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Uska writer bhaag gayaApp bhi update dy do yar soul wali py please
Kya kaam karte ho khan parJaise ju log kaam me vyast ho, waise hi mein bhi vyast hu. New role, new responsibilities, new stress and new schedule. Samay ab chura ke likhna hoga. Otherwise, time toh hai hi nahi.
Intezar rahega update ka bhaiJaise ju log kaam me vyast ho, waise hi mein bhi vyast hu. New role, new responsibilities, new stress and new schedule. Samay ab chura ke likhna hoga. Otherwise, time toh hai hi nahi.
Aur, ye yeh bhi darshata hai ki bhavna aur Veer ke beech kitni gehri understanding hai. Bhale hi unhe abhi zyada samay nahi hua saath me bitaaye par woh dono ek dusre ko dekh ke hi samajh lete hai. Dhanyavad. Keep supporting.Bhavna ji ne sabko chauka hi dia tha yeh saza deker or hame bhi laga yeh Galat ho raha h lekin sirf Bhavna ji or Veer hi samajh paye ki yeh saza saza nahi bas ek dikhawa tha
Kon marder ker raha h bhala kia faida hasil ho gayaor yeh lauda kon tha mask wala or jaate jaate yeh koyn kaha Mister
Dixter
Kia dukan wale bande ka naam Dexter h
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
Badhiya zabardast shaandar update
Thanks. Arc aise hi slowly slowly start hota hai. Do tarah ke readers hote hai. Ek woh jinhe suspense dekhna pasand hota hai. Woh action pasand karte hai.Iss update zada kuch tho nhi mila mujhe par Haan
Kafi zada emotions or pyar dekhne ko mila sath mein concern bhi tha
Lekin end ki kuch lines ne bata diya yeh update Ane Wale updates k liye 1 build up tha
Thanks for update
Abe woh watermark hi hai.Nice cover picture of other story Werewolf.
Top par story name me laga ki koi watermark hai, but it was your name
That's the better approach...Hint bhi aise dete ho, ki extra mind exercise karni padi. I'm not gonna do that.
Jo hoga so hoga
Yup!Hmmm...
If not Mr X then who... Will make quick reading of early updates... Waise Villains ki itni badi bheed me kaun dimag lagaye, story ko enjoy karta hoon...
Zyada khush nahi hone ka. Only 3k words have been completed so far. I'm not getting enough time to write.4 shabd padhkar itni khusi q ho rhi h?
Keep thinking.Hmmm... one person entered the story unnoticed,,, 'Pagal Doctor'. Kya wahi to nahi hai. Lekin yeh kaise ho sakta hai ki main villain hi jail me chala jaaye. Isko story me ab active hone ka time aa gaya hai... Tab kuch idea lagega...
Iss story ke completion ke baad nayi story aayegi. Jo iss se ek link share karti hai. Of course, ye tabhi hoga jab mein yaha kayi saalo tak agar raha.brother story to one in a million hai hi
Lekin mujhe iss baat se bura lag rha hai ki is story k completion k baad kya karunga!?
Everyone begining has an ending. But, every ending presents you a new beginning. Ye safar khatam hone ke baad, ek naya safar readers ke liye intezar kar raha hai.Jo ek excitement rehti to humesha ki next episode me kya hoga ab veer kya karega etc etc.
Vo sab excitement khtam ho jayega,
Bahut bahut dhanyavad man.Kudos to writer,ek simple si story ko readers ki day to day life k sath jod diya hai.,jo bohot kam hi dekhne ko milta hai.
Iske baad nayi stories. Simple!Also ju se further plans k baare me jaroor puchna chahuga.
Ki iske baad kya?
Bahut pehle ...!? Huh?Halaki bohot pehle humne iske baare mein discuss Kiya tha.
Lekin samay k sath bohot se badlav aate hai plan par.
Ab dekhna ye hoga ki ju k kya plans hai!
From an old reader...
Thanks a lot.Super duper awesome update luvd it to gud Bhai.
Really emotional and beautiful update
Eagerly waiting for your next update plz do cont asap take care
Dobara padhna ek accha idea hai.Mein to ab dobara parna suru kar diya
Bhai ek baat btao system Jane ke liye 2 extream tarika hai 1 to death hai 2nd kya hai bhai
Thanks a lot.This is the best story in any forum till now....you have spent a lot of time....in research things....most beautiful story.......
Thanks man.Bhai writer ne bahut mehnat kiya hai is story ko likhne me..bahut research Kiya hai.....hats off to you...
Apun ko baat hi alag hai reYes brother jahan tak maine aur bhi bahut sari story padhi hai aapke jitni kisi ne research na kiya hai abhi tak.... story likhne me.
Who need web series when he himself is here for us...
I lured you into thinking that Bhavna was going to punish Veer.What an emotional update. I was expecting some kind of fight and drama ... But Bhavna turned the situation completely. At first it seemed like she was really gonna punish Veer...
Indeed!Then not only she surprised the readers but she also surprised all of the other characters by her behaviour. The wisest one in the whole family....
Tej cares for him. She maybe angry at times but she can't see him in distress.A great woman. And, a great mother... Veer is lucky to have her. And, so is Bhavna... To have Veer as her son. Tej's secret invasion to the terrace also felt wonderful. She came to Veer's aid even though she was angry at him.
Yup! Thanks a lot again. Keep supporting as always.Again... A new suspense has entered the story. Dexter... The assassin... Seems like a bad news for Veer. Looking forward to the upcoming updates. Keep writing sir...
Full stack developer ki kagaar par...Kya kaam karte ho khan par
Sahi kaha aapne aap jaisa koi nahi ..... story me time laga kar .... research kar ke ... story ko likhne wala....maine aapki pahli wali story bhi padhi hai. ...aur ye story 175 updates Tak padhi hai ....jab kuchh aur updated ho jayenge to ek sath padh lunga....Apun ko baat hi alag hai re