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Update - 149 ~ Reunion​

Ab tak…

Lily apni baat aage kehti ki tabhi Ava ke mann me ek notification aaya jise dekh woh wahi jamm ke reh gayi.

*Ding*

[Grace Martin is dead.]

'N-No!'

Ab aage…

Kaisa mehsoos hota hoga jab zindagi bhar insaan ko gham hi gham milte rahe? Jab aap apne logo ko tadapte dekho, akele pad jao, koi raasta na mile, koi raah na dikhe, koi haath badhaane ke liye aage na ho, koi sahara dene ke liye kandha na ho, koi zakhmo par marham lagane wala na ho, kuch samajh nahi aa raha ho ki kya karna hai, toh kya kare woh insaan aisi zindagi jee ke?

Kaise ubhre iss kasht se? Ava abhi kuch aisi hi sthiti me thi.

“Breaking News - Singer aur actress Natalia Martin, jinhe haal hi me ek kidnapping event se bachaya gaya tha, unki mata Grace Martin ka kal raat lagbhag 9 baje nidhan ho gaya.”

“Reports ke anusaar Grace Martin Paris ke hi hospital me bharti thi. Lagbhag dedh saal se woh coma me thi. Unhe harr sambhav ilaaj diya jaa raha tha. Lekin, kal raatri me unhone apni antim saansein li.”

“Breaking News - Hume abhi abhi khabar lagi hai ki inn sab ke peeche Hospital ki ek bohut badi galti thi. Pata laga hai ki Hospital ki security me kami paayi gayi. Jaanch ke anusaar ye saamne aaya hai ki kisi ne jaan boojh ke Grace ke medical equipments ke saath chhedh-chaadh ki thi jiske chalte Grace Martin apni jaan gawa baithi. Toh kya hai ye sab? Kya koi conspiracy? Ya Natalia Martin ke khilaaf ye koi saazish hai? Koi aapsi dushmani ya fir kisi prakaar ka badla?”

“Jaan’ne ke liye saath bane rahe. Hum aapke liye latest updates laate rahenge. France 24!”

Reporters ka jamawda laga hua tha. Cameras ki shutters ki awaaz aur journalists ke bol chaal se poore shamsaan me shor macha hua tha. Aur inhi sab ke beech-

Ava maun chup chaap baithi hui thi. Uski aankhon ke saamne uski maa Grace ka casket rakha hua tha. Grace, christianity ko belong karti thi. Aur, isliye uska antim sanskaar bhi usi dharm ke anusaar ho raha tha.

Casket ke andar death bed par laiti Grace iss duniya se ab jaa chuki thi. Dedh saal tak zindagi aur maut ke iss sangharsh me woh haar chuki thi. Lekin, fir bhi aisa lag raha tha jaise uske chehre par muskaan thi.

Jaise woh khush thi ki ab uske kaaran uski beti ko aur kasht nahi jhelna padega. Ava ne jiske liye itna sab kiya, ab wahi duniya se jaa chuka tha. Kaisa system? Kaise points? Sab kuch jaise dhara ka dhara reh gaya uske liye.

Ava ke liye toh praanvayu hi uski maa thi. Kaise jiyegi ab woh? Ye daulat, shauharat, paisa, rutba, tarakki. Kiske liye kamayegi ab woh? Kise dikhayegi ye safalta? Jab koi bacha hi nahi uski zindagi me.

Woh shoonya ho chuki thi. Andar se bhi aur baahar se bhi. Itne ant tak woh ladi, lekin haath kya laga? Kuch bhi nahi. Reporters apne news channel ko footage dilwaane me lage the toh wahi aam janta formality nibha rahi thi.

Natalia ke ird gird security bhaari maatra me janta ko uss se dur rakhe hue thi. Dekhte hi dekhte, Grace ke antim sanskaar ki vidhiyaan bhi shuru ho gayi. Aur Ava ke mann me kal ki ghatna flashback ke roop me chalne lagi.

Kal-! Kal use notification aaya tha Death flag ka. Usne Grace ko bhi mark kar ke rakha hua tha. Taaki, apni maa ki zindagi aur maut ki khabar use pal pal milti rahi. Usne kabhi jeevan me nahi socha tha ki system ke zariye use iss khabar ke baare me pata chalega.

Jab tak woh waha pohuchi, tab tak sab kuch samaapt ho chuka tha. Use pata chala ki raat me kisi ne jaan boojh ke uski Maa ke medical equipments hata diye the.

Security camera me check kiya toh pata laga ki koi aadmi tha jo nurse ki uniform me tha. Aur, usi ne iss vardaat ko anjaam diya tha.

Hospital waale bas haath jod Ava ke saamne khade reh gaye. Galti unki security me hui thi. Par, ye sab hua kaise? Aur kaun tha inn sab ke peeche?

Sweetie!!!

Ya yu kahe ki Crimson dwaara nirdesh par amal karne wali Sweetie. Ava ne snipers ko hatwa zaroor liya tha lekin Crimson ne apna ek aadmi hospital ke andar hi nurse ke roop me bheja hua tha.

Uska kaam sirf yahi tha. Grace Martin ke medical equipments hatana. Badi baat ye thi ki woh aadmi ek din nahi balki ussi din se uss hospital me kaam kar raha tha jis din se Crimson ne Grace Martin ko udhar dhoonda tha.

Ava ne baahri khatro ko toh dur kar diya tha. Lekin, hospital me pehle se kaam kar raha woh aadmi uski nazro se bach ke nikal gaya.

Crimson jaanta tha ki Ava use daga degi. Use dhoka degi. Aur, isliye usne woh aadmi pehle se waha lagwa diya tha. Baaki ka kaam toh Sweetie ne kar diya tha.

Cruise me Veer ke hamle se pehle hi Crimson ne Sweetie ko do baatein samjhaayi thi.

“Sweetie! Ho sakta hai mera ye plan bigad jaaye. Isliye, take this-!”

Usne ek chaavi hawa me uchhaalte hue Sweetie ki or feki. Ye motorboat ki chaavi thi.

“Agar kuch gadbad hoti hai, toh iss motor boat ke zariye yaha se nikal jaana. After all, I don’t want you to die here. Right? My Sweetie!?”

Sweetie ne kiya bhi wahi tha. Jab Cruise toot ke bikhar chuka tha toh woh wahi motorboat ke zariye waha se nikalne me qamyab thi.

Ek dusra kaam aur diya tha Crimson ne. Chaavi ke saath saath ek phone bhi Sweetie ke haatho me thamaya tha usne.

“Jab yaha se niklogi. Iska matlab yahi hoga ki plan me gadbadi ho gayi hai. Tab ek kaam aur karna hoga tumhe. Phone ke draft me ek message hai aur ek contact bhi. Uss message ko uss contact par bhej dena. That will be your last work. I can trust you, right?”

“S-Sure!”

“Good!”

Sweetie ka dusra kaam tha Crimson dwaara diye gaye phone se ek contact par message bhejna. Aur uss message me bas ek hi shabd likha hua tha~

KILL!

Jo ki seedha jaake hospital me maujood usi nurse waale behroopiye ko mila. Use toh pata hi tha kya karna hai. Woh baitha hi hua tha Grace ka kaam tamaam karne ke liye. Jald se jald andhere ke baad, raat me apna kaam kar woh waha se faraar ho gaya.

Ava chaah ke bhi apni bhadaas Hospital waalo par nahi nikaal paayi. Woh sab toh system ki duniya se pare the. Kya kar lete woh? Aur kaisi bhadaas? Ab toh use kuch mehsoos bhi nahi ho raha tha. Na gussa, na khushi, na gham, ek murde ki tarah ho gayi thi woh.

Jab inn sab khabro ka silsila chal hi raha tha, toh bhala Ushant ki khabar na mile channel waalo ko aisa kaise ho sakta tha? Itna bada kaand jo hua tha waha.

Ships aksar Island ki orr jaaya karti thi. Swabhavik tha ki yeh khabar sabko pata chalni hi thi.

"Breaking News~ Abhi abhi hume khabar mili hai ki Ushant Island me 50 se upar dead bodies ke tukde paaye gaye hai."

"Sutro se pata laga hai ki Ushant ki orr kisi badi aalishan cruise me 50 se adhik log sawaar the. Ek haadsa hua aur vishal-kaay cruise ko samundar le dooba."

"Haadse ki wajah ko lekar bareeki se jaanch padtaal jaari hai. Khoonkaar sharks ke chalte hi shavo ki ye dasha hui hai. Bodies ko identify karne ka kaam jaari hai. Pata lagte hi sabhi ke parijano ko soochit kiya jayega. Tab tak ke liye, bane rahiye France 24 ke saath."

Tamaam reporters aur news channels bas inhi do news ko dikhaane me lag gaye.

Ek toh Ava ki maa ka dehaant. Aur dusra Ushant.

Veer ke liye mushqile khatam nahi hui thi. Abhi bhi woh janta ki nazro me ek criminal hi tha.

Lekin, kehte hai na jab ek darwaza band hota hai toh dooja khulta hai.

Ava, jisne Veer ko fassaya tha. Ab wahi use iss daldal se nikaal rahi thi.

Dherr saare reporters ke beech mics aur cameras se ghiri hui woh kuch bolne ke liye taiyaar thi.

Reporter 1 : Miss Natalia! Aapki maa ke dehaant ke baare me jaan ke hum sabhi ko behad dukh hai. Par kya aap iske baare me kuch kehna chaahengi? Hospital ko lekar kuch? Jo unse choonk hui?

Ava ke chehre par koi bhaav nazar nahi aa rahe the. Grace ka antim sanskar ho chuka tha. Aur, use dafna ke woh wapas laut chuki thi.

'Speak to me' gaana jo usne khaas apni maa ke liye gaya tha. Sab dhare ke dhare reh gaye. Maa toh kuch bhi sunn na paayi. Na hi kuch jaan paayi. Atyant hi dukhad ant tha yeh.

Ava : Iss baare me mein koi charcha nahi karna chahungi.

Reporter 2 : Aapki baat sahi hai Miss Natalia. Parivar ke sadasyo ko khone ke baad insaan jaldi ubhar nahi paata. Isliye mera sawaal iss se sambandhit nahi hai. Mera sawal hai aapse ki Ushant me jo kuch bhi hua tha kya usko lekar aapko kuch yaad aaya? Koi jankari haath aage lagi aapke?

Ava : Yes! I remember now!

Muh se shabd nikalte hi, reporters sabhi aapas me ek dusre ki orr dekhne lage. Ek badi khabar unke haath lagne waali thi.

Ava : I remember each and every thing. Uske liye hi mein ye conference ke liye raazi hui hu.

Reporter 2 : Ye toh bohut acchi baat hai! Kya aap bata sakti hai kya yaad aaya hai aapko?

Ava (nods) : Hmm! DGSI se bohut badi galti hui hai.

Statement nikalte hi, TV dekh rahe DGSI ke saare team members ke maathe par paseene ki boonde jhalakne lagi.

Itni badi agency thi woh. Sare aam koi unpe aarop laga raha tha. Kintu, aarop sahi bhi tha. Janta ko kya muh dikhayenge ab woh? Tamaam sawaalo se saare team members joojh rahe the.

Aur inhi me unke Head Xavier athwa Chris, Terashima se leke Andre sab shaamil the.

Iss raat Ava ka ye interview bohut saare raazo par se parda hataane waala tha.

Terashima : Dekha? Dekha aap sab ne? Mene kaha tha na ki humse zaroor koi galti hui hai. Woh-! Woh ladka! Woh ladka criminal nahi tha.

Andre : This is bad. Pata nahi ab hum ise handle kaise karenge.

Chris : Miss Natalia ka poora interview hone ke baad hi kuch clues milenge. Dekhte hai hume koi trail milti hai ya nahi iss se.

Xavier apne staff ki baatein sunn zaroor rahe the lekin unka poora dhyaan TV par hi tha.

Reporter 1 : Kya matlab? DGSI se galti? Kaisi galti?

Ava : DGSI ne jise criminal ke roop me pesh kiya hai. Woh darasal koi criminal hai hi nahi balki woh toh ek sadharan ladka hai.

Ava ke harr uttar logo ke beech aur bhi zyada confusion paida kar rahe the. Ek ke baad ek jhatke lag rahe the unhe.

Idhar DSGI me bhi Ava ke statement ke baad sab spasht ho chuka tha.

Chris : Lo! Ho gaya kaam! Ab kya karna hai Sir?

Xavier (frowns) : Shh! Keep watching!

Reporter 2 : Ye aap kaise keh sakti hai? DGSI hamaare France ki badi security agencies me se ek hai. Woh itni badi galti kaise kar sakte hai?

Ava : Ye sawaal aap unse hi kyu nahi poochte? DGSI se bohut badi galti hui hai. Ek nirdosh ko unn logo ne maut ke muh me dhakela hai. Aur itna hi nahi, balki use criminal bhi ghoshit kar diya.

Reporter 1 : Aap aisa kaise keh sakti hai? Kya saboot hai aapke paas?

Ava : Saboot? Kya mera yeh kehna saboot nahi? Woh ladka-! Jise DGSI ne Criminal bana ke rakha hua hai. Woh toh meri jaan bachaane waha aaya tha. Aur asli criminal toh koi aur hi tha.

Reporter 2 : What?

Ava ke ye sab bolte hi waha logo ki khusur pusur shuru ho gayi. Agar asli criminal koi aur tha toh abhi tak DGSI kise pakad rahi thi?

Ava : Asli criminal toh ye tha-!

Ava ne agle hi pal apni mobile screen par Crimson ki ek tasveer dikha di. Chaaro orr shor fel gaya.

Aur udhar TV par sab dekh rahi DGSI ki team ke hosh hi udd gaye.

Terashima : Ye kaun hai? Mene ise pehle kabhi nahi dekha.

Chris : Lekin, Miss Natalia keh rahi hai toh baat sach hi hogi. Sir! Hume private me Miss Natalia se baat cheet karni hogi.

Xavier : Hmm!

Reporter 1 : Ye aadmi kaun hai? Kya aap bata sakti hai?

Ava : Yahi toh hai harr hamle ke peeche. Ushant se leke woh rocket launcher blast. Issi ne mujhe kidnap kiya tha.

Reporter 2 : Toh ye baat aapne pehle kyu nahi batayi? Hume sutro se pata chala hai ki jab woh ladka execute kiya gaya toh aap waha maujood thi. Toh tab aapne ye sab kyu nahi roka? Aur bataya kyu nahi?

Ava : Mein uss haalat me nahi thi. Aur, woh ladka ghayal tha. Khoon se sana hua tha. Mein use pehchaan na paayi. Jiska mujhe khed hai. Lekin, woh sahi salamat hai. Mujhe poora yakeen hai ki ye insaan jisne mujhe kidnap kiya tha, yahi harr problem ki jadd hai.

Crimson ki photo release hote hi public me nayi sansani si mach gayi.

Xavier : Chris! Miss Natalia se milne ke liye hum abhi nikal rahe hai.

Chris : Yes Sir!

Ava ne apne statements de diye the. Dekhte hi dekhte waha DGSI bhi pohuch gayi. Aur tamaam janta ke beech unhe dherr saare sawaalo se gher liya gaya.

Reporter 1 : Janta jaan'na chaahti hai ki kya Singer Natalia ne jo kuch bhi abhi kaha. Kya woh sach hai? Kya DGSI apne kaam me fail ho gayi hai?

Xavier : Dekhiye! Chhaan been jaari hai. Aur ye baat sach hai. Mujhe bataate hue khed ho raha hai ki hum sabhi ek masterplanka shikaar ho gaye the. Jiske chalte uss nirdosh ko apni jaan gawani padi. Aur asli mujrim hamari pakad se nikal ke bhaag gaya.

Xavier ne ye kaha hi tha ki poori janta waha ki bhadak uthi. Ye mazaak chal raha tha kya?

Ava : Woh ladka zinda hai. Sahi salamat hai.

Xavier : Huh?

Terashima : W-Woh zinda hai?

Ava (nods) : Hmm! xxxxxx hospital se mujhe call aaya tha. Kisi ne use bachaya tha aur hospital me admit karwa diya tha. Chunki woh mere liye waha aaya tha isliye hosh aane par usne mera hi naam liya aur hospital ne isliye fir mujhe call kiya. Wo recover kar chuka hai. Lekin, aam janta ke beech kaise aaye? Ek nirdosh par aap sabne itne warrants jo jaari kar rakhe hai.

Ava ne bade hi chalaaki se saari sachhaayi ko ghuma diya. Ye karna aavashyak bhi tha.

Xavier : Kya aap uss ladke se contact me ho?

Ava : Hmm? Bilkul! Woh meri jaan bachane ke liye aaya tha. Aur aap sabne asli mujrim ko chhor use hi execute kar diya?

Xavier (frowns) : Magar-! Woh uska chopper? Ushant me uska surrender na karna? Ye sab kya tha?

Ava : Uss baare me mein nahi jaanti. Lekin, itna zaroor jaanti hu ki woh nirdosh hai aur apne parivaar se milne ke liye betaab hai. Asli criminal ye screen par maujood insaan hai. Isne mujhe kidnap kiya tha. Yahi tha jo gangs ko orders de raha tha.

Xavier (nods) : Hum thoda aur spasht kar le aur uske baad saare warrants hata diye jayenge. Iske saath hi iss photo waale aadmi ki chhaan been bhi jaari ho jayegi. I hope that is fine with you?

Ava : Alright!

Samjhauta ho chuka tha. DGSI ko unki bhool ka ehsaas ho gaya tha. Higher authorities se bhi unn par pressure badh raha tha. Isliye, jald se jald saare arrest warrants ko aur Veer ki execution ki news ko saari media se hata diya gaya.

Balki, ulta uski bahaduri bhare karnaamo ki news chalne lagi. Samachaar me ye bataya jaane laga ki Veer naamak ladka Ava ki jaan bachaane ke liye itni dur tak gaya tha jaha woh kisi masterplan ka shikaar hoke ghayal ho gaya.

Crimson ki photo saari news media me release kar di gayi. Logo ko jab ye samajh aaya ki asli maajra kya tha toh unhe Veer ka samarthan karne me derr nahi lagi.

Ava ke fans wese hi uski baato par yakeen kar liye the. Dekhte hi dekhte saari janta Crimson ki maang karne lagi. Aur Veer ki veerta ko saraahne lagi.

Veer jo chhipe baithe saari news dekh raha tha use khud kayi nayi nayi baatein pata chal rahi thi.

'Ava's mom-!? She passed away?'

Woh bura bhala keh ke Ava ko Island par chhor ke aaya tha. Kahi na kahi Ava ki maa ki mrityu ka use bhi dukh tha.

Magar ye samay shok jataane ka nahi tha. Samay tha yaha se nikalne ka.

DGSI se uski baat ho chuki thi. Sab kuch Ava ne karwaya tha. DGSI abhi iss shaq me thi ki woh chopper kiska tha? Aur Veer itni jaldi recover kaise ho gaya? Saath hi uska surrender na karna.

Ye kuch sawaal the jo unhe sataa rahe the. Isliye, Veer se aamne saamne baat karne ki unhone thaani.

*Tococococococo*

Helicopter ke neeche aate hi, uske andar se Veer baahar aaya.

Sab kuch news me prakaashit kiya jaa raha tha.

Hotel me maujood Tejal, Bhavna, Arohi aur Manorath ne jab ye khabar dekhi toh jaise unki khushi ka thikana na raha. Itne dino baad woh sabhi use dekh rahe the. Unke bhaavo ko shabdo me bayaa karna mushqil tha.

Tejal : M-Mom!

Khabar dekhte hi Tej apni jagah se uth khadi hui.

Bhavna : Tej! Jaldi! Chalo!

Bhavna kisi hawa ke jhonke ki tarah saree pehne pehne hi room se baahar nikal gayi.

Tejal : R-Right! Wait! Mom!

Aur Tej uske peeche peeche daud ke chal di.

Arohi : Dada jii! Chaliye!

Manorath : Haan bhai haan! Chalo chalo!

Idhar Arohi ne Manorath ko kamre ke baahar nikaal, kamra lock kiya aur unhe apne sang laate hue neeche aa gayi.

Unn sabhi ki manzil Veer ki location hi thi jo unhe news se mil chuki thi. Cab book karte hi woh sabhi waha se chal diye.

Par wahi bas nahi the. Ek aur aalishaan hotel me maujood ek ladki gumsum si baithi hui thi. Aur, uske theek saamne ek aurat khadi thi.

Woh koi aur nahi, Ashita hi thi. Aur saamne baithi ladki ~



Suhana!

Ashita : Akhir kab tak hum iss tarah hotel me rahenge? Huh?

Suhana : Why are you here? I told you to leave me alone!

Ashita : Ye sab kya laga rakha hai Suhana? Tumhare husband ka phone pichle 2 dino me 12 baar aa chuka hai. Agar mein pick karungi to tumhari saari pol khul jayegi. Sabko lata lag jayega ki tumhe split personality disorder hai.

Suhana : Prakash Uncle hai uske liye.

Ashita : And thank god that he's here. Warna agar woh na ho toh pata nahi mein tumhe kaise handle karungi. Tumhare husband ko jawaab tab se wahi de rahe hai. Lekin, mujhe lagta nahi woh ab zyada derr tak hold kar payenge ye sab.

Suhana : H-He-! He will manage. I believe in him.

Suhana ki haalat dekh, Ashita ka dil paseej utha. Woh ahista se uske bagal se aake baithi aur uska haath thaam kuch sochi,

'Agar mene iss baat ko abhi nahi rakha, toh shayad aage jaake ye aur nuksan-dayak hogi. Suhana ko mujhe realise karwana hoga. I know ye sahi state nahi hai inn sab baato ko jaan'ne ka. Lekin, mein aur derr nahi kar sakti. I'm sorry Suhana.'

Ashita : Suhana!?

Suhana : …

Ashita : Suhana???

Suhana : Ungh??

Ashita : Mujhe tumse kuch zaroori baat karni hai.

Suhana : O-Ohh!

Ashita (sighs) : Suhana! Tumhe pyaar ho gaya hai!

Aur usne keh diya. Seedhe seedhe!

Suhana : Hmm?

Ashita : Mujhe nahi pata ye pyaar ka beej tumhare andar kab boya gaya lekin, beej ankurit ho chuka hai Suhana. Usne paudhe ka roop lena shuru kar diya hai. Aur, mujhe darr hai ki kahi ye bada sa vraksh na bann jaaye. Agar aisa hua toh fir ye reversible nahi hoga. Fir tum pyaar ke daldal me fass jaogi Suhana!

Woh sab kuch sahi keh rahi thi. Parantu, Suhana uss haalat me thi hi nahi jaha woh inn pechida baato ko samajh sake. Woh toh Ashita ko aise dekh rahi thi ki jaise maano raah chalte kisi paagal insaan ko dekh rahi ho.

Suhana ne Ashita ka maatha chhua aur fir use waqai chintit nazro se dekhi,

Suhana : Kaun sa ped? Kaisa paudha? Kaha ka beej? Ashita! Tumhari tabiyat theek hai na? Should I take you to a doctor? Don't worry! I won't charge you for that.

Ashita : Ohh! God!!! This fucking stupid-!!! Aarrrghhh! Mera sarr fatt jayega. Calm down! Calm down! Suhana abhi calmly nahi soch rahi. Yes! She's not like her usual self. Tumhe dheere dheere aage badhna padega. Yes! Phew! Okay! So, meri baat suno Suhana.

Suhana (nods) : Uhh-huh! Mein sunn rahi hu!

Ashita : No! You are not listening you fucking stupid-!!! Argh!! Mein firse frustrate ho gayi. Calm down! Calm down! Ashita! Phew!

Suhana (frowns) : Are you really okay?

Ashita (screams) : Yesss! I'm fucking okay! But you are not you idiot-! Urgh! Anyways! Meri baat suno! Tumhe uss ladke se pyaar ho gaya hai. Do you understand?? Are you getting what I'm saying????

Suhana : Huh?

Ashita : Tumhe uss Veer naam ke ladke se pyaar ho gaya hai. Lekin, use bhul jao kyuki woh ab iss duniya se-

Woh abhi apni baat poori kehti ki tabhi room ka darwaza dhadalle se khula aur Prakash Uncle andar aake tapaak se bol pade,

"W-Woh Veer zinda hai! Miss Suhana! News dekhiye!"

Ashita : Ehh?

Ashita jaha confused reh gayi toh wahi Suhana tezzi me apne bistar se uth baahar room me aayi aur uski nazre seedhe TV par jaake tik gayi.

Khabar Veer ki hi chal rahi thi. Uska woh chehra, logo ke beech ghire hona, security ka uske liye jagah banaana.

Woh sab kuch apni aankhon se dekh paa rahi thi. Na jaane kya hua use jo woh seedha baahar ko apni car ki orr bhaag nikli.

Ashita : S-Suhana??? Wait!!!

Prakash Uncle : Lagta hai Miss issi news channel waali location par gayi hai.

Ashita : Aur aap…!

Prakash Uncle : Hmm?

Ashita : Uncle aap ko kya zaroorat thi ekdum se kisi ke kamre me aane ki. Do ladies andar baat kar rahi thi aur aap ho ki-

Prakash Uncle : Arrey mein woh- mein toh soochna dene aaya tha bas.

Ashita : De di soochna? Nikal gayi na woh. Ab chaliye!

Prakash Uncle : Bilkul! Abhi car laaya.

Suhana ke theek peeche Prakash Uncle Ashita ko leke bhi usi pate par chal diye.

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Idhar Veer chaaro taraf se ghira hua tha. Adhiktar janta uska samarthan kar rahi thi. Parantu, kuch abhi bhi the jo bataayi gayi baato ka asaani se yakeen nahi kar rahe the. Nayi sacchayi ka khandan karne me lage hue the.

Sawaalo par sawaal Veer se reporters puchte jaa rahe the. Kintu, woh ek ka bhi jawaab dene ke liye nahi ruka.

Veer ke liye security iss waqt behad high thi aur woh log apna kaam poori mehnat se kar rahe the. Na jaane kab uspe kaun hamla kar de. Maamla poori tarah se shaant nahi hua tha.

Uske thoda aage badhte hi DGSI ki team uske saamne thi. Kisi jeeti jaagti hassti ke samaan prateet ho raha tha woh iss waqt.

DGSI ne uske aate hi apni kaaryavaahi shuru kar di. Terashima se leke sabhi upasthit the.

Aur ye jald hi siddh bhi ho gaya ki-

Veer!!! Criminal nahi tha.

Saare arrest warrants uss par se hatt gaye. Yaha tak ki DGSI ki orr se use maafi ke roop me kuch dhan raashi bhi uplabdh ho chuki thi.

Crimson aur Ushant ko leke tehqiqaat bhi shuru ho gayi. Aur, Veer ka jise sabse zyada intezaar tha. Woh pal bhi aa hi gaya.

"Veeeeeeeeeeerrrr!!!!"

Ek jaani pehchaani awaaz, jise sunn'ne ke liye woh kabse tadap raha tha. Jaha usne umeed hi chorr di thi ki woh ab ye awaaz kabhi nahi sunn payega.

Ye wahi awaaz thi.

Awaaz thi Bhavna ki! Uski maa ki!

Par awaaz ki goonj abhi khatam nahi hui thi jab ek aur awaaz waha uske kaano me goonj gayi,

"Veeeeeeerr!!"

Aur iss awaaz se bhi woh bhali bhaati parichit tha. Agar koi aam insaan hota, toh itne shor me inn awaazo ko sunn nahi paata. Magar, Veer ek system holder tha-! Uske senses aam insaano ke muqaable kahi zyada tha.

Ye awaaz thi Tejal ki!

Parantu, woh logo ke beech ghira hua tha. Nikle kaise inn logo ke beech se?

Jab woh inn soch vichaar me laga hua tha tabhi ek haath bheed me aage badha aur uski kalaayi ko thaama.

'Hmm?'

Jab tak woh kuch soch paata, ek zorr ke khichaav ne use bheed se ghaseetate hue baahar nikaala.

Logo ke gol ghere ko tod woh baahar nikal khichaav ke chalte ek ladki se jaa bhida. Bhidna bhi nahi kahenge. Ye toh milan tha.

Aankhein jab chaar hui toh Veer unn naino ko dekhte hi pehchaan gaya.

Arohi!!!

Dono kuch shano tak ek dusre ki aankhon me hi kho gaye. Paristhiti kitni hi jatil kyu na ho, Arohi hamesha unn sthitiyo me saralta se apna raasta khoj liya karti thi. Aaj bhi wahi hua.

Usne badi hi asaani se Veer ko bheed se baahar nikal liya tha. Woh baat alag thi ki ab ek naya ghera bann'ne jaa raha tha.

Arohi : V-Veer!

Veer : Arohi dii!?

Dono aage kuch keh paate ki tabhi Veer ke upar koi lapka. Security sachet hui magar unse derri ho gayi. Ucchalne wala shaks behad tezz tha.

Zorr ka jhatka Veer ko apni chhaathi pe mehsoos hua aur agle hi shan woh neeche zameen pe tha. Uske upar ek bhaar bhi tha.

Khushboo ne naak me jaise hi apni haazri lagayi. Veer sab samajh gaya.

Veer : Teju dii???

Tej uske upar use zorr se jakde hue thi. Shirt par uski pakad itni mazboot thi ki lag raha tha kahi shirt hi na faad de woh.

Tej uss badan se wahi khushboo lene ka prayaas kar rahi thi. Magar woh kahi maujood hi nahi thi. Kaise milti Veer ki wahi shareerik sugandh? Veer Crimson ko maar ke khoon aur samudra ke namkeen paani se sann'ne ke baad nayi shirt me aa chuka tha. Uski khaas sugandh toh ghar par hi padi hui thi. Wahi Suhana ke dwara diya gaya Las Vegas wala perfume.

Fir bhi, iss chhaathi se lagne maatr se Tej ki jaise saari chintaaye gayab ho gayi.

Woh dono ye bhul chuke the ki unhe saare news channels me darshaya jaa raha tha. Kuch derr yu hi uske upar chadhe rehne ke baad Tej ne haule se apna sarr uthaya aur use dekha,

Aankhein dekhte hi Veer bhaanp chuka tha ki ye khubsoorat aankhein kayi raato se uski talaash me pehra di hai. Naino ke neeche kam sone se woh kaalapann, Tej ki atalta ko toh darsha hi raha tha par saath hi kahi na kahi uski sundarta me bhi chaar chaand laga raha tha.

Ek ajeeb sa aakarshan tha ye.

Veer (smiles) : I'm okay!

Tej (nods) : Mmm~

Veer : Umm! Aap uthengi? Aas paas sab hume hi dekh rahe hai.

Tej : Dekhne do!

Veer : Teju dii!

Tej : ...

Veer : Teju dii! Please! Uthiye na! Jee bhar ke gale lag lena. Mene maa ki bhi awaaz suni. Kya unse nahi milne dogi aap?

Bhavna ka zikr aate hi iss baar Tej uske upar se uth gayi. Lekin, uthne se pehle woh apne Bhai ke gaal ko choomna nahi bhuli. Veer se uski pakad chhoothate hi use kisi aur ne apne aalingan me le liya.

Mazbooti me ye pakad uski apni pakad se bilkul bhi peeche nahi thi.

Veer apni maa, Bhavna ki baaho me tha.

Veer : Maa!

Bhavna ne pehle toh use kass ke jakde rakha. Uske baad turant hi sabse pehle uske shareer ka jayza liya. Aage peeche, upar neeche. Jab sab sunishchit ho gaya toh uska haath apne aap hi Veer ki shirt ke andar gaya aur uske pendant ko tatola.

Haath me pendant aate hi Bhavna ne ek raahat ki saans li. Uske baad apne bete ke haath ko upar kar usne uski kalaayi dekhi.

Veer ki kalaayi me woh kaala dhaaga abhi bhi bandha hua tha. Bhavna ne khud hi uske jaane se pehle ye baandha tha.

Kaale dhaage me darasal kuch bhi nahi tha. Woh koi jaaduyi dhaaga nahi tha. Lekin, Bhavna ka atal vishvaas tha usme. Aur, yeh kaafi tha uske liye.

Sab kuch jaanch lene ke baad fir usne apne bete ke mukh ko dekha. Wahi bhar nahi thi. Dur khadi Ava bhi sab kuch dekh rahi thi.

Jaha usne apni maa ko khoya tha toh wahi uski nazro ke saamne ek maa bete aapas me mil rahe the. Unke milan ko dekh, uske honth pal bhar ke liye upar ko uth gaye. Par unn aankhon me atyant dukhdayi peeda ki ek parat chadhi hui thi.

Ye pehli baar tha, jab saare cameras Veer ke upar focused the. Na ki khyaati praapt ki mahaan singer Natalia ke upar.

Aur, inhi shor sharaabe ke beech Ava ke qadam dheere dheere peeche ko chal diye. Woh janta ki nazro se kab gaayab ho gayi, kisi ko kuch pata hi nahi chala.

Idhar Bhavna Veer ko thaame use ghoorne me lagi thi.

Bhavna : Mein toh pehle din hi bhaanp gayi thi ki tu mujhse jhooth bol ke gaya hai.

Hamesha apne bete ko 'tum' keh ke pukaarne waali Bhavna ke muh se aaj apne aap hi 'tu' shabd nikal aaya.

Ye 'tu' shabd apnepann ko darshane ke liye tha. Bekaraari ko darshane ke liye tha. Jaise woh batlana chaah rahi thi ki uska baccha kidhar bhi kyu na chala jaaye, kitne hi meel dur kyu na bichad jaaye, rahega hamesha uske aanchal ki chhaav me hi.

Veer sirf uska tha. 'Tu' shabd saral maayno me yahi darsha raha tha. Woh jaanti thi ki uska laadla uss se jhooth bol ke gaya tha.

Veer : Aur mein bhi ye jaanta tha ki aap ye jaan gayi ho ki mein aap se jhooth bol raha hu.

Bhavna : Uske baad bhi tum jhooth bol ke gaye?

Veer badle me bas muskura diya.

Bhavna : Ek ek baat bataoge tum.

Veer (smiles) : Jaisi aapki aagya!

Bhavna ne punah use apne gale se laga liya.

*Badump* *Badump*

Uske seene se lage unn dhadkano ko sunn, apne aap hi uski aankhein bheeg uthi. Woh zinda tha. Sahi salamat tha. Iss se badi baat uske liye aur kuch nahi thi.

Bhavna ko sambhaalte hue Veer ne use Tej ke sahaare khada karwaya. Aur, Manorath ne bhi tabhi aage badh apne pote ko gale se laga liya.

Veer : Dada jii!? Aap yaha kyu aaye? Khamakha taqleef uthayi!

Manorath : Ab tu mera baap bann gaya? Hmm? Arre Bhai mera pota jab gaayab ho, uss se koi sampark nahi bann paa raha ho, toh sab ko chinta toh hoyegi hi na? Mein ghar pe kaise baith sakta hu?

Arohi : Jab se tumhara call lagna band hua tha. Tab se hi hum sab tension me the. Tumhe bohut se questions ke answers dene hai.

Veer (smiles) : Right!

Manorath : Chalo bhai! Ab jald se jald yaha se ghar chalo. Aur Arohi bitiya theek keh rahi hai. Prashno ki list taiyaar rakhi hai iss Tejal bitiya ne toh-!

Veer apne parivaar se bharat milaap me laga tha aur media ek ek pal record kar rahi thi. Saath hi DGSI waalo ka yakeen aur mazboot ho chuka tha ki Veer koi criminal nahi.

Bharat se uska parivaar aaya hua tha. Ye ek sharm ki baat thi unke liye ki baahar se aaye athiti ke saath unn sabne aisa vyavhaar kiya.

Veer ko laga tha ki usne sabhi log se mil liya. Lekin, use zara bhi andaza nahi tha ki use ye awaaz bhi yaha sunaayi degi.

"M-Move aside!!"

"J-Just a minute! Step aside-!!! P-Please!"

Awaaz sunte hi Veer ki dhadkane tezz ho gayi. Bauhe kass uthi. Uska sarr idhar udhar mud uss shaks ki talaash me lag gaya.

Woh ek jhatke me logo ke ghere se baahar nikla. Bhavna, Tej, Arohi aur Manorath sabhi use prashn bhari nazro se dekh rahe the.

Magar, Veer na ruka.

Logo ko idhar udhar kar woh jaise hi baahar nikla...




Waqt jaise tham gaya.

"Suhana!?"

Woh ye jaanta tha ki Suhana ne uski madad ke liye chopper bheja tha. Magar usne sapne me bhi ye umeed nahi ki thi woh khud yaha tak aayi thi.

Woh toh hospital me thi na? Uski chot ka kya? Tamaam sawaal Veer ke mann me use dekhte hi uth khade hue.

Par dono ke beech ek ajeeb si khamoshi chhaayi hui thi. Dono ke hi mukh adhkhule the. Aur iss chuppi ko Veer ne hi toda,

Veer : Miss Suhana!? Aap yaha?

Par Suhana jaise kisi aur hi duniya me jaa chuki thi. Veer se milne ki ajeeb si dhun use sawaar thi. Aur ab jab woh saamne tha toh use kuch samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ki kya kare. Woh bas chup-chaap yu hi khadi rahi. Aur fir turant hi...!

Uske aansu chhalak uthe.




*Click* *Click*

Cameras ki shutters ki awaaz jab uske kaano me zorr se padi toh use hosh aaya. Ye kya kar rahi thi woh? Use ehsaas hua ki woh khabar me aa rahi thi.

Na jaane kitne log ise dekh rahe honge. Yaha tak ki uska husband bhi dekh sakta tha ye sab. Woh kaise itni badi bhul kar gayi?

Iss baat ka bodh hote hi darr ke maare uske qadam peeche ho gaye. Woh jhatse mudi aur aage badhi hi thi ki-

*Badump*

Laga jaise dil ne ek dhadkan phaand li. Do mazboot haath uski kamar par bandhe use jakde hue the.

"W-Wait!"

Veer ki awaaz theek uske daaye kaan me padi. Suhana ki saansein tezz ho uthi.

Ye woh kya kar rahi thi? Nahi! Ye sab kaise ho gaya uss se? Woh baad me bhi toh mil sakti thi. Itni bekaraar kaise ho gayi woh? Milne ke liye itna bechain kyu thi woh?

Kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha uski. Jab ek message ne uske dimaag ke saare taaro ko jod sab spasht kar diya.

*Buzz*

Mobile vibrate hua. Suhana ne haath me pakda mobile kaanpte hue haatho se mod uski screen par message dekha.

Message Ashita ka tha.

Aur saaf saaf bas yahi likha hua tha~

"Dear! You have fallen in love with him."

Padhte hi Suhana ki aankhein achambhav ke maare fel gayi.

Veer ka haath tab tak uski peeth par komalta sa firr raha tha.

Veer : You recovered!? Tell me...! Kyu aayi aap yaha? Kyu kiya mere liye itna? Mujhe bohut saare sawaalo ke jawaab aap se-

Magar uski baatein adhuri reh gayi jab Suhana ne khud ko uski pakad se chhuraaya aur woh ghabraate hue daud ke waha se nikal gayi.




Veer : N-No!!! W-Wait! Miss Suhaaaana!!!?

Logo ne fir use gher liya. Suhana...! Uski nazro se ojhal ho gayi.

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Crimson ke ant ke baad sab kuch shaant sa ho gaya tha. Veer aur anya ghar waapsi ke liye flight me baith chuke the.

Magar, Paris me idhar dur countryside ke pahaadi ilaake me ek choti par ek ladki, uchaayi se neeche dekh rahi thi.

Uske baal ahista ahista maddham hawa me lehra rahe the. Aankhon me bas niraasha hi thi. Sundar se mukh me kahi koi josh nahi, chehra kehne ko toh khubsoorat tha magar chamak jaise gaayab thi.

Agle hi pal uska perr choti ke chhor par aaya aur woh uski kagaar par khadi ho gayi.

[W-Wait!!! What are you doing?]

Uske mann me ek awaaz aayi. Par woh koi jawaab nahi de rahi thi.

[D-Dear! Stop it! What the hell are you doing? H-Hey don't scare me! Please!]

Woh awaaz vyakul thi. Ladki ne fir ahista se apne mann me uss awaaz ko jawaab diya.

'There's nothing left now! I must go as
well! Lily...!'

[W-Wait!! N-Noooooo!]

Aur usne apna perr aage badha diya.

[Noooooooooooooo!!!!!]
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Mujhe nahi lagta iss se zyada pareshani mujhe kabhi kisi update ko likhne me gayi hogi. Ye update mujhe yaad rahega. Kitne kasht jhelne pade hai ise taiyaar karne me. Update ke post time dekh ke andaza laga sakte ho aap sab. Also, yes! My mobile is gone. Previous data bohut kuch jaa chuka hai. This update is actually around 6.1k words. Yes! Ye mega update hai. Toh Dil se like thok ke jaane ka. Target wahi hai apna. 150. Aur revos rakhne ka.
Dhanyavaad.

 

[Kingisborn]

First reader Bhai aur pahle comment bhi Maine Kiya

 

[Kingisborn]

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[Werewolf]

Great update , and I am sorry to suggest you but I want some character that are mysterious in story without giving so much back story

Bro khatarnak update
But ending bohat sad ho gayi Grace Martin is dead but how?.....

Ava bhi fas gayi londe ke chakkar me .
Aur Bhai Keira ka kya hua vo to gayab hai naa?....

Ab veer kaa dhol bajne vala hai ye to dekhne maza ayega tej kya haal karegi or Suhana Ava ke saath kya karegi jab veer jida dikhega tab

Ab bhi ek chij reh gayi bro vertigo or Shark taming gayi kaha

Sub perfectly jud raha hai history ke sath ab bus story bohot dhyan se padh Raha hu..........

Baki ab arc khatam hone vala hai par maza aya is arc me

super duper A1 update bhai.... maza aa gya padh ke bass thoda zaldi zaldi de diya karo update

Ding almost theory veer assuming was right bechari Ava his ke liye itne papad bele ya isme bhi twist hai hogaya

So superb update.....
Woh masked man jo bhi hai bohot hi khatarnak hai....
Uska range jitne bhi systems hai unme sai bohot jyada hai.....
Can't explain in words about this update
Excellent
for the update

Great update Bhai maza aa gaya
Or please bhi update jaldi Diya kro

Mindblowing update

I am Sad that Ava had to go through all that and Veer just behaved like an asshole
I hope in future unka relation acha ho jaye ga Once again

Nice and fantastic update bhai

Mind blowing update

Nice update bro

Nice n fantastic

Ohh boss kya hi update tha ye kya gazab krr rhe ho aap starting ki thi jb is story ka tb laga tha k ye bhut alg jayegi thread but itna uper level jayega ye expect nhi Kiya tha

Fantastic update chalo crimson ka past pata chala or us masked ko pehle he hi pata tha ki veer zaror dekhega flashback or jo suspens last mai diya hai wakai mai maza aa gaya padh ke

Intersting update.... Very nice and looking forward to 2hat happens next and will grace dies and Ava her original identity remains or as grace die and ava as well

Nice beautiful update

ek baat saff ho chuki hai aur wo ye hai ki jo bhi kisi system vale vyakti ko marta hai usko marne vale ke sare card miljate hai .
aur ab vo vyakti ki baat karte hai jo ki hai mr X
wo ek system hunter ho sakta hai jo ki system vale vyakti ko marta hai isi liye 30 mese 18 bache hue hai kyuki baki logo ko marr diya gaya hai unke card ke liye .

Werewolf California me English ya Spanish bola jata hai.... French nahi

Mind blowing update! Happy that we resume normal schedule!!!

Awesome effort!

Mind believing fantastic update janab

Kya Baat h.. Mza aa gya..crimson ka past b dekh lia but jo mai chah ra tha k veer us ava ko wo attitude dikhaye jo wo deserve krti thi atleast for now..& he did it...baaki aaj bhot zda kuch ni h bolne ko bs intezaar h to agle update ka & i hope is baar time se mil jayega..baki lge rho munna bhai to entertain ur readers as u always do.. Big love n take care

Sandar jandar update brother...

Awesome update

bahut badhiya update hai,,,,,,,,,,,Ava ne akhir kar bata diya hai ki kyu wo ye sab kiya hai.........fir bhi veer ne maaf nhi kiya...........or crimson ke past ke jaariye paata chala ki crimson nse hi uske dad ko mara tha.....wo mask man koun hai jisne kaha hai koi hai jo ise dekhega....unkwon caller koun haai.........kahi mask man or unkwon caller ek hi admi to nhi.......
waithing for next update

In the end of update you have written that after 2 update arc finish..
What is the meaning of this?

Amazing update bro maja aagaya so the x man is very fucking smart he knew it all ki future me bhi system kiske pass hoga aur to aur kya skills ho gi uske pass y bhi shayad uske pass koi skill ya card ya koi aisa scroll hoga jisse wo dekh sake ya jaan sake un incidents ko jo usse jud ke future me hone waale h
And offcourse ava jaisi krni waisi bharni the saying us correct

Awesome update

bahut badhiya update hai bro..........

Superb update

Mr X/Masked man island ke aas paas hi hai. Usko death flag ki range mai lane ke liye hi sayad Ava ne DF ki range badhayi hai. Crimson ke baaki card bhi saayad usko mile hai jaise Ava ko ek card mila hai.

Bhai ekk random sa question puch raha hun .... Kya hame veer ki love life dekhne ko milegi ... Or or kya jo arc jo apne batayein hain bass wahi hai ya or bhi hain ... Nai id se question puch raha hun bhai koi naya reader nahi hun ... Purani id ka password bhul gaya hun isliye...

veer ki baat wo kisi bhi kimat par koi galat kaam nahi karega chahe danv par duniya lagi ho lekin mai yahan Ava ko dosh nai dunga kyunki ma se bada duniya me kauno noi uske liye kuch bhi karna pade karna chahiye agar baat unki Jaan bachane ki ho ya fir agar Aisa noi kar sakte rules aade aa rahe to fir sari life aisi takleef hogi jo bayan noi ki ja sakti hai filhaal meri samjh se wo galat noi koi usko raah dikhane wala noi tha ab veer agar usko kuch sikhaya hai to aage galti na karegi.mast update dost

Akhir kar Crimson Arcs ka end hua

Ok bro got it

Bhai mzza aw gya
Kya update dia h
Now it will be nice to see how ava and veer face each other next time
And abhi is arc me 2 updates
Yahi masked man samne aye ga ya kuch missing h abhi
Don't knw
But waiting to see what's next

Atyant adbhut update Werewolf bhai....

Matlab Mr.X ko bhi pata hai ki veer hi uska face dekhega...

Jabardasttt Updateee

Last mein Ava ne jo kiya woh samaj nhi aaya. Usne jis maa ko bachane ke liye itna kuch kiya aur jab woh apne manjil ke itne kareeb aachuki thi toh usne aisa kyo kiya.

Nice

Fabulous update boss....

Very nice and amaing update
Veer ne crimson ka past dekha crimesons ne mask man ke kahne par hi ava ke mom dad ko udaya Aur unknown caller aur ab ye mask man ek nai mystrey ban gye hai
But mask man ko pahle se kaise pata ke system owner ke sath kya ghatne vala hai aur kab kiske pass system pahunchane wala hai kaun system owner banne wala hai kafi sare questions hai
Aur is kahani ka tile incest hai but abhi tak insct ki starting hi nhi hui

Werewolf bhai ho sakta hai mai kuch dino tak update read na kar payu sur review na de payu because mere graduation ke exam start ho gye hai jo 17th may se end hoge

Fantastic Fabulous mazedaar awesome update sir.

awesome update.

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Werewolf bhai....
Nice and beautiful update....

Beautiful update Bhai

Nice

Super fantastic update bro

Werewolf bhai kya mask wala aadmi Mr.X hai.

Aur kya veer ne yeh cheez notice ki crimson ke past mien ki mask wala aadmi ke pass bhi system hai aur kya veer ko bhi doubt hai ki mask man and Mr.X ka kuch sambandh hai?

Aur ha ava ko bc itni asani se maaf mat karna usses bhi pata lage ki thukra ke mera pyar mera intkaam dekhegi

At last Crimson is dead,ant bhala to sab bhala.Maja aa gaya.

Jabardast update bhai

Super duper se upar bhai, ek baar to AWA ko uski aukat dikha di VEER ne phir bad me dosti hogi to chalega. Kyonki ab AWA us se milti rahegi to kuch na kuch to aage chal ke hoga hi, jo bad ki bad me dekh lenge.
Dhanyavaad update ke liye aur abhi free bhi ho gaye ho to update bhi regular milta rahega.

Kya bawal update hai Bhai mtlb us mask Wale ko Mr x bol skte hai kyunki starting se end Tak sab karta dharta wahi chae wo crimson ho Ava ho ya veer

Veer bhai you are great aaapke updTe hamesha time pe rahe keep writting

Boht badhiya update Werewolf bhai

Ava, Boht achcha kirdaar hai Ava. Dekha jaaye toh uski boht chhoti hai ya phir nahi bhi, uska hasta khelta parivar tha, maa baap use boht pyaar krte tha. Phir system mila singer bani, baap ka khoon hua maa zinda bhi hai toh murde ki tarah toh har kisi ko gussa aana laazmi hai aur khooni ko dhundhna bhi. Sab Veer ki tarah nahi hote jo aur logo ki parvah kare. Ava ko toh phir bhi apne kiye par dukh aur glani thi aur aakhir mei Veer ki baat sunkar uska vo death flag ko upgrade krna ye dikhata bhi hai ki usne apni maa ke moh mei galti ki hai nirdosh ki jaan khatre mei daal kar aur ab use aisa nahi krna chahiye. Ab toh Ava ke liye koi hate nahi bacha usko sthiti theek nahi thi aur caller ka darr bhi tha.

Ab Crimson iska zindagi mei bhi dukh the, story ke baaki villain ki tarah ye bhi shuru se evil nahi tha haalat ne ise bigaad diya tha. Jo ise zindagi ne dikhaya vo isne kiya, eklauta dost tha uski maut ke baad vo krta bhi kya.
Update se ek baat aur pata chalti hai aapne kaha tha ki Crimson ka system powerful hai Ava se jabki Ava ko system pehle mila Crimson se. Iska matlab Crimson ne kaafi logo ko mara hai aur shayad system owners ko bhi

Ye Mr. X ye kya hee aadmi hai sab pta hai ise. Masked man aur Mr. X ke same hone ke kaafi chances hai. Iss Masked man ki toh umar bhi zyada nahi hai Renshu ki tarah toh iske paas itna powerful system kaise hai.

Iski iss line ne toh dimaag hee kharab kar diya saale ke paas lagta hai koi alag hee skill hai future wagera ki ise itna tak pata hai ki koi system owner ki crimson ko marega aur ise apna chehra nahi dikhana. Iska bhi alag hee twist hoga.
Bhaya ek baat kahunga kahani mei ab tak koi aisa antagonist nhi aaya jo pure evil ho Aatish, Slogan, Crimson sab ke sath kuch hua jiske karan ye aise bane mai aise kisi ko dekhna chahunga jo bilkul bewajah evil ho jiske liye koi soft corner na bane kise ke dil mei

Baaki waiting for agla update and my favourite................................




KAERA bechari boht dino se underground hai company ko bhi loss ho rha hoga

Bahut hi saandar majedar update

Bohat zada paicheda hoti jaa rahi hain story. Ek taraf Ava ko apni ghalti ka bhod hona plus mission ke chaltey usay veer ko bachane ka mission mila wahi is crimson ki maut se usay mili new power lekin Aisa Kiya hain. Kiya khel racha jaa raha hai. Kia Renusha hi Mr. x Nahi hain aur woh sab se khel raha hain. Taki dusro ki powera jama kar ke last me khud Bach Jaye with all powera from the other.
Awaiting for next update.

werewolf bhai vary nIce update! Akir yeh to clear ho gaya ki system ke end hone par uske skill cards dusre system ko mil jate hai, ava na apne matlb ke liya veer ki help ki for rewards point to save her mother! But veer ke interaction se usko yeh pata chal gaya ki uska asli kaatil wo nakab wala aadmi hai jisne crimson ko uksaya! GRACE MARTIN is dead? Ava tut gayi! bhai yeh toh samaj main aa gaya ki yeh sab system ke liye ho raha hai and sab planing veer ko takatwar karne ke liye but kyu? (May be aage ke arc main pata chalega) Mr X and that caller man are linked to each other and that caller man will gives some spoiler in Chinatown arc jise veer janta hai may be! And that quote "koi hai jo is chahare ko dekhega" And he young! Now comes to present situation ava ka apologize karna aacha laga, usko yeh realized ho gaya ki usse kya galti hui jab veer ne kaha agar uski maa bhi hoti toh bhi wo usko bachata! Bhai thanks for this update it's gives goosebumps! And aacha laga next updates will comes on time, but aapne yeh supermegaupdate de kar khus kar diya

Quite an impressive update with plenty of facts and revelatory secrets. But I think that Death Flag's range should have been shown here with every upgrade.

Very fantastic update keep it up

Kahi mask wala aadmi mr X to nahi
What ? Grace Martin dead

Really awesome you are king of adventure

Crimson ke past se pata to chala ki koi or hi hai jo inn sab ko nacha raha hai.. masked man bahot power full lag raha hai or woh jiski baat kar raha tha lagta hai future ke bare me bhi jannta ho.

Khair veer ne to ava ko kathor shabdo me suna diya ki ab kabhi apni sakal mat dikhana.. me apne raste or tum apne raste ..

Ava ne apne card ko ji upgrade kar diya.. ab ava ki maa ko kya Hua hai ye dekhte hai aage..

Superb update bhai.

This shit is damn bloody good. No words to explain how much I'm in love with this story right now. Excellent stuff!

Superb update bro...
Waiting for next

Wao nice update

Another nice update. As with Aatish, Crimson also has a troubled past. But his daring and zeal for life makes one fall for him. Jis tarah se uske dost ko maara gaya, weh to waisa hi ho gaya.
Ava past was also troubled, it was bad luck that her parents got involved in fight between two systems. Ohhh..., Mr X, ab weh khas villain lag raha hai, jo system walon ko lada kar shayad unki powers batorne ki koshish kar raha hai. Lekin ye nahin samajh me aaya ki jab ek system wala dusre ko maarta hai, tab Mr X ko kya fayda hota hai. Kya Mr X ke pass koi skill ya card hai jo dusre system wale ko task de sake. Mujhe lagta hai ki weh system ko exploit karna jaan gaya hai, kaise usko dusron per use kara ja sake. Ek baat to hai, Mr X dusre system walon ko khatam karke khud 'Baadshah' ban'na chahta hai. Pehle weh Crimson ko use karke dusre system walon ko khatam kar raha tha, aur jab use laga ki Crimson khud uske liye khatra ban gaya hai, tab usne Crimson ko Veer aur Ava ke jariye khatam karva diya.
Chalo, Ava ki mother ki death ke baad Ava bhi ab free ho gayi hai.
Ab kuch emotional scenes to bante hain, jab Veer apni family se milega, aur khaas kar Suhana se, jisko yeh bhi pata nahi hai ki Veer abhi jinda hai. Yahan par ek intimate sex scene to banta hai.
Aur Kaera, jab usko pata chalega ki kis tarah se Veer marte huye bacha hai, uske emotions bhi phat padenge. Aur Sonia...
Business Arc khub majedaar hoga, kuch family drama, kuch romance, kuch business ki uchaiyon ko chuta Veer. Aur weh designer, aur sanwitch kha kar bina paise diye bhag jane wali food critic, itni tension ke baad kuch relaxed bhi to hona chahiye. Ladayi to China Town Arc me baad me dekh lenge.

Amazing update. Who killed grace??? I think lily

Update bhai

Congratulations for 3100 pages

Fantastic update bhai ji
Bharosa bahut muskil se hota hai
Ava ne jo kiya use uska natija apnj maa ko kho ke mil gaya is liye kabhi kisi ka bura nahi karna chahiye ab Ava ko veer ka piche se saath dena chahiye kyuki vo samjh gai hogi ki jisne bhi ye kiya hai vo veer ke bare me janta tha sayad bhavish ki chije dekhna ka ya kuch esa card hai uske pass jisse use pata chal raha hai ki kya hone wala hai use apne mom dad ke hatyare ko pakrna hai to use veer ko protect karna hoga kyuki jo bhi hai vo ab Veer ke piche aayega or Ava ko veer ka bharosa jeetna bhi hai

Great! Only one request hai, if possible Hindi font me post karne ki . Translator ki help le sakte ho.

Kuchh drashya Jo kahani me jyada important nahi hon unko bewajah lamba karne se Bach sakte ho. Jisse aap important part par jyada focus ka sakte ho. Sex scene bhi jaroori Hain beech beech me.

bahut hi shaandaar update hai bhai worth to wait for such a nice update. what like me most in this update " kyunki koi hoga jo is baad me dekhega" wow iska matlab Mr. X ko pahle se hi ye pata hai. mujhe lagta hai uske paas ya to koi skill hai ya koi card jisse wo future ki kuch baatein jaan sakta hai per use shayad apne bare me future nahin pata chal sakta usse aur usse sba kuch bhi nahin pata hoga nahin to wo baki system walon ko maar ker akela bach jata, ye to pakka hai ki wo un sabhi ko marna chahata hai jinke paas system hain aur wo uske saath nahin hain taki wo akela rule kare. abhi tak story me ye nahin pata chal hai ki jo 30 log the initially unko sabko ek saath system mila tha ya alag alag time per mujhe lagta hai ki alag alag time per mila ho kyunki jo aadami jail se bhaga tha usne crimson se kaha tha ki u r also my experiment to ho sakta hai ki alag alag time per system transfer hua ho kyunki abhi tak teen logon ke system milne ketime ko dikhaya gaya hai jisme crimson aur veer dono hi marne wale the jab system mila per ava ke saath aisa nahin tha to system kisi ko kaise choose kerta hai ye jaana waqi interesting hoga.
marne wale aadmi ki skills aur cards tansfer ho jate hain ho skata hai ki jitni bhi skills aur cards hain wo baki bache hue sabhi system walon ko transfer hoti hon per jisne mara ya jisko usse related mission mila unko jyada fayda hota hoga isme jaise ki veer ko hua aur ava ko bhi. ek tarah se ek ki shakti sabme divide ho rahi hai aur isse Mr. X ko fayada ho raha hai bahut sare cards aur skills ke liye bahut jyada mission kerne padeinge aur time aur points bhi bahut lageinge aur inte sare points ko kamane ke liye risk bhi bahut jyada hoga to ye aasan rasta hai ki baki syatem walon ko maar ker unke cards aur skills ko lena aur jo last me akela bachega uske paas sari power hogi aur uske baad aur skills aur cards na bhi mile to bhi wo itna jyada powerfull hoga ki koi usko maar nahin payega

ye to just mere dimag me aaya to meine likh diya asli khel to writer ko hi pata hai. bahut hi jabardast story hai ek ek baat ko soch ker likhe ne aur usse bahut aage tak relate kerne me bahut jyada time lagata hai aur jab sahi se sab match hota hai tabhi maja aata hai to bhai aapke update agar late bhi aaye to chalega aap apna pura time leker hi update likhate hain aur wo hi sabse accha hai

Har Raaz parat dar parat khulta Jaa Raha hai. Ab samajh aaya ki is story ka title 'Baadshah' kyun hai. Shayad Veer hi last surviving system holder rahega ya phir Jo bhi system holders honge unka leader banega.

I think grace Martin ko masked man ne hi marra h
And now I'll like to see grace Martin sch me marri h ya jese ava ko veer ke lie bhi notification Aya tha but vo bach gya tha
Ye to confirm h ki masked man hi h in sb ke piche but now I'll have to see ki kya kya aur planed h
And abhi bhi is arc me 2 updates
Ek to veer apni family ko suhana ko kese face kre ga
And ab ava ka koi ni bacha Is duniya me so it will be interesting to see what's happen next
And I think abhi system walle aur log bhi bhar aye ge
And kuch aur logo ka system active hona abhi bakki h
I think kaera un me se 1 ho skti h
Because uske stats
So it will be interesting to see
What happen next
A lot to think about and a lot to come
Bhai agr is script pr web series bne to super hit hogi
Kbhi.movies aur web series me script writer ka try kro
Acha scope h

Bro sandar lajab mast update bro

Bhai ji great adhbhut lekhni Jabardast or kamal ki update

Zabardast update

Congratulations brother for completing 3100 pages

3100 nice

BHAI update badhiya raha
padhne me mazza aya ,

kuch batie clear ho chuki hai jaisa ki maine assume kiya tha ki koi to hai jo sysytem ke har ek vyakti ko janta hai aur uski skills ke bare me bhi usko maloom hai aur vo hi vyakti kisi na kisi tarah se har ek ko control kar raha hai .
par yaha par kuch swal jo ubhar kar ate hai,

kyu vo system ke vykti ko maarna chahta hai ?
sirf card ke liye ?( ye sabse least possibilites ho sakti hai , kyuki uska maksad sirf itna hi nahi ho sakta jis tarahse wo sabkuch achse plane karke kar raha hai) .

to baaat saff ho jati hai ki wo kuch bada plan kar raha hai .
kya use kuch aisa maloom hai system ke bare me jo aur system owner nahi jante ?

sawal bahot sare ho sakte hai par javab waqt ke sath milenge ....

shandar update ke liye dhanyawad.

Mast update tha Bhai mja aa gya

Bhut hi shandar
Out of the world update bro

For completed 3100 pages on your story thread....

Mind blowing update

Nice update

Nice update

Cant wait to see .. Ki pari ka new avtar kaisa hoga .... Or woh masked man hi main villain hai ... To fight him veer ko or bhi system owners ka sath chahiye hoga i think ... Abhi tak veer ke locket se usse koi power nahi milli ... Ya koi fayeda nahi hua ... May bhi agge jake wahi bhramashtra nikle ... Dekhtein hai agge kya hota hai

Ekk random question kya aage jake veer ka phirse divya ke sath koi scene banega ????

Looking forward to it

Nice update

Hmm to satranj ka baadsha wo jisnai Ava ko unknown call kiya tha jisne crimson or wo chaina man ko call kiya jise X naam diya gya hai

Ye unknown call X or wo maskman kahi dono to ek hi payaale nhi hai....?

System ke es khel mai koi apne aap ko es game ka master samjh raha hai or game bhi wahi bana rha hai Lekin last mai apna Baadsha hi Baadsha banega.......


Aap nai story mai maskman add kar ke kaafi suspension peda kar diya hai ab ye story + point hoti jaa rahi hai

Congratulations for completing 31k pages

Congrats for crossing 3100 pages dear bro .

Congratulations on 3100 pages

BHAI IS STORY ME SEX HA JA NAHI JA ONLY ACTION but story is very nice ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

Most exciting thrilling nd outstanding update

nice1

Shaandaar

Amazing update
Keep it up.

kiya likhate ho bhai jabardast , fantastic update bro

What vertigo or Shark taming chali gayi matlab vo kisi ko bhi nahi mili.wait ek baat samaz nahi ayi ki sirf Aquatic breathing hi kyu mili?.....

Agla to Chinatown ark tha business arc Kaise aya fir

Ye System players ke sath Shatranj khelne ka kya hi fayda hoga Mr.X aka masked man ko kyuki cards or skill to system killer ko hi milega naa or ye Mr.X sirf game khel Raha hai pata nahi kitne points honge uske intelligence me................

Update 2 gjb h

Shandar update bro maza agya,
Ava aur veer ka conversation amazing tha,
To ava apne pita ke qatil ko dhond rahi thi aur crimson hi tha ye to wohi baat hogai ke bagal me chora aur pure shehar me dhindora
Veer ne crimson ka past dekha aur crimson ke past se yahi pata chalta he ke wo shuru se hi bure raste pe tha chahe majboori me hi sahi lakin wo galat kaam hi karta tha,
Aur bhai crimson ke past se yahi pata chala ke jo kaam crimson karta tha ameer logo ko marna wo kaam pehle bhi hota arha he aur crimson ye kaam apne dost ke marne ki waja se karta tha kyu ke wo in ameer logo ko us ki maut ka zimedar manta he jo ke sahi bhi he,
Ava ne veer ko apna pura past btaya jo ke kafi emotional tha but us ne jo veer ke sath kiya he veer use itni asani se to maaf nhi karne wala,
Aur jb ava ne veer se pocha ke tum meri jaga hote to kiya karte us pe veer ka jawab qasam se goosebumps agye bhai,
Aur end me ye kiya hogya bhaaya grace martin mar gai kese bhai achanak ye kese hogya,
Matlb ava ka itna sab karne ka koi faida nhi hua veer ki nazro me bhi gir gai suhana ki nazro me bhi aur jis maa ke liye itna sab kiya wo maa bhi nhi rahi ab to ava bilkul hi akeli hogai he,
Dekhna ye he ke aage ava kiya karti he,
Bro 1 baat mene observe ki he ke system unhi logo ko milta he jo bilkul akele par jate he ya jinki life me buhat problems hoti he ye meri observation thi,
Aur is sab ke peche koi buhat bara raaz he jo maybe aage pata chale ke kyu he aisa,
Ab intezar he veer ke begunah sabit hone ka ke wo kese in sb se bhar nikalta he aur veer ka apni family aur specially suhana se milne ka suhana ka kiya reaction hoga veer ko dekh ke,
Baqi update har bar ki trha amazing tha aap har baar sabit kar dete ho ke aap 1 behtareen writer ho,
Lot's of love and respect bro

Bhaiya next update kb dene ka irada hai kuch btao

Bro bht hi umda update tha or bhi ane ka intzar hai
Or 150 likes pure ho gae gae update kab Tak ae ga

ek saval aur paida hua hai aur wo ye ki ava ne apni deth flag skill kyu upgred ki ?

kyu ki usne point to healig skill ke use ke liye bacha kar rakhe the ?

kya razz chipa rahi ava ?

Mujhe lagta h ye caller men or maskman or Mr.x ek hi vyakti h
To kya ye sabse pahla system oner h jo system ke bare m sab kuch janta h or ise ye kese pata ki koi future m ye sab ko dekh sakta h kya iske pass koi esa card h jo ise esa batata h

You haven't replied my statement
Sad mr. W W

Werewolf
अद्भूत एक से बढ़कर एक सिस्टम है... क्रीमसन भी एक मोहरा ही निकला... अब ये नकाब बाला क्यूँ है... लोग बढ़ाते जा रहे हो. अब तो सिस्टम को सिस्टम के साथ कई युद्ध होंगे...
वीर ने जो भी एवा के साथ किया सही किया...
डेथ फ्लैग वो भी एवा की माँ.... पर...
बहुत ही बढ़िया फ्लैश बैकिं रहा....
जय हो...
अगले अंक में अब तो इस पर कई नए खुलासे होगे...
इन्तजार रहेगा

bhai next update aaj ya kal kab aayega ????

Super end of crimson

Veer ko kevel mask men ke bare me hi pta chla.. Jbki crimson to jail me us band kedi se bhi mila tha jiske pass bi systm h.. Uski koi info nai di gai h.. Or na hi veer ko uske bare me pta chla.. Jbki seer vision me veer ne crimson ki puri life dekhi h

Waiting for the update....

Another super duper Update....

See. Mne kaha tha ava ko balidan dena hoga some sort of... Grace passed away. Ab veer k heart me bhi Ava k liye soft corner aa jaega... Veer nd ava ki chemistry ab better turn legi.

Nd that masked man. A new person? Or he's the same unknown caller? I'm confused...

Want to see 2 more updates now as soon as possible. I Want to know about kaera... Uski kya situation h? Is she okay or not? Waiting eagerly for the business part to start... Keep writing sir...

aur ye kya supreme ho gyi apki id? Mne abhi notice ki...

bhai update kal aayega kya ???

Werewolf bhai update Kab ayega schedule ke hisab se aj ana chaiye na rat ko to batao lab ayega?

To Kab ayega Werewolf bhai bata to do Kab ayega?

Werewolf bhai maine to simple sa pucha ap to gussa krrahe maine to sirf pucha

Werewolf bhai wo bi krdunga muje reply dene ka Kam time milta hai isliye

Zabardast update yaar
Ab next update kab Tak aayega ye bhi bata dijiye Zara please

Mai kaafi waqt se silent reader rahi hoon xossip and abhi xforum me bhi kabhi maine koi reply nahi ki but abhi aapka yeh story padhkar baas laga likh du bahut hi bhadiya story hai best... Waiting for the next update warewolf bhai ur so awesome.

Fantastic update bhai jabardast

Mera yeh kehne ka mtlb tha ki inn sabhi logo ki majburi thi, inn logo ne duniya hee aisi dekhi inke sath galat hua toh inhone aisa kiya (galat kiya par phir bhi...) Evil toh ye sab bhi hai par jaise kuchh insaan hote hai na krur har kisi ke liye waise hee kisi insaan ki entry ho
Ye toh bass aise hee fan request hai story toh aapke dimaag mei hee fit hai jo ki boht achchi chal rahi hai

Bhai kahne ka mtlb h ki.. Veer ne jb crimson ka past dekha tab use us jail wale bande ke bare me bi to pta chlna chahiye na.. Jiske pass systm tha crimson bhi dr gya tha use dekh kr

Waiting...

awesome update

nawa update pesh kiya jaye

Awesome story.....!!!!! waiting for next update ?????

Bhaii update kb tk expect kr skte h?

bhai next update aaj ya kal aayega ??????

Per schedule k hisab say to aaj aana chahye.

That's right

congratulations bro for 3100 pages complete

Maha faltu opinion hai... Poll he mat rakho...
Direct jhataka dedo readers ko

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Thik hai bh@i....koi baat nhi aap aaram se dedo

Thik hai bh@i....koi baat nhi aap aaram se dedo

Bhai kya tariff karu aapki what a update aapka likhne ka style lajawaab he aadmi kho jata he usme aisa lagta he sab humare aankhon ke samne ho raha he. Mind-blowing superb jabardast..

Bhai bas ek request he jitna jaldi ho sake Veer ka Bhavna & Tej ke sath sex relation romance ho..
Its my request Bhai

Intezaar rahega Werewolf bhai...

WEREWOLF BHAI UPDATE KA INJAAR REHAGA AND NICE STORY❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

I also have a story werewolf bro with Good contain and story line up as same as yours feature and genres i wish to plot but lack of time and management i unable to make ittt....

bhai update late night aayega kya ????

Bhai kafi achha skill hai aapka.....Likhne ka.... Amazing....Story hain....Keep going.....Veer badshah banega

Hello wearfoll

Bro yaar aub to me khudh tarash gaya apke update ke liye
Me kishi ki story par jaldi comment nahi kartha ho kyu ki xebii se xforum tak sab ak hi hai
Koi xforum me bhagha koi kahi
But bhai mujhe kya lena yaha bhi story chor ke writer bhagh jate hai jaisha pahle hota tha
But apki story ne mujhe bahut extite kiya ishliye silent reader ki tarah padh raha tha
Bahut hi achi chemistery hai apki sara gyaan de diya crimson death me
Lekin aage ka kya kuch to update do bhai

तीन दिन से साइट मेरे यहाँ खुल ही नही रही थी।

लगता प्रॉब्लम है।

Hello werewolf Bhai kese ho aap yakin he sab badhiya hi hoga life mast Jaa Rahi hogi to Bhai sabse pahle to Dil se sukriya itni behtareen story hamare sath share karne ke liye or salute he apko apki kadi mehnat or is kahani ke prati Jo apka Jo atal nischay or jese ap ise Puri imandari or jimmedari se likhte rahe ho apka wo time Jo apne is kahani ko Diya uske liye apko Dil se salute he bhai bahot waqt se story's read kar raha run Bhai but Jo jazba or imandari apne apni story ke prati dikhai he ye bahot Kam log karte hain internet pe Bhai mene kahani padhi bahot he magar kabhi likhi nahi but ek bat janta hun ke yr karna meri ya kisi bhi just reader ki soch se bhi bahot Jada mushkil he or Jo story ap leke aaye ho wo to fir namumkin hi he kisi ese ke liye jisne kabhi likha na ho to isliye apko full ijjat bole to respect he brother

Ab aate Hain Bhai story pe to Bhai ek hi line kahunga ke ummed se jada behtar soch se pare na sapne me na hakikat me dekha bilkul super se upar

Ab Bhai yahan dekh Raha hun sare Bhai log guess kar rahe Hain Mr x. Wo phone wala Banda and tisra wo mask wala Banda sabne apni rai di mere dimaag me bhi kuch khichdi Pak Rahi he to me bhi parosta hun fir

To point ek wo phone wala Banda ek bada kardar hone wala he for sure

2nd point mast wala Banda bhi ek bada kirdar he magar utna bhi nahi

3rd Mr x bad ek naam he or sayar abhi Tak ki story ke hisab se renshu wo helper systam wala Banda eklota esa admi he jisane Mr x se bat ki he ya dekha he

Ab mughe kya lagta he ke ye 1 ya 2 nahi 3 alag alag kirdar hain or inme se ek se hum buisness ark ke end ya mid me milenge or uska end hoga china town ark me then second band hame same time china town ark me milega ya uska bas clue mile esa kuch then hame Mr x ke kuch glims sayad mile browlers ark me awaz ya wo khud but chota sa ek bada wala shock doge ap pakka taki final ark ki hype unimaginable ho well sahi he I agree or Bhai mughe lagta he ye browlers ark ka Jo apne name likha he ye kisi gang ka naam hoga ya koi title Jo apne aap me bahot badi cheez hoga I mean ye koi post ho sakti he jo I guess us phone Wale bande ke pass ho or Han Bhai mughe lagta he mask man humko china town ark me milega or phone wala Banda browlers ark me or Mr x abi bas ek nam hi rahega Jo veer or uske sath dusro ko bhi pata chalta rahega or unhain khoof mehsus karwata rahega Bina samne aaye wo bilkul last me aayega or uske liye bhi veer khud uske peeche jayega wo veer ke peeche nahi aayega

Sorry Bhai ab ek request he agar meri is bakwash me kuch sahi nikle to plz btadena agar direct nahi to DM kardena wo kya he na mujhe apne mind pe kuch jada hi confidence he
Dekhna he sahi chal Raha he ya ise junk lag gya

Last me thank you again Bhai for this godly masterpiece or sorry comments nahi Kiya kabhi but hamesha apke sath Raha hun Bhai suru se or end Tak rahunga promise

Waiting for your next update

Bhai awesome update

Werewolf Bhai ....ek aur Jhakkas update...
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.."Kyuki koi hoga...! Jo ise baad me dekhega!!"......!!

Iska matlab ye ho sakta hai...ki man ke pass future dekhne ki skills ya card ho...Jaisi veer ke paas past dekhne ki skills hai ..


ye mujh isliye laga kyonki system bhavishya me hone wali sambhavna ko mission ke roop deta hai...


toh system ke pass future dekhne ki skills ya card ho sakta hai jo system owner ko milta ho...

Next update kab Tak aayega bhai

Ding new mission Good night friends

Waiting

Ya aisa bhi ho sakta hai ki woh system ka creator ho aur usse pata ho ki koi na koi system holder crimson ko maarne jaroor aayega aur jab crimson marega toh woh system holder uska past jaroor dekhega
Its only my theory

Writer busy bhi to ho skta h na apni personal life m bro y baat bhi smjhna chahiye apno ko everyone has their own problems and priorities in life
We can jst request or wait we can't force waiting for next update bro

Congrees for writing that magical story werewolf bro

Main Meri Family Mera Gaun
- New version -

Bhai ye story ek alag image rakhti hai adhiktar readers k man main to..... please es story ka khachra mat karna.... original writer to kaha hai koi nahi janta or unke level Tak tum ja nahi paoge....to eske alawa koi new story hi likh lo yahi request hai bas....

bhai mastiya mere dost ki gf story ko poora karo pahle please
aaj kal to doondne par internet me bhi nahi mil raha
sonali ke sath love story complete karao please

Brother, indirectly you are saying to all that you will give update once in a week.... That's ok it's not a big deal we can wait but plzzz fix any day bro....

Ding System is in sleep mode

Superb update

Bilkul sahi kaha bhai meri first favourite story and still this story stays in my favourite list Maine bhut try Kiya tha us time writter ko dhundne ka but kuch pta nhi chala tha ek writter Anand Singh jinhone saand story likhi hai unse bhi bat kri thi us story ke related or writer ka kuch pta chale but still pta nhi raj bhai kahan hai
So it's humble request don't waste your efforts and if you still want to write a story so don't choose same story line choose another one and made a great story
Kyunki Bhai kuch chij original artist se hin achi lgti hai
Jaise monalisa painting 18-19 bnne main lgi painter ki death Hui painting adhuri rahi aesa nhi hai uske baad artist nhi aye bhut aye but wo adhuri painting bhi complete painting se upar hai

Ek aut baat batoge sir ji wife ek hi rhengi yaa sabhi karea mast lagti hai

Werewolf bhai aapne aapki story ka Nasha Kara dia h readers ko jese ek nashe krne Wale bande ko Nasha nhi milta vo bhadkta he na vhi haal aapki story k update ka h readers ko nhi milti bichare fel jate hein ,aap bhut shi ja rhe hein aap aapna kaam krte rhiye bs

Bhai me silent reader hun... Kabhi review nahi deta par koi aise waisa kahta hai to bura lagta hai... Bhai apko jab Lage tab update Dena ye zaroori to nahi hamesha time pe aye...

Hummse koi paise deke ye story read nahi kar rahe hain jo ulta sidha bol sake...

Jo Jo log aise ulta sidha kahte rahte Hain aur koi Kam nahi hoga... esliye Aisa karte hain

Aap job karte ho kuch time enjoy bhi Kiya Karo Aisa nahi hai ki job se ate hi story likhna suru ... Personal life bhi thode enjoy Karo yaar kya pata kal Zinda rahe ya na rahe... Free time pe hi story likh Lena kya hua thode late update aye to...


Hameshaa Bindass rahne ka...


Mere pahele Wale account pe review deta tha aur Maine bahat baar bola tha Marvel type ka story hai sayad aapko yaad na hoga...

Waiting for update....

Bhai late night update aaega kya ?

Update– 148

Adbhut....Adbhut....Adbhut

Ok

Fantastic update

भाई अपडेट देना ना या ना देना राइटर साहब का विशेषाधिकार (prerogative) है, हम तो बस इंतजार कर सकते हैं कि राइटर साहब समय निकले या अपडेट दे "धन्यवाद"

Bhai aapne kaha tha kal hi update aa jayega. Ham toh request hi kar sakte hai bhai zaldi de do. Ham reader's ka v thoda dekh lo bhala ho jayega....

Guys don't get flustered till Sunday Tak toh aa hiii Jaye ga update.....

जब कोई व्यक्ति कोई सामान्य या घोर पाप / अपराध करता है और उसे करने के बाद उसे पश्चाताप का बोध होता है और साथ मे प्रायश्चित भी करता है तब उसके पाप/ अपराध क्षम्य हो जाते है।
लेकिन यदि वह वही पाप/ अपराध बार बार करता है तो फिर उसे दण्ड भुगतना ही होता है।

कैकैयी ने अपने पुत्र भरत को राज सिंहासन पर बैठाने के लिए अपराध किया था । उनके इस कृत्य की वजह से उनके पति दशरथ की मृत्यु हो गई और श्रीराम बनवास को चले गए। लेकिन जब उन्हे अपने अपराध का बोध हुआ तब उन्होने पश्चाताप भी किया और प्रायश्चित भी किया।
" कैकेयी का अनुताप " मैथिलीशरण गुप्त की सर्वश्रेष्ठ रचना है। यहां कैकेयी के प्रायश्चित को पढ सकते है। और सबसे महत्वपूर्ण भगवान राम ने भी उन्हे माफ कर दिया था।


एवा ने भी एक पाप किया। लेकिन वो यह पाप अपने मां के जीवन बचाने के लिए की थी। हम यह जरूर कह सकते है कि कोई भी प्रॉब्लम हो , किसी के जीवन को समाप्त कर अपने प्रॉब्लम से छुटकारा पाना जायज नही माना जा सकता। किसी अन्य व्यक्ति के जान के बदले हम अपना और अपने परिवार के जीवन को सुरक्षित नही कर सकते।

लेकिन अगर कोई पाप नासमझी और अज्ञानतावश हो जाए तो उसे अवश्य ही एक मौका मिलना चाहिए। एवा ने जो कुछ किया , वह उसकी अज्ञानता ही थी।
उसका अबतक का जीवन काफी संघर्षपूर्ण रहा है। ऐसे परिस्थिती मे एक विद्वान व्यक्ति भी अज्ञानी का व्यवहार कर बैठता है।
मुझे लगता है ग्रेसी मार्टिन की मौत उसके इस नासमझी भरे पाप का ही परिणाम एवं फल था। शायद प्रकृति ने भी उसे उसके पाप से मुक्त कर दिया है। और एज ए रीडर , मेरी संवेदना एवा के साथ है।


इस अपडेट मे कार्लोस के क्रिम्पसन बनने तक का सफर मालूम पड़ा । उसके दोस्त जयदेन की मौत का मुझे बेहद खेद है पर शीप पर जर्नी करने वाले विकृत मानसिकता वालो लोगो के मृत्यु पर जरा सा भी अफसोस नही है। क्रिम्पसन ने उन लोगो के साथ बिल्कुल सही किया।
लेकिन वीर के साथ उसने जो कुछ किया , वह क्या था ! चंद स्किल वगैरह प्राप्त कर खुद को ज्यादा पावरफुल बनाने के लिए एक बेगुनाह का कत्ल ही तो था । फ्रांस मे जिन लोगो की हत्या उसने की , वह सभी निर्दोष और अजनबी ही तो थे। उसकी वह हरकत एक आतंकवादी का हरकत था। और ऐसे लोगो को जिन्दा रहने का कोई भी हक नही।

जायेश और ग्रेसी मार्टिन का कार एक्सिडेंट उनके ही अल्प बुध्दी का परिणाम था। वो जानते थे कि वो जिस कार का पीछा कर रहे है वो एक खुनी था। उसके कपड़े खून से रंगे हुए थे। और जिस व्यक्ति की बातों के बहकावे मे वो आए , वह व्यक्ति खुद काले नकाब से अपना चेहरा ढंके हुए था। वह व्यक्ति अपनी पहचान छुपाए हुए था। ऐसे मे वो कैसे उस व्यक्ति की बातों पर विश्वास कर सकते थे !
मुझे लगता है दोनो पति पत्नी अपने साथ हुए इस कांड के खुद जिम्मेदार थे।

अपडेट हमेशा की तरह खूबसूरत और बेहतरीन था वोल्फी भाई। आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड जगमग जगमग।

Abi to crimon phase end hone mein hi 2 update pade hai abhi se itni badi chutti 1 week ho gya

Phase end hone ke baad bhi 2 week ki chutti loge jese har pahse ke baad ati hai

Waitinggggg.. jaldi update do sir.....

Inteha Ho Gayi Intezaar Ki...

Ek system owner tab bhi mara tha kya jab veer ko system mila tha.. Pari ne bola tha wo kisi aur ke andar thi ab veer mein aayi hai..
Uss hisab se ya to pari kayi baat chupa rahi thi ya pari ka system reset hoke usse bhi nahi pata tha kya sb ho sakta hai.. kyuki wo system owner bhi kisi dusre system waale ke haathon hi mara gaya hoga to uss bhidant mein to usse pata hona chahiye tha ki aur bhi hain..
Aur phir wo banda kaun hoga jisne pari ke pichle owner ko mara wo to Veer ke bahut aas pass hoga... Kaera??. Aur pehle 30 system owner the aur ab 17 bache hain iska matlab system destroy hota hai jaisa pari bhi veer ko baar baar batati hai ki iss baar wo bhi khatam ho jayegi, to aise kitne system abhi transferable honge aur kitne last stage mein.. aur jab pari ko ye hamesha se pata hai ki ye uska last chance hai to baaki baatein kyu nahi pata ya kis wajah se chupai gayi hain??
Ye sab wo mask wala hi batayega shayad.. konu firki le raha hai be

Hum dua krte hein k sabb thik ho... Us phone ki jarurat jitni aapko hai utni hi hume bhi.... ....

I can understand, this can be very frustrating. Hope you are able to retrieve maximum data.

Take your time dear, no problem

No issues Werewolf bhai...
Take care your time...
Try to retrieve maximum data recover...

It's OK buddy we understand

Wese bhi pressure main aisi galti hojati hai main janta hu ki ek taraf tumhe family ka pressure hoga or dusri taraf tumhari job ka pressure or time pe update na mil pane ki wajah se story ke readers ka pressure aise main aisa hona aam baat hai but main janta hu jab ye teeno pressure mix hote hai to kitna stress hota hai

Main khud is situation se guzar chuka hu
Meri story ke kai readers mujhe pm karte hai ajay bhai nayi story kab start kar rahe ho par kya kare wolfi job ho yaa business jab kaam ka pahad tootta hai to kya halat hoti hai ye main janta hu or isi liye tumhari paristhiti main samjh sakta hu

Sorry ha wolfi main itne achche update ke review nahi de paya time par par kya karu jindgi main abhi business or family dono main hi itni uthal puthal machi huyi hai ki kya kare caahke bhi fouram par koi khass dhyaan nahi hai mera

Isi liye take your time main intzaar karunga update ka

bhai phone me ek folder sirf password ke mane se save karlo or usme new file karke sab password jo bhi aap me password ho uska password dalkar folder banado

Besabri se intezar rahega agle update ka

Update??

Waiting brooo....... Waiting....

Shedat se intezar hai update ka

Sahi hai

Update 149 has been posted.