aa jaega.

Jis bhi stand par wo jaati, Vikaas uske bagal se aake kuch na kuch samaan tatolne lagta aur trolley me rakh leta.

Nidhi kuch bol bhi nahi sakti thi. Bhale hi Vikaas wo saara samaan baad me waapas stand par rakh de par abhi toh woh uski trolley me tha aur aise me wo usse ye nahi bol sakti thi ki wo uska peecha karna band kar de.

Kyuki Vikaas samaan trolley me daalta jaa raha tha.

Nidhi ki nazre iss waqt Veer ko poori bekaraari se dhund rahi thi. Par wo kisi bhi stand ke aas paas dikhaayi nahi de raha tha.

'Just where is he????'

Haatho ko yu aapas me uljhae wo chalti jaa rahi thi aur nazre daudaati jaa rahi thi par Veer kahi nazar nahi aa raha tha.

Abhi wo Veer ko dhundna jaari rakhti tabhi uske kandhe pe ek haath pada,

"Aap ye kyu nahi le jaati???"

Vikaas uska kandha thaame ek kids ke koi product ki orr ishaara kar raha tha.

Aur agle hi pal Nidhi ne khud ko uske haatho ke sparsh se mukt karte hue khud ko peeche kiya.

Nidhi : Jii nahi! Mujhe pasand nahi hai ye!

Vikaas : Accha? Ek baar aap apni beti ko dena. Mera beta toh maangta hi rehta hai ye.

Vikaas ki taraf wo apni peeth kar aage badhne lagi ki tabhi firse ek haath uske kandhe par pada aur bas...

Usse ab gussa aa chuka tha...

"Just leave me alone...."

Usne thoda tezz swar me chillaaya...

"Huh???"

Aur tabhi Nidhi ko ek jhatka laga, fir thodi raahat sii mehsoos huyi, fir thodi khushi, fir glaani aur ant me usse ab atpata sa lagne laga.

Saamne Veer khada hua tha. Uska haath hi uske kandho par tha.

Veer : Wo mein toh bas...

Kehte hue wo apna haath Nidhi ke kandhe se uthaane laga ki tabhi Nidhi ne apne haath se uska haath thaama aur waapas apne kandhe par rakhwa liya. Usse khud iss baat ka andaaza nahi tha abhi ki wo kya kar rahi thi. Ye sab jese apne aap ho raha tha.

Wo jese chaah rahi thi...

Ki Vikaas ke gande haatho ka sparsh Veer ke haath ke sparsh se mit jaaye.

Aur isliye wo Veer ka haath yu thaame thi. Na jaane wo kabse Veer ko talaash rahi thi, aur ant me wo aa hi gaya.

Vikaas peeche khade thoda jhep se gaya kyuki usne dekha kese Nidhi ekdum se bhadak gayi thi. Abhi wo khud iss hamle ka shikaar ho jaata yadi wo apni limit cross karta. Par uske mann me ek hi sawaal tha ki ye banda hai kaun?

Nidhi : Kab se dhund rahi thi tumhe...

Veer : Wo sab chorriye aap theek toh ho na?

Nidhi (nods) : I'm fine!

Veer Nidhi ko ghurta hai aur tabhi uske mann me awaaz gunjti hai,

[I think wo peeche waala banda Nidhi ko harrass kar raha tha master.]

Aur agle hi pal Veer peeche mud Vikaas ko dekha.

Veer : Any problem??

Vikaas : No! Wese aapne bataya nahi Nidhi jii! Ye hai kon?

Veer : I'm her...

Nidhi : He's like my brother...

Iss se pehle ki Veer kuch keh paata Nidhi ne pehle hi apna uttar rakh diya, jisse sunn kahi na kahi Veer ko accha nahi laga.

Vikaas : Hahaha! Accha! Matlab real bhai nahi ho...

Veer : Real bhai nahi hu but bhai ki tarah hifaazat karna acche se jaanta hu.

Aur ye vaakya sunte hi agle hi pal Nidhi ne apna nichla honth daant se daba liya. Ab usse kahi na kahi lag raha tha jese usse wo uttar nahi dena chaahiye tha. Par uski koi galti nahi thi...

Jese Veer ke gale me lagi wo lipstick waale scene ne usse majboor kar diya tha wo kehne ke liye.

Vikaas : Acchi baat hai! Aisa hi hona chaahiye! Chaliye! Nidhi! Jii! Chalta hu mein...

Aur itna bol Vikaas waha se chala gaya.

Veer : Aapne virodh kyu nahi kiya???

Nidhi : Kyaa?

Veer : Anjaan mat baniye ma'am! Wo ghinona aadmi aapke saath aisa kar raha tha aur aapne kuch nahi kaha? Wo toh yadi Pari mujhe na.... I mean yadi meri nazar na padti toh wo na jaane kya kya harqat kar sakta tha...

Nidhi : It's... It's okay! Jaane do!

Veer : And you're fine? Really?

Nidhi (chillaate hue) : Nooooo! Not at all!!! I'm not fine!!!!

Waha maujood sabhi log Nidhi ko ghur ke dekhne lage...

Aur Nidhi Veer ko pakad samaan khareed ke baahar le gayi...

Iss waqt dono hi gaadi par sawaar the. Dono me se koi kuch nahi keh raha tha.

Par ek baat alag thi.

Iss baar Nidhi ekdum peeche nahi balki uss se satt ke baithi thi.

Aur iss baar...

Veer Nidhi ka haath apne kandhe pe aur saath hi saath uske stan apni peeth pe, bhali bhaati feel kar sakta tha.

'Pari! Favourability kitni hai?'

[Nidhi ki favourability ab 30 ho gayi hai master.]

Aur Veer ke chehre pe iss baar muskaan aa gayi.

'At least! Pehle se sab better hai.'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!!

Nice bro

 

[Werewolf]

Awesome, beautiful❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

Congratulations
For 2300 pages

Thanks!

Bhai ji mast update diya apne dil khush ho gya and please agla update jaldi dijiyega

Koshish rahegi.

1.Yehi toh werewolf bhai ne mistry bana ke chor diya!
2. In my sense I watched a Japanese movie jismain ek dusre grah ka jev insaan main ghus jaata hai aur uski takat bad jaati hai(venom movie jaise) wo jev koi bhi roop le sakti the!

Sochte rahiye!

Bhai aap ne pichle story mai bi insaaf nahi kar paye the nayikaon ke sath or ab bi vo ho raha hai.bhai itni ladyes kiu rakhte ho jab insaaf ho hi na paye.
Dusri baat bhai jab like karne jao to chingari or pata nahi kya kya khul raha hai .mod to is bare sochenge nahi

Ya toh ju pehla page padhe bina kahani me ghuse ho. Ya fir harem ka matlab nahi pata hai.
Apne aap se harr female character ko Veer ki goad me girao. Warna dukh hoega aage.
Pichli kahani me sab ke saath nyaay hua tha. Chaahe woh Anshu ho, Neha ho, ya koi aur. Preeti, Nikita ko mene side me hi rakha tha. Galti meri nahi hai agar reader ek side character ko protagonist se jod ke chal raha hai toh. Kyuki hoga toh wahi jo mene uss character ke liye socha hai. Toh abhi se, harr ek female character ko Veer se jod ke mat chalo. Warna pachtaoge.
Rahi baat likes ki toh aap log ye milke baat rakho mods ko ki tap karne par chingari site na khule. Ads dedo lekin redirecting ads na do. Pop up ads do. Mere paas prime hai toh mujhe ads nahi dikhte. Toh aap log mods se ye baat kar sakte ho.

Mod yaha injoy karne ke liye nahi hai ya apne nikammepan ko chupane ke liye.hum khol nahi pa rahe hai xf like karo to hum kuch or hi jagha ja rahe hai.
Akhri baat NAINA JI we want back.unki I'd ko chalu karo pls

Naina jii ki ID ko ban mila hai kyuki zaahir hai koi rule toda hoga unhone. Agar ban ka reason chota hai toh shayad jald hi unki ID unban ho jaaye. Par agar reason bada hua toh lamba ban hi hoga fir.

Nice mast update bro and awesome update bro and awesome singing and awesome update bro

Thanks!

 

[Werewolf]

Awesome Update Bhai

Rajat ka kam ek tarike se dekha jaye toh samapt ho gya hai ab shayad uske paas khone ko kuch nahi bacha. Biwi, bacche, ghar, pariwar, paisa, ijjat, shoharat, power yaha tak ki uski azaadi bhi Veer ne chheen li hai. Ab ek tarike se dekha jate toh wo khatam ho chuka hai par dusre tarike se dekha jaye toh ab wo danger bhi hogya hai cause humko pata hai rajat bhale hi jhant barabar ho par uska ghamand aur ego pahad barabar hai toh ab agar usko kabhi mauka milega toh wo sidha kill shot ke liye jayega. Ab usko maan, maryada, chaal, game in sabse koi matlab nahi rhega. Lekin ye sab writer ke upar hai ho sakta hai wo rajat ko purani bate bhul jao aur lawda pakad ke jhul jao bolke uska character hi nipta de.

Exactly! Ab woh khunkhaar ho gaya hai. Par pehle toh dekhna hoga ki uska haal kya hua hai. Kyuki abhi uske baare me hume kuch Jaan'ne ko nahi mila hai. Agle update me ye pata chalega hume. Bane rahiyega saath me.

Idhar Ragini bhi betaab hote jaa rhi hai. Wo jitna Veer ke paas jana chahti hai Veer utna hi busy hote jaa rha.. ab uske dimag me ek bahut nayab idea aaya hai jo usko Veer ke paas bhi layega aur Ragini ka character bhi ek naye padao se gujrega. Veer ka business is story ka bahut imp hissa hai. Puri story Veer ke business, uske social power & status ke aas paas ghum rha ab dekhna hoga ke Veer apne Bhabhi cum lover ko apne business me madad krne dega ya nahi waise Ragini ko toh Veer se baat manwani aati hi hai toh Ragini ko jyada dikkat nahi honi chahiye.

Ragini is a phenomenal asset. Agar woh Veer ke business me judegi toh zaahir hai Veer ki kaafi pareshaniyo ko hal kar degi. She's a capable person. Par baat wahi hai. Uska experience IT industry me hai. Aur thoda automobiles me bhi kyuki Vivek ki company automobiles ki hi hai. Aur Vivek se shadi karne se pehle woh IT sector me thi. Aur Veer ke paas dono hi nahi hai. Hotel management me toh sirf Shweta aur Bhumika hi uski madad kar sakti hai. Toh Veer ko IT industries me qadam rakhna hoga agar woh Ragini ko apne saath jodna chaahta hai toh.

Wahi Nidhi ke dil ke sath sath ab Nidhi ka mann bhi raste me aane laga hai. Veer ko ab wo apne parivar ke hi nahi balki apne Zindagi ke bhi hisse ki tarah dekhne lagi hai. Ab kuch samay aur phir Nidhi bhi samajh jayegi ke ab wo Veer ke bagair nahi reh sakti. Aur sirf Veer hi uske aur uske baccho ko wo pyar de sakta hai jiski unhe jarurat hai.

Nidhi jab realise karegi tab tak kahi derr na ho jaaye. Kya karegi fir woh?

Wahi Shreya ka pyar toh Veer ke liye samay samay par samne aa jata hai usko toh bas Veer ke haami ka intezar hai wo toh apna sabkuchh Veer ko dene ke liye kabse ready hai.

Shreya ek dost hai. Na ki pyaar. Haa bhale hi Shreya ko Veer pe crush aa raha hai. Par sirf one sided se kuch nahi hone waala.

Lekin dono behno ka rishta ek kathin raste se gurarne wala hai jab dono ko pata chalega ke dono ka pyar ek hi hai wo bhi Veer. Lekin jaisa dono ka character hai wo dono hi samajh jayengi ke kyun dusre ko Veer se pyar huva.

Aur jab dono ko ye pata chalega toh fir kya hoga? Yuddh chidhega fir toh! Kya Nidhi balidaan degi? Ya Shreya balidaan degi? Ya dono hi peeche nahi jayengi? Veer ko paane ke liye kya dono hi ek dusre se bhid baithengi? Dekhna dilchasp hoga.

Ab finally aate hai Tejal mata urf Tej par. Jo abhi kuch samay pehle sara mamla apne hatho aur pairo par bhi le liya tha aur pehle Veer ke pariwar ko baato dhoke ab Pranjal ko hatho se dhone aayi thi lekin Pranjal thoda Tejal pe bhari pad gya. But but but ab Apne Veer babu ka entry ho chuha hai jisko jarur Arohi ne bataya hoga kyuki address bhi usi ko pata tha. Ab Pranjal ka sabse bura sapna sach hone wala hai...

Actually, Pranjal nahi. Tej Pranjal par bhaari pad gayi thi. Pranjal ne toh sirf chhal se uske haath me kenchi maar ke ghayal kar diya. Warna nateeja kuch aur hi hota.
Thanks a lot btw! Keep supporting!

 

[Werewolf]

आज के अपडेट से समझ आया की तेजल intelligent तो है but over confident भी है

Keh sakte hai. Saath hi rash bhi hai thodi. Abhi javaan hai. Ladakpann bhara hi hai. Jese jese Veer ke sang samay guzaregi usse kaafi kuch pata chalega.

I mean ठीक है की green belt हो कराटे में लेकिन जो चीज कराटे में भी सबसे पहले सिखाई जाती है वो ये है की opponent को कभी understimate नहीं करना चाहिए

Hmm! Galti thi yaha Tej ki jo woh Pranjal ke haath ko observe na kar saki. Aur saath hi apne emotions ko khud par haawi hone dedi. Bas! Uske alaawa uski aur koi galti nahi thi. Pranjal ko toh woh warna maza chakha hi deti.

और यहां तो उसका opponent वो था जिसका चेहरा भी उसने जीवन में नही देखा था
खैर जो भी हो, उसका जो मकसद था वो पूरा हो गया
उसे अपने भाई से मिलना था मिल गई

Ye baat Pranjal pe bhi laagu hoti hai. Akhir usne bhi toh Tej ko nahi dekha tha. Overall agar ek fair fight hui toh Tej hi jeetegi.

ये सब करने का (वीर के फैमिली वालो से बहस, प्रांजल से लड़ाई) करने का बस एक ही कारण समझ आता है वो ये की वो अपने भाई के मन में एक अच्छी impression डालना चाहती होगी ताकि अगर उसके भाई के मन में थोड़ी बहुत भी कड़वाहट हो तो वो दूर हो जाए obviously गुस्सा भी होगा जो उन्होंने उसके भाई के साथ किया

Dono ke conversation se hi hume matlab samajh aayega.

हालांकि मैं थोड़ा confuse हो गया हूं, की तेजल सच में वीर की सगी बहन है या नहीं
और अगर है तो वीर की बाकी फैमिली को पता कैसे नही है

Confuse ho gaye? Kya yaar!

आगे देखते है क्या होगा, आगे इसका राज जरूर खुलेगा

वीर आ गया है उम्मीद है की प्रांजल भी अब वही जायेगा जहा रजत है, चुपचाप उठा के ले जायेगा।
वीर तेज के आलावा बाकी सब को लगेगा की प्रांजल अमृत निवास छोड़ कर भाग गया
करुणेश को भी ये लगेगा की प्रांजल पुणे में है।

Nope! Kyuki Veer ne toh Pranjal ko tapka ke unke hi ghar pe chorr diya hai.

वीर ने रजत को बहुत अच्छे से रेला है भाई,
ले देके उसके पास क्या बचा था, उसका रुतबा एक बड़ा lawyer होने का
वीर ने उसे भी खत्म कर दिया, उसी के खेल में उसे outplayed किया है।

Yes!

सबसे अच्छी बात ये है की निधि और छोटी बच्ची जूही इस कहानी के शुरुवात से दुख भोग रहे थे, अब जा कर उनके दुख कम होना शुरू हुए है
I hope की वीर जल्दी जल्दी उनके जिंदगी में सब ठीक कर देगा

He will!

Eagerly waiting की वीर ने जूही को जो chocolate factory open करके देने का जो वादा किया है उसे कब पूरा करेगा, hope इसी arc me

Not in this one. But we might see it in crimson arc.

इंतजार रहेगा की वीर kaira को जल्दी से normal करे ताकि वीर और kaira की एक अच्छी सी love story देखने को मिले

Of course!

बहुत ही अच्छा अपडेट भाई, आज लगा की कहानी एकदम सही pace पर थी ना ज्यादा तेज ना ज्यादा धीरे

ऐसे ही शानदार अपडेट देते रहे, स्वस्थ रहे मस्त रहे
And as always waiting for next update

Bohot bohot dhanyavaad!!! Aise hi saath bane rahiyega! Keep supporting!

 

[Werewolf]

Jabrdast update brother....

Rajat Chutiya ko ache sabak sikhya mujhe lgta hai wo police station me nahi hai wo veer ke kabje Mai hai police station me rahega jaldi hi nikal jayega.....

Nidhi Shreya ka gift acha laga wo part.....

Last me tezal ki entry or v majedar laga or to pranjal ka v hal behal hone vala hai .....​

Bohot bohot dhanyavaad!

Nice update bro aag laga di sorry for late comments aaj meri jindgi.main ek Nani Jaan ayi es liye late ho gaya sorry for late update

Koi na! Thanks a lot!

Bhai dilse ekk request hai ... Plzzz sex scenes mai plzzz gifs add kar dena

Imagine karo bhai.

Bahot ho shandaar aur jandaar update tha bhai...

Ab jab Pari ka level up hua he to uske sath Veer ko kay nayi abilities bhi mili he...

Veer apni Nidhi mam se bhi hal chal puchh aya aur nain matakka bhi kar aaya..

Aur last me Tej to karate Green belt nikli jisne Pranjal ke to tatte muh tak la diye the aur last me jo aapne Veer ki entry karwayi usne to maje he de diye he ab lagta he ye pranjal ke aakhri din he...

Thanks a lot! Keep supporting!

बहुत ही शानदार लाजवाब अपडेट भाई
मजा आ गया
परी का लेवल बढ़ने से वीर को बहुत फायदा हों गया हैं भाई
वीर ने बल्हार के कान में यह कहा था कि रजत को पेपर की सुर्खियां बना दों क्या मस्त आइडिया था वीर का सभी की नजरों से गिरा दिया हरामी को

वीर के साथ समय बिताने के लिए रागिनी भी वीर के बिजनेस में मदद करने की सोच रहीं हैं बहुत खुब भाई

आज बहुत दिनों बाद मेंम से भी मुलाकात हों गई लेकिन व्यवहार अभी भी वहीं है

तेज वीर के पुराने घर जाकर बवाल हीं मचा दिया भाई
ये कोनसा तरीका किसी के बारे में पता करने का
अब ये क्या बात हूई की तेज वीर की सगी बहन नहीं हैं और यह बात तेज खुद भी नहीं जानती हैं

प्रांजल का पता मिलते ही तेज निकल गई हाथ साफ करने करुणेश ने बता दिया प्रांजल को लेकिन कोई फायदा नहीं हुआ तेज को मिल गया लेकिन तेज प्रांजल को कम आंका जिससे वों मात खा गई भाई
लेकिन उसे चोट लगें उसके पहले ही वीर ने थाम लिया था लेकिन वीर वहां पहुंचा कैसे भाई
क्या परी ने उसे मिशन दिया था भाई

Veer waha kese pohucha ye next update me dikha diya jayega Bhai. Dhanyavaad iss sameeksha ke liye. Aise hi saath bane rahiyega!

Ek to pranjal waise h hrami h or upar se lakdi ko itni gndi Gaali de ra wo ldki veer ki bahen h toh ab to is pranjal ki achi gaand marega veer n he deserves it bhen ka lauda

Laude lag gaye uske bhai.

Bahut hi acha Update diya bro. Your writing skill is on another level.


My story :- Werewolf
Please take look

Thanks!

शानदार जबरदस्त भाई लाजवाब update bhai jann superree duperrere update
Fabulous excellent outstanding performance

Sale की to puri vat laga diya veer ne ab ijjat ka kambada karna baki hey ohhh balhar karega

Ab maja ayega jab us dusre chuu.... Ki bari hey

Dhanyavaad!

Hello werewolf bhai , i have been reading your story from last 3 months, moreover m a story reader from last 10 year , i started my story reading journey from antarvasana to now xforum but trust me your story is the incomparable and if i would do that then it will be equal to an insult, your writing skills are amazing i would batter suggest you to use your skills to write a novel and publish it ,it will definitely be a best seller , big fan of your story brother . Keep it up.

Thanks a lot brother!
About publishing.... Yes! I tried it once. That story is on a halt. There are contracts which you must sign if you want them to publish on their platform. A lot of work has to be done. Only full time authors are capable in it. Since I don't have all my time to spare for the story. That's the reason why I posted here. Thanks for the suggestion btw. Keep supporting!

 

[A.B.KING]

Waiting for next update bro

 

[Rajdeepchatha]

Waiting

 

[Werewolf]

Mast update tha bhai sbse bdiya to nyi bkchodi pta chli.. pranjal alg hi duniya m hai ashiq type scene bna diya uska apne chlo Madhuri ko dudha jaye next update me lkin Madhuri ki lega kaun veer ya pranjal

Thanks! Veer ko madhuri ka saiyya na maan lena bhai

Mazza aa gaya matlab thoda emotional or thoda thriller se bhara tha yeh update ..... Pranjal saala kitna kameena insaan tha bachpan se hi .... Yahan thoda gussa arohi pe bhi aata hai ki woh sab dekhti rahi lekin usne roka nahi ....

Isliye toh Arohi khud ko dosh deti hai abhi bhi.

Lagta hai ki jitna gussa veer shweta se hai usse kabhi zyada gussa woh apni sagi maa se hai ...

Gussa toh aaega hi na bhai!

Or jaise pranjal ki maa ne usse bachaya usne to aag mai ghee ka kaam kar diya

Bilkul!

Veer asani se apni maa ko maaf nahi karege usne jo kuch bhi bachpan se abtak saha hai uska kahin na kahin woh apni maa ko doshi manta hai or jo sach bhi hai ... Abb bhawna ki kya majburi thi woh to wahi jaane lekin woh kissi bhi tarhan se iss baat ko nahi jhutla sakti ki usne apne chote se bete ko chood diya tha ....

Ab bhai Shweta ke paas chance hai. Veer ko apni side karne ka.

Veer se maafi milna itna aasan nahi hone wala hai bhawna ke liye ....bohot besabri se intezar karenge agle update ka bhai .... Once again bohot badhiyan update tha ...

Dhanyavaad! Keep supporting!

Bahi Maja a gia update ka...............Super nahi nahi nahi ...is say bi operrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr Gr8 update

Thanks!

Superb mindblowing update sir g,
Kal chota se majak kiya tha per ye dekh ker dukh howa ki log jo mehnat karte haa unki izat nahi karte. Moka milte hi burari karne lagta haa...

Thanks!

That's call as a perfect update

Thanks a lot!

Superb update to maar peet aur sabak sikhane ke baad fek diya Pranjal ko uske ghar
Ab dono bhai bahan ghar pe
Aage dekhte hain kya baate hoti hai

Dhanyavaad!