Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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Bc ye kya chal raha yaha? Ek do din time se bhatko toh saala bawaal mach jaata yaha...

Mein relatives ke yaha aaya hu. Ghar jana possible nahi tha toh yahi Ujjain me hu. Update aa raha hai kuch derr me. Sabr rakho. :headpat:

Bhaii aapki story hi itni axi h ki kisi se wait nhi hota hai to BC to hogi hi

 

[Your heart]

Hope episode 160 will be the turning point of veer's life. He will get more skills from new genere of pari.

 

[Werewolf]

Update - 160 ~ Big Bash (1)​

Ab tak...

Nidhi ka haath kuch kehne ke liye aage badha magar woh kuch keh na paayi. Bas Veer ki peeth hj nazar aa rahi thi use. Kaise ek haath ko peeche le jaate hue woh Juhi ke sarr par rakha hua tha. Jaise maano ek pita apni beti ko apne kandho par se girne se bacha raha ho.

Veer : I want to reveal something. It's basically a method. Jise hum sabko apni life me follow karna chahiye.

Aur aage badhte hue usne uss board se woh laal kapda hata diya.

"Presenting you~ The Hourglass Method!!!"

Ab aage...

"Y-Ye kya hai?"

"Huh?"

*Chitter* *Chatter*

"Haan haan kuch samajh nahi aa raha."

"What is this?"

"Kuch hourglass sa bana hai. Andar kya hai ye sab?"

"Hmm! Samjhayega woh abhi."

"Akhir hai kya ye?"

"Andar kuch food sa bana hai."

Veer ke board se laal kapda hataate hi ek chitr sabhi ki aankhon ke saamne ujaagar hua. Chhota sa white board tha ek jis par yeh chitr bana hua tha.




Aur logo ki khusur pusur waha shuru ho gayi. Aapas ke log ek dusre se baat kar uss chitr ko samajhne ki koshish karne lage.

Kavya confusion me uss chitr ko dekh rahi thi toh wahi Arohi ki bauhe kasi hui thi. Magar, agle hi shan uske chehre par aashcharya ke bhaav umde.

'Th-This is-!'

Use jaise kuch kuch samajh aa chuka tha. Fir bhi woh shaant rahi aur bas Veer ke samjhaane ka intezaar karne lagi.

Nidhi se leke Shreya, Ragini athwa baaki sab bhi isi tarah confused the. Bhumika hi thi jo sab kuch samajh chuki thi. Food industry se uska purana naata tha. Veer kya pesh karne jaa raha tha woh pehle hi jaan gayi thi.

'Y-Ye toh-!! Veer!! You made this-!?'

Woh mann me sochi. Aur bas bekaraar thi Veer ke explanation ke liye.

Food bloggers, vloggers se leke food content creators tak jo bhi waha maujood the, woh photos kheechne athwa video banaane me lag gaye. Zaahir hai ye aaj social media me viral hone waala tha.

Unme se tabhi ek ne sawaal kar hi diya,

Blogger 1 : Ye kya hai Sir? Iske baare me aap kuch batayenge?

Veer muskuraya aur usne chitr ko dekha.

Veer : This is the Hourglass Method! Ek method jo poore nation ki diet ke liye hai.

Vlogger 1 : Kya aap ise thoda detail me samjha sakte hai?

Veer : Kyu nahi? Par pehle mere kuch sawaalo ka jawaab dena hoga aap sabko. Are you guys ready?

Sabhi ne pehle ek dusre ko dekha aur fir haami bhari. Kuch aur bhi log the jo insta par ye sab live chala rahe the. Chef on wheels koi chhota mota naam nahi tha ab. Mumbai me usne apni acchi khaasi popularity bana li thi.

Chef on wheels ko aur bhi zyada khyaati tab praapt hui jab Veer Paris se lauta aur uska interview liya gaya tha. Jaha se logo ko ye pata chala tha ki chef on wheels isi Veer ka hi ek start-up hai. Bas! Fir kya tha!? Uske baad se hi uska business charcha ka vishay bana hua tha.

Alag alag accounts me chal rahi Insta ki ye live telecast, bhala Aadesh tak kaise nahi pahuchti?

Usne toh 'Chef on Wheels' ke upar kadi nigraani rakhne ke liye aadmi lagaye hue the. Yaha live telecast shuru hue abhi kuch hi pal hue the ki waha Aadesh ko apne office me iski khabar bhi lag gayi.

'Hmm!? Y-Ye ladka-!!! Kahi dekha dekha sa kyu lag raha hai?'

Veer ki shaqal use apne mobile ki screen par saaf saaf dikh paa rahi thi. Usne zyada na sochte hue apna agla plan gear pe lagaya aur turant hi Tamanna ko call kiya.

Tamanna : Hello?

Aadesh : Dushman yaha nayi nayi chaale chal raha hai, aur tum waha so rahi ho?

Tamanna : K-Kya hua?

Aadesh : Ye Chef on wheels waale fir kuch naya kar rahe hai. Jaa ke dekho zara waha ki kya chal raha hai. Aur chaahe jo kuch bhi ho, dhyaan rahe ki tumhe uss par ulta waar karna hai. Samajh gayi?

Tamanna : A-Abhi jaana hai?

Aadesh : Toh kab? Jab woh apna plan kamyaab kar lenge tab jaane ka iraada hai?

Tamanna : N-Nahi! J-Jaati hu!

Aadesh : Aur agar na maane, toh fir mujhe pata hai ki kya karna hai. *smiles*

Idhar Veer sabhi ko ekatr kar unse sawaal puchne me laga hua tha.

Veer : Aap sab ke according, ek ideal diet kaisi honi chahiye?

Blogger 1 : Ek ideal diet aisi honi chahiye jisme food se hume nutrients, vitamins ye sab sahi maatra me mil sake.

Veer : Hmm! Aur-!?

Vlogger 2 : Protein!! Shareer ke liye protein bohut zaroori hai.

Veer : Aur?

Blogger 2 : Mein food ke baare me apne blog me likhta rehta hu. Mere hisaab se, sahi hygiene aur sahi proportion me sahi nutrients ki diet lena hi ek ideal diet hai.

Veer : Aur?

Blogger 1 : Actually, agar dekha jaaye toh ye aur bhi deep jaa sakta hai. Like, ayurved aapko pyaaj lehsun khaana recommend nahi karta.

Veer : Hmm! Well, let me explain-

Veer abhi yaha unhe upar upar ke basics samjha raha tha aur jaise hi woh main mudde pe aaya ki tabhi ek car waha aake ruki. Unki nazre car par gayi. Aur, jaise hi car ka darwaza khula usme se Tamanna baahar nikal ke aayi.

[She's here~ hooo~]

Use dekhte hi Veer ki bauhe uss par kass gayi. Tamanna ghabrayi hui thi. Uski pichli kartoot zaahir si baat hai ki Veer ne pakad hi li thi.

Kintu, kya Veer ke paas saboot tha koi ki woh Aadesh ke saath mili bhagat kar kaam kar rahi hai? Shayad nahi!

Isi aatm-vishvaas ko odhe woh chalte chalte aage badhi. Jaise hi usne Veer ko dekha,

'Huh-!!!!?'

Uske qadam shan bhar ke liye wahi tham gaye.

Veer ke hontho par haiwaano waali muskurahat thi. Uski aankhein baaj ki tarah apne shikaar par jami hui thi. Thand zara bhi nahi thi, fir bhi Tamanna ke badan par ruye khade ho chuke the.

Uski aankhein bhay aur aashcharya ke maare fel gayi jab use kuch akasmat hi nazar aaya.

Veer ki aankhein pal bhar ke liye ekdum laal rang ki hoke raat ke andhere me chamki.

'Wh-What-!!?'

Ye kya tha? Usne apni aankhein mali aur dobaara dekha par ab woh laal rang kahi nahi tha. Kya ye uska vehem tha?

'Was it-!? The reflection of light-!? I think so!'

Ise Light ka reflection samajh woh ek gehri saans chhorr aage aayi. Uske aate hi tamaam food bloggers aur creators jaise paagal hi ho uthe.

Tamanna jaani maani ek celebrity ki tarah hi thi food industry me. Uske sang photo khichwana hi bohut badi baat thi. Creators ye baat jaante the ki Tamanna unke followers badhaane me kitni faayde-mand saabit ho sakti thi.

Aur isliye woh sabhi use gher ke khade ho gaye.

"T-Tamanna!?? Tamanna Joshi, one of the most popular food blogger yaha pe!??? Oh myyyy goddddd!!!"

"It's- It's her!!! Tamanna Joshi!!! The best food blogger from India!!!"

"Woooowww~ Ma'am!! Ma'am autograph please!!!"

*Click* *Click*

"Ma'am! 2 minute please! E-Ek photo! Only one selfie please!"

"Guys, I hope aap sabhi dekh paa rahe honge. Tamanna Joshi! Hamare India ki best-! Matlab best food blogger aur critic hai yeh. Hum waqai lucky hai jo aaj saamne se unhe dekha. Baaki, dekhte hai kya hota hai abhi."

"Behanchod! Aaj ma'am ka ek autograph aur unke saath selfie toh leke hi jaana hai."

"Ma'am! Ma'am!"

Magar Tamanna akeli nahi thi. Do bodyguards bhi the uske saath. Janta ko niyantran me rakhne ke liye woh dono jann logo ko dhakelne lage aur Tamanna ke paas aane se unhe rokne lage.

Tamanna : I'm sorry! I'm not here to have any interview. No photos and autographs please!!

Usne saaf mana kar diya. Woh ahista ahista chalte hue uss white board ke sameep aayi. Aur aake uss chitr ko dekhne lagi.

Aadesh ki kuch derr pehle batayi gayi baat uske dimaag me goonji,

'Chaahe jo kuch bhi ho, dhyaan rahe ki tumhe uss par ulta waar karna hai. Samajh gayi?'

Usne ek gehri saans li. Woh jaanti thi ki Veer ne jo kuch bhi yeh banaya hai woh poore desh ke hit ke liye hi tha. Fir bhi, aaj woh majboor thi. Use iske viruddh jaana hi tha.

Tamanna : What is this? Is this a joke?

Veer muskurate hue uske qareeb chalte hue aaya.

Veer : It's an Hourglass Method!

Tamanna : For what??

Veer : Ek ideal diet ke liye. Aaj kal ki bhaag daud bhari life me, logo ke paas time nahi rehta ki woh apni diet par dhyaan de. Aur isliye woh bina kisi control ke bas kuch bhi khaate jaate hai. There must be an official diet method for the nation. Right?

Tamanna : Diet method? Hahahahaha! What a joke! Who do you think you are Sir? Bhala tum saare nation ko kaise represent kar sakte ho? Aur kaise ye diet method saamne rakh sakte ho? Aur kaise ye expect kar sakte ho ki desh ka harr naagrik ise follow kare?

Tamanna ka kroor aur karaara jawaab sunte hi Tej ka paara chadh utha. Iss ladki ki himmat kaise hui ki uske Bhai ke saath aise baat kare?

Kintu, iske pehle ki woh aage badhti peeche se Arohi ne uska haath thaam liya.

Tej : Arohi!?

Arohi : Rukiye di! Just wait and watch!

Daant meeste hue woh khud ko jaise taise roki. Idhar Veer bas muskura raha tha. Woh toh jaanta tha ki Tamanna bhala yaha kis iraade se aayi hui thi.

Wese ek baat acchi bhi thi isme. Woh yeh ki Tamanna ke aane se, Veer jo ye method logo tak pahuchana chaahta tha woh ab aur bhi asaan ho gaya tha.

Veer : Mein kaun hota hu saare nation ko represent karne waale? *smiles* Well! Woh mein hi tha jisne abhi haal hi me France me India ko represent kiya tha.

Tamanna : That's-

Uske iss jawaab se Tamanna ki bolti band hoke reh gayi. Toh wahi, Aadesh jo insta par sab live dekh raha tha. Use bhi jaise ab realisation hua.

'T-Toh ye ladka aur woh ladka-!!! Ek hi hai!!! Hmm! Samjha!!! Iska matlab hotel Prestige me yeh-'

Aur woh apni soch ko aur dur le jaane laga.

Yaha, Tamanna pressure me thi. Lekin, kaise bhi kar ke use ye sab kuch aaj thapp karna tha.

Tamanna : Woh baat aur yaha aaj ki baat alag hai mister Veer!

Veer : Ohh!? Kya duniya me pehla smartphone banane waala aadmi kisi ki permission leke aaya tha use banaane ke liye? Kya duniya ka pehla TV kisi ki permission se banaya gaya tha? Then, why do I need permission to make this method?

Tamanna : That's because-

Veer : Haan haan!? Kahiye? I'm all ears!

Tamanna (growls) : Y-You-!

Veer : Hmmm?

Tamanna : Tumhe kya lagta hai? Ye ghatiya si method tum yaha do chaar bloggers ko bula ke saamne rakh doge toh yeh official ho jayegi? Health department aake tumhe shabashi dega? Kin sapno me jee rahe ho tum?

Ek baar fir Tej uski kathor baatein sunn bhadak uthi.

"This bitch-!!!"

Woh dhadalle se aage badhi ki ek baar fir Arohi ne uski aasteen pakad use rok liya.

Tej : Arohhhiiii!! Chhorro mujhe!

Arohi : Tejal dii!! Samajhiye! Aap baat ko aur bigaad dogi! Gussa mujhe bhi aa raha hai.

Bhumika (steps-in) : Aur ye samay gusse me aake kuch karne ka nahi hai!

Arohi (glances) : Exactly!

Tej (glances) : Huhh!?

Bhumika uske bagal se aake khadi hui aur use dekhte hue boli,

Bhumika : Leave it to me!

Kuch derr tak Tej shaant rahi aur fir halke se haami bharte hue woh peeche ho gayi. Bhumika ki khud ki hotel thi. Shayad iss sthiti ko woh hi acche se sambhaal sakti thi.

Woh aage Veer aur Tamanna ki orr badhi,

Bhumika : Mera Bhai ek food business ka owner hone ke naate, kisi method ko saamne kyu nahi rakh sakta? 'Three satisfactory elements of any dish.' Ye book aapne hi likhi hai na?

Tamanna (frowns) : Y-Yes! So what-!?

Bhumika : Uss book ke according aapne ye bataya hai ki kisi bhi dish me sabse aham 3 hi elements hote hai. Toh ab mein aapse puchti hu. Aap kaun hoti hai saari dishes me se sirf inn 3 elements ko represent karne waali? Aap kaise inn 3 elements ko saamne rakh sakti hai? Aap ye kaise expect kar sakti hai ki desh ka harr nagrik aapki baat se sehmat hoga?

Ek aur karaara jawaab! Bhumika ka brutal retort dekh Tej ki aankhon me ek chamak aa gayi. Usne Tamanna ko uski hi bhaasha me jawab diya tha. Ye sahi nirnay tha jo Tej ne Bhumika ko waha jaane diya.

Blogger, vloggers aur content creators ke liye toh jaise aaj chaandi ho gayi thi. Woh iss debate ko live jo capture kar rahe the. Iska viral hona toh tay tha.

Tamanna ne kuch saal pehle hi apni ek book publish ki thi. Jiska naam tha ~ 'Three satisfactory elements of any dish.'

Yeh food industry me kaafi charcha me rahi thi jab launch hui thi. Aur iski sahayta se harr nau-seekhiya bhi food ka gyaan dene laga tha.

Kisi bhi dish me 3 mehatvpoorn cheezein hoti hai jiske chalte woh dish uttam se bhi uttam saabit ho sake. Agar kisi dish me ye teen baatein hai, iska matlab woh dish avval darje ki hai.

Pehla ~ Taste!

Yaani ki swaad. Insaan kisi bhi dish ka lutf swaad ke kaaran hi utha paata hai. Swaad kisi dish ka hi nahi, balki hamare khaane ka sabse mehatvpoorn hissa hota hai.

Dusra ~ Nutrition!

Khaana bhale hi swaadisht ho, lekin agar woh swaasth ko haani pahuchaye toh bhala woh kis kaam ka? Khaana na sirf swadisht hona chahiye balki saath hi saath shareer ko atirikt poshan de sake aisa bhi hona chahiye. Jo ki aaj kal aksar food industry me maujood tamaam business waale iss aham cheez ko bhool jaate hai.

Aur teesra ~ Presentation!

Ye teeno me utna aham nahi hai, magar ek accha business waala vyakti aur ek accha chef iss baat ko bhali bhaati samjhega ki kisi bhi dish ko acche se prastut karna kitna aavashyak hota hai aur uska business me kya prabhaav padta hai.

Tamanna ne apni iss kitaab me inhi teeno baato ka zikr bade hi sanchhipt roop me kiya tha. Par sawaal wahi utha diya Bhumika ne. Akhir, woh kaun hoti hai inn sab cheezo ko likhne waali?

Aur agar use anumati hai, toh bhala Veer kyu nahi kuch represent kar sakta?

Bhumika : Kahiye! Ab khamosh kyu ho gayi aap?

Tamanna (smirks) : Am I not qualified enough? Mene jo book likhi hai, woh managements, departments, foreign fields se awards milne ke baad hi likhi hai. So? Kya mein qualified nahi hu use likhne ke liye? But what about him? Mister Veer ne aisa kya kiya hai food industry ke liye jo woh iss method ko publicize karne ke liye qualified ho gaye hai?

Bhumika : Kisi me jab kisi field ke liye passion ho toh zaroori nahi hai ki jab woh apna naam kama le tabhi apne ideas ko public me rakh paaye.

Veer ne Bhumika ko dekha. Woh behan jisne kabhi Bhai maanane se inkaar kar diya tha. Aaj wahi use bhai pukaar ke uske liye uske saath khadi thi. Uske hontho par ek muskaan saj gayi. Bhumika ne bhi jaise Veer ko apni orr dekhte hue mehsoos kar liya.

Woh use dekhi aur halki si muskaan dete hue haami bhari. Jaise batana chaah rahi ho ki 'Mein hu tumhare saath yaha pe. Chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi.'

Tamanna : Chalo maan lete hai ki koi bhi kuch bhi present kar sakta hai. Par ye kaise maan le ki mister Veer ka diya gaya yeh method sahi hai? Hmm?

Bhumika : W-Woh-

Veer (smiles) : Aap khud kyu nahi khaamiya nikaalti? Logo ko samajh aa jayega ki yeh sahi hai bhi ya nahi!

Tamanna : Very well then. I won't hesitate.

Woh aage aayi aur usne apni ungli board par rakhte hue pehle khud diagram ko samjha. Aur fir boli,

Tamanna (grins) : Ye bakwaas hai actually. Mister Veer! Mene lagbhag poori duniya ghoomi hai. Aur, mein ye dekh ke bata sakti hu ki ye diagram aur ye method Japanese inverted triangle method se inspired hai. Kya mein sahi hu?

Veer ne use ghoora. Woh sahi thi.

Japanese Inverted Triangle bhi diet ke liye ek method thi.




Iss chitr ke anusaar, ye bataya gaya hai ki subah se raat tak insaan ko kis maatra me kya kya khaana chahiye. Subah se raat hote hote, khaane ki maatra bhi kam hoti gayi hai.

Yaani ki insaan ko raat me kam se kam khaana chahiye. Magar, Veer ke diagram me aisa nahi tha. Uska chitr hourglass ke akaar me tha.

Iska matlab kya hua bhala?

Veer kuch pal toh shaant raha. Fir bola,

Veer : Yes! You are right! I won't deny it.

Tamanna (smirks) : Haah~ Mein jaanti thi. Yeh Japanese inverted triangle ki sasti copy hai aur kuch nahi. Upar se yeh galat hai. Mein khud Japanese inverted triangle ko follow karti hu.

Veer : Ye galat kaise hai bhala?

Tamanna : Are you really asking me about that? Don't you see? Ye figure hourglass me hai. Iska matlab ye hua ki shaam aur raat me insaan ko utna hi khana chahiye jitna ki subah aur dopahar ko woh khaa raha hai. This is illogical.

Veer (smiles) : Aur ye illogical kyu hai?

Tamanna : Tumhare figure se hi samjhati hu tumhe. Hmm! Ye dekho! Ye morning aur lunch ka diya hai tumne. Right?




Veer : Yes!

Tamanna : Morning me ek insaan heavy breakfast kare. Ye mein maanti hu. But what about lunch? Tumne lunch ke liye toh minimal food select kar ke rakha hai. Bas ye fruits, juices, milk, etc. Kya inn sab se lunch ho payega logo ka? Mein aap sab se puchti hu! Kya ye kahi se bhi logical hai? Ki vyakti din me khaana hi na khaaye?

*Chitter* *Chatter*

Uske sawaal par log aapas me khusur pusur me lag gaye.

"Baat toh sahi hai yaar-!"

"Haan yaar! Matlab din me toh khaana maangta hai."

"Are do waqt ki din ki roti kamaane ke liye hi toh itni mehnat karte hai. Ab kya woh bhi nahi khaaye? Toh bhala khaaye kya?"

"Bilkul! Ek gareeb vyakti sirf do time hi khaata hai. Din me aur raat me. Ab ye tarah tarah ka khaane ke liye uske paas paise honge kya?"

"Barabar hai! Ye method sirf raees logo ke liye hi hai."

"Haan! Ab mein toh kar sakta hu ye follow. Lekin, mujhe nahi lagta ye kaam aayegi bhi kuch. Kyuki insaan sabse zyada khaana toh din me hi khaata hai na yaar."

"Aur nahi toh kya. Din me pait na bhare toh bhala kaam kaise hoga? Raat ko toh fir bhi theek hai, chala lenge."

"Ye poori method hi galat hai. Tamanna madam ekdum sateek baat keh rahi hai."

"Galat hai! Galat hai!!!"

Logo ki awaazein waha sunaayi dene lagi. Tamanna ek kapti muskaan hontho par sajaate hue Veer ko dekhi.

Tamanna : Hmph~ You thought it's over? Abhi toh aur bhi bacha hai. Everyone!!! Listen to me please!! Ye toh sirf lunch tak ka tha. Abhi poori picture toh dekhiye.

Woh board par ishaara kar apni ungli ko aur neeche leke aayi.




Tamanna : Aur ye hai evening aur dinner ka time table. Aap sab dekh rahe hai? Dinner me jaha vyakti ko kam se kam khaana chahiye. Waha ye mahashay lunch jaisa khaane ki salaah de rahe hai. Kya yeh method kahi se bhi sahi hai?

"Ye toh pagalpanti hai bhai. Haha!"

"Saala mein iske liye yaha aaya tha? Bas ek acchi baat hui aaj ki Tamanna madam jo aa gayi yaha. Hahaha!"

"Aise hi nahi best blogger hai desh ki yaar. Dekha nahi! Ek nazar me pehchaan liya ki kis diagram se inspired hai yeh."

"Tch! Mujhe toh laga tha kuch bada niklega. Saala hauaa bana diya iss method ko."

"Bhaad me jaaye saali method wethod. Hum toh apne hisaab se hi khayenge. Bau ki choot!!!"

"Hahahahaha!"

Log method ko poore tareeqe se bhool ke Tamanna se sehmati rakhne lage. Tamanna ki chaal qamyaab ho rahi thi. Tej apni mutthi kass apne andar ubal rahe gusse ko baahar aane se rokne ka prayatn karti rahi.

Aaj uska bas chalta toh woh iss kutiya ka jaa ke muh hi noch leti. Uski itni majaal ki uske Bhai ko neeche dikhaaye? Aur woh bhi uske saamne?

Tej (grits) : I'm gonna slap that bitttcchhh!!

Arohi, Kavya, Nidhi, Shreya, Ragini, Shweta, Manorath sab ke sab chintit the.

Magar unhe iss field ka koi knowledge nahi tha. Shweta se zyada iss baare me Bhumika jaanti thi. Parantu, woh bhi Tamanna ke saamne muh band rakhne par majboor ho gayi thi.

Tamanna (grins) : It's over! Hence proved! Ye method wahiyaat thi shuru se hi. Mein request karungi Mister Veer se ki aapne inn sab ko jo yaha bulaaya hai aur inka time waste kiya hai. Aap inn sab se maafi maange aur toh aur inhe aaj zero cost me khaana khila ke hi ghar bheje. Bodyguards! Lead the way!

Bodyguards logo ko dur karte hue raasta banaane lage aur aage nikal ke jaane lage, peeche peeche Tamanna bhi jaati gayi.

Udhar phone me Aadesh sab kuch live dekh ke bohut hi khush tha. Tamanna ne iss case ko behad khubsoorti se handle kiya tha. Woh thahaake lagaate hue hass raha tha.

Par tabhi, Tamanna ke peeche se ek awaaz aayi.

"Don't you want to hear my explanation?"

Uske qadam wahi tham gaye. Woh palti,

Tamanna : Huh? Explanation ke liye ab hai hi kya?

Veer : What do you think? Japanese Inverted Triangle method kis liye banayi gayi thi?

Tamanna : Huh? Kis liye banayi gayi thi ka kya matlab hai? Obviously, unke desh ke sabhi logo ki sehat ko dhyaan me rakh ke unki proper diet ke liye banayi gayi thi.

Veer (smiles) : Aur kis ke liye banayi gayi thi?

Tamanna : Are you dumb? Obviously, woh Japanese logo ke liye- huhhhh!!!??

Tamanna ki aankhein akasmaat hi jamm ke fel gayi. Use abhaas hua. Inverted Triangle method toh japanese logo ke liye banayi gayi thi.

Veer (grins) : Japanese logo ko dhyaan me rakh ke uss method ko unke nation ke liye pesh kiya gaya tha.

"Ohh! Toh aisa hai?"

"H-Haan! Yaar ye toh socha hi nahi apan ne."

Veer : Japan ke log India ke log se physically kam strong hote hai. It's a fact.

Tamanna : Huhhh! H-How can you-

Veer : Hamari cities ki life alag hai, hamara culture alag hai. Toh kya aap sab jaanana chaahenge ki mene lunch me kam khaana kyu rakha hai method me?

"Haan! Haan!"

"Bilkul! Batao bhai aisa kyu hai?"

"Zaroor Sir! Bataiye bataiye! Hum sab sunn rahe hai."

Veer (smiles) : Aap sab jaante hai na ki din me agar insaan bhar pait khaana kha le toh kya hota hai fir?

"Huh!? Kya hota hai?"

"Bhai bhar pait khana toh accha hai na. Koi bhi bhooka nahi rahega akhir."

"Haan! Isme buraayi kya hai?"

"Wait wait! Mein samajh gaya!! Shit!! Ye mene pehle kyu nahi socha. Bhai log bhar pait khaana kabhi bhi nahi khaana chahiye. Din me bhar pait khaana khaate hi seedha neend aati hai."

"Arre haan!!! Ye toh socha hi nahi!"

"Toh neend se kya dikkat hai?"

Veer : Neend se kya dikkat hai? *smiles* Work efficiency ki dikkat hai! Insaan din me itna kha leta hai ki neend aur aalas ke chalte 2 ke baad uss se dhang se kaam bhi nahi ho paata. Efficiency ghat ke kam ho jaati hai.

Tamanna : That's-

Veer : Inverted Triangle method unke apne logo ko dhyaan me rakh ke banayi gayi thi. Mene jo banaya hai, woh hamare desh ke logo ko dhyaan me rakh ke banaya hai. Ek heavy breakfast kaafi hota hai aapko din bhar ke liye energy provide karne ke liye.

Tamanna : Bullshit! Toh night ka kya-

Veer : Hamara desh alag hai. Logo ko yaha dinner me bhi mein unse unki freedom nahi chheen sakta. Aksar log apni families ke saath dinner par nikalte hai. Agar mene unhe iss se bhi rok diya, then this method won't get executed.

Tamanna : Toh fir lunch me kyu rakha hai aisa-!?

Veer : Didn't I tell you? Work efficiency! Dinner ke baad insaan kaam nahi karta. Vyakti ko sona hi rehta hai. And that's why, I have designed it in such a way.

Tamanna : Y-You-!!!

Veer (smiles) : Ab zara imagine kariye aap sab. Agar, ye method desh ka harr naagrik follow karne lage. Apne upar dhyaan dene lage. Toh kya hoga?

*Chitter* *Chatter*

Dur khadi Kavya Veer ko jeetate dekh khush ho uthi aur woh apni jagah se hi chillaa uthi,

"East or west!!! Bhaiya is the best!!! Yaaaayyy!!"

Veer ne dekha toh paaya ki woh Juhi ke saath khadi hui thi. Unn dono ko dekh woh muskura utha. Toh wahi Nidhi aur Shreya bhi use khushi khushi dekh rahi thi.

Kintu, Ragini hi thi jiske maathe par shikan chhaayi hui thi. Woh dekh rahi thi ki Veer ki behne kaise uski madad ke liye aage aa rahi thi. Kaise woh sab uske liye kaam aana chaah rahi thi.

'Kya isliye tum mujhse dur bhaag rahe ho? Ki mein tumhare liye kuch nahi kar paati? Agar aisa hai-! Toh ye bhi karti hu. Dekhti hu! Kya tum baad me mujhe accept kar paate ho?'

Kuch yahi haal Purvi ka bhi tha. Veer ko safalta ki seedhiyaan chadhte dekh woh behad khush thi. Magar, uss din ki vardaat se thoda gambheer bhi thi.

'Hamata beta-! Bhavna! Aaj dekho! Kaise tarakki kar raha hai! Kitna accha hai na? L-Lekin-! Uss din woh sab nahi hona chahiye tha. Ohh Bhavna! Kya tumhe woh sab batau ya nahi? Kuch samajh nahi aa raha!'

Ek gehri saans chhor usne iss baare me sochna band kar diya. Toh yaha Veer abhi bhi samjha raha tha logo ko,

Veer : Na sirf logo ki sehat acchi hogi, balki tandurust rehne se insaan khush bhi rahega. Desh ka happiness index badhega. Stress kam hoga, ekta badhegi, aur obesity jaisi cheezo ka nam-o-nishan nahi bachega. And all of this will happen only because of this simple change ~ The Hourglass Method.

*Clap* *Clap* *Clap*

"Bohut khoob Sir! Pehle mujhe laga tha ki aapki ye method kisi kaam ki nahi hai. Par ab jab aapne ye bataya na ki ye hamare logo ke baare me soch ke banayi gayi hai. Tab se mera doubt khatam ho gaya."

"Same! Mujhe bhi yahi laga tha. Lekin, ab lagta hai ye waqai zaroori hai."

"Haan haan! Dekha jaaye toh khaane ke maamle me kabhi kuch bhi aisa desh ke liye nahi nikala gaya hai. Agar iss tarah ki koi cheez aati hai toh ye pehli baar hoga."

"Bilkul! Aur aadmi interest bhi lega. Celebrities agar social media me ise promote karne lage toh aadhe log toh wese hi follow karne lagenge."

"Sahi kaha. Upar se sabse badi baat iske koi nuksaan nahi hai. Balki, faayde hi faayde hai."

Veer ka palda bhaari ho raha tha.

Tamanna : Y-You are crazy!!! Tumhe kya lagta hai? Bhala ye method aise hi publicize ho jayegi? Jab tak ye govt. ke Health department tak nahi pahuchegi tab tak iss par koi bhi official faisla nahi ho payega. Hmph~ Aaj nahi toh kal ye ek dustbin me hi bann ke reh jayegi.

Uske virodh karte hi log fir aapas ki baat cheet me lag gaye.

"Tumhe nahi lagta ki Tamanna ma'am kuch zyada hi bhadak rahi hai?"

"Haan! Mujhe bhi kuch off sa lag raha hai. Arre agar method me koi problem rehti bhi hai toh health department iski aur jaanch karega na."

"Haan! Ho sakta hai kuch changes ho isme aur fir ye public me officially announce kiya jaaye."

"Sahi kaha! Iska koi toh nuksaan nahi hai. Fir ye Tamanna madam itni hyper kyu ho rahi hai."

"Ma'am ko aisa virodh karte pehli baar dekh raha hu."

"Pata nahi kya chal raha. Kuch gadbad hai kya?"

"Ho sakta hai bhai!"

Tamanna ne jab logo ke beech apne liye aisi baatein suni toh woh ghabra uthi. Kahi uska pardafaash na ho jaaye. Agar aisa hua toh woh muh dikhaane layak bhi nahi bachegi.

Yaha se nikal jaana hi behtar tha.

Tamanna : W-Well then! Dekhenge hum! Kya karti hai tumhari so called hourglass method. G-Good luck!

Woh turant hi mudi aur tezz qadmo ke saath logo se nazre churaate hue bhaagne lagi. Log uske peeche peeche uske sang selfie lene ke liye jaane lage. Magar, Tamanna ek jhatke me apni gaadi me ghus gayi. Aur palak jhapakte hi woh waha se rafu-chakkar ho gayi.

Apne office me baithe Aadesh ne jab ye dekha toh uska gussa charam par pahuch utha.

"Maa ki choot!! Behanchod!!! Dimaag kharaab-!!!"

Usne apni personal assistant ki orr nazre daudaayi aur bola,

Aadesh : Big Bash ki taiyaari karo! Kal hi sab kuch ho raha hai.

Assistant : Yes sir~

Kehte hue woh turant hi kaam me lag gayi.

'Veer!!! Samjha! Sab samjha mein! Tujhe bhidne ka itna hi shauk hai na? Toh ab ruk jaa tu! Kal! Batata hu sab kuch tujhe!'

Woh baahar nikal apni gaadi me baith ke chal diya. Ek ghar ke baahar rukte hi woh gaadi se utar uss ghar me pravesh kiya.

*Ding* *Dong*

Usne door bell bajayi toh kuch hi pal baad darwaza andar se khula.

"Ahhh! Arre? Aadesh Uncle aap?"

Aadesh : Hahahaha! Kritika beti! Kaisi ho?

Saamne khadi ladki Kritika thi. Kavya ki best friend.

Kritika : Arre! Uncle? Aaiya na!

Aadesh andar aaya aur sofe par virajman hua.

Aadesh : Papa kaha hai?

Kritika : Bas aa hi rahe hai. Andar washroom me hai.

Aadesh : Hmm!

Andar se jaise hi Kritika ke pita, Kamal Maurya sahab baahar aaye toh Aadesh ko dekh unka chehra chamak utha.

Baat yu thi ki Aadesh ke pita Kamal ko jaante the. Aur uss wajah se Aadesh ka bhi kabhi kabhi iss ghar me aana jaana bana rehta tha.

Kamal ki khud ki travel agency thi aur woh buses athwa cars chalwata tha. Yaha tak ki security me bhi uski kaafi pehchaan thi.

Aadesh : Kamal Sahab! Aaiye! Vyast toh nahi the na? Haha!

Kamal : Arre nahi nahi! Boliye na! Aaj kaise aana hua? Kya seva kar sakta hu mein?

Aadesh : Hmm! Seedha mudde pe hi aata hu toh fir! Kal mene apni hotel me ek vishal party ka ayojan kiya hai.

Kamal : Ohh!

Kritika : Hoo~ Kya wahi Casa Belle me Uncle?

Aadesh (smiles) : Haan haan! Wahi!

Kritika : Ohh wowww! Kya hum bhi aa sakte hai?

Aadesh : Nahi!

Kritika (droops) : O-Ohh!

Uska maayus chehra dekh Aadesh hass pada,

Aadesh : Hahahaha! Arre Bhai, tumhe ab invitation dena padega kya? Poore parivar ke saath aana hai tumlog ko.

Kritika : S-Sach!!?

Aadesh (nods) : Hmm!

Kritika : Oh my gooodddd!!! Kya mein apne friends ko bula sakti hu? Meri do friends hai.

Kritika ko tabhi Veer aur Karan ka bhi dhyaan aaya. Woh firse boli,

Kritika : N-Nahi! 2 nahi! Sirf 4 log! 4 log ko bula sakti hu mein?

Aadesh : Umm! *frowns*

Kamal : Kritika!!! Ye kya harqat hai? Koi hume aamantran de raha hai aur tum aise pesh aa rahi ho!? Kya ye accha lagta hai?

Kritika : S-Sorry!!! Mein toh bas-

Aadesh (sighs) : Darasal, baat ye hai ki mein sirf chuninda bade bade logo ko hi invite kar raha hu. Casa Belle ka naam aur logo tak pahuch sake. Bas isi aim se ye big bash rakha gaya hai. Tumhe chooth deta hu mein. Tum apne koi bhi 2 friends ko laa sakti ho.

Kritika : 2?? O-Ohh Okay! Thank you Uncle!

Sirf 2 friends ko laana Kritika ke liye kaafi nahi tha. Fir bhi woh apni maayusi jhalakne nahi de sakti thi.

Kamal : Hmm! Chalo jao ab! Aur Uncle ke liye chai paani lagwao. Bolna padega kya mujhe?

Kritika : H-Haan jaati hu! Abhi laayi!

Aadesh : Arre iski koi zaroorat nahi Kamal Sahab! Aap bas mudde ki baat suniye. Mein nikal hi raha hu. Mujhe kaafi kaam hai abhi.

Kamal : Kahiye na!

Idhar, Kritika hall se nikal apne kamre me gayi aur seedhe usne Kavya ko call lagaya aur apne ghar par bula liya. Kavya aur Arohi iss waqt Veer ke food truck se nikal hi rahi thi. Isliye woh dono hi ek saath Kritika ke ghar ke liye chal di.

Aadesh : Kal, wese toh log apni apni gaadiyo se hi aayenge. Lekin, fir bhi mujhe aapki gaadiya chaahiye. In case agar unki zaroorat padi toh woh kaam aa jayengi. Balki, Casa Belle ke workers bhi car me hi aayenge.

Kamal : A-Accha!

Aadesh : Aur mujhe security bhi chahiye. Aap keh dijiyega ki jitne bouncers bhej sakte hai bhej de.

Kamal : Kyu nahi! Ho jayega kaam!

Aadesh (smiles) : Good! Aur aap sab bhi raat 8 baje tak kaise bhi karke pahuch jaana. Theek hai na?

Kamal : Haan haan! Kyu nahi!

Aadesh : Toh mein chalta hu fir!

Kamal (nods) : Hmm!

Aadesh waha se ravana ho gaya. Aur uske jaane ke kuch derr baad hi yaha Kavya athwa Arohi Kritika ke ghar pahuch gayi. Woh dono hi Kritika ke hi room me baithi hui thi.

Kavya : Oye! Kya hua? Kyu bulaya?

Kritika : Pagal! Tum sunogi na toh khushi se jhoom uthogi!!

Kavya : Accha? Aisi kya baat hai?

Kritika : Arre mere Uncle hai ek. Tumne Casa Belle hotel ka naam suna hai na?

Kavya : Casa Belle? You mean woh newly opened hotel na? Sabse luxury waali?? Haan suna hai mene.

Kritika : Kal usme bohut badi party hai ek. Sab bade bade log aayenge. Aur mere uncle usi hotel ke owner hai. Aur unhone mujhe apni 2 friends ko bulaane ke liye allow bhi kar diya hai. Hehehe~

Kavya : Ohhh wowwww~

Casa Belle ka naam sunte hi Arohi ke kaan khade ho gaye. Woh jaanti thi ki Hotel Prestige me Chef Narang ne kya hadkamp machaya tha. Aur ye bhi jaanti thi ki uske peeche kis hotel ka haath tha.

Ye jaante hi ki Casa Belle ka owner Kritika se sambandhit hai, woh ek gehre chintan me doob gayi. Kintu, Kavya inn sab baato se anibhigya thi.

Kavya : Di!!! Hum kal chal rahe hai. Hai na???

Choti behan ki masoom si soorat dekh Arohi vichaar me kho gayi,

'What should I do? H-How can I go there? Woh hamare rivals hai. But then again-! Agar mein waha jaati hu...! Then, I might find something. Yes! I must go!'

Arohi (nods) : Okay!!!

Kavya : Yaaaaaayyyyy!!!

Kritika : Hahahaha!! Dii!!

Arohi : Mm?

Kritika : Aaj aap Kavya ko yahi chhor dijiye. Mein subah ghar drop kar jaungi.

Kavya : Haan dii!! Mein yahi ruk jaati hu na raat me.

Arohi (nods) : Okay! Subah time se aa jana lekin!

Kritika : Aap chinta mat kariye. Mein ise subah chhor jaungi.

Samay rehte, kaafi raatri me Arohi bhi waha se apne ghar ki orr chal di. Ab bas Kritika aur Kavya hi uske room me maujood the. Kavya ne Kritika ke hi ghar ke kapde pehen liye the aur woh dono hi bed par laite laite apni baato me lagi hui thi.

Kavya : Kaash Veer bhaiya ko bhi hum invite kar sakte. Kritika! Kya ye possible nahi?

Kritika : Yaar mene unse pucha tha. Lekin, unhone bataya ki ye party wesi hai hi nahi. In fact kal celebrities bhi honge waha. Mein toh abhi se pagal ho rahi hu. Mujhe itni badi party me invite kiya gaya hai. Ohh my goooddd!! Kitne handsome handsome actors honge waha~ ahhhh!!!!

Kavya : Handsome actors?

Kritika : Aur nahi toh kya paagal~ Ahh! Unke saath selfie lene ka mauka mil raha hai mujhe. Ohh goddd! Tumhe nahi click karwani kya?

Kavya : N-No!

Kritika : Huh? Kyu??

Kavya : Accha ek question puchu?

Kritika : Kaisa question? Puch na!!

Kavya (blushes) : K-Kabhi tumhe aisa nahi lagta?

Kritika : Kaisa?

Kavya (blushes) : Umm! Like..! Tumhara mann sirf ek hi ladke ko dekhne ka karta hai. Uski harr baat acchi lagti ho. Wo galat bhi kuch kar raha ho toh tumhe uska hosh na ho. Tumhe wo bhi sahe lage. In fact, tum iss baare me socho hi na ki woh kabhi kuch galat kar bhi sakta hai. Aisa nahi lagta tumhe kabhi kisi ko dekh ke?

Kavya ki baat sunn, Kritika ke mann me seedha Karan ki chhavi bann ke aayi.

Kritika : S-Sach kahu toh-! Haan mujhe bhi aisa lagta hai kabhi kabhi! Par ye kya? Oye! *chataak* Tujhe pyaar ho gaya kya kisi se?

Kavya : Ahhn! Maara kyu? Aaj meri bum dukh rahi hai. Maar mat!

Kritika (smirks) : Kisi se kuch karwa liya kya? Hmm? Hmm? ಡ⁠ ͜⁠ ⁠ʖ⁠ ⁠ಡ

Kavya (blushes) : Dhatt! Ashleel ladki!!

Kritika : Ye mein kya sunn rahi hu? Oye! Tujhe sach me pyaar ho gaya kya? Baap re! Aur mujhe pata bhi nahi chala? Bata jaldi! Kaun hai woh?

Kavya (blushes) : H-Hattt!!

Kritika : Tu batati hai ya mein teri bum pe aur maaru?

Kavya : Ahn!! P-Pagal! *blushes* A-Aisa kuch nahi hai!

Kritika : Safed jhooth!!! Seedhe seedhe bata! Bata kaun hai woh! Meri naak ke neeche itna sab ho gaya aur mujhe khabar bhi nahi hai? Bol! Accha, ye bata kaisa dikhta hai woh?

Kavya (blushes) : Dikhne me...! Uska koi jawaab nahi! Bohut handsome! Bohut zyada! I-I cannot explain.

Kritika : Hmm? Toh thoda reference toh de. Like? Kartik Aryan jaisa?

Kavya : Noooo!

Kritika : Ah! Toh? Umm~ Shahid Kapoor jaisa?

Kavya : Nooo pagal! Actors ko kaha beech me ghused rahi ho. Use inn actors ki tarah make-up artists ki koi zaroorat nahi.

Kritika : Umm! Th-Then!! Karan jaisa?

Kavya : Karan se toh tu pyaar karti hai na. Noo! Not like him!

Kritika (blushes) : Wh-What?? K-Kisne kaha mein uss duffer se pyaar karti hu?

Kavya : Blah blah blah! Sabko pata hai ki tum dono ke beech kya chalta hai. Hmph~

Kritika (blushes) : E-Ehhh!? I-Itna k-kaise- ahhh!! Ohhh goddd!

Kavya : Hmm! Everyone knows it.

Kritika : That's- Okay! Leave that aside. Ahem!! Toh?? Veer bhaiya jaisa???

Iss baar Kritika ke itna kehte hi Kavya ke chehre ke haav bhaav hi badal gaye. Uske gaalo par laali ab saaf jhalak rahi thi. Kritika ne jaise sab bhaanp liya.

Kritika (smirks) : Hooo~ Toh ye baat hai.

Kavya (panics) : N-Nooo! A-Aisa kuch nahi hai! T-Trust me!

Kritika (smiles) : Toh woh ladka Veer bhaiya ki tarah handsome hai. Right?

Kavya : Ehhh?

Bechari Kavya ko laga tha ki Kritika ne use pakad liya. Magar, uska agla jawab sunte hi woh nishchint ho gayi. Kritika ko kuch nahi pata chala tha.

Kavya : H-Haan! *blushes* Tum yahi samajh lo.

Kritika : Veer bhaiya jaisa ladka tujhe kaha mil gaya? Aur woh bhi meri nazar se bach ke tune ye sab kab kar liya? Chaalu ho rahi hai tu bohut. Hmm? Kherr woh chodh! Aur ye bata ki tune approach kiya?

Kavya (droops) : I-I wish I could do that.

Kritika : Hmm! Matlab abhi kuch nahi hua?

Kavya (blushes) : I- I kissed him!

Kritika (bed se uchhalte hue) : Whaaaaaatttttttt?????

Kavya (blushes) : L-Lekin woh so raha tha. And-

Kritika : Oh! Pagal jab so raha tha toh kiss kyu kiya?

Kavya : It's impossible between us! *sighs*

Kritika : Aisa kyu?

Kavya : Kya tujhe Karan ko dekh ke kabhi aisi feeling aati hai ki uska aur tumhara kabhi kuch hona impossible hai.

Kritika : Kayi baar! Kyuki woh financially bohut strong hai aur meri uske saamne bhala kya aukaat.

Kavya : Mein financially baat nahi kar rahi.

Kritika : Hmm? Then? Fir kya problem hai?

Kavya : I- It's just-!! Woh aur mein ek nahi ho sakte.

Kritika : Haan lekin kyu? Ek minute! Tune married bande se pyaar toh nahi kar liya?

Kavya (blushes) : Paagal!!! Mein maar dungi tujhe~ Aisa nahi hai! He's not married... *mutters* Yet...!

Kritika : Yaar! Tu mujhe paagal kar degi. Batana bhi nahi hai. Par puchna bhi hai. Aisi kya baat hai jo tu aur woh ek nahi ho sakte?

Kavya (gloomily) : Bas aisa samajh lo ki... ek barrier hai. Hamare beech!

Kritika (sighs) : Jab tera mann kare toh bata dena. Kyuki, mujhe teri baatein na samajh aa rahi. *yawns* Chal so jaa!! Good night~

Kavya (nods) : Good night!

Kritika toh chaadar odh ke aankhein band kar lait gayi. Par bechari Kavya, apni taangein sikode wahi baithi na jaane kya sochti reh gayi.

***

Next day
Kaera's home
Evening ~ 6:38 PM

Kaera ke bhavya aleeshaan ghar me iss waqt Julia ek bathing robe liye waha khadi hui thi.

Ye bathing chamber tha, jo sirf aur sirf Kaera ke personal use ke liye hi tha.

*Splutter*

Paani me tairte hue woh Julia ke nazdeek aayi.



Julia : You have to get ready, Miss!

Kaera : I know Julia! Agar main nahi bhi jaana chaahu toh bhi mujhe jaana hi hai.

Julia : Then, what's the problem in it?

Kaera : Problem is that- Huhhh!???

Kaera ke bol akasmaat hi muh me hi dabb ke reh gaye. Woh jhatse Julia ki orr palti, jo use dekh muskura rahi thi.

Kaera : Y-You-!? You can understand Hindi?

Julia (smiles) : Mm-hmm! I have been learning Hindi for the last two years Miss.

Kaera (surprised) : You-!!? But you didn't even tell me!

Julia (winks) : I told you. Just now!

Kaera (smiles) : Can you speak as well?

Julia : I'm learning Miss! Although I can't speak for now. However, I'm able to understand it now.

Kaera (sighs) : That's a relief. It's good now.

Julia : So? Don't you want to get ready?

Kaera : Y-Yes!

Woh pool se nikal ke aayi aur bathing robe pehen apne room ki orr chal di aur theek peeche peeche Julia bhi chal padi.

***

Night ~ 7:40 PM
Veer's home

"Kuch rakhna toh nahi hai na?"

"Nahi nahi! Hum jald hi laut aayenge."

"Wese bhi hotel hi jaa rahe hai, right?"

"Yeah!"

Awaaz thi Tej aur Veer ki jo ghar se baahar nikal car me baithne jaa rahe the.

Veer : Ek minute! Ghost kaha gayi?

Tej : Ghost?

Veer : Arre hamari Rolls Royce. Kaha gayi woh?

Tej : Ahnn! That's- W-Woh-

Veer : Hmm?

Tej : Actually! Tum gussa toh nahi karoge na?

Veer : Kya hua? Bataiye na!

Tej : Actually, mein Arohi and Kavya ko driving sikha rahi thi. Mene unse promise kiya tha.

Veer : Toh thukwa di?

Tej : N-Nahi! Woh- Woh bas halka sa scratch laga hai aur side ka mirror thoda sa ukhda hai. Mene repair ke liye use bheja hai. Uska kharcha mein hi uthaungi. So- So please-

Veer ne aage aate hue uske sarr par pyaar se haath rakha,

Veer : Baat uski nahi hai dii. Paiso ki koi baat hi nahi hai. I don't care about that. Aur, mein gussa kyu karunga?

Tej : Nahi lekin galti meri hai na. Mujhe dusri waali car me unhe sikhani chahiye thi. Ye Scorpio me. Mein unhe jaan boojh ke usme le gayi. Kyuki mein bhi flaunt karna chahti thi.

Veer (smiles) : It's okay! Don't worry! Bas, mujhe turant hi bata diya kariye. Chhipaya mat kariye.

Tej (nods) : M-Mein dhyaan rakhungi. Ab chale?

Veer (nods) : Hmm!

Ghost repairing ke liye gayi hui thi, toh Veer ne Scorpio hi nikaal li. Andar se Bhumika bhi taiyaar hoke aa hi rahi thi.

Aur inn sabhi ko nyota aaya tha ~ Casa Belle ki orr se.

Veer jaanta tha aisa kuch Aadesh zaroor karega aur isliye woh taiyaar baitha tha.

Jaan boojh ke Veer waha jaa raha tha. Woh jaanta tha Aadesh ne use kuch neecha dikhaane ke liye hi ye plan kiya hoga. Ya woh pehle se hi ye karna chaah raha hoga aur Veer bas uss time uske aade me aa gaya.

Jo bhi tha, aaj raat Veer ko saari situation apne control me leni thi. Aaj harr vyakti ko use apne favour me lena tha.

Bhumika jaise hi ready hoke aayi toh Veer ko dekh puchi,

Bhumika : H-How do I look Veer?




Veer (glances) : Hmm? *smiles* Amazing dii!

Tej ne bas Veer ko dekha. Boli kuch nahi. Woh sabhi jab porch se bahar nikal baahar car me baithne ke liye hue, toh Bhumika toh andar chali gayi baithne. Magar, Veer ke andar jaane se pehle Tej ne uska haath thaam use rok liya.

Veer : ???

Tej : Aur mein? Mere baare me kuch nahi kehna hai?




Veer (smiles) : Do I really have to tell you ki aap kitni sundar lag rahi ho? Hmm?

Tej (blushes) : Thank you! Aur haan, tumhe bolna padega. You are looking great too~ Come! Jaldi chalo! Waha pakke se kuch hoga. Aur iss baar mein control nahi karungi khud ko.

Veer : Don't worry! I'll handle it well!

Woh sabhi apne ghar se ravana ho gaye.

***

Casa Belle~
Night ~ 8:12 PM

*Chitter* *Chatter*

Logo ki chehel pehel thi, gaadiyo ka shor parking area me ho raha tha. Tamaam bade se bade log ek ke baad ek aa rahe the. Red carpet unke swagat ke liye bicchaya gaya tha.




Kehna galat nahi tha ki Casa Belle sirf Mumbai ki hi nahi, balki poore Maharashtra ki sabse mehngi aur luxury hotel thi.

Ye kehna bhi galat nahi tha ki Casa Belle interior, luxury aur services ke maamle me kisi 7 star hotel se kam nahi thi.




Aadesh Jaisinghani kaafi raees tha. Aur usne apna adhiktar paisa iss hotel me jhok diya tha.

Veer, Tej aur Bhumika jaise hi hotel ke baahar pahuche, alishaan hotel ko dekh unke muh band the.

[Be careful ~]

Pari ki awaaz achanak hi mann me goonji.

'Kyu? Kya kuch gadbad mehsoos ho rahi hai tumhe?'

[I'm getting some vibes. Just be alert!]

'Alright!'

Bhumika : No wonder, he dared to hire our chefs.

Tej : Kehna toh nahi chahiye lekin ye hotel waqai 5 star se bhi upar ki lag rahi hai.

Bhumika : I agree!

Veer ne dono ko car se utarwaya aur woh car park karne laga.

Abhi woh utar ke aaya hi tha ki, uski nazar kisi pe padi.

Veer : Huh?? Arohi di??

Saamne Arohi khadi hui thi.




Arohi : Huhh!!? Veeerrrrr????




Woh turant hi tezz qadmo ke saath uske paas aayi.

Veer : Aap yaha?

Arohi : Hmm! Mujhe aur Kavya ko toh Kritika ne bulaaya tha. Casa Belle ka owner Kritika ke uncle lagte hai. Aur mein aayi thi iss aim se ki kuch pata lag sake.

Veer : I see! But mujhe usne directly invitation bheja hai.

Arohi (frowns) : Something is wrong!

Veer : Yeah!! He might be framing something.

Arohi : Thoda chaukanna rehna.

Veer (nods) : Hmm!! Kavya kaha hai?

Arohi : Woh Kritika ke saath upar balcony me hai. Look! There~

Veer ne dekha toh paaya ki Kavya Kritika ki balcony me upar kuch pictures click karne me lagi hui thi.




Tab tak Arohi aur Bhumika bhi use dhoondhte hue peeche aa gayi. Dono vi Arohi se bhi mili aur unhe pata chala ki woh kyu invited thi.

Veer aage badha hi tha aur hotel me pravesh karne hi wala tha jab peeche se kaafi shorgul hua aur photos click hone ki awaazein aane lagi.

Nazar padte hi use ek nahi do do baar aashcharya hua.

Pehla toh ye ki-




Sonia!!!!

Apni yellow coloured beautiful dress me cameramans ke aakarshan ka kendr bani hui thi.

'Shit!!! Miss Sonia? Yaha?'

Woh kisi ke saath chalte hue aa rahi thi.



Aur dusra jhatka use tab laga jab-




Kaera!!!

*Click* *Click*

Jiske ird gird tamaam photographers, uske bodyguards aur toh aur uski family se leke uski personal maid Julia aur secretary Ruchika bhi maujood thi.

'Goddamn it!!!'

Aur agar kahi Suhana bhi rahi, toh na jaane Veer inn sab ke saath saath Aadesh ko kaise jhel payega bhala?

Pari uski sthiti samajh sakti thi. Aur iss baar harr waqt seducing tone rakhne waali Pari bhi bas yahi boli,

[I wish you good luck!]
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
1 ya do din late hai ye update. Mein ujjain me hu. Kyu hu, kya kar raha hu woh mein batana zaroori nahi samajhta ab. Bas, rakhi me yaha aa gaya hu. The artwork is done by again our man Diplomatic Gladiator A big thanks to him. Update consists of 8.1k words. Target apna wahi hai guys. 150. Like thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka.
Dhanyavaad!

 

[PS10]

Brilliant update

 

[Werewolf]

Intezar Ka fal Meetha Hota Hai

JABARDAST UPDATE

Maja aa gaya bhai. Please continue within the time possible

Bahut dino baad aaya… par hamesha ki tarah behtareen…aapki jadui lekhni ka jadu hum par sar chad gaya….

Mazza aa gya bhai awesome update. I hope next updates apne usual timing pe aayegi.

Kya suspense built-up kiya hai. Aage aage dekhte hai hota hai kya. Veer has to prove himself in both fronts - personal relationships and career goals.

Bahut hi mazedar update Bhai

nice1

Super awesome update luvd it brother extremely excited for your next update eagerly waiting veer kya reveal krne wala he and nidhi aur veer ke kuch cute moments luvd the whol part bht dino baad kuch action dikha ....takecare

nice update

Nic update

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Gazab .
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Nice super Update.
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Veer aage kya krega ye dekha jaega.
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Excellent update and beautiful story

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Super Update.
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Gazab .
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Ab aage kya hoga dekha jae.
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Fight dekh ke maja a gya waise mere according ragini ko accept kr lena cahiye but phir Nidhi bhi to hai samasya hai veer ke liye idhar jae ya udhar hae or abhi to tej arohi baki hai unka bhi seen hai udhar kavya Sonia Nataliya ye bhi baki h
Smjh nhi a Raha hai Bhai veer kisko rakhega

Aadesh ne Tamanna ko veer ke food truck ko tabah karne mai madad ke liye paise diye

Agar veer ke samne agar uskA food truck ko koi tabah karne ki koshish karta toh tamana aur aadesh ko uski power ka pata chal jata lekin tamana ke Karan woh nahi ho saka

Beautiful update and amazing story

Nice behtarin mast awesome update bro

Mind blowing story and beautiful excellent writing skills keeps rocking stories

तमन्ना ने जो भी किया वो मजबूरी में किया और उसने ये महसूस भी किया जो वो कर रही है गलत है... पर कहते हैं ना मजबूर लोगों के पास कई बार ऑप्शन नही होते...
तमन्ना क्यो मजबूर है इसका भी खुलासा हो गया पर अब देखने वाली बात ये होगी वीर के सामने जब वो प्रस्तुत होगी तो अपनी मजबूरी को कैसे बयान कर पाएगी...!!!
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वीर और प्राची हॉस्पिटल में अपने वर्कर्स से मिलने आते हैं, जहां वीर को उन के बारे में जानकारी मिलती है एक वर्कर से, जिन्होंने उनके फूड ट्रक को तोड़ फोड़ दिया था...
वीर एक अच्छे ऑनर की तरह सभी वर्कर्स के अच्छे होने की कामना के तौर पर सारा खर्च उठाने का वायदा करता है साथ में उनकी सैलरी भी देने का वायदा करता है...!!!
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वीर को मिशन मिल चुका ~ कासा वेला के मालिक को सबक सिखाना...
सबक सिखाना कितना हानिकारक होता है ये तो वक्त ही बताएगा, पर जो भी होगा उन सभी के लिए अच्छा ही होगा जिनको उस मालिक से अब तक नुकसान हुआ है..
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बल्हार और करन के द्वारा वीर को उस गैंग और रिपोर्टर की जानकारी मिल जाती है..
और फिर गैंग से भिड़ने के लिए चल देता है...
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गैंग वालों की ऐसी तैसी करके घर आ जाता है..
रागिनी से उसकी वार्तालाप होती है जो की एक असफल वार्तालाप थी..
खैर ये देवर भाभी का रिश्ता कब तक चलेगा ये तो वक्त बताएगा..!!
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इवेंट रखा है वीर में जिसमे सभी लोग सम्मिलित होते हैं..
जहां वीर कुछ बड़ा अनाउंसमेंट करने वाला है जिसके लिए उसने कई फूड ब्लॉगर्स को भी बुलाया हुआ है.. अब ये क्या बड़ा होगा इसके लिए अगला अपडेट...!!!
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इस मैथड में ऐसा क्या है.. जल्द से बताओ हमे..
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बहुत ही खूबसूरत और बड़ा अपडेट.. बड़ा नही बहुत बड़ा अपडेट है ये तो
कमाल लाजवाब लिखते हो...!!!
और कोई तारीफ नही क्योंकि तारीफ के लिए ये शब्द काफी नही...

Bhot he shaandaar update bhai or hr baar ki trha is baar bhee sb kuch itney achey sey likha aap ney maza aa gaeya. Or update ki khushi k saath saath is baat ki bhee khushi hai k aap apney city mey wapis sey settled ho gaey to ab update regular pahley ki trha he aaey ge. Next update ka intizaar rahey ga. Keep writting and good luck bro

Nice update bro

Superb update

Wait for next update Bhai

Nice update

बहुत ही सुन्दर प्रस्तुति Werewolf भाई।

वीर का साराभाई के आदमियों को अच्छा सबक सिखाया लेकिन उसे आदेश को भी अपनी परिचय दे देना चाहिए ताकि वो आगे कुछ करने से पहले दो बार सोच ले की उसको भी बहुत कुछ हो सकता है।
और वीर एवम रागिनी के बीच में ये बिलकुल भी सही नही हुआ हैं। वीर को ऐसे माना नही करना चाहिए था क्योंकि वो रागिनी ही थी जिसने सबके विरोध के बाद भी हमेशा वीर को सपोर्ट किया और हमेशा उसका साथ दिया है वो भी सबके खिलाफ होने के बाद भी।

Awesome Update Bhai

Awesome update bro

Sabse pehlay thanks god aapki pareshani kuch Kam hui then congratulations ki naye shehar me settle hui. Aur abhi waqai me kuch cheezon per aapka control nahi hoga plus new city me jamne me time lagega but it's part of the life. Ab story per aate hai pari ka naya version bhi veer ke Aisa hi Naya lag raha hoga jaisay aapko Naya city lol.

Chef on wheel dobara khada ho gaya $agni ko bhi apne dil ki jagah dimagh se sochna chahiye ki woh rishtey ko Luka chipi se ho nibha saktey hai dono ne ek doosre ko burey waqt me support kiya hai to kiya hi accha na ho ki is rishtey ko aisay hi chalney de coz naam Dene se boundaries ban jaati hai.

Aadesh apni business ke liye apne sarey rivals ko khatam karna chahta hai by hooked aur crooked lekin is baar ghalat aadmi se panga le liya hain. Prachi mausi ki galani bhi jald hi pyar me aur pyar paane me badal jayega. Rahi Nidhi mam to unka woh khud Jane na bhujaye bhuj rahi hai na lagaye lag paa Rahi hai upar se Shreya ke sath veer ko dekh kar uski hasrato ke chiragh ko thoda jaley they woh phir wahi bujh gaye.

Sab se important jiska besabri se wait hoga aur uske liye update ka wait hoga woh hai hourglass method.humau bhi intezar rahega iska. Khush rahey aur jaldi update ke sath miley.

Bhut shandar update bro

Awesome

Finally something...... pichle episode se soch raha tha whats this hourglass method, ab agle mein clarity mill jayegi

Bhtreen

nice come back

Super update

Supper fantastic update janab

Kay Pranjal hi Sarabhai hai??

Update is super super

jab update aaya to Werewolf ke sabhi readers ka reaction

Super duper wonderful awesome excellent update

Arrreeeee ye kya ho gaya????

Yaha ki to Kaya palat ho gyi...
new theme??? Aur ye kya?? Tab se only 1 update aaya?? Where were u???

Jabarzast update

Jabardasttt Updateee

Ab lagta hai iss Tamanna ko badi hi tamanna ke saath Veer sambhalegaa. Jis tarah se usne Veer ka nuksaan kiya hai Veer iski saza toh jarur dega. Aur iski suruaat hochuki hai Surya se aur uske aadmiyon se.

Yeh Casabella ka owner Aadesh ab jaldi hi kisi ko Aadesh dene ke kaabil nhi rahega. Usne lalach mein aake galat bande se panga le liya hai. Aur iski saza Veer usse alag tarike se hi dega.

Ab dekhte hai iss Hourglass method exactly kya hai aur yeh method Veer ke parivaar ke upar kaise laagu hota hai.

Bhai ji lajawab update maja a Gaya ise kahate Hain asali writer

Nice update

This thing is happening every where in every stories of story section

Only 2-3 people do the proper comments and rest just write 3-4 copy pasted words

I have also noticed that some people does not even read the story just visit the thread and paste the copied comments. (I will not take there names)

I have seen few days ago that 2-3 people read 3-4 stories in just 1 mins. In this 1 mins they understand the whole content of 3-4 stories.

This is like one type of Joke. We waste our time just for these things.

Shandar update bro

Nice update

Nice update

Super & fantastic update

Nice update bro

So after a long time but worth it update.

Update jabardast tha, action and kind of heartwarming.

Pichle updates me sonali ko bhi apna bana liya. But as I thought sonali and veer ka relation Suman and veer ke relation se alag hoga.

Ab veer kamyabi ki sidhiyo par aage badhne ki koshish kar rha hai to rukavate bhi aayengi.

Lekin Casa Bella ke owner ko nahi pata ki veer power ke mamle me usse kahi aage hai.

Now about Ragini

I don't think that was genuine reason to say no for marriage. Mtlb unka rishta aisa nahi hai jisme shadi impossible ho.
Abhi apne relation ko chupana pad rha hai kyoki abhi tak unhone kisiko batane ki koshish nahi ki.

Agar vo chahe to bas family ko convince karne me thoda effort lagega. Society ki taraf se koi problem nahi hogi. Shadi ke bina pati vala pyar dega, Aisa lagta hai jaise ragini ko apni rakhail banane ki baat keh rha ho.

I know abhi veer shadi karne ki situation me to bilkul nahi hai, abhi itne jhanjhat hai life me. But vo ragini ko dusre dhang se samjha sakta tha. Veer's response to ragini is like injustice to her.

Don't know kahani kis direction me aage badhegi. But agar veer sirf kisi ek se hi shadi karega to ragini ke sath sath use aur kaiyo ke ke sath bhi injustice karna padega. And if he marries more than one, then ragini bhi uska sath deserve karti hai as a husband.

Abhi kahani me bahut kuch hai hone ko but all this happening because ab tak story me kon main heroine hai vo clear nahi hua hai. Nidhi yaa kaira yaa koi aur.
Is tarah ke jawab se usne Ragini ko to ek tarah se out kar hi diya hai uss list se.
Veer nidhi ko apna banana chahta hai lekin jab yahi sawal usse nidhi puchegi jo ragini ne kaha, kya tab bhi uska jawab vahi hoga jo is baar tha.
Ye bhi sach hai ki ragini ke character ko utni importance nahi mili jo shayad milni chahiye thi. Kahani me uski presence kuch khass najar nahi aati, bechari bas har baar veer ko jate hue hi dekhti reh jati hai kabhi, rajasthan, delhi, las vegas yaa paris aur bas intezar karti rehti hai.


Maybe I'm judging too quickly...
Just can hope best for favourite characters like Nidhi, Ragini, Kavya and Bhavna.

Bhavna abhi Karnataka gayi hai may be vahan bhi koi khatra aayega uspar.

Eagerly waiting for next update

Nice update

Fantastic update bro maza aa gaya hai


Waiting for the next update

Very nice update Bhai

awesome excellent update

Zabardast update bhai keep posting

pura ka pura gang khatam hona chahiye sath sath jo bhi nuksaan hua uski bharpai bhi aur mai to yahan tak kahunga ki dusam ko puri tarah khatam kar do ya is condition me pahuncha do ki dobara khada na ho paye kabhi wo

Speach less... ...

Waiting for Kiara update...

superb update... maza aa gaya ... but ragini possesive ho rahi hai ... wrong

Fantastic update bro lage raho but bahut intejar karaya aapne aage esa na karna

Back with a bang, waiting for future excitement.

Back with a bang, waiting for future excitement.

First let me again congratulate you on your new job. It is good to know that you have settled nicely.

Yeh to pata tha ki business me Veer ki ab rivalry bade businessmen se hogi, Tamanna jaisi blogger to ek front hai, iske peeche asli kaun tha weh bhi pata chal gaya. Ab Aadesh ki to khair nahin lekin padh ker afsos huya ki Tamanna ka weh fayda utha raha hai. Veer ne bhi aaj kal ki social media ki sthiti ko dekhte huye Shreya aur Abha ko tayyar kerna shuru ker diya hai. Kafi dino baad Veer ki ladayi dekhne ko mili, maza aa gaya.

Aakhir 'Ding' ki awaj aa hi gayi. Ye wali Pari to badi rahasyamaye hoti ja rahi hai, are ego ko chhod ker usko ab 'Mummy' bol hi de. Hahahah... Interesting tussle between Veer and Pari to dominate each other.

Ragini ke sath kafi dino ke baad interaction hua, per so sad. Weh to patni banana chahti hai.

'Kitne log the!?' ... wah... wo famous dialog...

Ab ye 'Hourglass Method kya hai'... Shayad marketing stunt... Jab tak Hourglass me sand khatam hoti hai, usase pehle hi dish serve ho jayegi...

Yes, Arohi is looking beautiful...

Ab dekhte hain ki Aadesh ko kaise Veer expose kerta hai... Shayad Tamanna ke jariye se hi, jiska pata Veer ne laga liya hai...

Wonderful update Bhai

By the way, is Arohi and Kaeras' pic of the same model...

Super bro nice update

Fantastic update

Super update bhai

Mast jabardast jhakkas update sir ji
aise hi likhte rahiye bahut bahut dhanyawad

Nice

Niceupdate

Nyc update bro as expected
bss ab speed continue kro updates ki

Thank u for the update. Der aaye par durust aaye


145 likes ho gaye hain. So expecting ki next update ready hogi. Because kal morning tak 150+ hone wali hain.

Next Update ka Intejar rahega bhai

Nice

Waah, kya kamaal ka update tha Bhai saath hi dhamekedaar bhi. Ab aage dekhte hain ki Veer kaise Aadesh Ko sabak sikhata hai. Congrats for giving us an amazing update dear bro. As usual, shall be awaiting your upcoming update anxiously

Update late aaya hai but story ka track jara sa bhi nahi bigdya
Thank you for your update sir
Interesting mindbolwing Update
Dear sir

super update bro fantastic update

VEER KA PAHLE SAMNA ATISH BHAI SE HUA PHIR SLOGAN SE PHIR NIGHT WAIKER SE AUR SABSE KHATARNAK SAMNA CRIMSON SE HUA DEKHATE HAI AAGE KON KON SE NAYE VILLAIN AATE HAI VEER KI ZINDAGI MAI

BHAI STORY EK DUM KAAMAL KI HAI STORY PADH KAR LAGTA HAI KI HUM KOI FILM DEKH RAHE HAI ONE OF THE BEST STORY IN XFORUM SITE

Mazedar Update Tha Bhai..

Cesa bella ke owner ko lagta hai Paisa ka bahot jyada hi ghamand chhad gaya hai iss liye veer se panga le liya.

veer ne surya or uske sathiyo ko thik se dho dala..

Very good please don't stop the pace now

Very Nice update...

Awesome update

Really?

Superb awesome update bhai

Kaafi saari baate h bolne ko jo ki maine ni ki kaafi time se sivaye like krne ke, to feedback to ni dia n of course u took a long break too... I knw the reason as u told to all of us... Well let's get back to the story toh batane ki zrurat ni h har update next level hota h or aaj b whi hua but kya kre u made us greedy, afterall...Khair ye sb to chlta rhega.. Bat kre story ki to ragini ke lie dil se bura lga, bechari ne itna Kuchh kia veer ke lie badle me bs veer se zda expect kr baithi.. Infact zda b ni bolunga har wo ladki ya ladka jo samne wale k lie itna Kuchh krta h, use apna har tarah ka pyar deta h to itna lagaav ke Baad wo usse shadi ke khwab to dekhega hi or kyu wo aisa ni chahega ya chahegi.. But saamne wala use saaf mna kr de to wo toh toot h jaega.. Khair dekhte h ragini ko uske pyar k badle Kitna milta h.. Ab aate h Apni Nidhi madam pe toh inka or veer ka pyar bda hi uljha hua h well veer ki taraf se to clear hii h bs nidhi h uljhi hui h... Or idhar food trucks ka scene ho gya.. Khair veer ne galat krne walo ko unki sza de di h.. Ab jo ye veer Kuchh nya reveal krne wala h wo dekhte h kya hone wala n I'm hoping k story ab 1 update/week wale purane schedule pr chal pdegi agle update se baaki to sir aap hi bta skte h... Baki bhot sara pyar n congratulations for the new job ye bdia se settle b ho gye...waiting for next update till then aise hi pyaar loot te rho

Bahut ekdum badhiya gajab update brother

Bahut shaandar update diya hai Werewolf bhai.....
Nice and lovely update.....

Waiting for next update

Beautiful update bhai

Ding nice start of business arc

nice
update keep going ....

Waiting for next update bhai

waiting new update

Behtarin super update

Next update ka intezar rahega Bhai

Fantastic update
Mind blowing

Waiting

AMAZING AWESOME FANTASTIC UPDATE BHAI THANKS

Waiting

waiting

स्वाति जी की बात से मै बिल्कुल सहमत हूं कि तमन्ना वैसी लड़की नही है जो अब तक दिखाया गया है।
एक लड़की जो मजबूरन हालात के मारे गई ।

रागिनी भाभी का भी कोई दोष नही । वो वीर को अपने लाइफ पार्टनर के रूप मे फील करने लगी , यह भी हालात की देन थी। वो जवान है , खुबसूरत है , दिल मे अब भी वैवाहिक जीवन की एक सुखद फीलिंग्स है , वीर को अपना हसबैंड मानने लगी है , ऐसे मे वो वीर से क्या आशा कर सकती है ! शायद वीर ने इस सिचुएशन को सही ढंग से टैकल नही किया।

प्राची ---- एकलौती लड़की जो अपने बाॅस को शेफ कहकर सम्बोधित करती है । चोर दरवाजे से यह लड़की वीर के दिल मे दस्तक देने लगी है।

लेकिन अपडेट के लास्ट पैराग्राफ और इस अपडेट का शीर्षक " The hoursgalass method " बिल्कुल ही समझ नही आया । ऐसा क्या है इस शीर्षक मे ?

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट वेयरवोल्फ भाई।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग अपडेट।

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Nice update

Ek baat samjh na aayi ki jab gundo ko maar pitai hi karni thi to ye Tamanna ko kyu bheja gawa aur veer ko wahan se kyu hataya gaya kya wo log dar gaye the jo unhone aisa kiya jabki main target wahi hona chahiye tha

Zabardast update

Bahut badiya update bhai

Jabardast update bhai..

Waiting for next

Fanstastic update bhai baki story ka review dena humare bus ki bat nahi to pl. Maf karna. Humare me utna dimag hi nahi he ki story ke bare me kuchh likh paye.

BHAI NEXT UPDATE KYA ISS WEEK SUNDAY KO AAYEGA KYA

Romanchak update ..surya gang ko achche se dho diya veer ne .
aur ab casse bella ke owner ko sabak sikhane ka mission bhi mil gaya hai .

Waiting for next update

awsome update bhai kiera ki entry kb ho rahi hye

waiting waiting waiting

Ab agla ansh kab.

BAHUT SHAANDAAR LAJAWAAB JABARDAST EXCELLENT MIND BLOWING AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI

Waiting for next update

Bhai mujhe sex story zayada pasand hai lakin apki story ka pata ni ak alag chaska hai jo din main do dafa check karta hun update aye ya ni jab bhe koi update parhta hun tab ye ni kahne ko dil karta sex karo sabse bus itna zaror ho sab main pyar atoot ho or khushi ke se rahe ak love wali feeling aye or sab mile or pyar karte rahe

Waiting for the next update

Aisi jagho par real photo nahi lagate... thoda to dhyan rakh bhai privacy ka

Waiting

Shandaar....Jabardast....Update yaara....
Mazaaaa aa gaya Bhai waah....

waiting update

It was a good update. Enjoyed every bit of your story.Looking forward to your next scintillating update. Thanks warewolf bhai

Waiting

Waiting for next update Werewolf bhai

Congratulations for 3400

wait for update

Congratulations on 3400 pages

Coming back with my review,

UPDATE 157
Finally sonali and Veer got intimate and it was quite awaited. Bhavna wants to continue her work as she enjoys her work.This variant of pari is troublesome for Veer in sensual matters, she wants Veer to surrender and she is trying all her effort. She activated mystic touch in a wrong situation. Tej got her opportunity to spent sometime with her brother alone and she enjoyed it.
I think she is trying to understand Veer and her feelings for Veer.

UPDATE 158
So now Veer is focussed on PROFIT PATH. Aabha and shreya are going to enjoy their dreams and that will profitable for veer (2 birds with an arrow).A plan laid for chef on wheels and it was quite good as it fooled veer . Casa Belle management is messing with Veer. Now we are going to see some business games and strategies.

UPDATE 159
Aadesh messed with the wrong person this time. Was he unaware of veer's heroics in France? How could you mess with a person who fought a whole fuckin country. Tamanna will get her consequences of her deeds.Now it will be a 1v1 with aadesh and his business.
Karan is a friend in need and futuristic brother in law. On ragini's dilemma , I can't think of any solution for what ragini is asking for?It hurts but we have to accept the pain sometimes (many times).


Now, congrats for ur new job and may u prosper in life with huge success.

You haven't given any reply to my earlier reviews but this time "I WANT A REPLY "
I dont do any concession in review, infact I give review from where I left.

Strange

Congratulations on 3400 pages

Congratulation for 3400 pages....


Waiting for the next update Werewolf

For completed 3400 pages on your story thread......

Congratulations for completing 3400 pages Bhai on your thread......

3400 page hone par hardik badhai

Behtareen zabardast shaandar update
Food truck ko todne walo ko unki saza .IL gayi ab baari h aisa kerwane wale ki matlab casa Bella k owner ka
Ragini n tow apne Dil saari bhadhas nikal Dali
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h aage kia hota h

Jabardast update

Yar why don’t you use speech to text AIs. Type karna hi nahi padega!

Kaafi saare AI tools available hai online, speech ko direct text me convert karne ke liye.
Bad mei usko edit manually kar lo.

Apka kaafi time aur effort Bach jayega..!

Me thinks it’s an idea with exploring.

Waise shuru se hi lag raha tha ki veer ki ek biwi to ho hi nahi sakti…
Vo jab matrimony mei settle hoga to wo ek polygamous marriage hi hogi with multiple partners…
Isme bhi kai biwiyan uski incestous hongi jaise uski saari behen aur bhabhi.

Itna to apki last story se hi samajh aa Gaya tha.
Kisi ka dil nahi rootega!

Sahi guess kiya na

I just imagined you writing a sex with audio to text…
Yes veer.. yes.. aise hi…
ah ah ah ahhhhh….
Aur zor se!!

The person in the next room be like -
Yar ye akele akele hi role play Khel raha hai…
How imaginative is this guy…!
Also is Veer his alter ego!!?

Thoda embarrassing ho sakta hai..
Koi na bhi sune, khud ko hi sex sounds simulate karte Sunna aur ek male naam lena…
Major gay vibes
You are right…
Ap type hi karo!!!

Par vahin, while describing an action sequence will give you an action director wali feeling…
Vo sahi lag raha hai…

Aur normal story telling mei - as you describe the sequences, ek Narrator wali feeling aayegi…
Jaise kai movies mei intro scenes mei hota hai!!

I just imagined all this shit while re-reading your last updates
Now I am wondering what you sound like

congratulations bro for 3400 complete page

3400 pages poore hone par dher sari badhaiyan aur shubhkamanaye....

Bhai, agle update ka intzar adhik mat karvana ji

Bhai next update kab aaega?

Waiting for the next update

कहानी बड़ी ही उम्दा पड़ाव पर आ चुकी है।

रागिनी के संग छपाक छई तो कर सकता है। लेकिन ना नही दे सकता,

ओर इधर लाइन इतनी बड़ी है। कि उसको तोड़ेगा कैसे, मोस्ट ब्यूटी फुल 4 लेडी तो बाहर ही है घर से, ओर वो सब अजीज बनेगी, मेडम संग उसका उस वक्त से रिश्ता है जब वो मर रहा था।


भाई अब तोड़ा रहम करो और 7 दिन में कम से कम एक उपडते दो,

Aaj aayega kya update

Bhai update kab tak aayega

Waiting for update

Any chances of upadte tonight?

Update

Waiting

Waiting

Nice story

Waiting janab

इंतज़ार है

Waiting for that

Waiting bro

waiting next update

रात्रि का वेट होगा

Intejar hai

Besabari se intezaar kar rahe hai next update ka Werewolf bhai....

Waiting

waiting for update

Ohk Brother Waiting.

Tik..Tok..tik...tok....TikTok...tiktok.....

I guess.....
Every Xforum readers are awaking for most precious story update.
1. Raj-- Hero of the family &
2. Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

इंतज़ार

Ek aur deadline missed….

Enjoy Raksha Bandhan

Ab to late night bhi khatam ho gya ......

Bhai subha ke kitne baje tak update aiyega

Writer Be Like -

Yhi hota hai

Bhai tune update k liy to leave nahi liya hoga...ye Thora jyada lag raha hai...

waiting waiting waiting

Aur kitna...

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Waiting......................................

Update kidhar hai

Bhai tum time pe update nahi de sakte to deadline kis liye dete holast 10 to 12 update me esahi kar rahe ho!! koi problem ho to deadline pe hi bata do ki mujhe kuch problem hai.
Story is fantastic and mind-blowing, please maintain your timetable its my humble request.

Waiting for update Bhai.....

It's 31stAug. After noon. Still, update not in sight. Lagta hai, hamein aur Kahi samay intezaar mein guzaarna padega Motrin

aa jao bhai

Pratiksha agle rasprad update ki

Bhai update kab aayega

30 is moth le last me hai

Ek din update aayega

mere karan arjun aayenge,, update bhi saath layenge

Bhaii aap deadline mt diya kro kyuki recently 5-6 update se aap deadline me update nhi de pa rhe ho
Deadline k baad update k wait nhi kiya jaata
Lkn y bhi hai deadline de dete ho to ak aas mil jaati hai ki ab update aa jayega
Its my humble request
Please jldi se update de do

Intinja hogyi inteha ki

Waiting

Bhai busy ho gaye hai wait kro

bro, update

Next update bro

Jo bhi bhai bol rahe hain ki writer chutiya bana raha h ya kuch aur ulta seedha bol raha h please aisa kuch mat bolo jisse apna bhediya naraj ho haye, sirf yahi bacha is forum par jiski kahani achhi hain,
Already vj4u , Jay Sutar Enigma ja chuke, aur nain11ster bhi chale gaye h yahi bacha h bas,
At least de to rahe hain,

Sayad tabiyat kharab hai

Update kab ayegi bro

Itna lamba speech Dene ke baad .....ye comment..

Br0 werewolf 30,08,2023 Date Nikal Gayi Hai a0r Apki 160 number update Nhi Aayi Hai

No I disagree. An employed person won't say this. Jab job ki responsibility sar pe hoti h... to situation kesi hoti h... I know this... main frnds family ko time ni de paati kitni baar...

aur ye to story h ... most of the writers are here unemployed. You can tell just by their activity nd online time. Only a few are employed. Nd that's why it takes time.

Waiting bro

Miss me aapko galat nhi kah raha.. but aap sirf ek pahlu ko dekh rahe ho.. I know ek employed person ke pass time nhi hota.. kyuki Me khud Kai baar time nhi de pata Ghar me.. but jab bhi mere pass time hota hai me time deta hu..

Baat yaha par ye hai ki aap time de rahe ho kisi ko to us time pr aapko hona chahiye.. Insan jab apni baat pr hi nhi khara utrega to trust issues aayenge hi .. yadi aap kisi ko ek time pr milne bulaye or us time par aap naa jaye.. or esa har baar ho to samne wala bhi aapse yahi kahega.. or haa jisne ye bola hai ki excuses dhundh rahe hai ya falana.. to ye uski galti hai.. use esa nhi kahna chahiye tha.. but agar taarif hoti hai to aalochna bhi hoti hai.. ek writer ko ye sab dekhna hi padta hai.. aap sirf ek tarfa dekh rahi hai..

Dekho reader bhaiyon werewolf bhai ki personal life bhi hai agar wo abhi aa kar bol de ki mien story band karta hu toh kya tum kuch kar paoge nhi na toh unko liye yeh ulta sidha mat bolo pata lage vo story hi band karde yeh ke ulta sidha comment padh kar so please say only positive things

Waiting next update werewolf brother

Bhai update kab aayega bahot din ho gaye update ko

Fantastic update

Werewolf is so good in writing stories that people are fighting with each other. I can see only the bright side here as even critics shows us that they can't live without him and those who are fighting with those critics shows how much they love werewolf that even they will not listen anything.

The best part is werewolf is back with his awesomeness...

Ding... Editing....

Ding site pe traffic badhane wala hai

Hope episode 160 will be the turning point of veer's life. He will get more skills from new genere of pari.

Update 160 has been posted.

 

[Werewolf]

Index has been updated.

 

[Werewolf]

Update 161 kaisa hone wala hai, iska andaza laga sakte ho ju log. Jab itne saare log ek hi jagah par ek saath honge. Kaera with her family, Sonia with her family, Veer with his sisters aur upar se bade bade chefs, Tamanna, Casa Belle ka crew aur baaki VIPs.

 

[ruksanabegam234]

I would request werewolf to give the next update early like before...in 3 days... Else this time people will fight more.

You already raised the temperature of people very high with this great update and I am sure, they will be looking for the next update with nails between their teeth. So Good Luck

 

[peerdip Meena]

Bro dhamekdar update bro

 

[Neerav]

I'm waiting for next update even from now only

Lot of things will happen next
And that will be great and I'm sure ki ye scene ek update me khtm ni hoga so only hope ki jldi updates Mille

Bakki msst update as usual
Keep goining