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Keval Introgation hi dikhana....thoda boring ho jayega. Uske sath Kuchh aur n ghtnaon ko bhi dikhana dilchasp rahegaUpdate 181 kal aayega man. Mein thoda stuck tha interrogation ko leke. Basically, mein sirf ye nahi dikha sakta ki Veer ki family uss se questions kar rahi hai aur Veer answers de raha hai and then it's over. I mean... Ye toh information dump ho gaya. Boring! Wahi soch raha tha ki ise dikhaya kaise jaaye. Kyuki, blueprint banate waqt toh bas yahi tay rehta hai ki interrogation dikhana hai. Par kaise dikhana hai woh update likhte time hi sochna padta hai...
So, I was stuck... Isliye 2k words hi likhe hue the. Abhi idea aaya hai badhiya. Ise kaise dikhana chahiye... Personally mujhe ye sahi laga. So, abhi around 4k words complete ho chuke hai. Baaki ka raat me likhunga aur jo Bach jayega woh kal. So, update kal hi aa payega ma
Ye baat sirf review dene waale logo ke muh se hi jamti hai bhai.Bro update no. 181 is very late
Bhai update time se diya karo firYe baat sirf review dene waale logo ke muh se hi jamti hai bhai.
Kyu du time se? Tum mujhe pagaar de rahe ho kya?Bhai update time se diya karo fir
Aisa nahi hoga
Kyu du time se? Tum mujhe pagaar
Mujhe kya mat do updateKyu du time se? Tum mujhe pagaar de rahe ho kya?
Then why are you asking, he will give whenever he want.MMaMain
Mujhe kya mat do update
Nahi dena to story band kar do
Abhi tumhi toh utaawle the na???Mujhe kya mat do update
Meri story! Mujhe jab dena hoga tab dunga. Kyu band kar du? Tum kaun hote ho?Nahi dena to story band kar do
Ju kahan reply bazi me lag gaye, itne me editing puri ho jayegi.Abhi tumhi toh utaawle the na???
Meri story! Mujhe jab dena hoga tab dunga. Kyu band kar du? Tum kaun hote ho?