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[Werewolf]

Awesome and jabardast update
Sabhi family ke members milkar yarnia ki tyariyo me lage huye hai sab veer ke liye isme apni jee jaan se taiyari kar rahe hai

Yes

Aadesh veer ki chaal me paskar loss me chalte huye bhi or karcha karta ja raha hai

Yahi toh plan hai

Vahi dhananjay ko akir veer ke bare me or jankari mil gayi or ye bhi pata chal gaya ki vo 31st December ko apna naya business ko launch kar raha hai dekte hai ab ye vaha par kya karta hai

Ye baat sabhi ko almost pata lag gayi hai ki 31st ko kuchh hona hai.

Tej or Aarohi ke sath ye chat ki pics dikhana bhut hi mast idea tha

Dhanyavad

Or vahi aadesh ke gunde tamanna ke piche Singapore tak chale gaye but un ko ye baat kese pata chali ki tamanna singapore me hai kher veer ne apna dimag lagakar unko vapis Mumbai me bula liya hai
Or akir me us pagal doctor ka pahala seen dikhaya gaya dekhne me ye bhut hi cruel or psycho type ka lag raha hai jo ki expected tha.

Yes. Thanks a lot. Keep supporting.

I get what Werewolf Sir is saying... He doesn’t expect everyone to write a long review, but at least for those writing just two lines, they should try to write something fresh...If you're still not able to do that...atleast quote anything that you liked in the update!

Exactly! It's not that hard, right??? I sometimes wonder — Are they bots???

I know exactly how this feels!!! An author doesn’t write every update with the same emotions or energy. Some updates are written when the author themselves are super hyped, and then seeing the same repetitive reviews for every update are just bland.

Yup!!! This... This right here!!
Imagine writing your ass off for more than a week and what do you get in return? — Nice update.

And come on?!? it’s impossible to read an entire update and not notice even one thing worth mentioning. That’s all it takes to let the author know their work is appreciated!

It's possible here. I don't even know whether they are reading or not.

Anyway I’m behind on the story myself, but if Werewolf Sir is going to talk like this, I feel like I’ll need to catch up quickly. Still I’ll make sure to give my review on the latest update!

Just read at your pace, whenever you feel like it. No need to rush.

bhai mai new hu kahani kaise padhu aapki 2nd chapter ke baad to kahani dikha hi nhi rha hai ye na hi koi link hai please guide kar do

Upar pinned comment me sab kuchh diya hua hai bhai. Index, characters list, latest update, sab kuchh diya hua hai. Tumhe khaali click karna hai.

Trisha tow slogan or Atish ke murder ki chaan been ke peeche hi pad gayi h ab tow woh mirror gallery tak pahoch gayi h dekhte h kia woh Jo chahti h ker payegi
Tow Dhananjay bhai sahab bhi poori tarah se veer ghoj khaber me lage huwe h JAISE ki woh kia kerta h
Yarina ke launch ki tayyari badi joro shoro se chal Rahi h poora pariwar kadi mehnat ker raha h lekin kia aisa ho payega kyonki apni Dhananjay Babu inki party kharab kerne ke liye tayyar Bethe h
Abhi tak yeh mystery murder case bhi Kuch nahi Mila kia Luna Wala me kuch surag milte h ya nahi
Yeh pagal Banda kon tha kis cheez per research ker raha h Jab safalta nahi mil tow kulhada se kaat dala kaisa drinda h
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
Bhai ab isi tarah ka review Dena aata h isliye aise dia h

Mirror gallery se toh Veer ka linkage hai hi. Trisha ko Veer tak pahuchne me der nahi lagni chahiye.

Dhananjay 31st ko attack karne ka plan kar raha hai. Ab sab kuchh next update se badal jayega. Arc peak par jayega. Dhanyavad btw.

seriously, review Dena nahi aata ,bhai story padhna aata hai koi scene pasand na ay to ushpe lamba sa review chep denge.update padhne ke baad review aapne aap aa jata hai ,aur wolf sir jitna bada update dete hai ush update pe main toh ek chota sa story update like du yaar
Review diya karo yaar writer bhi thoda accha lagta hai

Mein bade bade reviews ki farmaish nahi karta har kisi se. Lekin, agar kahani padh rahe hai log toh kam se kam kuchh toh likh hi sakte hai na update ke baare me? Unke kya sawaal hai, kya achha laga unhe update me? Aage kya ho sakta hai? Kya itna bhi nahi soch sakte??

 

[Mrxr]

Mein bade bade reviews ki farmaish nahi karta har kisi se. Lekin, agar kahani padh rahe hai log toh kam se kam kuchh toh likh hi sakte hai na update ke baare me? Unke kya sawaal hai, kya achha laga unhe update me? Aage kya ho sakta hai? Kya itna bhi nahi soch sakte??

of course sir,everyone know to how express his thoughts, what can he saying for story update.

 

[Werewolf]

Ek bar fir badhiya dhamakedar update

1. Trisha madam to lagta ha veer ka naam jane bager chain se nahi bethegi matlab inko serial killer se jyada atish slogan ke murderer ko pakadne ki talab ha wahan serial killer khun per khun or logon ko agwa kiya ja raha ha lekin inka dhyan udhar se jyada atish slogan per ha

Uska ek kaaran ye hai ki Divya ne ye keh diya tha ki Trisha se zyada authority FBCC ki hai iss case ko lekar. Toh zaahir hai ki Trisha ko waise bhi utni limelight nahi milne waali iss case se... Unless, she solves it entirely by herself. Jo ki possible nahi. Ya fir credit use diya jaaye kisi tarah se. Jo ki again... will depend on various factors.

aisa lagta ha ki trisha madam starting se story padh rahi ha or update-61 tak aa pahunchi ha bas usme ek hi difference ha ki trisha madam wali story me veer ka name hidden ha kher lagta ha ab trisha madam veer tak pahunch sakti ha lekin ek bat or ha kahin trisha madam ka serial killer case ko seriously na lena kahin bhari na pad jaye khin serial killer inke kisi janne wale per hamla kar de to fir kya hoga

Yes!!! Chhoti chhoti nazar-andaaz ki gayi cheezein hi baad me fatal saabit hoti hai. Dekhte hai hum Trisha ke liye ye kaisa saabit hota hai.

Ek bat or agar inke pas killer ke huliye ki thodi detail ha to uska sketch bhi to banwa sakte han ye log

Yes!! Filhal mein woh part dikha nahi paaya. Itna kuchh tha likhne ko, kahi na kahi woh dimaag se nikal gaya. Ab agle update me iska zikr aa jayega.

2. Dhananjay ko bhi ab veer ka pata pad chuka ha or wo us per hamle ki tayaari ker raha ha yarnia ke launch ke din veer ir baki gharwalon ki mehnat barbad karne ki puri planing kar rakhi ha or sabse dukh ki bat ye ha ki veer isse anbhigya ha jo ki bahut buri bat ha kyonki is khatre ki to shayd uski asha bhi nahi hogi dekhte han ki kya Dhananjay apne plan me kamyab ho pata ha ya nahi agar ho gaya to veer ko bahut badi kimat chukani pad sakti ha lekin Dhananjay bhi nahi janta ki veer kis bala ka naam ha iske khandan me ye hi eklota bachha bap dada ko to veer ne tapka diya lagta ha iska kalyan bhi veer ke haton hi likha ha

Yahi toh dikkat hai. Veer teeno — Rajat, Dexter, aur Dhananjay ke khatro se anibhigya hai. Use pata hi nahi hai ki itne saare uske past ke dushman use chaaro orr se gherne ke liye apne qadam badha chuke hai. Aur, woh bhi tab jab woh apne parivar se dur hai.

3. Idhar lalach me andha hona or apne peron per kulhadi marna kya hota ha iska sabut ha adesh matlab ki veer ise chane ke jhad per chadhata ja raha ha or ye chadhta ja raha ha paisa pani ki tarah baha raha ha khudke paison ko dekhe bina veer lagta ha ise sadak per hi leke ayega dusre se age nikalne ke chakkar me ye khudko hi bhul gaya ha ki ye kahan ja raha ha uper ki niche kya ise ye bhi nahi pata chala apne jasuson se ki veer to yarnia ko launch karne wala ha to uska plan to alag hi ha kher dekhte han adesh ko jab realise hota ha to wo kya karta ha wo bhi veer se panga leta ha ya nahin

Yahi par toh twist hai. 29th december ko jo bhi taiyaari Hotel Prestige me hui hai, toh waha par hotel ka koi bhi staff nahi hai. Ye mentioned hai kahani me. Sab ghar ke log isliye toh lage hai kaam par. Staff ko pata chala toh zaahir hai uss Ankit ko bhi pata chal jayega aur woh fir Aadesh ko send kar dega information. Par, ab dekhna ye hai ki akhir staff ko kitni der tak Bhumika dur rakhti hai aur kya bahana deti hai.

4. Idhar hotel prestige me yarnia ke grand launch ki tayaari joro shoron se chal rahi ha sab apni taraf se pura sahyog de rahen ha kisi ke man me kya chal raha ha to kisi ke man me kya jahan rajni is bar apna puri tarah sahyog dekar apna kam dikhakar veer ko impress karna chahti ha to wahin shweta bhi pichhe nahin ha wo bhi apna sapurn yogdan dekar veer ke dil me bhavna se age nikalna chahti ha kher ye to waqt hi batayega

Khushi ki baat yeh hai ki sabhi ek saath the. Bhale hi woh sabhi Veer ke dil me apni jagah special banaana chaahte hai lekin, uddeshya sabka ek hi hai. Aur, isme koi haani bhi nahi hai. Bas, jalan aur dwesh jab tak na aaye toh...

5. Idhar bhavna bhi shweta ko chhedna nahi chhodti ek bete ke liye do mataon ki cute fight jahan shweta bhavna se age nikalna chahti ha to wahin bhavna to khud shweta ko moka deti ha lekin use chedna nahin bhulti in dono me bhi kuchh to najdikiyan aa rahi ha jaise bhumika or tej me aa gayi han ab dono sath me behnon ki tarah rehne to lagi ha kahan pehle tej ladti rahti thi bhumika se kher bond strong hoga to wo waqt ke sath hi hoga

Tej aur Bhumika ki nazdeekiyo ka kaaran ye hai ki Tej Bhumika ki inner feelings se ignorant hai. Tej samajhti hai ki sirf wahi ekmaatra behan hai jo apne bhai ke saath lovey-dovey hona chaahti hai.
Jabki, haal hi me Bhumika ke andar ki bhavnaaye bhi badalne lagi hai. Choonki, Tej inn sab se anibhigya hai, isliye woh samajhti hai ki Bhumika uske liye koi khatra nahi. Par, kya aisa sach me hai? Kya waqai Bhumika koi khatra nahi hai?

6. Idhar veer ke muh se kisi duri ladki ka naam nikal jaye uske pas me bethi ladki jal bhun jati ha jaise ki abhi hua suhana ka naam lete hi divya or ava ka chehra dekhne layak ho gaya or uper se veer ka suhana ke prati uske janmdin ko lekar charcha karne se dono jal bhunker rah gayi

Meanwhile suhana laughing in the corner ye kahte hue ki poor girls or in donon ko chidhate hue

Divya surprised hai. Woh Veer ke saath Suhana se bhi adhik time spend kar rahi hai haal hi me, fir bhi Veer jis tarah se Suhana ka zikr karta hai aisa usne apne liye kabhi nahi dekha. Aur, yahi baat use kahi na kahi khatak rahi hai.
Wahi Ava toh completely stunned hai. Suhana use ek threat ki tarah nazar aa rahi hai.

Sach me suhana agar in dono ke sath hoti or agar uski pehle wali personality bhi hoti to maja aa jata suhana sach ne inhe jala jalakar mar deti ( joking ) sach me suhana ka alag aura ha story me isliye wo meri favourite ha sabse jyada meri list me wo no. 2 per ha pehle to pari hi ha kyonki pari na hoti to inme se koi nahi hota or na veer hota

Kintu, Pari koi tangible cheez nahi hai bhai. Use aap chhi nahi sakte. Toh Pari ke liye ek alag hi sthaan hona chahiye. Living human beings ke liye alag.
Suhana ne akhir itna kuchh kiya hai. Itni jagah toh woh Veer ke dil me deserve karti hai.

Kher veer bechara suhana ke liye koi kimti gift soch raha ha use kon bataye ki agar wo suhana ko simple rose bhi de de to wo use bhi sambhalkar rakh le jaise ki uski shirt ko sambhal kar rakha ha abhi tak jane suhana kab batayegi ki wo veer se pyar karti ha or na jane kab use usme pati se mukhti milegi

Shirt? Are you talking about the shirt during her getting shot by the bullet? When Veer tied it up as she was losing her blood??
Suhana keeps everything from Veer safe. Not just Suhana... Even Kaera has kept that teddy bear and his coat safe by her side. The cute fluffy toy which she got from Veer during her date with him. The coat she took from Madhuri. Both the items are by her side.

7. Finaly ava ne confess kar liya ha ki wo veer se pyar karti ha kher ye to hum sabko pata hitha lekin ab ye officialy bhi announce kar diya ha ava ne lekin karen bhi to kya ava past me jo kar bethi ha veer ke sath uski wajah se veer per hak jama nahi sakti kis muh se kahen or kis muh se use toke isliye bechari dusron ka naam sunker khun ka ghunt pika rah jati ha abhi to use ye bhi nahi pata ki uski bachpan ki donon dost bhi veer per hi fida han kher dekhte han ki ava ke future me kya likha ha kya lily uske liye kuchh kar payegi ya nahi dekhte han

Magar, abhi Ava ne sirf apne mann me ye sweekar kiya hai. Veer ke saamne usne izhar nahi kiya hai. There's a difference.

8. Idhar divya bhi apni hi friend se itni jal bhun rahi ha jabki dono best friends han or dono sawar bhi ek hi jaisi nav per ha fir bhi divya ke man me khayal to aya hoga ki usne veer ko apna sabkuchh de diya ha fir bhi use suhana ki fikra ha ab kya batayen use ki apna veer sabme perfect ha bas ladkiyon ke mamle me hi uska dimag aaj tak develop nahi hua wo dusron ki to sochi apni pari ki feelings hi nahin samjh pata kabhi kabhi

Kyunki, ladkiyo ke saath uska bachpan se utna interaction raha hi nahi hai. Ye toh jabse system aaya hai tab se cheezein badli hai. Na hi uski koi gf rahi hai kabhi aur na hi koi premi. Jaise jaise woh relationship me aayega, cheezein seekhta jayega. He'll get mature in this aspect too. Par, uske liye use pehle kisi ke sang relationship me aana padega.

9. Or fir aya whatsapp chats wala scene matlab ki sala real hi lag rahe the ab ek hi dil Werewolf bhai or kitni bar jitoge matlab ki har chijen ek dam real lagti ha sala ki jaise hamare hai samne chal rahi ho kher ek bat chats chalu hui tej ke sath 12:26 AM per or khatm hui arohi ke sath 12:43 AM per to kya itne time me veer ke phone ki battery 49 se 48 per hi giri sala hamare me ab tak 49 se 46 ho chuki hoti kher ye to bas aise hi majak ke liye kaha tha mene

Veer ka phone badi battery waala tha.

10. Kher idhar veer ke Hourglass Method per charchayen hona shuru ho chuki han ki iss approve kya jaye ya nahi koi keh raha ha ki aprove kiya jaye ir koi kah raha ha ki nahi kiya jaye or last ne bat aa chuki ha Tamanna per jo ki veer ki side hi legi to ye lagbhag aprove hi ha ek tarah se mano to

Approve toh hona hi hai. Lekin, amendments ke saath. It needs some changes.

11. Idhar singapore me Tamanna per fir adesh ne apne admiyon ko laga diya ha Tamanna ne bhi bevakofiyon wala kam kiya ha jo apni security ko keke nahin gayi veer me itna kehne ke bad bhi udhar veer bechara kidhar kidhar najar rakhe sala aisi skill hoti jisse veer khudke clone kar pata to ye jhanjhat hi khatam ho jati kher abhi ke liye to usne Tamanna ko wapas india bula liya ha dekhte han ki fir bhi adesh shanti se bethta ha ya fir apni koi agli chal chal deta ha

Tamanna befikr thi. Woh kaha jaa rahi hai next shoot ke liye ye information sirf crew ko hi pata thi. Toh aise me Aadesh ke gundo ke aane ka sawaal hi paida nahi hota.
Par, woh ye nahi jaanti ki Aadesh Damian se mila tha. Aur, Damian thehra ek system holder. Baaki... You do the math. It's a spoiler.

12. And last me killer pehli bar dikha chahe thoda bahut hi dikha lekin isse ye to pata pad gaya ki ye koi psychopath ha jise insaanon per experiment karna pasand ha or lagta kisi tarah ka formula tayaar kar raha ye jisse insanon ko ek weapon ki tarah banaya jaa sake or unhe strong ya power di ja sake tabhi to itne sare insanon ko mar dala isne or jaise ki last me dekha tha ki kucch per iska experiment safal raha ha shyad jo abhi bhi jinda ha jinhe lagta ha tayaar karke ye unhe attack ke liye bhejne wala ha lekin iske pas system ha ye to abhi dekhne ko nahi mila ya fir abhi iske system ko dikhaya nahi gaya ha ya fir ise bhi koi or control kar raha ha dekhte han lekin ek bat ha ki ye poora pagal ha agar iske pas system ha to iska intelligence itna uper chala gaya ha jisse ye pagal ho gaya ha ya fir iske pas koi skill ya card bhi ho sakta ha dekhte han ki veer ise harayega kaise or main bat to ye ha ki is tak pahunchega kaise

Yahi toh next update dikhayega. Jaisa ki maine kaha, agle update se arc peak par chala jayega. Aur, aane waale 4-5 update iss arc ke peak update honge. Fir dheere dheere wapas se mahaul light hoga aur post disembowler arc me hum kaafi kuchh cheezein dekhenge.... Before jumping to the Summit arc.

13. Veer ke pas mission ko complete karne ke liye sirf 2 din bache han yani ki 31 december mission ki last date ha or usi date per sab kuchh ha yarnia ka launch bhi us fin hi ha or sab dushman ghat lagaye bhi usi din bethe han kahin mission fail ho gaya to is khas din veer apne kisi ko kho na de ya fir trisha madam ko veer ka pata pad jaye to wo isi khas din kahin use jail me na dal de or koi kuchh na kar paye or yarnia, Hourglass Method hotel prestige, chef on wheels sab ek bar me hi khatam ya fir khin killer or veer ka amna samna isi din na ho jaye sawal bahut han lekin date ha sirf ek 31 december jo ane wale bhavishya ko tay karegi ki is din ke bad veer ke jivan me khushiyon ki roshni ati ha ya fir gam ka andhkar ek jara si chuk or khatm

Exactly! Woh ek din hi decide karega ki new year happy hone waala hai ya nahi.
Aur, ye mere liye sabse zyada tough hone waala hai. Itne logo ko ek saath mujhe screen par leke aana hai. Sab kuchh badi hi bareeki se ghatit karwana padega. Koi bhi choonk nahi honi chahiye. Ek bhi points miss nahi hone chahiye. Aur, ye saari responsibility mere sarr hai.

And now Werewolf sir its declared you are the

" GHOST OF THE X FORUM "

na to kabhi apke jaisa writer is forum per ayega or na hi aisi story agar isse bhi badhiya story ayegi to uske writer bhi aap khud hoge

Arey bhai. Dhanyavad bahut bahut.
Iss se badhiya stories bhi hai mere draft me. Lekin, ab unhe uthaane ke liye bahut himmat aur jigra chahiye. Maine jab ye kahani uthayi thi tab mein job ki taiyaari kar raha tha. Lekin, ab jeevan alag hai.

Upar se ghatate readers aur unki pratikriya. Ab shayad hi woh jazba bache mere andar...! Filhal toh nahi lagta ki abhi mein aur kuchh launch karunga. Kyunki, mein bhi kaafi thak chuka hu, mentally. Mujhe break chahiye hai ab. Lekin, jab tak ye khatam nahi hoti tab tak toh kalam chalti rahegi.

Thanks a lot for this massive review by the way. Reply karne me hi mujhe aadha ghanta lag gaya. Shayad zyada hi... Bas aise kuchh chand readers hi hai ju ki tarah jo aate hai, kahani padhte hai aur dil se review likh ke jaate hai. Inhi ko padh ke mera motivation badhta hai. Naya update likhne ka jo josh hai woh jaagta hai. Aur, isliye ye kahani ab tak chal rahi hai.

Aise hi saath bane rehne ka man. Kintu, agla update toh tabhi aayega jitni jaldi pichhle update ka Target poora hoga. Uss baare me mein kuchh nahi kar sakta. I can only hope that readers will do their work quickly. Anyways, keep supporting.

 

[Rihanna]

Werewolf I'll not say that I understand your feelings, because I'm a reader who tried to be writer but didn't even completed one single story.

Other side you are the best writer like a professional, out of league in many. Always give 100% and deliver the best. So all I can say that look the other side.

You have most views in the least no. of update, best response very few get on forum and some really good reviewers. Who wrote long paragraphs

SANJU ( V. R. ) Rihanna Suraj13796 Silent_killer Death Kiñg dododo Ajay chauhan and others.

So don't get demotivated or Death Kiñg 's 20k review will make you feel good . I'll talk to him.

Kya hua??? Ye inka fir natak shuru ho gya??? Kitni baar bola hai ki tiny tiny details par dhyan mat diya karo...

Itne acche acche reviewers h aapki story par jo baaki story writers ko naseeb bhi ni hote... Mujhe dekh lo...


Baat karwa lo bas...
Ruko abhi ek review fek k maarti hu ...

 

[Rihanna]

Aur main thode din gayab kya hoti hu aapki nayi dp lag jaati h...

 

[Rihanna]

Review kitthe hai?

Now... Have patience...

 

[Rihanna]

Let's start with the bickering first...

Kisne keh dia aapse ki aapko reviews kam milte h?? I haven't seen a single story in which there are so many reviewers... Writers tadapte h aisi feed k liye... I have seen them... Main yha almost sabhi stories k starting k 3-4 update padh chuki hu... Nd no story has this much charisma, fame nd popularity... To fir frustration kis baat k liye?

I can see why u are getting angry... Jo scene crimson arc ya china town arc me tha wesa kuch abhi ni ho pa rha h because there are less readers... Lekin ye sirf aapke saath ni h...

Genuinely readers ki quantity decrease hui h... I have seen this in other stories too... So stop taking tension for this simple matter... I don't think u realise that how strong ur feed is... Kisi bhi story ke koi se bhi random pages surf kar lo... Itna praise, itne long reviews kahi ni milenge aapko... So plz stop paying attention to these small details ... Just keep writing nd then see how people will come nd acknowledge ur hardwork...

Nd aapne khud kaha h ki next update se arc peak par jaega... So why worry? Just keep dropping bombs nd people will come... I'm sure of it.

Now let's start with the review ....

First of all ... So many scenes? Hats off for that... You finally listened to our complaints...

First scene was trisha's one... To use information mil gyi h mad system holder k appearance ko lekar... Pretty sure a sketch will be sent soon to all the police stations and then to the public... but as usual... Trisha madam busy kaha h? Slogan nd Aatish k case me... Ab technically dekhe to wo sahi jaa rhi h .. lekin present ke case ka kya? How can she ignore it? Use koi clue ni mil rha ya fir wo bas lazy ho rhi h??? At least use mirror gallery k baare me pata lag gya h...
See, this is the thing ... Mirror gallery ka update kab aaya tha? I think it was around 60th update something... Aur abhi chal rha h 191... U connected the freaking 191th update with the 60th one??? The way how easily u just made a way for Trisha to get to Veer... It's just amazing... Ab mujhe iske baad ka dekhna h... Iske baad se kaise wo Veer tak pahuchti h... Yaha tk to... It was quite understandable...

Second scene... Dhananjay... Ye pta ni kya kar rha h.. to isko Veer ka naam pata tha??? Lekin ye ni pata tha ki wo kaha par rehta h aur kya karta h right??? according to the narration... Veer ka naam ise iski maa se pata chal gaya tha... What was her name?? Vandna right? Dhananjay ki maa... So she told her about Veer and his family... Par use to pata hona chahiye tha na ki Veer kaha rehta hai?? Past me Bhanu Pratap aur Harikiran to manorath k ghar rishton k beech deewar kheechne to jaaya karte the... How come she never knew about Veer's house???

Sirf naam hi bata paayi wo... It's a little confusing... Wait! Veer is now living with Ragini... Is that why???

Shizzz.. I almost forgot ... Veer apne puraane ghar pe ni rehta... But Dhananjay ko Veer k puraane ghar par to jaana chahiye tha. Vandna ne use wo ni bataya kya? Clear this for me.

Third scene .. we got to see our pig Aadesh... Ye abhi tak nuisance bana hua h... Iska the end pta ni kab hoga... In my eyes he's just stoopid ... Aap kehte rho use ki wo sly fox h... He's a dumbo stoophid for me.. nd I'm not taking my statement back. No!

Fourth scene... One of the most wholesome scene of this update. The family nd their care for Veer... We got to see. Ek ek character ko ni chodha aapne... Sab ko dikhaya... A laud of applause for that ...
Chaahe wo tej ka sabke saamne veeru keh k blush karna ho ya fir bhumika ka absentmindedly Veer k baare me sochna... Chaahe wo Louis ka french accent ho ya fir Shweta-bhavna k beech ki khatti meethi bol jhok...

Nd lastly Ragini ka selfless love nd dedication for Veer aur Sonali-Suman ka unn sabki care karna because ultimately, by doing this... They are serving Veer only (indirectly)

Sab kuch bahut beautiful tha... Jis tarah se aapne event ki ek ek detail dikhayi h... Wo welcoming arch... Screen par simulation... Ye sab terms ko research karna... Nd then simple se scene ko itni depth me likhna... That's what sets u apart ...

Nd then we got to see our trio... Divya Veer nd Ava... Akhir Veer ne puch hi lia Suhana k b'day k baare me... So it's next month right? Aur next month hi wo badi company aane waali h... A big competition between sonia nd Kaera... I'm curious about what will Veer give to Suhana... Ek naam se dono Ava aur Divya jal bhun gyi h... Truth pata chalega to kya hoga? Nidhi bhi h... Bechari Ava... Now I feel bad for her... She accepted it. She account her love for Veer ... Par guilt se bhari hui h... Let's hope for the best. I have forgiven her. Hope Veer will forgive her too.

Nd how come you always come up with such beautiful names??? Hotel Hillcrest!! Startup k liye aapse naam nikalwaungi ..
Hadd to tab hui jab maine whatsapp chats dekhi... What the fuck was that? No... Like seriously... Kaise kia wo to chodh do ... Kyu kia wo bhi chodh do... We know u are damn dedicated... Par ye khayal kaise aaya ye karne ka wo batao ... Itna dimag kaise chal jaata h???

I got goosebumps literally... Tej ki dp thi waha pe ... The timing... The battery percentage... The whatsapp feature of replying a particular chat... Arohi's photo sent by her... Aisa lag rha tha sahi me wo chats hui thi... maine aaj tak aisa kisi bhi story me ni dekha h... The perfectionism nd the attempt to turn it into realism... It's just...

Uske baad food ministry ki meeting... Kaha se laate ho itna dimag? idhar logo ko epidemiologist ka matlab bhi ni pata hoga...

Ek simple writer isko sirf members ki meeting dikhaata jisme conversation bahut hi easy sa hota... But u?? Nutritionist, epidemiologist, policy analyst, panel head... Just the knowledge to have these terminology in ur mind... U are built different sir...

Nd isi k saath ye pata lag gya hume ki Veer ka hourglass method jo ab tak atka hua tha uska kya hua... So it's in progress...

Tamanna nd team k baare me kya kahu? phas gyi bechari... Ab Veer ne Mumbai bulaya toh h par kya wo sahi salamat aa bhi paegi? That's the question. You showed her anxiety very well.

Lastly the killer... Padhte hi goosebumps... Pure gore stuff... I'm just scared this time... Kyuki ye poora psycho h... Aur ye psycho log dimag se ni sochte .. inka jo mann karta h wo kar dete h... Without any hesitation...

Now I'm confused about one more thing... Damian ko 31st December k baare me kaise pata chala jo usne rajat ko jaake date bata di? Ye bhi clear karna please mujhe....

Baaki to padh k clear hota jaega... I have said this many times ... But u are the best writer on the forum right now... No one comes close. At least for now....

Jis tarah se aap scenes ki shuruat karte ho na... Wese koi ni kar paata... Maine dekha h hundreds of writers ko... Scene shifting k time wo 99% time yhi karte h ki... Idhar ye ho raha tha to udhar wo ho rha tha...

To aaiye chalte h dekhte h waha par kya ho rha h? Ya fir wo seedhe dialogue se start kar denge... Taaki readers ka dhyan dialogue par chala jaaye aur fir wo apni wahi simplistic se narration se scene aage kar denge... I see this as a lazy approach... Kuch ni soojha to dialogue se start kar dia... Kabhi kabhi it's good... But doing this majorly just shows the writer's inability.
This is where u shine... Aap scene ko aise start karte ho ki uski poori picture ek baar me mind me ban jaati h... Visual baith jata h nd then sab kuch easy ho jaata h... This is the difference between just a writer and a professional writer.... It feels like a novel to me. Ab bahut lamba ho gya...

Mere questions k answers Dena mat bhulna... Aur ye baat baat pe tension lena bhi chodh dijiye .. hum sab saath h... Main generally male lead stories nhi padhti.... As a female I tend to like female lead stories more. Kyuki tabhi mein connect kar paati hu... Which girl would like to see a male lead taking all the girls and having s#x???

I mean... Main to various males dekhna chahungi na merk female lead k saath par yha mujhe aisi koi story ni mili jo amazing mind blowing plot k saath female centric ho...
so, some stories are just Exception... Like for harry potter... How it draws u in... Same goes with this one...

It's a male centric story but the plot is just... Nd the way u portray some strong females... Ava, Bhavna, Kaera, Sonia, Suhana, Divya, etc. yes there are slaves too... Suman nd all... But compared to game of thrones... This is nothing lol...

Anyways... Keep writing sir... Lots of love waiting for the new new update eagerly... So curious about 31st December update... Be safe nd be healthy...

 

[Samar_Singh]

Kya hua??? Ye inka fir natak shuru ho gya??? Kitni baar bola hai ki tiny tiny details par dhyan mat diya karo...

Itne acche acche reviewers h aapki story par jo baaki story writers ko naseeb bhi ni hote... Mujhe dekh lo...


Baat karwa lo bas...
Ruko abhi ek review fek k maarti hu ...

Kuch nahi bas "nice update" wale comments par naraj ho jata hai bhai....

Zor se fek ke marna review ki hosh thikane aa jaye

 

[Samar_Singh]

Aur main thode din gayab kya hoti hu aapki nayi dp lag jaati h...

Mood swings hote hai writer ko....more than girls

 

[Samar_Singh]

Tamsoo kisi ne puchha

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