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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

    Votes: 1,326 83.1%
  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 27 1.7%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 207 13.0%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 35 2.2%

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Werewolf

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Nd how come you always come up with such beautiful names??? Hotel Hillcrest!! Startup k liye aapse naam nikalwaungi .. :bat:
Degree kar rakhi hai maine usme :pimp:
Naye startup naam ke liye rokda khiska dena idhar :pimp:
Hadd to tab hui jab maine whatsapp chats dekhi... 🙂 What the fuck was that? No... Like seriously... Kaise kia wo to chodh do ... Kyu kia wo bhi chodh do... We know u are damn dedicated... Par ye khayal kaise aaya ye karne ka wo batao ... Itna dimag kaise chal jaata h??? 🙂
I wanted it to look as real as possible. Aur bas isliye itni mehnat karta hu. Itna time deta hu. Just to make your experience as better as it can be .. :approve:
I got goosebumps literally... Tej ki dp thi waha pe ... The timing... The battery percentage... The whatsapp feature of replying a particular chat... Arohi's photo sent by her... Aisa lag rha tha sahi me wo chats hui thi... maine aaj tak aisa kisi bhi story me ni dekha h... The perfectionism nd the attempt to turn it into realism... It's just... :bow: :bow: :bow:
Goosebumps are just getting started. Iske baad se saare updates goosebumps denge. Trust me!!! :approve:
Uske baad food ministry ki meeting... Kaha se laate ho itna dimag? :faint: idhar logo ko epidemiologist ka matlab bhi ni pata hoga...
Haha! :laugh:
I research a lot before writing any update.
Ek simple writer isko sirf members ki meeting dikhaata jisme conversation bahut hi easy sa hota... But u?? Nutritionist, epidemiologist, policy analyst, panel head... Just the knowledge to have these terminology in ur mind... 🥶 U are built different sir...
Thanks a lot. Readers like you only pay attention to such details. Adhiktar readers inn sab intricate details par dhyan hi nahi dete. I do so much research just for an update to make it as perfect as it can be. Thanks for pointing it out. Now I know someone actually do see my hardwork.
Nd isi k saath ye pata lag gya hume ki Veer ka hourglass method jo ab tak atka hua tha uska kya hua... So it's in progress..
Yes. It's in progress.
Tamanna nd team k baare me kya kahu? :snow: phas gyi bechari... Ab Veer ne Mumbai bulaya toh h par kya wo sahi salamat aa bhi paegi? That's the question. You showed her anxiety very well. :claps:
She has reached Mumbai. Iske baad ka hum aage dekhenge. She's safe for now atleast.
Lastly the killer... Padhte hi goosebumps... Pure gore stuff... 🥶 I'm just scared this time... Kyuki ye poora psycho h... Aur ye psycho log dimag se ni sochte .. inka jo mann karta h wo kar dete h... Without any hesitation... 🥶
That's the real horror :D
You just don't know what he might do. :D
He's totally unpredictable.
Now I'm confused about one more thing... Damian ko 31st December k baare me kaise pata chala jo usne rajat ko jaake date bata di? Ye bhi clear karna please mujhe.... 🤔
Did you forget one thing? :D Remember! He's a system holder. :hint:
Baaki to padh k clear hota jaega... I have said this many times ... But u are the best writer on the forum right now... No one comes close. At least for now....
Bas kar ri... Rulayegi kya??? :Pepecry:
Jis tarah se aap scenes ki shuruat karte ho na... Wese koi ni kar paata... Maine dekha h hundreds of writers ko... Scene shifting k time wo 99% time yhi karte h ki... Idhar ye ho raha tha to udhar wo ho rha tha...
Ye toh mein bhi karta hu kabhi kabhi :laughing:
To aaiye chalte h dekhte h waha par kya ho rha h? Ya fir wo seedhe dialogue se start kar denge... Taaki readers ka dhyan dialogue par chala jaaye aur fir wo apni wahi simplistic se narration se scene aage kar denge... I see this as a lazy approach... Kuch ni soojha to dialogue se start kar dia... Kabhi kabhi it's good... But doing this majorly just shows the writer's inability.
Arey baap re... Yeh toh dhoti khol rahi hai :runaway:
This is where u shine... Aap scene ko aise start karte ho ki uski poori picture ek baar me mind me ban jaati h... Visual baith jata h nd then sab kuch easy ho jaata h... This is the difference between just a writer and a professional writer.... It feels like a novel to me. Ab bahut lamba ho gya...
Thanks a lot. Lagta hai ab zyada dhyan rakhna padega inn sab cheezon ka. :?:
Mere questions k answers Dena mat bhulna... Aur ye baat baat pe tension lena bhi chodh dijiye .. hum sab saath h... Main generally male lead stories nhi padhti.... As a female I tend to like female lead stories more. Kyuki tabhi mein connect kar paati hu... Which girl would like to see a male lead taking all the girls and having s#x??? 🙂
Already answers de diye hai maine. :D
Baaki sawaalo ke jawaab updates se hi mil jayenge aage. :declare:

Oh! Thanks! Yes, this is male centric story. Kyunki, mein khud bhi male hu toh protagonist male dikhaane me zyada easy rehta hai. Aage kabhi ek female centred protagonist waali story zaroor likhunga. :thumbup:
I mean... Main to various males dekhna chahungi na merk female lead k saath 🫣 par yha mujhe aisi koi story ni mili jo amazing mind blowing plot k saath female centric ho...
so, some stories are just Exception... Like for harry potter... How it draws u in... Same goes with this one...
Ju ne bhi Samar_Singh ki tarah apni kink bata di akhirkar... :heh:
It's a male centric story but the plot is just... 🥶🥶🥶 Nd the way u portray some strong females... Ava, Bhavna, Kaera, Sonia, Suhana, Divya, etc. yes there are slaves too... Suman nd all... But compared to game of thrones... This is nothing lol... 😆😆
Shukriya. :thank_you:

Anyways... Keep writing sir... Lots of love ❤️❤️ waiting for the new new update eagerly... So curious about 31st December update... Be safe nd be healthy... ❤️
Thank you so much for this lovely review. I had to break it into two comments to reply to this. Sorry for that... But reviews like these serves as my energy bar to keep me motivated and away from exhaustion. So, keep supporting just like this. :five:

Aur naye revo ka intezar hai. :waiting:
 

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Kya hi jabardast and shandar update diya hai ekdum superb update
To Veer ke mission a time katam hone me bas ab kuch ghante hi bache hai lekin ab tak usko katil ke baare me kuch kaas jyada pata nahi chala hai lekin ab jab us doctor ne juhi or pihu ko kidnap kar liya hai to Veer ko unko bachane jrur Jana padega
Or idhar uske yarnia ke launch event par Veer ki puri family apna apna kaam karne me lage huye hai or Veer ke aane ka intezar kar rahe hai lekin vo sab hotel ke bahar mandra rahe katro se anjaan hai
Dekte hai kya Veer juhi ko bachakar launch event me pahuch kar apni family ko bacha payega
 

Samar_Singh

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Juhi ko kuch bhi nhi hona chahiye... Agar juhi ko kuch hua to golia chal jaengi... Main bta rhi hu.... Werewolf :angry++: :mad2: :bat:
Juhi ko kuch nahi hoga.
Werewolf Nidhi ko niptane ka vichar bana chuka hai.
Uske baad Juhi aur Dhruv ko legally adopt kar lega.
 

Gaurav1969

Nobody dies as Virgin. .... Life fucks us all.
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me too ,,Asla humare paas bhi hai.par sirf juhi hi nahi nidhi ko bhi kuch nahi hona chahiye badle mein niharika sarika trisha insabko utha lo
Juhi ko kuch bhi nhi hona chahiye... Agar juhi ko kuch hua to golia chal jaengi... Main bta rhi hu.... Werewolf :angry++: :mad2: :bat:mee to
 
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Gaurav1969

Nobody dies as Virgin. .... Life fucks us all.
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Juhi ko kuch nahi hoga.
Werewolf Nidhi ko niptane ka vichar bana chuka hai.
Uske baad Juhi aur Dhruv ko legally adopt kar lega.
Kya kya planning kar rahe ho samar bro kuch din pehle hi to aap nidhi ki vo vali scene demand kar rahe the aur ab werewolf ke sath ho gye .lag raha hai premium membership mein hai aap😁
 

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me too ,,Asla humare paas bhi hai.par sirf juhi hi nahi nidhi ko bhi kuch nahi hona chahiye badle mein niharika sarika trisha insabko utha lo
Nidhi mad doctor ke kabze me thodi h... Pihu nd juhi ki fikr h... Nidhi k paas to Trisha h abhi... :eyes2:
 
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