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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

    Votes: 1,301 83.2%
  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 26 1.7%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 202 12.9%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 35 2.2%

  • Total voters
    1,564

Tri2010

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Writing meter update :writing:

I just deleted everything. :laughing: The starting wasn't much to my liking. Now, I just found a perfect start. I think that part must be pressed a little. :approve: So, I'm starting to write again. Of course, jo delete kiya hai woh part
exclude nahi hua hai. Use bas simply dusre dhang se dikhaya jayega aur use alag sections me shift kar diya gaya hai. Update ki length around wahi 9-10k words ke around rahegi. Dekhta hu aaj raat tak kitne words complete hote hai. Kal night me update kar dunga ki kaha tak pahuchi hai progress.
Update ka intezar rahega bhai
 

Sidd19

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Writing meter update :writing:

I just deleted everything. :laughing: The starting wasn't much to my liking. Now, I just found a perfect start. I think that part must be pressed a little. :approve: So, I'm starting to write again. Of course, jo delete kiya hai woh part
exclude nahi hua hai. Use bas simply dusre dhang se dikhaya jayega aur use alag sections me shift kar diya gaya hai. Update ki length around wahi 9-10k words ke around rahegi. Dekhta hu aaj raat tak kitne words complete hote hai. Kal night me update kar dunga ki kaha tak pahuchi hai progress.
Waiting
 

Werewolf

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Great update. Pranjal aur Karunesh ki halat kharab ho gayi hai. Harikiran ne apne fayde ke liye Karunesh ko mohra banaya, aur Karunesh apne saath apne bete ko lekar bhi doob gaya. Har aadmi apni galti maan'ne ke bajaye dusron ko dosh deta hai. Lekin Pranjal ka Madhuri ke liye pyar dekh kar accha laga, kam se kam kuch to usme sacchayi bachi hai.
Pranjal ki ladayi sirf Veer se thi. Woh koi Gunda ya gangster nahi jo harr kisi ke saath bura vyavhar kare :laughing:
Veer aur Suhana ka interaction bahut hi sunder dhang se likha hai. Uski dil ki ukhadti huyi dhadkane, uska Veer ko na dekhpana aur palat jana, the romance was perfect. Nidhi ma'am ki yaad aa gayi, bas unke saath Veer saath rehne ki vaah se jyada free tha, chaante bhi khoob khata tha, par Suhana aur Nidhi ki sthiti ek jaisi lag rahi hai. Knowing fully well their feelings towards Veer, not accepting it, probably due to their strong character and respect for social values, but they are crumbling now. I wonder what will happen to Suhana when later Sonia develops feelings towards Veer, how she will react.
Yahi toh complicated hai. Sonia Suhana ke liye hurdle bann sakti hai aur Shreya Nidhi ke liye. Dono hi unki chhoti behan hai. Kya hoga agar woh ye drishya dekhe ki unki chhoti behan ko Veer se lagaav ho gaya hai.
Tejal reaction was as expected, she wants to protect her brother, not knowing her own feelings for Veer, as a woman. 'I have given time, you choose the place', I like it. But the character of Kavya is so beautifully written, innocent, uncomplicated, just simple and pure.
Tejal will come to realisation soon. Kavya has already realised that she loves Veer. But she hasn't realised the complications that follows in doing so... She don't give a fuck about what will society say? What will happen later? She just knows she loves Veer and she wants him to stay by her side. She ain't even thinking about anything else.
Idhar Trisha gadhe huye murde ukhadne me lagi hai. Accha hua Rohan theek samay per aa gaya. Jab Veer China gaya tha tab 3 murders hi huye the, ab 6 ho gaye hain.

<Rohan : Maharashtra me serial killer khulla ghoom raha hai. Pune, Satara, Panchgani, Lonavla, aur ab Thaane. 6 murders ho chuke hai kul.>

Yeh to 5 hi shahar huye, kya kisi shahar me 2 huye hain.
Yes! It's not necessary that one city will have one murder. Any number of murders can take place at any city at any given time. If there are 2 murders in the same city. Then, that's an indication that the murderer is still there in the same city.
Now we come to the main mystery. So, the Evil Person is also a system holder, the way he asked Rebecca about Legendary Skill. He knows about Rebecca's hypnotizing powers, that's why he kept the room dark. Last time also, he was facing away from Rebecca. These small details take the story to a different level.
The only reader to decode the reason for the dark atmosphere. :approve: :good:
The Girl in Australia, Spanish Duo, Chaos and Strategy, Couscous, its too much to apply mind, so I am relaxing and enjoying the mystery. Couscous is used here for a dish aur some more upheavals, we don't know. The girl and duo may be three more system holders.
Couscous is a traditional and famous dish from Morocco. Now you know... :D
Yes, Lapdog is used for the mysterious Young boy who was fighting with Renshu. I am sure Dexter is involved in serial murders, trying to implicate Veer in the murders. Pari and Veer have become aware of the bad vibes. May be this time Veer will need help of his System Friends.
Murders were happening even before Dexter was reintroduced. :D

We'll start seeing things slowly. Right now the development is taking place. Characters development, business growth, relationships improvement, realisation of love, jealousy, emotional dramas,etc. These things will take place in this arc. Hence, the longest arc. Thanks a lot btw and keep supporting as usual. :five:
 

Ullu king

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Writing meter update :writing:

I just deleted everything. :laughing: The starting wasn't much to my liking. Now, I just found a perfect start. I think that part must be pressed a little. :approve: So, I'm starting to write again. Of course, jo delete kiya hai woh part
exclude nahi hua hai. Use bas simply dusre dhang se dikhaya jayega aur use alag sections me shift kar diya gaya hai. Update ki length around wahi 9-10k words ke around rahegi. Dekhta hu aaj raat tak kitne words complete hote hai. Kal night me update kar dunga ki kaha tak pahuchi hai progress.
Take your TIME Bro!
 

Werewolf

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Bhai sahab kaab, we are eagerly waiting for the moment when Veer and Keara express their feelings, Veer was the person with whom Keara loose her virginity.
We are very close....!
 
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