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Superb updateUpdate - 164 ~ Vacation (2)
Ab tak...
'Hum sab iss weekend ghumne chal rahe hai. Taiyaari shuru kar do.'
Par ek baat se woh anjaan reh gaya. Woh yeh ki jaise hi usne woh envelope khola tha-
Meelo dur udhar Chinatown me ek ghar ke kisi kamre me ek ladki ki aankhein turant hi khul gayi.
'I see! Someone has opened the envelope!!!'
Ab aage...
Morning : 8:22 AM
Suhana’s home~
“Aaj ho sakta hai mein thoda late ho jau darling!” Gaurav apni shirt pehente hue saamne baithi apni patni se bola.
Suhana dining table par baithi apna breakfast kar rahi thi jo abhi abhi chef ne unn dono ke liye banaya tha. Uska dhyaan jaise kahi aur hi tha.
Gaurav : Tum sunn rahi ho na?
Kintu, Suhana ne koi jawab nahi diya. Apne pati ki baatein use zara bhi sunayi nahi de rahi thi.
Gaurav : Wese, uss Veer ko maine ek trailer zaroor de diya tha uss raat hahaha!
‘Veer’ naam sunte hi Suhana ke kaan achanak khade ho gaye. Woh Gaurav ko sarr utha ke dekhi.
Suhana : Wh-What?
Aur uske ye puchte hi Gaurav ka muskurata chehra kisi gussail bhediye me badal gaya.
Gaurav : Mere itni baatein kehne par tumhe ek shabd nahi sunayi diya. Aur muh se uss ‘Veer’ ka naam nikalte hi tumhe hosh aa gaya? *frowns* Kya chal raha hai?
Usne jaan-boojh ke Veer ka naam liya tha. Woh ye dekhna chaah raha tha ki Suhana iss naam ko sunane par kaisa bartaav karti hai. Aur kahi na kahi jiska use darr tha, wahi hua. Veer ka naam sunane par hi Suhana ka reaction sab kuch jaayaz kar chuka tha.
Suhana : That’s not it-
Gaurav : Uss ladke ka naam sunte hi tumhare kaan khade kyu ho gaye?
Suhana : Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai! Tumne suddenly uska naam liya bas isliye-
Gaurav : Ohh! Kya yahi baat hai?
Suhana : Y-Yes!
Gaurav : I see! I believe you darling!
Woh muskuraya. Par, Suhana jaanti thi ki uske pati ki ye muskaan ekdum farzi thi.
Suhana : T-Tum kis trailer ki baat kar rahe the?
Gaurav : Ohhh! *smiles* Casa Belle ki party me woh bhi waha aaya hua tha.
Suhana : H-He was there as well?
Gaurav : Aur maine usko uski aukaat dikha di.
Suhana : K-Kya matlab?
Gaurav : I told him to- *smiles* Stay away from my wife.
Suhana (frowns) : W-What? M-Maine tumse kaha na? We are just friends. Jaisa tum soch rahe ho waisa kuch bhi nahi hai. And why did you behave like that in front of him? H-He’s my friend Gaurav.
Gaurav : Bilkul! Bilkul! Friend hai! Toh ek friend ko bhi apni limits pata rehni chahiye right?
Suhana : What are you implying? Kya tum mujh par ungli utha rahe ho?
Woh chalte hue aage aaya, aur usne Suhana ki chin ko thoda kass ke thaamte hue uska mukh utha kar uski aankhon me aankhein daalte hue kaha.
Gaurav : Nahi darling! I know! Mein jaanta hu tum mere alawa kisi aur mard ke baare me soch bhi nahi sakti.
Suhana : …
Gaurav (smiles) : Hai na?
Pakad aur mazboot hui, Suhana ko apne gaalo par dabaav ke kaaran dard mehsoos hone laga. Usne apne dono haath se Gaurav ka haath thaama. Woh jaanti thi ki Gaurav ke khilaf awaaz uthaane se kya hone wala tha.
Woh ghatna...!!!
Pushkar ka murder!!!
Aaj bhi Suhana ke peeche ek aafat bann ke pada hua tha. Woh ek aise dal-dal me fasi hui thi jis se woh chaah ke bhi nikal nahi sakti thi.
Aur agar usne nikalne ki koshish ki toh Gaurav kya kya karne me saksham tha ye baat woh bhali bhaati jaanti thi.
Gaurav : Kuch puch raha hu darling! Tum mere alawa kisi aur mard ke baare me soch bhi nahi sakti, right?
Suhana (nods weakly) : Y-Yes!
Gaurav (smiles) : That settles it then! Mein chalta hu. Aane me late ho jayega. Take care darling~
Aur itna bol woh apne kaam ke liye nikal gaya. Magar, kamre ke baahar aate hi uske hontho se muskaan gaayab ho gayi.
'Akhir woh aadmi kaun tha uss raat?'
Raat ka manzar uske zehen me aaya. Jab Balhaar aur uske aadmi Veer ke saamne sarr jhuka ke khade hue the.
Sarabhai jaisi choti gangs se kaafi businessman log waaqif the. Magar, Balhaar kaun tha? Woh Don tha!! Uske baare me na hi zyada kisi ke paas jankaari thi aur na hi use zyada koi jaanta tha.
Keval bahut bada aadmi hi use pehchaan sakta tha. Gaurav jaise kuch businessmen Balhaar ke saamne sirf jhaat barabar the.
Woh jaanta tha ki Balhaar koi maamooli aadmi nahi tha. Sarabhai jaisa vyakti agar uske saamne jhuk jaaye, toh iska kya matlab ho sakta tha?
Par, hairani waali baat ye thi ki Sarabhai jis ke saamne jhuk raha tha, wahi aadmi Veer ke saamne jhuka. Ab iska kya matlab tha?
'Lagta hai tumhare bhi kuch connections hai, Veer. I underestimated you! This will be fun then.'
Mann me sochte hue woh ghar se nikal gaya. Aur, idhar uske jaate hi Suhana andar apne kamre me ek gehre chintan me doob gayi.
'Wese, uss Veer ko maine ek trailer zaroor de diya tha uss raat hahaha!'
Gaurav ki baat uske sarr me ghoom rahi thi.
'What did he do there?'
Apne anguthe ko daanto tale dabaaye woh chinta me idhar se udhar tehelne lagi. Aur, sochne lagi ki uss raat akhir uske pati ne kya kaha hoga Veer ko. Veer ko kaisa mehsoos hua hoga?
Apna phone jhattse nikaalte hue usne contact list me Veer ka naam khola. Aur call icon pe tap karne hi wali thi magar-
Uski himmat nahi hui.
'He won't blame me, right?'
Woh kitni bechain thi iss waqt, ye woh khud bhi nahi jaanti thi. Apne schedule par dhyaan kendrit karte hue woh bhi kuch derr baad apne kaam me lag gayi.
***
Veer's old home~
Jaha social media me jagah jagah ab Veer ke charche failte jaa rahe the toh wahi Veer inn sab social media me chal rahi khabro se anibhigya tha.
Use koi andaza nahi tha ki woh social media aur news channels par din-ba-din kitna popular hota jaa raha tha. Uske javaan aur aakarshit hone ke chalte kayi saari ladkiya pehle hi uski fans bann chuki thi.
Casa Belle me hui saari vardaat kuch insta ke fashion influencers ne apne apne phones me capture kar ke rakhi hui thi. Jo unn sabhi ne apne apne accounts par baad me post kar di thi.
Iss se na keval unke followers aur badhe, balki na jaanane waale log bhi Veer ke baare me jaagruk hone lage.
Yaha Veer aaj apne sheher se dusre sheher kuch dino ke liye vacation manaane nikal raha tha. Kavya ki zidd thi ye ki sabhi milke ek saath Goa chale.
Usne Kritika se Goa ke baare me bahut kuch suna hua tha. Magar, woh jaanti thi ki akele use aise toh jaane milne nahi wala. Behtar yahi tha ki woh poore parivar ke hi saath waha ho aaye.
Veer ke puraane ghar ke baahar cabs khadi hui thi. Apni apni cabs me sabhi apne luggage ke saath virajmaan the.
Ek cab me Veer, Arohi, Kavya, aur Tej baithe hue the. Toh wahi dusri me Ragini, Shweta, Bhumika aur Suman.
Teesri me Purvi, Aabha aur Sonali.
Aur intezaar ho raha tha toh kisi ek shaks ka jiske liye saari cabs ruki hui thi.
Kavya : Ohh god~ Ye mamma kya karne lagi? Arre flight miss ho jayegi.
Intezaar ho raha tha Sumitra ka. Jo aksar ghar ke kaamo me hi apna jeevan vyateet karti thi, aaj jaise tese Kavya ne apni maa ko trip par chalne ke liye mana liya tha.
Ghar ke andar Sumitra baari baari Manorath ko sab kuch samjha rahi thi. Magar, Manorath uski ek sunane ko taiyaar nahi the.
Sumitra : Papa jii! Dawayi time pe le lijiyega. Aur agar-
Manorath : Bahu!! Aur kitni derr yaha khadi rahogi? Baahar sab intezar kar rahe hai. Arre Bhai sab kaam waale lage hai na. Waqt par dawa de denge mujhe.
Sumitra : L-Lekin fir bhi-
Manorath : Lekin vekin kuch nahi! Ab chup chaap apna samaan uthao aur sab ke saath kuch din ghoom ke aao. Mujh jaise budhe ki sewa kar kar ke tum bhi thak gayi hogi. Thode din mauj bhi karni chahiye. Hahaha!
Sumitra : Y-Ye kya keh rahe hai aap Papa jii? Aapki sewa karne par mein kyu thakne lagi?
Manorath : Arre mazak kar raha hu bahu. Haha! Tum chinta mat karo. Naukar chaakar sab hai. Sab dekh lenge. Aur Brijesh bhi rahega. Tum jao aur manoranjan kar ke aao.
Sumitra : J-Jii!
Manorath (frowns) : Wese...! Isme galti tumhari nahi hai. Galti meri hai jo Karunesh jaisa ladka maine paida kiya. Agar tumhari shaadi iss khandaan me na hoti toh shayad aaj tum aur bhi sukhad jeevan jee rahi hoti bacchi!
Sumitra : Y-Ye aap kya keh rahe hai Papa jii? Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai!!
Uske ye kehte hi mahaul aur bhi tang ho gaya. Sumitra khud kinhi vicharo me kho gayi. Nirasha ki ek parat uske chehre par chadh gayi, jise Manorath ne turant hi dekh ke bhaanp liya.
Manorath : Arre! Mein bhi kya- haha! Ye sab leke baith gaya. Chalo chalo! Fatafat apna saman uthao aur jao bhai, sab log rasta dekh rahe hai.
Sumitra : Huh?? J-Jii!
Sumitra apna trolley bag kheechte hue ghar se baahar nikli, toh bag uthaane ke liye pehle hi Veer aage aa gaya.
Veer : Laiye! Mujhe dijiye!
Sumitra ke haatho se usne bag liya aur cab me rakhwa diya. Woh teesri waali cab me Purvi, Aabha aur Sonali ke sang baith gayi. Aur iss qadar sab ke sab Goa jaane ke liye taiyaar the.
Dekhte hi dekhte woh sabhi airport par pahuch chuke the. Iss poore safar ke liye sabhi kahi na kahi behad excited the. Sabse zyada toh Kavya. Magar, do shaksiyat aisi bhi thi jo asmanjas ki sthiti me doobi hui thi. Aur woh do shaksiyat thi~
Purvi!!!
Aur Ragini!!!
Purvi toh Veer ka jaise saamna hi nahi karna chahti thi. Uss raat jo kuch unke darmiyaan hua tha, uss se woh abhi tak ubhar nahi paayi thi. Kintu, Tej ne use bulaya tha aur toh aur ghar par Arun ko jab pata chala toh usne turant hi Purvi ko manzoori dedi. Na chaahte hue bhi, use yaha aana pada.
‘N-Nahi! Ye sab mein kya sochne lagi? Iss se accha mauka aur kya hi hoga Veer se uss baare me spasht baat karne ke liye. Jitni mein vichlit hu, akhir woh bhi toh utna hi vichlit hoga na. Mein toh badi hu, magar woh toh chhota hai. Mujhe confront karna chahiye. Haan!’
Mann hi mann, woh uske aur Veer ke beech iss awkwardness ko khatam karne ke liye khud ko taiyaar karne lagi.
Dekhte hi dekhte, sabhi flight ke andar the aur flight bhi take-off kar chuki thi. Apni seat par baithi Ragini ka dil bhi bechain tha.
Uske aur Veer ke rishte me abhi kuch khataas si chal rahi thi. Jo woh chaahti thi, woh use Veer nahi de paa raha tha. Parantu, Veer kya chahta tha?
‘Huh?’
Achanak jaise Ragini ko kuch bodh hua. Woh Veer se kya chaahti thi usne spasht bata ke rakh diya tha. Magar, Veer kya chahta tha? Usne kabhi jaanane ki koshish kari? Kabhi nahi!
‘Y-Ye khayaal mere dimaag me pehle kyu nahi aaya? Mein apni icchaaye Veer ke saamne rakh chuki hu. Magar- Magar uski bhi toh icchaaye hongi na? That’s right! Maine sirf apni khwahishein uss par thop di. Lekin, woh bhi toh kuch chaah raha hoga na? Y-Ye maine kya kiya? Shayad isliye woh mujhe kuch jawab nahi de paaya? Iss trip par- mujhe uss se akele me baat karni hogi!!’
Usne bhi thaan liya tha ki woh Veer ke mukh se bhi seedha jawaab leke rahegi. Aur uske baad hi kisi nirnay par pahuchegi.
Tej aur Veer dono hi agal bagal waali seats par baithe hue the. Jaha Veer ek nap le raha tha toh wahi Tej uske bagal se baith use pal pal nihaar rahi thi.
Louis ke aane ke baad se, Veer ke upar zimmedari aur bhi badh chuki thi. Harr kaam khud karne se nahi banane waala tha, ye baat woh jaanta tha. Aur, isliye usne apno se hi kaam ko baantne ke liye madad maangi. Tej Louis aur Sudha ko sab kuch samjha ke aayi thi.
Jaha Sudha silaayi ke liye aur kaarigar dhoondhne me lag chuki thi toh wahi Louis branding, nayi fashion designs, aur materials ko arrange karne me laga hua tha. Saara kaam filhaal toh Bhumika ke hotel ke ek kamre me ho raha tha.
Kyuki, workshop jaisa abhi tak kuch bhi uplabdh nahi hua tha. Ye baat Veer bhi jaanta tha. Aur, isliye usne Karan ko ek left-over building dhoondhne ka kaam saupa hua tha. Real estate me uski pakad wese hi achhi thi. Uss se behtar ye kaam aur koi nahi kar sakta tha Veer ki nazro me.
Inn sab chintao ko kuch pal ke liye nazar-andaaz karte hue Veer aur baaki sabhi akhir kaar Goa ki zameen par land kar hi gaye.
Airport se baahar aate hi Kavya chehek uthi,
Kavya : Oh my god~ Dii!! It’s so colorful! Right? Itni saari lights!!
Arohi (smiles) : Hmm!
Flight shaam ki thi, toh pahuchte pahuchte ab sooraj bhi dhalne ko aa gaya tha. Kavya ko zara bhi sabr nahi ho raha tha. Aur woh baar baar kuch accha dekhne ke baad, seedhe palat ke Veer ko dekhti. Jaise kuch mann me soch rahi ho. Par, bechaare Veer ki kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha.
Airport par se Veer ne sabhi ke liye cabs book ki, aur sabhi usme baith chal diye.
Kavya : Bhaiya~ Bhaiya~ hum kaha jaa rahe hai abhi?
Veer (smiles) : Yaha se hum jaa rahe hai bogmalo beach.
Kavya : Wow!!! Par seedhe beach? Umm! Hotel nahi jaa rahe pehle? Umm, wese- *blushes*mujhe koi aitraaz nahi hai aapke saath paani me dubki lagaane me abhi hi. B-But- agar hotel me room pehle mil jaata toh accha nahi hota? I-I’m sweaty actually- aur-
Veer : Huh???
Veer ke chehre par poora confusion tha. Jab Kavya ne dekha toh use pata chala ki woh kuch zyada hi apne mann ki baatein bol gayi.
Kavya (blushes) : Ahh~ I-I mean- Umm- Woh hotel-!!
Veer : Of course, hum sabse pehle apne rooms me hi jayenge pagal! Resort wahi beach se laga hua hai. *smiles* Tumhe beach ka full view milega room se.
Kavya (amazed) : Ahhh~!!
Arohi (smiles) : Aur kitna kharcha hua inn sab me?
Kavya : H-Haan! Trip ke liye toh maine sab ko ready kiya tha. But kharcha toh Bhaiya kar rahe hai. Mujhe karna chahiye-
Veer : Bilkul bhi nahi!
Kavya : Kyuuuuu???
Veer : Tum abhi chhoti ho. Jab earn karne lagogi toh sab wasoolunga mein tum se.
Kavya : O-Ohh!!
Pal bhar ke liye Kavya ko laga tha ki Veer firse use yahi bhaasan dega ki bada bhai hi sab kuch karta hai. Uski hi zimmedari hoti hai. Aur, agar Veer yahi sab kehta toh aaj Kavya uss par firse uss raat jaise bhadakne waali thi. Magar, jab usne ye kaha ki woh uske kamaane ke baad uss se wasoolega. Kahi na kahi, apne bhaiya ka woh jawaab sunn ke use accha laga.
Kavya : Ahh~ Dii!! Look! Look! Sunset!! Kitna pyaara hai!
Sooraj doob raha tha. Aisa lag raha tha maano samudra use apne andar samaane ki koshish kar raha tha. Chalti car me se ye drishya dekhne layak tha.
Arohi : Bahut sundar hai.
Tej : Right! Shayad hum sabhi ko sach me kuch dino ke liye ek refreshment ki zaroorat thi.
Kehte hue uski nazre car ke saamne lage mirror par gayi, jaha use Veer ki aankhein nazar aa rahi thi. Veer ne bhi jaise bhaanp liya ki peeche se koi use dekh raha tha. Sheeshe me hi dono ki nazre aapas me mili. Veer muskuraya aur bola,
Veer : Aap sahi ho! Teju dii!
Badle me Tej bhi peeche se muskurayi. Aur, lagbhag 8-10 km ka raasta tay karte hue woh sabhi apne resort par akhir pahuch hi gaye.
Veer ne sabhi ko sabse pehle rooms me settle karwaya. Rooms me samaan rakhne ke baad sabhi baahar ko aaye toh unhe samudra aur doobte hue sooraj ka ek manmohak drishya dekhne ko mila.
Kavya : Wowwww~ Kitna beautiful hai ye!!!
Kavya apne ek black shorts aur white top me nange perr ret par daudati hui haath fela ke aage badhi. Usi ke saath saath Aabha ki aankhon me bhi ek anokhi chamak thi. Peeche peeche woh bhi aayi,
Kavya : Arre? Aapko bhi beach pasand hai?
Aabha : Ahh! M-Mein samudra pehli baar dekh rahi hu.
Kavya : Huh? Arre? Mumbai me Juhu beach nahi gayi kya aap? Apne waha toh kitne beach hai.
Aabha : N-Nahi! Kabhi mauka hi nahi mila.
Uski baat sunn Kavya taajub me thi toh wahi Veer dur se ye sunn apne aap se thoda niraash ho utha. Ye uski zimmedari thi. Magar, usne kabhi bhi Aabha ko inn jagaho par nahi ghumaya tha. Woh khud hi itna vyast rehta tha ki iss orr uska kabhi dhyaan hi nahi gaya. Khud se hataash ho raha tha woh jab tabhi,
[It’s okay!]
‘Hmm?’
[Tumhari koi galti nahi hai. You are already occupied with so many things. Wese bhi, tumne Aabha aur uss Shreya ko travel ke liye sponsor karne ka keh hi diya hai. Ab jitna tum nahi ghume ho, uss se zyada ye dono aage ghoomne waali hai. So, don’t feel bad.]
‘Y-Yeah!’
Kabhi Pari ki ye personality iss tarah se use comfort nahi kari thi. Fir aaj kaise?
Tej aur Arohi bhi samundar ke nazdeek jaake lehro ka lutf utha rahi thi. Veer ne ekdum prefect resort choose kiya tha unn sab ke liye. Yaha zyada log maujood nahi the. Aur, family ke hisaab se unn sab ke liye ye behad hi behatreen jagah thi.
Purvi, Ragini, Shweta aur Suman bhi baari baari aage badh samundar kinaare gayi aur apne apne perr bhigo ke thande paani ka aanand lene lagi.
Veer bhi ek chino short aur white cotton shirt daale hue tha. Jeb me haath daale woh dur se sabhi ko aapas me masti karte dekh raha tha. Sabko iss qadar khush dekh uske hontho par muskaan sajj gayi. Ye sabhi! Yahi sab uska parivar the. Bas yaha kami thi toh ek shaks ki-
Bhavna!!
Uski maa na jaane waha kin kaamo me vyast hogi abhi. Waha ki pal pal ki khabar lene ke liye usne Balhaar dwara do aadmi waha bhijwa diye the, jo na keval waha uski maa ki nigrani dur se kar rahe the balki khatro ke waqt use bachaane ke liye bhi taiyaar baithe the.
Kyuki khatra kabhi bhi bata ke nahi aata tha. Uski mutthi kasi.
Garofano! Li Renshu! Mr. X!
Inme se kaun saccha tha? Kaun jhootha? Kaun apna tha? Kaun paraya? Aur kaise kaise system owners maujood the? Woh kuch bhi nahi jaanta tha. Isliye, uska sabse accha saathi-
Satarkta hi thi! Jitna woh satark rahega, utna hi aage ke khatro ko taal paane me saksham rahega. Abhi woh inn vichaaro me dooba hi hua tha jab bagal se aayi ek awaaz ne use hosh me laa diya,
“Kya soch rahe ho Veer?”
Veer (glances) : Hmm?
Bagal se dekha toh paaya ki hare rang ki saree me uski chachi Sumitra khadi hui thi.
Veer : Chachi?
Sumitra (smiles) : Tumhe nahi jaana? Dekho! Sab masti kar rahe hai.
Veer : Yahi sawaal mein aap se bhi toh kar sakta hu na?
Sumitra : Mein paani se dur hi rehti hu aksar!
Veer : Kyu?
Sumitra : Bachpan me ek baar doobte doobte bachi thi. Tab se paani ka darr baith gaya. Toh hamesha nadi, samudra, talaab inn jagaho se dur hi rehti hu.
Veer : Ohh! Ye baat mujhe nahi pata thi. Aur fir bhi hum sab aapko yaha paani se ghiri jagah par le aaye.
Sumitra : Meri beti ne pehli baar iss tarah zidd ki thi. Iss baar mein uske saamne haar gayi. Aur shayad- mujhe bhi thode araam ki zaroorat thi. Kyu? Kya tumhe mera aana pasand nahi aaya? *smiles*
Veer : Mujhe accha laga ki aap bhi iss trip par shaamil hui. Kayi trips me hum sab aapko miss kiye hai.
Sumitra (surprised) : Ohh!
Veer : Jii!
Sumitra (smiles) : Theek hai! Wese maine apna jawab de diya. Ab tum batao! Tum kyu nahi jaa rahe?
Veer (smiles) : Bas unn sabko kuch derr khush dekh ke mein khush ho raha tha yaha. Kya ye kaaran kaafi hai?
Sumitra nazre jhukaate hue muskurayi, fir ahista se boli,
Sumitra : Kaafi hai! T-Tum- bahut acche ladke ho Veer.
Veer : Kyu? Kya aap mujhe apna ladka nahi maanti?
Sumitra : Huh!!?
Woh akasmat hi nazre upar kar use dekhi. Ekdum chakit aur dang. Veer ne kabhi iss tarah uss se aisa kuch nahi kaha tha. Fir aaj achanak kaise? Nazre jhukaate hue bas halke se usne haami bhari. Woh kuch kehna chaahti thi par sharm ke chalte uska muh na khul paaya. Woh batana chaahti thi ki woh Veer aur Arohi dono ko saath me bachpan me apna doodh pilaaya karti thi. Par, sharm ki wajah se shaant rahi.
Dono hi fir baad me bina kuch kahe baaki sabhi ke sang samudra kinaare mauj masti karne lage. Raat hui, andhere ka aagman hua. Aur, aasmaan me chaand aur sitaaro ki roshni se samudra aur bhi khubsoorat prateet hone laga.
Sabhi andar resort me jaa chuke the, siwae Bhumika ke. Rait par nange perr khadi woh lehro ko dekh kuch derr akele samay vyateet kar rahi thi. Veer jo kisi kaam se resort ke ek worker se baat karne aaya hua tha, uski nazre jab Bhumika par padi toh woh seedha uss orr chal diya.
Veer : Aap yaha?
Veer ki awaaz sunn, Bhumika palti aur use dekhi,
Bhumika : Hmm? Ohh! Veer!?
Veer (steps closer) : Yu akele iss tarah?
Bhumika : Hmm! Kuch kuch soch rahi thi bas.
Veer : Jaise?
Bhumika : Bas business related hi. Aur future ke baare me…!
Veer : Yaha bhi aap business ke baare me sochna nahi chorr rahi!?
Bhumika (smiles) : Mujhe aadat hai Veer! Mein aisi hi hu!
Veer : Kya mein jaan sakta hu ki kya soch rahi thi aap?
Bhumika : Hmm? Ohh! Hum clothes ka business jald hi shuru karne waale hai. Usi ko lekar soch rahi thi. Mein nahi chaahti ki hum kisi bhi liquidity gap me fase.
Veer : Liquidity gap?
Bhumika (nods) : Hmm! Naye business ki shuruat me ye aksar hota hai. Saral shabdo me, jab aap ek jagah se loan le lete ho, aur uss loan ko chukaane ke liye dusri jagah se loan lete ho. Dono ki hi time limit alag alag hoti hai. Fir dusri jagah ke loan ko chukaane ke liye aapke paas uss waqt paise nahi hote hai. Jiske kaaran ek gap aa jaata hai. Wahi liquidity gap hai. Aur mein nahi chaahti naye business me hum kabhi bhi iss situation me fase.
Kehte hue Bhumika shaant ho gayi. Par, jab Veer ki orr se kuch derr tak koi jawab na aaya, toh woh mud ke Veer ko dekhi. Aur, paaya ki Veer taajub me use dekh raha tha.
Bhumika : Veer?
Veer (amazed) : You are great!
Bhumika (blushes) : Huh?
Veer : Shayad isliye aap itna acche se sab kuch manage kar leti ho. Kyuki, aap pehle se hi dur ki soch ke rakhti ho.
Bhumika (blushes) : Y-Ye toh harr businessman karta hai Veer. Isme koi khaas baat nahi!
Veer : Mere liye khaas hai. Aapka mere saath hona.
Bhumika (blushes) : Huh!? I-
Veer aage badha aur usne Bhumika ko apne gale se laga liya. Badle me Bhumika ke haath bhi Veer ki peeth par kass gaye. Dono hi ek dusre se kuch derr lipte rahe. Jab Veer alag hone ke liye peeche hua, toh Bhumika ne apne honth uske gaal par rakh diye.
*kiss*
Veer (smiles) : Chale?
Bhumika (smiles) : Hmm!
Dono waha se laute, Bhumika toh seedhe apne kamre ki orr chali gayi parantu Veer jab apne room me jaane ke liye hua tabhi kisi ne uska haath pakad ke use kone me kheech liya,
Veer : Huh???
Ragini use ek changing room ki orr kheenchi aur usne andar se lock laga diya. Andar kaafi andhera ho rakha tha aur Ragini uske seene se chipki hui thi.
Veer : Bha-
Veer use ‘Bhabhi’ keh ke bulaane hi wala tha jab mann me hi Pari ne use tok diya,
[Don’t call her Bhabhi! Call her name.]
Veer : Ragini!???
Ragini : !!!!????
Aur uska asar Veer saaf saaf Ragini ke chehre par dekh paa raha tha. Woh stabdh thi, par andar hi andaar behad khush bhi. Veer ne use uske naam se bulaya tha.
Veer : Kya hua? Tumne mujhe yaha iss tarah-!?
Pari ki tarqeeb Veer samajh chuka tha. Isliye, usne khud-ba-khud ‘aap’ ki jagah ‘tum’ keh ke use pukaara.
Ragini : M-Mein-
Veer : ???
Ragini : Mujhe tum se kuch baat karni thi.
Veer : Iss tarah?
Ragini : Fir samay nahi milega hume. Itne logo ke beech kaise tum se akele me baat kar paungi?
Veer : Kaho na!
Ragini : Maine uss din- Uss din apni baatein saaf saaf rakh di thi ki mein kya chaahti hu. Lekin-
Veer : Lekin?
Ragini (glances) : Lekin, tumse kabhi nahi pucha maine.
Veer : Kya??
Ragini : Yahi ki tum kya chaahte ho?
Veer : Matlab?
Ragini : Mere baare me-!!! Tum kya chaahte ho? Tumhari kya iccha hai?
Veer : I-
Ragini : Hich-kichane ki zaroorat nahi hai. Tum khul ke keh sakte ho.
Veer apna muh kholta ki uss se pehle hi Pari ne apne nirdesh de diye.
[I'll help you this time. Ab jaisa jaisa mein kehti jau. Wesa wesa hi kehna.]
'Fine!'
Veer khud se hi sab handle karna chahta tha parantu, pichli baar Ragini ke saath kya hua tha ye yaad karne ke baad iss baar usne Pari par ye zimmedari chorr di. Woh uske mann me nirdesh deti jaa rahi thi aur Veer unka paalan karta jaa raha tha.
Usne turant hi Ragini ka haath thaama aur tabhi,
*Ding*
[Mystic Touch has been activated.]
Jaise hi Veer ka haath uske haath se sparsh hua,
"Nnn~" Ek dabi hui siski Ragini ne bhari.
Veer : Mein bhi tumse kab se ye baatein kehna chaahta tha?
Ragini : Huhh!!?
Veer : Pichli baar jo kuch bhi hamare beech baatein hui, woh adhuri baatein thi. Tum yu bhaag ke chali gayi thi. Iss baar nahi!
Uski pakad Ragini ki kalayi par mazboot hui, aur idhar Ragini ki dhadkane tez.
Veer : Ragini!!!
Ragini : H-Haan?
Veer : Maine tumhare saath iss tarah vyavhaar nahi kiya kabhi. Tum shadi shuda ho. Kya ye baat mein nahi jaanta?
Ragini : J-Jaante ho!
Veer : Toh fir tumne aisa kyu kaha tha uss din? Ki tum shadi shuda ho isliye mein tumhe dur rakh raha hu?
Ragini : Kya ye sach nahi? Bhala aur kya kaaran ho sakta hai?
Veer : Agar yahi sach hai, toh tumhe apne nazdeek aane kyu deta?
Ragini : Huhh!?
Veer : Bolo! Jawab do? Kyu tumhe apne itne qareeb aane deta? Pehle hi tumse duri na bana leta?
Ragini : Aur bhi kaaran ho sakte hai.
Veer : Jaise ki?
Ragini : Jaise ki mere shareer ka istemal…!
Usne jab ye kaha tab use samajh aaya ki woh baat baat me kitna zyada bol gayi. Kya Veer iss tarah ka ladka tha jo uske shareer ke liye uske saath sambandh banaye hue tha?
Veer ki nazre apne aap hi jhuk gayi.
Veer : Toh ye baat hai. I see now. Aap aisa sochti hai mere baare me?
Ragini : N-Nahi Veer!
Woh bechain ho uthi.
Ragini : N-Nahi! Aisa kuch nahi hai! Mein zyada keh gayi. Mujhe maaf kar do. Mein bas-
Veer (sighs) : Ragini! Aaj mein tumhe sab kuch clearly bata deta hu.
Ragini : !!??
Veer : Tum mujhe pasand ho. Tumhare shadi-shuda hone se mujhe koi farq nahi padta. Ek baar agar dil me maine jagah dedi, matlab dedi. Lekin, sirf tum hi nahi ho dil me.
Ragini : Wh-What?
Veer : Hmm! Tum jaanti ho ki jaise tum mujhe pasand karti ho, wese hi koi aur bhi mujhe pasand karta hai.
Ragini (panics) : K-Kaun pasand karta hai tumhe?
Veer : Hai koi!
Ragini (frowns) : Aankhein noch lungi uss chudail ki. K-Kaun hai woh??? Batao! Jaldi!
Veer ne ahista se uske dono gaalo ko thaama.
Ragini : Nnn~
Veer ne aage uss se jo kuch kaha, use sunn na sirf Ragini ka dil bhi dukha, lekin kahi na kahi Veer ke prati woh aur bhi zyada aakarshit ho uthi.
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China, Yunnan Province ~
Yunnan Province ek aisa hissa tha China ka jo desh ke beech me sthit tha. Ye woh hissa tha jaha barfeele pahaad bhi maujood hua karte the aur ghane jangal bhi. Ye woh ilaaka tha jaha natural resources ki koi kami nahi thi.
Isi ilaaqe me ek vishaal ghane jangal se kuch duri par siheyuan sthit the. Siheyuan ek prakaar ke Chinese ghar hote the jo puraane zamaane se chalte aa rahe the.
Ye ek aisi banawat ke ghar hote the jaha beecho beech ek baraamda hota tha, aur uske agal bagal se lag ke ghar banaaye jaate the. Aksar ek bada parivaar hi inn gharo me raha karta tha.
Aise hi ek siheyuan me raatri ke iss waqt kamre me ek aadmi baitha hua tha, jo Chinese wine cup ko haath me thaame wine pee raha tha.
Uske mann me kayi saare sawaal chal rahe the aur kayi chintaaye bhi thi. Kuch shabd abhi bhi uske dimaag me goonj rahe the.
'Legion aur Order kabhi ek nahi ho sakte. Aaj se ya toh Legion rahega, ya fir Order.'
Uski pakad uss wine cup par mazboot ho uthi. Aur, cup me ek daraar pad gayi. Kintu, uss aadmi ne turant hi apni pakad ko dheela chorr diya. Kisi ke nazdeek aane ki aahat use mehsoos hui.
*Krrrrrr*
Halki si awaaz ke saath kamre ka lakdi ka darwaza khula aur ek ladki andar daakhil hui.
Aadmi ne bina uski taraf dekhe hi pucha,
Aadmi : Koi khabar?
Ladki ne naa me sarr hilaya aur boli,
Ladki : Filhaal koi khabar nahi hai. Lekin, hume satark rehna hoga. Warna dikkat aa sakti hai.
Aadmi : Hmm!
Ladki ahista se uske nazdeek aake baithi.
Ladki : Hum darr kyu rahe hai?
Aadmi : Darr nahi rahe hai. Bas satarkta se aage badh rahe hai. Kyuki, humaare paas bhaugolik faayda nahi hai. Unke paas hai.
Ladki : Toh kya hua? Hum agar chaahe toh unhe ek jhatke me majboor kar sakte hai.
Aadmi : Nahi!!! Sirf wahi nahi hai!
Ladki : Toh????
Aadmi : Kuch nahi!
Ladki : Aapka matlab hai-!?
Aadmi : Hmm! Shayad koi aur bhi hai. Aur isliye mein hich-kicha raha hu. Jab tak poori jankaari haath na ho, tab tak prahaar nahi karna chahiye.
Ladki : Tsk!!! Akhir kaun hai jo unki madad kar raha hai?
Aadmi : Pata nahi! Lekin, jab tak hume jankaari haath nahi lagti, hum abhi kuch nahi karenge.
Ladki : Par fir waha se dabaav badhega hamaare upar. Tab kya?
Aadmi : Toh hume bas peeche hatne ki dhamki dena hai unhe. Agar woh ye kaam khud hi kar lete toh bhala ab tak kar kyu nahi paaye?
Ladki (nods) : Hmm!
Aadmi : Wese bhi, unse ye nahi hone wala hai.
Ladki : Hmm! Wese-! Ek baat aur bataani hai mujhe.
Aadmi : Hmm?
Ladki : Envelope kisi ne samay ke pehle khol liya hai.
Aadmi : Kis ne?
Ladki : Envelope number 3! Aapne kisko diya tha?
Aadmi : Ohhh! Hmm! Samajh gaya.
Ladki : Kaun hai woh?
Aadmi : Hai ek naujavan!! Mujhe uska hi intezar hai. Kyuki, tabhi mein safal ho paunga.
Ladki : Naujavan?
Aadmi : Hmm! Kuch dino me hi sab yaha honge. Meri aasha toh yahi hai. Aise me agar woh bhi aata hai toh-
Ladki : Toh?
Aadmi : Toh mera kaam sabse asaan ho jayega.
Ladki : Kya itna taaqatvar hai woh?
Aadmi : Hmm!
Aadmi ne jab haami bhari, toh ladki ki jigyaasa aur bhi adhik badh gayi. Kaun naujavan tha jo taqatvar tha itna ki uske saamne baithe aadmi ne bhi haami bhar di? Woh jaanti thi ki uske bagal se baitha ye aadmi behad shaktishali tha. Itna ki uss se shaktishali usne aaj tak kisi ko nahi dekha tha. Fir ye naujavan kaun tha? Jisko lekar uske bagal se baithe aadmi ne bhi uski taaqat par manzoori dedi?
Ab uski jigyaasa itni badh chuki thi ki use niyantrit karna bhi behad mushqil ho raha tha.
Ladki : Mujhe bataiye na! Kaun hai woh?
Aadmi muskuraya. Woh jaanta tha ki jab bhi jigyaasa ki baat aati thi, ye ladki iss maamle me behad kacchi hua karti thi. Sabr naam ki cheez usme thi hi nahi.
Aadmi : Abhi nahi! Jab woh aayega, toh khud dekh lena.
Ladki : P-Par kyu???
Aadmi : Maine kaha na!!!
Ladki : J-Jii!!
Aadmi turant hi utha magar jaate jaate kehta gaya,
Aadmi : Abhi sirf jankaari haasil karne par dhyaan do. Uske aage kuch nahi. Samajh gayi na?
Ladki (nods) : J-Jii!
Aadmi : Hmm!
Aur woh kamre se baahar nikal gaya. Kamre me woh ladki akeli yuhi baithi rahi aur bas sochti reh gayi ki aakhir woh naujavaan kaun ho sakta tha bhala?
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Update consists of 5.6k words. Ye waala thoda chhota hai compared to recent updates. Lekin, ab soch raha hu ki itne ke hi aas paas length rakhi jaaye. Abhi vacation part khatam nahi hua hai. Vacation ka ek aur hissa aana baaki hai jisme sab cover up ho jayega. Mein ise ek me hi karna chaahta tha par woh 10k ke upar jaa raha tha. Bahut zyada ho jaata. So, abhi itna hi. Baaki, likes aur revos rakhne ka. Target apna wahi hai. 150.
Dhanyavaad.
Bahut din Baad, Suhana ka character nazar aayi, thodi der ke liye hi sahi, phir bhi Dil kush Kar diya aapne toh. Yeh Gaurav ka character shuru se hi thoda shadowyi lagta tha, PURA yakin toh nahin par woh Suhana ke liye bilkul bhi laayak nahin lagta. Aur toh aur, woh ab Veer se takrane ke soch bhi rakhta hai, interesting to note that and exciting to anticipate their future duels. Aakhir, Veer, ek Lamhe Baad hi sahi, Apne parivaar ke saath kuch quality time spend karna shuru Kiya hai, waakayi acchi baat huyi uske liye. Aur Ragini aur uske beech ke relationship Ko sudhaarne aur waapas usko sahi line par laane mein safalta paayen yehi hum sabki manokaamna hai. Shweta aur Sumitra se Veer acchi tarah interact Kar Raha hai , Kushi ki baat hai yeh toh. Aur bahut door, China mein bhi Veer Ko lekar halchal shuru ho Raha hai, yeh toh kitne Naye naye twists laanewaala hai, aage jaakar hum Jaan paayen. Hats off to you dear bro. It's quite intriguing how you manage to deftly handle so many characters & create situations to keep us on tenterhooks regarding the outcomes & maintain the rythm of this enchanting & unique story 
. At the same time, u r a grand master of suspense, romance, action & what not knowing damn well the pulse of the readers to keep them forever engrossed. Heartfelt thanks & gratitude to you for successfully carrying on this mega masterpiece of a thriller in your inimitable style 
keeping the readers always on edge, what's about to happen next always a mystery & keeping everyone's heartbeats & pulse racing. U deftly handle almost all the main characters in such a way the readers are bound to feel them close to their hearts & treat them as if they are their near & dear ones. Dear bro, u r peerless alongside my other favourite author, Sandeep Singh Nirwan. It's my good luck & fortune that I am able to read & enjoy your magnificent Stories which you continue to shell out selflessly & entertain us non-stop. God bless you dear bro in your endeavours. Regards
. At the same time, u r a grand master of suspense, romance, action & what not knowing damn well the pulse of the readers to keep them forever engrossed. Heartfelt thanks & gratitude to you for successfully carrying on this mega masterpiece of a thriller in your inimitable style keeping the readers always on edge, what's about to happen next always a mystery & keeping everyone's heartbeats & pulse racing. U deftly handle almost all the main characters in such a way the readers are bound to feel them close to their hearts & treat them as if they are their near & dear ones. Dear bro, u r peerless alongside my other favourite author, Sandeep Singh Nirwan. It's my good luck & fortune that I am able to read & enjoy your magnificent Stories which you continue to shell out selflessly & entertain us non-stop. God bless you dear bro in your endeavours. Regards
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Update - 164 ~ Vacation (2)
Ab tak...
'Hum sab iss weekend ghumne chal rahe hai. Taiyaari shuru kar do.'
Par ek baat se woh anjaan reh gaya. Woh yeh ki jaise hi usne woh envelope khola tha-
Meelo dur udhar Chinatown me ek ghar ke kisi kamre me ek ladki ki aankhein turant hi khul gayi.
'I see! Someone has opened the envelope!!!'
Ab aage...
Morning : 8:22 AM
Suhana’s home~
“Aaj ho sakta hai mein thoda late ho jau darling!” Gaurav apni shirt pehente hue saamne baithi apni patni se bola.
Suhana dining table par baithi apna breakfast kar rahi thi jo abhi abhi chef ne unn dono ke liye banaya tha. Uska dhyaan jaise kahi aur hi tha.
Gaurav : Tum sunn rahi ho na?
Kintu, Suhana ne koi jawab nahi diya. Apne pati ki baatein use zara bhi sunayi nahi de rahi thi.
Gaurav : Wese, uss Veer ko maine ek trailer zaroor de diya tha uss raat hahaha!
‘Veer’ naam sunte hi Suhana ke kaan achanak khade ho gaye. Woh Gaurav ko sarr utha ke dekhi.
Suhana : Wh-What?
Aur uske ye puchte hi Gaurav ka muskurata chehra kisi gussail bhediye me badal gaya.
Gaurav : Mere itni baatein kehne par tumhe ek shabd nahi sunayi diya. Aur muh se uss ‘Veer’ ka naam nikalte hi tumhe hosh aa gaya? *frowns* Kya chal raha hai?
Usne jaan-boojh ke Veer ka naam liya tha. Woh ye dekhna chaah raha tha ki Suhana iss naam ko sunane par kaisa bartaav karti hai. Aur kahi na kahi jiska use darr tha, wahi hua. Veer ka naam sunane par hi Suhana ka reaction sab kuch jaayaz kar chuka tha.
Suhana : That’s not it-
Gaurav : Uss ladke ka naam sunte hi tumhare kaan khade kyu ho gaye?
Suhana : Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai! Tumne suddenly uska naam liya bas isliye-
Gaurav : Ohh! Kya yahi baat hai?
Suhana : Y-Yes!
Gaurav : I see! I believe you darling!
Woh muskuraya. Par, Suhana jaanti thi ki uske pati ki ye muskaan ekdum farzi thi.
Suhana : T-Tum kis trailer ki baat kar rahe the?
Gaurav : Ohhh! *smiles* Casa Belle ki party me woh bhi waha aaya hua tha.
Suhana : H-He was there as well?
Gaurav : Aur maine usko uski aukaat dikha di.
Suhana : K-Kya matlab?
Gaurav : I told him to- *smiles* Stay away from my wife.
Suhana (frowns) : W-What? M-Maine tumse kaha na? We are just friends. Jaisa tum soch rahe ho waisa kuch bhi nahi hai. And why did you behave like that in front of him? H-He’s my friend Gaurav.
Gaurav : Bilkul! Bilkul! Friend hai! Toh ek friend ko bhi apni limits pata rehni chahiye right?
Suhana : What are you implying? Kya tum mujh par ungli utha rahe ho?
Woh chalte hue aage aaya, aur usne Suhana ki chin ko thoda kass ke thaamte hue uska mukh utha kar uski aankhon me aankhein daalte hue kaha.
Gaurav : Nahi darling! I know! Mein jaanta hu tum mere alawa kisi aur mard ke baare me soch bhi nahi sakti.
Suhana : …
Gaurav (smiles) : Hai na?
Pakad aur mazboot hui, Suhana ko apne gaalo par dabaav ke kaaran dard mehsoos hone laga. Usne apne dono haath se Gaurav ka haath thaama. Woh jaanti thi ki Gaurav ke khilaf awaaz uthaane se kya hone wala tha.
Woh ghatna...!!!
Pushkar ka murder!!!
Aaj bhi Suhana ke peeche ek aafat bann ke pada hua tha. Woh ek aise dal-dal me fasi hui thi jis se woh chaah ke bhi nikal nahi sakti thi.
Aur agar usne nikalne ki koshish ki toh Gaurav kya kya karne me saksham tha ye baat woh bhali bhaati jaanti thi.
Gaurav : Kuch puch raha hu darling! Tum mere alawa kisi aur mard ke baare me soch bhi nahi sakti, right?
Suhana (nods weakly) : Y-Yes!
Gaurav (smiles) : That settles it then! Mein chalta hu. Aane me late ho jayega. Take care darling~
Aur itna bol woh apne kaam ke liye nikal gaya. Magar, kamre ke baahar aate hi uske hontho se muskaan gaayab ho gayi.
'Akhir woh aadmi kaun tha uss raat?'
Raat ka manzar uske zehen me aaya. Jab Balhaar aur uske aadmi Veer ke saamne sarr jhuka ke khade hue the.
Sarabhai jaisi choti gangs se kaafi businessman log waaqif the. Magar, Balhaar kaun tha? Woh Don tha!! Uske baare me na hi zyada kisi ke paas jankaari thi aur na hi use zyada koi jaanta tha.
Keval bahut bada aadmi hi use pehchaan sakta tha. Gaurav jaise kuch businessmen Balhaar ke saamne sirf jhaat barabar the.
Woh jaanta tha ki Balhaar koi maamooli aadmi nahi tha. Sarabhai jaisa vyakti agar uske saamne jhuk jaaye, toh iska kya matlab ho sakta tha?
Par, hairani waali baat ye thi ki Sarabhai jis ke saamne jhuk raha tha, wahi aadmi Veer ke saamne jhuka. Ab iska kya matlab tha?
'Lagta hai tumhare bhi kuch connections hai, Veer. I underestimated you! This will be fun then.'
Mann me sochte hue woh ghar se nikal gaya. Aur, idhar uske jaate hi Suhana andar apne kamre me ek gehre chintan me doob gayi.
'Wese, uss Veer ko maine ek trailer zaroor de diya tha uss raat hahaha!'
Gaurav ki baat uske sarr me ghoom rahi thi.
'What did he do there?'
Apne anguthe ko daanto tale dabaaye woh chinta me idhar se udhar tehelne lagi. Aur, sochne lagi ki uss raat akhir uske pati ne kya kaha hoga Veer ko. Veer ko kaisa mehsoos hua hoga?
Apna phone jhattse nikaalte hue usne contact list me Veer ka naam khola. Aur call icon pe tap karne hi wali thi magar-
Uski himmat nahi hui.
'He won't blame me, right?'
Woh kitni bechain thi iss waqt, ye woh khud bhi nahi jaanti thi. Apne schedule par dhyaan kendrit karte hue woh bhi kuch derr baad apne kaam me lag gayi.
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Veer's old home~
Jaha social media me jagah jagah ab Veer ke charche failte jaa rahe the toh wahi Veer inn sab social media me chal rahi khabro se anibhigya tha.
Use koi andaza nahi tha ki woh social media aur news channels par din-ba-din kitna popular hota jaa raha tha. Uske javaan aur aakarshit hone ke chalte kayi saari ladkiya pehle hi uski fans bann chuki thi.
Casa Belle me hui saari vardaat kuch insta ke fashion influencers ne apne apne phones me capture kar ke rakhi hui thi. Jo unn sabhi ne apne apne accounts par baad me post kar di thi.
Iss se na keval unke followers aur badhe, balki na jaanane waale log bhi Veer ke baare me jaagruk hone lage.
Yaha Veer aaj apne sheher se dusre sheher kuch dino ke liye vacation manaane nikal raha tha. Kavya ki zidd thi ye ki sabhi milke ek saath Goa chale.
Usne Kritika se Goa ke baare me bahut kuch suna hua tha. Magar, woh jaanti thi ki akele use aise toh jaane milne nahi wala. Behtar yahi tha ki woh poore parivar ke hi saath waha ho aaye.
Veer ke puraane ghar ke baahar cabs khadi hui thi. Apni apni cabs me sabhi apne luggage ke saath virajmaan the.
Ek cab me Veer, Arohi, Kavya, aur Tej baithe hue the. Toh wahi dusri me Ragini, Shweta, Bhumika aur Suman.
Teesri me Purvi, Aabha aur Sonali.
Aur intezaar ho raha tha toh kisi ek shaks ka jiske liye saari cabs ruki hui thi.
Kavya : Ohh god~ Ye mamma kya karne lagi? Arre flight miss ho jayegi.
Intezaar ho raha tha Sumitra ka. Jo aksar ghar ke kaamo me hi apna jeevan vyateet karti thi, aaj jaise tese Kavya ne apni maa ko trip par chalne ke liye mana liya tha.
Ghar ke andar Sumitra baari baari Manorath ko sab kuch samjha rahi thi. Magar, Manorath uski ek sunane ko taiyaar nahi the.
Sumitra : Papa jii! Dawayi time pe le lijiyega. Aur agar-
Manorath : Bahu!! Aur kitni derr yaha khadi rahogi? Baahar sab intezar kar rahe hai. Arre Bhai sab kaam waale lage hai na. Waqt par dawa de denge mujhe.
Sumitra : L-Lekin fir bhi-
Manorath : Lekin vekin kuch nahi! Ab chup chaap apna samaan uthao aur sab ke saath kuch din ghoom ke aao. Mujh jaise budhe ki sewa kar kar ke tum bhi thak gayi hogi. Thode din mauj bhi karni chahiye. Hahaha!
Sumitra : Y-Ye kya keh rahe hai aap Papa jii? Aapki sewa karne par mein kyu thakne lagi?
Manorath : Arre mazak kar raha hu bahu. Haha! Tum chinta mat karo. Naukar chaakar sab hai. Sab dekh lenge. Aur Brijesh bhi rahega. Tum jao aur manoranjan kar ke aao.
Sumitra : J-Jii!
Manorath (frowns) : Wese...! Isme galti tumhari nahi hai. Galti meri hai jo Karunesh jaisa ladka maine paida kiya. Agar tumhari shaadi iss khandaan me na hoti toh shayad aaj tum aur bhi sukhad jeevan jee rahi hoti bacchi!
Sumitra : Y-Ye aap kya keh rahe hai Papa jii? Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai!!
Uske ye kehte hi mahaul aur bhi tang ho gaya. Sumitra khud kinhi vicharo me kho gayi. Nirasha ki ek parat uske chehre par chadh gayi, jise Manorath ne turant hi dekh ke bhaanp liya.
Manorath : Arre! Mein bhi kya- haha! Ye sab leke baith gaya. Chalo chalo! Fatafat apna saman uthao aur jao bhai, sab log rasta dekh rahe hai.
Sumitra : Huh?? J-Jii!
Sumitra apna trolley bag kheechte hue ghar se baahar nikli, toh bag uthaane ke liye pehle hi Veer aage aa gaya.
Veer : Laiye! Mujhe dijiye!
Sumitra ke haatho se usne bag liya aur cab me rakhwa diya. Woh teesri waali cab me Purvi, Aabha aur Sonali ke sang baith gayi. Aur iss qadar sab ke sab Goa jaane ke liye taiyaar the.
Dekhte hi dekhte woh sabhi airport par pahuch chuke the. Iss poore safar ke liye sabhi kahi na kahi behad excited the. Sabse zyada toh Kavya. Magar, do shaksiyat aisi bhi thi jo asmanjas ki sthiti me doobi hui thi. Aur woh do shaksiyat thi~
Purvi!!!
Aur Ragini!!!
Purvi toh Veer ka jaise saamna hi nahi karna chahti thi. Uss raat jo kuch unke darmiyaan hua tha, uss se woh abhi tak ubhar nahi paayi thi. Kintu, Tej ne use bulaya tha aur toh aur ghar par Arun ko jab pata chala toh usne turant hi Purvi ko manzoori dedi. Na chaahte hue bhi, use yaha aana pada.
‘N-Nahi! Ye sab mein kya sochne lagi? Iss se accha mauka aur kya hi hoga Veer se uss baare me spasht baat karne ke liye. Jitni mein vichlit hu, akhir woh bhi toh utna hi vichlit hoga na. Mein toh badi hu, magar woh toh chhota hai. Mujhe confront karna chahiye. Haan!’
Mann hi mann, woh uske aur Veer ke beech iss awkwardness ko khatam karne ke liye khud ko taiyaar karne lagi.
Dekhte hi dekhte, sabhi flight ke andar the aur flight bhi take-off kar chuki thi. Apni seat par baithi Ragini ka dil bhi bechain tha.
Uske aur Veer ke rishte me abhi kuch khataas si chal rahi thi. Jo woh chaahti thi, woh use Veer nahi de paa raha tha. Parantu, Veer kya chahta tha?
‘Huh?’
Achanak jaise Ragini ko kuch bodh hua. Woh Veer se kya chaahti thi usne spasht bata ke rakh diya tha. Magar, Veer kya chahta tha? Usne kabhi jaanane ki koshish kari? Kabhi nahi!
‘Y-Ye khayaal mere dimaag me pehle kyu nahi aaya? Mein apni icchaaye Veer ke saamne rakh chuki hu. Magar- Magar uski bhi toh icchaaye hongi na? That’s right! Maine sirf apni khwahishein uss par thop di. Lekin, woh bhi toh kuch chaah raha hoga na? Y-Ye maine kya kiya? Shayad isliye woh mujhe kuch jawab nahi de paaya? Iss trip par- mujhe uss se akele me baat karni hogi!!’
Usne bhi thaan liya tha ki woh Veer ke mukh se bhi seedha jawaab leke rahegi. Aur uske baad hi kisi nirnay par pahuchegi.
Tej aur Veer dono hi agal bagal waali seats par baithe hue the. Jaha Veer ek nap le raha tha toh wahi Tej uske bagal se baith use pal pal nihaar rahi thi.
Louis ke aane ke baad se, Veer ke upar zimmedari aur bhi badh chuki thi. Harr kaam khud karne se nahi banane waala tha, ye baat woh jaanta tha. Aur, isliye usne apno se hi kaam ko baantne ke liye madad maangi. Tej Louis aur Sudha ko sab kuch samjha ke aayi thi.
Jaha Sudha silaayi ke liye aur kaarigar dhoondhne me lag chuki thi toh wahi Louis branding, nayi fashion designs, aur materials ko arrange karne me laga hua tha. Saara kaam filhaal toh Bhumika ke hotel ke ek kamre me ho raha tha.
Kyuki, workshop jaisa abhi tak kuch bhi uplabdh nahi hua tha. Ye baat Veer bhi jaanta tha. Aur, isliye usne Karan ko ek left-over building dhoondhne ka kaam saupa hua tha. Real estate me uski pakad wese hi achhi thi. Uss se behtar ye kaam aur koi nahi kar sakta tha Veer ki nazro me.
Inn sab chintao ko kuch pal ke liye nazar-andaaz karte hue Veer aur baaki sabhi akhir kaar Goa ki zameen par land kar hi gaye.
Airport se baahar aate hi Kavya chehek uthi,
Kavya : Oh my god~ Dii!! It’s so colorful! Right? Itni saari lights!!
Arohi (smiles) : Hmm!
Flight shaam ki thi, toh pahuchte pahuchte ab sooraj bhi dhalne ko aa gaya tha. Kavya ko zara bhi sabr nahi ho raha tha. Aur woh baar baar kuch accha dekhne ke baad, seedhe palat ke Veer ko dekhti. Jaise kuch mann me soch rahi ho. Par, bechaare Veer ki kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha.
Airport par se Veer ne sabhi ke liye cabs book ki, aur sabhi usme baith chal diye.
Kavya : Bhaiya~ Bhaiya~ hum kaha jaa rahe hai abhi?
Veer (smiles) : Yaha se hum jaa rahe hai bogmalo beach.
Kavya : Wow!!! Par seedhe beach? Umm! Hotel nahi jaa rahe pehle? Umm, wese- *blushes*mujhe koi aitraaz nahi hai aapke saath paani me dubki lagaane me abhi hi. B-But- agar hotel me room pehle mil jaata toh accha nahi hota? I-I’m sweaty actually- aur-
Veer : Huh???
Veer ke chehre par poora confusion tha. Jab Kavya ne dekha toh use pata chala ki woh kuch zyada hi apne mann ki baatein bol gayi.
Kavya (blushes) : Ahh~ I-I mean- Umm- Woh hotel-!!
Veer : Of course, hum sabse pehle apne rooms me hi jayenge pagal! Resort wahi beach se laga hua hai. *smiles* Tumhe beach ka full view milega room se.
Kavya (amazed) : Ahhh~!!
Arohi (smiles) : Aur kitna kharcha hua inn sab me?
Kavya : H-Haan! Trip ke liye toh maine sab ko ready kiya tha. But kharcha toh Bhaiya kar rahe hai. Mujhe karna chahiye-
Veer : Bilkul bhi nahi!
Kavya : Kyuuuuu???
Veer : Tum abhi chhoti ho. Jab earn karne lagogi toh sab wasoolunga mein tum se.
Kavya : O-Ohh!!
Pal bhar ke liye Kavya ko laga tha ki Veer firse use yahi bhaasan dega ki bada bhai hi sab kuch karta hai. Uski hi zimmedari hoti hai. Aur, agar Veer yahi sab kehta toh aaj Kavya uss par firse uss raat jaise bhadakne waali thi. Magar, jab usne ye kaha ki woh uske kamaane ke baad uss se wasoolega. Kahi na kahi, apne bhaiya ka woh jawaab sunn ke use accha laga.
Kavya : Ahh~ Dii!! Look! Look! Sunset!! Kitna pyaara hai!
Sooraj doob raha tha. Aisa lag raha tha maano samudra use apne andar samaane ki koshish kar raha tha. Chalti car me se ye drishya dekhne layak tha.
Arohi : Bahut sundar hai.
Tej : Right! Shayad hum sabhi ko sach me kuch dino ke liye ek refreshment ki zaroorat thi.
Kehte hue uski nazre car ke saamne lage mirror par gayi, jaha use Veer ki aankhein nazar aa rahi thi. Veer ne bhi jaise bhaanp liya ki peeche se koi use dekh raha tha. Sheeshe me hi dono ki nazre aapas me mili. Veer muskuraya aur bola,
Veer : Aap sahi ho! Teju dii!
Badle me Tej bhi peeche se muskurayi. Aur, lagbhag 8-10 km ka raasta tay karte hue woh sabhi apne resort par akhir pahuch hi gaye.
Veer ne sabhi ko sabse pehle rooms me settle karwaya. Rooms me samaan rakhne ke baad sabhi baahar ko aaye toh unhe samudra aur doobte hue sooraj ka ek manmohak drishya dekhne ko mila.
Kavya : Wowwww~ Kitna beautiful hai ye!!!
Kavya apne ek black shorts aur white top me nange perr ret par daudati hui haath fela ke aage badhi. Usi ke saath saath Aabha ki aankhon me bhi ek anokhi chamak thi. Peeche peeche woh bhi aayi,
Kavya : Arre? Aapko bhi beach pasand hai?
Aabha : Ahh! M-Mein samudra pehli baar dekh rahi hu.
Kavya : Huh? Arre? Mumbai me Juhu beach nahi gayi kya aap? Apne waha toh kitne beach hai.
Aabha : N-Nahi! Kabhi mauka hi nahi mila.
Uski baat sunn Kavya taajub me thi toh wahi Veer dur se ye sunn apne aap se thoda niraash ho utha. Ye uski zimmedari thi. Magar, usne kabhi bhi Aabha ko inn jagaho par nahi ghumaya tha. Woh khud hi itna vyast rehta tha ki iss orr uska kabhi dhyaan hi nahi gaya. Khud se hataash ho raha tha woh jab tabhi,
[It’s okay!]
‘Hmm?’
[Tumhari koi galti nahi hai. You are already occupied with so many things. Wese bhi, tumne Aabha aur uss Shreya ko travel ke liye sponsor karne ka keh hi diya hai. Ab jitna tum nahi ghume ho, uss se zyada ye dono aage ghoomne waali hai. So, don’t feel bad.]
‘Y-Yeah!’
Kabhi Pari ki ye personality iss tarah se use comfort nahi kari thi. Fir aaj kaise?
Tej aur Arohi bhi samundar ke nazdeek jaake lehro ka lutf utha rahi thi. Veer ne ekdum prefect resort choose kiya tha unn sab ke liye. Yaha zyada log maujood nahi the. Aur, family ke hisaab se unn sab ke liye ye behad hi behatreen jagah thi.
Purvi, Ragini, Shweta aur Suman bhi baari baari aage badh samundar kinaare gayi aur apne apne perr bhigo ke thande paani ka aanand lene lagi.
Veer bhi ek chino short aur white cotton shirt daale hue tha. Jeb me haath daale woh dur se sabhi ko aapas me masti karte dekh raha tha. Sabko iss qadar khush dekh uske hontho par muskaan sajj gayi. Ye sabhi! Yahi sab uska parivar the. Bas yaha kami thi toh ek shaks ki-
Bhavna!!
Uski maa na jaane waha kin kaamo me vyast hogi abhi. Waha ki pal pal ki khabar lene ke liye usne Balhaar dwara do aadmi waha bhijwa diye the, jo na keval waha uski maa ki nigrani dur se kar rahe the balki khatro ke waqt use bachaane ke liye bhi taiyaar baithe the.
Kyuki khatra kabhi bhi bata ke nahi aata tha. Uski mutthi kasi.
Garofano! Li Renshu! Mr. X!
Inme se kaun saccha tha? Kaun jhootha? Kaun apna tha? Kaun paraya? Aur kaise kaise system owners maujood the? Woh kuch bhi nahi jaanta tha. Isliye, uska sabse accha saathi-
Satarkta hi thi! Jitna woh satark rahega, utna hi aage ke khatro ko taal paane me saksham rahega. Abhi woh inn vichaaro me dooba hi hua tha jab bagal se aayi ek awaaz ne use hosh me laa diya,
“Kya soch rahe ho Veer?”
Veer (glances) : Hmm?
Bagal se dekha toh paaya ki hare rang ki saree me uski chachi Sumitra khadi hui thi.
Veer : Chachi?
Sumitra (smiles) : Tumhe nahi jaana? Dekho! Sab masti kar rahe hai.
Veer : Yahi sawaal mein aap se bhi toh kar sakta hu na?
Sumitra : Mein paani se dur hi rehti hu aksar!
Veer : Kyu?
Sumitra : Bachpan me ek baar doobte doobte bachi thi. Tab se paani ka darr baith gaya. Toh hamesha nadi, samudra, talaab inn jagaho se dur hi rehti hu.
Veer : Ohh! Ye baat mujhe nahi pata thi. Aur fir bhi hum sab aapko yaha paani se ghiri jagah par le aaye.
Sumitra : Meri beti ne pehli baar iss tarah zidd ki thi. Iss baar mein uske saamne haar gayi. Aur shayad- mujhe bhi thode araam ki zaroorat thi. Kyu? Kya tumhe mera aana pasand nahi aaya? *smiles*
Veer : Mujhe accha laga ki aap bhi iss trip par shaamil hui. Kayi trips me hum sab aapko miss kiye hai.
Sumitra (surprised) : Ohh!
Veer : Jii!
Sumitra (smiles) : Theek hai! Wese maine apna jawab de diya. Ab tum batao! Tum kyu nahi jaa rahe?
Veer (smiles) : Bas unn sabko kuch derr khush dekh ke mein khush ho raha tha yaha. Kya ye kaaran kaafi hai?
Sumitra nazre jhukaate hue muskurayi, fir ahista se boli,
Sumitra : Kaafi hai! T-Tum- bahut acche ladke ho Veer.
Veer : Kyu? Kya aap mujhe apna ladka nahi maanti?
Sumitra : Huh!!?
Woh akasmat hi nazre upar kar use dekhi. Ekdum chakit aur dang. Veer ne kabhi iss tarah uss se aisa kuch nahi kaha tha. Fir aaj achanak kaise? Nazre jhukaate hue bas halke se usne haami bhari. Woh kuch kehna chaahti thi par sharm ke chalte uska muh na khul paaya. Woh batana chaahti thi ki woh Veer aur Arohi dono ko saath me bachpan me apna doodh pilaaya karti thi. Par, sharm ki wajah se shaant rahi.
Dono hi fir baad me bina kuch kahe baaki sabhi ke sang samudra kinaare mauj masti karne lage. Raat hui, andhere ka aagman hua. Aur, aasmaan me chaand aur sitaaro ki roshni se samudra aur bhi khubsoorat prateet hone laga.
Sabhi andar resort me jaa chuke the, siwae Bhumika ke. Rait par nange perr khadi woh lehro ko dekh kuch derr akele samay vyateet kar rahi thi. Veer jo kisi kaam se resort ke ek worker se baat karne aaya hua tha, uski nazre jab Bhumika par padi toh woh seedha uss orr chal diya.
Veer : Aap yaha?
Veer ki awaaz sunn, Bhumika palti aur use dekhi,
Bhumika : Hmm? Ohh! Veer!?
Veer (steps closer) : Yu akele iss tarah?
Bhumika : Hmm! Kuch kuch soch rahi thi bas.
Veer : Jaise?
Bhumika : Bas business related hi. Aur future ke baare me…!
Veer : Yaha bhi aap business ke baare me sochna nahi chorr rahi!?
Bhumika (smiles) : Mujhe aadat hai Veer! Mein aisi hi hu!
Veer : Kya mein jaan sakta hu ki kya soch rahi thi aap?
Bhumika : Hmm? Ohh! Hum clothes ka business jald hi shuru karne waale hai. Usi ko lekar soch rahi thi. Mein nahi chaahti ki hum kisi bhi liquidity gap me fase.
Veer : Liquidity gap?
Bhumika (nods) : Hmm! Naye business ki shuruat me ye aksar hota hai. Saral shabdo me, jab aap ek jagah se loan le lete ho, aur uss loan ko chukaane ke liye dusri jagah se loan lete ho. Dono ki hi time limit alag alag hoti hai. Fir dusri jagah ke loan ko chukaane ke liye aapke paas uss waqt paise nahi hote hai. Jiske kaaran ek gap aa jaata hai. Wahi liquidity gap hai. Aur mein nahi chaahti naye business me hum kabhi bhi iss situation me fase.
Kehte hue Bhumika shaant ho gayi. Par, jab Veer ki orr se kuch derr tak koi jawab na aaya, toh woh mud ke Veer ko dekhi. Aur, paaya ki Veer taajub me use dekh raha tha.
Bhumika : Veer?
Veer (amazed) : You are great!
Bhumika (blushes) : Huh?
Veer : Shayad isliye aap itna acche se sab kuch manage kar leti ho. Kyuki, aap pehle se hi dur ki soch ke rakhti ho.
Bhumika (blushes) : Y-Ye toh harr businessman karta hai Veer. Isme koi khaas baat nahi!
Veer : Mere liye khaas hai. Aapka mere saath hona.
Bhumika (blushes) : Huh!? I-
Veer aage badha aur usne Bhumika ko apne gale se laga liya. Badle me Bhumika ke haath bhi Veer ki peeth par kass gaye. Dono hi ek dusre se kuch derr lipte rahe. Jab Veer alag hone ke liye peeche hua, toh Bhumika ne apne honth uske gaal par rakh diye.
*kiss*
Veer (smiles) : Chale?
Bhumika (smiles) : Hmm!
Dono waha se laute, Bhumika toh seedhe apne kamre ki orr chali gayi parantu Veer jab apne room me jaane ke liye hua tabhi kisi ne uska haath pakad ke use kone me kheech liya,
Veer : Huh???
Ragini use ek changing room ki orr kheenchi aur usne andar se lock laga diya. Andar kaafi andhera ho rakha tha aur Ragini uske seene se chipki hui thi.
Veer : Bha-
Veer use ‘Bhabhi’ keh ke bulaane hi wala tha jab mann me hi Pari ne use tok diya,
[Don’t call her Bhabhi! Call her name.]
Veer : Ragini!???
Ragini : !!!!????
Aur uska asar Veer saaf saaf Ragini ke chehre par dekh paa raha tha. Woh stabdh thi, par andar hi andaar behad khush bhi. Veer ne use uske naam se bulaya tha.
Veer : Kya hua? Tumne mujhe yaha iss tarah-!?
Pari ki tarqeeb Veer samajh chuka tha. Isliye, usne khud-ba-khud ‘aap’ ki jagah ‘tum’ keh ke use pukaara.
Ragini : M-Mein-
Veer : ???
Ragini : Mujhe tum se kuch baat karni thi.
Veer : Iss tarah?
Ragini : Fir samay nahi milega hume. Itne logo ke beech kaise tum se akele me baat kar paungi?
Veer : Kaho na!
Ragini : Maine uss din- Uss din apni baatein saaf saaf rakh di thi ki mein kya chaahti hu. Lekin-
Veer : Lekin?
Ragini (glances) : Lekin, tumse kabhi nahi pucha maine.
Veer : Kya??
Ragini : Yahi ki tum kya chaahte ho?
Veer : Matlab?
Ragini : Mere baare me-!!! Tum kya chaahte ho? Tumhari kya iccha hai?
Veer : I-
Ragini : Hich-kichane ki zaroorat nahi hai. Tum khul ke keh sakte ho.
Veer apna muh kholta ki uss se pehle hi Pari ne apne nirdesh de diye.
[I'll help you this time. Ab jaisa jaisa mein kehti jau. Wesa wesa hi kehna.]
'Fine!'
Veer khud se hi sab handle karna chahta tha parantu, pichli baar Ragini ke saath kya hua tha ye yaad karne ke baad iss baar usne Pari par ye zimmedari chorr di. Woh uske mann me nirdesh deti jaa rahi thi aur Veer unka paalan karta jaa raha tha.
Usne turant hi Ragini ka haath thaama aur tabhi,
*Ding*
[Mystic Touch has been activated.]
Jaise hi Veer ka haath uske haath se sparsh hua,
"Nnn~" Ek dabi hui siski Ragini ne bhari.
Veer : Mein bhi tumse kab se ye baatein kehna chaahta tha?
Ragini : Huhh!!?
Veer : Pichli baar jo kuch bhi hamare beech baatein hui, woh adhuri baatein thi. Tum yu bhaag ke chali gayi thi. Iss baar nahi!
Uski pakad Ragini ki kalayi par mazboot hui, aur idhar Ragini ki dhadkane tez.
Veer : Ragini!!!
Ragini : H-Haan?
Veer : Maine tumhare saath iss tarah vyavhaar nahi kiya kabhi. Tum shadi shuda ho. Kya ye baat mein nahi jaanta?
Ragini : J-Jaante ho!
Veer : Toh fir tumne aisa kyu kaha tha uss din? Ki tum shadi shuda ho isliye mein tumhe dur rakh raha hu?
Ragini : Kya ye sach nahi? Bhala aur kya kaaran ho sakta hai?
Veer : Agar yahi sach hai, toh tumhe apne nazdeek aane kyu deta?
Ragini : Huhh!?
Veer : Bolo! Jawab do? Kyu tumhe apne itne qareeb aane deta? Pehle hi tumse duri na bana leta?
Ragini : Aur bhi kaaran ho sakte hai.
Veer : Jaise ki?
Ragini : Jaise ki mere shareer ka istemal…!
Usne jab ye kaha tab use samajh aaya ki woh baat baat me kitna zyada bol gayi. Kya Veer iss tarah ka ladka tha jo uske shareer ke liye uske saath sambandh banaye hue tha?
Veer ki nazre apne aap hi jhuk gayi.
Veer : Toh ye baat hai. I see now. Aap aisa sochti hai mere baare me?
Ragini : N-Nahi Veer!
Woh bechain ho uthi.
Ragini : N-Nahi! Aisa kuch nahi hai! Mein zyada keh gayi. Mujhe maaf kar do. Mein bas-
Veer (sighs) : Ragini! Aaj mein tumhe sab kuch clearly bata deta hu.
Ragini : !!??
Veer : Tum mujhe pasand ho. Tumhare shadi-shuda hone se mujhe koi farq nahi padta. Ek baar agar dil me maine jagah dedi, matlab dedi. Lekin, sirf tum hi nahi ho dil me.
Ragini : Wh-What?
Veer : Hmm! Tum jaanti ho ki jaise tum mujhe pasand karti ho, wese hi koi aur bhi mujhe pasand karta hai.
Ragini (panics) : K-Kaun pasand karta hai tumhe?
Veer : Hai koi!
Ragini (frowns) : Aankhein noch lungi uss chudail ki. K-Kaun hai woh??? Batao! Jaldi!
Veer ne ahista se uske dono gaalo ko thaama.
Ragini : Nnn~
Veer ne aage uss se jo kuch kaha, use sunn na sirf Ragini ka dil bhi dukha, lekin kahi na kahi Veer ke prati woh aur bhi zyada aakarshit ho uthi.
***
China, Yunnan Province ~
Yunnan Province ek aisa hissa tha China ka jo desh ke beech me sthit tha. Ye woh hissa tha jaha barfeele pahaad bhi maujood hua karte the aur ghane jangal bhi. Ye woh ilaaka tha jaha natural resources ki koi kami nahi thi.
Isi ilaaqe me ek vishaal ghane jangal se kuch duri par siheyuan sthit the. Siheyuan ek prakaar ke Chinese ghar hote the jo puraane zamaane se chalte aa rahe the.
Ye ek aisi banawat ke ghar hote the jaha beecho beech ek baraamda hota tha, aur uske agal bagal se lag ke ghar banaaye jaate the. Aksar ek bada parivaar hi inn gharo me raha karta tha.
Aise hi ek siheyuan me raatri ke iss waqt kamre me ek aadmi baitha hua tha, jo Chinese wine cup ko haath me thaame wine pee raha tha.
Uske mann me kayi saare sawaal chal rahe the aur kayi chintaaye bhi thi. Kuch shabd abhi bhi uske dimaag me goonj rahe the.
'Legion aur Order kabhi ek nahi ho sakte. Aaj se ya toh Legion rahega, ya fir Order.'
Uski pakad uss wine cup par mazboot ho uthi. Aur, cup me ek daraar pad gayi. Kintu, uss aadmi ne turant hi apni pakad ko dheela chorr diya. Kisi ke nazdeek aane ki aahat use mehsoos hui.
*Krrrrrr*
Halki si awaaz ke saath kamre ka lakdi ka darwaza khula aur ek ladki andar daakhil hui.
Aadmi ne bina uski taraf dekhe hi pucha,
Aadmi : Koi khabar?
Ladki ne naa me sarr hilaya aur boli,
Ladki : Filhaal koi khabar nahi hai. Lekin, hume satark rehna hoga. Warna dikkat aa sakti hai.
Aadmi : Hmm!
Ladki ahista se uske nazdeek aake baithi.
Ladki : Hum darr kyu rahe hai?
Aadmi : Darr nahi rahe hai. Bas satarkta se aage badh rahe hai. Kyuki, humaare paas bhaugolik faayda nahi hai. Unke paas hai.
Ladki : Toh kya hua? Hum agar chaahe toh unhe ek jhatke me majboor kar sakte hai.
Aadmi : Nahi!!! Sirf wahi nahi hai!
Ladki : Toh????
Aadmi : Kuch nahi!
Ladki : Aapka matlab hai-!?
Aadmi : Hmm! Shayad koi aur bhi hai. Aur isliye mein hich-kicha raha hu. Jab tak poori jankaari haath na ho, tab tak prahaar nahi karna chahiye.
Ladki : Tsk!!! Akhir kaun hai jo unki madad kar raha hai?
Aadmi : Pata nahi! Lekin, jab tak hume jankaari haath nahi lagti, hum abhi kuch nahi karenge.
Ladki : Par fir waha se dabaav badhega hamaare upar. Tab kya?
Aadmi : Toh hume bas peeche hatne ki dhamki dena hai unhe. Agar woh ye kaam khud hi kar lete toh bhala ab tak kar kyu nahi paaye?
Ladki (nods) : Hmm!
Aadmi : Wese bhi, unse ye nahi hone wala hai.
Ladki : Hmm! Wese-! Ek baat aur bataani hai mujhe.
Aadmi : Hmm?
Ladki : Envelope kisi ne samay ke pehle khol liya hai.
Aadmi : Kis ne?
Ladki : Envelope number 3! Aapne kisko diya tha?
Aadmi : Ohhh! Hmm! Samajh gaya.
Ladki : Kaun hai woh?
Aadmi : Hai ek naujavan!! Mujhe uska hi intezar hai. Kyuki, tabhi mein safal ho paunga.
Ladki : Naujavan?
Aadmi : Hmm! Kuch dino me hi sab yaha honge. Meri aasha toh yahi hai. Aise me agar woh bhi aata hai toh-
Ladki : Toh?
Aadmi : Toh mera kaam sabse asaan ho jayega.
Ladki : Kya itna taaqatvar hai woh?
Aadmi : Hmm!
Aadmi ne jab haami bhari, toh ladki ki jigyaasa aur bhi adhik badh gayi. Kaun naujavan tha jo taqatvar tha itna ki uske saamne baithe aadmi ne bhi haami bhar di? Woh jaanti thi ki uske bagal se baitha ye aadmi behad shaktishali tha. Itna ki uss se shaktishali usne aaj tak kisi ko nahi dekha tha. Fir ye naujavan kaun tha? Jisko lekar uske bagal se baithe aadmi ne bhi uski taaqat par manzoori dedi?
Ab uski jigyaasa itni badh chuki thi ki use niyantrit karna bhi behad mushqil ho raha tha.
Ladki : Mujhe bataiye na! Kaun hai woh?
Aadmi muskuraya. Woh jaanta tha ki jab bhi jigyaasa ki baat aati thi, ye ladki iss maamle me behad kacchi hua karti thi. Sabr naam ki cheez usme thi hi nahi.
Aadmi : Abhi nahi! Jab woh aayega, toh khud dekh lena.
Ladki : P-Par kyu???
Aadmi : Maine kaha na!!!
Ladki : J-Jii!!
Aadmi turant hi utha magar jaate jaate kehta gaya,
Aadmi : Abhi sirf jankaari haasil karne par dhyaan do. Uske aage kuch nahi. Samajh gayi na?
Ladki (nods) : J-Jii!
Aadmi : Hmm!
Aur woh kamre se baahar nikal gaya. Kamre me woh ladki akeli yuhi baithi rahi aur bas sochti reh gayi ki aakhir woh naujavaan kaun ho sakta tha bhala?
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Update consists of 5.6k words. Ye waala thoda chhota hai compared to recent updates. Lekin, ab soch raha hu ki itne ke hi aas paas length rakhi jaaye. Abhi vacation part khatam nahi hua hai. Vacation ka ek aur hissa aana baaki hai jisme sab cover up ho jayega. Mein ise ek me hi karna chaahta tha par woh 10k ke upar jaa raha tha. Bahut zyada ho jaata. So, abhi itna hi. Baaki, likes aur revos rakhne ka. Target apna wahi hai. 150.
Dhanyavaad.
Fantastic update bro
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No no!
Veer ko pehchan'na simple hi tha. 'No information available.' Zahir hai woh Renshu ko jaanti hai. Toh aise me India me Veer ko pehchan'na is no big deal. Face ki zaroorat hi nahi agar 'No information available' dikh jaaye. Woh ye baat pehle se jaanti thi ki Veer ek system holder hai.
She's a seductive one.
Yup! Woh Veer ko romantic way me nahi dekhti. She sees him as her brother. Jo ki acchi baat hai.
Pari will tell the complete answer. Wese mein ye kayi baar bata chuka hu.
Abhi tak toh nahi.
Of course.
Ya fir check kar lena chahiye.
Maybe! Or maybe not.
Total 17 bache the Crimson ke baad.
Ab unme se kaun hai we will come to know later.
Ab wo mature hoyegi.
Sarabhai ka kya haal hua uske baad do you know?
She has realised that Veer is not just an ordinary person.
Bas ek saath kayi cheezein ghatit ho rahi hai. Various things. Mere liye ye hardest part hai abhi.
To deal with so many characters at one place one after another scene and to manage them along with the upcoming main plot. Thanks a lot Bhai. And keep supporting as usual.
