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Superb

What a beautiful update and the way you write is awesome

What a Turn around by Crimson

Bc ne kya plan banaya tha veer ko fasane ke liye pr bechara ko mission nahi mila mazza aa gya..

Ab bs dekhna hai veer kese bacha ya toh use kaira vale mission ke reward me kuch mila hai ya fir ava ko save krne me ....kuch toh mila hai card ya fir skill .....

Awesome update Brother

han brother padh liya maine kya planning hui veer ko kaise fansaya gaya sab thoda speed me padha kyuki ek ummid thi ki veer se mulakat hogi kahin na kahin to agar wo aa jata to meri speed slow ho jati thoda jaisa ki mujhe pahle se ummid thi ki aap condition explain karoge to wahi sab tha update me aur really superb update hai lekin kya karen in ankhon ko kewal veer ka intezar baki sabkuch sarsari nigaah se hi dekha jayega please understand bhai veer ke aane ke baad mai ye update dobara padhunga

zabardast update

Fantastic update

ISKI MAN KI ANKH BEHENCH@@D DIMAAG HI HILA DALA ! AB TO ALMOST SABHI CONECTIONS FIT HO GAIY. SAB SE PEHLY TO CRIMSON BHAIYA KI BHI KISI SY PHATTI HAI AHH MAN YE BANDA BHI KISI SY DARTA HAI HAHA!

TO HOK OR JIM OR NW OR PITCHER KO IKATHA KAR KY HOK KI RACHNA ISI CRIMSON BABOA NY KI AMAZING YAAR BC KY PASS GAJAB KA DIMAG HAI ALAG LEVEL KA AB YE BANDA KISI SY DARTA HAI WO UNKNOW CALLER JO BHI HAI IN SAB KA MASTER MIND LAG RAHA HAI USY CRIMSON K HAR MOVE KA BHI PATA HAI OR WO AVA K SAATH BHI CONTACT MAIN HAI AB SAWAAL HAI K WO BANDA HAI KON?

WO UNKNOWN CALLER VEER KO APNA SHIKAAR BATA RAHA HAI ! WHY MAN? HAMRY LONDY NY KIYA KIYAA? HAMRA LONDA TO AK ACHA INSAN HAI TU WO UNKNOWN BANDY KA SHIKAR WHY ? AB ISKA BHI I THINK KOI GAAND FAAD RAAZ HOGA JO AB LAZMI AGY PATA LAG JAIY GA .

AB SARI BATAIN CLEAR HOGAI VEER KA LA MAIN ANA HOK KA KHATMA PHIR VEER KA PARIS ANA EVERYTHING AB MASLA YE HAI K VEER MAR CHUKA HAI IN PAPER WORK I KNOW REAL MAIN TO APNA LONDA SAKHT HAI AISY NAHIN MARY GA I KNOW.

AB SAWAL YE HAI K AB JABKY VEER CRIMSON KI WAJA SY MAR GAYA HAI TU IS SY WO UNKNOWN BANDA SAMNY AAY GA CRIMSON SY BHIDNY ? KIYU K USNY PEHLY HI CRIMSON KO WARRNING DI THI K VEER USKA SHIKAAR HAI KIYA UNKNOWN OR CRIMSON FACE TO FACE HONGY?

YE FIR YE BHI HO SAKTA HAI KY YE SARA KRIYAKARAM WO UNKNOWN CALLER PEHLY HI PRIDICT KAR CHUKA THA HOK KA ANA OR VEER KA CRIMSON KY HATHO MARNA KIU K JAB USNY AVA KO KAHA K WO CRIMSON KY SAATH TEAMUP KAR LY TO USY AB YE TO PATA HI HOGA K ISKY RESULTS KIYA AAIN GY MAYBE WO SAB KUCH JANTA THA KIYA HOGA SAB KA SAB .

AB VEER WAPS KAISY ATA HAI ATA BHI HAI YA NAHIN YE TO UPDATE 144 MAIN PATA LAG JAIY GA OR AVA OR CRIMSON KI LAST CONVERSATION SY YE PATA CHAL AGAY HAI K AVA BHI KOI AAM CHEEZ NAHIN HAI USKA SYSTEM BHI ACHY KHASY LEVEL KA HAI .



AB ITNY SARY SYSTEM IKATHY HO GAIY HAI HAIN AB AK POINT YE HAI K VEER AKELA NAHIN HAI SYSTEM WALA BANDA AB YE BAAT KAHIN NA KAHIN ACHI NAHIN LAGI OR AK POINT YE BHI HAI K AB VEER AKELA NAHIN HAI SYSTEM WALA BANDA TO WO KHUD KO SUPERIOR KAISY SABIT KARTA HAI AB LAZMI HAI PROTOGNIST HAI TO SUPERIOR TO WOHI RAHY GA AKHIR MAIN .

AHH! MAN ABHI BHI DIMAAG MAIN BAHUT KUCH CHAL RAHA HAI MAN HOPE NEXT UPDATE IS SY BHI TAGDA HOGA .

OVERALL UPDATE WAS AWESOME .

Ab clear ho gaya ki crimson or ava dono ka use kar ke veer ko marne ki planing koi or hi kar raha hai.. Khair ye unknown kon ho sakta hai ? Veer ke dushman maise hi koi ek ho sakta hai.. abhi se bata pana sahi nahi rahega .. mujhe nahi lagta ki itni jaldi real pehchan bahar aa payegi uski.

Ava apni kamjori ki vajah se crimson or unknown men ka man karne ko ready ho gay thi . Majburi me karo ya bina majburi ke galat galat hi hota hai or dhokha dhokha hi hota hai . Galat karm ka fal bhi milta hi hai.

Bahot hi behtreen tarike se aap ne sab kuch samja diya iss update me bhai.. Bahot si bate ab clear ho gay.

Superb.....update

Jald me padha, detail comments baad me dunga. Phir bhi bas do comments -
1. Loose threads are connected, how HOK was created, and how and why Veer was lured to Paris
2. Caller and Prisoner - two more system owners

Super mind blowing background play no words are enough to explain the feel while reading simply amazing

Such a beautiful n outstanding update

Oohhh bhaaiiiii what thee fucckkkk aakhir ye majra tha sala hum to samjhe the ke crimson hi hai main villain but yaha to khud uska kaata gaya tha

Wo unknow caller hi tha jiske chalte Crimson aisa bana or hum to naa jaane kya kya soch baithe the Crimson ki guessing to suman tak pahuch gayi thi koi na at the end crimson ek master villain hai ye hum nahi bhul sakte ki wo kon hai isi liye Crimson ko itni to izzat banti hai

Or bhai veer ne kya hi sahi wala Crimson ka kata hai ye to aisa hogya tha ki sala saalo se sex keliye tadpe ho or chut pe Lund set kiya hi tha ki kisi ne lund kaat diya

Or wo aakhiri sell wala pagal aadmi and wo unknown caller ye dono lagta hai bahut jyada strong system carry karte hai indono se virki bhidant dekhne wali hogi maybe shyad Chinatown arc ya fir disemboler arc main

Or bhai ava bhi kya hi sahi wali strong hai usne Crimson Jese ko ek hi baar main khaternaak wali talker dedi veer ki tarah
To ava ne apna status change karliya tha

Or wolfi sach main aisi story kabhi nahi hogi is fouram par kya hi suspense hai kya hi Thriller hai yee bawaal hai bawaal

Wolfi Wese is arc main ab kitne update baaki hai ab Wese bore to zara bhi nahi kar raha ye arc but wo kya hai na mujhe kida hai puchne ka bas isi liye puch raha hu

Or ab veer ko lao yaar itna aaram bhi theek nahi uske liye hume veer ko full moon night main crimson se bhidte dekhna hai undono ki bhayanker tabahi dekhni hai may be aava bhi sath ho but bich main tang na aadaye use door hi rakhna indono se

Wese bhai kya Crimson ke pass bhi beowolf ki tarah hi koi khater naam wala card hoga kya agar hoga to maza ayega wese uski jarurat bhi nahi hai Crimson Wese bhi thunda huva pada hai wo ek hath se kya hi bigaad lega veer ka

Wese yaha tak story padhne ke baad itna to pata chal gya hai ki system dhari inshan ko marna muskil hai but namumkin nahi hai

Wolfi yaar such main is update main kya hi tagdi waali planning dekhne ko mili hume such main maza aaya

Superb fantastic incredible update

Nice update

Iss Crimson ne toh dimag ke taar hila dale, kya plan banaye kaha se kaha jod lagaye.

Lekin ek baat yaha saaf bhi ho rahi hai, bhale hi Ava urf Natalia ko Veer ke final decision ka nahi pata tha, par woh yeah toh janti hi thi jis tarah voh Veer ko fasa rahi hai usse uski life barbad toh ho hi jayegi, toh aab rone ka koi fayda nahi tha.

Aab aate hai Crimson par, uss caller se itni fat rahi hai fir bhi panga le raha hai guts hai bande mein.

Uss caller ne joh kaha ki "mere preys" matlab is update mein pata chale 5 logo se bhi jayada System hai kya.

And last mein mera ek chota sa guess kya woh caller Miss Kiara ke father ho sakte hain, lekin woh ab tak kisi bhi update mein jayada shail nahi huye toh kah nahi sakte.

Baki agle update mein dekhte hain humare Veer bhaiya ke barre mein kya pata chalta hai.

Mind blowing update sir

Awesome update

abhi update nahi pada bs update ke baad ke do chaar comment pe nazar gayi to waha kaiyo ka marm ye hi tha ki fatafat padh liya.
Phor update pe gaya to top pe hi note mile rush mat krna dhyaan se padhna
To bhaiyo bs itna kehna chahunga ki aise
Kaun karta hai bhai
Thodi maryada rakhiye

Bro jabardast dhamekdar update bro weting for next update jaldi dana bro hosekto bro

Awesome update

Mast bhai akhir crimson ne sach mai hila dala lekin veer akhir veer hi hai

Zabardast update bhaya bohot saare raaz khul gaye. Ab system 5 bando k paas dikhaya gaya hai.

Wo call wala banda kisi na kisi tarah Veer se related hai kyu ki usne Veer ki uska prey btaya, toh shayad ye slogan ko marne ki wajah se mission mila ho ya koi aur karan iska toh aage pata chalega.

Aur wo jail wala aadmi thoda khiska hua lagta hai par ye pagal type log hee bohot khatarnak hote hai. Aur jaise usne kaha "Hum mei se" ek toh use bhi pta lag gya ki Crimson ke paas bhi system hai aur use ye bhi pata hai ki aur bhi logo ke paas system hai.
Uska patient kehna kuch samajh nhi aaya, ya toh wo asal mei pagal hai aur doctor hoga ya phir uski bhumika kuch alag hai aur wo insab mei sabse powerful system wala ho shayad use system ka raaz pta ho aur sabse powerful system uska ho gya ho.

Aur bhi bohot raaz baaki hai unka jawab sirf wolfie bhaya hee de sakte hai bass..

Awesome update Bhai

Mast update bhai.....!!!!!!

Crimson's system sounds arrogant while Ava's seems to be innocent, and as in case of Pari, we have seen different versions but all of them have a common trait that they all are caring. So the system can be defined by Imran Khan's song which says Ni woofer tu meri, meri, main tera amplifier,
Baaki agar Ava apna status change kr sakti hai to usne crimson ke aage ghataya kyu ya phir kisi mission k liye koi card use krke uss time badhaya hua tha jab crimson ne usse screen mein check kiya??

Saala pehle update padhke bas ye sthithi hoti thi ki aage kya hoga. Ab dimaag ki dahi hui rehti hai

Shock fully update bus veer jinda hoo, baki writer sahab ki story haa jase thik lage kare

Nice update

Raat ko soty waqt prhn ga

Superb update

Fantastic mind-blowing update

Zabardast Update
Ab dekhte hain ke veer kaise zinda bachta hai

Your writing level is insane. Like you can write something according to future then again switch back to past, still make it sense. I don't know how you are doing this, but hats off to you bro.

Dhamakedar update Bhai......!!!!!

Nice update bro

Romanchak aur lajavab update bro

Veer ko kay hova

Ek aur nyaa mod
Ek or nyaa system wala insaan
Par veer ki abhi koi khabar nhi
Or eva ka veer ko maarne wala mission
Or goli maarne wala insaan
Bohat se swaal
Aur vass agle update ka besabri se intezar

This update cleared up major questions, some questions were left undefined which i think is for future surprises.

Now, a new entry, someone is there watching all of this like a game which he has planted.

We thought crimson played a major game but now the clear picture shows that he is getting played by any genius. Maybe professor of money heist

This cleared but the fact that crimson had no personal rift with Veer. He just wanted to disgrace the caller by taking down his prey.

In my opinion, the caller intentionally warns him to stay away from Veer as he knew that crimson will take up all the opportunity to defeat him. The caller used crimson and ava for Veer

Now i get us to the fact that Veer has something extra, something powerful and he is still unaware of this fact.

I have a question though, which i think can be answered without ruining future surprises.
The question is how system approach any person. Is the scenario same for everybody? Similar to Veer's, who got it in state of injury, a miracle type entry or it can be normal like inborne.

The person in jail also had a system. These system owner are playing up slowly and taking up part in this story after they have planned enough.

I would say that crimson should have ran towards the system owner rather than jim because it would have helped him to get info about system and that person who can layer become his enemy while on the other hand jim could have been searched up easily by the help of system.

Crimson is using system like no one till now. He is outplaying system itself. Even his system asks him "now what". The system appreciated him for a full proof plan.

This stage of the story is like a stop for every active characters just because of Veer. Crimson's plans and future approach are waiting up. Ava in guilt yet her future is lying up with mystery. Caller is the man of mystery himself and family stories has also been keen on veer's storyline. No story line can be touched up now without Veer.

My hypothesis
One of the system owner would have helped Veer and may be it can be a lady character which can be our lead.
Or a case with the caller planning up to kill crimson by Veer and extracting up profits from Veer.
Maybe the madman from jail have suffered all this system fights and he wanted some rest.


A thousands of possibilities are present at this moment but you will carry forward it from any billionth plan.

Dr. Strange
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Ab tak huyi ghatna ko, ek hi update me saar milaa kar dikhaa diya kadi milaa di..

Jiske karan sabhi ka dimak dahi khaa raha ha tha..


Sach me behtrin

Beautiful update bhai ye veer ka update kabse aayega

Bhai kya hi update he sir hi ghum Gaya padh ke pure 45 min. lag gay padhane ko.

Jabardast bhai aapne pura dimag hila diya

Awesome and fantastic update bhai

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Werewolf bhai....
Nice and awesome update.

Fantastic Fabulous mind-blowing update sir .

Hmmmm...kafi badi planning Hui re baba...sch me is update ne dimag ki sare purje khol diye... crimson ne kafi kosis kri mission ke jriye veer ko khatm krne ki....jis tarah se usne veer ko fansa wakai me uski system powerful h...wolfi bhai ne ek baar kaha tha ki asli villain abhi aaya kahan ... yahan to mujhe crimson se bhi upar ki chiz hone ki aabhash ho reya se...ab veer ki halat ko bhi dekhne ki aaturta charam per hai.... waiting for the next one.

Nice updates

Super Megha update

I am 100% sure that unknown person is Kishor…….

Bahut hi behtareen update Werewolf bhai sala inki planning dekh kar dimag ke saare purje hi hil Gaye hai....

Shandar jabardast jindabad bhut hi jordar update bhai.....

ऐसा भी होता है क्या ।
षड्यंत्र है भाई
बाकी मुख्य पात्रों को वापस देखने की चाहत है .

जो अपडेट समझने में इतना समय लग रहा है उसे लिखने में कितना लगा होगा ?

Kitna planning kra h crimson ne veer ko fasane ke liye...

Excellent update bhai

Superb, crimson ne jo pehle khel racha tha us par se parda hat gaya he, aur ab agle update me VEER ke samachar milenge.
So nice, mind blowing update
Waiting for next one, fadu update.

Ufff ufff ufffff...
Zabar update de diye ho Bhai tum toh
Kehne ko bohot kuch chl raha hai dimag me but sabse pehle
Crimson crimson crimson.... Man you deserve respect. Precisely ek ek minute level par planning kri hai tumne.


Ye lines apne andar bohot si theories and conspiracy liye hue hai.
Ek mastermind crimson jo kisi k liye kaam krta tha (who knows legal or illegal) usne us unknown aadmi ka sath chhod diya kyunki vo pakda gya tha apne hi boss k dwara .
Ho na ho crimson ek deemak ki tarah hi uss unknown ko khokla kr uski power use krke apni hi ek alag duniya basana chah raha ho us unknown k jaise.
Jisme vo kafi hadd takk kamyab bhi raha hai jaise update me dikhaya gya kaise usne apna Empire establish Kiya.
Mudde ki baat ye hai ki uss unknown ne crimson ko apni team se aise Shanti se jane bhi diya jaisa crimson chahta tha.
Zaroor ya to unke rishte ache rahe honge ya crimson uska favourite ho.
Even seems like that unknown have system and that too most powerful of them all atleast since now.



Ohhh mannn iss scene ke kya hi kehne
Ekdum ankho k samne visualise kewa diya pura to.
Maze aa gye padh ke
Crimson jo apni team ke liye sathi lene aaya tha detention camp me jaha par uska aur yha tak ki hum readers ka bhi ek surprise wait kar raha tha.
Doctor,ek sarfira doctor.
Ye kehna SHAYAD galat na ho ki ye vhi sarfira doctor hai jiske patients whi sab system dharak hai jo puri story me bawal machaye hai.
Uff crimson arc gadar macha diya.
Chinatown ko ek villan dekr jo ki veer ko apna sikar bta rha hai
Or sath hi SAYAD sarfire vaigyanik doctor ke rup me ek saviour bhi jiski madad veer ko leni hi padegi kisi na kisi villan ko khatam krne me.


Doctor sahab kuch ya bohot kuch system ki hakikat se vakif hai

Coming to the next,
Crimson partner/worker sweetie
Ye sweetie itni bhi sweet nahi hai jaisa dekhne se lag rha hai
Crimson par koi nazar rakhe hue hai ye hum jaan chuke hai
But crimson ki asli pehchan to jim nightwalker pitcher bhi nahi jante the jo vo unknown se share kre.
Uski almost sachai to bas sweetie ko hi pta hai.
Ho na ho vo vibhishan sweetie hi ho jo crimson ki lanka laga rhi ho uske pith piche.
Or yha hume ye bhi nhi bhulna chahiye ki crimson par goli bhi chalayi gyi thi.
Do you know what I mean


Is part se clear hogya ki pichle update me ava ke ek hi vaar me crimson dhul kyu chatne lga


Isse ye clear ho gya ki veer ko crimson ne vegas encounter me kyu nhi maara



Ohhhh bhai bhai bhai ab samjha kya catch tha inn dono ka iss mamle se.

And sabse mast to cherry on the top,icing on the cake to ye reason lga ki veer ko fasaya kyu gya dgsi k dwara or uska plan ka execution.
Masallah subhanallah Walla hi wallah...
Ohhh yrr ek ek reason padh kr aisa feel mil raha hai jaise orgasm se milta ho.
Insane writting skills mann.


No it's not good.
It is excellent


Agar jaha crimson ko goli lgi or uske basement me zyada fasla na ho to iske zyada chances hai ki goli chalane vali sweetie ho skti hai.

Ava ka vo Card.
Jis tarah ki skill hai vo uss hisab se lagta hai ki vo diamond ya platinum tier ki skill hai.
Isse hum ye bhi predict kar sakte hai ki ava ka system bhi veer se kuch kam nahi hai.
Or jis tarah se uski system ki usse interaction dikhayi gyi hai isse lagta hai ki she is soft cored person.


Acha hume ye bhi pta chl gya ki veer ne ava ko check Kiya to use pta kyu nhi chla tha.

Wow man itne bade bade doubts ko itni choti choti bato ke madhyam se itni asani se explain kar Diya.
Sabdh kam pad jayege to praise this wonderful creation.
Mera perception se apke jo purane update the hok wale vo ek perfect knitted cloth ki jaise the jo khi se fata nhi ho.
Ekdum smooth...
But jo abhi ke updates hai connection wale vo bilkul uss kadhayi ki tarah hai jo hatho se unn barik se spore me se fir buna jata hai ki cloth or sundar ho jaye or cloth bhi perfect rhe.
Microscopic levels par apka work dikha hai iss update ke madhyam se.

It is a MASTERPIECE.
and till now the best update of the whole crimson arc
Sahi mayno me updates pehle se behtar hote ja rhe hai
Hats off
Well written...


Do baate abhi back of the mind chl rhi hai
1, agr veer bachega,jo ki hoga hi, or use system ka kuch raaz janna ho to vo ava se consult kr skta hai. Ki uske pass kaise aaya system

2, abhi tk humne jitne bhi veer ke villan se encounter dekhe hai vo directly ya indirectly involve kiye hue hai Suhana ko chahe vo atish ho, slogan ho,pitcher ho,nightwalker ho, jim ho,yha tk ki crimson hi ho pehle vegas or ab yha bhi...
Itna closeness hazam nhi hui bro.
Ha manta hu khi na khi vo veer ko like krti hai but aisa behaviour?? Fishy Neo!!!


Personal experience: apke updates padhne ka asli maza raat ko hi aata hai...
Other than all up from my side till next

Best wishes for next update
Keep writing ....

Bhai next update present me story hogi ki past mein?

nice1

Aapne toh pahle hi bata diya tha ki Ava shaamil. Lekin planning bahut hi ghatiya thi iss crimson ki ya kah lo veer bahut kamzor hai abhi. veer kuch v karne lgata hai bina soche samjhe. Hope veer aage dhyaan rakhega.

Just kidding i know aage veer ka planning hoga kuch. 99% par aake ruk jana, its not a coincidence kuch toh lafda lagela hai bhai, aur woh goli joh chali thi crimson par iska dusra pakka sabut hai ki veer planing karke aya hai. Dusra possiblity hai ek naya system bich me kudega aur veer ki Jaan bachayega yeh Naa ke barbar possiblity hai isse veer ka character thoda loose dikhega so possibility is less.

Aap bol sakte ho ki crimson ke uppar joh hai system ya jisne Ava ko crimson ke saath collaborate karne ko kaha hoga usne goli maara hoga crimson ko toh kam hi possiblity lag raha hai. Toh veer ka new planning dekhte hai aage.

Lekin abhi ek possibility baki ha ki joh system crimson ke uppar hai usse veer ki jarurat ho kisi mission ke liye. Aur usne bas yeh khel khela ho Veera ko maut ke munh me pahuchane ka aur last me Jaan bacha ke sympathy haasil karne ka.

Bahut hi possibility dikh rahi hai bhai dimag ka maa bahan ho ke raha hai jaldi se naya update do bhai......

Super duper update

Chha Gaye bhai jabardast update bro

Ye sahi hai... System sirf Veer paas hi nahi hai aur bhi kayi log hai, ab tak 5 logo ke paas dikhaya hai - Veer, Crimson, Ava, mad jail guy and the caller.
Aisa lagta Crimson ka level kaafi upar hai. There must be a master of system creator and he/she has a bigger plan to make them fight (till death) among themselve to evolve the best system. Just a wild guess.

dhamakedar update ..to veer se koi dushmani nahi thi crimson ki par koi ek aisa insan hai jo crimson se bhi powerful hai ,aur shayad uske paas bhi system hai ,warna wo aisi dhamkiya nahi deta crimson ko .
us anjan shaks ko ava ke baare me bhi sab pata hai .aur wo veer ko apna dushman samajhta hai aur apne hi haatho se maarna chahta tha par crimson ko uski dhamki pasand nahi aayi aur usne apna hi alag plan bana liya .

ab wo jail se bhaga aadmi kaun hai jiske paas bhi system hai ..

crimson ke saath kaam karna majburi thi ava ki par us anjan shaks ki baat maanna samajh nahi aaya . aur us shaks ko sirf veer ko hi kyu maarna hai ,kya koi personal dushmani ,
kyunki agar system rakhne ka matter hota to ava ,crimson aur kuch aur logo ke paas bhi hai to unko bhi maarne ki sochta par usne aisa nahi kiya .

house of killers kaise bana aur usse crimson ameer bana sab pata chal gaya aur kaise crimson ne khudko bachane ke liye veer ko target bana diya dgsi ka .
par bechare ki kismat kharab ki usko veer ko maarne ka target mil hi nahi paya aur ek haath bhi gawana pada par kya system uska haath dobara laa sakti hai ??.

ava ke paas to ek best card hai jiska tod to crimson ke paas bhi nahi .

to aisa lagta hai ki har system me alag alag cards honge ,aur system se reward ke roop me milte honge ,
shayad veer ko bhi pata nahi chal paya jab wo crimson se ladh raha tha ki uske paas kaunsa card hai aur ava ke paas apna nature ye kuch change karne ka card hai jisse veer ko lag raha tha ki uski favourability badh rahi hai ..par ava usko skill se chakma de rahi thi .

maja aa gaya update padhke bas ab present me kya ho raha hai ye dekhna hai ..

very nice update werewolf bhai, is update se yeh toh pata chal gaya ki HOK kisliye create hua tha, uska maqsad kya tha! and crimson &ava se bus veer ko phasane ka kaam liya ja raha tha, us unknown caller ke jariye! But UNKNOWN CALLER?? that's mean woh veer se past main juda hua hai yah uske system se right? Aur wo goli crimson peh chalane wala unknown caller hai jo crimson ko warn karna chate hai don't cross tha line to kill veer! But wo veer ko bachaane ku chahata hai that's will clear on future updates! Bohut hi badiya update tha werewolf bhai 2 baar padne ke baad samaj main aaya

Awesome update

ओ भाई
यह क्या लिख डाला है
पुरा दिमाग़ का अंचर पंचर के परखच्चे उड़ा दिया है तुमने
मुझे लगा था सिर्फ दो जनों के पास सिस्टम है
भाई यह क्या अब लगता है बहुतों के पास सिस्टम है और तो और सिर्फ क्रीमशन ही जान पा रहा है किसके पास सिस्टम है
खैर किस्मत कहो या कुछ और क्रीमशन को तगड़ा झटका लगा है एक पर्सेंट पुरे निन्यानबे पर्सेंट पर भारी पड़ गया
आभा और सुहाना के साथ आमना सामना तो होगा ही दिव्या भी पुरी कोशिश करेगी वीर की बेगुनाही सामने लाने की
पर तब तक शायद वीर वापस आ जाए अपने अपग्रेड वर्जन के साथ
खैर यह तो मालुम हो ही गया क्रीमशन मेन विलेन नहीं है कोई और है और निसंदेह क्रीमशन को उंगलियों पर नचाने वाला सिस्टम के मामले में वीर से कई कदम आगे ही होगा l
पर यह देखना दिलचस्प रहेगा जब वीर वापस आयेगा तब आभा उसका सामना कैसे करेगी
वीर को आभा की असलियत कैसे पता चलेगी

Bhai kya hi update tha ye maza hi aa gaya sb crimson,ava,caller pr hi atke the aapne ek naye system ki entry bhi karwa di kya likh rhe ho yr aap aaj tk xform mein esi story nhi padhi h bas ek question tha mera ye sb aapne story k starting se soch kr rakha hua tha ya jese jese story badhi aapne likha h ye dono hi bhut badi baat h

Werewolf
मित्र उमर निकल जाते हैं सब कुछ समझने के लिए आज तो अपडेट ने कई पहलुओं पर ध्यान आकृष्ट कराया बहुत ही चतुराई से फसाना सिस्टम के बारे में जानकारी हासिल करने के बाद उसका उपयोग अपने फायदे के लिए करना क्रीमसन लाजवाब काम है... उन सबसे उपर वो कौन है जो सब को फोन कर हलाक कर रहा है....
शानदार अंक रहा है कहानी की अनुतत्परता को एक लय में मिलते ही आनंद आ गया है..
जय हो...
मिलते हैं इंतजार में

Ek shandar update, Mind-blowing nhi khunga kyoki iss update me basically past ko connect Kiya gya hai. System vale logo ka number bhdta hi Jaa rha hai. Veer, Crimson, Ava, inke paas to confirm system hai. Jisne Crimson ko dhamki di vo unknown caller uske pass bhi system hai. Or vo unknown Banda jise crimson ne jail me dekha vo kon tha, uske pass bhi system hai. HOK ka origin bhi pta chal gya. Ava ki powers bhi kamal ki hai.

Mujhe lgta hai ki jo unknown caller hai vo veer ka koi bahut karibi hai jise shayad veer bhi janta hai.

Eagerly waiting for next update

Nice apdet

boht achi update rahi, or kafi kuch clear ho gya k Ava kesy trap hoi. bus abb next update ma Veer ki kahani samny aa jaye gi. Good work

Nice update bhai

I like this story very much

Bhai wait for next update....

Awesome update

So ab background complete ho gaya aur Veer ki position in the system universe bahut hi mamuli nikli. But underdog usually wins in such stories so aage maja aayega.

Bhai is mai koi shak ni k you are the best.
But 1 bat kahni thi.
Avenger endgame mai jab Thor ka hathora Caption America uthata hai to Thor boht happy hota hai.
Lekan jab Thor ka interview howa tha to us ne saaf kaha tha k ye bat use pasnd nahi i. K us ka Hathora koi aur uthay.

Bro isi trha ye bat humy b pasnd nahi i k Veer k ilawa b kisi aur k pas system ho.

Chalo Veer k bad crimson ya pir kis big criminal k pas to chalta. Lkn ab Eva k pas b system....

Ye maza nahi aya..

Baki kuch bura laga ho to sorry.

Love you from

Werewolf bhai ju ne bola tha na ki last arc sab se bhayankar hoyega toh kya woh unknown caller ke uper hoyega last arc yeh phir Chinatown arc??

kyoki update padh kar itna samjh aa gya hai ki unknown caller knows everything and everybody.

Arc ki details mujhe pata hai kha hai mien yeh puch rha hu ki unknown caller in dono mien kisi arc ka main villian hoyega kya??

Ju bhi pata nhi konsa nasha karne laag gya

xforum ki best story hai ye
ek aur best update
ab Aage dekhte hai Veer apna inteqam kaise pura karta hai

Zabardast update

Maan gye guru

• Achha hai pure detail me plan kiya gaya tha

• ava ne jo kiya thik kiya apane sabse pehle le lekin jab time aaye to veer use maf kabhi de lekin phir uske ur veer ke raste alag hoto achha lagega yena ho ke maf kiya fir jarurt hone pe fir madad karne pahunch jaye
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• To ye collar hi hai jo real veer ka dusman hai or jaha tak mera khayal hai ye veer ki family se juda hua hai ya bhavana ka koi purana dusman
• Wese dekha jaye to crimson ne ek choti si galti ko jan kar uska faayda utha ke veer ko fasa diya ab dekhna ye hai ki veer is iljaam se kese bachaya hai
• Wese story me system hi system wale bande mil rahe hai or apane veer bhau ko system mission bhi ese deta hai ke kam kar ne ke baad bhi point nahi milte
• 1 mission keara ki feeling ko wapas lana jiska koi ata pata nahi
• 2ava ko bachaane ka jiska koi matlab hi nahi Kyu ke jab wo khud samiksha hai to uspe khatra kesa
• Ek or bat veer har bar uske sath galat karne wali ko maff kar deta hai 1 kya nam hai sawati ya kuch or usko maff kiya
• dusra prajal jis ko sirf pit kar chod deta hai jab wo uski bahen ko bhi nuksaan pahucha ne wala tha use bhi chhod diya take ahe jake kuch kar sake
• Ab agar prajal ko veer ki maut ka pata chale to uski family ko koi nuksaan pahucha sakta hai
• Or sabse bada folt ya galti uska chacha jisne uski ma or bap ko alag karne me madad ki use kuch nahi kiya khali kya nam tha bhul gaya lekin unko saja di to usme samil chacha ko kyu kuch nahi kia
• Yahi choti galtiya aage musibat banti hai mere ko sak hai uska chacha bhi veer ki is halta ka jimmedar ho sakta hai
• Update to ek dum gadu awesome tha itna laba choda plan man gaye bhai crimson or apko maja agaya

Kahi ye caller kaera ka baap to nahi

Bro likes to Kab ke pure Ho Gaye 150 like ho gaye update kab aaega

Bhai dusman se ladana asan hai lekin chalak lomadi se bahot muskil jo ke dusro ke piche chup ke hamla kare

Bhai 140 likes ho gaya hai update kab Dene wale ho veer ka kiya huwa yah janne ke jaldi bhai bhai de do update

Zabardast update

Bro main sirf update padhta hun comment Koi Nahin Padta isliye main index mein dekhta hun ki update aaya hai ya nahin FIR Main Apni delete karta hun Jab usmein a jata hai

वीर की खबर,

Ava की पप्पी,


ओर बदला

Mind blowing update bro Maza aa gya kitna bada jaal bichhaya gya tha Veer ke liye but apna Veer bhi kam na sabki lega Veer vo bhi bolke lega dekhte hai aage kya hota hai hardly waiting for next update ??

Nice update bhaii bhit Awla Maza Aya gya par Kar ab new update Ka intazar ha

Bhai bhot hi zabrdast update hai itna bada game khela Gaya ver ke shat Bhai aap bhot mhenat se likh rahe hai bhot mind laga rahe hai story pe hum ko pad ke Bhai maza a Raha hai

Are baap re..... Itni tagdi planning
Crimson ne itni lambi tayyari ki and I'm just imagining the intelligence level of crimson. Lekin fir bhi veer ke mission kr points to nhi le paya
Ava ka system bhi surprise hua when she got to know ki crimson ke paas bhi system hai, mtlb individual systems ko itna kuchh idea nhi hai... Ya kya pata wo bhi reveal nhi kr rhi ho.
But the question is ki wo jo banda jel se bhaga tha jiske paas system hai uska kya scene hai yaar ab
And one more point.. abhi tk jis bhi bande ke stats system owner nhi read kr paaya hai uska mtlb yahi nikla hai ki saamne Wale bande ke paas bhi system hai, but an exception to this is kaira.. To kya iska nishkarsh ye nikal rha hai ki kaira ke paas bhi system hai.

Yaha 1 system pari to sambhal hi nhi rahi thi tumne pariyo ki baris kar di pata nhi uske pass kesa system hoga jo crimson ki gaand fhaade hai

very niche

Lagta hai revos bhi tooooo long dene padenge ab se shayad

Main to dhaney hogaya keh meri senior ny mere comment ko mention kr dia. Naina G ye hy meri ek super senior. Apko to nai kia tag mene

Apni senior Naina G ko tag kia hy apko to nai kia tag. Ap khud samjhdar ho

Mujhy lgta Hy
Veer ka system inocent KY kill ka mission nhn deta
Ava crimson ya unknown ka dirty khelta Hy

Nyc update bhai as expected
Veer ki info ka wait h ab
Crimson ka bhi baap nikl Aya h koi
And ye next arc hoga veer vs unknown caller
But still abhi isi arc me kaffi kuch hone ka
Waiting to see
How will ava face veer and veer Crimson ka kya hall krta h
Waiting for next one

Sabse pehle, thanks for mega update, puri kadi HOK or Veer ko phasane ke shadyantra ke baare me ek hi update me puri ho gayi. Ab agla update Veer ke bachne ke uper hoga.

What writing skills, one feels transported to the situation.

Lagta hai phone system wala apne ko sabka 'Baadshah' samajhta hai, aur Crimson use nahi janta.




Ye ek aur system wala. Pagal sa, aur ye kinko apne patients bata raha hai. Kya ye doctor hai ya kuch aur.

Lagta hai Crimson Veer, Pagal aur Natasha ko teen gin raha hai, lekin uska system use Phone wale per concentrate kerne ke liye keh raha hai.

To Crimson pehle Veer aur uske baad Phone wale ko maarna chahta hai.

Iska matlab Crimson ki Veer se koi dushmani nahi thi, bas weh ek system wale ko maar ker jyada points aur uski powers lena chahta hai.

Ye samajh nahi aaya. Pehle Crimson Ava ke stats nahi dekh pa raha tha lekin Ava ne kya stats badle jo Crimson ab padhne laga. Lekin weh Ava ki skill ke baare me nahi jaan paya.



To Ava bhi keval apni Ma ko bachane ke liye hi nahi, balki is karan se bhi Veer ko phasane ke shadyantra me phans gayi.

Now it is very clear, Veer ke points lene ke liye Crimson uske peeche pada hai.



Veer ko phasane ka jaal phail gaya.

Hahaha... akhir yeh kaun hai, jo Crimson ke peeche pada hai.
Pata nahi ye update pehle se hi plan kiya tha ya baad me, lekin pichle HOK aur Veer ko phasane ke updates se bahut safai se gel ker gaya. Maza aa gaya.
Ab mega update ke baad keh bhi nahi sakte agle update jaldi dene ke liye, per Veer kis tarah se bachta hai, kya Neel Mani use bachati hai, ya fir Ava ka mission pura hone ke points ya skill, dekhna hai. Aur Kaera ka bhi suspense bacha hua hai, uske bhi emotions jagne ke baad points milne hain. Sabse badi baad, Veer ke bachne se kya Ava ya Crimson ko koi notification milega. Mere khyal se nahi, kyon ki un dono ko system ne Veer ko maarne ka task nahi diya tha. Bas ek baat dimag se uper nikal gayi, Ava ko points kyon mile, weh to phone wale ya Crmson ke kehne per Veer ko Ushant Island layi thi. Death Flag aur Veer uska target kaise ban gaya. Kya phone wale ke paas itni skill hai ki weh kisi aur ko points de paye.

Jabardastttt Updateee


Mujhe ab bhi pata nhi kyo woh Ladki Ava hi lag rahi hai.

jis hisaab se veer ko mara gya hai mujhe abhi yeh lgg raha hai baki sab logo crimson and ava or jis jis ke paas system hai veer abhi ek ghayal sher ki tra ek pair pishe kara hua hai mujhe yeh lgta hai k saare systems se power full system abb veer k paas hi hoga jisse veer ka baal bhi baka na ho baki writer to mujh se bhot agge jaante aap apni tipni jrur krre

Super thrilling update

Crimson and Ava ye sab to mohre h asli khel to wo call wala aadmi khel Raha h mano ya na mano mastermind to wahi h.

Aur ek baat wo veer ko khud hi marne nahi dega veer Marne wala rahega to bhi wo bachayega.....

Ab to usi se mulakat hogi Chinatown me crimson ke baad usi ka intezar h...

Last time jo mission mila tha Ava ko bachane ka mission complete ho gya h and uska fayda bhi milega veer ko aur jaha tak mera khayal h veer mission complete ke points se jo fayda hoga usi ki wajah se bachega bhi.....

Yaha abhi neelmani ka koi use na ho shayad is arc me mughe to lagta h neelmani ka raaz khulane me abhi bahut time h..... Kam se Kam iss arc me to nahi.....

Kulmila kar ye sb plan pehle se fix tha
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CRIMSON main Khiladi ni hai is khel ka dekha jaay to AVA ki trh wo bi ek MOHRA hai
.
SHANTRANJ ka khel khelne wala koi or he hai
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sari baate ek trf sbse main question ye hai MAIN KHILADI KN HAI JO YE KHEL KHELRHA HAI
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KY CHAHTA HAI WO AAKHIR VEER SE
OR
KY DUSHMANI HAI USKI VEER SE
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UPDATE KABILE TARIF HAI
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IS UPDATE KE LYE ITNA BOLOGA BS
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CLAP HAI VERY BIG HAND

bhai next update most probably kab aayega ???

Neel mani bachaygi Veer ko

Mujhe pata nahi story jis trah ghum raha hai waise me lagta hai sab khel khel kaira ka bap hi khel raha hai baki writer ji jane

Nice mast update bro

Werewolf Awesome update...hum imagine bhi nahi kar sakate Aisa hua hai pith piche..... waiting for update....raha nahi jata

Superr update bro to akhirkar past ke incidents bhi clear ho hu gaye lagbhg lgbhag lekin abhi bhi ava ka pura raaz baaki h maana ki crimson ne use force kiya lekin asal m ava ne caller ki baat maani thi na ki crimson ki.
Aur fir hospital m wo 18000 points wala notification mtlb ava ko bhi koi mission mila tha aur veer ke sath jo bhi hua possibly wo hi ava chaahti thi uska mission complete krne ke liye.
Interesting maja aaega aage jaanne m jb aur bhi teist aaege aur agr veer bch gaya h to ho skta h ki wo caller game khel raha ho ya veer ne koi scroll khol liya ho end time pr jisse ava ko uske mission m death fleg complete ka notification aaya.
Waiting for next update bro maja aaega

Bro kab Tak ayega update?

Bhai India m sirf ek hi system h or baaki ke sab system veidsho me h to kya veer ke alava system India m kisi or ke pass bhi h kya

awesome bhai

So first of all sorry for late review bro, actually kuch kaam me busy hone ke kaaran time nhi mila review dene ka,
So ab baat karte he last update ki to buhat hi zabardast update tha,
To ab 5 log hogye system wale maybe kiya pata aur bhi nikal aaye aage jake anyways wo baad me pata chal hi jaye ga hume,
To har cheez clear hogai HOK ke creation ki sb ke peche crimson hi tha but ye unknown caller kon he ye buhat suspense bana raha he aur veer ko kese janta he aur janta bhi he to dushmani kiya he us ki veer se,
Ab baat karte he ava ki to us ka system kafi interesting he wo apna profile change kar sakti he aur jo us ke pas legendary card he wo bhi kafi amazing tha,
Wese 1 baat kehni pare gi bro aap ne jis tarha sare dots connect kiye he wo kamal he bhai aisa mind set kam hi dekhne ko milta he,
Crimson ka ava ko approach karna ava ka veer ko trap me lana sb amazing tha but is se ziyada amazing veer ka crimson ka plan fail karna tha apni qurbani de ke,
Ab next update me veer ke bare me pata chale ga kafi excitement he veer ke bare me janne ki aur ye dekhne ki ke veer kese bacha aur aage veer kiya kare ga kese wo crimson ko hara ke apni begunahi prove kare ga aur ava ke sth kiya kare ga use maaf kar dega ya ava ko guilt me chor ke chala jaye ga ya use saza dega suhana ki bhi entry hogai he is arc me aur mujhe personally suhana aur veer ka relation dekhne me maza aata he aur curiosity bhi he janne ki ke aage in ka relation kaha jaye ga,
Aur sb se important cheez to bhool hi raha tha,
Wo prisoner kon he jis ke pass system he aur us ne crimson ko dekh ke aisa kyu kaha mere patients me se 1?
Kafi sawal he man me but aage to sb clear ho hi jaye ge me aap se poch ke suspense kharb nhi Karu ga,
Baqi har bar ki trha update aur aap ki skills superb thi bro keep it up,
Lot's of love and respect

Jabarzast

Arreyy baap re... Itni badi planning... Mujhe to laga tha bas 2 3 reasons honge...
yaha to itne pehle se itni badi planning chal rhi thi

Mera mind process maarne lga tha
isliye slowly padha ye update. Thank you upar note dene k liye...

Par abhi main review ni dungi
Mujhe veer ko dekhna h pehle... Uski news bataiye kuch... Nd wo last me ava k card waali art... Wow!!! Just wow!! Such a fine art... I know aapne bnai h wo. Samajh aata h ki kyu time lete h updates...

waiting for the new new update.
keep writing sir.

Well
kuch tu sort howa flashback se

पहले तितर-बितर करो और फिर उन्हे समेट कर एक करो , आप के इस कहानी की विशेषता रही है। ऐसा ही आपने अपने कांटेस्ट की स्टोरी मे भी किया था और थोड़ा-बहुत आपकी स्टोरी ' आखिर क्यों ' मे भी।
पर लिखने का यह तरीक़ा भी अद्भुत है आप की।

इस स्टोरी मे थ्रिलर का एक नया ही आयाम स्थापित किया है आप ने। एक्शन , थ्रिल और सस्पेंस का अनूठा मिश्रण किया हे आपने।

पहले ' परी ' के रूप मे एक सिस्टम लाकर अचंभित किया गया और हम समझते रहे कि ' वीर ' से बढ़कर और कोई नही हो सकता। सर्व शक्तिमान हो गया है वो । लेकिन इसे गलत साबित कर दिया आपने।
क्रिम्पसन उससे ताकतवर तो है ही , अब ऐसा लगता है कि नटालिया मार्टिन भी उससे अधिक सिस्टम के मामले मे आगे है। Vinona's Mark के बाद Maisie's Cure से यही समझ आता है।
इन दो लोग के बाद दो और लोग भी दिखाई दिए जो सिस्टम की कवच धारण किए हुए है। एक वह जो जेल मे कैद था और जिसके साथ क्रिम्पसन का सामना हुआ था और दूसरा वह जो क्रिम्पसन और नटालिया मार्टिन जैसे अद्भुत शक्तियों के मालिक को भी निर्देश देते फिर रहा था।
इससे यही समझ आ रहा है कि यह गुमनाम शख्स इन सभी से कहीं अधिक ताकतवर और बुद्धि से लैस है।

गीता मे प्रभू ने कहा है , आप कितना भी शक्तिशाली बन जाओ , कितने भी कवच कुंडल और इच्छा मृत्युं का वरदान प्राप्त कर लो , कितने भी ब्रह्मास्त्र धारण कर लो पर अगर आप ने इन शक्तियों का गलत इस्तेमाल किया तब यह सब के सब धरे के धरे रह जाते है और आप का पतन हो जाता है।
वीर के पास भी पावर है लेकिन इसने कभी भी अपने पावर का गलत इस्तेमाल नही किया। उसकी सोच और कर्म परहित पर निहित है।
लेकिन यह लोग गलत कर्म मे संलिप्त है। धन लाभ एवं अपने मनोरंजन के लिए बेवजह हिंसा करने वाले लोग है।
एवा उर्फ नटालिया ने भले ही विवशता मे क्रिम्पसन के लिए काम करने की हामी भरी हो पर गलत उसने भी किया है। उसने अधर्म का साथ दिया है।

एवा के डैड की भी हत्या हुई थी। अर्थात एक फ्लैशबैक अभी आना बाकी है। रहस्यमय गुमनाम व्यक्ति के अनुसार वो कातिल को जानता है। लेकिन यह व्यक्ति है कौन ? इसे कैसे पता कि क्रिम्पसन , एवा और वीर भी सिस्टम से लैस है ? इस व्यक्ति का मकसद क्या है ?
क्या काईरा के डैड किशोर साहब रहस्यमय व्यक्ति हो सकते है ?

एक बार फिर से अद्भुत अपडेट वोल्फी भाई। आउटस्टैंडिंग और जगमग जगमग।

bhai es update me apne Crimson ke bareme jo khulasa kiya he uske mutabik mera anuman sahi nikala Ki crimson ke piche be kohi he or vahi sab khel kel raha he bhai ek bat or Ki steam ka khel jo khel raha he ho hi Maine villain he esa muze lagta he par he mera anuman he dekte he sahi heya galat..

Superb update

Early waiting

Intezaar rahega Werewolf bhai....

Yoga to kar sakte hai na, swimming karne ka liye kisne kaha aapko? Yoga Kara kijiye.

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Update 144 has been posted.

 

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Update - 144 ~ The News​

Ab tak...

[Don't fight her! You don't have an arm. Bullet tumne nikaal li hai lekin wound heal nahi hua hai. You need rest.]

Majbooran Crimson ko Grace Martin ko taak rahe snipers hataane hi pade.

Accha hua jo woh nahi bhida uss samay Ava se-

Kyuki woh nahi jaanta tha ki Ava ki kya rakhi hui thi.

Uske paas jo card tha woh tha-

*Ding*



Ab aage...

Sonia’s House, Mumbai
Night ~ 10 : 12 PM

Apne bhavya aalishan bangle ke bade se kamre me Sonia apni night dress me bed par laiti ek magazine padh rahi thi.




Side table par hi ek kaanch ka glass tha jisme thodi si red wine maujood thi.

*Knock* *Knock*

Uske darwaze par tabhi khat-khatahat hui.

“Come in!” Aur Sonia ne andar se hi nirdesh diya.

Darwaza khulte hi ek ladki kamre ke andar pravesh ki.

Sonia : Suchi! Aao! I was waiting for you! Sorry to call you at this hour.

Suchi : No! It’s fine Miss!

Ladki ka naam Suchi tha. Woh ek navy blue color ka business outfit pehni hui thi. Haami bharte hue woh fir aage aayi.

Kamre me bas halki-halki roshni ho rakhi thi. Night lamps aur fragrant candles se hi room raushan tha.

Sonia : Any news?

Suchi (nods) : Yes Miss! Miss Suhana, Miss Kaera, Miss Ava, sabhi ke baare me news hai. Which one would you like to hear first?

Sonia : Let’s start with ‘dii’ first.

Suchi (nods) : Yes! Woh Las Vegas se Paris gayi hui hai.

Sonia (frowns) : Dii Paris gayi hai? Woh bhi iss haalat me? Mene unhe kaha tha ki jald se jald ghar lautna. Ab samajh aaya kyu woh mujhe promise nahi de rahi thi. Paris achanak kyu jaana hua?

Suchi : I’m sorry Miss! Abhi ye nahi pata chala hai ki woh Paris kyu gayi hai. Bohut jaldi me gayi hai. Kuch baat hai shayad. Lekin, hum jald hi pata laga lenge ki woh kyu waha gayi hai. Aur mere hisaab se mujhe anumaan hai iska. Mein aage apni baat me rakhti hu.

Sonia (frowns) : I see! Kya unke saath Prakash Uncle bhi hai?

Suchi (nods) : Yes Miss! Aur ek lady bhi hai. Filhaal, uss lady ke baare me koi info nahi hai. Magar, pata lag jayega jald hi.

Sonia : Hmm! Agar Prakash Uncle unke saath hai toh mujhe chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi. She’ll be fine! What about Kaera?

Suchi : Nexacom Industries Limited abhi kuch pareshaniyo se joojh rahi hai.

Sonia : Hmm?

Nexacom Industries Limited. Ye woh company thi jiska poore India me dabdaba toh tha hi saath hi videsho me bhi apni chhaap chhori hui thi. Dusre shabdo me, Kishore yaani ki Kaera ke pita ki company.

​

India ki sabse jaani-maani ek multinational conglomerate. Business itna vividh tha ki anya kayi business sectors isme shaamil the.

Energy, Telecommunications, Mass-media, Infrastructure, Textiles, Information Technology services, Goods supplies se leke na jaane kaha kaha haath daale hui thi Nexacom.

Sponsorships aur partnerships me hi itna aage rehti thi Nexacom ki aaye din akhbaaro me charcha ka vishay bani rehti thi.

Aur iss safalta ke peeche ka raaz kya tha?

Kaera!




Jisne apni buddhimatta aur soojh-boojh se company ki kaaya palat di thi. Kishore ne apne pita ki madad se ye empire khada zaroor kiya tha magar Kaera thi jo company ke profit percentage ko alag starr pe leke jaati thi.

Kintu, abhi yahi company kuch samasyao se joojh rahi thi. Kishore apni company ka Chairman aur Managing director toh tha hi magar uski anupasthiti me Kaera bhi ek Chairman aur MD ka role hi adaa karti thi. Company ki dusri owner wahi thi.

Toh kya haal hoga aisi company ka agar Kaera, company ke mehatvpoorn nirnay lene waali leader apne kaam se chutti lele?

Sonia : Nexacom problem me hai? Aisa kya hua?

Suchi : Miss Kaera kaafi dino se kahi gayab hai. Na hi unki koi news aa rahi hai aur na hi kahi par woh spot hui hai. Recent ki sabhi important deals aur meetings me Nexacom ki taraf se koi aur hi aaya hai attend karne.

Sonia (frowns) : Ye nahi ho sakta. Kaera business ko leke ekdum serious rehti hai. Woh kabhi aisa kar hi nahi sakti. Unless…

Suchi : ??

Sonia : Something must have happened. Kaha par hai woh?

Suchi : Mere hisaab se woh apne ghar par hi hai. Ya ho sakta hai woh kahi gayi ho. Woh kahi bhi spot nahi hui hai toh pehle case ki probability zyada hai.

Sonia : I see!

Kaera ki hi tarah Sonia bhi apni company me wahi role adaa karti thi. India ki jaani-maani automobiles companies me se ek Elite motors uske pita Shailendra ki bohut badi companies me se ek thi.

​

Sonia ke sang Suhana bhi kabhi kabhi uski madad karwaya karti thi. Parantu, Suhana kisi ek company par kendrit nahi rehti thi. Woh Elite motors me bhi yogdaan deti, toh kabhi apni khud ki companies aur partnerships par dhyaan deti.

Aur itna hi nahi, uske pati Gaurav ki IT based company ke chakkar bhi woh laga leti thi kabhi kabhi. Kul mila ke usse kayi jagah se profits hote the. Aneko businesses me woh bhaag li hui thi. Jiske chalte uska bade-bade prasiddh logo se connection bhi utna hi mazboot tha.

Elite motors sampoorn automobiles services se leke luxury cars services, unki manufacturing, accesories aur apne khud ke product bhi designs karti thi.

Isme koi sandeh ki baat hi nahi thi ki Kaera ke baad agar India me influential logo ki soochi taiyaar hoti toh usme Sonia ka naam zaroor shaamil hota. Aur jis hisaab se woh tarakki ki orr company ko badha rahi thi shayad Kaera ke theek neeche hi uska naam hota.

Sonia ne Suchi ki batayi gayi jankari ko dimaag me rakha aur aage puchi,

Sonia : And what about Ava?

Suchi : Ye news ho sakta hai aapko shocking lage Miss.

Sonia : Shocking? Kyu?

Suchi : Miss Ava bhi Paris gayi hui thi recently apne new song ke video shoot ke liye.

Sonia : Isme shocking kya Suchi?

Suchi : She…! She was kidnapped.

Khabar sunte hi bistar par laiti Sonia achanak hi uth ke baith gayi.

Sonia (gasps) : What???

Suchi (nods) : Jii!

Suchi aage badhte hue aayi aur usne apne haatho me pakda hua tablet Sonia ko thamaya.

Suchi : She was kidnapped. Par ab woh safe hai. Pehle criminal ki picture France ke news channel par broadcast hui thi. Lekin pata nahi kyu abhi kuch hi ghante pehle unhone saari criminal ki pictures ko news channel aur YouTube channels se bhi hata diya hai. Pata nahi kyu?

Sonia : That’s-!!! Ava theek toh hai na? Kaha hai woh?

Suchi : Woh safe hai Miss! DGSI France ki agency hai internal security ke liye. Unhone Miss Ava ko safely rescue kar liya hai.

Sonia (sighs) : Thank god!

Suchi : Aur jaisa ki mene pehle kaha tha ki mera ek anumaan hai kyu Miss Suhana Paris gayi hai. Woh yahi hai ki shayad Miss Suhana Miss Ava ke baare me hi jankari lene gayi hai.

Sonia : Ah! Right! Aisa ho sakta hai. But still-

Suchi : Rahi baat ki kyu France ne Criminal ki pictures ko hataya? Toh uske baare me bhi mein jald hi pata lagwa lungi Miss.

Sonia : Hmm! Mujhe dii se baat karni hogi.

Suchi : And that is all, Miss.

Sonia (nods) : Mmm! Thank you Suchi!

Suchi : It’s my job Miss!

Sonia : Aur chinta mat karo. Tumhari baat mujhe yaad hai. Tumhare baare me kisi ko kuch pata nahi chalega jab tak tum nahi chahogi.

Suchi : Thank you Miss!

Sonia (smiles) : I know how to treat my employees. You can leave now.

Suchi (nods) : Mmm!

Aur Suchi jis tarah shaanti se kamre me aayi thi, ussi tarah baahar ko nikal gayi.

Suchi! Na sirf ek honhaar ladki thi balki apne kaarya ke prati nishtha-vaan bhi thi aur samarpit bhi.

Sonia bhale hi Kaera se hamesha peeche rahi ho. Kintu, woh bodi nahi thi. Bewakoof nahi thi. Jaanti thi ki uski badi behan Suhana Prakash Uncle ke saath milke kayi baatein uss se chhipaaye hue hai.

Aur isliye, usne Suchi ko hire kiya hua tha. Secretary ka kaam toh Prakash Uncle hi karte the.

Parantu, logo aur unke vyavsaay ke baare me khufiya jankari ikhatta karna, iss kaam ke liye Sonia ne Suchi ko zimmedari di hui thi.

Aur woh apna kaam bohut acche dhang se kar rahi thi.

Suchi ko yu hi nahi apna personal information seeker banaya hua tha Sonia ne. Suchi ki ek khaas baat thi.

Aur woh ye thi ki woh-

Ruchika ki badi behan thi.

Wahi Ruchika, jo Kaera ki personal secretary hai.

Jaan-boojh ke Sonia ne Suchi ka chayan kiya. Par ye bhi ek kismat ka khel tha.

Kyuki, Suchi kayi saal pehle hi apne ghar se bhaag chuki thi. Uski apni ek kahani thi. Uski apni ek zubaani thi.

Kuch kaaran the jinke chalte woh limelight me nahi aana chaah rahi thi abhi. Aur yahi vachan Sonia ne usse diya hua tha.

Jab tak Suchi khud nahi chaahegi tab tak uski jankaari uske parivaar waalo aur samaaj ko nahi di jayegi.

Idhar Suchi ke jaate hi Sonia apni kisi soch me ghum ho gayi.

'Tumse bhi kitne samay se mulaqat nahi hui….! Veer!'

***

Paris,
Night ~ 9 : 18 PM

Suchi ne jo khabar Sonia ko di thi woh ekdum pukhta thi. Jhoothi nahi.

Usne theek bataya tha ki criminal ki photos news channel me pehle broadcast ki gayi thi. Parantu, ab?

Ab unhe hata diya gaya tha. Matlab Veer ki photos ko ab news me nahi dikhaya jaa raha tha.

Bas khabaro ka silsila hi jaari tha.

Kyu?

Kyuki, Las Vegas ke Investigation Department ne apni report darj kar di thi.

Dhanyavaad ho Divya, Mike aur Nolan ka jinhone ye maang rakhi.

Investigation Department ki report me saaf-saaf batla diya gaya tha ki Veer koi criminal nahi balki House of the Killers ko pakdaane waale sehkaariyo me se ek hai.

Uski aham bhumika ke chalte hi Vegas me HOK ko thikaane lagaya gaya tha.

Ye report milte hi DGSI ko ek bohut bada jhatka laga tha.

Las Vegas ne HOK ki report pehle bhej ke France ke upar ek ehsaan kiya tha. Badle me ye swabhaavik tha ki France bhi zaroorat ke samay Las Vegas ke kaam aaye.

France kabhi nahi chaahega ki Vegas se uski koi berr rahe.

Aur isliye, Investigation department ne apni maang rakhi. Ya yu kahe ki Divya, Nolan aur Mike ne apni maang rakhi ki Veer ki photos saari news media se hata di jaaye.

Jab tak Veer ke khilaaf 100% saboot na ho tab tak usse mujrim kaise thehraya jaa sakta hai? Kaise uske upar itne bade aarop lagaye jaa sakte hai?

DGSI ne baat ko samajh fauran hi saari tasveero ko hata diya. Veer ke upar laga ek laanchan abhi kam se kam dhundhla ho gaya tha. Mita nahi tha. Par abhi ke liye dhundhla hi sahi.

Magar, ye jhatka toh kuch bhi nahi tha. Asli jhatka toh unhe tab laga jab Terashima hosh me aayi.

DGSI ke Head, Xavier hospital ke ek normal ward me Terashima ke saamne khade hue the.

Xavier : Kya kaha tumne?

Terashima : H-He…! He saved me!

Terashima ki kahi gayi baat jaise kisi bomb ki tarah aake unke upar fati.

Unki dimaag ki taare hi short-circuit ho chuki thi.

Bhala mujrim kyu apne peeche lage vyaktiyo ki jaan bachayega?

Parantu, Terashima ki zubaani toh kuch aur hi bayaa kar rahi thi. Usse hosh me aaye abhi kuch ghante hi beete the aur uss se sawaal jawaab karne ke liye Xavier aur anya uske saamne the.

Chris aur Eric bhi ek-ek ward me bharti the.

Xavier : Uss ladke ne tumhari jaan bachaayi? Tum jaanti ho na ye kitna bada case hai? Mazaak ka waqt nahi hai ye. Nurse? Kahi sarr pe zyada chot aa gayi hai kya iske?

Nurse : Huh?

Terashima : I'm telling the truth!!!!

Jab usne thodi tezz awaaz me bola toh ward me ek khamoshi chhaa gayi. Sabhi ka dhyaan punah Terashima par chala gaya.

Uski palke jhuki hui thi, jaise maano woh uss pal ko yaad kar rahi ho.

*Bang*

Woh goli ki goonj uske kaano me fel gayi, jo usne apne haatho se chalaayi thi uss shaks pe.

Veer pe…!

Sab kuch tasveer bann-bann ke uske dimaag me aata jaa raha tha.

Terashima (nods) : I remember everything. Mujhe sab yaad hai.

Agle hi pal na jaane kyu par uski aankhein bheeg gayi.

Andre : T-Terashima?

Andre hairaan reh gaya. Terashima kabhi roti nahi thi. Agent bann'ne ke baad woh itna serious rehti thi ki uske emotions bohut hi kam jhalakte the. Par aaj-

Terashima : Mujhe yaad hai. Mein usse warning de rahi thi. Surrender karne ke liye. Uske baad tumse baat hui thi Andre. Tumne kaha tha ki shoot kar sakte hai.

Andre : H-Haan! Mujhe toh Sir se hi message aaya tha.

Terashima : Aur mein uspe aim hi ki hui thi. Lekin, mein jaha khadi thi. Waha woh stone walls me lage patthar…! Woh toot ke mere upar gir pade.

Andre : !!!?

Terashima : Aur tabhi woh ladka..! Mere upar kooda. Mujhe laga woh mujh par hamla karne aa raha hai isliye mene…! Usse shoot kar diya.

Xavier : Toh ye baat hai.

Terashima : Hmm! Lekin, woh mujhe bachaane ke liye aage badha tha. Aur uske baad, saare patthar uss bechaare ke upar girte chale gaye. Usne mujhe bachaya. A-Aur mene usse-

Andre : Asli khel toh usne hamare saath khela tha. Abhi tak uski body nahi mili hai. Case toh ulajhta hi jaa raha hai.

Terashima (uthate hue) : Uski body nahi mili? P-Par wo toh pattharo ke neeche tha na? K-Kya hua usse?

Andre : Wo waha se nikal aaya tha. Sir! Ab kya? Ye maamla toh aur pecheeda ho gaya hai.

Xavier : Mujhe ab bhi yakeen nahi ho raha.

Terashima (niraasha se) : Agar wo mujrim hai, to usne mujhe kyu bachaya Sir? Ye jaante hue ki mein ek agent hu aur usse pakadne ke liye aayi hu.

Andre : Terashima ki baat me dam hai Sir. Upar se Vegas ke department se jo report aayi hai usme woh ladka ek normal citizen hai jisne HOK ko pakdawaya hai.

Terashima : That's-!!! Woh mujhse keh bhi raha tha ki hume koi galat-fehmi hui hai.

Andre : Mujhe kehna toh nahi chahiye Sir. Par sh-shayad-!!! Humse bohut badi galti ho gayi hai iss baar.

Terashima : Agar woh ladka innocent nikla toh hum kabhi bhi iss paap se khud ko mukt nahi kar payenge Sir.

Xavier ke chehre par agle hi pal paseena jhalakne laga.

Xavier : Accha hua jo samay pe woh photos hatwa di mene.

Andre : Sir, woh bench par jab baitha tha tab Crimson kar ke kuch keh raha tha. Ye shabd yaad hai mujhe.

Xavier : Crimson?

Terashima : K-Kahi woh caller hi toh nahi? Jisne hume info di? Kahi aisa toh nahi ki hum uski chaal me fass gaye? Kahi wahi toh ye aadmi nahi? Crimson shabd uss se hi related toh nahi?

Terashima ki baatein sunn dono hi shaant reh gaye. Agar aisa hota hai toh kya muh dikhayenge woh Vegas ke Investigation Department ko?

Aur agar uss ladke ke desh ki sarkaar ko ye baat pata lag gayi. Toh kya jawaab denge unhe?

Xavier : Andre!! Terashima ko araam karne do! Mere saath baahar aao.

Andre : Yes Sir!!!

Terashima ko yu hi uske ward me araam karne ke liye chhor woh dono hi baahar chale gaye.

Aur idhar bechari Terashima ek baar fir apne khyalato me doob gayi. Uss se pehli baar itni badi galti kaise ho gayi? Kaise woh ek nirdosh ko pehchaan na paayi?




Harr koi iss samay Veer ke baare me sochne me laga hua tha. Fir chaahe uske chaahne waale ho, uske shubh-chintak, usse galat samajhne waale ya fir uske dushman.

***

Yaha ye sawaal-jawaab chal rahe the toh wahi issi sheher me koi aur bhi tha jo yahi sawaal-jawaab karne kisi aur ke paas aaya hua tha. Bas, tareeqa thoda alag tha.

*BAMMM*

Table par zorr se haatho ko patakne ki awaaz aayi aur ek aurat behad gusse me apni kursi se khadi ho gayi.

Suhana! Uski aankhein gusse me laal aur aasuo se namm thi.




Suhana : Mein tumse kuch puch rahi hu!! Jawaab do!!!

Aur uske saamne thi,

Ava!!

Ava ne apni nazre churaate hue chehra ferr liya. Aankhein toh uski bhi bheegi hui thi.




Ava : Mein apna jawaab rakh chuki hu Suhana!

Suhana : Woh mere sawaal ka jawaab nahi. Seedhe-seedhe batao mujhe kaha hai woh? Aur ye news…! Ye sab kya chal raha hai? Kyu tumne usse yaha bulaaya? I WANT TO KNOW EVERYTHING!!!!




Ava : I-I…! I called him for protection.

Suhana (screams) : Ye jaante hue bhi ki Divya abhi busy hai? Kis haq se tumne usse akele yaha bulaaya? Tumhe koi khabar bhi hai ki uske ghar par kya haalat ho rahi hogi uske parivar ki? They fucking don't know anything!!!

Chillaate hue Suhana ne table par rakhe saare kaanch ke glass bikher ke neeche gira diye.

Ava : I..!

Suhana : Uski choti behan ka call aaya tha mere paas. Kya jawaab du usse mein? Woh puch rahi hai mujhse ki bhaiya kaha hai!! Kya bolu uss se mein? FUCKING TELL ME!!!

Jab Ava ko ye pata chala ki Veer ka parivaar uski raah dekh raha hai, toh jaise glaani ka bada sa patthar uske upar aake gir pada.

Ab jaake usse bodh hua.

Woh akeli thi. Par uski tarah sansaar me harr koi akela nahi tha. Unke paas unka parivaar tha. Ava bechari dedh saal se akeli thi.

Jaise woh ye baat bhul hi gayi thi ki Veer koi awaara ladka nahi, balki kisi ke parivaar ki jaan hai. Kisi ki amaanat hai. Kisi ka sahaara hai. Kisi ka saathi toh kisi ka pyaar.

Bodh hote hi uski aankho se apne aap hi aansu panapne lage.




Suhana (growls) : TELL ME!! WHERE… IS… HE… NOW!!!!

Ava : M-Mujhe nahi pata! I don't know anything!

Usne ek baar fir muh ferr liya. Woh kaise sachhaayi bata sakti thi? Chaah ke bhi muh se kuch ugal nahi sakti thi.

Ava : Mujhe nahi pata kuch. Mujhe theek se kuch yaad nahi. Waha kya ho raha tha mein nahi jaanti. I-I don't know-

Suhana : Toh kaha gaya woh??? Kyu ye DGSI waale gaandu uske peeche pade the? Kyu uski tasveer b-baar baar…! Baar baar-

Aur wo ro padi.

Suhana (sobs) : *sniff* Kyu uski tasveer baar baar news pe aa rahi thi? *sniff* Bolo? K-Kyu??? Jawaab do? Kyu likh ke aa raha tha ki criminal has been executed. Kya matlab hua iska??

Ava : I-I don't know!!! I don't remember. Shayad unhe koi galat-fehmi ho gayi.

Usne abhi itna kaha hi tha ki Suhana ne agle hi shan uski dress ki collor ke hisse ko pakda aur zorr se jakad usse kheench liya,

Ava : !!!!

Suhana ki aankhein bhayanak hi buri tarah gusse me feli hui thi.

Suhana : Ye mein akhiri warning de rahi hu tumhe Miss Ava Grace Martin!!! Agar tumne ab mujhe kuch nahi bataya, toh mein bhul jaungi ki tum Sonu ki koi dost bhi thi.

Ava chaahti toh badi hi asaani se khud ko chhura leti. System ke aage Suhana ki ye pakad baccho ki pakad jaisi thi. Parantu, usne aisa kuch bhi nahi kiya. Woh Suhana ki giraft me hi bani rahi.

Ava : Mujhe nahi pata Suhana! M-Mein kisi kamre me thi. Bandhi hui thi. Baahar kya ho raha tha mein nahi jaanti.

Suhana ka iss baar maatha thanak utha. Woh jaanti thi ki Ava kuch na kuch zaroor jaanti hai. Magar bata nahi rahi. Woh agle hi pal itni zorr se garji ki baahar khadi Ashita aur Prakash Uncle tak ko uski awaaz sunaayi de gayi,

Suhana (screams) : AVA GRACE MARTIN!!! TUMHARI YE MAJAAL-! TUM SACH SACH BATAATI HO YA-

"MARR CHUKA HAI WOH!!!!"

Ava ke bol poore kamre me goonj gaye.

Achanak hi waha ek sannaata chha gaya!

Suhana kisi moorti ki tarah bann ke wahi jamm gayi.



Ava ke kapde par uski pakad bhi dheeli hoke chooth gayi. Uski aankhon ne jaise apna focus kho diya.

Woh jaise shoonya hoke reh gayi. Uska mastishk kaam karna hi band kar diya jaise kuch palo ke liye.

Aur iss baar Ava ki awaaz oonchi ho gayi. Rote hue woh chillaayi,

Ava (screams) : Marr chuka hai woh. HE'S DEAD!!! AND GONE!!!

Subakte hue woh bhi dobaara apni kursi par girte hue rone lagi.

Budbudaate hue abhi bhi uske hontho se ahista-ahista lafz baahar nikal rahe the.

Ava : H-He's gone-!!! Gone! No more with us-!!!

Suhana jo baar-baar ratt lagaaye hue thi jawaab jaan'ne ki, usse uska jawaab Ava ne de diya tha.

Kintu, Suhana ke liye ye jhatka jitna dikhaayi de raha tha uss se kahi zyada bada tha vaastav me. Ghaat aisi pohuchi thi usse andhruni starr par ki usse khud abhaas nahi tha iss baat ka.

Agle hi shan usse aisa laga jaise uske badan se poori urja kisi ne kheench li ho.

Woh ladkhadayi, aur kursi ke saath-saath hi woh khud bhi zameen par girke behosh gayi.

"Suhaaanaaa!!!!"

Ava ki akhiri awaaz thi jo usne behoshi me jaane se pehle suni. Uske baad andhkaar sa chhaa gaya.

***

Bhedo ke jhund ko jab charwaane ke liye unhe kheto me le jaaya jaata hai, toh unke saath unka ek gadariya hota hai.

Unki rehnumaayi ke liye. Unke netratva ke liye. Jo harr samay unki dekh-rekh aur parvaah karta hai.

Par agar wahi gadariya achanak khud kahi gaayab ho jaaye ya kho jaaye toh?

Toh, saari bhede titar-bitar ho jaati hai. Unki samajh nahi aata kya kare. Gadariye ke liye weh vyakul ho uthati hai. Bechain hoke machalne lagti hai.

Aur Veer ka parivaar iss waqt inhi bhed ke samaan ho chuka tha.

Lagbhag 3 hafte guzar chuke the Bhavna ki akhiri waqt baat hue Veer se.

Teen hafte! Maano ab mahina hi hone jaa raha tha kuch hi dino me.

Uske ghar me jo mahaul abhi bana hua tha woh dekha nahi jaa sakta tha.

Harr koi itna pareshaan aur vyaakul tha ki samajh nahi aa raha tha kya kare.

Kavya ka phone udhar Suhana ab utha nahi rahi thi.

Bhavna, Arohi, Tej aur Shweta toh Paris jaane ke liye tickets ka bandobast bhi karne lage the.

Par ek aur sansani fela dene waali khabar unke haath lagi.

Paris me sabhi flights ko rok diya gaya tha. International ki incoming flights sab band kar di gayi thi.

Unhe ye bhi pata chala ki ek bohut bada Terrorist attack hua tha Paris me.

Ye khabar paate hi jaise unki saansein atak gayi thi.

Jo nahi sochna chaahiye wahi khayaal mann me aa rahe the.

Kahi Veer ussi haadse me toh-!?

Par, sakaraatmak sochte hue aur bechain dil ko baar-baar tasalli dete hue unn sabhi ne khud ko sambhaala.

Kavya bechari jo sabse pehle khoob nidar hoke bina chinta ke Veer ke baare me sabko hidayat de rahi thi. Woh ab khud hi sabse zyada rone me lagi hui thi.

Veer ki orr se na hi koi khabar aa rahi thi aur na hi kahi aur se kuch pata chal raha tha.

Veer ke Dada ji waale ghar me bhi ye baat pata lag gayi. Manorath jo Veer ko dil se chaahte the woh fauran hi Bhavna ke nirnay se taiyaar ho gaye.

Aur nirnay ye tha ki-

Bhale hi woh Paris nahi jaa sakte toh kya? Par France ke koi aur sheher to jaa hi sakte the na?

Decide ho chuka tha ki woh Paris ki jagah Strasbourg jayenge. Aur waha se train se Paris ka raasta lagbhag 2 ghante ka hi tha. Toh Paris me jaa ke Veer ke baare me pata laga lenge.

Jaane waale logo me se ek swayam Bhavna thi. Uske sang Tej, Arohi aur Manorath khud.

Ek bade ki aavashyakta thi unhe jo unhe sambhaal sake. Bhavna khud bhi iss waqt dusro ko sambhaalne ki sthiti me nahi thi.

Shweta aane ki zidd karne lagi thi magar ghar par fir sabhi javaan ladkiya hi reh jaati.

Isliye usse ghar par rehne ke liye jaise-taise manaaya gaya.

Chaaro hi Veer ko dhundhne nikal chuke the. Aur Strasbourg pohuch bhi chuke the. Yaha tak ki unn logo ne Paris tak ka raasta bhi tay kar liya tha.

Par news me kahi bhi Veer ki tasveere nahi thi. Sab kuch hata diya gaya tha. Social media se leke YouTube athwa kisi bhi sites par kahi koi nishaan nahi tha uska.

Aur aaj ki issi raat, Ava ke wahi music video ke upload hone ki khushi me aalishaan hotel me ek choti si party rakhi gayi thi.

Staff team se leke sabhi log maujood the. Haadsa hue lagbhag 3 hafte guzar chuke the toh ye music video France ki saari janta aur Aga ke fans ke liye ek refreshment tha. Ek breather tha unke liye.

Yeh gaana logo ke liye aisa tha jaise maano kisi registaan me bhatke vyakti ko paani ka talaab mil gaya ho.

Kuch minutes hi hue the gaana post hue ki likes aur views ki barsaat shuru ho chuki thi.

Dinner ka aayojan bhi tha. Sabhi acche dhang se taiyaar khaane aur peene ka lutf utha rahe the.

Par kisi ki aankhein thi, jo ab bhi namm thi. Itni khushi, itni safalta ke bawajood, uss aurat ko koi khushi mehsoos nahi ho rahi thi.

Woh Ava hi thi.

Ab jaake Veer ki saari baatein usse yaad aa rahi thi.

Kaise woh alleys me yu hi sirf uske liye jaane ke liye taiyaar ho gaya tha.

Usse khud ke aur uske hue vartalaap yaad aa rahe the,

'Tum…! Tum mere liye aaye. Tumhare hone se mujhe safe feel ho raha hai.'

'Well! Mene aapko kaha hua hai. Jab tak aapke peeche pade uss insaan ka pata nahi laga leta, tab tak aapko protect karunga.'

'Come na! Yaha malls mene explore nahi kiye. Kahi chalte hai?'

'Agar aap yahi chaahti hai toh-'

'That's nice!!! Kya hum waha chal sakte hai?'

'Don't worry! Mein personally jaunga unke saath. Unhe kuch nahi hoga.'

'Yes! I understand. It was my fault.'

'It's okay! As long as you're safe. Nothing else matters right now.'

'See??? Hahahaha! I won!!! Mene kaha tha na?'

'Yeah yeah! Dekha mene. You sure are lucky *smiles*'

'Like what you see?'

'M-Mein aata hu. *blushes* Wait for me!'

Harr ek baat usse yaad aa rahi thi. Veer ki chhavi uske dil-o-dimaag me mandra rahi thi.

Uski woh strong back jisse leke woh uske saamne chal raha tha. Bina ye jaane hue ki woh swayam hi uski maut me shaamil thi.

Ava ke gaalo se aansu beh beh ke girne lage.

Hotel ki 7th floor par khidki ke paas khadi woh bas auro se dur ro rahi thi.



Par usse nahi pata tha ki-

Ussi building ke bagal waali building ki terrace se andhere me khade usse koi ghoor raha tha.

Uske badan par ek safed shirt thi jo tezz hawaao me awaaz kar lehra rahi thi.

Unhi hawao me uske baal bhi bikhre hue the.

Aur uski befiqr nazre building ke andar maujood Ava par hi tiki hui thi.

Agle hi pal, Ava ki aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi. Uski saansein aur dhadkane tezz ho uthi. Seena zorr-zorr se upar neeche hone laga.

Kyuki uske mann me ek ghanti baji thi,

*Ding*




Ava ke poore badan me sihran daud gayi. Woh kisi chidiya ki tarah harr taraf gardan modte hue apne chaaro orr dekhne lagi.

'V-Veer!!!!?'

Agle hi pal uski nazre bagal se lagi building ke uss terrace par gayi.

Par, usne jo saamne dekha toh-

Siwae aasmaan me chamakte chaand ke alaawa waha koi nahi tha.

Terrace khaali thi.

'Veer!!!????'
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Update consists of 4.7k words. Chuki, Crimson arc bas ab 5-6 updates me khatam hai toh yaha dekh sakte ho ki kaise business arc apni entry le raha hai. Baaki, likes

 

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Superb update

 

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Update - 144 ~ The News​

Ab tak...

[Don't fight her! You don't have an arm. Bullet tumne nikaal li hai lekin wound heal nahi hua hai. You need rest.]

Majbooran Crimson ko Grace Martin ko taak rahe snipers hataane hi pade.

Accha hua jo woh nahi bhida uss samay Ava se-

Kyuki woh nahi jaanta tha ki Ava ki kya rakhi hui thi.

Uske paas jo card tha woh tha-

*Ding*



Ab aage...

Sonia’s House, Mumbai
Night ~ 10 : 12 PM

Apne bhavya aalishan bangle ke bade se kamre me Sonia apni night dress me bed par laiti ek magazine padh rahi thi.




Side table par hi ek kaanch ka glass tha jisme thodi si red wine maujood thi.

*Knock* *Knock*

Uske darwaze par tabhi khat-khatahat hui.

“Come in!” Aur Sonia ne andar se hi nirdesh diya.

Darwaza khulte hi ek ladki kamre ke andar pravesh ki.

Sonia : Suchi! Aao! I was waiting for you! Sorry to call you at this hour.

Suchi : No! It’s fine Miss!

Ladki ka naam Suchi tha. Woh ek navy blue color ka business outfit pehni hui thi. Haami bharte hue woh fir aage aayi.

Kamre me bas halki-halki roshni ho rakhi thi. Night lamps aur fragrant candles se hi room raushan tha.

Sonia : Any news?

Suchi (nods) : Yes Miss! Miss Suhana, Miss Kaera, Miss Ava, sabhi ke baare me news hai. Which one would you like to hear first?

Sonia : Let’s start with ‘dii’ first.

Suchi (nods) : Yes! Woh Las Vegas se Paris gayi hui hai.

Sonia (frowns) : Dii Paris gayi hai? Woh bhi iss haalat me? Mene unhe kaha tha ki jald se jald ghar lautna. Ab samajh aaya kyu woh mujhe promise nahi de rahi thi. Paris achanak kyu jaana hua?

Suchi : I’m sorry Miss! Abhi ye nahi pata chala hai ki woh Paris kyu gayi hai. Bohut jaldi me gayi hai. Kuch baat hai shayad. Lekin, hum jald hi pata laga lenge ki woh kyu waha gayi hai. Aur mere hisaab se mujhe anumaan hai iska. Mein aage apni baat me rakhti hu.

Sonia (frowns) : I see! Kya unke saath Prakash Uncle bhi hai?

Suchi (nods) : Yes Miss! Aur ek lady bhi hai. Filhaal, uss lady ke baare me koi info nahi hai. Magar, pata lag jayega jald hi.

Sonia : Hmm! Agar Prakash Uncle unke saath hai toh mujhe chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi. She’ll be fine! What about Kaera?

Suchi : Nexacom Industries Limited abhi kuch pareshaniyo se joojh rahi hai.

Sonia : Hmm?

Nexacom Industries Limited. Ye woh company thi jiska poore India me dabdaba toh tha hi saath hi videsho me bhi apni chhaap chhori hui thi. Dusre shabdo me, Kishore yaani ki Kaera ke pita ki company.

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India ki sabse jaani-maani ek multinational conglomerate. Business itna vividh tha ki anya kayi business sectors isme shaamil the.

Energy, Telecommunications, Mass-media, Infrastructure, Textiles, Information Technology services, Goods supplies se leke na jaane kaha kaha haath daale hui thi Nexacom.

Sponsorships aur partnerships me hi itna aage rehti thi Nexacom ki aaye din akhbaaro me charcha ka vishay bani rehti thi.

Aur iss safalta ke peeche ka raaz kya tha?

Kaera!




Jisne apni buddhimatta aur soojh-boojh se company ki kaaya palat di thi. Kishore ne apne pita ki madad se ye empire khada zaroor kiya tha magar Kaera thi jo company ke profit percentage ko alag starr pe leke jaati thi.

Kintu, abhi yahi company kuch samasyao se joojh rahi thi. Kishore apni company ka Chairman aur Managing director toh tha hi magar uski anupasthiti me Kaera bhi ek Chairman aur MD ka role hi adaa karti thi. Company ki dusri owner wahi thi.

Toh kya haal hoga aisi company ka agar Kaera, company ke mehatvpoorn nirnay lene waali leader apne kaam se chutti lele?

Sonia : Nexacom problem me hai? Aisa kya hua?

Suchi : Miss Kaera kaafi dino se kahi gayab hai. Na hi unki koi news aa rahi hai aur na hi kahi par woh spot hui hai. Recent ki sabhi important deals aur meetings me Nexacom ki taraf se koi aur hi aaya hai attend karne.

Sonia (frowns) : Ye nahi ho sakta. Kaera business ko leke ekdum serious rehti hai. Woh kabhi aisa kar hi nahi sakti. Unless…

Suchi : ??

Sonia : Something must have happened. Kaha par hai woh?

Suchi : Mere hisaab se woh apne ghar par hi hai. Ya ho sakta hai woh kahi gayi ho. Woh kahi bhi spot nahi hui hai toh pehle case ki probability zyada hai.

Sonia : I see!

Kaera ki hi tarah Sonia bhi apni company me wahi role adaa karti thi. India ki jaani-maani automobiles companies me se ek Elite motors uske pita Shailendra ki bohut badi companies me se ek thi.

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Sonia ke sang Suhana bhi kabhi kabhi uski madad karwaya karti thi. Parantu, Suhana kisi ek company par kendrit nahi rehti thi. Woh Elite motors me bhi yogdaan deti, toh kabhi apni khud ki companies aur partnerships par dhyaan deti.

Aur itna hi nahi, uske pati Gaurav ki IT based company ke chakkar bhi woh laga leti thi kabhi kabhi. Kul mila ke usse kayi jagah se profits hote the. Aneko businesses me woh bhaag li hui thi. Jiske chalte uska bade-bade prasiddh logo se connection bhi utna hi mazboot tha.

Elite motors sampoorn automobiles services se leke luxury cars services, unki manufacturing, accesories aur apne khud ke product bhi designs karti thi.

Isme koi sandeh ki baat hi nahi thi ki Kaera ke baad agar India me influential logo ki soochi taiyaar hoti toh usme Sonia ka naam zaroor shaamil hota. Aur jis hisaab se woh tarakki ki orr company ko badha rahi thi shayad Kaera ke theek neeche hi uska naam hota.

Sonia ne Suchi ki batayi gayi jankari ko dimaag me rakha aur aage puchi,

Sonia : And what about Ava?

Suchi : Ye news ho sakta hai aapko shocking lage Miss.

Sonia : Shocking? Kyu?

Suchi : Miss Ava bhi Paris gayi hui thi recently apne new song ke video shoot ke liye.

Sonia : Isme shocking kya Suchi?

Suchi : She…! She was kidnapped.

Khabar sunte hi bistar par laiti Sonia achanak hi uth ke baith gayi.

Sonia (gasps) : What???

Suchi (nods) : Jii!

Suchi aage badhte hue aayi aur usne apne haatho me pakda hua tablet Sonia ko thamaya.

Suchi : She was kidnapped. Par ab woh safe hai. Pehle criminal ki picture France ke news channel par broadcast hui thi. Lekin pata nahi kyu abhi kuch hi ghante pehle unhone saari criminal ki pictures ko news channel aur YouTube channels se bhi hata diya hai. Pata nahi kyu?

Sonia : That’s-!!! Ava theek toh hai na? Kaha hai woh?

Suchi : Woh safe hai Miss! DGSI France ki agency hai internal security ke liye. Unhone Miss Ava ko safely rescue kar liya hai.

Sonia (sighs) : Thank god!

Suchi : Aur jaisa ki mene pehle kaha tha ki mera ek anumaan hai kyu Miss Suhana Paris gayi hai. Woh yahi hai ki shayad Miss Suhana Miss Ava ke baare me hi jankari lene gayi hai.

Sonia : Ah! Right! Aisa ho sakta hai. But still-

Suchi : Rahi baat ki kyu France ne Criminal ki pictures ko hataya? Toh uske baare me bhi mein jald hi pata lagwa lungi Miss.

Sonia : Hmm! Mujhe dii se baat karni hogi.

Suchi : And that is all, Miss.

Sonia (nods) : Mmm! Thank you Suchi!

Suchi : It’s my job Miss!

Sonia : Aur chinta mat karo. Tumhari baat mujhe yaad hai. Tumhare baare me kisi ko kuch pata nahi chalega jab tak tum nahi chahogi.

Suchi : Thank you Miss!

Sonia (smiles) : I know how to treat my employees. You can leave now.

Suchi (nods) : Mmm!

Aur Suchi jis tarah shaanti se kamre me aayi thi, ussi tarah baahar ko nikal gayi.

Suchi! Na sirf ek honhaar ladki thi balki apne kaarya ke prati nishtha-vaan bhi thi aur samarpit bhi.

Sonia bhale hi Kaera se hamesha peeche rahi ho. Kintu, woh bodi nahi thi. Bewakoof nahi thi. Jaanti thi ki uski badi behan Suhana Prakash Uncle ke saath milke kayi baatein uss se chhipaaye hue hai.

Aur isliye, usne Suchi ko hire kiya hua tha. Secretary ka kaam toh Prakash Uncle hi karte the.

Parantu, logo aur unke vyavsaay ke baare me khufiya jankari ikhatta karna, iss kaam ke liye Sonia ne Suchi ko zimmedari di hui thi.

Aur woh apna kaam bohut acche dhang se kar rahi thi.

Suchi ko yu hi nahi apna personal information seeker banaya hua tha Sonia ne. Suchi ki ek khaas baat thi.

Aur woh ye thi ki woh-

Ruchika ki badi behan thi.

Wahi Ruchika, jo Kaera ki personal secretary hai.

Jaan-boojh ke Sonia ne Suchi ka chayan kiya. Par ye bhi ek kismat ka khel tha.

Kyuki, Suchi kayi saal pehle hi apne ghar se bhaag chuki thi. Uski apni ek kahani thi. Uski apni ek zubaani thi.

Kuch kaaran the jinke chalte woh limelight me nahi aana chaah rahi thi abhi. Aur yahi vachan Sonia ne usse diya hua tha.

Jab tak Suchi khud nahi chaahegi tab tak uski jankaari uske parivaar waalo aur samaaj ko nahi di jayegi.

Idhar Suchi ke jaate hi Sonia apni kisi soch me ghum ho gayi.

'Tumse bhi kitne samay se mulaqat nahi hui….! Veer!'

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Paris,
Night ~ 9 : 18 PM

Suchi ne jo khabar Sonia ko di thi woh ekdum pukhta thi. Jhoothi nahi.

Usne theek bataya tha ki criminal ki photos news channel me pehle broadcast ki gayi thi. Parantu, ab?

Ab unhe hata diya gaya tha. Matlab Veer ki photos ko ab news me nahi dikhaya jaa raha tha.

Bas khabaro ka silsila hi jaari tha.

Kyu?

Kyuki, Las Vegas ke Investigation Department ne apni report darj kar di thi.

Dhanyavaad ho Divya, Mike aur Nolan ka jinhone ye maang rakhi.

Investigation Department ki report me saaf-saaf batla diya gaya tha ki Veer koi criminal nahi balki House of the Killers ko pakdaane waale sehkaariyo me se ek hai.

Uski aham bhumika ke chalte hi Vegas me HOK ko thikaane lagaya gaya tha.

Ye report milte hi DGSI ko ek bohut bada jhatka laga tha.

Las Vegas ne HOK ki report pehle bhej ke France ke upar ek ehsaan kiya tha. Badle me ye swabhaavik tha ki France bhi zaroorat ke samay Las Vegas ke kaam aaye.

France kabhi nahi chaahega ki Vegas se uski koi berr rahe.

Aur isliye, Investigation department ne apni maang rakhi. Ya yu kahe ki Divya, Nolan aur Mike ne apni maang rakhi ki Veer ki photos saari news media se hata di jaaye.

Jab tak Veer ke khilaaf 100% saboot na ho tab tak usse mujrim kaise thehraya jaa sakta hai? Kaise uske upar itne bade aarop lagaye jaa sakte hai?

DGSI ne baat ko samajh fauran hi saari tasveero ko hata diya. Veer ke upar laga ek laanchan abhi kam se kam dhundhla ho gaya tha. Mita nahi tha. Par abhi ke liye dhundhla hi sahi.

Magar, ye jhatka toh kuch bhi nahi tha. Asli jhatka toh unhe tab laga jab Terashima hosh me aayi.

DGSI ke Head, Xavier hospital ke ek normal ward me Terashima ke saamne khade hue the.

Xavier : Kya kaha tumne?

Terashima : H-He…! He saved me!

Terashima ki kahi gayi baat jaise kisi bomb ki tarah aake unke upar fati.

Unki dimaag ki taare hi short-circuit ho chuki thi.

Bhala mujrim kyu apne peeche lage vyaktiyo ki jaan bachayega?

Parantu, Terashima ki zubaani toh kuch aur hi bayaa kar rahi thi. Usse hosh me aaye abhi kuch ghante hi beete the aur uss se sawaal jawaab karne ke liye Xavier aur anya uske saamne the.

Chris aur Eric bhi ek-ek ward me bharti the.

Xavier : Uss ladke ne tumhari jaan bachaayi? Tum jaanti ho na ye kitna bada case hai? Mazaak ka waqt nahi hai ye. Nurse? Kahi sarr pe zyada chot aa gayi hai kya iske?

Nurse : Huh?

Terashima : I'm telling the truth!!!!

Jab usne thodi tezz awaaz me bola toh ward me ek khamoshi chhaa gayi. Sabhi ka dhyaan punah Terashima par chala gaya.

Uski palke jhuki hui thi, jaise maano woh uss pal ko yaad kar rahi ho.

*Bang*

Woh goli ki goonj uske kaano me fel gayi, jo usne apne haatho se chalaayi thi uss shaks pe.

Veer pe…!

Sab kuch tasveer bann-bann ke uske dimaag me aata jaa raha tha.

Terashima (nods) : I remember everything. Mujhe sab yaad hai.

Agle hi pal na jaane kyu par uski aankhein bheeg gayi.

Andre : T-Terashima?

Andre hairaan reh gaya. Terashima kabhi roti nahi thi. Agent bann'ne ke baad woh itna serious rehti thi ki uske emotions bohut hi kam jhalakte the. Par aaj-

Terashima : Mujhe yaad hai. Mein usse warning de rahi thi. Surrender karne ke liye. Uske baad tumse baat hui thi Andre. Tumne kaha tha ki shoot kar sakte hai.

Andre : H-Haan! Mujhe toh Sir se hi message aaya tha.

Terashima : Aur mein uspe aim hi ki hui thi. Lekin, mein jaha khadi thi. Waha woh stone walls me lage patthar…! Woh toot ke mere upar gir pade.

Andre : !!!?

Terashima : Aur tabhi woh ladka..! Mere upar kooda. Mujhe laga woh mujh par hamla karne aa raha hai isliye mene…! Usse shoot kar diya.

Xavier : Toh ye baat hai.

Terashima : Hmm! Lekin, woh mujhe bachaane ke liye aage badha tha. Aur uske baad, saare patthar uss bechaare ke upar girte chale gaye. Usne mujhe bachaya. A-Aur mene usse-

Andre : Asli khel toh usne hamare saath khela tha. Abhi tak uski body nahi mili hai. Case toh ulajhta hi jaa raha hai.

Terashima (uthate hue) : Uski body nahi mili? P-Par wo toh pattharo ke neeche tha na? K-Kya hua usse?

Andre : Wo waha se nikal aaya tha. Sir! Ab kya? Ye maamla toh aur pecheeda ho gaya hai.

Xavier : Mujhe ab bhi yakeen nahi ho raha.

Terashima (niraasha se) : Agar wo mujrim hai, to usne mujhe kyu bachaya Sir? Ye jaante hue ki mein ek agent hu aur usse pakadne ke liye aayi hu.

Andre : Terashima ki baat me dam hai Sir. Upar se Vegas ke department se jo report aayi hai usme woh ladka ek normal citizen hai jisne HOK ko pakdawaya hai.

Terashima : That's-!!! Woh mujhse keh bhi raha tha ki hume koi galat-fehmi hui hai.

Andre : Mujhe kehna toh nahi chahiye Sir. Par sh-shayad-!!! Humse bohut badi galti ho gayi hai iss baar.

Terashima : Agar woh ladka innocent nikla toh hum kabhi bhi iss paap se khud ko mukt nahi kar payenge Sir.

Xavier ke chehre par agle hi pal paseena jhalakne laga.

Xavier : Accha hua jo samay pe woh photos hatwa di mene.

Andre : Sir, woh bench par jab baitha tha tab Crimson kar ke kuch keh raha tha. Ye shabd yaad hai mujhe.

Xavier : Crimson?

Terashima : K-Kahi woh caller hi toh nahi? Jisne hume info di? Kahi aisa toh nahi ki hum uski chaal me fass gaye? Kahi wahi toh ye aadmi nahi? Crimson shabd uss se hi related toh nahi?

Terashima ki baatein sunn dono hi shaant reh gaye. Agar aisa hota hai toh kya muh dikhayenge woh Vegas ke Investigation Department ko?

Aur agar uss ladke ke desh ki sarkaar ko ye baat pata lag gayi. Toh kya jawaab denge unhe?

Xavier : Andre!! Terashima ko araam karne do! Mere saath baahar aao.

Andre : Yes Sir!!!

Terashima ko yu hi uske ward me araam karne ke liye chhor woh dono hi baahar chale gaye.

Aur idhar bechari Terashima ek baar fir apne khyalato me doob gayi. Uss se pehli baar itni badi galti kaise ho gayi? Kaise woh ek nirdosh ko pehchaan na paayi?




Harr koi iss samay Veer ke baare me sochne me laga hua tha. Fir chaahe uske chaahne waale ho, uske shubh-chintak, usse galat samajhne waale ya fir uske dushman.

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Yaha ye sawaal-jawaab chal rahe the toh wahi issi sheher me koi aur bhi tha jo yahi sawaal-jawaab karne kisi aur ke paas aaya hua tha. Bas, tareeqa thoda alag tha.

*BAMMM*

Table par zorr se haatho ko patakne ki awaaz aayi aur ek aurat behad gusse me apni kursi se khadi ho gayi.

Suhana! Uski aankhein gusse me laal aur aasuo se namm thi.




Suhana : Mein tumse kuch puch rahi hu!! Jawaab do!!!

Aur uske saamne thi,

Ava!!

Ava ne apni nazre churaate hue chehra ferr liya. Aankhein toh uski bhi bheegi hui thi.




Ava : Mein apna jawaab rakh chuki hu Suhana!

Suhana : Woh mere sawaal ka jawaab nahi. Seedhe-seedhe batao mujhe kaha hai woh? Aur ye news…! Ye sab kya chal raha hai? Kyu tumne usse yaha bulaaya? I WANT TO KNOW EVERYTHING!!!!




Ava : I-I…! I called him for protection.

Suhana (screams) : Ye jaante hue bhi ki Divya abhi busy hai? Kis haq se tumne usse akele yaha bulaaya? Tumhe koi khabar bhi hai ki uske ghar par kya haalat ho rahi hogi uske parivar ki? They fucking don't know anything!!!

Chillaate hue Suhana ne table par rakhe saare kaanch ke glass bikher ke neeche gira diye.

Ava : I..!

Suhana : Uski choti behan ka call aaya tha mere paas. Kya jawaab du usse mein? Woh puch rahi hai mujhse ki bhaiya kaha hai!! Kya bolu uss se mein? FUCKING TELL ME!!!

Jab Ava ko ye pata chala ki Veer ka parivaar uski raah dekh raha hai, toh jaise glaani ka bada sa patthar uske upar aake gir pada.

Ab jaake usse bodh hua.

Woh akeli thi. Par uski tarah sansaar me harr koi akela nahi tha. Unke paas unka parivaar tha. Ava bechari dedh saal se akeli thi.

Jaise woh ye baat bhul hi gayi thi ki Veer koi awaara ladka nahi, balki kisi ke parivaar ki jaan hai. Kisi ki amaanat hai. Kisi ka sahaara hai. Kisi ka saathi toh kisi ka pyaar.

Bodh hote hi uski aankho se apne aap hi aansu panapne lage.




Suhana (growls) : TELL ME!! WHERE… IS… HE… NOW!!!!

Ava : M-Mujhe nahi pata! I don't know anything!

Usne ek baar fir muh ferr liya. Woh kaise sachhaayi bata sakti thi? Chaah ke bhi muh se kuch ugal nahi sakti thi.

Ava : Mujhe nahi pata kuch. Mujhe theek se kuch yaad nahi. Waha kya ho raha tha mein nahi jaanti. I-I don't know-

Suhana : Toh kaha gaya woh??? Kyu ye DGSI waale gaandu uske peeche pade the? Kyu uski tasveer b-baar baar…! Baar baar-

Aur wo ro padi.

Suhana (sobs) : *sniff* Kyu uski tasveer baar baar news pe aa rahi thi? *sniff* Bolo? K-Kyu??? Jawaab do? Kyu likh ke aa raha tha ki criminal has been executed. Kya matlab hua iska??

Ava : I-I don't know!!! I don't remember. Shayad unhe koi galat-fehmi ho gayi.

Usne abhi itna kaha hi tha ki Suhana ne agle hi shan uski dress ki collor ke hisse ko pakda aur zorr se jakad usse kheench liya,

Ava : !!!!

Suhana ki aankhein bhayanak hi buri tarah gusse me feli hui thi.

Suhana : Ye mein akhiri warning de rahi hu tumhe Miss Ava Grace Martin!!! Agar tumne ab mujhe kuch nahi bataya, toh mein bhul jaungi ki tum Sonu ki koi dost bhi thi.

Ava chaahti toh badi hi asaani se khud ko chhura leti. System ke aage Suhana ki ye pakad baccho ki pakad jaisi thi. Parantu, usne aisa kuch bhi nahi kiya. Woh Suhana ki giraft me hi bani rahi.

Ava : Mujhe nahi pata Suhana! M-Mein kisi kamre me thi. Bandhi hui thi. Baahar kya ho raha tha mein nahi jaanti.

Suhana ka iss baar maatha thanak utha. Woh jaanti thi ki Ava kuch na kuch zaroor jaanti hai. Magar bata nahi rahi. Woh agle hi pal itni zorr se garji ki baahar khadi Ashita aur Prakash Uncle tak ko uski awaaz sunaayi de gayi,

Suhana (screams) : AVA GRACE MARTIN!!! TUMHARI YE MAJAAL-! TUM SACH SACH BATAATI HO YA-

"MARR CHUKA HAI WOH!!!!"

Ava ke bol poore kamre me goonj gaye.

Achanak hi waha ek sannaata chha gaya!

Suhana kisi moorti ki tarah bann ke wahi jamm gayi.



Ava ke kapde par uski pakad bhi dheeli hoke chooth gayi. Uski aankhon ne jaise apna focus kho diya.

Woh jaise shoonya hoke reh gayi. Uska mastishk kaam karna hi band kar diya jaise kuch palo ke liye.

Aur iss baar Ava ki awaaz oonchi ho gayi. Rote hue woh chillaayi,

Ava (screams) : Marr chuka hai woh. HE'S DEAD!!! AND GONE!!!

Subakte hue woh bhi dobaara apni kursi par girte hue rone lagi.

Budbudaate hue abhi bhi uske hontho se ahista-ahista lafz baahar nikal rahe the.

Ava : H-He's gone-!!! Gone! No more with us-!!!

Suhana jo baar-baar ratt lagaaye hue thi jawaab jaan'ne ki, usse uska jawaab Ava ne de diya tha.

Kintu, Suhana ke liye ye jhatka jitna dikhaayi de raha tha uss se kahi zyada bada tha vaastav me. Ghaat aisi pohuchi thi usse andhruni starr par ki usse khud abhaas nahi tha iss baat ka.

Agle hi shan usse aisa laga jaise uske badan se poori urja kisi ne kheench li ho.

Woh ladkhadayi, aur kursi ke saath-saath hi woh khud bhi zameen par girke behosh gayi.

"Suhaaanaaa!!!!"

Ava ki akhiri awaaz thi jo usne behoshi me jaane se pehle suni. Uske baad andhkaar sa chhaa gaya.

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Bhedo ke jhund ko jab charwaane ke liye unhe kheto me le jaaya jaata hai, toh unke saath unka ek gadariya hota hai.

Unki rehnumaayi ke liye. Unke netratva ke liye. Jo harr samay unki dekh-rekh aur parvaah karta hai.

Par agar wahi gadariya achanak khud kahi gaayab ho jaaye ya kho jaaye toh?

Toh, saari bhede titar-bitar ho jaati hai. Unki samajh nahi aata kya kare. Gadariye ke liye weh vyakul ho uthati hai. Bechain hoke machalne lagti hai.

Aur Veer ka parivaar iss waqt inhi bhed ke samaan ho chuka tha.

Lagbhag 3 hafte guzar chuke the Bhavna ki akhiri waqt baat hue Veer se.

Teen hafte! Maano ab mahina hi hone jaa raha tha kuch hi dino me.

Uske ghar me jo mahaul abhi bana hua tha woh dekha nahi jaa sakta tha.

Harr koi itna pareshaan aur vyaakul tha ki samajh nahi aa raha tha kya kare.

Kavya ka phone udhar Suhana ab utha nahi rahi thi.

Bhavna, Arohi, Tej aur Shweta toh Paris jaane ke liye tickets ka bandobast bhi karne lage the.

Par ek aur sansani fela dene waali khabar unke haath lagi.

Paris me sabhi flights ko rok diya gaya tha. International ki incoming flights sab band kar di gayi thi.

Unhe ye bhi pata chala ki ek bohut bada Terrorist attack hua tha Paris me.

Ye khabar paate hi jaise unki saansein atak gayi thi.

Jo nahi sochna chaahiye wahi khayaal mann me aa rahe the.

Kahi Veer ussi haadse me toh-!?

Par, sakaraatmak sochte hue aur bechain dil ko baar-baar tasalli dete hue unn sabhi ne khud ko sambhaala.

Kavya bechari jo sabse pehle khoob nidar hoke bina chinta ke Veer ke baare me sabko hidayat de rahi thi. Woh ab khud hi sabse zyada rone me lagi hui thi.

Veer ki orr se na hi koi khabar aa rahi thi aur na hi kahi aur se kuch pata chal raha tha.

Veer ke Dada ji waale ghar me bhi ye baat pata lag gayi. Manorath jo Veer ko dil se chaahte the woh fauran hi Bhavna ke nirnay se taiyaar ho gaye.

Aur nirnay ye tha ki-

Bhale hi woh Paris nahi jaa sakte toh kya? Par France ke koi aur sheher to jaa hi sakte the na?

Decide ho chuka tha ki woh Paris ki jagah Strasbourg jayenge. Aur waha se train se Paris ka raasta lagbhag 2 ghante ka hi tha. Toh Paris me jaa ke Veer ke baare me pata laga lenge.

Jaane waale logo me se ek swayam Bhavna thi. Uske sang Tej, Arohi aur Manorath khud.

Ek bade ki aavashyakta thi unhe jo unhe sambhaal sake. Bhavna khud bhi iss waqt dusro ko sambhaalne ki sthiti me nahi thi.

Shweta aane ki zidd karne lagi thi magar ghar par fir sabhi javaan ladkiya hi reh jaati.

Isliye usse ghar par rehne ke liye jaise-taise manaaya gaya.

Chaaro hi Veer ko dhundhne nikal chuke the. Aur Strasbourg pohuch bhi chuke the. Yaha tak ki unn logo ne Paris tak ka raasta bhi tay kar liya tha.

Par news me kahi bhi Veer ki tasveere nahi thi. Sab kuch hata diya gaya tha. Social media se leke YouTube athwa kisi bhi sites par kahi koi nishaan nahi tha uska.

Aur aaj ki issi raat, Ava ke wahi music video ke upload hone ki khushi me aalishaan hotel me ek choti si party rakhi gayi thi.

Staff team se leke sabhi log maujood the. Haadsa hue lagbhag 3 hafte guzar chuke the toh ye music video France ki saari janta aur Aga ke fans ke liye ek refreshment tha. Ek breather tha unke liye.

Yeh gaana logo ke liye aisa tha jaise maano kisi registaan me bhatke vyakti ko paani ka talaab mil gaya ho.

Kuch minutes hi hue the gaana post hue ki likes aur views ki barsaat shuru ho chuki thi.

Dinner ka aayojan bhi tha. Sabhi acche dhang se taiyaar khaane aur peene ka lutf utha rahe the.

Par kisi ki aankhein thi, jo ab bhi namm thi. Itni khushi, itni safalta ke bawajood, uss aurat ko koi khushi mehsoos nahi ho rahi thi.

Woh Ava hi thi.

Ab jaake Veer ki saari baatein usse yaad aa rahi thi.

Kaise woh alleys me yu hi sirf uske liye jaane ke liye taiyaar ho gaya tha.

Usse khud ke aur uske hue vartalaap yaad aa rahe the,

'Tum…! Tum mere liye aaye. Tumhare hone se mujhe safe feel ho raha hai.'

'Well! Mene aapko kaha hua hai. Jab tak aapke peeche pade uss insaan ka pata nahi laga leta, tab tak aapko protect karunga.'

'Come na! Yaha malls mene explore nahi kiye. Kahi chalte hai?'

'Agar aap yahi chaahti hai toh-'

'That's nice!!! Kya hum waha chal sakte hai?'

'Don't worry! Mein personally jaunga unke saath. Unhe kuch nahi hoga.'

'Yes! I understand. It was my fault.'

'It's okay! As long as you're safe. Nothing else matters right now.'

'See??? Hahahaha! I won!!! Mene kaha tha na?'

'Yeah yeah! Dekha mene. You sure are lucky *smiles*'

'Like what you see?'

'M-Mein aata hu. *blushes* Wait for me!'

Harr ek baat usse yaad aa rahi thi. Veer ki chhavi uske dil-o-dimaag me mandra rahi thi.

Uski woh strong back jisse leke woh uske saamne chal raha tha. Bina ye jaane hue ki woh swayam hi uski maut me shaamil thi.

Ava ke gaalo se aansu beh beh ke girne lage.

Hotel ki 7th floor par khidki ke paas khadi woh bas auro se dur ro rahi thi.



Par usse nahi pata tha ki-

Ussi building ke bagal waali building ki terrace se andhere me khade usse koi ghoor raha tha.

Uske badan par ek safed shirt thi jo tezz hawaao me awaaz kar lehra rahi thi.

Unhi hawao me uske baal bhi bikhre hue the.

Aur uski befiqr nazre building ke andar maujood Ava par hi tiki hui thi.

Agle hi pal, Ava ki aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi. Uski saansein aur dhadkane tezz ho uthi. Seena zorr-zorr se upar neeche hone laga.

Kyuki uske mann me ek ghanti baji thi,

*Ding*




Ava ke poore badan me sihran daud gayi. Woh kisi chidiya ki tarah harr taraf gardan modte hue apne chaaro orr dekhne lagi.

'V-Veer!!!!?'

Agle hi pal uski nazre bagal se lagi building ke uss terrace par gayi.

Par, usne jo saamne dekha toh-

Siwae aasmaan me chamakte chaand ke alaawa waha koi nahi tha.

Terrace khaali thi.

'Veer!!!????'
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Update consists of 4.7k words. Chuki, Crimson arc bas ab 5-6 updates me khatam hai toh yaha dekh sakte ho ki kaise business arc apni entry le raha hai. Baaki, likes thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka. Target is 150 for this one. Keep supporting!
Dhanyavaad!

Boss is coming, wait till than motherfuckers.

Super update broo... maza aa gya . Abb dekhna hai ki veer kaise baccha . Curious about it.

 

[Dar]

Super update bro

 

[Tahirtahir111]

Zabardast update

 

[CFL7897]

Shandar jandar update bhai...

Veer ke na hone se ....uske sath Jude logon ka manbhao ka aapane bakhubi se vivaran Diya Hai..
Ava ko ab Reliase ho raha hai ki apni Man Ki Jaan bachane Ke Liye vah bahut se Logon ke bhavnaon ke sath galat Khel gai..

Baki last Mein Ava Ko Aaya hua message Kahani Ko naya Mod De Gaya..