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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

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  • Kuch nahi bann paega

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Update - 154 ~ The Prestige's Ordeal

Ab tak...

Kintu, samasya kabhi na aaye aisa kaise ho sakta tha. Jaha abhi sab kuch accha chal raha tha ki itne me hi Bhumika ko ek call aaya. Usne call receive kar jab baat suni toh uski aankhein hairat me fel gayi.

Phone cut karte hi woh Veer ko dekhi,

Bhumika : Veer!! Ek problem ho gayi hai.

Magar woh akeli nahi thi. Truck se Prachi daudte hue aayi aur jaldbazi me boli,

Prachi : Ek nahi-! Do problem hai!!

Veer : Huh!!???


Ab aage...

Kehte hai ki bhagwan jab deta hai toh chhappar faad ke deta hai. Magar, kayi baar aisa bhi hota hai ki ek musibat ki jagah kaho anek musibatein saath me hi aa jaaye.

Veer iss samay isi duwidha me tha. Ek taraf woh Bhumika ko dekh raha tha jo chinta me uske saamne khadi thi toh wahi dusri taraf Prachi ko jo food truck se nikal ke jaldbaazi me aayi thi.

Samasyao ne darwaza khat-khata diya tha. Akhir, chal kya raha tha yaha? Veer ne pehle Bhumika se hi puchna sahi samjha.

Veer : Pehle aap bataiye! Kya hua hai?

Bhumika (frowns) : Veer! Ek bohut badi problem ho gayi hai.

Veer : Hotel me kuch-!?

Bhumika (nods) : Haan!

Veer : Kya dikkat hai?

Bhumika : Woh- Woh Head Chef-!!!

Veer : Head Chef?

Bhumika : Hmm! He's very troublesome to deal with. Pehle bhi woh kayi baar aisa kar chuka hai.

Veer : Kya kiya hai usne?

Bhumika : Baaki chefs ko bhadkana. Pay increase karne ke liye. Mein pehle hi 2 baar payment badha chuki hu. Magar-!! Oh no! Firse call aa raha hai. Veer! Mujhe jaana hoga!

Veer (nods) : Ek kaam kariye. Aap pohuchiye, mein aapke peeche peeche aata hu.

Bhumika : Alright!

Bhumika jaldbaazi me daudte hue waha se apni car ki orr nikli. Par, aisi sthiti me uska akela jaana theek nahi tha. Isliye,

Veer : Arohi dii?

Arohi (nods) : Mmm~ I got it!

Woh toh jaise bina kuch kahe hi samajh gayi. Bina Veer ko jawaab diye woh waha se tezz qadmo ke saath Bhumika ke peeche peeche chal di. Aur idhar Veer ke hontho par ek halki si muskaan saj gayi. Woh fir Prachi ki orr muda,

Veer : Ab tum batao! Kya hua hai?

Prachi : W-Woh-!

Veer : Ghabrane ki zaroorat nahi. Khul ke batao!

Prachi : Okay! Actually, baat ye hai ki- Ab aap toh jaante ho ki aapke kitne food trucks hai. Magar, aap harr ek ko daily dekhne nahi aa sakte. Right?

Veer : Mmm-hmm!

Prachi : Toh aaye din workers badalte rehte hai. Koi jaata hai toh koi naya aa jaata hai.

Veer : So?

Prachi : So, hua ye hai ki- Sir! Kaushik naam ka ek ladka hai.

Veer : Kaushik?

Prachi (nods) : Hmm! Woh morning waala breakfast ka jo ek aur food truck hai usme rehta hai. Uske saath ek aur ladka hai. Uske saath wala ladka accha hai lekin ye Kaushik-

Veer : Kuch kiya hai kya?

Prachi : N-Nahi!

Veer : Toh?

Prachi : Ab ho sakta hai mein zyada soch rahi hu. P-Par Sonali di jo hai-

Veer : Sonali ka kya?

Prachi : Sir, woh Kaushik aaj kal har roz shaam ko yaha aata hai aur fir Sonali di se meethi meethi baatein karta hai.

Veer : Hmm?

Prachi : Aur Sonali di use bas daant deti hai magar- Mujhe lagta hai jaise Kaushik ki baatein unhe pasand bhi aati hai.

Veer : I see! So, what's the problem?

Prachi : Problem ye hai ki- Mujhe lagta hai ki woh Kaushik kuch theek nahi hai.

Veer : Aisa kyu bhala? Agar woh theek nahi tha toh use hire kisne kiya?

Prachi : Sonali di ne hi. Uske kaam me koi dikkat nahi hai Sir.

Veer : Fir kya dikkat hai? Behaviour?

Prachi : Haan! Ho sakta hai mein kuch zyada overthink kar rahi hu. Mujhe jo laga woh mene aapko bata diya. Mujhe woh ladka theek nahi lagta.

Veer : Theek nahi lagta as in? Kya kuch gadbad kar raha hai? Ya kar sakta hai?

Prachi : Actually-

Veer : Prachi! Tumhe hich-kichane ki zaroorat nahi. Owner mein hu. Tum kaho! Tumhara koi kuch nahi ukhaad sakta. Just say!

Prachi : O-Okay! Shayad Kaushik-

Veer : Hmm?

Prachi : Sonali di ko paana chaahta hai.

Veer : Kya Sonali ko Kaushik pasand hai?

Prachi : Shayad haan! Like woh daant lagati hai use. Seedhe muh baat nahi karti par mene unko uski baato par muskuraate dekha hai.

Prachi ki baat par Veer ko thodi hairani hui. Sonali kisi ladke ki baato par muskura rahi thi?

Use Suman ko kahi gayi apni hi baat yaad aa gayi~

'Agar woh kisi aur ko chaahegi, toh mein use jaane dunga!'

Veer ko yaad hai ki usne isi kaaran kabhi Sonali ko Suman aur Aabha ki tarah apna slave nahi maana tha. Kyuki, ho sakta tha ki Sonali use apne maalik ke roop me sweekaar na kare. Ho sakta tha ki use koi aur ladka pasand aa jaaye.

Shayad aaj woh din aa chuka tha. Veer ne ek gehri saans li.

Veer : Agar use pasand hai. Toh kya dikkat hai?

Veer ko kehte hue pata nahi kyu accha nahi lag raha tha lekin fir bhi usne keh diya. Prachi ne jab ye suna toh woh hairat me use ghoor ke dekhi.

Prachi : A-Aap ko parvaah nahi?

Veer : Hmm? Isme parvaah kaisi? Sonali ko agar koi pasand hai toh acchi baat hai na woh toh-!?

Prachi : Eh? I-I thought-!!

Bechari Prachi duwidha me fas ke reh gayi. Use laga tha ki Veer aur Sonali ke beech kuch chal raha tha isliye woh bhaagi bhaagi daud ke ye baat use bataane aayi thi. Par yaha toh aisa prateet ho raha tha jaise Veer aur Sonali ke beech kuch tha hi nahi.

Woh toh ye soch ke aayi thi ki woh unn dono ke pyaar ko bacha legi. Par-

Veer : Sonali samajhdar hai. In case kuch gadbad tumhe lagti hai toh mujhe call kar dena.

Prachi : Mene aapko abhi toh bataya. Woh ladka theek nahi hai.

Veer : Hmm! Mene sunn liya hai Prachi. Par tumhare paas abhi kuch proof bhi nahi hai. Isliye keh raha hu, kuch gadbad lage toh mujhe call kar dena. You have my number, right?

Prachi : H-Haan!

Veer : I'll leave then!

Prachi : B-But-!!

Veer uski baat sune bagerr hi food truck ki orr chal diya. Andar Sonali dishes banaane me lagi hui thi.

Toh wahi road ke uss paar ek aur food truck khada hua tha. Jisme Kaushik aur ek aur worker maujood the.

Kaushik Sonali ko dekh apne lund ko masalne me laga hua tha. Aur uska saath driving seat par baitha tha.

Worker : Dekh! Mein abhi bhi keh raha hu. Woh teri pohuch ke baahar ki ladki hai. Upar se owner ki koi rishtedar lagti hai mujhe toh. Tujhse nahi patne waali.

Kaushik : Abe, tu jaanta hi kya hai ladkiyo ke baare me. Dekhta jaa bas tu. Gaav ki chhori hai. Chaahta toh mein uss Prachi ko set kar sakta tha. Magar, woh yahi Mumbai ki hai. Uss saali ko mere upar kuch shaq sa hai.

Worker : Woh ladki samajhdar hai!

Kaushik : Lekin, ye Sonali gaav se hai. Ise sheher ka utna gyaan nahi. Ise set karna asaan hai. Saali ko chodne me kya maza aayega. Lita lita ke chodunga.

Worker : Mein abhi bhi keh raha hu. Uss se dur hi reh.

Kaushik : Kya jhandu aadmi hai bey tu? Kabhi choot maari hai?

Worker : Nahi!

Kaushik : Bas yahi toh dikkat hai tumhari. Abe jaise ek nashedi insaan bina nashe ke reh nahi sakta na? Wese hi ye lund hai. Ek baar ye choot ka swaad chakh le na toh bina choot maare nahi rehta.

Worker : Choot ke chakkar me lene ke dene bhi pad jaate hai. Aur isliye, mein apne kaam se hi matlab rakhta hu.

Kaushik : Haan toh tu wahi kar. Mere kaam me taang mat ada. Mere lund ko choot ki zaroorat hai. Agar ye set ho gayi, toh fir kehne hi kya. Naukri bhi karte raho, free ki choot bhi maarte jao. Hahahaha! Pagaar ki pagaar. Upar se food truck ke maalik ki sambandhi hai woh. Sab set hai.

Worker (sighs) : Tu jaane aur tera kaam jaane.

Kaushik apne saathi ki baato ko ek kaan se sunn dusre kaan se nikal diya. Tabhi, uski nazar Veer par padi jo Sonali ke food truck me jaa raha tha.

Kaushik : Iski maa ka- Jaldi, gaadi waha laga.

Worker : Kyu? Kya hua?

Kaushik : Abe yahi owner hai na?

Worker (squints) : H-Haan shayad-! Haan yahi hai. Veer Sir!

Kaushik : Haan toh gaadi laga waha. Turant!

Worker : Haan haan!

Kaushik ke saathi ne food truck chaalu kar aage badhaya aur U-turn lete hue woh road ke iss side par aa gaya jaha Sonali ka food truck maujood tha.

Jab tak ye log yaha aa rahe the tab tak Veer aur Sonali ke beech alag vartalaap chal raha tha.

Veer : Sab theek toh chal raha hai na?

Sonali : Hmm? Aaj tumhe itna parvaah kaise hone lagi? Aise toh kabhi jhaakne nahi aate.

Veer : Kya mein puch nahi sakta?

Sonali : Puch sakte ho! Bilkul puch sakte ho. Sab kuch tumhara hi toh hai. Jo chaahe karo! Bhala mein kaun hoti hu-?

Veer (sighs) : Mera matlab ye hai ki kahi koi gadbad toh nahi hai. Koi dikkat toh nahi hai na? Sab theek hai?

Sonali ne do pal ke liye use dekha fir muh fula ke mudte hue boli,

Sonali : Hmm! Sab theek hai!

Veer (nods) : Alright! Agar koi- Agar koi problem ho toh mujhse share kar sakti ho. Okay?

Sonali (confused) : Tumhari tabiyat toh theek hai na?

Veer : I-!! Leave it! Apna dhyaan rakhna. Aur, apne aas paas ke logo ka bhi.

Sonali : Huhh!? Kya matlab? Aaj subah subah kahi sarr bhidwa ke aaye ho kya? Kaisi behki behki baatein kar rahe ho?

Veer kuch keh paata ki itne me Kaushik apne saathi ke sang truck leke haazir tha.

Window se nikal ke hi woh haath hilaate hue chillaaya,

Kaushik : Arre! Haha! Sir! Aaj mile ho aap! Warna kabhi darshan hi nahi hue aap ke toh batao.

Uske aate hi,

'Check!'

Veer ne usko poori tarah se scan kar liya. Kahi koi gadbad nazar nahi aayi. Kaushik ek aam ladka hi tha. Thoda awara-gardi karne waala tha magar kaam uska theek tha. Koi chor, gunda, mawali nahi tha woh. Jab Veer ne ye dekha ki kahi kuch gadbad nahi hai. Toh usne ek raahat ki saans li.

Kya iska matlab Prachi bewajah hi chintit ho rahi thi?

Prachi, jo theek unke saath khadi hui thi woh Kaushik ko aata dekh ke hi tension me aa gayi.

Veer ne idhar Kaushik ke aate hi uski baat ka jawaab diya,

Veer : Ohh! Naye ho?

Kaushik : Ji Sir!

Veer : Kya naam?

Kaushik : Ji Kaushik!

Veer : Alright! Acche se kaam karna.

Kaushik : Aap fiqr mat karo Sir! Mein apna kaam poori lagan se karta hu. Lekin, aaj aap se ek permission lena chaahta hu. Umeed hai aap mana nahi karoge.

Veer : Kaisi permission?

Kaushik : Woh kya hai na, kuch dino pehle pradarshani lagi hai yahi paas me. Mujhe jaana tha zara.

Veer (nods) : Theek hai! Tum jaldi jaa sakte ho.

Kaushik : Na na na na! S-Sirf mein nahi!

Veer : Toh?

Kaushik : Ahem! Woh kya hai na! Ab akela mein kya karunga Sir waha. Saath me koi hona chahiye na? Sundar si pradarshani ko dekhne ke liye ek sundari bhi toh honi chahiye na saath me? Hai na?

Veer : Bilkul!

Veer ne keh toh diya magar uske chehre par koi bhaav nahi the. Woh Kaushik ko aise dekh raha tha jaise kisi namoone ko dekh raha ho.

[Oh my~ Look at this worthless ant! A toad wishing to eat swan meat.]

Pari ke muh se bhi Kaushik ke liye beizzati hi nikli. Do kaudi ka ladka uske Master se hi unki hi bandi ko ghumaane ki permission maang raha tha. What a joke!

Magar-

Sonali ne jab Kaushik ki baatein suni, toh woh hass padi.

'Hmm?'

[Oh! Lagta hai~ Tumne apna swaad ise nahi chakhaya. What a mistake you have made my baby~ Isliye kehti hu. Forget all this. Come to me! Surrender to me! Call me 'Mommy' and I will make you the most powerful man in this world.]

'Please stop!!!'

Veer Pari se baat karne ke mood me nahi tha abhi. Sonali ne Kaushik ki baat sunn Veer ko dekha jaise maano woh dekhna chaah rahi ho ki Veer kaise react karta hai.

Veer (sighs) : No! This is work time. Tum khud jaana chaahte ho, koi manahi nahi hai. Jaa sakte ho. Par, staff me se kisi aur ko apne sang le jaana? Ye mein allow nahi kar sakta. Shaam hone waali hai aur ab rush hours rahenge. So, it's a strict 'NO' from my side.

Veer ka jawaab sunte hi jaise Kaushik ke muh pe 12 baj gaye. Kintu, usne aisa dikhaya nahi. Farzi muskan liye woh hassa aur punah bola,

Kaushik : Hahahaha! Arre kya Sir? Subah se din tak itna toh kaam kiya hai humne. Aur mein jaanta hu, sundari ka bhi ghoomne ka mann hoga. Ahem! Mera matlab hai Sonali ji ka! *winks*

Kaushik Sonali ko hi sundari keh ke itni derr se sambodhit kar raha tha. Jiske chalte, Sonali bas nazre ferr muskuraaye jaa rahi thi. Ye ladka roz uske paas kisi na kisi bahane se aaya karta aur roz apni fizool baato se use entertain karta.

Par kahi na kahi, ab uski fizool baatein hi Sonali ko jaise pasand aane lagi thi. Galti uski nahi thi. Balki, galti kisi ki bhi nahi thi.

Gaav ki ek aam ladki hone ke kaaran, Sonali ke standards ladko ko lekar behad hi low the. Shuru se hi woh apne baap Pushpendra aur uske bete Amit jaiso ko dekhti aayi thi. Jo ek number ke nalle, jaahil, gawaar aur nashedi aadmi the.

Aisi biraadri me rehne ke baad, Sonali ko ladke me bas itna hi chahiye rehta tha ki koi use sukhi rakh sake. Uski qadr kare. Bas!! Yahi the uske standards aur uski maangein.

Veer jaisa ladka uski expectations se bhi kahi zyada tha. Upar se uski khud ki maa, aur bhabhi apni taangein fela ke apne aap ko Veer ke prati samarpit kar chuki thi. Kahi na kahi, Sonali ke antarmann me ye dhaarna thi ki Veer bhala use kyu chaahega?

Uske paas toh ladkiyo ki line lagi hui thi. Magar maajra toh kuch aur hi tha, jo bechari woh nahi jaanti thi. Kisi aur ladke ka aana aur Sonali se iss tarah rubaru hona. Ye Veer ko na jaane kyu magar zara bhi pasand nahi aa raha tha.

Kaushik ke aamantran par usne turant hi naahi jataayi,

Veer : Nahi! Sonali ko kaam hai aur woh kahi nahi jayegi.

Kaushik : Arre ye kya baat hui Sir? Thoda hamare baare me bhi sochiye!

Veer : Nahi! Mene kaha na ki Sonali nahi-

Kintu,

Sonali : Kyu nahi? Kab se mein bhi subah se lage lage thak gayi thi. Pradarshani mujhe bhi dekhni thi. Na jaane kab se nahi dekhi. Isi bahaane thodi kamar bhi seedhi ho jayegi.

Veer : S-Sonali? T-Tum!?

Sonali : Haan! Kya mein nahi thakti? Mujhe bhi ghoomne ka mann karta hai. Aur kaun sa roz roz chhutti leti hu?

Veer : Tum aise kaise-!? Mujhe abhi zaroori kaam se jaana hai. Prachi akele nahi sambhal payegi. Tum iss waqt-

Sonali : Haan haan! Mujhe pata hai! Koi kaam nahi hai tumhara! Ab T.V me aa rahe ho iska matlab ye nahi ki harr waqt vyast ho tum. Ab aaye ho toh sambhalo apna yeh truck. Jaise uss din sambhala tha!?

Kaushik : Arre waah! Hahahaha! Kya baat hai! Dekha na Sir? Sab ki hi iccha hai. Mein toh kehta hu aaj aap chhutti hi dedo. Aa jao sundari- Mera matlab hai Sonali ji! Aaiye chalte hai! Thoda ghoom ke aate hai.

Bechari Sonali ye nahi jaanti thi ki abhi abhi Bhumika ki hotel me musibat aayi hai. Woh iss baat se anjaan thi. Woh nahi jaanti thi ki Veer ko abhi jald hi nikalna tha. Woh toh yahi samjhi ki Veer koi bahana bana raha tha.

Woh Kaushik se bhi parichit thi. Ye pehli baar nahi tha jab woh uske waale truck me baith rahi thi. Jab use hire kiya tha tab bhi woh Kaushik ke sang baith ke use venues ke baare me batayi thi. Kaha food truck lagana hai, kaise kaam karna hai. Toh isme ghabrane waali koi baat hi nahi thi ki woh akeli jaa rahi hai.

Saath hi woh Veer ko tang karne me kaha peeche hatati thi? Ye nirnay lete hi woh mann hi mann thahaake laga rahi thi. Soch rahi thi ki Veer chidhega aur tu-tu main-main karega.

Yahi soch woh truck se nikli aur Kaushik ke truck me chali gayi. Prachi muh khole bas nazara dekhti rahi. Jis train ko woh sahi se chalane ki koshish kar rahi thi woh toh patri se hi utar gayi. Naiyaa dubti hui nazar aa rahi thi use. Woh Veer ko bas hamdardi liye dekhi.

Aur mann me hi sochne lagi,

'Kya kar diya ye aapne Sonali di? Aapne Veer Sir jaise ladke ko haath se jaane diya? Agar mein aapki jagah hoti, toh uss Kaushik chhapri ko ghaas tak nahi daalti. Ye kya kar diya aapne?'

Sonali idhar muskaan liye seat par baithi aur truck chaalu hoke waha se chalne laga.

Magar jaise hi uski nazre Veer par tiki toh woh ghabra uthi. Veer ke chehre par taajub bhare bhaav the.

Woh Sonali ko aise dekh raha tha jaise use pehli baar dekh raha ho. Jaise usne koi aisa kaam kar diya ho jiski Veer ko umeed hi nahi thi. Achanak hi, Sonali ke dil ki dhadkane bechaini ke chalte tezz ho uthi. Par, truck chal chuka tha.

Use ye abhaas hua ki taang kheechne ke chakkar me kahi na kahi shayad usne Veer ko thes pohucha di hai. Ye sab kya ho raha tha?

Veer ke chehre par woh bhaav usne aaj se pehle kabhi nahi dekhe the. Kya uss se koi bhul ho gayi? Kya woh zyada bol gayi?

Sonali : N-Nahi-!!! R-Ruko-!

Par tab tak bohut derr ho chuki thi. Food truck kaafi aage badh chuka tha. Aur Sonali, sheeshe se Veer ke chehre ko dekh paa rahi thi. Na jaane kyu par uske dil me ek ajeeb sa dard utha.

Ab jaise sab kuch galat lag raha tha. Ye pradarshani, ye thakaan, Veer ki taang kheechna, jaise ab sab bhul chuki thi woh. Ab jaise inka koi artha hi nahi reh gaya tha. Kyuki jise sataane ke liye usne ye kiya tha wahi use hataash hue naraazgi me dekh raha tha. Veer ki wahi akhiri chhavi uske mann me bas gayi aur ek vichitr sa dard chhodh gayi.

Truck yaha se Veer ki aankhon se ojhal ho gaya. Sonali ke andar wapas jaane ki himmat bhi nahi aayi aur na hi woh kuch samajh paayi ki ye kya hua abhi abhi. Veer ko uss tarah dekh, uske dil me itna dard kyu uth raha tha?

'Iss se pehle-! Iss se pehle mene use kabhi aise nahi dekha! K-Kahi mein kuch zyada toh nahi bol gayi na? Agar woh bura maan gaya toh-!!!'

Lekin, ab sochne se kya fayda jab chidiya chug gayi khet. Woh ye nahi jaanti thi ki aane waale pal uske liye kaise hone waale the. Uske peeche khada Kaushik apni ghatiya nazro se uske badan ko taadne me laga hua tha. Muh se laar tapakne ki deri thi bas.

'Aaj toh teri seal tod hi dunga Sonali darling!!!'

***

"Ye kya kiya aapne?"

Truck ke jaate hi Veer ke peeche se Prachi ki naraazgi bhari awaaz aayi.

Veer : Kya?

Lag raha tha jaise woh Veer se bhi kahi zyada nirash thi.

Prachi : Aapne unhe jaane diya?

Veer (turns back) : Mene unhe jaane diya?

Veer ke sawaal par Prachi maun reh gayi. Usne jaane nahi diya tha. Balki, woh sabhi khud hi chale gaye the.

Veer chaahta toh ek baar me yaha maujood ek ek ki hekdi nikaal deta. Use bas 'Intimidating Presence' equip karne ki zaroorat thi. Uska aura mehsoos kar ke hi unn sab ki bolti band ho jaati. Lekin, usne aisa na kiya.

Prachi bas saantvna liye use dekhti rahi. Veer ke dil pe kya guzar rahi thi jaise woh jaanti thi.

Woh hairaan tha. Use thes pohuchi thi. Taajub iss baat ka nahi tha ki Sonali Kaushik ke saath gayi. Taajub iss baat ka tha ki Sonali uski baat ka yakeen na kar ke Kaushik ki baat ka yakeen kar chali gayi.

Kitne mahine ho chuke the use aur Sonali ko ek chhat ke neeche rehte hue? Usne apni taraf se kya kami chhodhi thi Sonali ke liye? Dard bas yahi tha ki Sonali ne ek baar bhi uski baat pe vishvaas na kiya. Aur bina poori baat sune nikal gayi. Yahi kaaran tha jo uske chehre par aashcharya tha.

Prachi : A-Ab?

Veer : You stay here! Mujhe kuch kaam hai! Mein aata hu baad me.

Prachi : O-Okay!

Woh aage kuch na keh paayi. Veer turant hi uske hawaale food truck chhodh seedha Hotel Prestige yaani ki Bhumika aur Shweta ki hotel ki orr nikal gaya.

***


Hotel Prestige
Evening ~ 6:08 PM


"Ye sab kya laga rakha hai, haan?"

"Aur nahi toh kya? Hum sab kya bewakoof hai?"

"Arre jab nahi ho paa raha hai toh lena hi nahi chahiye na order. Kaisa management hai aapka?"

"Paisa bhar dikhta hai inhe Bhai sahab. Baaki grahak ki qadr thodi hi hai."

"Sahi kaha!"

"Mein khud aadhe ghante se wait kar raha hu. Family saath me hai. Order le liya hai magar abhi tak table par paani ka jug tak nahi aaya hai. Ab batao!"

"Ye koi dhang thode hi hai. Bhai nahi ho raha aapse toh bata do. Band kar do. Hai na? Aadmi apni dusri jagah jaaye. Usko pehle hi bata do."

"Bilkul! Bilkul!"

"Haan! Samay ki barbadi hai aise me toh-"

"Mein bhi family saath aaya hu. Ab mera order pehle de diya. Aur abhi tak baccho ka order nahi aaya. Ye kya baat hui? Matlab mein unke saamne akele akele khau ab? Aap batao bhai. Family time ka matlab kya hota hai? Aadmi hotel kyu jaata hai?"

"Bilkul! Bilkul! Parivar ke saath khaane ke liye hi toh aata hai. Par ye baat ye kaha samajhte hai-"

"Sahi kaha ji. Darasal, ye aaj kal harr hotel ka bann gaya hai. Jab jab holiday waale din rehte hai ye uss din jaan boojh ke itna rush ghuswa lete hai laalach ke chakkar me. Baad me inse manage hota nahi hai."

Kayi saare log reception area me khade ek dusre se baatein karne me lage hue the aur counter ke uss side khadi Nandini jo ki hotel ki manager thi bas ghabra ke sab kuch dekh rahi thi.

Nandini : Sir! Please! Shaanti banaye rakhiye. Dekhiye! Thodi si problem ho gayi hai. Baat samajhne ki koshish kariye. Aisa kabhi hota nahi hai. Par aaj thodi si dikkat ho gayi hai.

"Arre kya dikkat ho gayi hai?"

"Haan haan! Jab nahi ho paa raha toh pehle batana chahiye."

"Shaam ke samay me ye haal hai, socho raat me kya hoga jab dinner ke liye aur families aayengi."

"Band kar do hotel."

Nandini : P-Please Sir! Try to understand.

Nandini ne kabhi bhi iss tarah ki situation se deal nahi kiya tha. Kyuki aisi naubat kabhi aayi hi nahi thi. Par aaj na jaane kiski nazar lag gayi thi unki hotel ko.

Nandini ne apne sehyogi logo ko dekha aur public ko shaant rakhne ke liye keh ke woh fauran hi andar kitchen ki orr bhaagi.

Andar aate hi woh zorr se boli,

Nandini : Ma'am!! Ma'am baahar situation ab out of control jaa rahi hai. Manage karna ab mushqil ho raha hai. Logo ka gussa badhta jaa raha hai.

Andar Bhumika chintit nazro se use dekhi. Kitchen me saamne saare chefs aur workers apna kaam dhaam chhodh ke ek jhund bana ke khade hue the.

Unn sab ke beech me hotel ka Head Chef apni guroor bhari muskaan liye khada tha. Head Chef woh hota tha jo kitchen me saare chefs ka head hota tha. Wahi baaki chefs ko nirdesh deta tha aur hotel acchi tarah se chal sake, isme uska bohut bada yogdaan hota tha.

Magar, Hotel Prestige ke Head Chef, Narang aaj kisi aur mood me hi tha. Kareeb 40-45 ki umr ka ye aadmi apne saath saath baakiyo ko bhi apne shadiyantra me shaamil kiye baitha tha.

Narang : Mein kahe deta hu! Hamari maange poori karo warna hum sab abhi ke abhi apni naukri chhodh denge.

Bhumika bechain ho uthi. Iske pehle bhi woh do baar uss Narang ki payment badha chuki thi. Iss se zyada woh afford nahi kar sakti thi. Balki, shayad hi koi itni payment deta hoga.

Bhumika : Aapki payment mein pehle hi do baar badha chuki hu. Ye theek nahi hai. Kahi aur jaa ke dekhiye. Koi bhi aapko-

Narang : Hmph! Toh theek hai. Chale jaata hu. Yaha se acchi pagaar milne ka offer wese hi aa chuka hai mujhe.

Bhumika : Huh!??

Narang : Chalo Bhai log!!

Narang ke saath kaafi log the. Magar saare nahi. Kuch the jo abhi bhi apni pagaar se khush the aur hotel ke hit ke liye hi kaam karna chaahte the. Hotel se unka lagaav tha. Par ye log chand hi the.

Bhumika ne jab dekha ki woh log jaa sakte hai toh woh darr gayi. Woh inhe jaane nahi de sakti thi. Agar aisa hua, toh hotel ke profit ke upar bohut bada antar aa sakta tha. Nuksaan hi nuksaan ho sakta tha.

Naye chefs ko dhundhna, unhe laana, fir wapas se kaam samjhana, ye sab na jaane kitna samay le sakta tha. Uske baad taste ka change hona. Harr chef apne dhang se khaana banata hai. Jo yaha pehle se bana rahe hai, unke jaisa agla aadmi nahi bana sakta.

Prestige ki yahi toh pehchaan thi. Uska taste!! Agar chefs badal jayenge, toh woh pehle jaisa taste kaise maintain kar payenge? Signature dishes ka kya hoga jo sirf head chef hi banaaya karta hai?

Inn vichaaro ne Bhumika ko ek chakravyuh me fasa diya. Agar Shweta yaha hoti toh woh ab tak chidh ke Narang ko bhaga chuki hoti. Usme itna tolerance nahi. Magar, Bhumika ke andar tolerance level kahi zyada tha.

Bhumika (frowns) : Ye aap theek nahi kar rahe. Baahar log apne khaane ka wait kar rahe hai. Ye saari baatein aap baad me bhi toh kar sakte the na? Abhi karne ki kya zaroorat thi?

Narang : Iska faisla abhi hi hoga. Baad me taalne wala kaam mera nahi. Kyu bhai log?

"Haan haan!! Faisla abhi hoga."

Bhumika : A-Aap sab-!!! Kya zara bhi pyaar nahi aapko iss hotel se? Itne saalo tak aap sab ne kaam kiya hai. Kya kabhi aapko kisi cheez ki taqleef hone di hai mene ya Mom ne?

Uski iss baat par kuch chefs apna sarr jhuka ke khade ho gaye. Baat satya thi. Aaj tak unhe kabhi bhi kisi bhi cheez ki taqleef nahi hui thi. Pagaar hamesha samay par mil jaaya karti thi. Tyohaaro me unhe bonus bhi milta tha. Kahi se bhi koi taqleef nahi thi.

Fir woh sab kyu apni itni shaleen maalkin ke khilaaf khade ho uthe? Jawaab tha ~ Narang!

Jisne bhadka ke unhe apne side kar liya tha. Thode se behkaave me aane ke baad woh ye tak bhul gaye ki isi hotel se unka ghar chalta tha. Aaj woh usi ko laat maar rahe the. Kahi na kahi unn sab ke andar ek glaani ki bhaavna zaroor jaagi. Magar ab woh itna aage badh chuke the. Ab peeche nahi hatt sakte the.

Narang : Hume bas saaf saaf jawab de do!

Bhumika duwidha me fas gayi. Kya kare woh?

Saath khadi Arohi bhi clueless thi. Kya karti woh bechari.

Arohi : Kaash Veer yaha hota-!!!

Uske muh se ye nikla hi tha ki-

"What's happening here???"

Ek jaani pehchaani awaaz uske kaano me padi.

'Huh???'

Bhumika aur Arohi dono ne mud ke dekha toh paaya ki Veer unke saamne khada hua tha. Woh abhi abhi kitchen me aaya tha. Baahar ke staff ne use andar jaane ke liye kaha tha.

Arohi : Veeeeeer!!!

Woh aage badh unke nazdeek aaya aur Bhumika ne use sab kuch samjha diya. Pehle toh Veer hassa aur uske baad usne Narang ko dekha,

Veer : Toh tumhe jawaab chahiye? Hmm?

Narang ne upar se neeche tak Veer ko dekha. Iss ladke ko usne pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha. Jis tarah se Bhumika aur Arohi uske saath pesh aa rahi thi, Narang ne ek anumaan laga liya ki ye ladka unka koi rishtedar hi tha. Apna guroor wapas se chehre par jhalkaate hue woh bola,

Narang : Hmph! Tum jawaab doge? Kherr! Jo bhi de, mujhe farq nahi padta. Bas, haan ya naa me bata do. Payment hamari badha rahe ho ya nahi?

Veer (smiles) : Theek hai! Toh mein deta hu tumhe jawaab!

Narang : Hmm!

Veer : GET LOST!

Narang : Huh???

Bhumika : Ahhh??? V-Veeer???

Narang ko jaise apne kaano par yakeen nahi hua. Bhumika ka bhi yahi haal tha. Woh iss waqt kaise bhi kar ke unhe rokna chaahti thi. Baahar sabhi khaane ka wait kar rahe the. Aise me ye kaisa nirnay tha ki Narang ko bhaga diya jaaye?

Narang : K-Kya kaha tumne?

Veer : Mene kaha, dafa ho jao!

Narang : Haah! Haha! Hahahahahaha!

Bhumika : Veer! Tum-!?

Narang : Mujhe toh laga tha thodi bohut aqal se kaam loge. Par- Hahahahaha!!!

Veer (smiles) : Aqal se hi kaam liya hai. Aur ye aqal pehle hi dikha deni chaahiye thi.

Narang : *frowns*

Veer : How much you pay him monthly?

Bhumika : Th-That's-!!! 60,000!!!

Veer (baffled) : 60 hazaar rupaye?? Aur pehle kitna pay karti thi?

Bhumika : 45,000!

Veer : 15,000 rupaye ka izaafa!! Mujhe nahi lagta ki aas paas ke kisi bhi hotel me kisi Head Chef ki itni payment hogi.

Narang : Ladke!! Tujhe pata hi kya hai? Hmph!!! Baahar jaake dekh zara. Casa Belle waale toh mujhe khushi khushi le lenge.

Bhumika : N-Nahi!!!

Bhumika ka darr jayaz tha.

Casa Belle!!!



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Haal hi me khuli ek nayi hotel jo unke hotel ke paas hi thi. Ek 5 star hotel. Bhumika ka sapna tha ki woh apni iss hotel ko 5 star hotel me tabdeel kare. Duniya ki ekdum premium hotels me uski hotel ka naam jaana jaaye. Aur isi sapne ke liye woh jee tod mehnat kiya karti thi.

Lekin, Casa Belle ke aane ke baad se hi hotel ke liye mushqile badh rahi thi. Zyada crowd abhi bhi Prestige ke paas hi tha. Magar, kya hoga agar Narang jaise chefs uske paas se chale jaaye aur jaa ke Casa Belle me kaam karne lage?

Hotel toh band hone ki kagaar pe aa jayega.

Veer bas muskuraya. Aur woh khushi khushi bola,

Veer : Darwaze khule hai! Jaa sakte ho!

Narang : T-Tum-!!!

Bhumika : Veer! Nahi! Hum aisa nahi kar sakte. Jald se jald inn sab ko rokna hoga. Baahar shor badhta jaa raha hai. Th-Theek hai mein payment badhaane ke liye-

Veer : Hargiz nahi! Ek rupaya bhi badhaya nahi jayega. Payment aapke kaam ke hisaab se ekdum sahi hai. Balki, zyada hi hai. 50,000 is a very good amount for a head chef. Not to mention ki tum kisi 5 star hotel ke chef nahi ho. Aur na hi abhi hamari hotel ek fully 5 star hotel me tabdeel hui hai.

Narang : Toh theek hai-!!! Bhaad me jao tum! Madam ji! Ab sambhal lena aap. Baad me mere paas gidgidate hue mat aana.

Bhumika : V-Veeeeer!!! Ye kya kiya tumne? P-Please! Hum unhe jaane nahi de sakte.

Narang : Hmph! Chalo Bhai log!

Usne kaha, magar pehle ke muqaable ab sirf aadhe hi log Narang ke saath aaye. Baaki aadhe peeche hoke khade ho gaye. Veer ki baato ne jaise unhe abhaas dilaya tha ki unhe jo mil raha tha woh pehle se kahi zyada tha.

Narang : Hmm? Tum sab!!! Yahi rehne ka irada hai kya? Bhulo nahi ki aise mauke baar baar nahi aate. Pagaar badhaane ka iss se accha mauka nahi milega. Ye ghatiya hotel chhodho aur chalo mere saath. Mein tum sab ko 20% zyada pagaar dilwaunga pehle ke muqaable.

Chef 1 : 20% zyada?

Narang : Haan! Chalo ab! Narang ki zubaan hai.

Chef 1 : L-Lekin-!! Nahi! Nahi hum yahi theek hai.

Narang : Tum!!! Mene kaha chalo mere saath.

Uska haath jabran thaam Narang ne jab use ghaseetna chaaha toh ek mazboot haath ne uski kalaayi ko jakad liya.

Veer : Woh kahi nahi jayega!

Narang : Ladke-!!! Haath chhodh!! Woh toh madam ke yaha itne saal kaam kiya hai isliye haath nahi uthaya tujh par. Tu hota kaun hai mujhe rokne waala? Madam ke naate mein kuch kar nahi raha warna-

Veer : Warna!? Shukr manao ki unhi madam ke chalte tum ab tak sahi salamat ho. Itne saal kaam kiya hai isliye zyada kuch kiya nahi mene warna-

Narang : Hoshiyar samajhta hai apne aap ko? Saale teri toh-

*Swish*

Wahi par rakha ek bada sa chamcha utha ke Narang ne Veer ke sarr pe chalaya par woh late tha. Ya yu kahe ki Veer uss se hazaro guna tezz tha.

Agle hi shan Narang ke haath se woh chamcha gaayab hua,

LIMBO!!!

*Crack*

*Swoosh*

Narang ko uske peeche se shirt pakad ke Veer ne uska sarr turant hi-

*Plop*

Paani se bhare ganj me de maara.

*Blurgh!!* *Gulp* *glrggh*

Bhumika : Nooooo!!! You both-!!!! Stop it Please!!!

Paani se uske chehre ko nikaal Veer use darwaze ki orr laaya aur-

*BAMMMMMM*

Darwaza zorr se khula aur ek udta hua insaan kuch feet dur jaa ke gira.

Baahar baithi tamaam janta ekdum se shaant ho gayi. Jo shikaayte woh pehle kar rahe the. Maar dhaad dekh sabke sab ekdum se dubak ke baith gaye.

Narang : L-Ladkeeee-!!! Madar-

*Bammmmmmm*

"Ugggghhh!!!"

Veer ne use pakda aur use aise le gaya jaise maano woh kooda fekne jaa raha tha.

Veer : Security!!!

Guard 1 : H-Haan!

Veer : Aaj se ye chef nahi hai. Hamari hotel me kaam toh kya, shaqal bhi nahi dikhni chahiye iski.

[What a strong performance. That's what I like about you~ A strong boy... needs a strong 'Mommy'! Doesn't he?]

'Shut up!'

[Fufufu~ Sooner or later! You'll be mine! ♡]

Narang ke saath jitne bhi the, woh Veer ko ladta dekh ke hi sehem gaye.

Veer : Aur tum sab!? Jaana nahi hai?

"N-Nahi Sir! H-Hum kaam karne taiyaar hai. Hum-"

Veer : Out!!!

"???"

Veer : Iss se pehle ki yahi haal tum sab ka hoye. Mere bina kahe hi nikal jao!

Na chaahte hue bhi unn sabhi ko waha se nikalna pada. Unhone apne hi perr par kulhadi maar li thi. Acchi bhali naukri haath se gawa di.

Ab woh sab Narang ke hi bharose the. Idhar Bhumika ki jaan jaise halak me aa gayi. Veer ne sabke saamne hi Head Chef ko nikaal diya? Ab kya hoga?

Bhumika : Khatam! Sab khatam! Veer! Kyu kiya aisa??? Ab k-kaise-!?

Arohi : Trust him!

Bhumika : Huh?

Arohi : He must have thought of something.

Bhumika : Wh-What?

Narang aur uski toli ko bhagaane ke baad Veer apne customers ke saamne aaya aur usne apni baat rakhi,

Veer : Jo kuch bhi hua. Uss sab ke liye mein aapse maafi maangta hu. Darasal, hamare Head Chef ki zyaadti badh gayi thi. Aur unhe ayeena dikhana zaroori tha. Mujhe aap sab 10 minute dijiye. 10 minute ke andar andar orders lagne shuru ho jayenge. Mein waada karta hu, aisa swaad aapne kahi nahi chakha hoga.

Uske bolte hi aapsi me logo ki khusur pusur chaalu ho gayi.

"Theek hai lao Bhai! Ab itna late toh ho hi gaya hai."

"H-Haan! 10 minute dekh sakte hai."

Manzoori milne ke baad Veer muskuraate hue kitchen me gaya. Peeche peeche Bhumika aur Arohi bhi thi. Nandini wahi baahar reh ke logo ko sambhaale rahi.

Aur idhar andar aate hi,

*Ding*

[Intimidating Presence has been equipped.]

Veer : Tum sab!!! Apna apna naam batao! Jaldi!

Bache hue chefs se jaise hi Veer ne buland awaaz me pucha sab uske aage sehem gaye. Andar se hi ek respect waali bhaavna na jaane kyu jaagrit hone lagi.

Apna apna naam unn sabhi ne bataya. Bhumika ko chinta khaaye jaa rahi thi.

Bhumika : Veer ab kya hoga? Hum kaise manage karenge? Ye nahi hona chahiye tha.

Veer : Bhumika dii!

Bhumika : ???

Veer (smiles) : Woh Narang pehle se hi naukri chhodhne ke chakkar me tha.

Bhumika : Wh-What??

Veer : Kya aapne gaur nahi kiya? Kyu woh baar baar Casa Belle hotel ka zikr kar raha tha?

Bhumika : Woh-

Veer (smiles) : Casa Belle waale logo ne pehle se hi use ghoos de di hai shayad. Narang toh bas bahana dhoondh raha tha yaha se nikalne ka.

Bhumika : Ahh!!?

Veer : Isliye woh aisi betuki farmayish rakh raha tha. Use laga tha ki aap use naukri se nikaal dogi. Aur uska kaam bann jayega.

Bhumika : Y-Ye!?

Veer (smiles) : But you were persistent. Aap use jaane nahi de rahi thi. Uske liye aur mushqil ho raha tha. And that's why he opted for violence.

Bhumika : Ahhhnn! Y-Ye baat thi!?

Veer : I fulfilled his wish. Ab shayad hi woh kabhi accha khaana bana paaye. *smiles*

Bhumika : Hmm?

Veer (smiles) : Looks like we've got a new competition in the market. Anyways! Aap sab kuch mujh par chhodh dijiye.

Bhumika : B-But how-!?

Veer (screams) : CHEFS!!!!

"Y-Yesss sirrr!!!"

Veer ne apni shirt utaar apni kamar par baandhi. Haath dhoye aur woh taiyaar tha.

Veer : Get ready!!! Bhumika dii! Arohi dii! Order numbers dijiye. Pehle woh bataiye jaha orders adhura pohucha hai. Uske baad woh orders jaha bohut derr se khaana nahi pohucha. And lastly newest ones.

Bhumika : G-Got it!!

Arohi : Veer! Table number 7!!! Umm! 1 Dal fry, 1 Veg pulav, and 1 butter paneer masala!!

Veer : Got it!!!

Uske haath itni raftaar se chal rahe the ki baaki chefs apni aankhein faade dekhte reh gaye. Kahi koi choonk nahi, sab kuch perfection se ho raha tha.

Bhumika ne jab uski speed dekhi toh uska muh khula ka khula reh gaya. Speed hona koi bohut badi baat nahi thi.

Par full accuracy ke saath speed hona, ye bilkul naamumkin jaisa tha. Kahi koi cheez gir nahi rahi thi. Tel ki maatra, pan ko saute karne ka dhang, ingredients ki maatra sab kuch jaise ekdum perfectly daala jaa raha tha.

Veer : Vijayyy!!!

Vijay : Y-Yes Chef!?

Veer : Tomato soup!!! Table number 9 ke liye. Abhi!!!

Vijay : Y-Yes Chef!!!

Veer : Toasted bread piece daalna mat bhulna!!

Vijay : Y-Yes!!

Veer : Coriander ki garnishing!!!

Vijay (shouts) : Yessssss Chef!!!

Veer : Rohitttt!!!!

Rohit : H-Haan??

Veer : Same table!!! Dry Manchurian!!

Rohit : Y-Yess Chef!!!

*Clang* *Schling*

Bartano ki khat-pat awaazo ke saath aur chaaku chhuriya ki dhaar ke sang Veer ne kitchen me ek alag hi aura bhar diya.

Baaki chefs Veer ki skills dekh, uss se order lete hue itne motivate ho gaye ki woh harsho-ullas ke saath khaana banaane me jutt gaye. Asli swaad tabhi aata hai jab ek chef dil se khushi khushi uss khaane ko banaaye. Aaj wahi ho raha tha.

Bhumika ne aisa drishya pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha. Veer ko kaam karta dekh, uski dhadkane tezz ho uthi. Sach kehte hai. Ek mard sabse zyada attractive tab hi lagta hai jab woh apne kaam me leen ho.

Woh yaha uss Narang ki payment badhaane ke chakkar me thi. Aur yaha Veer ne ek jhalak me uske shadiyantra ko pakad liya tha.

Bhumika : I have so much yet to learn...! M-Mein use samajh nahi saki theek se.

Arohi (smiles) : That's okay! As long as you keep faith in him!

Bhumika (smiles) : I see now! Thank you! Arohi!

Arohi (smiles) : Mmm~

Baahar jaise jaise dishes aati gayi, logo ke mann se woh doubt khatam ho gaya. Jaise jaise unhone khaane ka swaad chakha sab ke sab chakit reh gaye. Baat sahi thi. Aaj tak unn sabhi ne iss tarah ka swaad nahi chakha tha. Dishes toh same hi thi. Lekin, ek naya zaayka tha usme. Kuch extra tha. Jo woh bata nahi paa rahe the.

Akhir kaar ye silsila khatam hua. Raat ke 10:30 baj rahe the. Rush samaapt ho chuka tha. Veer ne aaj se pehle kabhi itna khaana nahi banaaya tha.

Garmi ke chalte woh poora paseene se lath-path tha. Hotel ke baahar closed ka sign lag chuka tha.

Dining area me hi woh ek kursi par AC ke neeche baith gaya.

Uske bagal se Arohi thi toh wahi dusri orr Bhumika.

Arohi ne ek towel lete hue uska paseena pochha.

Veer (smiles) : Thank you!

Arohi : Thank you!

Veer : Hmm?

Arohi : For working this hard!

Bhumika ne achanak se uski baah ko apne haatho ke ird gird liya.

Veer : ???

Bhumika : Veer! Aaj sab ne khaane ki itni zyaada tareef ki hai ki mein tumhe bata nahi sakti. Aisa pehle kabhi nahi hua.

Veer : Haha!

Bhumika : No doubt woh Narang accha khana banaata tha. Lekin, kabhi bhi public aise react nahi karti thi. Jo kuch bhi tamasha aaj hua, uss se public darr bhi gayi thi. Isliye mene unhe Sunday ka special offer ka coupon bhi diya hai. Umeed hai ye swaad chakhne ke baad woh zaroor ayenge.

Veer : Of course!

Bhumika (frowns) : L-Lekin-! Ye toh sirf aaj ke liye tha. Aaj tumne madad kar di. Aage kya hoga?

Veer : Don't worry! Aapke liye mene naya head chef bhi dhoondh liya hai.

Bhumika : Kya??? Kaun hai woh?

Veer (smiles) : You'll know soon!

Woh aankhein band thodi derr khud ko durust karne laga jab,

*Puch*

'Huh?'

Do narm honth uske gaal par lag gaye. Bhumika ne sharmaate hue uske gaal ko chooma.

Bhumika (blushes) : Th-Thank you so much!!!

Veer : Ahem! D-Don't mention it!

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Yaha toh sab nipat chuka tha. Magar inn beete ghante Sonali kaha thi?

Food truck se nikalne ke baad woh Kaushik ke sang pradarshani dekhne gayi thi. Khayaal toh use Veer ka hi aa raha tha.

Kintu, Kaushik ki lagataar baato ko sunn aur pradarshani me mauj masti kar uska dhyaan Veer par se thoda hatt gaya.

Derr raat ho rahi thi. Usne aaj khoob enjoy kiya tha. Ab lautne ka samay tha.

Kaushik ka dost bhi jaa chuka tha. Ab woh khud hi gaadi chala raha tha.

Kaushik : Kya iss nacheez ke saath sundari jii ko thoda bohut bhi accha laga?

Sonali : Hahaha! Tumhari baatein betuki hai. Aur mujh par line maarna band kar do.

Kaushik : Uui maa! Pakda gaya kya mein?

Sonali : Kab ke!!! Chalo! Aur mujhe jaldi se wapas se truck par chhodh do. Prachi ab aur late nahi ruk payegi.

Kaushik : Bilkul! Bilkul!

Sonali ko raaste pata nahi the. Magar kuch na kuch mod yaad zaroor the.

Jab Kaushik ne truck dusri disha me moda toh uski bauhe kass uthi.

Sonali : Arre? Y-Ye raasta nahi hai. Woh waala mod tha.

Kaushik : Jaane dijiye na! Aaj yaha se chalte hai. Kaafi saari khubsoorat jagaahe hai yaha pe. Aapko dikhata hu.

Sonali : N-Nahi! Raat bohut ho gayi hai. Aur mujhe ab jaana hai.

Kaushik : Maaniye toh baat-!!

Sonali : Mene kaha na-!!! Ye-! Ye kya kar rahe ho tum??

Kaushik : Nahi!! A-Aaj aapko meri baat maanami padegi.

Woh uski orr mudte hue bola. Uski muskaan me iss baar hawas ke iraade jhalak rahe the.

Sonali : !!???
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Update consists of 7.3k words. Arc ne pace pakad liya hai. Second gear lag chuka hai. Baaki, like thokna nahi bhulne ka aur revos rakhne ka. Target wahi hai apna. 150. Kehna na pade baar baar. Aur saath bane rehne ka guys.
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बहुत उम्दा ,

सोनाली कहा इतना जानती है । शहर में आई और आते ही उसे काम दे दिया गया। जो मन लगाकर रही है।

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Ye story jis raftaar se popularity ho Raha tha aajkal thoda slow ho Gaya hai...
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Update dene k 1 din me hi 150 likes ho jata tha... Aajkal 5 days lag rahe hain...

Pahle review etne ate the ki dekhte dekhte 20 page bhar jate the ... Aab to Aisa ho hi nahi Raha...

Aisa kyun ho Raha hai pata nahi ummid hai pahele ke jaise pyar milta rahe...
 

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Ye story jis raftaar se popularity ho Raha tha aajkal thoda slow ho Gaya hai...
Matlab
Update dene k 1 din me hi 150 likes ho jata tha... Aajkal 5 days lag rahe hain...

Pahle review etne ate the ki dekhte dekhte 20 page bhar jate the ... Aab to Aisa ho hi nahi Raha...

Aisa kyun ho Raha hai pata nahi ummid hai pahele ke jaise pyar milta rahe...
Kyuki forum me traffic ghat gaya hai. Ads ke kaaran shayad. Pehle Jo traffic tha woh ab nahi. Bohut se readers jaa chuke hai. :sigh2:

Kherr! Umeed hai Chinatown arc me traffic badhta hua nazar aayega.
 

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soniya suhana aur kaera ka bhi part dalne wale the bhai aap is update mai par unke related koi discussion hi nahi hua
Mene kab kaha? Nahi toh! Aisa toh mene kahi nahi kaha. Sonia Kaera iss arc ka aham hissa hai. Woh jald hi nazar aayengi. Dhairya banaaye rakhe.
Jabardastt Updatee


Pari ka yeh character sach mein dilchasp aur mazedaar hai saath hi thoda naughty bhi lag raha hai.
Yes! Woh bold hai. Sensual bhi.
Mujhe aisa kyo lag raha hai yeh character hi ab Veer ke life mein incest relation ki starting karwayega.
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Idher Shreya ab Youtuber banna chahti hai jisme Veer uski madad karega profit path ke jariye. Jisme woh Aabha ko bhi join karwana chahta hai. Ab dekhna yeh hai yeh chiz kitna successful hota hai.
Laundiyo ka YouTube channel dhadalle se famous hota hai. Laar tapkaate hue launde harr jagah pohuch jaate hai :hint:
Idher Veer aur Nidhi ki chemistry abhi bhi uljhi hui lag rahi hai umeed hai yeh chiz jaldi hi solve hogi shayad iss Chinatown arc mein hojaaye.
Abhi uljhane rahengi. Nidhi is very hard to claim. Disembowler's arc me uska aur Juhi dono ka behad aham role rahega. Dhanyavaad! Saath bane rehne ka. ✨
Bahot badhiya shaandar update
Ajay ko achcha sabka mil gaya saath m jack ko bhi
Nidhi k dil Veer k liye pyar tha lekin veer or Shreya ki harkat n bahot bade zakhmi diye
Ab kon se miseebat aan padi bhala Kiske gaand m keede kaat rehe
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
Shukriya bhai. Saath bane rehne ka. ✨
 

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Update - 142 ~ Necessitation

Ab tak...

Idhar upar udte helicopter me uss ladki ke baal hawa me lehra rahe the.

Tabhi uske mann me ek awaaz aayi,

*DING*

‘I’m sorry…! Veer!’

Aur udhar Mumbai me Ragini ke ghar me, apne kamre me laiti Bhavna achanak bechaini ke chalte bistar par uth ke baith gayi.


Ab aage...

*Badump* *Badump*

Bhavna ka dil zorr-zorr se dhadak raha tha. Kaleja baahar aane ko ho raha tha. Ye kaisi ajeeb si bechaini woh mehsoos kar rahi thi. Uska jee behad michla raha tha.

Achanak hi uske kamre ka darwaza khula aur haafti hui Tej andar aayi,

Tej : M-Mom!?

Bhavna : Tej?? Iss waqt yaha? Kya hua?

Subah ke 7 baj rahe the aur Tej ka iss qadar uske kamre me aana koi maamuli baat nahi thi.

Tej : Mom! Ajeeb sa mehsoos ho raha hai. Ek bure sapne ke chalte neend khul gayi. Paseena aane laga, jee ghabrane laga. Isliye yaha aa gayi.

Bhavna ki bauhe ye sunte hi chintan me sikud gayi.

Bhavna : Tum akeli nahi ho beta. Aao! Baitho!

Tej kamre ke andar aake apni Maa ke bagal se baith gayi.

Tej : Veer se abhi tak baat nahi hui hai. Mujhe ab fiqr ho rahi hai. Wo bhi to call kar sakta hai na? Kahi wo kisi musibat me toh nahi fass gaya na?

Bhavna (frowns) : Tum theek keh rahi ho beta! Itna lamba samay nahi lagna chahiye. Agar wo vyast bhi hai to kam se kam ek phone call to kar hi dena tha usse. Kuch baat zaroor hai.

Bhavna nahi chaahti thi ki uska mann uss disha me jaaye. Par na chaahte hue bhi uska mann wahi jaa raha tha. Aur, uski ghabrahat harr guzarte pal badhti hi jaa rahi thi.

'Mera beta...!' Usne apne ek haath se apne seene ko bheench liya.

Tej : Toh kya kare Mom?

Bhavna : Huh? Ho sakta hai Veer kisi ko koi alag number ya soochna de ke gaya ho. Shayad Ragini ko kuch pata ho. Sab ko uth jaane do. Fir hum baat karte hai.

Tej (nods) : Mmm!

Veer ke ghar me subah wese hi sabhi jaldi uth jaate the. Unn sabhi ke uthate hi jab saare log living room me ekatr hue toh Tej se ab aur raha na gaya,

Tej : A-Aap sab! Kya aap sab me se kisi ki Veer se baat hui hai?

Shweta sabse pehli thi jisne jawaab diya,

Shweta : Nahi! Lekin, uska phone Ragini ko zaroor aaya karta tha jab bhi woh baahar jaata tha. Ragini?

Ragini : Nahi Tai ji! Meri baat Veer se bas message pe hui thi. Mene parso pucha tha uss se ki sab theek hai waha? Toh uska reply aaya tha ki sab badhiya hai. Woh jald hi lautega.

Tej : Uske baad?

Ragini : Uske baad mene kal bhi message bheja tha. Lekin, message seen nahi hai.

Ragini ki iss khabar par woh sabhi ek chinta me doob gayi.

Bhavna : Kya woh tumhe koi aur number deke gaya hai? Emergency ke liye?

Ragini : Hmm? Nahi! Woh khud se hi call karta tha toh-!

Tej : Arohi? Kavya? Kya tum dono ki baat hui hai uss se?

Tej ka prashna sunn Arohi ne dheere se naa me sarr hila diya. Veer ki khabar se woh bhi anjaan thi.

Kavya : Didi! Veer bhaiya ne zaroor apna phone gira diya hoga kahi. Woh bhulakkad toh hai hi. Hehe! Ek baar school time me apna rumaal bhul gaye the. Toh fir mera ladkiyo wala rumaal use kiye the hahahaha!

Arohi : Kavyaaaa!!! Ye mazaak ka waqt nahi!

Arohi ki daant sunn Kavya apna chehra ferr muh fula li.

Kavya : Aap sab itna kyu darr rahe ho? Abhi Choti Tai ji ke gaav me Veer bhaiya uss ghar ki terrace se neeche nahi gire the? Kursi pe land kiye the. Unko kuch nahi hua tha. Ek baar Diwali ke time jab mein aur Arohi di ye waale ghar aa rahe the tab kuch gunde hamare peeche lag gaye the.

Tej : Gunde?

Kavya (nods) : Mmm-hmmm! Gunde! Gande waale! Par Veer Bhaiya waha hero ki tarah bachane aaye the hume. Dii yaad hai na aapko?

Arohi ko turant hi woh pal yaad aa gaya jab Veer usse bachaane aaya tha. Uska haath apne aap hi Veer dwaara di gayi unn kaan ki baaliyo par chala gaya. Aur woh ahista se apna sarr haan me hilaayi,

Arohi (nods) : Mmm!

Kintu, Bhavna ke maathe par lakeere chhaayi hui thi.

'Gunde...!?'

Woh samajh chuki thi ki uska abhi apne bete ke bohut se kisso ke baare me jaan'na baaki tha.

Kavya : Toh aap log khamakha itni tension le rahe ho. Bhaiya ka phone ghum gaya hai pakke se. Woh dekhna khud hi apni taraf se call karenge.

Usne keh toh diya, par sabhi ke ashaant mann ko saantvna dene ke liye ye kaafi nahi tha.

Ragini : Ahhh! Ek minute!! Kavya? Pichli baar Veer woh Suhana Miss ke saath gaya tha na? Woh famous Sonia..! Businesswoman!! Unki badi behan hai na? Woh dono holi me aayi thi na hamare ghar?

Tej : Sonia? Suhana? K-Kaun hai ye?

Kavya (nods) : Mm! Haan! Yaad aaya! Aayi toh thi woh dono.

Ragini : Toh unhone tumhe apna number diya tha na?

Kavya : Ahhn! W-Woh-!!

Jab Kavya nazre churaane lagi toh Arohi ne uski baah pakad li,

Arohi : Ab ye mat kehna ki tumne woh kho diya.

Kavya : Nahi!!! Woh...! Mene paper pe note down kiya tha unka number. Aur ab mujhe yaad nahi ki-

Arohi : Kaaaaavyyyaaaaaa!!

Woh zorr se usse chillaayi.

Arohi : Mene tumhe kaha hai na kitni baar ki hamesha important numbers ko apne phone me save kiya karo.

Kavya : Dii! Tab Holi thi. Mein buri tarah rang se puti hui thi. Isliye mobile ko haath nahi lagaya. Bhaiya ke room se hi copy pen laayi thi aur- arre haan!!! Bhaiya ke room me kahi padi hogi woh copy. Ruko!!!

Woh bhaagte hue andar gayi toh uske peeche-peeche Arohi bhi chal di.

Toh wahi idhar Ragini ke phone par ussi samay Nidhi ka call aa gaya.

Ragini : Hello?

Nidhi : Hello! Kaisi hai aap?

Ragini : J-Jii mein theek hu! Aap bataiye! Aaj mujhe kaise yaad kiya?

Nidhi : Veer ka phone nahi lag raha tha toh socha aapko hi laga lu. Darasal, agle mahine Holi hai. Aur exams bhi rahenge. Mene bas ye batane ke liye phone kiya hai ki Veer se kahiyega woh padhna shuru kar de. Semester ke last exams hai. Fir uska last year lag jayega.

Ragini : Ah! J-Jii! Mein keh dungi!

Nidhi (smiles) : Jii! Dekhiye! Business apni jagah hai. Par- Par ab companies aane lagengi. Veer se kahiyega wo prepare kare. Baaki, mein toh hu hi. Aap jaanti hai ki job kitni zaroori hai. Side me wo business kar sakta hai. Lekin-

Ragini : H-Haan! Aap sahi hai. M-Mein keh dungi uss se.

Nidhi : Jii! Aur usse mere paas bhi bhej dijiyega. Mein usse samjha dungi. Kuch pointers de dungi exams ke liye.

Ragini : S-Sure! Thank you!

Nidhi (smiles) : No need for that. Accha! Mein rakhti hu.

Ragini : Hmm!

Aur call cut ho gaya. Log Veer ko yaad kar rahe the. Parantu, unhe kya pata tha ki woh iss waqt kis haal me tha. Zinda tha bhi ya nahi?

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Mumbai me Veer ke ghar bhale hi subah ke 7:30 ho rahe the. Parantu, Paris me yaha ab bhi raat ka andhera barkaraar tha.

Yaha derr raat ke 3 baje hue the. Paris ka samay Mumbai se lagbhag saadhe 4 ghante peeche tha.

Hawa me helicopter lehra raha tha. Saagar ki ufanti lehre chattaano par thapede maar rahi thi. Dheere-dheere jab badi lehre takra ke thamti toh paani kuch shan ke liye shaant ho jaata. Aur ussi ke saath uska shor bhi.

Uss ardh-paardarshi jal ke andar dekh paana jatil tha. Upar se raat ka andhera. Helicopter ki spotlight ke bawajood kahi unhe woh nazar nahi aa raha tha jiski unhe talaash thi. Aur woh tha-

Veer ka shav!

"Dhoondhte raho!!! Aasmaan kha gaya usse ya dharti nigal gayi? Paani me hi hoga. Chappa-chappa chhaan maaro."

Senior officer ki awaaz uss poore ilaake me goonj gayi.

Par talaashi ke pehle Ava urf Natalia Martin ko helicopter se neeche utaar diya gaya.

Andre : Miss Natalia. Ab aap surakshit hai. Mein Andre! DGSI ki orr se ek agent. Mere saath chaliye.

Ava ne ahista se haami bhari aur uske peeche-peeche chal di.

Raasta wahi tha jaha se Veer aaya tha. Aur waha se nikal jaise hi woh sab building ke nazdeek aaye toh Andre ghabraate hue aage badha,

Andre : Terashimaaa!!!!

Woh chillaaya aur Terashima ko zameen se uthaate hue usse jhunjhlaya. Kintu, woh hosh me nahi thi.

Uski saansein aur physical condition check karne ke baad Andre ne ek raahat ki saans li.

Toh utne me building ke dusre maale se Chris aur uski team neeche aayi. Chris ki baah me goli lagi hui thi.

Neeche aate hi Chris ki aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi jab usne apne aas-paas ka nazaara dekha.

Lighthouse ka chhajja tabaah ho chuka tha. Aur neeche, ek bade se chopper ke chithde ude hue the jo aag ki lapto me jhulas rahe the.

Chris : Good god!! K-Kya hua yaha par?

Andre : Chris!!!

Chris : Andre?

Andre : Tumhe toh chot lagi hai. Quick! Jaldi chalo!

Chris : H-Haan! Upar bache hue logo ko arrest kar liya gaya hai.

Andre : Chinta mat karo! Poora area chhaan ke hi yaha se niklenge. Pehle tumhe medical assist dena zaroori hai.

Airplane airstrip par pehle se hi khada hua tha. DGSI aur police officers dwaara Natalia ko plane ke andar baitha diya gaya.

Toh wahi jis plane me Natalia ko laaya gaya tha, uske andar bhi chhaan-been shuru kar di gayi. Kintu,

Jo pilots Natalia ko plane me yaha baitha ke laaye the, unki bas laashe hi haath lagi.

Andre : Shit!!! Ab kya kiya jaaye?

Senior officer : Le ke chalna hoga inhe. Forensic report shayad kuch bata de. Baaki, bodies par se phones aur baaki details kese retrieve karni hai woh kaam hum par chhor do.

Andre (nods) : Hmm!

Aur kaafi mehnat mashakkat ke baad ek airplane ko waha se bhej diya gaya.

Yaha se ek plane ravaana hua tha toh wahi Paris ke airport par ek airplane land ho raha tha.

Plane ke land hote hi, usme se log nikle aur airport ke baahar jaane lage.

Unhi chand logo me se ek khubsoorat aurat tezz qadmo ke saath aage badh rahi thi. Uske peeche-peeche ek aadmi tha aur ek aur aurat chal rahi thi.

"Miss! Yaha se ab kaha?"

Awaaz Prakash Uncle ki thi. Aur aage chal rahi aurat koi aur nahi balki Suhana hi thi.

Uske chehre par chinta aur ghabrahat saaf jhalak rahi thi.

"Suhana!!! Kuch bataogi ya nahi?"

Ye awaaz thi Ashita ki. Suhana ki personal psychologist. Divya toh na aa saki parantu Ashita Suhana ke peeche peeche chali aayi.

Suhana ka ravaiyya bada hi ajeeb lag raha tha usse. Uski personal psychologist hone ke naate uski harr harqato par dhyaan dena Ashita ki zimmedari thi.

Suhana : Prakash Uncle!! Hume Ava ko dhundhna hai.

Prakash : P-Par Ava Miss to kidnap ho chuki hai na Miss.

Suhana tezz raftaar se chalti jaa rahi thi. Uska peeche karne ke liye Prakash aur Ashita ko bhaagna pad raha tha.

Prakash : Aur aap abhi bhi poori tarah theek nahi hui ho.

Suhana (frowns) : Abhi sabse zyada important hai Ava ke baare me khabar lagna Uncle. Veer bhaari musibat me hai. Uska Phone nahi lag raha hai aur na hi aapke uss Eric se contact ho paa raha hai.

Ashita : Veer? Who's this Veer?

Prakash ne ek jhalak Ashita ko dekha par uske prashn ka uttar na diya.

Prakash : Aise me toh fir Ava Miss ke sabse qareebi log ya fir yaha ke investigation department jaana hi behtar hoga. Wahi se kuch detail lag payegi Miss.

Suhana : Ava ke qareebi kaun hai, ye hum nahi jaante. Investigation department hi chalna behtar hoga.


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Road taraf aate hi ek car pehle se hi unke liye lagi hui thi.

Prakash ne aage badh car ka darwaza khola aur Suhana andar baith gayi. Saath hi Ashita bhi.

Prakash aage driver ke bagal se baitha aur car waha se ravana ho gayi.

Magar abhi kuch hi kilometer ki duri tay ki thi unhone ki saamne ka nazara dekh woh sabhi chaunk gaye.

Paris ke iss jaane maane chauraahe par afra-tafri machi hui thi. News reporters idhar se udhar apne cameramans ke saath coverage ke liye bhaag rahe the.


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Toh wahi police unhe control karne me lagi hui thi. Logo ko surakshit rakhne ke liye woh waha se jald se jald area khaali karwaane me lage hue the.

Ye ilaaka wahi tha jaha kal raat bada dhamaka hua tha. Tehqiqat karna kisse pasand nahi hota? Log apna camera leke aur reporters apna mic leke pohuch rahe the.

Police ke liye kaam badhta jaa raha tha.

Suhana : Something big has happened. Whole city is in chaos.

Ashita : Y-Ye sab!? Akhir ho kya raha hai?

Car me baithe-baithe unn sab ne dekha ki kaise news reporters harr ghatna ki jankaari dene me lage hue the.

Toh wahi janta me se kuch log aise the jo virodh ka pradarshan kar rahe the. Naare lagaate hue woh police aur France ki govt. ke khilaaf awaaz utha rahe the.


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"Kya yahi hai France ki suraksha? Kya yahi hai police ki security? Aise hi itna bada hamla sheher ke beecho-beech kar diya jaata hai. Kya kar rahi thi police? Kitne log maare gaye hai. Kaha hai hamla karne waala? Kya police pakad paayi usse? Hum jawaab chaahte hai!!!"

Janta ka virodh badhta hi jaa raha tha. Aur unki awaaz ko logo tak pohuchaane ka kaam media kar rahi thi.

Police officers logo aur media ke beech ghir kar unhe bas hidaayat hi de sakte the.

"France 24 News channel se mein bol rahi hu Audrey aur hamaare saamne maujood hai police department ke jaane maane Chief. Sir! Kya kehna chaahte hai aap iss waqt? Janta police se naakhush hai. Din-dahaade hamla ho jaata hai aur police ke paas saamne rakhne ke liye koi jawaab nahi hai."

Chief ne logo ko shaant rehne ka ishaara kiya par shor tha jo kam hone ka naam hi nahi le raha tha.

"Dekhiye!! Situation kaafi critical hai aur complex bhi. Ye samay virodh ka nahi hai. Mein janta se kehna chahunga ki kripya kar woh hume apna kaam karne de. Mujrim ke peeche DGSI aur hamari force lagi hui hai. Mujhe aasha hai jald hi hum ghuspethiye ko pakad lenge. Mein aashvashan deta hu ki France ki police apna poora de rahi hai."

"Par janta ka kya Sir? Jinhone apni jaan gavaayi hai unka kya? Uss baare me aap kya kehna chaahenge? Kya aap maante hai ki aap ke department me se kahi na kahi security ko lekar chook hui hai?"

"Ji nahi! Hum harr samay alert rehte hai. Ye ek haadsa hai. Aur mujhe bohut khed hai iss baat ka ki kuch logo ne apni jaane gawa di hai. Magar hum jald hi mujrim ko pakad ke janta ke saamne pesh karenge."

Itna bol Chief waha se hatt ke jaane lage toh news reporter unka peecha karne lage. Parantu, police officers ne unhe aage badhne na diya.

"Toh jaisa ki dekha aapne. Police chief ka yahi kehna hai ki woh apna poora de rahe hai aur tehqiqaat karne me teams juti hui hai. Mera bhi yahi nivedan hai darshako se ki kripya apne apne ghar me hi rahiye. Police ko apna kaam karne dijiye. Tab tak ke liye aaiye aapko dikhaate hai, uss building ki dasha jaha par dhamaka hua tha."

Aur news reporter cameraman ke saath waha se nikal gayi.

Car me baithe jab Suhana aur baaki sab ne ye dekha toh unki haalat patli ho gayi.

Ashita : I-Itna bada haadsa ho gaya yaha?

Prakash : Aage bhaari checking lagi hai Miss. Cars ko bina check kiye aage badhne nahi de rahe hai.



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Suhana : Hum clean hai. Hum par koi aarop nahi hai. It's okay. Let them do! Lekin agar time lagta hai then-!! Find another route.

Prakash : Jii! Mein aage jaake unse puch ke aata hu ki pehle hamari checking kar de. Toh hum yaha se nikal sake.

Suhana (nods) : Hmm!

Prakash gaadi se utar aage Signal ki orr chal diya. Lekin tabhi chauraahe ke upar bade bade hoardings ke paas lagi ek badi si screen par news aayi.

Suhana ki nazre fauran hi uss par tik gayi.


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"Breaking News coming from the blast incident which took place yesterday. Singer and celebrity Miss Natalia Martin has been rescued by the DGSI and police force. The suspect has been executed on the spot. It has been confirmed that the suspect didn't co-operate with the police. Hence, squandering his life. Body has still not been found. However, DGSI is working diligently to search the criminal's body."

Khabar ke saat hi Veer ki wahi tasveere screen par aayi jo Andre ne slot machine waali alley me video me record ki thi.

Suhana ne jab ye suna aur dekha toh uski saansein maano atak gayi. Saaf saaf likha hua tha. Suspect was executed on the spot.

Apraadhi ko wahi par maar diya gaya. Suhana ka badan thar-thar kaanpne laga. Uski aankhein feli hui thi. Kya woh saamne jo dekh rahi thi woh sach tha?

Aur fir iska bodh hote hi ek ajeeb si anubhooti usse andar se hui. Aankhon se apne aap aasu nirantar behne lage.

Ashita : Suhana!?

Suhana toh jaise kisi aur hi duniya me jaa chuki thi. Badan me kampan rukne ka naam nahi le raha tha.

Achanak hi uske phone par call aaya, jiski awaaz ne uska dhyaan kheecha.

Bina screen me number dekhe Suhana ne call uthaaya aur phone ko kaan pe lagaya.

Toh waha se awaaz aayi,

"Umm! Suhana ma'am? Kya ye aapka number hai? Mein Veer bhaiya ki choti behan- Kavya bol rahi hu. Hello? Hello?"

Suhana ki bolti band thi. Kaise jawaab de? Aur kya jawaab de? Saamne screen par Veer ki akhiri tasveere jhalak rahi thi. Kaise kahe uss ladki se ki uska bhai marr chuka hai?

Usse mehsoos hua jaise andar se kuch behad keemti toot gaya ho. Jisse ab dobaara kabhi nahi joda jaa sakta.

Kavya : H-Hello?

Suhana : M-Mein tumhe baad me call karti hu Kavya. Okay?

Kavya : Ohh! O-Okay! Wo-! Woh Veer bhaiya ke baare me puchna tha. K-Kya aapko koi khabar hai woh kaha par hai?

Suhana : N-Nahi! Mein pata kar ke tumhe uske baare me bataati hu. Th-Theek hai?

Kavya : Okay! Thank you~ B-Bye!

Aur call cut ho gaya. Magar call cut hote hi Suhana toot ke bikhar gayi. Woh zorr zorr se rone lagi. Ashita usse achanak se iss qadar dekh ghabra gayi.

Ashita : Suhaaaanaa???

Parantu, Suhana koi jawaab nahi de rahi thi. Woh bas roti jaa rahi thi. Jhar-jhar uske aansu aankhon se beh ke gir rahe the.

'It can't be-!!! H-How can this happen?'

Yakeen nahi karna chaahti thi woh magar saamne news channel uske mann ko aur duwidha me daal raha tha.

'N-Nahi!! Aisa nahi ho sakta. It doesn't make any sense. R-Right! They haven't discovered him yet. Jab tak mein apni aankho se nahi dekh leti tab tak mein yakeen nahi karungi! Woh Aatish, Slogan, Nightwalker, Pitcher jaiso ke changul se baahar aaya hai. I know you're out there Veer...!'

Ashita : Suhanaaa?

Suhana ne agle hi shan apne aansu poche. Tab tak Prakash bhi laut ke aa chuka tha.

Prakash : Miss! Woh maan gaye hai. Check karwa ke nikalte hai.

Suhana : Plan badal chuka hai Uncle. Ab hum waha nahi jaa rahe. Ek hotel me rooms book kariye sab ke liye. Aaj raat hum wahi thehrenge. Aur kal Ava laut ke aa chuki hogi Paris me! Then we'll meet her.

Prakash : Theek hai!

'She's hiding something.'

Car checking ke baad seedhe ek hotel ki disha me chali gayi.

***


Las Vegas
Night...


Veer ke liye uske chaahne waale log lag chuke the. Harr koi uski khabar paane ke liye bechain tha.

Yaha Vegas me Divya ko ek baar punaah Nolan ne apne department bulaaya hua tha.

Andar jaate hi ek aur report uske saamne table par patak di gayi.

Nolan : Ab sthiti haath se nikal rahi hai Divya. Take a look at this.

Report ko uthaate hue jab Divya ne sab kuch padha toh woh bhauchakki reh gayi. Atyant krodh janm liya, saath hi vyaakulta bhi.

Divya : Ye France waale paagal ho gaye hai kya? Andhe hai kya? Dikhaayi nahi deta kya namoono ko??

Nolan : Tumhe ek baat aur bataani hai. Kuch din pehle France ki orr se House of the Killers ke cases ko leke ek request aayi thi.

Divya : Wh-What?

Nolan : Hmm! Unhe report chahiye thi HOK ki.

Divya : Kyaaaaa?

Nolan : Aur humne unhe bheji bhi hai report.

Divya : What? Are you in your right mind??? HOK koi normal murder case nahi hai. Ye confidential hai. Classified reports ko department dusre desh me kaise bhej sakta hai?

Nolan : Unka daawa hai ki wahi hamla unke upar hone waala tha. Unhe saboot bhi mile hai. Aur iska rachayita unn logo ne kisse tehraya hai pata hai na?

Nolan ne agle hi pal report ka akhiri panna khola toh usme Veer ki tasveer bani hui thi.

Divya ka haal behaal ho utha. Woh apni jagah par baithate hue bhayanak peeda mehsoos kar rahi thi. Usse koi raasta nazar nahi aa raha tha. Uske nain bheeg uthe.



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Divya : Y-Ye sab-!!!

Nolan : Hum jaante hai Veer nirdosh hai. Hum sirf ek hi kaam kar sakte hai. Aur woh hai ki apni report bana ke bheje jisme Veer ko normal citizen ke roop me dikhaaya jaaye. Jaisa ki vaastav me hai. Lekin-! Jo kuch hoga woh wahi se ho payega. Mujhe nahi lagta woh maanenge.

Divya (sobs) : A-Aap kaise!? Kaise bhej sakte ho waha reports? *sniff*

Nolan : Divya! Jab dusra desh vipda me aane waala ho aur unhone koi maang rakhi ho toh hume badle me madad karni hi padti hai. Hamara desh iss samasya se joojh chuka hai. Upar se order the ki report ko bheja jaaye taaki woh pehle se iske liye taiyaar ho sake. Hume kya pata tha ki waha Veer ko fassa diya jayega!

Divya (screams) : Magar Veer nirdosh hai!!!!

Nolan : Jaanta hu! Isliye jo bann padega, department woh karega.

Itna bol woh baahar nikal gaya. Kintu, Divya wahi gir ke subakne lagi. Iss ladke se itna lagaav ho jayega usse, usne khud kabhi nahi socha tha.

***

Agli raat mahaul kuch aur hi tha. News par Ava se sawaal jawaab kiye jaa rahe the. Usse Paris aaye kuch hi ghante hue the ki reporters uske upar chadh pade.

Tamaam sawaalo ke saamne Ava mics se ghiri hui thi.

Aur unn sabhi sawaalo ka bas usne ek hi jawaab diya,

"Mujhe theek se yaad nahi mere saath kya hua tha. Mein bhaag rahi thi. Fir pakad li gayi aur fir kahi mujhe le jaaya gaya. Mujhe koi jankaari nahi hai inn sab ke peeche kaun hai. Mein abhi ghabrayi hui hu aur abhi kuch samay akele me guzarna chaahti hu."

Bas! Ye kuch shabd kaafi the. Doctors se leke security sabhi ne reporters ko Ava se dur kar diya. Doctors Ava ki health condition check karne lage. Toh wahi kuch reporters ke sawaal jawaab dene me lag gaye.

Sab kuch jab thoda shaant hua. Toh raat me Ava hospital ke liye chal padi.

Woh akeli thi. Face par mask tha uske. Car thode sunsaan raaste se guzar hi rahi thi jab theek saamne raaste par koi beech me aa gaya.

Ava ne car side me roki aur uss se baahar nikal woh uss shaks ki orr gayi.

Saamne wahi tha!!


Crimson!!!

Par uski aankhon me bhaiyankar krodh tha. Aag baboola ho rakhi thi uski aankhein.

Crimson (garajte hue) : Kaha hai woh??? Kaha hai??

Ava (frowns) : He's dead!

Agle hi pal Ava ka gala Crimson ke mazboot haatho me tha.

Crimson : NAHI!!!!! TUMNE MARRNE KAISE DIYA USSE??? WOH MERA SHIKAAR THA!!!!

Ava : Ngghhh!!!

*BAAAAAAMMMMMMM*

Ava ki laat turant hi Crimson ke pait se takraayi aur Crimson dur jaate hue lohe ke dabbo ke beech jaa gira. Uska ek haath wese hi pehle se gaayab tha. Seene par abhi bhi khoon ke dhabbe maujood the.

Ava : *huff* *huff* Mene tumhara kaam kar diya hai. Apne aadmiyo ko waapas bulao.

Crimson karaahte hue utha aur kuch derr tak Ava ko dekhta raha.

Ava ki awaaz agle hi pal kaafi khaufnaak ho gayi.

Ava : APNE AADMIYO KO WAAPAS BULAO! ABHI!!!

Crimson : Girl!!! Awaaz neeche! Bhulo nahi ki tum kis situation me ho abhi.

Fir bhi apna phone nikaal usne ek message bheja. Aur uske message bhejte hi,

8 se 10 snipers jo apna aim Grace Martin ke ward ki khidki par lagaaye baithe the woh waha se nikal gaye.

Crimson : They are gone!

Ava : Agar aisa kuch dobaara hua, toh mein tumhaare tukde tukde kar dungi! Fir chaahe apni hi jaan kyu na gawa du!

Crimson (gusse me) : Woh mera shikaar tha!!! Meraaaa!!!! But you let him-

Ava : He didn't surrender. He chose to die. He gave away his life rather than surrendering to you.

Kehte hue uski palke neeche ko jhuk gayi.

Crimson : Y-You-!!

Ava (glances) : Aur itna gussa kyu? Tum usse maarna chaahte the. Woh jaa chuka hai. Tumhara maqsad poora hua. Why the rage?

Crimson : Tch! Apne kaam se kaam rakho! Aur tumhara haal bhi toh alag hai. Aren't you caring for him too much? He was no one to you! Why such a reaction then!? Interesting!

Ava : Fuck off!

Ava waha se mudi aur apni car me baith ravana ho gayi.

Raaste par bas Crimson hi akela khada raha.

'Veeeeeerr!! You motherfucking bastard-!!! Mene nahi socha tha ki tum maut ko gale laga loge. Tch! Plan bigad gaya hai. Sirf iss ek move ke kaaran. Mujhe kuch aur karna hoga-!!! But first-!! I must fix something!'

Woh soch waha se hawa ke jhoke ki tarah gaayab ho gaya.

*Click*

Yaha Hospital me ward ka darwaza khula. Aur Ava apni Maa Grace ke kamre me pravesh ki.

Maa ko dekhte hi, Ava apne ghutno par gir padi.

Maa ko dekh woh unke paas aayi.

"Mother-!!!"


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Kintu, Grace toh kisi murti ki tarah sthir waha laiti hui thi. Koi harqat nahi. Bas saansein chal rahi thi.

"K-Kyu? Kyu meri itni pareeksha li jaa rahi hai? Kyu mujhe woh karna pada?"

"Mother-!!! I commited a sin!!!"

"Mujhse bohut bada paap ho gaya hai mamma!!! I-I- I killed an innocent mamma!!"

Woh kaanch ki tarah toot ke bikhar gayi.


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"Mein bewakoof-!! Samajh na paayi!! I couldn't understand his heart. I never wanted to do it. But I did-!!! Mamma!!!"

*sniff*

"Woh yaha mujhe bachaane ke liye aaya tha. He didn't even ask me for any details. *sniff* Yet I- Yet I worked with that guy to frame him!!!"

*hic*

"Mother-!! You are my strength!! But you are my weakness too!!"

"Kaise? *sniff* Yaha tak pohuch gayi hu. Ab kaise peeche hatt sakti hu?"

Uske mann me ek notification saaf saaf jhalak raha tha.


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"I'm sorry-!!! I'm sorry Veer!!! I never wanted to do it-!!! *sniff* Mamma!!! *sniff* Speak to me!!! P-Please-!!!"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Itne bade bade bawaal updates ke baad ek cooldown update zaroori tha. Update 4.6k words ka hai. Like thokne ka. Target wahi hai. 140 likes. 2 updates aur aayenge. 1 poore past ko darshayega ki Crimson ne ye sab racha kaise. HOK kaise paida hua. Veer kaise framed hua. Dusre me wapas hum present me aa jayenge.

Dhanyavaad! ✨
fantastic update bro maza aa gaya
 
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