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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

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Nice update. Update mein kuch khas nhi tha yeh aane wale updates k liye ek bulid up hai Khair. Werewolf bro ek request hai ho sake tho Chinatown arc is month mein shuru kar dena
 
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Mega Update

Update - 109 ~ Goodbye
Ab tak...

Aur agle hi second, woh anjaan shaks Veer ko wahi akela chorr gungunaate hue waha se seedha nikal gaya jese Veer uske liye sirf hawa ke samaan tha.

Aur alley me fir ek baar shaanti chhaa gayi,

Par uske bol abhi bhi Veer ke dimaag me zorr zorr se goonj rahe the....

"YOU ARE JUST ME PREY!"

"Also..."

"System... Sirf tumhaare paas nahi hai! VEER!"


Ab aage...

*Chirp* *Chirp* *Chirp*

Pakshiyo ki cheh-chahahat ne naye sawere ko ingit kiya. Palke jhapki, aankho se dhundhlapan hata aur ek pyaari sii ladki ki neend me se aankh khul gayi.

Usse baahar se ek aurat ki awaaz sunaayi dii, "Suhana? Ooo Suhana? Uthi ki nahi abhi tak? School nahi jaana kya? Sonu uth gayi hai!!"

Apni Maa, Namrita ki subah subah awaaz sunn Suhana fauran hi bed se uth ke baith gayi aur badle me awaaz lagaate hue boli, "Haan Mamma! Uth gayi hu! Aayi bas."

Woh bina aalas dikhaaye uthi, washroom me jaa ke fresh hui aur baahar aake school ki uniform pehen ke ready hone lagi. Jab woh baahar aayi toh Namrita uske tiffin me uske liye lunch rakh rahi thi toh wahi ek maid Sonia ke bag me uska tiffin rakh rahi thi.

Sab kuch leke dono behne baahar nikli aur ek car jo pehle se hi lagi hui thi gate par uske andar jaa ke baith gayi.

Suhana ne apni choti behan Sonu ko dekha aur muskuraa ke uss se puchi, "Homework kar liya na Sonu?"

"Didi woh toh raat me hi kar liya tha!" Woh jawaab me boli.

"Good!" Aur unki car school ki orr chal dii.

Jab gaadi unke school ke gate ke baahar aake ruki toh dono baahar nikal ke apni apni saheliyo ka intezaar karne lagi.

Kuch derr baad, 2 gaadiya aur aake wahi nazdeek ruki aur dono me se behad pyaari pyaari bacchiyaa nikal ke baahar aayi. Unn dono ko dekhte hi idhar nanhi Sonia ke chehre par muskaan bikhar gayi.

"Kaeraaaa~ Avaaaa~" Haath hiilaate hue usne zorr se awaaz lagaayi toh dono ladkiya daudte hue uske paas aayi.

"Chale?" Kaera ne aate hi pucha.

"Hmm! Didi mein jau?" Sonia Suhana se puchi toh Suhana ne badle me haa me gardan hila dii.

"Hello Didi! Good morning~" dono hi Kaera aur Ava ne Suhana ko greet kiya.

"Hmm!" Suhana ne bhi haami bhari.

"Soniaaaa~" bagal me khadi Ava tabhi pukaari, "Ye dekho butterfly. Kitni sundar hai na?"

"Ohhhh wooowwww! Didi dekho! Iske pankh kitne sundar hai na?"

Sonia ne Suhana ko ek khubsoorat sii titli dikhaate hue kaha jo wahi ek phool ki patti par baithi hui thi.





"Hmm! Khubsoorat hai." Suhana boli.

Par tabhi peeche se unhe Kaera ki awaaz sunaayi dii, "Pathetic! Insignificant! Pitiful!"

"Ah!! Ye tum kya keh rahi ho Kaera? Didi dekho Kaera butterfly ke liye kya keh rahi hai."

"Titliya mujhe pasand nahi." Kaera uss titli ke nazdeek aayi, "Inki life sirf 15 se 28 days tak ki hi hoti hai. Ye jaldi marr jaati hai. I hate it."

"Ahhh!!! T-Toh ye titli bhi marr jaegi?" Ava bechain ho uthi.

"Hmm~" Kaera ne Sonia ka haath pakadte hue bola, "Isliye titliyaa bekaar hoti hai. Chalo assembly shuru hone waali hai."

Aur woh waha se Sonia aur Ava dono ko leke andar jaane lagi.

"Waaaaaa~ Didiiiii!!! Titliii~"

Suhana bas Sonia ko jaate hue dekhti rahi. Uski nigaahein fir uss phool par baithi titli par jaa ke tik gayi.

Kya uski zindagi bhi aisi hi thi? Titli bhi apni zindagi akele jeeti thi. Apni zindagi ke nirnay akele leti thi. Kab maut aa jaaye kisse pata? Chand dino ka hi jeevan rehta tha unka.

Inhi baato me woh khoyi hui thi ki woh titli agle hi pal waha se udd gayi. Aur Suhana ka dhyaan waapas se gate ke baahar sadak par gaya.

Ek van aake ruki aur uss se ek ladki utar ke Suhana ki taraf aayi,

"Roz roz itna late kyu hoti ho?" Uss ladki se Suhana ne pucha.

"Arre baba mein van se aati hu. Tumhari tarah car nahi hai mere paas personal. Aur van wala dus jagah gaadi rokta hai."

Uss ladki ne apni majboori vyakt karte hue kaha. Ye koi aur nahi, balki Suhana ki param sakha Divya thi.

Jaha Suhana 7th class me thi toh wahi Divya ka school me ye last year tha. Woh 12th me thi.

Dono ki dosti bhi badi hi ajeeb thi. Ye woh samay tha jab Suhana apni sakha ko 'aap' keh kar pukaarti thi. Chuki Divya umr me badi thi uss se.

School me saari ladkiya Suhana ko ajeeb nazro se dekhti. Ye kesi ladki hai bhala? Khud 7th me hai, par dosti 12th class ki ladki se kari hui hai?

Yahi haal Divya ka bhi rehta. Divya ki class ke log usse aise dekhte jese woh khud ek bacchi ho. Par dono saheliyo ko inn sab baato se koi matlab nahi tha.

Dono ki dosti ab aapas me ho gayi toh kya kar sakte the isme bhala? Divya ka ghar nazdeek hi tha Suhana ke ghar se jiske chalte dono me dosti ho gayi thi.

Abhi dono aage badh school ke assembly hall me ghus hi rahi thi jab peeche se ek awaaz unhe sunaayi dii, "Helloooo didi!!! Ehehe~"

Ek nadaan sa pyaara ladka daudte hue aaya.

"Pushkar? Tum aaj bhi late?" Suhana ne aankh dikhaate hue pucha.

"Hehe~ Auto late rehta hai hamara roz. Aur ye aapke liye~"

Usne apne haath se ek phool Suhana ko thama diya aur ucchalte koodate woh tata bye-bye kar bhaag gaya.

"Ye chotu bhi natkhat hai bada! Hmm? Suhana? Kaha kho gayi?"

"N-Nahi! Kuch nahi! Chaliye! Par aapne sahi kaha. Ye ladka paagal hai poora."

***

Kehte hai samay bhi ek pahiye ki tarah hota hai, jo nirantar ghoomta jaata hai. Suhana jo school me thi, dekhte hi dekhte college me aa chuki thi.

Zamana badal raha tha, duniya badal rahi thi. Parivar ka mahaul badal raha tha. Aur issi beech usne ek badlaav mehsoos kiya. Apni choti behan Sonu me aaya ek badlaav.

Aur aaj toh usne thaan lii thi iss baat ko uthaane ki, "Mein kab se dekh rahi hu tumhe! Ye sab kya chal raha hai Sonu?"

"Kya hai dii?"

"Tumhari ye harqate. Na khaane me dhyaan rehta hai tumhara, na family me kisi se baat karna hai tumhe, koi aata hai toh tum unhe greet bhi nahi karti ho aur bas poore din alag alag books leke padhne me lagi rehti ho? Kya hai ye sab? Padhna acchi baat hai par aise...!? Bolo! Kya chal raha hai ye sab?"

"Aap jaaiye dii, aap jaaiye! Aap nahi samjhengi!"

"Kya nahi samjhungi? Haan? Meri baat ka jawaab do So--!?"

Par iske pehle ki woh apni choti behan ke muh se uska jawaab sunn paati, Sonia apne kamre ke andar chali gayi.

*Thud*

Aur usne andar se darwaza bhi band kar liya.

"Sonuuuuuuu~" woh bewajah hi pukaarti reh gayi.

Daraar!

Aaj pehli baar Suhana ko ye anubhooti hui ki uske aur Sonu ke beech kuch meelo ka faasla aa chuka tha.

Aur unke beech ka ye gap samay ki tarah badhta hi gaya. Jab bhi koi family gathering hoti, dono ki tulna usme na ho aisa kahi ho sakta tha?

"Arre Shailendra Saahab! Aapki choti bitiya!! Kya kehne jii uske. Itni hoshiyaar hai. Meri beti boht tareef karti hai uski hahaha~"

"Hahaha~ Jii dhanyavaad!"

"Wese badi bitiya kya kar rahi hai apni?"

"Badi bitiya college me hai abhi. Suhana! Zara idhar toh aana!"

"Namaste uncle!"

"Arre arre namaste! Toh aap college yahi se kar rahi ho beta? Foreign se nahi!?"

"Jii nahi uncle!"

"Arre...! Aapki choti behan ka toh aim set hai abhi se. Woh baahar jaane ka plan bana rahi hai. Fir aap kyu nahi?"

"Jii nahi mein na--"

"Chalo koi baat nahi. Hahahaha~ Shailendra saahab bulaaiye zara apni choti bitiya ko. Meri bitiya bhi aayi hai dono ko company bhi mil jaegi ek dusre ki."

"Hahaha~ kyu nahi... Kyu nahi...! Sonia beta! Zara idhar aao."

Aur dekhte hi dekhte Sonia, Shailendra aur Namrita dherr saare mehmaano ke beech Sonia ki tareefo me ghum ho gaye.

Unn logo ke beech woh teeno kahi nazar bhi nahi aa rahe the. Sabhi ne unhe gher rakha tha aur sab Sonu ki tareef me lage hue the.

Suhana dekh paa rahi thi. Sonu ke bagal se Pushkar uska dost aur uski anya saheliya, uske rishtedaar kese uske ird gird sab khush the.

Toh wahi, Suhana apne aap dhakka mukki me uss bheed se baahar kar dii gayi. Uske apne uss bheed me the. Fir bhi woh unka ek hissa hone ke bawajood, nakaar dii gayi.

Lekin,

Jab uski nazre Sonu par tiki hui thi. Tab bhi uske hontho par muskaan saji hui thi.

Koi jalan nahi, koi ghrina nahi, koi tulna nahi. Apni choti behan ke prati, sirf pyaar.

Ek ashru ki boond aankh se chhalakti hui uske gaalo se fisal kar neeche jaa giri.

Tab, uske sarr par ek haath aake thama.

"??? Dada jii?"

"Hmm! Meri bachhi! Naraaz ho?"

"Nahi Dada jii!"

"Toh ye aasu kese?"

"Bas aise hi nikal aaye... Abhi band ho jaenge!"

"Meri beti...! Ek baat yaad rakhna. Samay! Ghaav ko theek nahi karta. Woh sirf hume unke sang jeena sikhaata hai."

"...."

"Aao mere saath!"

"Hmm~"

Aur apne Dada jii ke sang woh bhi uss bheed me chal dii. Sonu ki khil-khilaati muskaan dekh uske zehen me bas ek hi baat aayi,

'You will always remain my pride! Sonu!'

***

Waqt guzra aur Divya jo Suhana ki bachpan ki saheli thi woh America ki orr nikal padi thi. Usse crime studies me interest tha aur ek detective ya cyber security me kaam karna hi uska lakshya tha.

Usse waha rehte abhi kuch mahine hi hue the jab uski Zindagi bhi poori tarah se badal ke reh gayi.

*Ring* *Ring*

Suhana ka phone baja aur screen par apni puraani sakha ka naam dekh ke hi uska dil khush ho gaya,

"Hello! Bolo Divya! Kesi ho?"

"Boht badi gadbad ho gayi hai Suhana!"

"K-Kya hua??"

"Pushkar...!"

"Huh?"

"Pushkar idhar Vegas me hai. Mene khud usse dekha hai. Drugs deal karte hue."

"Kyaaaa?????"

Ghabraate hue woh uth khadi hui.

"Par... Par aisa kese ho sakta hai?"

"Tumne hi mujhe kuch hafte pehle bataya tha na Suhana? Ki Pushkar apna ghar chorr ke bhaag gaya hai?"

"Haan haan! Woh bhaaga hai. Isliye toh Sonu itni pareshaan hai. Par woh waha? Aise kese?"

"Mene apni aankho se dekha hai Suhana! Aur sach kahu toh woh uss din mere haatho pakda jaata. Par meri himmat nahi hui uss par gun taan'ne ki. I let him go. Jo mujhe nahi karna chaahiye tha. You must come here. Usse samjhana hoga. He's going into the wrong business."

"Y-Ye ladka... Why did he??? Tch!!! Sonu ko ye baat toh nahi bataayi na tumne?"

"Mein paagal nahi hu. Tum ye batao ki tum aa rahi ho ya nahi? Ya fir mein apne dhang se deal karu iss matter ko?"

"N-Nahiii! Mein aati hu. I'll come! Don't do anything stupid."

"Jaldi aao. Kal ki flight leke fauran aao. Meri mulaqaat Nicholas naam ke ek shaks se hui hai. Uski wajah se mujhe kaafi kuch access mil chuki hai department me. Par agar department ne Pushkar ko dhundh nikaala toh, mein kuch nahi kar paungi Suhana. Mein ek private detective hu. Ye Nicholas bhi. Lekin iske baad bhi iski pakad govt. investigation department me boht zyaada hai."

"No! Don't worry! Mein kal hi flight leke aati hu."

"Good! I'll wait for you!"

*Call ends*

Ek nayi chinta ne Suhana ko gherr liya. Sonia London me apni padhaayi me vyast thi aur idhar ye Pushkar...!

'Ye tum kaha aa gaye Pushkar? Just... Why??'

Sochte hue woh agle hi din flight se Vegas ki orr ravaana ho gayi.

Plane vegas ki zameen par land kiya aur Suhana apne vatan se dur pehli baar aaj yaha Vegas aayi.

Airport se baahar nikalte hi uski nazar apni sabse acchi saheli par jaa tiki.




"Finally! You are here! We don't have any time. Come! Let's go!" Divya usse dekh boli.

Aur uske haath se uska bag thaam usne apni gaadi ke peeche rakha aur dono hi ladkiya waha se chal padi.

"Kuch bataogi ab? Details me? Mera toh tension ke maare sarr fata jaa raha hai."

"Baat simple hai. Tumne kaha tha Pushkar ghar se bhaag gaya hai. You can easily connect the dots. Woh yaha par hai aur apni life me bhatak chuka hai. He's dealing drugs with mafia gangs and all. Aisa kya ho gaya uss ladke ke saath haan? Bachpan me toh... *sigh* Zindagi kab kese mod leti hai. It's tragic."

"Mujhe nahi pata Divya. Par... Par hume kese bhi kar ke usse waha se nikaalna padega. Sonu ne bataaya tha ki uske ghar waalo ne usse nikaal diya hai. Aise me hum uske ghar me bhi contact nahi kar sakte... Par usse iss haal me chorr bhi nahi sakte... Kare toh kya kare?"

"Dekhte hai hum kya kar sakte hai. Abhi ke liye tum mere ghar chalo."

"Tumne ghar bhi le liya???"

"Nicholas ka hai. Mera nahi! Par jald hi le lungi mein. Tum dekhna."

"Wait! Tum uss aadmi ke saath reh rahi ho?"

"Yeah! Apna dimaag galat jagah chalaane ki zaroorat nahi hai Suhana. I'm only living with him. Not doing any deeds with him."

"Who knows? Hmph~"

"Y-You...! Tumhe mein itni laalchi dikhti hu."

"Harr angle se."

"Urgghh!"

*Screeeeeeccccchhhh*

Gaadi ek ghar ke saamne aake ruki aur woh dono utar ke andar gayi.

Par abhi woh hall ka gate kholne hi waali thi ki woh apne aap khul gaya, aur ek aadmi unhe saamne dikhaayi diya.

"Ohhh! You are here? Divya! And she is...!?"

"She's Suhana! My friend! I told you earlier about her right?"

"Ohhh! Nice to meet you!!! Suhana! I mean Sonny!! Heh~"

"Nice to meet you! And don't call me with that name."

Dono ne ek dusre ke haath milaaye par Nicholas ki nazre Suhana ke badan par neeche se upar fir rahi thi.

"The drug dealing gang has been found. Tonight we're about to catch them red handed. You stay with your friend here. If you want, you can come with us in night. I'm leaving!"

Kehte hue woh waha se nikal gaya. Par Suhana ke maathe par shikan chhaa gayi. Divya bhi samajh chuki thi ki baat kya thi.

"I don't like him a bit." Achanak hi Suhana ne bola.

"Well! Woh aisa hi hai. Kuch kar nahi sakte. Lekin tumne suna na? Drug dealers ka pata lag chuka hai department ko. Aur hume aaj raat jaana padega. Mujhe darr hai ki kahi Pushkar...!"

"Ahh! M-Mein bhi aaungi!"

"Nahiii! Suhana! Waha jaana khatre se khaali nahi hai."

"I still want to come!"

"Fine! Par tum mere saath hi rahogi. Okay?"

"Okay!"

"Good! Fresh up ho lo. Hume evening me nikalna hoga."

Din bhar ki thakaan ke baad woh waqt bhi aaya jab dono department me pohuch gayi. Andar ka nazaara dekh Suhana hairat me thi.

"Tum yaha work karti ho? Ab tak kitna kama liya hoga tumne?"

"Tum bhi na Suhana!? Harr waqt paisa paisa paisa... Apne aap ko dekho zara. Khud toh apne Dad ke business me aise ghusi ho aur mujhe bol rahi ho."

"Anyways! Woh sab chorro. Hume yaha se kaha jaana hai?"

"Department ke saath hi move karenge hum."

"Okay!"

Jis pal ka intezaar tha, woh bhi aa gaya. Investigation team ne sheher me faile kuch drug dealers ka pata laga liya tha.

Divya department ke baahar seating area me baithi hui thi. Uske haatho me gun thi. Fully loaded.



Nik department se baahar aaya aur ek kathor awaaz me bola, "Don't roam there unnecessarily. We are leaving in 5 minutes."

Divya ne haami bharte hue Suhana par nazar daali jo behad chinta me lag rahi thi. Ab na jaane kya hone waala tha. Ye bechaini...!

*Thud* *Thud*

Team ke ready hote hi sabhi waha se nikal pade. Unke theek peeche ek police ki gaadi bhi aa rahi thi.

"Kaash wo waha na ho aaj. Kaash...!" Divya dheemi awaaz me boli.

Agar Pushkar aaj pakda gaya toh...

"Kaash tumhari team ki jagah woh hume pehle mil jaaye. Aisa kaho...!"

"R-Right! Mera matlab wahi tha Suhana."

*Screeeeeeccccchhhh*

*Thud*

Kayi saari gaadiya ruki aur darwaza band kar sab cars se baahar nikle.

"Scatter in teams. If the info is correct, we might catch a few of them tonight. Let's go!"

Team leader ne unhe nirdesh diya aur kayi saare log chhaan been ke liye nikal pade. Nik ke sang divya aur Suhana bhi chal padi.

Par aise kuch bhi kaam nahi aane waala tha. Nik ke saath hone se unhe apni chooth nahi mil paa rahi thi. Aur Divya ne wahi kiya jo karna chahiye tha.

"My friend needs to go to washroom. You continue. We'll join you in a few minutes."

Uski baat sunte hi Nik usse ankhein chaudi karte hue dekha, "Whaaatttt? At this time? Sonny? Why didn't you do it earlier?"

Suhana usse aankh dikhaate hue gurraayi, "Abe chutiye abhi aayi hai toh abhi jaungi na!"

"What is she saying?" Nik ko Hindi samajh na aayi. Par Divya ko toh bhali bhaati aa gayi thi.

"She... Ahem! She's saying she can't control it anymore."

"Uggghh!!! You!!! Alright! Go! But don't hang out anywhere else. You can head to the main road. You might find some hotels there."

Nik ne samjhaate hue kaha aur dono ladkiya usse uske haal par chorr waha se nikal gayi.

"Ye aadmi kesa chutiya hai? Aur ye tumhare peeche kyu laga hai? Usse dekh ke hi mein bata sakti hu ki woh tumhe paane ki koshish me laga hai."

Suhana ka gussa Nik par badhta jaa raha tha isliye uss se raha na gaya.

"Tum galat nahi ho. Woh waqai mere peeche hai. Par mujhe uski zaroorat hai abhi. Ek baar department mere upar completel trust karne lage toh mein uss se apna peecha churra sakti hu."

Dono ladkiya alley se nikal kar main road par aayi aur road ke paar dusri alley me ghus gayi.

"Hold onto this!" Divya ne ek handgun Suhana ko dete hue kaha.

"Y-Ye? Gun?"

"Hmm! Hume lagegi. Emergency ke liye hai. Last time mene usse issi jagah dekha tha. I hope woh yahi hoga."

"Par mene gun nahi chalaayi hai kabhi. Tum mujhe ye kese de sakti ho? Aise me...!"

"Suhana! Agar situation humaare haath se nikal jaaye. Toh dhyaan rakhna tumhe kya karna hai. Hum dono ki jaan ek dusre ke haath me hai. Now let's go~"

Aur woh Suhana ko kheechte hue uss andhere se doobi hui alley me ghus gayi.

Kismat rang laayi jab kuch derr ki mashakkat ke baad hi unhe jiski talaash thi woh mil gaya.

Suhana usse ek nazar me dekh ke hi pehchaan gayi. Ye wahi tha. Wahi Pushkar...!

Wahi Pushkar jo bachpan me uske ghar aake Sonu ke sang khelta tha. Wahi jo school me sabse badmaash tha aur apni meethi meethi baato se sabko mana leta tha. Kin paristhitiyo se woh guzra tha jo aaj zindagi ki iss kagaar par aa gaya tha?

Haatho me se do suitcases exchange kar Pushkar kisi anjaan ladke se haath mila raha tha. Unn suitcases ke andar kya tha iss baat ko batlaane ki zaroorat nahi thi.

Ajeeb sa ek dard Suhana ke zehen me utha.

'Look at you now! Sonu kya sochegi jab usse pata chalega? W-Why???'

Sochte hue uske perr apne aap aage badh gaye.

"Noooo! Suhana!!" Divya khuspusaayi par tab tak derr ho chuki thi.

"Toh tum yaha ho. Haan? Pushkar?" Suhana andhere me se baahar aate hue boli.

Pushkar aur ek aur anjaan ladka, dono hi stabdh hoke Suhana ko ghoorne lage.

"Suhana didi?" Pushkar hairat me Suhana ko dekhe jaa raha tha. Usse bilkul bhi umeed nahi thi ki Mumbai se koi pehchaan ka shaks usse yaha Vegas me dikhaayi dega.

Lekin agle hi shan uski aankho me aashcharya ki chamak gaayab ho gayi aur gusse ki laali chhaa gayi.

"Chali jaiye yaha se. Yahi aapke liye accha hoga."

"Kyu? Taaki tum apni zindagi ujaad lo? Barbaad kar lo? Haan? Sonu par kya beetegi jab woh tumhaare baare me jaanegi haa? Kya sochegi woh? Bolo! Kyu kiya tumne aisa? Aisi bhi kya majboori?"

Sonu naam sunte hi Pushkar achanak hi shaant ho utha. Uska sarr jhuk gaya, mutthi kass uthi. Suhana bas bolti gayi. Jese usse glaani se bharne ki koshish kar rahi thi. Iss umeed me ki kaash Pushkar apne kiye par pacchtayega.

Parantu,

"AAP JAANTI HI KYA HO MERE BAARE ME?"

Woh zorr se chillaaya. Suhana ka badan kaanp utha.

"Bachpan se dekhti aa rahi hu tumhe. Mein jaanti hu ki tumhari family me kuch problems hai."

Woh aage aayi par Pushkar ke bagal me khade ladke ne apni jeb se gun nikaal ke Suhana par taan ne ki koshish kii,

Parantu, Suhana uss se tezz thi. Usne apni khud ki gun nikaal uss anjaan ladke par taan dii.



"Don't even think about it. I only want to talk with him."

Woh gusse me uss ladke ko dekhte hue boli aur Pushkar ko dekh punaah aage badhi,

"Mein jaanti hu Pushkar, ki tumhare saath kuch hua hai. Par hum usse suljha sakte hai. You cannot destroy your life like this and--"

Kehte hue usne jese hi uske kandhe par haath rakha,

"YOU DON'T KNOW ANYTHING!!!"

Pushkar ne tabhi zorr se Suhana ko dhakelte hue dhakka diya aur palat ke usne apni saathi ko ishaara kiya, "RUN!!!"

*THUD*

"Aahnnn~"

Suhana bagal me jaake giri aur uska maatha jaa ke seedha ek thos cheez se bhid gaya.

"Shit!!!" Divya ye dekh andhere me se nikal ke baahar aayi aur usne apni gun seedha dono bhaagte hue ladko par taan dii aur chillaayi, "FREEZE!!!"

Dono hi ladko ke qadam wahi jamm gaye. Peeche mud unhone dekha toh paaya ki ek aur aurat unn par gun aim karke khadi hui thi.

Pushkar ek jhatke me hi Divya ko dekh pehchaan gaya, "A-Aap!?"

"Haan mein! Chup chaap idhar aao. Apne weapons drop karo."

Divya ne socha tha Pushkar uski baat maanega par usse iss baat ki bilkul bhi umeed nahi thi ki,

"Shoot her!!!"

Woh itna nirdayi ho jaega.

Pushkar ki baat sunn uss anjaan ladke ne jese hi gun ek jhatke me nikaal ke Divya par taani ki tabhi,

*Bang*

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa~"

Divya ne goli chala dii. Bullet seedha jaa ke uss anjaan ladke ke perr me lagi aur uske haath se gun chooth ke gir gayi.

"You bittttccchhhhhh~" woh dard se bilakhte hue gurraaya.

Gun girte hi Pushkar usse paane ke liye dauda aur Divya bhi hadbadaate hue uss orr bhaagi. Gun haath me aayi hi thi uske ki Divya ki laat ne ek baar fir uske haath se gun chhatka dii.

"Y-Youuuu~"

Dono aapas me bhid gaye. Zaahir tha ki ek ladke hone ke naate Pushkar Divya par bhaari padne laga.

Suhana ne jab apni dost ko uss haal me dekha toh woh bhaag ke Pushkar ke peeche aayi aur usse pakad ke kheechne lagi.

"Chorrrooo! Chorro usse Pushkar!!!"

Bina apne maathe par lagi chot ki parvaah kiye woh ladaayi me kood gayi.

Pushkar ne gusse me aake Divya ke pait me zorr se ek laat maari aur palat ke usne Suhana ko pakad neeche gira diya.

Woh uske upar chadha aur apne haatho se uska gala jakad liya,

"Pushka-- urrghhh!!!!"

"World is cruel. I realised it. Aap jaanti hi kya ho mere baare me haan??? BOLO!!!! NO ONE CARES! YOU GET THAT?"

"That's not tru- nnnghhhhhhh!!!!"

"It's true!!! No one cares. Ek insaan sirf apne baare me hi soch sakta hai. Kisi aur ke baare me kabhi nahi."

Uski pakad Suhana ke gale me aur bhi badh gayi. Suhana ke perr chhatpatane lage, uski saans ruk rahi thi.

"S-Sonu... won't be happy... hhhaahhh"

"KAHA THI SONU TAB? WHERE THE HELL WAS SHE??? JAB MEIN AKELA THA?? NO ONE CARES!!! NO ONE!!!!"

Aur usne apne panje poori tarah se gaad diye Suhana ke gale me.

Divya jab yaha impact se khadi hoke Suhana ko bachaane jaa hi rahi thi ki tabhi wo anjaan ladka uss parr kood pada. Dono ek dusre se chheena japti kar gun hathiyaane me lage hue the.

Samay ret ki tarah fisal raha tha. Suhana ke perr chhatpata rahe the. Agar aise hi hota raha toh...!

'I have to...!'

Aur Divya ne apne daat seedha uss ladke ke kandhe par zorr se gaad diye.

"Aaaaaaaaaaarrrrghhhhhh~"

Woh chillaaya aur uska haath gun se hatt gaya. Mauke ka fayda uthate hi,

*BAAAAANGGGG* *BAAAAANNNGGG*

Uss andheri gali me zorr daar do gunshots ki awaaz fel gayi aur fir sab shaant pad gaya.

"Ahhhn???" Suhana ke gale se Pushkar ki pakad dheeli padte hi woh zameen par ludakte hue uske neeche se baahar nikli par tabhi,

Pushkar ka shareer dhadaam se neeche gir gaya. Jese hi Suhana ne Pushkar ki peeth dekhi uske chehre se uska rang udd gaya,

"N-Noooooooooo~" woh zorr ser cheenkhi.

Idhar Divya ke baal ko pakad woh ladka uske haath se gun ki muzzle ki disha badal seedha Divya ke gale ki orr hi aim kar raha tha.

"S-Suhaaaanaaaaaaa" woh chhatpatate hue chillaayi. Par Suhana toh jese sadme me jaa chuki thi.

Uske bagal se Pushkar ki laash padi hui thi. Divya ki jaan idhar mushqil me padi hui thi.

Dabi hui awaazo se woh Suhana ko pukaarti rahi. Muzzle dheere dheere uske gale ki orr palat raha tha. Bas trigger dabaane ki hi deerri thi aur Divya ka kaam tamaam.

"I urrgghh... can't...!!! S-Suhan...nnnghhhh!"

"You motherfucking bittcchhhh tsskkk die now!!!"

Muzzle ghooma aur uss ladke ka haath trigger par gaya. Usne trigger bas abhi chhiya hi tha ki,

*BAAAAANNNNGGGGG*

Ek gunshot ki awaaz goonj uthi.

Woh ladka dhadaam se Divya par gir pada. Uss shareer ke bojh ko apne upar se hataate hue Divya ne jese hi saamne dekha toh,

Suhana ke haath me gun thi. Uska haath kaanp raha tha aur uske haath se gun chhutak kar neeche gir gayi.

Woh sadme me ek jagah nazre gadaaye dekhe jaa rahi thi.

Divya gehri saas lete hue uthi hi thi ki,

"Bloody hell!!!!"

Ek awaaz ne unn dono ke badan me raungte khade kar diye.

Andhere me se aana waala shaks koi aur nahi, Nik tha.

"Y-You girls...!!!'

Usse apne saamne ka nazaara dekh yakeen hi nahi ho raha tha. Ye do ladkiya do ladko ki jaan leke baithi hui thi.

Divya fauran uthi aur usne apni saari baat bhaybheet hote hue bataayi. Jab Nik ne uski baat suni toh usse maamla samajh aaya.

"Ohhh! So you're asking me to save you from this mess? Do you even know what you girls just did?"

"P-Please!!! O-Only you can handle this."

"Ohhh!! Okay! But on one condition!"

"What is it??"

"Marry me!! Heh~"

Nik ki baat sunte hi Divya ke chehre se uska rang udd gaya. Woh bhauchakki sii hoke Nik ko ghoorne lagi.

"What? It's the finest deal. Not only you will be saved from this mess but also... We can live together just like we are living right now. I can help you achieve your goals faster. I do like you. You know! We can get familiar with ourselves more. Hehe~"

Nik ki shart saaf thi. Shaadi karlo aur iss musibat se nijaat paa lo.

Divya kabhi Suhana ko dekhti toh kabhi neeche bikhri unn laasho ko toh kabhi Nik ko. Uske maathe par paseena saaf jhalak raha tha. Ye uski zindagi ka sabse important decision jo hone waala tha.

Aur ek antim baar gehri saas lene ke baad,

"Fine! I agree! Now please!"

Woh haar gayi!!!

Nik ki toh khushi ka koi thikaana hi nahi tha. Woh toh khushi ke maare fula nahi sama raha tha. Divya idhar soch rahi thi ki usne sab sambhaal liya hai par ek bomb abhi aur fata uske sarr pe,

"But I can only vouch for you! Not for Sonny! Sorry!"

"Wh-Whaaatttt?" Divya achanak hi jhep gayi. Ye kya bakwas thi? Ek toh woh shaadi karne ke liye raazi ho gayi aur ab upar se ye aadmi uss se keh raha tha ki woh sirf usse hi bacha sakta hai? Suhana ko nahi? Toh matlab kya hua fir?

"I can only save you. She's an outsider. So I can't take risks. Now decide quickly. Others might be catching with us."

Ek baar fir Divya pareshani me phass gayi.

Woh Suhana ke paas gayi aur usse khada kar uthaayi, "Suhana? Suhaaanaaa!!! Dhyaan do!! Dekho! Nik can only save me. Call that bastard!! Uske paas zaroor koi na koi connection hoga."

Parantu Suhana toh jese apne hosh me hi nahi thi.

"Ughh! Just give me your phone!!" Divya kheejte hue uski jeb se phone nikaali aur ek number dial kar dii.

Par uss insaan se baat karte hi, usse ek aur jhatka laga. Ye vyakti koi aur nahi balki,

Gaurav tha!!!

"You bastardddd!!!" Divya zorr se phone par chillaayi,

Toh wahi phone ke dusre side se hassne ki awaaz aayi.

"Hahahahaha~ Isme ghaata kisi ka nahi hai. Aaj mein itna khush hu ki kya batau. Khush hu ki waha ka sheriff mere Dad ka dost hai. Aur aap kyu naraaz hoti ho. Suhana ko toh mein kitna chaahta hu. College me kitna manaaya usse par woh meri na maani. Aur dekho... Saccha pyaar aisa hi hota hai. Aaj khud bhagwaan ne meri jholi me Suhana ko laake rakh diya. Mein Suhana ko kese kuch hone de sakta hu? Par badle me bas ek hi cheez ki maang hai. Suhana meri ho jaaye!"

"Y-Youuu fuckerrrr!!!" Divya uspe garaj uthi.

Nik toh Nik tha hi par ye Gaurav bhi aisa niklega kisne socha tha...!?

Uske haath se phone achanak hi Suhana ne chhinaaya aur uss se baat ki aur ant me uske muh se yahi nikla,

"I agree!!!"

Jisse sunn Divya uske gale se lag gayi. Aur woh rone ki kagaar pe aa gayi.

"I'm so sorry Suhana~ I'm so sorry! Sorry sorry!!! We've gotten ourselves in such a mess. It's my fault. *sniff* I'm sorry!"

Poori zimmedaari Nik aur Gaurav ke haath me thi.

Dono ladkiya jo ab tak apna freedom enjoy karti thi. Palak jhapakte hi unka freedom unse chhin chuka tha.

Gaadi me Suhana ko Divya ne puchkaar ke samjhaaya, "I'll come within an hour okay? You go home! Aur kuch bhi mat sochna. Mein jald hi aati hu."

Gaadi ravaana hui, drive koi aur nahi Mik kar raha tha. Woh naya recruit tha.

Lekin usne gaadi ghar le jaane ki bajaaye, kisi aur jagah laa ke rok dii.




Suhana ne jab usse prashn janak nazro se dekha toh woh bola, "Taking you to the infirmary first. You are hurt."

Usne jawaab diya. Woh Suhana ke maathe par lagi chot ki baat kar raha tha.

***

Ye maamla rafa dafa tabhi hone waala tha jab Suhana apni gavaahi dene waali thi.

Car me woh kisi bhoot ki tarah bann ke baithi hui thi. Pushkar marr chuka tha. Usse ab bhi yakeen nahi ho raha tha.



Kya bolegi woh Sonu ko?

Nik ne saara ka saara dosh Divya ka apne sarr le liya tha. Uska kehna tha ki usne unn do ladko ko pakad liya tha par maamla haath se nikal gaya aur apne self defence ke chalte usne uss bande par goli chalaayi.

Toh wahi Suhana ka saara dosh Sheriff ke ek bande ne apne upar le liya tha. Uska kehna bhi yahi tha. Ab bas Divya aur Suhana ko apni apni gavaahi deni thi ki woh waha par kar kya rahi thi.

Dusre shabdo me ek kahani bana ke bolna thi.

Chuki Nik aur Sheriff ke bande ne khud hi qubool kiya tha ki unhone goliya self defence ke chalte chalaayi hai. Divya aur Suhana boht hi bhaari musibat se bach chuki thi.

Warna poori tehkiqaat hoti. Fingerprints check kiye jaate. Lekin ab toh saamne se hi qubool kar liya gaya tha ki goli kisne chalaayi hai.

"Go and say your thing. Don't mess it up!"

Peeche se Nik ne Suhana ko khuspusaate hue kaha. Woh palat ke usse dekhi.


Ye zindagi, kese achanak se badal chuki thi uski. Bilkul uss titli ki tarah.

Suhana ne gavaahi dii. Case khatam hua. Par ek nayi shuruaat hui.

Udhar Divya ko Nik se shaadi karni padi.

Aur idhar...

Shehnaaiya bajj rahi thi. Bhavya tareeqe se sab kuch sajaaya gaya tha.

Mumbai me ek badi hi khubsoorat sajavaat se poora shadi ka sthal sajaaya gaya tha.

Var vadhu dono hi ek dusre ke agal bagal khade hue the.

Jaha var ki aankho me guroor aur khushi thi toh wahi vadhu ki aankhein...

Namm thi.

Aur upar bade hi niraale tareeqe se likha hua tha.


Gaurav weds Suhana

Sonia apni badi behan ke nazdeek aayi aur usse dekh ke puchi, "Didi! Y-You are okay na?"

"Mmm~ Mujhe kya hua bhala?" Suhana jawaab dii.

"Aap... Mujhe aisa mehsoos hua ki aap sad ho. A-Are you really okay?"

"Nadaan ladki. Yes! I'm all fine!"

Sonia muskuraate hue uske gale se lag gayi. Par idhar Suhana ki aankho se aasu behna band na hue. Aur gale lage lage hi uski nazre Divya par tiki jo dur khade usse hi dekh ke ro rahi thi.

Dono ka haal ek jaisa tha. Udhar Nik wine pee ke apne maze le raha raha tha aur idhar dono saheliya andar hi andar apne dukh aur glaani se ladne me lagi hui thi.

Jo dono nahi chaahti thi. Woh ho gaya.

Suhana aur Gaurav ki shaadi bhi sampann ho gayi.

***

"Dekhiye aapko DID hua hai."

Ek female doctor ne Suhana ki taraf dekhte hue kaha. Vegas ki traasdi se ubhre abhi kuch din hi hue the ki Suhana ko apne aap me ehsaas hua ki woh aksar badla badla sa mehsoos kar rahi thi.

"DID matlab?" Usne pucha.

"Dissociative Identify Disorder! Dusre shabdo me split personality. Aksar ye childhood abuse ya sexual abuse me active hoti hai. Par kabhi kabhi kisi mental trauma me bhi ye janm le leti hai."

"Th-Then...!?"

"Ye ek tareeqa hota hai jo brain aapse aapko uss trauma se dur rakhne ke kiye karwaata hai."

"Toh iska koi solution...!?"

"Ye aurto me zyaada hota hai purusho ke muqaable. Solution se pehle mujhe bataaiye ki kya aapko kahi koi memory loss ki dikkatein toh nahi aa rahi abhi kuch dino se? Ya fir delusions hona? Ya anxiety? Depression? Khud ko chot pohuchaane ke vichaar? Drugs ya alcohol ka zyaada consumption? Kya inme se kuch bhi ho raha hai?"

"N-Nahi! Pr anxiety zaroor hoti hai."

"Hmm! Accha hua maamla itna gambheer nahi hai. Dekhiye, anxiety ke liye mein medications de sakti hu. Lekin sabse accha treatment psychotherapy hi hai."

"S-So!?"

"Iske zariye hum aapki dusri personality se familiar ho sakte hai."

"N-Nooo! Mujhe solution bataaiye iska. I... I can't live like this...! Mujhe pata hi nahi chalta mein kab weird behave karna shuru kar deti hu."

"Dekhiye mein samajh sakti hu. Par iska koi instant solution nahi hai. Ek hi tareeqa hai aur woh hai aapki dono personalities ko merge karke ek personality me form karna. Aur aisa karne me kitna samay lag jaega, ye koi nahi bata sakta."

"It... It cant be...!"

Suhana ka toh jeevan jese ujadte hi jaa raha tha. DID ki shikaar ho chuki thi ab woh.

Kese jeeyegi ab?

Lekin usne haar na maani. Woh datti rahi. Khud se usne apni dusri personality ke trigger hone ke reasons dhundhe. Jisme gussa ek aham reason tha.

Woh dheere dheere apni zindagi vyateet karne lagi. Gaurav ke sang rehke woh uski company me bhi uska kaam sambhaalti toh saath hi apne Pita Shailendra ke business me bhi Sonia ke saath haath bataati.

Andar se kitna toh tooti hui thi woh. Fir bhi ussi titli ki tarah woh abhi bhi pankh felaaye udd rahi thi. Jitna udd sakti thi.

Koi pyaar nahi. Shaadi toh bas ek samjhauta thi. Gaurav ko jo chahiye tha woh usse mil chuka tha. Jis ladki ko woh paana chaahta tha woh khud-ba-khud kismat ke maare uske haatho me aa gayi.

Raat ko woh dhakke lagaata aur din me apna guroor darshaata. Uski zindagi set ho chuki thi. Par Suhana ko majboori ke chalte jhukna pada. Aur Divya ka bhi yahi haal hua.

Jab Suhana apni boring life se thak chuki thi. Tab uske jeevan me ek shaks ki entry hui.


"Bolo!? Kabhi dekhi hai aisi ring? Ring chorro kabhi zindagi me 1.57 crores rupaye sune hai kisi ke muh se? Kabhi itna mehnga samaan dekha hai?"

Kuch issi tarah usne uski beizzati kii thi. Aur badle me,

"Remember! Paiso ka ghamand hamesha le doobta hai."

Usse apni galti ka ehsaas karwaya tha usne.

"You have killed someone before...Right?"

Kisse pata tha ki wahi ek maatr aisa hoga jo uske raaz ko khol payega!?

Yaha tak ki uski split personality ka raaz bhi. Jab se woh uski zindagi me aaya tha.

Usse sab kuch ab yaad aa raha tha.

Udti hui titli ke pankh, ab chotil ho chuke the. Mrityu saamne khadi hui thi.


"Titliya mujhe pasand nahi. Ye jaldi marr jaati hai."

Aaj usse uske zehen me baithi saari baatein ek ek karkje yaad aa rahi thi. Aur aaj usse ye bhi ehsaas ho gaya ki woh bhi...

Ek titli hi thi.


"Didiiiii~ Mein first aayi. Ehehehe~"

Harr ek yaad... Harr ek khushi ke pal...

Ek ke baad ek apne parivaar waalo ki chhavi uske mann me aa rahi thi.

Khaas kar apni choti behan Sonu ki...

'Mamma Papa... Sonu... Everyone else...!'

'I guess this was it.'

'Sonu...! I wanted to see you getting married...!'

'Kaera, Ava... Sonu... Tum teeno ko ek baar firse saath dekhna chaahti thi mein. Par harr khwaaish poori kabhi nahi hoti. I realized it now.'

'Aur tum....! Veer!!!'

'You were such a lovely person. Tumhe peehchaan na saki mein pehli mulaqaat me.'

'It was my fault. But I don't regret it. It was a happy journey with you...'

Usse beete dino bitaaye gaye pal yaad aane lage. Kese Veer ne usse ice cream deke shaant kiya tha. Kese woh inn killers ke beech survive kiye. Kese woh dono saath me dinner aur shopping par gaye the.

'Those moments were really beautiful...!'

'I don't regret anything now. Siwae... Sonu ki marriage... Aur tumhe grow karta dekhne ke... Still... A journey must come to an end. I think mine... was shorter...!'

'Goodbye~ everyone!!!'

Jo jo chhavi uske mann me aa rahi thi. Dheere dheere andhkaar unko gherr kar apne andar samaane laga.

Woh andhera sab kuch dhakte jaa raha tha. Woh titli rakh ki tarah hawa me udd ke fel rahi thi. Aur sab kuch ussd andhkaar me samaahit ho gaya.

Jab akhir me...


"Wake up!!!!"

Ek jaani pehchaani awaaz uske mann me aayi. Andhkaar ke beech ek roshni ki bindu usse dikhaayi dii.

Aur achanak hi,

Woh bindu fel ke poore andhkaar ko roshni se gaayab karti chali gayi. Kona kona raushan ho utha. Aur ek haath aake uski kalaayi ko thaama aur kheechte hue....

"Nnghhh!?"

"Aahhhh! Diiiiii!!!!!!"

Zorr se ek awaaz uske kaano me aayi.

"Dad!! Mom!!!! Didi... Dii ko hosh aa gaya. *sniff*"

"K-Kya kaha? M-Meri bacchi!!! Meri bacchi!"

"S-Suhanaaaa~"

"Ohhh thank god idiot! You are okay!!! You scared me to the death."

"Meri Suhana!!! Babyyyy!!! I'm here look!!!"

Usse saari parichit awaazein sunaayi dii. Aankhein jab khuli toh nazaara nazar aaya.

Fir harr ek shaks usse dikhaayi diya.

Shailendra, Namrita, Sonu... Divya, Nik, Gaurav...

Sab ke sab wahi khade hue the.

Par...

'Where is he?'

Veer kahi bhi usse nazar nahi aaya.

Sonia : Ohhh thank god dii! *sniff* thank god!!! Agar aapko kuch ho jaata toh... I couldn't... *sniff*

Woh uss se chipak ke rone lagi.

Sonia : Agar Veer na hota toh...! *sniff*

Baato hi baato me usse sab kuch bataaya gaya.

Bullet behad choti thi. Aur direct impact nahi tha. Bullet ricochet hui thi jis wajah se Suhana ki jaan bach gayi.

Aksar bullet shareer ke andar jaake shrapnels me toot kar bikhar jaati hai jo andhruni ango ko aur ghaayal kar deti hai.

Par, Suhana lucky thi jo bullet na hi uski bone ya artery ko chot pohucha paayi aur na hi toot ke bikhar paayi.

Aur toh aur... Samay rehte Veer usse yaha le aaya tha.

Usse ye bhi pata chala ki department me ek black sheep tha. Jo andar ki intel house of the killers ko pohucha raha tha.

Usse bhi Custody me le liya gaya tha. Veer ke kehne par Suhana ki security ke liye 15 se bhi zyaada log maujood the.

Par...

Woh tha kaha?

Sonia se usse pata chala ki woh jaa chuka tha. Usne ye bhi bataaya ki veer ka ek message uske phone me pada hua tha.

Jab Suhana ne usse dikhaane ke liye bola toh Sonia ne message khol ke screen Suhaana ke saamne kar dii.

Aur usme bas kuch hi shabd likhe hue the.

'I couldn't save you. It was my fault! Sorry! Jab aap ye padh rahi houngi, mein waha se jaa chuka hounga. I wish you recover soon. Once again, I'm sorry. Till then... Goodbye!'

Usse padhte hi Suhana ki aankho se apne aap aasu nikal aaye. Usne apni aankhein band kar lii aur zehen me ek hi baat goonji,

'You did save me...! Idiot...!'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
This marks the end of the House of the killers arc. Agle update se village arc shuru ho jaega. Lekin uske path ko banaane me mujhe samay lagega. So, I might take a week's break. Baaki, like thok ke jaane ka aur revos rakhne ka.

Dhanyavaad! ✨
Thanks God mrs./mr. Writer, jo tumne suhana ko nhi mara 😍
 
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Update - 163 ~ Vacation (1)

Ab tak...

Idhar airport par ek flight aake utri. Andar kayi saare passengers me se ek France ka aadmi utra.

Baahar aate hue woh taxi ko dhoodhne laga. Taxi kar woh seedha ek nazdeeki hotel gaya.

"Fuck!! My god! India is so vibrant! The colour, the lights, the traffic. Everything is chaotic here. But I like it. It's so engaging. My dear friend! One room please~"

Receptionist : Sure sir! Umm! Your name?

Guy : Ohh! Call me Louis, my friend!!


Ab aage...

Kayi saal guzar chuke the. Sab kuch khatam hota jaa raha tha. Veer ke parivar ke sadasyo me se sab umr ke chalte swarg sidhar chuke the. Manorath se leke Bhavna yaha tak ki Shweta, Brijesh, Sumitra sabhi apna shareer chorr iss duniya se mukt ho chuke the.

Aur aaj Veer ki apni sagi badi behan Tejal, 60 varsh ki aayu me bistar par apni antim saansein gin rahi thi. Veer ki aankhon se aasu nirantar bahe jaa rahe the. Woh Tej ke dono haatho ko apni hatheliyo me bheenche zameen par ghutno ke bal baitha tha.

"N-Nahi!!! Teju dii! Teju dii! Aap mujhe chorr ke nahi jaa sakti. Mera kya hoga??? M-Mein kaise jeeyunga?"

" *Cough* V-Veer! *Cough* "

"T-Teju dii!"

Tej beemari se grast thi. Ye baat usne kabhi bhi ghar me pata chalne nahi di. Agar wo beemari se peedit na hoti toh shayad woh Veer ke sang kayi aur saal guzaar sakti thi. Magar, ab ye mumkin nahi tha.

Usne badi hi komalta se Veer ke gaal ko thaama. Aankhein band ho rahi thi. Ye akhiri prayaas tha uska.

"T-Teju dii???"

Wo muskuraayi, uski aankhon se aasu chhalke aur kuch shan me hi uska haath bejaan padte hue Veer ke gaal se sarak ke neeche jhool gaya.

"Huhhh!!???"

'Ch-Check!!'

*Ding*

[Name : Tejal
Age : 60
Status : Dead.]

"Nahhhhiiiiiiiiii!!!!!"

Veer ki cheekh poore kamre me goonj uthi. Tej jaa chuki thi. Aur sirf Tej hi nahi, jaise jaise saal beetate jaa rahe the wese wese sabhi ki umr hoti jaa rahi thi.

Ek woh samay bhi aaya jab Bhumika bhi iss duniya se chali gayi, Arohi bhi aur uski sabse pyaari laadli behna, Kavya bhi.

Veer apne kul ka akela vyakti bacha tha. Sabhi duniya chhorr ke jaa chuke the. Woh khud 90 varsh ki aayu ka ho chuka tha. Magar, uska harr ang ekdum sahi se kaam kar raha tha.

Jiska kaaran tha system. Jo uske andar hoke ek aam insaan se use kayi zyada behtar bana chuka tha. Agar ek insaan 100 saal ke upar tak jee sakta tha, toh wahi Veer uska do-guna jeene me saksham tha. Ya shayad aur bhi zyada.

Jab tak andhruni ang hi dhang se kaam karte rahenge toh mrityu bhala kaise aayegi?

Veer ne kabhi ye nahi socha tha ki woh apni aankhon ke saamne inn sab ko jaate hue dekhega. Aur woh yaha par akela reh jayega. Magar, yahi satya tha.

Woh saari parivaar ki yaadein use yaad aane lagi jo pal usne guzaare the unn sab ke saath. Kaise usne apna ye safar shuru kiya tha, maa se kaise wo mila tha, sab kuch use yaad aane laga. Ek ke baad ek sadasya ki chhavi uske dimaag me mandraane lagi.

"N-No-!!"

"Maa!!! Choti maa!! Bhabhi!!! Dada ji! Chachi!!! Bhumika dii!! Teju dii!! Arohi!! Kavya~! Nidhi ma'am!! Shreya!! Juhiiii~"

"Nahiiii! Mein aap sab ke bina nahi reh sakta. Nahi reh sakta!! Mein aap sab ke bina nahi reh sakta!!"

"Nahhhhiiiiiiiiii!!!"

Aur achanak hi woh jhunjhlate aur cheekhte hue uth gaya.

"Ahh!"

Veer : Huh?? *huff* *huff*

Uska poora chehra paseene se bheega hua tha. Saansein tez ho rakhi thi aur seena zoro se upar neeche ho raha tha.

Use apne bagal se kisi ke chaukne ki awaaz sunayi di. Dekha toh paaya ki uski badi behan Tej hi waha baithi thi aur use aashcharya se dekh rahi thi.

Veer ne pal bhar ke liye use dekha aur fir achanak hi woh Tej par lapak utha.

Veer : Teju dii!!!!

Tej : V-Veer??

Veer aage badh poori tarah Tej se lipat gaya. Bechari Tej ki kuch samajh nahi aaya ki abhi abhi kya hua. Veer use kass ke bheenche hue tha. Tej ne apne dono haath peeche le jaate hue uski peeth par rakhe aur use bhi apne gale se lagaya.

Tej : H-Hey! Everything okay?

Magar, Veer ne koi jawaab na diya. Woh bas Tej ko zorr se gale se lagaaye hue tha. Toh wahi Tej ko bhi jaise ye itna accha laga ki woh andar hi andar gad-gad hoke reh gayi. Ye pehli baar hua tha.

Tej : V-Veer?

Veer : …

Tej : Veer?? H-Hey!! Baby!!!

Veer : Mmm!

Usne pehli baar Veer ko iss tarah 'baby' kehke pukara tha. Thoda darr bhi tha use ki kahi Veer ekdum se peeche na hatt jaaye. Lekin, jab Veer nahi hata toh woh aur bhi zyada confident ho gayi.

Tej : Kya hua?

Woh jaise thoda bahut samajh chuki thi lekin fir bhi woh uske muh se sunana chaahti thi.

Tej : Bura sapna dekha?

Veer (nods) : Hmm!

Tej ko jaise aaj pehli baar ek mauka mila. Uska bhai ek bure sapne ki darr ki wajah se uss se lipta hua tha. Aaj uski saari feelings nikal kar baahar aa rahi thi. Jinme kahi na kahi mamta waali anubhuti bhi chhipi hui thi. Harr ladki ke andar mamta ke bhaav kahi na kahi maujood hote hi the.

Bhavna ki gerr-haziri me Tej ke andar se ye saare bhaav aur bhi adhik maatra me baahar aa rahe the. Jaise andar se Tej ka mann keh raha tha ki ab use hi apne bhai ka khayal rakhna hai. Wahi maa bhi hai, wahi behan bhi hai, wahi dost bhi hai. Wahi sab kuch hai. Ek badi behan ka prem apne charam par pahuch raha tha.

Woh Veer ko zorr se pakde uski peeth par lagataar haath se sehlaaye jaa rahi thi. Saath hi apni ungliyo ko uske baalo me firaate hue use saantvna de rahi thi.

Tej : H-Hey! Kya hua? Mujhe batao Veer!

Veer : N-Nahi! Woh bataane layak nahi. It's rubbish!

Tej : Fir bhi! Mujhe janana hai. Batao! Baby!!

Kahi na kahi darr abhi bhi tha use Veer ko iss tarah pukaarte hue. Use khud nahi pata tha wo aise kyu bula rahi hai lekin use ye accha lag raha tha. Ek 'sense of closeness' jaag raha tha uske andar. Lag raha tha jaise inn shabdo ke istemal se woh aur Veer aapas me aur bhi qareeb aa rahe the.

Tej ke puchne par Veer ne inkaar kar diya.

Veer : Nahi dii! Faaltu sapna tha. Rehne dijiye!

Tej : Maine kaha na Veer! Batao mujhe! Share karne se cheezon ka bhaar kam ho jaata hai. Tell me! Quick!

Veer : I-

Tej (nods) : Mm-hmm!

Veer : M-Maine aapko sapne me dekha.

Tej : Okay! Toh usme kya hua?

Veer : A-Aap-

Tej : Hmm?

Veer : N-Nahi mujhe nahi batana. It's baseless. Faaltu hai. Mein aapko kuch nahi hone dunga.

Tej : Matlab mujhe kuch hua tha sapne me?

Veer : Hmm!

Tej : Kya?

Veer : Maine kaha na mujhe aapko nahi-

Tej : Tumhe meri kasam hai.

Veer (frowns) : Y-You-!!!

Tej (smiles) : Now say!

Veer : Maine dekha ki- aap mujhe chorr ke chali gayi.

Tej : Kya matlab?

Veer : Aap-

Tej : Tumne mujhe marrte hue dekha?

Uske prash puchte hi Veer ki pakad uski kamar par itni kass ke mazboot ho gayi ki use uske sawaal ka uttar mil gaya.

Tej (smiles) : M-Mein kahi nahi jaane waali baby.

Veer : Hmm!

Tej : Abhi toh hum mile hai. I will always be there with you. Always! Marrte dam tak.

Veer : Marrne ki baat mat kariye-!!!

Tej : Oh!!?

Pata nahi kyu, par Veer ko marna maraana jaise inn shabdo se aaj badi hi chidh mach rahi thi.

Tej : Theek hai! Nahi karti hu. But you know what? *smiles* I'm actually happy.

Veer : Huh?

Tej (smiles) : Ye jaan ke ki tum mere baare me soch rahe the. Tum sapne me mujhe dekh rahe the. Iska matlab pata hai?

Veer : ??

Tej : Aap kisi ke sapne me tabhi aate ho jab woh aapke baare me sochta ho. Jab woh aapki parvah karta ho. Aur mujhe ye jaan ke khushi hui ki mere Bhai ko bhi- meri parvah hai.

Veer : Of course!

Tej thoda sa peeche hui. Veer ka gaal uske gaal se laga hua tha. Usne apne mukh ko Veer ke gaal ki orr moda aur-

*Puch*

Veer : !!!!

Uske gulaabi honthon ne Veer ke gaal ko choom liya.

Tej (blushes) : T-Tumhari ye badi behan, hamesha tumhare saath hai. Aise nightmares jab kabhi bhi aaye, you can come to me. Okay?

Veer : Hmm!

*Puch*

Pata nahi kya hua par, Tej ne ek baar fir uske gaal ko choom liya. Iss baar Veer bhi thoda sa peeche ko hua, aur dono ki aankhein ek dusre se takrayi. Tej ki saansein ab tezz hone lagi thi.

Uski sarsari nigaahein kabhi Veer ke hontho par jaa rahi thi toh kabhi uski aankhon par. Yahi haal Veer ka bhi tha. Tej ka badan behad garam ho rakha tha. Saath hi seene se lage uske upar neeche hote uroz alag armaan jagaane par aatur the.

Dono ke mukh se nikalti saansein ek dusre ke chehre par pad rahi thi. Tej ka daaya haath Veer ki peeth par se uth ke aaya aur uske gaal ko thama.

Veer : D-Dii-

Veer ke bol wahi tham gaye jab do gulaabi honth uske labb se aake turant bhid gaye.

Woh sparsh-!!!

Labo ke bhidte hi dono ke andar jaisi ek chingaari bhadki, jo dono ne mehsoos kari. Dono ki hi palke neeche jhuk aankhon par parda odh li. Tej ka haath Veer ke gaal se hota hua uske peeche baalo par gaya aur unhe kass ke thaam woh Veer ke sarr ko apni orr dhakeli.

Uske dono honth Veer ke hontho ko choos rahe the. Par ye silsila zyada derr tak nahi chala. Jaise hi Veer ke mann me ye sawaal aaya ki akhir hua kya?

Tabhi, Tej ne khud ko Veer se alag kar liya. Dono apni saansein durust kar rahe the. Dono ke hi chehre par aashcharya tha. Tej ko khud yakeen nahi ho raha tha ki abhi abhi ye usne kya kiya. Magar, yaha baat ko sambhala nahi gaya toh woh jaanti thi ki aage unka rishta poori tarah se awkward ho jaane wala tha.

Achanak hi usne Veer ke chehre ko apne haatho me liya.

Veer : !!??

Aur apna maatha aage le jaate hue Veer ke maathe se laga diya.

Tej : Remember! Chaahe kuch bhi ho jaaye mere bhai. Mein aur tum! Hum dono kabhi bhi ek dusre se alag nahi ho sakte. Ab kabhi bhi nahi!

Veer : Mmm!

Veer ko andar hi andar behad accha mehsoos hua. Uski saari chintaaye jaise kahi chhu-mantar ho gayi. Jaise woh ye sab chaah nahi raha tha, lekin usko inn sab ki kahi na kahi zaroorat thi.

Veer (smiles) : Thank you dii!

Agar Tej ye sab na kehti, toh unke beech hua ye chumban hamesha hamesha ke liye unke rishte me ek daraar bann ke reh jaata. Magar, Tej ne baat ka rukh mod diya tha.

Ab Veer ke mann me ye baat toh thi ki unke beech ye chumban hua hai, lekin ye baat bhi thi ki uski badi behan ne ye chumban use ek behan ke roop me prem se kiya hai. Use bharosa dilane ke liye kiya hai ki woh hamesha uske saath hi rahegi.

Tej (smiles) : Badi behan hu. Koi musibat aane nahi dungi tum par.

Veer (smiles) : Hmm! Wese-! Ek sawaal yaad aaya mujhe.

Tej : Kya?

Veer : Kal raat me jab hum sab Casa Belle se nikle toh hum log toh parking par pahuch chuke the par aap 10 minute baad aayi thi. Kaha ruk gayi thi aap?

Tej (blushes) : W-Woh-!

Veer : Kahiye!

Tej : J-Jaane do na! Kuch nahi hai!

Veer : Aise kaise? Bataiye! Kaha thi aap?

Tej : Arre! Kaha na! Kuch nahi hai. Faltu hi-! It's rubbish. Jaanane ka koi matlab nahi-

Veer : Aapko meri kasam.

Tej (stammers) : Y-You-!!!!

Veer ne kuch der pehle chala Tej ka daav usi par aazmaa diya. Bechari Tej uske saamne vivash hoke reh gayi.

Tej (blushes) : M-Mein woh-

Veer (nods) : Haan?

Tej (blushes) : Maine darasal- w-woh-!

Veer : Kahiye! Sunn raha hu!

Tej (blushes) : I- I slapped that bitch!!!

Veer : Huh?

Tej : Ab dekho tum mujh par gussa mat hona okay? Woh chinaar tumhari shuru se insult kar rahi thi. Upar se usne tum par wine girayi? Uski himmat kaisi hui ye sab karne ki? Mene tumse keh diya tha raat me hi ki mein use bina sabak sikhaye nahi jaungi.

Veer : Aur aapne use thappad maar diya?

Tej : Haan!

Veer : Kaise?

Tej : Kaise kya? Tum log waha se nikle ho aur mein use side me sabse dur leke gayi aur fir-

Veer : Jadd diya?

Tej (blushes) : H-Haan!

*Pfft*

"Hahahahaha!!"

Veer ki na chaahte hue bhi hasi nikal gayi. Tej bhi sharm ke maare use dekhti rahi.

Veer (smiles) : Aap bhi na! Accha, ye bataiye ki aap subah subah mere kamre me?

Tej : Hmm! Tumhe uthaane hi aayi thi. Fresh up hoke neeche aa jaana. Breakfast ready ho raha hai.

Veer : Hmm! Aap chaliye, mein aata hu.

Tej haami bharte hue waha se nikli, aur kamre se baahar aate hi use apne dil ki dhadkane sunayi di. Kitni zoro se woh dhadak raha tha. Woh apne kamre ki orr bhaagi.

*Thud*

Apne room me aate hi usne zorr se darwaze ko andar se band kiya aur uss se tik ke khadi ho gayi. Lambi lambi saansein lete hue uska daaya haath apne honth par gaya.

Aur kuch derr pehle ka woh ehsaas ek baar fir wo yaad karne lagi. Aankhein band ho chali.

"Nnnn~"

Uske baaya haath kab upar uth ke uske apne doodh par aa gaya use pata bhi na chala. Honth par se haath hataate hi wo haath dheere dheere neeche ko sarakne laga. Uski legging ke andar pravesh kiya, uski panty me bheetar gaya aur jaise hi haath guptang ke sampark me aaya.

"Huh???"

Tej ki aankhein hairat ke maare phati ki phati reh gayi. Usne jhatt se apne haath kheech ke baahar nikala aur dekha.

Ungliyo ke beech kuch chipchipa sa padaarth resham ki patli dori samaan chipka hua tha.

"H-How!!?"

Ye sab kab hua? Aur kaise?

'V-Veer!!!'

Na chaahte hue bhi usne apna haath wapas se guptang me daala aur,

*squelch* *squelch*

Choot paani chorr chuki thi. Haath lagte hi aur bhi zyada paniyaa rahi thi. Aur ye madak swar uski choot se hi aa raha tha.

"Nnghh~"

Usne toh prem se hi Veer ko chooma tha kintu, shayad uska badan kuch aur bhi chahta tha.

***

Dining table par sabhi ekatr hoke naashta kar rahe the. Veer ne Bhavna se bhi phone par baat kar li thi. Woh sahi salamat thi aur apne kaamo me lagi hui thi.

Ragini chori chori apni nazro se Veer ko dekh rahi thi aur sabhi ko naashta paros rahi thi. Na jaane kya chal raha tha uske mann me. Tabhi, Veer ke mann me system notification ki awaaz aayi.

*Ding*

[‘Mission : Teach a lesson to Casa Belle’s owner’ has been completed. ]

[You have been rewarded 5000 points]

*Ding*

[You have been rewarded 500 Fame Points.]

‘Huh?? Mission complete ho gaya?’

[Yes!]

‘Garofano ki wajah se?’

[Yes! Aur Balhaar ki wajah se bhi.]

‘I see! Aur ye fame points-’

[You gained popularity. More fame! Tum social media par chhaaye hue ho. Toh obviously ye hona hi tha.]

‘I see! Show me my full status.’

[Hoo~ *smiles* Why don’t you call me ‘Mommy’ first?]

‘Fuck off! Dikha rahi ho ya nahi?’

[Tch! You are no fun!]

Pari ne thoda kheejte hue Veer ke mann me uske saamne full status prastut kar diya.

*Ding*



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‘Huh?’

Sabhi ki favorability badhi hui thi pehle se, siwae Sonia ke. Uski favorability ghat chuki thi. Wahi Kaera jiski favorability pehle 50 par atki hui thi, woh bhi badh ke 55 par aa chuki thi.

Veer ne dekha ki Sonali ki bhi favorability badhi thi saath hi uska relationship uss se ab ek partner ka bann chuka tha. Na ki ek slave ka. Wahi Divya ka relationship badal ke ‘bedfellow’ me tabdeel ho gaya tha.

‘Hmm? Is she remembering me?’

[Who knows? She might be missing your big hot rod heh~]

‘Will you shut up??’

Veer ko hairani do maamlo me hui. Pehli ki Tej ke relationship me question mark kyu bana hua tha?

‘Teju di? Unke me question mark? Miss Kaera, Miss Suhana ka toh samajh me aata hai. Magar Teju dii aur toh aur Purvi maasi??? Ye dono kyu?’

[Something is happening. *smiles* Tumhare baare me hi wo dono soch rahi hai.]

‘I see! Purvi maasi zaroor uss din ki ghatna ke baare me soch rahi hongi. *sigh* Kaise samjhau mein unhe.’

[You need a vacation. Trust me!]

Veer ne ek gehri saans li aur Pari se sawaal kiya,

‘Stat me 1 point badhaane ke liye mujhe kitne points lagenge?’

[System jab Level 8 par tha tab 50 points invest karne par 1 point badhte the. Aur ab system level 9 par hai.]

‘Toh ab aur mehnga hai.’

[Of course! *grins* Ab tumhe 75 points invest karne honge ek point badhaane ke liye.]

‘Damn it!’

Veer ne dekha ki uska Intelligence 150 par hi tha tab se aur endurance 140 pe. Inn dono stats par ab thoda dhyaan dene ki zaroorat thi.

‘Pari! Endurance ko 20 points se badha do.’

[Are you sure?]

‘Yeah!’

*Ding*

[1500 points have been consumed.]

[Endurance has been upgraded to 160.]

‘Good! Ab Intelligence ko bhi 10 points se badha do.’

*Ding*

[750 points have been consumed.]

[Intelligence has been upgraded to 160.]

[You are now left with 5442 points.]

‘Emergency ke liye itne kaafi hai.’

[Appearance nahi badhana? Hmm?]

‘Naah!’

[Okay!]

Woh abhi baitha hi tha jab achanak uska phone baj utha.

‘Unknown number?’

Call usne jaise hi uthaaya, dusre side se use ek awaaz sunaayi di.

“H-Hello!? Is- Is my friend Veer speaking?”

Awaaz sunte hi Veer ek jhatke me hi uss french accent ko pehchaan chuka tha.

Veer : Louis?

Louis : Ayo! My lovely friend Veer! I’m here, as per your offer. My god! India is so vibrant, full of vivid colors. I see people everywhere. So lively my dear friend.

Veer : Where are you?

Louis : I’m staying in a hotel here near xxxxx square.

Veer : When did you arrive?

Louis : Last night my friend. Now, I want to meet you. Tell me, where should I come?

Veer : No! Just send me your location. I’m coming!

Louis : Okay, my friend!

*call ends*

Louis India me aa chuka tha. Veer excited tha. Akhir uska offer Louis ke dwara sweekar kar liya gaya tha. Ab woh apne clothing brand ki neev rakh sakta tha.

Woh fatafat jaise hi utha, toh sabhi uski jaldbaazi dekh use prashn bhari nazro se dekhne lage. Tej abhi bhi subah waali ghatna ke chalte sharmaayi hui thi magar fir bhi usne apni hayaa ko chhipaate hue pucha,

Tej : Veer? Kaha jaa rahe ho?

Veer (smiles) : France se mera ek dost aaya hai dii. Maine aapko bataya tha na ki mein jald hi clothes ka business bhi shuru karunga. Woh ek fashion designer hi hai.

Tej : Ohh! Then, mein bhi chalti hu?

Veer : Huh? *smiles*Kyu nahi! Chaliye!

Veer ki manzoori milte hi Tej behad khush ho gayi. Woh pehle hi Shyaam jii ke dwara bheje gaye kisaan bhai logo ke sang kaafi kaam karwa chuki thi. Sabhi kisaan ab khud se saara kaam sambhaalne me saksham the.

Aise me Tej ke haatho me aur koi kaam nahi tha filhaal. Woh toh jaise mauko ko hi talaash rahi thi.

Ragini : V-Veer?

Veer (glances) : Hmm?

Ragini : M-Meri koi zaroorat-

Veer : Nahi Bhabhi! Abhi aisa koi kaam nahi hai.

Badi himmat se Ragini ne kuch shabd kahe the, aur wo bhi Veer ke dwaara jaise ansune kar diye gaye. Woh nirasha me sarr jhuka ke andar ki orr chali gayi. Parantu, Suman khadi khadi ek ek baato ka aaklan kar rahi thi. Veer bhi samajhta tha sab. Parantu, Ragini ko iss tarah nahi manaaya jaa sakta tha.

[I will help you with her.]

'Hmm?'

[Don't let her suffer anymore. Otherwise, you will lose her.]

'Huh?'

[Ek aurat ki intensity ko pehchan'na seekh jao.]

'Intensity?'

[Hmm! Woh aurat tumhe paane ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai.]

'Huh? Lekin favourability toh-'

[Favourability abhi normal zaroor dikhayi de rahi hai, lekin asal me hai nahi.]

'Woh kaise?'

[A woman's intuition.]

'Tumhare kehne ka matlab hai ki actually me favourability abnormal hai?'

[Exactly!]

'Toh fir favourability meter me mujhe unki 126 kyu dikhayi de rahi hai? Agar wo mujhe paane ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai toh unki favourability bhi Suman ki tarah hi show honi chahiye thi na?'

[That's because you have not given her any straight answer.]

'Matlab?'

[Matlab ye ki tumne use ek seedha jawab nahi diya hai. Isliye woh confusion me hai. Agar tum abhi keh do ki tum uss se shadi karne ke liye taiyaar ho, toh dekhna fir. Favourability kaha se badh ke kaha pahuchti hai.]

'That's-'

[Isliye kaha. Don't lose her.]

'Yes! Bhabhi ka matter jitna maine socha tha uss se kahi zyada complicated nikla.'

[Hmm! I'll help you with it. Follow my lead and you'll be good.]

'Alright!'

Ragini ka matter back of the mind me rakhte hue Veer Tej ko car me leke Ghar se rawana ho gaya. Toh wahi unke jaate hi Shweta bhi thoda maayus hote hue muh bana ke baith gayi. Suman ne jab ye dekha toh woh apni hi jagah se awaaz dete hue puchi,

Suman : Chinta me hai aap?

Shweta (glances) : Hmm? N-Nahi toh?

Suman : Mujhe pata hai aapka mann kidhar bhaag raha hai. Mujhse baat saajha kar sakti hai aap.

Shweta : Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai.

Suman : Toh fir maalik ki orr aise aas liye kyu dekh rahi thi abhi?

Shweta : T-Tumhara vehem hai. Aur kuch nahi.

Suman muskurate hue uske nazdeek aayi aur sofe par uske bagal se baithate hue boli,

Suman : Aapki aankhein sab bayaa kar rahi hai.

Shweta (jhepte hue) : K-Kya bayaa kar rahi hai?

Suman : Bhavna didi ke jaane ke baad toh aap ke chehre par kaafi chamak thi. Kahi gayi ab woh chamak?

Shweta : K-Kya? Ye kya keh rahi ho tum? A-Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai.

Suman : Jhooth bole kauaa kaate. *smiles* Sab kuch dikhta hai jii! Mein achhe se jaanti hu ki aapki kya tamanna hai!

Shweta : K-Kya tamanna hai?

Suman (smiles) : Aap chaahti hai ki maalik Bhavna didi se kam aur aapse zyaada pyaar kare. Aap unki pasandeeda maa bann’na chaahti ho. Kahiye! Kya maine kuch galat kaha?

Uski baat par Shweta ka muh bas neeche ko jhuk gaya. Aur, Suman ko uska uttar bhi mil gaya. Woh muskurayi,

Suman : Mein sahi thi! Par aap kuch baatein abhi nahi jaanti.

Usne bagal se sarsari nigaah Shweta par maarte hue kaha.

Shweta : Hmm? Kya matlab? Kya nahi jaanti mein?

Suman : Ab jab nahi jaanti toh fir agla thodi batayega aapko. Ye bataane waali baatein thodi hai.

Shweta ab bechain ho rahi thi. Ye kis cheez ki baat kar rahi thi Suman?

Shweta : Seedhe seedhe saaf saaf kaho. Kya nahi jaanti mein?

Suman : Na baba na! Woh toh maine khud maalik me mehsoos kiya hai. Aur, ye bataya nahi jaata.

Shweta : Veer me? A-Aisa kya pata chala hai tumhe? Dekho Suman! Agar Veer se related kuch baat hai toh abhi ke abhi mujhe batao. Maa hu uski mein.

Suman : P-Par-

Shweta : Par-var kuch nahi! Bolo!

Suman (sighs) : Maalik! Maaf karna par shayad ab aapka raaz kholna padega.

Shweta (curiously) : K-Kaisa raaz?

Suman : Woh raaz bataane se pehle mujhe kuch jaanana hai. Aur aap sirf haa ya naa me jawaab dengi. Kahiye! Manzoor hai?

Suman ek kutil muskaan liye boli. Kahi na kahi Shweta ko samajh aa raha tha ki ye Suman uske saath koi game khel rahi hai. Magar, raaz ke baare me baat kar ke Suman ne uske andar ki woh jigyaasa ko jaga diya tha. Ab yaha se woh peeche nahi hatt sakti thi.

Shweta (nods) : Th-Theek hai! Pucho!

Suman (smiles) : Pehla sawaal! Aap kayi baar raat me maalik ke kamre me unke saath sone gayi hai. Haa ya naa?

Shweta : H-Haan! Toh isme galat kya hai? Mein uske saath-

Suman : Jawaab mil gaya hai. Bas, haa ya naa me hi jawaab dena hai. Uss se zyada jankaari ki zaroorat nahi hai.

Shweta : ….!!!

Suman : Agla sawaal!!

Agle sawaal ke liye Suman uske kaan ke nazdeek jhuki aur ekdum ahista se puchi,

Suman : Aapne maalik ko apna stan-paan karwaya hai. Haa ya naa?

Sawaal jaise hi Shweta ne suna, uski aankhein hairat ke maare chaudi ho gayi. Ek kampan poore badan me fel gaya. Woh hadbadaate hue peeche hui aur bhauchakki hoke Suman ko ghoorne lagi,

Shweta (haklaate hue) : Y-Ye- Ye kya bakwaas kar rahi ho tum?

Suman ne naa me sarr hilaaya. Aur uske firse qareeb aate hue boli,

Suman : Jawaab sirf haa ya naa me dena tha.

Shweta (frowns) : T-Tumhe koi tameez hai ya nahi? Tumhara dimaag toh thikaane par hai na? Y-Ye kya behudi baatein kar rahi ho tum?

Suman (smirks) : Mein jaanti hu aapne kya kya kiya hai.

Shweta (haklaate hue) : K-Kya jaanti ho tum? Haan? M-Mujh par aarop lagaane ki koshish kar rahi ho?

Suman : Maine aisa kab kaha?

Shweta : T-Toh fir ye sab- Ye sab kya hai haan?

Suman : Maalik ka raaz usi se toh sambandhit hai. Agar aap uttar nahi dengi toh raaz kaise jaan payengi?

Shweta : M-Mujhe nahi jaanana koi raaz-vaaz. T-Tum phaaltu baatein karna band karo samajh gayi na. Aur ahinda se iss tarah pesh aayi toh mujhse bura koi nahi hoga.

Suman ka daav ulta pad raha tha. Par, woh iss mauke ko haath se jaane nahi dena chaahti thi. Woh jaise Shweta ke muh se kuch ugalwana chaahti thi.

Suman : Theek hai toh fir! Mujhe toh laga tha mein aapki madad kar dungi. Wese bhi mein thodi ye sab kisi ko bataane waali thi. Jaisi aapki marzi. Ab aapko nahi jaanana raaz toh rehne dijiye. Bhool jaiye ki hamare beech koi baat hui. Chaltu hu!!

Woh uthi aur palat ke jaane lagi. Uske jaate hi Shweta fir bechain ho gayi. Madad? Kaisi madad? Kaisa raaz? Ye Suman aakhir chaah kya rahi thi? Suman jab bilkul kamre ke mod ki taraf chali gayi tabhi Shweta ne use peeche se awaaz di,

Shweta : R-Ruko!!!

Suman ke qadam wahi tham gaye aur chehre par ek kutil muskaan bikhar gayi.

Suman (turns) : Hmm!? Kuch kaam tha?

Shweta (frowns) : M-Mere- Mere kamre me chalo!!

Suman (smiles) : Kyu nahi!!

Dono hi uske baad Shweta ke kamre me the. Darwaaza andar se band tha. Dono bistar par ek dusre ke saamne baithi hui thi.

Shweta : K-Kya chaahti ho tum?

Suman : Arre?? Kamaal karti ho aap! Arre mujhe thodi kuch chahiye. Mein toh bas ek raaz batana chaahti hu. Par, aap hai ki jawaab hi nahi de rahi thi.

Shweta : Toh jo batana hai woh batao, baato ko ghuma kyu rahi ho?

Suman : Bataya toh!! Mera sawaal itna sa tha ki aapne maalik ko stan-paan karwaya hai ya nahi? Ab aap haan ya naa me jawaab dengi tabhi toh mein raaz bata paungi na.

Shweta ek asmanjas ki sthiti me phass ke reh gayi. Kuch shan tak woh poori tarah shaant rahi, fir Suman ko ghoorte hue boli,

Shweta : T-Tum kisi ko bataogi toh nahi na?

Suman : Arre baba mein aapki hi taraf hu.

Shweta (nods) : Haan!!

Suman : Kya?

Shweta (blushes) : T-Tumhare sawaal ka jawaab.

Suman : Matlab aapne maalik ko stan-paan karwaya hai?

Shweta sarr jhuka ke apne gulaabi gaal liye haami bhari. Suman punah muskurayi,

Suman (smiles) : Ghabraiye nahi! Ye baat kisi ko nahi pata chalegi. Aur isme bura kya hai bhala?

Shweta (looks up) : H-Huhh???

Suman : Aap unki maa hai, toh isme bura kya hai? Kya maa apne bete ko stan-paan nahi karwati?

Woh uth ke Shweta ke peeche aayi aur uske kandho par apne dono haath rakh uske kaano me baatein bharne lagi.

Shweta : G-Galat toh nahi hai lekin-

Suman : Lekin kya? Ab beta bada ho gaya toh maa ka doodh peena galat ho gaya? Kya beta badal gaya hai?

Shweta : N-Nahi!

Suman : Toh fir? Ye galat kaise ho gaya?

Shweta : L-Lekin ab iss umr me stann se-

Suman : Doodh ki dhaara nahi beh rahi hai.

Shweta : H-Haan!

Suman : Toh ye galat ho gaya? Doodh ki dhaara stann se nahi beh rahi hai toh ye toh badhti umr aur garbhvati na hone ka kasoor hai na. Mamta ke bhaavo ka kya?

Shweta : H-Huhh???

Suman : Doodh ki dhaara na behne ke baad bhi, bete ke bade ho jaane ke baad bhi, agar maa firse wahi punah sukhad ehsaas paana chaahti hai toh ye galat kaise ho gaya?

Shweta : W-Woh-

Suman : Kis kitaab me ye likha hai ki ye sab galat hai?

Shweta : Huh? M-Mujhe nahi pata-

Suman : Kisne kaha hai ki ye sab galat hota hai? Kya ab ek maa aur bete ke beech kya icchaaye honi chaahiye woh baahar ki duniya tay karegi?

Shweta : N-Nahi!!

Suman ke haath dheere dheere sarakte hue Shweta ke thano par aa rahe the.

Suman : Toh fir kaise aap ise galat thehra sakti hai? Agar bete ko kisi cheez ki zaroorat hogi toh uski madad karne sabse aage pehle kisko aana chahiye?

Suman : M-Maa ko!!

Uska haath ahista se Shweta ke uroz par jaise hi aake ruka, Shweta bechari ek jhatka khaa ke reh gayi. Woh jaise kisi neend se jaag uthi. Use sthiti ka bodh hua. Abhi woh jhunjhlaate hue Suman ke haatho ko apne doodh par se hataane hi waali thi ki Suman ne uske than kass ke jakad liye,

*Squeeze*

Shweta (moans) : Nnnghh~

Suman : Inn stano me agar doodh nahi hai toh kya aapko apne bete se inhe chheen’ne ka haq mil gaya?

Shweta (gasps) : Huhh?? K-Kya??

*Squeeze*

Shweta : Ahh~

Shweta ka pallu neeche gir chuka tha aur blouse ke upar se apne dono haath jamaaye Suman uske thano ko acche se nichod rahi thi.

Suman : Aapka beta bahut peeda me hai.

Shweta : P-Peeda? K-Kaisi peeda?

Suman : Kya aapne kabhi nahi dekha?

*Squeeze*

Shweta (blushes) : Nnn~ K-Kaisi peeda? M-Mera baccha!! K-Kis musibat me hai??

Suman : Kisi din aap mere sang unke kamre me chaliyega. Tab jaake aap unki peeda ka ehsaas le payengi.

Shweta (moans) : Ahhhnn~ N-Nahi! M-Mujhe batao!

Iss se pehle ki Shweta aur kuch jaan paati. Suman ne apne dono haath peeche kheech liye. Shweta haafte hue muh ke bal bistar par gir padi.

Shweta (pants) : *huff* *huff*

Suman (smiles) : Abhi ke liye itna jaanana kaafi hai. Meri baat yaad rakhna.

Kehte hue woh seedha baahar ko nikal gayi. Aur idhar Shweta apni saansein durust kar bistar par waapas baithi. Saalo baad uske urozo ko iss tarah kisi ne chhiya tha. Ek andar ki jwala jo lagbhag bhujne ko thi uski lau iss harqat ke baad aur bhadak uthi.

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Idhar Veer aur Tej dono car me baith kahi jaa rahe the.

Tej : Kidhar chal rahe hai Veer hum?

Veer : Parijaat ghar ki aurto ke paas.

Veer ke muh se ‘parijaat’ naam nikalte hi Tej ke kaan khade ho gaye. Woh turant hi mud ke use dekhi,

Tej : Kya kaha tumne?

Veer (sighs) : Gussa mat hoiye! Mujhe unse waqai me kaam hai.

Tej : Kaam hai? Ya physical needs poori karni hai Veer?

Uski awaaz tezz thi. Veer bhaanp chuka tha ki Tej Parijaat ki aurto se sakht nafrat karti thi aur unka naam bhi sunana pasand nahi karti.

Veer : Sudha aur Mukta, unn dono se mujhe kaam hai.

Tej : Kya kaam hai tumhe?

Veer : Aap jald hi jaan jayengi.

Tej ki bauhe kass uthi magar woh bhi boli kuch nahi. Jald hi woh dono Nidhi ke pati, Rajat ke ghar ke saamne the. Isi ghar me toh Parijaat ki aurte thehri hui thi. Veer aur Tej car se baahar aate hue ghar ke darwaze ki orr badhe. Ghanti bajaate hi kuch hi derr me darwaza andar se khula.

Sudha ne andar se darwaza khol jaise hi apne maalik ko saamne dekha toh uski aankhon me chamak aa uthi, par woh chamak turant ke turant gayab bhi ho gayi jab uski nazre apne maalik ke bagal se khadi unki behan par jaa tiki.

Sudha ek gori chitti 40 varsheey mahila tha jo silaayi ke kaamo me nipud thi. Yaha Mumbai me aane ke baad Varsha ko uska kaam mil chuka tha. Aur woh tha Veer ki zameeno me uddyaano me phulo ki dekh bhaal karna aur unse sugandh banana.

Parantu, Sudha aur Mukta abhi bhi kaam karne ke liye taras rahi thi.

Sudha : M-Maalik? A-Aap?

Veer : Sab ghar par hai?

Sudha : Varsha toh uddyaan chali gayi subah hi. Baaki sab andar hi hai. Arre! Aap khade kyu hai? Andar aaiye na!

Veer aur Tej andar aaye toh unki nazre do anya sadasyo par bhi gayi. Mukta, ek behad kaale rang roop ki aurat jiska shareer madmast aur bhara hua tha. Khaaskar uska pichhwada. Aur, uski ladki Saili jo apni maa par gayi hui thi rang roop me. Lekin, shareer se ekdum dubli. Saral shabdo me ~ Ek black beauty!

Veer : Sudha! Mujhe tumse aur Mukta se kaam hai.

Veer unn dono ko hi naam se bulaya karta tha. Jaise ki Suman ko. Kyuki ye sabhi bhi uski slaves hi thi. Kahi na kahi, woh sense of superiority Veer ke andar ab bas chuki thi.

Mukta : Kaam?

Veer : Hmm! Mukta! Bhumika dii ki hotel me unhe ek head chef ki zaroorat hai. Bole toh- Khaana banane waali. Tum khaana banaane me maahir ho. Kya tum iss kaam ko karna chahogi?

Mukta : K-Kya mein kar sakti hu?

Veer : Kyu nahi! Tabhi toh puch raha hu.

Mukta : Y-Ye aapka hukum hai ya guzaarish?

Veer : Guzaarish!

Veer ke bol sunn Mukta muskurayi,

Mukta (bows down) : Ye Mukta aapki seva me haazir hai maalik!

Tej ke maathe par ek baar fir silvatein umad aayi.

Veer : Aur tum Sudha!

Sudha : Jii?

Veer : Kaam ki baari aa gayi hai. Chalo!

Dono ko gaadi me baithaate hue Veer sabse pehle Hotel Prestige pahucha, jaha usne Mukta ko Bhumika se milwaya. Bhumike ke upar se head chef ki ye chinta bhi usne mukt kar di.

Uske baad woh unn sabhi ko leke Louis ke thikaane par pahucha, jaha usne sabhi ka ek dusre se parichay karwaya. Magar, harr kaam Veer nahi kar sakta tha.

Use chahiye tha apno ka saath. Bhumika, Mukta mil ke Hotel Prestige ko sambhaal rahi thi. Shyaam ke bheje gaye kisaan log, aur Varsha mil ke uski zameen me kheti aur uddyaan ko sambhaal rahe the. Prachi aur Sonali mil ke uska food truck sambhaal rahi thi.

Aise me, use koi chahiye tha jo uske liye iss naye karobaar ko bhi sambhaal sake. Aur Veer ne ye tay kar liya tha.

Veer : Teju dii!

Tej : H-Haan?

Veer : Mein ye sab kuch aapke upar chhorr raha hu.

Tej : K-Kya???

Veer : Mein harr taraf se ghira hua hu dii. Mujhe aage ki planning bhi karni hai.

Tej : M-Mein kuch samjhi nahi!?

Veer : Clothing brand ki zimmedari mein aapko saupta hu.

Tej : Ahhhh!?

Uske dono kandho par haath rakh Veer use dekha. Kintu, Tej jaise itni badi zimmedari ke liye taiyaar nahi thi.

Tej : Veer? Ye sab kaise mumkin hoga? Itne bade level ka business mein bhala kaise start kar sakti hu? I-I- I don’t even know where to begin!? Kitna paisa invest karna padega, kitne raw materials lagenge, brand logo, brand name, workers, manufacturing machines, labels, government permission, aur na jaane kya kya.

Veer (smiles) : Sab toh pata hai aapko!

Tej : Eh?? N-Nahi!!! Mujhe kuch nahi pata. Trust me! Mein akele ye sab-

Veer : Teju dii!!

Tej : …

Veer : I trust you!!!

Tej : Huh!?

Tej ka badan sihar utha. Aankhon me aankhein daalte hue Veer uss se ye keh raha tha.

Veer : I believe in you!! Rahi baat paise aur brand name aur logo ki woh mein aapko kar ke dunga.

Tej : O-Ok!

Bechari bas yahi bol paayi. Kis muh se mana karti use?

Veer (smiles) : That's like my sis! Sudha ko angrezi nahi aati hai dii. Woh bas kuch shabdo se hi parichit hai. Aur, Louis ko hindi nahi aati hai. Aapke liye ye tough hone waala hai.

Tej : Don't worry! Mein dekh lungi sab.

Veer : I'm sorry dii.

Tej : It's okay! Mein tumhare kaam nahi aaungi toh aur kaun aayega.

Veer (smiles) : Thank you!

Tej : Uski zaroorat nahi!

Veer haami bhar waha se chal diya. Uske mann me kayi saari cheezein daud rahi thi. Loan, stocks aur shares me investment.

Woh jaanta tha ki ab bulk me paiso ki zaroorat padne waali thi. Profit Path me Path 1 ko poori tarah se samajh chuka tha. Woh jaanta tha ki kisko kaha pe kis kaam ke liye lagana hai. Woh samajh gaya tha ki system uss se kya karwana chaah raha tha.

Use yaad aaya ki kal raat Casa Belle se nikalte waqt usne Balhaar ko ishaara kiya tha. Zaahir hai, iss waqt Sarabhai gang apne zakhmo par marham laga rahi thi. Kyuki, Balhaar ke aadmiyo ne kal party ke baad unn sab ki jo dhunaayi ki thi, woh bechaare chalne layak bhi nahi bache the.

Use ye bhi yaad aaya ki jaise hi woh waha se nikla tha, Tamanna uske baad hi party me pahuchi thi. Social media par usne ye dekh liya tha. Aisa lag raha tha jaise Tamanna uske jaane ka hi intezaar kar rahi thi. Jaise woh uss se nazre nahi milana chaahti thi.

Rahi baat yaha brands ki toh Clothing ke alawa, Veer ko ek aur field me qadam rakhna tha. Aur woh thi ~

Information Technology!

Gaurav ki Globerays company ki tarah hi use bhi apni ek company kholni thi.

Ye sab kuch kehna aur sochna asaan tha lekin karna behad mushqil. Aur isliye, Veer ne soch bhi liya tha ki iss field ko sambhaalne ke liye uske kaun kaam aane waala tha.

Arohi aur Ragini!!!

Dono hi behad padhi likhi thi. Iss field ko woh dono sambhaalne me saksham thi. Abhi Veer ne sirf ek blueprint banaya tha. Ek ek kar ke use implement karna hi uski asli pareeksha thi.

Abhi woh car me hi apni baitha hua tha. Jab Garofano ki kahi gayi baat uske mann me aayi.


'Li Renshu ne tumhe ek card diya hoga!'

'Abhi use kholne ki zaroorat nahi. Next month use kholna. Filhal tumhara focus apni personal problems ko solve karne ke liye hona chahiye.'


Par Veer bhala kaha rukne waala tha. Uska dimaag wese hi itne saare suspense ko jhel raha tha. Usne turant hi woh envelope nikala jo Renshu ne use thamaya tha.

Woh mehsoos kar paa raha tha ki iske andar kuch card jaisa maujood tha. Parantu, envelope ke baahar hi kuch strict instructions likhe hue the.


• Do not open this in front of anyone at any cost.

• Make sure to be in a closed space to avoid any matter to be leaked.

• After opening the envelope and reading the content inside, keep the card with yourself unless asked for the return.


Itni saari jab Veer ne jankaariya padhi toh uski utsukta aur bhi badh gayi.

Usne envelope turant hi khola, toh andar se ek card baahar nikla.

Veer ne jaise hi use dekha-

'Wtf????'

Yahi uska reaction tha.

Card itna saja hua tha ki lag raha tha jaise kisi ne apni shaadi ke liye card ko banwaya ho.

'Li Renshu!? What kind of taste are you having?'



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Veer ne card ko padha. Card me koi bhi jankaari aisi nahi thi jis se kuch pata chal sake zyada. Bas yahi likha hua tha ki jald hi Veer ko Chinatown jaana padega.

Lekin kyu? Ye wo nahi jaanta tha. Renshu ka favour zaroor chukana tha use.

Jald hi use ek baar fir sheher chorr ke jaane ki zaroorat padne waali thi.

'Kaash mein uske pehle inn sabhi ke sath kuch samay bita lu. Pata nahi waha kya hone waala hai.'

Uska itna sochna hi tha ki tabhi uske phone par Kavya ka ek message bhi aa gaya.

"Bhaiya~ Kal ke liye ek baar firse sorry. Kal meri wajah se sabka mood kharab ho gaya tha. Uske liye mein compensate karna chahti hu. Kya hum iss weekend kisi vacation par chal sakte hai? Hum kahi bhi ek saath ghoomne nahi gaye kaafi time se. Please~???"

Veer soch hi raha tha ki sabhi ke sath milke kuch din thoda maansik tanaav se mukt hone ke liye use kahi jaana chahiye. Subah ki Pari ki bhi baat use yaad aayi,


'You need a vacation.'

Aur Veer ne thaan liya.

Usne muskuraate hue fauran hi Kavya ko message kar diya-

'Hum sab iss weekend ghumne chal rahe hai. Taiyaari shuru kar do.'

Par ek baat se woh anjaan reh gaya. Woh yeh ki jaise hi usne woh envelope khola tha-

Meelo dur udhar Chinatown me ek ghar ke kisi kamre me ek ladki ki aankhein turant hi khul gayi.

'I see! Someone has opened the envelope!!!'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Update consists of 7k words. Ye ek do update light hi rahenge lekin hot bhi rahenge. :hint: Uske baad business arc ke antim kuch updates shesh rahenge jaha do-teen matter samaapt ho jayenge. Then, hum Chinatown arc ke liye prasthaan karenge. Toh, likes thokne ka aur revos rakhna ka guys. Target apna wahi hai. 150. Keep supporting.

Dhanyavaad. ✨

Awesome, wonderful update Bhai.

Louis India aa gya veer ka business join karne. Veer harr business me apna kadam rakhne ka prayas kar rha hai.

Hotel, food chain, Agriculture, Investment, Clothing. Ab aage Aarohi aur Ragini ki help se IT me bhi startup karega, Ragini Automobile sector se judi hai to usme bhi scope hai sath hi, Shreya ke YouTube channel ko sponsor karke ek tarah se entertainment aur media field me kadam rakhega. Ek tarah se veer ek badi conglomerate banane me aage badh rha hai, halaki abhi rasta bahut lamba hai aur vo kahan tak pahuchega iska abhi kuch kaha nahi jaa sakta.

Aur ye Suman pakka Shweta ko Veer ke niche letakar hi manegi. Kamre me lagta hai apni aur veer ki gapagap dikhayegi Shweta ko.

Veer ne vakt se pehle envelope khol diya, I think iske consequences ache nahi honge. Kisi ko Chinatown me pta chal gya ki card open ho chuka hai, mtlb ye koi normal card to bilkul nahi tha.

But who is she new character, is she garofano or Ava or another new system holder. Definitely Chinatown arc system ki jankari ke hisab se bhi ek important arc hoga. Crimson arc me sirf crimson, Ava and Veer hi teen important system holder the. Chinatown me Garofano, Veer, Renshu ke alawa bhi kuch system holder dikh sakte hai. Ava bhi shayad dekhne ko mil jaye.

About Veer's dream, what do I say.
Vaise to ye sirf ek sapna tha, lekin important ye hai ki writer me ise aise hi to nahi daal diya hoga. There must be some reason. Kya ye sach me veer ka future tha, becoz we don't know ki ye system host ki body par kya kya effect karta hai kis had tak use biologically superior banata hai. But definitely veer is not normal person anymore he is superior. Ek tarah se ye sapna sach bhi ho sakta hai, shayad use sabhi apni ki death dekhni pade. Yaa aage chalkar system ke aise raaz khule jo iss sapne ko galat sabit kare.


Awesome wonderful update
Try to update soon Werewolf Bhai.

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Last time i checked ig sonali ne veer ko naraj kar diya tha so lets start with that only
I’m partially on both side in this incident. Sonali ko kabhi pyaar jaisa kuch mila nahi aur veer ko out of reach samjha bilkul bhi galat nahi tha but still i feel ki jaise mahool me vo rahi ladko ki naraj ki use jankari honi chahiye thi but still she is a innocent little immature sweet girl to hum usko maaf kar dete hai plus vo sirf veer ko pareshan karna chahti thi hurt nahi so she will get another point for that.
Yup! Sonali muhfad zaroor hai hai lekin Dil ki acchi hai. Uska aim kabhi bhi hurt karna nahi rehta. Gaav me rehte hue usne ladke bas aise hi dekhe hai jinme hawas bhari hoti hai. Jo aurto ko bas baccha paida karne ki machines samajhte hai. Veer ne hi uske iss stereotype ko toda tha.

Rahi baat ki woh uss ladke ke jhaanse me kaise fasi? Toh woh isliye kyuki woh kaafi shaatir tha apna real behaviour hide karne me, jo Sonali bhaanp nahi paayi. Aur uska result humne dekh hi liya tha.
Veer ka behaviour might be my first behaviour in such conditions but mujhe ye bhi lagta hai ki usne thoda extreme kiya. Ab vo bahut intelligent hai, kafi aurato ke sath uske samband bane hai to ladkiyo ki feelings ko behatar janne lag jana chahiye and that ignorance for such long was not necessary.
But in the end all went well.
Akhir hai toh woh bhi ladka hi. Aur attitude usme bhi bhara hua hai koot koot ke. Veer Kam hi aise egoistic hoke pesh aata hai. Aur ye unn moments me se ek tha. Veer ka woh behaviour hi Sonali ko boundary line pe leke Gaya jaha hume fir uska outburst dekhne ko mila.
Sonali ne apna pehla milan kara liya and jo uski conversation thi us time was according to me the best among all other jo aisi situation me veer ke sath aaye. Good writing
Aur ye conversation tabhi ho paaya hai jab Veer uss se khafa khafa pesh aa raha tha. :D Warna shayad baat yaha tak nahi pahuchti.
vaise tej ki najaro se kaise bach gaye sonali? Usko doubt nahi hua ya usne show nahi kiya?
I mean jab suman ko pata chal sakta hai to fir bhawna ya tej ya ragini ko kyu nahi?
Read it carefully. :D Sonali jab andar aayi toh woh act kar rahi thi. She was bearing the pain aur sahi se chal rahi thi. Woh toh end moment par jab woh upar jaane ke liye hui tab apna control pain ki wajah se kho baithi. Jiski wajah se Veer ne use sambhaala.

Suman, uss waqt kitchen area side hi thi, jo upar jaati stairs ke hi paas hai. So at the end, only Suman was able to see that. And that's the reason why she immediately realised.
Bhawna to chali gaye lekin tej bhi mujhe lagta hai bahut door nikal gaye hai jaha se ab vapas aana to impossible hi lag raha hai.
She is creating her own tactics without even realising it. :cmouth:
Enjoyed every bit of her conversation with veer. Fir chahe vo bike sikhna ho, apni tareef karvana ya veer ke liye pushy hona. Also that hug… tej ke sath sath hum jaise kae readers ki bhi dilli tamannha puri ho gaye vo dekh kar
Vaise to humesha badi behan hi bolti hai i am proud of you lil one but yaha jo hua maja aa gaya padh kar. Tej ke liye es se important kya hoga jab uska bhai uski tarif kare? Sayad kuch bhi nahi
Tej wants recognition, acknowledgement from Veer. She only wants Veer to depend on her. Nothing else.
Purvi mausi ko to pura pani pani kar diya veer ne. Ye touch aur ye wali pari pata nahi kya kya aur karvayegi veer ke sath. Sath me ye bhi clear ho gaya ki purvi mausi bhi veer ke haram ka hissa banegi aaj nahi kal
Naah! Ye clear kaha hua abhi? :laugh:
tamanna bahut uchal rahi hai aur mujhe aise feeling aa rahi hai ki in the end uska haal niharika se jada bura hone wala hai. Aaj kal social media influencer ka kuch jada hi chod chal raha happy you have show that. Also ye influencer wale scene ko kya main juhi ki maasi ke role ke sath jod kar dekh sakta hu?
You mean Shreya as an influencer? :laughing:
By the way, Shreya influencer nahi banana chaahti. She wants to be a youtuber. A youtuber who travels a lot. Ek prakaar se vlogs ho gaye but quality vlogs. Not the ghise pite ones.
Prachi seems a very nice girl. Sonali ke time par bhi usne hi veer ko bataya aur ab jab food truck me tod fod hue tab bhi aur bhai vo veer ke sath chali gaye?? Sayad apne boss ke liye dar tha ki use kahi kuch ho na jaye? Ya fir uske dil me bhi ghantiya bajne lag gaye hai?
Abhi tak aisa kuch dikha to nahi. Vo humesha apne kaam ko lekar bhi serious rahi hai but jab samne veer ho to anything is possible.
Ek baar ache se veer ki laal aankh dikha dete prachi ko to swaad aa jata
Kisi ko toh chorr do man! :laughing:
Prachi admirer hai Veer ki. She might start to have a crush on him but woh admiration se kam hi rahega. She's like one of his biggest fans.
Ragini ka behaviour bahut ajeeb laga mujhe. Maybe main unke emotions ko samjh nahi pa raha hu ya samjh nahi sakta hu but still jo vo chah rahi hai vo abhi ki situation ke liye to bilkul mumkeen nahi lag raha
Woh already married reh chuki hai. Isliye wo life ko uss nazariye se dekhti hai ki married ke baad kaisi life jeeni hoti hai. Veer ek bachelor hai aur use inn sab ka gyaan nahi hai.

She wants Veer to have her. She wants him to marry her, take responsibility and then uske baad wahi parivarik jeevan. Having kids and all that. Apni jagah woh sahi hai. Akhir woh beech me kab tak latki rahegi? Uski bhi ab young age apne prime par hai. Kuch hi saalo me woh apni 30s me aa jayegi. So, she wants a clear answer.
Baad me jab veer ka arohi kavya tej bhumika sab se rishta banega aur family me pata chalega tab to i can imagine but for now?? Galat laga i know uski feelings bahut strong hai but still mujhe lagta hai veer us time bilkul sahi tha aur agar dekha jaye to veer ne to kahi se bhi suruvaat nahi kiya aur agar ragini ne ki hai to uske consequences ke bare me sochna chahiye tha. Agar future ki baat bhi kare to mujhe ragini ka vo jagah dikhae nahi de raha veer ki life me jo vo expect kar rahi hai. Also uska ye bolna ki main divorced hu tab tum mujhe nahi sivkaar rahe bahut galat laga mujhe
Khud ka dil khud hi todne wali baat ho gaye ye to
Dekha jaaye toh ju are right ki usne pehle shuruaat kari thi. Lekin, Veer ke paas bhi toh control tha na.

Woh agar pehle hi ye bata deta ki ye sab possible nahi toh Ragini ka dil aaj utna nahi tootata nahi. Woh pehle hi samajh jaati ki unke beech kuch possible nahi hai.

Par aise intense sex ke baad, meethi meethi aadato ke baad koi kahe ki humare beeche ye possible nahi. Toh Dil toh tootega hi.

Ragini ke saath wahi hua hai. Aur uska ye kehne ekdum sahi bhi hai. Basically, agar woh married nahi hoti toh Veer itna nahi hichkichata. Divorced hai aur uski bhabhi hai, isliye Veer Katra raha hai.
sweta aur bhawna ki cat fight bhi missing hai. Aur ab jab tak bhawna vapas nahi aa jati missing hi rahegi but jab tak ye nahi hoti bhumika ko hi bahar nikal lo
Uski ek alag hi image bani hue hai dimag me jo baki behano se bilkul alag hai. I hope imagination se jada hi acha ho uske sath jo jo maine soch rakha hai
Bhumika is a very chill sister. Woh bilkul work focused hi rehti hai. Sometimes she enjoys the outside world otherwise woh kaam ko hi pehle preference deti hai. She enjoys the pride, success to her heart's content. And uska aur Veer ka rishta abhi purely bhai behan ka hai, jaisa vaastav me hona chahiye. Jis se dono hi behad khush hai. Baaki, aage dekhte hai.
Arohi ke bare me hum baat nahi karenge. Girl is a diamond
:laugh:
kavya however abhi bachi hai waqt ke sath maturity aa jayegi usme aur jo flavor vo lati hai story me vo bhi jaruri hai na. Baki sab to bade hai samjhdar hai but kavya is like that innocent naughty kid jo kabhi bhi kuch bhi kar deta hai
Mujhe lagta hai ye party ke baad usme thoda badlaav jarur aaega aur may be with a kiss vo veer se maafi bhi maang le? Who knows. Vaise bhi pyaar to ho hi gaya hai use
See! Ab chuki sabhi vacation par jaa rahe hai toh kuch bhi possible hai. :whistle:
Adesh seems a very tricky guy. Uske pass system nahi hai but dimag bahut lag raha hai. Vo crimson jaisa to nahi hi hoga but still expecting a very good negative character from her
Aadesh is Son of a bitch in simpler words. :laughing: he's way too crafty. A sly fox.
Ava vapas konse arc me aayegi?
Ava toh kood gayi pahaadi se. :dazed:
Aur ye wali pari??? Kya hi bola jaye eske baare me. I am loving her. Pehle wali caring thi lekin ye cold bhi lag rahi hai aur dominating bhi. Sayad aage chal kar thoda aur pata chale lekin mujhe ye pehle wali se jada smart lagi abhi tak
Yesssss!!! This pari is dominating. She want to dominate Veer and she's trying her best to make Veer submissive. 'Mommy' kehelwana means Veer ne submit kar diya. Tabhi Veer baar baar use reject kar raha hai. He won't submit to her this easily.
Sonniiiiiaaaaa aaa gaye finally. Ab main chain se nashe kar sakta hu. Bhai kitna intezaar karaya esne yaar. Feels like a eternity
:wtfrol:
Sonia ab gayab mat hona. Humse ye judai bardast nahi hoti
Ab ye last wali ladki. Aapne ek baar bola tha ki ek lead character abhi aana baki hai story me so i guess ye vohi hai aur vaise bhi etne badiya timming le sath aaye hai sath me ceo ki post bhi de rahi hai to im assuming ki kaera ki competitor hogi bahut sare cases me
If I tell you that you'll get to see each one of the system holder then? Even the dead ones. (Their past.) You can imagine now ki aage ke arcs me kya aane waala hai. :D Ek se badh ke ek nuke pade hue hai jin par already timer laga hua hai. Ek ek karke sab phatenge. Finale arc me forum par tabahi macha dunga mein. :hint:
Now all i want is sonia ruling above everyone else, arohi and veers blushing moments, bhumika and veers romance and a conversation with kaera.
Sonia ka comeback hoga. Jald hi. Disembowler arc me possible hoga woh.
Thank you for writing with such excellence. Keep it up. Much love
Thanks a lot for such a massive review man. :respekt: Aise hi saath bane rehne ka. Baaki aane waale arcs kaafi gripping hone waale hai. Too intense. Keep supporting. ✨
 

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Ye Veer itna defensive kab se ho gaya prabhu? Ik ki wo maybe apni family ke saamne ek dum raudra roop mein nahi aana chahta, but with the mammoth intelligence he has, usko haath chalaane ki zarurat thi kya..? Laga ki is baar Veer kuchh bhi calculative tareeke se nahi kar paaya (uska trademark hi nahi bana rakh paaya wo). Kya kuchh aur plan hai uska? Because if Veer ends up requiring help to deal with that lil doggie Aadesh, then it would be really disappointing. (I miss the previous Pari :sad:).
When it comes to family, he loses his mind. Simple. :dazed: Crimson arc ya HOK arc me uski family ko harm nahi kiya gaya tha. So he was cool, kept his calm. Yaha uske saamne Kavya ke saath aise pesh aaye wo log. Of course, he will fuck them up. But wo destruction bhi nahi kar paaya because he was reminded ki kya hota hai apni powers ka use karne par. Toh woh beech me reh ke reh gaya.

Na hi annihilation hua, na hi complete ignorance. We know his wits and intelligence. He's way too smart. :smartm:

And ju kaha gayab ho man. :sigh2:
Werewolf Bhai ekmatra lekhak hain jo bataye time pe update dete hain aur kabhi late ho to inform bhi karte hain😍😍😍😍 Wait karna kathin hai par aise quality content ke liye seh lenge thoda😜😜😜😜
Quality chahiye toh samay toh lagta hai man. :dazed:
10million views hone ki badhaai Werewolf Bhai🎉🎉🎉🎉 Main to 158 updates ke baad iss katha se juda aur ab ye meri all time favourite kathaon me se ek hai. Kuch charitra hain jinka vistaar hona shesh hai aur naye naye shatru aane bhi😁😁😁😁 My Favourite character is Suhana.
Shukriya bhaaya. Keep supporting. ✨
It's all time fav story. Waiting for kavya and veer moment.and love see niharika (veer's stress reliever )handled by veer and Suman.if possible add more filler scene with niharika.
You'll see them soon.
Crimson ke marne ke baad 17 system holder bache the. Known are
Veer, Ava (pata nahi jinda bhi hai ya nahi), jail me mila wo aadmi, pagal doctor, Renshu, Mr X (shayad), to bache hain 11. Shayad yeh mahila 11th hai, lekin yeh Veer ko kaise janti hai... Aaj raat ko pata chal hi jayega...
You were right.
पूरे 1 करोड़.... आशिर्वाद जीत चुके हो आप Werewolf । आपको ढेर सारी सुभकामनाएँ...
Bahut bahut dhanyawad Bhai. ✨
साथ ही ऐसे ही नये उपलबधियाँ हमेशा पाते रहो ऐसी ही शुभकामनाएं रहेगी मेरी उस उपर बाले से...


आप बीतते वक़्त के साथ अपनी लेखन शैली को लेजेंड्स के समरूप ले जा चुके हो....

आशा रहेगी की आपकी लेखनी का ये लाज़ाबाब प्रयोग (बादशाह - The Tales of Debauchery) अपने हर गुजरते वक़्त के साथ एक नये रहश्यो और उनके अजीबोगरीब तथ्यों से हमे मनोरंजित करते रहेगी ।

शुभकानाएं भविष्य के लिए 🥀🔅
Masterpiece banega ye. :D
Aur antim charno me mein tabahi macha dunga poori. Toh bas Dil thaam ke uss waqt ka intezar karte rahiyo. ✨
Sorry bro.. bhagwan ka bulawa aaya tha to kedarnath ji or badrinath ji ke darshan ke liye gya tha.. isliye review nhi de paya..update padha mene. waqai me aapko fame aapki writing skill se hi mila hai.. isme koi saq nhi hai... Kyuki aapki likhne ki kala ka koi Tod nhi hai.. aap har situation ka ese varnan karte ho jese wo live ho raha ho..

Parantu bhai.. aapne fame kamaya writing skill se.. or aap apni baat pr khare nhi utar ho isse aapko hate bhi mil rahi hai.. ye ek writer hone ke tor pr aapko iska dhyan rakhna chahiye..
Kya kare bandhu. Chaah ke bhi jaldi jaldi updates dena mushkil ho jaata hai mere liye. Job nahi hoti, koi business wagarah hota toh baat kuch aur hi thi.
Mante hai ki hum aapse time puchhte hai..har reader chahta hai ki usko pta chale ki jis update ke liye wo intzaar kr rahe hai uske liye or kitna intzaar krna pdega.. ye koi galti to nhi lagti..

aap busy hote hue bhi likhte hai ..iska hum samman bhi karte hai.. lekin jab aap ek samay dekar bhi us samay ke bit jane ke baad.. ek reason dete hai ki update nhi aayega to readers pr effect padta hai..
Isliye toh samay nahi deta man. Kyuki mein samay dene me bahut kharab hu. :sigh2:

Ab shuru ke updates dekh lo. Time to time aaye hai. Toh use bhi toh ignore nahi kar sakte na? Jab insaan ek sheher se dusre sheher jayega toh obviously uska schedule bigdega. Mein itna sab kaise manage kar leta hu, ye mein hi jaanta hu. :sigh2:
ek request hai wolfy bhai aapse aap agar samay de to samay par update bhi de anytha bina samay diye jb aapko update dena ho or aapko cnfrm ho ki aap aaj 100% update de sakte hai to bta diya kare..
Iss waale update me toh time pe hi aaya hai update man. Ab se poora complete hoyega tabhi date dunga.
Forum pr me sirf ab 3 stories hi padh raha hu.. AP bhai ki Sandeep Bhai ki or aapki.. aapka update ab mahine me 2-3 baar aata hai.. AP bhai bhi almost Daily update dete hai.. Or Sandeep Bhai To jo samay dete hai usme unka update usse pahle bhi aa jata hai.. To aapse request hai bhai ki khade pr dhokha mt diya karo...
Updates ki timing compare karoge man toh fir quality bhi compare karni hogi. :dazed:

Are they editing their pics by their own? Are they even uploading pictures? Ye sab logos, Veer ki status screen sab mein hi banata hu mitr. Likhne ko mein bhi 3k- 4k words ka likh du, aur jaisa mann me aaye wese story ko badhaata jau. Par kya Day 1 se mene Aisa Kiya hai? :dontknow:

Jo quality mein deliver karta hu, you know it better than anyone else ki woh kya hoti hai. And it takes a lot of time. Trust me! Ek ek word dekhta hu mein. Ek ek word change karta hu agar sahi nahi lag raha hota hai toh. Even punctuations bhi dhyaan se daalta hu.

I'm trying my best to accelerate the pace. So keep supporting and hopefully right pace pe hum aa jaaye.
Werewolf bhai toh slowly but one story Wale hai jo jabardast rehti hai bhai par xforum par jyadatar writer only sex shoot k piche bhage hai jabki story best honi chahiye family drama love incest etc sex scene come story important like some writers
Ek baar me jo ek se adhik story likhte hai woh kahi par focus nahi kar paate. Khichdi ho jaati hai. One at a time wala hai apun. Seedha bazooka maarta hai ek baar me. :hippi:
 

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Update - 163 ~ Vacation (1)

Ab tak...

Idhar airport par ek flight aake utri. Andar kayi saare passengers me se ek France ka aadmi utra.

Baahar aate hue woh taxi ko dhoodhne laga. Taxi kar woh seedha ek nazdeeki hotel gaya.

"Fuck!! My god! India is so vibrant! The colour, the lights, the traffic. Everything is chaotic here. But I like it. It's so engaging. My dear friend! One room please~"

Receptionist : Sure sir! Umm! Your name?

Guy : Ohh! Call me Louis, my friend!!


Ab aage...

Kayi saal guzar chuke the. Sab kuch khatam hota jaa raha tha. Veer ke parivar ke sadasyo me se sab umr ke chalte swarg sidhar chuke the. Manorath se leke Bhavna yaha tak ki Shweta, Brijesh, Sumitra sabhi apna shareer chorr iss duniya se mukt ho chuke the.

Aur aaj Veer ki apni sagi badi behan Tejal, 60 varsh ki aayu me bistar par apni antim saansein gin rahi thi. Veer ki aankhon se aasu nirantar bahe jaa rahe the. Woh Tej ke dono haatho ko apni hatheliyo me bheenche zameen par ghutno ke bal baitha tha.

"N-Nahi!!! Teju dii! Teju dii! Aap mujhe chorr ke nahi jaa sakti. Mera kya hoga??? M-Mein kaise jeeyunga?"

" *Cough* V-Veer! *Cough* "

"T-Teju dii!"

Tej beemari se grast thi. Ye baat usne kabhi bhi ghar me pata chalne nahi di. Agar wo beemari se peedit na hoti toh shayad woh Veer ke sang kayi aur saal guzaar sakti thi. Magar, ab ye mumkin nahi tha.

Usne badi hi komalta se Veer ke gaal ko thaama. Aankhein band ho rahi thi. Ye akhiri prayaas tha uska.

"T-Teju dii???"

Wo muskuraayi, uski aankhon se aasu chhalke aur kuch shan me hi uska haath bejaan padte hue Veer ke gaal se sarak ke neeche jhool gaya.

"Huhhh!!???"

'Ch-Check!!'

*Ding*

[Name : Tejal
Age : 60
Status : Dead.]

"Nahhhhiiiiiiiiii!!!!!"

Veer ki cheekh poore kamre me goonj uthi. Tej jaa chuki thi. Aur sirf Tej hi nahi, jaise jaise saal beetate jaa rahe the wese wese sabhi ki umr hoti jaa rahi thi.

Ek woh samay bhi aaya jab Bhumika bhi iss duniya se chali gayi, Arohi bhi aur uski sabse pyaari laadli behna, Kavya bhi.

Veer apne kul ka akela vyakti bacha tha. Sabhi duniya chhorr ke jaa chuke the. Woh khud 90 varsh ki aayu ka ho chuka tha. Magar, uska harr ang ekdum sahi se kaam kar raha tha.

Jiska kaaran tha system. Jo uske andar hoke ek aam insaan se use kayi zyada behtar bana chuka tha. Agar ek insaan 100 saal ke upar tak jee sakta tha, toh wahi Veer uska do-guna jeene me saksham tha. Ya shayad aur bhi zyada.

Jab tak andhruni ang hi dhang se kaam karte rahenge toh mrityu bhala kaise aayegi?

Veer ne kabhi ye nahi socha tha ki woh apni aankhon ke saamne inn sab ko jaate hue dekhega. Aur woh yaha par akela reh jayega. Magar, yahi satya tha.

Woh saari parivaar ki yaadein use yaad aane lagi jo pal usne guzaare the unn sab ke saath. Kaise usne apna ye safar shuru kiya tha, maa se kaise wo mila tha, sab kuch use yaad aane laga. Ek ke baad ek sadasya ki chhavi uske dimaag me mandraane lagi.

"N-No-!!"

"Maa!!! Choti maa!! Bhabhi!!! Dada ji! Chachi!!! Bhumika dii!! Teju dii!! Arohi!! Kavya~! Nidhi ma'am!! Shreya!! Juhiiii~"

"Nahiiii! Mein aap sab ke bina nahi reh sakta. Nahi reh sakta!! Mein aap sab ke bina nahi reh sakta!!"

"Nahhhhiiiiiiiiii!!!"

Aur achanak hi woh jhunjhlate aur cheekhte hue uth gaya.

"Ahh!"

Veer : Huh?? *huff* *huff*

Uska poora chehra paseene se bheega hua tha. Saansein tez ho rakhi thi aur seena zoro se upar neeche ho raha tha.

Use apne bagal se kisi ke chaukne ki awaaz sunayi di. Dekha toh paaya ki uski badi behan Tej hi waha baithi thi aur use aashcharya se dekh rahi thi.

Veer ne pal bhar ke liye use dekha aur fir achanak hi woh Tej par lapak utha.

Veer : Teju dii!!!!

Tej : V-Veer??

Veer aage badh poori tarah Tej se lipat gaya. Bechari Tej ki kuch samajh nahi aaya ki abhi abhi kya hua. Veer use kass ke bheenche hue tha. Tej ne apne dono haath peeche le jaate hue uski peeth par rakhe aur use bhi apne gale se lagaya.

Tej : H-Hey! Everything okay?

Magar, Veer ne koi jawaab na diya. Woh bas Tej ko zorr se gale se lagaaye hue tha. Toh wahi Tej ko bhi jaise ye itna accha laga ki woh andar hi andar gad-gad hoke reh gayi. Ye pehli baar hua tha.

Tej : V-Veer?

Veer : …

Tej : Veer?? H-Hey!! Baby!!!

Veer : Mmm!

Usne pehli baar Veer ko iss tarah 'baby' kehke pukara tha. Thoda darr bhi tha use ki kahi Veer ekdum se peeche na hatt jaaye. Lekin, jab Veer nahi hata toh woh aur bhi zyada confident ho gayi.

Tej : Kya hua?

Woh jaise thoda bahut samajh chuki thi lekin fir bhi woh uske muh se sunana chaahti thi.

Tej : Bura sapna dekha?

Veer (nods) : Hmm!

Tej ko jaise aaj pehli baar ek mauka mila. Uska bhai ek bure sapne ki darr ki wajah se uss se lipta hua tha. Aaj uski saari feelings nikal kar baahar aa rahi thi. Jinme kahi na kahi mamta waali anubhuti bhi chhipi hui thi. Harr ladki ke andar mamta ke bhaav kahi na kahi maujood hote hi the.

Bhavna ki gerr-haziri me Tej ke andar se ye saare bhaav aur bhi adhik maatra me baahar aa rahe the. Jaise andar se Tej ka mann keh raha tha ki ab use hi apne bhai ka khayal rakhna hai. Wahi maa bhi hai, wahi behan bhi hai, wahi dost bhi hai. Wahi sab kuch hai. Ek badi behan ka prem apne charam par pahuch raha tha.

Woh Veer ko zorr se pakde uski peeth par lagataar haath se sehlaaye jaa rahi thi. Saath hi apni ungliyo ko uske baalo me firaate hue use saantvna de rahi thi.

Tej : H-Hey! Kya hua? Mujhe batao Veer!

Veer : N-Nahi! Woh bataane layak nahi. It's rubbish!

Tej : Fir bhi! Mujhe janana hai. Batao! Baby!!

Kahi na kahi darr abhi bhi tha use Veer ko iss tarah pukaarte hue. Use khud nahi pata tha wo aise kyu bula rahi hai lekin use ye accha lag raha tha. Ek 'sense of closeness' jaag raha tha uske andar. Lag raha tha jaise inn shabdo ke istemal se woh aur Veer aapas me aur bhi qareeb aa rahe the.

Tej ke puchne par Veer ne inkaar kar diya.

Veer : Nahi dii! Faaltu sapna tha. Rehne dijiye!

Tej : Maine kaha na Veer! Batao mujhe! Share karne se cheezon ka bhaar kam ho jaata hai. Tell me! Quick!

Veer : I-

Tej (nods) : Mm-hmm!

Veer : M-Maine aapko sapne me dekha.

Tej : Okay! Toh usme kya hua?

Veer : A-Aap-

Tej : Hmm?

Veer : N-Nahi mujhe nahi batana. It's baseless. Faaltu hai. Mein aapko kuch nahi hone dunga.

Tej : Matlab mujhe kuch hua tha sapne me?

Veer : Hmm!

Tej : Kya?

Veer : Maine kaha na mujhe aapko nahi-

Tej : Tumhe meri kasam hai.

Veer (frowns) : Y-You-!!!

Tej (smiles) : Now say!

Veer : Maine dekha ki- aap mujhe chorr ke chali gayi.

Tej : Kya matlab?

Veer : Aap-

Tej : Tumne mujhe marrte hue dekha?

Uske prash puchte hi Veer ki pakad uski kamar par itni kass ke mazboot ho gayi ki use uske sawaal ka uttar mil gaya.

Tej (smiles) : M-Mein kahi nahi jaane waali baby.

Veer : Hmm!

Tej : Abhi toh hum mile hai. I will always be there with you. Always! Marrte dam tak.

Veer : Marrne ki baat mat kariye-!!!

Tej : Oh!!?

Pata nahi kyu, par Veer ko marna maraana jaise inn shabdo se aaj badi hi chidh mach rahi thi.

Tej : Theek hai! Nahi karti hu. But you know what? *smiles* I'm actually happy.

Veer : Huh?

Tej (smiles) : Ye jaan ke ki tum mere baare me soch rahe the. Tum sapne me mujhe dekh rahe the. Iska matlab pata hai?

Veer : ??

Tej : Aap kisi ke sapne me tabhi aate ho jab woh aapke baare me sochta ho. Jab woh aapki parvah karta ho. Aur mujhe ye jaan ke khushi hui ki mere Bhai ko bhi- meri parvah hai.

Veer : Of course!

Tej thoda sa peeche hui. Veer ka gaal uske gaal se laga hua tha. Usne apne mukh ko Veer ke gaal ki orr moda aur-

*Puch*

Veer : !!!!

Uske gulaabi honthon ne Veer ke gaal ko choom liya.

Tej (blushes) : T-Tumhari ye badi behan, hamesha tumhare saath hai. Aise nightmares jab kabhi bhi aaye, you can come to me. Okay?

Veer : Hmm!

*Puch*

Pata nahi kya hua par, Tej ne ek baar fir uske gaal ko choom liya. Iss baar Veer bhi thoda sa peeche ko hua, aur dono ki aankhein ek dusre se takrayi. Tej ki saansein ab tezz hone lagi thi.

Uski sarsari nigaahein kabhi Veer ke hontho par jaa rahi thi toh kabhi uski aankhon par. Yahi haal Veer ka bhi tha. Tej ka badan behad garam ho rakha tha. Saath hi seene se lage uske upar neeche hote uroz alag armaan jagaane par aatur the.

Dono ke mukh se nikalti saansein ek dusre ke chehre par pad rahi thi. Tej ka daaya haath Veer ki peeth par se uth ke aaya aur uske gaal ko thama.

Veer : D-Dii-

Veer ke bol wahi tham gaye jab do gulaabi honth uske labb se aake turant bhid gaye.

Woh sparsh-!!!

Labo ke bhidte hi dono ke andar jaisi ek chingaari bhadki, jo dono ne mehsoos kari. Dono ki hi palke neeche jhuk aankhon par parda odh li. Tej ka haath Veer ke gaal se hota hua uske peeche baalo par gaya aur unhe kass ke thaam woh Veer ke sarr ko apni orr dhakeli.

Uske dono honth Veer ke hontho ko choos rahe the. Par ye silsila zyada derr tak nahi chala. Jaise hi Veer ke mann me ye sawaal aaya ki akhir hua kya?

Tabhi, Tej ne khud ko Veer se alag kar liya. Dono apni saansein durust kar rahe the. Dono ke hi chehre par aashcharya tha. Tej ko khud yakeen nahi ho raha tha ki abhi abhi ye usne kya kiya. Magar, yaha baat ko sambhala nahi gaya toh woh jaanti thi ki aage unka rishta poori tarah se awkward ho jaane wala tha.

Achanak hi usne Veer ke chehre ko apne haatho me liya.

Veer : !!??

Aur apna maatha aage le jaate hue Veer ke maathe se laga diya.

Tej : Remember! Chaahe kuch bhi ho jaaye mere bhai. Mein aur tum! Hum dono kabhi bhi ek dusre se alag nahi ho sakte. Ab kabhi bhi nahi!

Veer : Mmm!

Veer ko andar hi andar behad accha mehsoos hua. Uski saari chintaaye jaise kahi chhu-mantar ho gayi. Jaise woh ye sab chaah nahi raha tha, lekin usko inn sab ki kahi na kahi zaroorat thi.

Veer (smiles) : Thank you dii!

Agar Tej ye sab na kehti, toh unke beech hua ye chumban hamesha hamesha ke liye unke rishte me ek daraar bann ke reh jaata. Magar, Tej ne baat ka rukh mod diya tha.

Ab Veer ke mann me ye baat toh thi ki unke beech ye chumban hua hai, lekin ye baat bhi thi ki uski badi behan ne ye chumban use ek behan ke roop me prem se kiya hai. Use bharosa dilane ke liye kiya hai ki woh hamesha uske saath hi rahegi.

Tej (smiles) : Badi behan hu. Koi musibat aane nahi dungi tum par.

Veer (smiles) : Hmm! Wese-! Ek sawaal yaad aaya mujhe.

Tej : Kya?

Veer : Kal raat me jab hum sab Casa Belle se nikle toh hum log toh parking par pahuch chuke the par aap 10 minute baad aayi thi. Kaha ruk gayi thi aap?

Tej (blushes) : W-Woh-!

Veer : Kahiye!

Tej : J-Jaane do na! Kuch nahi hai!

Veer : Aise kaise? Bataiye! Kaha thi aap?

Tej : Arre! Kaha na! Kuch nahi hai. Faltu hi-! It's rubbish. Jaanane ka koi matlab nahi-

Veer : Aapko meri kasam.

Tej (stammers) : Y-You-!!!!

Veer ne kuch der pehle chala Tej ka daav usi par aazmaa diya. Bechari Tej uske saamne vivash hoke reh gayi.

Tej (blushes) : M-Mein woh-

Veer (nods) : Haan?

Tej (blushes) : Maine darasal- w-woh-!

Veer : Kahiye! Sunn raha hu!

Tej (blushes) : I- I slapped that bitch!!!

Veer : Huh?

Tej : Ab dekho tum mujh par gussa mat hona okay? Woh chinaar tumhari shuru se insult kar rahi thi. Upar se usne tum par wine girayi? Uski himmat kaisi hui ye sab karne ki? Mene tumse keh diya tha raat me hi ki mein use bina sabak sikhaye nahi jaungi.

Veer : Aur aapne use thappad maar diya?

Tej : Haan!

Veer : Kaise?

Tej : Kaise kya? Tum log waha se nikle ho aur mein use side me sabse dur leke gayi aur fir-

Veer : Jadd diya?

Tej (blushes) : H-Haan!

*Pfft*

"Hahahahaha!!"

Veer ki na chaahte hue bhi hasi nikal gayi. Tej bhi sharm ke maare use dekhti rahi.

Veer (smiles) : Aap bhi na! Accha, ye bataiye ki aap subah subah mere kamre me?

Tej : Hmm! Tumhe uthaane hi aayi thi. Fresh up hoke neeche aa jaana. Breakfast ready ho raha hai.

Veer : Hmm! Aap chaliye, mein aata hu.

Tej haami bharte hue waha se nikli, aur kamre se baahar aate hi use apne dil ki dhadkane sunayi di. Kitni zoro se woh dhadak raha tha. Woh apne kamre ki orr bhaagi.

*Thud*

Apne room me aate hi usne zorr se darwaze ko andar se band kiya aur uss se tik ke khadi ho gayi. Lambi lambi saansein lete hue uska daaya haath apne honth par gaya.

Aur kuch derr pehle ka woh ehsaas ek baar fir wo yaad karne lagi. Aankhein band ho chali.

"Nnnn~"

Uske baaya haath kab upar uth ke uske apne doodh par aa gaya use pata bhi na chala. Honth par se haath hataate hi wo haath dheere dheere neeche ko sarakne laga. Uski legging ke andar pravesh kiya, uski panty me bheetar gaya aur jaise hi haath guptang ke sampark me aaya.

"Huh???"

Tej ki aankhein hairat ke maare phati ki phati reh gayi. Usne jhatt se apne haath kheech ke baahar nikala aur dekha.

Ungliyo ke beech kuch chipchipa sa padaarth resham ki patli dori samaan chipka hua tha.

"H-How!!?"

Ye sab kab hua? Aur kaise?

'V-Veer!!!'

Na chaahte hue bhi usne apna haath wapas se guptang me daala aur,

*squelch* *squelch*

Choot paani chorr chuki thi. Haath lagte hi aur bhi zyada paniyaa rahi thi. Aur ye madak swar uski choot se hi aa raha tha.

"Nnghh~"

Usne toh prem se hi Veer ko chooma tha kintu, shayad uska badan kuch aur bhi chahta tha.

***

Dining table par sabhi ekatr hoke naashta kar rahe the. Veer ne Bhavna se bhi phone par baat kar li thi. Woh sahi salamat thi aur apne kaamo me lagi hui thi.

Ragini chori chori apni nazro se Veer ko dekh rahi thi aur sabhi ko naashta paros rahi thi. Na jaane kya chal raha tha uske mann me. Tabhi, Veer ke mann me system notification ki awaaz aayi.

*Ding*

[‘Mission : Teach a lesson to Casa Belle’s owner’ has been completed. ]

[You have been rewarded 5000 points]

*Ding*

[You have been rewarded 500 Fame Points.]

‘Huh?? Mission complete ho gaya?’

[Yes!]

‘Garofano ki wajah se?’

[Yes! Aur Balhaar ki wajah se bhi.]

‘I see! Aur ye fame points-’

[You gained popularity. More fame! Tum social media par chhaaye hue ho. Toh obviously ye hona hi tha.]

‘I see! Show me my full status.’

[Hoo~ *smiles* Why don’t you call me ‘Mommy’ first?]

‘Fuck off! Dikha rahi ho ya nahi?’

[Tch! You are no fun!]

Pari ne thoda kheejte hue Veer ke mann me uske saamne full status prastut kar diya.

*Ding*



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‘Huh?’

Sabhi ki favorability badhi hui thi pehle se, siwae Sonia ke. Uski favorability ghat chuki thi. Wahi Kaera jiski favorability pehle 50 par atki hui thi, woh bhi badh ke 55 par aa chuki thi.

Veer ne dekha ki Sonali ki bhi favorability badhi thi saath hi uska relationship uss se ab ek partner ka bann chuka tha. Na ki ek slave ka. Wahi Divya ka relationship badal ke ‘bedfellow’ me tabdeel ho gaya tha.

‘Hmm? Is she remembering me?’

[Who knows? She might be missing your big hot rod heh~]

‘Will you shut up??’

Veer ko hairani do maamlo me hui. Pehli ki Tej ke relationship me question mark kyu bana hua tha?

‘Teju di? Unke me question mark? Miss Kaera, Miss Suhana ka toh samajh me aata hai. Magar Teju dii aur toh aur Purvi maasi??? Ye dono kyu?’

[Something is happening. *smiles* Tumhare baare me hi wo dono soch rahi hai.]

‘I see! Purvi maasi zaroor uss din ki ghatna ke baare me soch rahi hongi. *sigh* Kaise samjhau mein unhe.’

[You need a vacation. Trust me!]

Veer ne ek gehri saans li aur Pari se sawaal kiya,

‘Stat me 1 point badhaane ke liye mujhe kitne points lagenge?’

[System jab Level 8 par tha tab 50 points invest karne par 1 point badhte the. Aur ab system level 9 par hai.]

‘Toh ab aur mehnga hai.’

[Of course! *grins* Ab tumhe 75 points invest karne honge ek point badhaane ke liye.]

‘Damn it!’

Veer ne dekha ki uska Intelligence 150 par hi tha tab se aur endurance 140 pe. Inn dono stats par ab thoda dhyaan dene ki zaroorat thi.

‘Pari! Endurance ko 20 points se badha do.’

[Are you sure?]

‘Yeah!’

*Ding*

[1500 points have been consumed.]

[Endurance has been upgraded to 160.]

‘Good! Ab Intelligence ko bhi 10 points se badha do.’

*Ding*

[750 points have been consumed.]

[Intelligence has been upgraded to 160.]

[You are now left with 5442 points.]

‘Emergency ke liye itne kaafi hai.’

[Appearance nahi badhana? Hmm?]

‘Naah!’

[Okay!]

Woh abhi baitha hi tha jab achanak uska phone baj utha.

‘Unknown number?’

Call usne jaise hi uthaaya, dusre side se use ek awaaz sunaayi di.

“H-Hello!? Is- Is my friend Veer speaking?”

Awaaz sunte hi Veer ek jhatke me hi uss french accent ko pehchaan chuka tha.

Veer : Louis?

Louis : Ayo! My lovely friend Veer! I’m here, as per your offer. My god! India is so vibrant, full of vivid colors. I see people everywhere. So lively my dear friend.

Veer : Where are you?

Louis : I’m staying in a hotel here near xxxxx square.

Veer : When did you arrive?

Louis : Last night my friend. Now, I want to meet you. Tell me, where should I come?

Veer : No! Just send me your location. I’m coming!

Louis : Okay, my friend!

*call ends*

Louis India me aa chuka tha. Veer excited tha. Akhir uska offer Louis ke dwara sweekar kar liya gaya tha. Ab woh apne clothing brand ki neev rakh sakta tha.

Woh fatafat jaise hi utha, toh sabhi uski jaldbaazi dekh use prashn bhari nazro se dekhne lage. Tej abhi bhi subah waali ghatna ke chalte sharmaayi hui thi magar fir bhi usne apni hayaa ko chhipaate hue pucha,

Tej : Veer? Kaha jaa rahe ho?

Veer (smiles) : France se mera ek dost aaya hai dii. Maine aapko bataya tha na ki mein jald hi clothes ka business bhi shuru karunga. Woh ek fashion designer hi hai.

Tej : Ohh! Then, mein bhi chalti hu?

Veer : Huh? *smiles*Kyu nahi! Chaliye!

Veer ki manzoori milte hi Tej behad khush ho gayi. Woh pehle hi Shyaam jii ke dwara bheje gaye kisaan bhai logo ke sang kaafi kaam karwa chuki thi. Sabhi kisaan ab khud se saara kaam sambhaalne me saksham the.

Aise me Tej ke haatho me aur koi kaam nahi tha filhaal. Woh toh jaise mauko ko hi talaash rahi thi.

Ragini : V-Veer?

Veer (glances) : Hmm?

Ragini : M-Meri koi zaroorat-

Veer : Nahi Bhabhi! Abhi aisa koi kaam nahi hai.

Badi himmat se Ragini ne kuch shabd kahe the, aur wo bhi Veer ke dwaara jaise ansune kar diye gaye. Woh nirasha me sarr jhuka ke andar ki orr chali gayi. Parantu, Suman khadi khadi ek ek baato ka aaklan kar rahi thi. Veer bhi samajhta tha sab. Parantu, Ragini ko iss tarah nahi manaaya jaa sakta tha.

[I will help you with her.]

'Hmm?'

[Don't let her suffer anymore. Otherwise, you will lose her.]

'Huh?'

[Ek aurat ki intensity ko pehchan'na seekh jao.]

'Intensity?'

[Hmm! Woh aurat tumhe paane ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai.]

'Huh? Lekin favourability toh-'

[Favourability abhi normal zaroor dikhayi de rahi hai, lekin asal me hai nahi.]

'Woh kaise?'

[A woman's intuition.]

'Tumhare kehne ka matlab hai ki actually me favourability abnormal hai?'

[Exactly!]

'Toh fir favourability meter me mujhe unki 126 kyu dikhayi de rahi hai? Agar wo mujhe paane ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai toh unki favourability bhi Suman ki tarah hi show honi chahiye thi na?'

[That's because you have not given her any straight answer.]

'Matlab?'

[Matlab ye ki tumne use ek seedha jawab nahi diya hai. Isliye woh confusion me hai. Agar tum abhi keh do ki tum uss se shadi karne ke liye taiyaar ho, toh dekhna fir. Favourability kaha se badh ke kaha pahuchti hai.]

'That's-'

[Isliye kaha. Don't lose her.]

'Yes! Bhabhi ka matter jitna maine socha tha uss se kahi zyada complicated nikla.'

[Hmm! I'll help you with it. Follow my lead and you'll be good.]

'Alright!'

Ragini ka matter back of the mind me rakhte hue Veer Tej ko car me leke Ghar se rawana ho gaya. Toh wahi unke jaate hi Shweta bhi thoda maayus hote hue muh bana ke baith gayi. Suman ne jab ye dekha toh woh apni hi jagah se awaaz dete hue puchi,

Suman : Chinta me hai aap?

Shweta (glances) : Hmm? N-Nahi toh?

Suman : Mujhe pata hai aapka mann kidhar bhaag raha hai. Mujhse baat saajha kar sakti hai aap.

Shweta : Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai.

Suman : Toh fir maalik ki orr aise aas liye kyu dekh rahi thi abhi?

Shweta : T-Tumhara vehem hai. Aur kuch nahi.

Suman muskurate hue uske nazdeek aayi aur sofe par uske bagal se baithate hue boli,

Suman : Aapki aankhein sab bayaa kar rahi hai.

Shweta (jhepte hue) : K-Kya bayaa kar rahi hai?

Suman : Bhavna didi ke jaane ke baad toh aap ke chehre par kaafi chamak thi. Kahi gayi ab woh chamak?

Shweta : K-Kya? Ye kya keh rahi ho tum? A-Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai.

Suman : Jhooth bole kauaa kaate. *smiles* Sab kuch dikhta hai jii! Mein achhe se jaanti hu ki aapki kya tamanna hai!

Shweta : K-Kya tamanna hai?

Suman (smiles) : Aap chaahti hai ki maalik Bhavna didi se kam aur aapse zyaada pyaar kare. Aap unki pasandeeda maa bann’na chaahti ho. Kahiye! Kya maine kuch galat kaha?

Uski baat par Shweta ka muh bas neeche ko jhuk gaya. Aur, Suman ko uska uttar bhi mil gaya. Woh muskurayi,

Suman : Mein sahi thi! Par aap kuch baatein abhi nahi jaanti.

Usne bagal se sarsari nigaah Shweta par maarte hue kaha.

Shweta : Hmm? Kya matlab? Kya nahi jaanti mein?

Suman : Ab jab nahi jaanti toh fir agla thodi batayega aapko. Ye bataane waali baatein thodi hai.

Shweta ab bechain ho rahi thi. Ye kis cheez ki baat kar rahi thi Suman?

Shweta : Seedhe seedhe saaf saaf kaho. Kya nahi jaanti mein?

Suman : Na baba na! Woh toh maine khud maalik me mehsoos kiya hai. Aur, ye bataya nahi jaata.

Shweta : Veer me? A-Aisa kya pata chala hai tumhe? Dekho Suman! Agar Veer se related kuch baat hai toh abhi ke abhi mujhe batao. Maa hu uski mein.

Suman : P-Par-

Shweta : Par-var kuch nahi! Bolo!

Suman (sighs) : Maalik! Maaf karna par shayad ab aapka raaz kholna padega.

Shweta (curiously) : K-Kaisa raaz?

Suman : Woh raaz bataane se pehle mujhe kuch jaanana hai. Aur aap sirf haa ya naa me jawaab dengi. Kahiye! Manzoor hai?

Suman ek kutil muskaan liye boli. Kahi na kahi Shweta ko samajh aa raha tha ki ye Suman uske saath koi game khel rahi hai. Magar, raaz ke baare me baat kar ke Suman ne uske andar ki woh jigyaasa ko jaga diya tha. Ab yaha se woh peeche nahi hatt sakti thi.

Shweta (nods) : Th-Theek hai! Pucho!

Suman (smiles) : Pehla sawaal! Aap kayi baar raat me maalik ke kamre me unke saath sone gayi hai. Haa ya naa?

Shweta : H-Haan! Toh isme galat kya hai? Mein uske saath-

Suman : Jawaab mil gaya hai. Bas, haa ya naa me hi jawaab dena hai. Uss se zyada jankaari ki zaroorat nahi hai.

Shweta : ….!!!

Suman : Agla sawaal!!

Agle sawaal ke liye Suman uske kaan ke nazdeek jhuki aur ekdum ahista se puchi,

Suman : Aapne maalik ko apna stan-paan karwaya hai. Haa ya naa?

Sawaal jaise hi Shweta ne suna, uski aankhein hairat ke maare chaudi ho gayi. Ek kampan poore badan me fel gaya. Woh hadbadaate hue peeche hui aur bhauchakki hoke Suman ko ghoorne lagi,

Shweta (haklaate hue) : Y-Ye- Ye kya bakwaas kar rahi ho tum?

Suman ne naa me sarr hilaaya. Aur uske firse qareeb aate hue boli,

Suman : Jawaab sirf haa ya naa me dena tha.

Shweta (frowns) : T-Tumhe koi tameez hai ya nahi? Tumhara dimaag toh thikaane par hai na? Y-Ye kya behudi baatein kar rahi ho tum?

Suman (smirks) : Mein jaanti hu aapne kya kya kiya hai.

Shweta (haklaate hue) : K-Kya jaanti ho tum? Haan? M-Mujh par aarop lagaane ki koshish kar rahi ho?

Suman : Maine aisa kab kaha?

Shweta : T-Toh fir ye sab- Ye sab kya hai haan?

Suman : Maalik ka raaz usi se toh sambandhit hai. Agar aap uttar nahi dengi toh raaz kaise jaan payengi?

Shweta : M-Mujhe nahi jaanana koi raaz-vaaz. T-Tum phaaltu baatein karna band karo samajh gayi na. Aur ahinda se iss tarah pesh aayi toh mujhse bura koi nahi hoga.

Suman ka daav ulta pad raha tha. Par, woh iss mauke ko haath se jaane nahi dena chaahti thi. Woh jaise Shweta ke muh se kuch ugalwana chaahti thi.

Suman : Theek hai toh fir! Mujhe toh laga tha mein aapki madad kar dungi. Wese bhi mein thodi ye sab kisi ko bataane waali thi. Jaisi aapki marzi. Ab aapko nahi jaanana raaz toh rehne dijiye. Bhool jaiye ki hamare beech koi baat hui. Chaltu hu!!

Woh uthi aur palat ke jaane lagi. Uske jaate hi Shweta fir bechain ho gayi. Madad? Kaisi madad? Kaisa raaz? Ye Suman aakhir chaah kya rahi thi? Suman jab bilkul kamre ke mod ki taraf chali gayi tabhi Shweta ne use peeche se awaaz di,

Shweta : R-Ruko!!!

Suman ke qadam wahi tham gaye aur chehre par ek kutil muskaan bikhar gayi.

Suman (turns) : Hmm!? Kuch kaam tha?

Shweta (frowns) : M-Mere- Mere kamre me chalo!!

Suman (smiles) : Kyu nahi!!

Dono hi uske baad Shweta ke kamre me the. Darwaaza andar se band tha. Dono bistar par ek dusre ke saamne baithi hui thi.

Shweta : K-Kya chaahti ho tum?

Suman : Arre?? Kamaal karti ho aap! Arre mujhe thodi kuch chahiye. Mein toh bas ek raaz batana chaahti hu. Par, aap hai ki jawaab hi nahi de rahi thi.

Shweta : Toh jo batana hai woh batao, baato ko ghuma kyu rahi ho?

Suman : Bataya toh!! Mera sawaal itna sa tha ki aapne maalik ko stan-paan karwaya hai ya nahi? Ab aap haan ya naa me jawaab dengi tabhi toh mein raaz bata paungi na.

Shweta ek asmanjas ki sthiti me phass ke reh gayi. Kuch shan tak woh poori tarah shaant rahi, fir Suman ko ghoorte hue boli,

Shweta : T-Tum kisi ko bataogi toh nahi na?

Suman : Arre baba mein aapki hi taraf hu.

Shweta (nods) : Haan!!

Suman : Kya?

Shweta (blushes) : T-Tumhare sawaal ka jawaab.

Suman : Matlab aapne maalik ko stan-paan karwaya hai?

Shweta sarr jhuka ke apne gulaabi gaal liye haami bhari. Suman punah muskurayi,

Suman (smiles) : Ghabraiye nahi! Ye baat kisi ko nahi pata chalegi. Aur isme bura kya hai bhala?

Shweta (looks up) : H-Huhh???

Suman : Aap unki maa hai, toh isme bura kya hai? Kya maa apne bete ko stan-paan nahi karwati?

Woh uth ke Shweta ke peeche aayi aur uske kandho par apne dono haath rakh uske kaano me baatein bharne lagi.

Shweta : G-Galat toh nahi hai lekin-

Suman : Lekin kya? Ab beta bada ho gaya toh maa ka doodh peena galat ho gaya? Kya beta badal gaya hai?

Shweta : N-Nahi!

Suman : Toh fir? Ye galat kaise ho gaya?

Shweta : L-Lekin ab iss umr me stann se-

Suman : Doodh ki dhaara nahi beh rahi hai.

Shweta : H-Haan!

Suman : Toh ye galat ho gaya? Doodh ki dhaara stann se nahi beh rahi hai toh ye toh badhti umr aur garbhvati na hone ka kasoor hai na. Mamta ke bhaavo ka kya?

Shweta : H-Huhh???

Suman : Doodh ki dhaara na behne ke baad bhi, bete ke bade ho jaane ke baad bhi, agar maa firse wahi punah sukhad ehsaas paana chaahti hai toh ye galat kaise ho gaya?

Shweta : W-Woh-

Suman : Kis kitaab me ye likha hai ki ye sab galat hai?

Shweta : Huh? M-Mujhe nahi pata-

Suman : Kisne kaha hai ki ye sab galat hota hai? Kya ab ek maa aur bete ke beech kya icchaaye honi chaahiye woh baahar ki duniya tay karegi?

Shweta : N-Nahi!!

Suman ke haath dheere dheere sarakte hue Shweta ke thano par aa rahe the.

Suman : Toh fir kaise aap ise galat thehra sakti hai? Agar bete ko kisi cheez ki zaroorat hogi toh uski madad karne sabse aage pehle kisko aana chahiye?

Suman : M-Maa ko!!

Uska haath ahista se Shweta ke uroz par jaise hi aake ruka, Shweta bechari ek jhatka khaa ke reh gayi. Woh jaise kisi neend se jaag uthi. Use sthiti ka bodh hua. Abhi woh jhunjhlaate hue Suman ke haatho ko apne doodh par se hataane hi waali thi ki Suman ne uske than kass ke jakad liye,

*Squeeze*

Shweta (moans) : Nnnghh~

Suman : Inn stano me agar doodh nahi hai toh kya aapko apne bete se inhe chheen’ne ka haq mil gaya?

Shweta (gasps) : Huhh?? K-Kya??

*Squeeze*

Shweta : Ahh~

Shweta ka pallu neeche gir chuka tha aur blouse ke upar se apne dono haath jamaaye Suman uske thano ko acche se nichod rahi thi.

Suman : Aapka beta bahut peeda me hai.

Shweta : P-Peeda? K-Kaisi peeda?

Suman : Kya aapne kabhi nahi dekha?

*Squeeze*

Shweta (blushes) : Nnn~ K-Kaisi peeda? M-Mera baccha!! K-Kis musibat me hai??

Suman : Kisi din aap mere sang unke kamre me chaliyega. Tab jaake aap unki peeda ka ehsaas le payengi.

Shweta (moans) : Ahhhnn~ N-Nahi! M-Mujhe batao!

Iss se pehle ki Shweta aur kuch jaan paati. Suman ne apne dono haath peeche kheech liye. Shweta haafte hue muh ke bal bistar par gir padi.

Shweta (pants) : *huff* *huff*

Suman (smiles) : Abhi ke liye itna jaanana kaafi hai. Meri baat yaad rakhna.

Kehte hue woh seedha baahar ko nikal gayi. Aur idhar Shweta apni saansein durust kar bistar par waapas baithi. Saalo baad uske urozo ko iss tarah kisi ne chhiya tha. Ek andar ki jwala jo lagbhag bhujne ko thi uski lau iss harqat ke baad aur bhadak uthi.

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Idhar Veer aur Tej dono car me baith kahi jaa rahe the.

Tej : Kidhar chal rahe hai Veer hum?

Veer : Parijaat ghar ki aurto ke paas.

Veer ke muh se ‘parijaat’ naam nikalte hi Tej ke kaan khade ho gaye. Woh turant hi mud ke use dekhi,

Tej : Kya kaha tumne?

Veer (sighs) : Gussa mat hoiye! Mujhe unse waqai me kaam hai.

Tej : Kaam hai? Ya physical needs poori karni hai Veer?

Uski awaaz tezz thi. Veer bhaanp chuka tha ki Tej Parijaat ki aurto se sakht nafrat karti thi aur unka naam bhi sunana pasand nahi karti.

Veer : Sudha aur Mukta, unn dono se mujhe kaam hai.

Tej : Kya kaam hai tumhe?

Veer : Aap jald hi jaan jayengi.

Tej ki bauhe kass uthi magar woh bhi boli kuch nahi. Jald hi woh dono Nidhi ke pati, Rajat ke ghar ke saamne the. Isi ghar me toh Parijaat ki aurte thehri hui thi. Veer aur Tej car se baahar aate hue ghar ke darwaze ki orr badhe. Ghanti bajaate hi kuch hi derr me darwaza andar se khula.

Sudha ne andar se darwaza khol jaise hi apne maalik ko saamne dekha toh uski aankhon me chamak aa uthi, par woh chamak turant ke turant gayab bhi ho gayi jab uski nazre apne maalik ke bagal se khadi unki behan par jaa tiki.

Sudha ek gori chitti 40 varsheey mahila tha jo silaayi ke kaamo me nipud thi. Yaha Mumbai me aane ke baad Varsha ko uska kaam mil chuka tha. Aur woh tha Veer ki zameeno me uddyaano me phulo ki dekh bhaal karna aur unse sugandh banana.

Parantu, Sudha aur Mukta abhi bhi kaam karne ke liye taras rahi thi.

Sudha : M-Maalik? A-Aap?

Veer : Sab ghar par hai?

Sudha : Varsha toh uddyaan chali gayi subah hi. Baaki sab andar hi hai. Arre! Aap khade kyu hai? Andar aaiye na!

Veer aur Tej andar aaye toh unki nazre do anya sadasyo par bhi gayi. Mukta, ek behad kaale rang roop ki aurat jiska shareer madmast aur bhara hua tha. Khaaskar uska pichhwada. Aur, uski ladki Saili jo apni maa par gayi hui thi rang roop me. Lekin, shareer se ekdum dubli. Saral shabdo me ~ Ek black beauty!

Veer : Sudha! Mujhe tumse aur Mukta se kaam hai.

Veer unn dono ko hi naam se bulaya karta tha. Jaise ki Suman ko. Kyuki ye sabhi bhi uski slaves hi thi. Kahi na kahi, woh sense of superiority Veer ke andar ab bas chuki thi.

Mukta : Kaam?

Veer : Hmm! Mukta! Bhumika dii ki hotel me unhe ek head chef ki zaroorat hai. Bole toh- Khaana banane waali. Tum khaana banaane me maahir ho. Kya tum iss kaam ko karna chahogi?

Mukta : K-Kya mein kar sakti hu?

Veer : Kyu nahi! Tabhi toh puch raha hu.

Mukta : Y-Ye aapka hukum hai ya guzaarish?

Veer : Guzaarish!

Veer ke bol sunn Mukta muskurayi,

Mukta (bows down) : Ye Mukta aapki seva me haazir hai maalik!

Tej ke maathe par ek baar fir silvatein umad aayi.

Veer : Aur tum Sudha!

Sudha : Jii?

Veer : Kaam ki baari aa gayi hai. Chalo!

Dono ko gaadi me baithaate hue Veer sabse pehle Hotel Prestige pahucha, jaha usne Mukta ko Bhumika se milwaya. Bhumike ke upar se head chef ki ye chinta bhi usne mukt kar di.

Uske baad woh unn sabhi ko leke Louis ke thikaane par pahucha, jaha usne sabhi ka ek dusre se parichay karwaya. Magar, harr kaam Veer nahi kar sakta tha.

Use chahiye tha apno ka saath. Bhumika, Mukta mil ke Hotel Prestige ko sambhaal rahi thi. Shyaam ke bheje gaye kisaan log, aur Varsha mil ke uski zameen me kheti aur uddyaan ko sambhaal rahe the. Prachi aur Sonali mil ke uska food truck sambhaal rahi thi.

Aise me, use koi chahiye tha jo uske liye iss naye karobaar ko bhi sambhaal sake. Aur Veer ne ye tay kar liya tha.

Veer : Teju dii!

Tej : H-Haan?

Veer : Mein ye sab kuch aapke upar chhorr raha hu.

Tej : K-Kya???

Veer : Mein harr taraf se ghira hua hu dii. Mujhe aage ki planning bhi karni hai.

Tej : M-Mein kuch samjhi nahi!?

Veer : Clothing brand ki zimmedari mein aapko saupta hu.

Tej : Ahhhh!?

Uske dono kandho par haath rakh Veer use dekha. Kintu, Tej jaise itni badi zimmedari ke liye taiyaar nahi thi.

Tej : Veer? Ye sab kaise mumkin hoga? Itne bade level ka business mein bhala kaise start kar sakti hu? I-I- I don’t even know where to begin!? Kitna paisa invest karna padega, kitne raw materials lagenge, brand logo, brand name, workers, manufacturing machines, labels, government permission, aur na jaane kya kya.

Veer (smiles) : Sab toh pata hai aapko!

Tej : Eh?? N-Nahi!!! Mujhe kuch nahi pata. Trust me! Mein akele ye sab-

Veer : Teju dii!!

Tej : …

Veer : I trust you!!!

Tej : Huh!?

Tej ka badan sihar utha. Aankhon me aankhein daalte hue Veer uss se ye keh raha tha.

Veer : I believe in you!! Rahi baat paise aur brand name aur logo ki woh mein aapko kar ke dunga.

Tej : O-Ok!

Bechari bas yahi bol paayi. Kis muh se mana karti use?

Veer (smiles) : That's like my sis! Sudha ko angrezi nahi aati hai dii. Woh bas kuch shabdo se hi parichit hai. Aur, Louis ko hindi nahi aati hai. Aapke liye ye tough hone waala hai.

Tej : Don't worry! Mein dekh lungi sab.

Veer : I'm sorry dii.

Tej : It's okay! Mein tumhare kaam nahi aaungi toh aur kaun aayega.

Veer (smiles) : Thank you!

Tej : Uski zaroorat nahi!

Veer haami bhar waha se chal diya. Uske mann me kayi saari cheezein daud rahi thi. Loan, stocks aur shares me investment.

Woh jaanta tha ki ab bulk me paiso ki zaroorat padne waali thi. Profit Path me Path 1 ko poori tarah se samajh chuka tha. Woh jaanta tha ki kisko kaha pe kis kaam ke liye lagana hai. Woh samajh gaya tha ki system uss se kya karwana chaah raha tha.

Use yaad aaya ki kal raat Casa Belle se nikalte waqt usne Balhaar ko ishaara kiya tha. Zaahir hai, iss waqt Sarabhai gang apne zakhmo par marham laga rahi thi. Kyuki, Balhaar ke aadmiyo ne kal party ke baad unn sab ki jo dhunaayi ki thi, woh bechaare chalne layak bhi nahi bache the.

Use ye bhi yaad aaya ki jaise hi woh waha se nikla tha, Tamanna uske baad hi party me pahuchi thi. Social media par usne ye dekh liya tha. Aisa lag raha tha jaise Tamanna uske jaane ka hi intezaar kar rahi thi. Jaise woh uss se nazre nahi milana chaahti thi.

Rahi baat yaha brands ki toh Clothing ke alawa, Veer ko ek aur field me qadam rakhna tha. Aur woh thi ~

Information Technology!

Gaurav ki Globerays company ki tarah hi use bhi apni ek company kholni thi.

Ye sab kuch kehna aur sochna asaan tha lekin karna behad mushqil. Aur isliye, Veer ne soch bhi liya tha ki iss field ko sambhaalne ke liye uske kaun kaam aane waala tha.

Arohi aur Ragini!!!

Dono hi behad padhi likhi thi. Iss field ko woh dono sambhaalne me saksham thi. Abhi Veer ne sirf ek blueprint banaya tha. Ek ek kar ke use implement karna hi uski asli pareeksha thi.

Abhi woh car me hi apni baitha hua tha. Jab Garofano ki kahi gayi baat uske mann me aayi.


'Li Renshu ne tumhe ek card diya hoga!'

'Abhi use kholne ki zaroorat nahi. Next month use kholna. Filhal tumhara focus apni personal problems ko solve karne ke liye hona chahiye.'


Par Veer bhala kaha rukne waala tha. Uska dimaag wese hi itne saare suspense ko jhel raha tha. Usne turant hi woh envelope nikala jo Renshu ne use thamaya tha.

Woh mehsoos kar paa raha tha ki iske andar kuch card jaisa maujood tha. Parantu, envelope ke baahar hi kuch strict instructions likhe hue the.


• Do not open this in front of anyone at any cost.

• Make sure to be in a closed space to avoid any matter to be leaked.

• After opening the envelope and reading the content inside, keep the card with yourself unless asked for the return.


Itni saari jab Veer ne jankaariya padhi toh uski utsukta aur bhi badh gayi.

Usne envelope turant hi khola, toh andar se ek card baahar nikla.

Veer ne jaise hi use dekha-

'Wtf????'

Yahi uska reaction tha.

Card itna saja hua tha ki lag raha tha jaise kisi ne apni shaadi ke liye card ko banwaya ho.

'Li Renshu!? What kind of taste are you having?'



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Veer ne card ko padha. Card me koi bhi jankaari aisi nahi thi jis se kuch pata chal sake zyada. Bas yahi likha hua tha ki jald hi Veer ko Chinatown jaana padega.

Lekin kyu? Ye wo nahi jaanta tha. Renshu ka favour zaroor chukana tha use.

Jald hi use ek baar fir sheher chorr ke jaane ki zaroorat padne waali thi.

'Kaash mein uske pehle inn sabhi ke sath kuch samay bita lu. Pata nahi waha kya hone waala hai.'

Uska itna sochna hi tha ki tabhi uske phone par Kavya ka ek message bhi aa gaya.

"Bhaiya~ Kal ke liye ek baar firse sorry. Kal meri wajah se sabka mood kharab ho gaya tha. Uske liye mein compensate karna chahti hu. Kya hum iss weekend kisi vacation par chal sakte hai? Hum kahi bhi ek saath ghoomne nahi gaye kaafi time se. Please~???"

Veer soch hi raha tha ki sabhi ke sath milke kuch din thoda maansik tanaav se mukt hone ke liye use kahi jaana chahiye. Subah ki Pari ki bhi baat use yaad aayi,


'You need a vacation.'

Aur Veer ne thaan liya.

Usne muskuraate hue fauran hi Kavya ko message kar diya-

'Hum sab iss weekend ghumne chal rahe hai. Taiyaari shuru kar do.'

Par ek baat se woh anjaan reh gaya. Woh yeh ki jaise hi usne woh envelope khola tha-

Meelo dur udhar Chinatown me ek ghar ke kisi kamre me ek ladki ki aankhein turant hi khul gayi.

'I see! Someone has opened the envelope!!!'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Update consists of 7k words. Ye ek do update light hi rahenge lekin hot bhi rahenge. :hint: Uske baad business arc ke antim kuch updates shesh rahenge jaha do-teen matter samaapt ho jayenge. Then, hum Chinatown arc ke liye prasthaan karenge. Toh, likes thokne ka aur revos rakhna ka guys. Target apna wahi hai. 150. Keep supporting.

Dhanyavaad. ✨
Super update Bhai 💯
 
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