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Thanks a lot bro!Amazing update Werewolf bhai, this time the mission is like finding a needle in a haystack, Veer has less endurance, he should spend some points on endurance next time
He ain't weak.Werewolf u rocks again.
But mere kiyal main veer ko itna weak nai show hona chahiye tha. Ziada bhi nai lkn isey thora ziada strong jitna show kia gaya hy. Otherwise keep it up
Prefix incest hai toh obviously incest will happen at some point. But aise ekdum se nahi. Sab kuch hoga sahi samay aane pe. Don't forget ki Veer ki family ne uske saath kesa behave kia tha. So aise me ekdum se incest toh hone se raha. It will happen. You will have to wait for it.Bhai sandaar update tha Yr apki story incest h or ab tak 300 pages se upar ja chuke h fatal 28 update pr khi bhi abhi tak incest nhi mila itna hi nhi abhi tak hero ka only 1 sex update aya h to ab isme kab tak next sex hoga hero ka ky oh incest m hoga ya other bhai ye nhi Keh rha ki sex jada dalo pr thoda to ho baki ap samjdar ho bas ik request h ki sex na shi pr kisi ke sath romance hi dikha do bhai bat galt lgi ho to bura na mana pr jo ab tak lga whi bta rha hu agle update ka intezaar rhega
Dhanyavaad!jahan uski sauteli bahan bhumika hairaan pareshaan thi ki ye ho kya raha hai suhaana aur veer ke bich... veer itna kuch suna diya phir bhi kyun suhaana chup thi.... wohi dusri taraf veer bhi hairaan pareshaan sath hi Gussa bhi aa raha tha ushe ki ye kaisa task hai... jis suhaana ne ushe har baar beijjati ki usiki madad karo wo ring dhund ke...
Well... Kashmakash mein fansha veer phir laut aaya ushi gali ushi ghar ke paas jahan uski dusri jindagi ki suruaat huyi thi... wo ghar jisme rehne wale teen log uske liye fikarmand the sath hi usse pyar aur care bhi karte the... par ye kaisi majburi ki wo chaah kar bhi abhi ke liye us ghar mein pravesh nahi kar sakta tha... Kyuki waha jaate hi nidhi ushe rok leti... kahi na jaane deti...
waise ghar ke bahar juhi aur shreya mil gayi... kuch baatein bhi huyi... juhi to ushe chhodne ka naam hi nahi le rahi thi... par shayad kuch promises ke chalte ant wo maan gayi...
veer ka khayal to ragini & family bhi to rakhti hai... waise us ghatana ke baad ekdum se ragini ka hriday parivartan ho gaya... ek waqt tha jab ragini ushe ignor kar deti thi... ya apne pati devar sang milke uske sath bura karne ke bare mein sochti thi... wohi ragini aaj uski kisi apne ki tarah khayal rakhti hai...
So finally veer ko us system ke jariye pata chal hi gaya ki wo chor kaha hai, chor ke piche nikla jaipur....btw us chor ke chalte bahut kuch jhel raha hai veer.... upar se wo chor jatin hai bada chalak.. veer to marte marte bacha train mein ushe pakadne ki koshish karte waqt.... ye Kaisa mission de diya veer ko..
upar se abhi bata bhi nahi rahi ke ki exactly abhi wo chor hai kaha...
kya veer us chor ko dhundh ke usse wo anguthi haasil kar paayega?
veer kab wapis nidhi ke ghar jaayega?
ragini jab jaan jaayegi ki veer kya karne gaya tha to uski reaction kya hogi?
let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills..
Ye chalaaki toh kuch bhi nahiupar se wo chor jatin hai bada chalak..
Don't compare me with other writers bro.Bhai ek baat karna Chahunga. Aap bahut acche lagte ho mujhe bahut pasand Aata Hai... But. Kahani bahut jyada Badi mat rakhna. Kahin Jyada time hone per aap Kahani bich Mein Na Chhod Do... Jaise "Raja Chauhan" bhai ne "Manhoos se mahan tak" me aur "enigma" bhai ne kia"Pyaar - 100 Baar " me... Kia
Story bahut Achcha likhate the lekin bich Mein Chhod Diya..
Baki Jaisi aapki ichcha
Raagini ki mom ka naam kya haiDon't compare me with other writers bro.
Story start kii hai toh complete bhi hogi.
And ye meri pehli story nahi hai.
So, chill!
Also, keep supporting!