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Hmm! Tabhi mein taajub me tha ki kisi ka dhyaan ek baar bhi uss par naa gaya. Mere liye toh ye accha hi tha."I need you asap" esme ek commanded tone tha jo sirf kaera ya Eva ki hi ho sakti thi. Kisi ne Eva ka nahi socha just because vo ek baar hi aaye thi aur sab etna familiar nahi the us se including myself.
Kaera ka poora ek alag se aage chal ke update aayega. Usme sab ujaagar ho jayega. Including Veer's mysterious skill which he used worth 5000 points.Maine bhi yehi socha tha ki kaera ne bulaya hai aur finally hume kuch pata chalega but aisa nahi hua so aapne ab tak kaera wale scene ko dikhaya nahi matlab usme kuch bahut bada hua hai aur uski ek achi ploting ban rahi hai
Jaan boojh ke short likha kyuki wo repeated nahi hona chaahiye tha. Ragini ko pehle Veer bhog hi chuka hai. Toh aise me agar woh Ragini ke saath kahi acchi sii jagah jaa ke kuch special moments banaata tab mein aur vistaar mein usse dikhaata. Abhi ke liye plot par zyada dhyaan diya. Isliye sweet and short rakha.Ragini ke sath milan bhi ho gaya lekin mujhe vo kuch short laga sayad maine jada expect kiya tha aur jaisa aap likhte ho uske according ragini ke liye expectations badh gaye thi lekin jaisa bhi hua acha hua
Sweta aur baki sab apne liye lage pade hai ki kaise bhi karke veer ke dil me jagah bana paye vahi bhawna aati hai ek sentence bolti hai aur sabse upar jake khadi ho jati hai. Just a personality she had. Just amazing
Yes! Aur uss par mein kaam kar raha hu. Tej isliye depressed bhi rehti hai iske chalte. She's not able to help her brother that much. Bhumika jabki Veer ke liye kaam karna shuru kar di hai. It's going to be tough for Tej.Tej is brilliant too but now I want her to do something productive. I mean apne bhai ke sath to kaise bhi rahe, kuch bhi kare lekin sirf utna hi seemit nahi rahna chahiye usko. She has the potential and she must use it. Veer will be very proud of her then
Finally ab jaake Shweta ne usse freely chorr diya hai. She's utilizing that freedom. Wo jaanti hai Veer aur uske beech utni bonding nahi hai isliye wo Veer se baatein kar apna relation bana rahi hai uske saath. She's shy too. Lekin wo Arohi jitni shy nahi hai. Arohi shyness me aur aage hai. Usse embarrassment zyada feel hota hai compared to others.However bhumika is involving in everything like anything. Bahut jaldi usne sab sikh liya aur step in karke apna paksh bhi rakhne lag gaye. Sayad uski maa ka bahut bada role raha hai esme but still she is doing great
Yes there are similarities. But they aren't exactly identical. Bhumika shy hoti hai lekin Arohi jitna nahi. Arohi kuch zyada hi reserved rehti hai aur bolti bhi kam hai. Bhumika as a hotel owner has to deal with a lot of VIP guests. So she's persuasive and she does talk with people frequently unlike Arohi who doesn't like public attention that much. They were both in a tough situation back then. They couldn't talk to Veer because of their family. However, there's a twist. Bhumika for now isn't attracted to Veer in some other kind of way. But same cannot be said for Arohi.Vaise dekha jaye to bhumika aur arohi me kafi similarities hai. Dono shy hai veer ke samne, dono ko veer ke against koe aur hi chala raha tha aur dono apni feelings share nahi kar pati
Man! Arohi ke itne kam screen time me bhi uske fans badhte jaa rahe hai. Rihanna Arohi sabko pasand aa reli hai.Arohi is my favorite character in this story (nidhi ma'am is going parallel with her)
Indeed. Arohi ke sirf subtle emotions dikhaaye gaye hai but they are very impactful if you look deep into it.Bas uski ek chhoti si conversation aa jaye aur mera kaam ho gaya. Aapne jis tarike se uske emotions plus mental situations ko dikhaya hai mujhe nahi lagta es se acha koe aur kar kuch kar sakta tha. Also agar emotion wise dekha jaye to arohi ke emotions ko hi sabse barike se dikhaya gaya hai
Aur bhai kya chahte ho aap us se? Kitni baar galti se kiss karaoge? Es baar arohi ki marji se hi kara dena ek chhota pyaar sa kiss.
Yes! Sonia ab thodi mysterious si ban gayi hai. It's understandable why people are now curious about her more.Also also I'm much more interested in Sonia and veer equation (even more than kaera aur Eva aur anybody else) may be because starting dosti se hue fir business me aur fir...
It will be very interesting to see how these two will go in future
Kavya beech beech me apni chhaap chorrti jayegi.Kavya ka role kam tha kya es baar mujhe jada kuch yaad nahi aa raha. Tej aur bhumika hi ghum rahi hai dimag me bas.
She is a bit busty. Haha! She has a slim waist and appropriate size for breasts and booty.Can I imagine bhumika as a busty chick?
Ye ladki jo system wale bande ke sath thi ye Priya thi na?
We'll see soon.Aur agar veer system wale bande ko maar de to kya uska system pari ke sath merge ho sakta hai? Fir to aur strong ho jayegi system
Abhi main kuch purane updates padh raha tha aur usme ek line thi kuch aisi- agar aapne mera galat istemal karna suru kiya ya aapme ego aa gaye to aap mujhe kho doge" aisi kuch line thi jo pari ne boli thi
Why I'm getting a vibe ki last me aisa hi kuch hone wala hai and the end will be like sab kuch pane ke baad bhi kuch hasil nahi hua aur sab khatam ho gaye?
Sach sach batana veer ko maroge na end me aap? Main kisi ko nahi bataunga
You don't know what's about to come.Now let's talk about this arc
Pehle to ye ki I know Eva ya nat jo bhi uska naam hai usko aapne kaera ke level ka rakha hai to thoda usko elaborate karo. I know vo abhi dari hue hai aur abhi to sirf ek hi update aaya hai lekin fir bhi main gyaan to chhodunga hi
You'll see soon!Kuch aisa dekhna to banta hai jaisa hum kaera ke time dekha tha aur esliye hi kaera naam sunte hi ek alag personality aakhon ke samne aa jati hai
Aisa hi kuch uske sath
There might beAb ye arc yaha Paris me hai to Divya suhana, Sonia ya kaera ke yaha aane ki koe possibility?
I'm also getting a vibe ki koe to marega es arc me lekin aisa naam dikhae nahi de raha because all the characters are too strong right now aur unme se kisi ka marna abhi ke liye to justify nahi lagega but still koe to marega esme
Tamanna? Tamanna, Niharika, Parijaat ladies will play their roles after the crimson arc. China town arc je pehle ek business segment ka arc rahega. Jo famiglia arc ke antargat hi aayega. But it'll be focused on business.Are ha us blogger ka kya hua?
Kaha bhag gaye vo?
Kuch faltu me to likhte nahi ho aap
Agar uske bare me likha hai to kuch na kuch to jarur hoga. Bulao usko aur karao ghode ki savari us bechari ko bhi
Thanks a lot man for this massive and lovely revo. I cannot answer much questions. But I do try to give as many details as possible to the readers without ruining the surprise for them. Thanks and keep supporting man! It means a lot.All the updates are very good bhai. Ab pace banane laga hai so most probably crimson bhi dikh jaye next me. Keep writing
Ye swabhaavik hai. Koi bhi writer jab kuch naya likhna shuru karta hai toh josh zyada rehta hai. Tab mein free bhi tha. Isliye updates jaldi aa jaate the. Lekin updates ki length choti hua karti thi.Ek question hai aapse ho sake to honestly reply kijiyega jab aapne ye story start ki thi tab aapka week mein 3 update aate the jaise 2 update thode complicated hote gaye aapka update ka ratio bhi kam hota gaya week mein 3 se 2 huye fir 2 week mein 3 update reh gaye ab aap weekly updates dene lage ho jis speed mein aap ja rahe ho uss hisaab se fir 2 weeks mein ek update aayenge fir shayad monthly ho jayega,mera suggestion hai ki aisa hone se pehle aap sambhal jaayen,mind mat kijiyega meri baaton ka mein samajhta hoon basic problem kya hai jo ki basically yahaan par majood maximum writers ki hai pehle to wo Josh 2 mein regular update dete hai kyunki basic concepts unke mind mein hota hai par jaise hi thode complications badhta hain unke ratio kam hone lagti hai kyunki kyun be fizul mein Itna matha khapayen fir dheere 2 unka interest kam hone lagta hai aur finally wo completely story ko dump kar dete hain yahaan maximum logon ne yehi kiya hai kine hi mind blowing story started after some point of time the writer disappear so aapko ye mera personal suggestions hai ki at least week mein do update ka ratio maintain karne ki koshish kijiyega mere hisaab se ye ratio aap aaram se maintain kar sakte ho without disturbing your daily routine.ek baar sochiyega Jaroor
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Crimson Arc Kitne Update Ya Time Main Pura HogaTamanna? Tamanna, Niharika, Parijaat ladies will play their roles after the crimson arc. China town arc je pehle ek business segment ka arc rahega. Jo famiglia arc ke antargat hi aayega. But it'll be focused on business.
200 ka update hai kul abhi mano toCrimson Arc Kitne Update Ya Time Main Pura Hoga
Around 149 according to my estimate.Crimson Arc Kitne Update Ya Time Main Pura Hoga
Bhai cnp maane?Ye swabhaavik hai. Koi bhi writer jab kuch naya likhna shuru karta hai toh josh zyada rehta hai. Tab mein free bhi tha. Isliye updates jaldi aa jaate the. Lekin updates ki length choti hua karti thi.
Ab work hota hai. Aur idhar udhar vyastata ho jaati hai. Samay kam milta hai.
Baat plot ki nahi hai. Mere andar abhi aage aane waale do arcs ka plot spasht hai. Plot ki dikkat hai hi nahi. Par story jaise jaise aage badhi hai, complicated hoti gayi hai. Complicated as in likhne me. Story ko likhna ab hectic task hai. Kyuki itne characters mujhe akele manage karne hote hai. Fir appropriate pictures dhundna. Kuch edit karna, aur ek ek detail ke liye wapas se puraane updates ko chhaatna.
Taaki kahi bhi koi galti na ho jaaye future updates ke liye. Sab mein akele hi karta hu. Na hi kisi ki help ya suggestion. Kahani aisi hai ki koi suggest bhi nahi kar payega theek se. Veer ki family ke liye bhalayi wo suggest kar de. Par system se related kuch nahi kar payenge. Kyuki sabse zyada familiar mein hi hu uss se. Mein jaanta hu system ko kaise progress karwana hai. Isliye mein akela pad jaata hu. Aur ye sab taiyaar karne me samay lagta hi hai.
Tum jis basic problem ki baat kar rahe ho meri ginti usme nahi hoti. Because I have a prepared plot from the beginning. Finale ka bhi soch rakha hai mene. So uski problem nahi hai. Also, meri already ek story completed hai yaha.
Writers ka motivation poora readers pe depend karta hai. Ab last update ko dekh lo. Response weak hai. Harr update ke end me mein ye kehta hu ki apna apna kaam kar ke jaane ka. Readers ka kaam chota sa hota hai. Update padhne ke baad usse like karna. Aur kam se kam 1 se do line me update ke baare me kuch kehna.
Par kuch readers wo bhi nahi karte. Taali do haath se hi bajti hai. Agar readers lack of interest dikhayenge. Toh writer apna motivation khota jayega. Isliye ant me wo ye sab fir chorr deta hai. Jab uski mehnat ka fal usse nahi milta.
Reader aata hai, update 10 minute me padhta hai, bina like kiye, wahi superb update chipkaata hai, aur dusre thread par chala jaata hai. Waha bhi yahi karta hai and it keeps going on.
Last update mene mega update diya. Action start ho raha hai. Lekin response readers ka ghat gaya. Toh ab aise me mein agla action update kaise likhu? Motivation hi nahi aata. Siwae chand ginti ke readers ke alaawa, baaki sabhi cnp waale hai.
Mein apna poora deta hu harr update me. Parantu kuch readers apna kaam nahi karte. Mein yaha aake ek hi cheez dekhta hu aur wo hai readers ka response. Jab pata lagta hai ki iss update ko khaas pasand nahi kiya. Aur dheere dheere ab log chhat rahe hai.
Toh fir mera bhi likhne ka mann nahi karta. Agla update mene likhna shuru bhi nahi kiya hai. Readers ka saath rahega to kahani aage badhti jayegi. Warna toh... Dekhte hai...!
Copy pasteBhai cnp maane?