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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery
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Yess! Sab chup ho jayenge ab saala saamne wale ko nhi samajhte. Bandhwa majdoor thode hee na hai jo sirf kahani likhta rahega
Bhai uski zindagi h spare time ka kaam h ye sab nhi mila toh nhi diya update...
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Mega Update
Post Diwali Special
Update - 166 ~ Using the pawns
Ab tak...Post Diwali Special
Update - 166 ~ Using the pawns
Unhone table par pade ek mobile ko dekha. Use haath me liya aur recent ki contact list me se pehle naam waale vyakti ko phone laga diya. Ye phone usi mrat vyakti ka tha.
Ye bhi naukri ka ek hissa tha. Ye ek zimmedari thi. Mrat vyakti ke ghar parivar ko dukhad samachar ki soochna dena. Jab waha se turant hi call ko uthaya gaya toh Senior officer ne bas yahi kaha-
"Mein Pune ke thaane se Senior Inspector bol raha hu beta. Mujhe batate hue bada hi khed ho raha hai lekin aapke pita ji Prabhakar ji ki kuch derr pehle hatyaa kar di gayi hai."
"Beta Madhuri! Jaha par bhi aap ho, apni maata Shri ko leke jald se jald Pune aaiye."
Ab aage...
*Thud*
Car ki dickey band hui aur Veer ne apna trolley bag usme se nikaalte hue cab waale ko paise diye. Cab wala bhi khush hoke waha se chal diya.
Veer ne dekha ki do qadam ki duri par Kavya abhi bhi khadi hui use muskura ke dekh rahi thi. Baaki, sabhi log andar jaa chuke the par Kavya wahi ruk ke uska intezar kar rahi thi.
Veer : Kya hua? Andar nahi jaana?
Uske sawaal par woh muski maarte hue aage aayi aur ekdum jhatse uske dono gaalo ko thaam-
*Chu*
Apne honth uske hontho par jama di. Veer hadbada ke peeche hua. Uski aankhein hairat me feli aur usne turant hi Kavya ko apne se alag kar diya. Use paltaya aur-
*Chataak*
Kavya : Ahhh-!
Pichhwade par ek chamaat lagayi. Kavya ka bum poora hil ke reh gaya.
Kavya : Abhi tak mann nahi bhara aapka? Haan?
Veer : Tumhara bhi mann nahi bhara abhi tak? Koi dekh leta toh?
Kavya : Hehehe~ Nahi! Mera toh nahi bhara. Aur dekh leta toh dekh leta.
Veer : Dekh leta toh kya jawaab deti tum?
Kavya : Keh deti ki mein bhaiya ko gaal par kiss karne jaa rahi thi par bhaiya palat gaye toh honth par ho gayi.
Veer : Gaal toh tumne dhak rakhe the na paagal.
Kavya : Ohh!? Arre haan! Hmm! Fir kya bolti?
Veer : You-!!!!
Veer iss se pehle ki dobaara uske chuttad par apne haath saaf karta Kavya khil-khilaate hue waha se bhaag andar ghar me ghus gayi.
Woh sabhi Goa se laut ke aa chuke the. Aur inn beete dino unn sabhi ne khoob manoranjan kiya tha. Isi dauran Kavya ke sang uska rishta itna aage badh paaya tha.
Woh andar jaati phudakti hui Kavya ko dekh muskuraya. Aur, use parso ke uske sang guzaare woh pal yaad aa gaye.
Baat tabhi ki hai jab Shweta Veer ke kamre se bhaag ke nikli thi. Aur Suman Veer ke lund ko choos ke uske mani ko saaf kar chali gayi thi. Parantu, abhi abhi ki iss ghatna ke baad woh uske kamre ka darwaza lagaana bhool gayi thi.
Aur isi galti ka faayda mila tha ~ Kavya ko! Jo apne kamre se dheere se nikal, Arohi ko chakma dete hue Veer ke kamre ki orr aayi. Ye uski kismat thi jo kamre ka darwaza use khula mil gaya tha.
'Arre baap re! Bhaiya ne door lock nahi kiya kya sote waqt?'
'Ye bhaiya bhi na! Safety ka dhyaan hi nahi rakhte hai. Fir dusro ko sunayenge. Ghar me thodi so rahe hai hum. Hotel hai yeh. Hmph~'
Woh kamre ke andar daakhil hui aur usne andar se hi darwaze ko band kar diya. Halki roshni me Veer ke chehre ko dekh Kavya ka dil zorro se dhadak raha tha. Kritika ki kuch din pehle kahi baatein uske mann me goonji.
"Yaar Kavya tu bhi bacchi ki bacchi hi rahegi. Lip se lip ko touch karna koi kiss nahi hoti samjhi na? Ye toh bacche bhi kar lete hai."
"Ahh! T-Toh?"
"Lips ko choosna padta hai. Unhe suck karna padta hai."
"Suck? K-Kaise?"
"Arre kaise kya? Jaise ek baby milk suck karta hai na apni mamma ke breasts se. Wese hi kiss me lips ko suck karna padta hai."
"Ahhn~!"
"Sharma gayi itne me hi!? Isliye kaha maine. Tum bacchi ki bachhi ho!"
"M-Mein bacchi nahi hu. M-Maine lip se lip ko touch kar ke kiss ki hai!!!"
"What? Dekho Kavya! Mein tumhare harr jhooth bardasht kar sakti hu. Lekin, iss matter pe agar tumne feka, toh mein tumhari help kabhi nahi karungi."
"Noooo! Why don't you believe me? M-Maine ki hai!!! Maine kiss ki hai!"
"Oh really? Aur kise kiss kiya?"
"I-I- I kissed-!"
"Haan haan!? Kise? Sunn rahi hu mein!"
"I- I can't tell! *blushes*"
"See! Maine kaha tha! Jhooth bolna band karo and listen to your guru if you want to succeed. Hmph! Kyuki, guru log apne shishyo ke jhooth ko bardaasht nahi karte."
"Y-You-!!! *sigh* Okay! Kritika Guru ji! Please! Tell me more about kissing."
"Hmm! Hmm! *nods* Ab jab mera shishya mere saamne gid-gidaaye toh mein chup kaise reh sakti hu? I will tell you about the art of kissing."
"Y-Yes please!"
"Dekho, sabse pehle na. Jise kiss karna hai na wo koi aisa hona chahiye jise tum pyaar karti ho. Kyuki, randoms ke saath woh feeling nahi aati."
"What do you mean Kritika? Tumhe mein kya aisi wesi ladki lagti hu jo kisi ke saath bhi kiss kar lungi? ( ≧Д≦)"
"Ahem! Mein sirf points bata rahi ho."
"Yeah I know! Aage kaho!"
"R-Right! Uske baad tumhe uske nazdeek jaana hai. Aankhein band karni hai, aur fir hontho ko hontho se touch karna hai."
"Ahan! Fir?"
"Fir, tumhe apna muh kholna hai aur lips ko suck karna hai. Slowly slowly."
"O-Ohh!! Tumne kiya hai ye pehle?"
"O-Of course! Tumko kya lagta hai? Mein aise hi thodi tips deti hu ladkiyo ko."
Ye bolte waqt Kritika ke gaal sharm se laal the. Of course, usne pehle kabhi kisi ke saath aisa kuch bhi nahi kiya tha. Usne aaj tak ek kiss tak nahi ki thi, jo bhi gyaan wo baatati thi woh aksar social media se uthaya hua gyaan hota tha.
Par, woh apni experienced ladki ki image bhala kaise kharab kar sakti thi sabhi ko ye sach bata ke? Isliye, madam ka naatak chaalu tha.
"Uske baad?"
"Uske baad ye dekho ki kya tumhara partner further jaane ke liye ready hai?"
"M-Matlab?"
"Matlab ye ki fir muh kholne ke baad apni tongue ko uske muh ke andar leke jao."
"Ahhn! *blushes* T-Toungue to tongue kiss?"
"Haan toh? Usi me toh maza hai. Jab toungue se tongue takraati hai na toh alag hi spark uthata hai body me."
"A-Aisa kya? Tumne ye bhi kiya hai?"
"O-Of course! *blushes*"
Kavya jab use thoda ajeeb dhang se dekhi toh Kritika hadbada gayi. Woh experienced khud ko dikhana chaahti thi lekin itna bhi nahi ki uski saheliyaan use sasti aurat samajhne lage.
"I-I mean maine ki hai. B-But sirf ek baar."
Jab usne ye bola toh Kavya ko iss baar uss par poora yakeen ho gaya. Woh muskuraane bhi lagi.
"Hmm! F-Fir kya karna hota hai?"
"Fir tongues ko suck karte hai."
"T-Tongues ko bhi?"
"Yesss!!"
"Par agar partner ne apni tongue saaf na ki ho toh?"
"Doh!!!"
Kavya ka sawaal sunn bechaari Kritika ne apne sarr par haath de maara.
"Kya yaar Kavya tu bhi na. Poore mood ki band baja ke rakh di."
"B-But I'm serious. (╯︵╰,)"
"Ughh~ Kavya!"
Kavya ko tabhi Veer ki chhavi apne dimaag me aayi. Veer kitna handsome tha, ye sochne ke baad use inn sab par dhyaan dene ki zaroorat hi nahi thi.
"Ohh! Right! Mera partner bahut smart hai so, I don’t have to worry about that. Hehe~"
"Tum fir jhooth boli mujhse? Kaha ka partner? Tum literally mere saath hi rehti ho college me poore time. Partner kaha se aa gaya tumhara?"
"Toh? Zaroori thodi hai ki college se hi mera partner ho."
"Oh shut up! I know tumhare pados me kaun kaun rehta hai. Unme se koi bhi ek dhang ka smart ladka nahi hai. Bewakoof kise bana rahi ho tum?"
Kritika ye maanane ko taiyaar hi nahi thi ki Kavya ne uske pehle kisi ko kiss kar liya tha aur toh aur ek partner bhi bana liya tha. Kavya ko woh ek bacchi ki tarah hi samajhti thi toh aise me Kavya uske aage kaise nikal sakti thi?
"Ugh!! Tumhe nahi maanana toh mat maano!"
Inhi kuch beeti baaton se Kavya apne ateet se baahar aayi. Saamne Veer gehri neend me bistar par so raha tha. Woh nervous hote hue aage badhi, uske bed ke paas aake uske bagal se baithi aur uske chehre ko nihaarne lagi.
Usne bade hi haule se Veer ke gaal par haath rakh use sehlaya. Pari abhi bhi jaagi hui thi aur woh sab kuch dekh rahi thi. Lekin, Veer sota rahe iss baat ki bhi pushti kar ke rakhi hui thi.
‘Bhaiya kitne handsome hai!!!’
‘Bhaiya! Aapki koi girlfriend nahi hai na? Hmm! Maine toh kabhi aapko kisi ladki ke saath gulu gulu karte nahi dekha.’
Woh apni tezz dhadkane liye uske chehre ki taraf jhuki aur-
“I love you bhaiya~”
Kritika ki baat ka dhyaan rakhte hue, apni aankhein band kar usne apne honth Veer ke hontho se bhida diye.
*kiss*
Ek current Kavya ke poore badan me fel gaya.
“Nnn~”
Uss din college me apne classroom me bhi usne Veer ko chooma tha. Tab bhi woh neend me tha aur aaj bhi.
‘Kaash aap hosh me mujhe ye sab karne dete.’
“Mmm~”
Kritika ki shiksha ko dimaag me rakhte hue usne apne honth khole aur Veer ke hontho ko apne muh ki giraft me lete hue unhe ahista ahista choosna shuru kiya. Jaise hi usne ye kiya-
“Mmmmmm~~”
Uska josh aur badh gaya. Veer ke chehre ko kass ke pakad wo zorr se uske honthon ko choosne lagi. Use nahi pata tha ki kiss karne me itna maza bhi aata tha. Ye normal kiss se kahi zyaada uttejit kar dene waala tha. Uska rukne ka mann hi nahi ho raha tha. Lag raha tha ki bas Veer ke hontho ko choosti jaaye.
Uske baad usne apna agla daav rakha. Veer ke muh ko apne hontho se khol, usne apni jeebh andar daali. Jaise hi dono ki jeebh aapas me takraayi, Kavya ka badan firse thitur ke reh gaya.
"Nnnn~"
Jab woh hontho ko acche se choos li uske baad uski nazre Veer ke pant ki orr gayi. Aur ek baar fir use Kritika ke kaam-vaasna ke paath se adhyaay 3 ki kuch mehatvpoorn baatein yaad aa gayi.
"Dekh Kavya! Ab mein tujhe sex ka ek mast gyaan deti hu. Theek hai? Aur, agar ye tumne sex ke time acche se kiya toh tumhara partner ekdum khush ho jayega. Hehe!"
"Ohh?"
"Aur woh cheez hai ~ Blowjob!!!!"
"Ahhn! *blushes* B-Blowjob? I-I know!"
"Huh? Tumhe pata hai? Ye toh aur bhi acchi baat hai."
"B-But-"
"But wut kuch nahi. Dekho! Ladko ko blowjob bahut pasand hai. Sabse pehle gently apne partner ke pant ko utaaro. Use tease karo."
"B-But agar partner so raha ho toh?"
"Hein??? Ye kya bakwas kar rahi ho?"
"Ahh! N-No! Nothing! Carry on!"
"Haan toh mein keh rahi thi ki pehle gently uska pant utaaro, dheere se underwear utaaro and then pehle apne partner ke private part ko bas dekho."
"Bas dekho?"
"Haan haan! Ye bahut important step hai. Tumhe pata hona chahiye ki tumhare partner ka private part kaisa dikhta hai. Uski image ko acche se apne dimaag me baitha lo."
"But dekhne ki kya zaroorat hai? I-I mean agar light band rahi toh?"
"Huh?? Wtf?"
"Umm! K-Kuch nahi! Tum nahi samjhogi."
"Ugh! Whatever! Haan toh iske baad halke haatho se use touch karo. Use hold karo and then apni aankhein band kar lo."
"Aankhein kyu band karni hai?"
"Arre pagal feel lene ke liye. Tumhe bina dekhe bhi sirf touch se pata lagna chahiye ki ye tumhare partner ka private part hai. Toh use harr jagah touch kar ke use poora yaad kar lo."
"O-Ohhh!"
"Haan haan! And then, ahem *blushes* u-use... use kiss karo."
"Ehhh?"
"I mean tumhe kiss karna hai waha pe."
"Y-You mean?"
"Haan! Jaha se ladke log susu karte hai na. Uss jagah ko tumhe kiss karna hai."
"Chhheeeeee!!!!"
"Chheee kya!! Yahi hota hai sex me. *blushes* J-Jitna tum dirty rahogi na partner tumhe utna pasand karega."
"Ahh! A-Aisa hai kya?"
"Y-Yes!!! Uss jagah ko pyaar se kiss karo. Apni tongue use karo and usko tatol ke khoob kiss karo."
"Ahh! Kritika! *blushes* Aage bhi badho."
"Ahem! Y-Yeah! I'm sorry! Uske baad tumhe wo apne muh me bharna hai."
"Ok!!"
"Jaise lollipop bharte hai na, wese hi. And use suck karna hai. Apna haath chalana mat bhoolna. Aage peeche aage peeche, you know."
"Aage peeche?"
"Haan haan! This is a very important step. Remember Kavya! Aage peeche! Now, repeat after me."
"Huh?"
"Aage peeche!"
"A-Aage *blushes* peeche!"
"Very good! *smiles* Ab jab tum kabhi bhi apne partner ko blowjob dena toh hamesha ye code yaad rakhna. It's a life saver. Aage peeche!!!"
"O-Okay!!"
Kavya unn lamho ko yaad kar firse apne vartmaan me aayi. Usne nischay kiya aur Veer ke pant ko dono haatho se kheech ke neeche kar diya. Pant ke saath saath hi underwear bhi neeche aa gaya aur Veer ka musal lund Kavya ki bholi aankhon ke saamne ujagar ho gaya.
"Haah!!!"
Woh thoda ghabrate hue lund ko dekh rahi thi. Pehli baar usne aisa kuch apni aankhon ke saamne itne nazdeek se dekha tha.
'B-Baap re!! It's so big!!! Porn videos me yahi hai jo females ke andar jaata hai. Akhir... Y-Ye andar chala kaise jaata hai? Dard nahi hota?'
Kritika ke nirdesh anusar Kavya aage badhi aur apne komal haath se Veer ke lund ko darrte hue pakdi. Veer ka lund sakht tha. Abhi abhi Suman use choos ke saaf kar ke jo gayi thi.
Woh jhukte hue apni naak ko lund ke paas le gayi aur-
*sniff*
'It smells weird!'
Ab agle step ke mutaabik use peshaab waali jagah ko choomna tha. Bechari ko thodi ghin toh aa rahi thi par ye sab wo uske saath kar rahi thi jise wo sabse zyada chaahti thi.
Himmat karte hue usne lund ke chhed ki orr apne honth badhaye aur-
*Chu~*
'Hmm? Koi swaad toh nahi samajh aaya.'
Ek baar fir aage aayi aur-
*kiss*
'Umm! Still nothing. Shayad-! Suck karne par pata chale?'
Kavya ne Veer ke lund ke supaade ko muh me bhara. Ye uska inn sab ka pehla tajurba tha. Use swaad kuch samajh me nahi aaya. Jab usne chuski li, tab jaake use kuch ajeeb sa swaad laga.
Uski bauhe kasi, mann toh kar raha tha muh se nikal de lekin woh jaanti thi ki agar woh peeche hati toh fir ye kabhi nahi kar payegi.
Woh dati rahi. Ek baar fir zorr se muh se hawa kheechte hue usne supaade ko choosa aur ab use swaad sach me samajh aaya. Bas, kuch derr pehle hi Suman Veer ke lund se uska mani nikaal ke gayi thi.
Bhale hi usne apni laar, thook aur jeebh se chaat chaat ke use saaf kar diya tha parantu, veerya ki woh prabal gandh toh abhi bhi baaki hi thi.
Kahi na kahi Kavya ko veerya ka swaad mil chuka tha.
'Y-Ye itna ajeeb sa taste kyu kar raha hai? Kya aisa hi taste hota hai?'
Woh confusion me supaade ko choosti rahi aur fir use kuch yaad aaya. Apne haath ko le jaa kar woh Veer ke lund par le gayi. Code word use yaad tha.
'Aage peeche! Aage peeche!'
Khud se haami bharte hue usne prakriya shuru kar di. Apne bhaiya ke saath ye karne ka uska na jaane kab se mann tha. Pyaar toh usko Veer se kaafi pehle hi ho gaya tha.
Khaas kar tab jab use aur Arohi ko uss diwali wali raat me woh bachaane aaya tha. Aur, ye pyaar aur bhi gehra tab hua jab Veer Casa Belle me uske liye aage aa ke sabse bhidne ko taiyaar ho gaya tha.
Wahi pal tha, jab Kavya poori tarah se Veer ke prem me doob chuki thi. Ye sirf manoranjan ke liye nahi tha. Woh gambheer thi iss maamle me. Aisa nahi tha ki usne apni zindagi me ladke kam dekhe the. Use aaye din ladke propose kiya karte the. Magar, kabhi bhi koi bhi musibat ke waqt uska saath nahi nibhaata tha.
Siwae Veer ke...! Jo harr vipda me uske saamne uski shield bann ke khada rehta tha.
Veer ke auzaar ko hilaate hue aur muh me bhare rehte hue Kavya use uski charam seema par leke aa chuki thi. Idhar Pari Veer ko uske mann me erotic sapna dikha ke use sexually active rakhi hui thi.
Aur zyada derr na lagi jab-
"Ahhhnnn!!???"
Kisi jwalamukhi ki tarah fatt ke Veer ke lund se veerya baahar aaya aur Kavya ke muh me andar sama gaya.
Woh bechari hadbada ke peeche hui, par muh me aadhe se zyaada veerya woh bhar chuki thi. Bacha kucha Veer ke pant par hi gir chuka tha.
Veer ka badan jhatke le raha tha. Bachi kuchi boonde uske jhatke maarte lund se baari baari nikal ke lund se fisalte hue neeche aa rahi thi aur Kavya ekdum tak-taki lagaaye sab kuch aashcharya me dekh rahi thi.
Lekin, Veer ki neend iss baar khul chuki thi. Woh utha aur jaise hi usne apni haalat aur saamne Kavya ko dekha woh hakka bakka reh gaya.
Veer : Kavvvyaa??? What the hell??
Kavya masoom si bann ke use dekh rahi thi. Woh jaanti thi ki ab wo pakdi gayi thi. Muh me uske Veer ka mutth bhara hua tha. Wo badi koshish kar rahi thi nigalne ki par ek baar me itna saara nigalna asambhav tha. Upar se veerya itna gaadha tha ki uske gale ke neeche jaa hi nahi raha tha.
Badi mushqil se thook ke sang milaap karte hue Kavya ne use pehle patla kiya aur baari baari woh use nigalti gayi. Uske chehre par bhaav aise the jaise usne sada hua anda khaa liya ho.
Aur akhiri niwaala nigalte hi usne raahat ki saans lete hue apne bhaav jataaye,
Kavya : Chhheeeeee!!! (ᗒᗩᗕ)
Veer : Huh???
Kavya : Yucckkkk!!! Y-Ye kya tha?
Veer : Whattt??
Kavya : Kitna ganda swaad tha!!! Chheeeee!!! Kaise pee leti hai ladkiya ise?? Yukkk!! *Gwak* *cough* *cough*
Veer ko tab samajh aaya ki ye saamne uski nadaan behan uska veerya pee ke baithi thi. Usne ek jhatke me Kavya ka gaal zorr se marodte hue pakda,
Veer : You-!!!
Kavya : Awawawaaaa~ bhaiyaaaaa!!!
Veer : Who told you? Huh?? Who told you to do it?
Kavya : Muhuuuuuuu~ (╥﹏╥) waaaaaa!!!!
Veer ne apni underwear aur pant upar kiya aur Kavya ki aaj woh acche se class lene waala tha. Uske gaal ko zorr se nochne ke kuch shan baad Veer gusse me haath mode aankhein band kiye baitha hua tha. Toh wahi Kavya apna dukhta hua gaal sehla rahi thi jise Veer ne kass ke nocha tha.
Veer : So... Explain!!!
Kavya : Umm! Bh-Bhaiya! You know...! Isme meri koi galti nahi hai. Y-Yeah! It's all because of her.
Veer : Her?
Kavya : Kritika! Haan haan! Usi ne mujhe ye sab bataya bhaiya. Na wo batati aur na hi mein aapke saath ye sab karti.
Veer : Kya bataya usne?
Kavya : Yahi sab! *blushes* Yahi ki ye sab karne me kitna maza aata hai kaise karna chahiye.
Veer : Hmm? Toh ye sab toh tumhe apne partner ke saath karna chahiye na?
Kavya (blurts out) : Toh wahi toh kar rahi thi.
Veer : Whatttt???
Kavya (hadbadate hue) : Ahh! M-Mera matlab hai, mera koi partner nahi hai na bhaiya.
Veer : Toh partner dhundho then.
Kavya : N-Noo! Mujhe kisi aur ke saath nahi karna bhaiya. Agar koi aur hota hai toh mera ye sab karne ke mann bhi nahi karta. But jab aap hote ho toh mujhe aap pe trust rehta hai, aur mein aap se pyaar bhi karti hu, to simple ho jaata hai mere liye.
Veer : But tum ye sab mere saath nahi kar sakti. You know that or not? Agar galti se Arohi dii ya Chachi ko pata lag jaata toh pata hai kya haal karti woh hum dono ka?
Kavya : P-Par pata to kisi ko nahi chala na bhaiya.
Veer (sighs) : Tum...! Aise nahi maanogi. Mujhe khul ke batao sab.
Kavya : Bhaiyaa! K-Kya aapko mera wo karna pasand nahi aaya? Sach sach batana!
Uski masoom aankhon ko jab Veer ne dekha toh ek duwidha me pad gaya. Bhala kaise qubool kar leta ki apni choti behan ki blowjob use behad pasand aayi thi. Magar, jhooth bhi nahi keh sakta tha.
Veer (nods) : Haan! Mujhe pasand aaya tha.
Kavya (gleams) : I knew it!!! See? Fufu! Aapko bhi pasand aaya na?
Veer : Par tumhari jagah koi aur ladki hoti to bhi mujhe pasand aata. Kyuki, ye jagah sensitive hoti hai. Aur, opposite gender jab ise touch kare to yahi reaction milta hai. Don't get your hopes too high.
Kavya : B-But-! Bhaiya!!!
Veer : Hmm?
Kavya (blushes) : I-I really love you-!!! Aapko ye sab mazaak lage but I really love you. And I mean it.
Veer : Haha! I know paagal!
Kavya (yells) : Noooooooooo!!!!
Veer : ???
Kavya (ahista se) : You don't know! You don't know bhaiya!! Aap samajh rahe ho ye Bhai behan ki tarah... But... I love you... In real.
Veer : What?
Kavya : Aap vishvaas nahi karoge. Mein jaanti thi. Bhaiya I- *blushes* I have fallen for you.
Veer kuch shan toh hairat me apni chhoti behan ko dekhta raha par fir thoda kathorta se usne bola,
Veer : Kavya! Mazaak ki apni ek hadd hoti hai. Tum meri choti behan ho. Tumne jo aaj kiya, use mein tumhari bhool samajh ke maaf kar sakta hu. Mein jaanta hu iss umr me hormones kuch zyada hi release hote hai aur curiosity bhi rehti hai opposite gender ke liye. Par, ye kehna ki tum mujhse pyaar karti ho ye kuch zyada ho gaya. I know tum mujhse pyaar karti ho lekin ek ladke ladki ki tarah? Tumhara dimaag toh theek hai?
Kavya (screams) : Aap meri baat ka vishvaas kyu nahi kar rahe ho Bhaiyaaaa!!! I love you!!! I mean it. M-Mein sach keh rahi hu...! Believe me!!! Mujhe kabhi aisa kuch kisi ke liye bhi feel nahi hua...!
Veer : Aur isliye ye aur bhi unbelievable hai you know!!!
Kavya (yells) : Nooooooo!!!! Trust me bhaiyaa!!! M-Maine kabhi kisi ko apne aas paas bhi nahi bhatakne diya hai. Aur, ye abhi se nahi hai. Mein uss din hi aapse pyaar karne lagi thi jab aapne mujhe aur dii ko diwali wali raat me bachaya tha.
Veer : Huh???
Kavya : In fact, tab toh- tab utna nahi tha. Bas dheere dheere badh raha tha. Lekin, jab aap Casa Belle me sirf mere liye waha khade hue, tab mujhe samajh aa gaya tha ki mujhe kya hua hai bhaiya-!!!
Veer : ...
Kavya : Bhaiya~ I love you~
Dono ke hi dil ne jaise ek dhadkan phaand li. Aur, woh dono ek dusre ko khaamoshi me dekhte rahe.
Kavya : M-Mein jaanti hu it sounds stupid but- but maine kabhi bhi itna surety mehsoos nahi ki kisi bhi baat ke liye. Aaj- aaj mein ekdum 100% sure hu ki mere saath kya chal raha hai. Aur, ye kabhi nahi hota mere saath. Mein most of the times confused hi rehti hu. But not this time. I know ki mujhe kya hua hai. I- I have fallen for you bhaiya~
Veer ne iss baar kuch na kaha. Usne bas Kavya ko pakad ke apni goad me litaaya, ek jhatke me uski skirt upar ki aur panty ko neeche kar diya. Achanak se jo kuch bhi hua, Kavya kuch samajh na paayi. Apni sthiti ka jab use bodh hua tab use hosh aaya ki woh kis awastha me Veer ke upar thi.
"Bhaiyaaaaa!!??" Woh aashcharya janak swar me chillaayi par tabhi-
*Chataaaaaakkkk*
"Ahh!!??"
Veer ka ek haath aake seedha uske pichwaade par pada. Woh use spank kar raha tha? Woh bhi panty utaar ke??? Jaha ek taraf woh sharmsaar thi toh wahi dusri taraf krodhit aur niraash bhi.
*Chataaaakkk*
"Nnghh!!??"
Veer : Ahinda se tumne aisi baato ka mazaak banaya, toh yahi saza tumhe milegi.
*Chataaaaaakkkk*
"Aaaahhhh!!!!"
Iss baar ek aasu ki boond Kavya ki aankhon se nikal gaal se fisalte hue giri. Usne apne dil ki baat rakh di thi. Kintu, uske bhaiya kuch samajh kyu nahi rahe the? Kabhi bhi use itna gussa nahi aaya tha jitna aaj aaya tha. Woh khamosh rahi, aur bas aansu bahaati rahi.
*Chataaaaaakkkk*
"Ahhhhnnn!!!"
*Chataaaaaakkkk*
"Mmmmm!!!"
*Chataaaaaakkkk*
"Nnnghhhhhh!!!"
Jab tak Kavya ka narm pichwaada laal na pad gaya tab tak Veer ne use nahi chorra. Aur, kuch derr ki spanking ke baad hi usne Kavya ko azaad kiya.
Kavya uthi, apni skirt aur panty usne upar ki. Palat ke Veer ko dekhi. Uske poore gaal aasuo se bheege hue the. Dono ek dusre ko kuch pal dekhte rahe. Aur, fir Kavya mudte hue zorr se rote hue room se bhaag gayi.
Veer ne ek thakaan bhari aah chori.
[This won't work you know. Fufu~]
'Shut up! Mujhe pata hai mein kya kar raha hu.'
[Haan haan! Par jaisa ki maine kaha. Ye kaam nahi aane waala.]
'We'll see!'
Kavya ke jaane ke baad, Veer abhi theek se neend me gaya bhi nahi tha jab kuch derr baad hi dhadalle se uska darwaza fir khula aur koi andar hadbadate hue aaya,
"Veeerrrr!!!"
'Hmm?'
Woh utha. Saamne Arohi thi. Baal uske bikhre hue the aur badi hi tension me nazar aa rahi thi.
Arohi (frowns) : Kavya room me nahi hai!!!
Veer : What???
Arohi : M-Mein washroom karne uthi toh dekha ki woh mere bagal se thi hi nahi. Mene baahar bhi check kiya toh waha bhi nahi mili.
Veer : Aapne baaki sab ke rooms check kiye?
Arohi : Nahi! But wo sab pehle hi so chuke the. Mujhe yaad hai, sab ke rooms andar se locked the aur mein aur Kavya hi late night sone gaye the.
Veer : Ek kaam kariye. Aap sab ke rooms me check kariye, mein baahar dekhta hu. Ho sakta hai use neend na aa rahi ho uss kamre me isliye kisi aur ke room me chali gayi ho?
Arohi (nods) : Haan!
Arohi ke baahar jaate hi Veer araam se apne bistar par se utha. Kyuki, woh jaanta tha ki Kavya kaha thi. Arohi ko usne bas isliye bheja kyuki woh nahi chaahta tha ki Kavya aur uski baato ke beech iss waqt koi aaye. Woh kahi na kahi ye bhi jaanta tha ki Kavya bhala aise kyu gayi thi bhaag ke.
'This stupid girl...! *sighs* Kabhi seedhe nahi baithati.'
[She's your sister after all.]
'Yeah! *smiles* Right!'
Tracer!!!
Veer ne pehle hi apne harr sadasya ke upar mark kar diya tha. Kavya ke maamle me Veer ne tracer Kavya ke bracelet par mark kiya tha. Ye wahi skill thi jiski madad se Veer ne Sonali ke food truck ko dhundha tha.
Use Kavya ki location saaf saaf nazar aa rahi thi ki woh kaha par thi. Woh baahar ki orr chal diya. Hotel se baahar aate hi Veer daayi orr chal diya. Hotel ke saamne hi samundar tha. Woh rait par chalte hue daayi orr badhta jaa raha tha. Andhera ho rakha tha, aur chaand ki roshni me samudra ka paani apne upri starr par chamak raha tha.
Veer aur aage badhta gaya, jaha kuch chattaanein use dikhaayi deni shuru ho chuki thi. Badi badi chattaano ke nazdeek aate hue woh aur andar ko gaya. Aur thoda sa andar aate hi-
Usne dekha ki Kavya rait par apne dono perr sikodi baithi hui thi aur apna sarr ghutno par rakh zorr zorr se ro rahi thi.
Kisi ki aahat mehsoos hote hi Kavya ne jaise hi sarr utha ke dekha toh paaya ki uske bhaiya hi saamne khade hue the. Wo kuch na boli. Apni roti hui soorat usne firse sarr neeche kar chhipa li.
Veer uske bagal se aa ke baith gaya.
Veer : Toh yaha thi tum?
Kavya : Chale jaiye aap yaha se. *sniff* Akela chorr dijiye mujhe. *sniff*
Veer : Haan haan chala jaunga. Par tumko saath leke jaunga. Ab bada bhai hu toh mujhe hi sab samajhna hota hai.
Kavya : K-Kuch nahi samajh aata aapko. *sniff* Samajh me aa raha hota, toh- *sniff* Toh aisa nahi karte aap. *hic*
Iss baar Veer ki kathor aankhein narm pad gayi. Woh samudra ki orr dekh raha tha. Aur, badi hi dheemi awaaz me usne bola,
Veer : Mein jaanta hu pagal!
Kavya ne apna sarr utha ke uski orr dekha. Woh kuch samjhi nahi thi.
Veer : Mein sab jaanta hu. Mein sab samajh bhi gaya tha. Mein jaanta hu ki tum mujhse pyaar karti ho.
Iss baar Kavya ka muh halka sa khul gaya. Uske bhaiya jaante the? Toh fir kyu-!?
Veer : Par maine jaan boojh ke woh sab kiya tha.
Aur, Kavya ko uska jawaab mil gaya tha. Lekin, jaan boojh ke bhi kyu akhir-!?
Veer : Jaan boojh ke isliye kyuki tum bhi ye jaanti ho aur mein bhi jaanta hu, ki hum dono bhai behan hai. Tum meri sabse pyaari choti behan ho. Aur, mein nahi chaahta ki tum bhatko.
Kavya : Par mein bhatak nahi rahi *sniff* Mera pyaar-
Veer : Saccha hai! I know! Lekin, tum consequences ke baare me nahi soch rahi. Mein bhi tumse pyaar karta hu Kavya. Jaise tum karti ho.
Kavya ekdum stabdh Veer ko ghoorti rahi. Inn baato ka kya matlab tha? Kya uske bhaiya bhi uski tarah-!? Par ye kaise ho sakta tha?
Veer : Yes! I love you too! Mujhe laga tha pehle ki ye tumhara infatuation hoga, attraction hoga. Tum sabse zyada samay agar kisi ladke ke saath bitaati ho toh woh mein hi hu. Mujhe laga tha ki jaise jaise tum baahar apni age ke aur ladko se milogi, baatein karogi tumhare mann se ye attraction khatam hota jayega. Aur, eventually tum apne partner ko choose kar logi.
Kavya (yells) : Ye koi attraction nahi hai. Koi infatuation nahi hai bhaiyaaaa!!! *sniff* It's- It's love!!!
Veer : I know! Mujhe bhi ye abhi haal hi me samajh aaya. Aur, aaj clear bhi ho gaya. Par, Kavya isliye mein dimaag se chalta hu. Tum kuch bhi nahi soch rahi ho. Mein aage ke consequences bhi dekh paa raha hu. Agar sab ko pata chala toh kya hoga, samaaj kya sochega, wo sab mein dekh paa raha hu. Aur isliye-
Jaise hi woh Kavya ki orr muda. Iss baar use ek jhatka laga. Kavya ro rahi thi firse. Lekin, iss baar uske haav bhaav se Veer saaf pata laga sakta tha ki woh uss se kitna zyaada gussa thi. Woh jaise chidh rahi thi uski baato se. Jaise uska dil toota tha inn baato se. Kavya ne bas fir ek hi sawaal kiya, jiske baad Veer maun hoke reh gaya.
Kavya : A-Aap-!? Aap dimaag se chal rahe the mere saath?
Veer : Mein-
Kavya ne apne aasu poche aur wo jhatse khadi hui.
Kavya : Thank you bhaiya! Mujhe bataane ke liye. Aaj ke baad se mein aapko kabhi bhi pareshan nahi karungi. Aur, aapne sahi kaha. Dimaag se hi chalna chahiye. Mein paagal thi jo dil se chal rahi thi. Ahinda se dhyaan rakhungi.
Woh apne jazbaato ko chhipaate hue waha se ab jald se jald nikal jaana chaahti thi. Ek pal bhi yaha rukna nahi chaahti thi. Usne apne qadam badhaaye. Par ek qadam badhaate hi uski kalaayi peeche se Veer ne thaam li. Fir bhi wo peeche na mudi.
Kavya : Ab kya hua bhaiya? Chorriye mujhe. Raat ho gayi hai bahut. Yaha rukna theek nahi-
Par, iske pehle ki uski baat khatam hoti woh peeche ki orr khichi chali gayi. Aur, chand palo me hi uske honth Veer ke hontho ki giraft me the.
Woh aankhein phaade sthiti ka bodh karne lagi. Veer ne use kheech ke apni baaho me bhar liya tha. Woh joshile andaaz me Kavya ke hontho ko choosta jaa raha tha.
"Mmm!??"
Uske gaalo ko thaam, use kass ke jakadte hue Veer unn gulaabi honthon ka jamm ke rass paan kar raha tha.
Woh Kavya ke muh ke andar apni jeebh se prahar karta jaa raha tha. Harr guzarte pal Kavya aur bhi zyada madhosh ho rahi thi. Woh toh chaahti hi thi ki Veer use khul ke apnaaye.
Woh koi virodh nahi kar rahi thi, aur zyada derr na lagi use jab woh swayam hi Veer ke baalo me apni ungliyo ko fasaate hue uske baalo ko jakad utne hi josh ke saath uska saath dene lagi.
Chaand ki roshni me uski aankhon se nikalte aasu ki boond chamki, Kintu, iss baar woh chamak khushi ke aasu ki thi. Ye sab kuch aanand-may tha.
Khushi, akela-pann, hasi, kuch praapt karna, aanandit hona, aasu ek se adhik rango me aate the. Indra-dhanush ki tarah. Woh soch rahi thi ki kya iske baad agli subah aisi hi rang-birangi hone waali thi? Aaj use woh mil chuka tha jiski use kaafi samay se talaash thi. Par akhir kab tak? Woh iss baare me sochna bhi nahi chaahti thi.
Gale ki ghutan bhari gaanth aasuo me tabdeel hoti jaa rahi thi. Kavya ke haath khud-ba-khud Veer ke kandho ke chaaro orr lipat gaye. Aur, fir woh abhaas hua-
Veer ki maujoodgi jaise uss keh rahi thi. Ye sab theek hai. Sab theek hai. Tum ro sakti ho meri behan. Mujh par vishvaas karo. Tum akeli nahi ho.
Har din…! Har din shabdo ke bhavar me uljhe rehna aur bhavnao ke toofaan me sangharsh karte rehna. Kuch keh na paana aur din ka yu guzar jaana. Kavya uss chhoti cheenti ki tarah thi jo apne jhund se bhatak chuki thi. Apne bhaavo ko vyakt kaise kare jaise woh ye raasta bhool chuki thi.
Fir bhi, jeetne ke liye woh dridhta se bhari hui thi. Ziddi thi. Baakiyo ki tulna me usme kayi adhik prem bhara hua tha. Waqt tha ab sarr uthaane ka. Aur, aaj usne woh kar diya tha.
Uske woh thar-tharaate kandhe, jo kampan ki wajah se kaanp rahe the, jinhone kitna kuch saha tha. Ab ye ghut ke rone ka samay samapt ho chuka tha. Waqt tha taaqat jutaane ka. Usne ek gehri saans li aur chumban ko beech me roka. Aasu se bhari unn dhundhli aankhon se usne Veer ko apne nazdeek se dekha aur uske lab khule-
“I love you~ Bhaiya~!!!”
Iss baar pehle ke muqaable inn teen shabdo me aseem bhaar tha, jise Veer khud mehsoos kar sakta tha.
“I love you too! Kavya~”
Aur, Veer ke muh se ye nikalte hi Kavya foot-foot ke ro padi. Woh ek baar fir uske aalingan me aa gayi.
Kavya (cries) : Kyuuuu? *sniff* Kyu?? Kyu mujhe aap dhutkaar rahe the? *hic*
Veer : Taaki, hum galat raaste par na jaaye Kavya!
Kavya : Kya mera aapko pyaar karna galat raasta hai?
Veer : Ek ladke ladki ki tarah pyaar karna? Shayad haan!
Kavya : Toh mujhe isi galat raaste par chalna hai.
Veer hairat me use dekhta reh gaya. Magar, Kavya ki gambheerta bata rahi thi ki woh apne nirnay par kitni adig thi.
Aur, iss baar usne khud Veer ke hontho ko chooma. Poore haq se. Veer ke haath apne aap Kavya ki chuttad par chale gaye. Uske narm pichwaade ko wo dabochta gaya aur Kavya siskiyaan bharti gayi.
Parantu, dono hi ye baat jaante the ki woh yaha zyaada derr ruk nahi sakte the. Kavya, use choomte hue uski goad par aake baith chuki thi. Dono ek dusre ki saansein mehsoos kar paa rahe the.
Kavya : Maine toh apna reason bata diya bhaiya! Par aap? Aapko mujhse kab se pyaar ho gaya?
Veer : Huh? Mein-
Kavya : Kyuki, mujhe toh aisa kuch bhi yaad nahi ki maine aapke liye kuch kiya ho aur aap mere pyaar me pad gaye ho. Bataiye!
Veer (smiles) : Ye bhi aaj ka thodi hai pagli. Bachpan se hi tum mere baare me sochti aayi ho. Tumhare liye pyaar tabhi se tha.
Kavya : Par tab toh bhai behan waala pyaar hi raha hoga na? Fir ye ladka ladki waala pyaar kab se hua aapko bhaiya?
Veer : Sach kahu toh-!!! Mein jab sochta hu ki tum kisi aur ki ho jaogi, woh mujhse bardaasht nahi hota. Aur, shayad isliye mein tumhe apne paas rakhna chaahta hu? I know I'm selfish but-
Kavya (smiles) : Mujhe jawaab mil gaya.
Veer : Huh? Tumhe bura lag raha hoga sunn ke ki mere paas koi thos reason nahi hai. It's just-!! But sach yahi hai-
Kavya (smiles) : It's okay!
Veer : ????
Kavya : Mujhe ye reason kaafi accha laga. *smiles*
Veer : Ohh! Aur, honestly yahi same cheez mein Arohi di ke liye bhi feel karta hu. And, shayad Teju di ke liye bhi. I don't know mere saath kya chal raha hai.
Kavya (surprised) : Ohh? Ohhh??? Ohhhhhhhhh!!!!!
Veer : Wh-What!!??
Kavya (smiles) : M-Matlab aap Arohi dii se bhi pyaar karte ho? Aur Teju di se bhi?
Veer : N-Nahi! Mein-
Kavya : Ohh God!!! Bhaiya!! Aap toh bade chupa rustam nikle haan? Hehe!!!
Veer : Nahi Kavya tum samajh nahi rahi-
Kavya : I know! I know! Well! Mujhe didi log se koi problem nahi hai hehe! B-But-
Veer : ???
Usne ek baar fir Veer ke ird gird apni baahe lapeti aur uske nazdeek aayi,
Kavya : Jab tak aapke aur unke beech kuch nahi hota...! It will be our little secret -!!!
Aur ek aankh maarte hue usne punah Veer ko hontho ko choom liya.
"Mmmmm~"
Dono fir alag hue.
Veer : Tumhe Arohi dii dhundh rahi hai. Ab hume chalna chahiye warna dikkat ho jayegi.
Kavya (nods) : Hmm! But mera mann nahi bhara. Mujhe aur kiss karna hai.
Veer : Pagal ho kya? Hume dhoondhte hue yaha koi bhi aa sakta hai.
Kavya : Toh utha lo mujhe goad me. Pakad ke leke jao mujhe.
Veer : Theek hai baba!
Veer ne Kavya ko princess carry kiya aur woh unn chattaano se use lekar baahar ko aaya jaha Arohi aur Tejal dono hi khadi uski hi talaash kar rahi thi. Dono use dekhte hi bhaagte hue uski orr aayi.
Arohi : Veeeerrr!!??
Veer (smiles) : Ye rahi madam aapki!
Arohi : Kavyaaa? Kaha thi tum??
Kavya : Dii mein-!!! Mein bas akele time spend karne gayi thi. Par fir bhatak gayi thi. Bhaiya ne mujhe dhoondh liya.
Arohi : Kya? Akele time spend karne? Tumhara dimaag toh theek hai na? Time dekha hai tumne? Raat ke 1:30 baj rahe hai. Aur tum-!? Kyu gayi thi akele?
Kavya : Dii mujhe bas-!!! Thoda time akele chahiye tha.
Arohi : Aur ye goad me kyu chadhi ho Veer ke?
Kavya : W-Woh-! Perr mud gaya tha waha patthar ke kaaran. Toh bhaiya utha ke laaye.
Arohi : Tum na...! Sahi me!!! Tum mujhe bata ke bhi toh jaa sakti thi na?
Kavya : Dii! Aap so rahi thi. Sab log so rahe the. Mein kisi ko jagana nahi chaahti thi. Bas, yahi tak hi gayi thi.
Tej : Jagana nahi chaahti thi, par madam aapne sabko jaga diya hai already.
Kavya : ???
Tej : Tumko dhundhne ke liye harr koi idhar udhar ghoom raha hai. Sab jaage hue hai.
Kavya : Ohh! S-Sorry!! Meri wajah se aap sab ko-
Tej ne pyaar se uske sarr par haath fera,
Tej : It's okay! But aage se kahi bhi jao, kisi na kisi ko bata ke nikla karo. Taaki, kisi ko tension na hoye. Okay?
Kavya (nods) : Hmm!
Tej ne fir use Veer ki goad se utaara aur use andar leke chali gayi. Baahar sirf Veer aur Arohi hi the. Dono Tej aur Kavya ko jaate hue hi dekh rahe the.
Arohi : Thank you!
Veer (glances) : Huh?
Arohi : Use waapas laane ke liye.
Veer : Isme thank you kaisa?
Arohi : Kavya meri sirf choti behan nahi hai. Woh meri sab kuch hai. Agar, tum na hote toh pata nahi hum sab kaise dhoondhte use. Tumne ek baar me use dhoondh liya.
Veer (shrugs) : It was just luck!
Arohi uski orr mudi aur ek haath uske seene par haule se rakhi,
Arohi : It isn't just luck!
Veer : ..!!?
Arohi : Jab jab mujhe ya Kavya ko tumhari zaroorat hoti hai, tab tab tum waha par maujood hote ho. Hamari madad ke liye. Aur, ye mein harr baar notice kar chuki hu.
Veer : Ek bhai hone ke naate yahi mera farz hai. *smiles*
Arohi : Par harr bhai ye nahi kar paata na-!!!
Uski baat saaf thi. Uska ishaara apne dono bhaiyo Pranjal aur Vivek ki orr tha. Jo woh dono sage bhai kabhi na kar sake, woh harr kaam unka Veer karta tha.
Veer (sighs) : Well-!
Arohi uske aur nazdeek aayi aur Veer ki saans wahi atak gayi. Jaise ek saanp rengte hue aapke badan par chadhta hai, wese hi Arohi ka haath uske seene se upar aate hue uski gardan par aaya, aur fir peeche baalo me gaya.
Woh Veer ke labo ko dekh rahi thi, aur Veer uski aankhon ko. Veer ki dhadkan ab tezz ho chuki thi. Arohi uske qareeb aa rahi thi. Uske labb Veer ke hontho se thoda dur jaate hue pehle uske gaalo par tike.
Aur jab wo peeche ko hattne lagi, Veer nahi jaanta tha ye jaan boojh ke tha ya fir by chance hua tha parantu, Arohi ke peeche hatate waqt uske honth Veer ke hontho se chheete hue guzre.
Arohi (blushes) : Chalo Veer! Andar chale!
Veer : S-Sure!!!
Aur dono hi ek dusre se nazre sharm ke maare churaate hue andar chale gaye.
Veer apne ateet se baahar aaya. Kavya apna bag leke andar jaa chuki thi. Ye sab kuch parso Goa me hua tha uske saath. Kuch bhi ho, par uska rishta Kavya se behtar ho chuka tha. Aur, use iss baat ki behad khushi thi.
Magar ab Veer wapas se apne gambheer mood me aa chuka tha. Vacation samapt ho chuka tha. Aur, ab laparwahi wo nahi barat sakta tha.
Use kuch adhoore kaarya abhi khatam karne the. Aur, mann me 3 hi naam the uske-
'Tamanna! Aadesh aur Niharika!!! We have some unfinished business here.'
***
Pune...
Prabhakar's house...
Evening ~ 4:24 PM
Prabhakar ke ghar se rone ka shor saaf saaf poori society me sunaayi pad raha tha. Madhuri ke pita Prabhakar ki itni dardnaak maut hui thi ki poori society me darr ka mahual bana hua tha.
Abhi abhi unka antim sanskaar kar ke hi society ke log laute the. Kuch rishte waale log bhi the jo maut ki khabar sunke aa chuke the.
Ghar ke pehle hi kamre me baithi Lalita, Prabhakar ki patni zorr zorr se rote hue vilaap kar rahi thi. Aur, baaki mahilaaye use sambhaalne ki koshish me lagi hui thi.
"Madhuu!!! Ooo madhhhu!!! Papa chale gayeee betaaa!!!! *sniff* Madhuuuuu!!!"
"L-Lalita! Lalita sambhaalo apne aap ko!!!"
"Haan Lalita! Himmat mat haaro!"
"Madhuuuu!!! Betaaaa! Haaaaaaaaa!!!"
Lalita apni beti ko pukaarte hue apne hosh kho chuki thi. Bechari, Madhuri ki aankhon se bhi aasu behna band nahi ho rahe the.
Toh wahi purush log ghar ke baahar hi plastic ki kursiyo par baithe apne aap me charcha karne me lage hue the. Harr taraf gamgeen mahaul tha.
Maut hona alag baat thi. Par, itni dardnaak maut hona? Ki gale ke maans ko hi ukhaad ke alag kar diya jaaye??
Madhuri khud jaise sadme me jaa chuki thi. Kintu, uska hosh me rehna zaroori tha. Warna uski maa ko kaun sambhaalta? Woh iklauti beti thi apne maa baap ki.
Saara Ghar parivaar aur aas pados me log bhi isi baat se duwidha me the ki akhir itni buri tarah kisne maara hoga? Na hi Prabhakar ki kisi se dushmani thi aur na hi kisi se ladayi jhagda ya berr!
Fir iss tarah kaun use maar sakta tha? Jisne bhi iss tarah maara tha ye saaf batla raha tha ki vyakti ne saari khunnas nikaali thi Prabhakar ke upar.
Par ye sambhav hi nahi tha. Prabhakar bol chaal ka behad hi madhur vyakti tha. Uske swabhav se sabhi padosi log prabhavit the aur uski izzat bhi karte the.
Ek zamaana tha jab Madhuri ke bachpan me Prabhakar dherr saara dhan kamaya karta tha. Tab, Madhuri Veer aur Pranjal ke ghar ke sameep raha karti thi.
Magar, uske baad hi woh sheher badal Delhi jaa chuki thi. Aur, uske baad jo kuch hua Delhi me hi hua tha. Prabhakar ne Delhi me apna ek naya karobaar shuru kiya tha. Aur wahi, uska saara karobaar doob chuka tha. Jab aap galat vyaktiyo ko apne karobaar me shaamil karo toh aisa hi kuch hota tha.
Prabhakar ke saath bhi yahi hua tha. Jawani me naya naya usne apna vyavsaay shuru kiya tha aur apni mehnat aur bhagwaan ki kripa se vyavsaay phal phool bhi raha tha.
Kintu, uski kamaayi ko jald hi kisi ki nazar lag gayi. Uske business me kayi saare vyakti the. Magar, ek tha jo Prabhakar ke vyavsaay ko hathiyaana chaahta tha. Aur, woh tha uska Delhi me bana hua mitr ~ Praveen!
Praveen Delhi ka hi rehne wala tha aur woh chote mote vyavsaay me apna haath daalta rehta tha. Jab Prabhakar Delhi me shift hua, toh use bhi ek saath ki zaroorat thi.
Kisi aise vyakti ki zaroorat thi jo samay bhi de sake, acche se vyavsaay ko handle bhi kar sake, aur shuruati daur me thoda paisa bhi laga sake.
Aur, tabhi uski mulaakat hui thi Praveen se. Business ekdum jorr shorr se chaalu hua tha. Aur, badhiya bhi chal raha tha.
Lekin, Praveen ek gunda aadmi thi. Ya yu kahe ki uski pakad gunde mawaali logo se thi. Adhiktar paisa usne hi lagaya tha karobaar me. Uski raay par Prabhakar kaafi kuch kaam uske mutaabik hi kiya karta tha. Jab aadmi itna paisa aap ke vyavsaay me jhok raha ho toh uski baat maanana swabhavik hi tha.
Magar, Prabhakar ko nahi pata tha ki Praveen use uske patan ki orr le jaa raha tha. Dheere dheere kar ke na sirf Praveen ne business ko karz me daala balki, aisi haalat kar di ki na Prabhakar kisi ko karza chuka paa raha tha, na hi kuch kama paa raha tha. Woh na ghar ka bacha tha aur na hi ghaat ka.
Praveen ne jaha se karze me dubwaya tha. Woh darasal uske hi aadmi the. Ye toh bas ek chaal thi. Badle me Praveen ne bas itni hi salah di ki-
"Dekho Prabhakar! Tum wese hi karze me ho. Maine hi kitna paisa lagaya hai isme. Tumne wo bhi nahi chukaaya. Aur na hi tumne baakiyo ka karza chukaaya hai. Yaha tak ki aamdani bhi itni nahi ho rahi ki tum kuch chuka pao."
"M-Mein kya karu? Meri kuch samajh nahi aa raha."
"Dekho! Meri salaah maano toh mein kehta hu ki ye business tum mere hawaale kar do."
"Huh???"
"Mein jaise tese logo ko samjha dunga. Mera naam kitna hai yaha tum jaante hi ho. Mein apna nuksaan bhi seh lunga. Tum mere mitr ho. Agar tumhe karz se bachna hai toh tum yahi kar sakte ho. Aur agar chuka sakte ho toh chuka do."
Praveen behad hi shaatir tha. Usne itne samay me Prabhakar ke saare pehchaan waale vyaktiyo se apni khud ki pehchaan bana li thi. Ab use Prabhakar ki koi zaroorat nahi thi.
Darasal, Prabhakar ek mechanical engineer tha. Aur, usne Praveen ke sang milke apni ek workshop kholi thi. Badi badi machines usne laakho ki mangwayi thi aur install karwayi thi jiska adhiktar paisa Praveen ne hi lagaaya tha.
Prabhakar hi tha jo cars ko leke aata tha aur unki service athwa gaadi ke baaki parts lagwana, repair karwana ye sab karta tha. Use A to Z cars ka poora knowledge tha. Kaise insurance waali cars se aur adhik paise nikalwaana hai ye woh bakhoobi jaanta tha.
Bhale hi wo imaandaar tha par insurance waali cars se woh hamesha thodi be-imaani kiya karta tha. Usko bhi karz chukaana tha aur faayda karna tha. Agar woh ye nahi karta toh bhala itni jald kaise chuka paata sab kuch?
Praveen bas mauj me tha. Woh workshop aata, kaam dekhta, aur Prabhakar ko business se alag karne ki tarqeebe sochta rehta. Aur, woh samay bhi jald hi aa gaya tha.
Aur, isi tarah Prabhakar ko apna hi karobaar chorrna pada tha. Uski koi wazandar vyakti se pakad nahi thi. Use darr tha ki kahi uss par ya uske parivaar par koi hamla na kar de.
Majbooran, use ye sab chorrna pada. Aur, aise hi Prabhakar ne apna sab kuch duba diya.
Magar, iss baat ko toh kayi saal beet chuke the. Uske baad toh Prabhakar ne apne liye ek private job dhundh li thi. Woh ek automobiles ki company me kaam kiya karta tha. Uski kamaayi kam thi par guzaara ho jaata tha.
Prabhakar aur Lalita, dono hi gaav se the. Aur, gaav me hi unki shaadi hui thi. Prabhakar ki padhayi zaroor sheher me hui thi parantu, uska niwaas sthaan gaav ka hi tha. Shaadi ke baad hi dono sheher aaye the.
Lekin, khulaasa abhi tak nahi hua ki akhir uski hatyaa kisne ki? Kya inn sab ke peeche woh Praveen hi tha? Lekin kyu? Bhala wo kyu itne saalo baad badla lega?
Parantu, uske alaawa Lalita ke dimaag me aur koi nahi chal raha tha. Police ki jankaari lene par Lalita ne usi ka bas naam liya. Aur, Police ne apni investigation shuru kar di.
Toh wahi forensics ne Prabhakar ke deh sanskar se pehle uski body ki jaanch kar aur uska blood sample le kar apna kaam shuru kar diya tha.
Iss gutthi ko suljhaana zaroori tha. Ek serial killer unke sheher me khullaa ghoom raha tha.
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Mumbai...
Evening ~ 4:45 PM
"Haash~ Poora khoon choos lete hai ye company waale!"
Ek aurat apne ghar me aate hue apne bag ko sofe par patki aur haafte hue wahi bagal ke couch par baith gayi.
"Aur ye bhi abhi tak nahi aaya!?"
Usne apne aap se kaha. Ye aur koi nahi, Niharika hi thi jo abhi abhi company se kaam kar ke lauti thi. Roz ki tarah uska pati Vikas abhi college se aaya nahi tha. Aur, uska beta Ritvik bagal ke ghar me tha. Umr me bahut chhota tha abhi isliye use pados ke ghar me chorr ke hi dono maa baap apne apne kaamo par jaaya karte the. Kahi na kahi uski parvarish me abhi bachpan se hi kami hone lagi thi. Jitna samay woh apne maa baap ke sang nahi guzaarta tha uss se kahi zyada waqt wo apne padosiyo ke saath guzaarta tha.
Thak ke choor uski uthne tak ki himmat nahi ho rahi thi. Kayi dino se woh behad pareshan thi. Ek kaaran toh kaam ka bojh tha aur dusra-
"Ugh!!!"
Usne apni saree ke neeche haath le jaate hue apni choot ko tatola. Doosra kaaran tha ye asantusht choot. Jo kab se tadap rahi thi. Na chaahte hue bhi uske mann me Veer ke sang woh zabardasti ki gayi chudaayi ki chhavi hi aa rahi thi.
"Chheee! Ye kya sochne lagi mein? Woh haram khor aur mein ek saath? Chee chee chee!!!"
Parantu, uski ungliyaan rukne ka naam nahi le rahi thi.
"Ahhhnnn~"
Mann me baar baar Veer ka lund uski choot me dhaste hue hi nazar aa raha tha. Aur, jab use josh chadh hi raha tha tabhi baahar darwaze par-
*Ding Dong*
Ghanti baji. Niharika hadbada ke apne hawa me latke perro ko neeche laayi aur sofe par se uthi.
'Huh? Ye aa gaya kya?'
Apne pati ke baare me sochte hue woh darwaza kholne ke liye gayi. Vikaas isi waqt aa jaaya karta tha. Usne yahi sochte hue darwaza khola par darwaaze par khade shaks ko dekh uske perr kaanp gaye.
Saamne wahi naujavaan khada hua tha jiske baare me na chaahte hue bhi woh usi ko apne mann me soch rahi thi.
Veer! Jiske mukh par ek kapti muskaan saji hui thi.
Niharika (stammers) : T-Tum!??
Veer (smirks) : Haan mein! Kyu? Kya mein nahi aa sakta?
Niharika Veer ko chorr pehle apni nazre baahar daudayi. Kahi kisi ne dekh toh nahi liya? Kahi uska pati bhi toh nahi aa gaya? Usne darwaze ko kass ke pakda aur Veer ko punah dekh thodi kathorta se boli,
Niharika : Ch-Chale jao yaha se. Tumhari himmat kaise hui yaha aane ki?
Veer : Ohh? Lagta hai tumhe tumhara dose diye kaafi samay ho gaya hai. Tabhi, ye zubaan kaichi ki tarah tezz chalni lagi hai aaj kal.
Usne haath badhaate hue Niharika ko uski thuddi se pakda, aur iss sparsh maatr se hi Niharika ka badan thitur utha. Usne haath ko jhatkaarte hue bola,
Niharika : M-Maine kaha na. Jao yaha se.
Woh darwaza band hi karne waali thi jab Veer ne darwaza pakda aur khud andar aa gaya.
Niharika : Ahhh!!??
*Click*
Jab woh andar aaya, toh usne khud hi darwaza band kar diya. Dono ab poore ghar me akele the. Iss baat ka bodh hote hi Niharika kisi chuhiya ki tarah bartaav karne lagi. Uske qadam dheere dheere peeche jaa rahe the, toh wahi Veer dheere dheere uski orr aage badh raha tha.
Niharika : T-Tum yaha kyu aaye ho? K-Kya chahiye tumhe?
Veer : Well! Tum toh aise bartaav kar rahi ho jaise maano mein pehli baar yaha aaya hu. Wo din bhool gayi? Jab tumhara pati tumhare kamre ke baahar tha aur mein tumhare andar? Hmm?
Woh vaakhyaan yaad aate hi Niharika ki bauhe chinta me kass gayi. Aur, ek kulbulahat neeche choot me uthi. Usne apni choot me maujood garmi ko badi mushqil se nazar-andaaz kar Veer ko gusse se dekha.
Niharika : Tumhe sharam nahi aati aisi baatein karte hue? Mein kehti hu dafa ho jao abhi ke abhi. Iss se pehle ki mein police ko bulau-
Veer : Ohh? Dhamki?? Kya mein aapki jankari ke liye aapko bata du ki mere paas aapki kayi saari ashleel tasveere aur videos pade hue hai? Hmm?
Niharika iss baar khamosh reh gayi. Apne nichle honth ko gusse se daato ke beech kutarte hue thodi roti hui soorat me wo dekhi,
Niharika : T-Tumhe kya chahiye??
Woh jaanti thi ki Veer ke paas kya kya maujood tha. Agar, wo tasveere aur woh videos samaaj ke saamne ujagar kar diye gaye toh uska kya hashr hona tha ye woh bhali bhaati jaanti thi.
Peeche jaate jaate woh kamre ki diwaar se bhid gayi. Aur, Veer uske nazdeek aa chuka tha. Niharika ka dil zorro se dhadak raha tha. Paas aake Veer ki nazre kisi bhooke bhediye ki tarah uske jism par fir rahi thi. Aur, ye Niharika khud mehsoos kar paa rahi thi.
Jaise hi Veer ne uske gaalo par apne haath ki ungliyaan firaayi,
"Nnnnhhh~"
Niharika ke muh se ek siski nikal gayi. Uska badan kaanp utha. Choot ab paani chorr rahi thi.
Veer : You know what? A slave should realise her own place. Don't you think?
Niharika : Wh-What???
Veer ne fir kuch na kaha. Usne apni mazboot pakad se uske dono gaalo ko ek hi haath se pakda aur uske hontho se apne honth bhida diye.
"Nnnghhh???"
Niharika bhauchakki si wahi jamm ke reh gayi. Par, itni tezzi me sab kuch ho raha tha ki woh kuch samajh hi nahi paa rahi thi. Woh chaahti thi Veer ko rokna. Magar-
Magar, uska virodh baahar nikal ke aa hi nahi raha tha. Woh virodh jaise andar hi andar sweekriti me tabdeel hota jaa raha tha.
Pal bhar me hi uska dupatta uski chaathi se hatt chuka tha, aur blouse zabardasti upar chadha diya gaya tha. Aaj pink blouse ke andar usne pink bra hi daali hui thi. Ek mard ka haath jaise hi unn urozo par jamm ke pada,
Niharika ki aankhein band ho gayi. Veer ke haath unn stano ko kass ke dabochte hue daba rahe the. Aur, Niharika aankhein moond bas siskiyaan bhar rahi thi.
Niharika : Ch-Chorr do! Chorr do mujhe!
Ye virodh bas naam maatr ka tha. Andar se jaise woh khud bhi Veer ke uss sparsh ke liye mahino se tadap rahi thi. Veer ne kuch hi shan me uski bra ko bhi upar kar uske doodh par se alag kar diya. Aur nange stann ko dekhte hi apni pyaas bujhaane ke liye woh unn par toot pada. Inme se abhi bhi doodh aata tha. Ritwik inhe abhi bhi choosta tha.
Veer jaanta tha ki Niharika ke stann doodh chorrte hai. Nipple ko muh me bharte hi woh zorr zorr se unhe choosne laga.
"Ahhhnnnn!?"
Niharika uske sarr ko pakad aahein bharne lagi. Veer unhe daba raha tha, choom raha tha aur choos raha tha. Pata nahi kyu, par Vikaas ka sparsh Veer ke sparsh ke saamne kuch bhi nahi tha.
Veer ki wahi baat uske mann me goonji,
'A slave should know her place. Don't you think?'
'S-Slave!?'
Uske mann me khayaal aaya. Kya woh Slave thi? Veer ki? Maatr ye sochte hi uski choot ne paani chorr diya. Woh hairat me reh gayi. Sirf iss vichaar se hi uski choot ka ye haal tha. Upar se-
Veer ka woh zabardasti uske jism se khelna. Niharika andar hi andar jaise ye sweekar kar rahi thi ki woh koi dominating female nahi balki ek submissive female thi jise bas ek asli dominating male ki zaroorat thi.
Veer ne use agle hi pal goad me uthaaya aur upar uske bedroom ki orr chal diya. Vikaas aur uske bedroom ke bistar par use litaate hue kuch hi palo me Veer ne use nanga kar diya tha.
Niharika thode bhay, thodi sharam, thodi bechaini aur thodi utsukta me Veer ko dekhti jaa rahi thi. Woh underwear me tha. Aur, underwear ke baahar se hi uska auzaar dekh Niharika ki nazre wahi tiki hui thi.
*Gulp*
Muh ka thook nigalte hue woh lambi lambi saansein bharne lagi. Aur, tabhi Veer ne apni underwear utaar ke fek di. Uska musal lund jo 90° me khada hua tha woh uski aankhon ke saamne aaya. Ek baar fir use dekh Niharika ki aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi.
Yahi wo auzaar tha jisne uski choot me kohraam machaya tha. Jiske liye wo mahino se tadpi thi. Kyuki, uski dono office ki slaves Ayushi aur Ishani use ye sukh kabhi bhi nahi de sakti thi.
Woh jaanti thi ki ab kya hone waala tha, lekin fir bhi uske muh se virodh karne ke liye ek swar bhi nahi nikal raha tha.
Aur, wahi hua jo woh chaah bhi rahi thi. Veer ne koi foreplay nahi kiya iss baar. Usne seedha apna mota, lamba aur sudol lund uski choot me utaar diya.
"Aaahhhh~"
Woh Niharika ko chodne laga. Uske mann me sirf chudaayi nahi thi. Niharika ko apni orr poori nishta se rakhna uska maqsad tha. Niharika kabhi bhi uski peeth me chhura na ghope, ye use sunishchit karna tha. Aur, aisa karne ke liye Niharika ko samay samay par wo dena zaroori thi jiski wajah se woh uski hoke reh sakti thi.
Tabad-tod chudaayi chalti rahi, bed hilta raha aur Niharika kasmasaate hue siskiyaan bharti rahi jab tak ki Veer ka mutth uski choot me na utar gaya.
Jab dono shaant hue uske baad Niharika ne apne aap par thoda qaabu kiya aur puchi,
Niharika : Kis kaam se aaye ho tum yaha?
Veer : Let's say ki mujhe tumhari zaroorat hai. Ya yu kahe ki I need your help.
Niharika : Hmm?
Veer : Tum Globerays me kaam karti ho right?
Niharika : Haan toh? Firse kisi ki naukri lagwani hai kya?
Veer : Nahi! Iss baar wo kaam nahi hai.
Niharika : Toh fir?
Globerays wahi company thi jisme Suhana ka pati Gaurav CEO tha. Aur, isi company me Niharika HR thi jo aksar interviews liya karti thi. Veer ko yaad tha ki Gaurav Casa Belle me uss se kis tarah pesh aaya tha.
Veer : Tumhari monthly income kitni hai?
Niharika : Kyu puch rahe ho?
Veer : Batao pehle!
Niharika : Around 75k.
Veer : Ohh! That's good!
Niharika : Of course! Mein sirf HR nahi hu. HR department saara mein sambhaalti hu. Interviewers me mera naam sabse pehle aata hai. Lekin, ab mein ye chhote mote interviews nahi leti. In fact, mein hi interviewers ka panel set karti hu.
Veer : Hmm! Agar tumhe koi 75k se zyada pay kare same job ke liye toh kya tum switch karogi company?
Niharika : Huh? 75k se zyada? For same job?
Veer : Yeah!
Niharika : Kitna?
Veer : Maan lo 80k ya 90k ya fir even around 1 lakh.
Niharika : Huh??? Itna abhi koi pay nahi karta. Meri company mujhe ideal payment de rahi hai already and that's-
Veer : Agar pay kare toh?
Niharika : Toh of course mein switch karungi. Jidhar zyada paisa hoga wahi jaungi.
Veer (smiles) : I see!
Niharika : Toh ab?
Veer : I want you to do something for me.
Niharika : Wh-What?
Veer uske kaan ki taraf thoda sa jhuka aur apni mardaana awaaz me bola,
"Inspect from the inside."
Niharika : K-Kya matlab?
Veer : Mein chaahta hu ki tum andar se nazar rakho Globerays par. Dekho, ki kaun kaun kaam karne me accha hai aur at the same time unme se kaun kaun company se na-khush hai.
Niharika : H-Huh!? Lekin kyu?
Veer : Jitna kaha gaya hai utna karo. Aur, haan tumhara ek kaam aur hai.
Niharika : ???
Veer : Tumhe unse touch me aana hai aur bhadkana hai.
Niharika : Kya?
Veer : Unhe company ke khilaaf bhadkana hai. Tumhe bhi ye jataana hoga ki tum bhi company se na-khush ho. Taaki, woh apni bhadaas asaani se tumhare saamne nikal sake.
Niharika (frowns) : Tumhara maqsad kya hai?
Veer (smiles) : Tumhe zyada paise chahiye ya nahi?
Niharika : Chahiye hai. Lekin, aise nahi ki mein-
Veer : Tum kahi nahi fassogi.
Niharika : ??
Veer : Ye tumhari bhalayi ke liye hi hai. Jitna kehta jaa raha hu utna karti jao. Jald hi tumhe realise ho jayega. A smart woman knows when to follow orders right?
Niharika : Hmm?
Veer : Andar se nazar rakho. Jo jo employees tumhari nazar me aaye jo accha kaam kar rahe ho, unhe apni side karo. Company ke demerits ginwao. Lekin, thoda sambhal ke. Ise dheere dheere aage badhana. Kisi ko shaq na ho tumhare upar. Aur, unse itni familiarity kar lo ki woh tumhare saamne be-jhijhak khul sake.
Niharika : Uske baad?
Veer (smiles) : Uske baad mein tumhe khud bataunga ki kya karna hai. And, don't worry tum kisi bhi pareshani me nahi padogi.
Pata nahi kyu, par Niharika Veer ki baat par sandeh nahi kar paa rahi thi. Woh iss baat par yakeen kar rahi thi.
Niharika : Th-Theek hai! Mein-
*Ding Dong*
Ghar ki ghanti fir baji. Aur, Niharika darr gayi. Vikaas aa chuka tha.
Niharika : Shit!!!! Woh aa gaya. Tumne gaadi kaha khadi-
Veer : Don't worry! Meri gaadi idhar nahi hai. Dur khadi hai. Chalta hu. Mein yaha first floor se neeche utar jaunga.
Niharika : Whattt??
Par, iss se pehle ki wo rok paati Veer khidki se kood chuka tha. Niharika ki saans uski halak me hi atak gayi ye drishya dekh ke. Woh jhatse duadate hue khidki ke paas aayi par neeche se Veer uski orr dekh ke haath hila raha tha. Bhala itni upar se kood ke use kuch hua kyu nahi?
Niharika isi duwidha me padi hui thi. Parantu, darwaze ki lagatar bajti ghanti ne use zyada kuch sochne na diya. Usne fatafat apna ek gown daala aur neeche ki orr chal di.
Idhar Niharika Vikaas ko ghar ke andar laane lagi aur udhar Veer ghar se baahar nikal paidal hi apni gaadi ki orr aa chuka tha.
Car me baithate hue usne saamne rakha ek lifaafe ki orr dekha.
'I wonder uss Tamanna ka kya reaction hoga inhe dekhne ke baad?'
[I take my words back. Woh Aadesh tumhare saamne kuch bhi nahi. The real sly fox is you.]
Veer muskuraya aur car chaalu kar woh apne agle target ki orr chal diya.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
This update consists of 10.8k words. Aage note me sab bataya jayega ki mein kaha tha itne din kaha busy tha. Waise toh mein ye chaahu to na bhi batau. After all, it's my personal life. Lekin, fir bhi tum logo se kabhi itna kuch nahi chhipaya hai. Toh aage woh note padh lena. Ek update aur bacha hai iss arc ka. Wo bhi itna hi bada ho sakta hai shayad. Aadhi outline ready hai uski. Thoda sa aur kadiyo ko aapas me jodna hai. Baaki, likes thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka guys. Target apna same hai. 150. Keep supporting.
Dhanyavaad!
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Gr8 update bro,
Sexiest update ever…love u…keep updating we are already with you…this time no complain…bcoz this update….so lovely….
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Super amazing update Bhai
कुछ दिन पहले टेलीविजन पर एक फिल्म देखा था । फिल्म का नाम याद नही है और न ही फिल्म के कलाकारों का लेकिन यह याद है कि फिल्म के निर्देशक आर बाल्की साहब थे ।
इस फिल्म मे कहानी एक ऐसे लड़के की है जिसका पिता एक फिल्म निर्देशक था और उसकी पहली फिल्म इसलिए फ्लॉप हो गई कि फिल्म समीक्षकों द्वारा उनकी फिल्म की काफी आलोचना की गई थी। लड़का गुरुदत्त साहब से काफी इन्सपायर्ड था जिनकी लास्ट फिल्म कुछ कुछ इन्ही कारणों से असफल हो गई थी । लड़का सीरीयल किलर बन जाता हे और उन सभी फिल्म समीक्षक की हत्या करने लगता है जो गलत समीक्षा करते है । उसके हत्या करने का तरीक़ा भी समीक्षक के दिए गए विवरण पर होता था । मतलब अगर किसी समीक्षक ने फिल्म को एक स्टार मार्क दिया और कहा कि फिल्म निर्देशक दिमाग का बिल्कुल ही शुन्य है तो किलर उस समीक्षक के माथे को खंजर से क्रास करके मार डालता था और उसके ललाट पर एक स्टार मार्क बना देता था ।
इस अपडेट मे कुछ कुछ ऐसा ही घटित हुआ है । सतारा मे एक व्यक्ति को मारकर उसका हाथ गायब कर दिया , पंचगनी मे एक व्यक्ति को मारकर उसके दोनो कान गायब कर दिए गए और पुणे मे एक व्यक्ति को मारकर उसके गले का मांस नोच लिया गया ।
यह सब दर्शाता है कि किलर का नेक्स्ट टार्गेट शरीर का कोई अन्य हिस्सा होगा ।
देखते है यह सीरीयल किलर किस मकसद से यह सब कर रहा है ! क्या वो अजनबी को भी शिकार बना रहा है या किसी खास खास टार्गेट लोगों को !
वीर साहब के कहने ही क्या ! फिलहाल तो उनकी ' पांचो उंगलियाँ घी मे और सिर कढ़ाई मे ' जैसी हालात है।
वीर साहब से यह अवश्य सीख मिलती है कि आपको सिर्फ एक ही गाय का दूध नही पीना चाहिए । कोशिश करनी चाहिए कि रोज बदल बदल कर , मतलब दूसरे , तीसरे , चौथे , पांचवे..... वगैरह वगैरह गाय का दूध पीना चाहिए । आपकी सेहत के लिए , आपकी बुद्धि के लिए यह बहुत फायदेमंद है ।
पहले रंगीनी मैडम , फिर पूर्वी मैडम , फिर डियरेस्ट सुम्मु मैडम के दूध का सेवन कर वीर के धन्य भाग्य हो गए। बहुत जल्द इस कड़ी मे श्वेता आंटी का नम्बर लगने वाला है ।
वैसे वीर के इस बात से मुझे बहुत आश्चर्य हुआ कि वो निधि मैडम को अपना जीवन संगिनी बनाना चाहता है । इतनी खुबसूरत खुबसूरत हसीन लड़कियाँ है , ये सब किस लिए हैं ? शायद वीर का पहला पहला प्यार है । और यह सच है भाई कि पहला प्यार पहला ही होता है ।
बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट वोल्फी भाई ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड जगमग जगमग अपडेट।
romanchak update ..ye suman kya kar rahi hai shweta ke saath ,raaz batane ke chakkar me aur hi kaand kar diya suman ne..
aur ab ye murder kaun kar raha hai ,teen jagah abhi tak murder huye hai ,,pattern to kuch samajh nahi aa raha cities ke naam se..
kya ye koi system holder kar raha hai ya koi aur .perfect murder to koi best insan hi kar sakta hai .
jab agla murder ho to uska aankh ya naak gayab ho
Mast super update
Zabardast update
Mind-blowing update Bhai
So beautiful, So elegant,
Just written like a wow....
Veer with Ragini and purvi and Suman and Shweta. Hotness ka gajab tadka. Bina sex scene ke bhi aag laga di.
Now talks about one by one.
So Veer told Ragini about Nidhi, aur uske alava koi ho hi nahi sakta tha, halaki ab tak Nidhi ka naam nahi btaya. But Ragini ki galatfehmi to dur ho hi gayi at least.
And thanks pichle updates se jo meri shikayat yaa doubt tha veer aur Ragini ko lekar ki Ragini ki koi importance nahi reh jayegi Kaera aur Nidhi jaise character ke samne veer ki life me vo kuch had tak Kam hua hai. The way Veer dominate and shown love to Ragini, that's what I want. Jo pichle updates me hua tha ki Ragini se shadi ki baat ko lekar veer ne ek excuse dekar chod Diya tha, vo mujhe pasand nahi aaya tha. But yahan par jis tarah se Veer ne apni baat clearly aur dominated way me kahi vo acha tha. Asal me problem shadi hone naa hone ki nahi thi, uss update se hi Aisa laga tha ki Ragini doesn't have value in veer life. Kon kon veer ki wife banegi ye to writer hi tay karega, baat hai Ragini ki bhi importance wife jaisi honi chahiye agar shadi naa bhi ho yaa ho to aur acha. Jo yahan pe clearly dikha bhi. Baki lite intimate scene to mast tha hi.
Now purvi
Wow that was unexpected.
Well scene dekh ke to lag rha tha ki Aaj to gayi purvi kaam se, lekin hamara hero to dudh pike hi shant ho gya, abhi bacha hai naa....
Lekin ab vo din dur nahi jab mausi bhanja ek ho jayenge.
In sab baato ka mtlb kya hai, kya veer aur uski family me dheere dheere jo relation develop ho rha hai vo bhi system ki vajah se. Kya system ka koi aur intention bhi hai. Why pari pushing veer to do incest in family. Aur insab ko lekar veer kya soch rha hai. Veer itna strong hote hue bhi is tarah apni lust par control lose karna, isko lekar veer ki kya theory hai. I can't say much about this.
Suman and Shweta
ek taraf pari aur dusri taraf Suman lagta hai dono milkar sari females ko Veer ke niche lakar hi manegi. Khair pari ka to kuch keh nahi sakte, lekin Suman ye sab kyu kar rahi hai. Mtlb kya vo sirf ye chahti hai ki uske malik ko alag alag females ka pyar mile yaa baat kuch aur hai.
Is update ke baad kuch sawal khade ho gye ki jis incest ki taraf veer and family badhegi vo sirf pyar ek ittefaq hoga yaa isme bhi koi conspiracy hai.
Well iss update me bhawna kaa naam directly 3-4 baar aaya to kehna to uske bare me bhi kuch chahta hu lekin filhal ke liye use postpone karte hai. Jab vo aayegi tab kahunga.
To ek serial killer logo ko berahami se maar rha hai. And the next target is in Mumbai. Ab definitely Veer se vo takra hi jayega, lekin kuch bhi itna tedha nahi hoga, sab kuch jalebi jaisa sidha hoga.
Kahani me Madhuri ko entry phir ek baar ho gyi hai, jo Madhuri pranjal ke liye sirf ek bahana thi veer ko pareshan karne ka. Asal me to vo veer ko pehle se hi pareshan karta tha lekin apni nafrat aur gunaho ko jayaz batane ke liye usne Madhuri ka sahara liya ek tarah se. Ki usne sab kuch Madhuri ka badla lene ke liye kiya.
Har insan kahi gehrai me sahi galat ki samajh rkhta hai aur phir bhi jab vo galat karta hai to apne aap ko sahi thehra e ke liye, duniya ke samne nahi balki khud ke samne. Ek bahana bnata hai ki mene to ye isliye kiya. It's a criminals psychology.
Killer ne Madhuri ke pita ka murder Kiya hai, ab Mumbai me to kahi na kahi Madhuri veer se milegi hi.
Dekhne vali baat hogi jab pranjal ko Madhuri ka pta chalega aur use veer ke sath dekhega to kya jalegi uski.
Kuch kuch jiasa Ajay ke sath hua tha ki jis ladki ke chakkar me veer ko dhoya usne ni dost maan ne se inkar kar diya.
Awesome updates
Kehne ke liye abhi bahut kuch tha lekin fir kabhi.
Waiting for next update
And pls try to give update sooner. No obligation , just a humble request.
Kya baat hai Aate Ke Sath dhamaka
halat 
Shandar, jabardast and amazing update
Can you specify the update no. in which Veer have sex with parijat women and also that update where veer talks with bahwna about parijat Ghar.
What's the favourability of Suman and jis update me Suman ki favourability ko lekar baat ki gayi hai.
When it's complicated, it means that all the love and incest that is/will blossom in Veer's family is not just about love, surely there are other reasons. Varna complicated hota hi nahi.
Well kisi na kisi tarah to connect hoga hi bhale hi abhi confrontation na ho. Kahi bhawna ke pass na chala jaye.
I didn't said that Veer Madhuri me interested hoga hi, interested to uss ladki me bhi kuch khas nahi tha bas harmonal effect ki vajah se dekhta tha use, vese bhi pranjal ki g*and jalane ke liye in dono ka romantic hona jaruri nahi.
Haa agar romantic ho jaye phir to pakka pranjal ki gaa*d ke chithde udd jayenge
Thanks
Waiting for next update
Jabardast update bro kya romantic update tha NNN Nhi hota to hila leta just kidding
Update bhut acha tha every character ke sath romance ho gya
Arohi ka number kab lgega
Hero ke bare me nahi janta lekin Sunny Deol Sahab the us picture me. Mughe picture badhiya laga tha.
80 के दशक की बात कर रहा हूं । उस वक्त के एक साल के मूवीज की लिस्ट अभी भी मेरे एक डायरी मे है।
Frieren को जानने वाला , समझने वाला पहला इंसान मै ही हूं। वो किसी के बहकावे मे नही आ सकती।
Excited
Bhai kuch din Goa aur ghoom le…bhaut kuch erotic padhne ko mil sakta hai…
Update bhut badhiya tha prabhu, ab agla update thoda jldi Dene ki kripa krna Werewolf
Ye toh best hoga yrr
I came here after a long time.
previous kuch updates bilkul familial matters par h... That Garofano one update was so good.... Uske baad se dekhe to saare hi updates family regarding rhe h... Nd aapne last last me kuch kuch alag scenes show kiye h...
like wo aadmi nd wo ladki ki talk... Kon the wo? Aadmi to mujhe Renshu hi lga... But I don't know about that girl... It's not Garofano... That's for sure
nd iss update me bhi aapne end me suspense chodh hi dia... Now a serial killer...
aapko readers ko hooked rakhna itne acche se aata h ki ab aap master ho master...Even after such long gaps... Story hasn't lost its readers... Hmm thoda downfall hua h... But when Chinatown arc will start I think firse peak par jaane waali h story... Or it might even go beyond... Who knows ... Depends on your new level... Abhi iss update ko leke zyada kuch points ni h mere paas ...
although scenes with Ragini and Purvi were hot ..
Looking forward to see some Tej, Arohi and Kavya scenes with Veer. Keep writing sir. Best wishes.
Do bacchon ki maa hai bhai "Nidhi"Seal toh tutne se raha ab veer se
Werewolf pyare,, agla update tum Sunday tk Dene Wale the,,, kb doge Bhai
Sorry Guys, Update will come after
Any latest update regarding your upcoming update dear bro, please give us a positive reply atleast once so that our anxiety may lessen to a certain extent regarding your upcoming update
Ese hi bare bare update doge to maja aa jayga dost aur agar jaldi jaldi update milegaa to khushi se phule nahi samayenge
bahut hi behtarin aur Shandar update Bhai
lagta hai yeh Madhuri aur koi nahin Madhu mam hi hai Jinke Pita ki Hatya Hui Hai ...
ATI Uttam aur behtarin tarike se likha gaya Ek Aur sanskaran
Tnq for your optimistic reply dear bro
80% chance means 0%
Kyuki jb 100% chance hone pe bhi nhi aata h to 80% me kya aayega
Ok
Happy Diwalifriends
Bhai size dekh k mujhe laga update aagya...
Dingwe will wait for super duper double mega update
Update 166
2 varshon Ka Safar bahut Achcha Raha Werewolf bhai
Achcha hota agar aap Kahani complete kar dete... Per fir bhi good bye
सबसे पहले enigma भाई फिर राजा भाई उसके बाद नैन भाई और अब आप ने भी कर हीं दिया
Par mujhe nhi lagta ye story band ho gyi hai ab rahi baat updates ki to wo aajayegi late hi shi hota aesa hai kabhi kabhi hm sab aap kuch jyada hi busy hote hai jise time de pana muskil hota hai wese hi ye lekhak Werewolf shahb ji bhi busy honge.
Jab tak hamare writer shahb update nhi dete tab tak aap log meri nichedekho niche story par ek nazar maar le........
Par mujhe nahi lagta apna Werewolf lekhak babu es story ko chhod ke jaayenge
I don't know man....warewolf bhai 1 baar aake itna to bol hi skte the ki guys I'm taking a break....or due to this reason i'm unable to update. It takes 2-3 minutes to post the reason about the delay...well i hope he comes back with a blast....but he didn't said anything, so i'm not so sure. Its a shame if this stiry is closed. Come back warewolf bhai
Jabardast update
Werewolf Is it everything okay ??? Why updates are not coming its been a long time ..
Ab itne gap k baad ek sath 3 updates to bante hai..atleast 2 toh har haal me hone chaiye..nhi to Fir wahi hai k jaisi writer ki marzi...
Update 166 has been posted guys.
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great news of one more double mega update