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Ab ye mein abhi kaise bata sakta hu?Bro Update complete honay main taqriban kitna time lagega?
No problem bro i will be waiting.Ab ye mein abhi kaise bata sakta hu?
Dhanyavad.Fantastic brother apne ek dam se itna jayada suspension dal diya next update main to maza aa jaye ga
Thanks a lot. Action aa raha hai toh maja aa raha hai. Warna writing toh meri wahi hai.bhai last 3 updates ke baad aaj finally maaza aaya ... badi update ka nahi but intresting writing ka .... aj lag raha apna purana wolfy bhai is back .... with his banging skills .... amezing update ....
Tab se keh toh raha tha ki ju log prepared nahi ho. Halke me le rahe the pehle.Werewolf broooooo....what have you done here juhi literally your thoughts for loved ones ends on juhi .i can't ever imagined of juhi being gone from this epic story she resides in my heart .
Ise kehte hai asli cliffhanger.till now veer has no idea of anything about the situations.you made us so eagre for the next update .i can only be waiting for what will happen in the very next.
That's anxiety for you... This arc gives a lot of anxiety. But it's only limited to a few updates.update was too good and yumm..but the last thing when that creepy piece of shit talks with juhi and pihu ,it made me shivering ,literally got goosebumps .
Target toh hui gawa complete. Ab update complete hona baaki hai. :appronow its on the readers how fast they can complete the target ,readers bhailog jaldi se complete karna isbaar ,bechaini kuch jyada hi badh gayi hai is update ke baad.
Dhanyavad bhai.Bhai next level update
Jitna likhu utna Kamm h
But is update me next update ke kaffi hints h
And still chije kesi ho pae gi ye nhi pta
Woh toh pehle hi aa chuka tha Mumbai. Divya ke paas abhi aaya hai.Upr se ye nick chutiya isko bhi abhi hi Ana tha kya?
Aur uske pehle hi agar mad scientist ne Juhi ka the end kar diya toh???And moreover Veer ka mission uske l lge h
But villan ne khud juhi ko utha kr
Uska kaam asan kr dia h
Ab dekhna ye hoga
Ki Veer kese juhi ko bache ga
Kese apna mission pura kre ga
And kese Yarina ka lunch success kr pae ga
Mission juhi ko bachana nahi hai. Murderer ko pakadna hai. Remember.Launch me to vo phele se hi late h
But ab aur late hoga
Agr late na Hua to baki dono chije hath se jae gi
And juhi ki vo warning se hi kuch glt hoga ye hint veer ko Milla hi h
Thanks a lot. Kaam chal raha hai agle update par.Kul Mila kr kya likha h bhai
Next update me full action hoga
Mzza aye ga bc
Hopefully jitna wait is update ka kia h utna next ka na krne pde
Keep going bro
Thanks man.What a storie man too good
Awesome update
Superb update! Absolutely exciting writing
Dhanyavad bhai. Keep supporting.Oooooo my god . Kia update tha bro...
Aur kitny suspense pe khatam kar dia ..
Bhaio jaldi jaldi 220 ka mark complete karo.. is shandar update ke bad wait nahi hona .
Usme mere ko santushti na milegiIss update ke bad to lagta hai fake ids bana kar like karna parna hai...
Kia bataon bhai abhi tak goosebumps hain
Dobara padhne kaNice Update Dear but itna late K Pichhly episode Ka end Kiya Tha w0 bhi bh0ol gaye
Thanks man. I appreciate it. I'm glad you liked it.Today you have outnumbered our suggestions, a masterpiece update.
Encircled each and everyone with details
10/10.
Now the heart is racing for the safety of the babies and hope that "Veer" will be right on the target.
It won't take long to finish the job.
Tumhi log bol rahe the Nidhi khatre me hai. Mere draft me toh Juhi hi khatre me thi. Now you know why Nidhi's character will undergo into the character development. And now you know... Why I kept telling that Disembowler arc is for Nidhi.Maine kaha tha ki Nidhi khatre me hai.... Nidhi khatre me hai to tumne Juhi utha li.
Start of a spine-chilling event....
Long review soon......
Ho sakta hai...Fantastic update bhai
Par bhai kuch aisa karo ki idher like target complete aur dusri taraf update ajaye please
Thanks.Super update bro waiting for next is situation me aage kya hoga wo h soch soch ke excitement bd rhi h
Motivation kaun layega??? Target complete dekh ke jo motivation jaagta hai mera woh kaun layega???Woh keh raha hai ki target pura hone ke baad likhna start karoge uske bajay pehle hi likhna start kar do.
Target to kuch din me pura ho hi jayega.
Update dedena target complete hone ke baad.
Sab pata chalega ki kaun log kaun hai aur kis liye hai aur kya karne waale hai. Sab next update me hai.Tabaahi macha hai hai yarrr
Har jagaha afra tafri machi hui hai...
Ek taraf to family waale YARNIA k Launch k liye betaab hain or sar tod mehnat kar rahe hain...
To bhai saahab ab ek aadmi HOTEL PRESTIGE pr nazar rakh raha hai or uske paas jo chiz hai, lagta to hai k SNIPER Gun hi hai...
Or uske ilaawa bhi kaafi log hain jo on ground hotel ki nigraani kar rahe hain...
Jo Veer k gaon waale aadmi k honge...
Pr woh Sniper waala or ye sab alag alag hain... Us bnde k expression's ya baaton se to aisa hi laga hai...
Intended nahi thi. Woh dikhaani hi thi. Suhana ko pata toh chalna chahiye ki Veer ke saath waha kya hua tha. Do purpose ke liye tha wo scene.Sonia or Suhana ki convo kaafi intended ho gyiii... Par chalta hai ab itna masaala to hona hi chaahiye naa...
Sonia apne PoV se sahi hai. Woh Veer ko bas as a normal person hi samajhti hai. Shuruwat me nazdeekiya badh rahi thi lekin, jaise jaise dono ka milna julna kam hua, Veer uske liye zyada importance nahi rakh paaya. Jo ki completely normal hai. I mean... Sonia ka aim hai Nexacom ko topple karna. Basically, Kaera ko peechhe chhorna. Toh aise me Veer uske liye zyada kuchh provide hi nahi kar paaya. She's focused in her career. Isme ab uski bhi galti nahi hai. Veer ke liye woh deal chhor ke kaise jaa sakti thi? I mean... Koi bhi ambitious lady wahi karegi jo Sonia ne kiya. It's as simple as that.Or Sonia ko bhi uski ghalti ka ehsaas hona hi chaahiye.... Atleast usko pata to hona chaahiye k usne ghalti ki hai or yehi kaam Suhana ne kar diya hai pr kahin na kahin woh khudko bhi phansaa gyii hai...
Sonia ko shaq jo ho gaya hai us pr...
Dekhenge hum... Tamanna safe hai for now.Or Tamanna bhi bach k waapas aa gyii hai pr ab bhi Adesh ko sabak sikhaana baaki hai pr uske liye to apne veer ko baaki sab chizon se free hona hoga... Pr maybe usne koi intezaam kar rakha hoga...
Yes!!! Aayenge wo bhi... Abhi toh Pandemonium (1) hi padha hai. Isliye toh do parts me divided hai. Pandemonium (2) bahut si cheezon ko wrap up kar dega. Sab kuchh! Almost.Is update m Karan or Kaera ka koi scene nahi dikha pr itna to pata chala k Karan aane waala to shayad Kaera bhi aayegi hi...
Ab scene naa dikhna bhi obvious hi tha bcz already itna sab kuch chal raha hai k har ek chiz nhi dikhayii jaa sakti...
Ek system holder hai woh. No normal human can stop him.Baaki end m Juhi or Pihu ko woh Doctor Madd utha k le gaya...woh bohot ghalat huwa...
Pranjal or Madhuri ne try kiya pr unke basss ka kahan us Doctor ko rokna...usne wk hi laat maar k pranjal ki haalat bigaad di...
Nidhi or Trisha ka pareshaan hona to banta hai aakhir MAA jo hain woh...
Wahi toh dikhaya jayega agle bhaag me.Ab ek taraf Veer tension m hai k Mission poora karne ka time khatam hone m kuch hi ghante baaki hain or uske paas koi ek bhi clue Nahi laga hai or saath hi ab usse YARNIA k Launch m bhi jaana hai...
Pr jab Veer ko pata chale ga k Uski Pyaari Juhi or uski new friend Pihu ko woh Doctor uthaa kr le gaya hai yo pata nhi uska kya haal hoga...
Kuchh bhi ho sakta hai man. Red flag sab pe mandra raha hai.Jahan ek taraf Trisha ek tarhaan se Veer ko hi pakadne k chakkar m hai to wahin ab Veer hi ek hai jo uski beti ko bachaa sakta hai or woh aisa kar bhi le ga pr pata Nahi iske liye woh kya qeemat chukaaye ga...
We'll see about that...!!!Or Shayad iske baad Trisha bhi Veer ko kisi had tak support karne lag jaaye or usko case se bhi bachaaye...
Or Shayad Pranjal ki ye wk koshish jo usne Juhi or Pihu k liye ki hai... Uske chalte uski or Veer ki kadwaahat kam ho sake...
Only a guess...
We'll see!!! Event?? Event me pahuchega ya nahi, ye toh sthitiya batayengi. Abhi Nik bhi toh pahuch chuka hai waha uske paas.Ab dekhte hain k Kya hota hai agle part m... Jab Veer nikle ga Juhi or Pihu ko bachaane + us Doc ko pakadne k iye...
Or kya woh sab kuch thk kar paate ga or kya iske baad woh timely LAUNCH Event m pohonch paaye ga...
So can we expect next update between 25& 26 jan ?Word count update
3.9k words have been completed so far. Aaj raat me bhi baithunga likhne. Hopefully, ek scene aur taiyaar kar lunga aaj. Next update bhi around 10k words ka hi rahega. The peak is just starting... As, I've said before, you guys are not ready for what's about to come.
Hn or ju jo ghaat lagaye baithe hoo ??Werewolf कुछ नहीं दे रहा। बस तम लोग बता रहे हो की कौन किसके लिए दांत पैने किए बैठा है।
Miss Tejal Singh wants ur locationThen give me Veer...
Yeeeeeee...abbi maja ayegaa na bidoooWord count update
3.9k words have been completed so far. Aaj raat me bhi baithunga likhne. Hopefully, ek scene aur taiyaar kar lunga aaj. Next update bhi around 10k words ka hi rahega. The peak is just starting... As, I've said before, you guys are not ready for what's about to come.