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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery
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Update - 137 ~ First Clash (2)
Ab tak...
Uski aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi.
"T-Tum!!???"
Agle hi shan,
*Ding*
[Mission : Get to Ava as fast as possible.
Rewards :
1) ??? Points.
2) 1 Random skill (any tier)
Mission failure penalty : 5000 points deduction.
Location : 3rd floor.]
Ab aage...
“Itna hairaan kyu ho rahe ho? We are not seeing each other for the first time right?”
Veer ke saamne woh khada hua tha. Wahi jiska darr usse itne dino se sataa raha tha.
CRIMSON!
Veer : T-Tum!?
Crimson : Haan mein! Itna darr kyu rahe ho Veer?
Uske hontho par ek mazaakiya muskaan thi. Lag raha tha woh Veer ko ghabraaya hua dekh uske mazze le raha tha.
[Shit! Master! Ava is in trouble! Lekin ab ye-! How is he here?]
Veer chup chaap saamne khade vyakti ko ghoor raha tha. Ye aadmi uske liye ek buri khabar tha. Woh poora satark, apna dhyaan uss par hi lagaaye hue the.
[Agar isne humse fight li, toh Ava ko bachana mushqil ho jayega Master. Hamare paas waqt kam hai.]
Veer Pari ko jawaab nahi de raha tha Woh jaanta tha ki Pari sahi keh rahi thi. Ek taraf Ava thi jo musibat me na jaane kis haal me 3rd floor par unn aadmiyo se bach rahi hogi?
Toh dusri taraf ye saamne khada aadmi. Woh kare toh kya kare?
Veer : What do you want? Mujhe nahi lagta mene tumhara kuch bigaada hai. Toh fir kyu-!?
Crimson : Ohh! It’s simple!
Veer : ??
Crimson (smiles) : I simply want to kill you. That’s it!
[What??]
Veer (frowns) : Tumhe mere baare me kaise pata chala?
Crimson : Tumhe nahi lagta Veer ki jab ek sher kisi hiran ka shikaar karne wala ho toh hiran ko iss baat se koi matlab nahi hona chahiye ki sher ne uspe hamla kyu kiya. Hai na?
[Shit!!! He is prepared to fight! Master! This is bad news. Run!]
Mutthi kass Veer uski aankho me aankhein daal ke dekha.
Veer : Toh woh tum ho jo Ava ke peeche pade ho?
Crimson : Hmm? Why do you think so?
Veer : Tum Las Vegas me bhi the. House of the killers ke dauraan. Aur ab Ava mushqil me hai. Don’t tell me-!!
Crimson (smiles) : Ohh?
Veer : Las Vegas me Ava ki friend Charlotte maari gayi thi. Woh bhi celebrity thi. Aur Ava bhi celebrity hai. Charlotte maari gayi aur Ava bhi ab-!!! Lekin woh Nightwalker ka kaam tha. Kahi tum-!?
Crimson (smiles) : Hmm?
Veer (frowns) : Iska matlab tum House of the killers se related ho?
Crimson bas muskuraya.
Veer (screams) : TELL ME!!
Crimson : Awaaz neeche Veer!!
Veer : Agar mujhe maarna hi tumhara maqsad hai. Toh mujhe maara kyu nahi? Tumhare paas to Las Vegas me mauka tha.
Crimson (smiles) : Tum khud jald hi jaan jaoge.
[What? Master! I'm feeling strange. Y-Ye aadmi-!! He's doing something. Lekin mein samajh nahi paa rahi. Akhir ye chaahta kya hai.]
'Pari!'
[Yes Master!?]
'Don't worry! We will save Ava!'
[Yes Master! Lekin ye-]
Par Pari apni baat poori kehti uske pehle hi Crimson ke hontho par ek daraavni muskaan saji aur agle hi pal,
*Swoooooossshhhh*
'Huh?'
Woh apni jagah se gaayab ho gaya.
[Shit! Maste-]
Pari ko apne bol beech me hi rokne pade kyuki agle hi shan Crimson Veer ke saamne tha.
*BAAAAMMMMMMMMM*
Ek laat zorr se aake Veer ko padi, parantu samay par usne apne dono haatho se apna chehra block kar liya.
Uska shareer peeche ki orr hawa me ucchla aur usne back flip hawa me hi maari. Turant hi fir usne apne aap ko sambhaala aur zameen par apne perr wapas tikaate hue usne Crimson ko taajub me dekha.
Laat padte hi Veer ko Crimson ke force ka andaaza lag gaya tha. Uss kick ko block karne par hi uske haatho me dard hone laga tha.
[He's strong! That force-!]
Ek gehri saans lete hue Veer ne khud ko prepare kiya.
Aur fir shuru hui waha pe bhaiyankar ladaayi.
Crimson apni tezz gati se Veer ke saamne aaya,
*Whoooossshhhhh*
Uski laat zorr se ghoom kar hawa ko beech se cheerte hue Veer ke sarr par padne ko aayi.
Par tabhi,
*Duck*
Veer ne khud ko neeche jhuka liya. Crimson ki laat Veer ke sarr ke upar se usse cross karti ki uske pehle hi usne muskuraate hue apna perr neeche jhuke Veer ki orr mod diya.
'Fuck!!!'
*Baaaammmmmm*
Split second me Veer ne apne dono haatho se cross bana ke block kiya warna woh kick uske chehre ka huiya badal deti.
*Crack*
Kick ke force se neeche jadi tiles par daraare bichh gayi. Aur turant hi Veer ki aankhein laal ho gayi.
*Ding*
[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned ON.]
Veer ne apna wazan apni baayi taang par tikaaya aur,
*Whooosh*
Daayi taang ko neeche se ghuma ke usne Crimson ki taang par vaar karna chaaha jo ek perr par khade hue tha.
Lekin jaise Crimson pehle se hi Veer ke move ko read kar chuka tha.
Usne tabhi khade hue perr se khud ko hawa me uchhaala aur Veer ke haatho ke beech maujood ek taang se woh hawa me roll kiya.
Crimson ke uchakte hi Veer ki kick yu hi barbaad chali gayi.
Par Crimson ke hawa me hone ke kaaran, Veer ko ek mauka mil gaya.
Woh jaanta tha uske roll hote hi ek zordaar kick uski orr aane waali thi.
Isliye,
"Haaaarrrrrghhhh!!!!"
Dahaad maarte hue usne apne haatho ke cross ko bhar taaqat se khol Crimson ko dur fek diya.
Jiska nateeja kuch nahi hua. Crimson dur jaate hi apne perro par araam se khada ho gaya. Par uske chehre par ek bohut badi muskaan feli hui thi.
Crimson (smiles) : I knew it!! Tumhe maarne me maza aayega Veer!!! Hahahahahaha!!!!
[Maaastttteeerrr Run!!!!]
*Whoooossshhhhh*
Veer mauka dekhte hue hawa ke jhoke ki tarah waha se bhaaga. Ladaayi se bhaagna uski apni style nahi thi.
Lekin uski priority abhi Ava thi. Ye ladaayi nahi.
Corridor ke chhor par hi stairs thi. Isliye lambe corridor me apni poori gati se woh bhaaga.
"Bhaag kaha rahe ho Veeeeerr!!!? Hahahaha!!!"
Usse apne peeche se Crimson ki bhayanak awaaz sunaayi di. Mud ke dekha toh Veer ke badan me ek sihran daud gayi.
Crimson bhaiyankar tez raftaar se uski orr bhaagte hue aa raha tha. Uske qadam itne bhaari bharkam the lekin raftaar fir bhi khoob tez.
[Shit!! Shit!!! Shitttt!!! Runnn! Maaasterrr!!! Runnn!!!! Remember 3rd floor! Quick!!!]
Peeche se khaufnaak chehra liye Crimson utsaah me Veer ko maarne ke liye dauda.
Beech corridor me hi ek fire extinguisher ko usne deewaar par lage hook se ukhaad ke nikaala.
"Here's a gift for you Veeeeerrrr!!!!"
Aur uss bhaari bharkam fire extinguisher ko usne khilaune ki tarah dur bhaag rahe Veer ki taraf phek diya.
*Zoosh zoosh zoosh*
Teevr gati me woh laal rang ka lohe ka cylinder udte hue Veer ke sarr ko phodne ke liye aaya.
[Maaaasttterrrrr!!!!!!]
Veer palta.
Fire extinguisher ke aate hi usne apne baaye haath se usse pakda aur,
"Haaaarrrrrghhhh!!!!!!"
Khud ko 360° turn me ghumaate hue usne force ka istemaal kar fire extinguisher ko Crimson ki orr hi aim kar phek diya.
*Ding*
[Hawkeye]
Extinguisher zorr se udta hua Crimson ke muh ki orr aaya ki tabhi,
Achanak hi slippery floor ke chalte uska perr fisla, woh peecha ko jhuka aur,
*Whooosh*
Extinguisher uske sarr ke upar se nikal gaya.
Aur peeche jaake zorr se andar rakhi office table se bhid tezz awaaz ke saath gira.
Crimson ki aankhein iss baar feli hui thi.
Usne rukte hue Veer ko dekha. Aur fir agle hi shan uski daraavni muskaan aur zyaada badh gayi.
"Nice Aim!"
[Whaaaatttttt!!!??]
Idhar Pari ke saath saath Veer ke bhi hosh udd gaye.
'P-Pari!!??'
Hawkeye miss ho gayi?
Aaj tak Hawkeye se kiya gaya vaar miss nahi hua tha. Lekin aaj Crimson ne uski Hawkeye ko chakma de diya.
[This is bad!!! Master! Ya toh usne koi skill use ki hai, ya fir fast reflexes ke chalte wo dodge kar paaya. Ya fir simply luck ki vajah se uska perr fisla aur bach gaya.]
'That's…!'
[Oh no! Usse hamari Hawkeye ke baare me andaaza lag gaya hai. Master jaldi!! Runnn!!!]
Veer corridor ke antim chhorr par hi khada tha. Usne na aav dekha na taav.
Seedha seedhiyo ki railing pakad chhalaang maar di.
Parantu, Crimson bhi daud ke aake uske peeche peeche kood gaya.
Veer hawa me neeche gir raha tha. 6th floor, 5th floor, 4th floor.
4th floor ke saamne aate hi usne ek jhatke me railings ko dobaara pakda aur latke hue apne shareer ko fling kar woh uss floor ki seedhiyo pe aa gaya.
[Master? Ye 4th floor hai. 3rd nahi!]
'Agar 3rd pe jaunga, toh Ava waha hogi. Mein musibat ko aur leke waha nahi jaa sakta. I'll have to deal with him here!'
[Ah! Right! Yes!]
Uske achanak se upar chadhne ke kaaran Crimson ek floor neeche ko chala gaya.
3rd floor ki railings usne pakdi aur kood ke seedhiyo pe aaya. Veer ka peecha karte karte woh 4th pe chadha.
Waha aate hi Veer uske saamne khada tha. Na hi woh bhaag raha tha aur na hi kuch keh raha tha. Uski aankhein poori laal hoke focused thi.
Crimson (smiles) : Tumhara peecha karte hue jo adrenaline rush mein mehsoos kar raha hu. Woh extraordinary hai Veeeeerrr!!!!
Veer ke dil ki dhadkane tezz ho rakhi thi. Aaj tak usne logo ko chase kiya tha. Ye pehli baar tha jab koi usse chase kar raha tha aur woh bhaag raha tha.
Ek bhayanak darr baitha hua tha uske andar. Darr yaha haarne ka aur Ava ko khone ka.
'Kuch bhi ho jaaye…! I cannot lose here! Miss Ava ko yu hi nahi kho sakta mein…! I promised her!'
[K-Kaash hum alley me na gaye hote.]
'Galti meri hai Pari! Mein hi unhe leke gaya tha. I'm the one who is responsible.'
[N-No master! Please! Khud ko blame mat dijiye. Hume kya pata tha ki waha aisa kuch achanak se ho jayega.]
'It's my mistake Pari!'
[N-No! Subah se hi sab kuch smoothly ho raha tha. Kahi koi dikkat nahi gayi thi. Koi enemy show nahi hui thi. Aur hum confident the apni skills par isliye Ava ki khushi ke liye aap usse leke gaye the. But suddenly-]
Veer mann hi mann muskuraaya.
'Isliye toh kaha mene ki ye meri galti hai Pari!'
[No! That's-]
'And I accept it. Isliye…! Ab uss galti ko fix karne ki zaroorat hai.'
Mutthi kas usne agle hi pal ek martial art stance liya.
Crimson (smiles) : Ohhh!
Veer : Come then!
***
Udhar Veer aur Crimson apni pehli bhidant me lage hue the toh yaha Vegas me Suhana idhar se udhar tension me tehel rahi thi.
Uske saamne hi do aur aurte sofe par baithi hui thi.
Ashita aur Divya.
Divya : Kab tak tehelti rahogi aise haan?
Ashita : Right! Doctor ne tumhe rest karne kaha hai na? Ye faaltu me kyu chal rahi ho?
Divya : Aur baat kya hai? Aisa kya bata diya Prakash uncle ne jisse sunn tum itni tension me aa gayi?
Apni bauhe sikode Suhana kisi soch me doobi hui thi.
Kuch din pehle Prakash Uncle ne uske kaan me ek khabar di thi. Jisse sunn woh thoda taajub zaroor hui thi lekin utna nahi ki chinta me aa jaaye.
Par aaj fir unhone ek khabar usse sunaayi thi. Aur isse sunn, uska chinta me jaana swabhaavik tha.
Divya : Kuch kaho bhi! Kya hua? Business loss hua kya?
Suhana ne naa me gardan hilaayi.
Divya : Toh fir? Periods? Agar aisa hai toh mein kuch tumhare liye accha sa khaana order karwati hu ruko-
Suhana : No! You idiot!
Divya : Ehh!? Toh fir kya hua?
Ashita : Husband se jhagda?
Suhana : Nahi!
Divya : Toh?
Suhana (sighs) : Mene tumhe uss din kuch bataya tha. Yaad hai?
Divya : Kya?
Suhana : Ava ke baare me.
Divya : Oh! You mean uske Paris jaane ki baat? Haan! Mujhe yaad hai.
Suhana : Mujhe Prakash Uncle ne hi bataya tha. Aur mein bas thoda surprised thi. Lekin aaj-
Divya : Hmm?
Suhana : Mujhe khabar mili hai ki Veer bhi Paris gaya hua hai.
Divya : Ohhh! I see! Toh ye baat hai!
Suhana : Huh?
Divya : Ye toh hona hi tha.
Suhana : What do you mean?
Divya : Ava ka call mere paas aaya tha Suhana. She wanted my help. Lekin mein yaha busy thi. Toh aise me uske paas Veer hi ek option bacha. Isme koi taajub ki baat nahi ki Ava ne usse bulaaya hoga.
Suhana : T-Tum jaanti thi?
Divya : Nahi! Mein ye nahi jaanti thi ki woh fir Veer ko bulayegi.
Suhana : Lekin aisi kya zaroorat pad gayi usse Veer ki?
Divya : Uska kehna tha ki woh khatre me hai. Shayad isliye Veer ko hire kiya hai usne. She knows Veer is capable.
Suhana : That…! That stupid Veer. Woh chala bhi gaya? Akele!! Bewakoof hai kya?
Ashita : H-Hey ek minute! Yaha kiski baat ho rahi hai? Kaun Veer?
Divya (smiles) : Suhana ka pyaara lover.
Suhana (blushes) : Shut the fuck up!!! K-Koi lover nahi hai woh mera. For fuck sake I'm married. Don't talk rubbish.
Ashita : W-Wait! Why are you blushing?
Suhana (blushes) : Wh-Who's blushing? Shut up!!!
Ashita : Nahi nahi! I can see it. You are blushing. Tum baakiyo ko bewakoof bana sakti ho mujhe nahi. Hmm! Veer huh? Toh hubby ke alawa bhi koi hai. I knew it!!! Tum kisi se mili ho. Kahi ye wahi toh nahi?
Suhana : Y-You-!!! Stop it!
Divya : Pfft~ Hahahahaha!!! C'mon Suhana! Tumhare chehre pe likha hua hai. You are tensed about him.
Suhana iss baat se anjaan thi ki woh kitni parvaah karne lagi thi Veer ki. Divya ke kehte hi usse abhaas hua.
Suhana : I…! I was just-
Divya (smiles) : Hey! It's okay! Mein to abhi apni investigation chhor ke nahi jaa sakti kahi. But-
Suhana : I see!
Woh kehte hue baahar ko nikal gayi. Aur usne turant hi Prakash Uncle ko phone lagaya.
Prakash : Ji kahiye Miss! Kya baat hai?
Suhana : Paris me humare paas kitne resources hai?
Prakash : Hein?
Suhana : Mera matlab waha par kya kya hai hamara?
Prakash : Ohh! Kaafi kuch hai Miss. Ek ghar available hai. Usme caretaker bhi maujood hai. Transport ke liye 1 car, 2 bikes aur ek personal chopper bhi available hai. Agar aap samudri safar karna chaahti hai toh uska bhi band-o-bast ho jayega.
Suhana : Ohh!
Prakash : Iske alawa hamari 3 badi business partnership bhi hai waha. Kuch kaam tha kya?
Suhana (gehri saans lekar) : H-Haan! Uncle! Ghar se leke transport sab Veer ko available karwa dijiye. Woh wahi par hai.
Uski baat se Prakash hairat me reh gaya.
Prakash : Umm…! V-Veer? Woh ladka?
Suhana : Haan!
Prakash : Ji theek hai. Bura na maane toh ek baat puch sakta hu?
Suhana : Yahi na ki mein usse ye sab kyu de rahi hu?
Prakash (nods) : Jii!
Suhana (smiles) : Mein khud bhi sure nahi hu.
Prakash : Huh?
Suhana : Aap jaldi se ye karwaiye. Rakhti hu!
*Call ends*
Call cut karke usne ek raahat ki saans li.
'Mujhe laga hi tha ki mein phir kisi kaam me fass jaungi. Accha hua Sonu ko mene jaldi aane ka promise nahi diya. Looks like mujhe yaha se nikalna hoga jald hi!!!'
***
Veer iss baat se pare ki uske liye koi soch bhi raha hai aur madad bhi karna chaah raha hai, yaha Crimson se ladne me laga hua tha.
Powerful punches aur Swift kicks ko jhel jhel ke, toh kahi unhe deflect kar woh jaise taise apne perro par ab tak sthir khada hua tha.
Lekin uski haalat kuch theek nahi thi. Jagah jagah choto ke nishaan jhalak rahe the. Toh wahi Crimson apni tip top condition me tha. Bas uske kapde kuch dheele se pad gaye the.
[What the hell is this? Abhi tak mein ek bhi skill trace nahi kar paayi hu. He's fighting just based on his stats?]
Veer haafte hue firse khud ko prepare kiya. Aur,
*Whhhoooosssshhhhhhh*
Dono apne sthaan se gaayab hue aur takraar karte hue dono ke punch ek dusre ki mutthi se jaa bhide.
*BAAAAMMMMMMMMM*
Crimson 2 qadam peeche hua toh wahi Veer uss impact se 6-7 qadam peeche ki orr chala gaya.
Crimson chillaate hue bhayanak speed me aage aaya aur punches aue kicks ki barsaat usne shuru kar di.
Veer acrobats ke chalte kuch vaaro se bacha toh kuch usne wahi rakhi cheezo ko utha ke khud ko defend kiya par kuch uske shareer pe aake pade.
*Powwwwwww*
Ek aake seedha uski chaathi par pada.
"Urrrghhhhh!!!!"
Usne Crimson ko dekha. Woh apne chehre par haivaano waali muskaan liye hue tha.
Achanak hi Veer ke sthir perro ka balance dagamagaya aur,
Iss se pehle ki woh ubhar paata, ek laat uske pait par aake padi aur Veer,
*Craaaaaaassssshhhhhhhhh*
[Noooooooooo!!!!!]
Veer building ke chhor par lage kaanch ko todta hua baahar gira. Hawa me glass ke tukde bikhar gaye.
Force itna tezz tha ki woh neeche girte hue next building ki 3rd floor ke kaanch ko todta hua andar crash ho gaya.
Ek building se dusri building me Crimson ne usse ek laat se pohucha diya.
*Bwuah*
Muh se achanak hi uske khoon nikla.
[Internal bleeding??? N-Nooo!!!]
*Cough Cough*
Sahi samay par usne turant hi Beowulf's Blessings ko switch kar Bone Reaper laga liya tha. Warna uska ribcage andar hi toot ke bikhar gaya hota.
Woh haafte hue khud ko sambhaala aur uthne ki koshish karne laga, jab peeche se fir ek awaaz aayi.
"Time to say goodbye Veeeeerrr!!!!"
Aur fir,
*Booooooooooooooommmmm*
Zorr se ek dhamaka hua.
Building se building ko tehes nehes karte hue ek missile nikli.
Buildings ki lights dhamaake se apne aap toot foot ke band ho gayi.
Jo bhi log andar maujood the. Woh ya toh turant hi dhamake me dardnaak maut maare gaye ya ghaayal ho gaye.
Aur agle hi shan poore ilaake me hahakaar mach gaya. Cheekhe goonjne lagi, log idhar se udhar afra-tafri me bhaagne lage.
Police jo ab tak neeche sadak par gangs se deal kar rahi thi unhe samajh aaya ki ye kitni badi aapda thi.
Toh wahi second floor par maujood Chris, Terashima aur Andre zordaar hue dhamaake se apna balance kho ke zameen par gir pade.
Teeno hi bhayankar ghabraahat me the. Woh ground floor aur first floor ko explore kar ke abhi second floor par aaye hi the jab ye ho gaya.
Unhe saamne ka nazaara saaf saaf dikhayi de raha tha.
Chris (shivers) : This-!!!!
Terashima ne kaanpte hue turant hi apne ear piece par haath rakha aur contact kiya.
Terashima : Reinforcements!!!! Nowwwww!!!
Andre : R-Rocket Launcher? W-Woh ek rocket launcher tha hai na?
Chris : H-He fucking killed them. M-Mein isse nahi chhorunga.
Terashima : Quick!!! Discussion ka time nahi hai hamaare paas. Move faaastttt!!!
***
Dhamake ki bhanak aas paas ke chhetro me bhi lag gayi. Media reporters ke saath saath baaki log bhi turant hi apni apni coverage ke liye recording shuru kar diye.
Toh wahi police aur adhik maatra me apni cars me siren bajaate hue ghatna sthal par pohuchne lagi.
Kisi ne fire fighters ko bhi inform kar diya tha. Lagi hui aag ko bujhaane ke liye wo bhi nikal pade the.
Aur yahi kuch kilometres ki duri par DGSI (The General Directorate for internal security) me ek alag vartalaap chal raha tha.
France ki security agency me se ek thi ye agency jo country ke internal activities se deal karti thi.
DGSI ke head Xavier saari details ko sunn' ne ke baad bhaiyankar gusse me khade hue the.
Head Xavier : Bheji gayi footage se ek arrest warrant jaari karo.
"Yessss Sirrr!!!!" Wahi se awaaz aayi aur kuch log kaam me lag gaye.
Head Xavier : Terrorism ka case ghoshit karo isse. High alert ki warning de do sabhi agencies aur police ko.
"Yessss Sirrr!!!"
Head Xavier : Jo jo agents puraane cases me lage hue unhe issi waqt inform karo aur kaho ki sab kuch chhor ke iss case par focus kare. Baaki sab abhi ke liye halt kiya jaa sakta hai.
"Okayyy Sirrr!!!"
Head Xavier : Dead or Alive ka warrant hona chahiye. Kisi bhi keemat par woh bach ke nikalne na paaye. Warrant ko harr police station, agencies aur news media me bhej do.
"Right away Sirrr!!!"
Head Xavier : Media se contact karo aur ye bhi kaho ki janta high alert me rahe aur ghar se baahar na nikle. Blast waale area ko jald se jald khaali karwao. Ask the police for help.
"Yessss Sirrr!!!"
Head Xavier : Agent Chris, Terashima aur Andre ko satark rehne ke liye kaho. Bina reinforcements ke wo akele aage na badhe.
"We got it Sir!!!"
Tabhi waha Police ka ek senior officer aaya aur Xavier uske saath andar cabin me chale gaye.
***
Idhar dhamaake ke baad Veer ne khud ko uthaaya.
Uske upar ceiling ke kuch bade tukde gir chuke the.
Unhe alag kar woh khaaste hue utha.
[Maaastteeerrr!!! Aap theek ho na?]
'I'm fine Pari!'
[Ye aadmi paagal hai Master. Usne ek baar bhi nahi socha rocket launcher fire karne se pehle. H-He killed people.]
Veer ko ab abhaas ho gaya tha ki woh ek bohut bade potential khatre me tha.
[Also Master!!! I have discovered one of his skills.]
'Huh?'
[Punch maarne ke baad jaise hi aapne uski aankho me dekha tha. Aapka balance dagamaya tha. Right?]
'That's right!'
[He's using Vertigo Master.]
'Vertigo?'
*Ding*
[Skill : Vertigo
Description : Induces confusion, disorientation and loss of balance when looked into the bearer's eyes.]
'So that's what happened. Good job Pari.'
[Look for Ava Master!!!]
Veer utha. Usse neeche se logo ki cheenkhe aur shor-sharaba sunaayi de raha tha.
Usne waapas se building ki orr dekha jaha se woh gir ke iss nayi building me aaya tha.
Crimson chup chaap wahi haatho me rocket launcher liye khada tha.
[I hate him so much!]
'Rocket launcher? Kahi issi ne Slogan ko toh nahi supply kiye the weapons?'
[Ho sakta hai Master.]
Crimson kood ke Veer ki building me jaata ki iske pehle hi,
*BANG*
Ek bullet kahi se shot hui aur uske sarr ke chithde udaane ko aayi. Lekin tabhi usne fraction of second me apna sarr hata liya.
Uski aankhein achambhav me fel gayi aur usne alag disha me dur dekha.
Veer aur Pari bhi hairaan the. Koi dur se Crimson ko maarne ki koshish kar raha tha.
Par Pari aur zyada hairaan Crimson se thi.
[H-He dodged a bullet!!?? Aur wo bhi blind spot me fire ki hui bullet? Aapki Hawkeye ko bhi-!!! Akhir wo istemaal kya kar raha hai?]
'I don't know!'
Crimson ne Veer ko dobaara dekha aur unchi awaaz me bola,
"You are lucky Veeeeer!!! Kuch pal aur jee lo apni zindagi ke."
Itna bol woh waha se turant hi nikal gaya.
Veer fatafat waha se neeche jaane ke liye hua tabhi,
*Ding*
[Mission location upgraded.]
[Location : Red car at parking.]
'Fuuuccckkkkk!!!'
Ava pakdi jaa chuki thi.
Veer apni tezz dhadkane liye waha se neeche aaya.
"Avaaaaaa!!!!"
Woh usse pukaarte hue parkinge dekhne laga. Par tabhi sadak par usse laal gaadi tezz raftaar me jaati hui dikhaayi di.
'N-Noooo!!! Damn it!!!!'
[Master!!! Jaldi!!! Koi car ya bike!!! We need it. Quick!!!]
Veer ne wahi khadi ek bike uthaayi jo kisi gang member ki thi. ON-OFF Switch ko khol usne jhat-se power socket ko hataaya. Aur turant hi 4 wires socket ko remove kar diya.
Uske remove hote hi Bike apne aap start ho gayi.
Acceleration dete hue usne speed me uss laal car ki disha me bike dauda di.
Lekin usse bhaagte hue Chris aur anya ne building se neeche aate waqt dekh liya.
Andre : He's escaping. Quick!!
Terashima : Jaldi!! Chris!! Car lao!!
Chris bhaagte hue Car ko laaya aur woh dono baithate hue Veer ke peeche chal diye.
Idhar Terashima ne turant hi kuch police force ko follow karne ko bhi keh diya.
Kul milaake, Veer ke peeche Chris, Terashima aur Andre toh the hi par Police force bhi peeche pad gayi thi.
Aur udhar Media ne jab Ava ko car me zabardasti logo dwara andar ghuswaate hue dekha. Turant ek sansani bhari khabar news me fel gayi.
"Famous Celebrity Natalia Martin was kidnapped by an unknown group of people."
Headline bann ke poore news channels me ye Breaking News bann gayi.
Ava ke fans chinta me aa gaye. Toh wahi glamour ki duniya me ek sansani mach gayi. Ava jaisi celebrity ka kidnap hona bohut bada matter tha.
Usse bachaane ki ek Chase shuru ho gayi.
Veer na jaane kitni baato se anjaan tha.
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Aur idhar Vegas ke investigation department me tabhi France ki DGSI ki taraf se ek message aaya.
Investigation Department ke Head Nolan ne jaise hi woh sab padha. Woh apni kursi se uth khade hue. Aur turant ke turant hi unhone Divya ko apne cabin me bulaaya.
Jaha waha Paris me raat ho rakhi thi. Yaha Vegas me din ka samay tha.
Divya jaldbaazi me Suhana aur Ashita ko apne ghar par chhor ke department me aayi.
Divya : D-Did something happen!?
Nolan ne bina kuch kahe hi ek printout Divya ke haatho me thama diya.
Jab Divya ne uss print out par apni nazre dudaayi aur usme likhe hue content ko padha. Uski haalat kharab ho gayi.
Uske haanth kaanp uthe aur woh printout uske haath se chhutak ke table par gir pada.
'It can't be-!!!'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Update consists of 4.3k words. Apna apna kaam kar ke jaane ka bhai log. Like thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka. Tab tak ke liye,
Dhanyavaad!
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O bhai sahab entry jabardast Death king bhai gajab entry maariAbhi hum zinda hain! *Smiles in Feroze Khan* :grin
Haan toh sabse pehle dobara gaayab hone ke liye maafi chahunga lekhak mahoday se. Ab zyada details mein nahi jaaunga but ek baar fir boht vyast ho gaya tha par is baar ek sukhad kaaran hetu. So, finally sab achhi - buri cheezein sort ho gayi hain aur ummeed hai ki abse reviews regular taur par de paaunga. :Yess
Would like to start with the fact that I might have never been back to the forum, because of the shortage of time I had in the past few months. But because of two stories, I'm here. This masterpiece of yours is one of the two. I'm not a fan of anime, or shall I say, I don't like it at all. I'm not a fan of stuff similar to it, whether it's in the form of a story or a novel or a movie/series. But this story (though a lot different from what I've understood anime as), but still being based on a subject or baseline that's synonymous to anime, the writer deserves a lot of applause and appreciation for this thing, from my side! If a reader likes a particular topic, say sci-fi, he or she'll eventually start liking a story based on it, no matter what's the quality of the stuff but if a person who dislikes a particular genre, falls into love with a story based into it, is enough to describe the genius of the writer, the quality of his masterpiece and the impact of the words he chose... :Applause
Let's start with where I left... Ab aise particularly yaad nahi hai ki last time kahaan tak review karke gaayab hua tha but shayad Bhavna se mila nahi tha Veer us samay. To kyon na Bhavna se hi shuru kiya jaaye, is review ko..? :Hmm
Bhavna's character needs to be discussed in two parts. Let's start with the first one, that is Bhavna between the time when she met Brijesh in the past and when she was thrown out of the house by Brijesh and co. Pehla point, Bhavna being the mother of the main protagonist of this story (stress on biological mother), will escape criticism and negative feelings most of the time, from the readers' side. Let's start with a basic fact. Bhavna married Brijesh *on her own consent*. The point to be noticed again & again is that she wasn't forced into marriage or union with Brijesh. Brijesh ki utni aukaat thi hi nahi ki Bhavna ke baapu ke zinda rehte Bhavna ki will ke khilaaf us se shaadi to kya, baat tak kar leta! Bhavna ke mann mein Brijesh ke liye pyaar nahi tha ya wo ek samjhaute ke taur par shaadi mein bandhi thi, to ye kewal aur kewal Bhavna ki choice thi, ismein na kisi aur ka koyi dosh tha, na hi role...
If anyone states ki Bhavna ne dono parivaaron ke madhya shaanti hetu apna balidaan types de diya, then it's totally wrong. Agar Brijesh ke proposal ko ek baar bhi Bhavna ne halka sa bhi, ittu sa bhi nakara hota to Bhavna ke Pita aur Bhai, na raktpaat ki fikra karte aur na hi dushmani ki and she very well knew ki uske Pita Harikiran se zyada powerful aur rutbe waale shakhs the (this is what I understood from the flashback). Secondly, Bhavna left Veer in the house and took Tej with her. This is an interesting point. Bhavna ne khud ko ye tark diya ya kisi aur ke saamne khud ko begunaah dikha rahi thi, I don't know, but she fucking hid the existence of a daughter from her father. That's a fucking big deal. Bhavna cannot escape the fact that no matter what the circumstances were, hiding the birth of a child from her father was, is and will be wrong forever, again no matter what!
She very sweetly stated that she wanted to protect Tej from Harikiran and Bhanu's threats. So she hid her. Let's come back to reality, Harikiran threatened about killing her son, and trust me, Tej is not Bhavna's son. Another point is, *what if* Bhavna would've brought Tej alongside her to the house (after her first agyatvaas of one year ended)..? Isn't there even a 0.1% chance of the fact that Brijesh & the rest of the family (excluding Karunesh), would've understood and accepted the allegations she would've put on Harikiran and Bhanu. Kehne ka matlab ye ki Bhavna ne yahi socha na ki Brijesh & party use hi galath samjhenge aur Harikiran aur Bhanu ke baare mein Bhavna yadi sach kahegi, to use hi jhootha samjhenge. But kya ye sab kewal Bhavna ki soch nahi thi? Kya ye sab kewal Bhavna ne apne mann mein *ASSUME* nahi kiya? Wasn't there even a 0.1% of probability of the other thing happening. There was! Tbf, more than 01% of chances were there. The equation was at least 60-40 if nothing else. To kya iska matlab ye nahi ki yahaan bhi Bhavna ne hi sab kuchh *Choose* kiya?
Kya kewal Bhavna ne hi nahi chuna ki Tej ka janm Brijesh aur baakiyon se chhipaya jaayega, Harikiran aur Bhanu ki sachhayi sabse chhupayi jaayegi, Veer ke janm ke waqt wo gaayab nahi hogi, Veer ko Harikiran aur Bhanu se threat nahi hoga (that's why she left Veer there and took Tej with her), Brijesh will not understand her when she'll expose Harikiran & that chutiya Bhanu... Ye sab ke sab Bhavna ke assumptions aur decisions the! Sab ke sab... To wo kabhi bhi, kisi bhi haalat mein khud ko justify nahi kar paayegi un faislon ke liye jo usne ateet mein liye. She expressed her and Brijesh's union as a samjhauta, and said it was Brijesh's attraction towards her and nothing else. Let's be fair, wo 20-22 ya 24 saal ka naujavaan apne parivaar aur relatives ke against chala gaya tha to marry Bhavna. It cannot be just attraction. Secondly, she said it was on Brijesh to make her love him. I mean wtf does that mean? Usne shaadi hi kyon ki fir? Yahaan bhi assume kiya tha kya ki future mein use Brijesh se ek dum Bollywood waala pyaar ho jaayega?
Now let's end the analysis of this version of Bhavna with the most important thing. She took Tej with her and left Veer over there... There's something fishy! Agar wo chahti to Veer ke janm ko sabse chhupa sakti thi, bilkul waise hi jaise usne Tej ke janm ko chhupaya. Correct? But she didn't. Chalo uska assumption raha hoga ki Tej ko baap - bete ki chutiya jodi se zyada khatra hai, Veer ko kam. Second point, wo Veer ko wahaan chhod kar gayi. Duniya ki kisi bhi adaalat mein yadi ek navjaat ki custody par mukadma chale to custody 90% cases mein Maa ko di jaati hai (cases of infidelity not considered in it). There must be a reason for that. No!? Ek navjaat ko, chaahe kitna bhi bada aur vishaal aur pyaar karne waala, mahatmaon ka parivaar mil jaaye, par un shuru ke 8-9 saalon mein jitni zaroorat Maa ki hoti hai, utni kisi aur ki nahi. Bhavna left Veer over there. Yahaan ye dhyaan rakhna hoga ki Shweta abhi equation mein nahi hai, yaani jab Bhavna gayi tab use poori tarah maloom tha ki wo har us darwaze ko band kar rahi hai jahaan se Veer ko Maa ki mamta aur dulaar mil sakta hai, that too for an indefinite period of time. Yaani usne naa kewal apne liye cheezen chuni, balki Tej ke liye uske pita aur parivaar se doori chuni, Bhavna ne hi chuna ki wo Veer ka janm nahi chhupayegi, Bhavna ne hi chuna ki wo Veer ko Maa ki mamta se door karegi. Ye kehna bilkul galath hoga ki Bhavna Veer ko le jaa nahi akti thi. Pehli baat, wo Veer ka janm Tej ki hi bhanti chhupa sakti thi, chalo nahi chhupaya to jab use ghar se nikaala gaya to adaalati karwayi ke zariye wo Veer ko apne saath le jaa sakti thi (in case Brijesh & party use aisa normally na karne dete)...
Second Version of Bhavna - After the mess of Harikiran & Bhanu duo was ended for good by Veer. (Aage likhi gayi saari baatein kewal aur kewal usi Bhavna par apply hoti hain jo gaaon se waapis lautne ke baad dikhi hai. :Spoiler) Bhavna seems to be most intelligent relative of Veer in the story till now. Intelligence in the sense of common sense, and being calculative in the various situations. She's strongly expressive but not over - expressive, she loves Veer and shows it to the fullest but is not kind of overwhelming in her reactions, she doesn't seem to like Shweta's (and Bhumika's?) closeness with Veer but at the same time she doesn't seem to dislike it at all... She's the biggest onion in the story till now in terms of expressing herself out in various conditions and thats is a fucking huge advantage when it comes to her so called *cold war* with Shweta...
Shweta's approach towards Veer is dissimilar as that of Shweta's, Bhumika's or even Tej's. She seems to be calm & composed in handling Veer and matters related to Veer, and that's why I think she's way ahead of Shweta in every terms right now. Maybe Veer has forgiven Shweta but according to me, there's still ice. But when it comes to Bhavna, there's nothing as such and therefore, Bhavna is more calm. She's not worried about Tej and Veer's relationship, but Shweta is, when it comes to Bhumika. Shweta's behaviour towards setting up Bhumika and Veer's relationship in a better way wasn't in the category of intelligent steps, but let's see how it pans out. Till now, it has worked though...
So, to sum up, I dislike Bhavna for her past deeds, and more because of her justifications or arguments she gave in the face-off with Brijesh, her choice of words in that particular conversation. But at the same time, I've to agree to the fact that Bhavna has been the most intelligent character after Kaera in terms of everything (excluding Veer). And the same approach is going to make her rise & rise when it comes to the closeness to Veer...
Overall, a nicely developed character. I mean, I don't like Bhavna doesn't means, I didn't like the character development of her in the story. It has been a superb one, without a doubt. But if there are reasons to admire her, there are some to dislike her too!
After Bhavna, the character which has been in extreme focus in some of the recent updates is Purvi. Let's be fair, she's the most appreciable and beautiful character amongst all her counterparts. Even Bhavna & Shweta aren't even close to her when it comes to generating loveable vibes. Her past, just like 99% of the characters of this story is dark and unpleasant. Losing your own child is a feeling that cannot be expressed in words, it hurts a lot. I've seen a couple's condition after they lost their unborn baby due to certain complications and that was something I hope no one has to experience, ever... But her love & behaviour towards Veer & Tej makes me fall in love with her beautiful heart. I don't think any woman (above 35) would ever come close to Purvi in terms of generating those loveable vibes in this story. Again, one of the moat beautiful characters of this beautiful story... Would love to see more of her in future!
Brijesh bhaiya ki bhi baat kar lete hain. Ab zyada gaali dunga nahi kyonki is farzi aur leechad aadmi ke liye har gaali kam hi hai. But I think what he did to Veer is coming back to him. I don't see either of Tej or Veer ever calling him Dad or Papa in future, don't think there could be any bigger punishment for that bastard for what he did to his own child's childhood! (This also states that Kishor deserves even more brutal belt treatment for what he did :grin ).
Karunesh kahaan gaayab ho gaya hai aaj kal? :Hinthint I assume abhi sutaayi aur kutaayi baaki hai uski aur uski leechad aulaad ki. Firstly, I don't think Veer will be as much blunt towards Karunesh as he should be, all because of Arohi & Kavya. But I think this fact is also gonna change in future. Karunesh jaisa leechad aadmi kuchh na kuchh haramipana to dikhayega, and if I'm correct he might target Bhavna or Tej, aur tab uski marammat bhi theek tarah se ho jaayegi. Would like to see where Pranjal is, and what future holds for him. Third, Vivek ki asliyat kya family ke saamne aayegi. I think ki aayegi, baaki dekhte hain...
Lage haath Harikiran aur Bhanu ka bhi kaam niptata chalun to dono haramzadon ke baare mein zyada baat nahi karunga, waise bhi ye suar baat karne laayak hain nahi. But want to know what's going on with Bhanu's wife. Hope she's fine Werewolf ?
So Bhavna, Purvi & majority of side characters have been discussed. Now let's start with the central ones.
Arohi... My favourite character in the story, even more than Veer! I guess currently ye sequence hai story ki female characters ke prati meri liking ka :shy ... Arohi > Tej > Suhana = Sonia > Kaera = Ava > Nidhi = Ragini > Kavya = Sonali = Bhumika = Shreya. Itni hi hain na abhi, jo potentially Veer ke debauchery ke safar mein shaamil hongi (above 90% chances)??? Khair, Arohi! She can make anyone fall in love with her, without doing anything. Same is the case here. I love this character and I'm in awe of her, for some unknown reasons. And when readers fall in love with characters without knowing the reasons, it's a big win for the development of the particular character. In the case of Arohi, she's cute, she's intelligent and she's shy as well. But that awkwardness she experiences every then and now, makes her different. Bhumika comes close to Arohi in terms of being shy, but Arohi is a level or two above her tbf. Sudden changes in her everytime Veer calls her directly by her name, her response after both the accidental kisses, her words on Holi when Veer apologised after the first kiss, and most recent one.. her reaction on Karunesh's truth opening out.... And yeah! Her behaviour towards Veer when she came to know about Pranjal's bastardism, that food truck scene! Arohi has been the cutest character in the story so far, that too by a country mile (Obviously excluding Juhi from the competition).
I guess soon she'll confront herself on the two 'accidental' kisses and when she realises that she's falling for Veer, we'll might see a new Arohi. Obviously, her shyness and awkwardness aren't going anywhere but would be interesting to see how things pan out when she'll express her feelings (after understanding them herself) to Veer... Overall, the finest development of a character in the story, right after the one of Suhana! :Clap
Kavya has enjoyed her short little time in the story right from the start. She's never in the focus as much as others. But when she's there, she knows how to bring all the focus on her only. Love this character to bits. The recent scene where she spoke to Bhavna & Purvi leaving Arohi in the supreme awkwardness suggests that maybe Kavya needs a couple of more sessions with Veer, you know what I mean!? :grin Waise bhi Veer jab gaaon gaya tha aur towel ke kaaran inmein naarazgi aayi thi, us waqt ka bhi ek spanking session baaki hai. Nahi!? :hinthint Moreover, I think someone (obviously Veer) needs to educate and tell her more about, say duniyadari. She's unaware of what to say, when to say and where to say... But again, that's exactly what makes her so, so cute!
Sonali has been in limelight in the recent updates. When Veer squeezed her boobs, he clearly stated that she, just like her mother & sister in law, is Veer's belonging. Because Suman has already stated that the females of her family will always serve Veer, that too as a slave only, so Sonali & Veer being in a love kind of relationship is out of the equation. I guess now or then, Sonali will be Veer's slave too. But her position will surely vary, as compared to that of Suman or Aabha. She's already helping Veer in the business and when she'll end up gaining knowledge from Nidhi about various subjects, she'll become even better. The gussail and chidchida touch to her character, makes her even more loveable & I think Veer also loves that part of her to the fullest.
Ragini has been taken and so will be Nidhi... But what I'm curious about is the future of Ragini & Veer. Shweta was doubtful about their relationship, and it looks like Bhavna has observed something similar recently. Means, soon the covers will be out and when the truth opens up, it'll be interesting to see how things go. About Nidhi, when Veer said "Be Mine" in the party, her mild reaction stated that she'll be doing that very very soon... The ice is already breaking! Shreya has completely disappeared, maybe she'll be back after the Crimson eposode... And yeah, Sumitra, would be interesting to see what future holds for her cuz Vivek's bastardism would be out soon as well and when her husband and both her sons too will be thrown out, her life ain't going to be the same ever again...
Coming to Suman, I personally never was a fan of Suman's character. I admire her for the strength she put on display when her husband & his son came for her & Aabha. But at the same time her behaviour towards Sonali and Veer is something I can't process. I mean Sonali is her own biological daughter, yes, she's Veer's slave and wants Sonali to respect him but can't she understand that that young girl watches her own mother and sister in law having sex with the same man. I think she should've tried to understand Sonali's condition too. Moreover, I don't think ki story mein abhi tak Suman aur Sonali ka koyi conversation aaya hai jahaan Suman ne use baithaakar us se baat ki ho, use sab samjhaya ho, pyaar se aur waise jaise ek Maa ko samjhana chahiye... Secondly, Suman ne jo kuchh bhi Parijaat waale chapter mein kiya, it looked like Veer is her slave and she's not his. I mean, I know her role is like I only care about my maalik Veer, rest of the world could better fuck off, but that's not how it works, no!? If she's Veer's slave she needs to careful about the kind of impact she's creating on other relationships of her maalik.
Yahaan ye zaroor mention karna chahunga ki is sequence mein Veer saste mein chhoot gaya. Usne Tej se baat karne se mana kar diya tha Parijaat ki auraton ke baaron mein, ek do conversations ke baad. Bhavna ne zyada kuchh kaha nahi. Arohi aur Kavya Karunesh ka satya ujagar hone ke kaaran theek nahi thi, Purvi ne baat ki par uske saamne bhi Veer ne seedha sa jawaab diya nahi... I think I would really like to see ki aisa kaun sa reason that Veer ke paas ki usne apni behnon aur Maa ki maujoodgi mein Parijaat mein sex kiya. Obviously fuddu nahi hai Veer, jo House of Killers ko saaf karke aaya ho, wo moorkh nahi ho sakta. But as far as I can think of, particularly apni family ki maujoodgi mein sex karne ka taatparya meri samajh se baahar hai. And I thought Tejal thodi aur strongly react karegi is maamle par, gaaon se lautne ke baad but maybe she doesn't want to have differences between her and Veer, in such an initial stage of their own relationship. So, I think Suman is behaving like a boss in front of everyone, like she owns Veer and only she can take decisions for him. Her conversation with Tej in Parijaat was an unpleasant one, as far as I'm concerned. Let's see what's next to see about her.
Khair, ab bachi Shweta aur Bhumika, Shweta ke baare mein oopar baat ho hi chuki hai. Wo sab kuchh try kar rahi hai to become more close to Veer than Bhavna is but ismein wo kaamyab hogi ya nahi ye dekhne waali baat hai. Bhumika... Well uski asli side ab khul rahi hai. As she's not behaving only on the orders of Shweta now, to achha lag raha hai uska kirdar khulkar saamne aata dekhkar. Bhumika ko neend mein jis prakar ki harkaten karne ki aadat hai wo beshaq jald hi uske aur Veer ke madhya ke rishte mein tabdeeli laane ka damkham rakhti hai. I think Shweta ne jaan boojhkar Bhumika ko Veer ke samg sone ke liye bheja. Firstly, taaki wo Tej se pichhad na jaaye aur doosra kyonki wo Bhumika ki neend mein ki jaane waali gatividhiyon se waaqif thi. Khair, ab dekhna ye hai ki Bhumika kya Veer ke dil mein apni ek khaas jagah bana paayegi..?
So, we're left with Tej only, as far as Veer's family is concerned. She's a beautiful - beautiful character tbh. She has the shyness of Arohi, boldness like no one else, has maybe the highest intelligence among girls (after Kaera), loves Veer like no one else and the most special and unique thing about her is her behaviour towards Veer. Jis tarah wo Veer par apna hakh jamati hai wahi use khaas aur alag banata hai. She wanted to help & care for Veer like an elder sibling but firstly Veer saved her from Pranjal & then took revenge for Bhavna as well. He's having a nicely set business, has a Rolls-Royce in his backyard and owns a hefty amount of belongings as well. So what's she left with? Tej currently is confused as well as sad because of her inability in fulfilling what she wanted to. But to be fair, her role in Veer's life currently is extremely special. Her behaviour, which I referred to above, makes her special to the story as well as to Veer. No one has ever treated Veer like she does. Her questions reflect the amount of love & care she holds for Veer in her heart. Filhaal, Bhumika ke kahe anusaar wo Veer ki sahayta ke liye kuchh na kuchh karne ka prayas karegi. But kya wo Parijaat ki sadasyaa ke saath kuchh bhi kar paane mein saksham athva comfortable mehsoos karegi? Veer ne jo kuchh us se kaha tha is maamle ko lekar, I don't think uske baad wo Parijaat ki sadasyaaon ke samg durvyavahar karegi parantu us sab ke baad normal reh paana aasan nahi.
Let's see what she does in order to achieve what she wanted to, I mean, that special aide to Veer. Now let's talk about the Trinity...
Sonia... My personal favourite of the three atm. Again, she has been in least limelight of the three. Despite getting more story - space than Ava, it seems like her character is still in the cocoon. Even Ava seems to be more explored than Sonia. But I'm sure a special arc dedicated to her is on the way, though I don't know which one that'll be. Because she has been a different character altogether throughout the course of the story. Bhumika was the least explored some updates back, but now even she has pipped Sonia. I can't think of anything less than 5-6 updates specially dedicated to her, to make her rise from the shadows and come to the mainstream characters. Till now, just like Arohi, she has been my favourite of the Trinity because of some unknown reasons & without a doubt I would love to see more of her in the coming updates. But what makes me worried is Kaera - Ava duo and Suhana as well. Suhana has fallen for Veer & there is no doubt in it. Kaera is Veer's first and in coming updates when OG Kaera rises things will complicate further. Ava will be in centre very very soon. Where does Sonia fit into this? She already has a stigma of coming second and never being able to pip past Kaera. What will happen when she'll fall for Veer? What will happen when she'll know her own sister has fallen for the same guy as her. Tough way ahead for Sonia but if she stands tall in all this, I'm sure she'll be at the same position as her two counterparts.
Coming to Kaera... After that mission she has been invisible. Would've liked if Veer inquired about her from Karan though. But I guess we'll see her again very soon. Kya pata Crimson arc mein hi dekh len hum Kaera ko, OG Kaera ko! Ava se isi arc mein bhent ho jaaye uski? Sounds like a blistering scenario, but the chances are low currently. Mission wasn't completed, and mission didn't fail, so what exactly happened? Kaera's favourability drop towards Veer signifies some kind of emotional outburst but what happened exactly is still unknown. Two scenarios are possible. In both the scenarios one thing will be common and that's Kaera's favourability dropped because her emotions finally ignited. First scenario is ger favourability dropped because of the diary. There was something terrible in the diary and that's confirmed. I guess Veer handed over the diary to her could be the reason for the drop. The second scenario is her emotions came and then she realised what sex actually is. What losing virginity actually is and that seems to be a more plausible reason for the drop. Still the diary, it's contents, mission's status, Kaera's current feelings and state... All needs to be known in complete explanation. Would love to see when she comes back... Kishor ki gaand hi todd de kya pata wo theek hone ke baad!? :Grin Between I think her emotions did awake but she might be not in complete conscious state about them currently and that's why mission's status in unknown...
Suhana's meeting with the doctor explains a lot. She has already fallen for Veer and Veer has comforted her a lot amidst the issues she was facing. She's better currently, both mentally and physically. But again, what will happen when Sonia will fall for Veer? Suhana has been the sacrificer in Sonia's life right from the start, will she do it again for her little sister? This triangle is the most interesting and mind - boggling scenario I can see in the future story, in the context of relationships and feelings. Her doctor will know soon about Veer and things that are developing between him & Suhana and then it'll get even more interesting.
So Ava & Crimson are the two who are left. Ava called Veer when she was in real trouble. Signifies one thing - she's impressed by what Veer did in Vegas. Her favourability clearly states that she currently does not trust Veer completely, let alone having any kind of feelings for him. But in the last update when she went missing and that mission came up, Veer has got a golden opportunity to make that favourability rise. If Veer is able to save her, which he should be, it will definitely create an impact on her and her heart. Crimson has something to do with Veer and with Kaera as well.
• Veer saw Crimson for the first time in Vegas when he was after the House Of Killers. Wahin par aisa laga tha that Crimson is somehow connected to House Of Killers. It would be safe to assume ki he was the mastermind behind the House Of Killers.
• Crimson came to know about Veer... This could be possible because of two reasons. Firstly, he got a mission from his system to finish or deal with Veer. Secondly, it could be possible that Veer messed up his House Of Killers and that was where Veer uski aankhon mein chadh gaya.
• For this to happen, can we assume that House Of Killers was constructed to kill or deal with none other that Ava/Natalia. Pitcher ka agla shikaar wahi thi. Clearly, she would've died if Veer wouldn't have been there. So, it points towards another thing - Crimson wasn't interested in Veer, rather ge was after Ava right from the start. Veer came in between his proceedings and that's where the mess started...
• I think Crimson is somehow closely connected to Grace Martin. How!? That remains a question! Ava's past is unknown, and that part might answer some questions about Crimson as well. So currently it looks like Crimson & Ava are connected.
Terashima seems to be an ally of Crimson. That pahaadi waali girl is unknown, so is that Priya with Slogan. But I think dono mein se ek na ek is arc mein saamne aa hi jaayengi. Abhi ke liye Veer has invested a lot on his Intelligence and that will surely help him in facing Crimson par mujhe yahi lagta hai that his system is far more advance than that of Veer.
Is pehle face-off mein Veer ki kutaayi ke adhik aasar hain but let's see what happens.
What an amazing story this is!! Fuckinggg masterpiece man! Every character is extremely well developed and has a well - defined position in the story. Veer's rise has been phenomenal and I'm sure this Crmison Arc will add another feather in the cap of this story... Never read anything so much well - constructed like this is...
kaha the itne din se ju ki kami khatak rahi thi 
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Fantastic update
Damn amazing awesome nd amazing update
Nice update
Mast update h bhai...
Dhamake dar update bro amazing,
So finally ab asli action dekhne ko mile ga,
End me crimson aur veer ka dubara samna hua he ab dekhna ye he ke veer kese ava ko bachata he,
Aur jaha tak bat late update dene ki he to bro health pehle he aap pehle completely thik hojao update aate rahe ge wese bhi mega update deke aap ne kami puri kar di.
Baqi update Fabolous tha amazing maza agya
nice1
Fantastic update
Romanchak aur shandar update bhai
Werewolf
ऐवा मिशन एक नया अध्याय शुरू कर दिया है.. तो अब इन्तेज़ार है....
Superb update dear
इस अपडेट से आराम से पता चलता हैं की वीर की दुनिया कितनी बदल गई है, कहा एक वक्त उसके होने न होने से दुनिया को कोई फर्क नहीं पड़ता था और आज उसे चाहने वालों की कमी नहीं है, उसके थोड़े समय ना होने पर भी लोगों को उसकी कमी महसूस हो रही है।
वैसे हो सकता हैं ये थोड़ा rude हो, लेकिन आज वीर की जितनी भी care की जा रही है वो बस इसलिए क्योंकि वीर ने अपने साथ हुए अन्याय को भूल कर सबकी अपनी ओर से पहल करते मदद की थी।
तेज का सही है उसके बातों से, उसके behaviour से पता चलता है की वो अपने भाई के लिए desperate हैं, और उसका love अपने भाई के लिए unconditional हैं, वक्त के साथ भी वैसा ही रहेगा।
Well तेज को रात में वीर को call कर लेना था, may be जो love वो अपने भाई को show करना चाहती थी वो हो जाता and obviously वीर के लिए बहुत special होता,वीर के लिए भी सही होता क्योंकि वीर का mentally strong होना जरूरी है, और तेज का call कही ना कही वीर को crimson को मार कर जल्दी वापस जाने के लिए motivate करता, साथ ही एक अच्छा conversation का segment देखने को मिलता
काव्या और आरोही का भले ही छोटा segment था but important था, आरोही reserved रहती है लेकिन इसमें उसका दोष नहीं है, कुछ लोगों का nature ही होता है specially जो घर का बड़ा बेटा/बेटी होते है। आरोही वक्त से पहले mature हो गई है अपनी छोटी बहन को सम्हालते सम्हालते, और काव्या अभी भी बच्ची है क्योंकि सब उसकी care एक बच्चे की ही तरह करते है चाहे वीर हो या रागिनी
Ava की हरकते देख कर अच्छे से समझ आ रहा है की वीर उसके लिए कितना important हैं। बस वीर के आ जाने से कितना relax है वो और कितना safe feel करती है, but कही ना कही ये वीर के लिए थोड़ा मुसीबत भी है क्योंकि ava के साथ होता है तब थोड़ी careless तो जरूर हो जाती होगी, जैसी सतर्कता वो अकेले रहने पे रखती होगी वैसा वीर के साथ रहने पर नहीं रखती होगी।
ava के angle से देखे तो कही ना कही वीर के रहने से उसे फिर अपना free life जीने को मिल जाता है, भले ही उसे वीर से मिले ज्यादा time नहीं हुआ है लेकिन एक बात वो भली भांति जानती है की अभी इस दुनिया में सिर्फ वीर ही है जो उसके सारे मुसीबत का solution हैं।
खैर ava अपना cleavage show करके क्या करना चाह रही थी समझ नहीं आया, क्या वो वीर को tempt करने की कोशिश कर रही थी या फिर वीर को परख रही थी की वीर कही characterless तो नहीं
Well यदि ava वीर को tempt कर रही थी तो निश्चित ही वीर के लिए परेशानी होगी क्योंकि ava जैसी खुबसूरत celeb किसी को रिझाना चाहे तो फिर उस इंसान का बच पाना थोड़ा मुश्किल ही है।
Terashima और chris मुझे detactive लग रहे है क्योंकि वो दोनो तो बहुत पहले से वीर और ava के पास थे, तो enemy tracker को पहले ही notifications दे देने चाहिए थे पर ऐसा नहीं हुआ, खैर दोनो अपडेट में बहुत limited चीज़े ही हमे जानने को मिली है दोनो के बारे में
और वो दोनो किसका चेहरा रिकॉर्ड कर रहे थे वीर का या ava का, i guess वीर का क्योंकि ava का चेहरा नया नही है
पुराने जमाने की कहावत है एक योद्धा को हमेशा सतर्क रहना चाहिए, वीर भी एक हिसाब से warrior ही है और यहां वो बस कुछ seconds के लिए ही लापरवाह हुआ नतीजा ava kidnap होने के कगार पर है, enemy tracker इस बार दगा दे गया
Crimson ने literally suprise motherfaka वाला moment दिया है, बस 1 झलक में उसने परी और वीर दोनो को समझा दिया की बच्चों खेलने कूदने के दिन गए, आप के अब्बू आ गए है। खैर ये तो वक्त ही बताएगा की कौन किसका बाप है।
वैसे excited हूं crimson के system को लेकर, क्या वो भी ऐसे ही बात करती होगी crimson से, क्या वो भी female है, क्या system evil काम करने वाले mission देता है और बहुत कुछ भी
एक शानदार अपडेट भाई, कहानी की pace एकदम सही है। पिछले arc की तुलना में ये arc सही स्पीड पर हैं।
And i hope की होली तक 2 अपडेट पढ़ने को मिल जाए
बाकि तो स्वस्थ रहे,मस्त रहे
And as always waiting for next update
Very good, take rest and get well soon
Chaliye kuch acchi khabar di aapne....
Dhyan rakhiye apna...
Aur review main kal dungi...
Ohhh gosh.. Wt a wonderful update it was!!!...dammn, u always amazed us
...sbhi ne apne apne kaam pakad liye hai to make veer happy and proud
..bechara,, well kya hi kr skte hai...hope wo 'eva' ko bcha le.. Let's see wt happens in next update.. Eagerly waiting
...gud luck bro n take care of ur health as well
...much love brother
Beautiful update Bhai
JABARDAST HaiUpdate
Nice updates
Wao! Superb amazing wonderful update bhai jabarjast sandar lajvab bhai...
Ava ne yha park me apne past ko lekr kuchh btaya pahli baar, vahi se ava ne shopping karne ka plan bnaya, veer ko pahan kr dikha kr pasand kiye sath hi veer ko bhi kuchh kapde dilvaye, Ava ne apni ada car me baith kr ek baar fir se dikha di, Haydil hi le gyi veer ka...
Shopping Mall me use ek struggler mila jo fashion disign me Jabardast hai pari ke mutabik, veer ne use apna card diya hai sath hi offer bhi ki vo uska head designer hoga, veer ko design ka ghanta gyan nhi tha fir bhi bhar bhar ke tarif ki Uski jisse vo pighal gya...
Ava ne illegal jagah jakr vha pr lottery khelne ki farmaish kr di, us dukan vale ne thagne ki Kosis Kari, ab aise me ham Indian Kaise react hote hai vo to sabhi ko pta hi hai lekin jb koi ladki ya mahilao ke liye apsabd Bolta hai to Uska thobda hi bigad dete hai, veer ne usko lagta hai apni wolf vali ankhe dikha di hai, dar ke mare Uski halat patli ho gyi hai...
Vo Chris or uski japani dost ne aisa kyo kaha ki hame uska chehra record karna hai or ek jagah hame sunai diya ki usne "him" sabd ka prayog kiya hai na ki Her, Iska to ek hi mtlb hota hai ki Vo dono purush ke pichhe the na ki kisi ladki ke, yha aapne Ava ke chehre ko kholne ka bhi dikhaya hai jo Sayad confuse karne ke liye ho... Mujhe yah bhi lagta hai ki veer ko deport karvane ka plan bhi bna rkhe hai taki kahi or se use kidnap karvaya ja sake...
Ava kisi IT building me ghusi hai or usi me veer bhi gya tha pr pari ka yah kahna ki vo Yadi smart and intelligent hogi to top me hi jayegi (mujhe yah samajh hi nhi aata ki log musibat aane pr top ko taraf kyo bhagte hai unke liye to ground jyada sutable rahta hai, to kisi bhi direction me bhag sakte hai, top me to exit ka rasta hi block kr dete hai log) usi top vali baat ne veer ko upar bhej diya or use mila apna Crimson Jo Sayad uska hi intjar kr rha tha Taki Usko idhar busy rakh sake...
Idhar crimson ne tab tk show nhi hone diya apne mohro ko jb tk plan puri tarah se execute nhi hone lga, or kya hi exact prediction ke sath planning ki hai Bhai Crimson ne, us illegal jagah pr jaha Ava ka, uske mohro ka vha pr hona, Ava ka usi building me jana jaha pr Crimson hai veer ka uske Flor tk Jana, sabkuchh usne calculate karke rakha hua tha...
Uski avaj sunkr veer ke sath pari ka andar se saham Jana "Dar" bhay Ka samrajya kaisa hota hai Bahut hi khubsurati ke sath prastut kr rhe ho bhaya...
Sabse Pahle to idhar bhavna ji ne Kavya ko khud ko chhoti tai ji kahalvaya or sweta ko badi tai ji, Uski yah masti purvi Ji ne pakad li hai, Dekhte hai sweta Ispr kya reaction deti hai...
Sweta ne idhar bhavna ji ko dekhte huye mere bete sabd ko jor dekr bola tha, vo bhavna ji ko jalana chah rhi thi Lagta hai, bhumika ne to blue print bhi taiyar kr liya hai roughly or usne Aaj sabke samne baat bhi khul kr Bol di Jisse sabke andar ek nya josh bhar gya...
Tej ko apne bhai ki yaad sta rhi hai Bahut, vo rato me uth kar uske touch ko Uski khushbu ko miss karti hai, vo veer ki utari hui shirt ko sungh kr khud ko bahla rhi hai ki uska bhai uske pass hai yah paragraph aapne Bahut hi khubsurati ke sath sath marmik rup me pesh kiya hai...
Mujhe Bahut jyada Accha lga update bhai...
Bhut hi shandar update bhai....
Ek question hai aapse ho sake to honestly reply kijiyega jab aapne ye story start ki thi tab aapka week mein 3 update aate the jaise 2 update thode complicated hote gaye aapka update ka ratio bhi kam hota gaya week mein 3 se 2 huye fir 2 week mein 3 update reh gaye ab aap weekly updates dene lage ho jis speed mein aap ja rahe ho uss hisaab se fir 2 weeks mein ek update aayenge fir shayad monthly ho jayega,mera suggestion hai ki aisa hone se pehle aap sambhal jaayen,mind mat kijiyega meri baaton ka mein samajhta hoon basic problem kya hai jo ki basically yahaan par majood maximum writers ki hai pehle to wo Josh 2 mein regular update dete hai kyunki basic concepts unke mind mein hota hai par jaise hi thode complications badhta hain unke ratio kam hone lagti hai kyunki kyun be fizul mein Itna matha khapayen fir dheere 2 unka interest kam hone lagta hai aur finally wo completely story ko dump kar dete hain yahaan maximum logon ne yehi kiya hai kine hi mind blowing story started after some point of time the writer disappear so aapko ye mera personal suggestions hai ki at least week mein do update ka ratio maintain karne ki koshish kijiyega mere hisaab se ye ratio aap aaram se maintain kar sakte ho without disturbing your daily routine.ek baar sochiyega Jaroor
Thanks
Zabardast fantastic update
So so so apun aaya wapas Kafi long time bad like apun gayab hua tha village arc Mai aur aaj ich WAPAS AAYA online Sala dimag ich chakara gya bidu story itne aagy nikal gye vallage arc khatam ho gya aur usmy dekhai gye scane WAQAI bemisal the ya dekhata hai ke wolfi bro apny story ko likhte waqt Kitne mehnat krte hen village arc ka last scane amazing thaitna maza aaya prhte hue like lga apun wahan beth kr live dekh rha tha usky bad hua ragini ka Kalyan aur family together it's nice keara ke emotions wapas lane ke lye veer ke ek acha khass jhokim liya hai let's see Kya hota hai
suhana ke jhalak dekhe to it's like very interesting she is going to recover from his mentality aur WO Kafi couris ha ke wo nhi btana chahti ke kis ke wajasy she was going to recover
than crimson arc start hua bohat he badiya way Mai ab 1st clash be hua hai
ziyada dekhny ko to nhi Mila but Jo Mila Kafi tha excited krne ke lye
wapasi pe apky story he read ke sabsy phle
again you going rock bro keep write keep post we with you
hope next update jaldi aai Werewolf
Jabardast update bhai
Congratulations for completing 2800 pages
Congratulations on 2800 Pages
Sir jii morning
Hogai
for complete 2800 page
Nice bhai
Bhai, bolnewaalon ko bolne do! Bina saboot ke koi bhi Kuch bhi Kuch de, Woh sach kaise ho jaayega? Aap shuru se hi kehte as rahe ho ki, yeh system genre sirf Aapne hi Hindi mein introduce Kar ke, story likhna chaalu Kiya hai. Jab kahaani itna kaafi samay se aage badi aur prabal ho gayi, koi bhi Kuch bhi iske khilaaf na Kaha toh abhi Kuch log ke ungli karne se, kya ho jaayega? Aap kripya Karke aise logon ko importance deke clarification dena chod dho. Apne shaandaar tarike se kahaani ko aage badaayein, yahi hamaare aapse guzaarish hai. Regards, dear bro
Update 137 has been posted.Abhi hum zinda hain! *Smiles in Feroze Khan* :grin
Haan toh sabse pehle dobara gaayab hone ke liye maafi chahunga lekhak mahoday se. Ab zyada details mein nahi jaaunga but ek baar fir boht vyast ho gaya tha par is baar ek sukhad kaaran hetu. So, finally sab achhi - buri cheezein sort ho gayi hain aur ummeed hai ki abse reviews regular taur par de paaunga. :Yess
Would like to start with the fact that I might have never been back to the forum, because of the shortage of time I had in the past few months. But because of two stories, I'm here. This masterpiece of yours is one of the two. I'm not a fan of anime, or shall I say, I don't like it at all. I'm not a fan of stuff similar to it, whether it's in the form of a story or a novel or a movie/series. But this story (though a lot different from what I've understood anime as), but still being based on a subject or baseline that's synonymous to anime, the writer deserves a lot of applause and appreciation for this thing, from my side! If a reader likes a particular topic, say sci-fi, he or she'll eventually start liking a story based on it, no matter what's the quality of the stuff but if a person who dislikes a particular genre, falls into love with a story based into it, is enough to describe the genius of the writer, the quality of his masterpiece and the impact of the words he chose... :Applause
Let's start with where I left... Ab aise particularly yaad nahi hai ki last time kahaan tak review karke gaayab hua tha but shayad Bhavna se mila nahi tha Veer us samay. To kyon na Bhavna se hi shuru kiya jaaye, is review ko..? :Hmm
Bhavna's character needs to be discussed in two parts. Let's start with the first one, that is Bhavna between the time when she met Brijesh in the past and when she was thrown out of the house by Brijesh and co. Pehla point, Bhavna being the mother of the main protagonist of this story (stress on biological mother), will escape criticism and negative feelings most of the time, from the readers' side. Let's start with a basic fact. Bhavna married Brijesh *on her own consent*. The point to be noticed again & again is that she wasn't forced into marriage or union with Brijesh. Brijesh ki utni aukaat thi hi nahi ki Bhavna ke baapu ke zinda rehte Bhavna ki will ke khilaaf us se shaadi to kya, baat tak kar leta! Bhavna ke mann mein Brijesh ke liye pyaar nahi tha ya wo ek samjhaute ke taur par shaadi mein bandhi thi, to ye kewal aur kewal Bhavna ki choice thi, ismein na kisi aur ka koyi dosh tha, na hi role...
If anyone states ki Bhavna ne dono parivaaron ke madhya shaanti hetu apna balidaan types de diya, then it's totally wrong. Agar Brijesh ke proposal ko ek baar bhi Bhavna ne halka sa bhi, ittu sa bhi nakara hota to Bhavna ke Pita aur Bhai, na raktpaat ki fikra karte aur na hi dushmani ki and she very well knew ki uske Pita Harikiran se zyada powerful aur rutbe waale shakhs the (this is what I understood from the flashback). Secondly, Bhavna left Veer in the house and took Tej with her. This is an interesting point. Bhavna ne khud ko ye tark diya ya kisi aur ke saamne khud ko begunaah dikha rahi thi, I don't know, but she fucking hid the existence of a daughter from her father. That's a fucking big deal. Bhavna cannot escape the fact that no matter what the circumstances were, hiding the birth of a child from her father was, is and will be wrong forever, again no matter what!
She very sweetly stated that she wanted to protect Tej from Harikiran and Bhanu's threats. So she hid her. Let's come back to reality, Harikiran threatened about killing her son, and trust me, Tej is not Bhavna's son. Another point is, *what if* Bhavna would've brought Tej alongside her to the house (after her first agyatvaas of one year ended)..? Isn't there even a 0.1% chance of the fact that Brijesh & the rest of the family (excluding Karunesh), would've understood and accepted the allegations she would've put on Harikiran and Bhanu. Kehne ka matlab ye ki Bhavna ne yahi socha na ki Brijesh & party use hi galath samjhenge aur Harikiran aur Bhanu ke baare mein Bhavna yadi sach kahegi, to use hi jhootha samjhenge. But kya ye sab kewal Bhavna ki soch nahi thi? Kya ye sab kewal Bhavna ne apne mann mein *ASSUME* nahi kiya? Wasn't there even a 0.1% of probability of the other thing happening. There was! Tbf, more than 01% of chances were there. The equation was at least 60-40 if nothing else. To kya iska matlab ye nahi ki yahaan bhi Bhavna ne hi sab kuchh *Choose* kiya?
Kya kewal Bhavna ne hi nahi chuna ki Tej ka janm Brijesh aur baakiyon se chhipaya jaayega, Harikiran aur Bhanu ki sachhayi sabse chhupayi jaayegi, Veer ke janm ke waqt wo gaayab nahi hogi, Veer ko Harikiran aur Bhanu se threat nahi hoga (that's why she left Veer there and took Tej with her), Brijesh will not understand her when she'll expose Harikiran & that chutiya Bhanu... Ye sab ke sab Bhavna ke assumptions aur decisions the! Sab ke sab... To wo kabhi bhi, kisi bhi haalat mein khud ko justify nahi kar paayegi un faislon ke liye jo usne ateet mein liye. She expressed her and Brijesh's union as a samjhauta, and said it was Brijesh's attraction towards her and nothing else. Let's be fair, wo 20-22 ya 24 saal ka naujavaan apne parivaar aur relatives ke against chala gaya tha to marry Bhavna. It cannot be just attraction. Secondly, she said it was on Brijesh to make her love him. I mean wtf does that mean? Usne shaadi hi kyon ki fir? Yahaan bhi assume kiya tha kya ki future mein use Brijesh se ek dum Bollywood waala pyaar ho jaayega?
Now let's end the analysis of this version of Bhavna with the most important thing. She took Tej with her and left Veer over there... There's something fishy! Agar wo chahti to Veer ke janm ko sabse chhupa sakti thi, bilkul waise hi jaise usne Tej ke janm ko chhupaya. Correct? But she didn't. Chalo uska assumption raha hoga ki Tej ko baap - bete ki chutiya jodi se zyada khatra hai, Veer ko kam. Second point, wo Veer ko wahaan chhod kar gayi. Duniya ki kisi bhi adaalat mein yadi ek navjaat ki custody par mukadma chale to custody 90% cases mein Maa ko di jaati hai (cases of infidelity not considered in it). There must be a reason for that. No!? Ek navjaat ko, chaahe kitna bhi bada aur vishaal aur pyaar karne waala, mahatmaon ka parivaar mil jaaye, par un shuru ke 8-9 saalon mein jitni zaroorat Maa ki hoti hai, utni kisi aur ki nahi. Bhavna left Veer over there. Yahaan ye dhyaan rakhna hoga ki Shweta abhi equation mein nahi hai, yaani jab Bhavna gayi tab use poori tarah maloom tha ki wo har us darwaze ko band kar rahi hai jahaan se Veer ko Maa ki mamta aur dulaar mil sakta hai, that too for an indefinite period of time. Yaani usne naa kewal apne liye cheezen chuni, balki Tej ke liye uske pita aur parivaar se doori chuni, Bhavna ne hi chuna ki wo Veer ka janm nahi chhupayegi, Bhavna ne hi chuna ki wo Veer ko Maa ki mamta se door karegi. Ye kehna bilkul galath hoga ki Bhavna Veer ko le jaa nahi akti thi. Pehli baat, wo Veer ka janm Tej ki hi bhanti chhupa sakti thi, chalo nahi chhupaya to jab use ghar se nikaala gaya to adaalati karwayi ke zariye wo Veer ko apne saath le jaa sakti thi (in case Brijesh & party use aisa normally na karne dete)...
Second Version of Bhavna - After the mess of Harikiran & Bhanu duo was ended for good by Veer. (Aage likhi gayi saari baatein kewal aur kewal usi Bhavna par apply hoti hain jo gaaon se waapis lautne ke baad dikhi hai. :Spoiler) Bhavna seems to be most intelligent relative of Veer in the story till now. Intelligence in the sense of common sense, and being calculative in the various situations. She's strongly expressive but not over - expressive, she loves Veer and shows it to the fullest but is not kind of overwhelming in her reactions, she doesn't seem to like Shweta's (and Bhumika's?) closeness with Veer but at the same time she doesn't seem to dislike it at all... She's the biggest onion in the story till now in terms of expressing herself out in various conditions and thats is a fucking huge advantage when it comes to her so called *cold war* with Shweta...
Shweta's approach towards Veer is dissimilar as that of Shweta's, Bhumika's or even Tej's. She seems to be calm & composed in handling Veer and matters related to Veer, and that's why I think she's way ahead of Shweta in every terms right now. Maybe Veer has forgiven Shweta but according to me, there's still ice. But when it comes to Bhavna, there's nothing as such and therefore, Bhavna is more calm. She's not worried about Tej and Veer's relationship, but Shweta is, when it comes to Bhumika. Shweta's behaviour towards setting up Bhumika and Veer's relationship in a better way wasn't in the category of intelligent steps, but let's see how it pans out. Till now, it has worked though...
So, to sum up, I dislike Bhavna for her past deeds, and more because of her justifications or arguments she gave in the face-off with Brijesh, her choice of words in that particular conversation. But at the same time, I've to agree to the fact that Bhavna has been the most intelligent character after Kaera in terms of everything (excluding Veer). And the same approach is going to make her rise & rise when it comes to the closeness to Veer...
Overall, a nicely developed character. I mean, I don't like Bhavna doesn't means, I didn't like the character development of her in the story. It has been a superb one, without a doubt. But if there are reasons to admire her, there are some to dislike her too!
After Bhavna, the character which has been in extreme focus in some of the recent updates is Purvi. Let's be fair, she's the most appreciable and beautiful character amongst all her counterparts. Even Bhavna & Shweta aren't even close to her when it comes to generating loveable vibes. Her past, just like 99% of the characters of this story is dark and unpleasant. Losing your own child is a feeling that cannot be expressed in words, it hurts a lot. I've seen a couple's condition after they lost their unborn baby due to certain complications and that was something I hope no one has to experience, ever... But her love & behaviour towards Veer & Tej makes me fall in love with her beautiful heart. I don't think any woman (above 35) would ever come close to Purvi in terms of generating those loveable vibes in this story. Again, one of the moat beautiful characters of this beautiful story... Would love to see more of her in future!
Brijesh bhaiya ki bhi baat kar lete hain. Ab zyada gaali dunga nahi kyonki is farzi aur leechad aadmi ke liye har gaali kam hi hai. But I think what he did to Veer is coming back to him. I don't see either of Tej or Veer ever calling him Dad or Papa in future, don't think there could be any bigger punishment for that bastard for what he did to his own child's childhood! (This also states that Kishor deserves even more brutal belt treatment for what he did :grin ).
Karunesh kahaan gaayab ho gaya hai aaj kal? :Hinthint I assume abhi sutaayi aur kutaayi baaki hai uski aur uski leechad aulaad ki. Firstly, I don't think Veer will be as much blunt towards Karunesh as he should be, all because of Arohi & Kavya. But I think this fact is also gonna change in future. Karunesh jaisa leechad aadmi kuchh na kuchh haramipana to dikhayega, and if I'm correct he might target Bhavna or Tej, aur tab uski marammat bhi theek tarah se ho jaayegi. Would like to see where Pranjal is, and what future holds for him. Third, Vivek ki asliyat kya family ke saamne aayegi. I think ki aayegi, baaki dekhte hain...
Lage haath Harikiran aur Bhanu ka bhi kaam niptata chalun to dono haramzadon ke baare mein zyada baat nahi karunga, waise bhi ye suar baat karne laayak hain nahi. But want to know what's going on with Bhanu's wife. Hope she's fine Werewolf ?
So Bhavna, Purvi & majority of side characters have been discussed. Now let's start with the central ones.
Arohi... My favourite character in the story, even more than Veer! I guess currently ye sequence hai story ki female characters ke prati meri liking ka :shy ... Arohi > Tej > Suhana = Sonia > Kaera = Ava > Nidhi = Ragini > Kavya = Sonali = Bhumika = Shreya. Itni hi hain na abhi, jo potentially Veer ke debauchery ke safar mein shaamil hongi (above 90% chances)??? Khair, Arohi! She can make anyone fall in love with her, without doing anything. Same is the case here. I love this character and I'm in awe of her, for some unknown reasons. And when readers fall in love with characters without knowing the reasons, it's a big win for the development of the particular character. In the case of Arohi, she's cute, she's intelligent and she's shy as well. But that awkwardness she experiences every then and now, makes her different. Bhumika comes close to Arohi in terms of being shy, but Arohi is a level or two above her tbf. Sudden changes in her everytime Veer calls her directly by her name, her response after both the accidental kisses, her words on Holi when Veer apologised after the first kiss, and most recent one.. her reaction on Karunesh's truth opening out.... And yeah! Her behaviour towards Veer when she came to know about Pranjal's bastardism, that food truck scene! Arohi has been the cutest character in the story so far, that too by a country mile (Obviously excluding Juhi from the competition).
I guess soon she'll confront herself on the two 'accidental' kisses and when she realises that she's falling for Veer, we'll might see a new Arohi. Obviously, her shyness and awkwardness aren't going anywhere but would be interesting to see how things pan out when she'll express her feelings (after understanding them herself) to Veer... Overall, the finest development of a character in the story, right after the one of Suhana! :Clap
Kavya has enjoyed her short little time in the story right from the start. She's never in the focus as much as others. But when she's there, she knows how to bring all the focus on her only. Love this character to bits. The recent scene where she spoke to Bhavna & Purvi leaving Arohi in the supreme awkwardness suggests that maybe Kavya needs a couple of more sessions with Veer, you know what I mean!? :grin Waise bhi Veer jab gaaon gaya tha aur towel ke kaaran inmein naarazgi aayi thi, us waqt ka bhi ek spanking session baaki hai. Nahi!? :hinthint Moreover, I think someone (obviously Veer) needs to educate and tell her more about, say duniyadari. She's unaware of what to say, when to say and where to say... But again, that's exactly what makes her so, so cute!
Sonali has been in limelight in the recent updates. When Veer squeezed her boobs, he clearly stated that she, just like her mother & sister in law, is Veer's belonging. Because Suman has already stated that the females of her family will always serve Veer, that too as a slave only, so Sonali & Veer being in a love kind of relationship is out of the equation. I guess now or then, Sonali will be Veer's slave too. But her position will surely vary, as compared to that of Suman or Aabha. She's already helping Veer in the business and when she'll end up gaining knowledge from Nidhi about various subjects, she'll become even better. The gussail and chidchida touch to her character, makes her even more loveable & I think Veer also loves that part of her to the fullest.
Ragini has been taken and so will be Nidhi... But what I'm curious about is the future of Ragini & Veer. Shweta was doubtful about their relationship, and it looks like Bhavna has observed something similar recently. Means, soon the covers will be out and when the truth opens up, it'll be interesting to see how things go. About Nidhi, when Veer said "Be Mine" in the party, her mild reaction stated that she'll be doing that very very soon... The ice is already breaking! Shreya has completely disappeared, maybe she'll be back after the Crimson eposode... And yeah, Sumitra, would be interesting to see what future holds for her cuz Vivek's bastardism would be out soon as well and when her husband and both her sons too will be thrown out, her life ain't going to be the same ever again...
Coming to Suman, I personally never was a fan of Suman's character. I admire her for the strength she put on display when her husband & his son came for her & Aabha. But at the same time her behaviour towards Sonali and Veer is something I can't process. I mean Sonali is her own biological daughter, yes, she's Veer's slave and wants Sonali to respect him but can't she understand that that young girl watches her own mother and sister in law having sex with the same man. I think she should've tried to understand Sonali's condition too. Moreover, I don't think ki story mein abhi tak Suman aur Sonali ka koyi conversation aaya hai jahaan Suman ne use baithaakar us se baat ki ho, use sab samjhaya ho, pyaar se aur waise jaise ek Maa ko samjhana chahiye... Secondly, Suman ne jo kuchh bhi Parijaat waale chapter mein kiya, it looked like Veer is her slave and she's not his. I mean, I know her role is like I only care about my maalik Veer, rest of the world could better fuck off, but that's not how it works, no!? If she's Veer's slave she needs to careful about the kind of impact she's creating on other relationships of her maalik.
Yahaan ye zaroor mention karna chahunga ki is sequence mein Veer saste mein chhoot gaya. Usne Tej se baat karne se mana kar diya tha Parijaat ki auraton ke baaron mein, ek do conversations ke baad. Bhavna ne zyada kuchh kaha nahi. Arohi aur Kavya Karunesh ka satya ujagar hone ke kaaran theek nahi thi, Purvi ne baat ki par uske saamne bhi Veer ne seedha sa jawaab diya nahi... I think I would really like to see ki aisa kaun sa reason that Veer ke paas ki usne apni behnon aur Maa ki maujoodgi mein Parijaat mein sex kiya. Obviously fuddu nahi hai Veer, jo House of Killers ko saaf karke aaya ho, wo moorkh nahi ho sakta. But as far as I can think of, particularly apni family ki maujoodgi mein sex karne ka taatparya meri samajh se baahar hai. And I thought Tejal thodi aur strongly react karegi is maamle par, gaaon se lautne ke baad but maybe she doesn't want to have differences between her and Veer, in such an initial stage of their own relationship. So, I think Suman is behaving like a boss in front of everyone, like she owns Veer and only she can take decisions for him. Her conversation with Tej in Parijaat was an unpleasant one, as far as I'm concerned. Let's see what's next to see about her.
Khair, ab bachi Shweta aur Bhumika, Shweta ke baare mein oopar baat ho hi chuki hai. Wo sab kuchh try kar rahi hai to become more close to Veer than Bhavna is but ismein wo kaamyab hogi ya nahi ye dekhne waali baat hai. Bhumika... Well uski asli side ab khul rahi hai. As she's not behaving only on the orders of Shweta now, to achha lag raha hai uska kirdar khulkar saamne aata dekhkar. Bhumika ko neend mein jis prakar ki harkaten karne ki aadat hai wo beshaq jald hi uske aur Veer ke madhya ke rishte mein tabdeeli laane ka damkham rakhti hai. I think Shweta ne jaan boojhkar Bhumika ko Veer ke samg sone ke liye bheja. Firstly, taaki wo Tej se pichhad na jaaye aur doosra kyonki wo Bhumika ki neend mein ki jaane waali gatividhiyon se waaqif thi. Khair, ab dekhna ye hai ki Bhumika kya Veer ke dil mein apni ek khaas jagah bana paayegi..?
So, we're left with Tej only, as far as Veer's family is concerned. She's a beautiful - beautiful character tbh. She has the shyness of Arohi, boldness like no one else, has maybe the highest intelligence among girls (after Kaera), loves Veer like no one else and the most special and unique thing about her is her behaviour towards Veer. Jis tarah wo Veer par apna hakh jamati hai wahi use khaas aur alag banata hai. She wanted to help & care for Veer like an elder sibling but firstly Veer saved her from Pranjal & then took revenge for Bhavna as well. He's having a nicely set business, has a Rolls-Royce in his backyard and owns a hefty amount of belongings as well. So what's she left with? Tej currently is confused as well as sad because of her inability in fulfilling what she wanted to. But to be fair, her role in Veer's life currently is extremely special. Her behaviour, which I referred to above, makes her special to the story as well as to Veer. No one has ever treated Veer like she does. Her questions reflect the amount of love & care she holds for Veer in her heart. Filhaal, Bhumika ke kahe anusaar wo Veer ki sahayta ke liye kuchh na kuchh karne ka prayas karegi. But kya wo Parijaat ki sadasyaa ke saath kuchh bhi kar paane mein saksham athva comfortable mehsoos karegi? Veer ne jo kuchh us se kaha tha is maamle ko lekar, I don't think uske baad wo Parijaat ki sadasyaaon ke samg durvyavahar karegi parantu us sab ke baad normal reh paana aasan nahi.
Let's see what she does in order to achieve what she wanted to, I mean, that special aide to Veer. Now let's talk about the Trinity...
Sonia... My personal favourite of the three atm. Again, she has been in least limelight of the three. Despite getting more story - space than Ava, it seems like her character is still in the cocoon. Even Ava seems to be more explored than Sonia. But I'm sure a special arc dedicated to her is on the way, though I don't know which one that'll be. Because she has been a different character altogether throughout the course of the story. Bhumika was the least explored some updates back, but now even she has pipped Sonia. I can't think of anything less than 5-6 updates specially dedicated to her, to make her rise from the shadows and come to the mainstream characters. Till now, just like Arohi, she has been my favourite of the Trinity because of some unknown reasons & without a doubt I would love to see more of her in the coming updates. But what makes me worried is Kaera - Ava duo and Suhana as well. Suhana has fallen for Veer & there is no doubt in it. Kaera is Veer's first and in coming updates when OG Kaera rises things will complicate further. Ava will be in centre very very soon. Where does Sonia fit into this? She already has a stigma of coming second and never being able to pip past Kaera. What will happen when she'll fall for Veer? What will happen when she'll know her own sister has fallen for the same guy as her. Tough way ahead for Sonia but if she stands tall in all this, I'm sure she'll be at the same position as her two counterparts.
Coming to Kaera... After that mission she has been invisible. Would've liked if Veer inquired about her from Karan though. But I guess we'll see her again very soon. Kya pata Crimson arc mein hi dekh len hum Kaera ko, OG Kaera ko! Ava se isi arc mein bhent ho jaaye uski? Sounds like a blistering scenario, but the chances are low currently. Mission wasn't completed, and mission didn't fail, so what exactly happened? Kaera's favourability drop towards Veer signifies some kind of emotional outburst but what happened exactly is still unknown. Two scenarios are possible. In both the scenarios one thing will be common and that's Kaera's favourability dropped because her emotions finally ignited. First scenario is ger favourability dropped because of the diary. There was something terrible in the diary and that's confirmed. I guess Veer handed over the diary to her could be the reason for the drop. The second scenario is her emotions came and then she realised what sex actually is. What losing virginity actually is and that seems to be a more plausible reason for the drop. Still the diary, it's contents, mission's status, Kaera's current feelings and state... All needs to be known in complete explanation. Would love to see when she comes back... Kishor ki gaand hi todd de kya pata wo theek hone ke baad!? :Grin Between I think her emotions did awake but she might be not in complete conscious state about them currently and that's why mission's status in unknown...
Suhana's meeting with the doctor explains a lot. She has already fallen for Veer and Veer has comforted her a lot amidst the issues she was facing. She's better currently, both mentally and physically. But again, what will happen when Sonia will fall for Veer? Suhana has been the sacrificer in Sonia's life right from the start, will she do it again for her little sister? This triangle is the most interesting and mind - boggling scenario I can see in the future story, in the context of relationships and feelings. Her doctor will know soon about Veer and things that are developing between him & Suhana and then it'll get even more interesting.
So Ava & Crimson are the two who are left. Ava called Veer when she was in real trouble. Signifies one thing - she's impressed by what Veer did in Vegas. Her favourability clearly states that she currently does not trust Veer completely, let alone having any kind of feelings for him. But in the last update when she went missing and that mission came up, Veer has got a golden opportunity to make that favourability rise. If Veer is able to save her, which he should be, it will definitely create an impact on her and her heart. Crimson has something to do with Veer and with Kaera as well.
• Veer saw Crimson for the first time in Vegas when he was after the House Of Killers. Wahin par aisa laga tha that Crimson is somehow connected to House Of Killers. It would be safe to assume ki he was the mastermind behind the House Of Killers.
• Crimson came to know about Veer... This could be possible because of two reasons. Firstly, he got a mission from his system to finish or deal with Veer. Secondly, it could be possible that Veer messed up his House Of Killers and that was where Veer uski aankhon mein chadh gaya.
• For this to happen, can we assume that House Of Killers was constructed to kill or deal with none other that Ava/Natalia. Pitcher ka agla shikaar wahi thi. Clearly, she would've died if Veer wouldn't have been there. So, it points towards another thing - Crimson wasn't interested in Veer, rather ge was after Ava right from the start. Veer came in between his proceedings and that's where the mess started...
• I think Crimson is somehow closely connected to Grace Martin. How!? That remains a question! Ava's past is unknown, and that part might answer some questions about Crimson as well. So currently it looks like Crimson & Ava are connected.
Terashima seems to be an ally of Crimson. That pahaadi waali girl is unknown, so is that Priya with Slogan. But I think dono mein se ek na ek is arc mein saamne aa hi jaayengi. Abhi ke liye Veer has invested a lot on his Intelligence and that will surely help him in facing Crimson par mujhe yahi lagta hai that his system is far more advance than that of Veer.
Is pehle face-off mein Veer ki kutaayi ke adhik aasar hain but let's see what happens.
What an amazing story this is!! Fuckinggg masterpiece man! Every character is extremely well developed and has a well - defined position in the story. Veer's rise has been phenomenal and I'm sure this Crmison Arc will add another feather in the cap of this story... Never read anything so much well - constructed like this is...
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Bhai holi ke moke per diwali ka maja de diyaUpdate - 137 ~ First Clash (2)
Ab tak...
Uski aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi.
"T-Tum!!???"
Agle hi shan,
*Ding*
[Mission : Get to Ava as fast as possible.
Rewards :
1) ??? Points.
2) 1 Random skill (any tier)
Mission failure penalty : 5000 points deduction.
Location : 3rd floor.]
Ab aage...
“Itna hairaan kyu ho rahe ho? We are not seeing each other for the first time right?”
Veer ke saamne woh khada hua tha. Wahi jiska darr usse itne dino se sataa raha tha.
CRIMSON!
Veer : T-Tum!?
Crimson : Haan mein! Itna darr kyu rahe ho Veer?
Uske hontho par ek mazaakiya muskaan thi. Lag raha tha woh Veer ko ghabraaya hua dekh uske mazze le raha tha.
[Shit! Master! Ava is in trouble! Lekin ab ye-! How is he here?]
Veer chup chaap saamne khade vyakti ko ghoor raha tha. Ye aadmi uske liye ek buri khabar tha. Woh poora satark, apna dhyaan uss par hi lagaaye hue the.
[Agar isne humse fight li, toh Ava ko bachana mushqil ho jayega Master. Hamare paas waqt kam hai.]
Veer Pari ko jawaab nahi de raha tha Woh jaanta tha ki Pari sahi keh rahi thi. Ek taraf Ava thi jo musibat me na jaane kis haal me 3rd floor par unn aadmiyo se bach rahi hogi?
Toh dusri taraf ye saamne khada aadmi. Woh kare toh kya kare?
Veer : What do you want? Mujhe nahi lagta mene tumhara kuch bigaada hai. Toh fir kyu-!?
Crimson : Ohh! It’s simple!
Veer : ??
Crimson (smiles) : I simply want to kill you. That’s it!
[What??]
Veer (frowns) : Tumhe mere baare me kaise pata chala?
Crimson : Tumhe nahi lagta Veer ki jab ek sher kisi hiran ka shikaar karne wala ho toh hiran ko iss baat se koi matlab nahi hona chahiye ki sher ne uspe hamla kyu kiya. Hai na?
[Shit!!! He is prepared to fight! Master! This is bad news. Run!]
Mutthi kass Veer uski aankho me aankhein daal ke dekha.
Veer : Toh woh tum ho jo Ava ke peeche pade ho?
Crimson : Hmm? Why do you think so?
Veer : Tum Las Vegas me bhi the. House of the killers ke dauraan. Aur ab Ava mushqil me hai. Don’t tell me-!!
Crimson (smiles) : Ohh?
Veer : Las Vegas me Ava ki friend Charlotte maari gayi thi. Woh bhi celebrity thi. Aur Ava bhi celebrity hai. Charlotte maari gayi aur Ava bhi ab-!!! Lekin woh Nightwalker ka kaam tha. Kahi tum-!?
Crimson (smiles) : Hmm?
Veer (frowns) : Iska matlab tum House of the killers se related ho?
Crimson bas muskuraya.
Veer (screams) : TELL ME!!
Crimson : Awaaz neeche Veer!!
Veer : Agar mujhe maarna hi tumhara maqsad hai. Toh mujhe maara kyu nahi? Tumhare paas to Las Vegas me mauka tha.
Crimson (smiles) : Tum khud jald hi jaan jaoge.
[What? Master! I'm feeling strange. Y-Ye aadmi-!! He's doing something. Lekin mein samajh nahi paa rahi. Akhir ye chaahta kya hai.]
'Pari!'
[Yes Master!?]
'Don't worry! We will save Ava!'
[Yes Master! Lekin ye-]
Par Pari apni baat poori kehti uske pehle hi Crimson ke hontho par ek daraavni muskaan saji aur agle hi pal,
*Swoooooossshhhh*
'Huh?'
Woh apni jagah se gaayab ho gaya.
[Shit! Maste-]
Pari ko apne bol beech me hi rokne pade kyuki agle hi shan Crimson Veer ke saamne tha.
*BAAAAMMMMMMMMM*
Ek laat zorr se aake Veer ko padi, parantu samay par usne apne dono haatho se apna chehra block kar liya.
Uska shareer peeche ki orr hawa me ucchla aur usne back flip hawa me hi maari. Turant hi fir usne apne aap ko sambhaala aur zameen par apne perr wapas tikaate hue usne Crimson ko taajub me dekha.
Laat padte hi Veer ko Crimson ke force ka andaaza lag gaya tha. Uss kick ko block karne par hi uske haatho me dard hone laga tha.
[He's strong! That force-!]
Ek gehri saans lete hue Veer ne khud ko prepare kiya.
Aur fir shuru hui waha pe bhaiyankar ladaayi.
Crimson apni tezz gati se Veer ke saamne aaya,
*Whoooossshhhhh*
Uski laat zorr se ghoom kar hawa ko beech se cheerte hue Veer ke sarr par padne ko aayi.
Par tabhi,
*Duck*
Veer ne khud ko neeche jhuka liya. Crimson ki laat Veer ke sarr ke upar se usse cross karti ki uske pehle hi usne muskuraate hue apna perr neeche jhuke Veer ki orr mod diya.
'Fuck!!!'
*Baaaammmmmm*
Split second me Veer ne apne dono haatho se cross bana ke block kiya warna woh kick uske chehre ka huiya badal deti.
*Crack*
Kick ke force se neeche jadi tiles par daraare bichh gayi. Aur turant hi Veer ki aankhein laal ho gayi.
*Ding*
[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned ON.]
Veer ne apna wazan apni baayi taang par tikaaya aur,
*Whooosh*
Daayi taang ko neeche se ghuma ke usne Crimson ki taang par vaar karna chaaha jo ek perr par khade hue tha.
Lekin jaise Crimson pehle se hi Veer ke move ko read kar chuka tha.
Usne tabhi khade hue perr se khud ko hawa me uchhaala aur Veer ke haatho ke beech maujood ek taang se woh hawa me roll kiya.
Crimson ke uchakte hi Veer ki kick yu hi barbaad chali gayi.
Par Crimson ke hawa me hone ke kaaran, Veer ko ek mauka mil gaya.
Woh jaanta tha uske roll hote hi ek zordaar kick uski orr aane waali thi.
Isliye,
"Haaaarrrrrghhhh!!!!"
Dahaad maarte hue usne apne haatho ke cross ko bhar taaqat se khol Crimson ko dur fek diya.
Jiska nateeja kuch nahi hua. Crimson dur jaate hi apne perro par araam se khada ho gaya. Par uske chehre par ek bohut badi muskaan feli hui thi.
Crimson (smiles) : I knew it!! Tumhe maarne me maza aayega Veer!!! Hahahahahaha!!!!
[Maaastttteeerrr Run!!!!]
*Whoooossshhhhh*
Veer mauka dekhte hue hawa ke jhoke ki tarah waha se bhaaga. Ladaayi se bhaagna uski apni style nahi thi.
Lekin uski priority abhi Ava thi. Ye ladaayi nahi.
Corridor ke chhor par hi stairs thi. Isliye lambe corridor me apni poori gati se woh bhaaga.
"Bhaag kaha rahe ho Veeeeerr!!!? Hahahaha!!!"
Usse apne peeche se Crimson ki bhayanak awaaz sunaayi di. Mud ke dekha toh Veer ke badan me ek sihran daud gayi.
Crimson bhaiyankar tez raftaar se uski orr bhaagte hue aa raha tha. Uske qadam itne bhaari bharkam the lekin raftaar fir bhi khoob tez.
[Shit!! Shit!!! Shitttt!!! Runnn! Maaasterrr!!! Runnn!!!! Remember 3rd floor! Quick!!!]
Peeche se khaufnaak chehra liye Crimson utsaah me Veer ko maarne ke liye dauda.
Beech corridor me hi ek fire extinguisher ko usne deewaar par lage hook se ukhaad ke nikaala.
"Here's a gift for you Veeeeerrrr!!!!"
Aur uss bhaari bharkam fire extinguisher ko usne khilaune ki tarah dur bhaag rahe Veer ki taraf phek diya.
*Zoosh zoosh zoosh*
Teevr gati me woh laal rang ka lohe ka cylinder udte hue Veer ke sarr ko phodne ke liye aaya.
[Maaaasttterrrrr!!!!!!]
Veer palta.
Fire extinguisher ke aate hi usne apne baaye haath se usse pakda aur,
"Haaaarrrrrghhhh!!!!!!"
Khud ko 360° turn me ghumaate hue usne force ka istemaal kar fire extinguisher ko Crimson ki orr hi aim kar phek diya.
*Ding*
[Hawkeye]
Extinguisher zorr se udta hua Crimson ke muh ki orr aaya ki tabhi,
Achanak hi slippery floor ke chalte uska perr fisla, woh peecha ko jhuka aur,
*Whooosh*
Extinguisher uske sarr ke upar se nikal gaya.
Aur peeche jaake zorr se andar rakhi office table se bhid tezz awaaz ke saath gira.
Crimson ki aankhein iss baar feli hui thi.
Usne rukte hue Veer ko dekha. Aur fir agle hi shan uski daraavni muskaan aur zyaada badh gayi.
"Nice Aim!"
[Whaaaatttttt!!!??]
Idhar Pari ke saath saath Veer ke bhi hosh udd gaye.
'P-Pari!!??'
Hawkeye miss ho gayi?
Aaj tak Hawkeye se kiya gaya vaar miss nahi hua tha. Lekin aaj Crimson ne uski Hawkeye ko chakma de diya.
[This is bad!!! Master! Ya toh usne koi skill use ki hai, ya fir fast reflexes ke chalte wo dodge kar paaya. Ya fir simply luck ki vajah se uska perr fisla aur bach gaya.]
'That's…!'
[Oh no! Usse hamari Hawkeye ke baare me andaaza lag gaya hai. Master jaldi!! Runnn!!!]
Veer corridor ke antim chhorr par hi khada tha. Usne na aav dekha na taav.
Seedha seedhiyo ki railing pakad chhalaang maar di.
Parantu, Crimson bhi daud ke aake uske peeche peeche kood gaya.
Veer hawa me neeche gir raha tha. 6th floor, 5th floor, 4th floor.
4th floor ke saamne aate hi usne ek jhatke me railings ko dobaara pakda aur latke hue apne shareer ko fling kar woh uss floor ki seedhiyo pe aa gaya.
[Master? Ye 4th floor hai. 3rd nahi!]
'Agar 3rd pe jaunga, toh Ava waha hogi. Mein musibat ko aur leke waha nahi jaa sakta. I'll have to deal with him here!'
[Ah! Right! Yes!]
Uske achanak se upar chadhne ke kaaran Crimson ek floor neeche ko chala gaya.
3rd floor ki railings usne pakdi aur kood ke seedhiyo pe aaya. Veer ka peecha karte karte woh 4th pe chadha.
Waha aate hi Veer uske saamne khada tha. Na hi woh bhaag raha tha aur na hi kuch keh raha tha. Uski aankhein poori laal hoke focused thi.
Crimson (smiles) : Tumhara peecha karte hue jo adrenaline rush mein mehsoos kar raha hu. Woh extraordinary hai Veeeeerrr!!!!
Veer ke dil ki dhadkane tezz ho rakhi thi. Aaj tak usne logo ko chase kiya tha. Ye pehli baar tha jab koi usse chase kar raha tha aur woh bhaag raha tha.
Ek bhayanak darr baitha hua tha uske andar. Darr yaha haarne ka aur Ava ko khone ka.
'Kuch bhi ho jaaye…! I cannot lose here! Miss Ava ko yu hi nahi kho sakta mein…! I promised her!'
[K-Kaash hum alley me na gaye hote.]
'Galti meri hai Pari! Mein hi unhe leke gaya tha. I'm the one who is responsible.'
[N-No master! Please! Khud ko blame mat dijiye. Hume kya pata tha ki waha aisa kuch achanak se ho jayega.]
'It's my mistake Pari!'
[N-No! Subah se hi sab kuch smoothly ho raha tha. Kahi koi dikkat nahi gayi thi. Koi enemy show nahi hui thi. Aur hum confident the apni skills par isliye Ava ki khushi ke liye aap usse leke gaye the. But suddenly-]
Veer mann hi mann muskuraaya.
'Isliye toh kaha mene ki ye meri galti hai Pari!'
[No! That's-]
'And I accept it. Isliye…! Ab uss galti ko fix karne ki zaroorat hai.'
Mutthi kas usne agle hi pal ek martial art stance liya.
Crimson (smiles) : Ohhh!
Veer : Come then!
***
Udhar Veer aur Crimson apni pehli bhidant me lage hue the toh yaha Vegas me Suhana idhar se udhar tension me tehel rahi thi.
Uske saamne hi do aur aurte sofe par baithi hui thi.
Ashita aur Divya.
Divya : Kab tak tehelti rahogi aise haan?
Ashita : Right! Doctor ne tumhe rest karne kaha hai na? Ye faaltu me kyu chal rahi ho?
Divya : Aur baat kya hai? Aisa kya bata diya Prakash uncle ne jisse sunn tum itni tension me aa gayi?
Apni bauhe sikode Suhana kisi soch me doobi hui thi.
Kuch din pehle Prakash Uncle ne uske kaan me ek khabar di thi. Jisse sunn woh thoda taajub zaroor hui thi lekin utna nahi ki chinta me aa jaaye.
Par aaj fir unhone ek khabar usse sunaayi thi. Aur isse sunn, uska chinta me jaana swabhaavik tha.
Divya : Kuch kaho bhi! Kya hua? Business loss hua kya?
Suhana ne naa me gardan hilaayi.
Divya : Toh fir? Periods? Agar aisa hai toh mein kuch tumhare liye accha sa khaana order karwati hu ruko-
Suhana : No! You idiot!
Divya : Ehh!? Toh fir kya hua?
Ashita : Husband se jhagda?
Suhana : Nahi!
Divya : Toh?
Suhana (sighs) : Mene tumhe uss din kuch bataya tha. Yaad hai?
Divya : Kya?
Suhana : Ava ke baare me.
Divya : Oh! You mean uske Paris jaane ki baat? Haan! Mujhe yaad hai.
Suhana : Mujhe Prakash Uncle ne hi bataya tha. Aur mein bas thoda surprised thi. Lekin aaj-
Divya : Hmm?
Suhana : Mujhe khabar mili hai ki Veer bhi Paris gaya hua hai.
Divya : Ohhh! I see! Toh ye baat hai!
Suhana : Huh?
Divya : Ye toh hona hi tha.
Suhana : What do you mean?
Divya : Ava ka call mere paas aaya tha Suhana. She wanted my help. Lekin mein yaha busy thi. Toh aise me uske paas Veer hi ek option bacha. Isme koi taajub ki baat nahi ki Ava ne usse bulaaya hoga.
Suhana : T-Tum jaanti thi?
Divya : Nahi! Mein ye nahi jaanti thi ki woh fir Veer ko bulayegi.
Suhana : Lekin aisi kya zaroorat pad gayi usse Veer ki?
Divya : Uska kehna tha ki woh khatre me hai. Shayad isliye Veer ko hire kiya hai usne. She knows Veer is capable.
Suhana : That…! That stupid Veer. Woh chala bhi gaya? Akele!! Bewakoof hai kya?
Ashita : H-Hey ek minute! Yaha kiski baat ho rahi hai? Kaun Veer?
Divya (smiles) : Suhana ka pyaara lover.
Suhana (blushes) : Shut the fuck up!!! K-Koi lover nahi hai woh mera. For fuck sake I'm married. Don't talk rubbish.
Ashita : W-Wait! Why are you blushing?
Suhana (blushes) : Wh-Who's blushing? Shut up!!!
Ashita : Nahi nahi! I can see it. You are blushing. Tum baakiyo ko bewakoof bana sakti ho mujhe nahi. Hmm! Veer huh? Toh hubby ke alawa bhi koi hai. I knew it!!! Tum kisi se mili ho. Kahi ye wahi toh nahi?
Suhana : Y-You-!!! Stop it!
Divya : Pfft~ Hahahahaha!!! C'mon Suhana! Tumhare chehre pe likha hua hai. You are tensed about him.
Suhana iss baat se anjaan thi ki woh kitni parvaah karne lagi thi Veer ki. Divya ke kehte hi usse abhaas hua.
Suhana : I…! I was just-
Divya (smiles) : Hey! It's okay! Mein to abhi apni investigation chhor ke nahi jaa sakti kahi. But-
Suhana : I see!
Woh kehte hue baahar ko nikal gayi. Aur usne turant hi Prakash Uncle ko phone lagaya.
Prakash : Ji kahiye Miss! Kya baat hai?
Suhana : Paris me humare paas kitne resources hai?
Prakash : Hein?
Suhana : Mera matlab waha par kya kya hai hamara?
Prakash : Ohh! Kaafi kuch hai Miss. Ek ghar available hai. Usme caretaker bhi maujood hai. Transport ke liye 1 car, 2 bikes aur ek personal chopper bhi available hai. Agar aap samudri safar karna chaahti hai toh uska bhi band-o-bast ho jayega.
Suhana : Ohh!
Prakash : Iske alawa hamari 3 badi business partnership bhi hai waha. Kuch kaam tha kya?
Suhana (gehri saans lekar) : H-Haan! Uncle! Ghar se leke transport sab Veer ko available karwa dijiye. Woh wahi par hai.
Uski baat se Prakash hairat me reh gaya.
Prakash : Umm…! V-Veer? Woh ladka?
Suhana : Haan!
Prakash : Ji theek hai. Bura na maane toh ek baat puch sakta hu?
Suhana : Yahi na ki mein usse ye sab kyu de rahi hu?
Prakash (nods) : Jii!
Suhana (smiles) : Mein khud bhi sure nahi hu.
Prakash : Huh?
Suhana : Aap jaldi se ye karwaiye. Rakhti hu!
*Call ends*
Call cut karke usne ek raahat ki saans li.
'Mujhe laga hi tha ki mein phir kisi kaam me fass jaungi. Accha hua Sonu ko mene jaldi aane ka promise nahi diya. Looks like mujhe yaha se nikalna hoga jald hi!!!'
***
Veer iss baat se pare ki uske liye koi soch bhi raha hai aur madad bhi karna chaah raha hai, yaha Crimson se ladne me laga hua tha.
Powerful punches aur Swift kicks ko jhel jhel ke, toh kahi unhe deflect kar woh jaise taise apne perro par ab tak sthir khada hua tha.
Lekin uski haalat kuch theek nahi thi. Jagah jagah choto ke nishaan jhalak rahe the. Toh wahi Crimson apni tip top condition me tha. Bas uske kapde kuch dheele se pad gaye the.
[What the hell is this? Abhi tak mein ek bhi skill trace nahi kar paayi hu. He's fighting just based on his stats?]
Veer haafte hue firse khud ko prepare kiya. Aur,
*Whhhoooosssshhhhhhh*
Dono apne sthaan se gaayab hue aur takraar karte hue dono ke punch ek dusre ki mutthi se jaa bhide.
*BAAAAMMMMMMMMM*
Crimson 2 qadam peeche hua toh wahi Veer uss impact se 6-7 qadam peeche ki orr chala gaya.
Crimson chillaate hue bhayanak speed me aage aaya aur punches aue kicks ki barsaat usne shuru kar di.
Veer acrobats ke chalte kuch vaaro se bacha toh kuch usne wahi rakhi cheezo ko utha ke khud ko defend kiya par kuch uske shareer pe aake pade.
*Powwwwwww*
Ek aake seedha uski chaathi par pada.
"Urrrghhhhh!!!!"
Usne Crimson ko dekha. Woh apne chehre par haivaano waali muskaan liye hue tha.
Achanak hi Veer ke sthir perro ka balance dagamagaya aur,
Iss se pehle ki woh ubhar paata, ek laat uske pait par aake padi aur Veer,
*Craaaaaaassssshhhhhhhhh*
[Noooooooooo!!!!!]
Veer building ke chhor par lage kaanch ko todta hua baahar gira. Hawa me glass ke tukde bikhar gaye.
Force itna tezz tha ki woh neeche girte hue next building ki 3rd floor ke kaanch ko todta hua andar crash ho gaya.
Ek building se dusri building me Crimson ne usse ek laat se pohucha diya.
*Bwuah*
Muh se achanak hi uske khoon nikla.
[Internal bleeding??? N-Nooo!!!]
*Cough Cough*
Sahi samay par usne turant hi Beowulf's Blessings ko switch kar Bone Reaper laga liya tha. Warna uska ribcage andar hi toot ke bikhar gaya hota.
Woh haafte hue khud ko sambhaala aur uthne ki koshish karne laga, jab peeche se fir ek awaaz aayi.
"Time to say goodbye Veeeeerrr!!!!"
Aur fir,
*Booooooooooooooommmmm*
Zorr se ek dhamaka hua.
Building se building ko tehes nehes karte hue ek missile nikli.
Buildings ki lights dhamaake se apne aap toot foot ke band ho gayi.
Jo bhi log andar maujood the. Woh ya toh turant hi dhamake me dardnaak maut maare gaye ya ghaayal ho gaye.
Aur agle hi shan poore ilaake me hahakaar mach gaya. Cheekhe goonjne lagi, log idhar se udhar afra-tafri me bhaagne lage.
Police jo ab tak neeche sadak par gangs se deal kar rahi thi unhe samajh aaya ki ye kitni badi aapda thi.
Toh wahi second floor par maujood Chris, Terashima aur Andre zordaar hue dhamaake se apna balance kho ke zameen par gir pade.
Teeno hi bhayankar ghabraahat me the. Woh ground floor aur first floor ko explore kar ke abhi second floor par aaye hi the jab ye ho gaya.
Unhe saamne ka nazaara saaf saaf dikhayi de raha tha.
Chris (shivers) : This-!!!!
Terashima ne kaanpte hue turant hi apne ear piece par haath rakha aur contact kiya.
Terashima : Reinforcements!!!! Nowwwww!!!
Andre : R-Rocket Launcher? W-Woh ek rocket launcher tha hai na?
Chris : H-He fucking killed them. M-Mein isse nahi chhorunga.
Terashima : Quick!!! Discussion ka time nahi hai hamaare paas. Move faaastttt!!!
***
Dhamake ki bhanak aas paas ke chhetro me bhi lag gayi. Media reporters ke saath saath baaki log bhi turant hi apni apni coverage ke liye recording shuru kar diye.
Toh wahi police aur adhik maatra me apni cars me siren bajaate hue ghatna sthal par pohuchne lagi.
Kisi ne fire fighters ko bhi inform kar diya tha. Lagi hui aag ko bujhaane ke liye wo bhi nikal pade the.
Aur yahi kuch kilometres ki duri par DGSI (The General Directorate for internal security) me ek alag vartalaap chal raha tha.
France ki security agency me se ek thi ye agency jo country ke internal activities se deal karti thi.
DGSI ke head Xavier saari details ko sunn' ne ke baad bhaiyankar gusse me khade hue the.
Head Xavier : Bheji gayi footage se ek arrest warrant jaari karo.
"Yessss Sirrr!!!!" Wahi se awaaz aayi aur kuch log kaam me lag gaye.
Head Xavier : Terrorism ka case ghoshit karo isse. High alert ki warning de do sabhi agencies aur police ko.
"Yessss Sirrr!!!"
Head Xavier : Jo jo agents puraane cases me lage hue unhe issi waqt inform karo aur kaho ki sab kuch chhor ke iss case par focus kare. Baaki sab abhi ke liye halt kiya jaa sakta hai.
"Okayyy Sirrr!!!"
Head Xavier : Dead or Alive ka warrant hona chahiye. Kisi bhi keemat par woh bach ke nikalne na paaye. Warrant ko harr police station, agencies aur news media me bhej do.
"Right away Sirrr!!!"
Head Xavier : Media se contact karo aur ye bhi kaho ki janta high alert me rahe aur ghar se baahar na nikle. Blast waale area ko jald se jald khaali karwao. Ask the police for help.
"Yessss Sirrr!!!"
Head Xavier : Agent Chris, Terashima aur Andre ko satark rehne ke liye kaho. Bina reinforcements ke wo akele aage na badhe.
"We got it Sir!!!"
Tabhi waha Police ka ek senior officer aaya aur Xavier uske saath andar cabin me chale gaye.
***
Idhar dhamaake ke baad Veer ne khud ko uthaaya.
Uske upar ceiling ke kuch bade tukde gir chuke the.
Unhe alag kar woh khaaste hue utha.
[Maaastteeerrr!!! Aap theek ho na?]
'I'm fine Pari!'
[Ye aadmi paagal hai Master. Usne ek baar bhi nahi socha rocket launcher fire karne se pehle. H-He killed people.]
Veer ko ab abhaas ho gaya tha ki woh ek bohut bade potential khatre me tha.
[Also Master!!! I have discovered one of his skills.]
'Huh?'
[Punch maarne ke baad jaise hi aapne uski aankho me dekha tha. Aapka balance dagamaya tha. Right?]
'That's right!'
[He's using Vertigo Master.]
'Vertigo?'
*Ding*
[Skill : Vertigo
Description : Induces confusion, disorientation and loss of balance when looked into the bearer's eyes.]
'So that's what happened. Good job Pari.'
[Look for Ava Master!!!]
Veer utha. Usse neeche se logo ki cheenkhe aur shor-sharaba sunaayi de raha tha.
Usne waapas se building ki orr dekha jaha se woh gir ke iss nayi building me aaya tha.
Crimson chup chaap wahi haatho me rocket launcher liye khada tha.
[I hate him so much!]
'Rocket launcher? Kahi issi ne Slogan ko toh nahi supply kiye the weapons?'
[Ho sakta hai Master.]
Crimson kood ke Veer ki building me jaata ki iske pehle hi,
*BANG*
Ek bullet kahi se shot hui aur uske sarr ke chithde udaane ko aayi. Lekin tabhi usne fraction of second me apna sarr hata liya.
Uski aankhein achambhav me fel gayi aur usne alag disha me dur dekha.
Veer aur Pari bhi hairaan the. Koi dur se Crimson ko maarne ki koshish kar raha tha.
Par Pari aur zyada hairaan Crimson se thi.
[H-He dodged a bullet!!?? Aur wo bhi blind spot me fire ki hui bullet? Aapki Hawkeye ko bhi-!!! Akhir wo istemaal kya kar raha hai?]
'I don't know!'
Crimson ne Veer ko dobaara dekha aur unchi awaaz me bola,
"You are lucky Veeeeer!!! Kuch pal aur jee lo apni zindagi ke."
Itna bol woh waha se turant hi nikal gaya.
Veer fatafat waha se neeche jaane ke liye hua tabhi,
*Ding*
[Mission location upgraded.]
[Location : Red car at parking.]
'Fuuuccckkkkk!!!'
Ava pakdi jaa chuki thi.
Veer apni tezz dhadkane liye waha se neeche aaya.
"Avaaaaaa!!!!"
Woh usse pukaarte hue parkinge dekhne laga. Par tabhi sadak par usse laal gaadi tezz raftaar me jaati hui dikhaayi di.
'N-Noooo!!! Damn it!!!!'
[Master!!! Jaldi!!! Koi car ya bike!!! We need it. Quick!!!]
Veer ne wahi khadi ek bike uthaayi jo kisi gang member ki thi. ON-OFF Switch ko khol usne jhat-se power socket ko hataaya. Aur turant hi 4 wires socket ko remove kar diya.
Uske remove hote hi Bike apne aap start ho gayi.
Acceleration dete hue usne speed me uss laal car ki disha me bike dauda di.
Lekin usse bhaagte hue Chris aur anya ne building se neeche aate waqt dekh liya.
Andre : He's escaping. Quick!!
Terashima : Jaldi!! Chris!! Car lao!!
Chris bhaagte hue Car ko laaya aur woh dono baithate hue Veer ke peeche chal diye.
Idhar Terashima ne turant hi kuch police force ko follow karne ko bhi keh diya.
Kul milaake, Veer ke peeche Chris, Terashima aur Andre toh the hi par Police force bhi peeche pad gayi thi.
Aur udhar Media ne jab Ava ko car me zabardasti logo dwara andar ghuswaate hue dekha. Turant ek sansani bhari khabar news me fel gayi.
"Famous Celebrity Ava was kidnapped by an unknown group of people."
Headline bann ke poore news channels me ye Breaking News bann gayi.
Ava ke fans chinta me aa gaye. Toh wahi glamour ki duniya me ek sansani mach gayi. Ava jaisi celebrity ka kidnap hona bohut bada matter tha.
Usse bachaane ki ek Chase shuru ho gayi.
Veer na jaane kitni baato se anjaan tha.
***
Aur idhar Vegas ke investigation department me tabhi France ki DGSI ki taraf se ek message aaya.
Investigation Department ke Head Nolan ne jaise hi woh sab padha. Woh apni kursi se uth khade hue. Aur turant ke turant hi unhone Divya ko apne cabin me bulaaya.
Jaha waha Paris me raat ho rakhi thi. Yaha Vegas me din ka samay tha.
Divya jaldbaazi me Suhana aur Ashita ko apne ghar par chhor ke department me aayi.
Divya : D-Did something happen!?
Nolan ne bina kuch kahe hi ek printout Divya ke haatho me thama diya.
Jab Divya ne uss print out par apni nazre dudaayi aur usme likhe hue content ko padha. Uski haalat kharab ho gayi.
Uske haanth kaanp uthe aur woh printout uske haath se chhutak ke table par gir pada.
'It can't be-!!!'
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