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After USC. Contest. Wolfi bhai ko bhi dabbe ka aur reactions score ka chaska lag gaya hai![]()
Meri padh lenajanta hun dost mai ye bol raha ki unka aur is story ke writer wolf bhai inke update ka size dekho aap fir batao jab inna bada bada update me story nipta nai pa rahe to ek chota sa short ma kya hoga bhai aur hamko yahi pasand puri feeling ke sath story padhte hain hum ishiliye short story like na karte hain unna samjh na aata usme
sorry brother dil se mujhe contest se nafrat hai har writer dil se mehnat karta hai fir koi winner koi looser ye sab meko achcha na lagta wahan aapko kya hasil hota malum nai meko yahan aap hiKabhi mujhe flaunt karte dekha hai mr. xf ka dabba? Apun seedha saadha masoom hai
Koi lalach noi.
Haan bas updates pe likes aur revos ka lalach zaroor rehta hai. Jo ki mera haq hai
Meri padh lena
Wese mein short story writer nahi hu par koshish karunga ju logo ko ek mast story dene ki.
Winner ya loser se farq nahi padta. Iss genre pe mein yaha par pehli baar kuch likhne wala hu. Samay mile toh ek baar nazar zaroor maarnasorry brother dil se mujhe contest se nafrat hai har writer dil se mehnat karta hai fir koi winner koi looser ye sab meko achcha na lagta wahan aapko kya hasil hota malum nai meko yahan aap hiho
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ok brother padh lungaWinner ya loser se farq nahi padta. Iss genre pe mein yaha par pehli baar kuch likhne wala hu. Samay mile toh ek baar nazar zaroor maarna![]()
Laalchi hona acchi baat nhi...After USC. Contest. Wolfi bhai ko bhi dabbe ka aur reactions score ka chaska lag gaya hai![]()
Janm dene waali ki baat kuch aur hi hoti hai. Par Shweta bhi peeche nahi rehne waali.MA samajh gyi! akhir kyo na samajhti MA hai vo!
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Shweta ne baat sambhaali thi.Bhumika Di jhijhak rhi thi veer ke gale lagne ke liye pr veer ne unhe khud se hath faila kr bula liya, jaha Teju Di ne ek pyari si kissibhi le li Uski gale lagte huye...
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Ava ko akhir kyo jarurat pad gyi veer ki Jo use msg karke bulva liya, kahi vo fir se to nhi fas gyi is Crimson ke changul me...
Vo iland kyA us crimson ka hai jidhar se fire huye the vo patakhe barood.
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Ju ne bada sawaal kiya hai. Iska uttar hum issi arc me jaanenge. Sabr banaye rakhe.Vaise mujhe puchhna tha ki jb host ki maut ho jati hai to kya uska system bhi dismantal ho jata hai ya vo kisi or host ko search krta hai, kya aisa bhi ho sakta hai ki host khud apne system ko kisi dusre person ko de sakta hai...
Bohut bohut dhanyavaad khubsoorat revo ke liye. Aise hi bane rehne ka man! Keep supporting!Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab amazing update with awesome writing skills bhai![]()
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