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[Werewolf]

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[LionHeart007]

Aisa kab dikhaya gaya ki Jaw Long bahut bura aur zaalim hai. Yaha tak ki Renshu ne khud bhi Aisa kabhi nahi kaha hai jaha tak mujhe yaad hai.
The only reason Renshu iss matter me haath daal Raha hai woh ye hai ki Legion ne mine par qabza karna shuru kar diya hai. Jo ki illegal hai. Already more than 50% mine ka hissa unke under me hai. Jaw Long mine ko qabze me kyu le rahe hai, iss baat se bhi Renshu pareshan hai. Iske pehle kabhi aisa nahi hua tha. Agar Jaw Long mine par qabza karne se aur strong hota hai toh kahi na kahi Renshu ke liye ye khatre ki baat hai. Zaahir hai use fir iss maamle me haath daalna hi padega. Kyuki, mine ke baad Jaw Long ka agla target Order ho sakta hai.

Actually mene ye is liye bola bcz Legion walaon ne kuch logon ko bhi maara tha i think so it could be a reason...

or jahan tak baat FBCC ki hai to maybe Govt want yo use its as a cover up...
obviously wo yeh nhi bata sakte public/media ko k unhon ne Renshu ki help li hai legion ko khatam krne m ya haraane m, naa woh khud ko ganda krna chaahte hain..

so agr woh Ye batayen ge k FBCC ne ye matter sort kiya hai to koi itna sawaal bhi nhi kare ga (Govt ki saakh pr sawaal ho sakta hai k unhe FBCC ko involve kyun karna pada)
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pr jaisa k aapne kahan k Bohot se dhaage jude hain kuch bhi ho sakta hai...
so just wait krte hain or story read krte hain...

 

[Werewolf]

Editing!!!!

 

[LionHeart007]

Aaj raat me bhi aa sakta hai. Agar nahi aaya toh kal definitely raat me aa hi jayega. Wese mein koshish karunga aaj hi delivery kar du. Kaam chal raha hai.

Apne idher to bss 2 hi cheezon ka intezaar ho rha hai abhi...

1 to aapki story k update ka or
2Sra Elections k results aane ka...

 

[Werewolf]

Update - 174 ~ Tranquility before Chaos​

Ab tak...

Julia : Please! Take down your mask, young miss. You don't need any mask in front of Young Master Veer.

Kaera : I-

Julia : This time you lost just the deal. If you keep behaving like this... You might lose Young Master Veer himself.

Kaera : Huh!????

Aur, itna bol Julia waha se ravana ho gayi. Reh gayi toh bas Kaera aur uski aankhon se behte aasu.

Ab aage...

Mission complete ho chuka tha. Veer ne case solve kar diya tha. Aur, use uske points bhi praapt ho chuke the. Woh ab saamne ghatit ho rahe drishya ko bade hi dhyaan se dekh raha tha. Uski nigaahein saamne ghatit ho rahi ghatnao par tiki thi.

“Take this-!!!”

*Whoosh*

Erica ne ek hidden knife Renshu ki orr feki jise Renshu ne apne lakdi ke ek mote dande se badi hi asani se deflect kar diya. Knife hawa me tezi ke sath gol-gol ghumti hui dur jaa giri.

Erica daudate hue aage aayi, mutthi kasi aur ek mukka usne Renshu ki pasli ki orr ghumaya parantu, Renshu ne uski mutthi ko pakad neeche perr se use trip kar diya.

“Huh!!?”

Erica girne ko hui par apne dusre haath ka istemal kar woh hand stand kar apni taang ko Renshu ke chehre ki orr tezi ke saath laayi.

Parantu, kya woh aisa kar sakti thi? Apne hi pita ke chehre par laat se vaar? Aisa karne ke baare me toh woh apne sapne me bhi nahi soch sakti thi.

Aur, har baar ki tarah woh hich-kicha gayi. Uski laat ki raftar dheemi pad gayi.

*Whoosh*

Renshu ne mauqe ka fayda uthate hi khud ko jhukaya aur jo mutthi usne pehle Erica ki pakdi hui thi usi ko thaame usne zorr se Erica ko ghuma ke apne se dur fek diya.

“Ahhh~”

Woh dur jaa ke giri aur uska shareer zameen par ghisatate hue seedhiyo se jaa bhida.

“M-Miss Ericaaa~!”

“Miss Erica aap theek toh hai na?”

Renshu ke aadmi turant hi Erica ke nazdeek aaye lekin kisi ne bhi use haath lagaane ki zurrat nahi ki. Sabhi Erica ke gusse se waqif the.

Erica ne krodh me unn aadmiyon me se ek aadmi ko dekha aur gurrate hue boli,

“Get lost!”

Erica ke muh se daant sunane ke baad bhi aadmi ka dil baag baag ho gaya. Woh sabhi uske itne bade chaheete the ki agar Erica unhe gaaliya bhi bak de toh bhi woh usme ullaas hi dhoondhte the.

Renshu : Toh dekh liya na tumne? Isliye, tum frontline missions ke liye taiyaar nahi ho.

Erica : Tch!

Erica muh fulayi hui thi. Toh wahi Renshu ke sabhi aadmi aadar ke saath apne Lord aur unki beti ko dekh rahe the.

“Miss Erica kamal ki fighter hai. Hai na?”

“Bilkul! Lord ke saamne itni derr tikna. Sirf Miss Erica hi kar sakti hai.”

“Woh itni sundar hai, komal hai, fir bhi hamare liye unhone martial arts seekha. Order ko bachane ke liye… Wo kitna kuch kar rahi hai.”

“Aur, jab wo kar sakti hai toh hum bhi kar sakte hai.”

“Haan haan! Bilkul!”

“Order zindabad!”

“Order zindabad!”

Unka aatmvishvas ye dekh ke hi khoob badh gaya. Iss aatmvishvas ke peeche Erica khud ek bada kaaran thi. Sabhi ek dusre ke saamne martial arts ka stance leke khade hue aur fir practice ke liye khud ko taiyaar karne lage.

Veer chup chaap baramde ki ek seedhi par baitha hua tha. Muskurate hue woh sab kuch dekh raha tha. Renshu aur Erica training kar rahe the. Erica ka kehna tha ki woh frontline ke liye taiyaar hai aur unn sab ke saath jaa sakti hai.

Kintu, Renshu ke vichar ulte the. Uske anusar Erica stealth infiltration me maahir thi. Saamne se ladayi lena uska forte nahi tha. Ye apne hi perr par kulhadi maarne jaisa tha.

Veer ne dekha ki kaise Renshu ke sabhi aadmi ikatr hoke ye nazara jigyasu hoke dekh rahe the, saath hi khud ki practice bhi zorr shor se kar rahe the. Iss se Veer ne kuch baatein pata laga li thi.

Renshu aur Erica khul ke aadmiyon ke saamne practice karte the. Bas, speed ka dhyaan rakhte the. Woh dono apni full speed par kabhi bhi practice nahi karte the. Agar woh aisa karte toh unke aadmiyon ko vaastavikta par se yakeen uth jaata. Kya asal hai aur kya nakli, woh iska uttar hi dhoondhte reh jaate.

Sabhi aadmi jaante the ki unke Lord Renshu martial arts me behad mahir the. Kahi na kahi woh ye bhi vishvas rakhte the ki unke Lord ke paas kuch ancient martial arts ki vidyaein hai jo keval unke Lord ko hi aati hai.

Toh aise me agar Renshu ya Erica koi asadharan skills ka prayog karte bhi the toh log yahi samajhte the ki ye unke Lord ki hidden martial arts vidya hai. Kehna galat nahi hoga ki Renshu ke aadmi use kahi na kahi pracheen yoddha ke samaan samajhte the jiske paas aam shaktiyo se kahi zyada shaktiya hoti thi.

Aur, unka aisa sochna kahi na kahi dono Erica aur Renshu ke liye faydemand hi tha. Unki iss soch ke kaaran hi woh khul ke practice kar paate the.

Veer Renshu ki iss baat se bhi sehmat tha ki Erica frontline missions ke liye taiyaar nahi thi. Aur, woh iska kaaran bhali bhanti jaanta tha.

Hich-kichahat! Erica Renshu ke prati kya bhaav rakhti thi ye Veer jaanta tha. Uska hich-kichana hi hamesha uski haar ka kaaran hota tha.

Zaahir hai aisa vyakti frontline par khade hone ke laayak nahi. Abhi Erica ko aur samay aur practice ki zaroorat thi.

Renshu : Erica! Mein janta hu tum mere nirnay se hatash ho lekin, sachhaayi yahi hai ki tum abhi taiyaar nahi ho. Tumne jo vaar abhi mujhpe kiya, tumhari galti thi ki tum apne haath ke bal zameen par chali gayi. Aisa karne se tum uss haath par apna balance banaane ke liye majboor ho gayi. Isliye, tum haar gayi.

Erica : I-I know Dad!

Veer (smiles) : I see nothing wrong here!

Erica : Huh?

Renshu : Hmm?

Seedhi par baithe Veer ki awaaz jab unn dono ne suni toh dono hi uski taraf mudke use dekhe.

Veer : Erica ne jo combat technique use ki use mein pehle hi Crimson par istemal kar chuka hu. And, it was effective. Erica ke haarne ke kaaran kuch aur hi hai.

Renshu : Ohh!?

Veer : Uska hich-kichana sabse bada kaaran hai.

Erica : Th-That's- not it- I-

Veer : Woh tumhare saamne hich-kicha jaati hai. Ye baat toh tum bhi samajh hi gaye hoge. Par, iska ye matlab nahi hai ki woh sabke saamne hich-kichaye. Hai na?

Erica : O-Of course!

Veer : Garofano Erica ke liye ek perfect trainer ho sakti hai. Unfortunately, woh filhal yaha nahi hai. Aur, mein Erica ke liye sahi nahi. Because I can take her down in one move.

Erica : Wh-What!!? K-Kya kaha tumne? Zara firse toh kehna. Tum mujhe kamzor samajhte ho?

Veer : Mein bas sach keh raha hu. Aur, kuch nahi.

Erica : Sach? Oh really? Come on then! Mein bhi toh dekhu kitna dam hai Crimson naam ke aadmi ko maarne waale insaan me. You think you are so mighty? No one can take you on? Let me tell you, mister. Koi crimson vimson ko maar lene se tum kahi ke king nahi bann gaye, alright?

[Erica! Don't agitate him.]

'Calm down Genie! Dekho tum mein isko kaise maza chakhati hu abhi. Ise bas badi badi haakna hi aata hai. Hmph! I can't stand his lies now.'

Veer (smiles) : Ghar me baith ke spar karne se experience gain nahi hota madam. Jab ek system holder tumhari jaan ke peeche pada ho aur tum uski, tab jaa ke experience praapt hota hai. Aur, tab pata chalta hai ki hum kitne kamzor hai. Jab maut ke saamne insaan hota hai-

Erica : Blah blah blah...! Blah blah blah...! Lecture hi dena aata hai? Ya fir haath chalaana bhi aata hai?

Erica apna stance le chuki thi. Aur, woh bade hi gusse me Veer ko dekh rahi thi.

[Ohh!? Iss ladki ko pata bhi nahi hai ki ye kis se bhidne jaa rahi hai. Wese pata toh mujhe bhi nahi hai. Fufu~ After all, I haven't seen you fight, right? Crimson ki fight ke dauran meri koi aur personality rahi hogi.]

'Yeah! That personality was the best. Mujhe woh Pari wapas chahiye.'

[Y-You-! Tum firse shuru ho gaye dear? Oh come on! I'll make you forget her. Bas sahi samay aane do. Come on, show me what you've got. Zara mein bhi dekhu, mera host kitna taqatvar hai.]

Idhar unke chaaro orr jo aadmiyon ka jhund tha, woh ye sab dekh ke dang the. Veer ne jo kuch bhi baatein kari thi woh Hindi me kari thi. Zaahir hai ki Renshu aur Erica ne bhi Hindi me hi use jawab diya tha.

Bechare Renshu ke aadmiyon ko kuch samajh na aaya ki ye achanak se Erica aur Veer ladne kaise lage. Unhe toh sirf Chinese hi samajh aati thi. Veer aur unke beech kya baatein hui, ye unke palle na pad saki. Veer apna facade banaye hue tha.

Ye baat fel chuki thi ki Veer ko Chinese nahi aati. Aise me ab use wahi scenario ke saath aage badhna tha. Jaha ek tarah Renshu ke aadmi inn sab se confused the toh wahi dusri orr woh Renshu aur Erica ko dusri bhaasha me baat karte dekh garv bhi mehsoos kar rahe the.

"Lord aur Miss Erica ko dusri bhashaaye bhi aati hai?"

"Kyu nahi aayengi? Woh Order ke Lord hai. Ek se adhik bhaasha aana unke liye maamuli baat hai."

"Sahi kaha. Aur, ye hamare yaha aaya hua mehman. Kya ye bhi ek martial artist hai? Kya Miss Erica ab uske saath ladne jaa rahi hai?"

"Dekh ke toh yahi lag raha hai. Miss Erica gusse me lag rahi hai. Huh? Kahi isne kuch galat salat toh nahi keh diya Miss Erica ko?"

"Aisa hai toh hum ise chorrenge nahi."

"P-Par Lord chup chaap khade hai. Matlab aisa kuch nahi hua hoga."

"H-Haan ye baat bhi hai. Hume jaldbazi me kuch nahi karna chahiye."

"Sahi kaha. Abhi hume sirf dekhna chahiye jo saamne ho raha hai. Agar, Lord koi ishara karte hai toh hum action lenge."

"Haan! Ye sahi hai."

"Haan haan!"

Woh aapas me hi apni baatein rakhe jaa rahe the aur apne anumaan lagaaye jaa rahe the. Toh yaha Erica Veer ko shaant khada dekh aur bhi krodhit ho chuki thi.

Erica : Looks like you're scared to make the first move...! Fine then...! Here I come!

*Whooooooosshhhh*

Woh turant hi tez raftaar me uski orr aayi. Aur, seedhe hi mutthi kass Veer ke pait ki orr usne ek zordaar mukka maarna chaaha.

Erica ka mukka Veer ke pait ko jaise hi lagne ko aaya. Veer ne ek haath se turant hi uski kalaayi thaam li.

Kintu, apni kalaayi Veer ki pakad me aate hi Erica ke hontho par ek kutil muskaan fel gayi. Veer ne uski muskurahat ko dekha par uske chehre par koi bhaav nahi the.

Erica ne jaise pehle se kuch plan kar rakha tha. Usne ek jhatke me apne dusre haath me wahi hidden knife nikali aur seedhe Veer ki chin ki orr maarne ke liye le gayi.

*Swish*

Parantu...

Veer ne dusre haath se uski woh kalaayi bhi pakad li.

"Urgh~"

Erica ki dono kalaayi Veer ki giraft me thi. Na jaane kya soch ke woh Veer se direct bhidne aayi thi. Shayad use laga tha ki Veer uski hidden knife ko nahi pakad payega. Magar, parinaam toh kuch aur hi tha.

Veer ne uske dono haatho ko ghumaate hue moda.

"Ahhn~"

Erica virodh karti rahi lekin uski strength Veer ki strength se behad kam thi. Na chaahte hue bhi uske haath wese hi mudte chale gaye jaise Veer modta gaya. Veer ne unhe aapas me ghuma ke ek dusre se fassa diya tha. Uske baad usne uske dono haath upar kiye aur ek jhatke me Erica ko apne paas kheench liya.

Bechari Erica kisi besahara naari ki tarah Veer ke seene se jaa ke bhid gayi. Uske doodh Veer ke chhaathi me dhans gaye. Woh apna nichla honth dabaaye, ek aankh me aasu ki boond sajaaye, gusse se laal hoke Veer ko ghoor rahi thi. Par, woh bebas thi. Woh poori tarah se Veer ki kathputli bann chuki thi.

Skills ka prayog karne ke liye use khud ko churrana zaroori tha. Magar, woh yahi karne me naqamyab thi. Veer ne jaisa kaha tha, wesa kar dikhaya. Ek hi move me Erica ko usne paraast kar diya tha. Aur, ye sach saabit hota dekh Erica aur bhi khud ko dosh deti jaa rahi thi.

Baramde ke baahar neeche khade aadmi bhi Erica aur Veer ko iss tarah dekh ke stabdh the. Erica unke bageeche ka sabse khubsoorat phool thi. Aur, uss phool ko tod ke koi aur le jaa chuka tha. Unki nazro me Veer kisi kaale bhavre ki tarah tha jo phool par aake baith uska ras unke saamne maze se choos raha tha.

Ye dekhte hi aadmiyon ka gussa sarr chadh gaya. Aur, woh sab bhadak uthe.

"Iski zurrat kaise hui? M-Miss Erica ko-"

"Miss Erica haar gayi? Wo bhi itni buri tarah? N-Nahi! Iski himmat kaise hui Miss Erica ko iss tarah se pakadne ki? Aaj tak hum me se kisi ko unhe chheene tak ka mauka nahi mila. A-Aur ye ladka-"

"Huuuuhuuu~ M-Miss Ericaaaa~ *sob* Miss Erica!!!"

"Ye accha nahi hua. Iss ladke ne hamari Miss ka fayda uthaya hai. Hum ye bardaasht nahi karenge."

"Haan haan! Vidroh karenge hum!"

"Vidroh! Vidroh!"

"Miss Erica! Hum aapke saath hai."

"Miss Erica! Miss Erica!!!"

Sabhi ke sabhi Erica ka naam pukarne lage. Magar, Erica ka gussa har guzarte pal badhta jaa raha tha. Aadmiyon ki awaaz use aur batla rahi thi ki woh kitni kamzor thi.

Tabhi, Veer ki awaaz uske kaano me padi aur ek sihran uske shareer me daud gayi.

Veer : I've been through hell a lot of times...! You don't even know what the real danger means. Do you know why you lost?

Erica : !!??

Veer : Because you are weak!!!!

Erica ka badan thitur utha. Woh gusse me thar-thara rahi thi. Lekin, Veer ki baat ko jhutla nahi paa rahi thi. Kyuki, Veer shat-pratishat sach keh raha tha.

Erica : Tsk-!!!

Veer : I have faced death many times. You can't even imagine the chaos when 2 system holders fight each other without any restraint. You lost because you have no experience. You lost because you came at me, who's good in close combat.

Erica : ....

Veer : Tum ek medium ranged fighter ban sakti ho. Close ranged combat tumhara forte nahi hai. Close combat tumhe bas khud ki protection ke liye aana chahiye. Uss field me mat ghuso jidhar tumhari skills hi istemal na ho paaye.

Erica (growls) : Y-You-!!!

Woh poori tarah se haar chuki thi. Aur, itni buri tarah haari thi ki na sirf use Veer ki baaton ko sunana pad raha tha balki uske seene se chipke rehne par bhi woh majboor thi. Ek taraf bhayanak gussa uske andar ubaal le raha tha toh wahi hayaa ki ek parat bhi gaalo par chadh rahi thi.

Veer kuch aur deductions kar paata ki tabhi itne me-

“Lord! Lord! Lord Renshu-!!!”

Renshu ka ek aadmi baahar se bhaagte hue bheetar ko aaya.

Renshu : Hmm?

Aadmi : Sarkaar ki taraf se official aaye hai.

Uska bas itna hi kehna tha ki Renshu turant hi uth ke waha se chal diya. Veer ne Erica ko chorra aur Renshu ke peeche chal diya. Erica apni kalaayi ko thaame lambi lambi saansein bhari aur baad me unke peeche peeche chal di.

Hall me sabhi ikatr ho chuke the aur Veer ne jaisa socha tha bilkul wahi hua. Official yaha kaarya ki pragati dekhne hi aaya tha.

Official : Abhi tak kaam shuru bhi nahi hua hai? Ye kis tarah ki rann-neeti bana rahe hai aap Mister Renshu? Mujhe toh laga tha ab tak kaafi kuch ho chuka hoga.

Iss baar official Veer ke prati utna satark nahi tha. Isliye, usne bina jhijak ke apni baatein rakhni shuru kar di.

Renshu (frowns) : Aap ye baat jaante hai na ki ye kaam kitna kathin hai?

Official : Hahaha! Jaanta hu jaanta hu.

Renshu : Jangal me ghuste hi Legion ka ilaqa lag jaata hai. Unke hi ghar me ghus ke unke haath se mine lena agar itna hi asaan hai toh sarkar khud kyu nahi kar leti?

Official : Hahaha! Iska jawab mein pehle bhi de chuka hu aapko.

Renshu : Jaanta hu. Lekin, iss tarah se mein aage nahi badh sakta.

Official : Kya matlab?

Renshu : Hume army ki orr se thodi madad chahiye.

Official (frowns) : Army isme beech me nahi aayegi, ye baat mein pehle bhi aapko bata chuka hu.

Erica : Kyu nahi aayegi? Kya hamari safety important nahi? Agar hum jokhim utha rahe hai toh hamari hifazat ke liye bhi toh sarkar ko kuch karna hoga na?

Official (frowns) : Tch!!! Par orders ye hai ki-

Erica : Orders kuch bhi ho. Hum apni jaan iss tarah se khatre me nahi daalenge.

Official Erica ke ziddipann ko dekh aur bhi duwidha me fass gaya. Kuch derr tak kamre me bas khamoshi chhayi rahi. Uske baad woh bola,

Official : Kya chaahte hai aap?

Renshu : Hamari maang sadharan hai. Hume army ki taraf se kuch jawan chahiye jo hamare saath andar Legion ki territory me jaa sake.

Official : ???

Renshu : Zaahir hai, jawano ke paas saari bandooke aur unke equipments honge jis se hume kaafi madad hogi.

Official : Kitne?

Renshu : Jitne zyada ho sake utna behtar hai.

Official (frowns) : Mujhe baat karni hogi.

Woh uthate hue gusse me baahar ko gaya. Jaate jaate Veer ko usne dekha kintu, Veer ke chehre ke bhaav aise the jaise maano use kuch samajh me hi nahi aa raha tha ki kya ho raha hai. Ye dekh official mann hi mann thoda chinta-mukt ho gaya aur Veer ke prati uski jo savdhani thi woh bhi kam ho gayi.

Kuch derr baad woh andar wapas aaya. Uske haath me uska phone tha. Shayad kisi bade adhikari se uski baat hui thi.

Official : Theek hai! Hume ye manzoor hai.

Renshu : Oh!? Toh kitne?

Official : 6! Sirf 6! Sirf aur sirf 6 jawano ko hi sarkar bhej sakti hai. Uss se zyada nahi.

Erica : What??? 6?? Sirf 6? Waha picnic manaane nahi jaana hai. Sirf 6 jawano se kya hoga?

Official : Maine kaha na... Uss se zyada nahi.

Erica (frowns) : You-!!!!

Official : Agar zyada hi bhejne hote toh hum ye kaam aapko kyu saupte? Army bina bandook ke ladaayi lena nahi jaanti. Tribe ke log teer kamaan, bhaala aur na jaane kya kya hathyaar rakhte hai. Aise me unse bhidne ke liye aapse behtar aur kaun ho sakta hai? Aapke aadmi bhi toh talvaar, bhaala ye sab chalana jaante hai na?

Erica : Toh?

Official : Toh ye ki ise aise hi niptana hoga. Army ke 6 jawan aapki suraksha ke liye jayenge. Baaki, aapke aadmi bhi toh hai. Itne saare aadmiyon ka kya karoge aap?

Erica : Y-You-!!! T-Tum chaahte ho hum apne aadmi waha le jaaye? Unhe maut ke ghaat utaar de?

Official : Ye kisne kaha? Maut ke ghaat kyu utrenge woh? Woh bhi toh trained hai. Kya woh Legion ke kuch gang members ka saamna nahi kar sakte? Kya itna hi dum hai Order me? Kya maine kuch zyada hi aasha rakh li aapse? Matlab ye aapke bas ki baat nahi thi? Hmm?

Erica : Y-You freakin'-

Renshu : Theek hai! Mujhe manzoor hai. 6 jawaan!! Aaj ke aaj hi chahiye mujhe raat tak.

Official : Aaj?

Renshu : Hmm! Aaj! Khamoshi kayi din se chhaayi hui hai. Mujhe lag raha hai ki Legion aane waale 2 se 3 din me hum par hamla kar sakta hai. Aur, isliye unse pehle hume hamla karna hoga.

Official : Toh hamari orr se kab shuru hone waala hai?

Renshu (glances) : Aaj raat se!!! Aaj ki raat hi hum infiltrate karenge.

Erica : What??? Dad? Aaj? Abhi toh-

Renshu : Plans bann chuke hai. Maine pehle se hi sab soch rakha hai. Bas, mujhe apne aadmiyon ko instructions dene hai aur sab kuch settled hai.

Official : Hohohoho~ Kya baat hai. Jitna jaldi ho utna behtar hai. Waqai! Mujhe aapse yahi umeed thi. Jawaan raat tak pahuch jayenge. Aur-

Renshu : Hmm?

Official : Khoon kharaabe ki chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi hai. Jitna behta hai behne do. Bas... Mine hamare haatho me honi chahiye.

Erica (glares) : Y-You-!!!

Official : Bade sir tak ye khabar pahucha dunga mein ki aaj raat se kaam shuru ho jayega. Media aur press ko tab tak ke liye alag samachar dikhane par hum majboor kar denge. Koi bhi media Order aur Legion ya fir Mine ka zikr nahi karegi. Jab tak ye maamla sulajh nahi jaata, tab tak media ko iss baat ki bhanak tak nahi lagegi.

Renshu : Ohh!?

Official : Isliye, mujhe umeed hai ki aap apna kaam acche se karenge. Aur, chinta ki koi baat nahi hai. Aapki image na bigde iske liye bhi ek acchi si script hamare kuch anubhavi patrakaro ne taiyar kar ke di hai. Yahi media me darshayi jayegi. Jis se aapke upar keechad nahi uchhlega.

Erica : Keechad nahi ucchlega? Pehle hi keechad ucchal chuka hai. Kya guarantee hai iski ki log Dad ko doshi nahi thehrayenge?

Official : Har desh me kuch na kuch log aise rehte hi hai jo disha ke vipreet jaa ke udne ki koshish karte hai. Magar, chinta ki zaroorat nahi hai. Adhiktar log aapke upar vishvas banaye rakhenge iski guarantee mein leta hu.

Erica : Tch!!

Official : Chalta hu... Jawaan raat tak pahuch jayenge. Umeed hai unhe aap acche se hi treat karenge. Woh yaha aapki hifazat ke liye hai. Aur.... *smiles* Good luck!!! Hamari mulaqat ab shayad kuch din baad hi hogi. Agar, aap tab tak zinda bane rahe toh. Meri shubhkamnaye aapke saath. Chalta hu!

Itna bol woh waha se nikal gaya. Erica ko uski shaqal dekh ke hi gussa aa jaata tha. Akhir, samajhta kya tha apne aap ko?

Erica (glances) : D-Dad-?

Renshu : Erica! Aaj raat hi hume hamla karna hoga. Ab aur derr nahi kar sakte.

Erica : P-Par-!?

Veer : Uss se pehle mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai.

Renshu : Hmm? Kaisi baat?

Veer : Tumne kaha tha ki tumne ek letter uss caller ko bheja tha. Woh letter tumne kaise bheja? Uss caller ne address bataya tha apna?

Renshu : Nahi! Usne mujhe apna address nahi bataya tha. Usne sirf itna hi kaha tha ki woh USA se hai.

Veer : Toh fir tumne use letter kaise bheja?

Renshu : Maine bas apne pigeon ko USA ke Houston Port par bheja tha. Aur, ye baat maine use batayi thi ki mera pigeon port par iss din pahuchega. Pigeon jab wapas aaya toh uske perr par jo letter maine baandha tha woh nahi tha. Iska matlab uss caller ne zaroor woh letter mere pigeon ke perr se nikaal liya hoga.

Veer : I see!

Erica : Par, woh letter abhi tak khola nahi gaya hai. Meri skill hai ek. Blemish!!! Harr letter par maine wo skill mark ki thi. Agar, letter ke saath koi bhi chedh chaadh hoti hai toh mujhe pata lag jaata hai.

Veer : Jaise ki?

Erica : Jaise ki agar letter khola gaya ho, ya faad diya gaya ho, ya fir use marod diya gaya ho. Mujhe turant hi pata lag jayega. Magar, filhal letter ke saath aisa kuch bhi nahi hua hai. Tumne aur Garofano ne jab apne letters khole the toh mujhe turant yaha pata chal gaya tha.

Veer : That's an interesting skill...! Kya ye insaano par bhi kaam karti hai?

Erica : Nahi! Sirf non-living things par.

Veer : I see-!

Veer, Renshu aur Erica yaha hall me baith ke baat kar rahe the toh wahi Divya apne kamre me thi aur woh apne kaamo me lagi hui thi.

Divya ka kaam yaha information batorne ka tha. Woh nahi jaanti thi ki Veer yaha bhala ab kyu ruke hue tha. Parantu, woh apna samay barbaad nahi kar sakti thi. FBCC ke Director ka call aa chuka tha aur woh ab unke direct contact me thi.

Director : You're late, rookie! Any progress on the mission?

Divya : Ah! I- I'm investigating, M-Miss.

Director : Call me Director!

Divya : Yes, Director!

Director : And? What did you investigate?

Divya : Something is not right, Director. Just now an official came from the government. I couldn't hear what they talked about.

Director : An official huh?

Divya : That's right!

Director : It's probably to pressurize them.

Divya : Huh?

Director : A battle will happen soon, rookie. Just stay there and investigate. You don't need to move into a battlefield. It's bound to happen. No one can stop it.

Divya : B-But-

Director : Don't stress over the protocol. You have free rein to do whatever you want. Why so nervous? Be confident! You work under me!

Divya : That's-

Director : My subordinates don't need to go and put their life on risks. Their greatest virtue is their loyalty. Stay loyal to FBCC...! And... Stay loyal to me! I hope you can do that. Am I right, rookie?

Divya : Y-Yes-!!!

Director : Call me when you see fit.

*Call ends*

Divya nahi jaanti thi ki yaha chal kya raha tha. Woh yaha bas chhip ke jo bhi information ikhatti kar paa rahi thi woh kar rahi thi. Use Veer se bhi jald se jald baat karni thi.

Official ke jaane ke kuch derr baad hall ka darwaza khula aur Veer, Renshu, Erica andar se baahar nikle. Veer ko dekhte hi Divya uske sameep aayi.

Divya : Veer!

Veer : Hmm?

Divya : Mujhe tumse akele me kuch baat karni hai.

Veer ne Renshu ki orr dekha toh Renshu ne haami bhari aur Erica ke sang woh dusre raaste chala gaya. Ye waqt apne aadmiyon ko nirdesh dene ka sahi tha.

Divya idhar Veer ko kheechte hue apne kamre me le gayi aur turant hi andar se darwaza band kar di.

Divya : Tum yaha ab kya kar rahe ho Veer?

Veer : Hmm? Kya maine bataya nahi tha? Jab tak mein Miss Garofano ke saath deal nahi kar leta tab tak mein wapas nahi jaunga.

Divya : Veer!! Tum samajhte kyu nahi? Yaha jald hi jung chhidne waali hai. Maine tumhari madad kar di hai na? Miss Garofano ko abhi formalities poori karne me kayi din lagenge. Tab tak tum yaha nahi ruk sakte.

Veer : Aur tum? Kya tumhare liye khatra nahi hai?

Divya : Mein akeli nahi hu, Veer. Mere saath FBCC ke escorts aur security hai. Agar, kuch hoga toh mein yaha se turant nikal sakti hu. Par, tumhara kya?

Veer : Mein abhi nahi jaa sakta, Divya. Abhi toh Miss Garofano ko humne churraya hai. Unhe kuch din lagenge toh mein ruk jaunga. Par aise mein wapas kaise jaa sakta hu?

Divya (shouts) : Veer tum pagal ho kya? Jaan zaroori hai ya paisa? Tumhe meri koi baat samajh kyu nahi aa rahi hai? Yaha ladayi hone waali hai. Koi aisi wesi ladayi nahi, laashe bichhengi. Dono groups aapas me bhidne waale hai. Aur, aise me tum beech me fasse reh jaoge. Itni si baat tumhe samajh me nahi aa rahi hai?

Apni orr Divya ki chinta dekh Veer khush bhi tha parantu, ye uske liye ek adhchan bhi thi.

Veer use sirf baato se ab nahi behla sakta tha. Use kuch na kuch baatein ab bataane ki zaroorat thi.

Veer : Divya...! Darasal-

Divya : ???

Veer : Darasal...! Tumhe yaad hai na France me meri kya haalat thi?

Divya (nods) : Hmm!

Veer : Tab, Mister Renshu France me hi kuch kaam se aaye hue the.

Divya : Huh?

Veer : Aur, unhone meri jaan bachayi thi ek samay par. Jab mere peeche police padi thi. Unhone meri madad ki thi. Toh mere upar unka ek ehsaan hai.

Divya : Samjhi! Sab samjhi! Ab samajh aaya ki tum kyu itna yaha rukne ke liye ade hue the. Toh ye baat thi. Par, iska ye matlab nahi hai Veer ki tum apni jaan khatre me daalo. Arre waha tumhara poora parivar tumhari raah dekh raha hoga. Bhagwan na kare par agar tumhe yaha kuch ho gaya toh kya haal hoga unka waha pe-!?

Veer : Divya-!



Divya : N-Nahi-! Mein iss baar tumhari chikni chupdi baaton me aane waali nahi hu. Mujhe seedhe Suhana ko hi batana padega. Woh tumhare parivar waalo ko khabar kar degi aur fir tumhe yaha se jaana hi padega. Yahi karna hoga warna tum aise hi yaha par-

Veer : Divyaaaaa-!!!

Veer ne iss baar seedhe uske kandho ko pakad use thaama. Divya apni nazre upar kar use dekhne par majboor ho gayi. Kintu, Veer ke chehre ke bhaav dekhte hi uski bolti band ho gayi. Veer use pyaar aur vinamrata se dekh raha tha.

Veer : Meri baat sunogi?

Divya : V-Veer-!?

Veer ka haath uske kandho se fisalte hue neeche ko gaya aur uski patli kamar ko usne apne dono hatheliyo me bhar liya. Divya uske harr sparsh se thitur rahi thi par zara bhi virodh nahi kari.

Usne punah apna ek haath upar le jaake Divya ki thuddi ko thaam ke upar kiya aur uski aankhon me aankhein daalte hue dekh ke bola,




Veer : You know what-!? Sometimes, I think... Nick jaisa aadmi tumhe deserve nahi karta. Tumhe nahi lagta ki tumhe ek asli mard ki zaroorat hai?

Kehte hue Veer ke haath ka angutha Divya ki thuddi se hote hue uske gulaabi hontho par firne laga. Dabaav banaate hue Veer uske nichle honth ko apne anguthe se ragadne me laga tha. Aur, Divya pe ek alag hi suroor chadh raha tha.




Veer uski kamar thaame use peeche le gaya. Divya ka perr bed se takraaya aur agle hi pal dono-

"Ahh~"

Divya bistar par thi aur Veer uske theek upar. Aankhein chaar ho rakhi thi. Veer dheere dheere jhukta gaya aur uske hontho ke qareeb badhne laga. Divya sab kuch dekh rahi thi, sunn rahi thi fir bhi jaan ke Veer ko peeche nahi kar rahi thi. Aur, kahi na kahi ye baat use aur bhi bechain kar rahi thi. Kyu? Woh ek shadi-shuda aurat thi. Uske bawajood Veer ko iss tarah apne qareeb aane dena?

*Kiss*

Aur labb se labb bhid gaye. Pal bhar ke liye Divya ki aankhein feli par fir dheere dheere woh band hoti chali gayi. Aur, uska ek haath apne aap hi kab Veer ke sarr ke peeche baalo me chala gaya use pata hi na chala.



Chumban shuruati daur me bas hontho ka aapas me mel milap thi. Par, jald hi woh ek alag hi roop leli. Kab woh aakramak aur ek janglee chumban me tabdeel ho gayi dono ko hi pata na chala. Dono kisi bhooke jaanvar ki tarah ek dusre ke muh ko choos rahe the. Labo ko chaba rahe the aur jeebh ko aapas me lipta ke ek dusre ke andhruni muh ke swaad ko chakh rahe the.



Veer ka haath jald hi Divya ke kapde ke andar ghusa aur seedha uske sudol stano ko jakad liya.

"Nnghh~"

Divya kasmasayi. Veer ka haath bra ke andar jo tha. Usne uski nangi doodh ki thaili ko apne haath me bhar rakha tha.

Veer : They've definitely grown bigger. Kya mere liye tum inhe bada kar rahi thi?

Divya : Ahhh~ N-Nonsense-! Nngh~ ♡

Veer ka dusra haath saanp ki tarah Divya ke jism par rengte hue neeche gaya, usne furti me uski jeans ki button kholi aur apna haath andar sarka diya.

*Squelch*

"Ahhhnnn~"

Divya apne taangein aapas me mod ke sikod li. Veer ka haath uske guptang ke upar tha.

Veer (surprised) : It's wet?

*Squelch*

Veer ne aashcharya me Divya ko dekha toh woh bechari sharma ke apna chehra fer li. Isme uski galti nahi thi. Veer ka sparsh hi aisa tha ki uske chheete hi uska ang ang garam hone lagta tha. Uska seena zoro se upar neeche ho raha tha. Badan me garmi badh rahi thi. Aur, neeche se woh paniya chuki thi.

Veer ne mehsoos kiya ki choot par halke halke baal the. Yaha aane se pehle Divya ne shave kiya hoga par waha se nikle aur yaha par rukne ke kaaran itne dino me halke halke baal guptang ke upar aa chuke the. Veer ko iss se koi dikkat nahi thi. Ulta, ye use aur bhi uttejit kar raha tha. Uska haath Divya ki bur ko sehlaane laga. Aur, bechari Divya sisakti hui bistar par machalne lagi.

*Squelch* *Squelch*

"Nnnn~ Ahhhnnn!! V-Veer-! Ruko-! Uuuuhhhhh! N-Nahi- Ahhhhnnnn~"

Veer : You didn't shave? Hmm! Tumhe samay hi nahi mila hoga, right? But you know Divya...! I like the way you are...

Divya (blushes) : S-Stop-!!! I-

Veer : It's okay! Leave it to me!

Divya (blushes) : Wh-What-!? N-No-! Veer-!!!!

"Mmphh-!!!!???"

Par, uske shabdo ko beech me hi ek chumban ke zariye virhaam laga diya gaya.

Divya ke kapde ek ek karke utarte gaye. Woh naam maatra ka virodh karti rahi, par jaise uska badan uski baato ke vipreet jaa raha tha.

Nagn haalat me aate hi usne apne doodh aur choot ko apne haatho se dhak liya. Veer khud bhi sirf underwear me tha. Punah Veer ke jism ko dekh Divya ki saansein tez ho uthi. Ye kis dal-dal me girti jaa rahi thi woh? Par, fir woh iss se nikal kyu nahi paa rahi thi?

Veer ne samay zaaya nahi kiya. Usne Divya ki dono taangein pakad ke use neeche kheencha.

"Aaaaahhh~"

Taango ko felaya aur Divya ke haath ko zabardasti hataaya. Choot theek uske saamne thi. Iss choot ki serr woh pehle bhi kar chuka tha. Divya jaanti thi ki aage Veer uske sath kya karne waala tha. Kintu, fir bhi-

Fir bhi uske andar se virodh kyu nahi aa raha tha? Use toh ab tak Veer ko dhakel ke apne se alag kar dena chahiye tha. Fir bhi yaha uski bur lund lene ke liye paniyaayi hui thi. Iss baat ko woh hazam hi nahi kar paa rahi thi.

Veer ne jaise uske mann ko padh liya. Woh muskuraya aur usne apna haath theek Divya ke faile hue perr ke beech me uski bur par rakha,

Divya (moans) : Ahhhnnn~

Veer : Soch rahi ho ki kyu mujhe apne se alag nahi kar paa rahi. Hai na?

Divya : ....

Veer : Kyuki, tumhara badan mujhe maang raha hai, Divya. Ek asli mard ko. Tumhara jism asli mard ki pehchaan jaanta hai. Kya kabhi Nick ke touch se aisa react karta hai tumhara badan?

Divya ne koi jawab na diya. Uski khamoshi hi uska jawab thi.

Veer (smiles) : Stay quiet! I'm coming...

Woh hairat me Veer ko dekhi. Par, tab tak Veer ne dastak de di thi.

Divya (gasps) : Ahhhnnn-!!!!???

Zyada foreplay ki aaj zaroorat hi nahi thi. Divya itni geeli thi neeche se pehle hi ki Veer ko neeche muh lagaane ki bhi zaroorat nahi padi. Jaise maano Divya kayi saalo se uski raah taaq rahi thi.

Veer ka bada sudol gatheela lund apne andar lete hi Divya ki saansein pal bhar ke liye atak ke reh gayi. Uski kamar ne akadte hue bistar par hi ek arch bana diya. Aur, Veer fir na ruka.

Dhakke pe dhakke aur dana dan chod ke aaj woh Divya ka poora ras pee jaana chahta tha. Aaj woh Divya ko iss qadar nichodne wala tha ki Divya kayi dino tak sex ke baare me soche bhi na.

Pati hone ke bawajood-

"Nnnhghhh~ Ahhhnnnn! Ahh! Ahhhn! Ahhnn! Nnn~ Mmmm-! Aa hnnn!! Veer~ ♡"

Divya apni se chhoti umr ke naujavan ladke se apni bur kamar hila hila ke chudwa rahi thi.

Agar, Veer use aaj garbhvati bhi bana de, toh bhi woh Veer ko kuch nahi kehne wali thi. Woh iss qadar chudayi ke nashe me doobi hui thi ki use iss baat ki khabar bhi nahi thi ki woh yaha FBCC ke mission ke liye aayi thi.

Uski kulbulati bur Veer ka lund dobara lene ke liye na jaane kab se tadap rahi thi. Usne socha tha woh pehli aur akhiri baar tha. Par-

"Ahhhnnn~ Nnnnghh~ O-Ohhhh!!! Aaaaaaa~ Aaaa~ Aaaaahhhhh-!!!"

Uski siskiya batla rahi thi ki yeh khel ab aise hi chalne waala tha.

Kamra thapp thapp ki awaaz se bhar gaya. Divya ki sisikiyaan nirantar uske muh se nikal rahi thi. Paseene se dono ke badan bheeg chuke the aur ek dusre ke badan se ragad kha rahe the. Divya ke doodh, uske khade nipple Veer ki chhaathi se bhid ke ragad rahe the.

"Aahnnm~ Ahhn~ V-Veer-!!!!"

"Mmmmphhhhhh ⁠♡"

Woh Veer ko choomti jaa rahi thi. Bechare Nick ko bhanak tak nahi thi ki uski patni apne poore kapde utaar ke nangi hoke Veer se chud rahi thi. Apne pati ke baare me sochte hi Divya ki choot apne aap hi aur kass gayi. Veer ke lund ko woh aur apne andar dhasvaane lagi.

Kahi na kahi Nick se chhip ke Veer se chudna... Use aur bhi adhik uttejit kar raha tha. Jaise woh poori tarah se Veer ke rang me rang jaana chaahti thi. Apne poore badan par Veer ke paseene ki mehek ko chadha lena chaahti thi. Har ang ko Veer ke haatho se chhiwana chaahti thi. Aur, Veer ke dwara diye gaye nishaan aur chhaap apne jism par utaar ke rakh lena chaahti thi.

"Urgh!!!"

Veer skhalit hone waala tha. Woh nazdeek tha. Sex protection hamesha hi ON rehta tha toh use pata tha ki veerya kaha giraana hai.

Divya (gasps) : A-Andar nahi Veer-!!! Ahnnn~ Andar n-nahi-!!! Nnnnnnnn~ iiiyyaaaaa~

*Splurt*

Par, Veer ka veerya Divya ki bur ki andhruni deewaro ko rangta hua andar apna raasta tay kar bharta chala gaya.

Divya ki kamar akad ke reh gayi. Uski pakad Veer ki baah par itni mazboot thi ki lag raha tha maans ka tukda hi noch legi woh. Uska badan thiturta raha. Ek ek boond use apne andar fisalti hui mehsoos ho rahi thi.

Aur, fir Veer ke bol use apne kaan ke paas sunayi diye.

Veer : Now, please~ Let me do this my way Divya. Aur, tum kuch nahi kahogi. Kisi ko bhi nahi. Suhana ko bhi nahi.

Divya kuch kehne ki haalat me nahi thi. Woh pehle hi do baar itni buri tarah jhar chuki thi ki woh muh dikhane laayak bhi nahi thi. Poori bedsheet uske orgasm ke kaaran neeche se geeli ho chuki thi. Aur, ab use sab samajh me aa chuka tha.

Woh khud par gussa bhi thi aur nahi bhi. Veer ne uske saath ye sab use chup karaane ke liye kiya tha. Jab ye baat use samajh aayi toh uski palke neeche ko jhuk gayi.

Divya : Toh tumne mujhe chup rakhne ke liye ye sab-!?

Dil par ek adrishya bhaar achanak se aake baith gaya. Lag raha tha jaise kisi ne uske kaleje ko jakad liya tha. Na kuch bola jaa raha tha aur na hi kuch sunane ki himmat ho rahi thi.

Par, Veer ke agle shabdo ne use nigaahein upar karne par majboor kar diya.

Veer : Bilkul nahi! Tumhe kya lagta hai? Kya maine tumhare saath ye sab tumhare chup rehne ke liye kiya? Kya tum mujhe aisa samajhti ho? Maine tumhare saath ye sab kiya kyuki mein tumhare saath ye sab karna chahta tha. Mujhe tumhari zaroorat thi. Aur, mein tumhe iss waqt paana chaahta tha. Maine ye sab kiya kyuki mein uss subah ko firse jeena chaahta tha. Mein tumhe firse mehsoos karna chaahta tha.

Divya ki saansein punah tez hui. Woh Veer se nazre nahi mila rahi thi. Kya waqai Veer use mehsoos karna chahta tha? K-Kya waqai-!? Woh uske badan ko paana chahta tha? Apni se kayi saal umr me badi mahila ke prati kya waqai woh aakarshit tha?

Veer agar use sirf bhogna bhi chaahta tha toh bhi Divya ke liye ye ek sukhad baat hi thi. Iska matlab tha ki woh Veer jaise naujavan ko bhi apni orr mohit kar sakti thi.

*Kuch derr baad*

Raat lag chuki thi. Veer, Divya, Renshu aur Erica sab ke sab baahar ke aangan me khade hue the. Aur, sarkar ke dwara bheje gaye 6 jawaan bhi aa chuke the. Har ek ke haath me modern gun thi aur aadhunik equipment se woh lade hue the.

Renshu : Miss Divya. You are from FBCC. There's no need to go further into this matter. There's only one thing which awaits us now. It's war.

Divya : I-I know-!

Renshu : If you want information I can give you that. But there's no need to risk your life.

Divya : Yes! I know! Don't worry! I won't go too deep.

Renshu (nods) : Hmm!

Veer ne dekha ki Erica ke gaal laal the. Aur, woh gusse me uski orr dekh rahi thi. Fir kabhi woh Divya ko dekhti aur wapas use ghoorne lagti.

'Huh?'

[Fufufu~]

'Kya hua?'

[It's nothing. Nothing!]

'Urgh!'

Renshu (glances) : Veer?

Veer : Hmm?

Renshu : Zara mere saath andar aao.

Veer (nods) : Hmm!

Veer jab Renshu ke sang andar aaya toh Renshu ne mudte hue seedhe uss se sawaal kiya,

Renshu : Tum hathiyaar istemal kyu nahi karte?

Veer : Huh?

Renshu : Apne upar jitni layers chadhaoge utna behtar hoga. Kehne ka matlab ye hai ki tumhe jitni zyada cheezein aayengi dushman ko tumhe haraane me utni hi mushqil jayegi. Agar haath me hathiyar hoga toh pehle dushman tumhare hathiyar ko tumse dur karne me aadhi taaqat laga dega. Aur, uske baad tum close combat me expert toh ho hi... Tum samajh rahe ho na mein kya kehna chaah raha hu?

Veer (nods) : I know! Tumhari baat sahi hai. Actually, maine pehle kabhi koi hathiyaar istemal nahi kiya. Lekin, karna zaroor chahunga. Par, abhi iska waqt nahi hai. Filhal, mein jin cheezon se familiar hu mujhe unse hi kaam chalana padega.

Renshu : Hmm! Battle ke baad...! Mein tumhe ek cheez dunga. Hope, tum tab tak date rahoge.

Veer : Sure!

Renshu (frowns) : Ab mudde ki baat...!

Achanak hi uski awaaz bhaari ho gayi aur nigaahein gambheer hote hue Veer par tann gayi.

Renshu : Xishuangbanna ke jangal me ghusne ke do mukhya raaste hai. Ek seedha seedha hai jaha se tourists ko le jaaya jaata hai. Magar, baahar se hi unhe sab kuch dikha ke wapas le aate hai. Kyuki, uske aur andar jaate hi Legion ki territory lag jaati hai, jaha bina unki anumati ke ghusna matlab khud ki jaan gawa dena jaisa hai.

Veer : Aur dusra-!?

Renshu : Dusra raasta hai East side se. Jab hum sab seedhe ghus rahe honge, tumhe east side jaana padega. Uske baad waha se ghusna hoga.

Veer : I see!

Renshu : Seedhe seedhe ghusoge toh Legion ke poore logo ka saamna karna padega. Ye aam log nahi honge. Ye tribal log hai. Inhe hathiyaar chalaana bhi aata hai, ye janglee janvar ka istemal bhi kar sakte hai aur andhere ka fayda utha ke traps me fasa bhi sakte hai.

Veer : Aur agar East side se jaaya jaaye toh?

Renshu (frowns) : Jaw Long!!!

Veer : ...

Renshu : East side par tumhe Jaw Long milega. Woh akela hoga. Lekin, ye baat tum aur mein acche se jaante hai ki woh akela kya kar sakta hai.

Veer : Mujhe uske baare me jankari do kuch.

Renshu : Koi jankari nahi hai.

Veer : What-!????

Renshu : Na hi mein uss se kabhi bhida hu aur na hi kabhi mila hu.

Veer : Wh-What!? What do you mean?

Renshu : Tumne sahi suna. Maine use bas ek baar dekha hai, aur wo bhi andhere me dekha tha maine use. Dur se hi maine use check kiya tha aur mujhe pata lag gaya tha ki woh ek system holder hai.

Veer : P-Par ye kaise ho sakta hai? Tumne ek baar bhi-

Renshu : Jaw Long leader zaroor hai Legion ka magar woh baahar nahi aata hai. Sarkaar ki taraf se jo bhi baat karne andar unke ilaaqe me aaj tak gaya hai, toh hamesha unki baat 'Ken' se hi hui hai.

Veer : Ken?

Renshu : Long Tribe me hi ek aadmi hai jo sabhi tribe ke logo ko apne niyantran me rakhta hai. Tum use vice captain ke roop me samjho. Aur, asli captain Jaw Long ko.

Veer : Samjha!!!

Renshu : Jo bhi baatein hoti hai, sab Ken hi karta hai. Jaw Long unki hifazat karne ke liye zimmedar hai. Wahi sabse bada kaaran hai jo Long Tribe waale itna uchhalne lage hai.

Veer : Toh tumne kab Jaw Long ko dekh liya?

Renshu : Sarkaar ke jab kuch officials ko Long Tribe ne maar peet ke agwa kar liya tha toh samjhaute ke roop me mein unse baat karne gaya tha. Tab Ken se hi meri baat hui thi. Lautate waqt mujhe Jaw Long ki chhavi nazar aayi thi. Woh dur khada hua tha. Theek se mujhe dikhaayi nahi diya, par mein daave ke saath keh sakta hu ki woh Jaw Long hi tha.

Veer : Damn it!!! This is getting more and more complicated. Agar hamare haath me uske baare me kuch nahi hoga toh hum ladenge kaise?

Renshu : Aur, isliye ab sabse zaroori sawaal puchta hu.

Veer : Huh?

Renshu : Which path do you want to take? East side? Ya fir straight way?

Veer : That's-

Renshu (frowns) : Agar tum straight way chunte ho toh tumhare saath Erica rahegi. Aur, saath hi saath mere sabhi aadmi tum dono ke support ke liye rahenge.

Veer : ...

Renshu : Par, agar tum East side chunte ho. Toh, tumhe akele jaana hoga.

Veer : ???

Renshu : Apne saath waha kisi aur ko le jaana matlab use maut ke ghaat utaarna. Erica Jaw Long se bhidne ke liye taiyaar nahi hai. East side path se jo bhi jayega wo akela hi jayega. Ab ya toh tum jao, ya fir mein. Hum dono ke alawa ye kaam aur koi yaha nahi kar sakta. Maine tumhe apna nirnay lene ki chooth di hai, Veer. Mein apne faisle tum par thopna nahi chaahta.

Veer : ...

Renshu : Meri maano toh tumhe straight way hi chunana chahiye. Erica tumhare saath rahegi aur tum acche se unke camps me infiltrate kar unhe hara sakte ho. Koshish karna ki khoon kam se kam bahe. Maarne ki bajaye agar unhe neutralize kar sako toh behtar hoga. Akhir, woh bhi hamare desh ka hi hissa hai. Sarkaar ko toh bas mine se matlab hai. Isliye, ise mein apne dhang se karunga. Na ki unke dhang se.

Veer kuch kehta ki tabhi uske mann me ek ghanti baji,

*Ding*

[Mission : Be the saviour.
Description : Infiltrate into the Jaw Long's territory from the East side and decimate him.]

Mission toh Veer ne padh liya tha. Kintu, jaise hi uski nazar neeche Mission ke rewards par gayi uske badan ke poore ruye khade ho gaye. Uski nazar reward par se hatt hi nahi rahi thi.

Ye lakho points se bhi kayi guna keemti tha. Veer chaah ke bhi ise kabhi haath se jaane nahi de sakta tha. Ye reward toh uska hi tha.

Renshu ne jab Veer ko dekha toh wo bhi utna hi stabdh tha. Kyuki, Veer akela nahi tha.

Renshu : T-Tumhe mission mila?

Veer : H-Huh? *nods* Haan!

Renshu : Kya mila?

Veer (smiles) : Sorry! Renshu! But I'm going to the East side.

Renshu (sighs) : Pata tha mujhe...!

Veer : Tumhe bhi mila hai?

Renshu (nods) : Mission ye hai ki mujhe unke camps me infiltrate kar mine tak ka raasta clear karna hai aur mine hathiyana hai.

Veer : Ohh!

Renshu : M-Mujhe laga tha ki- ki Jaw Long se bhidne ka mission mujhe milega. Par-

Veer : Well-!? I can't do anything about it.

Renshu : Nahi! Wo baat nahi hai. Mein nahi chahta ki sirf mission ke liye tum apni jaan jokhim me daalo. Veer, mein apna mission fail kar sakta hu. Tumhe agar East side nahi jaana hai toh tum rehne do. Straight way jao. Zyada se zyada hum dono ko penalty lagegi aur kya-!? Aur, wese bhi-

Veer (smiles) : Renshu!

Renshu : ???

Veer : Jab mein apni aakhiri saansein gin raha tha tab tumne hi meri jaan bachayi thi. It's time to pay back that debt now.

Veer apne haatho ko strech kar khada hua.

Renshu : P-Par-

Veer : Leave that Jaw Long to me. Don't worry! I'll make it out alive.

Renshu samajh chuka tha ki ab Veer ko manaana mushqil hi nahi namumkin tha. Isliye, usne iss par behas nahi kari.

Renshu : Booby traps ka dhyaan rakhna Veer. Also, andar jaate hi tumhe Lancang Mekong ki nadi bhi milegi. Woh nadi kayi jagah alag alag nehro me batati hai. Toh tumhe andar jangal me kayi saare pul dekhne ko mil jayenge. Ghabrane ki zaroorat nahi hai, bas traps ka dhyaan rakhna.

Veer : Okay!

Renshu : Aur, sabse pehla pul jo padega, woh sabse bada pul hoga. Wahi hai main entrance. Use cross karte hi tum Jaw Long ki territory me ghus chuke hoge. Waha se satark ho jaana. Iske alawa mere paas aur kuch dene ke liye nahi hai. Ye ek map hai unki Territory ka. Ise rakh lo. Kaam aayega.

Veer ne haami bharte hue uss map ko fold kar apne jeb me rakh liya. Usne Garofano dwara di gayi uski wahi kaali shirt pehni hui thi. Saath hi uske upar ek kaali jacket. Woh all black outfit me tha. Jaan boojh ke kyuki, andhere me ye uske liye behtar tha.

Jacket ki andhruni pockets me Garofano ki kuch needles bhi khusi hui thi, saath hi uska woh zeher bhi ek sheeshi me rakha hua tha. Usne Veer ko ye sab pehle hi de diya tha. Magar, woh ye nahi jaanti thi ki Veer ant me Jaw Long se bhidne hi jayega.

Agar, abhi woh yaha hoti toh use Jaw Long ke paas jaane tak nahi deti. Kintu, uski anupasthiti Veer ke liye zaroori thi.

Renshu aur Veer baahar wapas aaye. Renshu ke aadmi poore josh me jangal me ghusne ke liye taiyaar the. Abhi raat ke 9 baj rahe the par sabhi ki aankhon se neend gaayab thi. Unme tha toh bas josh, junoon aur ladne ka jazba.

Erica ne jab apne Dad ko baahar aate dekha toh woh unke qareeb jaate hue puchi,

Erica : Dad?

Renshu : Hmm?

Erica : K-Kya baat kar rahe the aap?

Renshu : Veer-!!!

Erica : Hmm?

Renshu : Veer East side jayega.

Uska bas itna kehna tha ki Erica ki aankhein hairat me fel gayi aur uska muh khula ka khula reh gaya. Inn chand shabdo ka matlab aur bhaar dono bhali bhaanti jaanti thi woh.

East side jaane ka matlab tha akele jaana aur Jaw Long se bhidna. Agle hi shan, usne Veer ko dekha. Parantu, iss baar uski aankhon me kuch aur tha.

Woh kuch sochti hui Veer ke nazdeek gayi. Usne ek jhatke me Veer ki collor pakdi...

Veer : Huh?

Veer ki shirt ki fir ek button kholi. Neeche khade jitne bhi Renshu ke aadmi the woh ye nazara dekh ke baukhla chuke the.

"N-Nahi! Ye mein kya dekh raha hu?"

"Y-Ye kaise ho sakta hai? Keh do ki ye jhooth hai. *sob* Miss Ericaaaa~"

"Subah isi ladke ne aapki be-izzati kari thi Miss Erica. Aap aisa kaise kar sakti ho?"

"Miss Erica ko kahi-!? Kahi unhe pyaar toh nahi ho gaya?"

"Madarchod-!!! Chup!! Hamari Miss Erica kisi aere gaire ke pyaar me nahi pad sakti. Y-Ye sab zaroor unki chaal hogi. Woh pyaar se uss ladke ko behlana chahti hai. Taaki, agli baar sparring me ye ladka unka deewana hone ke kaaran haar jaaye."

"S-Sahi kaha. Ye tactic hai. Akhir- Miss Erica hume kaise chorr sakti hai? Hum unke number one fan hai. Hahaha! Kya dimag lagaya hai Miss Erica ne. Hum unki tactic ko pehchanane me itni der laga diye. Tch! Hume aur practice ki zaroorat hai."

Erica ko ek ek baat sunayi de rahi thi. Uske maathe ki nass phatne ko aa rahi thi. Agar, yaha par Veer, Divya aur uske Dad na hote toh iss waqt usne unn aadmiyon ko dho dho ke unka bhurta bana diya hota. Fir bhi ek gehri saans lete hue usne khud ko shaant kiya.

Veer ki kholi gayi shirt ki button ke baad usne shirt ko felaya, andar ki vest ko dekha aur wapas se shirt ki button laga ke woh mud ke jaane lagi.

"Huh???"

Veer poori tarah se confused tha ki itne me Erica dobara mudi aur haule se bas yahi boli,

"G-Good luck. I hope you'll come back."

Aur, woh aage badh gayi. Erica ne darasal Veer ki shirt aur uski vest ko Blemish se mark kiya tha. Pyaar ke maamle me Veer kaccha toh tha hi. Uski samajh me hi nahi aaya ki achanak se ye Erica ke ravaiyye ko kya ho gaya tha bhala. Uss par zyada dhyaan na dete hue woh East side jaane ke liye taiyaar tha.

Divya Veer ke liye pareshan thi, magar Renshu ne use ye keh ke shaant karwa diya ki Veer bas dusri side se aa raha hai jaha khatra kam hai. Saath hi uske saath uske aadmi bhi rahenge.

Jab Divya ne ye suna toh use thodi raahat mehsoos hui. Woh iss ladayi me hissa nahi le sakti thi lekin sabse peeche chalte hue sab kuch dekh sunn toh sakti hi thi. Aur, yahi uske liye sabse badi investigation hone waali thi.

Aur, Renshu ke agle hi ishaare par sab ke sab jangal me pravesh kar diye. Woh sabhi straight way me ghus chuke the. Toh wahi Veer East side ke liye ravana ho chuka tha.

Aage jo kuch bhi hone wala tha woh bhayanak hi hone waala tha.

'Let's do this, Pari!'

[Fufu~ I was waiting to see you in action.]
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
This update consists of 9k words. Divya aur Veer ke scene ki maang sabhi kar rahe the toh ye raha unke beech ka ek hot scene. Umeed hai pasand aaya hoga. Iske baad ye scene iss arc me ghatit nahi ho sakta tha isliye ise abhi dikhaya gaya hai. Kyuki, iske baad action hi action hai. 6 se 7 updates honge jinme poora arc hai. Uske baad seedhe Disembowler lag jayega. Toh likes thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka. Target apna 170 hi hai. Next update se pure action hai, so saath bane rehne ka.
Dhanyavad.

 

[Werewolf]

wonderful update

Shandar update

Superb Maja a raha hain padke

Mast jabardast lajabab adhyay Sir ji
Bahut bahut dhanyawad

Jabardast update bro

beautiful update... dil maage more n big update

Supper fantastic update janab

Next level update bro

Awesome fantastic update

Mind blowing

Very Nice Fantastic And Excellent Update Bhai

Ding sach mein dhamaka tha ye update boleto wat lagi andheki Kam bana system holder kahaa haa jabardast update keep posting

Nice update. Love to see more kaera's content

Super update

Fantastic update

Jabardast update bhai

Zabardast update

Mast update dia hai bhai...maza aa gaya padhkar...

Blockbuster update Werewolf bhai full of suspence and thrill..

Shandar update bro

Fabulous outstanding update

Nice update...

Nice and fantastic update bhai keep posting

Superb bro, Nice & wonderful update ,

Wonderful update

Another masterpiece

Wo to culprit ...GARFANO nikali.
Iske pass bhi wazib karan tha Nikalson ko marne k liye Aur Veer bhi us bat se agre karta tha.
Kaira se sambandhit jo mission mila tha veer ko abhi tak uska kya result nikala ???kuch pata nahi chal raha hai. Kaira ke aasu nikal rahe hai ..it means her emotion is awekan......sayad yehi to mission tha!!
Baki dekhte hain system kya decision leta hai

Good update. China wala update comes to end for the time being. Quite complicated plot tha, thank god it ended.

Awosome update bro

Nice update bhai

Nice update bro
Kuch sak to tha ki garofano ne hi Kiya hoga murder par itni chalaki se ye nahi socha tha
Absolutely beautiful
Ab kkaera ko bhi Julia ne samjhaya hai dekhte kitna asar hota hai
Keep going

Super awesome update bro

What an update... So mastermind was Garofano, who manipulated Ethan to murder his brother, and ultimately killed Mr Nicholson with her own hands. Mujhe lag raha tha ki keval Ethan ko murderer banana to bahut simple hota, aur wolfie itna simple plot to likhne wale nahi hain. Waise ek bahut bada clue diya tha...

<[Your designs are always good. But still… that’s not your forte.]>
<[Looks like your cover-up is blown now!]>

Aur motive was 'Revenge.'

But the journey of finding the culprit was interesting. Veer ne bahut sahi jagah apne points invest kiye. Ek aur sundari ab Veer par flat ho gayi. Lekin iske saath hi aage ke liye bhi link khol diya. Veer to Veer hai, weh Garofano ki warning sun'ne wala nahi hai, seedhe hi Jaw Long ka saamna karne wala hai.

Kaera ko to Julia line par jaldi hi laane wali hai. Usne contract kya khoya, usko lagta hai jaldi hi andaaz ho jayega ki usne to apna dil hi kho diya hai. Us din ka besabri se intezaar rahega jab emotions ka visphot hoga.

Superb update

Bhai update me bahot pyaar bhara move tha. Thora aur thora aur mann kar raha tha. Dil bol raha tha itni jaldi kyu khatam ho gaya. Update bahot jabardast tha bhai bahot maja aaya. Bhai update jaldi nahi ho sakta kiya bahot mann karta hain ki jaldi jaldi update aaye aur pare. Please next update jaldi de paao to de dena bhai

Nice update

Brilliant 1

Atlast Nicholson ka case solve hua
Kyu kisne or kab mara yeh pata chal gaya
Keara ko wapis story mein dekh k acha laga
Yeh bhi pata laga k uske Dil mein Veer k liye kafi kuch hai

Ab dekhna hai mine wala case ka kya or kaise hota hai

Just Wow
OP Update Bro

As Expected,Apne Kabhi Disappoint Nhi Kiya

Super action update

Super amazing update Bhai

Zabardast update

Toh sab se phele mere ek aur baar chutiya kaat chuka hai yaar werewolf bhai yeh toh cheating hoti hai na har baar mien samajhta kuch aur hu aur ho kuch aur jata hai pichle update mien mujhe laga ki Nicholson ne mara hai lekin iss update ko padhne ke baad mien phir se galat ho gya wese mienne pichle review mien yeh chiz likhi thi ki itni aasan maut kese mil rhi aur itni aasaani se katil kese pakada gya aur yehi par mien galat ho gya


Baat kare violet ki toh mien isse kitna masum samaj rha tha aur yeh bc itni jyada tedi nikali bhaisahab abhi tak yakeen nhi ho rha ki itni maasum shakal wali kitni badi khilaadi nikali wese mien hi galat tha jo system holder ko aur werewolf bhai ko easily le liya bhai update ko 2-3 baar padhne ke baad bhi yakeen sa nhi ho rha


Toh baat kare update ki ko update bhot acha tha aur mujhe apna katwa kar phir se maja aa gya aur padhne mien bhi bhot maja aaya aur jese starting mien ju past dikha rha tha tab tak thik thik lag rha tha lekin jab ju ne garofano ke muh se asaliyat nikalvaai tab dimag toh ekdum se yakeen nhi hua lekin baad mien yaad aaya ki werewolf bhai hai yeh kuch bhi kar sakte hai vese starting mien doubt hua tha mereko jab veer ko mission mila tha lekin baad mien woh saak sahi hogya


Lekin jab garofano ke muh se asaliyat sunne ke baad uss ke hamadardi aai ki usne jo kiya sahi kiya hai lekin kya veer ke maan mien hamadardi aayi??? Aur kya woh garofano ke upar trust karne laga hai???


Lekin dono system wala romance scene tha na woh padhne mien acha laga aur garofano bechari ko pehli par pata laga ki yeh sab karte bhi points milte usse kya pata hamaare veer bhaisaab phele hi sab kuch try chuke hai lekin yeh bhot honey honey kar rhi hai jab veer ki honey Milegi tab pata lage ga

Aur veer ne jab garofano ka haath pakada tha woh scene bhot sahi tha jese veer ne usse yaad dila diya tha ki system sirf tumare pass hi nhi hai honey lekin kya veer ne sahi mien garofano ko apni pheli gf maan liya hai??? (Kyuki abhi tak nidhi ka answer nhi aaya hai)

Aur kaera ko jese julia ne realize karvaya woh bhot jaruri ka kaera ke liya aur mien intezaar karunga veer aur kaera ke conversation le liya kyuki jaha tak mujhe yaad hai woh crimson arc start hone se phele hua tha

Aur antt mien woh option jo sayad veer ko milne wala hai renshu ke dwaara jese ki garofano ne bataya hai toh mere hisab veer phele first option try karega aur agar woh uss mien fail ho jata hai toh sayad then second option try kare (aur mujhe pura yakeen hai mien phir galat hounga )

Lekin mujhe yeh arc mien thodi house of killers wali feel aa chuki hai bas ab crimson arc wali feel chaiya yeh uss se jyada and sorry for spelling mistake samaj liyo werewolf bhai besak mere kata hai lekin update padh kar acha laga aesi hi twist and turn wala update padh kar acha lagta hai

Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Werewolf bhai.....
Nice and beautiful update....

Kiya likhty ho yaar kidr sy laky wapis sab ko katha kr rhy ho level

nice update

Nice waiting for next update. I'm loving it

Next update kab tak aye ga or kiya schedule hy updates ka

Beautiful and lovely update Bhai

Eagerly waiting.... Dude

Bhai maza aa gaya aakhir veer ne mystery solve kar hi Li violet hi aakhir me qatil nikli aur usne apne hisab se veer ko bhi nakara kar hi Diya thaa magar aakhir woh veer se chahti kia thee kyu usne veer ko apne hisab se ditch kia.
Usme qatal karne aur dono bhayyo ko Marne ka to maqsad khul Gaya magar veer ne in sab ke baad usay kyu maaf kar diya kia bohat bada planning kar ke betha hai veer ya phir usko ek aur mauqa de kar woh uski loyalty Lena chah raha hai magar jaisay usne khud kaha hai ki woh tab hamla karti hai jab koi usper zada vishwaash karey means woh do dhari talwaar double edge sword hai jo ki uske owner ko bhi nuqsan pohchane me dair nahi karegi.
Ab waqt hi uska action batayega. Aur veer ke faisle ko kia anjaam dega magar jatey jatey woh veer ko Renshu se bhi hoshiyar kar gayi hai aur mine Wale case me Jo cheez uske kaam aa sakti hai woh Information bhi de di hain.

Maza aa gaya aapki zabardast update se. Apna bohat Sara khayal rakho Bhai aur isi tarah mast updates detay raho..

Mien review mien puchna bul gya ki ab ungli kesi hai werewolf bhai?

Nice update

Hmm, interesting! Things are not as simple as it seems. Violet’s treachery was surprising! Obviously as I read this chapter, felt like of course the mystery was clear! Duh! Really well thought off! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Wow what a great and wonderful and suspicious update waiting for the next one

उम्दा
सही कहा उसने वीर हर पर भरोसा कर लेता है।जब कि सिस्टम होल्डर सब अपनी ताकत को बहुत ज्यादा मानते है। और अपनी ही सत्ता चाहते है।

वीर एक से सावधान भी हुआ और समझ भी गया होगा।

रेशू भी अपनी बेटी और अपने छेत्र को बढ़ाना ही चाहता होगा। आख़िर उसके बाप का किया हुआ नाम सोहरत पैसा वो यू ही गवाना नही चाहेगा।

बेटी उसकी हर बात में तेवर दिखा रही है। नासमझ है या पावर का नसा है।

Nice update

Bhai kya hi dhamakedar update tha kya veer ab renshu ko sb sach batayega aur garafano kyu mine wale matter mein help nhi kregi vo to ab flat h apne hero pr ?

अपने पिछले रिव्यू मे मैने कहा था की कत्ल के केस मे पुलिस अधिकारी का सबसे महत्वपूर्ण कार्य कत्ल का मकसद जानना , कत्ल का वेपंस , वेपंस की उपलब्धता और बरामदी , और सस्पेक्ट का कत्ल के वक्त की मौजदूगी , उनकी आई - विटनेस की गवाही अहम होता है ।
इस कार्य मे शव परिक्षण , शव का पोस्टमार्टम , फोरेंसिक साइंस , पूछताछ और आज के दौर मे टेक्नोलॉजीज इविडेंश की भूमिका अधिक होती है ।

मुझे शुरू से लग रहा था , मिस्टर निकोल्सन की हत्या के बारे मे जो कुछ भी गारोफानो कह रही है वह संदिग्ध है।
पहला कारण था , मिस्टर निकोल्सन की हत्या एक ऐसे प्वाइजन से हुई थी जो सिर्फ दो लोगो के पास ही हासिल था । मिस्टर रेंशू के पास प्वाइजन तो था लेकिन कोई मकसद नही दिख रहा था ।
इसके बाद सिर्फ एक ही शख्स बचा और वो थी गारोफानो । इनके पास भी वेपंस तो था लेकिन मकसद क्लियर नही हो रहा था ।
इस अपडेट के अनुसार गारोफानो , मिस्टर निकोल्सन के साथ अपने वेयरहाउस या वेयर - शोप कहें गई हुई थी । दोनो ने एक साथ ही वहां प्रवेश किया था । इसका प्रूफ वहां का सी सी टी वी कैमरा था । वेयरहाउस के दो एंट्रेंस थे - एक फ्रंट डोर पर और एक बैक डोर पर । कुछ समय बाद वहां से मिस्टर निकोल्सन अकेले ही बाहर निकल जाते है । और मिस गारोफानो वहीं वेयरहाउस मे ही रह जाती है । कुछ समय बाद मिस्टर निकोल्सन की हत्या हो जाती है । चूंकि गारोफानो के पास सी सी टी वी के रूप मे पुख्ता सबूत था कि इस दौरान वो वेयरहाउस से बाहर निकली ही नही ।
लेकिन पुलिस ऐसे थ्योरी से पुरी तरह संतुष्ट नही होती । मुजरिम अपने घर के छत से , बरामदे से या किसी भी ऐसे जगह से किसी मोटी रस्सी या फिर किसी और माध्यम से नीचे उतर कर और वगैर सी सी टी वी के सामने आए बाहर जा सकता है ।
( मैने सुरेंद्र मोहन पाठक साहब का एक ऐसा उपन्यास पढ़ा था जहां मुजरिम एक कमरे के अंदर अपने दोस्तों के साथ पार्टी करता है और उनके नजरों से बचकर चुपचाप घर से बाहर निकलता है , थोड़ा दुर जाता है और एक व्यक्ति का कत्ल कर के वापस अपने दोस्तों के साथ महफिल मे शामिल हो जाता है । )

मिस गारोफानो भी ऐसे हो अपने घर से बाहर निकली , मिस्टर निकोल्सन के शरीर मे प्वाइजन इन्जेक्ट किया और फिर वैसे ही वापस अपने वेयरहाउस मे प्रवेश कर गई। और हमे यह भी नही भूलना चाहिए कि वो स्वयं एक सिस्टम होल्डर्स है ।

खैर बहुत ही खूबसूरती के साथ इस पुरे मर्डर मिस्ट्री का वर्णन किया आपने ।
कोरियाई सुंदरी ने जो कुछ किया अपने इज्ज़त , अपनी जान की हिफाजत के लिए किया । इसके अलावा मिस्टर निकोल्सन अप्रत्यक्ष रूप से उसके मां-बाप के कातिल भी थे । मिस्टर निकोल्सन की नीचता यहीं तक समाप्त नही हुई थी , उसने अनेकों मासूम लड़कियों को अपने हवस का शिकार बनाया था । मेरी नजर मे गारोफानो ने कत्ल नही इंसाफ किया है ।

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट वेयरवोल्फ भाई।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग अपडेट।

Bahut badiya update bhai

Mind blowing update bhai

Ohh mujhe laga tha ki fbcc director hi caller hai

Lekin kya fbcc director aur caller doh alag log hai??

Wow, mind boggling turnarounds ! Not only Veer but the readers too must have been bemused by the baffling turn of events occurring in such short intervals , including myself (he he he)! Atlast, Veer unmasked the original assassin of Mr. Nicholson i.e. Miss.Violet urf Garafoño but let her off after coming to know her motive behind the murder . Seems Garafoño too has fallen for Veer, who too seems to have a soft corner for her. Now Veer is back on track on mine case for which he was originally called by Renshu. After a very long while, Kaera is in limelight again but for different reasons or may we say, different causes . Let's wait and see what the next update is going to be , though damn sure it'll not be less dramatic in anyway

bhai kiaera aur veer ki shaadi kara do pyar kara do dono main

Fantastic mind-blowing update

Bahut hi mazedar update

Nice

Ye update bohot hi badhiya tha warewolf bhau. Good to see kaira after long time. I hope the finger is alright. Keep writing

bohat he zabadast update t

bohat he zabadast update tha sir keep going eagerly waiting for next update

शानदार जबरदस्त लाजवाब update bhai jann superree duperrere update...

Ye veer ne divya ko divyaastra use krke ha karne par majbur kar diya

Aur gur gurfu ko bhi case se nikal diya hey, aur uska ye yehsan ohh nahi bhule gi....

Ab ye bhavana bhi agyi hey yaha par ab dekhte hey ki ohhh kya krti hey ab......

SUPERB AWESOME FANTASTIC LOVELY MIND BLOWING EXCELLENT AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI

Fabulous excellent outstanding marvelous update bhai.....

Sach mey kahi laga bhi nahi tha ki ye sab gurfu ne karwaya hoga usaka plan hoga....

Par ye sab huva aur ohh usaka muu bola chincha sab mey fas gaya....

Aur ab ohh veer ki koi madat nahi kar sakti hey ab....

Usne long ke bare mey use agyaha bhi kiya hey use direct na bhide...


Aur ab veer aur gurfu ka taka bhid gaya hey ab to kuch tension na hogi fir.....

Yaha india mey kaira ki deal chin liyi soniya ne uske hi secretary ke sath mil ke, secretary ne use dhoka de ke....

Ab kya juliya ki bato ka kuch parinam niklta hey ya nahi ye bhi dekhna dilchps rahega.....

Werewolf bro

Wonderful

SHAANDAAR LAJAWAAB JABARDUST FANTASTIC MIND BLOWING EXCELLENT AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI

Mind blowing update…

romanchak and lovely update ..jab veer ko mission mila aur penalty me kuch nahi tha tab aisa laga hi tha ki garofano involve hai apne ghatiya baap ki maut ke pichhe .
veer bhi 2 kadam aage ki sochke chal raha tha aur ye baat garofano samajh nahi payi .
beti banakar galat najar se dekhna aur uske maa baap ke kaatil hone ki saja dekar kuch galat nahi kiya garofano ne .
ab kaera kya step legi ,kya wo veer ko call ya msg karegi ,waise kaera se kaha gadbad ho gayi jo uski deal sonia ko mil gayi .

Bahut hi shandaar update hai bhai maza aa gaya

Super awesome update brother finally ek case solve hua ab mine ka matter start hoga aur end me kaera ko dikha k ye update aur bhi interesting bna dia apne eagerly waiting for your next update brother luvd it pls do cont asap take care

शानदार अपडेट है सर जी

Tow yeh sab kia dhara violet ka tha jiski bhanak veer ko bhi lag gayi thi asli culprit Violet thi or Violet ne bhi apne asli maa baap ki maut ka badla hi lia h
Veer n sahi time per apni intelligent m 10 point add ker lia Jo yaha kaam aa gaye nahi Violet ne tow 3 ghante ke liye paralyzed ker hi dia tha
Udher Mumbai shayad pehli Baar Kaera se koyi deal nikli or woh bhi gayi kaha Sonia ke
Julia achche aina dikha dia Kaera ko ab Kaera ke ooper h yeh sab or achche se dekhne ki
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
Badhiya zabardast shaandar update

Nice update

Nice awesome mast story bro

Awesome

अपडेट

Werewolf bhai aap to naam ke hisaab se update dene lag gaye ho. Ab kya keval full moon day pe update aayeinge

One of the best story

Please take the right stand regarding this story dear friend - in one post by another reader (Ramjanne1998), you endorsed his comments on this story as boring & in the same breath, you are praising this story to be one of the best. Kindly clarify us as to which one of your views regarding this story is genuine and honest valuation. This is just my genuine feeling with regards to your comments but not anybody else's, especially not the esteemed writer, dear friend. If at all you feel offended by my comments, I request you to take it in the right spirit & forgive me

चलो राम रची राखा

nice 1

आप तो अंतरयामी हो प्रभु... ​

राम जाने... की आप संतुलित हैं भी या नही ​

हमेशा की तरह 'अद्भुत'... और सच कहुँ तो पहले से भी बेहतरीन और परिपक्व लेखनी...

ये कहानी शायद हमारे अनुमान से भी कहीं और आगे निकल गयी... और आशा है की ये हमारे हर उस अनुमान को तोड़ कर यूँही बढ़ती जाये..जिसमे हम सब ने अपने अपने अपने विचारों को गढ़ा ...

पढ़ कर मन प्रफुल्लित हो गया...

विश्तार से टिप्पणी करने बैठूँ तो समझो होगया... आखिर अपनी टिप्पणी मे क्या लिखुं क्या छोड़ू...

वो फ़िर कभी विस्तार से...

बाकी अपडेट बेहतरीन था...

धन्यवाद ​

और Werewolf .... यार तुम अपने हेल्थ का थोड़ा ध्यान रखा करो भाया...

जब भी यहाँ आता हूँ... और कुछ मिले या नही मिले... तुम्हारी हेल्थ से जुड़ी कुछ न कुछ नकारात्मक पता चल ही जाती है ...
एक तुम्हारी रचना ही तो है जो शायद इस फोरम की आत्मा बन चुकी है....
हमारे जैसे बहुत होंगे जो शायद इस रचना के लिए मात्र... यहाँ अपनी हाजरी लगाते होंगे...
बाकी हम भी दिल से दुआएं करते हैं की जु स्वस्थ और सुरक्षित रहो...
धन्यवाद ​

Story reaader me kahna chahunga ki intzaar ka phal meetha hota hain ya nahi me chakh kar batayega, ab kyuki maine last 7 chapters ab tak nahi padhe, lakin padhunga akhir kar ab maja ayega,

Huhhh.... It's been two unread update that I read... Not going to talk how where they... Coz... You already set higher standard so they were quite good....

Now let's talk about those updates...

It's clear for me that Nicholson has been killed by grafano... In first interaction where she come to attack on renshu... And suddenly stopped after seeing veer coz she knows veer is powerful so she can't harm him... Also maybe has soft corner... Whatever you can say my Fan theory was correct that Nicholson been killed by grafano that he actually was in second update....

Secondly... Bond btwn Divya n veer... Heartwarming.... Fufu... Love to see if something happens btwn them in china... Her favourlty also changed to 100 so you have to do something for Divya... Y I sound like horny... Anyway...

So grafano revealed that she killed Nicholson but poor girl I know as fan that she can't fool him... Her intelligence should be more then mine....

When she realised she fucked up... Rather running she kissed veer for his intelligence... Fuck I deserve too as well then.....

Back to it...

Now veer going to do what he actually came here to do... Fight with Jaw Long... That will be epic... Intresting to see how veer going to handle that stuff....


Y my Fan theory says Eric going to stab back veer... She doesn't give me any good wives as well let's see what happens next....






Stop where are you going not ended yet how can I not going to talk about kaera in this update... My crush

Good to see him
Julia wao... Men... Seriously desrv this from my side... The she talks about how a women should be... She needs to be a social media influencer...
Get her job also veer...


My girl is crying... I can't see her cry... Dear writer... It's request please start a convo btwn her n veer... it's been more then 7 or 8 months when she was with veer... My girl was fine that time.... Don't do this...


Huhhhh... All done now... see you on USC.... Are you coming?? Will meet you there....


Sayonara

Mujhe kya shak ho rha hai k Government Renshu ko 2ble cross kr rhi hai...

WOh chaah rhe hain k saamp bhi mar jaye or laathi bhi naa toote...
bcz they know that k Us Tribe ko haraana bilkul bhi easy nhi hoga even for Renshu too..
or Govt ko sab ache se pata hai accept about system (probably)..

Govt chaahti hai k Renshu unke liye apne haath gande Kare or Tribe ko khatam Kare ya jo bhi kare pr unhe Mine mil jaye...
also woh chaahte hain k Jab Renshu is sab m uljhaa ho tabhi same time pr FBCC is maamle ko tackle krne ki koshish kare pr ek different angle se, as " Order vs Legion "...

Pr real m to asia kuch hai bhi nhi, Renshu ko Us tribe se koi issue bhi naa hota unless k unka leader ek system holder hai or woh bohot bura or zaalim hai pr ye baat to Govt ko nbi pata...
is liye Govt k hisaab se ye Govt/State vs Legion hai jisse woh har haal m jeetna chaahte hain but keeping there hands clean...
pr woh sabko aisa dikha rhe hain k Mainly ye sab Renshu k Order or Legion ka phadda hai...

to obviously woh chaahte hain k Renshu isse khatam kare or phir FBCC as a culprit usse hi punish kare ya jo bhi woh uske saath krna chaahen karte rahen..

iska reason mere according ye hai k agr Renshu Legion ko khatam kr k Mine waapas le leta hai to iska matlab saaf hoga k woh kitna powerful hai or in future woh Govt k liye bhi problem create kr sakta hai, Mine ko hatheyaa kr ya usne se share maang kr jaisa Tribes ne kiya tha ya woh kisi or tarhaan unze payoff leta ..

pr ab bhale hi woh unhe haraa de pr woh khud bhi bach nhi sakta bcz FBCC uske peeche padi hogi...
pr Govt waale jaante nhi k uske paas system hai...

or unka ye bhi plan ho sakta hai k chaahe jo bhi jeete Order ya Legion, or baad m FBCC usse tackle kar le ga or unka raasta saaf ho jaye ga....

is ze se Govt k haath bhi saaf rahen ge, Tribe ka issue bhi khatam ho jaye ga or Mine completely unke under aa jaye gi or Renshu ko FBCC sambhaal le ga to unhe usko bhi koi payout nhi dena pade ga...

YE sab meri soch hai and i think k it's quiet possible to happend...
and also i think k yehi ek maqsad ho sakta hai Govt ka ek hi time pr Renshu or FBCC ko involve krne ka pr different angle se...

ya woh chaahte hain k Renshu yahan pr as a Enforcer kaam kare or FBCC as deal maker...
is se Tribe ko woh confused rakhen ge k unhe Baat cheet krni hai ya Ladna hai or isii beech kisi tarhaan Renshu unhe khatam kr de ga ya Govt chupke se ye kaam niptaa de gi...

Garofano ne hi Charles ko marva diya..vaise jo wajah batay uss hissab se apna badla lene ke liye sahi kiya.
Khair ab garofano ka case bhi solve ho gaya ab veer Mine ke matter par focus kar payega..
Renshu veer ko ab kya kam chopta hai? Garofano ne bataya aise hi 2 option dega?.

Awesome update bhai.

No no no... Crimson saw mr. X... Remember? Ava k parents ko jab marwaya tha usne...

Crimson saw him. He didn't see his face but saw his physique... Waha k conversation se hum kaise keh sakte h ki wo ladki thi?

Unless she shrinked her boobs... Crimson ko dikhega ni kya? Crimson could tell whether the person in front of him is a guy or girl... We didn't see him using any credentials like 'Miss' or 'Mrs.'

So... That's why I think she's not the X... X is a guy... Not a girl... Or may be I could be wrong too. Werewolf sir pta ni kya ghuma de firse...

The ingenious Werewolf sir is here again...

unmasked... How can you come up with such accurate titles for the updates???

Veer wore a mask, luring us into thinking that he was caught off guard and fell directly into the Garofano's plan... Garofano wore the mask showing that she was a timid helpless girl all along though it was just the opposite...

Both of them unmasked their masks at the right time... And to top this... You showed Kaera... Where Julia makes the statement "you don't need to wear a mask in front of Young Master Veer."

The way you connected that segment to the update's title... Was... *Muah muah

The whole Garofano mystery was so flabbergasting... I didn't expect her to be so cunning... I thought our girl was really in need of help...

But she was slithering like a snake, waiting for her prey to come near her and then bore her fangs into it.

but more than Garofano Veer surprised me the most. I thought Veer was done... My hero was caught in her web... There was no way he could come out of it... However... he was playing as well... Hehehehe...

I guess this is over now.. Garofano will be busy with her own work. She has to clear her name. She must get rid off the dirty records. Whereas Veer and the others will be focused on the mine matter. Although I wanted to see Garofano along side Veer. I wanted to see how she fights and what are her skills. Anyways we might see her after a few updates I guess?

She is here only. She might come if she comes to know that Veer is in danger. I don't know why she cares for Veer but it's true she has that one soft corner for him... Or it's more than that? Maybe? Idk... If she didn't come... Erica might get close with Veer... Hehehe it'll be bad for her... She better take this chance...

Bhavna has returned home but so far she has no clue where is his son.... I'm pretty sure she and Tej will bombard questions after questions the moment Veer arrives home.

That's it for now... Read 2 updates back to back... Reading 2 updates back to back is always good... Hehe.. Thank you for this wonderful work again Sir... Looking forward to the action scenes now... It's been a while since we saw hardcore action ... Waiting for new new update... Keep writing...

My opinion is the gerafano knows Divya boss and she knows more then she lets on

Waiting for the next update

Waiting for next update Werewolf bhai...

Bhai... next update kab Tak aayega...next update ka besabri se intezaar hai bhai...

Waiting...

Aaj update milega kya

Get well soon mate, and take some rest an proper medication and than post the update whenever it's possible....

Koi nhi bhai
Pahle shi karo tan fir mila lege man

Garofano is still innocent, as I said. Nicholson ya jo bhi naam tha us leechad vyakti ka, achha hua wo mar gaya. Ek tarah se Garofano ne social service hi ki hai use maarkar.

Waiting for the next update

Bhai ek mahine me bas 3 uodate... Story boht slow chal rahi hai.. Es hisab se ek saal me bs 36 update....

In that way every body should take law into his or her own hand.
Then what is the need of courts and judges? We can save a lot in way of salaries and infrastructure ( though unemployment will increase someway).

To sehat ka khayal rakhne ka bhidu Pehele, bad mey update ka dekh,
Do bund jindgi ke leliyo thik ho jayega Werewolf

Agla update kub tak aaega

Please add some character for the middle East

Get well soon bhai

Get well soon bhai

Take your time wishing for speedy

Take your time wishing for speedy

Intezar rahega bhai

Any update on your health werewolf Bhai

Good to know that you are recovering the weather in Mumbai is like that every one is getting viral fever this days

Waiting

Tabiyat sahi hua bro

काहे को बदनाम कर रहे हो भाई ! मेरी अधिकांशतः फ्रैंड ने फोरम को अलविदा कह दिया । अब ऊंगली मे गिनने योग्य फ्रैंड बचे हैं ।

Waiting

Ok

Update 174 has been posted guys.

 

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Index has been updated.

 

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