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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

    Votes: 1,303 83.2%
  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 27 1.7%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 202 12.9%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 35 2.2%

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Gaurav1969

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Again another splendid update.....

Last 2-3 update were slow and a little bit boring 😌 😌, but those were also important.....

Ab kahani phir se apne purane dhang me wapas aa gayi hai, and it was amazing to read.

Ek aur nayi system holder ko hamne dekha, aur ek hi update me uska character ache se establish bhi kar diya. Everything was precise, jitni jarurat thi utne me hi sab samet diya....uske motives, uske emotions, uski strength and mindset. Uska past definitely aage jakar hi pata chalega...

Mr. X and Rebecca know about every system holder, where are they...what they do, their secrets etc. I wonder how he knows everything....is it a power of his/her system or they using FBCC somehow or something else like those reports have something 🤔 which X and Rebecca were talking.

Damian aur Captain ki fight bahut detail me nahi thi, lekin ek major major idea to de hi diya. Damian ne same attack jo renshu par use kiya tha vahi captain par ajmaya.

Renshu wasn't able move after the attack but captain managed to not only survive but blow a deadly attack on Damian. Either Captain is equivalent or stronger than renshu.

Maybe sending Damian to Australia was just for checking power levels of Captain to check that can she be a danger for them or not. Otherwise why Rebecca just want to injure her not kill.

Now of I talk about the power levels of all system holder it's really complicated.... We know nothing about X, but definitely he is most powerful right now. He dominate Rebecca. Veer felt weak and powerless in front of Rebecca but he was injured and exhausted that time. Maybe she had upperhand upon Veer.

Renshu admited that Veer is most powerful in their alliance.... I consider Damian, Renshu and Captain almost same level. Thoda upar niche ho skata hai.

Ava really fuck the Jaw long during the fight with him. But eventually he beat her somehow. Ava is powerful but I don't think she is similar to renshu or Damian at least right now. Maybe in future she will surpass them all.

We haven't seen garofano fighting that long but she has some really fucking killer moves and skills specifically her poison skill. I would say she is also on same level to Ava.

We don't know anything about psycho Doctor/Prisoner.

Erica came out as the weakest upto now😌

Captain brutally refused the offer to join Rebecca, Maybe aage hame woh Renshu and Veer ke alliance ke sath dikhe. Abhi ke liye usse negative character ki vibe to nahi aa rahi. And what was the night she talking about. Is it related to China or somewhere else. 🤔🤔

Now about Pune.....

Ye badhiya tha aate hi Pranjal ki dhulai shuru....he deserves that.

See pari also agrees with my thoughts 🤣🤣... some chuma chati😂😂

Madhuri ne Veer ko ek najar me pehchan liya....and did she had a childhood crush on Veer. It seems like that. Madhuri Veer aur Pranjal ke bich me khadi hai unke hath pakad ke. Pranjal Veer se ladna chahta hai lekin madhuri ki vajah se chup hai.

Is it kind of foreshadowing....kya madhrui Veer aur Pranjal ke bich sab kuch thik hone ki vajah banegi yaa phir chize aur khrab hongi. Who knows except you.

Honestly I don't like the idea of hridya parivartan....and I don't think it's gonna happen with pranjal.

Veer ne madhuri aur uski maa ko mumbai bhej diya kiske paas. Shayad jahan mukta shaili sab rehti hai wahan.

Ab Veer Pune ke baad panchgani jaa raha hai where the another murder took place....hint by hint he will come to Mumbai back.

After a long wait we see Kaera....and in her strong business woman aura. Frankly mujhe ab tak Kaera ka character kuch khaas pasand nahi aaya even though woh kahani ki sabse important character me se ek hai. Lekin iss particular scene me mujhe woh pasand aayi. Kuch lines me hi Kaera ki presence of mind, uske business skills and stress handling ko show kar diya.

Last scene establish some further plot.....Kaera and sonia both will fight for same project.... let's see what will happen....who wins.... mujhe to isme bhi Veer ke laude lagte najar aa rahe hai. 🤣🤣🤣

Veer is busy finding the murderer here....and next update se focus vahi par hoga..... what's Rajat, Dexter, and harikiran son doing. Unki musibat Veer ke liye ek big surprise ki tarah hi samne ayegi...cause he has zero idea about that

Again amazing update....


But this time give three update in month and prove yourself a good person... IYKYK 😂😂💯👏
If someone remember kaera was the one who make a base for story in the starting by having sex with veer ,which was his first mission😄
For this this thing i love kaera more than other two ,but now by ava's scenes and her possession towards veer makes her the first in the trinity to come close to veer.
Sonia is left far behind from other two .
 

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सिस्टम होल्डर का अस्तित्व मे इस प्रकार से आना एक बहुत ही बड़ा संदेह पैदा कर रहा है और वह यह कि यह सभी सिस्टम होल्डर्स असल मे जीवित हैं भी या नही !
यह सभी लोग अपने सिस्टम द्वारा रेगुलेट किए जा रहे हैं और यह शुरुआत से ही सस्पेंस का विषय बना हुआ है ।
That's what i am thinking about veer and captain's story is same but ava crimson erica renshu story is bit different .garofano has some other story of getting system

I think veer and captain are on same level for now but captain has an upperhand due to orphana group as she has so many girls with wishes and system gives her missions on that so she become as powerful as veer but veer with normal limited missions is giving a tough fight too.
 
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If someone remember kaera was the one who make a base for story in the starting by having sex with veer ,which was his first mission😄
For this this thing i love kaera more than other two ,but now by ava's scenes and her possession towards veer makes her the first in the trinity to come close to veer.
Sonia is left far behind from other two .
If?..... everyone remembers that Kaera was the one with Veer loses his virginity....about that Kaera was totally unaware. She doesn't feel anything after knowing about that.

For me the character development of the character, their actions decide about their favourability. Whether they'll be liked or not.

Yes, Kaera is probably the most important female character, most beautiful among all, most intelligent ( non system holder), like a queen. But still uska aisa koi khaas character development nahi hua jo use favourite bana de. Reason - her lack of emotions, which are actually the base of any character.

Maybe Kaera ki emotions wala mission pura hone par aisa dekhne ko mile.

Ab Veer ke sath sax sux kiya isliye to favorite nahi ho jayegi...😏😏

Abhi to Suhana, Ava, Tej, Nidhi, Kavya, Ragini upperhand rakhti hai mere liye.
Suman also....IYKYK 😏😏
 

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If?..... everyone remembers that Kaera was the one with Veer loses his virginity....about that Kaera was totally unaware. She doesn't feel anything after knowing about that.

For me the character development of the character, their actions decide about their favourability. Whether they'll be liked or not.

Yes, Kaera is probably the most important female character, most beautiful among all, most intelligent ( non system holder), like a queen. But still uska aisa koi khaas character development nahi hua jo use favourite bana de. Reason - her lack of emotions, which are actually the base of any character.

Maybe Kaera ki emotions wala mission pura hone par aisa dekhne ko mile.

Ab Veer ke sath sax sux kiya isliye to favorite nahi ho jayegi...😏😏

Abhi to Suhana, Ava, Tej, Nidhi, Kavya, Ragini upperhand rakhti hai mere liye.
Suman also....IYKYK 😏😏
Gufron and vo china wali ko mat bhulo
 

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The clock is ticking when I will give my first review for this story, since when I joined this forum I haven't read any update and now the time is coming when I gonna read the first update.

Btw this is my 45th comment on this story without reading any update Werewolf sir.

Maine bahut sari stories par apna review diya hai par jo story sabse favourite hai abhi tak usi story ko maine apna koi review nahi diya hai.

[One update to go for my first review] 😂 😂 😂.
Aur jald hi mera name comments list mein 1st page par aa jayega jo abhi 4th page mein hai.
 
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