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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

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  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 26 1.7%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 202 12.9%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 35 2.2%

  • Total voters
    1,564

Death Kiñg

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Update - 30 ~ The Best Gift

Ab tak...

Jese hi usne aankhein khol ke dekha toh paaya ki...

Suman ekdum nangi apni dono doodh ki thailiya uske seene par tikaaye usse hi nihaar rahi thi aur muskuraa rahi thi.

Uske baad wo boli,

"Subah ho gayi... Ma-Maalik!"

'Huh?? Wait!!!! What did she sayyyy???'


Ab aage...

Mumbai...
At Nidhi's Home...

Subah subah Nidhi badi hi pareshaan sii hall me hi sofe par viraajmaan thi. Haatho me phone tha aur aankho me nami.

'He doesn't even replies to me. Phone karti hu toh wo bhi nahi uthaana hai usse. Kya itna bura laga hai usse meri baato ka? Jo ab wo mujhse baat bhi nahi karna chaahta? Kya ho gaya tha mujhe bhi uss din? Uss... Uss din itna kese bhadak gayi mein uspe? Meri hi galti hai. Bura laga hai usse tabhi toh dekho na... Na mere calls utha raha hai, na meri baatein maan raha hai college roz aane ki, na messages seen kar raha hai. Itna... He's... He's stupid... Idiot... Pagal... He...'

Nidhi bechaari, Veer ke hi baare me sochi jaa rahi thi. Akhir uska contact jo nahi hua tha Veer se uss raat se. Bechaini se bharpoor thi wo iss waqt. Upar se Rajat ka alag tension. Kahi Rajat ne Veer ko kisi pareshani me toh nahi daal diya. Dherr saare sawaal umad rahe the uske mann me.

Apni aankho me bann rahe aasuo ko poch wo uthne hi waali thi ki uski jaangh pe uske gown ko kisi ne pakad ke kheencha,

Dekha toh Juhi thi jo abhi abhi apni aankhein malte hue uske paas aayi thi.

"Uth gayi meri bacchi!?" Nidhi ne usse thaamte hue apne seene se laga liya.

Juhi : Mmmm

Nidhi : Chalo! Ready kar du tumhe. School bhi jaana hai.

Juhi : Mummy aap yaha kyu baithi ho? Tiffin me kya rakhogi aaj?

Nidhi : Kuch nahi betu. Tumhaare Veer maamu... Boht tang karte hai tumhari mummy ko...

Juhi : Mmm? Veer maamu!? Veer maamu se toh mein parso hi mili thi Ehehehe~

Juhi ki baat sunte hi jese Nidhi ko ek jhatka laga. Uski beti bhala kab aur kaha mil lii Veer se?

Nidhi : ??? Tum?? Kaha!??? Kaha mili thi beta Veer se? Wo toh...

Juhi : Hmm? Parso jab mein maasi ke saath bazaar gayi thi toh waha se jab aaye... Toh Veer Maamu neeche hi khade thi bike pe.

'Bike!??? That means... It was him!!!!!!!'

Nidhi apni bacchi ko kass ke thaame usse ghur rahi thi. Aur uss se jaldbaazi me sawaal karte jaa rahi thi. Jese maano Veer se judi harr ek information wo Juhi se jaan'na chaahti thi.

Nidhi : T-Toh? F-Fir kya hua? Kya kaha usne? Aapke Veer maamu ne?

Juhi : Wo bole unhe kuch kaam hai aur chale gaye... Mummy! Mujhe toilet aayi hai...

Juhi itna bol Nidhi ke aachal se nikal tezz kadmo ke saath andar washroom me bhaag gayi.

Par Nidhi ka sawaal poora nahi hua tha. Sabse bada sawaal ki Veer iss waqt kaha reh raha hai...?? Ye toh woh puchna hi bhul gayi.

Ye khayaal aate hi jese hi wo palti aur Juhi ko awaaz lagaane waali thi ki tabhi, usne dekha ki Shreya darwaaze ki dehleez pe khade usse hi dekh rahi hai.

'???'

Shreya : Don't worry! Wo apni Bhabhi ke saath reh raha hai. Remember? Wahi Bhabhi... Jinhe wo uss din bachaane gaya tha?

Nidhi (surprised) : Tumhe...?? Noo!!! Wo tumse milne aaya aur tumne mujhe bataaya tak nahi Shreya? Itni badi baat...

Shreya : Chill!!! Uska kehna hai ki wo aapke saath nahi reh sakta. Kyuki wo aapki situation jaanta hai aur wo guilt conscious banda hai. Uss se aise nahi raha jaega. Isliye, wo waha reh raha hai.

Nidhi : Aur kaun tha jisne usse meri sacchaayi ke baare me bataaya!? Haa?

Shreya : I...

Nidhi : Mene tumhe mana kiya tha na Shreya? Mene mana kiya tha na? Fir kyu tumne usse...

Wo Shreya ko acchi khaasi sunaati par tabhi usse kuch shabd yaad aa gaye.

'Shreya ji ko mat daatiyega, unhone mujhe wo sab batana zaroori samjha isliye bataaya tha shayad.'

Aur bas...

Nidhi ke khule honth apne aap hi band ho gaye. Letter me Veer ne spasht likha tha ki Shreya jii ko na daanta jaaye. Ab bhala Nidhi uski baat kese nahi rakhti? Uski maujoodgi na hone par bhi, iss tarah se uska mehatv bann chuka tha uske ghar me.

"Idiot...!"

Wo badbadaati hui uthi aur seedhe kitchen me chali gayi.

Par saamne khadi Shreya sab kuch dekh paa rahi thi. Wo dekh paa rahi thi ki kitna significance tha Veer ka Nidhi ke upar aur saath hi saath Juhi par bhi... Even uske khud ke upar bhi.

Wo khud ek gehre chintan me doob gayi.

'I wonder how it would look if he was my Sister's husband!...'

'????'

'Huh?? Wtf!?? Wait! Mein kya sochne lagi??'

Apna sarr hilaate hue wo andar chali gayi.

***

Rajasthan...
At Suman's home...

Veer : Hmm! Toh ab bataogi ki ye kya chakkar hai? Kyu mujhe aap...

Suman : Tum kehke bulaaiye mujhe maalik... Tum... Tum keh ke... Kripya kar!

'She..'

Veer (sighs) : Hmm! Toh ab bataogi ko ye sab kya chakkar hai? Kyu tum... Kyu tum mujhe maalik keh ke bula rahi ho?

Veer kal ki hui ghatna ke baad mann me dherr saare sawaal liye hue tha. Ab chuki wo dono ka hi clear mind tha, Veer ne forun hi sawaal puchna sahi samjha.

Wo iss waqt ussi bistar par baitha hua tha jispe kal raat dono ne hi rangreliyaa manaayi thi. Uske perro ke paas uski jaangh par haath rakhe Suman baithi hui thi jo keval muskuraa ke Veer ko dekhe jaa rahi thi.

Suman (smiles) : Ye toh hona hi tha ek na ek din maalik!

Veer (frowns) : Kya matlab!?

Suman : Maalik! Ye toh hona hi tha... Jis pal mene aapka seena dekha tha.

'Mera seena!?'

Sochte hue Veer ne jese hi apne seene par nazar maari toh usse nazar aaya...

Uska pendant. Wahi pendant jo uski Maa ne diya tha. Wo shirt ke baahar hi tha.

'Huh!?? So... That's why she kept looking at me like that!?'

Veer ne apne haatho me uss pendant ko thaama jo ek sone ki chain ka tha aur usme ek bada hi anokha sa neela patthar chipka hua tha.

Veer : Tumhara matlab hai ye?? Mera pendant?

Suman (nods) : Jii Haa maalik! Yahi! Aur isliye aaj se ye Suman aapki Daasi hai.

'Huh??? Wtf?? Did I heard that right!?'

[Hahaha~ You don't know. You just found the diamond. Wo Heere ki anguthi kuch bhi nahi, asli heera toh ab aapko mila hai master. Haha~ Who needs a diamond ring? When you can have a slave? Hahaha~]

'Oh come on Pari! This is serious.'

[Hehe~]

Veer (pendant pakadte hue) : Isme aisa kya hai?

Suman (surprised) : Maalik? Kya aapko waqai kuch nahi pata iske baare me?

Veer : Hmm? Nahi! Kyu?

Suman Veer ko aise dekh rahi thi jese maano koi bhoot dekh liya ho.

Suman : Maalik!??? Ya toh aap mazaak kar rahe hai ya anjaan bann rahe hai.

Veer : Dekho Suman...

Suman : *smiles*

Veer : ???

Suman : Mujhe accha laga aapne akhir kaar mujhe mere naam se bulaaya. Aur mera ye anurodh hai ki... Aage bhi... Aage bhi maalik... Aise hi mujhe bulaaye.

Veer : Ahem! Haa! Toh dekho Suman... Mein waqai kuch bhi nahi jaanta hu. Tum kya keh rahi ho meri samajh me kuch bhi nahi aa raha hai.

Suman : Par aisa kese ho sakta hai!? Huh!?? Zara rukiye maalik...

Wo hairaan hote hue kuch sochti hai aur fir Veer ko punah dekhti hai,

Suman : Ye aapko kisne diya? Aapke paas ye kese aaya?

Veer : Hmm? Ye!? Ye meri Maa ne mujhe janm ke waqt pehnaaya tha.

Suman (shocked) : Aapki Maa ne!?

Veer (frowns) : Hmm! Tum... Kya tum kuch jaanti ho?

Suman : Aapki... Aapki Maa ka naam kya hai!?

Veer : Bhavana!

Suman ye sunte hi forun khadi ho gayi hai aur muh faade Veer ko dekhne lagi. Stabdh nigaaho se wo usse ghur rahi thi.

Suman : Bh-Bhavana!?

'There's something wrong!'

[Ask her every possible detail master! Something is fishy!!!]

'Yeaaahhh!!'

Veer (frowns) : Tum! Kuch zaroor jaanti ho. Hai na!?

Veer ne khade hote hue agle hi pal kivaad ki chatakni andar se hi band kar lock laga diya.

Veer : Jawaab do!!

Suman haa me sarr hilaayi aur tezz kadmo ke saath almaari ki taraf gayi, usse khol wo kuch hi palo ke andar ek chaavi dhund ke laayi.

Uske baad wo neeche jhuki aur ussi bistar ke neeche se usne ek peti sarka ke nikaali.

Suman ki harr ek harqat Veer dekh raha tha aur uska dil zorr se dhadak raha tha. Zaroor... Zaroor kuch na kuch usse pata chalne waala tha jiske chalte usse shayad jhatke bhi lag sakte the.

Andar peti me se usne ek tasveer nikaali jo photo frame me saji hui thi aur Veer ki taraf badhaayi.

'??'

Sawaalia nazre liye jese hi usne wo photo dekhi...

Usse dikhaayi diya ki ek behad hi shandaar sa mahal ya haweli keh lo jo kaafi badi thi aur phoolo se saji hui thi. Koi bhi insaan nahi tha photo me. Keval ek mahal jitni badi haweli hi thi.

Veer (frowns) : Iska matlab kya hai!?

Suman : Maalik! Mein aapko zyaada kuch nahi bata sakti. Keval itna hi bata sakti hu ki...
Mein aur mera parivaar, mere purvaj asal me...
Hamesha se iss haveli me rehne waale logo ki seva karte aaye hai. Itne pehle se ki sahi anumaan lagaana naamumkin hai.

Veer : Kaun hai ye log? Aur ye haveli?

Suman : Mein nahi bata sakti. Mujhe maaf kijiyega. Mein vachan baddh hu. Bas itna jaan lijiye ki... Mein aur hamaare poorvaj iss haveli ke logo ke sevak the aur hai aur aane waale samay me bhi rahenge.

Veer : Par tumne abhi abhi kaha ki tum meri daasi...!? Wait!! Huh??

Jese usse realize hua...

Suman (smiles) : ....

Veer : Iska matlab toh yahi hua ki... Mein iss haweli se hu... Jo ki bilkul bhi sach nahi hai.

Suman : Ye jo aapke gale me tanga hua hai na??

Veer : Hmm!

Suman : Ye mene iss haveli me rehne waale logo ke paas dekha tha. Aur... Ye unka beshkeemti gehna tha.

Veer (surprised) : Yadi iss hisaab se chale toh... Doesn't that means ki meri Maa... Wo iss haveli ke logo me se ek thi?

Suman : ....

Veer : Ye log kaha hai abhi? Ye haveli kidhar hai?

Suman : Mein nahi bata sakti maalik! Mein vachan baddh hu.

Veer : Dammmn it!!! Toh... Toh ye toh bata sakti ho na ki tumhe ye vachan kisne diya?

Suman (nods) : Meri Nani ne...

Veer : Nani? Okay!! G-Good! Toh chalo... Kaha hai wo? M-Mujhe unse milna hai.

Suman : Maaf kijiyega par... Wo ab iss duniya me nahi hai maalik!

'Fuuuuccccckkkkkkk!!!!'

'There's something wrong!! Yadi Suman ka kehna hai ki wo aur uska parivaar Inn haveli ke logo ki sewa karta tha toh yaha toh wo meri sewa kar rahi hai. Keval mere pendant dekhne ke baad. Kyuki uske hisaab se ye pendant unn haweli ke logo ka beshkeemti gehna tha. Toh fir Mom ke paas kese aaya ye pendant? Did she stole it? No I don't think so. Iska matlab toh bas yahi darsha raha hai ki Mom inn haveli waale logo ke beech ki ek sadasya thi. Ya fir unhone Mom ko ye gehna diya ho? Par wo itna beshkeemti gehna kyu denge bhala? Aaaarrrghhhhhh!!!'

Veer ne kheejte hue apne baal noche. Itne saare sawaal umad rahe the ki uski kuch soojh nahi raha tha kya kare.

[Don't worry! Ye kaafi uljhi hui gutthi hai. Atleast aapko apni Mom ke baare me kuch information mili.]

'Yeaahhh! No wait....'

Kuch sochte hue wo forun hi palta aur Suman se pucha,

"Toh kya tum meri Maa ko jaanti ho? Bhavana?"

Suman Veer ko dekhi aur fir naa me sarr hila dii.

Suman : Nahi maalik!! Mein unhe nahi jaanti.

Veer (frowns) : Par tumhaare haav bhaav toh kuch aur hi the jab tumne mere muh se unka naam suna tha.

Suman : Jesa ki mene kaha maalik. Mein unhe nahi jaanti. Rahi baat mere haav bhaav ki... Toh mein iss se zyaada kuch bhi kehne ke liye vachan badhh hu maalik. Mujhe maaf kar dijiye maalik!

Suman ko Veer ne gaur se dekha aur ant me ek aah bhari. Kyuki Suman ko dekh ke hi pata lagaaya jaa sakta tha ki wo bilkul bhi jhooth nahi bol rahi thi.

Abhi wo baitha hi hua tha ki tabhi uska phone bajne laga,

Screen pe dekha toh...

'Ragini Bhabhi!?'

Veer : Hello?

Ragini : Happy Birthday Veeeeeeeerrrr!!

Ragini ki khil khilaati hui awaaz uske kaano me padi. Aur ye sunte hi Veer ke hontho pe ek muskaan fel gayi.

'I almost forgot... Ki aaj toh mera b'day hai. Bhabhi ko yaad tha!? I wonder... Aur kisse yaad hoga?'

[Fuck! It's your birthday master!? Happy Birthday my dear master.]

'Thanks Pari!'

[Ab gift ke taur pe fataak se mujhe Level 4 pe pohuchao.]

'Gift jiska b'day hota hai wo nahi deta idiot. Wish karne waale dete hai usse.'

[Huh? Ohh yeah! Fuck! I forgot! Ahahaha~]

Veer (sighs) : Thank you Bhabhi!

Ragini : Welcome! Toh!? Wo... Wo... Tum aa rahe ho na? Kab tak aaoge?

Veer : Kal! Aaj reservation karwa lunga. Aur aaj raat me baith jaunga. So kal tak...

Ragini ki tabhi udhar se thodi udaasi bhari awaaz aayi,

"Toh! Tum b'day par yaha nahi rahoge matlab."

Veer : Chaahta hu par possible nahi hai. Kal hi aa paunga.

Ragini : Well! Right! Kal then... I have a surprise for you! Kal aao... And... Acche se safar karna okay?

Veer (smiles) : Jiii!

Ragini : Okay! Toh... Mein rakhu..!?

Veer (smiles) : Jii!

Aur call end ho gaya.

Bechaari Ragini call toh badi hi utsaah se lagaayi thi. Par usse wish karne ke baad samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ki apne dewar se bhala ab aur kya baatein kare. Aur iske chalte usse khud pe sharam aa rahi thi. Wo jald se jald phone rakhi aur khud ko baatein sunaate hue andar chali gayi.

***

Veer ka birthday toh tha hi par saath hi saath aaj kisi aur ka bhi b'day tha. Wo shaks aur koi nahi balki Suhana aur Sonia ki Maa thi ~ Jyoti!

Ek badi sii hotel me ek poora hall booked tha. Poore hall ko sajaaya gaya tha. Andar dherr saari lights jal rahi thi aur mand mand awaaz me instrumental music chal raha tha.

Waiters me saari ki saari khubsoorat ladkiya thi jo khubsoorat sii attire pehne guests ko kahi cold drinks toh kahi snacks serve kar rahi thi.

Toh kuch entrance pe unke swaagat ke liye khadi hui thi.

Guests bhi ek se badh ke ek the. Sabhi raees aur bade gharaano se belong kar rahe the.

Mahaul kul milaake boht khushnuma tha par...

Par iss waqt ussi hotel ke ek kamre me do behad hi khubsoorat auratein atyant hi chintan me doobi hui thi.

Ye aur koi nahi balki Suhana aur Sonia hi thi.

Suhana idhar se udhar tahelte hue khud ko shaant karne ki koshish kar rahi thi.

"Kuch nahi hoga Suhana! Phew! Calm down! Phew!"

Sonia : Wo aate hi honge.

Suhana : Tum mujhe aur darra rahi ho Sonu!

Par Suhana ki baat pe Sonia kuch na boli bas muh ferr ke kahi aur dekhne lagi.

Aur uska ye rukhapann Suhana ko andar hi andar tadpa raha tha. Wo Sonia ke sameep aayi aur uske chehre ko apne haatho se ghumaate hue apni orr kii.

Suhana : Ab bhi naraaz ho mujhse?

Sonia : ....

Suhana : Sonuuu! Please! Don't! Tere bina adhuri hu mein ye baat tu bhi jaanti hai. Aur mein tujhse maafi maang chuki hu na. Mene maana hai na ki uss Veer ne ring nahi churaayi hogi kyuki tum uske saath thi. Toh ab kya dikkat hai?

Sonia : ....

Suhana : Sonu!!! Maaf kar de!!! Dekh! Mein kaan pakadti hu.

Wo kaan pakad paati ki uske pehle hi darwaaza khula aur ek aadmi andar aaya. Upar se leke neeche tak wo mehnge kapdo se saja hua tha.

Sonia : Dad!?

Sonia aur Suhana ke pita, yaani ki desh ki jaani maani automobiles company ke maalik ~ Shailendra.

Shailendra : Bolo! Kya baat hai? Tumlogo ko beta waha hall me rehna tha. Sabhi guests kya sochenge?

Suhana apne pita ko dekh ekdum kaanp rahi thi. Akhir kese wo bataegi ki jo ring wo dene waale hai. Wo toh chori ho chuki hai.

Sonia : Dii ko aapse kuch kehna hai.

Shailendra : Hmm? Kya baat hai beta? Jaldi kaho... Baahar bhi jaana hai. Tumhari Mom bhi ready ho hi gayi hai.

Suhana Sonia ko hairani bhare bhaav se ghur rahi thi. Andar aane se pehle hi Sonia ne uss se kaha tha ki Sonia uski madad karegi. Par yaha toh wo jese uski taraf dekh hi nahi rahi thi.

'Oh no!!! Sonu!!! She's really mad...'

Yaha Sonia apne alag hi vichaaro me leen thi.

'Mene kitna call kiya Veer ko. Ki aaj party hai. I wanted to say sorry to him again. Par... Abhi tak uska koi reply na aaya. He probably hates me now. Akhir... Dii ne uski itni beizzati kii hai ki wo mujhe hi inn sab ka kaaran samajh baitha hoga. Par Veer... Kese batau tumhe... Sacchaayi!?'

Shailendra : Bolo beta!

Suhana : Wo... Wo...

Shailendra : Haa?

Suhana : Asal me...

Shailendra : Arre bolo bhi...

Suhana : Wo dedh crore ki ring chori ho chuki hai.

Wo ek saas me bol gayi.

Aur agle hi pal...

Poore kamre me sannaata sa chhaa gaya.

Shailendra : ???

Sonia : ....

Suhana : ....

Shailendra : K-Kya? Kya kaha tumne?

Suhana : Wo... Wo... Dedh crore waali ring... Jo aap Mom ko dene waale the wo... Wo chori ho gayi hai.

Aur agle hi pal Shailendra ki aankhein felti chali gayi.

Uske baad jab Suhana ne poori sachhai bataayi toh Shailendra ka gussa saatve aasmaan par pohuch chuka tha.

Wo aag baboola hoke Suhana aur Sonia dono ko dekh raha tha.

Aisa lag raha tha ki kisi bhi waqt wo dono ko tamaacha jadd dega.

Par usne aisa kiya na...

"Kal tak yadi Ring nahi mili... Toh Suhana... Hmph!"

Daant meeste hue wo agle pal hi mobile nikaal kaan se lagaaya aur baahar nikal ke...

*Slaaammmm*

Zorr se usne darwaaza band kar diya.

Aur Suhana ye dekhte hi bilakhte hue rone lagi. Wo jaanti thi ki jab uske Dad kuch nahi bolte the toh wo kitna naraaz aur gusse me rehte the. Sonia se chipak ke wo rone lagti hai.

Ab usse Veer ke kahe shabd yaad aa rahe the.

"Didn't you said that few minutes ago!? Money can buy happiness. Paisa sab kuch hai. Paisa hi khushiya laata hai. Paise se hi aap khush rehte ho? Paise se kabhi koi udaas reh hi nahi sakta. Didn't you said that!? Then why do you look sad now? Mujhe toh abhi keval yahi dikhaayi de raha hai ki... Paise se... You are not even happy... Look! How distressed you are. Look at yourself. Kaha gaye ab wo shabd??? Hmm?? I can't hear them..."

Iss waqt bhi...

Wo ro rahi thi. Aur kahi se bhi happy nahi thi. Uske shabd jese ekdum sahi saabit ho rahe the. Pata nahi kyu par iss baar Suhana ko Veer ka dhyaan aate hi... Iss baar usse gussa nahi aaya. Keval rulaayi hi chooth rahi thi.

***

Idhar Veer reservation karwa ke Jaipur ke station pohuch chuka tha. Ragini ke diye gaye paise waqai boht kaam aaye the uske liye.

Na keval Suman ne idhar apne ghar me poora taala laga diya balki wo apne ghar ki chaavi bhi pados me de aayi ye kehke ki yadi uska pati waapas se aaye toh usse dhundne ki koshish na kare.

Keval Suman hi nahi, Aabha aur Sonali bhi uske sang thi. Suman ka kehna tha ki ab wo Veer ki daasi hai toh harr pal uske aas paas hi rahegi aur uski sewa karegi.

Shaam ko bhi Suman ke aakarshan ke chalte Veer se raha na gaya aur usne ek baar aur Suman ko pel diya.

Pehli baar me jo sex usne Suman ke saath kiya tha uske chalte usse 35 points mile the aur usse bachaane ke 30 points. Toh kul milaake uske paas 65 points maujood the jinhe wo spend nahi kiya tha.

Wo ghar lautne ke baad hi inn points ka sahi istemaal kese karna hai ye decide karne waala tha.

Ab chuki aa toh gaya tha wo station par usne dekha ki Sonali bade hi gusse se usse dekh rahi thi. Aur baat bhi nahi kar rahi thi. Bas dekhti aur gusse se aag baboola ho jaati. Par bolti kuch nahi. Veer ne bhi ignore karna hi behtar samjha filhaal ke liye.

Train aa chuki thi reservation unka AC 1 coach me tha. Veer samaan rakh ke abhi baahar hi aake kuch chips aur biscuits khareedne me laga hua tha jab usse sunaayi diya,

"Bhaiya!! Oo bhaiya! Hello jii!?"

Usne dekha toh paaya ki saamne ek dusri train me ek mahila khidki se apna ek haath nikaale kisi ko awaaz laga rahi thi.

Veer kuch soch aage badha toh agle hi pal uss mahila ki nazar Veer par gayi.

Dono ki nazre jab aapas me takraayi toh uss mahila ne forun hi firse pukaara,

"Betaa! Suno..."

Usne haath se ishaara karte hue Veer ko bulaaya.

Veer jab uske sameep aaya toh thoda hairaan reh gaya. Paas se gaur se jab usne dekha toh paaya ki...

Wo mahila waqai khubsoorat thi. Aur saree nahi balki ek kaali t shirt pehni hui thi. Jisme uski gori twacha alag hi khil ke dikhaayi de rahi thi.

Veer : Jiii!?

Aurat : Beta! Kya tum mere liye waha shop se ek paani ki bottle laa doge please? Mein khud le aati par... Meri back me thoda pain hai.

Veer (smiles) : Sure!

Aurat : Ohh! Th-Thank you beta!

Veer (smiles) : Isme thanks kesa? Aap rukiye! Mein aata hu.

Veer uske diye gaye paiso se ek bottle liya aur apni taraf se usne ek biscuit ka packet bhi liya aur wo leke uss aurat ke paas aaya.

Aurat (surprised) : Ye!?

Veer (smiles) : Ye meri taraf se... Rakh lijiye! Back me pain hai aapki. Aage station me aapko utarna na pade.

Aurat kuch derr ke liye usse dekhi aur fir ek badi hi pyaari sii muskaan usne dii.

Na jaane kyu par wo muskaan dekh Veer ekdum shaant pad gaya.

Aurat : Thank you beta! Wese iski koi zaroorat nahi thi par fir bhi thank you! Aur ruko...

Tabhi wo apne bagal me rakhe bag se kuch tatolti hai aur ek candy ka packet usse thama deti hai.

Aurat : Ye meri taraf se... Haha~

Veer (smiles) : Iski koi zaroorat nahi...

Aurat : Na na! Haha~ Ab ye rakhna padega. Thank you once again.

Veer (smiles) : Jii! Chalta hu! Safe journey!

Aurat (smiles) : Okay! You too!

Aur tabhi uss aurat ki train aur saath hi saath Veer ki bhi train chalne lagti hai.

Ek baar fir wo Veer ko khidki se dekhti hai toh paati hai ki Veer bhi usse hi dekh raha tha. Dono bas muskuraa dete hai.

Veer lapak ke train me chadhta hai par achanak usse pata nahi kya sujhta hai ki...

Wo palat ke ek baar fir uss aurat ko dekhta hai aur...

'Check!'

[Alias name - Geeta
Real Name - Bhavana Singh.
Bio - Bhavana! Ek behad hi strong woman hai. Boht peeda me hai jo kayi saalo se wo bardaasht karti aa rahi hai. Loves her daughter too much. Ek aas hai usse. Aur kisi ki talaash. Peshe se Archeologist hai.

Favourability - 70
Relationship - Mother.]

Aur ye padhte hi Veer ko uski life ka sabse bada jhatka laga tha.

Aaj usse apne janmdin par koi gift mila ho na mila ho. Ye jese...

Uske liye best gift tha.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!

Don't forget to like. 😁
Woohooo... Suhana ki akkal aakhir thikaane aa hi gayi... Himmat kaise huyi thi iss ghamandi aurat ki Veer ki beizzati karne ki... Issi ki wajah se bechari masoom Pari ko gaali galoch pe utarna pada tha. Main to kehta hoon ke jab Veer isse ring waapis kare to uske baad ye galti se usse gutter mein daal de... Fir aayegaa maza to...

To ye Suman vachanbadh hai... Acchha laga jaanke ke aaj ke zamane mein bhi log vachano ka mol jaante hain... Matlab bahut samay se Suman ke poorvaj haveli waalon ki sewa karte aa rahe hain... Aur ab Suman ne bhi wahi kiya... Veer ki sewa :akshay:...

Kherr!! Suman ne bataya to kuchh khaas nahi Veer ko... Par Bhavana naam sunkar uska iss prakaar chaunkna saabit karta hai ke kuchh to zaroor hua tha past mein Veer ki Nanihaal waali family mein... Veer ke liye saari sachayi pata lagana aasan kaam nahi hone waala hai... Sonali train station par bhi Veer ke prati gusse mein hai... Aur ho bhi kyon naa aakhir uski Maa kyon Veer ke liye iss tarah ka bartaav rakh rahi hai... Asliyat se to Sonali anjaan hi hai naa...

[Alias name - Geeta
Real Name - Bhavana Singh.
Bio - Bhavana! Ek behad hi strong woman hai. Boht peeda me hai jo kayi saalo se wo bardaasht karti aa rahi hai. Loves her daughter too much. Ek aas hai usse. Aur kisi ki talaash. Peshe se Archeologist hai.

Favourability - 70
Relationship - Mother.]
Wtf!!! Veer ki mom zinda hai... Fir kyon usne Veer ko akele chhod diya ... Agar wo Brijesh se alag huyi thi matlab wo spasht roop se jaanti thi ke wo acchha insaan nahi hai fir bhi Veer ko uske paas chhod diya... Aur ye Geeta naam se kyon jee rahi hai... Kyon chhipaayi hai isne apni pehchaan???

Beti... Matlab Veer ki ek behen bhi hai... Kya Bhavana ne doosri shaadi kar li??? Aur agar ye ladki Bhavana aur Brijesh ki hi beti hai to jab wo usse apne saath rakhe huye hai to Veer ko kyon akele chhod diya??? Shayad Brijesh ne kaha ho ke mujhe ladka hi chahiye... Rajat ki tarah??? Par kya Veer apni Mom se abhi mil paayega??? Ya fir train chhoot jaayegi... Werewolf bhai ab zyada din door naa rakhna Maa Bete ko... Kherr aapne jo socha hoga wohi kahani ke liye best hoga... Dekhte hain Veer kab aur kese apni Behen aur Maa se milega...

By the way Nidhi bahut zyada miss kar rahi hai Veer ko... Juhi lagta hai ke Veer ki kahi gayi baat se santusht hai... Pata nahi kya kaha hoga Veer ne uske kaan mein??

'I wonder how it would look if he was my Sister's husband!...'
Hahahaha :lol::lol::lol: saala yahi sun na baaki reh gaya tha kya ab... Marriage Bureau khulwaa ke do koyi iss laadki ko... Aur agar Veer itna hi achha hai to khud ke saath kaahe naa jodi sochi isne... Nahi isse to saali banke maze lene hain...

Anyways shaandar update bhai... Ek baar fir se suspense mein chhod diya hume... Iss tarah ki harkat baar baar bardasht nahi ki jaayegi... Aur haan agli baar 25k words ka update... Nahi matlab try karne mein koyi harz to nahi hai :D

Outstanding Update as always & Waiting for next one...
 

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kya Werewolf :slap: main kya soch ke aayi thi ki chalo subha subha in kirdaaro ki thodi bahot band baja dun to dil ko sukun mile.... Par ju ne to itna bada shocked de diya...... itni jaldi kahani ke is mod pe bhaavna is tarah se entry legi ye to soch se bhi pade hai :fainted: :faint:
 

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Update - 30 ~ The Best Gift

Ab tak...

Jese hi usne aankhein khol ke dekha toh paaya ki...

Suman ekdum nangi apni dono doodh ki thailiya uske seene par tikaaye usse hi nihaar rahi thi aur muskuraa rahi thi.

Uske baad wo boli,

"Subah ho gayi... Ma-Maalik!"

'Huh?? Wait!!!! What did she sayyyy???'


Ab aage...

Mumbai...
At Nidhi's Home...

Subah subah Nidhi badi hi pareshaan sii hall me hi sofe par viraajmaan thi. Haatho me phone tha aur aankho me nami.

'He doesn't even replies to me. Phone karti hu toh wo bhi nahi uthaana hai usse. Kya itna bura laga hai usse meri baato ka? Jo ab wo mujhse baat bhi nahi karna chaahta? Kya ho gaya tha mujhe bhi uss din? Uss... Uss din itna kese bhadak gayi mein uspe? Meri hi galti hai. Bura laga hai usse tabhi toh dekho na... Na mere calls utha raha hai, na meri baatein maan raha hai college roz aane ki, na messages seen kar raha hai. Itna... He's... He's stupid... Idiot... Pagal... He...'

Nidhi bechaari, Veer ke hi baare me sochi jaa rahi thi. Akhir uska contact jo nahi hua tha Veer se uss raat se. Bechaini se bharpoor thi wo iss waqt. Upar se Rajat ka alag tension. Kahi Rajat ne Veer ko kisi pareshani me toh nahi daal diya. Dherr saare sawaal umad rahe the uske mann me.

Apni aankho me bann rahe aasuo ko poch wo uthne hi waali thi ki uski jaangh pe uske gown ko kisi ne pakad ke kheencha,

Dekha toh Juhi thi jo abhi abhi apni aankhein malte hue uske paas aayi thi.

"Uth gayi meri bacchi!?" Nidhi ne usse thaamte hue apne seene se laga liya.

Juhi : Mmmm

Nidhi : Chalo! Ready kar du tumhe. School bhi jaana hai.

Juhi : Mummy aap yaha kyu baithi ho? Tiffin me kya rakhogi aaj?

Nidhi : Kuch nahi betu. Tumhaare Veer maamu... Boht tang karte hai tumhari mummy ko...

Juhi : Mmm? Veer maamu!? Veer maamu se toh mein parso hi mili thi Ehehehe~

Juhi ki baat sunte hi jese Nidhi ko ek jhatka laga. Uski beti bhala kab aur kaha mil lii Veer se?

Nidhi : ??? Tum?? Kaha!??? Kaha mili thi beta Veer se? Wo toh...

Juhi : Hmm? Parso jab mein maasi ke saath bazaar gayi thi toh waha se jab aaye... Toh Veer Maamu neeche hi khade thi bike pe.

'Bike!??? That means... It was him!!!!!!!'

Nidhi apni bacchi ko kass ke thaame usse ghur rahi thi. Aur uss se jaldbaazi me sawaal karte jaa rahi thi. Jese maano Veer se judi harr ek information wo Juhi se jaan'na chaahti thi.

Nidhi : T-Toh? F-Fir kya hua? Kya kaha usne? Aapke Veer maamu ne?

Juhi : Wo bole unhe kuch kaam hai aur chale gaye... Mummy! Mujhe toilet aayi hai...

Juhi itna bol Nidhi ke aachal se nikal tezz kadmo ke saath andar washroom me bhaag gayi.

Par Nidhi ka sawaal poora nahi hua tha. Sabse bada sawaal ki Veer iss waqt kaha reh raha hai...?? Ye toh woh puchna hi bhul gayi.

Ye khayaal aate hi jese hi wo palti aur Juhi ko awaaz lagaane waali thi ki tabhi, usne dekha ki Shreya darwaaze ki dehleez pe khade usse hi dekh rahi hai.

'???'

Shreya : Don't worry! Wo apni Bhabhi ke saath reh raha hai. Remember? Wahi Bhabhi... Jinhe wo uss din bachaane gaya tha?

Nidhi (surprised) : Tumhe...?? Noo!!! Wo tumse milne aaya aur tumne mujhe bataaya tak nahi Shreya? Itni badi baat...

Shreya : Chill!!! Uska kehna hai ki wo aapke saath nahi reh sakta. Kyuki wo aapki situation jaanta hai aur wo guilt conscious banda hai. Uss se aise nahi raha jaega. Isliye, wo waha reh raha hai.

Nidhi : Aur kaun tha jisne usse meri sacchaayi ke baare me bataaya!? Haa?

Shreya : I...

Nidhi : Mene tumhe mana kiya tha na Shreya? Mene mana kiya tha na? Fir kyu tumne usse...

Wo Shreya ko acchi khaasi sunaati par tabhi usse kuch shabd yaad aa gaye.

'Shreya ji ko mat daatiyega, unhone mujhe wo sab batana zaroori samjha isliye bataaya tha shayad.'

Aur bas...

Nidhi ke khule honth apne aap hi band ho gaye. Letter me Veer ne spasht likha tha ki Shreya jii ko na daanta jaaye. Ab bhala Nidhi uski baat kese nahi rakhti? Uski maujoodgi na hone par bhi, iss tarah se uska mehatv bann chuka tha uske ghar me.

"Idiot...!"

Wo badbadaati hui uthi aur seedhe kitchen me chali gayi.

Par saamne khadi Shreya sab kuch dekh paa rahi thi. Wo dekh paa rahi thi ki kitna significance tha Veer ka Nidhi ke upar aur saath hi saath Juhi par bhi... Even uske khud ke upar bhi.

Wo khud ek gehre chintan me doob gayi.

'I wonder how it would look if he was my Sister's husband!...'

'????'

'Huh?? Wtf!?? Wait! Mein kya sochne lagi??'

Apna sarr hilaate hue wo andar chali gayi.

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Rajasthan...
At Suman's home...

Veer : Hmm! Toh ab bataogi ki ye kya chakkar hai? Kyu mujhe aap...

Suman : Tum kehke bulaaiye mujhe maalik... Tum... Tum keh ke... Kripya kar!

'She..'

Veer (sighs) : Hmm! Toh ab bataogi ko ye sab kya chakkar hai? Kyu tum... Kyu tum mujhe maalik keh ke bula rahi ho?

Veer kal ki hui ghatna ke baad mann me dherr saare sawaal liye hue tha. Ab chuki wo dono ka hi clear mind tha, Veer ne forun hi sawaal puchna sahi samjha.

Wo iss waqt ussi bistar par baitha hua tha jispe kal raat dono ne hi rangreliyaa manaayi thi. Uske perro ke paas uski jaangh par haath rakhe Suman baithi hui thi jo keval muskuraa ke Veer ko dekhe jaa rahi thi.

Suman (smiles) : Ye toh hona hi tha ek na ek din maalik!

Veer (frowns) : Kya matlab!?

Suman : Maalik! Ye toh hona hi tha... Jis pal mene aapka seena dekha tha.

'Mera seena!?'

Sochte hue Veer ne jese hi apne seene par nazar maari toh usse nazar aaya...

Uska pendant. Wahi pendant jo uski Maa ne diya tha. Wo shirt ke baahar hi tha.

'Huh!?? So... That's why she kept looking at me like that!?'

Veer ne apne haatho me uss pendant ko thaama jo ek sone ki chain ka tha aur usme ek bada hi anokha sa neela patthar chipka hua tha.

Veer : Tumhara matlab hai ye?? Mera pendant?

Suman (nods) : Jii Haa maalik! Yahi! Aur isliye aaj se ye Suman aapki Daasi hai.

'Huh??? Wtf?? Did I heard that right!?'

[Hahaha~ You don't know. You just found the diamond. Wo Heere ki anguthi kuch bhi nahi, asli heera toh ab aapko mila hai master. Haha~ Who needs a diamond ring? When you can have a slave? Hahaha~]

'Oh come on Pari! This is serious.'

[Hehe~]

Veer (pendant pakadte hue) : Isme aisa kya hai?

Suman (surprised) : Maalik? Kya aapko waqai kuch nahi pata iske baare me?

Veer : Hmm? Nahi! Kyu?

Suman Veer ko aise dekh rahi thi jese maano koi bhoot dekh liya ho.

Suman : Maalik!??? Ya toh aap mazaak kar rahe hai ya anjaan bann rahe hai.

Veer : Dekho Suman...

Suman : *smiles*

Veer : ???

Suman : Mujhe accha laga aapne akhir kaar mujhe mere naam se bulaaya. Aur mera ye anurodh hai ki... Aage bhi... Aage bhi maalik... Aise hi mujhe bulaaye.

Veer : Ahem! Haa! Toh dekho Suman... Mein waqai kuch bhi nahi jaanta hu. Tum kya keh rahi ho meri samajh me kuch bhi nahi aa raha hai.

Suman : Par aisa kese ho sakta hai!? Huh!?? Zara rukiye maalik...

Wo hairaan hote hue kuch sochti hai aur fir Veer ko punah dekhti hai,

Suman : Ye aapko kisne diya? Aapke paas ye kese aaya?

Veer : Hmm? Ye!? Ye meri Maa ne mujhe janm ke waqt pehnaaya tha.

Suman (shocked) : Aapki Maa ne!?

Veer (frowns) : Hmm! Tum... Kya tum kuch jaanti ho?

Suman : Aapki... Aapki Maa ka naam kya hai!?

Veer : Bhavana!

Suman ye sunte hi forun khadi ho gayi hai aur muh faade Veer ko dekhne lagi. Stabdh nigaaho se wo usse ghur rahi thi.

Suman : Bh-Bhavana!?

'There's something wrong!'

[Ask her every possible detail master! Something is fishy!!!]

'Yeaaahhh!!'

Veer (frowns) : Tum! Kuch zaroor jaanti ho. Hai na!?

Veer ne khade hote hue agle hi pal kivaad ki chatakni andar se hi band kar lock laga diya.

Veer : Jawaab do!!

Suman haa me sarr hilaayi aur tezz kadmo ke saath almaari ki taraf gayi, usse khol wo kuch hi palo ke andar ek chaavi dhund ke laayi.

Uske baad wo neeche jhuki aur ussi bistar ke neeche se usne ek peti sarka ke nikaali.

Suman ki harr ek harqat Veer dekh raha tha aur uska dil zorr se dhadak raha tha. Zaroor... Zaroor kuch na kuch usse pata chalne waala tha jiske chalte usse shayad jhatke bhi lag sakte the.

Andar peti me se usne ek tasveer nikaali jo photo frame me saji hui thi aur Veer ki taraf badhaayi.

'??'

Sawaalia nazre liye jese hi usne wo photo dekhi...

Usse dikhaayi diya ki ek behad hi shandaar sa mahal ya haweli keh lo jo kaafi badi thi aur phoolo se saji hui thi. Koi bhi insaan nahi tha photo me. Keval ek mahal jitni badi haweli hi thi.

Veer (frowns) : Iska matlab kya hai!?

Suman : Maalik! Mein aapko zyaada kuch nahi bata sakti. Keval itna hi bata sakti hu ki...
Mein aur mera parivaar, mere purvaj asal me...
Hamesha se iss haveli me rehne waale logo ki seva karte aaye hai. Itne pehle se ki sahi anumaan lagaana naamumkin hai.

Veer : Kaun hai ye log? Aur ye haveli?

Suman : Mein nahi bata sakti. Mujhe maaf kijiyega. Mein vachan baddh hu. Bas itna jaan lijiye ki... Mein aur hamaare poorvaj iss haveli ke logo ke sevak the aur hai aur aane waale samay me bhi rahenge.

Veer : Par tumne abhi abhi kaha ki tum meri daasi...!? Wait!! Huh??

Jese usse realize hua...

Suman (smiles) : ....

Veer : Iska matlab toh yahi hua ki... Mein iss haweli se hu... Jo ki bilkul bhi sach nahi hai.

Suman : Ye jo aapke gale me tanga hua hai na??

Veer : Hmm!

Suman : Ye mene iss haveli me rehne waale logo ke paas dekha tha. Aur... Ye unka beshkeemti gehna tha.

Veer (surprised) : Yadi iss hisaab se chale toh... Doesn't that means ki meri Maa... Wo iss haveli ke logo me se ek thi?

Suman : ....

Veer : Ye log kaha hai abhi? Ye haveli kidhar hai?

Suman : Mein nahi bata sakti maalik! Mein vachan baddh hu.

Veer : Dammmn it!!! Toh... Toh ye toh bata sakti ho na ki tumhe ye vachan kisne diya?

Suman (nods) : Meri Nani ne...

Veer : Nani? Okay!! G-Good! Toh chalo... Kaha hai wo? M-Mujhe unse milna hai.

Suman : Maaf kijiyega par... Wo ab iss duniya me nahi hai maalik!

'Fuuuuccccckkkkkkk!!!!'

'There's something wrong!! Yadi Suman ka kehna hai ki wo aur uska parivaar Inn haveli ke logo ki sewa karta tha toh yaha toh wo meri sewa kar rahi hai. Keval mere pendant dekhne ke baad. Kyuki uske hisaab se ye pendant unn haweli ke logo ka beshkeemti gehna tha. Toh fir Mom ke paas kese aaya ye pendant? Did she stole it? No I don't think so. Iska matlab toh bas yahi darsha raha hai ki Mom inn haveli waale logo ke beech ki ek sadasya thi. Ya fir unhone Mom ko ye gehna diya ho? Par wo itna beshkeemti gehna kyu denge bhala? Aaaarrrghhhhhh!!!'

Veer ne kheejte hue apne baal noche. Itne saare sawaal umad rahe the ki uski kuch soojh nahi raha tha kya kare.

[Don't worry! Ye kaafi uljhi hui gutthi hai. Atleast aapko apni Mom ke baare me kuch information mili.]

'Yeaahhh! No wait....'

Kuch sochte hue wo forun hi palta aur Suman se pucha,

"Toh kya tum meri Maa ko jaanti ho? Bhavana?"

Suman Veer ko dekhi aur fir naa me sarr hila dii.

Suman : Nahi maalik!! Mein unhe nahi jaanti.

Veer (frowns) : Par tumhaare haav bhaav toh kuch aur hi the jab tumne mere muh se unka naam suna tha.

Suman : Jesa ki mene kaha maalik. Mein unhe nahi jaanti. Rahi baat mere haav bhaav ki... Toh mein iss se zyaada kuch bhi kehne ke liye vachan badhh hu maalik. Mujhe maaf kar dijiye maalik!

Suman ko Veer ne gaur se dekha aur ant me ek aah bhari. Kyuki Suman ko dekh ke hi pata lagaaya jaa sakta tha ki wo bilkul bhi jhooth nahi bol rahi thi.

Abhi wo baitha hi hua tha ki tabhi uska phone bajne laga,

Screen pe dekha toh...

'Ragini Bhabhi!?'

Veer : Hello?

Ragini : Happy Birthday Veeeeeeeerrrr!!

Ragini ki khil khilaati hui awaaz uske kaano me padi. Aur ye sunte hi Veer ke hontho pe ek muskaan fel gayi.

'I almost forgot... Ki aaj toh mera b'day hai. Bhabhi ko yaad tha!? I wonder... Aur kisse yaad hoga?'

[Fuck! It's your birthday master!? Happy Birthday my dear master.]

'Thanks Pari!'

[Ab gift ke taur pe fataak se mujhe Level 4 pe pohuchao.]

'Gift jiska b'day hota hai wo nahi deta idiot. Wish karne waale dete hai usse.'

[Huh? Ohh yeah! Fuck! I forgot! Ahahaha~]

Veer (sighs) : Thank you Bhabhi!

Ragini : Welcome! Toh!? Wo... Wo... Tum aa rahe ho na? Kab tak aaoge?

Veer : Kal! Aaj reservation karwa lunga. Aur aaj raat me baith jaunga. So kal tak...

Ragini ki tabhi udhar se thodi udaasi bhari awaaz aayi,

"Toh! Tum b'day par yaha nahi rahoge matlab."

Veer : Chaahta hu par possible nahi hai. Kal hi aa paunga.

Ragini : Well! Right! Kal then... I have a surprise for you! Kal aao... And... Acche se safar karna okay?

Veer (smiles) : Jiii!

Ragini : Okay! Toh... Mein rakhu..!?

Veer (smiles) : Jii!

Aur call end ho gaya.

Bechaari Ragini call toh badi hi utsaah se lagaayi thi. Par usse wish karne ke baad samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ki apne dewar se bhala ab aur kya baatein kare. Aur iske chalte usse khud pe sharam aa rahi thi. Wo jald se jald phone rakhi aur khud ko baatein sunaate hue andar chali gayi.

***

Veer ka birthday toh tha hi par saath hi saath aaj kisi aur ka bhi b'day tha. Wo shaks aur koi nahi balki Suhana aur Sonia ki Maa thi ~ Jyoti!

Ek badi sii hotel me ek poora hall booked tha. Poore hall ko sajaaya gaya tha. Andar dherr saari lights jal rahi thi aur mand mand awaaz me instrumental music chal raha tha.

Waiters me saari ki saari khubsoorat ladkiya thi jo khubsoorat sii attire pehne guests ko kahi cold drinks toh kahi snacks serve kar rahi thi.

Toh kuch entrance pe unke swaagat ke liye khadi hui thi.

Guests bhi ek se badh ke ek the. Sabhi raees aur bade gharaano se belong kar rahe the.

Mahaul kul milaake boht khushnuma tha par...

Par iss waqt ussi hotel ke ek kamre me do behad hi khubsoorat auratein atyant hi chintan me doobi hui thi.

Ye aur koi nahi balki Suhana aur Sonia hi thi.

Suhana idhar se udhar tahelte hue khud ko shaant karne ki koshish kar rahi thi.

"Kuch nahi hoga Suhana! Phew! Calm down! Phew!"

Sonia : Wo aate hi honge.

Suhana : Tum mujhe aur darra rahi ho Sonu!

Par Suhana ki baat pe Sonia kuch na boli bas muh ferr ke kahi aur dekhne lagi.

Aur uska ye rukhapann Suhana ko andar hi andar tadpa raha tha. Wo Sonia ke sameep aayi aur uske chehre ko apne haatho se ghumaate hue apni orr kii.

Suhana : Ab bhi naraaz ho mujhse?

Sonia : ....

Suhana : Sonuuu! Please! Don't! Tere bina adhuri hu mein ye baat tu bhi jaanti hai. Aur mein tujhse maafi maang chuki hu na. Mene maana hai na ki uss Veer ne ring nahi churaayi hogi kyuki tum uske saath thi. Toh ab kya dikkat hai?

Sonia : ....

Suhana : Sonu!!! Maaf kar de!!! Dekh! Mein kaan pakadti hu.

Wo kaan pakad paati ki uske pehle hi darwaaza khula aur ek aadmi andar aaya. Upar se leke neeche tak wo mehnge kapdo se saja hua tha.

Sonia : Dad!?

Sonia aur Suhana ke pita, yaani ki desh ki jaani maani automobiles company ke maalik ~ Shailendra.

Shailendra : Bolo! Kya baat hai? Tumlogo ko beta waha hall me rehna tha. Sabhi guests kya sochenge?

Suhana apne pita ko dekh ekdum kaanp rahi thi. Akhir kese wo bataegi ki jo ring wo dene waale hai. Wo toh chori ho chuki hai.

Sonia : Dii ko aapse kuch kehna hai.

Shailendra : Hmm? Kya baat hai beta? Jaldi kaho... Baahar bhi jaana hai. Tumhari Mom bhi ready ho hi gayi hai.

Suhana Sonia ko hairani bhare bhaav se ghur rahi thi. Andar aane se pehle hi Sonia ne uss se kaha tha ki Sonia uski madad karegi. Par yaha toh wo jese uski taraf dekh hi nahi rahi thi.

'Oh no!!! Sonu!!! She's really mad...'

Yaha Sonia apne alag hi vichaaro me leen thi.

'Mene kitna call kiya Veer ko. Ki aaj party hai. I wanted to say sorry to him again. Par... Abhi tak uska koi reply na aaya. He probably hates me now. Akhir... Dii ne uski itni beizzati kii hai ki wo mujhe hi inn sab ka kaaran samajh baitha hoga. Par Veer... Kese batau tumhe... Sacchaayi!?'

Shailendra : Bolo beta!

Suhana : Wo... Wo...

Shailendra : Haa?

Suhana : Asal me...

Shailendra : Arre bolo bhi...

Suhana : Wo dedh crore ki ring chori ho chuki hai.

Wo ek saas me bol gayi.

Aur agle hi pal...

Poore kamre me sannaata sa chhaa gaya.

Shailendra : ???

Sonia : ....

Suhana : ....

Shailendra : K-Kya? Kya kaha tumne?

Suhana : Wo... Wo... Dedh crore waali ring... Jo aap Mom ko dene waale the wo... Wo chori ho gayi hai.

Aur agle hi pal Shailendra ki aankhein felti chali gayi.

Uske baad jab Suhana ne poori sachhai bataayi toh Shailendra ka gussa saatve aasmaan par pohuch chuka tha.

Wo aag baboola hoke Suhana aur Sonia dono ko dekh raha tha.

Aisa lag raha tha ki kisi bhi waqt wo dono ko tamaacha jadd dega.

Par usne aisa kiya na...

"Kal tak yadi Ring nahi mili... Toh Suhana... Hmph!"

Daant meeste hue wo agle pal hi mobile nikaal kaan se lagaaya aur baahar nikal ke...

*Slaaammmm*

Zorr se usne darwaaza band kar diya.

Aur Suhana ye dekhte hi bilakhte hue rone lagi. Wo jaanti thi ki jab uske Dad kuch nahi bolte the toh wo kitna naraaz aur gusse me rehte the. Sonia se chipak ke wo rone lagti hai.

Ab usse Veer ke kahe shabd yaad aa rahe the.

"Didn't you said that few minutes ago!? Money can buy happiness. Paisa sab kuch hai. Paisa hi khushiya laata hai. Paise se hi aap khush rehte ho? Paise se kabhi koi udaas reh hi nahi sakta. Didn't you said that!? Then why do you look sad now? Mujhe toh abhi keval yahi dikhaayi de raha hai ki... Paise se... You are not even happy... Look! How distressed you are. Look at yourself. Kaha gaye ab wo shabd??? Hmm?? I can't hear them..."

Iss waqt bhi...

Wo ro rahi thi. Aur kahi se bhi happy nahi thi. Uske shabd jese ekdum sahi saabit ho rahe the. Pata nahi kyu par iss baar Suhana ko Veer ka dhyaan aate hi... Iss baar usse gussa nahi aaya. Keval rulaayi hi chooth rahi thi.

***

Idhar Veer reservation karwa ke Jaipur ke station pohuch chuka tha. Ragini ke diye gaye paise waqai boht kaam aaye the uske liye.

Na keval Suman ne idhar apne ghar me poora taala laga diya balki wo apne ghar ki chaavi bhi pados me de aayi ye kehke ki yadi uska pati waapas se aaye toh usse dhundne ki koshish na kare.

Keval Suman hi nahi, Aabha aur Sonali bhi uske sang thi. Suman ka kehna tha ki ab wo Veer ki daasi hai toh harr pal uske aas paas hi rahegi aur uski sewa karegi.

Shaam ko bhi Suman ke aakarshan ke chalte Veer se raha na gaya aur usne ek baar aur Suman ko pel diya.

Pehli baar me jo sex usne Suman ke saath kiya tha uske chalte usse 35 points mile the aur usse bachaane ke 30 points. Toh kul milaake uske paas 65 points maujood the jinhe wo spend nahi kiya tha.

Wo ghar lautne ke baad hi inn points ka sahi istemaal kese karna hai ye decide karne waala tha.

Ab chuki aa toh gaya tha wo station par usne dekha ki Sonali bade hi gusse se usse dekh rahi thi. Aur baat bhi nahi kar rahi thi. Bas dekhti aur gusse se aag baboola ho jaati. Par bolti kuch nahi. Veer ne bhi ignore karna hi behtar samjha filhaal ke liye.

Train aa chuki thi reservation unka AC 1 coach me tha. Veer samaan rakh ke abhi baahar hi aake kuch chips aur biscuits khareedne me laga hua tha jab usse sunaayi diya,

"Bhaiya!! Oo bhaiya! Hello jii!?"

Usne dekha toh paaya ki saamne ek dusri train me ek mahila khidki se apna ek haath nikaale kisi ko awaaz laga rahi thi.

Veer kuch soch aage badha toh agle hi pal uss mahila ki nazar Veer par gayi.

Dono ki nazre jab aapas me takraayi toh uss mahila ne forun hi firse pukaara,

"Betaa! Suno..."

Usne haath se ishaara karte hue Veer ko bulaaya.

Veer jab uske sameep aaya toh thoda hairaan reh gaya. Paas se gaur se jab usne dekha toh paaya ki...

Wo mahila waqai khubsoorat thi. Aur saree nahi balki ek kaali t shirt pehni hui thi. Jisme uski gori twacha alag hi khil ke dikhaayi de rahi thi.

Veer : Jiii!?

Aurat : Beta! Kya tum mere liye waha shop se ek paani ki bottle laa doge please? Mein khud le aati par... Meri back me thoda pain hai.

Veer (smiles) : Sure!

Aurat : Ohh! Th-Thank you beta!

Veer (smiles) : Isme thanks kesa? Aap rukiye! Mein aata hu.

Veer uske diye gaye paiso se ek bottle liya aur apni taraf se usne ek biscuit ka packet bhi liya aur wo leke uss aurat ke paas aaya.

Aurat (surprised) : Ye!?

Veer (smiles) : Ye meri taraf se... Rakh lijiye! Back me pain hai aapki. Aage station me aapko utarna na pade.

Aurat kuch derr ke liye usse dekhi aur fir ek badi hi pyaari sii muskaan usne dii.

Na jaane kyu par wo muskaan dekh Veer ekdum shaant pad gaya.

Aurat : Thank you beta! Wese iski koi zaroorat nahi thi par fir bhi thank you! Aur ruko...

Tabhi wo apne bagal me rakhe bag se kuch tatolti hai aur ek candy ka packet usse thama deti hai.

Aurat : Ye meri taraf se... Haha~

Veer (smiles) : Iski koi zaroorat nahi...

Aurat : Na na! Haha~ Ab ye rakhna padega. Thank you once again.

Veer (smiles) : Jii! Chalta hu! Safe journey!

Aurat (smiles) : Okay! You too!

Aur tabhi uss aurat ki train aur saath hi saath Veer ki bhi train chalne lagti hai.

Ek baar fir wo Veer ko khidki se dekhti hai toh paati hai ki Veer bhi usse hi dekh raha tha. Dono bas muskuraa dete hai.

Veer lapak ke train me chadhta hai par achanak usse pata nahi kya sujhta hai ki...

Wo palat ke ek baar fir uss aurat ko dekhta hai aur...

'Check!'

[Alias name - Geeta
Real Name - Bhavana Singh.
Bio - Bhavana! Ek behad hi strong woman hai. Boht peeda me hai jo kayi saalo se wo bardaasht karti aa rahi hai. Loves her daughter too much. Ek aas hai usse. Aur kisi ki talaash. Peshe se Archeologist hai.

Favourability - 70
Relationship - Mother.]

Aur ye padhte hi Veer ko uski life ka sabse bada jhatka laga tha.

Aaj usse apne janmdin par koi gift mila ho na mila ho. Ye jese...

Uske liye best gift tha.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!

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Update - 30 ~ The Best Gift

Ab tak...

Jese hi usne aankhein khol ke dekha toh paaya ki...

Suman ekdum nangi apni dono doodh ki thailiya uske seene par tikaaye usse hi nihaar rahi thi aur muskuraa rahi thi.

Uske baad wo boli,

"Subah ho gayi... Ma-Maalik!"

'Huh?? Wait!!!! What did she sayyyy???'


Ab aage...

Mumbai...
At Nidhi's Home...

Subah subah Nidhi badi hi pareshaan sii hall me hi sofe par viraajmaan thi. Haatho me phone tha aur aankho me nami.

'He doesn't even replies to me. Phone karti hu toh wo bhi nahi uthaana hai usse. Kya itna bura laga hai usse meri baato ka? Jo ab wo mujhse baat bhi nahi karna chaahta? Kya ho gaya tha mujhe bhi uss din? Uss... Uss din itna kese bhadak gayi mein uspe? Meri hi galti hai. Bura laga hai usse tabhi toh dekho na... Na mere calls utha raha hai, na meri baatein maan raha hai college roz aane ki, na messages seen kar raha hai. Itna... He's... He's stupid... Idiot... Pagal... He...'

Nidhi bechaari, Veer ke hi baare me sochi jaa rahi thi. Akhir uska contact jo nahi hua tha Veer se uss raat se. Bechaini se bharpoor thi wo iss waqt. Upar se Rajat ka alag tension. Kahi Rajat ne Veer ko kisi pareshani me toh nahi daal diya. Dherr saare sawaal umad rahe the uske mann me.

Apni aankho me bann rahe aasuo ko poch wo uthne hi waali thi ki uski jaangh pe uske gown ko kisi ne pakad ke kheencha,

Dekha toh Juhi thi jo abhi abhi apni aankhein malte hue uske paas aayi thi.

"Uth gayi meri bacchi!?" Nidhi ne usse thaamte hue apne seene se laga liya.

Juhi : Mmmm

Nidhi : Chalo! Ready kar du tumhe. School bhi jaana hai.

Juhi : Mummy aap yaha kyu baithi ho? Tiffin me kya rakhogi aaj?

Nidhi : Kuch nahi betu. Tumhaare Veer maamu... Boht tang karte hai tumhari mummy ko...

Juhi : Mmm? Veer maamu!? Veer maamu se toh mein parso hi mili thi Ehehehe~

Juhi ki baat sunte hi jese Nidhi ko ek jhatka laga. Uski beti bhala kab aur kaha mil lii Veer se?

Nidhi : ??? Tum?? Kaha!??? Kaha mili thi beta Veer se? Wo toh...

Juhi : Hmm? Parso jab mein maasi ke saath bazaar gayi thi toh waha se jab aaye... Toh Veer Maamu neeche hi khade thi bike pe.

'Bike!??? That means... It was him!!!!!!!'

Nidhi apni bacchi ko kass ke thaame usse ghur rahi thi. Aur uss se jaldbaazi me sawaal karte jaa rahi thi. Jese maano Veer se judi harr ek information wo Juhi se jaan'na chaahti thi.

Nidhi : T-Toh? F-Fir kya hua? Kya kaha usne? Aapke Veer maamu ne?

Juhi : Wo bole unhe kuch kaam hai aur chale gaye... Mummy! Mujhe toilet aayi hai...

Juhi itna bol Nidhi ke aachal se nikal tezz kadmo ke saath andar washroom me bhaag gayi.

Par Nidhi ka sawaal poora nahi hua tha. Sabse bada sawaal ki Veer iss waqt kaha reh raha hai...?? Ye toh woh puchna hi bhul gayi.

Ye khayaal aate hi jese hi wo palti aur Juhi ko awaaz lagaane waali thi ki tabhi, usne dekha ki Shreya darwaaze ki dehleez pe khade usse hi dekh rahi hai.

'???'

Shreya : Don't worry! Wo apni Bhabhi ke saath reh raha hai. Remember? Wahi Bhabhi... Jinhe wo uss din bachaane gaya tha?

Nidhi (surprised) : Tumhe...?? Noo!!! Wo tumse milne aaya aur tumne mujhe bataaya tak nahi Shreya? Itni badi baat...

Shreya : Chill!!! Uska kehna hai ki wo aapke saath nahi reh sakta. Kyuki wo aapki situation jaanta hai aur wo guilt conscious banda hai. Uss se aise nahi raha jaega. Isliye, wo waha reh raha hai.

Nidhi : Aur kaun tha jisne usse meri sacchaayi ke baare me bataaya!? Haa?

Shreya : I...

Nidhi : Mene tumhe mana kiya tha na Shreya? Mene mana kiya tha na? Fir kyu tumne usse...

Wo Shreya ko acchi khaasi sunaati par tabhi usse kuch shabd yaad aa gaye.

'Shreya ji ko mat daatiyega, unhone mujhe wo sab batana zaroori samjha isliye bataaya tha shayad.'

Aur bas...

Nidhi ke khule honth apne aap hi band ho gaye. Letter me Veer ne spasht likha tha ki Shreya jii ko na daanta jaaye. Ab bhala Nidhi uski baat kese nahi rakhti? Uski maujoodgi na hone par bhi, iss tarah se uska mehatv bann chuka tha uske ghar me.

"Idiot...!"

Wo badbadaati hui uthi aur seedhe kitchen me chali gayi.

Par saamne khadi Shreya sab kuch dekh paa rahi thi. Wo dekh paa rahi thi ki kitna significance tha Veer ka Nidhi ke upar aur saath hi saath Juhi par bhi... Even uske khud ke upar bhi.

Wo khud ek gehre chintan me doob gayi.

'I wonder how it would look if he was my Sister's husband!...'

'????'

'Huh?? Wtf!?? Wait! Mein kya sochne lagi??'

Apna sarr hilaate hue wo andar chali gayi.

***

Rajasthan...
At Suman's home...

Veer : Hmm! Toh ab bataogi ki ye kya chakkar hai? Kyu mujhe aap...

Suman : Tum kehke bulaaiye mujhe maalik... Tum... Tum keh ke... Kripya kar!

'She..'

Veer (sighs) : Hmm! Toh ab bataogi ko ye sab kya chakkar hai? Kyu tum... Kyu tum mujhe maalik keh ke bula rahi ho?

Veer kal ki hui ghatna ke baad mann me dherr saare sawaal liye hue tha. Ab chuki wo dono ka hi clear mind tha, Veer ne forun hi sawaal puchna sahi samjha.

Wo iss waqt ussi bistar par baitha hua tha jispe kal raat dono ne hi rangreliyaa manaayi thi. Uske perro ke paas uski jaangh par haath rakhe Suman baithi hui thi jo keval muskuraa ke Veer ko dekhe jaa rahi thi.

Suman (smiles) : Ye toh hona hi tha ek na ek din maalik!

Veer (frowns) : Kya matlab!?

Suman : Maalik! Ye toh hona hi tha... Jis pal mene aapka seena dekha tha.

'Mera seena!?'

Sochte hue Veer ne jese hi apne seene par nazar maari toh usse nazar aaya...

Uska pendant. Wahi pendant jo uski Maa ne diya tha. Wo shirt ke baahar hi tha.

'Huh!?? So... That's why she kept looking at me like that!?'

Veer ne apne haatho me uss pendant ko thaama jo ek sone ki chain ka tha aur usme ek bada hi anokha sa neela patthar chipka hua tha.

Veer : Tumhara matlab hai ye?? Mera pendant?

Suman (nods) : Jii Haa maalik! Yahi! Aur isliye aaj se ye Suman aapki Daasi hai.

'Huh??? Wtf?? Did I heard that right!?'

[Hahaha~ You don't know. You just found the diamond. Wo Heere ki anguthi kuch bhi nahi, asli heera toh ab aapko mila hai master. Haha~ Who needs a diamond ring? When you can have a slave? Hahaha~]

'Oh come on Pari! This is serious.'

[Hehe~]

Veer (pendant pakadte hue) : Isme aisa kya hai?

Suman (surprised) : Maalik? Kya aapko waqai kuch nahi pata iske baare me?

Veer : Hmm? Nahi! Kyu?

Suman Veer ko aise dekh rahi thi jese maano koi bhoot dekh liya ho.

Suman : Maalik!??? Ya toh aap mazaak kar rahe hai ya anjaan bann rahe hai.

Veer : Dekho Suman...

Suman : *smiles*

Veer : ???

Suman : Mujhe accha laga aapne akhir kaar mujhe mere naam se bulaaya. Aur mera ye anurodh hai ki... Aage bhi... Aage bhi maalik... Aise hi mujhe bulaaye.

Veer : Ahem! Haa! Toh dekho Suman... Mein waqai kuch bhi nahi jaanta hu. Tum kya keh rahi ho meri samajh me kuch bhi nahi aa raha hai.

Suman : Par aisa kese ho sakta hai!? Huh!?? Zara rukiye maalik...

Wo hairaan hote hue kuch sochti hai aur fir Veer ko punah dekhti hai,

Suman : Ye aapko kisne diya? Aapke paas ye kese aaya?

Veer : Hmm? Ye!? Ye meri Maa ne mujhe janm ke waqt pehnaaya tha.

Suman (shocked) : Aapki Maa ne!?

Veer (frowns) : Hmm! Tum... Kya tum kuch jaanti ho?

Suman : Aapki... Aapki Maa ka naam kya hai!?

Veer : Bhavana!

Suman ye sunte hi forun khadi ho gayi hai aur muh faade Veer ko dekhne lagi. Stabdh nigaaho se wo usse ghur rahi thi.

Suman : Bh-Bhavana!?

'There's something wrong!'

[Ask her every possible detail master! Something is fishy!!!]

'Yeaaahhh!!'

Veer (frowns) : Tum! Kuch zaroor jaanti ho. Hai na!?

Veer ne khade hote hue agle hi pal kivaad ki chatakni andar se hi band kar lock laga diya.

Veer : Jawaab do!!

Suman haa me sarr hilaayi aur tezz kadmo ke saath almaari ki taraf gayi, usse khol wo kuch hi palo ke andar ek chaavi dhund ke laayi.

Uske baad wo neeche jhuki aur ussi bistar ke neeche se usne ek peti sarka ke nikaali.

Suman ki harr ek harqat Veer dekh raha tha aur uska dil zorr se dhadak raha tha. Zaroor... Zaroor kuch na kuch usse pata chalne waala tha jiske chalte usse shayad jhatke bhi lag sakte the.

Andar peti me se usne ek tasveer nikaali jo photo frame me saji hui thi aur Veer ki taraf badhaayi.

'??'

Sawaalia nazre liye jese hi usne wo photo dekhi...

Usse dikhaayi diya ki ek behad hi shandaar sa mahal ya haweli keh lo jo kaafi badi thi aur phoolo se saji hui thi. Koi bhi insaan nahi tha photo me. Keval ek mahal jitni badi haweli hi thi.

Veer (frowns) : Iska matlab kya hai!?

Suman : Maalik! Mein aapko zyaada kuch nahi bata sakti. Keval itna hi bata sakti hu ki...
Mein aur mera parivaar, mere purvaj asal me...
Hamesha se iss haveli me rehne waale logo ki seva karte aaye hai. Itne pehle se ki sahi anumaan lagaana naamumkin hai.

Veer : Kaun hai ye log? Aur ye haveli?

Suman : Mein nahi bata sakti. Mujhe maaf kijiyega. Mein vachan baddh hu. Bas itna jaan lijiye ki... Mein aur hamaare poorvaj iss haveli ke logo ke sevak the aur hai aur aane waale samay me bhi rahenge.

Veer : Par tumne abhi abhi kaha ki tum meri daasi...!? Wait!! Huh??

Jese usse realize hua...

Suman (smiles) : ....

Veer : Iska matlab toh yahi hua ki... Mein iss haweli se hu... Jo ki bilkul bhi sach nahi hai.

Suman : Ye jo aapke gale me tanga hua hai na??

Veer : Hmm!

Suman : Ye mene iss haveli me rehne waale logo ke paas dekha tha. Aur... Ye unka beshkeemti gehna tha.

Veer (surprised) : Yadi iss hisaab se chale toh... Doesn't that means ki meri Maa... Wo iss haveli ke logo me se ek thi?

Suman : ....

Veer : Ye log kaha hai abhi? Ye haveli kidhar hai?

Suman : Mein nahi bata sakti maalik! Mein vachan baddh hu.

Veer : Dammmn it!!! Toh... Toh ye toh bata sakti ho na ki tumhe ye vachan kisne diya?

Suman (nods) : Meri Nani ne...

Veer : Nani? Okay!! G-Good! Toh chalo... Kaha hai wo? M-Mujhe unse milna hai.

Suman : Maaf kijiyega par... Wo ab iss duniya me nahi hai maalik!

'Fuuuuccccckkkkkkk!!!!'

'There's something wrong!! Yadi Suman ka kehna hai ki wo aur uska parivaar Inn haveli ke logo ki sewa karta tha toh yaha toh wo meri sewa kar rahi hai. Keval mere pendant dekhne ke baad. Kyuki uske hisaab se ye pendant unn haweli ke logo ka beshkeemti gehna tha. Toh fir Mom ke paas kese aaya ye pendant? Did she stole it? No I don't think so. Iska matlab toh bas yahi darsha raha hai ki Mom inn haveli waale logo ke beech ki ek sadasya thi. Ya fir unhone Mom ko ye gehna diya ho? Par wo itna beshkeemti gehna kyu denge bhala? Aaaarrrghhhhhh!!!'

Veer ne kheejte hue apne baal noche. Itne saare sawaal umad rahe the ki uski kuch soojh nahi raha tha kya kare.

[Don't worry! Ye kaafi uljhi hui gutthi hai. Atleast aapko apni Mom ke baare me kuch information mili.]

'Yeaahhh! No wait....'

Kuch sochte hue wo forun hi palta aur Suman se pucha,

"Toh kya tum meri Maa ko jaanti ho? Bhavana?"

Suman Veer ko dekhi aur fir naa me sarr hila dii.

Suman : Nahi maalik!! Mein unhe nahi jaanti.

Veer (frowns) : Par tumhaare haav bhaav toh kuch aur hi the jab tumne mere muh se unka naam suna tha.

Suman : Jesa ki mene kaha maalik. Mein unhe nahi jaanti. Rahi baat mere haav bhaav ki... Toh mein iss se zyaada kuch bhi kehne ke liye vachan badhh hu maalik. Mujhe maaf kar dijiye maalik!

Suman ko Veer ne gaur se dekha aur ant me ek aah bhari. Kyuki Suman ko dekh ke hi pata lagaaya jaa sakta tha ki wo bilkul bhi jhooth nahi bol rahi thi.

Abhi wo baitha hi hua tha ki tabhi uska phone bajne laga,

Screen pe dekha toh...

'Ragini Bhabhi!?'

Veer : Hello?

Ragini : Happy Birthday Veeeeeeeerrrr!!

Ragini ki khil khilaati hui awaaz uske kaano me padi. Aur ye sunte hi Veer ke hontho pe ek muskaan fel gayi.

'I almost forgot... Ki aaj toh mera b'day hai. Bhabhi ko yaad tha!? I wonder... Aur kisse yaad hoga?'

[Fuck! It's your birthday master!? Happy Birthday my dear master.]

'Thanks Pari!'

[Ab gift ke taur pe fataak se mujhe Level 4 pe pohuchao.]

'Gift jiska b'day hota hai wo nahi deta idiot. Wish karne waale dete hai usse.'

[Huh? Ohh yeah! Fuck! I forgot! Ahahaha~]

Veer (sighs) : Thank you Bhabhi!

Ragini : Welcome! Toh!? Wo... Wo... Tum aa rahe ho na? Kab tak aaoge?

Veer : Kal! Aaj reservation karwa lunga. Aur aaj raat me baith jaunga. So kal tak...

Ragini ki tabhi udhar se thodi udaasi bhari awaaz aayi,

"Toh! Tum b'day par yaha nahi rahoge matlab."

Veer : Chaahta hu par possible nahi hai. Kal hi aa paunga.

Ragini : Well! Right! Kal then... I have a surprise for you! Kal aao... And... Acche se safar karna okay?

Veer (smiles) : Jiii!

Ragini : Okay! Toh... Mein rakhu..!?

Veer (smiles) : Jii!

Aur call end ho gaya.

Bechaari Ragini call toh badi hi utsaah se lagaayi thi. Par usse wish karne ke baad samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ki apne dewar se bhala ab aur kya baatein kare. Aur iske chalte usse khud pe sharam aa rahi thi. Wo jald se jald phone rakhi aur khud ko baatein sunaate hue andar chali gayi.

***

Veer ka birthday toh tha hi par saath hi saath aaj kisi aur ka bhi b'day tha. Wo shaks aur koi nahi balki Suhana aur Sonia ki Maa thi ~ Jyoti!

Ek badi sii hotel me ek poora hall booked tha. Poore hall ko sajaaya gaya tha. Andar dherr saari lights jal rahi thi aur mand mand awaaz me instrumental music chal raha tha.

Waiters me saari ki saari khubsoorat ladkiya thi jo khubsoorat sii attire pehne guests ko kahi cold drinks toh kahi snacks serve kar rahi thi.

Toh kuch entrance pe unke swaagat ke liye khadi hui thi.

Guests bhi ek se badh ke ek the. Sabhi raees aur bade gharaano se belong kar rahe the.

Mahaul kul milaake boht khushnuma tha par...

Par iss waqt ussi hotel ke ek kamre me do behad hi khubsoorat auratein atyant hi chintan me doobi hui thi.

Ye aur koi nahi balki Suhana aur Sonia hi thi.

Suhana idhar se udhar tahelte hue khud ko shaant karne ki koshish kar rahi thi.

"Kuch nahi hoga Suhana! Phew! Calm down! Phew!"

Sonia : Wo aate hi honge.

Suhana : Tum mujhe aur darra rahi ho Sonu!

Par Suhana ki baat pe Sonia kuch na boli bas muh ferr ke kahi aur dekhne lagi.

Aur uska ye rukhapann Suhana ko andar hi andar tadpa raha tha. Wo Sonia ke sameep aayi aur uske chehre ko apne haatho se ghumaate hue apni orr kii.

Suhana : Ab bhi naraaz ho mujhse?

Sonia : ....

Suhana : Sonuuu! Please! Don't! Tere bina adhuri hu mein ye baat tu bhi jaanti hai. Aur mein tujhse maafi maang chuki hu na. Mene maana hai na ki uss Veer ne ring nahi churaayi hogi kyuki tum uske saath thi. Toh ab kya dikkat hai?

Sonia : ....

Suhana : Sonu!!! Maaf kar de!!! Dekh! Mein kaan pakadti hu.

Wo kaan pakad paati ki uske pehle hi darwaaza khula aur ek aadmi andar aaya. Upar se leke neeche tak wo mehnge kapdo se saja hua tha.

Sonia : Dad!?

Sonia aur Suhana ke pita, yaani ki desh ki jaani maani automobiles company ke maalik ~ Shailendra.

Shailendra : Bolo! Kya baat hai? Tumlogo ko beta waha hall me rehna tha. Sabhi guests kya sochenge?

Suhana apne pita ko dekh ekdum kaanp rahi thi. Akhir kese wo bataegi ki jo ring wo dene waale hai. Wo toh chori ho chuki hai.

Sonia : Dii ko aapse kuch kehna hai.

Shailendra : Hmm? Kya baat hai beta? Jaldi kaho... Baahar bhi jaana hai. Tumhari Mom bhi ready ho hi gayi hai.

Suhana Sonia ko hairani bhare bhaav se ghur rahi thi. Andar aane se pehle hi Sonia ne uss se kaha tha ki Sonia uski madad karegi. Par yaha toh wo jese uski taraf dekh hi nahi rahi thi.

'Oh no!!! Sonu!!! She's really mad...'

Yaha Sonia apne alag hi vichaaro me leen thi.

'Mene kitna call kiya Veer ko. Ki aaj party hai. I wanted to say sorry to him again. Par... Abhi tak uska koi reply na aaya. He probably hates me now. Akhir... Dii ne uski itni beizzati kii hai ki wo mujhe hi inn sab ka kaaran samajh baitha hoga. Par Veer... Kese batau tumhe... Sacchaayi!?'

Shailendra : Bolo beta!

Suhana : Wo... Wo...

Shailendra : Haa?

Suhana : Asal me...

Shailendra : Arre bolo bhi...

Suhana : Wo dedh crore ki ring chori ho chuki hai.

Wo ek saas me bol gayi.

Aur agle hi pal...

Poore kamre me sannaata sa chhaa gaya.

Shailendra : ???

Sonia : ....

Suhana : ....

Shailendra : K-Kya? Kya kaha tumne?

Suhana : Wo... Wo... Dedh crore waali ring... Jo aap Mom ko dene waale the wo... Wo chori ho gayi hai.

Aur agle hi pal Shailendra ki aankhein felti chali gayi.

Uske baad jab Suhana ne poori sachhai bataayi toh Shailendra ka gussa saatve aasmaan par pohuch chuka tha.

Wo aag baboola hoke Suhana aur Sonia dono ko dekh raha tha.

Aisa lag raha tha ki kisi bhi waqt wo dono ko tamaacha jadd dega.

Par usne aisa kiya na...

"Kal tak yadi Ring nahi mili... Toh Suhana... Hmph!"

Daant meeste hue wo agle pal hi mobile nikaal kaan se lagaaya aur baahar nikal ke...

*Slaaammmm*

Zorr se usne darwaaza band kar diya.

Aur Suhana ye dekhte hi bilakhte hue rone lagi. Wo jaanti thi ki jab uske Dad kuch nahi bolte the toh wo kitna naraaz aur gusse me rehte the. Sonia se chipak ke wo rone lagti hai.

Ab usse Veer ke kahe shabd yaad aa rahe the.

"Didn't you said that few minutes ago!? Money can buy happiness. Paisa sab kuch hai. Paisa hi khushiya laata hai. Paise se hi aap khush rehte ho? Paise se kabhi koi udaas reh hi nahi sakta. Didn't you said that!? Then why do you look sad now? Mujhe toh abhi keval yahi dikhaayi de raha hai ki... Paise se... You are not even happy... Look! How distressed you are. Look at yourself. Kaha gaye ab wo shabd??? Hmm?? I can't hear them..."

Iss waqt bhi...

Wo ro rahi thi. Aur kahi se bhi happy nahi thi. Uske shabd jese ekdum sahi saabit ho rahe the. Pata nahi kyu par iss baar Suhana ko Veer ka dhyaan aate hi... Iss baar usse gussa nahi aaya. Keval rulaayi hi chooth rahi thi.

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Idhar Veer reservation karwa ke Jaipur ke station pohuch chuka tha. Ragini ke diye gaye paise waqai boht kaam aaye the uske liye.

Na keval Suman ne idhar apne ghar me poora taala laga diya balki wo apne ghar ki chaavi bhi pados me de aayi ye kehke ki yadi uska pati waapas se aaye toh usse dhundne ki koshish na kare.

Keval Suman hi nahi, Aabha aur Sonali bhi uske sang thi. Suman ka kehna tha ki ab wo Veer ki daasi hai toh harr pal uske aas paas hi rahegi aur uski sewa karegi.

Shaam ko bhi Suman ke aakarshan ke chalte Veer se raha na gaya aur usne ek baar aur Suman ko pel diya.

Pehli baar me jo sex usne Suman ke saath kiya tha uske chalte usse 35 points mile the aur usse bachaane ke 30 points. Toh kul milaake uske paas 65 points maujood the jinhe wo spend nahi kiya tha.

Wo ghar lautne ke baad hi inn points ka sahi istemaal kese karna hai ye decide karne waala tha.

Ab chuki aa toh gaya tha wo station par usne dekha ki Sonali bade hi gusse se usse dekh rahi thi. Aur baat bhi nahi kar rahi thi. Bas dekhti aur gusse se aag baboola ho jaati. Par bolti kuch nahi. Veer ne bhi ignore karna hi behtar samjha filhaal ke liye.

Train aa chuki thi reservation unka AC 1 coach me tha. Veer samaan rakh ke abhi baahar hi aake kuch chips aur biscuits khareedne me laga hua tha jab usse sunaayi diya,

"Bhaiya!! Oo bhaiya! Hello jii!?"

Usne dekha toh paaya ki saamne ek dusri train me ek mahila khidki se apna ek haath nikaale kisi ko awaaz laga rahi thi.

Veer kuch soch aage badha toh agle hi pal uss mahila ki nazar Veer par gayi.

Dono ki nazre jab aapas me takraayi toh uss mahila ne forun hi firse pukaara,

"Betaa! Suno..."

Usne haath se ishaara karte hue Veer ko bulaaya.

Veer jab uske sameep aaya toh thoda hairaan reh gaya. Paas se gaur se jab usne dekha toh paaya ki...

Wo mahila waqai khubsoorat thi. Aur saree nahi balki ek kaali t shirt pehni hui thi. Jisme uski gori twacha alag hi khil ke dikhaayi de rahi thi.

Veer : Jiii!?

Aurat : Beta! Kya tum mere liye waha shop se ek paani ki bottle laa doge please? Mein khud le aati par... Meri back me thoda pain hai.

Veer (smiles) : Sure!

Aurat : Ohh! Th-Thank you beta!

Veer (smiles) : Isme thanks kesa? Aap rukiye! Mein aata hu.

Veer uske diye gaye paiso se ek bottle liya aur apni taraf se usne ek biscuit ka packet bhi liya aur wo leke uss aurat ke paas aaya.

Aurat (surprised) : Ye!?

Veer (smiles) : Ye meri taraf se... Rakh lijiye! Back me pain hai aapki. Aage station me aapko utarna na pade.

Aurat kuch derr ke liye usse dekhi aur fir ek badi hi pyaari sii muskaan usne dii.

Na jaane kyu par wo muskaan dekh Veer ekdum shaant pad gaya.

Aurat : Thank you beta! Wese iski koi zaroorat nahi thi par fir bhi thank you! Aur ruko...

Tabhi wo apne bagal me rakhe bag se kuch tatolti hai aur ek candy ka packet usse thama deti hai.

Aurat : Ye meri taraf se... Haha~

Veer (smiles) : Iski koi zaroorat nahi...

Aurat : Na na! Haha~ Ab ye rakhna padega. Thank you once again.

Veer (smiles) : Jii! Chalta hu! Safe journey!

Aurat (smiles) : Okay! You too!

Aur tabhi uss aurat ki train aur saath hi saath Veer ki bhi train chalne lagti hai.

Ek baar fir wo Veer ko khidki se dekhti hai toh paati hai ki Veer bhi usse hi dekh raha tha. Dono bas muskuraa dete hai.

Veer lapak ke train me chadhta hai par achanak usse pata nahi kya sujhta hai ki...

Wo palat ke ek baar fir uss aurat ko dekhta hai aur...

'Check!'

[Alias name - Geeta
Real Name - Bhavana Singh.
Bio - Bhavana! Ek behad hi strong woman hai. Boht peeda me hai jo kayi saalo se wo bardaasht karti aa rahi hai. Loves her daughter too much. Ek aas hai usse. Aur kisi ki talaash. Peshe se Archeologist hai.

Favourability - 70
Relationship - Mother.]

Aur ye padhte hi Veer ko uski life ka sabse bada jhatka laga tha.

Aaj usse apne janmdin par koi gift mila ho na mila ho. Ye jese...

Uske liye best gift tha.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!

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Naina

Nain11ster creation... a monter in me
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Dekha ...Bhavna thakurain nikli :cool:
Birthday ke din sabse bada gift veer ko.... bas veer jaake bhavna ko rok le.... :approve:


........
Kahani suman aur us haweli ki.....
yahan ek baat to clear hai ki shayad hi suman kabhi us haweli mein gayi ho... na hi uski beti aur bahu..... ushe jo bhi pata hai haweli ya haweli walo ki seva karne ke baare mein ,apni nani ya maa baap ke jariye hi malum hua hai.... pendant ke chalte veer ko khush to kiya usne malik samajh ke lekin haweli aur usme rehne walo se related baatein batane se isliye mana kiya Kyunki uski nani ke mana karne ki wajah se....
Shayad suman ki nani sahit sabhi sevak ya shubhchintak logo ko dar ho kisi baat se... Lekin kyun......?

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kahani suhana aur soniya ki......

Kuch kirdaar aise hote hai jo bina matlab ke kahani mein ghuse chale aate hai.... aur khud ki musibat ko kahani ke original characters ke sir pe daal dete hai.....
For example..... ye suhana aur soniya ko hi dekh lo.... ye iske baap shailendra ya unki mom jyoti.... inlogo sar ke upar talwar banke latke the ranga,atish aur wo kutta slogan,
Ab soniya & family ne is kahani mein ghus ke kya kiya.....apni musbit ko veer aur uski family ke upar daal diya..
Kaise haramjade story characters hai ye chaaro..... :bat:
Veer ko car se thokte hi doubtful character mein tabdil ho chuki thi soniya.... ab shaq yakin mein badal chuka hai..... :D
Final baat Yahi hai ki Ye soniya & family veer ke liye hanikaarak hai.... veer se jeetna dur rahe ye log, veer ke liye hi aachha hai...
badi aayi anguthi wali :buttkick:
aur us silencer matlab shailendra ki baatein suno....ek anguthi chori ho jaane aise dikha raha hai jaise uski sari business hi dub gaye ho....are itne paise show off kahe kar raha phir party mein :buttkick:

khair ......
Waise veer aur jyoti ki birthday same date pe hai...Lekin Werewolf is baat pe kahe jor de rahe the :D
kahi veer aur jyoti mele mein bichhde huye judwa to nahi :popcorn2:

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Main to big bang ke jaanne se hi kehti aa rahi hun ki ye pari ek no ki haaraman hai.....
[Hahaha~ You don't know. You just found the diamond. Wo Heere ki anguthi kuch bhi nahi, asli heera toh ab aapko mila hai master. Haha~ Who needs a diamond ring? When you can have a slave? Hahaha~]
ab dekho kis tarah ye haaraman baatein kar rahi hai.... kam se kam ek system aisi baat nahi kar sakti....
matlab saaf hai ye koi tharki alien hai ya phir haweli walo dwara banayi gayi koi hawasi insects cheej... jo veer ko Purnroop se hawas ka pujari banane ki koshish kar rahi hai...

nidhi, shreya, club wali, suhana, sonia aur ab to veer ke sang suman, sonali aur kavya bhi rehne wali hai:roflol:
us pari ki to lottery lag gayi hai :lol:
ek ek mein ghus ke hawas ke khel aanand legi wo :D

Aur agar veer ne maana kiya to ushe majboor kar degi hawas ka khel khelne ke liye ye bolke ki. ...

IMG-20211030-144449
:roflol:
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Sonali gusse mein pagal huye jaa rahi thi.... par veer kya chutiya hai jo itna bhi nahi pata ki madad karne ke baad bhi ye reaction kyun... Lol...are uski hi maa ke sath kuchhi ku karoge aur ab uske hi saamne aise dikhaoge ki veer zyada bhola insaan aur koi nahi to gussa to aayega hi na... sukar hai ki sonali gusse ki ghut pi gayi hai... warna lage ki railway station mein hi uska gala kaat deti sonali :roflol:

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Sabse badi shocking moment ye ki abhi Readers veer ki mom ke bare mein jikar hi kar rahe the...yahan tak ki suman aur veer bhi discuss hi kar rahe the.... par ye kya bhavna ne to entry hi le li story pe....
btw ye veer apni tharki nigahon ko kabu mein rakhe to hi behtar hai uske liye.... bhavna saree nahi black t-shirt pehni hai.... :sigh:

...............
lagta hai kahani mein ek alag hi mod aane wala hai bhavna jis tarah se entry li hai....
aur sabse badi baat.... Bahot saare raaz se parda hatne wale hai....
1) brijesh & family ne aisa kyun kiya bhavna ke sath.? kyun usko is tarah buri yaad samajhkar gaali dete hai brijesh aur uske gharwaale..
2) bhavna apne bete ko sasuraal mein chhod ke kyun chali gayi thi? Jab ki wo jaanti thi ye baat bhali bhaanti ki uske sasuraal wale kaise kamine log hai?

3) ab tak kaha thi? Kya kar rahi thi?

4) sabse bada sawal ye ki us haweli ka kya matter hai.... ?
waise ek baat to sach nikli ki Bhavna THAKURAIN hai.....
btw birthday ke din finally veer ko apni mom mil gayi... sabse bada gift uski life mein koi gift hai to yahi gift hai....




shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan..
Aise hi likhte rahiye aur aur apni manoram lekhni se hum readers ka manoranjan karte rahiye...

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :applause: :applause:
 
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Naina

Nain11ster creation... a monter in me
31,619
92,282
304
Dekha ...Bhavna thakurain nikli :cool:
Birthday ke din sabse bada gift veer ko.... bas veer jaake bhavna ko rok le.... :approve:


........
Kahani suman aur us haweli ki.....
yahan ek baat to clear hai ki shayad hi suman kabhi us haweli mein gayi ho... na hi uski beti aur bahu..... ushe jo bhi pata hai haweli ya haweli walo ki seva karne ke baare mein ,apni nani ya maa baap ke jariye hi malum hua hai.... pendant ke chalte veer ko khush to kiya usne malik samajh ke lekin haweli aur usme rehne walo se related baatein batane se isliye mana kiya Kyunki uski nani ke mana karne ki wajah se....
Shayad suman ki nani sahit sabhi sevak ya shubhchintak logo ko dar ho kisi baat se... Lekin kyun......?

-------------------------
kahani suhana aur soniya ki......

Kuch kirdaar aise hote hai jo bina matlab ke kahani mein ghuse chale aate hai.... aur khud ki musibat ko kahani ke original characters ke sir pe daal dete hai.....
For example..... ye suhana aur soniya ko hi dekh lo.... ye iske baap shailendra ya unki mom jyoti.... inlogo sar ke upar talwar banke latke the ranga,atish aur wo kutta slogan,
Ab soniya & family ne is kahani mein ghus ke kya kiya.....apni musbit ko veer aur uski family ke upar daal diya..
Kaise haramjade story characters hai ye chaaro..... :bat:
Veer ko car se thokte hi doubtful character mein tabdil ho chuki thi soniya.... ab shaq yakin mein badal chuka hai..... :D
Final baat Yahi hai ki Ye soniya & family veer ke liye hanikaarak hai.... veer se jeetna dur rahe ye log, veer ke liye hi aachha hai...
badi aayi anguthi wali :buttkick:
aur us silencer matlab shailendra ki baatein suno....ek anguthi chori ho jaane aise dikha raha hai jaise uski sari business hi dub gaye ho....are itne paise show off kahe kar raha phir party mein :buttkick:

khair ......
Waise veer aur jyoti ki birthday same date pe hai...Lekin Werewolf is baat pe kahe jor de rahe the :D
kahi veer aur jyoti mele mein bichhde huye judwa to nahi :popcorn2:

------------------------------------
Main to big bang ke jaanne se hi kehti aa rahi hun ki ye pari ek no ki haaraman hai.....

ab dekho kis tarah ye haaraman baatein kar rahi hai.... kam se kam ek system aisi baat nahi kar sakti....
matlab saaf hai ye koi tharki alien hai ya phir haweli walo dwara banayi gayi koi hawasi insects cheej... jo veer ko Purnroop se hawas ka pujari banane ki koshish kar rahi hai...

nidhi, shreya, club wali, suhana, sonia aur ab to veer ke sang suman, sonali aur kavya bhi rehne wali hai:roflol:
us pari ki to lottery lag gayi hai :lol:
ek ek mein ghus ke hawas ke khel aanand legi wo :D

Aur agar veer ne maana kiya to ushe majboor kar degi hawas ka khel khelne ke liye ye bolke ki. ...

IMG-20211030-144449
:roflol:
---------------------------------------

Sonali gusse mein pagal huye jaa rahi thi.... par veer kya chutiya hai jo itna bhi nahi pata ki madad karne ke baad bhi ye reaction kyun... Lol...are uski hi maa ke sath kuchhi ku karoge aur ab uske hi saamne aise dikhaoge ki veer zyada bhola insaan aur koi nahi to gussa to aayega hi na... sukar hai ki sonali gusse ki ghut pi gayi hai... warna lage ki railway station mein hi uska gala kaat deti sonali :roflol:

----------------------------------------

Sabse badi shocking moment ye ki abhi Readers veer ki mom ke bare mein jikar hi kar rahe the...yahan tak ki suman aur veer bhi discuss hi kar rahe the.... par ye kya bhavna ne to entry hi le li story pe....
btw ye veer apni tharki nigahon ko kabu mein rakhe to hi behtar hai uske liye.... bhavna saree nahi black t-shirt pehni hai.... :sigh:

...............
lagta hai kahani mein ek alag hi mod aane wala hai bhavna jis tarah se entry li hai....
aur sabse badi baat.... Bahot saare raaz se parda hatne wale hai....
1) brijesh & family ne aisa kyun kiya bhavna ke sath.? kyun usko is tarah buri yaad samajhkar gaali dete hai brijesh aur uske gharwaale..
2) bhavna apne bete ko sasuraal mein chhod ke kyun chali gayi thi? Jab ki wo jaanti thi ye baat bhali bhaanti ki uske sasuraal wale kaise kamine log hai?

3) ab tak kaha thi? Kya kar rahi thi?

4) sabse bada sawal ye ki us haweli ka kya matter hai.... ?
waise ek baat to sach nikli ki Bhavna THAKURAIN hai.....
btw birthday ke din finally veer ko apni mom mil gayi... sabse bada gift uski life mein koi gift hai to yahi gift hai....




shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan..
Aise hi likhte rahiye aur aur apni manoram lekhni se hum readers ka manoranjan karte rahiye...

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :applause: :applause:
Ab jab Veer ko uski mom mil chuki hai to pari ko uske andar rehne koi jarurat nahi... Pari... Tharki system kahi ki..
Jaa ,chali jaa veer ko chhod ke :protest:
 
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