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Degree kar rakhi hai maine usmeNd how come you always come up with such beautiful names??? Hotel Hillcrest!! Startup k liye aapse naam nikalwaungi ..
I wanted it to look as real as possible. Aur bas isliye itni mehnat karta hu. Itna time deta hu. Just to make your experience as better as it can be ..Hadd to tab hui jab maine whatsapp chats dekhi... What the fuck was that? No... Like seriously... Kaise kia wo to chodh do ... Kyu kia wo bhi chodh do... We know u are damn dedicated... Par ye khayal kaise aaya ye karne ka wo batao ... Itna dimag kaise chal jaata h???
Goosebumps are just getting started. Iske baad se saare updates goosebumps denge. Trust me!!!I got goosebumps literally... Tej ki dp thi waha pe ... The timing... The battery percentage... The whatsapp feature of replying a particular chat... Arohi's photo sent by her... Aisa lag rha tha sahi me wo chats hui thi... maine aaj tak aisa kisi bhi story me ni dekha h... The perfectionism nd the attempt to turn it into realism... It's just...
Haha!Uske baad food ministry ki meeting... Kaha se laate ho itna dimag? idhar logo ko epidemiologist ka matlab bhi ni pata hoga...
Thanks a lot. Readers like you only pay attention to such details. Adhiktar readers inn sab intricate details par dhyan hi nahi dete. I do so much research just for an update to make it as perfect as it can be. Thanks for pointing it out. Now I know someone actually do see my hardwork.Ek simple writer isko sirf members ki meeting dikhaata jisme conversation bahut hi easy sa hota... But u?? Nutritionist, epidemiologist, policy analyst, panel head... Just the knowledge to have these terminology in ur mind... U are built different sir...
Yes. It's in progress.Nd isi k saath ye pata lag gya hume ki Veer ka hourglass method jo ab tak atka hua tha uska kya hua... So it's in progress..
She has reached Mumbai. Iske baad ka hum aage dekhenge. She's safe for now atleast.Tamanna nd team k baare me kya kahu? phas gyi bechari... Ab Veer ne Mumbai bulaya toh h par kya wo sahi salamat aa bhi paegi? That's the question. You showed her anxiety very well.
That's the real horrorLastly the killer... Padhte hi goosebumps... Pure gore stuff... I'm just scared this time... Kyuki ye poora psycho h... Aur ye psycho log dimag se ni sochte .. inka jo mann karta h wo kar dete h... Without any hesitation...
Did you forget one thing? Remember! He's a system holder.Now I'm confused about one more thing... Damian ko 31st December k baare me kaise pata chala jo usne rajat ko jaake date bata di? Ye bhi clear karna please mujhe....
Bas kar ri... Rulayegi kya???Baaki to padh k clear hota jaega... I have said this many times ... But u are the best writer on the forum right now... No one comes close. At least for now....
Ye toh mein bhi karta hu kabhi kabhiJis tarah se aap scenes ki shuruat karte ho na... Wese koi ni kar paata... Maine dekha h hundreds of writers ko... Scene shifting k time wo 99% time yhi karte h ki... Idhar ye ho raha tha to udhar wo ho rha tha...
Arey baap re... Yeh toh dhoti khol rahi haiTo aaiye chalte h dekhte h waha par kya ho rha h? Ya fir wo seedhe dialogue se start kar denge... Taaki readers ka dhyan dialogue par chala jaaye aur fir wo apni wahi simplistic se narration se scene aage kar denge... I see this as a lazy approach... Kuch ni soojha to dialogue se start kar dia... Kabhi kabhi it's good... But doing this majorly just shows the writer's inability.
Thanks a lot. Lagta hai ab zyada dhyan rakhna padega inn sab cheezon ka.This is where u shine... Aap scene ko aise start karte ho ki uski poori picture ek baar me mind me ban jaati h... Visual baith jata h nd then sab kuch easy ho jaata h... This is the difference between just a writer and a professional writer.... It feels like a novel to me. Ab bahut lamba ho gya...
Already answers de diye hai maine.Mere questions k answers Dena mat bhulna... Aur ye baat baat pe tension lena bhi chodh dijiye .. hum sab saath h... Main generally male lead stories nhi padhti.... As a female I tend to like female lead stories more. Kyuki tabhi mein connect kar paati hu... Which girl would like to see a male lead taking all the girls and having s#x???
Ju ne bhi Samar_Singh ki tarah apni kink bata di akhirkar...I mean... Main to various males dekhna chahungi na merk female lead k saath par yha mujhe aisi koi story ni mili jo amazing mind blowing plot k saath female centric ho...
so, some stories are just Exception... Like for harry potter... How it draws u in... Same goes with this one...
Shukriya.It's a male centric story but the plot is just... Nd the way u portray some strong females... Ava, Bhavna, Kaera, Sonia, Suhana, Divya, etc. yes there are slaves too... Suman nd all... But compared to game of thrones... This is nothing lol...
Thank you so much for this lovely review. I had to break it into two comments to reply to this. Sorry for that... But reviews like these serves as my energy bar to keep me motivated and away from exhaustion. So, keep supporting just like this.Anyways... Keep writing sir... Lots of love waiting for the new new update eagerly... So curious about 31st December update... Be safe nd be healthy...
Mein toh pehle din se keh raha tha... Meri sunta kaun hai... Hmph...Werewolf this update has given a lot of anxiety to everyone.... Hope chize aur naa bigde.
Juhi ko kuch bhi nhi hona chahiye... Agar juhi ko kuch hua to golia chal jaengi... Main bta rhi hu.... Werewolf mee to
Kya kya planning kar rahe ho samar bro kuch din pehle hi to aap nidhi ki vo vali scene demand kar rahe the aur ab werewolf ke sath ho gye .lag raha hai premium membership mein hai aapJuhi ko kuch nahi hoga.
Werewolf Nidhi ko niptane ka vichar bana chuka hai.
Uske baad Juhi aur Dhruv ko legally adopt kar lega.
Nidhi mad doctor ke kabze me thodi h... Pihu nd juhi ki fikr h... Nidhi k paas to Trisha h abhi...me too ,,Asla humare paas bhi hai.par sirf juhi hi nahi nidhi ko bhi kuch nahi hona chahiye badle mein niharika sarika trisha insabko utha lo