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[Raanjhanaa]

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[Werewolf]

Oh no... Ye kya ho gya
So it was Ava all along jiske trap me veer phasa aur phasa bhi to kaisa khtrnaak phasa ki aage kua peeche khai.

Aur kitne jhatke milenge sirji

Asli bomb toh finale arc me phootega bhai.

Vaise this incident added the much needed touch to the story ki hmara MC bhi vulnerable hai... Koi invisible Banda nhi... Aur antagonist jitna tagda ho utna hi thrill bhadta hai.

Of course! Veer ke paas system hai. Lekin woh invincible nahi hai. Tabhi toh Pari ne kaha tha. Guroor mat rakhna.

Ab thode time to action ki pabandi lg chuki honi chahiye considering veer ki situation and considering veer Bach jaae

Abhi 2-3 update toh haan!
Yahi samajh ke chalo ki abhi setup ko samjhaya jayega. Dhyaan se padhiyo bhai. Doubts clear honge yaha. Thanks btw!

Wo pencho kya hi bawal update tha...
Maza aa gaya.

Maza aaya na? Chal laa rokda laa.

AVA hi wo ladki nikali aur ye bhi conform ho gaya ki wo us par lambe samaye se nigrani kar rahi thi..aur uske pass bhi system hai..

Hum uski kahani hi dekhenge ab.

Veer ke to jabrjast lawade lag gaye...kai goliya gusi hui hai uske ander ....kaise bachega veer ???

Dekhte hai.

Ek umid k rup me uska pendent ho sakata hai jo abhi tak uske kisi kam nahi aaya hai ...

Pendant hai bhi ya nahi gale me?

Bahut log marne wale hai..ab to

Dekhte jao. Thanks a lot btw! Keep supporting!

Ye kya tha, unable to figure out with this aaj tak itni thriller aur plot twists padhe par this one is ahead of every comparison. Werewolf bhai aapko Booker Prize milna chahiye for this creativity and vision.

Abhi se prize? Bhai poori kahani toh padho pehle. Btw thanks a lot. And keep supporting!

Ohh bhai shab kya aag update thi ye I was a silent reader of xform but is update ko padhte hi mera man ho gaya reply krne ka aap great ho boss

Bohut bohut dhanyavaad bhai! Thread me ju ka swagat hai. keep supporting.

Expect to ye bhi kar sakte hai.

One more thing kya kaera k pass bhi system hai,?
Because veer pehle kuch time uska bio check nahi kar paya tha.

But Veer has checked her stats right?

Pendant,suhana,mr pilot,tershma ye veer k saviour hone chahiye.
Yr agla update veer par hi dedicate kariye.
Kuki jabtak hum protagonist k survival ko dimag me le kar chalege
Tabtak chahe aap kaera ki theory explain bhi kar do but hum interpret nhi kar payenge.

Kaera ka update aage push ho gaya hai. Aane waale updates me behind the scenes ko darshaya jayega. Basically , Ava and Crimson.

I think jaisa hype hai abhi readers ka veer ki taraf hai uske according use hi continue krna chahiye meri opinion me.

Uspe hum aayenge. Lekin abhi mere according, behind the scenes ko samjhaane ka yahi sabse behtar samay hai.

And please apna Target bta dijiye next update k liye.

Best wishes

Already reach ho gaya hai. Response kaafi accha mila hai. Mein khush hu. Agle update ka target update ke neeche hi likha mila jayega.

wo kahani aapko yaad hai par mujhe uska naam yaad nahi ,writer ko galat lagta hai jab koi bura kehta hai par maine aisa kabhi nahi kiya ,
us kahani par sirf 3 ya 4 reader the jisme sabse jyada comment me hi karta tha par tab bhi us writer ko bura laga ,,ek galat comment ho jata hai par mera wo comment kahani ko lekar nahi balki past aur future ko lekar tha tab bhi usne ye kaha ki ek update tu likh ke bata ( agar me writer hota to apni khud ki kahani nahi likh sakta kya ) ..

ek reader ke najariye se kaha tha par wo bura maan gaya aur ab uski kahani kisko yaad bhi nahi ..

Abey kahani mujhe bhi nahi pata. Mujhe toh bas itna yaad rehta hai ki ju ne ye katha sunayi thi. Aur ju ki vyatha par hum sab thahaake lagaaye the.

Amazing update

Thanks

Bhai iss baar apne under tk hila diya + senti bhi kr diya

Shukriya bhai. Keep supporting!

 

[Werewolf]

Update Kab Se Aayega Ye Bata Do Bhai

Aaj Din Me 20 Baar Se Jaada Visit Ka Chuka Hu Is Site Par Sayad Ab Aajaye Sahi Bata Raha Hu Kam Me Man Nahi Lag Raha Hu Wase To Silent Reader Hu Par Bhai Tum Ne Majboor Kar Diya Review Likhne Ko Kya Batau

Agla update most probably kal night me. Schedule ke hisaab se wahi hai.

 

[Werewolf]

Iss baar ke revos toh-

 

[Werewolf]

romanchak update ..pari aur veer ki baate dil ko chhu gayi ,ek premi aur premika ki tarah ek dusre ko samjha rahe the dono

Itne samay se ek saath hai. Toh lagaav toh rahega hi na. Veer ke sabse closest toh wahi hai. Kyuki woh uske andar hai.

laga hi tha helicopter me jab ladki ko dekha veer ne ,ki wo natalia hi hogi .. agar natalia pehle hi bata deti to veer ko kuch nuksan nahi hota par wo to gaddar nikli aur uske paas bhi pari jaisa system hai

aisa lagta hai ki crimson aur natalia (ava ) ne milke veer ko trap me fasaya hai ..

agar veer bach gaya to crimson ko buri maut milni hi hai par natalia ko bhi milni chahiye ..dhokha diya hai usne veer ko ..

Trinity ko tudwaoge ju? Ava Trinity ka hissa hai. Thanks btw! Keep supporting! Aur ju ke revo beech me aane band ho gaye the.

Omfg…. That was hard to read! Interesting turn of events!

Yes it is. Thanks.

Possible to ye bhi hai ki hok ki head ya fir member ava bhi ho.
Tbhi use death mission zyada chahiye taki zyada points mile.

Noooooooooooo.. what did you do???
Mne aapse kaha tha ki veer ko kuch ni hona chahiye... And you did this...

Chal basa ab woh.

He's my favourite protagonist among all the stories which i have read till now. Usse kuch ni hona chahiye....

Ohh! Veer is your favourite? That's good!

He's the most sweetest soul. Agar usse kuch hua to main aapki story par review dena band kar dungi...

Chill chill :chill

Awesome update bro

Thanks

we're wolf bhai, kya action &thillar scene tha padte padte roungate khade ho gaye, last main emotional scene,and talkbetween veer and pari, pari ki bhi emotions last scene main nikal aaye uff kya scene tha padte hua main bhi emotional ho gaya,

Shukriya bhaaya

aap ki writing plot se lagta hai aap bahut aage ke soch ke rakhi hai,

Two worlds are being created at the same time. (as I'm writing this story.)

toh atlest ye pata laga ki unknown girl ava the, but usne mazboori main kiya iss se pata chalta hai ki woo ye sab majbooti main kar rahi hai, but veer usko dekh ke hasta hai usko pata chal jata hai ava ne he usko phasaya, mujhe nahi lagta crimson ne ava ko mazboor kiya kyu ki ava ne he crimson par goli chalayi the,

Ava crimson par goli kaise chala sakti hai? Positions ko dhyaan do thoda. Crismo kaha tha tab aur Ava kaha thi.

and last veer ki baat yeh toh koi karisma hoga jo veer bach jaye(may be neel mani, suhana, veer mother power etc) bahut he badiya update diya hai aapne no words

Thanks a lot bhai. And keep supporting!

Fabulous Update Sir

Thanks

Super bro
Veer dead,

Thanks. Yeah! Veer dead...

Ab veer zinda kaise hoga yeh daikna hoga.
Veer ka pendent aik raaz reh gya
kaera
sonia
Ava
woh system wali larki
and crimson
still pending

Dekhte jao bas.

Second thing lagta hai ab veer ko side line laga k system wali larki aur crimson ko dikaya jaye ga how they got system and how much mission they complete

Nayi itni lambi kahani ka varnan nahi hoga. Ba setup dikhaya jayega. Thanks.

very impressive writing skills u have. veer ke paas abhi bhi neelmani hai to wo mar to nahin sakta ab dekhna ye hai ki wo jinda kaise bachega. crimson arc hai to finally crimson isme khatam hona chahiye aur agar aisa hota hai to definitely 4th person hona chahiye in sabke peeche kyunki mujhe lag raha hai ki koi aur hi hai in sabke peeche aur khel abhi bahut bada hai

may be koi sabhi system ko pana chahta hai aur iske liye wo sabhi ka plan kerke fasa raha hai per jo bhi ho bahut maja aa raha hai hum log to sirf soch hi sakte hain per asli kaam to aapka hi hai aur wo aapne bahut acche se kiya hai waise guess kerne bhi bahut maja aa raha pura dimag hil jata hai

Guess karte rehne ka. Kya pata anumaan sahi nikal jaaye? Btw thanks a lot. And keep supporting!

 

[Death Kiñg]

Louis : Fashion Designer from France. Veer ka business partner in Clothes Industry.

Chal basa ab woh.

Really? Wo mar jaayega to Louis kaise uska partner banega?

 

[monster@23]

Abhi ju ye kaise decide kar liye ki phone karne waala crimson hi hai?
Sab plan saamne aayega. Dekhte jao. Saazish jitna ju ne socha hai uss se kayi zyada badi hai.

Bhaaya agar phone karne wala koi aur tha to veer ka 1 aur dushman he kiya agar aisa he to difficulty level aur barh jaye ga,

Toh fir Ava ko notification kaise aaya?

Ho sakta he veer ki saanse ruk gai ho but mar to nhi sakta abhi veer ya to veer ko 1 bar phr pari bacha le gi jese sb se pehle bachaya tha ya koi aur power use bacha le gi,

Ever seen a wounded Tiger?

Exactly hume ab kuch aisa hi dekhne ko mile ga aur last update se anuman lagaya ja sakta he ke story aage aur ziyada zabardast hone wali he,

Aise toh dherr saare updates hai bhai jo ek se badhkar ek hai. Fir chaahe wo Nightwalker ke ho, Pitcher ke, Slogan ke, Aatish ke ya Crimson ke. Harr arc me koi na koi dhakad updates raha hai.

Aap ki bat sahi he but mujhe personally last update sb se ziyada pasand aya khas kar pari aur veer ki conversation aur veer ka last 5 second Beowulf use karna,

 

[Werewolf]

Aur main soch rhi thi iss se better aur kya hi ho sakta h ab....

Aisa soch bhi kese liya ju ne?

but you were waiting with your bombs. And now you are dropping them one by one on us.

I set them on fire way earlier. They are getting blasted now.

How can someone be so smart? Hum Kaera k IQ ki baat karte h... She's the smartest. Veer is the smartest. Crimson bhi...

But who's designing them? What's your IQ then? This is isanity at its peak. I was right about you. This content is actually a paid content which we are luckily recieving for free.

Itti tareef...! ab bas bhi karo!

Update 138, 139, 140, and now 141. It's the pinnacle of creativity, writing skills and visualisation. Ek baar writer mind blowing plot imagine kar bhi sakta h... But to put it into words, to connect them, and to show them effectively is what makes that writer different from the others.

Kuch parts me mujhe bhi sarr khujana padta hai. Samay dena padta hai. Fass jaata hu confusion me. Kya pehle dikhau, kya baad me.

You should realise that you have set several bars in the whole history of the this forum. Not just this forum but previous ones or any other too.

Ohhh!

Jab Slogan arc finish hua tha to I was like okay... Nothing else can top this now. From here the quality will drop. Then came the House of the killers arc. mujhe batane ki zaroorat nhi wo kya tha...

We are progressing you know.

Finally I thought okay this is it. What more can be done in the story? Then came the village arc.

Uske baad bhi chlo thik h... Mujhe lga ab to inse better kuch aa hi nhi sakta. And then you introduced us The Crimson Arc....

Crimson arc me hi ye haalat hai ju logo ki. Aage jhel loge story ko? Mere ko toh abhi se comments nazar aa rahe hai ki kahani unke upar se jaa rahi hai. Chinta ka vishay hai ye.

Mera mind itne shock jhel chuka h ki dar h kahi kaam karna band na kar de kahi... Nd abhi to aur jhatke lagni baki h... I know you are hiding much much bigger things from us. This is just the introduction to the tip of the iceberg. Smd we're getting scared by that only...

Of course. Dimaag ko sahi rakhna dear. warna fir samjhogi kese?

Like seriously. How can someone be so consistent? Mne apni life me kabhi iss se consistent story nhi padhi h... Ek ek update itne alga level ka hota h ki main words me ab describe nhi kar sakti.

Ohh! Thanks!

mne apne sapne me bhi nhi socha tha ki ava wo ladki niklegi. Ab sab clear out ho rha h...
Kyu aapne hume wo update beech me show kia... You knew from the start what you were doing.

Of course. Readers toh keval utna hi dekh sakte hai jitna dikhaya gaya hai. Bigger picture toh meri nazar me rehti hai na. I'm the one to take decisions.

Jo sabse acchi baat mujhe aapki lgti h wo ye h ki aap influenced nhi hote... Various readers commented that they didn't understand what happen in that update. Yet you were persistent about it. You moved according to your plans. I love this thing about you. You keep your patience and then in the next update suddenly boom.... Another blast happens.

That is true actually. Abhi tak kisi ki ek bhi suggestion ya advice ko kahani me laagu nahi kiya gaya hai. Update one se hi ye meri dinaag ki upaj se jaa rahi hai. Aur wese hi jayegi.

This update was out of this world. I will talk in points.

1) The environment : Kese aapke mind me ye idea aaya ki wait... Let's just take Veer to the islands with a lighthouse and then there I will show a fight. What the heck is this???

Uske peeche bhi ek kaaran hai dear. So why the island right? You'll come to know in these upcoming updates.

Now I understand why you chose France. Because France has islands. Ushant Island does have a lighthouse. The amount of research you had to do to execute this plot is just commendable. And those pictures and gifs. Absolutely mind blowing

Ohh thanks a lot! Yes indeed! Mujhe research karni padti hai. Kaafi!!

But this isn't the scariest part ... The scariest part is that how you utilize these environments into the story. Thinking about this just shakes me to the core that none of the things are useless. Even the lighthouse, the narrow passageway, the lighthouse keeper, the chopper, the blade, the building, Eric's gun, Teams made by Chris A, b, c. Each and everything was used.

When you are visualising the story strongly. If you have that imagination power, then you can pull this off. You just have to make sure that you're keeping the environment in mind while writing the updates. Characters should react according to their environment. You must visualise what they are seeing at that particular time. Sounds easy! Right?

Your visualisation is so strong that it seems you're just playing with your stuff. It's like a child's game for you. It's insane!!!

That's one of the very first steps you must do before laying down the outline of the update.

2) The unexpected : Kitne hi bade sapne kyu na aa jaye mujhe. Lekin aisa mne sapne me bhi nhi socha tha Ava wo girl niklegi. It shook me and took me by surprise. The moment I read words Veer is dead. I was shocked and dumbfounded. Kabhi ni expect kia tha ki veer aur pari iss stage pe pahuchenge jaha veer maara jaega. But he'll come back. I believe in him. He must come back. He has to come back. Mujhe ni pta wo kese aaega but aaega... Aur aap usse laoge... warna..

Just watch dear.

3) The goosebumps moments :

Ohhh!

I could feel my goosebumps rising up. Morning me padha tha mne. Halki halki thand rehti h morning me mere yha...

Morning me mere yaha bhi thand rehti hai. Thand abhi gayi nahi hai poore se.

Aur jab ye padha tha... I had to wear a blanket. You know why... I shivered. Veer has never been more heroic than here in this moment. I could imagine each and every scene.

I'm glad to hear that.

And this one... O my fucking god....
The guts he had. Here he was like a King.

He's the King.

4) The Breakdown Part (for me) : I had an emotional breakdown while reading Pari and Veer's convo. At first I was like wtf is veer talking... Why he's acting all sentimental now...

and then the convo proceeds. So does my heartbeats. Veer's every dialogue were pulling my heartstrings. And then he says this...

Noooooooooooo
Nd I lost it. I cried. Yes....

Oh you cried! Aww! That means I succeeded.

Veer ne kbhi pari ko I love you ni kaha tha. You intentionally kept that away from us to show in this scene right? Bahut bure ho aap

Even Pari was crying with muffled noises. They both can never be seperated. Nothing should happen to Veer...

Damn that rage.

5) The confusion : Ava ko kbhi maafi ni milegi... Agar usse maafi chahiye to Veer k liye kuch karna hoga... She must give a balidaan... My boy Veer got killed. He will return. I know Ava vamp ni h story me... I can confirm that... Shes a doing this for some reasons... But still... She must now pay Veer back... Only then I will forgive her.... And about that death flag... I think hume pehle death flag ko samajhna hoga... What is this? Missions or what? Ye smjh me aega then only we can understand what's happening actually.... Ava's system is very confusing actually.

Very true! You must first understand what Death Flag is. Then only you can make a few correct assumptions. Otherwise, it will be very complex for you guys. We'll come to know what it is very soon.

Now we realise why ava was hitting a punching bag in previous update .. her driving skills, her Singing ability ... Everything is coming together now... She betrayed us.

Real life me bhi hota hai. Bas logo ke paas system nahi hai.

Abhi k liye itna hi sir... Mera mood sahi krne k liye aapko jaldi se veer ko lana hoga... Ghar pe tej bhavna sab uska wait kar rhi h...

Suhana ki entry dekhna interesting hoga ab... Waiting for the next update. Keep writing sir...

Thank you so much dear. I think ye ju ka sabse favourite revo hai mere liye. Ju ne sab bayaa kar diya. And that rage.

Don't worry! Bas itminaan se padhne ka. And keep supporting as usual dear. It means a lot.

 

[Werewolf]

Really? Wo mar jaayega to Louis kaise uska partner banega?

Kaha kaha khod rahe ju? Lagta hai guide ko derr se update karna theek hai.

 

[Dragon master]

Slogan bhi zinda na ho