Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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Update - 155 ~ Sonali's Turmoil​

Ab tak...

Sonali : N-Nahi! Raat bohut ho gayi hai. Aur mujhe ab jaana hai.

Kaushik : Maaniye toh baat-!!

Sonali : Mene kaha na-!!! Ye-! Ye kya kar rahe ho tum??

Kaushik : Nahi!! A-Aaj aapko meri baat maanami padegi.

Woh uski orr mudte hue bola. Uski muskaan me iss baar hawas ke iraade jhalak rahe the.

Sonali : !!???

Ab aage...

"Kaushikkkk!!!!"

Raat ke andhere me sadak par daud rahe food truck ke andar Sonali ki tezz awaaz fel gayi.

Jagmagati city lights ke beecho beech Kaushik uski bina koi baat sune ek disha me food truck sarpat bhagaaye jaa raha tha.

Kaushik : Itna kyu darr rahi ho aap? Kaun sa agwa kar ke le jaa raha hu. Hahaha! Aap chaliye toh sahi. Aap ko khud accha lagega.

Sonali : Nahi! Mene keh diya na ki mujhe food truck par chhodh do. Mujhe jaana hai. Abhi ke abhi!!!

Kaushik : Arre! Chhodh dunga! Itna ghabra kyu rahi hai aap?

Sonali : Kyuki raat kaafi ho gayi hai aur sab mera intezaar kar rahe honge. Isi waqt wapas chalo.

Kaushik : Mein jald hi aap ko chhodh dunga ek baar chaliye toh aap sahi.

Sonali ne Kaushik ka aaklan kiya jo truck araam se chala raha tha. Wese woh kahi se bhi kuch galat karne ke mood me toh nahi lag raha tha. Warna abhi hi jhapat chuka hota.

Sonali : B-Bas ye akhiri baar hai. Iske baad tum mujhe seedhe food truck par chhodhoge.

Kaushik : Aap fiqr mat kariye, aapko sahi salamat wapas chhodunga. Ab theek hai?

Sonali : Hmm!

Kahi na kahi uska shaant bartav dekh Sonali ne thodi raahat mehsoos ki. Food truck 40 ki speed se dheere dheere nirantar galiyo me ghusta gaya.

Kaushik : Thoda bharosa toh rakhiye mujhpe Sonali ji! Kab se kaam kar raha hu aapke yaha. Fir bhi aap-

Sonali : B-Baat woh nahi hai! Bas, woh raat kaafi ho gayi hai aur isliye ghar par sabhi fir-

Kaushik : Kher chhodiye! Woh dekhiye! Park! Tehelna chahengi?

Sonali : Iss waqt? Pagal ho gaye ho kya? 11 baj rahe hai raat ke.

Kaushik : Dekhiye toh sahi! Abhi bhi kuch log tehel rahe hai.

Sonali ne jab khidki se dekha toh paaya ki aas paas ke colony ke log raat me apne dinner ke baad apni family sang tehel rahe the. Log ginti ke hi the, magar kam se kam woh maujood toh the. Ye dekh uska darr aur kam ho gaya.

Sonali : Isliye tum mujhe yaha leke aaye ho?

Kaushik : Din bhar ki thakan ke baad, aise khubsoorat park me aisi khubsoorat ladki ke saath tehelne me... Kya maza nahi aayega?

Woh muskuraya.

Sonali : Hmph~ Zyada makkhan lagane ki zaroorat nahi hai. Theek hai! Chalo! Lekin bas ek hi chakkar!

Kaushik : Theek hai baba! Shayad aaj ek hi chakkar naseeb me hai. *smiles*

Sonali uski baat par hasi, magar use dikhaaye bina. Truck se utar dono wahi park me tehelne lage. Mand mand sheetal hawaayein unki thakaan ko dur karne me kaafi madadgar saabit ho rahi thi. Aas paas ke log unhe hi dekh rahe the.

Kaushik : Aap toh mujhse aise darr rahi thi jaise mein aapko kha hi jaane waala tha.

Sonali (blushes) : Ye pehli baar hai na- I-Isliye bas! Pehle kabhi mein kisi ladke ke saath aise akele nahi gayi. Isliye-!!

Kaushik : Ohh? Matlab mein pehla hu? Haaye mera naseeb! Itna bura bhi nahi hai. Hai na?

Sonali : Hahahahaha!!

Woh fir hasi. Aur Kaushik ke andar mann me hi laddu footne lage.

Kintu, dekhte hi dekhte aas paas ke log sabhi apne apne gharo ki orr jaane lage. Der raat me ab reh gaye toh sirf, Kaushik aur Sonali.

Sonali : A-Ab hume chalna chahiye. Sab chale gaye hai.

Kaushik : Kyu nahi? Aaiye chaliye!

Sonali ko laga tha Kaushik fir koi bahana banayega. Magar, woh ek jhatke me maan gaya. Jiske chalte uska nazariya Kaushik ke prati aur sudhar gaya.

Dono truck ki orr jab aage badhe toh Kaushik ka haath chalte chalte yu hi Sonali ke haath se bhid gaya. Sparsh ka ehsaas hote hi Sonali sarr utha ke uski orr dekhi. Kahi ye jaan boojh ke toh nahi tha?

Magar, usne dekha ki Kaushik toh seedhe muh kiye saamne chal raha tha. Kya ye galti se hua?

Woh ye soch hi rahi thi jab fir se Kaushik ka haath uske haath se bhida.

'Huh?'

Par iske aage woh kuch vichaar kar paati ya keh paati, Kaushik ke haath ki ungliya uski ungliyo ke ird gird lapitne lagi.

Aur ek sharm ki parat Sonali ke gaalo par chadh gayi. Ye ek aisa sukhad ehsaas tha jise har ladki kabhi na kabhi mehsoos karna chaahti hi thi. Aaj ye sab uske saath ho raha tha.

Uski Maa aur Bhabhi, dono hi Veer ki daasiya thi siwae uske. Kya iska matlab yahi tha ki woh azaad thi? Wese bhi Veer use apna nahi raha tha. Toh kya uske paas kisi aur ladke ke sang hone ki azaadi nahi thi?

Woh inn vichaaro me leen ho gayi. Lekin, woh bechari ye kaha jaanti thi ki uska parivaar Veer ke parivaar ki sewa karne ke liye baadhya tha. Suman ne use kabhi sachhaayi nahi batayi thi.

Bas, har baar use Veer ke samaksh izzat se pesh aane ko kehti. Magar kyu?

Iska jawaab woh hamesha se hi jaanana chaahti thi. Kintu, use koi jawab mil na paaya.

'M-Mujhe bhi toh haq hai na? Apni zindagi ke nirnay lene ka? Meri zindagi ke aham nirnay bhala koi aur kyu le? Y-Ye toh meri zimmedari hai na? Toh kya mein-!?'

Yu hi saath saath chalte chalte idhar Kaushik ne Sonali ka haath bade hi araam se thaam liya. Woh apne vichaaro me doobi hui thi. Aur iska ehsaas bhi use baad me hua.

Truck ke andar jaise hi dono aaye. Achanak hi-

"Ahhhhh!!!"

Sonali ke badan ke ird gird do haath lipat gaye.

Sonali : Kaushikkk????

Kaushik : Mein aapko bohut chaahta hu Sonali ji!!!

Sonali : Huh!??

Woh chaahti thi ki dheere dheere use ye sukhad ehsaas praapt hoye. Magar-

Kya ye jaldbazi nahi thi? Kya ye rishta kuch zyada hi raftaar me nahi bhaag raha tha? Abhi toh theek se usne Kaushik ke baare me jaana hi nahi tha. Uski pasand-napasand, ghar-parivar, uthna-baithna, ye sab kaha pata tha use?

Toh aise me-! Kya ye theek tha? Jawab tha nahi! Aur Sonali ke antar mann ne bhi yahi jawab diya.

Beshaq, woh ek premika banane ka ehsaas mehsoos karna chaahti thi. Lekin, ye behad jaldi tha.

Sonali : Kaushik! Ch-Chhodho mujhe!

Woh khud ko chhudane ki koshish karne lagi. Magar, Kaushik ki mazboot pakad se chhoothna asaan kaam nahi tha.

Sonali : Kaaaaussshikkkkk!!!

Kaushik : I love you Sonali!!!

Sonali ki dil ki dhadkane tez thi. 'I love you' kabhi kisi ladke ne aaj tak nahi kaha tha use. Ye shabd toh woh bas filmo me suna karti thi.

Lekin ek ghabrahat bhi andar panap rahi thi. Ye sab theek nahi ho raha tha. Accha toh lag raha tha use ye sab kyuki ye pehli baar tha. Magar, ye ghabrahat kaisi?

Jab sab accha tha toh fir ye bechaini kyu? Ye darr kyu? Woh nahi jaanti thi ki uska dil use darinde se bachane ki koshish kar raha tha.

Kaushik ke haath aur kass ke uske badan me jakad gaye. Aur woh galat jagaho par jaane lage.

Sonali : N-Nahiii! Kaushikkkk!!!

Aur ab...! Sonali ko kuch abhaas hua. Kaushik uski ek nahi sunn raha tha. Chheena-jhapti me Sonali ke kapde ast-vyast hone lage.

Woh dono ek seat par jaake gire magar abhi bhi Kaushik ki pakad se woh chooth nahi paayi.

Jaise tese Sonali ne use dhakka diya aur dur jaake khadi hui. Ghabrahat uske chehre par saaf jhalak rahi thi. Uske kapde aur baal bigad chuke the.

Sonali : Badtameez!!! *huff* *huff* Tumhe pata bhi hai tum kya kar rahe ho? T-Tumhari himmat kaise hui mere saath ye sab karne ki?

Kaushik : Sonali! I love you! Ek baar kar ke toh dekho mere saath! Dheere dheere tumhe bohut accha lagne lagega.

Sonali : T-Tum aise nahi maanoge!! Ruko-!!!

Usne apni ek jeb me haath daala. Magar, jeb ke andar haath tatolte hi uski aankhein hairat me fel gayi.

Sonali : M-Mera phone??

Kaushik (smiles) : Kya ise dhoondh rahi ho?

Usne apne haath me uska phone ghumaate hue dikhaaya.

Sonali : T-Tum-!!!

Kaushik (smiles) : Phone ko bhul jao Sonali darling. Ek baar tum mere saath raat guzaarogi toh sab samajh jaogi.

Sonali : Y-Ye tum theek nahi kar rahe. A-Agar ghar me ye pata chala na toh tumhari kher nahi hai. S-Samjhe?

Kaushik : Arre aap galat samajh rahi ho. Ek baar mere saath samay toh guzaro. Aur wese bhi- Aapke ghar me batayega kaun? Aap? Hahaha! Kya izzat reh jayegi aapki? Kya kahogi? Mere saath zabardasti ki kisi ne? Ye kahogi? Hahahaha!

Uske badalte rang dekh Sonali bhaiyankar ghabra uthi. Aur uski aankhon me aasu panapne lage.

Sonali : K-Kameene!!! Tu aisa tha? Mujhe laga tha tu kam se kam ek imaandar ladka tha. Lekin-!!! Thuu!!! Meri hi galti hai. Prachi sahi keh rahi thi. Usne mujhe ishara diya tha. Mein hi na-samajh thi jo samajh na saki.

Kaushik : Uss raand ki baat kyu karti ho? Uska toh kaam hi hai beech me adanga daalna.

Kaushik baato hi baato me apne mann me bhi rann-neeti taiyaar karta jaa raha tha.

'Iss saali ko aaj hi lund ka swaad chakhana padega. Agar aaj haath se nikal gayi toh agle din se mein yaha bhatak bhi nahi paunga.'

'Ise aaj kaise bhi karke chodna padega. Baad me dara dhamka dunga. Toh saali ghar me bata nahi payegi. Fir roz dara dara ke choda karunga. Dheere dheere ise mere lund ki aadat lag hi jayegi. Bina chudwae fir rahegi nahi.'

Sonali : Kya kaha tumne? Tumhari himmat kaise hui Prachi ke baare me iss tarah ki baat karne ki??? Tumne bohut badi galti ki hai mujhse aisa bartav karne ki. Mein isi waqt tumhe naukri se nikalti hu. Chale jao!! Abhi ke abhi. Dafa ho jao!!!

Kaushik : Hahahahahahaha! Darling Sonali! Shayad tum ye dekh nahi rahi ki tum iss waqt kis sthiti me ho.

Sonali ko apni paristhiti ka abhaas hua. Na hi uske paas phone tha aur na hi koi sahayaak. Fir kis baat ko lekar woh itna guroor dikha rahi thi? Harr taraf se wahi fasi hui thi.

Agle hi shan uski aankhon se aasu behne lage. Aur use kuch der pehle ki baatein yaad aane lagi.

"Nahi! Mene kaha na ki Sonali nahi-"

"Kyu nahi? Kab se mein bhi subah se lage lage thak gayi thi. Pradarshani mujhe bhi dekhni thi. Na jaane kab se nahi dekhi. Isi bahaane thodi kamar bhi seedhi ho jayegi."

Veer!!

Kis tarah woh use mana kar ke neecha dikha ke aayi thi. Woh use jaane se mana kar raha tha. Uske hi hit ke liye. Kaash usne Veer ki baat maan li hoti.

Aaj uske na hone ki kami sabse zyada khal rahi thi.

'Veer!!!!'

Jis ladke ko dekh ke hi Sonali ko kheej uthati thi, gussa aata tha aur chidh-chidahat hoti thi. Aaj usi ladke ki yaad sabse zyada aa rahi thi.

Kitni buri tarah sabke saamne uski baat ko kaat ke woh yaha chali aayi thi. Veer ki wahi taajub waali akhiri chhavi uske mann me fir aayi.

Kaise naraazgi se dekh raha tha woh use. Ek ajeeb sa dard utha uske seene me. Veer ki baat ko taal ke woh iss kameene ke saath yaha aayi hui thi. Jo ki ek bhed ki khaal me darasal bhediya tha.

Woh bhaagi-!!!

*Thud*

Darwaza khol truck ke baahar nikal woh daudi.

Kaushik idhar uske bhaagte hi chaukanna hua aur khud ko koste hue woh bhi tezz gati me daudte hue baahar nikla.

Sonali uss se bachne ke liye bas kisi vyakti ko dhoondh rahi thi. Raat bohut ho chuki thi. Ye ilaaka bhi utna logo se bhara hua nahi tha. Jo park tha woh behad chota hi tha.

Aas paas ke log toh apne apne gharo me jaa chuke the. Agar, Sonali udhar gayi hoti toh shayad bach jaati.

Kintu, truck se nikalte hi disha ulti thi jis kaaran woh society ki orr na bhaag ke society ke pichle hisse ki orr bhaag chali.

Woh outer area tha jo dur ke ilaako ki roads ko connect karta tha. Jaha gaadiya behad kam chalti thi. Logo ka aana jaana na ke barabar rehta tha. Agar koi aata bhi tha toh sirf driving seekhne ya fir-

Ashleel ya gerr kanooni kaam karne.

Jaise jaise woh bhaagti gayi, ilaaka aur sunsaan hota chala gaya. Akhir kaha tak bhaagti?

Kuch qadmo ki daud ke baad, Kaushik ne apni gati se use akhir jhapat hi liya.

Sonali : Nghh! Kutte! Chhodhh! Chhodh mujhe kameene.

Kaushik : Chod? Chodunga na darling. Sabr rakho!

Sonali : Haraam khorrr!!!

Woh uski pakad se chhootne ki koshish karne lagi. Magar sab bekaar tha. Kaushik use peeche se jakde hue tha.

Uske haath dheere dheere Sonali ki kamar par rengne lage aur ahista ahista hi upar uske stan ki orr aane lage.

Sonali : B-Bach-

Iss se pehle ki woh cheekh paati, Kaushik ke haath ne uske muh ko band kar diya.

Kaushik : Ek baar karwa logi toh saara virodh tumhara khatam ho jayega darling.

Sonali : Mmm!??? Mmnnghh!! Urnnghh!

Stan ki taraf haath jaate hi Sonali ne apni aankhein band kar li. Palke bheeg uthi aur uske aasu gaalo ko bhigo kar neeche girne lage. Jaise usne apni galti qubool kar li thi.

Woh jaan gayi thi ki uparwale ne use ye saza di hai. Aaj jo usne Veer ke saath kiya tha. Ye uski hi saza thi.

Gham iss baat ka tha ki iss haraam zaade ke chheene se pehle kaash Veer ne hi use bhog liya hota. Par uski kismat me jaise yahi likha tha.

Usne haar maan li. Aur jab uski saari umeedein chhooth chuki thi. Tabhi,

*Whoosh*

Ek hawa ka jhoka use apne bagal se mehsoos hua. Aur kuch awaaz bhi aayi.

'Huh?'

Achanak hi woh uss Kaushik ke changul se azaad thi. Kya ye sapna tha? Ya fir haqeeqat?

Apni bheegi palke jhapkaate hue usne aankhein khol palat ke dekha. Toh-

Wahi khada hua tha. Kaushik toh dur raaste par pada hua suar ki tarah raik raha tha. Jaise maano kisi ne uske tatto par laat mar di ho.

Achanak se ye sab kya ho gaya? Lekin, uss aakriti ko pehchaan'ne me woh kabhi galat nahi ho sakti thi. Kaise nahi pehchaan paati use-!?

Veer!!!

Sonali ki bheege nain uski peeth ko hi ghoorne me lage the. Aur har guzarte pal uski siskiya bhadhti jaa rahi thi.

Akhir wahi aaya.

Wahi jise woh hamesha chidhaya karti, taang kheechne ka kabhi mauka nahi chhodhti thi aur palat ke jawaab deti thi.

Uske bawajood...! Woh aaya!

Bechari Sonali ke aasu rukne ka naam nahi le rahe the. Glaani uske seene ko andar se kachote jaa rahi thi. Kaise muh pe Veer ki beizzati kar ke wo yaha aayi thi. Kitna kuch nahi kaha tha usne aaj tak.

Lekin, inn sab ke bawajood aaj woh yaha tha.

Aur ye pehli baar nahi thi. Jab woh gaav me thi aur uska sautela baap uski maa ko baalo se pakad ghaseet ke bechne le jaa raha tha tab bhi toh woh aaya tha na?

Haan! Tab bhi woh aaya tha aur usne hi unn sab ko uss daldal se baahar nikala tha. Lekin, sirf yahi thodi tha.

Jab uska baap aur sautela Bhai Mumbai tak chale aaye the, tab woh uski Maa aur Bhabhi ko agwa kar ke le gaye the.

Aur tab bhi toh woh...!

Aaya tha na? Aur aaj bhi...!

Veer ne kitna kuch kiya tha unn sab ke liye iska abhaas karte hi, Sonali ki aaj rulaayi chhooth gayi. Aasu nirantar jharne lage.

Shayad ab use samajh aa raha tha. Kyu uski maa aur bhabhi Veer ke prati khud ko samarpit kar chuki thi.

Idhar Veer Sonali ki orr bina mude dekhe hi aage badha. Uske chehre par koi bhaav nahi the. Woh Kaushik ke paas pohucha aur jhukte hue use dekh bola,

Veer : Mujhe laga hi tha. Jis tarah ki tumhari shaqal hai, tum koi seedha kaam kar hi nahi sakte.

[Fufufu~ He's just an ant my dear. Why waste time on such people?]

Pari ki ek behad coquettish si awaaz uske mann me aayi. Kintu, agle hi shan uski awaaz ekdum thandi pad gayi. Bol aise... ki laga jaise uske andar koi bhavnaaye hi nahi thi.

[TRASH PEOPLE SHOULD KNOW THEIR PLACE!!! ELIMINATE HIM!! LET THIS ANT KNOW WHO HE WAS DEALING WITH!! HE DARED TO STEAL YOUR PROPERTY?? CUT HIS DICK OFF AND-]

'Shhhh!'

Veer ke mann me hi shaant rehne ke ishaare ke chalte Pari ne khud ko rok liya.

Kaushik : S-Sir??? M-Mein woh-! A-Aap jaisa soch rahe ho w-wesa kuch nahi hai. Sacchi!!!

Veer ne uski uniform ko dekha. T shirt pe uske naam ka badge laga hua tha. Chef on wheels ka badge tha ye jo harr staff members apni apni t shirt par lagaate the.

Saath hi ek cap bhi thi. Veer ne uske sarr se apni brand ki cap pehle nikaali aur fir uski T Shirt se woh badge.

Kaushik : S-Sir-!!!?

Veer ka haath ek jhatke me uske thobde ko jakda. Pakad itni mazboot thi ki Kaushik ko laga agar Veer zorr lagaata toh shayad aaj uska sarr tarbooz ki tarah hi fat jaata. Veer ne uske sarr ko pakad ke uski T shirt bhi uske gale se nikaal di.

Kaushik : S-Sir-!!! Sir meri baat suniye!

Veer ko kuch sunn'ne ki zaroorat nahi thi. Sonali ke aasuo ne sab baya kar diya tha.

Veer : Mein tumhe apne food truck se nikaalta hu. Ahinda se aas paas kahi bhatakte hue bhi mujhe nazar aaye. Toh agli baar sirf T shirt nahi utaarunga. Nanga kar ke poore area me daudaunga.

Kaushik : N-Nahiiii! S-Sir!!! Sir mujhe maaf kar do! Meri rozi roti ka sawaal hai. M-Mujhse bhool ho gayi.

Veer : Ye baat-!!! Pehle sochni chaahiye thi.

Bina Kaushik ki baat sune Veer ne use ek haath se uthaaaya. Kaushik gidgidata raha magar Veer ki pakad itni mazboot thi ki woh khud ko chhudha na paaya.

Aage hi bada sa lohe ka kachre ka container rakha tha. Veer uss container ke paas pohucha aur ek hi jhatke me-

*Dump*

Kaushik ko usne kisi koode ke samaan uss kachre ke dibbe me palta diya.

Veer : This is where you belong!

Peeche khadi Sonali ne jab ye dekha toh woh bas dekhti reh gayi. Kaha woh uss Kaushik ke changul se chhooth nahi paa rahi thi. Aur kaha Veer-

Jisne ek haath se hi use utha ke kachre ke dibbe me patak diya tha. Akhir woh kitna taqatvar tha? Kya yahi mard hone ki nishani thi? Uska dil itna zorro se kyu dhadak raha tha? Tamaam sawal Sonali ke mann me ek saath aa dhamke.

Uske qadam khud-ba-khud aage badhe aur use pata hi nahi chala kab woh Veer ki peeth se jaake lag gayi. Zorr zorr se uska rona bhi shuru ho gaya. Uske nazdeek aate hi ye glaani ka bhaav dheere dheere kam hone laga.

Magar-

Uske saare armaano par paani fir gaya jab-

Veer ne uske haatho ko thaam ke apni kamar par se alag kar diya. Sonali ekdum stabdh hoke use dekhi magar Veer ne ek baar bhi uski taraf nazre nahi feri. Balki, kuch kaha bhi nahi. Woh toh kisi aur ki taraf muda aur bola,

Veer : Ye chaavi lo aur food truck ko location par park kar dena.

Usne chaavi hawa me ucchaali toh woh kisi ke haatho me jaake giri. Sonali ko ab hosh aaya tha ki Veer ke alawa bhi koi maujood tha yaha. Woh Veer ko dekh usme itna kho gayi thi ki usne apne aas paas dhyaan bhi nahi diya.

Aur ye chaavi thaamne wala shaks koi aur nahi, Jacky hi tha.

Veer ke ek call pe hi woh seedha uski madad ke liye chala aaya. Aaj Jacky ne bhi Veer ki strength ek chota sa namoona toh dekh hi liya tha.

Jacky : Ho jayega Sir! Hehe! A-Aur uss ladke ka kya karna hai? Kachde ke saath fikwa du kya?

Veer : Nahi! Uski koi zaroorat nahi. Dhyaan rakhna woh aas paas na bhatke. Gaadi ki chaavi tum ghar de jaana.

Jacky : Bilkul! Bilkul!

Jacky apna kaam samajhte hue fauran hi waha se truck ko leke nikal gaya. Veer ne saare trucks ke liye ek parking location rent par li hui thi. Saare trucks line se wahi lagte the.

Uske jaate hi Veer apni bike par baitha aur woh intezar karne laga. Sonali kuch kehna chaahti thi. Jacky ki anupasthiti ke baad woh thoda hichkichate hue boli,

Sonali : S-Suno-! M-Mein woh-!!!

Kintu,

*Beep*

Bike ke horn ki awaaz waha fel gayi. Horn Veer ne hi bajaya tha. Andhere me uske chehre par kya bhaav the Sonali na dekh paayi.

Magar horn ne ye jata diya tha ki woh kya chaah raha tha. Woh uski koi bhi baat sunn'na nahi chaahta tha.

Woh bechari iss rukhe ravaiyye ko dekhte hi ro padi. Aisa laga jaise koi khanjar se uske dil par lagataar vaar kar raha tha.

Woh apna muh khol firse kuch kehti ki-

*Beep*

Horn ne ek baar fir use shaant kar diya. Apni rulaayi ko rokte hue woh apna sarr jhukaate hue aage badhi. Bike par chadhte hue woh Veer ke peeche baithi aur bike chal padi.

Ek sannaata sa chha gaya. Dono ke muh se ek lafz nahi nikla. Jaise jaise ghar nazdeek aa raha tha, Sonali ke dil me uth raha dard aur bhi ghatak hota jaa raha tha.

Ye sab kya ho gaya? Bhale hi unn dono ka rishta best nahi tha lekin, dono ki beech kisi bhi prakaar ki ranzishein nahi thi. Fir kyu ye sab ho gaya?

Aaj mausam bhi vichitr tha. Lag raha tha jaise woh Sonali ke bhaavo ke saath mel kha raha tha. Akasmat baarish ka aana koi samajh paida nahi kar raha tha.

Dono yuhi bheegte hue ghar ki orr chalte rahe. Na Veer ne bike roki aur na hi Sonali ne kuch kaha.

Ghar pohuchte hi Veer apni bike rakhte hue, seedhe ghar ke andar chal diya.

Sonali apne aasuo ko rokte hue andar ki orr bhaagi. Gate kholne waali Suman ne jab ye sab dekha toh woh aashcharya me reh gayi.

Kuch hua tha. Inn dono ke beech? Kuch toh zaroor hua tha. Lekin, kya?

Yahi soch woh Veer ke kamre me pohuchi, jaha woh apne kapde badalne me laga hua tha.

Suman : M-Maalik?

Veer : Hmm?

Suman : Kya kuch hua hai? Sonali ro rahi thi. Uski aankhein laal thi. K-Kuch hua hai? Aap dono ke beech?

Veer (T-shirt pehente hue) : Kaushik naam ka ladka aaj uske saath zabardasti kar raha tha.

Suman : Huh?

Veer : Ghabrane ki zaroorat nahi. Ahinda se aisa kuch nahi hoga. Mein samay par pohuch gaya tha.

Suman : O-Ohh!! M-Mein zara... chalti hu!

Veer : Mmm!

Suman seedhe apni beti ke paas pohuchi jo andar kamre me lagataar roye jaa rahi thi.

Suman (sits) : Kisi ne chheda hai?

Sonali : *nods*

Suman : Maalik ne tumhe bachaya?

Sonali : *nods*

Suman : Oh! Meri bacchi!!

Aur usne bina aage kuch kahe use apne seene se laga liya.

Aaj ki raat Sonali kabhi nahi bhulne waali thi. Ye buri yaad toh bhale hi woh bhul sakti thi lekin, Veer ki berukhi kaise bhula sakti thi?

Na jaane kyu, magar ye berukhi use zaroorat se zyada peeda pohucha rahi thi.

Agla din hua. Aaj woh gumsum si food truck par kaam me lagi thi. Prachi ne use sab bata diya tha.

Shukriya uska jisne Veer ko call kar ye bata diya tha ki Sonali itni raat gaye Kaushik ke sang wapas nahi lauti hai.

Aur isi ki wajah se Veer waha pohuch paaya tha. Bas ek sawal abhi bhi Sonali ko tang kare jaa raha tha.

Akhir Veer ko ye pata kaise chala ki woh aur Kaushik uss waqt kaha par the?

Inn vichaaro me woh uljhi thi jab kisi gaadi ki awaaz sunn uske kaan turant hi khade ho gaye.

Ye Veer ki gaadi ki awaaz thi. Woh aaya hua tha.

Aksar woh food truck ko jaachne aata tha.

'A-Aaj hamare beech jo bhi gile shikwe hai. Sab dur ho jayenge. Apne haatho se ye mene banaya hai. Woh khayega toh- Khush ho jayega.'

Apne haatho se aaj usne ek sweet dish banayi thi. Apni galti ko maan'ne ke liye ye bas ek zariya tha uska.

Veer jaise hi aaya, Sonali ne badhiya si ek plate sajaayi. Sweet dishes Veer ko pasand thi, ye baat woh jaanti thi. Aisa ho hi nahi sakta tha ki Veer ke saamne sweet dish ho aur woh use khaaye na.

Veer : Prachi!? Kaisa chal raha hai sab?

Prachi : Ah!! Ch-Chef!!? I-I mean Sir!!! Sab accha chal raha hai.

Veer (smiles) : Good! Kisi cheez ki zaroorat hai kya?

Prachi : H-Haan woh-!

Veer : Kaho!

Prachi : Woh brand labels, cutlery items aur coupons khatam ho gaye hai. Toh aap-

Veer : Theek hai! Mein keh dunga. Deliver ho jayenge. Aur kuch?

Prachi : N-No Sir! Baaki toh sab manage ho jaata hai. Sab kar lete hai hum. *smiles*

Veer (smiles) : Good! And congrats! You are promoted. I have increased your pay by 3000.

Prachi : Ahhh!!! Ch-Chef!!?? M-Mera matlab Sir!!? T-Teen hazaar se payment badh gayi!?

Veer : Yes! You deserve it. Toh mehnat karne ka. Alright? I hope you won't disappoint me.

Prachi : N-Never chef...! Shit! I mean... Sir!!!

Veer (smiles) : Carry on!

Inki baatein samaapt jaise hi hui, Sonali mauka dekhte hue aage badhi.

Sonali : S-Suno-! Y-Ye mene tumhare liye-

Veer : Alright! Toh mein chalta hu. Mujhe ek important kaam hai.

Prachi : Ahn! O-Ok! B-But aapka-!!

Magar, Veer uski koi baat sune bina hi waha se ravana ho gaya. Uske jaate hi Prachi ke hontho se adhure shabd budbudate hue nikle,

Prachi : Aapka... sweet dish item toh reh hi gaya.

Kintu, Veer toh jaa chuka tha. Ek hamdardi bhari muskaan liye woh Sonali ko dekhi jo na jaane kab se mehnat kar uss dish ko banaane me lagi hui thi. Haatho me sajaayi gayi plate pakde woh yu hi khadi rahi.

Jiske liye usne ye plate sajaayi thi, usne toh ek baar bhi na dekha uski taraf.

Aur aaj...!

Aaj use samajh aa raha tha ki dil ki asli peeda kaisi hoti hai. Aankhon me aasu panpe. Magar woh nahi chaahti thi ki Prachi use rota hua dekhe.

Turant plate ko side me rakh woh apne kaano me lag gayi. Par uske sisakne ki awaaz aur lagataar aasteen se palke pochna sab batla chuka tha ki woh ro rahi thi.

1-2 din bhi kuch isi tarah beete. Woh mauka dhoondhti aur Veer ke nazdeek aake uss se baat karne ki koshish karti magar Veer uski baato ko sune bager hi nikal jaaya karta.

Aaj sabhi jab dinner kar rahe the toh Sonali ne thaan liya tha ki aaj toh woh sabke saamne hi kahegi aur uss se baat karegi.

Tej : V-Veer! Mujhe tumhe kuch dikhana hai. Bas 1-2 din me complete ho jayega. Uske baad tum dekh paoge. Chaloge na?

Veer : Let me guess! Shyaam ji aur unke kisaano se related hai?

Tej (smiles) : Yes!!! Chaloge na?

Veer (smiles) : Kyu nahi!? Mein hi toh aap sab ko ye sab saunp ke gaya tha.

Tej : Hmm! Aur ab waqt aa gaya hai ki tum jaano hum sab ne kitni mehnat ki hai. You'll be surprised.

Veer (smiles) : I'll wait then!

Bhavna : Ab meri bhi baat sunoge? Ya Bhai behan hi aapas me lage rahoge?

Veer : Kahiye na!

Bhavna (smiles) : Apni Purvi maasi se zaroor mil aana ek din time nikaal ke. Bohut gusse me hai woh. Jab se tum laute ho tabse mil nahi paayi hai woh.

Veer : Unse kahiye na ki ghar aa jaaye.

Bhavna : Bilkul nahi! Woh gusse me thi. Aur iss baar usne tumhe ghar bulaya hai. Aur sirf tumhe.

Tej : Kya? Mujhe nahi? Maasi parayi ho gayi hai.

Bhavna (smiles) : Veer ki class lagegi. Agar tumhe bhi shaamil hona hai. Toh bilkul jaa sakti ho.

Tej : Ah!! N-No thank you! Veer! Good luck!

Veer : Huh?

Dining table par Veer ki lagbhag sabhi jano se baat hui siwae Sonali ke. Woh bas mauka taakti rahi.

Jab sabhi kha ke uthne lage toh usne himmat baandh hi li.

Sonali : V-Veer! Suno! M-Mein kuch kehna-

Veer : Mera ho gaya hai. Thank you bhabhi! Swadisht khaane ke liye. Mein thoda kaam se baahar jaa raha hu.

Ragini (smiles) : Isme thank you kaisa? Mujhe toh khushi hui. Aur ye toh mujhe *blushes* karna hi chahiye.

Veer waha se uth turant apne kaam ke liye nikal gaya. Aur ek baar fir-!!

Sonali bechari apne shabdo ko awaaz na de saki.

Raat bhar woh karvatein badalti rahi. Par neend thi jo aane ka naam nahi le rahi thi.

Veer bhi rutha tha aur uski aankhon se khwaab bhi roothe the. Bechaini ke chalte woh uth ke baith gayi.

Iss waqt use ek hi shaks ki zaroorat thi.

Uski maa, Suman!!!

Apni maa ko tatolte hue jab usne uthaaya toh Suman uth ke baith gayi.

Suman : Kya hua? Neend nahi aa rahi kya?

Sonali : M-Maa~!

Suman : Haan?

Woh aage kuch na boli. Uski aankhon se aasu bahe aur woh uchak ke apni maa ki chaathi me jaa ghusi.

Suman : A-Arre? Kya hua? Beta?

Sonali : huuuuuuu~ *sniff* *sniff*

Suman : Sonali!??

Sonali : huuuuuuu~ *sniff* *sniff* ngh~

Suman : Kya hua?

Sonali : M-Maa-!! *sniff* Mein bewakoof hu! *sniff* Ullu ki patthi hu!!! M-Mujh me zara bhi aqal nahi hai. *sniff*

Suman : Ye kaisi baatein kar rahi ho tum? Kya uss din ki ghatna ko lekar pareshan ho? Maalik ne keh diya hai ki ab se woh ladka aas paas bhi nahi dikhega. Aur-

Sonali : *sniff*

Suman : Mene maalik se guzarish bhi ki hai ki woh tumhari hifazat kare. Tumhe chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi.

Sonali : *sniff* M-Maa woh baat nahi hai! *sniff*

Suman : Toh?

Sonali : M-Maana ki meri galti hai lekin... *sniff* Lekin woh mujhe mauka kyu nahi deta bolne ka. *sniff* Woh mujhse baat bhi nahi karta maa! huuuuuuuu~ *sniff*

Suman (sighs) : Tumhe hi iska hal khojna hoga meri bacchi! Maalik bhi naraaz hai kahi na kahi. Khud se pucho ki tumne kya galti ki thi. Aur fir maalik se baat karo.

Sonali : M-Mein toh karna chaahti hu. P-Par woh nahi karna chaahta. *sniff*

Suman : Mein toh bas anurodh hi kar sakti hu beta. Iss se zyada kuch nahi. Tumhe maalik se akele me baat karni hogi. Unke saamne apni baat rakhni hogi. Ho sakta hai woh sunn le.

Maa ki baat mann usne kuch soch liya tha. Woh taiyyaar thi.

Aaj jab woh food truck par gayi toh poori lagan se kaam kari. Magar raat hote hi,

*Thud*

*Clang*

*Thud*

"Arre arre arre!!?"

Prachi bhaagte hue baahar aayi. Dekha toh paaya ki Sonali kursi wagarah sab gira rahi thi.

Sonali : Tang aa gayi hu mein. Mein jaa rahi hu. Nahi karna mujhe kaam yaha.

Prachi : Kya???

Sonali : Prachi mujhse muh mat ladaana aaj warna kuch galat salat keh diya toh meri jawabdari nahi. Mein jaa rahi hu.

Prachi : P-Par kaha?

Sonali : Nahi pata! Bhatakti rahungi galiyo me kahi. Jaha ye saare mod le jaaye. Bye!

Aur woh bhaagte hue nikal gayi.

Prachi : Arre!?? Arre par-!! Ohh God!!! Ch-Chef... I mean Sir ko call karna padega.

Idhar uske iss tarah jaate hi Prachi ne ghabrahat me Veer ko saari ghatna ke baare me jataya jise sunn Veer khud pareshan ho utha.

Aur yaha Sonali araam se tehelte hue sadko par jaati jaa rahi thi. Mann me ek hi sawaal tha.

'Kya woh aayega!?'
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Aaj ke liye bas itna hi guys.
Mein chaahta tha isi update me ye scene poora dikhau. Lekin update 5.4k words ka already ho gaya hai. Aur ye mega update bhi nahi hai. Hum next update me ise finish kar denge. Mere upar work load bohut zyada hai toh update deri se aaya hai. Toh thoda samajhne ka. Baaki, apne likes rakhne aur revos bhi. Target apna wahi hai. 150. Kaera aur Sonia jald hi nazar aane waali hai.
Dhanyavaad.

 

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Ok, dear bro. Take Ur time & give us update. Aur thodi der intezaar karlenge

 

[Werewolf]

Shandar update

Super fantabulous update Werewolf bhai....

Dheere dheere bhumika ko bhi veer accha lagne laga hai aur sayad bhumika veer ko ek ladki ki tarah pyaar karne lage...

Thanks for Quote Werewolf bhai

Ding veer got new mission save sonali favority points 50
Mission failed lost sonali and 5000 point

Nice update

Nice one

Fantastic update

Beautiful update bhai

Excellent update....
Sonali sirf tang karna chahti thi veer ko lekin woh galti kar baithi hai....
Veer ne puri tarah se mana kar diya tha....
Lekin woh nehi mani ...
Veer ne superbly hotel ki problem ko solve kiya hai...
Woh hotel mein apna dumdar chhavi pesh kiya hai jis se Bhoomika bohot influence huyi hai...
Thanks for the update

Nice update after so much hard fought action some quality time with family is so much refreshing good job ☺

Excellent update. Veer's Chef skills on display. Narang to Limbo me gaya. Waiting for [Ding. Save Sonali.]
Ab Veer ke dimag me ye naya chef kaun hai...
No news of Kaera and Ava. Kaera ka mission to Limbo me chala gaya.

Nice n fantastic

Bro sandar lajab mast update bro weting for next update

Sonali ka kya hoga????

Update was awesome as always

Nice update bro

Awesome update

Fantastic mind-blowing update

Amazing update

Narang toh giyo bhaya je kaushik ki bari haigi par manne lage hai ki sonali ne bhi thoda ja sabak shikhana banta hai bhaya

Again a nice update

Poor Sonali, sach me agar aap uske gaon ke mindset ko explain nahi karte to pakka sonali ko galiyan padni thi, iss update ke baad.

Jaisa ki usne apne baap bhai ko dekha uske mukable koshik sahi banda hi laga use. Halaki uske mind me use leke koi vaisa khyal nahi hai. Lekin bewkufi to usne kar di Veer ki baat na maan ke.

Kahan veer aur kahan vo chhapri kaushik.
Khair uska bhi realisation sonali ko jaldi ho jayega.

Don't know sonali aur veer ka relation kis direction me jayega. Agar vo veer ki life ka part nahi bhi banti to acchi dost to ban hi sakti hai.

Coz uska Suman aur Aabha ki tarah Veer ki slave banna sahi nahi lagega. Jis tarah ka ab tak unka communication dikhaya hai.
Suman aur Aabha ki baat alag hai, but sonali is different case so I can hope only for best.

Ab kaushik to pitega buri tarah se. Veer ke hatho sabki haddiya tut te dekkar swad aa jata hai

Now about hotel.

Aarohi Aarohi Aarohi.....
Sach me kya character development Kiya hai aarohi ka. Story ke start me ye kuch khas nahi lagi thi, but now she is one of my favourite after nidhi and kavya.

It feels like veer ko aarohi se behtar koi nahi samjhta. She believe Veer completely.

Bhumika ko bhi Aarohi ne samjha diya ki Veer kabhi kuch bina soche samjhe nahi karta.

Who can be the new head chef?
Who knows? Only Werewolf knows?

Agle update ka intezar rahega.......

Bahut badiya update bhai

Werewolf
ग़ज़ब विरासत मे मिली हुई सोनाली भी अब भाव खा रहीं हैं.. देखते हैं कि क्या गुल खिलते हैं..
वीर ने होटल की सही तरह से मुद्दे को सुलझा लिया...
ट्रस्ट बिल्डिंग बढ़िया रहा है
चलिए आपकी ये खूबसूरती है कि हर पात्र को सहेजते हो जैसे सोनाली...
मजेदार भावनाओं के ओतप्रोत से भरपूर मनोरंजक अंक

Superb update bro...
Waiting for next

Very nice update

Nice update

Fantastic update bro
Bas ek baat hai please thora jaldi update diya karo yar

Super update

Adbhut, Lajwaab or bejod update bhai....

nice1

Bahot badhiya shaandar update
Sonali tow shayad fas gayi h Kaushik jaal m usne veer ki BAAT nahi Mani or jab ehsaas huwa tab tak bahot dair ho gayi thi
Bhumika k hotel ki laaj rakh li Veer n or dagabaj chef se bhi bacha lia
Baherhal dekhte h ab Sonali ka kia hota h
Kia Veer ka system upgrade hone k baad yeh pehla mission hoga Sonali ko bachane ka shayad...?
Dekhte h aage kia hota h
Badhiya shaandar update

Nice

Fabulous fantastic mazedaar update sir.

Awesome update bhai..

Awesome and fantastic update bhai keep posting

Mast update maja aagya .super update

Nice update
Waiting for next update bhaiya ji

Agla update kab de rhe ho

Amazing wonderful keep it up

सोनाली का behaviour वीर के प्रति शुरवात से बहुत ही rude रहा है
फिर भी वीर हमेशा से उसका बरताव बर्दाश्त करता रहा है
जो भी हो वीर ने उसकी मदत की रहने को खुद के घर में जगह दी काम दिया फिर भी उसकी बात को ठुकरा कर वोह किसी दूसरे लड़के के साथ चली गई घूमने,
क्या वीर की बातो की कीमत कुछ नहीं उस कल के आए लड़के के सामने????
भले सोनाली कौशिक को पसंद करती हो, या प्यार भी करती हो वीर की बातो की थोड़ी इज्जत तो रखनी चाहिए थी सोनाली ने

वीर के संबंध भले ही सोनाली की मां और भाभी के साथ है लेकिन वीर ने उनके साथ कोई जबरदस्ती तो रिश्ता नहीं बनाया वोह दोनो खुद अपनी मर्जी से वीर से संबंध बनाती है फिर भी सोनिया हर बात पर वीर से टेढी बाते ही करती आ रही है प्यार से ना सही इज्जत से तो बात कर ही सकती है
अब वीर को सोनाली को बचाने का मिशन मिलेगा ही और जिस प्रकार परी की नई personality अभी है उसके बाद तो परी वीर को सोनाली के साथ सेक्स करने की ही बात कहेगी
लेकिन वीर ने इस बार सेक्स ना करते हुए सोनाली को एक बार उसकी औकात दिखानी चाहिए कि सोनाली सिर्फ एक slave हैं और वीर उसका master तो सोनाली अपनी औकात में रहे
कुत्तों को घी कभी हजम नही होता उस प्रकार सोनाली को अब तक जो छूट मिली है उसका सोनाली ने बहुत फायदा उठा लिया वीर जब भी सोनाली के साथ कुछ बात करता है तो सोनाली उसे कुछ भी टेढी बाते करती ही है,,
सोनाली अगर फूड ट्रक में काम कर रही है तो वोह वीर पर कोई एहसान तो नही कर रही रोटियां तोड़ने के लिए और सर पे छत के लिए काम करना तो पड़ेगा ही या मां और भाभी की चुत के दम पर मुफ्त की रोटियां तोड़नी है

वीर ने होटल में परिस्थिति को बड़ी अच्छी तरह से संभाल लिया और बाकी बचे हुए स्टाफ में अच्छा जोश भर दिया लेकिन नारंग की जगह मास्टर शेफ के लिए वीर किसे चुनेंगा या यहां वीर सोनाली को रखने की तो नही सोच रहा???
वीर बादशाह बन ने के रास्ते पर काफी अच्छी तरह से अग्रेसर है तो अब वीर को बादशाह की तरह ही व्यवहार करना चाहिए दासियों को अपनी जगह भी दिखानी चाहिए अब तक वीर बहुत प्यार से सब को साथ ले कर बढ़ रहा था लेकिन अब उसे थोड़ा सख्त भी बनना होगा ।।।

होटल की प्रतिष्ठा की परीक्षा में तो वीर पास हो गया लेकिन अब देखना ये बनता है कि वीर अपनी खुद की प्रतिष्ठा के बारे में किस तरह से deal करता है
दूसरे स्टाफ के सामने वीर की प्रतिष्ठा क्या रह गई जब सोनाली उसकी बात को न मान कर वीर के ही फूड ट्रक में काम करने वाले दो टके के लड़के के साथ घूमने निकल गई
वीर अपना बिजनेस एक ऐसे लड़की के भरोसे कैसे आगे बढ़ाने की सोचे जिसकी नजरो में वीर की बातो की कुछ एहमियत ही नहीं
वीर ने अब सोनाली को थोड़ा रेस्ट देना चाहिए और प्राची को फूड ट्रक की जिम्मेदारी सौपनी चाहिए क्युकी प्राची एक तो वही की रहने वाली एक स्मार्ट लड़की है जो सही गलत लोगो की पहचान तो रखती है और जब वीर को जरूरत थी होटल जाने की तब उसने अकेली ने जिम्मेदारी निभाई हैं

बढ़िया लाजवाब update था
देखते है अगले update में क्या होगा????

अगले रसप्रद update की प्रतीक्षा

Maine o sanam toka pyaar kiya
Tune o sanam meko dhoka diya (sonali)

Awesome update

Jabardast maja aagya

Hello nisha

Super

Nice bhai

We can compare household of veer with any kind of royal houses...
Like a royal household has a king and veer is king...
Leader of Household has wise and care giving mother and sister veer has in form of his mother and sister Tej...
Leader of household has leadership qualities obviously veer has leadership qualities....
Leader of household should be brave and warrior veer is also one of them...
Leader of household has empire to rule and hero has business empire...
Leader of household has female slaves veer has in form of suman, Abha and other members of parijat but they are still under cover and one side of family did not know about them I am waiting for that update when this secret will reveal or expose completely...
I am also waiting for the update that how many ladies will become the member of harem front the bunch of these beauties as we know in royal harems females have different status some Nobel females are just for breeding and others are just for fun....
In royal house holds a king will breed one or more Nobel females by the choice of his mother because elder females knows well the breeding traits of women and she gives a male child to household who will become true heir of his father's empire but right now here we are not looking this kind of concept....
Will there be any kind of physical empire of veer beside his business empire where he will do welfare works for the people of his empire and will protect their physical and financial interests...
Obviously no royal household can survive without a trained, well disciplined and brave army and right now this concept is also not seen by reader may be writer has some thing in his mind regarding this...
I have so many questions regarding the theme of story if I think it according to theme it is vast and big concept.....
Once again salute to the writer....
Thanks Werewolf bro for this marvelous content and great concept...

Nice update

Nice

Lajawab update

Fabulous update

Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Werewolf bhai....
Nice and lovely update....

awesome bro apki update ka humeshaa intizar rehta hye

Waiting for next

Nayi nayi problems aane lagi veer ke samne .. hotels ki problem solve bhi ho gay.
Khair Sonali to khud hi kulhaadi par pair marne gay haai to ab kya hi kar sakte hai.
Veer bachayega ya phir khud Bach ke bhag payegi ki nahi.. dekhte hai aage..

Nice update bhai ...

Acha handle kiya
now who is next chef
A food critic name tammana us ka review nae aya food trucks k liye
sonali in danger may be a new mission
sonali ko punishment kiya mily gi

Waiting for the next update

Kaera ka koi contact nae howa
kaera aur veer ka bussiness agreement ka kiya howa
sonia ki kab wapsi hogi and
Ava kiya wapis aye gi ya nae
waiting for next

Updates late ho rahi hain ab aur story bohat intresting ho rahi hai

Mind-blowing update tha. Maja hi a gaya. Almost half year baad ju ka story fir se read Krna start Kiya hu. Lakin abhi bhi lag raha hai jaise kuch hi din hue the last update ko read kiye hue.
Such me maja aa gaya. Is updte me veer ko bole to official permission mil gyi sex karne ki. Ab almost uske Ghar me sub jnte hai ki veer itn bhi sidha nahi hi.
Aur veer ka parijaat ghar ko accept karna bhi mujhe bilkul sahi laga.
Sath me ye tino lady's pne field me sbse best hai. Mujhe lagta hai thi veer ke business ko aage badhane ka kaam karenge.
Sex scene kafi ache the maja a gaya unko read krke. Aur veer ki maa ka uske liye cinta Karn bhi jayaj tha aakhir koi normal person kisi ko bin hichkichaye maar hi nhi skta hai. Khair dekhte hai ab aage aur ky kya bawal samne aata hai.
Kul mil kar bhut hi mast update tha.

Wonderful update ...

awesome update bro

Jabardast update bhai

Bahut hi jabardast update tha bhai maja hi aa gaya. Kya shaandar tarike se ju ne Village arc ka end Kiya. Maja hi aa gaya. Baat bete dono ka samne wahi haal hua. Kahir fir me mujhe dono me sudhrne ke kuch chances dikhte hai ab dekhte hai kya wo shudhar payenge kabhi y aur jyada bigadenge.
Aur ye veer ne kon sa fasa fek hi ? Sath me ye one time use wali kon si skill hai Iska khulasa to aage hi ho payega.
Ek baat ur pata chli hme ki veer ke paas abhi bhi kafi points hai. Dekhte hai wo unk kaise use karta hai.
Tej, veer ka rista bhi kafi ache se aage badh rah hai dekhte hai ye kaha tk jata hai.
Nd ye last wala massage jarur us system Wale villain ka hi hoga. Matlb ab bas ek ke baad ek bhut sare dhamake hi honge. Dekhte hai kya kya dekhne ko milta hi usme.

interesting update bro

पिछले अपडेट की दोनो समस्या इस अपडेट में देखने को मिली...!!!
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भूमिका की समस्या उसके होटल की थी, जिसका वीर ने अच्छे से निदान भी किया, साथ ही उस मास्टर सैफ को और उसका साथ देने वाले सभी सैफ को भी निकाल दिया ।

अक्सर ऐसा होता रहता है हर उस फील्ड में, जहां काम अच्छा होने लगता है, वर्कर को कोई ना कोई भड़काने वाला मिल ही जाता है , कुछ नादान वर्कर भड़कावे में आ भी जाते हैं और फिर गेहूं के साथ घुन की तरह पिस भी जाते हैं ।
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सोनाली का स्वभाव चंचल वाला ही है, वो सिर्फ वीर को परेशान ही करना चाहती थी और साथ में उसे कौशिक का यूं बोलना भी पसंद आ गया था..
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भोले भाले से दिखने वाले लड़के अक्सर बुरी संगति का शिकार होकर रास्तों से भटक ही जाते हैं ऐसा ही कुछ कौशिक के साथ हुआ होगा क्योंकि वीर के द्वारा देखी गई इन्फो में वीर को कुछ भी पास्ट का प्रेजेंट का क्राइम रिपोर्ट नही दिखा...!!!
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अब सोनाली साथ तो चली गई कौशिक के पर उसे वीर के दिल को ठेस पहुंचाई है इसका भी आभास हो चुका... खैर सोनाली के साथ गलत होगा ? ना मेरे हिसाब से नही हो सकता...!!!
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इसका रीजन है प्राची की कंप्लेंट...!!!
बिना रीजन के प्राची कुछ भी नही कहेगी ये वीर भी जानता है, और इतने विश्वास के साथ कहा प्राची ने इसका आभास भी वीर को हो चुका लेकिन बिना सुबूत के कुछ भी नही कहा जा सकता... जहां दिल की बात होती है वहां बिना सुबूत के सामने वाला गलत इंसान भी अच्छा ही लगता है...
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सोनाली के साथ कौशिक ने अब तक कुछ भी बुरा नही किया.. तो उसके चंचल दिल में उसके लिए इमेज भी चंचल वाली ही है...
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अब देखना ये है कैसे वीर सब कुछ हैंडल करेगा...!!
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गुड वर्क मेट.. कीप अपडेटिंग...
वेटिंग फॉर नेक्स्ट अपडेट...!!!!

Bahut hi acha update tha maja a gaya Werewolf bhai. Mujhe ek baar laga tha ki aap veer ka b'day celebrate karenge lakin jb wo aapne last ke 2 update me skip kar diy to mujhe laga ab nahi hoga. But wapas se aapne yaha ye dikha kar hum sub ko shocked kar diya.
Bahut hi acha lag ki veer ko badhayi dene ke liye wo sare log aaye the jo uske life me matter karte hai.
Ye Sonal wala scene mujhe hmesa bhut hi funny aur intresting lagta hai. Aur jo ragini ke sath sex scene tha wo to mind blowing tha. Maja hi aa gaya. Aakhirkar ragini ne Veer ko pa hi liya. Aur kya mast plan banaya usne veer ke sath time spend karne ka. Aur ye tej aur bhumika ka bhi combo bhut funny lagt hi mujhe. Yaha se ab aise bhut se kirdar aur unki jodiya ban gyi hai. Jiske jariye story me bahut kuch add Kiya ja skta hai.
Khair ab dekhte hai ye kaira ka matter kab over hoga.

Lbhai agla update jaldi laao rha nhi jaa rha

भई , जब लजीज भोजन करना हो तो थोड़ा-बहुत इन्तजार तो करना बनता है । मै हर एकाध हफ्ते बाद 60 किलोमीटर ट्रैवल कर के एक होटल जाता हूं ताकि स्वादिष्ट व्यंजन का लुत्फ उठा सकूं। और विश्वास मानो , हमारा नम्बर करीब एक घंटे के बाद ही आता है। कुछ अच्छा चीज पाने के लिए थोड़ा कष्ट सहना पड़ता है।

वैसे वीर के साथ ये क्या कर दिया आपने ? कहां वो इन्टरनेशनल मामले सुलझाने मे लगा था , बड़े-बड़े सूरमाओं के साथ दो - दो हाथ करने मे लगा था , दुश्मनों की बखिया उधेड़ने मे लगा था और कहां हम उसे होटल मे वन प्लेट दाल फ्राई , वह प्लेट वेज पुलाव , वन बटर पनीर मसाला वगैरह वगैरह करते हुए देख रहे है ।

खैर , नारंग ने जो कुछ किया , अपने हित के लिए किया। लेकिन उसके करने का तरीका अवश्य ही गलत था। हर कोई अपने जाॅब चुनने के लिए स्वतंत्र है लेकिन इसके लिए किसी का नुकसान करना , किसी के विश्वास के साथ दगा करना सही नही है। होटल मामले को अच्छी तरह से हैंडल किया वीर ने । इस काम के लिए वो इनाम का हकदार था और उसे यह इनाम मिला भी । एक स्नेह भरा चुम्बन जो भुमिका ने दिया।

सोनाली गांव की अवश्य है लेकिन है तो औरत ही । क्या वो कौशिक के हवस भरी नजरों को पहचान न सकी ! क्या उसे जरा भी महसूस न हुआ कि कौशिक उसे अपनी चिकनी - चुपड़ी बातों से बरगलाने का काम कर रहा है ! सेक्स के मामले मे औरतों का सिक्स सेंस काम करता है।

वो वीर की अधिक तवज्जो पाने के चक्कर मे गलत निर्णय कर गई। लड़की दिल की भोली है , जो दिल मे है वही उसके जुबान पर भी है , छल कपट से मीलों दूर है । ऐसी लड़की के साथ कुछ ऐसा - वैसा नही होना चाहिए।
कौशिक ने सच्चे दिल से प्रेम किया होता तो कोई बात नही थी लेकिन उसने यह सब अपनी हवस और वासना के चलते किया जो कभी भी स्वीकार्य नही है।


बहुत खुबसूरत अपडेट वेयरवोल्फ भाई।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड जगमग जगमग।

Bdia update tha...veer ne sb sambhaal lia ni to bechari bhoomika to bdi musibat me fas jati or ab uspe trust kahi zada badh chuka h.. Whi dusri taraf sonali alag hi fasi h us kaushik laude k chakkar me.. But looks like is kaushik ko apni mausi yad ane wali h.. Bs zada der ki baat ni h phle wo chef pita ab is loduu ka choot k chakkar me moot nikal ayega.. Or meko kyu lag ra h k next update jldi ane wala h

To is dhamakedar update ke sath naya arc start ho cuka hai. Wo help wla massage Ava ka hi hoga. Lakin yaha to apna system wala villain bhi hai. Aur sala yaha bhi ye aise khatarnak khel khelne me laga hua hai. Killer arc ke bhi sub khel ka asli mastermind whi hoga.
Aur lagata hai veer ne uske us jagah ko khtam kar diya isi liye ye iske piche pad Gaya hai. Matlb bole to veer ka sochna sahi tha. Lakin ye aava yaha kaha se aa gyi ? Lagta hai jarur koi n koi connection hai Ava ka yaha hona sayad wo system wala Banda Ava ke jariye veer ko paresan karn ya sirf yaha bulana chahata ho. Khair in sub k to pat hme aage hi chlega.
Baki ye ragini to such me bhut jyada dirty hoti ja rahi hai. Aur veer ki maa ko veer ne bahar jane ko kyu mana Kiya. Sayad karunesh ki wajah se ?
Aur chlo veer ne apne business ke liye ladkiyo ki help to leni suru kar di hai.
Dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai.

Kya bawal update tha maja hi aa gaya Werewolf bhai. To wo crimson apne veer ke upar hmesa se najar banaye hue tha aur usne hi Ava ke khilaf ye karwa kar use yaha bulwaya hai. Aur ab ava ki maa ke jariye kuch n kuch plan bana Raha hai.
Lakin ye baki do logo ka ky kaam hai ? Kya ye dono bhi uske hi under kaam karne Wale log hai. Is baat k to aage hi pata chlega.
Nd ha song such me bhut ach tha. Aur Ava ki feeling hum sub ko bhut ache se feel Hui ab dekhte hai aage aur ky ky dhmake honge.

amazing update hai bhai maza aa gaya

Mst update bro

Romanchak aur shandar update bhai

Zabardast update

Jabardast update

Next update kb ay ga bro

Kamal ki story ha bro bhoat he nice I hope agy update or b mazadar ho gy thanks for to u itne achi story hm tk ponchana k leya apka keep it up bro ...

To yaha ek nahi balki 2-2 system Wale logo ne mil kar veer ko bali k bkr banaya. Aur wo dono veer se sayad is time bhi aage hai status me. Dono ne bahut hi long planning karke veer ke sath ye sub kiya. Ava k to smjh me aa gaya usne aisa kyu Kiya !! Lkin crimson ne aisa kyu Kiya ? Aur in dono ke paas system kaha se a gaya ? Ye baate abhi pata karni baki hai.
Veer ke bare me fihal sirf divya aur suhana ko hi pat hi aur wo dono hi bhut bure haal me hi. Mujhe Hanekawa se kuch ummid hai ab ki wo veer ke wapas aane par uska sath de skti hai.
Aur ab jb veer ko apne dusmano ko apni aakho se dekh liya hi to wo ab unhe bhut hi jldi sub 10times jyada repay karega.
Ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai ?

Shandar update

Wowww........... Kya bawal update tha maja hi aa gaya. Ye is foram ki fihal ki next story hai is baat me koi shak nhi hai. Batao sari chije kaha se le kar kaha Tak connect hua. To fihal yaha par total ab tak 5 log system Wale samne aaye hai.
1. Veer
2. Crimson
3. Ava
4. Unknown caller
5. Wo jail se bhagne wala.

Jinme fihal sbse weak veer hai. Uske baad Ava lakin sayad ab wo crimson se jyada strong ho cuki hai. Wo bas us unknown caller ki wajah se aur points earn krne ke liye veer ko marne me uska sath de rahi thi. Bas anter ye hi ki crimson use marne ke liye mission ka wait kar Raha tha. Jabki Ava ko wo mission phle hi mil gaya aur usne use maar kar apna kaam kar diya.
Lakin kya in system walo ko marne se kya points chappar fad kar milte hai ? Aisa hi hoga warna normal aur un logo me anter hi kya reh jayega.
Aur ye unknown caller hi Chinatown wala system ka owner hoga. Lakin o veer se kab Mila ? Aur wo uske piche kab se pada hi jo uske liye wo itna lamba plan banaye hue hai.
Jarur aage jb Chinatown arc start hoga to aap waps se hum sub ko past me le kar ki ghtnaye yaad dilaoge aur use story se link kar doge.
Mujhe ju ki yhi baat to sbse awam lagti hai. Aua ju is kaam me bahut mahir bhi ho.
Khair dekhte hai ab aage kya hot hi ?

Waiting for the next update

Ding
(Mission: Safe to Sonali
Time limit: 25 minutes
Reward Points: 5000
Location: highway Road)


Super update bro
Waiting for next

Waiting for next update Werewolf bhai...

Bahoot badiya update bhai.... Hotel ki problem solve ho gyi...lekin lgta hai sonali kisi lafde mei fass gayi...veer dekh lega woh toh... System ki Naughtiness ko veer ignore kr raha hai kitni der tkk ignore krega??....abb arc speed paked hi raha hai toh jald hi top gear bhi pad jayega....

Nice update

Mast update h bhai...

Superb awesome update brother to gud luvd it eagerly waiting for your next update

Sonali ye tune kya kiya?

usne bagawat ki hai bhai

There is a time to shine and There is a time to hold back and observe, Veer should do the same and observe his surrounding and people attached with him, because sometimes a little spark can cause big harm when we are tightly searching for inferno. Marvelous update Werewolf bro.

Bahut hi mazedar update Bhai

Nice behtarin mast awesome update bro

Nice update update superb

Nice update bhaii bhit Awla Maza Aya gya par Kar ab new update Ka intazar ha

Long time ha? Ab to ye bhi yaad nahi hai ki kaha chhoda tha last me so lets start with the finale of crimson arc

Ava was helping crimson because she wanted to know about his father. Maine to pehle hi bola tha ladkiya apne pita ke jada kareeb hoti hai esliye jab photo frame wala scene dikhaya tha tabhi kah diya tha ki ye us ladki ke baap ki photo hai aur hua bhi vaisa hi

Veer died(almost) because of her but still i feel for her. Veer ki starting aur ava ki ending same same hi lagti hai. Starting me veer family ke hote hue bhi akela tha and suffered a lot vahi ava apni maa ke hote hue bhi akeli hi thi and she too have suffered a lot and one more thing ki samne wale ko to ye dikhega bhi nahi unko to yehi lagega ki sab kuch to hai dono ke pass. Veer ke pass family, paise vahi ava ke pass stardom lekin asliyat kisi ko nahi dikhti

Ava is going to play a very big role in this story i can sense it. Also i want to see ava and kaera conversation. Ava with system and kaera with her extremely sharp mind and now emotions too will be a treat for us to read

That underwater scene and depth jo aapne dikhaye i feel like vo bahut jaruri thi for the end of crimson. Afterall he was one hell of a villain but i wanted ava to help him without a mission. Vo jada better hota according to me of course

Ava ne death flag ki range kyu badhai? Vo veer par to lagane nahi wali thi aur agar laga bhi deti to fayda kya hota? Dono hi alag alag desh me rah rahe hai. Dimag vaha tak ja nahi raha jaha tak ava ke death flag ki range hai

Bro suhaannnaaa???? Pyaar kara doge aap us se. That update jisme uska depression dikhaya gaya tha and photo jo aapne use ki was just beyond perfection. Arrogant ass to such a beauty her transformation was just unbelievable and not to forget that mel milap wala scene aur jab vo vaha se vapas bhagi. Everything was just perfect
Also i was thinking ki sonia ne dekha hoga kya suhana aur veer se aise milna? Camera ne to sab catch kiya hi hoga na?

Arohi se to pyaar hai hi aur jaise usne bheed se etni aasani se veer ko nikal liya vo yehi dikhata hai ki kitni saral ladki hai vo bilkul dream girl type. En chhote chhote palo me hi ladki dil jeet leti hai

Finally kaera bhi dekhne ko mil gaye and that diary bro?? Veer ne nahi vo aapne likhi but I want to know how? Hum sabne aisa kabhi na kabhi suna to hoga no doubt but unhe ek jagah ek sath bhavnao me band kar likhna was too good. I can see the efforts you have put to write that shit. RESPECT

kaera ka apne baap ko ulta jawab dena etni shanti kyu de raha hai mujhe? Aur jab kaera finally bahar nikli to uska aura kaisa hoga ye bhi etni aasani se kaise imagine ho raha hai? Aapne bahut mahnat ki hai bhai bahut baar sabad nahi milte kuch chhije bayan karne me jaise abhi kaera wale scene ke liye nahi mil rahe.

Need a kaera and veer’s conversation asap

Ghar vapas hue aur jaise maine socha tha actual me utna hua nahi. Sabne etne kam lekin important question puch kar baat taal di ki meri to sari planning dhari ki dhari rah gaye jaise

Kavya hi sabse samjhdar thi vaha. Vohi sabko uksa rahi thi puchne ke liye lekin fir bhi kisi ne us bachari par dhayan nahi diya. Kavya ki age kya hai vaise story me?

Aur madhuri maam ke question answer bhi rah gaye aapne sidhe paper wale question karva diye bahut galat baat hai ye to. Madhuri us se puchti aur veer flirt karta maja hi aata vo dekh kar

Ek madhuri jaisi maam to hum bhi deserve karte hai

Ajay ke sath jo hua vo to ab normal chhij ho gaye hai veer ke liye handle karna lekin kya ye sirf ek scene ke liye likha gaya tha ya eske ander kuch aur chhupa hua hai? Veer highlight to vaise hi bahut ho chuka hai to fir aise abruptly usko dikhaya kyu? Kya uski vo girlfriend thi uska ab koe aur role aane wala hai ya kuch aur baat hai?

Madhuri ke ghar ke scene me i feel like aapne sirf jealousy dikhane ki hi kosis ki hai aur ye hai bhi business arc to esme business aur family parallel chalenge aur ab pyaar dhokha jealousy dard sab dekhne ko mil jayega but still i dont think madhuri jealous hogi apni hi behan se same goes to sonia

Sonia bhi side hat jayegi aur madhuri bhi agar aisi condition kabhi aaye to baki to waqt hi bata dega
Ya fir sab ek sath ho lengi veer ke piche jiske chances lag rahe hai

Sonia kaha hai yaar? Aankhen taras gaye usko dekhe uske dekhne ke liye purane updates padhne padte hai naye me to jaise vo hai hi nahi. Vohi to pehli ladki thi jo veer ke sath normal behave karti thi us waqt jab uske pass kuch bhi nahi tha aur ab vo dikhaye hi nahi de rahi

I wonder vo kaise react karegi jab veer aur vo aamne samne honge aur sonia ko jo past me hua uski puri jankari hogi

Divya ne bhi darsan nahi diye mujhe laga tha vo jayegi aur fir badiya sa romantic thressome ho jayega lekin afsos

Now back to the latest update

Pehle to mujhe laga ki pata nahi konsa pahad toot gaya jo dono aise bhagte hue aaye aur vaise dekha jaye to bhumika ki problem to samjh me aata hai lekin prachi ne aisa kya dekha ki vo bhi same time par hi vaha aa pahuchi?

Mujhe laga tha sonali kafi intelligent hogi but vo typical gaon wali ladki nikali. Galat vaise uski hai bhi nahi aur aapne sahi hi kaha tha jiska boys interaction etna kharab ho aur jo humesha dab kar hi rahi ho vo udna to chahiyegi hi jab use moka mile aur chahe galat humsafar hi kyu na ho

Veer ko kaise nahi pata chala us londe ki intentions? Kya main bahut time baad aaya hu esliye kuch bhul gaya hu ya naye pari ka kuch jadu hai?

Master chef veer ka scene bahut acha laga aur umeed hai aise aur bhi bahut sare scene es arc me dekhne ko milenge jab veer khul kar apni family walo ke samne aane lagega

Ab intezaar hai to bas sonia ka vo aaye aur sare lead actress ko kha jaye including kaera. Possibility bahut jada lag rahi hai vaise mujhe es baat ki

Also suhana aur veer ki conversation ka bhi intezaar rahega

Also also ava india kab aayegi?

Also also also veer aur tej ka relationship bhi main focus par rahega. I was wondering how things will go down between these two

Kafi time baad aate hai to ek sath padhne ko to bahut milta hai lekin emotional touch kam ho jata hai. Last ke kuch updates vapas padhne padenge to get the real taste

Everything was wriiten in a well planned way and i loved the little little things jo aap ek dusre scene ke sath link karte ho

Keep writing brother. Stay health

Bas update ke notification liye comment kar raha hu, Sorry kuch hai nahi kahne ko .

Waiting for the next update

waiting waiting waiting

like target is achieved

waiting! for the update.........................

I am not asking ki update kab aayega lekin kya agle update veer aur kaera ki Conversation dekhne ko milegi?

Hlo

Ok btao phir kha baat hogi aapse

Best ever story bro keep it up

Ok lekin jab bhi dikhna thodi lambi conversation dikhna Or sabse important cheeze kisi update ka end mat karna unki convo se phele like veer aur kaera mil gye lekin unki convo agle update mien yeh thoda dukh dard wali cheez ho jayegi

Waiting

Tum kaho to sahi is thread ko cc thread me Badal denge hum ​

Waiting for kaera and veer with bussiness deal and love

Sonia b nae dikh rahi
kyunk sonia aur kaera tu same hain.

waiting for next update bro

Bht hi behtreen update keep it up dear

Bhi update kb tk ay ga

bahut hi shandaar update hai bhai

Waiting for update bro

154 the best one

Bhai next update kab ayen gi koi din hi bta do ky is update a jaya kre gi

Waiting for the next update

बहुत उम्दा ,

सोनाली कहा इतना जानती है । शहर में आई और आते ही उसे काम दे दिया गया। जो मन लगाकर रही है।

उसकी पिछली यादे बहुत बुरी रही है।

Ye story jis raftaar se popularity ho Raha tha aajkal thoda slow ho Gaya hai...
Matlab
Update dene k 1 din me hi 150 likes ho jata tha... Aajkal 5 days lag rahe hain...

Pahle review etne ate the ki dekhte dekhte 20 page bhar jate the ... Aab to Aisa ho hi nahi Raha...

Aisa kyun ho Raha hai pata nahi ummid hai pahele ke jaise pyar milta rahe...

Waiting for updates

fantastic update bro maza aa gaya

Update 155 awaiting

Bhai main to brave use krta hun mujhe ad nhi milte hai ek bhi site ka performance ad ki wajah se ghata kabhi pc main open krta hun opera main to preshan ho jata hun

Werewolf bhai or kitne arc bache hai or buisness arc kitna din chalega

Isne virus hogya hai jab kholta hu virus' ka dikhata hai

Ding update werewolf bhai sonali ka mission milta hai ya balhar ke through bachayega dekhte hai Sonali bhi veer ke slave mein aa rahi Hain

javascript malware are full here .. thats why traffic getting low slowly slowly

Waiting next

Waiting for the update...

Update

Update kab tak

Interesting turn of events for beer. Let’s see how he overcomes Nidhi’s jealousy. And not to forget kiara!! Looking forward to what the writer has planned for us!

Waiting for editing

Bhai aaj update aayega kya ?

Bhai update de de rha nhi jata

waiting for update bro

Wow

Waiting

Waiting for the next update

Update

Kab tak aayega

When the time comes?

Werewolf bhai next update kab tak aayega?

Ding werewolf bhai Monday mission update karegen I think so

Isko bolte hai Intimidiating presence. Ek hi baar mein sabki bolti bandd. Narang aur uske isharo pe naachne waale ko achha sabak sikhaya Veer ne.

Idher Sonali ki izzat ab khatre mein hai. Veer ko uss Kaushik ki chikhni chupdi baaton se shakk kaise nhi hua. Kyaa sirf check features ke badaulat hi woh logo ko parakta hai. Apna common sense bhi toh kuch use kar sakta tha. Kaushik ki chikni chupdi baaton se toh uska intention samaj aaraha tha.

Khairr ab lagta hai Veer ko ek mission milega safe Sonali ka. Yaa phir hosakta hai mamla kuch aur hi nikle.


Ab dekhte hai aage kya kya hota hai.

Kaushik jaisa purely ordinary ladka,Veer ko kaise ignore karke Sonali ko le ja sakte hei,ye mere ko hazam nehi hua.Veer usko track vi nehi kar paya,tajjub ki bat hei.

Waiting

Waiting

still waiting for update bro

Nice update

Inbox please

Besabari se intezaar rahega Werewolf bhai....

Waiting for update

ok bro

भाई दे देना इंताजर होगा

Werewolf bhai agar ankh lagne wali toh hummein bhi bata dena hum bhi Soojayege

Hello Wolfie bro
Kese ho ap
I'm sure mast ho
Or mere pyare reader Bhai logo sab kese ho apne Wolfie bro ki story pe present me bahot traffic he isliye idar bol raha hun
I think hamari website ke owner Jo hein in logo ne kuch Kiya he warna ek ke bad ek writer ka ese jana ye kuch hazam nahi horaha yr pehle enigma sir fir sandy Bhai fir valentine bro is site ke atmost Jo top writer the sab gayab hain why kuch to gadbad he ye site suddenly start Hui he jitna mughe yad he assosip ke baad ye suddenly start Hui kisine recomend Kiya tha sayad xossip pe is site ko etc but I think is site ye owner's writer's ko problem de rahe Hain ya maybe kuch or kya pata payment ka promise Kiya ho starting me or ab kat liye honge isliye updates nahi mil rahe time pe kher Jo bhi he I'm sure site ke owner responsible hain somehow late updates and incomplete story's le liye for sure

Bhai rhi baat enigma bhai ke yha se Jane ki to unhone yha post krna isliye band Kiya kyoki unhone Apne book ki advertising suru krdi thi yha pr Jo k site k policy k khilaf thi...isliye enigma bhai aur mod se koyi jhadap huyi is baat ko lekr...aur phir salat bhi gya tha mamla phir dobara Kisi reader ne advertising krna suru kr diya aur is baat pr dubaara se behes huyi aur story is website pr banned ho gyi...phir t.e.l.e.gram pr start huyi uske baad wha kisine bakchodi kr diya aur unke dimag me bhar diya k apni website BNA kr paise kamao aur log paid story padhenge..phir pta nhi Kya hua...pr jha tk mujhe lgta hai yha koi paid writer nhi hai...sb Apne mn se story post krte hai.....ha pr yha jyada popularity hone ke baad Kuch log ungli jarur krte hai kyuki unko aur koi Kam HOTA nhi hai...to yaha frustration Nikalte hai or bahot story is reason se bhi stop ho gyi post hona......

Waiting for update

Update kab tak ayega bhai

Waiting for the next update

Wait for next update bhai

Waiting bro

1 update per week , i think so writer is busy due to some work load or personal issue .....

Update ka de rahe ho sir

Aapka agla update ke intezaar mein, dear bro

Abe Chomu 3 mahine pehle hi main iski story read Kiya tha 130 ya 140 update thi isliye main leh raha tha ki update jaldi Kiya kare

Ekdam dhansoo or damdaar update yaara....
Mazaaaa AA Gaya bhai waah....

mujhe lagta h ki writer mahoday ka tabiyat thik nahi h isliye update nahi aa rha h jaise hi Werewolf bahi thik honge update resume ho jayega

Unnecessary expectations rakhna band karo Bhai log..ek time tha jab main bhi due time ke samay din mein kai baar check karta tha..bcos it definitely is one of the best long stories I have come across in terms of the writing skills, language control and imagination.
But I presume there is something called writer's fatigue which sets in. AA hi jayega update aaj nahi to kal/ parso raat Tak. Thoda patience rakho guys..and enjoy the update jab aata hai. I do hope ki update aayega to na Werewolf.bhai. Don't go breaking our heart.

Please do not push writer so much, he himself tries very hard and even in case of delay gives us a mega update. His writing skills is awesome so waiting for him is worthy I suppose. If you are feeling too bored, read his another story, "Akhir Kyu? From Hatred to love"

Bhai aap ne kal Kaha tha ki lite night ko update aye ga hum 3 baje tak intezar karte rahe update Ka par Nahi Aya or aj Subha se intezar karte karte Raat ho Gaye par update Nahi Aya ab aap ye BATA do ki kab aye ga update pls agar aap time dete ho to pls us time pe update post Kar Diya kare ya fir new timing BATA deya karo Bhai pls

Bhai AAP ek time boliye...we don't mind may be Gap between the updates may be more than a week but whatever the time nd date you say....we want update on that time...
Hope you will understand

Besabri se intejaar kar rahe hai Werewolf bhai

Update

Update

Update

Bhai aj update aye ga ya nahi ye bata dejye pls hum log intezar karte ya so Jaye

SUPERB AWESOME FANTASTIC EXCELLENT AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI

Bhai update

Werewolf bhai agar nind aa rhi ho sone ja rha ho humme bhi bata dena

bhai tum nahi intezaar hota to na karo .. wo aapki naukri kar raha hai na... jo aise bol rahe ho

Update 155 has been posted.

 

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