Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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Update - 176 ~ Heavy Violence (2)​

Ab tak...

PROBABILITY MANIPULATION!!!

Crimson dwara paapt kiya woh card pehli baar aaj activate hua. Veer ka perr apne aap andar ki namm mitti ke chalte fislan kha gaya. Uska sarr peeche hua, aur saanp dusri orr jaake jaake zameen se jaa bhida. Probability manipulation ne Veer ke upar hamla hone ki probability badal di thi.

Mauka na gawaate hue usne turant hi wall run kar upar chadh haath felaate hue gaddhe ke baahar ki zameen ko jakda. Aur usme se baahar nikal aaya.

'That was close-!!!'

Saansein abhi theek se durust hi ki thi ek awaaz ne uske raungte ek baar fir khade kar diye. Koi tezi se uski orr aa raha tha.

Ab aage...

Mahaul tang tha. Do insaan jo ek dusre se anjaan the woh aamne saamne ek dusre ka adanga bann ke khade hue the. Dono ek dusre ki taaqat ki kshamta ka aaklan kar rahe the.

[Something's off about him!!!]

'Hmm!'

Lloyd ki gambheer awaaz Renshu ke mann me goonji jis se woh poori tarah sehmat tha. Saamne khada ye naujavan...! Kuch ajeeb si anubhuti de raha tha.

Achanak se ek system holder ka prakat hona aur unn par hamla karna. Kuch andhruni taur par pak raha tha, jis se Renshu anibhigya tha.

Uske maathe par paseene ki boonde chhayi hui thi. Aankhein gambheer taur par uss agyaan naujavan system holder par tiki thi.

Uski instinct 'Enlightenment' use aagah kar rahi thi. Har mushqil mod pe 'Enlightenment' use raasta dikha deti thi. Woh dekh paa raha tha ki uske liye koi jaal bicchaya gaya tha. Usne khamosh khade uss system holder ko dekh bola~

"Apne iraade toh tum batane se rahe ladke...! Lekin, ek baat yaad rakhna! Iss maamle me dakhal andazi deke tumne apne aap ko Order ka dushman bana liya hai."

Parantu, veh ladka abhi bhi shaant hi bana raha. Renshu ke agle hamle ke liye khud ko taiyar karne laga. Kahi na kahi ye baat Renshu ko aur bhi zyada gussa dila gayi ki anjaan system holder uski baato ka jawab tak nahi de raha tha. Jaise maano samay vyateet karna chaah raha ho ya fir woh uski nazro me kuch tha hi nahi.

"Mein sahi tha. Tum kuch bhi ugalne waale nahi-! Theek hai fir!!! Tumhare muh se ek ek shabd mein khud ugalwaunga!!!! LLOYD!!!' Woh garja!!!

[Ready!!!]

Agle hi pal uske haav bhaav badal gaye. Nazre kisi sher ke maafiq uss system holder par tik gayi, mutthi apne bhaale par usne jamm ke kassi. Aur, woh uss system holder par aage badh jhapatne hi waala tha jab uss ladke ne apne peeche tange tarkash se ek teer nikala aur-

*Swoooossshhhh*

Teer seedhe Renshu ki aankh ki orr poori gati se aaya magar, usne use ek jhatke me apne haath se jakad liya. Aur-

*Crack*

Use do tukdo me baant diya. Uski aankhein ab apne shikaar par poori tarah se sthir thi.

"Galti meri hi thi, jo maine 'Mayhem' ka istemal pehle nahi kiya. Lekin, koi baat nahi. Uska bhugtan tumse ho jayega!" Woh itna bol-

*Whooooooosshhhh*

Apni jagah se ek jhatke me aage dauda. Uss unknown system holder ki aankhein shan bhar ke liye bhay ke maare fel gayi aur badle me woh bhi sarpat andar gehre jangal ki orr bhaaga. Ghode ki tez chaal ke bhaanti daudate hue woh Renshu se duri banane me qamyab tha.

[Woh humse tez hai, Renshu. Sambhal ke peecha karo.]

'Ek agile system holder!? Kahi...? Assassination type? Samajh gaya!'

[Behtar hoga agar use Order se jod le toh...!]

'Ye ab sambhav nahi!'

Jangal ke ghane pedo ke beech se guzarte hue ghapp andhere me do system holder lagatar bhaagte jaa rahe the. Unke perro ke neeche aate sookhe patte kuchal rahe the aur dono ke beech ek paryapt duri bani hui thi. Jo ki zahir tha kyuki woh naujavan Renshu se 'Agility' me aage tha.

*Ding*

['Trap Master' is in use.]

Daudate daudate hi Renshu ki gardan kisi chidiya ki tarah idhar udhar hote hue traps ki talashi me jut gayi.

*Whissshhh*

Uska bhaala hawa me udta hua jaake seedhe ek gupt rassi ke baandh pe jaake laga. Rassi tooti aur patthar giraane ka jaal wahi nasht ho gaya. Toh wahi patto ki parat se dhake hue kuch gehre gaddho ko usne patthar fek unka uddeshya bhi wahi mita diya.

Jaise jaise woh aage badh raha tha, raaste me aane waale sabhi jaalo ko nasht karta jaa raha tha. Isi raaste se uske aadmiyon me se koi bhi aage aa sakta tha. Unke liye jaal se mukt raasta taiyar karna uski ek zimmedari thi.

Idhar bhaagte bhaagte punah Lloyd ne use sachet kiya.

[He's luring you deep inside the forest.]

'Jaanta hu, Lloyd!'

[Be prepared for the worst. Aage kuch bhi ho sakta hai. Par, andar jaana bhi humari majboori hai.]

'Hmm!'

Anjaan system holder Renshu ko jaise kisi prakar ke jaal me fasaane ki taiyaari me tha. Andhere jangal me woh use na jaane kaha liye jaa raha tha. Dono hi tez raftar se bhaag rahe the. Tabhi, woh ladka achanak hi uchhalte hue peeche ko ghoom gaya. Dhanush ki pratyancha par teer chadha. Aur, ladke ne teer ko kass ke kheench ek baar me Renshu ki orr chhor diya.

*Swiiiiiiisssshhhhhh*

Renshu, jo theek uske peeche bhaag raha tha, uske tez qadam shan bhar ke liye dheeme pad gaye. Teer uski orr hawa ko cheerte hue aaya toh zaroor magar, woh uska nishana nahi tha jaise-! Balki, teer uske bagal se neeche zameen me jaa gira.

'Huh!?'

[Shit! Renshuuuu-!!!]

Aur, Lloyd ko awaaz dene me halki si derr ho gayi.

*Booooooooommmmmm*

Ek Dhamaka! Dhua vatavaran me fel gaya aur usme se gussail Renshu hawa me udta hua bahar nikla. Chhota lekin ek ghaatak visfot jo use buri tarah se ghayal kar sakta tha agar woh na hoti.

Rapid Reaction!!! Uske paas maujood behatreen skills me se ek. Ye aaj na hoti toh shayad woh buri tarah zakhmi ho sakta tha. Hatasha aur krodh se uski bauhe fadakne lagi. Dhamake ke chalte uske badan par dhue ke kaale dhabbe bhi pad chuke the.

'Ye toh-! Explosive arrows!?'

[Hmm! Asal zindagi me ye nahi hote. Lekin, inhe banaya jaa sakta hai. Mujhe yakeen hai ki uske paas inhe banane ki koi skill hai. Mujhe toh ye jaan ke bhi taajub nahi hoga agar uska dhanush bhi uske haatho se banaya gaya ho.]

'Let me do it! Check!!!'

*Ding*

[A self made adjustable bow.]

[Dekha? Mein sahi tha.]

'Ab kya?'

[Unn explosive arrows se sambhal ke rehna hoga hume. Maine uski pehchan kar li hai. Uske agli baar vaar karte hi mein tumhe satark kar dunga.]

'Good!'

Ladka mauka dekh punah bhaaga. Peeche peeche Renshu bhi gusse me aaya. Krodh toh sawaar tha uspe magar uss krodh ko usne apne sochne, samajhne aur nirnay lene ki kshamta par haawi hone nahi diya. Aur, isme sabse zyada madadgar thi uski instinct ~ Enlightenment!

Kintu, jis baat ka darr tha akhir wahi hua. Jangal ki gehraiyo me uss anjaan system holder ka peecha karte karte woh aa toh gaya. Magar, aate hi use samajh aa gaya ki maajra kya tha. Woh ladka uss se ek seemit doori bana ke khada ho gaya. Chaand ki raushni me uski halki halki chhavi nazar aa rahi thi. Aur fir-

Ek raushni!

Aag ki lau andhkar me achanak Renshu ke saamne khade ladke ke peeche se jagmaga uthi.

Mashaal! Aur, fir ek aur-! Aur, ek aur...! Aur, ek ek karke uske ird gird mashaalo ka samooh banta chala gaya. Renshu ki aankhein hairangi me chaudi ho gayi. Woh jaise jaise apni daayi orr mudta gaya, ek ek karke mashaale andhere me jalti gayi. Woh ghir chuka tha. Yahi woh jaal tha!

[Isliye, woh tumhe yaha laa raha tha. Ye Unit 2 nahi lag raha. Ye alag se aadmi iske dwara laaye gaye hai shayad.]

'Lloyd---!'

[I got it.]

*Ding*

['Mayhem' has been equipped.]

*Ding*

['Mayhem' is now in use.]

Achanak hi uske mann me ek lamba sa virtual bar bann ke aa gaya. Usne Kung fu ka stance liya aur zorr se gurraaya-

"Come-!!!!"

Aur, tabhi-

"Haaaaaaaaaa-!!!!!"

"Haaarrrrgggghhhhh!!!"

"Hamlaaaaaaa-!!!!"

Neeche sthit aadmi uss par daudate hue toot pade. Toh, wahi upar pedo par baithe aadmi uss par teero ki varsha kar diye.

*Swish* *Swish* *Swish* *Swish*

Aadmi uss system holder ke peeche andhere me se agal bagal se nikalte hue aate jaa rahe the aur woh chup chaap wahi khade sab kuch dekh raha tha. Ek ke baad ek teero se apna bachaav kar Renshu seedhe aadmiyon se bhidne me ulajh gaya. Aur, 'Mayhem' apna jalwa dikhane ke liye taiyar tha.

Pehle aadmi ke aate hi Renshu ne bagal me hote hue khud ko uske hathyar se bachaya, uska ek haath seedha aadmi ki gardan par jaa ke pada.

*Chakkkkk*

Dusra haath seedha kamar par jaa ke laga.

*Whakkkk*

Aur, akhiri vaar seedhe thuddi ki orr gaya-

*Bokkkkk*

Jis se veh aadmi hawa me udte hue muh se thook aur khoon nikaal door jaa gira. Aur, isi ke saath Renshu ke virtual bar me ek point jud gaya. Kintu, yeh hua kaise? Aur, kya tha ye virtual bar?

Uske arsenal me sabse behatreen cards me se ek ~ 'Mayhem'




Ye woh card tha jo aisi group fights ke liye hi banaya gaya tha. 'Wushu' ya saral shabdo me 'Kung fu' ke moves par hi ye card apni bhumika nibhata tha. Uske paas pehle se hi 'Wushu' skill thi jisme woh maahir tha.

Wushu ka istemal kar agar woh combo ender apne dushman pe land karta hai, toh dushman 1 second ke liye achet ho jayega. 1 second dekha jaaye toh vastavik roop me kam tha, lekin system holders ke liye wahi ek second poori ki poori ladaayi ka nateeja tay kar sakta tha. Par, shart yahi thi ki combo ender dushman ke shareer par utara jaaye.

Kintu, kya bas yahi tha? Hargiz nahi! 'Mayhem' system holder ko ek virtual bar provide karta tha. Harr ek dushman jo Renshu ke haatho dher hota jayega, uske badle me virtual bar me ek point chadhta jayega. Agar, bar 5 points tak pahucha toh agla hamla do guna lethal damage ka hoga.

Ye thi taqat 'Mayhem' ki. Renshu ne Unit 1 ko dher karne me iska istemal nahi kiya tha. Warna, uske paas ab tak na jaane kitne bars stack ho chuke hote. Yeh system holder uske liye koi khatra nahi hota fir. Magar, iss baar woh taiyaar tha. Woh khud bhi jaan ke hi andar jangal ki gehrayi me uska peechha karne aaya tha. Aur, unke iss ek aadmi ko dher karne ke baad use ek point mil chuka tha. Ab baari thi baakiyon ki.

Apne aadmi ko itni asaani se ghayal hota dekh baaki sabhi bhauchakke toh hue par unke qadam zara bhi nahi ruke.

"Aaarrrghhh!"

"Uummmphhhh-!!!"

"Urrrrghhh!!"

Fir bas, unki ghur ghurati awaazein uss ilaaqe me fel gayi. Ek ke baad ek sabhi Renshu ke kung fu moves ka shikar hote chale gaye aur use points par points bhi de gaye.

Parantu, woh system holder abhi bhi yuhi shaant khada hua tha. Renshu ko inn aam logo se khatra nahi tha. Woh yeh baat jaanta tha aur isliye ladte waqt uss ladke par bhi poori tarah se dhyaan rakhe hue tha.

*Klaaaang* *Claaaanggg*

Mashalo aur chaand ki raushni ke alawa hathyaro ki aapas me bhidne ki chingariyaan bhi ilaaqe me chamakne lagi. Renshu ka harr ek move itna sateek aur nishaane par tha ki tribe ke log keede makodo ki tarah dher hote jaa rahe the.

Uska bhaala chain ke saath aise ghum raha tha ki kuch aadmi bhaale ka shikaar hote toh kahi kuch chain ke lapete me aake dur fik jaate. Kuch ped se jaa bhidte toh kuch zameen par ghisatate hue lot jaate.

Unke perr ab kaapne lage the. Unhe apne Lord Jaw Long ki upar poora vishvas aur garv tha. Aur, aaj woh sab samajh paa rahe the ki Order ka Lord bhi koi aera gera nahi tha.

"D-Daanav! Y-Ye aadmi daanav hai!"

"H-Hamare hamle- hamare hamle uss tak pahuch hi nahi rahe!!!"

"Ye kaise ho sakta hai? *shivers* Hamara ek jhund pehle hi haar chuka hai. L-Lord-! Hume Lord tak khabar-"

Magar, uske shabd adhoore hi reh gaye. Renshu ke bhaale ki chain akasmat uski kamar par aake bandhi aur Renshu ne use ek jhatke me apni orr kheench liya. Woh aadmi udta hua uski orr aaya aur-

*Gwakh*

Apne gale ko uske bhaari bharkam haath me saunp diya. Ek haath se hi Renshu uss aadmi ko zameen se upar uthaaye hue tha. Yeh manzar dekh sabko khauf ke chalte saanp soongh gaya. Aur, fir Renshu ne bolna shuru kiya.

"Tum sab ko abhi bhi mauka diya jaa raha hai. Humne baahar kisi ko bhi jaan se nahi maara hai. Agar, tum apne logo ki chinta karte ho toh abhi bhi waqt hai. Jao...! Aur, unhe bacha lo. Kahi derr na ho jaaye."

Ye sunte hi tribe ke logo ko do jhatke lage. Pehla toh yeh ki Renshu unse unki hi tribal bhaasha me bol raha tha. Woh iss tathya se anibhigya the ki Renshu ek system holder tha aur use sabhi bhashaayein aati thi.

Toh wahi, dusri taraf unke taajub hone ka kaaran tha Renshu ke aadmiyon ke dwara unke aadmiyon ko bina jaan se maare chhor dena. Yaha unke Lord ne toh keh ke bheja tha ki yeh ladayi ab aar ya paar ki hai. Kya yahi baat Renshu ke logo par laagu nahi hoti? Bilkul hoti thi.

Fir, uske bawajood-!?

"Legion se kabhi bhi Order ki dushmani rahi hi nahi hai. Mein toh sirf sahi ke liye ladd raha hu. Mine ko apne qabze me karna... Yeh ek apradh hai. Mine rashtra ki sampatti hai. Uss par sirf kuch logo ka haq nahi ho sakta. Tum sab khud socho. Kya Order ne kabhi bina wajah Legion pe hamla kiya hai?"

Uski baatein jaise logo par prabhav daal rahi thi. Sab ke sab sankoch me nazar aane lage the.

"M-Mujhe lagta hai...! Shayad... W-Woh sahi hai!"

"Huh? Tum pagal ho gaye ho kya?"

"Nahi! Mujhe bhi lagta hai ki iss baat me sacchayi hai."

"M-Mera bhai-!! Mera bhai pehle jhund me tha. M-Mujhe jaana hoga. Use bachaane."

"Tum sab ab dagabazi karoge? Legion ko akela chorr kar bhaag rahe ho?"

"Bhaag nahi rahe hai. Par, ye baat sach hai ki hume apne logo ki chinta hai. Kya tumhe nahi hai?"

"Mujhe bhi hai par-"

"Toh mein jaa raha hu. Tumhe jo karna hai karo."

Unke jhund me se ek aadmi nikal ke Unit 1 ki orr bhaag gaya. Woh sirf akele nahi the yaha. Jagah jagah unki basti bani hui thi jangal me. Aur, unn gharo me unki patniya, bacche, budhe buzurg, unka parivar unka intezar kar raha tha.

Aaj agar woh sab yaha maare jaate hai toh kal ko unke parivar ki dekhbhal kaun karega? Sabhi ke mann me jaise yeh baat toh aayi magar ek sandeh bhi paida hua. Iske pehle ki baaki sab bhi uss aadmi ke peeche peeche jaate, unhi ke ek sadasya ne unhe rokte hue kaha.

Aadmi 1 : Zara ruko tum sab!!! Y-Ye ek chaal bhi toh ho sakti hai na?

Aadmi 2 : Sahi kaha. Kya pata ye hume fasaane ke liye ho? Kya pata hamare aadmiyon ko pehle hi inn logo ne maar diya ho aur iske aadmi hamara waha intezar kar rahe ho?

Aadmi 3 : Ekdum sahi kaha! Bhala hum kaise maan le ki tum jhooth nahi keh rahe?

Renshu ki bauhe pareshani me sikud gayi.

Renshu : Jhooth keh ke mera koi fayda nahi. Tum sab khud socho. Agar, mein chaahta toh tum sabhi ko abhi hi yahi maar sakta tha. Par, kya maine kisi ki bhi jaan li?

Uske itna kehte hi sabhi ko ek bada jhatka laga. Yeh baat satya thi. Jab se woh ladd rahe the tab se kisi bhi aadmi ne apni jaan nahi gawayi thi.

Renshu : Mein aur mera hathyar tum sabhi ko maarne me poori tarah se saksham hai. Kya tum sab iss baat se sehmati nahi rakhte?

Sab ke sab khamosh reh gaye. Kyuki, ek ek baat jo Renshu ugal raha tha usme poornta sacchayi thi. Ise nakara nahi jaa sakta tha.

Shuru se hi unhone kabhi yeh nahi socha tha ki uska saamna karna asaan hoga. Lekin, unhone yeh bhi nahi socha tha ki woh sthiti ko sambhal nahi payenge. Akhirkar, yaha har ek aatmvishvas se bhara hua yoddha tha. Magar, jis tarah Renshu ne unke aadmiyon ke saath khela, uske aage sandeh jaisa kuch reh hi nahi gaya tha. Ve sab haath khade karne par majboor the.

Aadmi 1 : Dekho! M-Mujhe nahi pata tum sach keh rahe ho ya jhooth. Par, agar waqai tumne hamare aadmiyon ki jaan nahi li hai toh... Ye baat hum sabhi yaad rakhenge.

Aadmi 2 (nods) : Hmm!

Aadmi 3 : Lekin, iska matlab ye nahi ki hum Order ke gulam ho gaye hai.

Renshu : Mera kaam sirf tumhare leader se hai. Khoon kharaba karna hota toh mein tumhe kab ka maar chuka hota. Order na kabhi inn siddhanto par chala hai aur na hi chalega.

Aadmi 2 : Aur, hum sabhi Legion ka hissa rahe hai. Hamara kartavya hai ki hum apne ghar ki rakhwali kare. Magar, ye baat bhi sach hai ki agar tum hume maarna chaahte toh sach me maar dete.

Aadmi 3 : Haan! Aur, isliye-

Kehte hue woh Renshu ke raaste se alag ho gaya. Woh akela nahi tha. Uske saath uske saathi jo pehle ladne ke liye taiyaar the woh bhi uske maarg se hat gaye.

Renshu : !!??

Unka ishara saaf tha. Veh sab Renshu ki madad toh nahi karne waale the magar apne haath khade karte hue unhone ek prakar se uski madad kar hi di. Renshu ne unhe dekh haami bhari. Aur, uske baad woh log ghayalo ko utha ke unke gharo ki orr chal diye.

Yeh jhund bhi jaise taise raaste se hatt gaya. Unke jaate hi Renshu ne wapas apni nazre jab saamne gadayi toh use ek bura abhaas hua. Woh ladka-! Woh waha nahi tha. Woh gayab tha!

'Shit!!!'

Aur, achanak-

[Renshu-!!!! Dodge!!!]

Lloyd ki awaaz sunn Renshu apni jagah se uchak gaya. Uske hatate hi sansanata hua ek teer zameen par aake gira aur-

*Booooooooommmmmm*

Ek aur dhamaka. Ye wahi explosive arrow tha. Iss baar Lloyd ne ek nazar me hi pehchan liya. Renshu abhi hawa me hi tha. Uske qadam zameen par utar hi rahe the jab uss ladke ke chehre par ek kutil muskan fel gayi.

Ek sihran Renshu ke badan me daud gayi. Hawa ko cheer ke kaatate hue aa rahi ek awaaz-

"-!!!!!"

*Swoosh* *Swoosh* *Swoosh*

Woh koodne ke baad jaha utar raha tha, usi disha me dhue ko cheerte hue ek aur teer uski orr aaya. Ek jaal!!! Apne aap uske haath ne harqat li aur apne bhaale ki chain ko jorr se kheencha. Chain kisi saanp ki tarah aake fauran hi uske haath me lipat gayi aur-

*Claaaaannngggg*

Teer chain se jaa bhid usme dhans gaya. Teer ko chain par se nikal usne use alag kiya.

'He's getting on my nerves.'

[Use the bar's power on him.]

'Hmm!'

Woh dauda. Lekin, iss baar ladka bhi uski orr dauda. Dono ek dusre ki taraf aane lage. Aur, jaise hi faasla kam hua ladka hawa me ucchalte hue ulta ho gaya. Renshu ko koi mauka hi na mila. Ladke ke uchhalte hi kuch chhoti chhoti nukeeli cheezein seedhe uski taraf aayi, jinse woh poori tarah se bach na saka.

*Khaccchhh* *Khaccchhh*

'Shit!!! Shurikens???'

Woh nukeele shuriken uske shareer me jagah jagah ghus gaye. Koodate waqt ladke ne ye pehle hi fek diye the. Koodate waqt??

'Ek minute!? Shitttt...!'

Iska matlab woh ladka ab... Uske kaano me tabhi peeche se ek awaaz padi,

"Never turn your back on your enemy."

[Renshuuuu-!!!!]

Lloyd cheenkha aur agle hi pal-

*Baaaaammmmmmm*

"Urgh!!"

Renshu dur hawa me udte hue jaa ke gira. Usne vaar ko apne dono haatho se chhek ke apne chehre ko toh bacha liya. Magar, haatho me jamm ke chot pahuch gayi. Ladke ke haath me lohe ki ek rod thi. Koi shaq nahi tha ki ise bhi usi ne banaya tha.

'This is getting troublesome!'

Haatho ko mal, Iss baar woh punah dauda. Ladka bhi uski orr aaya. Magar, iss baar Renshu hawa me chhalaang maara.

'Huh!?'

Ye dekhte hi ladke ke qadam beech raaste me tham gaye. Renshu ke ek haath me uska bhaala tha toh wahi dusre me uski chain. Usne ladke ki taraf hawa me hi apne bhaale ki nok se nishana lagaya aur bhar taqat se use ladke ki orr fek diya.

Ladka ghabraate hue turant hi back hand spring maarne ke liye peeche gulati maara... Aur, tabhi Renshu ke hontho par ek kapti muskan saj gayi.

Jo bhaala usne feka tha, ek jhatke me usne use apni orr wapas kheech liya. Aur, iss baar chain ko ghuma ke fek diya.

*Kha-ching*

Peeche gulati maar raha ladka saamne ke drishya se anibhigya tha. Uska chehra neeche ki orr jo tha. Usne jaise hi chain ki awaaz suni uski aankhein bhay ke maare chaudi ho gayi.

'A Feint Attack??? Sh-Shit!!!'

Use bachaav ka koi samay na mila. Chain tezi se aake uske perro par bandhi. Full force ke saath Renshu ne uss ladke ko chain se kass ke kheencha aur woh udta hua perro me chain se bandhe Renshu ki orr aaya aur-

*Pooooooooooooowwww*

Mayhem ka ek bar upyog ho gaya. 200% Lethal Damage. Ladke ke pait ki atadiya jaise baahar aane ko ho gayi, uske muh se dherr saara khoon nikla aur woh jaa ke seedha ek chhote ped se jaa bhida. Ped do tukdo me vibhajit ho gaya aur neeche gir gaya.

*Huff* *Huff*

Renshu apni saanso ko durust karte hue apne badan se shurikens ko nikalne laga. Ab iss ladayi me uska upper hand tha. Bhaale ko zameen par zorr se khoste hue usne apni nigaahein ladke par tikayi.

"Ab tum saari baatein ugloge!!"

***

Wahi idhar bahar ka mahaul bhi bigda hua tha. Erica jawano aur Order ke aadmiyon ko chorr ke jaa chuki thi. Aur, inn sabhi ko ab lead karne ki zimmedari uss jawaan pe thi jo Renshu aur Erica ke sang chal raha tha.

Jawaan 1 : Miss Erica na jaane aise andhere jangal me kaha akeli chali gayi hai.

Jawaan 2 : Kya hume unke peeche jaana chahiye?

Jawaan 1 : Hume pata hi nahi hai ki woh gayi kaha hai. Aise me unka peecha karna waqt ki barbadi hi hogi. Kahi hum anchaahe jaal ka shikaar na ho jaaye. Behtar hoga ki hum unke kahe anusar aage badhe aur Unit 2 se engage hoye. Aap sab kya kehte ho?

Jawaan 2 : Haan, mein sehmat hu.

Order ke log bhi uski baato se raazi the magar unhe Erica ki chinta bhi utni hi sata rahi thi.

Aadmi 1 : Mein kya kehta hu... Hum me se 2-4 log Miss Erica ko dhundhne ke liye chale jaate hai. Kya pata woh kahi kisi mushqil me fass jaaye? Aur, madad ka intezar kare? Aise me hamara ye farz banta hai ki hum unki madad ke liye pahuche.

Aadmi 2 : Tumne theek kaha. Suno! Jo bhi 3-4 log Miss Erica ko dhundhne jaane ke liye taiyaar hai woh aage aaye.

Uske kehte hi 15-20 aadmi ek saath aage aa gaye.

Aadmi 2 : Itne nahi. Sirf 4. Tum dono aur tum dono. Tum chaaro Miss Erica ko dhundhne jaoge. Jo bhi samaan abhi lena hai bag me rakh lo. Yaha se hum apne apne raaste ho jayenge.

Poorn taiyaari ke baad 4 log Erica ki khoj me uss disha me nikal gaye jis disha me woh bhaagi thi. Toh wahi, Jawaan samet baaki sabhi jangal ki aur bhi gehrayi me Unit 2 ka saamna karne ghus gaye.

Divya, uska escort Clark, security aur jawaan bhi sab saath me peeche chal rahe the. Pareshani agar kisi baat ki thi toh woh yahi thi ki Veer ke baare me ab tak use koi khabar pata nahi chali thi.

Divya : Mister Renshu kaha par hai?

Jawaan 3 : Mister Renshu aage unke kisi skilled fighter se fight me engaged hai. Unhone ye mauka hamare liye banaya hai. Yaha se Unit 2 ke saath bhidant hogi. Aap sab mere peeche hi rahiyega. Hume ladayi me nahi rehna hai. Unki nazro se dur rehna hai.

Divya (nods) : Hmm!

Usne haami bhari. Magar, chinta thi jo khaaye jaa rahi thi. Jaise jaise samay beet raha tha wese wese Divya aur bhi zyada bechain hoti jaa rahi thi. Kaaran sirf ek hi tha - Veer ki safety.

***

"Damn it! Damn it-!!! Kaha ho tum??"

Erica tez raftar se bhaag rahi thi. Gati ke chalte uske baal hawa me zorro se lehra rahe the. 'Nocturnal Shade' aur 'Dead Silence' dono hi activated the, jiske chalte use andhere me dekhne ki na hi koi taqleef ho rahi thi aur na hi uske qadmo ki awaaz sunayi pad rahi thi. Woh aise bhaag rahi thi jaise ek billi raaste par bhaagti ho. Koi awaaz nahi.



East side ke entrance se pravesh woh pehle hi kar chuki thi. Aur, Veer ki talashi me juti thi. Magar, abhi tak Veer ka koi bhi naam-o-nishaan nahi mil raha tha.

"Just, where are you-!?"

Aur, kuch duri tay karne ke baad hi uske qadam saamne ke drishya ko dekh tham gaye.

'What the-!?'

Uske saamne ek neher thi. Parantu, uske upar bana rassi aur lakdi ka pul kata hua neeche latak raha tha. Erica ne neeche jhaank ke dekha toh paaya ki pul ka thoda hissa neher ke andar bhi dooba hua tha. Usne wapas apni nazre saamne gadayi.

[Pul ko saamne ki orr se kisi ne kaata hai, Erica.]

'Tumne sahi kaha Genie. Aur, ye abhi kuch derr pehle hi kaata gaya hai. Shit-!!! Iska matlab Veer zaroor uss orr hai. Woh wapas kaise aayega?'

Woh pul ko dobara se sahi karne ke baare me soch hi rahi thi jab uski nazre unn magarmaccho par padi jo beecho beech ek adanga bann ke waha niyukt hue terr rahe the.

'Shittt-!!! Ye yaha kya kar rahe hai? Ek hi jagah par!? Aisa lag raha hai kisi ne inhe jaan boojh ke yaha par chhora ho.'

[Ab uss orr jaane ke do hi upaay hai. Ya toh tum inhe pehle yaha se kisi tarah distract kar ke hatao aur fir terr ke jao. Ya fir thodi dur side se chhalaang lagao aur fir terr ke uss orr jao. Upaay koi bhi ho, udhar terr ke pahuchne ke baad tumhe climb toh karna hi padega kyuki pul toot chuka hai.]

'I know! I know! Let's try the first method first.'

Erica ne neeche zameen se ek patthar uthaaya aur nishana lagaate hue zorr se neher me unn magarmachho se halka sa dur fek diya.

*Splash*

Magarmacch chaukanne hue, woh sabhi terrte hue uss orr gaye magar, do teen chakkar maarne ke baad wapas se apni jagah par aake jamm gaye.

'What the-!?'

[They are keeping a watch. Hume dusra method hi try karna padega. Let's go!]

'Urgh! Alright-!'

Na chaahte hue bhi Erica ko apna rukh badalna pada. Woh dayi orr aage badhi. Kuch duri par aane ke baad usne neeche dekha. Neher me halka halka bahaav tha. Lekin, ye bahaav zyada tezz nahi tha. Woh apne shareer ko behne se rok sakti thi. Agar, bahaav tezz hota toh woh behte hue unn magarmaccho ke paas pahuch jaati. Aur, fir waha se nikalna uske liye bhaari pad jaata. Shayad woh maari bhi jaa sakti thi.

'I can handle this much current.'

[Good! Then, dive in!]

Kapde pehen ke paani me koodna Erica ko zara bhi pasand nahi tha. Magar, woh janti thi ki Veer abhi mushqil me tha. Samay zaaya nahi kar sakti thi woh-

'You better thank me later, Mister-!!!'

Aur, mann me budbudate hue woh uss chhor se kood gayi.

Chhapaak ki awaaz ke saath woh neher me aake giri. Neher gehri thi aur chaudayi me badi bhi. Yeh sirf Lancang Mekong ki kayi tributaries me se ek thi jo jangal me se hoke guzarti thi. Agar, yeh swayam Lancang Mekong nadi hoti toh Erica ko ise paar karne ke baare me 10 baar sochna pad jaata.

Neher paar kar woh dusre chhor par aayi aur usne chattaan ko pakad upar chadhna shuru kar diya. Pattharo par apne haatho ki pakad mazboot banaate hue woh ahista ahista upar chadhti gayi jab tak ki ekdum upar na pahuch gayi.

*Huff* *Huff*

Upar aate hi usne ek rahat ki saans li. Uske poore kapde paani se bheeg chuke the. Halki thand ke chalte uska badan bhi ab kaanpna shuru ho chuka tha.

Genie ne turant hi 'Chameleon' ka upyog kar uske badan ka tapmaan sahi kiya tab jaa ke Erica ko thoda behtar mehsoos hua.

Aur, bina waqt barbad kiye woh punah aage badh gayi. Pul isi orr se kaata gaya tha iska matlab khatra iss orr hi tha. Isliye, woh sambhal ke apne qadam aage badha rahi thi. Kuch duri hi usne abhi tay ki thi ki tabhi use bhi-

'Huh!?'

Woh gandh aayi.

'Th-This-!'

[It's blood!]

Khoon me maujood lohe ki dhaans hawa me soonghte hi Erica ke badan me ruye khade ho gaye.

*Whooooosh*

Woh apni jagah se gayab hui aur ped par chadh gayi. Usne apne aas paas poore ilaaqe ka aaklan kiya lekin kahi bhi kuch bhi use nazar na aaya.

Ek ped se dusre ped ki daali me chhalaang maarte hue woh thoda aur aage badhi. Jaise jaise woh aage badh rahi thi, khoon ki mehek aur bhi prabal hoti jaa rahi thi.

'What the hell is this-!? Urgh!'

Aur, tabhi woh ek daali par aake ruk gayi. Neeche use saaf saaf khoon ki ek lambi rekha dikhayi di.

'Y-Ye-!?'

[Kisi blood trail ki tarah nazar aa rahi hai. Pata nahi kitni dur tak gayi hogi.]

'B-But ye hai kya?'

[Check it first.]

'Ah right! Check!'

*Ding*

[A trail of fresh human blood.]

'F-Fresh human blood? Genie?'

[Hmm! Zaroor uss Jaw Long ka hi kaam hoga ye.]

'Jaw Long?'

[Hmm! He must be using some kind of skill or a card.]

'P-Par ye kaisi skill hai jisme human blood ki zaroorat padti ho?'

[There are many of them!]

'Ahhhh!? But why?? Aur, agar ye human blood hai toh-!? Toh, unka kya jinka yeh blood hai? Are they alive?'

[I don't know. Remember, Erica! Aisi bahut si skills aur cards hote hai jo evil practices bhi apnaate hai.]

'Huh???'

[Zaroori nahi ki koi skill ya card hamesha accha hi ho. They can be bad too.]

'Hmm!'

Erica bechari chup chaap Genie ki baat sunti rahi. Use jaise ye jaan ke thes pahuchi thi ki system ka upyog insaan ke khoon se kuch karne ke liye bhi kiya jaa raha tha.

'Kya tum jaanti ho ki yeh kya hai, Genie?'

[Hmm! Mein pata laga sakti hu. Lekin, usme mujhe thoda samay lagega. Kyuki, khoon ka istemal karne waali laakho skills hai. Unme se ye kaun si ek hai iske baare me pata karne me mujhe samay toh lagega hi na?]

'Hmm! Okay! Thank you!'

[Sambhal ke aage badhna.]

'Umm! Kuch hoga toh nahi na? Mujhe kuch theek nahi lag raha.'

[Hum kuch nahi kar sakte. Hume iss trail ko cross karna hi hoga. If you want to save that guy... Then, there isn't any other option.]

'Okay! I see!'

Erica ne ped par ek daal se dusri daal par koodate hue aage badhna hi theek samjha. Neeche ka vatavaran use kuch theek malum nahi pad raha tha.

Aur, jaise hi usne trail ko paar kiya... Udhar andar Jaw Long ki bauhe prashn ke chalte upar ko ho gayi.

'We've entered!'

[Keep going!]

Erica mehsoos kar paa rahi thi ki yaha ka tapman kuch zyada hi thanda pad chuka tha. Geele hone ki wajah se use apna tapman banaye rakhne me dikkat aa rahi thi.

Bheetar pravesh karte hi use kuch ajeeb si awaazein sunayi padne lagi. Ye janglee janvaro ki awaazein thi. Erica ki dhadkane tezz ho gayi. Awaazein aur adhik bhayanak aur ugra hoti jaa rahi thi. Aur, jaise hi woh ek daal pe aake ruki.

'Nocturnal Shade' ki madad se usne dur ho rahi halchal ko gaur se dekha. Aur, jo usne dekha... Use dekh uske perr wahi kaanp gaye. Uska poora badan thar-tharaane laga. Woh itna ghabra gayi ki kampan ke chalte woh neeche girne ko hui magar, ped ko haath se thaam usne khud ko girne se bachaya aur daal pe hi thithurte hue baith gayi. Uski aankhein bhauchakke hone ke chalte feli hui thi. Aisa nazara usne aaj se pehle kabhi apni zindagi me nahi dekha tha.

Saamne-!!!

Saamne Veer ghayal awastha me bhaagta jaa raha tha aur uske peeche-!? Uske peeche poora ka poora jangal ka samrajya laga hua tha. Pedo par koodate bandaro ka samooh jo daali se latak latak ke furti me aage badh rahe the.

Neeche daudate lakadbagghe, bhediye, aur seengh waale hiran jo jhund me sirf Veer ko apne perro se kuchalne ke liye bhaag rahe the.

Upar hawa me udta baaj jo Veer ke upar kisi helicopter ki spotlight ki tarah use apni nigrani me rakha hua tha.

Aur, peeche bhaagta Black Panther, jo Veer ke maans ko apne nukeele daanto se phaadne ki firaaq me tha. Magar, khauf sirf inka hi nahi tha.

Khauf tha uss aadmi ka...! Jo inhe apne vash me kiye hua tha. Jaw Long-!!!

*Grooooowwwwwlll*

Ek aisi dahaad waha par goonji ki Erica ke poore badan me raungte khade ho gaye. Jaise hi usne Veer ke peeche apni nazro ko le jaate hue dekha toh maano uske badan se uski rooh hi nikal gayi.

Jangalo ke janvaro me se sabse ugra aur sabse ghatak ~ Baagh! Kintu, uske upar koi tha. Uss baagh ki sawari koi aur nahi balki Jaw Long kar raha tha.

Veh bhaari, peeli aankhon waala, dhaari-daar bhayankar janvar Jaw Long jaise vyakti ka wazan uthaane ke baad bhi itni tezz daud raha tha. Akhir, kitni kshamta thi usme?

Erica aayi toh Veer ko bachaane thi. Magar, drishya dekh woh itna bhaybheet ho gayi ki bechari ke perr wahi jawab de gaye.

'I- M-My legs...! G-Genie!!! Mere perr hilne ke naam nahi le rahe, Genie!!! M-My whole body is shivering.'

[Don't worry! Calm yourself!]

'N-No wonder-! *huff* No wonder his shirt was destroyed. *shivers* H-How can he???'

[???]

'H-How can he-!? Itna sab kuch hone ke baad bhi woh waha kyu hai, Genie? It's suicidal. *huff* Agar, woh waha aur raha toh maara jayega.'

[If he's running at that pace, then it means he's fine for now.]

'Y-Ye tum kya bakwas kar rahi ho Genie? *huff* Th-This is suicide! It's pure suicide. J-Just how long he has been running for?'

[Stay calm!]

'F-Fuck it-!!! Haha! H-He will die, Genie! *sniff* At this rate, he will die. *sniff* Is he stupid??? K-Kyuuu? He could have just-!!! Woh chaahta toh yaha aata hi nahi...! Even then-! *sniff* Why did he???'

[I can see now!]

'???'

[He's a man who stays true to his convictions.]

'Huh!!??'

Aur, aaj pehli baar Erica ko Veer ke uss dradh nishchay ka abhaas hua. Uss naujavan ko dekh jo aisi awastha me apne mann ko shaant banaye rakh aisi musibat se ladd raha tha, pehli baar aaj Erica ka dil kisi aur wajah se zorr se dhadka.

Veer ke punah woh bol uske mann me goonj gaye.

'You can't even imagine the chaos when 2 system holders fight each other without any restraint.'

'J-Just how many battles have he fought to achieve that level of confidence and such calmness?'

[I'm not gonna lie. I'm very impressed. Aisi paristhiti me agar khud tumhare dad hote toh mujhe nahi lagta ki woh itna shaant khud ko rakh paate.]

'!!!?'

[He might be having a very good system like me.]

'Huh-!!?'

[You are lucky... to have him on your side. Imagine the destruction he can bring if he was your enemy.]

Aisa vichaar karte hi Erica ke badan me ek sihran daud gayi. Veer agar unka dushman hota toh-!? Kya kar sakta tha woh? Woh sochna bhi nahi chaahti thi. Genie ki baat poornta sach thi. Woh sab kismat waale the jo Veer unki taraf tha.

'I-I want to help him! Lekin, mere perr kaanp rahe hai.'

[Zaroorat nahi. Jis halat me tum abhi ho uske liye ek musibat hi banogi. Khud ko shaant karo aur halaat ke hisaab se dhaalo khud ko. Use dekh ke lag raha hai ki uske paas kuch plan hai.]

'R-Really???'

[Hmm!]

'G-Genie-! Agar mein uski jagah hoti, toh shayad kab ka maari gayi hoti. Mujhe nahi lagta mein uss tarah himmat rakh ke unn janvaro se bhaagi hoti. Mere toh perr wahi jamm gaye hote. Balki, abhi bhi use dekh... Mere badan me raungte khade hue hai. Bas, soch rahi hu ki akhir uske paas kaise itni himmat aayi hogi? J-Jaw Long-!! Kisne socha tha ki uske paas aisa kuch hoga-!?'

[Abhi tum bas apne aap ko niyantran me lao. Agar, kuch anhoni ke asaar bane toh mein action lungi. I will help you. So, don't worry. For now we can watch.]

'Mmm-!!'

Woh bas Veer ke liye yaha se dua hi kar sakti thi. Iss sthiti me agar woh jaati toh Veer ke liye madad kam balki adanga zyada sabit hoti. Veer ne apni situation ko turant bhaanp ke khud ko adapt kar liya tha, magar harr kisi me ye capability nahi hoti thi.

'Fuck!! Fuck! Fuckkkk!!!'

Idhar Veer apna stamina gawata hua bhaage jaa raha tha. Ye janvar na jaane kab se uske peeche lage hue the.





'Kya tumhe kuch pata chala? For fuck sake aur kitna time lagega???'

[Urghhh! Shut the fuck up! Tumhe andaza bhi hai ki kitni saari skills hai blood se related? I had to go one by one to look for the one that motherfucker was using...!]

'Toh? Ab ye mat kehna ki kuch pata nahi laga. I've been stalling them for quite a long. Aur, ab mujhe nahi lagta ki mein unhe aur zyada chhaka sakta hu. Jaw Long-!!! Fucking hell-!! He's riding a tiger!!!'

[Fufufu~ Are you scared? Call me 'Mommy' and I will tell you everything.]

'Huh? Matlab tumne pata laga liya?'

[Of course! Mujhe pata lag gaya hai ki woh kya istemal kar raha hai.]

'Oh really? Toh? Kya?'

[First call me, 'Mommy!' Tabhi, kuch bataungi.]

'What the hell-!? You freakin-'

[Bata rahi hu. Don't spoil the mood now.]

'Be quick!!!'

[Woh blood trail... Definitely, woh human blood tha. Lekin, woh jaan boojh ke waha giraya gaya tha.]

'What? Jaan boojh ke?'

[Yes! It was this-]

*Ding*

[Legendary skill : Jemisha's Blood Ring.
Description : The skill allows the host to have limitless perception for a certain area. Pour the human blood and form a trail to create a circular ring of blood. If anyone enters the ring, the host will immediately come to know about them.
Note : There is no limit to the area covered by the blood ring. The bigger the ring, the bigger the area which can be perceived.]

'Th-This-!!'

Veer ne jaise hi skill ka description padha, toh uske hosh hi udd gaye.

'Fuck this-!! Toh ye baat thi. Isliye usko mere andar aane ka pata pehle se hi lag gaya tha.'

[That's right!]

Jemisha's Blood Ring ek legendary skill thi jo insaan ke khoon ka istemal karti thi. Khoon ko ek golakar ki rekha me kheencha jaata tha jiske baad usme pravesh karte hi system holder ko pata lag jaaya karta tha ki woh kaha par hai. Veer ke andar ghuste hi Jaw long ko pata lag chuka tha ki woh kaha par rekha ko paar kiya tha.

'Legendary skill-!!? Uske paas legendary skill hai?'

[Not one but two.]

Pari ne jaise hi ye kaha Veer ke perro tale jaise zameen khisak gayi.

'Wh-Wha-!?'

[Have a look at this.]

*Ding*

[Legendary skill : Shayna's Blood Ritual.
Description : Bestows a set of instructions to perform Shayna's Blood Ritual. A ritual meticulously written by the legendary entity Shayna herself. The host must have 'Shayna's Access' and 'Animal Kingdom' cards before performing the ritual.
Click 'here' to view the set of instructions.

Note : Ritual will only last for 25 minutes.]

'What the-!?'

Veer ko ab jaise baatein samajh aa rahi thi. Shayna's Blood Ritual woh ritual tha jisme kuch mayavi nirdesh diye gaye the. Veer ne jaise hi use 'click' kar kholna chaaha toh woh khula hi nahi. Balki, ek notification uske saamne prakat ho gaya.

*Ding*

[Only after claiming the skill you can view the instructions.]

'Toh ye baat hai. I see!'

[Ritual ki timing 25 minutes hai. Iska matlab woh janvar bas 25 minutes tak hi uss Jaw Long ke ishaaro par naachenge. Bas, 5 minute aur hold kar ke rakhna hoga.]

'Hmm!'

[Aur, rahi baat cards ki toh woh iska istemal kar raha hai.]

*Ding*



Card ko padhte hi Veer sab kuch samajh gaya.

'I see! Toh ek prakar se woh iski madad se unhe control kar raha tha?'

[Sirf iski madad se nahi. Use inn sab ko upyog me laane ke liye kayi cheezon ka istemal karna pada. Jemisha's blood ring hamare aane ki khabar dene ke liye istemal ki gayi thi.]

'I know!'

[Uske baad Shayna's Blood Ritual perform kiya gaya taaki janvaro ko niyantran me laaya jaa sake.]

'How powerful-!'

[Aur, uske baad unhe niyantran me banaye rakhne ke liye 'Animal Kingdom' card ka istemal kiya gaya. Isme koi shaq nahi ki usne abhi yahi equip kar rakha hoga. Itna sab karne ke liye usne apni 2 legendary skills aur do cards ka prayog kiya hai.]

'2 cards? Dusra kaun sa card hai?'

[Shayna's Access. Shayna woh entity hai jo inn tantra vidyao me maahir hai.]

'Shayna? Who the fuck is Shayna?'

[I can't tell you.]

'Fuckkk!!!'

[Uske saath communication baithane ke liye Shayna's Access card ka hona zaroori hai. Aise samjho ki agar tum kisi aatma ki shaktiyo ka prayog karne ke liye uss se sampark karna chaahte ho, toh pehle uss aatma ka ek card hona zaroori hai. Kuch samajh aaya?]

'Samajh gaya!'

*Ding*

[This is her card.]



'I get it!'

[Good!]

*Booooooooommmmmm*

Magar, Veer zyada derr baato me lage reh ke unn janvaro se peechha nahi churra sakta tha. Ek aur dhamake ne use ye baat batla di.

[Bas 2 minute aur-!!!]

Veer ne bhaagte hue peeche mud ke dekha toh paaya ki ek baagh par baithe hue Jaw Long uski taraf hi aa raha tha. Uske haath me ek bada sa kulhada tha. Par, uski aankhein abhi bhi band thi.

'What the hell? Uski aankhein agar band hai-!! Toh, woh dekh kaise paa raha hai sab kuch?'

[It's his skill.]

'Kaun si??'

*Ding*

[Skill : Aura Vision.
Description : Allows the host to see the world even after losing the eyesight. Aura vision grants a grey scenery vision. Different living beings are shown in different colored auras.
Note : Non living things cannot be observed through Aura Vision.]

'Fuck this-!!! It's getting complicated. Akhir, aur kitni skills hai iske paas?'

Pari ne ekdum sateek aaklan kar ke diya tha. Jaw Long pehle hi Veer ke neele rang ke aura ko dur se dekh ke pehchan chuka tha ki koi insaan uski territory me ghus aaya hai.

Insaano ka aura neele rang se nazar aata tha toh wahi ped paudho ka hare rang se. Aur, janvaro ka peele rang se. Ye rang uske liye kaafi the aankh na hote hue bhi sab kuch dekhne ke liye.

[Oh shit-!!!]

'What?!?'

[I just realised...! Isliye, uski aankhein nahi hai buddhu!]

'Huh???'

[Arre, isliye woh aankhein band kiya hua hai. Ab tumhe samajh aaya ki kyu uski band aankhon se khoon beh raha tha? Kyuki, usne apni aankhein nikaal di thi.]

'What the-!?'

Veer ke badan me ek sihran daud gayi. Apni aankhein nikaal di? Kya matlab?

[Rituals pagal... Rituals...! Koi bhi ritual perform karne ke liye kuch balidan dena hota hai. Considering, ye dono skills legendary thi zahir hai usne koi na koi sacrifice diya hoga jisme usne khud ka koi ang ritual me chadhaya hoga. Now everything makes sense.]

'Wait! Toh iska matlab usne 2 rituals perform kiye. Aur, unn dono me usne apna ek ek balidan diya. Yaani ki... Uski ek ek aankh!?'

[Exactly!!!!]

'He's going to such lengths just to chase me down???'

[Use thodi pata tha ki tum aa jaoge. Usne ye sab toh Renshu ke liye prepare kar rakha tha. Humne uski mehnat par paani ferr diya. Sirf ek minute aur ab bas-!!!]

Ab harr baat sense bana rahi thi. Shukriya Pari ka jo usne samay rehte sab kuch khoj nikala tha. Veer janta tha ki use bas ek minute aur inse bhaagna tha aur fir ye sabhi niyantran se mukt ho jaane waale the.

[Also, woh unhe poori tarah control nahi kar raha hai. Bas, unhe tame kar raha hai. Hypnosis nahi hai yeh.]

'Got it!'

[25 seconds.]

Veer bhaagta gaya. Use saamne ek aur pul nazar aaya. Pul patla tha. Veer bina soche samjhe uss orr bhaaga aur idhar peeche se Black Panther theek uske peeche aate hue pul par dauda.

[20 seconds.]

Veer ke qadam tezz raftaar me pul par bhaag rahe the. Toh wahi Panther bhi Veer ki gati milaate hue uske qareeb aane laga. Pul dono ke bhaar se poori tarah se dol ke idhar udhar hone laga.

Aur, abhi Veer chhor tak pahuch paata ki tabhi uss chhor se ek bada sa ajgar pul par chadh uski orr tezz raftaar se reng ke aane laga.

'Shitttt-!!!'

Ek Deadlock!!!

[10 seconds.]

Ajgar achanak hi uski orr uchka. Toh wahi peeche se aa raha panther bhi uski orr lapka aur tabhi-

*Ding*

Panther ka perr lakdi ke pul ke ek takhte par padte hi andar ghus gaya. Probability manipulation ne ek baar fir uski jaan bacha li. Veer ne samay rehte hue khud ko baayi orr rassi par jhukaaya aur dono ajgar aur panther ek dusre se jaa bhide.

[5 seconds.]

Pul ki rassi par bhaar badha. Ek orr santulan hone laga... Pul baayi orr jhukne laga. Aur, derr na lagi jab Veer ke bhaar ke chalte pul poori tarah se baayi orr jhuk gaya.

'Fuckkkkk!!!'

Veer, panther aur ajgar samet seedhe dusri neher me jaa gira. Lancang Mekong ki ek aur tributary. Parantu, ye kaafi chhoti thi aur bahaav ekdum na ke barabar.

*Splaaaaaaaasssshhhh*

Neher me Veer chhapaak se gira. Aur, jaise hi Panther aur ajgar gire woh dono pehle toh khud ko kinare kar Veer ko dhundhe. Par agle hi shan-

*Ding*

[O seconds.]

[Shayna's Blood Ritual ki time limit khatam. They are no longer in control.]

Maano jaise janvaro ko bhi achanak se kuch ho gaya. Fir, Veer ne ek hairat angez drishya dekha. Jis Panther aur ajgar me thodi derr pehle itni ekta thi, jo use maarne ke liye ek dusre par dhyaan tak nahi de rahe the. Wahi ab ek dusre par jhapatta maarne par tule the.

Veer apni aankhon ko bas paani me se nikaalte hue sab kuch dekhta gaya. Panther ne ajgar ko apne jabdo me pakda aur use ghaseet ke le jaane laga.




Aur, derr na lagi jab woh use apne daanto ke beech fasa ke waha se le jaane me qamyab ho gaya.

Shayna's Blood Ritual ki time limit samapt ho chuki thi. Magar, asli ladayi ab shuru honi baaki thi. Abhi woh Aquatic Breathing ka upyog kar paani me saans lene hi wala tha jab Pari ne use mana kar diya-

[Wait!!]

'Hmm?'

[Check the water first.]

'Right! Check!!'

*Ding*

[Water body induced with an unknown venom.]

'Shittttt!!! Akhir ye banda kitni dur ki planning kar ke baitha hai?'

Woh saans le leta toh abhi ke abhi maara jaata. Pehle se hi Jaw Long ne uss hisse me apne kisi zeher ko gira ke neher ko dooshit kar rakha tha.

Aur tabhi, Veer ke kaano me ek dahaad sunaayi di. Jaw Long upar baagh par baithe use hi neeche ghoor ke dekh raha tha.

'Pari!!! Agar Animal Kingdom aur Shayna's Ritual ka asar khatam ho gaya hai toh fir woh baagh abhi bhi uske niyantran me kaise hai?'

[Woh uska paaltu bhi ho sakta hai.]

'Hmm!'

Jaw Long tabhi apne baagh par se utra. Aur, ek chhalaang me hi seedhe neeche ko kood neher me utar aaya.

*Splaaaaaaaasssshhhh*

Paani chhalakte hue upar uchhla aur boondo me bikharte hue neeche girne laga. Jaw Long apna kulhada liye wahi paani me khusi ek lakdi par chadh gaya. Uski aankhein aag baboola ho chuki thi.

Jagah jagah ped ki ye lakdiyaan aadhi kati hui paani ke andar ekdum neeche zameen me dhasi hui thi. Shayad pehle yaha ped hua karte the jinhe baad me kaat diya gaya tha aur neher ke paani ko nikaalne ke liye iss orr se raasta bana diya gaya.

Unhi ardh kati lakdiyo ka sahara lete hue Veer bhi unhi me se ek par chadh gaya. Ab muqabla tha barabri ka. Do system holder jo ek dusre se bhidne ke liye taiyaar the.

Veer 25 minute ki iss bhaag daud se thak chuka tha lekin abhi bhi usme itni taqat thi ki woh Jaw Long se yuddh kar sake.

Aur, fir shuru hua asli muqabla...

*Swoosh* *Swoosh*

Jaw Long ek lakdi se doosri par koodate hue Veer ki orr aaya.

"Come then-!!" Veer taiyaar tha.

Veer ke nazdeek waali lakdi par aate hi Jaw Long ne zorr se apna kulhada ghumaya jise Veer ne jhuk ke dodge kar liya.

Aur, woh koodate hue peeche ke ardh ped par jaa ke khada ho gaya.

'Violet ke dwara di gayi saari needles aur woh serum uss blast me wahi gir gayi. I only have one knife and one pocket knife.'

[Use the normal knife for emergency parrying.]

'Yeah-!!!'

Iss baar woh tezzi me ek lakde se dusre par phaandte hue aage badha aur uski laat seedhe Jaw Long ke pait par aayi.

'What-!?'

Lekin, ek haath se hi Jaw Long ne uski taang ko jakad liya. Achanak hi Veer ke jism me ek sihran daud gayi. Aisa laga jaise agar abhi woh waha se na hata toh uska perr wahi katt ke ukhaad diya jayega.

Aur, wahi hota...! Jaw Long ne apna kulhada hawa me upar kiya...! Veer ki aankhein woh dekhte hi fel gayi. Aur, kulhada neeche aane hi waala tha ki Veer ne apni dusri taang se seedhe Jaw Long ke perr ke ghutno ke bagal me vaar kiya.

*Thuck*

Santulan bigda... Ek side se Jaw Long jhukne par majboor ho gaya. Pakad dheeli hui aur Veer ko mauka mil gaya.

*Whooooooosshhhh*

Woh palak jhapakte uske changul se nikal peeche ke lakde par kooda. Aur koodate hi uske kaano me hawa me sansanati hui aati kisi cheez ki awaaz padi,

*Whoosh* *Whoosh* *Whoosh*

*Ding*



Apne aap uska shareer neeche jhuka aur jhukte hi Jaw Long ka kulhada uske sarr ke upar se bhayanak raftaar se nikal gaya. Uske sarr ke 8-10 baal chhalni hoke hawa me hi udd gaye. Agar, sahi samay par woh na jhukta toh unn kuch baalo ki jagah uska sarr waha hawa me udd raha hota.

Veer ne apni baah ko dekha. Goosebumps poore shareer par bikhre hue the. Aur, tabhi-

"Shebaaaaaaaa-!!!!!!"

Jaw Long dahaada!!!! Uska kulhada ab uske haatho me nahi tha. Aur, beshaq uske awaaz lagaate hi-

*Keeaaaaaaarrrrrrrr*



Sheba raat ke uss andhere me hawa me apne par felaye aasman me uske madad ke liye haazir ho gaya.

[See! I told you! That eagle is a pain in the ass.]

Sheba ke panjo me ek bhaala latak raha tha. Woh upar udte hue Jaw Long ke nazdeek aaya aur panje kholte hue usne bhaala chorr diya jo seedha neeche girte hue Jaw Long ke haatho me jaa gira.

Bhaale ko apne ird gird zorro se gol gol ghumaate hue Jaw Long punah Veer ki taraf lapka. Woh bhari bharkam shareer, aur kayi shero ke barabar taqat rakhne waala danav insaan iss baar Veer ki khaal ukhaadne ki firaaq me nazar aa raha tha.

[Careful-!!!]

*Whoosh*

Uske hamle shuru ho gaye. Bhaale ko woh itni taqat aur itni nipudta se chala raha tha ki uske praharo se neeche paani me tarange paida ho rahi thi.

Woh jaan gaya tha ki Veer ne paani ki ek boond bhi apne andar nahi li thi. Uski ek aur tactic barbad jaa chuki thi. Gussa uske sarr par savaar tha. Ya toh ab woh yaha se zinda bach ke nikalne waala tha ya fir Veer.

Woh garja-

"Haaaaaarrrrrrggghhhhhhh!!!!!"

Uski garaj sunn Veer ko hawa me kampan mehsoos hone laga. Jaw Long ne bhaala fir itni zorr se feka ki Veer ko aage ki rann-neeti banaane ka koi samay na mila.

*Swooosh*

Woh bhaala tezi se uske perro ki orr aaya toh Veer hawa me ek jhatke me ucchak gaya.

*Thuck*

Aur, bhaala seedhe lakde par jaa ke dhans gaya. Magar, jaise hi Veer uchka...! Use agle hi pal apne nirnay par glaani mehsoos hui. Kyuki-

*Poooooooowwwwww*

Zordaar laat seedhe aake uske pait par padi. Ek feint attack. Jaan boojh ke uske perro ki orr woh bhaala feka gaya tha. Taaki, woh hawa me uchke aur Jaw Long yahi soch pehle hi hawa me kood chuka tha.

Veer ka shareer hawa me uda... Jaise patthar ko paani ki sateh par tez gati me fekne se woh uske upar tappe khaate hue dur jaata tha. Waise hi Veer ka shareer bhi iss waqt neher ke paani ke upar tappe khaate hue dur jaa gira.

Gati dheeme padte hi uska shareer paani ki sateh ko chorr andar doob gaya. Veer ne aav dekha na taav aur seedhe kinaare ki orr terrte hue woh chhor ke liye bhaaga.

Jaw Long ko jaise hi uske iraado ka pata chala, toh bhala woh kaha peeche rehne waala tha. Veer ka peecha karte hue woh bhi neher chorr ke usme se baahar aa gaya.

Zameen par qadam padte hi Veer uss se ek duri banaane ke liye bhaaga. Woh dono jangal ki aur bhi gehrayi me aa chuke the aur yaha se mine ka raasta ab thoda hi bacha tha.

Beecho beech ek jagah par aate hi Veer palat ke Jaw Long se bhidne ke liye taiyaar ho gaya. Martial arts ka stance lete hi usne khud ko taiyaar kiya. Saamne se baagh ke samaan woh danav bhaagte hue aa raha tha.

Toh wahi upar thehri Erica ko achanak hi hawa me antar samajh aa gaya. Janvar ab ajeeb tareeqe se idhar udhar hote hue bhaag rahe the.

[Lagta hai woh sab control se baahar aa gaye hai ab.]

'Ohh! P-Par Veer kaha hai?'

Woh bechain hote hue idhar udhar nazre daudayi.

[We need to check it out. Tum ab theek ho?]

'H-Haan shayad-! I can move my legs now.'

[Good! We need to make a dash. Quick!]

'Y-Yes!'

Woh apni jagah se uthate hue Veer aur Jaw Long ki talaash me ek baar fir aage badhi.

Toh wahi Veer yaha neeche Jaw Long se yuddh me bhida hua tha. Bhaale se bachte hue Veer apne attack uss par land kar raha tha magar, koi bhi vaar aisa nahi kar paaya jis se Jaw Long ko ghaat pahuch sake.

Kintu, jaise usne koi tarqeeb soch rakhi thi. Ek dusre par vaar kar rahe jaise hi iss baar Jaw Long ka bhaala Veer ke seene ko chhalni karne ke liye aaya.

*Thuck*

Veer ne khud ko peeche kar liya. Bhaale ki nok zameen me ghusi aur agle hi shan-

"Haaarghhh!!!"

Veer ki laat ne bhaale ke lakde ke do tukde kar diye. Beech se tootate hi bhaala ab vyarth ho gaya.

Usne ladaayi iss mod par laa ke khadi kar di ki ab hand to hand combat ke alawa Jaw Long ke paas aur koi chaara na tha.

Dekh ke prateet ho raha tha ki uss baagh par bhi uska koi khaas niyantran nahi tha. Animal kingdom ke asar khatam hote hi woh baagh bhi kahi nazar nahi aa raha tha.

Aur, ab shuru hui thi asli combat. Jaw Long ka pehla prahaar Veer ki kamar ki orr badha.

Shareer ko peeche kar Veer ne khud ko bachaya. Uske hontho par muskaan feli...! Woh jaise hi aage badh hamla karne ka socha ki tabhi Jaw Long ka wahi haath wapas se uss par hamla karne ke liye tezi se aaya.

'Tch!!!'

Aur, iss baar-

*Swish*

Veer ne duck kar liya. Woh tezz raftaar se neeche jhuka. Uski aankhon ke saamne Jaw Long ka pait tha. Aur, uska mukka kass ke maarne ke liye taiyaar tha.

Magar, Jaw Long bhi jaise ye padh chuka tha. Woh ghoomte hue peeche hua aur Veer ka vaar vyarth chala gaya. Agle hi shan, Veer ko apne chehre par ek parchhayi chadhti nazar aayi.

Upar jaise hi dekha-

*Baaaaammmmmmm*

Jaw Long ka perr zameen par zorr se pada aur uss zameen ke parchhatte udd gaye. Ek halka gehra gaddha waha bann gaya. Agar, sahi samay par woh na hatata toh woh laat use kaafi haani pahucha sakti thi.

[What are you doing? Probability Manipulation teen baar istemal ho chuka hai. Ab 12 baje ke baad agla din lagne par hi uska istemal dobara kar paoge. Fight carefully!]

'Yeah yeah-!! I know-!!'

Dono ke mukke, haath aur laat ek dusre se bhidne lage. Taqat itni thi ki haath se haath bhidne par hi uss ilaaqe me awaazein paida hone lagi. Neeche pade patte unki harqat ki raftaar se udd ke bikharne lage. Toh wahi chhote ped paudhe unke praharo ki gati ki hawa se lehraane lage.

Combos ke baad combos woh dono ek dusre par maar rahe the. Magar, dono hi ek dusre ke combo ender ko poora hone nahi de rahe the. Veer ki pasli par Jaw Long ka mukka padte hi uske muh se ek karaah nikal gayi. Usne apne daant meeste hue uske haath ko thaama-

*Ding*

LIMBO!!!!

Par-

*Baaaaammmmmmm*

Ek laat seedhe aake uske seene par padi kyuki, Limbo ke asar lene se pehle hi Jaw Long ne apna haath chhina liya.

Veer ka shareer hawa me udta hua dur gaya. Jaw Long pehle se hi daud laga diya. Veer tamaam maujood pedo me se ek ped par jaa ke bhida aur uske bhidte hi-

*Baaaaammmmmmm*

"Urgh-!! Uck-!!"

Jaw Long ka tabadtod mukka uske pait par aake laga. Na jaane woh yaha kab prakat ho gaya. Aur, mukke aur pait ka sampark hote hi-

*Ding*

[Bone Reaper has been equipped.]

*Craaaaaaacccccckkk*

*Booooooooommmmmm*

Ped ke tukde beech se hue, Veer ka shareer ek nahi peeche maujood aur 2-3 pedo ko ek saath todte hue jaa gira. Ped ke baad ped bikhar kar ab gir rahe the. Ab ye ladayi ghatak ho rahi thi. Bone Reaper uski haadiyo ko toh bacha ke rakha tha. Magar, pait me koi haddi nahi hoti thi...

*Bluuurrghhhhhh*

Uske muh se khoon nikla. Pait aise dard kar raha tha maano kisi ne kass ke hathoda maar diya ho.

Ladkhadate qadam ko sambhalte hue jaise hi woh khada hua-

*Gwaaakhhhh*

Veer ki aankhein hairat me chaudi ho gayi. Jaw Long ne uske gale ko apne haath ki giraft me liya aur punah kass ke ek ped se bhed use hawa me utha diya.

"Argh-! Ack-!!!"

Aur, pehli baar Jaw Long ke bol uske kaano me pade.

"Tum...! Ek acche yoddha ho!!! Magar, mujhse behtar nahi!"

Kehte hue usne agle hi shan Veer ke shareer ko upar hawa me uchhaal diya. Veer ka badan ped ki daali ko tukdo me bikherte hue aur upar ko gaya. Neeche se Jaw Long khud bhi uchka. Dusri daali ka sahara lete hue woh aur upar uchka...!

Jaise hi hawa me woh Veer ke nazdeek aaya uski aankhon me khoon karne ka bhoot sawar ho gaya. Ghaatak prahar woh Veer pe barsaane hi waala tha ki Veer ne unn hamlo ko apne vaaro se block kar unhe rok liya.

Dono hawa me hi the aur neeche girne lage. Haath perr itni tezz raftaar se chal rahe the ki bas unki after images hi nazar aa rahi thi.

Par, ek laat itni tezz gati se Veer ki orr aayi. Hawa me iss se bacha nahi jaa sakta tha keval ise block hi kiya jaa sakta tha. Aur, Veer ne kiya bhi wahi-

Jaise hi usne apne dono haath perr modte hue khud ke sarr ko dhaaka, Jaw Long ki kick uski kohniyo par padi aur woh neeche dhadaam se gir, zameen ko ukhaadte hue dur tak jaata chala gaya. Zameen ke udhadte hi waha halka dhua uth gaya.

Jaw Long toh jaise bhooke bhediye ki tarah uss par dhaawa bol raha tha. Veer ki thakaan ne apna asar dikha diya tha. Agar, woh 25 minute ki bhaag daud na hui hoti toh abhi maajra kuch aur hota...

*huff* *huff*

Uski saansein ab ukhdi ukhdi aa rahi thi. Jagah jagah badan par chote pahuchi rakhi thi aur jagah jagah par gehre ghaav bhi bann chuke the. Khoon se lathpath uska shareer kisi bhi waqt ab neeche gir sakta tha.

'H-His weight is helping him in his blows.'

Paseene ke saath khoon uske chehre par bhi fela hua tha. Aankhein fadakte hue band hone ko bol rahi thi par uski dridhta unn palko ko khol ke rakhe hue thi. Baalo ki ek latt uski aankh ke saamne aake jhool gayi. Jaw Long saamne se uss par antim vaar karne aa raha tha.

Veer ka haath apni jebo ko tatolte hue hidden knife ko dhundha aur usne tezz raftaar se aa rahe Jaw Long ke nazdeek aane ka intezar kiya.

Jaise hi woh 4 qadam ki duri par aaya. Veer ne ek jhatke me woh knife uski orr fek di. Jaw Long iss hamle ke liye jaise taiyaar nahi tha. Woh achambhav me reh gaya aur knife seedhe jaake uske kandhe me ghus gayi.

Aur, idhar Veer ki ek theory sach saabit ho gayi.

'So, he doesn't have any sort of dodging skills...! I see!'

Veer ki theory toh saabit ho gayi. Magar, Jaw Long ka agla hamla itni zorr se pada ki Veer ke poora jism andar se leke baahar tak hil gaya.

Khoon hawa me ucchla aur uska shareer bhayanak gati se pedo ko cheerte hue kayi feet dur jaa gira.

Jaw Long uski mrityu ke samaan dheere dheere chalte hue uske nazdeek aane laga. Usne wahi khusa bhaala zameen par se ukhaad ke nikaala aur ahista ahista Veer ke paas aane laga.

Veer koi bhi harqat nahi kar raha tha. Probability Manipulation ka istemal ab woh nahi kar sakta tha. Limbo barbaad jaa chuki thi. Bone Reaper keval uski haddiyo ko hi bacha sakta tha. Andar ki maanspeshiyo aur aham ango ko nahi.

Beowulf's Blessings keval uske senses hi badhaata tha na ki uski taqat. Agar woh ek neend le leta toh kam se kam woh ladayi me kuch antar laa sakta tha. Magar-

Jaw Long uss se kuch qadam ki duri par khada ho gaya. Aur, bina deri kiye woh aage daudte hue hawa me ucchla par tabhi uski aankhein bhay ke maare fel gayi.

Uske haath apne aap uske chehre ke saamne aake use dhaak liye aur agle hi shan-

*Booooooooommmmm*

Uska bhaari bharkam shareer hawa me vipreet disha me atyant dur jaa ke gira. Prahar ki awaaz se Veer ne apna chehra kar upar dekha toh paaya ki-

Koi khada hua tha.

'*huff* K-Kaun-!? *huff*'

Koi tha...! Usne upar se neeche tak kaale kapde pehne hue the jo uski gori safed twacha ke ekdum vipreet the. Wahi lambe, seedhe, kaale ghane baal jo mand hawa me lehra rahe the. Uski chamak daar aankhein jo andhere me vishesh roop se chamak rahi thi. Aur, uske ird gird fela uska woh strong aura jo inn sabhi visheshtao ko baandh ke rakha tha.

Uska yeh swaroop Veer ke dil-o-dimag me ankit ho gaya. Nahi! Balki, ye aisa tha ki ise bhoolna hi namumkin tha.

Tabhi, Veer ka dil chehra dekhte hi zorr se dhadka...! Hairat me uski aankhein chaudi ho gayi.

'Y-You-!!!???'

Woh ladki bina Veer ko dekhe aage badhi ki tabhi Veer ne use peeche se pukaarte hue rok liya.

"W-Wait-!!!!"

Ladki ke qadam wahi tham gaye. Uski mutthi Zorro se kass gayi. Jaise maano woh yaha rukna nahi chaahti thi.

"I-It's you-!!! Wh-Why???"

Parantu, ladki kuch na boli. Woh punah jaise hi aage badhne ke liye hui-

"Avaaaaa-!!!!"

Iss baar fir uske qadam Veer ki pukaar par rukk gaye. Veer ki dhadkane tezz thi. Uske mann me kayi sawaal uthal puthal machaaye hue the. Magar, inka samay nahi tha.

"Wh-Why??? *huff* *huff* T-Tum yaha...? Kyu??!"

Uski awaaz me krodh, aashcharya aur peeda sab kuch tha. Par, Ava mudi aur usne jo jawaab diya... Unme bhi yahi bhaav the.

"Why? You ask me why?"

Woh palti... Veer ne uska chehra saamne se dekha toh uska muh khula ka khula reh gaya. Ava ki aankhon me aasu the...!



"Yaad karo Veer! Kya kaha tha tumne mujhse akhiri baar?"

Veer ne jaise hi uss baare me socha Ava utne me ek jhatke me hawa ke jhoke ki tarah apni jagah se gayab ho gayi.

"Avaaaaaaa-!!!!"

Veer ki pukaar ka koi fayda na hua. Woh Jaw Long ki disha ki orr jaa chuki thi. Magar, uske bol zaroor Veer ke mastishq me goonjte reh gaye.

'Yaad karo Veer! Kya kaha tha tumne mujhse akhiri baar?'

Veer ko yaad aaya. Akhiri baar usne Ava ko jo kuch kaha tha... Woh uss island par kaha tha jiske kinaare woh Crimson se ladd raha tha. Dhoka dene ki wajah se woh Ava se apne saare rishte naate tod chuka tha. Usne kaha tha ki-

'Tum apne raaste! Aur mein apne! Humare beech ab koi rishta nahi. And, don't you dare ever cross paths with me. You are on your own from now on.'

'And don't show me your face ever again.'

Magar, sirf itna hi nahi tha. Ava apni maa ko bachaane ke liye ye sab kari thi. Aur, isliye Island chorr kar jaane se pehle Veer ne ek vaakya aur kaha tha. Itni dheere ki sirf use hi sunaayi de sake. Lekin, Ava ne woh sunn liya tha.

Woh bol the-

'Go and protect your loved one now.'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Update consists of 11k words. Mere khayal se ye sabse bada update hai kahani ka. Also, aap sabhi ko Holi ki shubhkamnaye. Update late aane ke kayi saare kaaran hai jinke baare me mein baar baar baat nahi karunga. Achanak food poisoning ki wajah se bhi mera swastha beech me dagmaga gaya. Anyways, update 176 is here. Baaki, likes thokne aur revos rakhne ka. Target apna 200 hi hai. Pahucha do.
Happy Holi once again!
Dhanyavad.

 

[Werewolf]

Msst bhai ekdum
Veer yha se jeet to lega but dekhna higa kese
Aur renshu kya krta h

Zalim update Bhai zalim agg Laga the ap nay ajj to,

THAT WAS MINDBLOWING!!!!! AWESOME!!!!!

No words for this updaTe

Iss ko soch ko

Bahut hi khatarnaak update bhai

Lovely and beautiful update

Gazab ka update

Superb update bro

Ye barhia tha guru

Bhai is baar to aapne hollywood movie se bhi behtereen scene dikha diya….
So thrilling…so exciting…
Awaiting next anxiously….

Bahut hi lajawab update

अत्यंत ही खौफनाक और धमाकेदार अपडेट Werewolf भाई।।

लगत हैं वीर को अब अपने चाहने वालो की दुआ के भरोसे ही यहाँ से निकल पाएगा।।

Bahut hi shandaar update Bhai aakhir hae ek cheez ab sence bana rahi hai veer KO
Aur ye ek aur system holder kaun hosakta hai wo Bhi young age wala jo rensho par bhari padh Raha hai
Aur rahi sketch ki BAAT to Bhai sahaab bawaaal
Awesome update bro
Next update ka besabri se intezar rahega

Another masterpiece fabulous update

Bhai simply marvellous. I had goosebumps while reading. Kamal bhai kamal.

ultimate update.... kaafi updates baad excitement on its peak ... next update lste na karna jyada .... u r amazing writer

Woahow ye kya tha Bhai itna thriller update aapne Aaj Tak kabhi nahi banaya I know ki crimson ek one ofthe power full villan tha but us arc ke update bhi is Wale ko takker nahi de sakte

Sabse pehle resnu ke sath army ka vyavhar kafi pasand aaya mujhe aakhir renshu koi airagaira nahi tha or aise hi thodi sab log uski itni izzat karte the

Wese Divya ko yaha nahi aana cahiye tha kyu chalo army walo ko or order ke admiyo ko to renshu or Erica sambhal bhi lete but Divya ke samne kayi baar veer apni skill dikha Chuka hai or agar jangal main andhera na hota to Divya jarur Shak karti in dono par kyuki Jim th sliprey ko pakadte waqat veer ki reflex speed dekh chuki thi

And pehli baar aapne veer ke alawa 2 or system holders ke full status and card dikhe but meri ek shikayat hai aapne cards ki details ko samjaya nahi buddy aapki story main kisi or ke pass card dekhta hu bas uski details janne ka kida kaatne lagta hai mujhe

Erica ki skills acchi hai but ye dekh kar dukh huva ki bechari ke pass sirf ek hi card hai wese buddy sidhe raste par Jo ladai huyi woto Kamal thi

Bat jab system Wale ladke ne jab renshu par attack Kiya or dono ke ghamashan ki pehli jhalak dikhi wo to or bhi dhamaal thi

Or mujhe ek doubt ho Raha hai ki wo ladka veer hai kyu ki aapne kaha ki us ladke ne muh par kala kapda bandha huva tha and veer bhi black shirt pehne huye tha may be jese jaw long ne animals ko apne kabu me Kiya ho wese hi veer ko bhi hepnotaiz Kiya ho te bas Mera gess hai

Or ab ye baat to sabit ho hi Rahi hai ke jawlong le pass ek aisi skill hai jisse wo mine uske kya kaam aasakti hai ye bhi sense kar Raha hai

And the jaw long ye aakhir kya sach main hi danav hai kya jese wolfi tumne discription Diya us hisab se to ye crimson se bhi bhayanak hone wala hai

And buddy please yaar Hume jawlong ke cards dikhana mat bhulna and kya jaw long wahi pagal aadmi hai jise crimson ne jail se nikala hai I have doubt


But honestly buddy you are so great apni story keliye ye sub design karna I mean status and card ye sach main tarif ke kabil hai or aapne jo extra time liya wo is update ko justify karta hai hatts off to you buddy

Baki superb and dhasu block buster update buddy update padhte waqt litraturlly mujhe pasine chut gaye mere wo bhi itni thand mai. Fabulous buddy fabulous

Bhai sahab.. Ab kya kahne... Ek ek word 2-3 bar pda hai.. Amazing update..

Awesome Fantastic Jabardast Update

Uffff.... What a thriller... What creativity... Abhi to tongue tight hoon, shock me hoon... Ek do din aur kayi readings isko assimilate karne me lagegi... uske baad shanti se reply doonga...

Great update...

Shandar update

Awesome. Par jaw long to rakshas se Kam nahi lag raha. He is using all the elements of the jungle.

Seems Erica ke strong hone ka time aa gaya hai.

She will help Vir and prove herself.

Again awesome.

Supper fantastic update janab

Very nice update...

Werewolf Bhai kya update tha yar sarir ke rongte khade ho gye. Gosslbooms Bhai maja aa gya agle update ka besabri se intezar rahega.....

Amazing

Superb update

Ek dum gaadu bgm agar ye ek webseries hoti to sach main ye bgm aag laga deta

Wolfi main jab bhi aapki is story ko padhta hu to meri imagination mujhe iski puri picture ki tarah sab dikhta hai

Sach main aisi story mene Aaj Tak nahi padhi or nahi koi tumhe story banane main beat karsakta hai

Jese order ke log resnu ko lord kehtr hai

Aaj main tumhe boltahu tum hum writer ke lord ho

LORD WEREWOLF

Ea kya tha dimag hin chakra geya he...
Itne sare janwar se kese ladhega veen
Achha fasaya li renshu ne ....
Waiting for climax of this situation....

Bahut badiya update bhai

Shaandar

B


No need to say another great update and thanks bhai ki ap itni research krne ke baad update dete ho aur khud draw krte ho hats off to you boss eagerly waiting for next update aur agr ho sake to thoda jaldi bhai ab jaldi se jaldi padhna hai baki thanks for your hardwork on this story

Nice update

Hauf hauf yeh ju ne kya likh diya bhai sahab aaj bencho words hi nhi mil rhe ek second phle apne goosebumps sant karo jo yeh last wala part kar aaye ohh ohh ha toh Mai kaha rha tha yeh jo last wala part padh kar toh ase lag rha tha ki Mai veer ki jagah fasa padha hu aur apni kismat ko gali de rha hu
Lekin baad mien jab update katam ho gaya phir bhi mien bhi wapas aagya. Lekin subha 5-6 baar padh chuka abhi bhi sath sath padh likh rha hu. Toh baat kare update ki toh...
Update ke starting ke part mien ju ne jesa dikhaya ki renshu ke logo ka aatmvishvas thoda dol rha muskhil aane par aur erica aur renshu ka unhe motivate karna ha woh alag baat ki samajhya renshu ne tha aur erica ne khali smile kiya tha lekin kabhi kabhi asi ek smile ke piche mard apni jaan bhi de dete hai agar baat pasinda aurat ki ho toh lekin unhe kya pata yeh pasinda aurat kisi aur toh pasand karne lagi hai aur uss ke baad jab ju ne woh ek ek cheez batai hai jese ki head light, mashaal,torch,etc ek baari toh mujhe laga ki mai bhi renshu aur erica ke sath hi hu. Aur phir unn ka plan batna baki logo ko aur erica ka ander akele jana aur uss ke piche se baki aam janta ka tension lena ki kahi kuch gya toh usse lekin un ko kya pata she is a system holder and she also has dead Silence skill lekin mujhe ek cheez samajh nhi aayi ki agar erica abhi tak kisi system holder se nhi ladi toh uss ke stats itne ache kese hai like maximum cheezein 150 par hai usse kaha se point milte itne ache stats ke liye aur erica ke stats mien kuch logo ka bhi zikar hai kya woh bhi aage story mien ayenge?? Aur yeh par mai ju ki tariff karna chaunga kyuki ju ne erica ke bhot saare skill ki description bhi hai jo ki bhot time consuming hogi ju ke liye aur renshu ke bhi stats bhot ache se dikhye hai ju ne.

Aur jab maine renshu aur jawan ki conversation padi aur jab asliyat pata lagi ki joh 6 jawan aaye hai wah apni marzi se aye hai aur iss se Chinese government ki mansa dikha rahi hai ki government khali formality ke liye madad kar rahi hai

Aur uss ke baad the most waited the action scene iss le liye toh sahi mien hi words nhi samaj nhi aa rha kese describe karu bas itna kaha sakta hu ki mujhe laga mai bhi wahi hu aur mere saamne sara action ho rha chaye woh unit 1 wala ho yeh chaye erica aur renshu wala ho lekin erica ko jab renshu ne wapas bheja aur jo baatein uss ke maan mien chal rahi thi veer ki kahi hui woh ab kud bhi maan rahi thi .

Aur baat karen last part ki toh baki readers ka pata nhi lekin mujhe sahi mien nhi laga tha ki animal controll type koi skill bhi hoyegi (jab ki ju ne already shark controll skill dikhai hui hai crimson arc ) aur uss ke baad bhi dhyan nahi rha aur toh aur yeh animal wala point bhi miss hogya kyuki na veer toh yaad tha na renshu ne yaad dilya aur na hi ju ne yaad dilaya balki ju ne sida humla kar diya sab par aur ab agle update mien kya hone wala ab yeh dimag mien gumta rahega agle 8-10 din tak lekin veer aur erica yeh se kese bache ne yeh dekhne layak hoyega aur kya garofano bhi aayegi veer ke liye yeh koi aur ? aur aage jab Garofano ko pata laage ki erica bhi kuch samye baad sona mona bolne lagegi veer ko toh dekhne layak hoyega

Aur ju ne mereko bhi 8-10 saal piche bhej diya school time apni drawing se mai bhi 7-8 mien ase hi anime character aur pokemon banta tha aur kuch time madam se pakra bhi jata aur phir wahi maar khani aur class ke samne lekin art and images and gifs all were on point and sorry last update par review nhi diya kyuki result aagya aur iss update ke antt mien yeh nhi likhuna ki badhiya update kyuki yeh update uss category ke bhot jyada upar hai aur agar ase hi aur itne hi bade update aaye toh 5-6 ki jagah 3-4 update mien hi China town arc samapt ho jyega lekin worth tha 15 din rukna

Bye aur kuch galti hui ho spelling ki yeh kuch aur toh maafi...

Mat kar bhai phele hi main update se baar nhi aaya aur ab Pata lage ki yeh side mien Baja kar update padh raha hu saare wese yeh idea bura nhi try karta hu

Gaqnd faad update tha bhai
Aaisa to bilkul bhi kisi ne socha hi nahi hoga ki janwaro se ladna pade ga fuck man ab pata nhi veer ki gaanf kaise bache gi

nice update

Bahut satik lekhan shailly

Super and beautiful update bro

Shandar jandar Gajab Ka update...
sala dimag ki Aisi Ki Taisi ho gai Ek Aur system holder kya hi Kahane.. dekhte hain journey kya dikhata hai

Nice update bro

Zabardast update

Bhai yar kya likhte ho aap...aapki mehnat dekh kr dil se respect nikalta hai aapke liye , itna bda update likhna aur usme itna sare pic edit krke bnana aur fir sketches bhi bnana..JUST WOW BUDDY...sayad hi koi aur aisa writer hoga yha jo itni siddhat se story likhta ho
Aur ek aur kamal ki bat aapke writing skill me aapki detailing hai...mtlb pura hi imagine kra dete ho kya ho rha hai wha...last wale seen me Veer ka to phat hi gya lekin kuch der ke liye yha bhi bhi goti muh me tha, mai bhi agal bagal dekhne lga tha ki yha to koi janwar nhi hai to sala mai kyu itna drr rha hu?

Wo jo pichle update ke review me maine bola tha n ki 'straight way me larne ke liye jyada log nhi ja rhe hai?' , to ho ske to isko bhul jana...lekin aapne bhi to cheating ki , tribal log bol bol ke ek aur system holder ko hi utar diya
Ab dekhna hai ki ye system holder kitna takatwar hai aur Renshu isko akele sambhal lega ya fir iska samna bhi Veer se hone wala hai
Ye bhi ho skta hai ki Jaw Long ka connection Mr.X se hai kyuki Renshu confident tha ki long tribe me aur koi player nhi hai to kya pta Mr.X hi ne iss nye player ko bheja hoga Jaw Long ki madad ke liye kyuki whi to ek hai who is playing with the players...

Iss update me baki players ke bare me kafi information jaane ko mili , sbke stats , cards , nye nye skills , level sb kuch dekhne ko mila....Bhale hi Erica Veer aur Renshu se ek aur do level hi piche hai pr abhi bhi wo dono se kafi weak hai jiska karan experience hi hai joki iss fight ke bad usko accha khasa gain hone wala hai....aur veer ka level bhale hi renshu se ek kam hai pr phir bhi uske stats Renshu se acche hai , aur uske cards bhi resnhu se kafi jyada hai aur jawan khoon to hai hi apne hero ka

Mujhe lga tha ye soldiers jo aaye hai ye kewal formality nibhaienge pr ye to kafi accha sath nibha rhe hai jiska karan inhone khud hi bta diya Renshu ke liye respect...Divya ka iss ladai me itne andar jana ek galat step sabit ho skta hai...last me khi ye step Veer ke liye muskilo ko aur badha hi na de
Batao , ye order ke kuch chutiyas sapne Erica ke dekhte hai lekin kewal andhera jungle dekh ke phat gyi inki...aise milegi Erica aise?
Waise Erica bhi gid gyi apne hero ke pyaar me bhale use khud nhi pta , nhi to kewal ek notification pe daud thori na jati uske pas bina iske pawah kiye wha kitna khatra hoga aur uske dad ne use baki sabhi ko lead krne ka order diya hai...Ab dekhte hai wha jake wo Veer ki madat krti hai to aur musibat lati hai...Mujhe yaad hai jb ek bar Veer ne Kaera ko check kiya tha to uska appearance 150 points show hua tha aur yha Erica ka appearance 160 points hai...Aaila , Kaera se bhi sundar

Ek bat aur pta chali iss update me ki Renshu aur Erica ko same time pe hi system mila tha...kya itna sb kuch kewal ek coincidence hi hai? Mtlb ek to pure world me kewal 30 logo ko hi system mila hai sayad...unn 30 me se dono bap beti ko mil gya aur wo bhi same time pr hi...ye thora strange lgta hai

Aur ab aate hai last seen ke taraf....Ye jaw Long to kuch jyada hi takatwar nikla
Cheating to hui hai bhai aur wo bhi dono Renshu aur Veer ke sath hui hai...jha ek taraf Renshu ne socha tha ki kewal Tribal log honge samne whi ek system holder nikal aaya ( kya pta aur bhi nikal aaye) whi dusre taraf Veer ko lga tha kewal Jaw Long se larna hoga to whi pura ka pura jangal hi samne khara ho gya hai
Jaw Long ko harana bhut muskil hone wala hai aur mujhe nhi lgta ki usko sidhe sidhe fight krke haraya ja skta hai kyuki abhi tak to uski ek hi takat samne aai hai janwaro ko kabu krne wali aur esi ek ne Veer ko mud ke bhagne pr majbur kr diya hai...ab dekhte hai aage aur kon kon si Jaw Long ki ability samne aati hai aur Veer kaise un sb ko tackel krta hai
Kya hme Jaw Long ke stats aur skills wale card dekhne ko milenge??

Bhai sketches sach me bhut kamal ke hai...abhi aur kitne skill aur talent aapne hm sb se chupa ke rakha hai??...Kahi aapko real life me to system nhi n mil gya?

Thanks you bhai hmare liye itne siddhat aur lagan se mehnat krne ke liye
Ye update sayad abhi tk ke story ka sbse bda update tha , hai n?
Update bhut hi sandar tha bro

KEEP WRITING...
WAITING FOR NEXT...

I'm waiting a fight between two system holders

I
Itne time bd update Aya pehly to Koch smjh na Aya bd time Sy prha to bahoot hi interesting Hy
Jow long jis trh animals ko control kr rha hy is trh Africa KY witch doctor's k bary MN different novel MN likha jata hy
Bahoot hi lajwab update
Jow long n jis trh explosion use Kiya hy is Sy lgta Hy us k ps koi skil Hy isly wh wh bhi Lena Chahta Hy

Excellent update Bhai

Most thriller update

Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Werewolf bhai.....
Nice and lovely update....

Detailed analysis later on.... I've got goosebumps all over my body... I need to process things.

Kya update hai bhai. Kamal hi kar diya. Matlab Veer ko niche gira kar hi uthaoge. Yahi to asli hero ki pehchan hai.

Matlab mai akela nhi hu jis ko update padh kar goosebumps aaye hai

भाई गजब इंटरेस्टिंग

Bhai kia kia cheez ki tareef Karu aapke update ki ya phir mastery of art I mean sketches ki maza aa gaya dushman 1.5 pad raha hai veer per aur shayad abhi usne apni tricks ke pitare me se pehla hatiyar nikala hai aur abhi yah halat kar di veer ki usko kahi jagah nahi mil Rahi nikalne ki abhi to jaw long se to muqabla hua hi nahi hai aur abhi se yah halat
udhar apna Renshu bhai bhi ek system holder se bhid gaye means meri last comment me 5 system holder ka zikar kiya thaa to ab 5 hi ho gaye total system holder. Mantey ho bhai ki guessing ko.
Dekho Erica yaha aan ker kia help karti hai coz usko bhi to khud ko sabit karna hai plus kahi na kahi veer ke liye dil dhadak hi raha hai.
Intezar rahega is cliffhanger ke top per pahuchne ka. Apna and apni family ka khayal rakhiye .

Awsm wonderful update

wow

You’ve really out done yourself brother!! The descriptions of night time scenes, the emotions of people - really well written! I could feel their nervous energy while reading! Good to know Erica, Renshu’s stats and where veer stacks up against them.

Veer has fought higher level system holders - so I did expect him to be nervous. But to feel fear against Jaw Long! That’s an interesting scenario. Beowulf - characteristically- wolf, jaw long - more like king of jungle - how will Veer outrun him! We all get used to feeling that nothing will happen to veer and then we get character like crimson and jaw long!

More questions than answers! What does the burnt card mean? What exactly is Jaw Long’s power with respect to animals here?can he control them, can he tame them, or communicate with them? Another possibility - can he tap into their bodies - see and feel what the animals do? This reminds me of Naruto manga character ‘Pain’ - how he could control dead bodies, had vision connected with them! If it’s something similar - that would be sick!

The point about Veer needing sleep to gain the points! How will he be able to do that with Jaw Long on his tail? Erica may possibly join and help him re-group, but will that be enough? And what about Renshu in the meantime? Oh this is interesting as hell! 5 system holders in 1 chapter! By far the best you’ve written!

Kudos!!

Really really looking forward to the next chapter and what you have in store for us!

Totally awesome mind blowing update bro

Super update dear

Super duper fantastatic update bro

Bahot jabardast update tha bhai maja aa gaya bhai. Next update ka intajaar rahegaa bhai

You can't know a system holder's favourability towards you, right? Werewolf

Ok veer ka samajh aa gya lekin kya Erica ne aur Garofano ne apne system se veer ki unke liye favourbility puchi ??

Nice update waiting for next

This update was out of the world, the narrative so strong, one felt as if one is walking along the marching Bravehearts, dead in the night, in a dense forest. It had all the emotions, doubts in the minds of few of the weak ones, the leadership of the leader, proving why he is called the The Lord, the budding love and care of a budding lover, the disquietness of an old lover.

The idea of Erica leading the team was great, she used her Stealth and Nocturnal Shade skills to locate and neutralize the main person of the first line of defense, and then others. The best part was that they did not kill the Long fighters, just injured them and also gave them medical aid. Yes, ultimately, Order And Long have to reunite and Renshu has to lord over them.

The second line of defense had become alert, but all the traps were cut by Renshu. The Skills were very innovative.

So the second system owner has come, about which Renshu was always thinking, right in the beginning. He also seems to be powerful. But Erica's going to assist Veer, was totally unexpected.

I thought that the invasion, and fight at the main entrance was very intense, but the scene at the East Side was really frightening. The moment I read about the blood trail, it looked very unusual. Veer, and specially Pari, should have got alerted before crossing it. The attacks of the various animals, and Veer's escape were very scary.

<Koi tezi se uski orr aa raha tha.>

Now who can that be, another animal, maybe Black Panther, or Jaw Long, or Erica. But the bridge has been cut, how can Erica come and Jaw Long seems to be in a meditative state, controlling the animals. But why Veer has not activated his Alpha personality.

So many Skills and Cards were shown in the status. It would have been difficult to remember them, and would have broken the flow of the story. I like the idea of explaining them as and when they are used.

Again, a great update. The associated arts were very relevant, the status windows were well made.

DING such a level up update zabardast work no words to describe completely superb next update kya hoga soch ke dahi ho raha hai keep posting

Nice update

Bahut hi jabardast update aur jaisa ki long ke baare mein bataya gaya tha pahle waisa hi menacing hai woh aur saath hi jangli janwar ka hamla bahut hi thrilling and nail biting the iss update mein, hope yea Ladayi Thodi lambi jaayegi aur humko Veer ke saath Jaw Long, Erica aur Renshu ke true potential ke baare mein pata chalega aur toh aur Renshu ke sirf 3 hi Close ally hai jahan ki Erika ka 5 aur Veer ke ahem... Well ginne ke liye bhi ungliya kam pad rahi hai Favourability section mein

I wonder kisko ni aae honge?

Fantastic update

Unko nhi aaye hoyne jinno ne nice update likha hai khali

I think this update was the most awaited one... The Heavy Violence. As the name says... This was the heaviest update till now after Veer's fake death update. (For me)

It's not a surprise that you are outdoing yourself as days are progressing... I know the future updates will be more thrilling and mind boggling. Pretty sure they will leave us awe struck...

Now coming to the update... I have said this multiple times... Nd firse ek baar bolti hu... What makes you different from the other writers is the... The premise setup...

There's no one else I've seen who can set the premise like this. Even if they can, the next part becomes troublesome. Executing the premise setup and then utilising it's full environment. Crimson k sath jab Veer fight kia tha... That island premise... Light house... Tab bhi mne yahi kaha tha... Ki aapse better environment ko use karne me koi nhi...

You again proved that here. Right from the beginning jo words the... Jaise update start hua... The pictures of the forest in the dark... Seedhe hume uss environment me pull karke le jata h... Immediately...

We all get sucked into that premise. Nd here comes the beautiful part of the detailing.

Renshu's men getting demotivated. Kisne socha hoga? I mean... Agar main writer hoti to seedhe fight par le jaati... This is what separates an expert writer from an amateur one.

You can feel how those men felt. They were terrified and demotivated. The fear of unknown is the worst. The lack of information... The darkness... The lack of people in numbers... Every details were thrown which filled the occuring questioning gaps in our mind with answers at the right time.

Erica's character is very unique tbh... She's cocky, a bit egoistic but has a kind heart. Her intentions are always good. What she shows on her face isn't what she actually means. Her skills... Finally hume uska full status dekhne ko mila...

Dead silence Garofano k paas bas nhi h that means... Also chameleon is such an interesting skill too. Idk why but I feel like stealth suits to Garofano more than Erica... Or maybe they both need stealth...

Fight with unit 1 was a piece of cake... Too easy... But as they went deeper... Renshu was right. Now a freaking new system holder... Surpise after surpise... Aur kitne surprise doge...

mujhe pta ni kyu par ye unknown system holder kafi dangerous lag rha h... Uske intentions bhi clear ni h... Of course no wonder Renshu ne Erica ko kyu waha se bhagaya... Girl... Life is more important than your ego for now... I love how Genie kept motivating her... So we can assume she's a kind system.

Renshu k bhi stats dekhne ko mile... I'm not gonna talk about him for now. Because I believe ki hume next updates me uske baare in-depth information milne wali h??? Am I right? Werewolf Sir???

Erica ko Veer ke words yaad aana... Apne dad ke order k against Jana only to save Veer... Is something cooking here? What did I miss?? Achanak se Erica ko itni fiqr Veer ki? Did I miss some ishaare??

nd nd nd... Finally... The goosebumps portion... The eastside... Starting me to sab mystery me shrouded tha... That blood boundary... Trail whatever it was...

Idk what was happening... Nd then came the danger himself... Jaw Long... What a fucking description...

That guy didn't even say a word to Veer. Not a single word... Nd charged at him right from the get go ...

The moment I saw those dears pic... Pure goosebumps...

But the picture that took my breath away and made me shiver was this...

There's no way you drew this okay? There's no wayyyy What are you doing to me???

You are taking my imagination to next level... Nd I'm not ready for that... Figures in my imagination run wobbly here and there... This was too much... The sheer determination to execute this update so well and going as far to even make your own sketch...

Kya nhi aata h?? Bata do... Ab ye mat kehna ki gaana aur nachna bhi ata h... No no noooo... I can't...

Anyways... Things have just started... Veer has yet to exchange some punches with Jaw Long... I bet the upcoming updates will be fire too. Koi doubt ni h... Okay... Enough blabbering... I don't want to bore you...

Thank you so much for this jaw dropping update. Goosebumps dena koi aapse seekhe... I'm waiting for some lovey dovey scenes between Erica nd Veer... I know I know... We have Kaera nd nidhi Maam nd Sonia in Mumbai... But Erica ko Veer k baare me aur pata chalna chahiye... His hardships nd all... I'm sure uska nazaria badlega.. nd that would be fun to watch... Her reaction...

aise hi likhte rahiye sir... Always love ur work... This was tremendous... Awaiting for your new new update.

Absolutely mind blowing!

Lajawab update total thriller

Apki lekhni lajawab hai update jab bhi ata hai maja aa jata hai superb

Waiting update

Awesome update

Ding werewolf bhai first consider the mission
*Ding*

[Mission : Be the saviour.
Description : Infiltrate into the Jaw Long's territory from the East side and decimate him.]
aapne mention kiya hai decimate veer ka intelligence itna Kam bhi nahi hai ki woh jungle mein needle aur pocket knife leke fight kare iss choti baat se confused hu.

Shandaar...kya hi kahein.... Khtrnak jung jari hai.... Kuch kahenge to next update ke baad hii

Update 176

action packed update bro
renshu and party traaped hue hai unhe ek aur system holder ke baare pata hi nahi tha
wahi veer ko bhi idea nahi tha ka uska pala kis tarah ke dangerous situation se hoga
abhi bhi wo sirf bhaag aur bach raha hai lekin dekhne layak hoga jab wo reaction dega kaise wo
apne uper humla karne wale ko harayega
aur renshu kaise bachenge uss naye system holder se
keep going

Waiting for the next update

Bahut bahut dhanyawad sir ji
Maha mega update Dene ke liye
Aise hi aage mega update update dete rajiye

bohat zabadast gazab update tha me samajh raha tha 1 taraf sirf akela jaw long or dosri taraf 3 system holder jaw long inka kia he bigar lega lekin isne to sabki band baja ke rakhi hy dekhte hy veer yaha se kese bach ke nikalta hy eagerly waiting for next update

Wah Bhai kya scene hey Hollywood web series se Kum nahi once again thanks this masterpiece..

Mind blowing mind fucking update Werewolf Bhai.

Itna lamba maha mega update tha, still it feels like ye to shuru hote hi khatam ho gya, just because of your extraordinary writing and the craziness your put in this update.

Jaisa ki mene guess Kiya tha ki sirf Renshu ne hi kisi system holder ko nahi bulaya balki jaw long ne bhi system holder bulaya hai.

And uske pass weapon specifically archery se related koi skill hai. Veer ki to halat tight ho gyi hai, Garofano ne isiliye warn Kiya tha ki bhulkar bhi jaw long se sidhe bhidne ki galti mat karna.
Jaise crimson ke pass sharks ko tame karne ki skill thi vaise hi jaw long ke pass bhi koi aisi hi skill hai jisse usne pure animal kingdom ko tame kar liya hai.
Aur iss skill ka level crimson ki skill se bahut bada hai.

Filhal to veer tab tak nahi bach sakta jabtak usse ye naa pta ho ko ye hai kya cheez.
Hamne Renshu aur Erica ke stats dekhe dono hi bahut powerfull hai lekin veer ke stats unse jyada hai.

Erica veer ko bachane jaa rhi hai,vahan jakar use pta chalega ki asli ladai kya hoti hai jab do system holder ladte hai.

Mujhe to ye Divya ke lakshan thik nahi lag rhe pakka yahan ye musibat me fasegi, phir veer ko ise bachana padega.

Aur BC ye Suman ki favourability kya asman fadegi 200 cross kar chuki hai, aur jyadatar ki 100 cross hi chuki hai.

Nidhi aur kaera jo ek tarah se heroine ko tarah project hui hai unki abhi bhi 100 nahi hui, I guess next arc me ho jayegi.

Super dhamakedar update
Next update ka intezar besabri se.

Super

Yeh update kafi rochak tha

1 naye system holder ki entry hoyi

Jaw long ki thodi se jhalak mili jisme yeh pata chala k woh kitna zada powerfull hai

Veer ko bhi ehsas hua k woh iss baar kisse takra raha hai filhaal uski Jaan khud bahut mushkil mein hai kaise woh khud ko bachaye phir Jow Long ko haraye wahi Erica bhi Veer k liye chintit hai or usko bhi Veer ki musibat ka ehsas ho gaya isliye woh Veer ki madad k liye aa rahi hai shayad woh kuch kar pate Veer k liye


Udhar Renusha bhi mushkil mein hai woh bhi 1 system holder se lad Raha hai
Dekhte hai ab yeh Jung kya roop leti hai

यह तो ऐसा लग रहा है जैसे वीर ' जूरासिक पार्क ' के डायनासोर वर्ल्ड मे चला गया है । आदमखोर डायनासोर के बीच फंसा एक अदना - सा इंसान ।
वैसे इस सीन्स को गजब का लिखा है आपने वोल्फी भाई।
मिस्टर लोंग के पास शर्तिया ऐसी कोई स्पेशल स्किल है जिनसे वह जंगल के जानवरों को कंट्रोल कर रहा है और अपने इशारे पर नचा रहा है ।
पहले क्रिम्पसन , फिर मिस्टर रेंशू और अब यह जाउ लोंग - सभी लोग वीर से पावरफुल ही मिले । खैर कोई बात नही , युद्ध मे जीत सदैव धर्म और सत्य की ही होती है।

वीर के लिए मुझे डर नही है , डर है इरिका के लिए जो अपना ' वार जोन ' छोड़कर वीर के जोन मे आ रही है । वीर के लिए चुनौतियाँ काफी बड़ी होने वाली है । खुद को डिफेंस , इरिका को डिफेंस और फिर लोंग पर अटैक - काफी मुश्किल होने वाली है ।
वैसे मेरी इच्छा है कि इरिका अपने पिता और वीर को गलत साबित कर दे कि वो कमजोर है।

इधर मिस्टर रेंशू सर को भी एक और सिस्टम धारी मानव ने हैरान परेशान कर दिया । यह महाशय कहां से आ गए ? इनका परिचय क्या है ?
शायद मेरा शक सही ही था कि यह युद्ध सिस्टम होल्डर्स का युद्ध होने वाला है । शायद सभी सिस्टम होल्डर्स यहां इकठ्ठे होने वाले हैं ।

ऐसे मौके पर दिव्या मैडम की यहां मौजूदगी उनके लिए खतरे से खाली नही है । बेहतर होता वो मिस्टर रेंशू के आवास पर रहकर इनके वापस आने की प्रतिक्षा करती।

दस हजार शब्दों से भी ऊपर का अपडेट । यह वास्तव मे अद्भुत है । इसे पढ़ने मे अगर आधे घंटे से भी अधिक समय लग जाए तो इसे लिखने मे कितना समय लगता होगा ! अपडेट लिखना , फिर करेक्शन करना , फिर रिवीजन करना - बहुत बहुत कठीन काम है ।
आप के मेहनत को साधुवाद ।

अपडेट नो डाऊट , आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग।
और जगमग जगमग।

veer ko hi focus kar rhe hai bhaiya ji lekin aap update dene ka thoda jaldi vichar kare kyoki update padne ke baad update ke antim me aisa lagta hai ki update thoda aur likhta to kya ho jata. ye to man ki upaj hai
new update kab tak ayega sir ji

baaki update achha laga

Fantastic job

वाकई वीर मुसीबत के बीच फंस चुका एक तरफ़ jaw long और दूसरी तरफ उसके द्वारा नियंत्रित किए गए जानवर, they are totally focused on veer और उधर erica भी इस खतरे से अंजान वीर की तरफ ही आ रही है किंतु वीर का intelligence भी 180 है वो जरूर इस खतरे का कोई न कोई हल निकाल ही लेगा खैर आगे की लड़ाई बहुत ही भयानक होने वाली है जिसके आसार इसी अपडेट में नजर आ रहे हैं सो अगले अपडेट का बेसब्री से इंतज़ार है ।

और हां आपकी लेखनी में वाकई जादू है warewolf भाई आपके हर अपडेट का एक एक शब्द पढ़कर किसी चलचित्र की भांति आंखों के समक्ष प्रस्तुत हो ऐसा प्रतीत होता है।

Bhut bhut dhansu update bro

I love your writing skills bro

Is baar mene is update ka full review likha hai page no 3750 par hai wo or mujhe batana Mera review kesa laga

Arre Bhai itna saara likha. Aur no words...

Yeh us waqt ki feeling thi Bhai jab update pehli bar padha tha

Oh no you can't kill Erica so early so either Renshu has to take the hit which may prove fatal or she will have a valiant escape.

Let's see.

Waiting bro.

Bohat hi behtreen bohat hi aala aur shandar update hai Maza a giya but plz atleàst every week give one update and if it before it's much better ur story is unique I never ever read such kind of story sci Fi thriller action suspense love sex emotions everything is available Fabolous

Bahut hi shandaar lajawaab update hai bhai maza aa gaya

Garofano Pr shaq sa Ho rha hai.. Veer se mithi -2 baate krna shaq krwa rha baki dekhte real murderer kon hai...

Waiting for the next update

Waiting for next amazing update

Waiting for next marvel update and I think it's awesome

Kb tak aa sakta hai update?

Bahot zabardast sabse ziada khaternaak update h bhai ab tak ki Kahani ka
Sabki soch se Ulta ho raha h Renshu ke ek ladka bhari per raha Jo system owner h or idher veer ke samne tow pata nahi kon kon se janwer pade huwe h
Sala pehle se pata hota ki aisa kuch khaternaak hoga tow aata hi nahi
Baherhal dekhte h Pari in janwaro se nipatne ke liye koyi Rasta nikal paati h ya nahi Jo jaw long ke isharo per naach rehe h kia yahi saare janwer Pari ki madad se veer ke iShare per nachenge
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
Badhiya zabardast shaandar lajawab update bhai

Waiting for next update

Waiting please fast please please fast fast ab intzar nahi hooo raha

Waiting for the epic fight between veer and long jaw please update

Ding Best of luck

Bhai update 176 kab doge?

Fantastic update bro

Top class update bhai...

Next update ka intezaar rahega bhai

Zabardast update

Update kab ayega bhai

Waiting

भाया तुस्सी छा गए। आपने कहानी संग अपनी पुरानी कला को भी जिंदा कर लिया। सच मानिए आपको आज की इस भाग दौड़ वाली जिंदगी में वो पल ही सुकून के लगे होंगे।

यहा अब कहानी में दो तरफ जंग स्टार्ट हुई है। और मोड़ आपने पहली और ही एक नया किरदार यानी नया सिस्टम होल्डर लाकर खड़ा कर चौका ही दिया है। उसकी काबिलियत क्या है। वो क्या क्या पॉवर रखता है। ये नही पता है। और ये लड़की बीच लड़ाई में अपनी जगह छोड़ एक छोटे से मिले टच से ही उस ओर भाग ली है। कहानी में रोचकता ला ही देते है। मजबूर कर रखा है। पाठक को,
अब नसा सा परोस रहे है। हर अपडेट में,

वीर बिना कोई तर्क किये मैदान में कूद गया है। अपने किये अहसान को चुकाने के लिए, या यूं कहें कुछ नया पाने के लिए, या वाला तर्क आपके लिए ही छोड़ देते है। क्यो पता है। इस बार ओर कुछ नया परोस देगे आप, फिर इमेज किया गायब हो जाएगा।

वैसे सच कहूं आप इसको एक बुक का रूप दे, या एक नोबल या वेब सीरीज का, आप मे इसमें की गई बाते हमेसा याद ही रहेगी।

कुछ विशेष दोस्तो के किये कमेंट भी

आपको सादर आभार है। आप अपना अमूल्य वक्त निकाल कर कुछ अच्छा पैसे कर रहे है। वरना आज की भाग दौड़ में लोगो को सोचने लिखने पढ़ने का वक्त ही नही है।

सब के सब शिघ्र पतन के दोष से भरे पड़े है

वैसे अगले अपडेट अरे अगले नशे की खेफ कब पेश की जाएगी।

पाठक ओह ग्राहक है, तो तलब है। आपकी लेखनी की

Waiting for next one

Nice update

That update was too Fabulous...more action to come ....
& Your drawings ...@Werewolf aap toh chupe rustam nikale ....

Waiting next

Hello sir mai aapka old reader hun meri I'd uda dete sab ishiliye nawa id lekar aata hun waiting new update

Next update Werewolf bhai??

Werewolf bhai next month
tak he umeed rakhe ab update ki ?

Hey boss sorry for inactive.... Waiting for update.... Preparing for civil services so can't activate so sorry for not comments

intezaar rahega Werewolf bhai....

Waiting

Jabardast update aage kya hone waala hai usika intejer hain jaldi update kar dena please bahut suspense hai

Dear WereWolf,
Waiting for new update.

Waiting for update

USC k liye all d best


Waise Gurafano aayegi usne dil jo lagaya hai Veer se …. Erica and Gurafano fight karegi Jaw Long se jab Veer ghayal / thaka hua rahega - aisa mujhe lagta hai

Waiting for the update taki pataa chale ki kon kidhar n kya kar raha hai

Werewolf Bhai aapne USC ki story n likhi kya ?

सर, मैं आपका बहुत बड़ा फैन हूं, मैंने आपकी पुरानी कहानी पूरी पढ़ी है, और यह कहानी तो मुझे बहुत ही ज्यादा पसंद है, सबसे अनोखी कहानी है आपकी सर, पहले मैं एक मूक पाठक था इसलिए मैंने कभी आपके स्टोरी में कॉमेंट नहीं किया सर इसके लिए माफ़ी चाहूंगा

Waiting for the update bro

इंतज़ार

Update 176

This is close

Pichhle 10-15 din se koi update nhi lagta bhai sahab bor ho gye iss story se abb

Sach Baat Toh Yeh Hai Ki Saari Stories Slowdown Ho Rahi Hai.
Bus Baadshah And Raj - Hero Of The Family,
Sahi SE Chal Rahi Hai Baaki Dheere Dheere Band Hoti Jaa Rahi Hai.

इंतज़ार

Waiting bhai

Jald hi update dene ki koshish karna bhai

Waiting

शायद आज 21 दिन हो गए हे अपडेट आए । एक बेहतरीन कहानी अलग हि लेवल पे जा रही हे। मुझे ऐसा लगता हे।

Waiting bhai



9-6 duty kro fir rat ko update pdho yehi jindgi bchi h but bhai abhi update bhi nhi de rhe h ..... kb aaoge bro

Mujhe aisa kyu lag raha hai ki abhi next update aane me 10 din aur lagege

fir bhi bhai ham aapko support karte hai
aur next update ka intezaar karege

baas update likhne me jaldbaaji mat karna

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Update ke intzaar main

Main Hairaan H0n K itna Lamba Stay Yar writer Abi t0o Apk0 Update Dena Haq Banta Hai

Writer ki story jesy Dil kry wh likhy
Itni jldi kahe ko bhai log
Woh Km Sy km reply to kr rhy hn yhn Koch writer reply to nhn krty

 bhai ab to update dedo yr almost 20 din hogye h
tumne 15 tk ka bola tha

Dost, dhekh lo agar ho sake to, erica bechari bhi action se nipat kar vir se Holi khel le. Jyada samay na hai ab holi me

Wait for next

Waiting for next update!
Keeping in mind the time taken by the author to post the next update, the coming update must be a block buster one! My honest hope.

Miss me na...
I bet you did..
Past year bohot tragic tha...
But now on, I'm active on this masterpiece...
Read all previous updates...
Sab ek se badhkar ek hai. Can't wait for the clash between the saviour and the legion.
Best wishes for you.
Reviews alge updates se continue..

BAHUT HI SHAANDAAR LAJAWAAB JABARDUST FANTASTIC MIND BLOWING EXCELLENT AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI

Kal ka intezar rahega

Besabari se intezaar kar rahe hai next update ka Werewolf bhai...

NP wait krenge bro get well soon

Apna khayal rakhiye sir, get well soon...

Nice awesome mast update bro

Aaj rest hin kar lo werewolf bhai. Waise bhi aaj aapko bahut kaam hai, bukhar bhi niptana hai aur cake bhi. Janmdin mubarak ho, bhai. Take care

Happy Birthday bhai

Get well soon

Happy birthday bhai...
Aur sehat par jayada dyan do ..bite sal bister par jayada rahe....to swasth ka dhyan bhi jaruri hai

Happy birthday bhai

Many many happy returns of the day happy birthday bhai

Happy birthday to you

Happy Birthday

Bhai kamal hy level hogya faadu update waiting for next.

Hello bhai
Kya hal he ap ka ab...
Tbyt kesi he...
Bhai I'm from Pakistan..
men ap ki story ko shuru se read kr raha hon
lekin kbi comment ni Kya.,
ap ki story bhut hi outclass hy...
kmaal ki he...
lekin ap se 1 guzarish he...
agr munasib samjhen to plzzz...!
ap apni story men english ke word bhut use krty hen
kuch kuch to smjh aa jati he..
lekin aksar sar ke upar se guzar jati he
to plzz english word ko Kam use kijye...
itni hi huzarish he....
or han bhai....!!!
happy birthday

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Happy Birthday lekhak mahoday

Birthday Mubarak

Happy birthday bhai tum jiyo hajaro saal

Happy birthday dost

Many Many Happy Returns of the Day to You bro.
You are exceptional in the field of writing. Take care of your health. We will wait for the update whatever the time you needed. And thanks for providing us this masterpiece of yours.​

धरा अवतरण दिवस की हार्दिक शुभकामनाएं werewolf भाई ईश्वर आप पर सदैव कृपा दृष्टि बनाए रखे आप हमेशा मंज़िल की उन असीम ऊंचाईयों को प्राप्त करें जिसकी आपने कल्पना की है एवम् हम ईश्वर से आपके जल्द स्वस्थ होने की कामना करते हैं

और देरी के लिए क्षमाप्रार्थी हूं किसी कारणवश दो - तीन दिनों से forum पर नहीं आ सका

Koi baat nahin, Bhai. Get well soon

Kindly accept my belated birthday wishes , dear bro . Due to my severe work constraints, I could not come to your thread. Request you to kindly bear with me and accept my humble apologies. Bye the bye, take care of your health which is more important than update. We'll wait till then , don't take any tension please, dear bro .

Waiting

175 1 heavy hai bhai

Waiting for the update 176 warewolf bhau. Its been too long since last update. I hope u r all right healthwise and its nothing serious.

Bhai itna late kroge to flow khatam ho jayega story ki or last update apne bahut pahle Diya tha but av tak update na diya to new update se pahle last firse padhna padega
By the way story bahut achchi hai apki or Mera ek Question hai ki agar ye itna dangerous log hai to fir Veer ko puri tarah se such kyu nhi btaye ye log???

Bhai yaaar jaldi update dedo bhai

Happy birthday to you

Waiting for update

Waiting for update

Finally some news after a long waiting period

Update 176 has been posted guys.

 

[Werewolf]

Index has been updated.

Also, artworks and full characters guide bhi update kar di gayi hai. Full characters guide ko aur bhi acche dhang se darshane ke liye use mein thoda aur sort out kar dunga.

Happy Holi to all of you.