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I'm the lord of cliffhangers.Fantastic update once again......
First time it made me so much eager for next update.....like what hell is gonna happen...
You are allowed to imagine.'Pandemonium' definitely it justifies the name of update..... Maybe I can imagine or maybe not, about what's coming ahead. But one thing is sure it's pure Chaos.
Woh baahar hi hai. Toh bhala use kaise pata chalega? Bechare ko bataane waala bhi koi nahi. Sab kuchh peeth peechhe ho raha.Mission deadline me kuch hi ghante bache hai aur abhi tak Veer jyadatar baaton ko lekar unaware hai.
Yahi toh troublesome part hai.Chize simultaneously aur pre planned ho rahi hai..... Prestige me launch party ke liye sab wait kar rahe hai, lekin ab lagta nahi Veer wahan pahuch bhi payega. Dusri taraf Prestige ke charo taraf giddh najar lagaye bethe hai.
We'll see in the next update.Wo Shawl wala aadmi definitely Rajat hai, use Damian ne kya sikha ke bheja hai kuch nahi pata.
We'll see how he'll handle all these things. Whether he'll be able to do something or not??? Aadesh is not a threat for now.To wahi terrace par Dexter Sniper lagaye betha hai.
Aur Dhanjay ke aadmi charo taraf faile hue hai, inn sab se Veer ko koi khatara nahi lekin Veer ki family khatre me pad sakti hai.
Veer sirf Aadesh ke bare me aware hai, uske liye usne aadmi bhi laga rahke honge lekin bakiyo ki shayad koi khabar Veer ko nahi hai.
Well, abhi Veer ko ye bhi nahi pata ki Juhi gaayab ho chuki hai. He'll have to deal with the Nik first (If he becomes a threat.)Aur ab uska pura dhyan sirf Mental Doctor par hoga, ki kaise Juhi aur Pihu ko usse bachaye. Jiski takat ka koi idea Veer ko nahi hai.
There's no way a normal human can even withstand a kick from a system holder, right?I can see Pranjal ka character kis disha me badh raha hai, halaki Doctor ke ek punch me woh hospital pahuch gaya lekin ye ghatna uske kirdar me ek positive aspect hi add karega.
It's Ava not Eva!Divya aur Eva pehle hi Suhana ko lekar jealous aur insecure thi, ab Nidhi ka naam bhi usme add ho gaya hai.
Well, indeed!!!The way Veer was looking into the call to Juhi and Juhi watching Veer with tilted head.That was cute
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Kisi ko hi nahi pata tha.Juhi ke through ek universal hint Veer ko mila ki kuch bahut bura ho sakta hai, lekin use kya pata tha ki woh apne hi bare me bata rahi thi.
Yesss!!!! But cheezein bahut pechida hai man.As I said mirror gallary ke through jald hi Veer ka naam bhi samne aa jayega, aur Veer bhi Trisha ki radar me aa chuka hai.
Things are different now....agar Trisha ki beti ko koi is waqt bacha sakta hai to sirf Veer.
Anything can happen. Anything!!! Kahani ko kisi bhi mod pe moda jaa sakta hai iss waqt. Har reader apne hisaab se imagine kar rahe honge. But let's see... Kiski imagination close to mine nikalti hai.Lekin sawal ye hai ki Veer Juhi, Pihu ko bacha bhi leta hai to ye baat sabko pata chalegi yaa nahi. Uss situation me to Trisha definitely ek soft corner rakhegi Veer ke liye, yaa Veer ke is pure rescue mission me chize aur bigad jayengi
Maine pehle bhi kaha tha ki Sonia ab limelight me aana shuru karegi. It has begun. We'll get to see more Sonia scenes in the future. Kyuki post Disembowler arc me uska kaafi role hai. Nidhi and Sonia are in the phase of development in this arc. And, in parallel... I'll set the tone for Veer's defined relationship with some of the females which will make things easier for forging future relationships.After long time.... We see a detailed scene aur Sonia warna to background character si lag rahi thi kafi time se.
Poor Suhana she s completely fell in the love of Veer, kya halat ho gayi hai bechari ki. Ab to apne emotions par bilkul kaabu nahi raha uska, khair isi bahane thoda reality check diya usne Sonia ko.
Veer was hurt. He did so much for Sonia indirectly. Aatish Sonia ke peechhe hi toh tha. Sonia ke through woh Kaera tak pahuchana chaahta tha. And, Suhana jaise taise use protect karti aa rahi thi. Veer ne hi toh woh threat dur kiya tha.But lagta hai jyda asar hua nahi. Kaera se competition ke chakkar me jo khud hasil kar sakti hai use bhi kho degi. Baad me Veer ko Kaera ke sath dekhkar aur pareshan hogi.The way Veer talked with her on phone, I liked that.....
Yup!!! But that's not the only worse thing that can happen...Yarnia launch me pahuchna to abhi possible nahi lag raha lekin ye baat uske naye brand image par adverse effect dalegi. Bahut se connection jo ban sakte the vo reh jayenge aur log Veer ko ek waqt ki kadar na karne wala insan dekhenge.
I'll wrap up this whole segment in the next update. Pretty much kaafi kuchh dikha diya jayega. Aane waale updates me meri bahut mehnat lagne waali hai. Because I haven't prepared any sort of system for the murderer. You can easily run out of ideas you know. And, I must make him unique just like Jaw Long. That part will take my time... A lot of time. I'll have to brainstorm the cards, his abilities and then draw and edit those for his system.Waise bhi business world me paise se jyada keemti bas samay hota hai.
Let's see Veer kaise karega sab kuch.....
Abhi to first and the most important thing Juhi ko bachana hi hone wala hai, lekin kahi uske chakkar me Prestige me koi kaand na ho jaye. Dhananjay, Dexter, aur Rajat wahan hai.
Although Juhi and Dhruv... Both are equally important to her.. but Juhi holds a special place in her heart. And, we all know the reason. She's been with her when there was no one. She brought joy in her life. So obviously... If anything happens to Juhi. Nidhi might never recover from that impact.Feeling sad for Nidhi.....(Just a beautiful ordinary woman and mother) Iski alag jaan jayegi agar Juhi ki kuch hua.
Thanks a lot for the revo.That's why update name is 'Pandemonium'
Let's see how worse things can go in next update.
Again mind blowing fantastic update....
Long wait totally worth it....
Eagerly waiting for next update.....
Thanks for amazing story....
Rajat ko kaha se marwa du bhai???Brooo broooo broooooooo wthaaatt isss thiiss no please bro please juhi and pihu nai baki aap rajat ko marwa do ya ki si or ko goli lagwa do yaar un bacchiyo ne kya bigada hai yaar veer ke kya tumne kam laude lagaye hai is update main
Kahani toh usi hisaab se jayegi bhai jo soch rakha hai.Chaaho to agle update main or laga dena but bro please juhi or pihu nai broo please ye request aapko manni hi padegi yaar haal hi main maine marco movie dekhi hai or usme baccho ka sath jo villain karta hai us wajah se mainwo movi e sirf ek baar dekh kehi delete kardi because it's too horrible brother please ab aisa kuch yaha padhne ki himmat nahi hai meri
Brijesh Karunesh ko kaun uthwata hai man??? Fir ye anxiety kaise hoti??? Bola toh tha maine ki ye arc anxiety dega.Yaar tumhe juhi or pihu hi mili thi fasane keliye yaar koi or admi ko uthva lete brijesh ya karunesh ko uthva le te agar ye bhi kam ho to kishor aadrsh ko uthwa lete aapko yaar ye dono phool si bacchiya hi mili thi bro please hume is story main aage indono bacchiyo ko dekhna hai agar inhe kuch huva to main is story se jane keliye majboor ho jaunga jo ki shayad mujhse hoga bhi nahi
Aane waale updates hi batayenge ki kya hota hai man.Aap samjh rahe hona wolfi yaar wo taste chala jata hai yaar kisi or carecter ko aise kidnep karwa lete yaar juhi or pihu hi kyu bro please please indono ko kuch na ho please
Thanks a lot btw.Baki superb dhamake daar update thaa y
Mere readers bhailog please mere yaaro jaldi like target ko pura karo ab raha nahi ja raha hai come on faster bhailog please complete the targetttttt
Thanks a lot manOmg! I knew this guy would cook, and boy was I right. Werewolf - take a bow!
What level of detail! I think, I speak for all fans when I say this - you have out done yourself In terms of story writing!
It's total chaos.Amazing work! The chapter is rightly titled - ‘Pandemonium’. Veer’s new year is certainly not gonna come without some challenges.
that's the most interesting part. He's currently facing Nik. Will he deal with Nik first??? Or will go the event? Will he be able to prevent any Mishap??? Or he'll roam around just like Nidhi to search for juhi?? Who will inform him? These questions will be answered in the next update.It’s the year end - and kind of a finale situation right? Veer has this big launch planned. He is planning to move up in the world - and he has his family supporting him throughout. But in a way - he is painting a target on his back and those associated with him. It’s easy sometimes to be the lone wolf, but there is strength in support from family. In a long time - it looks like no decision Veer can make here will be easy enough. He may have to trade between family and fame? There are hyenas surrounding his event on one side - Nidhi’s husband, a sniper and those goons. One the other side - this serial killer system holder who has got Juhi and Pihu. It’d be interesting to see how Veer navigates next this scenario!!
I was waiting for the arc to get here... And, like you guys I'm excited as well.Shreya’s grp is back, Sonia -Suhaana discourse and Nik’s entry - all this is definitely Pandemonium.on story writing and buildup.
I'm really happy with how readers this time did their job. They gave me more than I asked for... Hope this will continue for the upcoming updates as well. Thanks and keep supporting as usual.So so excited to see what comes next. Obviously - target is higher for this chapter, but I think it will be achieved soon. Thank you for thinking this amazing chapter.
Eagerly awaiting next update![]()
Oiled sex me koi maza na aata...Also my favourite female kass veer or suman ke bich oiled passionate sex ho and veer ko suman ka doodh pina aai Haye ab nahi bola jayega mujhse
Kass bhavna suman or veer ka threesome hojaye ufff soch kehi alag maza aaraha hai
Sabki apni apni imagination hai. Ju ko kya dikkat hai?Bhawna! Kya ghatiya soch hai re teri?
Iska matlab ki next update me Juhi ki exact location Veer ko nahi pata lagegi. Means next update ke last me yaa 194 me hi Veer Juhi tak pahuch payega.I'll wrap up this whole segment in the next update. Pretty much kaafi kuchh dikha diya jayega. Aane waale updates me meri bahut mehnat lagne waali hai. Because I haven't prepared any sort of system for the murderer. You can easily run out of ideas you know. And, I must make him unique just like Jaw Long. That part will take my time... A lot of time. I'll have to brainstorm the cards, his abilities and then draw and edit those for his system.Not to mention I'll have to design his cards too. So, yeah... Update 194 may take some time to show up. You know the reasons now.
Bas ho gaya mera......Nidhi might never recover from that impact.![]()
Koi dikkat nahi....bas phir mere ko bhi gande gande idea aate.Sabki apni apni imagination hai. Ju ko kya dikkat hai?![]()
Werewolf Sir sath de de to sb neutral ho jayngeOr Juhi ka Mamu alag se pele ga![]()