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Ye action toh na ke barabar tha bhai.So after a long time but worth it update.
Update jabardast tha, action and kind of heartwarming
And they deserve thatPichle updates me sonali ko bhi apna bana liya. But as I thought sonali and veer ka relation Suman and veer ke relation se alag hoga.
But Aadesh ko abhi humne bhi kaha jaana hai. Obviously, Veer has a system. However, underestimating any opponent can be fatal you knowAb veer kamyabi ki sidhiyo par aage badhne ki koshish kar rha hai to rukavate bhi aayengi.
Lekin Casa Bella ke owner ko nahi pata ki veer power ke mamle me usse kahi aage hai.
Now about Ragini
But the question is...I don't think that was genuine reason to say no for marriage. Mtlb unka rishta aisa nahi hai jisme shadi impossible ho.
Abhi apne relation ko chupana pad rha hai kyoki abhi tak unhone kisiko batane ki koshish nahi ki.
Thoda nahi bhai. Bahut.Agar vo chahe to bas family ko convince karne me thoda effort lagega
No! Veer inn maamlo me soch nahi Raha hai. Woh jaanta hai ki agar Ragini se shaadi karni hai toh kya kya pareshaniya saamne aa sakti hai. Isliye woh darr raha hai. Uska kehna bas itna hi hai ki, woh Ragini ko harr cheez pradaan kar sakta hai siwae patni banaane ke.Society ki taraf se koi problem nahi hogi. Shadi ke bina pati vala pyar dega, Aisa lagta hai jaise ragini ko apni rakhail banane ki baat keh rha ho.
Iss tarah ki situation pehli baar uske jeevan me arise hui hai. Pehli baar koi married ladki uss se shaadi karna chaahti hai. Aur isliye woh duwidha me hai. Iska samadhan Pari hi nikalegi.I know abhi veer shadi karne ki situation me to bilkul nahi hai, abhi itne jhanjhat hai life me. But vo ragini ko dusre dhang se samjha sakta tha. Veer's response to ragini is like injustice to her.
He will have more than 1 wifeDon't know kahani kis direction me aage badhegi. But agar veer sirf kisi ek se hi shadi karega to ragini ke sath sath use aur kaiyo ke ke sath bhi injustice karna padega. And if he marries more than one, then ragini bhi uska sath deserve karti hai as a husband.
Aur lead heroine ka hi batayi bhi nahi jayegi. Kyuki particularly ek lead heroine hai hi nahi. There are multiples. Readers ke upar hai ki woh kitna sahi guess kar sakte hai unki rankings ko.Abhi kahani me bahut kuch hai hone ko but all this happening because ab tak story me kon main heroine hai vo clear nahi hua hai. Nidhi yaa kaira yaa koi aur.
Is tarah ke jawab se usne Ragini ko to ek tarah se out kar hi diya hai uss list se.
Nope! Nidhi ke case me he has completely fallen for her. Aur abhi Pari yahi baat use samjhayegi. Wait for it.Veer nidhi ko apna banana chahta hai lekin jab yahi sawal usse nidhi puchegi jo ragini ne kaha, kya tab bhi uska jawab vahi hoga jo is baar tha.
Nope! Ragini ek hatt ke character hai. You'll come to know soon why is that. It's just that she has been out of the picture for recent plots which were action focused. Isliye logo ko lag raha hai ki uska koi role nahi hai.Ye bhi sach hai ki ragini ke character ko utni importance nahi mili jo shayad milni chahiye thi. Kahani me uski presence kuch khass najar nahi aati, bechari bas har baar veer ko jate hue hi dekhti reh jati hai kabhi, rajasthan, delhi, las vegas yaa paris aur bas intezar karti rehti hai.
Abhi Veer ne IT sector aur baaki fields me qadam hi kaha rakha hai. Did you forget that Ragini use to work in automobiles sector?Maybe I'm judging too quickly...
Just can hope best for favourite characters like Nidhi, Ragini, Kavya and Bhavna.
Thanks a lot. And keep supporting as usual.Bhavna abhi Karnataka gayi hai may be vahan bhi koi khatra aayega uspar.
Eagerly waiting for next update
Thanks man!First let me again congratulate you on your new job. It is good to know that you have settled nicely
Yeh toh ladaayi thi hi nahi man. Bas aise hi tha. Goons aaj kal Veer ke liye kuch nahi.Yeh to pata tha ki business me Veer ki ab rivalry bade businessmen se hogi, Tamanna jaisi blogger to ek front hai, iske peeche asli kaun tha weh bhi pata chal gaya. Ab Aadesh ki to khair nahin lekin padh ker afsos huya ki Tamanna ka weh fayda utha raha hai. Veer ne bhi aaj kal ki social media ki sthiti ko dekhte huye Shreya aur Abha ko tayyar kerna shuru ker diya hai. Kafi dino baad Veer ki ladayi dekhne ko mili, maza aa gaya.
Nope! Veer ye kabhi nahi bolega. Because of his balanced alpha and Sigma traits. He can't accept that. Pride ka sawaal hai.Aakhir 'Ding' ki awaj aa hi gayi. Ye wali Pari to badi rahasyamaye hoti ja rahi hai, are ego ko chhod ker usko ab 'Mummy' bol hi de. Hahahah... Interesting tussle between Veer and Pari to dominate each other
Aur ye normal hai bilkul.Ragini ke sath kafi dino ke baad interaction hua, per so sad. Weh to patni banana chahti hai.
Woh 'kitne aadmi the?' Tha!Kitne log the!?' ... wah... wo famous dialog...
Kya ho sakta hai? Guess Karo!Ab ye 'Hourglass Method kya hai'... Shayad marketing stunt... Jab tak Hourglass me sand khatam hoti hai, usase pehle hi dish serve ho jayegi...
We'll see! Very soon! Thanks a lot man. And keep supporting.Yes, Arohi is looking beautiful...
Ab dekhte hain ki Aadesh ko kaise Veer expose kerta hai... Shayad Tamanna ke jariye se hi, jiska pata Veer ne laga liya hai...
Yeah manKaafi saari baate h bolne ko jo ki maine ni ki kaafi time se sivaye like krne ke, to feedback to ni dia n of course u took a long break too...
Lekin use hi likhne me bohut samay lagta hai bhai. Kabhi kabhi toh update likhne ka mann toh rehta hai lekin type karne ka Mann nahi hota. Ye ek alag duwidha rehti hai.Well let's get back to the story toh batane ki zrurat ni h har update next level hota h or aaj b whi hua but kya kre u made us greedy, afterall...
Exactly!Khair ye sb to chlta rhega.. Bat kre story ki to ragini ke lie dil se bura lga, bechari ne itna Kuchh kia veer ke lie badle me bs veer se zda expect kr baithi.. Infact zda b ni bolunga har wo ladki ya ladka jo samne wale k lie itna Kuchh krta h, use apna har tarah ka pyar deta h to itna lagaav ke Baad wo usse shadi ke khwab to dekhega hi or kyu wo aisa ni chahega ya chahegi..
Maybe Pari will help?But saamne wala use saaf mna kr de to wo toh toot h jaega.. Khair dekhte h ragini ko uske pyar k badle Kitna milta h..
Nidhi bohut persistent hai. Use manaana kaafi mushqil raha hai shuru se hi. Dekhte hai kaise Inka relationship banta hai.uljha hua h well veer ki taraf se to clear hii hbs nidhi h uljhi hui h... Or idhar food trucks ka scene ho gya.. Khair veer ne galat krne walo ko unki sza de di h..
Update likhna toh mene parso hi chalu kar diya tha. Halaki, around 2k words hi complete hue hai. Dekhte hai Aaj raat tak kitna ho paata hai. Shukriya bhai. And keep supporting.Khair veer ne galat krne walo ko unki sza de di h.. Ab jo ye veer Kuchh nya reveal krne wala h wo dekhte h kya hone wala n I'm hoping k story ab 1 update/week wale purane schedule pr chal pdegi agle update se baaki to sir aap hi bta skte h... Baki bhot sara pyar n congratulations for the new job ye bdia se settle b ho gye...waiting for next update till then aise hi pyaar loot te rho![]()
स्वाति जी की बात से मै बिल्कुल सहमत हूं कि तमन्ना वैसी लड़की नही है जो अब तक दिखाया गया है।
एक लड़की जो मजबूरन हालात के मारे गई ।
Kintu, Veer ke saath bhi yeh sab pehli baar hi hua hai. Woh kaise ideal way me ise deal kar leta? Achanak ek shadi shuda aurat jo ki kisi ki bhabhi hai, woh uss se shadi karne ke liye puche toh woh kya jawab dega?रागिनी भाभी का भी कोई दोष नही । वो वीर को अपने लाइफ पार्टनर के रूप मे फील करने लगी , यह भी हालात की देन थी। वो जवान है , खुबसूरत है , दिल मे अब भी वैवाहिक जीवन की एक सुखद फीलिंग्स है , वीर को अपना हसबैंड मानने लगी है , ऐसे मे वो वीर से क्या आशा कर सकती है ! शायद वीर ने इस सिचुएशन को सही ढंग से टैकल नही किया।
Nahi nahiप्राची ---- एकलौती लड़की जो अपने बाॅस को शेफ कहकर सम्बोधित करती है । चोर दरवाजे से यह लड़की वीर के दिल मे दस्तक देने लगी है।
Bataya toh gaya hai akhir me. Veer ne kuch aisa reveal kiya jiska naam hi hourglass method hai. Ab woh kya hai, ye agle update me pata chalega.लेकिन अपडेट के लास्ट पैराग्राफ और इस अपडेट का शीर्षक " The hoursgalass method " बिल्कुल ही समझ नही आया । ऐसा क्या है इस शीर्षक मे ?
Bohut bohut dhanyavaad bhaaya.बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट वेयरवोल्फ भाई।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग अपडेट।
Pari's version isn't kidding though. If Veer really calls her 'mommy'. Pari can make him the most successful man as early as possible. Not just in terms of money and power but in terms of beauties and debauchery as well.Coming back with my review,
UPDATE 157
Finally sonali and Veer got intimate and it was quite awaited. Bhavna wants to continue her work as she enjoys her work.This variant of pari is troublesome for Veer in sensual matters, she wants Veer to surrender and she is trying all her effort. She activated mystic touch in a wrong situation. Tej got her opportunity to spent sometime with her brother alone and she enjoyed it.
I think she is trying to understand Veer and her feelings for Veer.
Absolutely! We'll see some business rivalries. Schemes and plays. This is the sequence where Kaera, Sonia, Suhana, will enter into the scenes now.UPDATE 158
So now Veer is focussed on PROFIT PATH. Aabha and shreya are going to enjoy their dreams and that will profitable for veer (2 birds with an arrow).A plan laid for chef on wheels and it was quite good as it fooled veer . Casa Belle management is messing with Veer. Now we are going to see some business games and strategies.
Aadesh doesn't know that Veer, the owner of Chef on Wheels is the same Veer who came back from Paris. He does know about both of them. But he hasn't figured out yet that they both are the same person.UPDATE 159
Aadesh messed with the wrong person this time. Was he unaware of veer's heroics in France? How could you mess with a person who fought a whole fuckin country. Tamanna will get her consequences of her deeds.Now it will be a 1v1 with aadesh and his business.
She's asking for Veer's love. Nothing else. A love with a position in demand. A position of wife.Now it will be a 1v1 with aadesh and his business.
Karan is a friend in need and futuristic brother in law. On ragini's dilemma , I can't think of any solution for what ragini is asking for?It hurts but we have to accept the pain sometimes (many times).
Thanks a lot man.Now, congrats for ur new job and may u prosper in life with huge success.
Kya karu man. In fact, mene bohut se logo ke replies nahi diye hai. Because of this busy schedule and relocating... Ju akele nahi ho. Kaafi logo ke replies baaki hai. But sadly mujhe yaad hi nahi hai ki mene kaha se kitne logo ko replies nahi diye hai. So, abhi bas deta jaa raha hu jo jo dikh rahe hai revos. Thanks and keep supporting.You haven't given any reply to my earlier reviews but this time "I WANT A REPLY "
I dont do any concession in review, infact I give review from where I left.
I have tried that. But woh mujhe sahi nahi jamta. Thoda ajeeb lagta hai. Imagine if I want to write a sex scene. I don't even want to imagine that...Yar why don’t you use speech to text AIs. Type karna hi nahi padega!
Kaafi saare AI tools available hai online, speech ko direct text me convert karne ke liye.
Bad mei usko edit manually kar lo.
Apka kaafi time aur effort Bach jayega..!
Me thinks it’s an idea with exploring.
Waise shuru se hi lag raha tha ki veer ki ek biwi to ho hi nahi sakti…
Vo jab matrimony mei settle hoga to wo ek polygamous marriage hi hogi with multiple partners…
Isme bhi kai biwiyan uski incestous hongi jaise uski saari behen aur bhabhi.
Itna to apki last story se hi samajh aa Gaya tha.
Kisi ka dil nahi rootega!
Sahi guess kiya na![]()
That's the exact thing I'm concerned about. Okay suppose ragini se vo shadi nahi karta hai aur ragini bhi uske liye taiyar ho jati hai, but problem to vahi hai naa ki uske baad bhale hi vo ragini ka lifetime khyal rkhe as a husband, lekin vo kabhi veer ki baki future wives ke barabar to nahi hogi.No! Veer inn maamlo me soch nahi Raha hai. Woh jaanta hai ki agar Ragini se shaadi karni hai toh kya kya pareshaniya saamne aa sakti hai. Isliye woh darr raha hai. Uska kehna bas itna hi hai ki, woh Ragini ko harr cheez pradaan kar sakta hai siwae patni banaane ke.
Ye to readers pe depend karta hai ki vo kis chiz ko leke disappoint hote hai aur kisko leke nahi.Yes, Veer will have more than one wife. Although I can't tell ki kaun kaun rahegi. Ye readers ke upar hai. Ab saari behan bhabhiyo ka mein kuch nahi bata sakta. But readers won't have any complaints. That I can guarantee.![]()