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Update - 161 ~ Big Bash (2)​

Ab tak...

Kaera!!!

*Click* *Click*

Jiske ird gird tamaam photographers, uske bodyguards aur toh aur uski family se leke uski personal maid Julia aur secretary Ruchika bhi maujood thi.

'Goddamn it!!!'

Aur agar kahi Suhana bhi rahi, toh na jaane Veer inn sab ke saath saath Aadesh ko kaise jhel payega bhala?

Pari uski sthiti samajh sakti thi. Aur iss baar harr waqt seducing tone rakhne waali Pari bhi bas yahi boli,

[I wish you good luck!]

Ab aage...

Casa Belle's VIP room~
Night ~ 8:14 PM

"Neeche ka kya mahaul hai?" Aadesh ne apni shirt ki akhiri button lagaate hue peeche khadi apni assistant se pucha.

"Guests aate jaa rahe hai, Sir!" Assistant ne jawab diya. Haatho me uske Aadesh ka ek kaala coat tha.

Uske button lagaate hi woh assistant aage aayi aur usne coat Aadesh ko thamaaya. Coat daal, Aadesh ne sheeshe me khud ko dekha. Woh jach raha tha. Neeche se use music aur chehel pehel ka shor sunaayi de raha tha.

Upar ke floor par khud ki hotel ke ek VIP kamre me wo taiyaar ho raha tha.

Assistant : Hum neeche kab chal rahe hai, Sir?

Aadesh : Abhi nahi! Kaun chutiya khud ki party me sabse pehle pahuchta hai?

Assistant (smiles) : Fir?

Aadesh : Kuch important guests ko aa jaane do pehle. Unke aate hi hum neeche chal denge.

Assistant : Aapne kayi saare important log bulaaye hai, Sir. Unme se kuch toh aa bhi gaye honge.

Aadesh : Oh!

Assistant : Aap 'Chef on Wheels' waalo se kaise deal karne waale ho?

Aadesh (smirks) : Woh tum aaj hi dekh lena.

Assistant : Toh kya unse deal karne ke liye hi aapne ye itni badi party rakhi hai?

Aadesh (laughs) : Hahahaha! Paagal ho kya? Party toh mujhe pehle se hi deni thi apni hotel ke advertisement ke liye. 'Chef on Wheels' toh raaste me aaya bas ek chhota sa kankad hai, jo aaj raaste se nikaal diya jayega.

Assistant : Ohh!

Aadesh : Tum neeche nigrani rakhti raho! Mein nahi chaahta ki important guests ke saamne mein waha late pahuchu. Woh kehte hai na? First impression is the last impression.

Assistant (smiles) : Ji!!

Aur assistant apne haath me ek tab uthaate hue usme security cameras me kuch dekhne lagi.

***

Idhar neeche Veer, Arohi, Bhumika aur Tej aapas me mil chuke the aur hotel ki entry me qadam rakh rahe the jaha pehle se hi kuch bouncers security ke saath khade hue the.

Veer ne jaan boojh ke kuch derr delay kiya tha taaki tab tak Kaera aur Sonia dono pehle hi andar chali jaaye. Aur hua bhi yahi. Cameras ki shutters aur flash se tang aake, Sonia aur Kaera dono hi zyada derr tak waha khadi na reh saki. Kuch hi palo me woh dono andar thi.

Unke jaate hi Veer aur baaki sab security ke paas pahuche. Security ne unka invitation check kiya aur bina kisi samasya ke unhe andar jaane de diya.

Hotel ke premises me ghuste hi uski sundarta dekhne laayak thi. Dekh ke hi andaza lagaya jaa sakta tha ki akhir kitna paisa kharch kiya gaya tha iss khubsoorat structure ko taiyaar karne me.

Aapas me chalte chalte Bhumika hotel ki tareef karne se khud ko na rok paayi.

Bhumika : Very unique!

Tej (glances) : Hmm?

Bhumika : Tum logo ne dekha? Hotel me swimming pool ke liye inn logo ne hotel ke chaaro orr swimming pool bana diya. Pool ki width kam kar di par length itni badha di ki koi bhi araam se pool ka maza le sakta hai.

Arohi : Yes! I saw that too. Aur woh hotel ke 360° me swim bhi kar sakte hai.

Bhumika : Yes! A very unique structure.

Tej : Jagah ka acche se istemal kiya hai.

Bhumika : That's right!

Veer khamosh tha. Woh aisi luxury pehle hi Las Vegas aur France me dekh chuka tha. Uski nazre kahi aur hi jagah jagah scan karne me lagi hui thi.

Yaha balcony me khadi Kavya ne jab neeche se Veer ko aate dekha toh pehle toh woh chakit reh gayi aur fir baad me seedha neeche ki orr bhaagi. Kritika use peeche se awaaz deti rahi par ant me use bhi uske peeche peeche hi bhaagna pada.

Veer aur baaki sabhi hotel ki main entry ke gate par aa chuke the aur tabhi,

"Bhaiyaaaaaaaa~"

Ek awaaz Veer ke kaano me padi. Woh muskuraaya aur ek cute si ladki daud ke aake uske shareer se chipak gayi.

Kavya : Bhaiyaaaa~

Kavya Veer ko jamm ke jakde hue thi. Bechari ki khushi ka koi thikana nahi tha. Jise woh sabse zyada yaad kar rahi thi wo yaha aa chuka tha.

Kavya : Aap sab yaha?

Veer (smiles) : Kyu? Kya hume invitation nahi mil sakta?

Kavya : Ahh! Matlab aapko bhi invitation mila hai? Oye! Kritika, dekha na? Mere bhaiya ko bhi invitation mila hai.

Kritika jo peeche peeche daud ke aayi woh haafte hue apni saansein durust kar boli,

Kritika (pants) : O-Ohh! *huff* Y-Ye toh acchi baat hai. Ab hum sab saath enjoy kar sakte hai.

Kavya (pouts) : Aapne mujhse nahi pucha ki mujhe invitation kaise mila?

Veer (smiles) : Arohi di ne mujhe pehle hi bata diya hai ki tum log Kritika ki taraf se aaye ho.

Kavya : Kya dii aap bhi!!! Sab pehle hi bata deti ho. Hmph~

Badle me Arohi bas muskurayi. Kavya ne Veer ki baah me haath daala jaise ek couple aksar daal ke rakhte hai aur use kheechte hue andar le jaane lagi.

Veer : H-Hey! Wait!

Kavya : Chaloooo~ Andar pata bhaiya food counter me mast mast dishes lagi hui hai. Mast jamm ke khayenge. Chalooo~

Arohi (blushes) : K-Kavyaaaa!!! What is this?

Kavya : Arre toh usme kya? Khaane hi toh aaye hai hum. Hai na? Hai na bhaiya?

Woh masoom aankhein liye Veer ko dekhi toh Veer ki hasi nikal gayi.

Veer (laughs) : Bilkul! Bilkul!

Arohi (blushes) : Veeeeerr!!! Don't support her!!! Kritika kya sochegi aisi baatein karogi tum toh-

Kavya : Huh? Matlab? Arre to woh toh khud thoosne aayi hai. Kyu hai na? Kritika?

Bechari Kritika bas sharm ke maare apna sarr jhuka ke reh gayi. Uske gaal laal ho rakhe the. Arohi ne bud-budaate hue use dekh sorry kaha. Toh woh bas haami hi de paayi.

Isme Kavya ki koi galti nahi thi. Woh yaha par kya schemes hone waali thi unn sab se anibhigya thi. Uske liye toh ye bas ek sunehra mauka tha.

Ek sunehra mauka jaha 5 star hotel me free ka khaana mila ho. Jaise aksar parichit ki shaadiyo me hume muft ka khaana naseeb ho jaaya karta tha. Kuch usi prakaar Kavya ke liye yahi aaj ka din tha. Woh toh bas lazeez khaana enjoy karne, apne logo ke saath masti karne aur photos click karne aayi hui thi.

Peeth peeche kya rann-neetiya bani hui thi woh inn sab se anjaan thi.

Andar ghuste hi unn sab ki aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi. Andar ka banquet hall itna bhavya aur vishaal tha ki dherr saare logo ke hone ke bawajood woh kahi se bhi chhota prateet nahi ho raha tha.

Tej (amazed) : This-!!

Lightings ki bharpoor vyavastha ki gayi thi. Spotlights se leke party lights sab ki sab installed thi. Side se buffet laga hua tha aur 50 se bhi zyada dishes ka intezam tha. Italian, Mexican, Chinese, Thai, Continental, Indian jaisi tamaam cuisines waha maujood thi.

Kavya : Dekha na? Mein toh harr cuisine try karne waali hu. Hehe!

Kritika (blushes) : Abhi khana start nahi hua hai pagal!

Kavya : Arre toh ho jayega. Wait karte hai.

Harr guzarte pal bheed badhti hi jaa rahi thi. Jaanta kaafi maatra me aayi hui thi.

Aisa nahi tha ki aadmi local ho. Bade se bade log aaj yaha maujood the. Iska matlab saaf tha ki Veer ke liye yaha bohut se log business partners bann sakte the.

Woh dekh paa raha tha dur se ki Kaera aur Sonia opposite sides kisi se baato me lagi hui thi.




'Kya unn dono ko ek dusre ki presence ke baare me pata chal gaya?'




[Yes!]

'Tum itni surety se kaise keh sakti ho?'

[Don't you see? Woh dono hi opposite side khadi hui hai. Also, unhe nahi bhi pata chala hoga toh unke secretary ya kisi ne unke kaan me ye baat daal hi di hogi.]

'I see!'

Veer dekh raha tha ki kaise high net-worth waale log andar hotel me pravesh karte jaa rahe the. Woh baari baari kuch logo ko check karte jaa raha tha.

'Akhir iss Casa Belle ke owner ka motive kya hai?'

[We'll come to know!]

Bhumika : Ah! Veer! Hotel se yaad aaya, tumne head chef ke baare me kaha tha ki tumhari nazar me hai koi. Lekin, uske baad se tumne kuch bataya hi nahi.

Veer : Oh right! Shit! Mein ye kaise bhul gaya? Koi hai jise mein hotel par bhejna chahunga chef ke roop me.

Bhumika : Kaun hai? Kya woh experienced hai?

Veer : Nahi! Ye unka kisi bhi hotel me kaam karne ka pehla experience hoga. But I can say that she's really good at cooking.

Bhumika : She? Yaani koi lady hai?

Veer : Yes! Magar, unhe pehle aapko thoda sa sikhana padega. Unhone pehle kabhi itne logo ke liye khana nahi banaya hai. So, ek training ki zaroorat hai. Uske baad woh sab kuch khud sambhal sakti hai.

Bhumika : Oh! I see! Mene ek head chef ko abhi temporary hire kiya hai. Agar, woh unke saath milke seekh jayengi toh ye bohut hi acchi baat hogi. I'll wait for her then. Kab bhej rahe ho unhe?

Veer (smiles) : Mein kal hi unse aane ke liye keh dunga. Don't worry.

Bhumika (nods) : Mmm~

Veer ne nazre ghumayi toh usne ye bhi gaur kiya ki tamaam reporters aur influencers bhi aaye hue the.

Reporters woh the jo aksar glamor aur fashion ki duniya me reporting karne ke liye jaane jaate the. Toh wahi, influencers woh the jo instagram par apni tagdi fan-followings ke liye aaye din charcha me rehte the.

Dur khadi Sonia jo kuch parichit logo se mil rahi thi, uski nigaahein achanak hi peeche ki orr jab gayi toh ek jaana pehchaana shaks use dikhayi diya.

‘Veer???’

Apni baato ko wahi virhaam dete hue woh aage badhi,

“Excuse me! One moment please~”

Uske saath khade guests ne use haami di aur Sonia apne group circle se baahar nikal ek disha ki orr chal di. Kya woh Veer hi tha? Magar woh yaha kya kar raha hai? Kuch yahi sawaal uske dimaag me ghoom rahe the.

Woh chal hi rahi thi jab kuch insta models uske paas achanak se aake use gher liye,

“Ma’am, one selfie please! One selfie!”

“Big fan ma’am! I follow you on instagram~!”

“Oh my god! Miss Sonia! You look even beautiful in person! Please, one photograph?”

Sonia : I-

“Please! Ma’am!”

“Please~”

Woh bechain ho uthi. Kahi Veer uski nazro se gaayab ho gaya toh? Uss se mile na jaane kitna samay ho chuka tha. Akhiri baar shayad woh tab hi mili thi jab uske ghar holi khelne woh Suhana ke sang gayi thi.

Na jaane kyu, par jab bhi woh Veer se milti thi use ye milan bada hi accha lagta tha. Kuch alag si baat thi usme. Shuru se hi, jab jab woh Veer ke paas hoti, tab tab uska mann khush ho uthata.

Lekin, ek sawaal hamesha uske mann me reh jaata. Akhir kyu? Kyu Veer ke aas paas hone se use ye anubhuti hoti thi? Shayad Veer ne kabhi bhi use ameer baap ki ladki ki tarah treat nahi kiya isliye? Shayad haan!! Jawab yahi tha.

Sonia : Let me pass through~ P-Please~ L-Later guys. I’m really sorry! But later guys!

Aur wo aaj pehli baar logo ko iss tarah mana kar unke ghere se baahar aayi. Veer ki orr uske qadam fir badh gaye.

Idhar Veer logo ko scan karne me laga hua tha, jab achanak se-

“Veer!!!”

Veer (turns) : Hmm?

Sonia uske saamne thi. Apna cham-chamata chehra liye, sundar badi badi aankhon se use nihaarte hue, aur apni pyaari si peeli dress me uske saamne samaksh khade hue, woh haazir thi.

Saundarya bolta tha. Sonia ki khubsoorti iss baat ka saboot thi. Jab jab iss starr ki koi khubsoorti ki bala uske saamne prastut hoti thi tab tab hi Veer kuch palo ke liye maun hone par majboor ho jaata tha.

Uske honth halke se upar ko uthe, uska muh ahista se khula. Woh Sonia ko nihaar raha tha. Sonia ne bhi jaise ye baat gaur kar li aur apne baalo ki latt ko kaan ke peeche le jaate hue sharma ke nazre ferr lii. Uske baad hi Veer ke muh se kuch shabd nikle,

Veer : Miss Sonia?

Sonia (smiles) : Kya Miss lagana zaroori hai? I thought we were good friends, Veer!

Veer : A-Aap mujhse badi hai isliye-

Iss se pehle ki Veer apni baat poori keh paata, peeche khadi Tej ne uska haath thaama aur uss se chipakte hue tapaak se boli,

Tej : Toh didi kehna sahi hoga? Right?

Sonia (baffled) : Wh-What!???

Sonia ki aankhein ‘didi’ shabd sunte hi fel gayi. Ye kya sunn liye usne? Veer ke muh se ‘didi’? Aur woh bhi apne liye? Kabhi bhi nahi!

Jab Sonia Veer ke paas aayi tab Tej sabse pehle aashcharya me thi, par Sonia ki aankhon me Veer se baate karte hue woh chamak jaise hi use dikhayi di, ek khatre ki ghanti uske dimag me baj uthi.

Uske baad toh woh ye bhool gayi ki Sonia Elite Motors ki maalkin thi. Woh apne defense mode pe aa chuki thi. Uske bhai ko koi bhi chhina ke nahi le jaa sakta tha. Woh ye bhi jaanti thi ki yahi woh Sonia thi jiski car se bhid ke uska bhai hospital me hospitalized tha.

Kintu, baaki sab ke saath aisa nahi tha. Arohi, Kavya, Kritika, Bhumika ye sabhi Sonia ko dekh khush thi. Holi ke dauran woh sabhi mile hue the.

Sonia : Ahaha! T-That’s not okay I guess!? ‘Miss’ hi theek rahega Veer.

Veer : O-Ohh!

Jab ‘didi’ bulaane jaane se Sonia ne inkaar kiya toh Tej ka shaq aur bhi gehra ho gaya. Dal me kuch toh kaala tha. Woh ek baat samajh chuki thi ki ab use ek naya hathiyaar mil chuka hai.

Apne bhai ke ird gird harr ladki se ye puchna ki kya woh uske bhai ki behan banengi? Agar koi bhi inkaar kar de, matlab kuch gadbad zaroor hai.

Veer (smiles) : By the way, ye meri badi behan hai. Tejal! And Teju di! Ye hai-

Tej : Miss Sonia! Elite motors ki CEO and MD. Right?

Usne attitude me apna haath aage kar badhaya. Sonia ki bauhe ek pal ke liye kasi par usne muskuraate hue Tej ka haath thaama aur ahista se boli,

Sonia (smiles) : Last time when I came, you weren’t there I guess?

Tej (smiles) : Because I was busy finding a trail to my brother.

Sonia (smiles) : That’s so sad! I’m glad I’m always here to support him.

Tej (smiles) : Well no need then! Since, I’m here now!

Dono muskura zaroor rahi thi par ye muskaan dono ki hi farzi thi. Unke haatho ki pakad aur kass gayi. Ye kahi se bhi ek sadharan handshake ki pakad nahi thi, ye kisi panja ladaane ki taaqat jitni mazboot pakad thi.

Woh kya keh rahi thi aapas me baakiyo ko toh sunayi na diya magar Veer apne senses dwara sab kuch sunn chuka tha.

‘This is bad!! Fuck!!!’

Halaki, use hastakshep karne ki zaroorat nahi padi. Tej karate me maahir thi. Abhi black belt champion nahi thi lekin Sonia jaisi ladkiyo ko ring me dhool chataane ki kaabiliyat zaroor rakhti thi woh. Zaahir hai, uski pakad Sonia ki pakad se zyada mazboot thi. Jis wajah se Sonia ne apna haath dheela kar chhor diya, aur badle me Tej ne bhi.

Sonia : Anyways-

Woh kuch aage kehti ki tabhi uske peeche se Prakash Uncle aur uski secretary bhi unke saath sammilit ho gayi.

Prakash (smiles) : Bahut dino baad mil rahe hai hum! Kaise ho?

Veer (smiles) : Theek hu! Aap sunaiye haal chaal!

Prakash : Bas kaam kaam aur kaam!

Sonia : Aap ke shabd aise sunayi pad rahe hai Uncle jaise hum aapse mazdoori karwa rahe ho.

Prakash : Hahaha! Arre meri chhoro aap sab. Meri toh umr nikal gayi hai. Mujh budhe se baat kar ke kuch naya nahi milega. Aap sab apna enjoy karo.

Veer (smiles) : Apne se badi umr ke logo se hi gyaan milta hai Uncle.

Prakash bas muskuraya aur mud ke haath hilaate hue waha se wapas se apne sthaan par chala gaya. Veer ki baat use pasand aayi ho ya na aayi ho, Sonia ki aankhon me ye sunn ke zaroor chamak aa chuki thi.

Veer : Wese? Y-Ye kaun?

Veer ka ishara uski secretary ki orr tha jo itne logo ke beech iklauti aisi thi jo mask pehni hui thi.

Sonia : Umm! Ye meri secretary hai, Veer!

Veer : Hello!

Veer ne haath aage kar Sonia ki secretary ki taraf badhaya. Secretary ne bhi Veer ka haath thaama aur ek nod deke haath milaake peeche kar liya. Kintu, boli kuch nahi.

Veer : Hmm?

Veer ne fir agle hi pal.

‘Check!’

*Ding*

[Name : Suchika
Age : 31
Bio : Suchika, Ruchika ki badi behan. Kuch saal pehle ek aashiq ke pyaar me aake ghar chhorr bhaag gayi thi, jis se saare parivaar ki thu thu hui thi. Aashiq koi raees baap ki aulaad nahi balki ek unemployed bhatakta hua awaara tha. Sachhaayi ka pata chalte hi woh uske changul se bhaag nikli. Sonia ne Kaera ke plans ko exploit karne ke liye Ruchika ki behan ke whereabouts ka pata lagwaya. Aur, tab jaake Suchika iss tarah Sonia ke contact me aayi. Aaj Sonia use Kaera ke against use kar rahi hai.

Relationship : Strangers.
Favourability : 12]

‘Suchika? Ruchika ki badi behan? I see! Miss Sonia inhe Miss Kaera ke against istemal kar rahi hai? Wait! Favorability 12? How?’

[Because of your looks.]

‘Ohhh!’

Veer : Mujhe toh laga tha ki Prakash Uncle aapke secretary the?

Sonia : Prakash Uncle sirf mere hi nahi, dii ke bhi kaam karte hai. Jabki ye meri new secretary…! She’s my private secretary.

Sonia naam nahi le rahi thi Suchika ka aur Veer jaanta tha ki woh aisa kyu kar rahi hai. Woh Veer se jhooth nahi bolna chaahti thi. Isliye behtar tha ki Suchika ka naam hi na bataya jaaye.

Sonia : Aur tum sab kaisi ho? *smiles* Arohi? Kavya? And- Bhumika right?

Bhumika : Yes!

Arohi (smiles) : We are good as well!

Kavya : Agli baar aap firse holi me aaiyega. Hum saath khelenge.

Sonia (smiles) : Kyu nahi!

Inki baate aur hoti ki peeche se koi chhillaaya,

"Damn it!! Veer??? Tum yaha???"

Palat ke dekha toh koi aur nahi, Karan tha. Uska sabse khaas dost. Suit me tip top lag raha tha woh. Veer ko dekhte hi woh uske nazdeek aaya aur uske dono kandho par haath jamm ke rakhte hue bola,

Karan : What the hell man? Fursat nahi milti tumhe zara bhi? Ek baar milne ka bhi nahi socha.

Veer : Well-

Karan : Haan haan! Ab bahaane aayenge! I know!

Veer : Nahi aisa nahi-

Karan : Ohh! Hey Kavya! Kaisi ho?

Kavya : Acchi hu! Aur bhaiya ki chhorro, aap ke paas bhi toh time nahi hai ki hum sab se mil jaaye. Hmph!

Karan : Eh!? Ahaha! Woh mein actually-

Arohi : That's right! You never showed up!

Karan : Wait! Arohi di! Asal me aisa tha ki-

Bhumika : Karan from Nexacom! Younger sibling of Miss Kaera. *smiles* Pleased to meet you!

Karan : Ohh! Ahaha! Nice to meet you too! Aap se pehle kabhi mulaqat nahi hui. Aap Veer ki badi behan-

Bhumika (nods) : Yes!

Karan : Ohh! Tejal dii? Haha!

Bhumika : No! Mein Bhumika!

Karan : Eh!?

Tej (smiles) : I'm Tejal!

Karan : Ohh! Milke accha laga. Veer ne bataya tha aapke baare me.

Tej ye sunn andar hi andar behad khush ho gayi. Toh wahi bechari Bhumika ka chehra maayus ho utha. Matlab Veer ne kabhi uska zikr nahi kiya? Bagal se khade Veer ne jaise ye bhaanp liya aur Bhumika ke peeche aake uske kandho par apne dono haath rakh bola,

Veer : Wese, ye bhi meri dii hai. Bhumika dii! Hotel Prestige ki owner.

Veer ke haatho ka sparsh apne upar paate hi aur uske muh se apna parichay sunn Bhumika ka dil jaise andar se gad-gad ho gaya. Halki sharm bhi uske gaalo par chadh gayi.

Bhumika : M-Mein akeli owner nahi hu. Hotel hum sab ka hai.

Karan (smiles) : That's nice to hear.

Karan ki nazre uske baad fir Kritika pe gayi. Dono ki aankhein chaar hui aur ek hayaa ka parda unn dono ne odh liya.

Karan : H-Hey!!

Kritika (blushes) : H-Hello!

Karan : Tum yaha?

Kritika : Iss hotel ke owner jo hai, woh actually mere uncle hai.

Karan : Ohh! That's nice.

Kritika (blushes) : Hmm!

Veer : By the way, tumse kuch kaam hai. Baad me baat karunga.

Karan : Hmm? Yeah! Mujhe bhi kuch kaam hai tumse.

Veer : Ohh?

Sonia : I'm here as well. Mister! *smiles*

Karan : Ahh!

Sonia (extends hand) : How are you doing?

Karan (smiles) : M-Miss Sonia! I'm good. It's been a while.

Sonia : Yes!

Dono ki beech aur baatein hoti ki tabhi koi aur bhi inki mehfil me shaamil hone aa gaya,

"My dear~ Sonia!!! Kab se tumhe dhoondh raha hu. Aur tum yaha ho!"

Ek sadharan sa dikhne waala aadmi, aankhon par chashma lagaaye, grey suit pehne apne dono haath khol aage aaya. Parantu, Sonia ne apna haath aage badha ke uski hug ko jaise thukra diya.

Veer ko kya karna tha, woh jaanta tha.

'Check!'

*Ding*

[Name : Gaurav
Age : 33
Bio : Gaurav! Suhana ka husband! Globerays company me CEO hai. Shadiyantra ki madad se usne Suhana ko hathyaaya aur uss se shadi ki. Suhana ko paana bas uska apna ego satisfy karna jitna tha. He's actually after Suhana's money. Sonia ke saath physical relationship banaane ki chaah rakhta hai.

Relationship : Strangers.
Favourability : -5 ]

Bio padh ke Veer ki aankhein hairat me fel gayi.

'This motherfucker!'

[So he wants the younger sibling too? What a douchebag!!]

Shayad Sonia bhi uske iraado se waaqif thi kahi na kahi jo aaj usne uski hug ko thukra diya.

Globerays ek jaani maani badi MNC thi jo IT sector me kaafi mashoor thi.





Yahi woh company thi jisme Suhana ne Shreya ko Veer ke kehne par job pe lagwaya tha.

Aur yahi woh company thi jisme Niharika ek HR ke roop me waha kaam kar rahi thi. Usi company ka CEO Gaurav aaj Veer ke saamne haazir tha.

Gaurav : Kya ho raha hai yaha? Haan? No space for me? *smiles*

Sonia : Dii nahi aayi?

Sonia ne kehte hue sawaal ka rukh badal diya.

Gaurav : I don't know yaar. Tum toh jaanti ho apni behan ko. Mene pucha uss se par usne koi jawab hi nahi diya. Bas boli ki mujhe kaam hai aur mein nahi jaungi. Harr koi tumhari tarah understanding wala thodi hota hai. *winks*

Sonia (frowns) : Dii bhi samajhti hai.

Gaurav : Oh yes! Yes! Mene ye thodi kaha wo samajhti nahi hai. Haan, lekin tumse kam. Hahaha!

Sonia ko apne jiju ki baato se hi uncomfortable sa feel ho raha tha. Gaurav apni nazre churaate hue upar se neeche tak Sonia ke patle jism ko taad raha tha. Uski jawani me doobna chaahta tha woh. Veer yaha sab kuch bhaanp chuka tha.

Sonia : By the way inn sab se miliye. Ye hai Veer. Abhi recently aap ne suna hoga woh ladka jo France se aaya tha. He's him! Aur 'chef on wheels' ka owner hai.

'Veer' naam sunte hi Gaurav ke kaan khade ho gaye. Usne apne gusse ko turant hi chhipaya.

Gaurav : Chef on wheels? Ye naam toh kabhi suna nahi. Well, hoga kuch. Par haan abhi news me tum kaafi charcha me rahe ho. Hahaha!

Hasste hue haath mila kar woh Veer ke gale se mila. Par gale milte hi Veer ke kaano ki taraf aake usne halki par dhamkaane waali awaaz me kaha,

"Toh woh tum ho jiske saath meri biwi ghoomti rehti hai? Haan? If you know your limits then stay away from her. Warna-! Tumhare liye accha nahi hoga!"

Aur apni baat Veer ke kaan me daalte hue waapas se woh hasste hue sabhi se baat karne laga.

Veer ki aankhein baaj ki tarah uss par jamm gayi. Mutthi kasi! Par iske pehle woh kuch karta,

[Stay calm for now! Bugs like him can't do anything.]

Pari ne uska gussa shaant kar diya.

Jab itne bade bade logo ki mehfil ek saath jami hui thi toh logo ka attention waha jaana swabhavik tha. Kaera bhi inme se ek thi.

Usne dekha ki kaise Veer aur baaki sabhi, yaha tak ki uska chota Bhai bhi uss ghere me khade hoke baat kar rahe the. Woh apni jagah se uthi.

Julia : M-Miss?

Parantu, woh bina kuch kahe ya sune uss orr chal di. Uske peeche peeche Jassi, Raghu bhi aaye. Julia aur Ruchika ko bhi majbooran jaana pada.

Uske waha aate hi sabki nazre uss par tikk gayi. Sonia ki nigaahein Kaera se bhidi. Dono ne ek dusre ko dekha. Aur laga jaise nazro ke beech aapas me ek spark hua ho. Kaera ke waha aate hi mahaul tang ho chuka tha. Aisa lag raha tha jaise vatavaran me hawa bhaari ho gayi ho. Lekin, netr sirf inke hi nahi mile the.

Kaera ke peeche khadi Ruchika ki aankhein bhi Suchika par jamm gayi. Woh ek soch me pad gayi ki ye mask pehne kaun nayi ladki thi? Aur use aisa kyu lag raha tha jaise woh use jaanti hai?

Ruchika ne na aav dekha na taav aur seedha hi prashn kar daala.

Ruchika (eyes profusely) : Who are you?

Suchika : *raises eyebrow*

Suchika apni jagah shaant khadi rahi. Usne koi uttar na diya. Kintu, Sonia ko jaise ek accha daav khelne ka mauka mil gaya.

Sonia : Where are your manners? Don't you know that before asking someone's name, you should introduce yourself first.

Ye jawaab sirf Ruchika ke liye nahi tha. Balki, ye Kaera ki bhi be-izzati thi.

Kaera ne mud ke Ruchika ko aankh dikhaate hue jab dekha toh Ruchika ko apni galti ka abhaas hua. Bhala woh kaun hoti thi iss tarah se inn sab ko ignore kar apna sawaal rakhne waali?

Ruchika (bows) : I'm sorry Miss! I was just wondering, who might be this new person?

Sonia (smiles) : Woh meri secretary hai. Private secretary. I don't think ki mujhe uske baare me sabhi ko batana zaroori hai. Right?

Ruchika : I understand!

Sonia : Good!

Sonia ko aaj behad khushi ho rahi thi. Ek prakaar se usne Ruchika ko hi nahi balki Kaera ko bhi muh tod jawaab diya tha. Ye sab ye darsha raha tha ki Kaera ki secretary ke paas manners nahi hai.

Veer ki nazre bhi Kaera par tiki hui thi. Kehne toh hazaar shabd chaahta tha woh magar shuruat kaha se kare aur kaise kare uski kuch samajh na aa raha tha.

Gaurav : If it isn't the most popular young Miss Kaera from Nexacom!? Such a pleasure to meet you in person.

Woh haath aage badha ke aaya. Kaera ne ek nazar uss par daali. Woh jaanti thi ye Suhana ka husband tha. Kintu, Gaurav ko usne koi ghaas tak nahi daali.

Veer ne bhi apna muh kholna chaaha,

Veer : Miss Kaera-

Magar, Kaera ek hawa ke jhoke ki tarah uske saamne se nikli, Karan ka haath thaami aur use kheechte hue waha se le jaane lagi.

Gaurav ko aisa laga jaise uske goto par kisi ne laat maar di ho.

'This bitchhh!!!'

Woh nakli muskaan liye mann hi mann garja. Uska handshake barbaad ho gaya. Iss ladki ki itni aukaat?

Karan : What? What happened? Dii???

Kaera : We are not here to chat!!

Kehte hue woh use ghaseet ke le jaane lagi.

Karan : W-Wait! Suniye toh-!! Shit!!!

Kaera ne Veer ko bhi ignore kar diya tha. Veer confused tha. Use bas yahi samajh aaya ki Kaera uss se naraaz hai. Emotions aane ke baad shayad ab use sab kuch sahi se samajh aa raha tha. Aur yahi kaaran tha jo woh uss se niraash thi.

Tej, Bhumika, Arohi aur Kavya bhi khadi khadi tamasha dekhti rahi. Unki samajh me toh nahi aaya ki kya hua lekin ye zaroor pata lag gaya tha ki kuch baat zaroor thi.

Jaate jaate Karan bas Veer ko dekhta raha jaise kehna chaah raha ho ki use iske baare me kuch nahi pata. Veer ne haami dete hue use nishchint rehne ka ishaara kiya. Tab jaake Karan ne ek raahat ki saans li.

Julia ne bhi peeche mud Veer ko ek baar hamdardi se dekha aur fir aage badh gayi. Toh wahi Raghu aur Jassi bhi Kaera ke iss bartaav se anjaan the. Sarr haan me hilaate hue Veer ko dekh woh dono bhi wapas chal diye.

Veer ka sarr apne aap jhuk gaya. Kya ye sab uski wajah se tha?

[Be alert!!! Here he comes!]

Kintu, Pari ke bol ne use sachet kar diya.

'Huh!?'

*Clap* *Clap*

Taaliyo se banquet hall goonj utha. Aadesh upar se neeche ki orr aa raha tha. Structure kuch aisa tha ki hall ke ant me madhya se stairs di gayi thi. Aadesh apni assistant ke saath neeche utar raha tha.

Taaliyo ki gad-gadahat uske chehre par aur badi muskaan laa rahi thi.

Veer ki nazar me jaise hi uska chehra aaya Pari ne uske mann me Aadesh ka poora parcha chhittha khol ke rakh diya.

*Ding*

[Name : Aadesh Jaisinghani
Age : 33
Bio : Aadesh Jaisinghani Casa Belle ka owner hai. Uske naam par sheher ki kayi anya hotels bhi hai. Magar, Casa Belle sabse pramukh hai. Apne swargeeya pita ki dhan daulat ko ikhatta kar usne pehle aur paisa kamaya aur fir Casa Belle ko khada kiya. Aadesh ke kuch underworld se bhi connections hai jaha woh paisa wasooli ke liye kuch gangs ka istemaal karta rehta hai.

Relationship : Mutual disagreement.
Favourability : -12
Note : Beware! The man is a crafty sly fox!]

Status padhte hi Veer hairat me reh gaya. System bhi use satark rehne ke liye keh raha tha.

'Relationship me mutual disagreement?'

[Because tum dono hi ek dusre se disagree kar rahe ho. Abhi tak shayad system ne use enemy consider nahi kiya hai. Lekin, mujhe nahi lagta ki woh samay ab dur hai-]

Aadesh jaise jaise seedhiyo se neeche aa raha tha, wese wese spotlight use follow kar rahi thi. Baaki, lights dim ho chuki thi.

Veer ko tabhi Karan ka call aaya. Call pick kar usne apne kaan se lagaya,

Veer : Kya hua?

Karan : Yaar mujhe nahi pata dii ko kya hua but aisa woh kabhi nahi karti hai. Trust me!

Veer (smiles) : Don't worry! Mujhe bura nahi laga.

Karan : Sure na?

Veer : Yeah!

Karan : Kahi tumhare aur dii ke beech toh kuch baat nahi hui na?

Veer : I-

Karan : Hmm?

Veer : No! Nothing happened! Mujhe tumse ek sawaal karna hai.

Karan : Oh! Kya?

Veer : Aadesh Jaisinghani koi bohut bada neta toh nahi hai aur na hi koi bohut badi personality hai. Fir itne bade bade log uski iss party me kyu shamil ho rahe hai?

Karan (smiles) : Good question! Log sirf bulaane par nahi aate Veer.

Veer : Hmm?

Karan : Ye business minded log hai. Obviously, bina faayde ke yaha par ek bhi insaan khada nahi hoga.

Veer : Toh kya baat hai?

Karan : Isme koi bhi shaq nahi hai ki Casa Belle hamare state ki sabse luxurious hotel hai. Tum batao! Jab koi company kisi client company se deal karti hai ya milti hai ya kahi pe bhi use kuch organise karwana hota hai toh woh kya karti hai?

Veer : Ohh! I get it! Woh apne sheher ki best hotel me dinner ya lunch ke liye unhe leke jaati hai. Taaki unka impression accha pade. To set the deal.

Karan : That's right! Toh itne logo ka yaha aane ka yahi maqsad hai ki woh hotel ke owner se acche khaase relations rakhna chaahte hai taaki jab kabhi bhi woh yaha aaye, unki khatirdaari me koi kami na hone paaye. Staff unhe pehli priority de.

Veer : I see!

Karan : Lekin sirf itna hi nahi hai-

Veer : Huh?

Karan : Wait a little more. Tum samajh jaoge ki log yaha kyu aaye hai. I'm hanging up now!

Veer : Hmm!!

*Call ends*

Jaise hi Aadesh ke qadam neeche floor par pade. Influencers tatha kuch ladkiya jhoom uthi.

33 saal ka unmarried banda, jo dikhne me handsome, aur paiso se mazboot unke saamne khada hua tha. Swabhavik tha ki ladies use apna banaane ki chaah rakh rahi thi.

"Oh my goddd! Mr. Aadesh!!! So handsome!!!"

"Looking so good Sir!!!"

"Oh goddd! His suit is looking so good~"

*Chitter Chatter*

Woh aate hi charcha ka vishay bann gaya. Uske paas se guzar rahi ek waitress badi si tray me wine ke kuch glasses le jaa rahi thi. Par achanak aayi bheed ki wajah se woh apna santulan kho baithi aur,

"Aahhhh!!"

*Swoosh*

Ek haath ne uski kamar kass ke thaam li aur use girne se bacha liya. Waitress stabdh hoke apne saamne uss vyakti ki aankhon me dekhti rahi aur uske gaal sharm se laal ho uthe.

Aadesh waitress ko pakde hue tha. Wine aur tray neeche gir chuki thi. Kaanch ke glasses toot ke bikhar chuke the.

Shayad aaj uski naukri jaane waali thi. Yahi khayal waitress ke mann me tha. Jo agle hi shan gaayab ho gaya,

Aadesh : Sambhal ke madam! Aise glasses aur trays mein dobara afford kar sakta hu. Par aapko kuch ho gaya toh mere staff me se ek mehanteeya vyakti kam ho jayega na? Dhyaan se! *smiles*

Waitress (blushes) : Ahh!!

Aur ek baar fir, taaliyo ki goonj hall me fel gayi. Guests ke upar iss se behtar first impression aur kya hi ho sakta tha?

Idhar Pari ne ye sab dekhte hi uski personality ko khol ke rakh diya.

[System is right! Ye aadmi tumse khurafati dimaag rakhta hai. He's a sly bastard. He's like your brother, Pranjal! Satark rehna.]

'Yeah!'

Toh yaha baaki workers ne turant hi aake gire hue samaan ko saaf kiya aur Aadesh aage aate hue sabhi ko dekh muskura ke sarr hilaaya.

Ek mic uske haatho me pakdaaya gaya.

"Ladies and gentlemen!"

"Thank you! Thank you aap sab ka jo aapne iss na-cheez ko yaha aake apna keemti samay diya."

"Mein bohut khush hu jo aaj apne mata aur pita jii ke ashirvaad dwara iss khubsoorat hotel ko aap sab ki seva ke liye yaha khada kar paaya."

"Mein ye batana chaahta hu ki ise aap sab apni hi hotel samjhe. Aaj ye choti si party aap sab ke liye hi hai mene aayojit ki hai."

Uski speech sunte hi kayi saare log prasann ho uthe. Uske kaptipann se toh Veer, Bhumika Arohi waaqif the. Par baaki aam insaan uske iraado ko thodi jaanta tha.

Veer ki aankhein Aadesh par hi gadi hui thi. Aur, jaise Aadesh bhi ye bhaanp chuka tha. Isliye usna bhi apna next step rakh diya,

"Aap sabhi ke liye hi mene ek service introduce ki hai. Pesh hai aap sab ke saamne ~ "

"Unicard!!!!"





Usne apne haath me liya ek card sabhi ko dikhaya.

"Na sirf hotel ki saari facilities ko aap sabhi access kar payenge. Balki, ye card hone se aapko discount bhi diya jayega aur toh aur saari VIP services with extra attention and priority aap sabhi ko mera staff provide karega."

Unicard ke baare me sunte hi guests ke chehro par muskaan sajj gayi. Akhir isliye toh aaye the woh sabhi yaha.

"Please! Ab baaki baatein baad me! Aap sabhi pehle food enjoy kariye. And do let me know your thoughts~"

Spotlight hati aur dim lights wapas se bright ho gayi. Andhera gaayab ho gaya.

Kritika sab kuch dekh badi hi utsukta se boli,

Kritika : Oye! Kavya! Dekha na? Wahi hai mere Uncle!

Kavya : Ohh! Acchi baat hai! Ab toh khaana bhi allowed ho gaya. Chal na khaate hai ab!!

Woh dono aage badh ek food counter ki orr badhi aur Veer aur baaki sabhi ko bhi insist karne lagi. Itne me Aadesh jo khada hua tha woh Veer ki taraf aage badha,

Mic abhi bhi uske haath me tha. Jaise woh ye sab jaan boojh ke kar raha tha. Mic pe hi usne kehna shuru kiya,

"I'm sorry but who are you?"

Uske mic pe bolne ke kaaran sabhi ka dhyaan uski orr aakarshit hua.

Woh seedha Veer ke saamne aake khada hua.

Aadesh : Mister! Aapki tareef?

Veer : Veer!

Aadesh : Oh! Mister Veer, I don't remember ki mein aapko jaanta hu. May I ask ki aap yaha kar rahe hai?

Bhumika samajh chuki thi ki woh pal aa gaya hai jab unhe musibato ka saamna karna padega. Usne kass ki Veer ki hatheli ko thaam liya.

Toh wahi Tej ne jab ye suna toh uska maatha aise thanka ki woh khud ko qaabu me naa rakh paayi aur aage aate hue boli,

Tej : Who are we?? Didn't you send the invitation? How forgetful you are?

Jaha ek badi behan use emotional support de rahi thi toh wahi dusri badi behan uske saamne khade hoke use bachaane ki koshish kar rahi thi.

Aadesh : No! Mujhe nahi lagta mein aap sab me se kisi ko bhi jaanta hu.

Kritika jo peeche thi woh ye dekh ghabraate hue daud ke saamne aayi.

Kritika : U-Uncle! Y-Ye mere friends hai.

Aadesh : Hmm? Mene tumhe do friends ko laane kaha tha na Kritika? Woh do kaun hai?

Kritika ne majbooran Arohi aur Kavya ki orr ishara kiya.

Aadesh : Okay! Lekin, fir ye sab kaun hai?

Tej : I'm Tejal! And he's my brother. Aur hum sab yaha invitation ke baad hi aaye hai.

Usne apne purse se invitation nikaal ke uske muh ke saamne pesh kar diya.

Invitation dekhte hi Aadesh ke chehre par ek kapti muskaan aa gayi. Veer ki maathe par silvatein chhaayi,

[Something is wrong!]

Aadesh : Ohh! Okay! Assistant! Zara dekhna toh ye invitation sahi hai ya nahi?

Assistant : Yes Sir!

Peeche khadi uski assistant achanak hi aage aayi aur uss se invitation leke peeche ko gayi. Par tabhi,

*Ka-dink*

Light achanak hi gaayab ho gayi. Aur ek spotlight Aadesh ki upar padi.

Aadesh : Aap sab apna khaana enjoy kariye please. Ye chota sa hassle hai. Please, don't worry.

Aur agle hi pal spotlight wapas se hati aur baaki lights dobaara bright ho gayi. Magar, iss andhere me jo hua wo koi nahi dekh paaya. Siwae Veer ke.

Inn chand seconds me Aadesh ki assistant ne invitation ke upar se paper ki ek parat kheech ke hatayi aur use apni mutthi me band kar ke rakh liya.

Lights ke aate hi assistant uske paas chalte hue aayi, par jaise hi usne card par naam dekha uske hosh hi udd gaye.

Card par Veer ka hi naam likha hua tha. Aadesh ne ye card chalaaki se design kiya tha.

Usne Veer nahi 'Heer' likha hua tha card me. Aur uske upar ek similar paper ki parat chadhaate hue fir 'Veer' ka naam daal uske paas bheja tha.

Taaki jab uss paper ki parat ko hataya jaaye toh 'Heer' naam saamne aaye. Aur uske paas ye bahana rahe ki usne 'Veer' ko nahi, kisi 'Heer' ko card bheja tha jo galti ki wajah se uske paas aa gaya.

Magar, uska saara plan chaupat ho chuka tha. Paper ki parat hataane ke baad bhi Veer ka naam hi saamne aaya tha.

Aadesh ye nahi jaanta tha ki woh kis se bhid raha tha. Jis pal Veer ko invitation mila tha. Usi pal usne uss invitation ko check kar liya tha.

Aadesh ki saari kartoot uss par jhalak gayi thi. Ab baari Veer ki thi. Veer ne 'Heer' naam ko hi 'Veer' me tabdeel kiya tha.

Copycat!!!

Yahi woh skill thi jiski madad se usne Kaera ko woh diary likh ke di thi. Same writing ke tehet use bas 'H' ko thoda sa adjust karna pada tha.

Rubbing alcohol!!! Jiski sahayta leke usne 'H' ko 'V' me tabdeel kar diya tha.

Aadesh ne khud ne jab card dekha toh use jaise ek bohut bada jhatka laga.

Ye writing toh uski hi thi. Ye kaise mumkin hai bhala? Usne toh Heer hi likha tha. Fir ye kaise?

Uske chehre par aashcharya saaf jhalak raha tha. Iss baar Veer ke hontho par muskaan thi.

[Mock him!]

'Huh?'

[Jaisa mein kehti hu wesa kaho-]

'Alright'

Agle hi pal Veer muskuraate hue Tej ke peeche se aage aaya.

Veer (smiles) : Looks like it was a mistake from the staff itself. Surely, famous Casa Belle's owner won't turn his guests away now because of his fault. Right?

Ek karaara jawaab!

Aadesh : Tch!!

Tej khush hote hue apne haath fold kar use dekhi.

Tej : Galti staff karta hai lekin fir use accept nahi karna hota hai? Waah!

Aadesh jaan chuka tha usne muh ki khaayi thi. Lekin, use kaise bhi kar ke ye sambhaalna tha. Kuch sochte hue uske hontho par fir ek muskaan chhaa gayi.

Aadesh (smiles) : My bad! My bad!! Haha! Bilkul! Ye meri galti hai. Mein sab kuch organise karwane me itna busy tha ki mere dhyaan se nikal hi gaya ki mene recently charcha me chal rahe mister Veer ko bhi invite kiya hai. Kabhi aapse mulaqat nahi hui na isliye bas ye bhool ho gayi. Ladies and gentlemen! Mister Veer is here!!

Spotlight jali! Aur iss baar seedhe Veer ke upar aa ke padi. Aadesh kitna bada harami tha iss se saabit ho chuka tha. Usne apni kami ko accept toh kiya lekin log uss baare me zyada soche na isliye usne saara ka saara dhyaan Veer ke upar kendrit kar diya.

Aadesh : Mister Veer! Jii haan! Abhi haal hi me ye France me hamare desh ka naam roshan kar ke aaye hai. Aapne suna hoga inke baare me news me. Ye Chef on wheels ke owner bhi hai. Inka khud ka food startup hai. Please, make a huge round of applause for Mister Veer!

*Clap* *Clap*

Veer ke liye bhi taaliya bajne lagi. Dur khadi Sonia khushi se uski taraf dekh rahi thi. Toh wahi Kaera kuch soch vichaar me leen thi.

Aadesh : Ab jab interruption ho hi gaya hai toh mein iss mauke par Unicard bhi distribute karna chahunga.

Uske itna kehte hi jis wajah se log yaha aaye the woh sabhi apne apne assistants ko bhej diye Unicard ko paane ke liye.

Ek baar fir chehel pehel hone lagi. Aur dekhte hi dekhte kayi saare Unicard ek baar me khareed liye gaye.

Kavya : Bhaiyaa! Hum bhi lete hai! Hehe! Fir mein kabhi bhi aa jaa sakungi yaha.

Veer (smiles) : Sure!

Pehli baar aaj uski Kavya ne kuch maanga tha. Veer kaise inkaar kar sakta tha.

Parantu, jaise jaise yaha cards bate ek bhi card Veer ko offer nahi kiya gaya. Tamaam logo ko cards diye jaa rahe the, siwae Veer ke.

Kavya : W-Woh hume card kyu nahi de rahe bhaiya?

Veer : Wait!

Tej : Kavya sahi keh rahi hai! Ek toh inn logo ne pehle hamari insult ki aur ab ye. Kavya! Chalo!

Kavya : Haan didi!

Tej uske saath aage badhi. Aur Aadesh ke paas pahuchi.

Tej : Unicard hume kyu nahi diya jaa raha hai? You are distributing it to everyone else.

Aadesh : Hmm? I'm sorry Miss! Lekin, ye sab ke liye nahi hai. Basically, aap ise afford nahi kar sakti.

Kavya : Wh-Whaatttt? Kya matlab hum afford nahi kar sakte? Kya aap ye kehna chaahte ho ki hamare paas paisa nahi hai?

Kritika dur se chintit ho rahi thi. Magar, woh unke beech kuch nahi keh sakti thi.

Aadesh : Ye toh aap keh rahi ho beta! *smiles*

Kavya : Toh aapka matlab kya hai? Mere bhaiya ki insult ki ek toh aapne aur ab hum logo ko card dene se mana kar rahe ho? Mere bhaiya ke paas bhi bohut paisa hai.

Aaj Kavya bhi atyadhik gusse me thi. Ek toh uske bhaiya ki insult hui aur upar se ab ye.

Aadesh ne apne jeb se ek Unicard nikala aur Kavya ko dikhaya,

Aadesh : Padhte toh aata hoga na beta? It's only for c-suite executives and above individuals.

Kavya : Huh? C-C suite? Executive?

Kavya ke bhale sarr ke upar se nikal gaya ho. Lekin, Tej ko sab samajh aa chuka tha. Apne nichle honth ko daanto tale gusse me dabaate hue woh Aadesh ko dekhi aur Kavya se boli,

Tej : C-suite executives woh hote hai Kavya jo companies me CEO, COO, CMO, CTO, CIO jaisi job profiles par hote hai.

Aadesh (smiles) : Exactly! Aur chuki aap me se koi bhi iss profile par nahi hai, toh ye aapko nahi mil sakta.

Kavya (pouts) : Youuuu-!!!!

Iss se pehle ki Aadesh card ko utha ke apne jeb me wapas rakhta.

*Swoosh*

Aadesh : Huh???

Kisi ne uske haath se card chhina liya. Kavya apni jeebh dikhaayi,

Kavya : Ab hum toh Kritika ke friends hai. Toh ek dene me kya ghat jayega aapka?

Aur woh palat ke masti kar bhaagi. Lekin, security ke ek aadmi ne turant hi uska haath pakad use rok liya.

Aadmi ne uska haath moda,

Kavya : Ahnnn!!!

Tej : Kavyaaaa!!!

Security guy : Pranks are not allowed.

Usne abhi card liya hi tha Kavya ke haath se ki,

*Baaaaaammmmmmm*

Ek zordaar dhakka uske shareer ko laga aur woh dur ek table me jaake dhadaam se bhid ke gir gaya.

Table ka saara samaan ast vyast hoke neeche ko gir gaya. Aur ye shor hote hi sabhi ka dhyaan Veer aur baaki sabhi ki orr chala gaya.

[I told you to remain calm!!]

Veer : Don't you dare touch my sister!!!

Kavya jo bas apne bhaiya ke liye kuch karna chaahti thi pehli baar. Woh ek baar fir apne bhaiya ke upar depend hoke reh gayi. Bechari ki aankhon se behne shuru ho gaye.

Ek baar fir..! Woh kisi ke pyaar me gir gayi.

Kass ke Veer ke coat ko jakadte hue woh uski baaho me simat ke reh gayi.

Aadesh ki muskaan haivaano waali ho rahi thi.

'Yes!!! Yes motherfucker!! Beat me!!! Be violent...!!! Yahi toh mein chaahta hu!!!'

Uska khurafati dimaag yahi sab soch andar hi andar shadiyantra rache jaa raha tha.

Veer jaise iss baar uske plan me fass raha tha. Dekhte hi dekhte saare log Veer aur Aadesh ke beech ho rahe jhagde ko dekhne lage.

Sonia, Kaera aur Karan! Sabhi confused the. Ye achanak se kaisa mod aa gaya party me?

Toh wahi reporters aur influencers apna cameras me ye sab qaid karne ki bharpoor koshish me jut gaye.

Aadesh ka shadiyantra jaante hi jaise Arohi ne kuch bhaanp liya aur woh Veer ke coat ki sleeve ko pakdi. Par pakadne se pehle hi-

*Whoooshhhh*

Veer uske qareeb se chhu-mantar hua aur kuch qadmo ki duri par khade seedha Aadesh ke saamne pahuch gaya.

Uski collor ko jakadte hi Veer ki aankhein ek shan ke liye laal hui aur uski dabang awaaz Aadesh ke kaano me padi,

"Mein aur mera parivar, yaha bad-salookhi ke liye nahi aaye hai. If you cannot afford us. Then, just ask us. We'll leave!!!"

Kritika : K-Kavya! Kavya ye sab kya ho raha hai? Kuch karo!

Kavya (cries) : Bhaiyaaaa~ Bhaiya I'm sorry! Ye sab meri galti hai. Chaliye na chalte hai yaha se. Mujhe kuch nahi chahiye. *sniff* I'm sorrryyyy!!! *sniff*

Log toh tamaam the. Par kisi ki himmat nahi ho rahi thi ki Veer ko jaake use shaant kare.

Kyu?

Kyuki uske andar se aa rahe ek Intimidating aura ki anubhuti unn sab ko ho rahi thi.

Intimidating Presence!!!

*Gwak*

Veer ka haath Aadesh ke gale par jaa chuka tha. Aur, pehli baar Aadesh ki phatt ke chaar ho chuki thi.

Peeche khadi uski assistant ne jaise tese aage badh Veer ko zorr se dhakka diya.

Sthiti ka abhaas hote hi Veer ne khud-ba-khud Aadesh ko chhorr diya.

Magar,

"How dare you?????"

Aadesh ki assistant Veer par baras uthi. Security agle hi pal active hui aur Veer ko pakad li. Koi bhi intervene nahi kar raha tha.

Sab Veer ke Intimidating Presence ka hi shikaar hue baithe the. Aur, uske aftereffects se hi baahar aane ki koshish kar rahe the.

Assistant ko jaise mauka mil chuka tha. Usne tray se ek wine ka glass uthaaya aur-

*Splash*

Seedha Veer ke muh pe de maara.

Wine uske chehre ko bhigote hue neeche girne lagi.

Tej : Veeeeeeerrrr!!!

Woh aage daudi!!! Par kuch waitresses ne use bhi pakad liya.

Tej : Uggh!!! Leave meeee!!! I said leave meee!!!

Bhumika, Arohi bhi wahi logo ke beech dabb ke reh gayi.

Sonia ghabraate hue uthi. Par aage badhne se pehle hi peeche se kisi ne use rok liya.

"Miss Sonia! Kaha jaa rahi hai aap?"

Sonia : Mister Tanishq! Mera waha jaana zaroori hai. He's my friend! Kuch misunderstanding hui hai zaroor.

Tanishq, Sonia ke suitors me se ek tha. Jis bandi ko woh paana chaahe woh kisi aur mard ke liye bhaage, bhala woh ye kaise bardaasht kar sakta tha.

Tanishq : Kya mujhse zyada aur hamari company Autoshield ki deal se zyada important hai?

Autoshield Automobiles ki field me ek bohut bada naam tha.





Sonia ke labb ye baat sunte hi sil ke reh gaye.

Prakash : Ye deal hum haath se jaane nahi de sakte Miss. 120 crores ki deal hai. Agar ye haath se nikli toh-

Baat sunte hi Sonia ne daant meeste hue, mutthi kaste hue khud ko roka. Agar wo nahi jaa sakti thi toh kisi ko bhej toh sakti thi na?

Usne Suchika ki orr dekha. Aur Suchika jaise samajh gayi ki kya karna hai. Woh apni jagah se uth ke nikal gayi.

Idhar Kaera ke circle me Kaera bechain nazro se use dekh rahi thi. Karan se ab aur na raha gaya.

Karan : What the hell is going on? Damn it! This is too much!!!

Uska dost mushqil me ho, toh woh kaise shaant reh sakta tha?

Kaera na jaane kya soch rahi thi par jaise woh kuch chaah rahi thi ki Veer kuch kare. Aisi situation se woh baahar aaye. Bina uski madad ke!

Use puraane saare woh lamhe yaad aa rahe the.

Veer security se ghire hue apna bheega chehra neeche jhukaaye vichaaro me leen tha.

[If that lady would have been here, you wouldn't have been seeing this day.]

That lady?? Lekin kaun?

Pari ek hi shaks ki baat kar rahi thi.

Suhana!

Aaj woh yaha hoti toh kya woh ye sab hone deti? Shayad nahi!

Veer khud ko chhura ke yaha se nikalne waala tha jab ek ajnabi awaaz ne uske kaan khade kar diye.

Banquet hall ke darwaaze ki orr se ek lady ki awaaz poore hall me goonj gayi.

"Not having a c-suite profile is the problem right?"

Tamaam janta ki nigaahein uss ajnabi lady par tikk gayi
. Jinhone pehli baar use dekha unki dhadkane use dekhte hi tezz ho gayi.

Par, uss lady ki aankhein sirf aur sirf Veer par hi tiki hui thi. Baaki janta jaise uske liye hawa ke samaan thi. Usne fir se teevr awaaz me kaha,

"Then, I hereby declare him the CEO of my company."

"Whatttt?"

"Huh??"

Bade se bada aadmi uss pal waha stabdh reh gaya.

Veer ne apna sarr upar kiya. Wine ke aankhon me padne se use dhundhla dikhaayi de raha tha.

'Wh-Who!!?'

Ek khubsoorat si lady uski aankhon ke samaksh thi.

Par jhatka toh tab laga jab-

'Check!'

*Ding*

[No information available!]

'I-It can't be-!'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
This update consists of 8.7k words. Mein chaahta tha ise ek update me hi finish kar du. Lekin kya karu, itna sab kuch hai dikhaane ko ki ek me ho hi nahi paaya. Agle me zaroor ye finish bhi ho jayega aur hum aage bhi badh jayenge iske. Baaki, likes thok ke jaane ka. Aur revos rakhne ka. Kaafi mehnat ki hai mene ek ek scene ko yaha visualise karwane ki. Target apna wahi hai. 150.
Dhanyavaad!

 

[Skkhan7000]

Waiting

 

[king cobra]

werewolf bhai ji aaj first like update par mera hua hai

 

[Sweet_Sinner]

Are kaun pareshan hai bas intzaar me thoda maje le rahe hain ishi bahane time pass ho raha hai

अच्छा जी, साथ में लेखक को बोलो की उसकी तो आदत है हमेशा ऐसा करता है अपडेट का बोलकर अपडेट नही देता है l यही तुम्हारा टाइम पास है यहां पे,,,,, बात तो ऐसी बोलो जो समझ में आए।

 

[Werewolf]

Chup ho jao be dono!!! Saala comments padhne do! Ekdum se itne saare aa gaye.

 

[Werewolf]

Brilliant update

I would request werewolf to give the next update early like before...in 3 days... Else this time people will fight more.

You already raised the temperature of people very high with this great update and I am sure, they will be looking for the next update with nails between their teeth. So Good Luck

Bro dhamekdar update bro

I'm waiting for next update even from now only

Lot of things will happen next
And that will be great and I'm sure ki ye scene ek update me khtm ni hoga so only hope ki jldi updates Mille

Bakki msst update as usual
Keep goining

Fabulous update... It's gonna be a cold war

nice update

Ding aag laga di werewolf bhai adesh bhi ab soch mein padegaa ki veer chiz kya hai both angles are there adesh don't know both are falling for veer.hahaha next update is completely dhamaka best of luck keep posting

Speechless... perfection... detailed review baad me...

Very nice update bhai

Finally job joining के बाद कुछ leave मिला, 10 अपडेट पढ़े, और भाई सबसे पहले तो धन्यवाद इतने busy schedule में से time निकाल कर कहानी continue रखने के लिए वरना इस फोरम के कितने ही बड़े writers देखे है जो lame excuses देकर कहानी बंद कर दिए या अनिश्चितकाल स्थगित कर दिए है।
10 अपडेट के बारे में कहूं तो स्टोरी सही जा रही लेकिन speed थोड़ा बढ़नी चाहिए ऐसा मुझे लगता है।

सबसे पहले वीर की बात करूं तो वीर का एकदम नया अवतार दिख रहा है, cool calm and composed, किसी भी situation में panic ना करने वाला।
कितनी आसानी से भूमिका की मदद की, आराम आराम से अपने सारे plan execute कर रहा, but आगे वीर के लिए मुश्किल आएगी, mission को लेकर नही बल्कि रिश्तों को सम्हालने को लेकर।

वीर के लिए एक नया सर दर्द आया है आदेश जयसिंघानी, अब इसको enemy बोल कर वीर और उसके system की बेज्जती नही करूंगा, i mean जिसने crimson जैसे psycho को handle कर लिया उसके लिए normal human being को handle करना मुश्किल नही होगा, बस देखना है कि एक हफ्ते के भीतर वीर उसे कैसे बर्बाद करेगा, वैसे भी chef on wheels पर attack कराकर उसने पहले ही limit cross कर दी है बाकी छिछोरापन उसने वीर के chef's को hire करके कर दिया है, so I don't think की वीर पूरी तरह से बर्बाद करने में hesistate होगा

But तम्मन्ना ने betrayal किया है सीधे सीधे वीर के भरोसे का नाजायज फायदा और इसकी सजा तो उसे मिलनी ही चाहिए although i m expecting की आगे तमन्ना को वीर अपने लिए use करेगा क्योंकि कही न कही तमन्ना दिल से ये काम नही करना चाहती but मजबूर है क्योंकि आदेश के अहशान खूब सारे है।

So नए arc में एक नए लेवल पर पहुंच गया वीर और साथ ही परी की नई personality भी आई है और सच कहूं तो परी की जितनी भी personality आई उसमें ये सबसे ज्यादा irritating है, जैसे ही वो बात करना शुरू करती है बस चुप करवाने का मन करता है, system का काम है वीर की help करवाना और नई वाली परी ये काम को छोड़ बाकी सारी बकचोदियां कर लेती है, house of killers arc वाली परी, परी की सबसे बेहतरीन version थी but last वाली परी भी awesome थी।
I hope इसकी mommy कहलवाने की fantsy जल्दी ही खत्म हो जाए, काफ़ी weird sound होता है।

पेरिस में इतना बवाल काटने के बाद भी वीर आसानी से बच गया, घर वालो ने ज्यादा सवाल जवाब नही की जितना expected किया था। I thought की भावना सबसे ज्यादा सवाल जवाब करेगी but लगता है की भावना को बस इस बात से मतलब है की उसका बेटा कुछ illegal काम ना करें बाकी उसकी मर्जी की वो कैसे जीना चाहता है। तेज शायद इस डर से नही पूछी की ज्यादा सवाल जवाब करने पर उसके और वीर के बीच दूरी ना पैदा हो जाए

रागिनी, मैं ये नही कहूंगा कि वो सही है, लेकिन अभी जिस स्थिति में है उसका ऐसे react करना वाजिब है, मतलब उसकी जिंदगी में बस एक लक्ष्य था वीर से शादी करके बाकी की जिंदगी खुशी खुशी बिताना but बात ये भी है की अगर वीर मान भी जाता तो क्या ये possible होता, बाकी सब मान जाते?, बाकी सब भी छोड़ो क्या भावना मान जाती जवाब है बिल्कुल भी नहीं

अब भले ही वीर अपनी मां से 20 साल दूर रहने के वजह से कितना भी नाराज हो ले, लेकिन वीर कोई भी ऐसा काम नहीं करेगा जिस से भावना को दुख पहुंचे, और सिर्फ रागिनी को खुश करने के लिए वो ऐसा कोई काम नही करेगा जिससे उसके इतने सारे परिवार वालो को दुख हो
हां मैं ये जरूर कहूंगा की वीर रागिनी को ज्यादा better तरीके से मना कर सकता था जिस से रागिनी को कम तकलीफ होती, situation ज्यादा अच्छे तरीके से handle किया जा सकता था but at the end this is the truth की रागिनी का दिल तो टूटना ही था

और रागिनी से तो बस दिल टूटने की शुरुवात हुई है, अभी दिल टूटने की line लंबी है। इसके बाद निधि,kaira, सुहाना, काव्या और तेज भी तो है। सबको वीर sole चाहिए वो किसी के साथ बांटना नही चाहेंगी और ऐसा तो बहुत कम ही possible है तो दिल तो टूट कर रहेगा।

मुझे लगता है की निधि ने फालतू ही चीजों को perplexed कर लिया है जबकि वो इसे ज्यादा better तरीके से handle कर सकती थी, even यदि वो situation को flow के साथ ही चलने देती तब इतना complicate नहीं होता। अब ना तो वो वीर से दूर रह पा रही है, ना ही वीर के पास आ पा रही है और ना ही किसी और को वीर के करीब देख पा रही है।

काव्या को ये एहसास है की वो वीर से प्यार करती है as boyfriend type और साथ ही ये भी की उसका और वीर का एक होना impossible हैं, अब तक की कहानी में वो सबसे cute character रही है और वीर कभी नही चाहेगा की उसकी सबसे प्यारी बहन को उसकी वजह से तकलीफ हो, लेकिन काव्या के chances तो रागिनी से भी कम है, देखते है आगे कैसे tackle करता है।
वैसे यदि देखा जाए तो वीर को पाने के लिए प्रयास तो सभी करेंगे लेकिन सब किसी न किसी कारण से hesitated है,कुछ न कुछ समस्या है सिवाय kaira और सोनिया के, और at the end वीर के लिए जंग Kaira vs sonia का आखिरी जंग होगा।

नई वाली Kaira की ज्यादा झलक देखने को अभी नही मिली है but जितनी भी देखी लगा की just opposite kaira है, जो ज्यादा खुल कर अपने आप को express करती है, probably kaira kishor के लिए robot जैसे काम नही करेगी।
I am waiting to see when tej will meet kaira मतलब already वो अपने भाई की इतनी सारी females के surrounding से परेशान है अब उसने kaira जैसी beauty आ जाए तो फिर उसकी परेशानी और बढ़ जाएगी। देखते है cassa belle में सोनिया kaira और तेज आमने सामने आते है या नहीं

खैर kaira चाहती है की वीर उसे claim करे but बिना love का कोई sign दिए क्या सच में वीर ऐसा करेगा,
i mean इस कहानी में बस एक kaira ही है जिसे देख वीर खुद को कम आंकने लगता है, औकात के बाहर की लगती है और बस वही इकलौती character है जो वीर को dominate करने का दम रखती है, would love to see their love story
उनकी clothes की नई brand को लेकर जो deal हुई थी उसका क्या हुआ? वो तो कही पीछे ही छुट गया

Well तेज ने better than best तरीके से बहुत rapidly वीर के दिल में खास जगह बनाई है, even आरोही और भूमिका से ज्यादा, उस farm पर की गई तेज की मेहनत ने finally वीर को अहसास कराया की उसकी एक बड़ी बहन है जो actually में उसकी बेहद care और प्यार करती है।
जो desperation थी तेज में अपने भाई के लिए उसको काफी सही से excute किया है उसने जिसमे वो succeed भी हो गई। वक्त के साथ जो भूमिका से compitition की भावना थी वो भी ख़त्म हो गई।

भूमिका से याद आया वीर ने भूमिका को कहा था की उसने उसके लिए chef ढूंढा है, कौन है वो? क्या वो परिजात घर की महिला की बात कर रहा था?

बाकी सब को भी नए arc में ठीक ठाक time मिला है, श्रेया और आभा अपनी journey कैसे आगे बढ़ाती है देखने लायक रहेगा क्योंकि श्रेया तो फिर भी अपने upcoming job को लेकर कुछ plan करके बैठी होगी लेकिन आभा के लिए तो ये whole new adventure होगा।
भावना वापस से site पर चली गई, अब ये चीज मुझे समझ नही आई की अचानक से उसे स्टोरी से गायब क्यों किया जा रहा है, कोई reasonable answer मिला नही, looking for this answer too

बस करन ही अभी तक बेहद कम दिखाई दिया, जोकि मुझे लगता है की ज्यादा होना चाहिए था afterall इस कहानी में वो वीर का इकलौता दोस्त है।

आरोही और वीर की last kiss की conversation कही पीछे छूट गई but yes देख के अच्छा लगा की आरोही वीर के साथ थोड़ा open हुई है at least अपने emotions थोड़े बहुत share करती हैं।

I hope की इसका part 2 जल्दी ही देखने को मिलेगा, आज कहानी अधूरी अधूरी सी लगी क्योंकि बाकी सारे अपडेट किसी conclusion पर खत्म होते थे but इस वाले में सारी important events शुरू होने बाकी है so i hope ये जल्दी देखने को मिले।

Thanks for the wonderful update bhai
Stay happy and
healthy, And as always
Waiting for next update

Hum sach kahun bhai to jaisi meko ummid thi us hisaab se update me na dikha kuch meko jaise mu tod janaab dena tha (sach me mu tod dena tha) waisa kuch hua nai.han ek baat kahunga ki ghayal dusman ko chhod dena matlab dusra mauka dena usko ishiliye kuch Aisa hona chahiye jo adbhut ho

Intjaar....

Mind blowing update Bhai

Nice

Mast update dhasu update..................

dhamaka boss

excellent update

Bahut hi mazedar update Bhai

Werewolf bhai iss forum pr ye mera pehla comment hai and sach batao to mujhe apke story bahut pasand aai hai,
Kya ap bta skte hai ki ye story kis manga se inspired hai ?

Mast update bhai ji maja a Gaya

Just wow.....
Ab or ek suspense....

Bahut badiya update bhai

Buhut badiya update bhai... Excellent

Super

Zabardast update bhai ab dekhna ye hoga ki aage kya hoga

Next update kab aynga

Great update,best story,best writer

Kya hi kahne mere yaar ke

Aaj to aesa update diya hai...

Kahani ke is update ke sath aapne dil ki dhadkan bada si di hai

Ab becheni rahegi aage ke liye

Bahut prefect

It's Amazing update bro......
And Now it remains to know how Veer gets out of this situation... and it will also make something instresting stuff.

What a perfect End bro....
i can't wait for kaera-veer-sonali meeting.....
And the interesting thing is the rivalry between Sonali and Kaera

Fantastic update

बहुत ही बेहतरीन तरीके से प्रस्तुत किया गया अपडेट Werewolf भाई और आपने वीर के जरिए जो खाना खाने का नियम बताए हैं वो भी काबिले तारीफ़ है।

Nice update

Average update samjh sakte hai har baar superb nahi ho sakta but awaiting next anxiously…

nice1

fantastic update bro

awesome update

Toh sabse pehle toh kese ho werewolf bhai aur maafi itne time se review na dene ke liye
Aur ab baat kare update ki toh nhi update ki baat baad mien phele kuch aur baaten ek toh jo ulta sidha bolte hai une ignore karo bc aur ek cheez aur mienne observe ki hai ki update mana late ho rhe hai (jis se mujhe koi taklif nhi hai ) lekin update ka size bhot bada hota which good for us and in the compensation
Aur ab baat kare update ki toh update was as usual contain some funny and some serious and some ruk teri g@nd marta hu ruk type
Aur detailed mien baat kare toh finally apne hourglass method se parda hatya aur legit mujhe nhi laga tha ki yeh koi diet schedule type kuch hoyega ( kyuki mein bhi gym jata hu mere gym wale ne diet ke naam par itna kuch khane ko bol diya ki soch ke hi ase lagta hai yeh diet poori karne mien hi poora din nikal jayega aur uss ke baad bhi khana baj jayega bc phir idhar udhar dhyan chale gya review vapis aa bc sorry) lekin jo bhi bolo yeh jo bhai tumne food blogger wala scene dikhya tha mien toh imagine kar rha tha.aur ase hi hota jab inne kuch naya dikhta hai yeh chutiyon ki tarah photo kich kich karte rehte hai abe bhai phele dekh ko lo yeh tumare aur janta ke fayda ki baat hai yeh nhi (baas janta ko chutiya banna hai) aur iss scene mien bhai aapne bhumika ka food industry ki samjh aur food industry ka experience bhi socase kiya. Lekin yeh aadesh bhot bada badwa hai bc saale ki jab tak maregi nhi na saala samjhe nhi saale ne bhej diya tamanna ko marne ke liye lekin iss baar toh veer bhi taiyar tha maarne ke liya lekin yeh tammana ki entry ekdam realistic type tha kyu ki jab bhi koi bada star aata hai log ase hi chutiya ho jate hai lekin bechari tammana jis kaam ke liye aayi voh toh hua nhi lekin veer ko thodi aur publicity de ( aur haa veer ke pass phele hi bhot publicity toh koi mujhe gali mat dene lag jana ki veer ki phele ki publicity ka kya thik hai bc phir dyan idhar udhar hogya focus focus sorry) lekin tammana ne kosish bhot kari alag alag tarike se jese baar baar bolna ki health care ministry kabhi approve nhi karegi bc Tu kyu marwa rahi hai apni health ministry kare na kare vo sab veer ki tension bhen teri kyu jal rahi hai ( aur haa iss baat par gyan mat dena ki aadesh ke bolne par kar rahi hai mereko pata yeh baat aur haa mien yeh review bakchodi mien likh rha hu iss liye kisi ko bura lage toh vah g@nd marwai) aur haa yeh bhi bol rahi thi Japanese se copied thik hai copied hai lekin veer ne kuch acha karne ka socha toh hai na tunne toh sirf yeh batya ki food should good in taste and have enough amount off nutrition and good presentation and finish you should aware people about there diet schedule or diet plans in your book but nothing aur one and most important thing bhai aapne explaination de kar veer ka kaam karab karne ki kosish ki hai jara usse nhi suun kar jao aur jab humare veer bhaisaab ne explain kiya ko phir kyu dhum dhuba kar bhag gyi tammana rani aur vo tej aur bhumika ka veer ke liye concern arohi ka tej ko rokna choti bhen hote huye bhi ( correct me if I'm wrong here) all these were fantastic.
Aur baat kare aadesh ki ko i want know his plan ? but I know you will not tell me until next update comes fuuuuuuckkkkkkkkk
Aur kritika aur kavya ki baatein sunn kar toh ase lag rha ki kavya vo pehli ladki hoyegi vo veer se incest hoyigi kya?
Lekin jo bhi bolo inki conversation badiya thi.
Aur ab baat kare finally my favorite kaera ki ko entry ko issi tarah ki honi chahiye in mam ki ekdam erotic and attitude in the story lekin werewolf bhai gussa bhot aaya tha tum pe end mien phir veer aur kaera ki baat nhi karwaai phir ab iss ke liye intezaar karo fuck lekin mujhe yeh nhi samajh aaya why kaera ask julie whether she knows hindi aur not? damm one more question fuck
Aur finally baat kare party scene ki ko bc kaha ati hai ladkiyaan ase hot baan ke bhai mien bhi parties mien gya hu ase hot band ke ayi ladkiyon ko aaj tak nhi dekha just joking about the things I write above about girls sorry girls if it sound bad sorry .

Lekin jo bhi dekhne wali baat hoyegi what is big bash? mereko ek hi big bash pata jo hai big bash league that it.

Dekhne wali baat yeh bhi hoyegi how veer is going face oof kaera, sonia with their families and yes with veer family also?

Aur ha update fucking good i know you don't like read aur listen nice update or good update but your update was nice and good also as usual.
Aur haa maafi agar kuch Spelling mistakes yeh word mistake hoti ho

Aur haa yeh review above 900 words hai (bc itna school mien S.A likha hota toh madam 10 mien 15 number deti )

BAHUT HI SHAANDAAR LAJAWAAB JABARDUST FANTASTIC MIND BLOWING AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI

Der Aaye Durust Aaye
Lakeen Isme Itna Maza Nhi Aaya Bhai.
Hope NXT Update Much Thrilling For Us

Nice n fantastic

Awesome

Nice update bro

Mast update bhai

Lovely update

Wondering update

Shaandaar update tha Bhai . Expecting your upcoming exciting update dear bro for

Nice update

Shandar update

Nice update bhai...
Next update lagta hai dhamakedar hone wala hai.. sab ek jagah par ekthe hue hai.
veer ke khilaf kuch bada plan banaya hai.

Waiting for next update.

Beautiful update

Superb update....
Tamanna was completely controlled by Aadesh ..
Uski upar Veer konsa step leta hai woh dekhne layak rahega....
Aadesh Veer trap beecha raha hai...
It will be thrilling....
Party par sab hai, Kavya , Arohi, Bhoomika , Sonia aur Kaera ....
Veer buri tarah se fasne wala hai...
for such a beautiful update

Bhai story itni achi hai ki mujhe jo update pasand tha mai usko phir se read kar raha hu

Nice update

Supper fantastic update janab

Aj se yahi diet follow Krna hai Bhai log Maine start kr diya hai bhai update mat tha bhut late aya bhai bs next update main dekhna hoga Sonia kaera kaise milti hai Bhai maja a jaega Bhai thoda jldi try kijiye next update ka

Nice update

Super se bhi upper update brother to gud finally kaira and sonia both on the same place with veer eagerly waiting veer kaise sb kuch handle krta h aur Sonia aur kaera ka kya reaction hoga usko wha dekh ke plz plz plzz do cont asap take care

Shandar update bro

Thora boaring update hain ye sayad aage maza aaye last ke kuch der acha laga

Tamanna aayi to bohat tamna lekar magar usne veer ke samjhane ka kaam asan kar diya to ek tarah se woh uski help hi kar gayi anjane me. Kisi cheez ko samjhana easy hota hai jab koi aapse sawal jawab me poochey aur aadhi cheez to usne khud hi samjha Diya.

Ab dekhna yah hai ki adesh sb ab kaun sa adesh detay hain I mean kis tarah ki setting kar rakhi hai unhoney koi na koi gadbad to zaroor karega Banda magar dekhna hoga ki woh gadbad hai kiya. Aur veer kaisay usse bahar nikalta hai waisay bhi veer waha per control karne ke liye jaa raha thaa aur adesh veer ke sath gadbad karna chahta hai sab celebrities ke aage usko zaleel yah neecha dikhana chahta hai taki uska jo celebrity jaisa craze hai woh khatam ho jaye.

Ab dekhna hai ki kaun apne maqsad me kamyab hota hain. Iske liye agli update ka intezar rahega.

Bahut badhiya update diya hai Werewolf bhai.....
Nice and awesome update.....

bahut hi badia updare

bahut hi badia updare

Super duper update bro
Cant wait for the next one
Please be hurry

next update

Agar Adesh ko maar peet na karni hai to itne bouncers kyu magaye hain update ho sake to jaldi dena

Nice update

यह अध्याय ठीक से समझा नही मै । क्या आप वीर के माध्यम से यह कहना चाहते है कि सुबह का नाश्ता और रात का डिनर भरपेट होना चाहिए और दोपहर का भोजन अल्पाहार होना चाहिए !

जहां तक मुझे लगता है किसी भी क्षेत्र का डाॅक्टर या किसी भी प्रकार का डाॅक्टर का सलाह यही होता है कि ब्रेकफास्ट हल्का , लंच हैवी , डिनर औसत मात्रा मे होना चाहिए।
वैसे प्रत्येक शरीर अलग-अलग तरीके से काम करता है क्योंकि हमारी अपनी प्रवृति होती है । आप ध्यान देंगे तो आपको पता चलेगा कि शरीर आपकी अपनी जरूरतों को बताने के लिए विभिन्न संकेत देता है , जैसे कि जब वह भूखा हो या जब आपने पेट भर लिया हो। आपकी पचाने की क्षमता और चयापचय की शक्ति को ध्यान मे रखते हुए , अग्नि का अच्छा संतुलन बनाए रखने के लिए भोजन की उचित एवं संतुलित मात्रा महत्वपूर्ण है।
आयुर्वेद कहता है कि दोपहर के समय आपकी पाचन शक्ति सबसे अधिक होती है। हमारी पाचन शक्ति को आयुर्वेद मे अग्नि कहा जाता है। अग्नि ताप उर्जा को संदर्भित करता है , जो सभी पाचन एवं चयापचय कामो के मूल मे है।
ऐसा कहा जाता है कि अग्नि दोपहर के समय सबसे अधिक होती है जब सुर्य अपने चरम पर होता है। इस बेला को पित का समय भी कहा गया है। यही वह समय है जब पाचन शक्ति सबसे ताकतवर होती है और इसलिए खाना आसानी से पच जाता है। दोपहर के समय एंजाइम या पाचक रस भी अधिक सत्रावित करता है
लोग बाग दोपहर के समय कार्य मे व्यस्त होते है इसलिए अधिक भोजन भी शरीर हजम कर लेती है।
लेकिन सुबह का भोजन नाश्ता की तरह ही होना चाहिए। यदि भूख ज्यादा हो तो फल , दूध , मेवे का इस्तेमाल किया जा सकता है।
रात का भोजन संतुलित होना चाहिए । न अधिक न ही कम। बहुत मुश्किल होता है रात के भोजन को डाइजेस्ट होने मे। इसीलिए लोग अक्सर डिनर के बाद थोड़ा-बहुत टहलना पसंद करते है।

वैसे वीर को आदेश ने आमंत्रित क्यों किया गया है ? क्या वो अपने सेवन स्टार होटल और वीर के ट्रक फूड बिजनेस का कंपेयर कर वीर का मजाक उड़ाना चाहता है ? वैसे वीर के साथ आदेश का कोई डायरेक्ट सम्बन्ध अबतक हमे दिखाई नही दिया तो फिर उसने वीर को आमंत्रण पत्र कैसे दे दिया ? और वीर ने इस निमंत्रण को स्वीकार कैसे कर लिया ?
कुछ तो पृष्ठभूमि होनी चाहिए थी इस निमंत्रण की !

जब वीर वहां जा ही रहा है तो ऐसा मुझे लग रहा है कि उसकी वहां बड़ी फजीहत होने वाली है और वो भी अनगिनत सुन्दरियों के बीच ।
यह भी समझ नही आया कि आदेश साहब ने काव्या की सहेली और उसके परिवार को क्यों आमंत्रित किया । ये लोग तो उसके स्टैंडर्ड के थे ही नही । यह भी जरूर उसके स्कीम का हिस्सा होगा ! लेकिन क्या ?

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट वेयरवोल्फ भाई।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग अपडेट।

Very nice update Bhai

intezaar rahega next week ka excitement continue

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Super nice Update .
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Ab aage kya hoga dekha jaega.
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Kahani kahan se kahan tak pahuch gayi.
System ki ladai ab sehat, aayurved aur diet plan tak pahuch gayi hai.


Jahan tak baat hai kritika aur uski family ko bulane ki to aisa to kahi nahi likha ki kritika aur uski family gareeb hai, haa kritika aadesh yaa karan ke level ki kahi se nahi hai.

Aur kritika ke papa ka car travel aur security provider ka business hai to pehchan to unki bhi bade logo tak hogi sath hi paisa bhi thik thak hoga.

Jahan tak rahi invitation ki baat to jaisa ki update me likha hai ki aadesh pehle se hi kritika ke papa se services leta rha hai aur isbar bhi party me unki cars aur security mangi hai. Ab jisko aap kafi vakt se jante hai aur apne business me uski help lete hai to aise moke par to invitation dena ek formality banti hi hai. Jaisa ki aadesh ne kiya.

Aur update me dekhne ko bhi milta hai ki party ke liye kritika hi excited hai na ki uske father. Unke liye ye sirf ek tarah ka business contract hi hai. Kritika ek young ladki hai to aisi party ke liye vo excited hogi hi.

Ab isme koi alag se khass connection ki jarurat nahi, halaki connection to yahi hai ki kritika indirectly veer se judi hui hai. Jiska abhi aadesh ko pta nahi.

Mere simple observation me to iss baat me isse jyada kuch aur najar nahi aata.
Baki agar Werewolf bhai koi connection nikal de to keh nahi sakte.

Excellent update

Bhai is story ka koi jawab hi nhi hai....yha ki best story hai....pta nhi kaise pr is story ko itne like tk pahochane ke Liye Kitne logo ne na chahte huye bhi register kr Liya Apne aapko ...silent reader se registered reader BN gye....hats off bro....there is no word to describe your story and writing skills...

Achi update bhai. Keep up the Good work magar jldi updates ya at least koi schedule bta do. Thank you

I hope you remember this update with minute details... Even the earlier ones. I am reading all again to make sure I do not miss anything interesting

zabarjast comeback bro
great update.....
keeep going...

Pa g 165 ho gye

Next update kab Tak ayega Bhai ye update to bhut acha tha diet plan bhi sahi hai but isse mann nhi bhara Bhai next update thoda jldi ka try kijiye please bhai

Interesting as always building up to the bang that is about to unfold next. Aur bhai aapki late aake lambe updates dene ki mehnat bhi dikhti hai. Saara delay compensate ho jaata hai. Bas bhaiji ek sujhav tha.. aap aksar 'aur' ke liye 'athwa' ka prayog karte hain, 'athwa' ka arth 'yaa', jise english mein 'or' kehte hain, hota hai. Please ispe dhyan dijiega

Nice update...

Bro mind blowing update bro weting for next update bro

Sb kuch bdia chal ra h except update timing ke...u r not following the schedule as u promised in previous update.. Anyways, hoping is update ke bad se purane schedule se update ane lagenge

Bhai maza aa gaeya laken hr baat ki trha is baar bhee suspense pr khattam keeya aap ney let’s see Ab Veer Sonia or Keara dono ko 1 sath kaos ey handle krey ga especially jb waha Tej bhee hai to or about sey barh k Adesh. I know you are best to solve all the matters very easily but currious to knows what will happen in between Veer and Kear when then met after a long period. Btw thanks for wonderful episode and waiting for the next one. I wish you good luck bro

Bilkul sir.. aapki iss near perfect story mein hum kamiyo ki koi gunjaish nahi rehne denge.. aap aise hi likhte rahiyega, hum aapko chodd ke kahin jaa nahi payenge

Nice update

वुल्फ भाई मेने आपका एक कमेंट देखा था जिसमे आपने बोला था की अब जितने भी विलेन आएंगे वो सभी क्रिमसन से बड़े लेवल के होंगे लेकिन ये आदेश , वीर
के किस. गेर में आएगा ।
हाँ ये हो सकता है कि आदेश , वीर की फॅमिली के लिए प्रॉब्लम क्रिएट करे ।
अगले अपडेट का इंतज़ार !!!!!!

धीरे धीरे ही सही कहानी सही मुकाम पा रही है।

Mast update h bhai...

Bhai matalab ek number update tha maja aa gya itne update ho gye lekin aisa lag hi nhi rha ki story khich rhi hai balki har update ke saath Or bhi majedaar hoti ja rhi hai.... Kabhi aisa lagta hai ki ab khatam ho rhi hai but modaisa aata hai ki Sare thoughts badal jaaate hai predictions dhari rah jati hai mind blowing story bilkul sateek tarike se bad rhi hai... Bilkul bhi unnecessary topic nahi hai...... Story to aap bahut acha likh rhe ho update bhi de rahe ho ek request ma'am ko ab jyada intezaar na karwao.... . Aur hourglass method mast tha i really like it........... Thxxx aisi story likhne ke liye.. . Keeep writing always.....

Sorry to say this, can't we get an update tonight as we all have seen delays from last many days so any surprise update will make everyone happy and obviously you might get tired

Fu..fu ..fu...

Bhai bohot ache se likhte ho story. Sach mein padke maja aa raha h. Jaise tum sab kuch balance karte hue likhte ho. Kahi kahi to mera khud ka life yaad aata h story padte padte.

Agla update bohot wait karr rahe h. Kab tak expect kar sakte h agla update.

Ek sawaal hai mera maar peet Adesh ne suru karai tod fod hui veer ka nuksaan hua staaf hospital me hain.veer ne gundon ko sabak sikha diya lekin in sabke piche Jo the wo safe hain veer powerful hai chahe to pura ka pura hotel hi ujaad de uska lekin chalo koi na wo baat se kaam chalayega lekin aage Adesh maan lo dobara attack karwaye aur is baar sidha Veer ke upar kyuki khunnas khaya aadmi kuch bhi kar sakta aur usne Kiya bhi hai

Werewolf u r so compatible and having god gifted writing skill so plz carry on

Business plan with Kaera, Suhana...


Also, what will happen to the task given by the System to teach a lesson to Aadesh. I am expecting a big revenge here, although you have said that this arc is mainly family, business and love based, but still the fight level was really high during crimson arc so this time, expectations are also high for Aadesh

yes bro.... sorry for mistake... my bad

waiting next update

This is not fair werewolf bro... I am waiting to see kaera from so many weeks and you delivered in in this update but just glimpse of it...


Update is also gone I have to wait a week or more to see kaera...


Otherwise update was outstanding... A werewolf update I have to say...


Waiting for more updates please deliver it soon...

Waahhh... intezar ka phal meetha hota hai, ye baat aaj prove ho gayi, bahut hi informative aur badhiya update tha, aur lamba bhi. Waise ye kahavat yo suni thi ki - Have breakfast like a king, lunch like a queen and dinner like a pauper, per ye Japanese inverted triangle ke baare me pehli baar padha. Your capacity to go into details is find new facts in mindblowing. Tamanna ko bahut hi karara jabav mila.
A aate hain big bash pe, mujhe nahi pata tha ki Aadesh itna bada businessman hai, ki jiski party me na chahte huye bhi Kaera ko jana pad raha hai. Saaf hai ki Kaera aur Sonia ko ek saath face kerna mushkil hai, lekin ye ek oppurtunity bhi hai jahan sab badr business walon ke samne Veer apne aap ko introduce kerva sakta hai, Kaera aur Sonia sse freindly ho ker.
Ye Suhana nahi dikh rahi. Tabiyet to theek hai na uski ya phir weh phir America chali gayi hai.
Akhir Kavya ke mann me Veer ke premi wali feelings jaag hi gayi.
Abhi bhi Kaera ka task bhi latka hua hai aur Ava ka koi pata nahi. Mana usne pahadi se kuddi maar di thi, lekin mujhe nahi lagta wo itni jaldi story se gayab ho jayegi. Akhir trinity ka weh ek ahem part hai.
Bhumika ko dekh ker Ragini kafi unsecure ho gayi hai. Dekhte hain ki wo ab kis tarah se Veer ke saath uske business me involve hoti hai.

Lajawab update

Shayad ye ab tak ka kaafi alag update tha...
I read some of the comments nd saw that ppl are viewing this as an average update... which I can understand...

But honestly ye mujhe kaafi pasand aaya... Maybe because I understood what you were trying to explain there... compliment ki baat ye nhi h ki aapne food k upar likha... compliment ki baat ye h ki aap jaante the ki ye kuch updates food centred ho rhe h aur aapko kuch aisa laana padega jis se Veer ka food business me hona justify lage...

aur aapne wo kia... inverted triangle method mne Google krke dekhi thi kal... honestly wo sach me effective h... lekin jis tarah se aapne usko morph kia h... like hourglass me convert krna us shape ko... nd Veer telling that he has designed it for our Indian population not for Japanese... which makes sense... kyuki unki aur hamari diet, food, work schedule aur culture me zameen asman ka fark h... this was worth appreciating...

Also kavya aur Kritika ka sweet convo mujhe bahut accha lga... kaafi time se ye missing tha. Kavya khud Missing si thi.. aur is scene se aapne ye bhi bata diya ki kavya k kya thoughts h Veer ko leke.... at least hum readers ko kuch to hint mil gyi kavya k baare me...

Ab blast hone wala h .. my goddd.... sab k sab casa Belle padhar chuke h... I also liked ki aapne uss scene ko bhi dikhaya.. tej ne promise Kia tha kavya ko ki woh unn dono ko car driving teach kregi... aur fir rolls Royce ka repair k liye Jana... ye mini mini details bahut sweet lagti h aur kahani me chaar chaand laga deti h...

lekin next update se mujhe bahut umeed h... kyuki sab k sab ek jagah pe honge... aapko sirf conversations nhi dikhani h... aapko past k interactions ki memories bhi narrate karni hongi...

for example... tej ne jab Suhana k baare me Jana tha to woh shocked thi ki uska bhai suhana se connected h... aur Sonia se bhi... ab wo jab Sonia ko live dekhegi to uske reaction me use wo baat yaad aani chahiye ki Veer ne use iss baare me bataya tha ki wo unse familiar h...

you get my point right? Kaafi tough kaam hone wala h ye update aapke liye

ab maza aaega... Kaera ka kya reaction hoga... tej ka .. Arohi nd kavya ka... aadesh ka...

waiting eagerly for that next update...
Ab wait ni ho paa rha h... plz deliver it as soon as possible... love ur work always...

waiting next update

Update 161 please

waiting for next update bro

Bhai 150 jaghah 190 ho geya...... Update kidhar hai

Mazza aa gya.... Maine din rat 1 krke 2 din Sare update khatam kr diya.... Nice bro keep it

अब आगे ििनतजार होगा

Bahot jabardast update bhai
Mujhe to ye dekhna hai veer kinse shadi krta hai

Waiting

Nice update

Waiting for the next update

bhai target ke matlab hota hai ki target ager pura kiya to hum jeet geye.....or ya jeetne ka matlab hua update jaldi hi aayega isiliye pucha......apko bura laga ho maff kar dena bhai..
i'm extramly sorry

waiting waiting waiting

Waiting.....

Sonia dikhae di ya mujhe vaham hua?

Bejod, Bemisal, Bakamal or Behtreen update bhai....
Ekdam dhansoo, Jabardast, Shandaar or Lajwaab update Bhai....

Fantastic update

Tamanna n ek Baar fir se apna kaam ker dia tha lekin jab veer n apni baat rakkhi tow saari public ko samajh aa gaya ki woh sahi h
Yeh adesh kuch bada kerne jaa raha h veer k khilaf isliye itni badi party rakkhi h or itne bade bade bade celebratyion ko bulaya h
Dekhte h kia hota h
Behtareen shaandar update

Truly amazing Bhai shabad bhi kam padh jaye tarif ke liye esi updates aa rhi Or upar se veer ka incest kehna to galat hoga abhi but family ladies specially sisters se interaction or unse ghulna milna bhi kafi badh gya hai hope so kuch tadke daar dekhne ko milega ane wale kuch updates Mai next wale Mai to shayad cassa bella ka bhanda ache se phoot hi jaye ( fingers cross )

Nice behtarin mast awesome update bro

bahut behtarin update brother

waiting next update werewolf brother

Bhai ugla update kab aayega

Waiting for update bhai

intezar main

Waiting for next update bhai

Ding werewolf bhai hour glass ki reit khatam hone wali hai update ka intezar hai

Please Update Dear werewolf

Intjaar....

Waiting

waiting waiting waiting

Waiting

Fabulous update bro

Jabardast update

Waiting for next

Good knowledge lessons update

Bhai mega update dene ke liye thanks

Nice update. Next one is going to be a blockbuster update can't wait warewolf bhai

Last update was on Friday

Ding don't count days

Ding expectations from writer got new job new town new city new accomodation new time table New bed weekly update bajegi

Copy cannot replace the original

Bhai ap jis story ki bat kar rahe hai main smjh raha hun maine usko pucha tha wo to bol raha hai story alag hai

Jabardast update bhai.

Bhai bhut update hogaye aapne jo heera veer ke gale main latka rahta hai uski power veer ko nahi mili dikhya aur uska chacha and uska beta pranjal ke sath fight and suhana ki sister ke sath veer ka koi aur seen and naari shakti bali lady ke sath koi kand dikhaya

Copies can never replace the original sir...
market me top brands ki various copies aati h... Nike Adidas ko dekh lo aap...

nikee, abibas aate h market me... par chalta kon h??? You know better than me.

Aap apni story pe focus kariye... We are with u always... Also jo baat apki writing style me h... Wo same baat copies me nhi ho sakti...

They can copy ur text style nd a little bit of writing style... But how can they copy ur imagination??? Your story plot is insane. None of the system story can exceed your original work here... So don't worry... Nd give us the update for which we r waiting for eagerly... Ab to ek week ho gya... Jaldi se dedo...

But Agar Brand Ki Value Jyada Badh Jaye To.
.
Copies Jyaada Bikate Hai.

Waiting

Intjaar....

Waiting

Waiting

Update ke besabri intezaar mein

Ok ab ham samajh gay app
Ko aur time lagega update Dene ke liye
Iss hi liye app update par bath nyy karra he ho na kay myy sahi hoo

Sonia and kaera come back and together
so veer got chance to show his relations

waiting

Waiting for next update

Waiting bro....
Kya aj night Update milega ya fir intazaar ka irritation?

Update please

Waiting for new update

Kitna bhi late night aye... Aaj wait karenge bhai...

Bilkul sahi bole h...But koi bat nhi update aaj nhi aya tu kal aa jayega...2 din bad aa jayega..

Bhai kitna likh lia, kab tk de rahe ho update?

Ek story aap likhiye aur lekhak ban ke dekhiye, aur mahsus kijiye jab aap readers ke satisfaction ke liye effort karte hain, aur readers aise comments karte hain.

Kahna aasan hai aur karna mushkil.

भाई लोग , मैं पहले भी ये बात बोल चुका हूं कि लेखक अपनी मर्जी से यहां पे कहानी लिखता है उसे कोई जरूरत नहीं है कि वो आपको अपडेट का समय बताए या अपडेट दे, आप लोग उसे कोई पैसे नही दे रहे हो, जो बात बात पे लेखक को उल्टा सीधा बोलते रहते हो। ये उसकी मर्जी है जब उसे अपडेट देना होगा देगा।। यदि आपको इतना भी सब्र नहीं होता है तो खुद की कहानी लिख लो पता चल जायेगा । अपडेट मांगने और देने में कितना फर्क होता है।

Finally some good news

Update 161 has been posted guys.

 

[Werewolf]

Index has been updated.

 

[Werewolf]

Kuch 3-4 revos ke replies dena baaki hai. Woh mein kal night tak dunga. Baaki naye waale dete rehne ka.

 

[PS10]

Awesome Brilliant update