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Update 163What was the update no. where Veer saw a nightmare about his life. That everyone dies but him. And he left alone in the end.
Werewolf
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Happy reading tej and Veer's kiss session?A Delightful update
I felt kind of happy while reading this.
Yes. This was attention diverting at its best. City me choonki murders ho hi rahe the. Toh, Balhaar ko underground karne ke liye iss se behtar aur kya hi sakta tha? Aadesh knowing that Balhaar can't do anything right now has decided to confront Veer head on. He wants to totally remove the hotel prestige and chef on wheels. One more fact : Hotel Prestige and casa Belle are located actually close to each other. Another reason why Aadesh doesn't want any competition in his area. (And, later in whole Mumbai. Further advancement to whole country.)Serial killing ki vajah se puri city police high alert par hai aur uski vajah se balhaar aur baki criminals jyada kuch nahi kar paa rahe. Jiska fayda aadarsh ne uthaya Veer ke khilaf.
Woh raaz toh nahi hai ab. I mean... It was evident ki Aadesh ko kaise pata chala. Ab mein aur jitna hints nahi dunga. I've given you guys a lot of hints lately.Veer ka spy pakda gaya, kaise vo abhi raaj hai. Halaki uska pakda jana koi badi mystery nahi. Mystery vo banda hai jo Aadarsh se mila hua hai.
Well, good for you to actually think and not just wait for me to tell you.Jo aadmi Dexter tak pahuch sakta hai vo ek mamuli spy ko to pakad hi sakta hai.
Yes, I'm damn sure ye jo Adarsh se mila aur Jo dexter se mila dono same hai.
Explains why he was able to locate Dexter.And as Rihanna guessed there is high possibility ki ye bhi ek system holder hai, isliye Veer ka spy ko asani se pakda gaya.
Can buy anyone. Normal goons.Dekhna ye hai ki Balhaar ki gang me konsa saanp hai jo sari info leak kar raha hai, maybe usme bhi isi unknown ladke ka hath ho.
*AadeshEk taraf Dexter se meeting aur dusri taraf se Adarsh se bhent, Veer ko kai taraf se gherne ki koshish hai yahan.
Adarsh phir vahi chal chalega head chef vali, but this time things are different. Mukta ko paise se kaise kharidega
Side characters ki stories ko zyada lamba kheechna sahi bhi nahi. I mean... It doesn't make sense if the sequences are not contributing anything to the plot. It's just a drag and can make readers bore. Better to move quickly regarding these sidelines.Kritika and Karan ka scene badhiya tha, well already I knew it, ki kritika jaldi hi karan ko maaf kar degi, aur karan ne without any hesitation apni galti accept ki aur gently apologize kiya to matter lamba nahi gaya.
Yes. That scene is left. But Kritika actually ran away. Also, seeing Karan with her...! Kavya wouldn't want to interfere. We might see a short scene of them but in a different way.But ek scene to kritika aur kavya ka bhi banta tha, kavya bhi to karan ke baad kritika se maafi mangne nikli thi.
Afterall, apni guru par hi kavya ne uski di hui shiksha ka istemal kiya tha.
I'll drop one scene for you guys.I hope next update me ek aisa hi scene hum Kavya and Kritika ka dekhenge.
Yes. Tej ka decision bhi bahut bada hai. It takes a lot of guts to do what she did. Ab waise toh use paise ki Kami nahi hai. But still... Giving up in your job just for a start up business where there's no guarantee you'll succeed or not. Use nahi pata ki Veer ke paas system hai aur business succesful hona hi hai. And, still she gave up her job so easily.Veer ka business smoothly establish ho raha hai, because there are lot of people to help. Tejal pure dil se usme lagi hai, Karan ki business expertise aur connection ka bhi benefit hai aur Louise bhi 100% de raha hai.
There's still some time.Ab Kaera ko bhi isme involve karne vala hai Veer so soon we are going to see the queen Kaera.
Gradually Kaera is gaining her emotions. Let's see when will we see the notification. 'Mission completed'
Exactly! Nidhi bhi ye jaanti hai. Lekin, use pata hai ki Veer ka character kaisa hai. Woh thoda jazbati zaroor rehta hai. Lekin, Nidhi jaanti hai ki woh kabhi bhi use harm nahi pahuchayega.Nidhi is completely in love with Veer, the way she defend Veer in front of Mrs. Tiwari. Veer apni soch aur irade puri tarah se Nidhi ko clear kar chuka hai, and then she defending Veer. Halaki mrs tiwari ki warning ek galat sense me thi, but Veer ki intention kuch vaisi hi hai but in a good way.
Also, ab Nidhi ye jaan gayi hai ki Veer ko leke uski society me ab baatein uthne lagi hai. Sab notice karne lage hai. Aur, Nidhi kabhi bhi ye nahi chaahegi ki Juhi ko log kisi galat nazariye se dekhe. Aur, uska Sahara leke uski maa ka apmaan kare.Mrs. Tiwari uske isi darr aur jhijhak ki personification hai. Veer ke ghar aane par agar use kisi se kuch sunna pad raha hai to vo aage badhne se pehle kai baar sochegi. Ye sab vo actively nahi soch rahi, but uske subconscious mind me yahi hai.
Aise darr khatam nahi hota man. Yu baar baar baat karne se kuch nahi hone waala. Their relationship needs to reach the melting point. Ye baatein ubaal toh rahi hai cold ice ko... But they are not reaching to its melting point. And, that's where this arc comes in action. You'll see how their relationship will turn out at the end.Upar jo thoda bahut vo Veer ki taraf pighal rahi thi, Shreya vale scene ke baad usne vo bhi band kar diya.
Veer kaise Nidhi ki iss state ko tackle karega ye hi unke future ko decide karega, If he want Nidhi to uske darr ko bhi Veer ko hi khatam karna padega.
But I feel good when Nidhi defended Veer.
We see two beauty queens together Ava and Divya again after a long time.
Dono me hi ye dikhane ki hod thi ki kon Veer ke jyada close hai. Divya is friend and Bed partner but Ava is the one who knows Veer's secret more than anyone.
Ava - "I'll use camouflage"
Ab divya market ke jaake Camouflage dhundegi.
Training can't be done in the hotel.Dekhte hai hotel me kis tarah ki training karte hai, vaise bedroom me khaat kabaddi bhi khel sakte hai. Achi training hai vo bhi
No! It's still not confirmed. I mean...Best part of this update was Tej and Veer. I thought ki cafe vale scene ke baad inke bich kuch to hoga but itni jaldi ho jayega
So finally Veer and Tej ne ek tarah se apne future relation ko lekar confirm kar diya ki kya hone vala hai.
number one most unpredictable, hyperactive, knucklehead ninja Tejal Uzumaki
Oh sorry, galti se idhar udhar nikal jata hu.
We'll see who gives her cherry first.shayad ab Tejal ki possessive nature me kuch kami aaye yaa shayad aur badh jaye.
Smooch to tagda tha, but Kavya is still one step ahead IYKYK
I'm thinking something special for Arohi.Pehla kiss Arohi ke sath hua tha Veer ka, let's see uske sath kab baat aage badhti hai.
I've already planned a sequence for Bhumika. We'll see her from the next update.Bhumika ka to abhi koi scene hi najar nahi aata. Sabse kam screentime vale character me se ek hai vo. Let's see vo kab aur kaise iss line me aati hai.
Exactly!!! Only I know my pain...I'm gonna say this arc will be most challenging for you, kyoki bahut sare character ko ek sath handle karna hai.
Ab tak kahani 2 side se chal rahi thi. Ek Veer aur dusri Veer ke enemies. Lekin ab bahut kuch ek sath ho raha hai.
Likh likh ke mera stress mat badhao man. I know I have to deal with so many things.Morrocco aur Spain me sajish ho rahi hai, America me Mr X aur Rebecca kuch plan kar rahe hai.
India me Serial killer hai aur vo banda jo Dexter aur Adarsh se mila. Pranjal Madhuri se milne gaya hai, Ragini ko sab pata chal gaya, Ava and Veer ki training, Tej aur Suhana ki meeting. Kaera ka scene. Aur bhi bahut kuch aur sab kuch ek sath handle karna hai ju ko. I can understand .
Noted. We'll see!I have a guess.
1st
is ki ye serial killer pehle se hi Veer ko janta hai aur isliye unke paths intersect honge.
We'll see again. But what's the reason behind the murders? Madhuri ke pita ka toh chala kuch hoga. Story hogi koi... But what about other random people? Who kills like that?2nd
ki ye koi chalak lekin random psycho serial killer hai jo logo ko kisi reason se maar raha hai, aur Veer ka koi apna isme jarur fasega so ultimately Veer isme involve hoga. And high possibility is ki vo apna Nidhi hai.
Thanks a lot man. Aise comments dekh ke hi dil khush hota hai. Ye reactions wagarah toh bas 2 minute ka likhne ka motivation dete hai. Honestly, I don't really care about these... These are just the driving fuels... Lekin, lengthy comments hi woh cheez hai jo bataate hai ki readers kahani se jude hai aur uske baare me sochte hai...! That is enough for the writer. Every writer wants the reader to actually talk about his work. Not just admire it from the side.Mujhe vahi sabse jyada vulnerable situation me najar aati hai filhal.
Just random guess...which usually proven wrong
Again an Fantastic Update
It was quite late this time, but we know the reasons , hope so abki baar itna late nahi hoga. I expect at least 2 to 3 update in a month.
But I never asked specifically, cuz I know when update is ready you deliver it.
Take you time , and give best as always
Woh goa se aane k baad and china jaane se pahleWhat was the update no. where Veer saw a nightmare about his life. That everyone dies but him. And he left alone in the end.
Werewolf
Waah!Woh goa se aane k baad and china jaane se pahle