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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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Update - 143 ~ Luring the wolf with the hen

[Note : Update ko rush me bilkul mat padhna. Itminaan se samay leke dhyaan se padhna. Warna sarr ke upar se jayega.]

Ab tak...

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"I'm sorry-!!! I'm sorry Veer!!! I never wanted to do it-!!! *sniff* Mamma!!! *sniff* Speak to me!!! P-Please-!!!"


Ab aage...

A few months ago...
(Kuch mahine pehle...)


Kisi underground basement me sofe pe ek aadmi baitha hua tha. Ceiling par pankha halki gati me ghoom raha tha. Shor tha toh bas ussi pankhe ka, baaki harr jagah ek khamoshi chhayi hui thi.

My-Snarky-Self

Uske haath me ek wine ka glass tha toh dusre me cigarette. Ye koi aur nahi, Crimson hi tha jiske mann me kuch baatein ghoom rahi thi,

‘Why don’t you be my right hand? You’ve got potential!’

‘So you chose to betray me huh? Surprised? Mujhe kaise pata chala? You can’t lie to me you know!’

‘One of my preys is arriving there. Dhyaan rahe! Usse kuch hone na paaye!’

‘I can kill you anytime! Don't test my patience.’


Ye awaazein, ye bol uske dimaag me mandra rahe the.

Aur achanak hi,

*Crack*

Uske haatho me maujood wine ke glass ke tukde-tukde ho gaye. Wine uske haath ko bhigo ke zameen par gir gayi. Woh gusse me utha,

"Tujhe lagta hai tu koi bhagwan hai? Mein tujhe dikhaunga ki asli baazigar kaun hai. Just you wait-!"

Woh krodh me garja.

"Aur ye bhi pata laga lunga ki tu hai kaun asal me madarchod!!!"

*Crash*

Table par ek laat usne maari toh wine ki bottle aur glass sab toot ke bikhar gaye. Aur basement me punaah wahi khamoshi chhaa gayi.

***


Clark County Detention Center,
Las Vegas.
Night ~ 11 : 49 PM


Kuch din guzar jaane ke baad, Vegas ki iss jail me raat ke samay sab kuch pehle ki tarah hi tha. Qaidi log apne-apne cell me waqt kaat rahe the. Patrolling karne waale officers roz ki tarah apni duty par the.

Kahi bhi koi gadbad ki aashanka nazar nahi aa rahi thi jab achanak se,

*Pssssssssssssss*

Detention Center ki entrance ke paas hi chaaro orr dhua felne laga.


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"Ye kya ho raha hai? Officers!!!"

Satark hote hue sabhi mauke pe pohuche aur dhue ke source ko dhundne lage. Lekin, unke yaha aate hi,

*Pssssssssssssss*

*Pssssssssssssss*

Harr jagah dhua uthne laga. Smoke bombs ek ke baad ek apna kaam karne me lag gaye. Aur saare detention center me afra-tafri mach gayi.

"Officers be alert!!!"

Par unn smoke bombs ke beech kuch aise bombs bhi feke gaye the, jinme behosh karne waali gas maujood thi.

Ek ke baad ek officers behosh hoke girte chale gaye. Jab tak unhe iss baat ka ehsaas hua ki gas me behoshi ka koi padaarth hai tab tak gas apna kaam kar chuki thi.

Security cameras dhue ke chalte kuch catch na kar paaye. Jail cells ke andar maujood apraadhi log bhi aashcharya me pad gaye. Unhe nahi pata tha ki baahar hall me kya ho raha tha. Tabhi achanak hi,

*Clang*

Ek cell ka gate zorr se awaaz kar ke khul gaya.

"H-Huhhh!?"

Jail ke andar baitha aadmi stabdh reh gaya. Ye sab ho kya raha tha? Aur uske jail ke cell ka darwaaza kisne khola? Usse samajh tak na aaya.

Par mauka dekhte hi woh bhaaga. Jail se chhootne ka iss se behtar mauka aur kya ho sakta tha?

'Fuck it! I'm free now! Hahaha!'

Aur ye shaks jo tha, woh koi aur nahi, wahi tha.

Jim! Yaani ki,

Jim the Slippery.

Ussi ke saath-saath baaki saare jail cells ke darwaaze khul gaye. Aur ek ek karke saare apraadhi baahar bhaagne lage.

"Hahahaha!!! Bhaago!! Bhaago! Iss se pehle ki extra unit aake hume pakad le."

Alert ke sirens bajne lage the. Bhaagne ka shor fela hua tha. Security cameras ko monitor karne waale logo ne turant hi extra units ko inform kar diya tha.

Yaha saare jail cells ke akhir me ek cell aur tha. Jiske andar baitha aadmi dheere se utha aur baahar aaya.

Uske chehre par ek behad hi bhayanak muskaan saji hui thi. Aisi muskurahat jisse dekh insaan darr jaaye. Badan par phate hue aur maile kapde the.

Woh paagalo ki tarah hasste hue bhaag kar entrance ke paas aaya.

"Ehehehehehehe! Hehehehe!"

Uski hassi badi hi vichitr aur khaufnaak si thi. Aisi jisse sunn aadmi ke raungte khade ho jaaye. Agle hi pal, uss khaske aadmi ki nigaahein dhue ki taraf daudi aur usse koi waha khada nazar aaya,

Usse dekhte hi aadmi ke honth ajeeb dhang se aur upar fel gaye aur muskaan pehle se bhi daraavni ho gayi.

"Ehehehehehe! Tum bhi hum me se ek ho? Ehehehe! Mere patients-!!! Hehehehe! Mein aaya-!!!"

Woh na jaane kya badbadaya aur waha se uchhalte koodte hue bhaag gaya.

Koi bhi hota toh usse iss waqt dekh paagal hi samajhta. Par dhue me khada woh aadmi usse dekhne ke baad ek shock me jaa chuka tha.

Kyuki abhi abhi uske mann me ek awaaz aayi thi.

*Ding*


[No information available.]

Uss shaks ki aankhein phati ki phati hui thi. Ye Crimson hi tha.

Wahi tha jo detention center se unn apradhiyo ko bhagaaya tha. Wahi tha jisne ye saare bombs fek ke iss ghatna ko anjaam diya tha. Uska maqsad yaha sirf Jim the slippery ko churraane ka tha.

Par na jaane uske haath kya lag gaya tha aaj.

'Y-Ye-! Woh aadmi!'


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Uske hosh ude hue the. Tabhi uske mann me ek awaaz punaah aayi,

[Yes! Woh aadmi ke paas system tha. Tumhari tarah!]

Spasht hote hi Crimson ko ek bada jhatka laga.

Kya kare? Uske peeche jaaye ya fir!?


[Yaha kyu khade ho? Jo karna hai jaldi karo!]

Par system ki baat sunte hi woh waha se tezz qadmo ke saath baahar nikal gaya.

Idhar Detention Center se bhaagte hue Jim alleys me ghus chuka tha.

*huff* *huff*

Haafte hue woh pakde jaane se bachne ke liye tezz gati me bhaag raha tha.

Andhere me doobi unn sakri galliyo me woh daud hi raha tha jab,

"Heugh!!!"

Achanak se kisi ne uski shirt ki collor ko peeche se pakda jiske chalte shirt uske gale par phande ki tarah kass gayi.

Fir apne aap hi uss shaks ne usse chorr diya. Jim ne jab palat ke dekha toh paaya ki andhere me koi khada hua tha.

Jim : K-Kaun? Kaun ho tum?

Woh apne gale ko sehlaate hue ghabrahat me pucha. Uske saamne Crimson tha. Parantu, andhere ke chalte Jim bechara uska muh nahi dekh saka.

Crimson : Mein kaun hu tumhe ye jaan'ne ki zaroorat nahi. Tumhe bas itna jaan'na hai ki mene hi tumhe jail se churraaya hai.

Jim : Heh! Toh? Toh ab tum chaahte ho mein tumhaare talve chaatu? Agar tum mujhe nahi bhi churraate toh bhi mein-

Crimson : Kaise bhi kar ke baahar nikal aata!

Jim (hairaani me) : Huh!!!?

Crimson : Yahi kehna chaah rahe the na?

Jim : T-Tum-!!! Kaun ho tum??

Crimson (smiles) : Jim the Slippery. Police se bach nikal ke bhaagne ke liye maana jaane waala mashoor criminal. Ladkiya, daaru aur drugs dealing me maahir. Taskari toh tumhare khoon me daudti hai. Kyu? Hai na?

Crimson ke itna kehte hi Jim ki aankhein bhay ke maare fel gayi. Saamne khada vyakti usse acche se jaanta tha. Usse aisa laga jaise woh iss aadmi ke saamne nanga khada hua tha. Jaise uss se kuch bhi chhipaya nahi jaa sakta tha.

Crimson : Bolo! Kya mein sahi hu?

Jim : Hmph! T-Toh kya? Y-Ye toh sab jaante hai mere baare me.

Crimson (smiles) : Kya ye bhi jaante hai ki iss se pehle tum grave body collector jaise illegal kaam me bhi shaamil the?

Iss baar Jim ke perr ladkhada gaye.

Jim (kaanpte hue) : T-Tum!!? Tumhe kaise pata? N-Nahiii!! Kaun? K-Kaun ho tum? Jawaab do!!!

Crimson (smiles) : Apni position ko samjho Jim! Tum maut se bas ek qadam dur khade ho.

Jim (frowns) : K-Kya chahiye tumhe?

Crimson : Kuch nahi!

Jim : K-Kya?

Crimson (smiles) : Tum azaad ho. Bas mere liye ek chota sa kaam karna hoga.

Jim : Bolo!

Crimson : Tum drugs dealing karte ho ya sharaab ka business, ya fir kuch aur. Mujhe iss se koi matlab nahi. Jo karna hai karo.

Jim : Hmm?

Crimson ne muskuraate hue agle hi pal jeb se kuch nikaal ke uski orr feka. Hadbada ke Jim ne usse haatho me thaama.

Jim : Y-Ye kya hai?

Usne apne haatho me pakde uss cheez ko tatol ke dekha. Ek card tha. Kisi credit card ki tarah.

Crimson (smiles) : Tumhe ye bechna hai. Police ya kisi ko bhi iski khabar lagni nahi chaahiye. Ye sirf tumhe kisi aise shop dealer ko bechna hai jo khud kisi illegal kaam me ho. Aur usse bhi kuch nahi batana hai. Samajh gaye?

Jim : P-Par ye hai kya?

Crimson : Jitna kaha gaya hai utna karo. Tumhe baad me samajh aa jayega.

Jim : Tch!!! Theek hai. Kaam ho jayega!

Crimson : Ye raha number. Iss number pe hi mujhe contact karna.

Jim : Th-Theek hai!

Crimson : Apni gang ko ikhatta kar lo. Time kam hai. Tumhare saath aur bhi do log judne waale hai!

Jim : K-Kaun?

Par Crimson bina kuch kahe hi waha se palat ke jaane laga.

Jim : H-Hey!! Jawaab do! Kaun do log?

Crimson (smiles) : Tumhe pata lag jayega. Go now! Aur haan! Welcome to the House of the Killers.

Kehte hue woh waha unn andheri galliyo me kahi gaayab ho gaya. Jim bas uss card ko taakta reh gaya. Bina samay gawaaye fir woh waha se bhaag nikla.

Aur idhar Crimson jeb me haath daale apne naye plan ko execute karta jaa raha tha.

Jin do logo ki woh baat kar raha tha woh koi aur nahi the. Woh wahi mashoor serial killers the-

Nightwalker aur Pitcher!!!

Alley se baahar aate hi ek luxury red car uske saamne khadi hui thi. Driving seat par ek khubsoorat ladki virajmaan thi.

Crimson (smiles) : Ahn! My sweetie! You arrived.

Sweetie : Yes! Toh? Ab kya?

Crimson ne wesa hi ek aur card nikaal ke Sweetie ki orr feka toh usne card ko catch kar liya.

Sweetie : Ye kya hai?

Crimson (smiles) : Maut ka aamantran! Inki copies banwani hai. Tumhare phone pe address diya hua hai. Jao aur iss card ki multiple copies banwaane keh do. Chip wahi rehni chahiye usme.

Sweetie : Kisi tarah ka entry card hai?

Crimson ne muskura ke haan me sarr hilaaya.

Sweetie : Well! Theek hai! Meri pagaar?

Usne itna kaha hi tha ki agle hi shan noto ki do badi badi gaddiya uski goad me thi.

Crimson : Go now!

Sweetie ek kutil muskaan liye unn noto ko apne hontho se choomi aur jitni tezzi me woh yaha aayi thi. Utni hi tezzi me waha se nikal bhi gayi.

Main road par aate hue Crimson cigarette ka kash lagaate hue upar unn bade bade hoardings ke bagal se lagi screen ko dekhne me lage hue tha.

Jisme jaani maani Singer Natalia Martin ke interview ki kuch snippets chal rahi thi.

Na jaane usse kya soojha par usne mann me hi,

'Check!'

*Ding*


[No information available.]

Crimson ki aankhein ek baar fir hairat ke maare fel gayi. Uske haantho se cigarette chhutak ke gir gayi.

Uska system TV screen ko toh check karta hi tha. Parantu, tv me dikhaayi dene waali cheez ko bhi check kar ke batla sakta tha.


[This is a surprise. Nahi laga tha ki Natalia Martin ke paas bhi system hoga. That explains her sudden rise in the industry. What now? What will be your action?]

Uske system ne uss se pucha.

Par Crimson ke mann me kisi aur ke hi bol goonj rahe the. Uss anjaan shaks ke-


‘One of my preys is arriving there. Dhyaan rahe! Usse kuch hone na paaye!’

Na jaane ye kaun tha par Crimson ko yakeen tha ki woh ateet me jis insaan se mila tha. Ye wahi vyakti tha.

Usse zindagi me aaj tak kisi se kabhi itna darr mehsoos nahi hua tha. Magar ye insaan usse maut ki anubhooti karwa raha tha.

Uske perro tale chal rahe kuch cheete ek rakha bana ke jaa rahe the. Aag baboola hote hue Crimson ne apna perr patka aur unme se ek cheeta uske perr ke neeche kuchal ke marr gaya.

"Sahi kehte hai. Insaan ki zindagi ek cheeti ke samaan hoti hai."


[What now?]

'One lf his preys is arriving here? Tab toh ek teer se do nishaane ho gaye.'

[We have Natalia too now!]

'Ohhh! Hahaha! My bad! Teen nishaane!'

[Jail me mile uss system waale aadmi ke baare me mat socho abhi. Aur uss caller ke baare me socho. Woh zyada dangerous maalum pad raha hai. He's scheming something.]

'I know! Aur ussi ke liye toh ye sab taiyaar kar raha hu. I must have my own force.'

Woh apne basement me laut ke aaya toh kuch hi derr me Sweetie bhi uske saamne haazir thi.

Crimson : Kaam ho gaya?

Sweetie : Hmm! Card ki copies jald hi mil jayengi. Par ye sab hai kis liye?

Crimson : Tumhara kaam hai mera kaha gaya order follow karna. Nothing else. Samajh rahi ho na?

Sweetie : Y-Yes!

Crimson : Singer Natalia Martin ke upar nazar rakhwao. Dhyaan rahe kahi se bhi usse pata na lag paaye. Aur logo ke beech ye khabar faila do ki Island par dherr saara treasure maujood hai ek mansion me. Saath hi Investigation department me ek spy plant kar do, jo hume pal pal khabar dete rahe.

Sweetie : Treasure? Singer Natalia!? Lekin-!!!? Theek hai!

Sweetie sawaal puchti par woh apni jagah jaanti thi. Bina koi prashn kiye woh raazi ho gayi aur firse baahar nikal gayi.

Aur aise shuru hua, House of the Killers ka karnaama.

Jim the Slippery apne drug dealing aur kaale karmo me jut gaya. Saath hi usne alleys me maujood slot machines ka vyapaar karne waalo ke beech kisi ek dukaan me unn cards ko bhijwana bhi shuru kar diya.

Ye wahi card the, jiska istemaal kar ke Nightwalker ke mansion me ghusa jaata tha. Sweetie uski copies banwa banwa ke Jim tak supply karti. Aur Jim unn cards ko alley me maujood uss dukaan me bhijwata.

Island par Nightwalker ka Mansion aur bhi bhawya bana diya gaya. Usse jo chahiye tha woh usse milne laga tha. Zinda kaatne ke liye insaan. Treasure ki feli khabar sunn, log alleys me jaate, uss card ko khareedte aur baad me island par jaate.

Jaha Nightwalker unke sang raat me maut ka khel khelne ke liye taiyaar rehta. Saath hi wines, drugs import aur export kar deals bhi karta.

Toh wahi Pitcher bhi iss tigdi ka hissa tha. Alag alag hotels me uski maut ki parties organise hoti. Mithridatism ki vidya liye woh ek se ek celebrities ko maut ke ghaat utaarta aur apni fetish ko santusht karta.

Crimson yaha unn fetish waale logo ko dhundhta jo live killing dekhne ke liye dherro paisa lutaate.

Unhe ikhatta kar woh Nightwalker, Pitcher ke through dark web me live killing dikhwata.

Inn chand mahino me usne itna paisa kama liya tha ki ab uski khud ki IT companies ki kuch buildings bhi thi. Itna investment kar chuka tha woh.

Uski force taiyaar hoti jaa rahi thi.

Khaas baat ye thi ki Jim, Nightwalker aur Pitcher, teeno ko hi Crimson ke baare me koi jankaari nahi thi.

Woh jaante the ki koi aadmi tha jo unka dhandha karwaane me madad kar raha tha. Par woh kaun tha? Iss baat se woh anibhigya the.

Kintu, jo sabse zyaada usse tang kare hue tha woh tha wahi-

Woh unknown caller. Aur uski baatein-


‘I can kill you anytime! Don't test my patience.’

Ek baar fir woh awaaz apne mann me sunn uska gussa saatve aasmaan par pohuch gaya.

*Crash*

Agal bagal padi cheezo ko usne gusse me bikher diya.

"Tu mujhe maarega behanchod!!!? Jald hi-!! Jald hi tera chehra mere saamne hoga. Kaun hai tu, tera maqsad kya hai sab pata laga lunga mein."

Woh abhi uss caller ko yaad kar hi raha tha ki itne me ussi caller ka usse phone aa gaya.

Aur crimson ke call uthaate hi waha se fir wahi awaaz aayi,

"Tum nahi maane! Hai na? I gave you a warning though. Ye antim warning de raha hu. Veer-!!! Mera shikaar hai. Waha aane waala hai. Usse kuch bhi hone na paaye. You got that!?"

Bas! Aur call cut ho gaya. Magar Crimson ke chehre par woh kapti muskaan felte hi jaa rahi thi.

"Veeer!!!?? Huh!!! Hahahahahaha!! Toh Veer naam hai uska!!!!"


[Kya plan hai next? You want to kill him!]

'Of course! Hahahaha! Shikaari ke shikaar ko hum churaaenge. Aur baad me uss shikaari ko bhi dhad dabochenge.'

[Be careful!]

'Aane do uss chooze ko.'

Aur issi beech, ek kaand aur hua. Pitcher ne Ava ki dost Charlotte ko maut ke ghaat utaar diya.

Sansani bann ke news fel gayi. Ava ko ye pata lagte hi ek dhakka laga. Bhale hi Charlotte uske itna qareeb nahi thi. Lekin, uss se hi-hello uski bani rehti thi.

Aur ab Crimson taiyaar tha apna dusra daav khelne ke liye.

Ava urf Natalia Martin akeli hotel me ek record company se mil ke parking me khadi apni car me baithne jaa hi rahi thi jab usse peeche se ek awaaz sunaayi di,

"Natalia Martin!!"

Ava ne palat ke dekha toh uske saamne Crimson maujood tha.

Ava : ???

Crimson (smiles) : Kaisa lag raha hai system ka istemal karte hue safalta ki uchhaiyo par pohuchne me?

Ava ek haafi lete hue stabdh hoke 2 qadam peeche ho gayi.

Ava : Who-!? Who are you?

Usne khud bhi uss aadmi ko check kiya magar,

*Ding*


[No information available.]

Ava ki aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi.

Ava : K-Kaun ho tum? Kya baat kar rahe ho meri kuch samajh me nahi aa raha.

Crimson ne jab punaah usse check kiya toh woh dang reh gaya. Kyuki iss baar,

*Ding*


[Name : Natalia Martin
Status : Business woman/ Singer/ Celebrity
Age : 25

Bio : Natalia Martin, ek singer hai. Kaafi saalo se mehnat kar ke woh aaj iss mukaam pe pohuchi hai. Kuch record companies ke sang ties hai. Abhi struggle kaafi hai lekin safalta mehnat se milti jaa rahi hai.

Favourability : 3
Relationship : Strangers.]


Crimson ne jaise hi ye padha woh zorr-zorr se hassne laga.

Crimson : Hahahahahahahaha!!!

Ava : Y-You-!!

Woh hasste hue uske qareeb aaya. Ava sachet hote hue ek qadam peeche hui.

Ava ke kaano ke nazdeek aake woh bola,

Crimson : System sirf tumhaare paas nahi hai Miss Natalia!!!

Ava uss se dur hatt usse bhayanak gusse me ghoori,

Ava : Kaun ho tum? Aur kya chaahte ho? Iska matlab tumhaare paas bhi-!!?

Crimson : Meet me upstairs.

Woh jeb me haath daale palat gaya.

Crimson (smiles) : Don't worry! Iss hotel ki aadhi partnership meri hai. Half owner mein hi hu iska. Meet me at the 4th floor.

Aur woh waha se upar nikal gaya.

Ava bas bhauchakki si wahi khadi rahi.

'Ye sab kya ho raha hai?'


[I don't know miss. There shouldn't have been more than 1 system. Lekin shayad lagta hai ki-!]

Ava ke mann me ek pyaari si female voice usse samjhaate hue boli,

'Forget it! Yaani mein akeli nahi hu jiske paas ye system hai. I must be careful then.'


[Yes.]

Woh upar ko chali gayi. 4th floor par aate hi Crimson uske saamne bade hi araam se jeb me haath daale khada hua tha.

Ek badi si jagah thi aur woh dono hi bas akele the waha.

Ava (frowns) : Say!

Crimson : Mere liye ek chota sa kaam karna hai tumhe.

Ava : What is it?

Crimson : Samay aane par mein bata dunga. Kaho? Do you agree?

Ava : Heh! Why should I? Tum hote kaun ho-!?

Crimson (smiles) : Grace Martin!

Apni maa ka naam sunte hi Ava ki aankhein bhay me fel gayi. Uska haath turant hi peeche apni jeans ki orr gaya aur ek hand gun nikaalte hue usne Crimson par taan di.

Ava : DON'T YOU DARE-!!

Crimson ahista ahista uske nazdeek aaya aur bola,

Crimson : Kya hoga jab Grace Martin... Your only family... Zinda na bach paaye toh?


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Ava : Y-You-!!!

Crimson : Veer!!!

Ava : ??

Crimson : Ye naam hai uss ladke ka jiske saath meri dushmani hai.

Usne jhooth bolte hue jeb se cigarette ke dabbe se ek cigarette nikaali aur kash lagaane laga.

Crimson : Woh Las Vegas jald hi aane waala hai. Mein chaahta hu tum nazar rakho uspe.

Ava : Huh!!?

Crimson (smiles) : Status toh tum apna badal hi sakti ho. Hai na? Jaise abhi thodi derr pehle badla.

Ava : Y-You-!!?

Crimson (smiles) : Tumhara koi nuksaan bhi nahi hai. Right? Why don't you collaborate with me girl? Hum dono ek dusre ke kaam aa sakte hai you know.

Ava : Fuck off!

Woh bhaagte hue uski orr aayi,

*Swoooossshhhhh*

Ek laat Crimson ke sarr ki orr tezz gati se ghoomte hue aayi par woh turant hi jhuk gaya.

*Baaaaaaaaammmmm*

Neeche jhukte hi usne ek punch Ava ke pait ki orr maara jisse Ava ne split second me apne haatho se block kar liya tha. Parantu, uske bawajood uska shareer kayi qadam peeche jaa ke ladkhada ke girte girte bacha.

Crimson (smiles) : Ohh! You wanna fight?

Aur dono hi aapas me bhid gaye. Ava ki haalat buri hoti jaa rahi thi. Par na jaane usse kya hua, woh agle hi shan bhayanak krodh me aa gayi.

*Bam*

*Bam*

*Bam*

Ek ke baad ek hits uske shareer par lagte jaa rahe the.

7 hits.

8 hits.

9 hits.

10 hits.

“What???” Crimson ke badan par daswa lagataar hit jab uske seene par laga toh agle hi pal uske seene ka kuch hissa phat gaya. Akasmaat hi uss hisse se khoon behna shuru ho gaya.

Woh hairat-angez me Ava ko dekha jo daudti hui uski hi orr aa rahi thi.


[Iss ladki ke paas koi card hai. Sambhal ke!]

Ek ladki ne uske badan se khoon nikaal diya? Uska gussa sarr chadh ke bol utha. Bhaagti hui Ava ko usne ek jhatke me uske gale se pakda aur,

*BAMMMMMMMMMM*

Wahi rakhi table par usse patak diya.

“Nnghhhh~”

Crismon : You should know your place! Behtar yahi hoga ki meri baat maan lo. Warna Grace Martin-

Na chaahte hue bhi Ava ko apne haath khade karne hi pade. Usse raazi hona hi pada. Uski maa uski sabse badi kamzori thi.

Woh apne ghar lauti toh uss anjaan vyakti ka usse call aaya. Wahi ajanabi jisne usse Slogan ke paas bhejne ka kaarya saupa tha.

Ava : Hello?

? : Hmm! Toh tum uss se bhi mil li ho! Right?

Ava : T-Tum!! Kaun ho? Kyu mujh pe nazar rakhe hue ho? Kya chaahte ho mujhse?

? : Hey! Hey! Mein toh tumhari bhalaayi ke liye hi keh raha hu. Don’t you want to know? Kya tum jaan’na nahi chaahti? Kaun woh hatyaara hai jisne tumhaare Dad ko maara? Hmm?

Ava ki mutthi zorr se kass gayi. Daant peeste hue woh boli,

Ava : What do you want exactly?

? : Mene tumse do maange rakhi thi. Yaad hai na?

Ava : Y-Yes! Tell me! What do I have to do?

? (smiles) : That’s like a good girl. Collaborate with him.

Ava : Kya?

? : Suna nahi? Tum abhi abhi kisi se mil ke aayi ho na?

Ava : That’s-

? : Collaborate with him. Jo woh keh raha hai woh karo. And then, I’ll tell you who your father’s killer is…

Ava : I-

? : Don’t worry! Mein apne vaade nahi todta. Ye tumhara akhiri kaam hai. Do it!

Ava (growls) : F-Fine!

***

Idhar mauto ka silsila jaari tha, toh wahi Veer Suhana ke sang Las Vegas pohuch chuka tha. Ye wahi waqt tha.

Bhavya hotel me Pitcher ki ek party chal rahi thi. Log masks pehne dance ka lutf le rahe the. Magar, issi party me ek sadasya galti se andar ghus aaya.

Ya kahe ki usse kuch gadbad mehsoos hui aur talaashi karne ke liye woh khud andar aa gaya.

Aur ye shaks tha~ Daniel!!

Jisne Pitcher ko dekha, jisne waha maujood masks pehne logo ko dekha. Aur jisne, usse bhi dekha jo gir ke apne muh se jhaag baha rahi thi. Ek aur anya celebrity. Pitcher ki shikaar. Jo marr chuki thi.

Ghabra ke woh bhaaga, par uski nigaaho ne kisi ek ko aur dekha.

Crimson!!

Jo haivaano waali muskaan liye usse hi ghoor raha tha. Daniel nahi jaanta tha ki uss bechaare ko pehle hi check kar liya gaya tha. Woh Investigation Department ka senior detective hai ye saari info Crimson ko dikh chuki thi.

Woh bhaaga. Apni jaan bachaane ke liye. Yaha pe itna bada kaand chal raha tha. Koi ek nahi, kayi log iss khel me shaamil the. Usse andaaza lag gaya tha. Woh khatre ko bhaanp chuka tha par tabhi,

*Splurt*

“Huh??”

Daniel ke qadam wahi tham gaye. Uski aankhein badi ho chali. Aisa laga maano jaise usne koi bhoot dekh liya ho.

Peeche palat ke dekha toh, usne paaya ki-

Wahi aadmi, yaani Crimson uske peeche khada hua tha. Uske haath me maujood chaaku pehle hi Daniel ki peeth me dhass chuka tha.

Crimson (smiles) : Sweet Dreams!

Daniel : Y-You!!!

Daniel ki saansein ukhadne lagi aur Crimson ne chaaku uski peeth se kheench ke nikaal di.

Zameen par girte hue Daniel apna phone nikaal call karne laga par,

*BAAAAMMMMMM*

Crimson ki laat padte hi phone ke chithde udd gaye. Aur woh usse ussi haalat me chhor waapas chala gaya.

Marrne se pehle Daniel ne ek kaam kiya. Aur woh tha wahi dying message chhorna.

Heinous thoughts destroys the mind. O
ften the glee tuns into, Unhappiness.

Sorrow remains but shall be forgotten. Emergence of a new beginning prevails.

Opulent, rich thoughts fills the mind once more. Fend off the fiend this time.

Kindle the fire in yourself. Intensify it. Lure the evil out of it. Lecherous demons shall be punished.

Escape if you realize you cannot handle it. Remember, there ain't a single one, if you do get caught,

Soul shall burn.


Aur yahi woh message tha jisse Divya ne decode kiya tha. Jiska arth tha - House of Killers.

Yahi woh samay tha jab, Investigation Department apne action me aayi. Veer aur Suhana Department me hai, iski khabar turant hi Sweetie ko lag gayi.

Department me spy jo baitha hua tha ek. Crimson ne hi toh bithaya tha Sweetie se keh ke. Woh harr pal ki khabar bhejta jaa raha tha.

Yeh khabar Sweetie ne Crimson tak pohuchaayi.

Toh wahi Crimson ne Ava tak. Ava jaan chuki thi ki Suhana ke sang Veer naam ka shaks Las Vegas pohuch chuka tha. Uska kaam tha iss shaks par nazar rakhna.

Yahi woh samay tha jab Jim the Slippery ko bhi Veer ne Las Vegas ki alleys me drug dealing karte waqt dhad dabocha tha. Jab usne Divya ko pehli baar apni fighting skills ka namoona dikhaya tha.

Yahi woh samay tha jab Veer aur Mike uss card tak pohuche aur usse khareed ke woh Island ki khoj kar paaye.

Yahi woh samay tha jab Veer ne Nightwalker jaise bade serial killer ko pakad ke department ke saamne pesh kiya tha.

Ek ke baad ek Veer Crimson ki banaayi force ki dhajjiya udaata jaa raha tha.

Kintu, fir bhi Crimson patience rakhe hue tha.

Jiske peeche ek hi kaaran tha,


[Agar usse maarna hi hai. Toh maar kyu nahi dete tum? Woh tumse kamzor hai.]

‘Abhi nahi System! Abhi nahi! Abhi maar dunga toh mujhe profit kaise hoyega? Mission ki possibility kitni hai?’

*Ding*


[Mission possibility : 60%]

Ye Crimson ki skill thi. Veer ko maarna tab hi qifaayat mand saabit ho sakta tha jab woh Mission milne ke baad usse maare. Lekin, abhi mission milne ki sambhaavna sirf 60% hi thi.

‘100% karne ke liye mujhe aur kya karna hoga?’


[Tum aur woh Veer jitna hi ek dusre ke raaste me aaoge, jitna ek dusre ke kaamo me hastakshep karoge, utna hi system usse ek obstacle maanta jayega. Aur jald hi ye possibility 100% tak pohuch jayegi. Fir mission mil hi jayega. Usse maarne ka.]

‘Hmm! Ek gadbad ho gayi hai. Mujhe nahi pata tha Veer Investigation Department ke liye yaha aayega. Dikkat ho gayi hai. Crimson Festival ki taiyaari shuru karni hogi. Uske pehle usse ek trailer dena zaroori hai.’

Bas dikkat ek thi. Bechaara Pitcher nahi jaanta tha ki Ava Crimson ke saath mil ke kaam kar rahi thi. Aur Ava ye nahi jaanti thi ki Crimson hi House of the Killers ka rachaita tha.

Pitcher ne Ava ko maut ka invitation bhej diya tha jo woh aksar harr celebrity ko bhejta tha. Invitation toh party ka hota tha parantu, party jaisa waha kuch nahi hota tha.

Aur yahi woh samay tha jab Ava ne Divya ko apne concert ke invitation ka card bheja.

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Iss se uske do kaam hone waale the. Card bhejne waale ka raaz Divya aur department ke zariye saamne aa jaata aur Veer ke aane se woh uss par ab nazar rakh sakti thi.

Yahi woh samay tha jab Divya, Veer aur Suhana pehli baar Ava ke concert me gaye the aur Veer pehli baar uss se mila tha.


Hande-Er-el

Na sirf usne Pitcher ko pakadwaya tha balki Ava ke liye bhi raaste se ek samsasya ko dur kar diya tha.

Crimson ki poori tigdi ko Veer ne barbaad kar ke rakh diya tha. Suhana ke sang woh hotel aaya hua tha. Balcony me woh khada hua tha jab usse koi dikha.

Yahi woh waqt tha jab Veer ne pehli baar Crimson ko dekha.



Yahi woh waqt tha jab Suhana aur uske peeche gang pad gayi thi. Crimson jo trailer dene ki baat kar raha tha woh yahi tha. Suhana ka Veer ko bachaane ke liye goli lagna aur Crimson ka Veer ko yu wahi chhor bas system ke baare me raaz bataate hue chale jaana.

Kyuki abhi bhi, possibility sirf 70% hi hui thi. Dono ko ek dusre ke raaste me aur aane ki zaroorat thi.

***

Par kya ye sab yahi samaapt ho gaya? Hargiz nahi! Investigation department poore zorr-shor se tehqiqaat karne me jut chuka tha.

Aur derr nahi lagni thi unhe Crimson ko dhundhne ke liye.


[Ab kya? Department jald hi tumhe trace kar lega.]

Crimson Paris me apni hotel ke kamre me baitha hua ek soch me dooba hua tha. Aage kuaa tha toh peeche khaayi. El taraf woh unknown caller toh doosri taraf uske peeche lagi Investigation Department kib team.

‘Mein chaahu toh abhi unn namoono ko maar du. Lekin aise me mera samay bhi barbaad hoga. Mein expose bhi zyada ho jaunga. Aur ye log maan’ne waale nahi hai. Akhir kitno ko maarunga mein? Gatar me macchar ki tarah ye firse naye naye jhund me aate hi jayenge.’


[Toh-]

Woh muskuraaya.

‘Samay aa gaya hai ki mein apna teesra aur akhiri daav khelu.’

Aur usne apna phone uthaate hue ek call laga diya.

*Ring* *Ring*

DGSI ke Head ke cabin me telephone par call aaya. Xavier jo apni seat par baithe kuch reports ko padhne me laga hua tha usne call uthaaya.

Xavier : Hello?

Crimson : Paris me ek bohut bada hamla hone waala hai.

Sunte hi Xavier apni seat se uth khada hua.

Xavier : K-Kaun? Kaun ho tum? Kya bol rahe ho?

Crimson (smiles) : Kaun hu, kaha se hu, ye sab sawaal puch kar samay zaaya kyu kar rahe ho. Zaroori soochna de raha hu. Paris me jald hi bohut bada terror attack hone waala hai.

Xavier : Y-Ye kya bakwaas kar rahe ho? Kaun ho tum? Tumhe andaaza bhi hai kis se baat ho rahi hai tumhari?

Crimson : DGSI ke Head, Mister Xavier se. Right?

Xavier : T-Tum-??

Crimson (smiles) : Woh firse dohraane waala hai. Woh firse ghatit hone waala hai.

Xavier : K-Kya ghatit hone waala hai? Kya kehna chaah rahe ho tum?

Xavier ne hadbadaate hue apni team me se phone call ko record karne ke liye ishaara kiya.

Crimson (smiles) : Call record kar rahe ho? Baad me trace bhi karoge. Hai na?

Xavier : Seedhe seedhe jawaab dete ho ya-?

Crimson : Shhh! Apni aukaat me raho Xavier!!

Xavier (gusse me) : Youuuuu-!!!!

Crimson : Aur chup-chaap meri baat suno. House of the Killers Paris me ghatit hone jaa raha hai.

Xavier : H-House? K-Kya? Ye kya bol rahe ho?

Crimson : House of the Killers ka leader jald hi Paris me aayega aur saare sheher me hahakaar fela ke rakh dega. Kayi mauto ko anjaam dega woh.

Xavier : Kaun? Kiski baat kar rahe ho tum? Hello?

Crimson : Agar meri baat ka yakeen na ho. Toh Las Vegas ke investigation department se House of the Killers ki report maang lena. Woh bhugte hue baithe hai. Umeed hai ek sheher dusre sheher ki madad kar hi dega. Aur mujhe apna shubh-chintak hi samajhna. Agla call mein kuch din baad lagaunga. Hope tab tak reports aa chuki hongi.

Xavier : H-Hello? Hello!!!!

Par call tab tak cut ho chuka tha.

Xavier ke poore chehre par paseene ki boondi saji hui thi.

"Jald se jald Las Vegas ke Investigation Department ke Head se mujhe contact karwao. Jaldi-!!!!!"

Woh zorr se garja toh kaam karne waale log fauran hi uss kaam me lag gaye.

Kuch hi derr me Xavier aur Nolan ek dusre ke contact me the.

Request rakhte hue DGSI ne reports ki maang rakhi toh badle me Investigation Department ne kuch hi dino me waha se HOK ki report bhej di.

Report padhte hi poora DGSI staff hakka-bakka reh chuka tha.

Itna bada game?

Itna bada maut ka khel khela gaya tha Las Vegas me?

Report me kahi par bhi Veer ka naam nahi tha. Uski privacy aur apni izzat bachaane ke liye Investigation Department ne Veer ka naam report me nahi daala tha. Kyuki woh department ka hissa nahi tha.

Xavier (screams) : Abhi ke abhi!!! Agent Chris aur Agent Terashima ko bulao. Abhi-!!!!

Meeting shuru hui aur woh sabhi ek table ke ird-gird baithe hue the.

Chris : Kya khabar pukhta hai Sir?

Xavier : Nahi! Lekin, hume alert rehna hoga. Hum isse nazar-andaaz nahi kar sakte hai.

Terashima : Right! Report ke hisaab se teen procedure me ye kiya jaata hai.

Xavier : Hmm!

Terashima : Yaani pehle woh card liya jaata hai. Fir logo ko island bulaaya jaata hai ya leke jaaya jaata hai. Right?

Xavier (nods) : Hmm!

Terashima : Aur ye celebrities ke saath kiya jaata hai. Aur fir waha pe maut!!

Chris : Hmm!

Xavier : Aur isliye tum dono undercover rahoge. Andre tumhare saath rahega. Recording ka kaam usse saupa hai mene.

Chris : Okay!

Woh sabhi baithe hi the, jab punaah Xavier ka telephone baj utha. Call ussi ka tha-

Crimson (smiles) : Kya ab meri baat pe yakeen ho gaya?

Xavier : T-Tum firse-!?

Crimson : Savdhaan kar raha hu. Mujhe toh tumhe thank you kehna chahiye. Alert raho. Nigrani rakho. Jald hi woh apne mission ko anjaam dega.

Xavier : Tum-!!!

Par firse, call cut ho gaya.

Terashima : Hume planning karni chahiye.

Idhar DGSI ki planning shuru hui aur udhar Crimson ne Ava ko Las Vegas se Paris bulwa liya.

Ava (growls) : Ab kya maqsad hai tumhara!!!?

Crimson : Veer ko message karo aur uss se kaho ki tum musibat me ho. Don't mention anything. Kaho ki help chahiye ASAP.

Majboori ke chalte usse woh karna pada. Yahi woh message tha jo Veer ko Ava dwaara aaya tha.

Jiske chalte Veer Ava ke liye Paris tak aaya.

Crimson : Apna maqsad mein tumhe bata hi chuka hu.

Ava : B-But he's innocent-

Crimson (frowns) : Tumhe kab se uss se itna lagaav ho gaya? Just do your work. Raat me tumhe usse alley me le jaana hai. Waha slot machines hongi.

Ava : Kyuuu??!

Crimson (smiles) : DGSI Veer par nigraani rakhegi. Aur tabhi mein apni gang aur nakli police force ko bhejunga. Woh waha hamla kar DGSI ko galat sanket de dengi. Jis se unhe ye lagega ki Veer pe hamla karna allowed hai. Zaahir hai tab woh bhaag ke niklega. Aur tumhe-!!! Usse meri owned uss building me laana hai.

Ava krodh me usse ghoorti rahi. Par chaah ke bhi kuch na kar saki. Kyuki Sweetie ne Crimson ko Grace Martin ke hospital ka pata de hi diya tha. Aur Crimson Grace ko dhundh chuka tha.

Alag alag buildings pe snipers bithwa ke Grace ko target kar ke rakha hua tha.

Ava apne bandhe haatho se sab kuch karne par majboor hoti gayi. Yaha tak ki uss unknown caller ne bhi usse Crimson ke saath kaam karne ke liye kaha hua tha. Kaise bhaagti inn sab se bach ke?


[Plan is good.]

Crimson ke mann me awaaz aayi.

Ye big game racha tha usne. Investigation Department jab uske peeche pada hi hua tha toh kyu na unhe unke target tak pohucha diya jaaye?

Issi tarah usne Veer ko fassa diya tha. Veer ka naam House of the Killers ka rachayita ghoshit hone waala tha.

Aur wahi hua bhi,

Ava usse nirdesh anusaar unn alleys me leke gayi.

Veer ke na dekhte hue woh khud ko nervous dikhaati jo Andre sab kuch record kar raha tha.

Terashima : Dekho! Natalia kaise darr rahi hai.

Andre : Right! Zaroor dhamka ke rakha gaya hai. This motherfucker-!!!

Utne me hi Crimson ki fake police waha ghusi aur idhar Terashima aur Chris ko galat jankaari haath me lag gayi.

Andre : Wh-What?? Cops usse shoot kar rahe hai? Matlab hum usse maar sakte hai?

Chris : Let's go!!!

Yahi woh waqt tha jab Ava waha se bhaagte hue Crimson ki owned IT building me gayi. Uske peeche jo gang members lage the unhe pata tha kya karna hai.

Ava chup chaap khadi rahi aur gang waalo ne usse baandh diya.

Fir woh rocket launcher ka blast. Veer ka bike utha ke bhaagna. Yahi sab toh ghatit hua tha.

Bilkul wesa hi ho raha tha jesa Crimson ne DGSI ko bataya tha. Jesa department se bheji gayi reports me likha hua tha.

Veer ne alleys me se woh pass khareeda hi tha. Las vegas me bhi card khareeda gaya tha. Chris aur Terashima ko unka pehla saboot mil chuka tha.

Dhamaake ke baad Veer ka island ki orr bhaagna aur celebrity Natalia ki kidnapping.

Aur ye tha dusra saboot jo unhe mil chuka tha.

Sab juch dohraya hi toh jaa raha tha. Matlab House of the Killers sach me racha jaa raha tha firse.

Koi sandeh nahi tha isme ki Veer hi ab-

House of the Killers ka rachayita tha.

Crimson apni tarqeeb me qamyaab ho chuka tha.

Bas ek cheez chorr ke.

*Bang*

Kisi ne uss par goli chala di thi peeche se.

Majbooran Veer ko chhor usse waha se bhaagna pada.

*Bang*

Ek aur bullet aayi aur uske seene par thodi si chot karte hue ghis ke nikal gayi.

Crimson uss source ka peeche karta gaya. Par tab tak goli chalaane waala vyakti bhaag chuka tha.

"Damn it!!! Madarchod hai kaun???"

Apne basement me pohuchte hi Sweetie uska waha intezaar kar rahi thi.

Sweetie : You are hurt.


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Par usne koi jawaab na diya. Koi tha jo usse maarne ki koshish kar raha tha. Par kaun?

[Kahi ye wahi caller toh nahi?]

'Ho sakta hai! Lekin filhaal Veer ko Island leke jaana hai. Tabhi toh uspe aarop lagwa paunga mein. Uss par aarop lagte hi DGSI aur Investigation Department mera peecha chorr denge. Aur aarop lagne ke baad hi mission ki possibility jald hi 100% pohuch jayegi. Aur tab-!!! Mein usse maar paunga!!!'

Aur wesa hi hua. Veer harr taraf se fass chuka tha. Itni badi scheme uske peeth peeche uske liye rachi gayi thi uss bechaare ko andaaza bhi nahi tha.

Par Veer ne aenn mauke par baazi palat di.

Crimson ki Mission possibility 99% tak pohuchte hi,

Veer ne khud ko qurbaan kar diya.

Crimson ka saara khel dhara ka dhara reh gaya. HOK toh gaya hi saath hi Veer ko maarne ka jo mission milne waala tha, woh bhi ab gaya. Kyuki Veer jaa chuka tha.

Sthiti aisi thi jaise khade lund pe kisi ne laat maar di ho.

Aur isliye woh-

"Kaha gaya woh?? Where is he-!!!??"

Ava ka gala pakde uss par gussa nikaal raha tha. Itni badi machli uske haath se yu hi nikal gayi thi. Aur ye Ava dekhti rahi.

Parantu,

*BAAAAAMMMMMM*

Ek laat padte hi woh dur jaa gira.

Woh jaanta tha ye ladki Ava koi strong card rakhe hue thi. Wese hi uski condition sahi nahi thi.


[Don't fight her! You don't have an arm. Bullet tumne nikaal li hai lekin wound heal nahi hua hai. You need rest.]

Majbooran Crimson ko Grace Martin ko taak rahe snipers hataane hi pade.

Accha hua jo woh nahi bhida uss samay Ava se-

Kyuki woh nahi jaanta tha ki Ava kya rakhi hui thi.

Uske paas jo card tha woh tha-

*Ding*


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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
It's big brain time. Ye update dimaag ki taare khol dega. Haha! Update consists of 7k words approximately. Dekhte hai kitne dots ko connect kar paate hai. Agla update hume Veer ki jankaari dega. Target abhi bhi wahi hai. 140. Toh like thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka.
Dhanyavaad! ✨
Is series ka sabse dhasu and important update thaa yaani ke kai sarey system hai aur crimson ki halat unknown ke samney aisi ho thee jaisi veer ki crimson ke aage ab veer in sab se kaisay nikalta hai aur system ki sacchai kaisy samne aayi hai.
In sab se badi baat system ka RAAZ khul pata hai ki nahi shayad asli villan bhi is story ka mil gaya hai unknown caller.
 

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Update - 144 ~ The News

Ab tak...

[Don't fight her! You don't have an arm. Bullet tumne nikaal li hai lekin wound heal nahi hua hai. You need rest.]

Majbooran Crimson ko Grace Martin ko taak rahe snipers hataane hi pade.

Accha hua jo woh nahi bhida uss samay Ava se-

Kyuki woh nahi jaanta tha ki Ava ki kya rakhi hui thi.

Uske paas jo card tha woh tha-

*Ding*

Vinona-s-mark


Ab aage...

Sonia’s House, Mumbai
Night ~ 10 : 12 PM


Apne bhavya aalishan bangle ke bade se kamre me Sonia apni night dress me bed par laiti ek magazine padh rahi thi.


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Side table par hi ek kaanch ka glass tha jisme thodi si red wine maujood thi.

*Knock* *Knock*

Uske darwaze par tabhi khat-khatahat hui.

“Come in!” Aur Sonia ne andar se hi nirdesh diya.

Darwaza khulte hi ek ladki kamre ke andar pravesh ki.

Sonia : Suchi! Aao! I was waiting for you! Sorry to call you at this hour.

Suchi : No! It’s fine Miss!

Ladki ka naam Suchi tha. Woh ek navy blue color ka business outfit pehni hui thi. Haami bharte hue woh fir aage aayi.

Kamre me bas halki-halki roshni ho rakhi thi. Night lamps aur fragrant candles se hi room raushan tha.

Sonia : Any news?

Suchi (nods) : Yes Miss! Miss Suhana, Miss Kaera, Miss Ava, sabhi ke baare me news hai. Which one would you like to hear first?

Sonia : Let’s start with ‘dii’ first.

Suchi (nods) : Yes! Woh Las Vegas se Paris gayi hui hai.

Sonia (frowns) : Dii Paris gayi hai? Woh bhi iss haalat me? Mene unhe kaha tha ki jald se jald ghar lautna. Ab samajh aaya kyu woh mujhe promise nahi de rahi thi. Paris achanak kyu jaana hua?

Suchi : I’m sorry Miss! Abhi ye nahi pata chala hai ki woh Paris kyu gayi hai. Bohut jaldi me gayi hai. Kuch baat hai shayad. Lekin, hum jald hi pata laga lenge ki woh kyu waha gayi hai. Aur mere hisaab se mujhe anumaan hai iska. Mein aage apni baat me rakhti hu.

Sonia (frowns) : I see! Kya unke saath Prakash Uncle bhi hai?

Suchi (nods) : Yes Miss! Aur ek lady bhi hai. Filhaal, uss lady ke baare me koi info nahi hai. Magar, pata lag jayega jald hi.

Sonia : Hmm! Agar Prakash Uncle unke saath hai toh mujhe chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi. She’ll be fine! What about Kaera?

Suchi : Nexacom Industries Limited abhi kuch pareshaniyo se joojh rahi hai.

Sonia : Hmm?

Nexacom Industries Limited. Ye woh company thi jiska poore India me dabdaba toh tha hi saath hi videsho me bhi apni chhaap chhori hui thi. Dusre shabdo me, Kishore yaani ki Kaera ke pita ki company.



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India ki sabse jaani-maani ek multinational conglomerate. Business itna vividh tha ki anya kayi business sectors isme shaamil the.

Energy, Telecommunications, Mass-media, Infrastructure, Textiles, Information Technology services, Goods supplies se leke na jaane kaha kaha haath daale hui thi Nexacom.

Sponsorships aur partnerships me hi itna aage rehti thi Nexacom ki aaye din akhbaaro me charcha ka vishay bani rehti thi.

Aur iss safalta ke peeche ka raaz kya tha?

Kaera!



feb-2015

Jisne apni buddhimatta aur soojh-boojh se company ki kaaya palat di thi. Kishore ne apne pita ki madad se ye empire khada zaroor kiya tha magar Kaera thi jo company ke profit percentage ko alag starr pe leke jaati thi.

Kintu, abhi yahi company kuch samasyao se joojh rahi thi. Kishore apni company ka Chairman aur Managing director toh tha hi magar uski anupasthiti me Kaera bhi ek Chairman aur MD ka role hi adaa karti thi. Company ki dusri owner wahi thi.

Toh kya haal hoga aisi company ka agar Kaera, company ke mehatvpoorn nirnay lene waali leader apne kaam se chutti lele?

Sonia : Nexacom problem me hai? Aisa kya hua?

Suchi : Miss Kaera kaafi dino se kahi gayab hai. Na hi unki koi news aa rahi hai aur na hi kahi par woh spot hui hai. Recent ki sabhi important deals aur meetings me Nexacom ki taraf se koi aur hi aaya hai attend karne.

Sonia (frowns) : Ye nahi ho sakta. Kaera business ko leke ekdum serious rehti hai. Woh kabhi aisa kar hi nahi sakti. Unless…

Suchi : ??

Sonia : Something must have happened. Kaha par hai woh?

Suchi : Mere hisaab se woh apne ghar par hi hai. Ya ho sakta hai woh kahi gayi ho. Woh kahi bhi spot nahi hui hai toh pehle case ki probability zyada hai.

Sonia : I see!

Kaera ki hi tarah Sonia bhi apni company me wahi role adaa karti thi. India ki jaani-maani automobiles companies me se ek Elite motors uske pita Shailendra ki bohut badi companies me se ek thi.



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Sonia ke sang Suhana bhi kabhi kabhi uski madad karwaya karti thi. Parantu, Suhana kisi ek company par kendrit nahi rehti thi. Woh Elite motors me bhi yogdaan deti, toh kabhi apni khud ki companies aur partnerships par dhyaan deti.

Aur itna hi nahi, uske pati Gaurav ki IT based company ke chakkar bhi woh laga leti thi kabhi kabhi. Kul mila ke usse kayi jagah se profits hote the. Aneko businesses me woh bhaag li hui thi. Jiske chalte uska bade-bade prasiddh logo se connection bhi utna hi mazboot tha.

Elite motors sampoorn automobiles services se leke luxury cars services, unki manufacturing, accesories aur apne khud ke product bhi designs karti thi.

Isme koi sandeh ki baat hi nahi thi ki Kaera ke baad agar India me influential logo ki soochi taiyaar hoti toh usme Sonia ka naam zaroor shaamil hota. Aur jis hisaab se woh tarakki ki orr company ko badha rahi thi shayad Kaera ke theek neeche hi uska naam hota.

Sonia ne Suchi ki batayi gayi jankari ko dimaag me rakha aur aage puchi,

Sonia : And what about Ava?

Suchi : Ye news ho sakta hai aapko shocking lage Miss.

Sonia : Shocking? Kyu?

Suchi : Miss Ava bhi Paris gayi hui thi recently apne new song ke video shoot ke liye.

Sonia : Isme shocking kya Suchi?

Suchi : She…! She was kidnapped.

Khabar sunte hi bistar par laiti Sonia achanak hi uth ke baith gayi.

Sonia (gasps) : What???

Suchi (nods) : Jii!

Suchi aage badhte hue aayi aur usne apne haatho me pakda hua tablet Sonia ko thamaya.

Suchi : She was kidnapped. Par ab woh safe hai. Pehle criminal ki picture France ke news channel par broadcast hui thi. Lekin pata nahi kyu abhi kuch hi ghante pehle unhone saari criminal ki pictures ko news channel aur YouTube channels se bhi hata diya hai. Pata nahi kyu?

Sonia : That’s-!!! Ava theek toh hai na? Kaha hai woh?

Suchi : Woh safe hai Miss! DGSI France ki agency hai internal security ke liye. Unhone Miss Ava ko safely rescue kar liya hai.

Sonia (sighs) : Thank god!

Suchi : Aur jaisa ki mene pehle kaha tha ki mera ek anumaan hai kyu Miss Suhana Paris gayi hai. Woh yahi hai ki shayad Miss Suhana Miss Ava ke baare me hi jankari lene gayi hai.

Sonia : Ah! Right! Aisa ho sakta hai. But still-

Suchi : Rahi baat ki kyu France ne Criminal ki pictures ko hataya? Toh uske baare me bhi mein jald hi pata lagwa lungi Miss.

Sonia : Hmm! Mujhe dii se baat karni hogi.

Suchi : And that is all, Miss.

Sonia (nods) : Mmm! Thank you Suchi!

Suchi : It’s my job Miss!

Sonia : Aur chinta mat karo. Tumhari baat mujhe yaad hai. Tumhare baare me kisi ko kuch pata nahi chalega jab tak tum nahi chahogi.

Suchi : Thank you Miss!

Sonia (smiles) : I know how to treat my employees. You can leave now.

Suchi (nods) : Mmm!

Aur Suchi jis tarah shaanti se kamre me aayi thi, ussi tarah baahar ko nikal gayi.

Suchi! Na sirf ek honhaar ladki thi balki apne kaarya ke prati nishtha-vaan bhi thi aur samarpit bhi.

Sonia bhale hi Kaera se hamesha peeche rahi ho. Kintu, woh bodi nahi thi. Bewakoof nahi thi. Jaanti thi ki uski badi behan Suhana Prakash Uncle ke saath milke kayi baatein uss se chhipaaye hue hai.

Aur isliye, usne Suchi ko hire kiya hua tha. Secretary ka kaam toh Prakash Uncle hi karte the.

Parantu, logo aur unke vyavsaay ke baare me khufiya jankari ikhatta karna, iss kaam ke liye Sonia ne Suchi ko zimmedari di hui thi.

Aur woh apna kaam bohut acche dhang se kar rahi thi.

Suchi ko yu hi nahi apna personal information seeker banaya hua tha Sonia ne. Suchi ki ek khaas baat thi.

Aur woh ye thi ki woh-

Ruchika ki badi behan thi.

Wahi Ruchika, jo Kaera ki personal secretary hai.

Jaan-boojh ke Sonia ne Suchi ka chayan kiya. Par ye bhi ek kismat ka khel tha.

Kyuki, Suchi kayi saal pehle hi apne ghar se bhaag chuki thi. Uski apni ek kahani thi. Uski apni ek zubaani thi.

Kuch kaaran the jinke chalte woh limelight me nahi aana chaah rahi thi abhi. Aur yahi vachan Sonia ne usse diya hua tha.

Jab tak Suchi khud nahi chaahegi tab tak uski jankaari uske parivaar waalo aur samaaj ko nahi di jayegi.

Idhar Suchi ke jaate hi Sonia apni kisi soch me ghum ho gayi.

'Tumse bhi kitne samay se mulaqat nahi hui….! Veer!'

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Paris,
Night ~ 9 : 18 PM


Suchi ne jo khabar Sonia ko di thi woh ekdum pukhta thi. Jhoothi nahi.

Usne theek bataya tha ki criminal ki photos news channel me pehle broadcast ki gayi thi. Parantu, ab?

Ab unhe hata diya gaya tha. Matlab Veer ki photos ko ab news me nahi dikhaya jaa raha tha.

Bas khabaro ka silsila hi jaari tha.

Kyu?

Kyuki, Las Vegas ke Investigation Department ne apni report darj kar di thi.

Dhanyavaad ho Divya, Mike aur Nolan ka jinhone ye maang rakhi.

Investigation Department ki report me saaf-saaf batla diya gaya tha ki Veer koi criminal nahi balki House of the Killers ko pakdaane waale sehkaariyo me se ek hai.

Uski aham bhumika ke chalte hi Vegas me HOK ko thikaane lagaya gaya tha.

Ye report milte hi DGSI ko ek bohut bada jhatka laga tha.

Las Vegas ne HOK ki report pehle bhej ke France ke upar ek ehsaan kiya tha. Badle me ye swabhaavik tha ki France bhi zaroorat ke samay Las Vegas ke kaam aaye.

France kabhi nahi chaahega ki Vegas se uski koi berr rahe.

Aur isliye, Investigation department ne apni maang rakhi. Ya yu kahe ki Divya, Nolan aur Mike ne apni maang rakhi ki Veer ki photos saari news media se hata di jaaye.

Jab tak Veer ke khilaaf 100% saboot na ho tab tak usse mujrim kaise thehraya jaa sakta hai? Kaise uske upar itne bade aarop lagaye jaa sakte hai?

DGSI ne baat ko samajh fauran hi saari tasveero ko hata diya. Veer ke upar laga ek laanchan abhi kam se kam dhundhla ho gaya tha. Mita nahi tha. Par abhi ke liye dhundhla hi sahi.

Magar, ye jhatka toh kuch bhi nahi tha. Asli jhatka toh unhe tab laga jab Terashima hosh me aayi.

DGSI ke Head, Xavier hospital ke ek normal ward me Terashima ke saamne khade hue the.

Xavier : Kya kaha tumne?

Terashima : H-He…! He saved me!

Terashima ki kahi gayi baat jaise kisi bomb ki tarah aake unke upar fati.

Unki dimaag ki taare hi short-circuit ho chuki thi.

Bhala mujrim kyu apne peeche lage vyaktiyo ki jaan bachayega?

Parantu, Terashima ki zubaani toh kuch aur hi bayaa kar rahi thi. Usse hosh me aaye abhi kuch ghante hi beete the aur uss se sawaal jawaab karne ke liye Xavier aur anya uske saamne the.

Chris aur Eric bhi ek-ek ward me bharti the.

Xavier : Uss ladke ne tumhari jaan bachaayi? Tum jaanti ho na ye kitna bada case hai? Mazaak ka waqt nahi hai ye. Nurse? Kahi sarr pe zyada chot aa gayi hai kya iske?

Nurse : Huh?

Terashima : I'm telling the truth!!!!

Jab usne thodi tezz awaaz me bola toh ward me ek khamoshi chhaa gayi. Sabhi ka dhyaan punah Terashima par chala gaya.

Uski palke jhuki hui thi, jaise maano woh uss pal ko yaad kar rahi ho.

*Bang*

Woh goli ki goonj uske kaano me fel gayi, jo usne apne haatho se chalaayi thi uss shaks pe.

Veer pe…!

Sab kuch tasveer bann-bann ke uske dimaag me aata jaa raha tha.

Terashima (nods) : I remember everything. Mujhe sab yaad hai.

Agle hi pal na jaane kyu par uski aankhein bheeg gayi.

Andre : T-Terashima?

Andre hairaan reh gaya. Terashima kabhi roti nahi thi. Agent bann'ne ke baad woh itna serious rehti thi ki uske emotions bohut hi kam jhalakte the. Par aaj-

Terashima : Mujhe yaad hai. Mein usse warning de rahi thi. Surrender karne ke liye. Uske baad tumse baat hui thi Andre. Tumne kaha tha ki shoot kar sakte hai.

Andre : H-Haan! Mujhe toh Sir se hi message aaya tha.

Terashima : Aur mein uspe aim hi ki hui thi. Lekin, mein jaha khadi thi. Waha woh stone walls me lage patthar…! Woh toot ke mere upar gir pade.

Andre : !!!?

Terashima : Aur tabhi woh ladka..! Mere upar kooda. Mujhe laga woh mujh par hamla karne aa raha hai isliye mene…! Usse shoot kar diya.

Xavier : Toh ye baat hai.

Terashima : Hmm! Lekin, woh mujhe bachaane ke liye aage badha tha. Aur uske baad, saare patthar uss bechaare ke upar girte chale gaye. Usne mujhe bachaya. A-Aur mene usse-

Andre : Asli khel toh usne hamare saath khela tha. Abhi tak uski body nahi mili hai. Case toh ulajhta hi jaa raha hai.

Terashima (uthate hue) : Uski body nahi mili? P-Par wo toh pattharo ke neeche tha na? K-Kya hua usse?

Andre : Wo waha se nikal aaya tha. Sir! Ab kya? Ye maamla toh aur pecheeda ho gaya hai.

Xavier : Mujhe ab bhi yakeen nahi ho raha.

Terashima (niraasha se) : Agar wo mujrim hai, to usne mujhe kyu bachaya Sir? Ye jaante hue ki mein ek agent hu aur usse pakadne ke liye aayi hu.

Andre : Terashima ki baat me dam hai Sir. Upar se Vegas ke department se jo report aayi hai usme woh ladka ek normal citizen hai jisne HOK ko pakdawaya hai.

Terashima : That's-!!! Woh mujhse keh bhi raha tha ki hume koi galat-fehmi hui hai.

Andre : Mujhe kehna toh nahi chahiye Sir. Par sh-shayad-!!! Humse bohut badi galti ho gayi hai iss baar.

Terashima : Agar woh ladka innocent nikla toh hum kabhi bhi iss paap se khud ko mukt nahi kar payenge Sir.

Xavier ke chehre par agle hi pal paseena jhalakne laga.

Xavier : Accha hua jo samay pe woh photos hatwa di mene.

Andre : Sir, woh bench par jab baitha tha tab Crimson kar ke kuch keh raha tha. Ye shabd yaad hai mujhe.

Xavier : Crimson?

Terashima : K-Kahi woh caller hi toh nahi? Jisne hume info di? Kahi aisa toh nahi ki hum uski chaal me fass gaye? Kahi wahi toh ye aadmi nahi? Crimson shabd uss se hi related toh nahi?

Terashima ki baatein sunn dono hi shaant reh gaye. Agar aisa hota hai toh kya muh dikhayenge woh Vegas ke Investigation Department ko?

Aur agar uss ladke ke desh ki sarkaar ko ye baat pata lag gayi. Toh kya jawaab denge unhe?

Xavier : Andre!! Terashima ko araam karne do! Mere saath baahar aao.

Andre : Yes Sir!!!

Terashima ko yu hi uske ward me araam karne ke liye chhor woh dono hi baahar chale gaye.

Aur idhar bechari Terashima ek baar fir apne khyalato me doob gayi. Uss se pehli baar itni badi galti kaise ho gayi? Kaise woh ek nirdosh ko pehchaan na paayi?



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Harr koi iss samay Veer ke baare me sochne me laga hua tha. Fir chaahe uske chaahne waale ho, uske shubh-chintak, usse galat samajhne waale ya fir uske dushman.

***

Yaha ye sawaal-jawaab chal rahe the toh wahi issi sheher me koi aur bhi tha jo yahi sawaal-jawaab karne kisi aur ke paas aaya hua tha. Bas, tareeqa thoda alag tha.

*BAMMM*

Table par zorr se haatho ko patakne ki awaaz aayi aur ek aurat behad gusse me apni kursi se khadi ho gayi.

Suhana! Uski aankhein gusse me laal aur aasuo se namm thi.



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Suhana : Mein tumse kuch puch rahi hu!! Jawaab do!!!

Aur uske saamne thi,

Ava!!

Ava ne apni nazre churaate hue chehra ferr liya. Aankhein toh uski bhi bheegi hui thi.



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Ava : Mein apna jawaab rakh chuki hu Suhana!

Suhana : Woh mere sawaal ka jawaab nahi. Seedhe-seedhe batao mujhe kaha hai woh? Aur ye news…! Ye sab kya chal raha hai? Kyu tumne usse yaha bulaaya? I WANT TO KNOW EVERYTHING!!!!



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Ava : I-I…! I called him for protection.

Suhana (screams) : Ye jaante hue bhi ki Divya abhi busy hai? Kis haq se tumne usse akele yaha bulaaya? Tumhe koi khabar bhi hai ki uske ghar par kya haalat ho rahi hogi uske parivar ki? They fucking don't know anything!!!

Chillaate hue Suhana ne table par rakhe saare kaanch ke glass bikher ke neeche gira diye.

Ava : I..!

Suhana : Uski choti behan ka call aaya tha mere paas. Kya jawaab du usse mein? Woh puch rahi hai mujhse ki bhaiya kaha hai!! Kya bolu uss se mein? FUCKING TELL ME!!!

Jab Ava ko ye pata chala ki Veer ka parivaar uski raah dekh raha hai, toh jaise glaani ka bada sa patthar uske upar aake gir pada.

Ab jaake usse bodh hua.

Woh akeli thi. Par uski tarah sansaar me harr koi akela nahi tha. Unke paas unka parivaar tha. Ava bechari dedh saal se akeli thi.

Jaise woh ye baat bhul hi gayi thi ki Veer koi awaara ladka nahi, balki kisi ke parivaar ki jaan hai. Kisi ki amaanat hai. Kisi ka sahaara hai. Kisi ka saathi toh kisi ka pyaar.

Bodh hote hi uski aankho se apne aap hi aansu panapne lage.



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Suhana (growls) : TELL ME!! WHERE… IS… HE… NOW!!!!

Ava : M-Mujhe nahi pata! I don't know anything!

Usne ek baar fir muh ferr liya. Woh kaise sachhaayi bata sakti thi? Chaah ke bhi muh se kuch ugal nahi sakti thi.

Ava : Mujhe nahi pata kuch. Mujhe theek se kuch yaad nahi. Waha kya ho raha tha mein nahi jaanti. I-I don't know-

Suhana : Toh kaha gaya woh??? Kyu ye DGSI waale gaandu uske peeche pade the? Kyu uski tasveer b-baar baar…! Baar baar-

Aur wo ro padi.

Suhana (sobs) : *sniff* Kyu uski tasveer baar baar news pe aa rahi thi? *sniff* Bolo? K-Kyu??? Jawaab do? Kyu likh ke aa raha tha ki criminal has been executed. Kya matlab hua iska??

Ava : I-I don't know!!! I don't remember. Shayad unhe koi galat-fehmi ho gayi.

Usne abhi itna kaha hi tha ki Suhana ne agle hi shan uski dress ki collor ke hisse ko pakda aur zorr se jakad usse kheench liya,

Ava : !!!!

Suhana ki aankhein bhayanak hi buri tarah gusse me feli hui thi.

Suhana : Ye mein akhiri warning de rahi hu tumhe Miss Ava Grace Martin!!! Agar tumne ab mujhe kuch nahi bataya, toh mein bhul jaungi ki tum Sonu ki koi dost bhi thi.

Ava chaahti toh badi hi asaani se khud ko chhura leti. System ke aage Suhana ki ye pakad baccho ki pakad jaisi thi. Parantu, usne aisa kuch bhi nahi kiya. Woh Suhana ki giraft me hi bani rahi.

Ava : Mujhe nahi pata Suhana! M-Mein kisi kamre me thi. Bandhi hui thi. Baahar kya ho raha tha mein nahi jaanti.

Suhana ka iss baar maatha thanak utha. Woh jaanti thi ki Ava kuch na kuch zaroor jaanti hai. Magar bata nahi rahi. Woh agle hi pal itni zorr se garji ki baahar khadi Ashita aur Prakash Uncle tak ko uski awaaz sunaayi de gayi,

Suhana (screams) : AVA GRACE MARTIN!!! TUMHARI YE MAJAAL-! TUM SACH SACH BATAATI HO YA-

"MARR CHUKA HAI WOH!!!!"

Ava ke bol poore kamre me goonj gaye.

Achanak hi waha ek sannaata chha gaya!

Suhana kisi moorti ki tarah bann ke wahi jamm gayi.


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Ava ke kapde par uski pakad bhi dheeli hoke chooth gayi. Uski aankhon ne jaise apna focus kho diya.

Woh jaise shoonya hoke reh gayi. Uska mastishk kaam karna hi band kar diya jaise kuch palo ke liye.

Aur iss baar Ava ki awaaz oonchi ho gayi. Rote hue woh chillaayi,

Ava (screams) : Marr chuka hai woh. HE'S DEAD!!! AND GONE!!!

Subakte hue woh bhi dobaara apni kursi par girte hue rone lagi.

Budbudaate hue abhi bhi uske hontho se ahista-ahista lafz baahar nikal rahe the.

Ava : H-He's gone-!!! Gone! No more with us-!!!

Suhana jo baar-baar ratt lagaaye hue thi jawaab jaan'ne ki, usse uska jawaab Ava ne de diya tha.

Kintu, Suhana ke liye ye jhatka jitna dikhaayi de raha tha uss se kahi zyada bada tha vaastav me. Ghaat aisi pohuchi thi usse andhruni starr par ki usse khud abhaas nahi tha iss baat ka.

Agle hi shan usse aisa laga jaise uske badan se poori urja kisi ne kheench li ho.

Woh ladkhadayi, aur kursi ke saath-saath hi woh khud bhi zameen par girke behosh gayi.

"Suhaaanaaa!!!!"

Ava ki akhiri awaaz thi jo usne behoshi me jaane se pehle suni. Uske baad andhkaar sa chhaa gaya.

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Bhedo ke jhund ko jab charwaane ke liye unhe kheto me le jaaya jaata hai, toh unke saath unka ek gadariya hota hai.

Unki rehnumaayi ke liye. Unke netratva ke liye. Jo harr samay unki dekh-rekh aur parvaah karta hai.

Par agar wahi gadariya achanak khud kahi gaayab ho jaaye ya kho jaaye toh?

Toh, saari bhede titar-bitar ho jaati hai. Unki samajh nahi aata kya kare. Gadariye ke liye weh vyakul ho uthati hai. Bechain hoke machalne lagti hai.

Aur Veer ka parivaar iss waqt inhi bhed ke samaan ho chuka tha.

Lagbhag 3 hafte guzar chuke the Bhavna ki akhiri waqt baat hue Veer se.

Teen hafte! Maano ab mahina hi hone jaa raha tha kuch hi dino me.

Uske ghar me jo mahaul abhi bana hua tha woh dekha nahi jaa sakta tha.

Harr koi itna pareshaan aur vyaakul tha ki samajh nahi aa raha tha kya kare.

Kavya ka phone udhar Suhana ab utha nahi rahi thi.

Bhavna, Arohi, Tej aur Shweta toh Paris jaane ke liye tickets ka bandobast bhi karne lage the.

Par ek aur sansani fela dene waali khabar unke haath lagi.

Paris me sabhi flights ko rok diya gaya tha. International ki incoming flights sab band kar di gayi thi.

Unhe ye bhi pata chala ki ek bohut bada Terrorist attack hua tha Paris me.

Ye khabar paate hi jaise unki saansein atak gayi thi.

Jo nahi sochna chaahiye wahi khayaal mann me aa rahe the.

Kahi Veer ussi haadse me toh-!?

Par, sakaraatmak sochte hue aur bechain dil ko baar-baar tasalli dete hue unn sabhi ne khud ko sambhaala.

Kavya bechari jo sabse pehle khoob nidar hoke bina chinta ke Veer ke baare me sabko hidayat de rahi thi. Woh ab khud hi sabse zyada rone me lagi hui thi.

Veer ki orr se na hi koi khabar aa rahi thi aur na hi kahi aur se kuch pata chal raha tha.

Veer ke Dada ji waale ghar me bhi ye baat pata lag gayi. Manorath jo Veer ko dil se chaahte the woh fauran hi Bhavna ke nirnay se taiyaar ho gaye.

Aur nirnay ye tha ki-

Bhale hi woh Paris nahi jaa sakte toh kya? Par France ke koi aur sheher to jaa hi sakte the na?

Decide ho chuka tha ki woh Paris ki jagah Strasbourg jayenge. Aur waha se train se Paris ka raasta lagbhag 2 ghante ka hi tha. Toh Paris me jaa ke Veer ke baare me pata laga lenge.

Jaane waale logo me se ek swayam Bhavna thi. Uske sang Tej, Arohi aur Manorath khud.

Ek bade ki aavashyakta thi unhe jo unhe sambhaal sake. Bhavna khud bhi iss waqt dusro ko sambhaalne ki sthiti me nahi thi.

Shweta aane ki zidd karne lagi thi magar ghar par fir sabhi javaan ladkiya hi reh jaati.

Isliye usse ghar par rehne ke liye jaise-taise manaaya gaya.

Chaaro hi Veer ko dhundhne nikal chuke the. Aur Strasbourg pohuch bhi chuke the. Yaha tak ki unn logo ne Paris tak ka raasta bhi tay kar liya tha.

Par news me kahi bhi Veer ki tasveere nahi thi. Sab kuch hata diya gaya tha. Social media se leke YouTube athwa kisi bhi sites par kahi koi nishaan nahi tha uska.

Aur aaj ki issi raat, Ava ke wahi music video ke upload hone ki khushi me aalishaan hotel me ek choti si party rakhi gayi thi.

Staff team se leke sabhi log maujood the. Haadsa hue lagbhag 3 hafte guzar chuke the toh ye music video France ki saari janta aur Aga ke fans ke liye ek refreshment tha. Ek breather tha unke liye.

Yeh gaana logo ke liye aisa tha jaise maano kisi registaan me bhatke vyakti ko paani ka talaab mil gaya ho.

Kuch minutes hi hue the gaana post hue ki likes aur views ki barsaat shuru ho chuki thi.

Dinner ka aayojan bhi tha. Sabhi acche dhang se taiyaar khaane aur peene ka lutf utha rahe the.

Par kisi ki aankhein thi, jo ab bhi namm thi. Itni khushi, itni safalta ke bawajood, uss lady ko koi khushi mehsoos nahi ho rahi thi.

Woh Ava hi thi.

Ab jaake Veer ki saari baatein usse yaad aa rahi thi.

Kaise woh alleys me yu hi sirf uske liye jaane ke liye taiyaar ho gaya tha.

Usse khud ke aur uske hue vartalaap yaad aa rahe the,


'Tum…! Tum mere liye aaye. Tumhare hone se mujhe safe feel ho raha hai.'

'Well! Mene aapko kaha hua hai. Jab tak aapke peeche pade uss insaan ka pata nahi laga leta, tab tak aapko protect karunga.'

'Come na! Yaha malls mene explore nahi kiye. Kahi chalte hai?'

'Agar aap yahi chaahti hai toh-'

'That's nice!!! Kya hum waha chal sakte hai?'

'Don't worry! Mein personally jaunga unke saath. Unhe kuch nahi hoga.'

'Yes! I understand. It was my fault.'

'It's okay! As long as you're safe. Nothing else matters right now.'

'See??? Hahahaha! I won!!! Mene kaha tha na?'

'Yeah yeah! Dekha mene. You sure are lucky *smiles*'

'Like what you see?'


'M-Mein aata hu. *blushes* Wait for me!'

Harr ek baat usse yaad aa rahi thi. Veer ki chhavi uske dil-o-dimaag me mandra rahi thi.

Uski woh strong back jisse leke woh uske saamne chal raha tha. Bina ye jaane hue ki woh swayam hi uski maut me shaamil thi.

Ava ke gaalo se aansu beh beh ke girne lage.

Hotel ki 7th floor par khidki ke paas khadi woh bas auro se dur ro rahi thi.


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Par usse nahi pata tha ki-

Ussi building ke bagal waali building ki terrace se andhere me khade usse koi ghoor raha tha.

Uske badan par ek safed shirt thi jo tezz hawaao me awaaz kar lehra rahi thi.

Unhi hawao me uske baal bhi bikhre hue the.

Aur uski befiqr nazre building ke andar maujood Ava par hi tiki hui thi.

Agle hi pal, Ava ki aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi. Uski saansein aur dhadkane tezz ho uthi. Seena zorr-zorr se upar neeche hone laga.

Kyuki uske mann me ek ghanti baji thi,

*Ding*



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Ava ke poore badan me sihran daud gayi. Woh kisi chidiya ki tarah harr taraf gardan modte hue apne chaaro orr dekhne lagi.

'V-Veer!!!!?'

Agle hi pal uski nazre bagal se lagi building ke uss terrace par gayi.

Par, usne jo saamne dekha toh-

Siwae aasmaan me chamakte chaand ke alaawa waha koi nahi tha.

Terrace khaali thi.

'Veer!!!????'
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Update - 147 ~ Break The Impasse (2)

Ab tak...

Aur idhar Veer-

[Maaaaassstttteerrrr!!!]

*Splash*

Uska shareer gehre samundar me jaa gira. Sateh par aate hi, uski nazre Crimson par tik gayi jo cruise se chhalaang maar khud paani me aa chuka tha.

Aur upar khule aasmaan me woh chamak raha tha.

'Its's your unlucky day Crimson!'


Ab aage...

Chaand ki roshni samundar ki upri sateh par chamak rahi thi. Paani bhi sheetal tha. Veer aur Crimson ki iss ghamasaan ladaayi ne jo tabaahi machaayi thi woh bilkul bhi sadhaaran nahi thi.

Vishaal Cruise do bhaago me batt chuka tha. Unn dono ki mutbhed me Cruise ka engine tabaah ho chuka tha. Ek hi engines se baaki engines lage hue the. Aag ki lapto ne jaise hi ek engine ko apne aaghosh me liya, uss se lage hue baaki engines ek ek karke dhamaake ke saath fatate chale gaye.

Cruise ka lower mid section jo ki sabse aham hissa hota tha, woh inn dhamaako ke chalte chatak utha. Ab bas thodi aur halchal chahiye thi usse. Aur, upar deck par ho rahi logo ki afra-tafri ne jaise woh kaam bhi asaan kar diya.

Cruise do hisso me toot ke ukhad gaya. Nichle hisse se paani bahaar maarte hue ek jhatke me andar ghusa. Labalab paani dekhte hi dekhte cruise ke andar bharne laga. Short circuits hue aur electric wirings saari jal uthi, jiske chalte Cruise ki lights bhi band ho gayi.

Upar ki bheed atyadhik bhay ke maare cheekhne lagi. Koi behosh ho chuka tha toh koi apni jaan bachaane paani me kood raha tha. Aur, jinse tairna nahi aata tha woh toh bas cruise ke hisso ko pakde apni maut ka intezaar kar rahe the.

Dheere dheere sagar uss vishalkaay cruise ko apne andar samaane laga. Aur idhar,

“Veeeeeeeeeeeer!!!!”

Doobte hue Cruise se chhalaang maarte hue Crimson dahaad maar kar samundar me gira.

*Splash*

[Master!!]

Pari ne Veer ko sachet rehne ke liye uske mann me pukaara. Aur, Veer jaise turant hi samajh gaya.

‘Yeah!’



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Chaand apne poore shabaab me tha. Full Moon hone ke chalte Veer ke senses 80% badhe hue the. Toh wahi uski speed, agility, reflexes aur healing double ho chuki thi.

Upar hawa me udd raha helicopter Veer ko cruise par utaar ke aage Ushant Island ki orr badh chuka tha. Island me helicopter land karwaate hi pilot bhi dur se apni aankho se sab dekh raha tha. Kaise itna bada cruise do tukdo me toot ke bikhar gaya tha.

“B-Baap re! Y-Ye Oyabun ne kaha bhej diya mujhe.” Uski aankhein avaak hone ke kaaran faili hui thi.

‘Oyabun’ ka tatparya yaha par ‘Boss’ se tha. Pilot bhi chinese tha aur shayad Renshu ke home town se hi tha. Prateet ho raha tha ki Renshu uska kisi prakaar ka boss tha.

Ye pehli baar nahi tha jo usne aisi traasdiya apne jeevan me dekhi thi. Kintu, ye koi bhula dene waala sadharan drishya bhi nahi tha.

Woh bas dua kar raha tha ki jald hi woh Veer ko leke yaha se sahi salamat laut sake. Ab bas use kuch derr intezaar karna tha.

Samundar me idhar dekhte hi dekhte ek ek karke sabhi kapti log doobne ki kagaar par pohuch gaye. Unke paapo ki saza aaj unhe mil rahi thi. Hahakar macha hua tha aur samudri ilaake me bas janta ki chillaahat fel gayi.

[Go down!]


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Pari ki awaaz Veer ke mann me akasmaat aayi. Woh agle hi pal jaise hi paani ke neeche gaya, usne jo saamne dekha toh uski aankhein hairaani ke maare fel gayi.

‘Wh-What is happening?’

Ye Crimson ko kya ho raha tha?

“Urrghh! Ummphhh! Arrghhh!”

Crimson paani me aate hi seedhe sateh se neeche gaya aur achanak hi uska shareer jhatke maarne laga. Woh ajeeb tareeqe se chhatpata raha tha.



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Toh wahi saans lene ke liye Veer dobaara upar aaya,

“Fuahhh!!”

‘What is going on?’

[Take another look, Master!]

Ek baar fir gehri hawa andar kheechte hue usne apni saans roki aur dobaara paani ke andar chala gaya.

*Splash*

Veer ne dekha ki Crimson muh me paani bhar raha tha aur fir muh ko ajeeb tareeke se chalaate hue woh wahi paani baahar nikaal raha tha. Bulbule bann ke paani uske muh se baahar aa raha tha.

[Ahhhnnn!]

Pari woh manzar dekhte hi cheekh uthi.

‘Pari! Kya hua?’

[M-Master-]

‘That Crimson! Don’t tell me-’

[Yes! Master! He’s fucking-!! He’s freaking separating oxygen from the water.]

‘Whaaaatttt??’

Veer ki aankhein underwater hi aashcharya me chaudi ho gayi. Just what else Crimson was hiding in his arsenal?

[Aquatic Breathing, Master. Allows the host to breakdown oxygen molecules present in the water. The process is a bit longer compared to the fishes. Host can last upto 20 minutes underwater without any exposure to the air.]

‘That fucker-!!!!’

Pari ke skill description dete hi Veer chakit reh gaya. Paani! Jise, vigyaan ki bhaasha me H2O bhi kaha jaata hai.

Iska breakdown hote hi O2 release hota hai. Jise hum oxygen kehte hai. Aur yahi toh hamaare liye praanvayu hai. Kintu, Crimson macchliyo ki tarah, unke gills ke bhaati ye apne muh se kar paa raha tha.

Uske muh me maujood Blood capillaries paani ko breakdown kar oxygen ko shareer me jagah jagah pohucha rahi thi. 20 minute tak woh bina hawa se saans liye paani ke andar yu hi reh sakta tha. Woh paani se oxygen ko alag kar raha tha. Ye karne me saksham tha woh.

Par, Veer nahi! Uske paas Aquatic Breathing nahi thi.

[This is bad!! Master! Basically, woh chaahta hai hum underwater lade. Woh poori koshish karega aapko neeche apne saath ghaseetne ki.]

‘Hmm!’

Veer yu hi saans roke paani ke andar Crimson par apni nazre gadaaye hue tha. Usne aas-paas fir sarr fira ke dekha toh manzar dekhne laayak tha.

Dherr saare log paani me doobte hue samundar ki gehraiyo me gaayab hote jaa rahe the. Magar, Veer ki aankhon me unke liye koi daya bhaav nahi tha.

Ye wahi log the jo maut ka nanga naach dekh utsuk hote the, uske liye apni dhan-daulat lutaate the. Inke liye bhala Veer kaise hamdardi rakh sakta tha?

[I’m surprised Master. Aapko swim karna aata hai? I never expected that.]

‘Dada ji ne sikhaya tha. Bachpan me jab Arohi di aur mujhe woh Juhu le jaaya karte the. Tab-’

[That’s good!]

‘Aur tab se mujhe abhi tak yaad hai.’

[Kab kya cheez aapke kaam aa jaaye, ye aapko pata nahi rehta.]

‘Yeah!’

[I would like to know more about that but we got no time now, Master! Here he comes! Get ready!]

Pari ke warning dete hi Crimson ek tezz raftaar me uski taraf aage badha. Veer ko aisa laga jaise maano koi shark uski orr aa rahi ho.

Bhale hi Crimson paani me saanse le sakta tha, lekin Full moon ke chalte Veer ko uske reflexes aur agility me ab hara nahi sakta tha.

Woh jaise hi tezzi me Veer ko gale se pakadne ke liye jhapka, paani me hi Veer ne ek jhatke me khud ke shareer ko baayi orr kar liya.

Aur Veer apne haath perr ka istemaal kar paani ke neeche se upar ko aa gaya. Cruise ka hissa abhi bhi doob raha tha. Veer bina koi deri kiye uss disha me aage tairte hue badha.

Crimson bhala use kaise apne changul se jaane de sakta tha? Woh paani ke neeche se Veer ka peecha karne laga.

Veer jaise jaise aage badh raha tha, use waha aur zyada cheenkhein sunaayi deti jaa rahi thi. Kuch doobti mahilaaye aur purush use guhaar lagaate hue paani me chhatpata ke bula rahe the toh kuch ki aankhein madad ki maang darsha rahi thi. Iss aas me ki ye naujaavaan unki madad karega.

Par, Veer ne ek par bhi rehem nahi dikhaya.

Usne jab punaah paani ke neeche jhaak ke dekha toh darr ke maare uske badan me ek sihran daud gayi.

[N-No-!!!]

Paani ke andar,


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Sharks uss samudri ilaake me pravesh kar chuki thi. Lag raha tha woh paani me ho rahi halchal se hi aakarshit hoke aayi thi.

Crimson kya kam khatra tha jo ab ye? Pari ne jaise Veer ki mann ki baat padh li aur use samjhaate hue turant boli,

[Master! Sharks turant aise hamla nahi karti. Lekin, zyada derr nahi lagegi unhe ye abhaas hone me ki paani me halchal macha rahe log unka ahaar bann sakte hai. Be careful!]

*Splash*

Veer aage jhuk apni disha me firse aage badha. Ye chase ka game jaari tha. Par akhir kab tak?

Doobte hue Cruise ke hisse ke paas pohuchte hi Crimson Veer ki speed ko catch up kar liya.

“Shit!!”

Veer ka perr Crimson ke haatho me tha. Paani ke neeche se upar aate hi Crimson ke chehre par bhayanak muskaan saj gayi.

Crimson (smiles) : Where are you running?

Use kheechte hue Crimson ne iss baar Veer ko jakda aur cruise ki body se bhedte hue uss par ghoose barsaane laga.

Crimson : Tujhe laga tu mujhe maar sakta hai? Huh? Bol ha-

*BAAMMMMMM*

Veer ne khud ke bachaav me Crimson ke gale par ek vaar kar apne aap ko chhuraaya.

Aur Crimson ko sambhalne ka mauka na dete hue, usne apni kamar se handgun nikaali,

HAWKEYE!

*BANG*

Gunshot ki awaaz waha fel gayi. Magar firse wahi hua jo Veer hargiz nahi chaahta tha. Crimson uski bullet ko dodge kar chuka tha.

[This is the second time now! Hawkeye firse chook gayi? Akhir wo ye sab kar kaise raha hai???]

Pari ko lagataar jhatke lag rahe the. Veer yaha Crimson ko bilkul bhi mauka nahi dena chahta tha. Yahi ek chance tha aur isliye usne firse,

*Ding*

HAWKEYE!

*BANG*

Bullet fire kar di. Magar, Crimson toh jaise aaj vardaan leke baitha tha ki uska koi baal bhi baaka nahi kar sakta. Gardan side karte hue usne ye teesri bullet bhi dodge kar li. Pehli usne cruise ke andar hi Veer dwara shot ki gayi bullet dodge ki thi. Aur ab ye do aur bullets-

Uske hontho par khaufnak muskan feli hui thi.

Crimson (smiles) : You should give up Veer!

*Click* *Click*

Bullets ab khatam ho chuki thi.

‘Shit!!! Renshu ne isme magazine nahi bhari thi kya?’

[Looks like he gave you the gun as it is. Only 3 bullets were left. Aur humne teeno hi miss kar di.]

‘Fuck this!!’

Veer daant meeste hue aage kuch keh paata ki utne me hi Crimson ne uski taang pakad use paani ke andar kheech liya.

*Plop*

"Nnghh!"

[I'm analyzing his dodging skill. You stall him until then.]

Pari itna bol achanak hi maun ho gayi. Uska poora dhyaan ab Crimson ki dodging skill ka pata lagaane me lag chuka tha.

Ab Veer apne bal boote par tha. Pari beech me koi help nahi karne waali thi.

Veer ka shareer samundar ki gehraiyo me ghashitata jaa raha tha. Crimson jaise use dum ghuta ke maarna chaah raha tha.

'You fucker-! Argh!!!'

Uske chehre par ek zordaar laat maarte hue woh uske changul se baahar aaya.

Sharks aur nazdeek aa chuki thi. Tabhi, Crimson ne kuch aisa kiya jise dekh Veer ke badan me raungte khade ho gaye.

Ek shark Crimson ke behad qareeb thi. Aur jaise hi uss par hamla karne aage badhi, na jaane Crimson ne aisa kya kiya ki shark achanak hi shaant ho gayi.

Woh apne haath se shark ki naak ke upar ahista ahista sehla raha tha maano jaise woh koi uski paaltu jaanvar ho.

'He's a shark tamer?' Veer bhauchakka reh gaya.

Woh yu hi nahi sharks ko Crimson Festival me istemal karta tha. Harr ek cheez ke peeche koi na koi kaaran chhupa tha.

Shark taming skill thi uske paas jiske chalte woh samudra me maujood unn sharks ko tame kar unka upyog karta tha.

Veer 40 se 50 seconds tak hi saans ko paani ke andar rok ke rakh sakta tha. Use baar baar upri sateh par jaana padta tha saans lene ke liye.

Jaise hi woh iss baar neeche aaya, ek shark uski orr tezi me lapki.

[Master-!!! Keep your eyes on it. Nose, gills aur uski aankhon ko apna nishaana banaiye.]

Pari ko na chaahte hue bhi apni analysis band karni padi. Apne Master ko akele nahi chhor sakti thi woh.

[Punch on its nose.]

*BAMMM*

Tareeqa effective tha. Naak kisi bhi shark ke liye ek sensitive part tha. Udhar par hamla hote hi, shark Veer se darr ke dur ho gayi.

[Go towards the deck.]

Veer deep ocean me apna raasta dhoondh waapas se cruise ki taraf jaane laga. Use na jaane kin kin prakaar ki macchliya nazar aa rahi thi.



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[Ye open ocean hai. Island se thodi hi duri par hai hum Master. Island ke nazdeek nahi jayengi sharks. Underwater ladna hamare liye behtar hai. He can’t use Vertigo underwater. Disbalance zameen par hi kiya jaa sakta hai. We are floating underwater. So, Vertigo is useless. Island ke paas jaiye jitna jaldi ho sake.]

Par, Veer ke mann me toh jaise kuch aur hi chal raha tha. Woh swim karte hue raftaar me deck ki orr badha.

“Surprise!” Uske bagal se ek awaaz aayi.

“Shit-!”

Aur jaise hi woh palta, ek zordaar ghoosa uske seene me aake pada.

“Gwakh!!!”

Aisa laga jaise Veer ka poora andhruni system hil gaya ho.

*Crash*

Uska shareer paani se uchhalte hue doobte hue cruise ke deck me jaa ghusa. Wooden flooring ko tod woh cruise ke andar jaa gira.

[Such power!]

Andar ka nazaara kuch aisa tha jaise maano woh kisi space me aa gaya ho. Paani bhar jaane ke chalte, andar rakhi cheezein float kar rahi thi. Kahi kisi cabin ka lamp paani me tair raha tha toh kahi lakdi ke kuch tukde.

Aur wahi dusri orr, sharks ne apna bhojan dhoondh liya tha.

“Aaaaaaaaaarrrrrghhhh!”

“H-Helllppppp!! Aaaaaaaaaa!!!”

“Noooooooooo!!!!”

Ab shuru hua tha asli Crimson Festival. Saara paani lahu luhaan ho utha jab Sharks doobte hue logo par baras padi. Logo ko apne nukeele daanto se chabaate hue unke shareer ko tukdo me vibhaajit karne lagi. Ye khaufnak manzar Crimson ko enjoy karna chahiye tha. Par, uski aankhein gusse se ekdum laal thi.

Crimson (growls) : You ruined my another plan as well. Bolo Veer! Kaisi maut du tumhe?

Uske maathe ki nass phatne ko baahar aa rahi thi. He was definitely pissed off.

Dhamaake me ude engines abhi bhi aag ki lapto me qaid the. Kuch aur bhi the jo bas phatne ka intezaar kar rahe the.

Veer deck ki railing ko ek haath se jakde aadhe se zyaada paani ke andar tha. Woh dekh paa raha tha kaise cruise ke andar ke hisse ke poore chithde ude hue the.

Ek aur tooti hui railing ki rod uske qareeb latak rahi thi. Use apni taakat se ukhaad ke Veer ne woh rod apne haatho me li.

Lower mid section me jal rahe engines ki taraf uski nazre daudi. Aur, fir fuel tanks ki orr.

“Haaaaarrrrrggghhhh!”

Woh chillaaya. Aur rod se usne seedha uss fuel tank me hamla kar diya.

*Clang*

Rod fuel tank ko cheerte hue apna kaam kar gayi. Cruise diesel par chalta tha. Dherr saara diesel tank se nikal gravity ke chalte neeche girne laga.

Veer ne fir jalte engine ko dekha. Uss engine ko giraane ke liye uske neeche maujood flooring par waar karna tha. Aur Veer ne theek wahi kiya. Wooden flooring par jaise hi lohe ki badi si woh rod aake padi, ek baar me hi saari flooring toot ke bikhar gayi.

Engine khaska aur neeche gira. Parantu, neeche girne se pehle Veer ne wahi rod uske theek neeche laga di.

Jab engine gira toh pehle woh rod pe gira aur Veer ke hontho par iss baar ek muskaan fel gayi.

Engine ke bhaar ko usne rod se uthaaya-

“Haaaarrghhh!! Take this you fucker-!!!!”

*Wuh-psssh*

Jalta hua engine hawa me ucchla. Waqt jaise tham gaya. Crimson ki ab pehli baar aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi. Use abhaas hua ki aage kya hone waala tha.

Kintu, sab palak jhapakte ho gaya.

Crimson turant paani ke neeche jaise hi gaya, Engine theek ussi waqt uss jagah par gira. Aur paani me maujood woh diesel-

*BOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMM*

Ek vishaal dhamaka ne janm liya. Crimson jo bhale hi paani ke andar dubki maar chuka tha. Dhamaake ke chalte uske shareer se jagah jagah chamdi udhad gayi. Toh wahi, Veer uss dhamaake me upar ki uchhal gaya aur waapas se paani me jaa gira.

*Splash*

Par ye khel yahi thodi khatam hua tha.

Chot Veer ko bhi aayi thi. Magar Crimson jitni nahi. Veer jaise kisi cheez ka intezaar kar raha tha.

Aur tabhi woh ghadi bhi aa gayi. Crimson paani ke andar achanak hi chhatpatane laga. Apna gala pakad woh upar tezzi me aaya.

Aur upar aate hi woh dahaad maar ke cheenkha,

“Veeeeeeeeeerrrrrrr!!!!”

Uske poore badan me jagah jagah se khoon ris raha tha. Tabhi, Veer ki nigaahein samundar me ek jagah padi. Usne dekha ki ek high performance boat unn sab se dur jaa rahi thi aur usme koi maujood tha.

‘Check’

*Ding*

[Name : Sweetie
Age : 32
Bio : An orphan. Works for Crimson. Money is what she needs. Nothing else.

Relationship : Strangers.
Favourability : 0]

Woh tezz raftaar me waha se bhaag ke nikal chuki thi. Uske chehre par darr saaf jhalak raha tha. Sweetie pe dhyaan ne dete hue Veer ne Crimson par dhyaan diya.

Uski haalat behad kharaab nazar aa rahi thi. Aur ab jaake Pari ko asli baat samajh aayi.

[Y-You! You are a fucking genius!] Pari ek thar-tharati awaaz me Veer se boli.

Hydrolysis Reaction! The chemical breakdown of a compound due to reaction with water.

Diesel jo range karta tha C10H20 se leke C15H28 tak. Kya hoga agar ye molecules break ho jaaye? Woh bhi paani ke saath mil ke?

Combustion ke chalte jalta hua engine jaise hi paani me gira aur visfot hua, ek zordaar chemical chain reaction waha janm liya.

Carbon aur hydrogen ke compounds break hue aur jaa ke seedhe H20 se react kar gaye. Aur fir utpatti hui,

Carbon dioxide (CO2) ki…!

Bhari maatra me carbon dioxide to release hui hi saath hi saath ek woh cheez bhi release hui jiska Veer ko intezaar tha-

Carbon Monoxide (CO)

Woh zehreeli aur jwalansheel gas jiska na hi koi rang hota tha, na hi koi smell aur na hi koi taste.

Paani ke neeche jaate hi Crimson aquatic breathing ka istemaal karega hi, ye Veer pehle se hi jaanta tha. Kya hoga jab Oxygen ki jagah agar woh Carbon monoxide ko apne andar lele?

Maut!!!

Agar Crimson ke paas koi poison ko control karne ki skill nahi hogi toh ye zaahir tha ki uski kya dasha hone waali thi.

*Rumble* *Rumble*



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Aur agle hi pal, zorr se baadal garaj uthe. Bijli kadki! Kehte hai ki jaha dhua uthata hai, waha aag hoti hai. Magar, agar vatavaran aapka saath de toh jaha dhua uthata hai waha baarish bhi hoti hai.

Pyrocumulus!! Woh clouds jo aag ke dhue se bante the. Jitna bheeshan dhamaka hua tha, uss se utpadit hui aag ki garam lapte hawa me uth gas bann upar jaati gayi. Islands par waise hi barsaat hoti rehti thi.

Ye dhamake ne jaise ek madad ka haath aage badha diya varsha ke liye.

Tip tip kar agle hi pal choti choti baarish ki boonde girni shuru ho gayi. Aur aasmaan me chaand dhak gaya. Bijli zorro se kadak rahi thi, tezz hawaaein apna rukh le rahi thi. Neeche aag ab bhi faile hue diesel par lagi hui thi. Khoon aur logo ke shareer se ukhde ango se samundar lahu luhaan hua pada tha.

Dhamaake ke chalte kuch jeev badqismati se uska shikaar ho gaye the. Toh baaki bache turant hi waha se dur bhaag nikle.

Aur inn sab ke beech, do laal aankhein Crimson ko ghoor rahi thi. Uss naujavaan ke baal hawa me lehra rahe the.

*Rumble* *Rumble*

Drishya dekh Pari ke khud ke raungte khade ho gaye.

[M-Master-!]

Veer jaise kisi devta samaan lag raha tha.

Crimson khaaste hue apne muh par haath rakha toh uski hatheli par khoon ke dhabbe fel gaye.

Crimson (screams) : Y-YOU-!! YOU BASTARD!!!!!

Veer ne uska ye plan bhi fail kar diya tha. Woh yaha inn ameer logo ko samundar me dhakel ke maarne hi toh laaya tha. Isliye sweetie confused thi ki bhala Crimson kisse maut ke ghaat utaarne waala tha? Woh unn logo ko hi cruise se dhakel ke sharks ka chaara banaane wala tha. Issi baat ka use ek mission mila tha. Yahi uska lakshya tha.

Woh sab maare toh gaye,

Magar-!!

Veer ke haatho. Usi ke kaaran cruise toota aur Crimson ka mission dhara ka dhara reh gaya. Jaha use points milne the, waha use 10,000 points ki penalty lag chuki thi.

Jiski katauti uske system ne turant ke turant hi kar li. HOK bhi gaya, Veer se bhid haath bhi gawaaya tha usne. Aur ab ye mission bhi failed. Gussa uss par kis tarah haawi tha iss waqt ye batlaane ki zaroorat nahi thi.

“Veeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrr!!!”

Woh cheekhte hue ek jhatke me Veer ke nazdeek aaya.

‘Huh?’

[Careful-!]

*Grasp*

Veer ko gale se jakad woh paas se use ghoorne laga. Aur, ek aur buri khabar tabhi Veer ke kaano me padi,

*Ding*

[Beowulf’s Blessings timing has been used.]

[Beowulf’s Blessing has been turned OFF.]

[N-No!!!]

Cruise ke dono bhaag samundar me doob chuke the. Ushant me maujood pilot darr ke maare waha se andar ki orr bhaag apne helicopter me jaa ke baith gaya.

“Tumhe lagta hai tum mujhe maar sakte ho Veer? Huh? *Cough* Mein tumhe-”

*Splash*

Veer ke chehre ko pakad Crimson ne seedha use paani ke andar dubo diya.

*Glub* *Glub*

[Master-!!!]

Paani ke bulbule Veer ke muh se nikal rahe the. Lekin, Veer ne zara bhi paani apne andar nahi liya. Carbon monoxide slightly soluble hoti thi paani me. Aur woh mili hui thi.

Veer ki saanse ukhad hi rahi thi jab-

*BANG*

Ek bullet aake seedhe Crimson ke kandhe ko cheer ke andar ghus gayi.

“Urgh!”

Woh apne kandhe par haath rakha. Veer uski pakad se chooth gaya. Bullet Island se chali thi. Zaahir hai ki ye ek sniper ki bullet thi. Normal handgun se ye sambhav nahi tha.

Crimson ki nigaahein Island par tiki hui thi. Aur, mauke ka fayda uthaate hi turant Veer ne,

LIMBO!!

*Crack* *Crack*

“Aaaaarrrrghhhhhhhhh!”

Ek teevr dardnaak cheenkh waha goonj gayi. Crimson ke dono haath ajeeb-o-gareeb dishao me mud chuke the.

Renshu ne toh iss ladayi me shaamil hone se mana kiya hua tha. Woh toh ye bullet fire nahi kar sakta tha. Woh toh Paris me hi tha. Toh fir kaun tha?

“You Bitch!!!!”

Crimson zorr se Island ki orr dekhte hue chillaaya. Aur, agle hi shan Veer ko andaaza lag gaya. Renshu ke alawa jo vyakti Crimson se bhidne ki aukaat rakhta tha…!

Apni bauhe sikode Veer ne Island ki disha me dekha.

‘Ava!?’

Tezz hawao me Ushant Island ki sateh par ek khubsoorat ladki haatho me sniper liye waha khadi hui thi. Kal use apni hi kahi gayi baatein yaad aa rahi thi~

‘There’s one more thing I have to do!’

Aur idhar achanak hi,

[Ahnnn!! I got it!]

Pari zorr se chillaayi.

[Master! I get it now! Crimson-! Woh kaise ye sab dodge kar paa raha tha. He couldn’t dodge that bullet now. Teen baar!! Sirf teen baar woh koi death ya fatal blow dodge kar sakta hai ek din me. He was not using a skill but a card Master.]

'???'

[He's using Probability Manipulation.]

Pari Veer ko aur baatein samjhaati par Veer hamle ki liye zyaada aatur tha.

Matlab Crimson kisi fatal blow ko ek din me sirf teen baar hi dodge kar sakta tha?

Ab harr baat sense bana rahi thi. Use samajh aa chuka tha ki kyu uski teen bullet Crimson dodge kar liya parantu, Ava ki fire ki gayi chauthi bullet dodge nahi kar paaya.

Saari dots connect ho rahi thi ab. Ushant Island me bhi toh yahi hua tha na?

Veer ne jab uss building ki terrace pe Crimson ko rod maari thi, aur ek bullet bhi. Eric ne bhi ek bullet fire ki thi chopper se, jo ki teeno hi baar Crimson ne dodge kar li thi.

Aur isliye-

Isliye woh lighthouse se neeche girte waqt uss blade ko dodge nahi kar paaya tha. Kyuki woh teen mauke istemaal ho chuke the.

Aur isliye Renshu ki bullet bhi tab dodge nahi kar paaya tha. Sab kuch ab samajh aa chuka tha Veer ko.

'So that's why-!!'

Ab iss se behtar opportunity kya ho sakti thi?

Crimson ke haath mude hone ka fayda uthaate hue Veer apni saans rok seedha neeche gaya aur uski taango ko apne haatho me le jakad liya.

"You-!! Rrghhh!"

*Plop*

Use neeche ghaseetate hue Veer andar hi andar aage badhne laga.

Iss waqt woh shabd uske mann me goonj rahe the.

'CRIMSON!!!!! AGAR AAJ MEIN MARTA HU, TOH MERI LAASH KO DEKH KE SUNISHCHIT KAR LENA KI WOH MERI HI LAASH HAI…! WARNA AGAR MEIN YAHA SE ZINDA BACHA…! TOH TUMHE WO MAUT DUNGA JO SANSAAR NE PEHLE KABHI NAHI DEKHI HOGI!!'

[Master!!!]

Jin jeevo ka Crimson istemaal karta tha, wahi jeev aaj use apna ahaar banaane waale the.

Crimson : N-Noooo! You fucker!! Nrrghhh!!!

Shark jo waha se bhaag rahi thi, paani me khoon me ho rahi halchal mehsoos kar turant hi Veer ki orr aane lagi. Uske jabdo se lage hue woh nukeele daant, maans ko phaadne ke liye taiyaar the.

Veer Crimson ko taango se ghaseetate hue laaya aur jaise hi shark ne apne daant khole-



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"Haarrrghhh!!!"

Poori taaqat se Crimson ko kheench Veer ne use shark ke muh ke saamne kar diya.

"Nooooooooo- rrrgghhhhh!!!!"

*Crunch*

Shark ke jabdo me jo taaqat hoti thi woh Crimson jaisa taqatvar aadmi bhi jhel nahi sakta tha.

Ek hi baar me woh nukeele daant uske seene ko puncture kar andar dhass gaye. Shark ne jab dusri baar hamla kiya toh ghaav aur gehra ho gaya. Haddiya toot chuki thi. Aur peeche se Veer taango ko kheech ke cheer diya.

Drishya kuch aisa tha ki Crimson ka shareer do tukdo me usi cruise ki tarah vibhaajit ho gaya. Ek hissa shark ke muh me tha. Toh dusra Veer ke haatho me.

Veer apne kahe gaye shabdo pe khada utra tha. Usne wahi maut di Crimson ko jo sansaar ne kabhi nahi dekhi thi.

Shark se dur hatt woh jaise hi upar aaya toh use ek shor sunaayi diya.

Dekha toh paaya ki-

"Veer!!!"

Motorboat me Ava uski orr jhuk ke haath aage badhaaye hue thi.

Veer ne kuch na kaha. Haath ko thaama aur woh upar aa gaya.

Ava ne boat filhaal ke liye Ushant Island ki orr hi badha dii. Bohut si baatein thi jo woh Veer se karna chaahti thi.

Magar, Veer jaise koi bhi baat karne ke mood me nahi tha. Woh toh Ava ki shaqal bhi nahi dekhna chaahta tha. Ye baat sach thi ki Ava ne uske saath chhal kiya tha.

Lekin, ye baat bhi sach thi ki abhi usne hi uski madad ki thi.

Ushant ki dehleez par aate hi Veer ke mann me awaaz aayi,

[We'll meet again! Master!]

*Ding*

['Mission : Kill Crimson' has been completed.]

*Ding*

[You have received 10,000 points.]

*Ding*

[System has reached Level 9]

Par jo sabse zyada chauka dene waali baat thi woh ye thi ki-

*Ding*

[You have gained - Probability Manipulation.]



Probability-manipulation

*Ding*

[You have gained - Limb Substitution.]



Probability-manipulation

*Ding*

[You have gained - Aquatic Breathing.]

'Wh-What!?'

Veer ki aankhein aisi phati hui thi jaise maano usne nangi taar ko haath me le liya ho.

Toh wahi woh akela nahi tha.

Ava use utne hi aashcharya me dekh rahi thi. Kyuki uske mann me bhi ek notification aaya tha aur woh tha -

*Ding*

[You have gained - Healing Factor.]



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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Update took time because of the work. A few rooms are getting renovated in my home. Mein ghar ka bada ladka hu toh mujhe hi dekhna hota hai sab. Saath hi job bhi rehti hai. Renovation finish hone me abhi kuch 4-5 din aur lagenge. But I'll try my best to give you the next update asap. Baaki, likes thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka. Target wahi hai apna. 150.

Dhanyavaad! ✨
Kamal Dhamal Chappar phad zabardast arc tha yah story ka aur isne Puri story ki tone set kar di hain. Maza aa gaya Boss qasam se. Ab review per aatey hai.
Aakhir kaar sabit ho gaya ki power hi sab cheez nahi hoti warna crimson kabhi nahi harta coz woh power ka khazana thaa. Yaha jeet hui veer ki kyuki
woh sachai ke liye aur doosro ke bhaley ki ladta thaa tabhi usay renushah jaisa helper mila. Aur yahi bhalai ne Ava ko bhi jhinjhod diya aur aakhir me woh uski madadgar sabit Hui.
Sath me uske pass ek pariwar aur uska pyaar thaa jo ki crimson ko lack kar raha thaa.Log kahtey hai pariwar kamzori hota hai jabki woh ek taqat Banta hai jiske liye insaan kuch bhi kar guzarta hai.
Aakhir apne dar pe qabu pana jo ki veer ne kiya jab pehli baar Mila to andar se dar Gaya isiliye pehli fight me buri tarah pita phir woh dar jab Kam hua to usne crimson ko aghat Diya chahe thoda hi sahi aur phir jab yah dar nikal gaya to woh khud crimson se bhid e chala aaya aur uski taqat ko hi uski kamzori bana diya agar woh shop pe nahi jaata to usko atamvishwash nahi milta ladne ke liye.
At last but not least use and presence of mind jo usne engine ko tod ker crimson per hamla kiya.
Ab 18 me se 17 system bachey hai 3 ka to veer ko pata hai aur 4th one racheta hai iska ab dekhna hain aur kaun kaun isne shamil hota hai coz aane waley bhavishya me ab Jung hogi system negative and positive team aur uske baad hi racheta ka koi surag milega.
Hats off to your imagination and make them ink. Lajawab maza aagaya.
Awaiting for the next but family commitments pehlay hai har cheez Sai so take your time then write next update with fresh mind.
Tab Tak hum is update ka sawad lete rahenge.
 

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