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Shukriya bhai.This was like movie scene
Like we watch movie n enjoy,
But the plot you create in every update it takes the excitement to another level.
N then u make us wait.
Shukriya bhai. Natalia toh kood gayi thi.Ek hi update mein itne twists & turns, possible only for you, dear bro. Aur ek system owner Veer se judnewaali hai. Isse Natalia ka yaad taaza hogaya. Aakhir kya hi hua Natalia Ko, woh Zinda bhi hai ya nahi?
Suhana time to time aati jayegi. Aadesh se toh ab through business hi deal karna padega. Thanks and keep supporting.Garofono ka asliyat aur uska maqsad aakhir kya hai, yeh Raaz dheere dheere hi khulega Aisa lagta hai. Kaera ka haal par sympathy karen ya gussa Karen, kuch samajh nahi aa Raha. In Sab ke beech, Suhana ko bhi mat bhoolna chahiye jisne Veer ke liye bahut kuch Kiya uski musibat ke waqt par. Aadesh Ko uski aukaat ka pata lagna chahiye aur Veer se ijjat se pesh aana
Kavya mature hogi ab. Thoda sambhal ke sharaarte karegi. Sharaarte ab bhi jaari rahengi par ab woh pehle sochegi kuch bhi karne se pehle.Chahiye. Bechari Kavya, uspar taras aa Raha, Usne kuch samajh Kar aayi thi aur kya se kya Ho Gaya. Dekhte hain Veer jaise kaha, waise apna khud ka Samrajya stapit kaise karta hai, aanewaale updates dwaara![]()
ThanksSuperb! This update is literally a rollercoaster... kab kya ho jAe pta nhi
Garofano uska asli naam nahi hai.Toh aakhir kar uss mahan sakshiyat ka pata chal hi gaya. Ms. Garofano. (Aur koi naam nahi suja ju ko)
Kuch bhi ho sakta hai.Ab dekhna yeh hai ke yeh Garofano Veer ki dost banti hai ya dushman kyoki pehli mulakat mein toh achhe se pata chala nhi. Bhale hi usne apne skills Veer ke saamne openly show kiye hai. Hosakta hai yeh iski koi chaal ho.
Dekhenge aage.Isne aate hi Veer ko uss Mr. X ko leke satark rehne ka ishara bhi kiya hai. Aakhir yeh kaun yeh Mr. X
Dekhte hai directly approach maarti hai ya abhi bhi roundabout way try karti haiIdher Kaera ko jalan horahi hai Garofano ke Veer ke kareeb aane se. Julia ka kehna bhi sahi hai agar woh usse koi ishara nhi degi toh Veer ko kaise samaj aayega. Hosakta hai Kaera ab Veer ke najdeek jaane ki koshish kare usse isshara dene ki koshish kare.
Ab Chinatown me hoga sab. Business arc finish hai almost. Thanks man. Keep supporting.Dekhte hai ab yeh Aadesh kyaa karta hai aur Garofano bhi kya kya karti hai
Ju ki icchha to poori ho gayi.Waise is hotel wale ki and uske us sadakchhap don ki hekdi sab ke saamne nikalni chahiye.. Balhar ke dwara....taaki alag hi impression pade baaki sab par. Ver k jaane se pahle agar Balhaar uski shaan mein jhuk kar salam kare ya boss boss kare to mazaa aa jayega
Already kuch kuch pata lag gaya haiSuhana ko bi veer ke sath kya kya hua sab pta chlna chahiye.. Fir suhana apne tarike se us adesh or us ladki ko acha sabak sikhaye to mja aa jaye
Apne hi pati se thodi ladegi bhaiBhai comment like kiya thanks but ye to btao suhana bdla legi veer ka ys ya no
Haan woh hoti toh itna kuch nahi hota.Hamesha ki tarah update bohot achha tha...Suahana hoti to Adesh itna udh nahi pata, lekin humain poori umeed he apnay Veer Saahib se ke woh Adesh ko apna desh chhodnay per majboor kar dega.
Ava toh gayi Bhai. Pahadi se kood gayi.Sonia , kaira , Ava to pehle se hi hai 3 friends and sautan
Ava ko bhi Lao veer ki help Mai abb badal gayeee thee woh
abbb grafano bhi baharwali main heroine aayegi k nahi
Pasand aa gayi kya?वो खूबसूरत लेडी थी गारोफानो कॉस्मेटिक की मालकिन ~ Garofano![]()
Bilkul!ज्यादातर लोग उसे जानते थे.. कुछ लोग उसे नही जानते जिनमे से एक वीर भी था..
वीर को उसने इतना बड़ा ऑफर दिया जिसे वीर ने ठुकरा भी दिया.. वीर से मिलने वो क्यों आई इसकी ज्यादा जानकारी तो ना मिल सकी.. वक्त के साथ ही सब कुछ जानने को मिलेगा...
Logo ke liye devta bann ke aayiगारोफानो ने वीर के साथ किए गए बर्ताव की क्षमा याचना भी करवा दी एसेस्टेंस से, साथ ही यूनिकार्ड को पब्लिक के लिए अवेलेबल भी करवा दिया..!!
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Absolutely.जाने से पहले कुछ दो चार वार्तालाप भी हुए, जो आने वाले वक्त में और देखने को मिलेंगे...
Halke me kabhi nahi lene ka Veer ko. Aur ab toh uske paas system hai toh... Bilkul bhi nahi.अंत में आदेश का लास्ट दाव भी उस पर उल्टा पड़ गया, सारा भाई की भी हवा निकल गई बल्हार को देख कर... अभी आदेश को समझ आया होगा वीर क्या चीज है...
Nawa waala jald hi aayega. Bas zyada nahi bache hai ab. Mushqil se 3-4 hi honge I guess. Uske seedhe baad Chinatown me jump kar denge apan. Dhanyavaad !!! Keep supporting.लुइस ~ फ्रांस का एक आदमी...!!!
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वेटिंग फॉर नेक्स्ट अपडेट
Bhai! Abhi romaanch aana baaki hai. Chinatown arc me story ki second sabse best fighting hai. First toh finale arc arc me hai. Toh andaaza laga lo ab.werewolf भाई
3500 पन्नों मे सिमटी ये स्टोरी सच मे लाजवाब है और जैसे जैसे ये अपने मंज़िल के करीब पहुंच रहि है वैसे वैसे इसके रोमांच मे मे भी इजाफा हो रहा है
Kahani me aise aise kuch lamhe aate rahenge. Prepare rehne ka.Yrr sooo saddd,,,, why am I so sensitive, why I feel the pain for so long whenever I listen or anywhere such kind of phenomena either in newspaper or anywhere else
Veer crimson aur Ava hi ek jagah par the toh Crimson arc kis level par gaya tha. Ab socho jab firse 3 ya 3 se adhik system waale ek saath ek jagah par maujood honge toh kya hoga?Bhai ye China Town arc to abhi se lg rha h ki msst hoga
Baki I think wha pe aur bhi system holders aye ge hi
Bakki msst update mzza Aya
Tumko kya lagta hai?Suman ke actions se ye kyu lg rha h ki vo shewta ko veer ke niche Lana cha ri h?
Nahi! Nidhi ka major role disembowler's arc me hai. Woh waha pe shine karegi. Juhi bhi shine karegi usme. Wo arc unn dono ko involve karega.Mtlb is sb ki kya jrurat
Aur apne kha tha is arc ke start me
Ki is arc me nidhi shine kre gi?
Lekin ab vo gyab si ho gyi h?
Esa kyu?
Kya koi plot change Hua h ya kya h?
Jald hi naya update aa jayega. Shukriya. Keep supporting.Awesome update dear…you left us with so many unsolved questions and suspense…by the way again mind blowing update and request for early updates…![]()
Aage rakhunga na.Target 180+ rakh sakte ho....may be ye aage 200+ v ho jaye...
Koi Raaz nahi tha bhai.बहुत ही बेहतरीन अपडेट Werewolf भाई।।
लेकिन एक बात समझ में नहीं आ रही हैं कि सुमन श्वेता से क्या करवाना चाहती हैं और वो वीर के किस राज के बारे में बोल रही थी।
Nahi! Itni asaani se kaise ho jayega bhala.और उधर वीर हर नए काम के लिए तेज के ही भरोसे है और क्या तेज हर कुछ इतने आसानी से संभाल पायेगी।।
Bata ke jayega Bhai. Lanka nahi lag jayegi warna uski. Ab uske ghar me itne members hai. Use bata ke hi jaana padega.अब जब नीर को पता चल ही गया है कि उसे चीन जाना है तो क्या इस बार वो सबको बता कर जायेगा या फिर हर बार की तरह बिना बोले निकल लेगा।।
Vacation ka last update bacha hai. Saara masaala usi me hai. Aur mushqil se 3-4 updates hi baaki hai business arc ke. Fir Chinatown aa jayega. Shukriya and keep supporting.jaise update start hua i thought wtf is going on but that was dream.
I think chinatown arc me entry se pehle avi 5-6 update aur lag skte h business arc me. Kaira ke saath interaction ka wait h bhai. Iss vacation me kuch hot interactions ho skte hai may be.
Awesome update by the way. Keep going
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Chinatown me bas 3-4 update hi baaki hai.Chinatown arc main or kitna update baki hai Bhai
Tej apni felling bta kyun nhi deti hai saf saf
Ragini veer ke kam ayegi veer ko usse answer kr Dena cahiye
Arohi bhi isi chakkar main wait kar rahi hai
Purvi masi ka bhi yahi problem hai
Aur inn sab me accha khaasa samay lagne waala hai.Rasiledaar aur kuch rahasyamayi update tha Bhai. Veer apna clothing business Louis se milkar chaalu karne wala hai, accha hua. Aur bahut jald IT duniya mein bhi khadam rakhnewala hai, yeh bhi khushkabr huyi
. Aur perfumes aur cosmetics ke duniya mein kab Pravesh karnewala hai yeh jaanne ke liye utsuk hain hum
Suhana scene se abhi gayab rahegi. Beech beech me hi jhalak dikhegi uski. Nidhi ke sang disembowler's arc me active hoyegi fir woh. Baaki, Kaera abhi Chinatown ke just baad active ho jayegi. Sonia bhi.Shweta ke maamle mein aage kya kya mod aayenge, yeh toh aanewaale waqt hi Tay karega, niyati par kiska bas chalta. Ab Chinatown arc sameep hai toh, Veer Ko jald hi business Samrat banne ka koshishon mein bahut hi intense
rahna padega taaki kaamyaabi Paa sake. What about Kaera & Suhana?
Sabr rakho Bhai. Sab hoga. Jo planned hai mere dimaag me woh hoke hi rahega. Bas samay dena hoga.France se aane ke Baad ek Baar bhi nahi Mila Suhana se, bechari kitna tadpi thi Veer ke liye - Veer aur Suhana ki milan toh Banti hi hai Bhai, thoda toh Reham karo unpe aur Kaera toh bilkul emotionless thi, usko emotions se sahi tarah Parichay karwao aur Veer ke Prati uski jo feelings hai, unhein mehsoos hone do aur Veer se milaap karwao, yeh hamari guzaarish hai aapse.
Agle update me pata lag jayega. Shukriya and keep supporting.Aur dekhte hain Veer ki vacation kaisi rahegi aur kya rang laayegi uski personal life mein![]()
Bhai itni kamjor nahi hai woh jo kudd k marr Jaye as per his character bhaiji Jitsu ne jaise veer ko bachaya vaise hi Natalie hai jo system waShukriya bhai.
Shukriya bhai. Natalia toh kood gayi thi.
Suhana time to time aati jayegi. Aadesh se toh ab through business hi deal karna padega. Thanks and keep supporting.
Kavya mature hogi ab. Thoda sambhal ke sharaarte karegi. Sharaarte ab bhi jaari rahengi par ab woh pehle sochegi kuch bhi karne se pehle.
Thanks
Garofano uska asli naam nahi hai.
Garofano flower ka name hai ek.
Kuch bhi ho sakta hai.
Dekhenge aage.
Dekhte hai directly approach maarti hai ya abhi bhi roundabout way try karti hai
Ab Chinatown me hoga sab. Business arc finish hai almost. Thanks man. Keep supporting.
Ju ki icchha to poori ho gayi.
Already kuch kuch pata lag gaya hai
Apne hi pati se thodi ladegi bhai
Haan woh hoti toh itna kuch nahi hota.
Ava toh gayi Bhai. Pahadi se kood gayi.![]()