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Maza toh raat me hi aata hai bhai padhne kaMind blowing update
Acha hua raat ko nahi padha nahi toh nind Hi nahi aati
Yes. Koi ghar ka vyakti...Update aise lagta hai jese mere samne koi series chal rahi ho so bhi bina imagine kiye
Juhi aur pihu toh bach gaye
par disembowler bhi bach gaya ye mission fail hua aur penalty ke roop mein someone love's death matlab jo bhi marega wo veer ke najdeek hoga
Sumitra bhi Veer ki chaheeti hi hai bhai.Toh kon hai kya manorath hai par veer itna jyada kya pyaar unse karta hai
Sumitra or vivek ka toh chance Hi nhi hai matlab love ones likha hai toh vivek bhi gaya sumitra bhi shayad nhi hai uss category mein
Dhanyavad!Toh kya ragini gayi ya fir koi aur ya shweta agar inke alawa kon ho sakta hai hmm lets see
Wo cheej jab veer ke chest ke pass se blade nikli mein shock hogaya tha ye kya hua
Pura underground lair ka concept bohat badiya tha veer jahan wahaan disemblower waha puri fight intense Hui
Veer ke paas memory se related koi skill nahi.Aur wo hath ukhad ne wala scene eknumber tha aur juhi wo juhi se hath wapis lana
Wese kya veer ke pass memory se related ability BHi hai kya kyoki ye sab juhi aur pihu ne dekh liya hai toh ye kese handle hoga
We'll see about that...mujhe ek aur baar padhi padegi ye story
Aur iss update ka wo unexpected pal ki juhi ne veer ko papa bola bohat khusi hui uss moment mein mujhe
Let see disembowler se fir kab mulakaat hoti hai veer Ki
Bahut bahut dhanyavad. Keep supporting man.Lets see kya hota hai aage hota hai
Bohat hi badiya update tha itna badiya update ki aur lines likho par sabd kam padhte hai
Yah aadami nahin sudhrega are bhai bahut jyada time hai tumhare pass to update jaldi likhkar post karo naMaza toh raat me hi aata hai bhai padhne ka
Yes. Koi ghar ka vyakti...Koi chaheeta.
Sumitra bhi Veer ki chaheeti hi hai bhai.Vibek nahi hai ye zaroor maan sakte hai. Par, Sumitra uski chachi hai jinhone humesha hi usko pyaar diya hai.
Dhanyavad!
Veer ke paas memory se related koi skill nahi.Seer Vision thi pehle — ek legendary skill jise Veer ne Kaera ke ateet ke liye istemal kar liya tha. Toh ab uske paas memory se related kuchh nahi. You can see the full status on the first page. Sab diya hua hai waha
We'll see about that...
Bahut bahut dhanyavad. Keep supporting man.![]()
Well! Notification aaya hi hai. Penalty lagi hai. Koi na koi chal basa hai.Bro sabse pehle to wooowww sach main update padhke ek alag hi rahat mili or aisa kyu kyu ki juhi and pihu are safe sach main agar unhe kuch ho jata to shayad Mera ye story per last update rehta reading keliye
Arey araam se padh liya karo bhai. Update kahi bhaaga nahi jaa raha. Asli time toh waise update ko raat me padhne ka hi hai. Maza usi waqt aata hai. Par itna late bhi mat padha karo ki neend sawaar ho, aankhein band ho rahi ho.But but bro sach main bahut hi jyada gazab update tha wo kya hai na wolfi kal mujhe wese bhi accidity horakhhi thi or gas pet main dhamal choukdi khail raha tha or uske uper bhi apka update 30 padhte hi meri accidity peck per pahuch gayi aisa chest pain huva ki kya batau raat ke 12: 30 baje mujhe 2 redbull ka sahara lena pada uske baad pura update padha or uske baad kya hi batau kya hi goosebumps aaye hai body main but maza bahut aaya padhke
Veer ka trademark bann chuka hai ab woh.Jesa ki mene pehle kaha ki ek rahat mili update main beowolf ke baare main padhke ki ye card humesha keliye break nahi huva just for one hour agar ye card chala jata to veer pata nahi kya karta this is one of the actual legendary combat card
Yes. One is for defense. The other one is for pure attack.Or disembowler kis hadtak ka sanki hai ye jaanke sach main meri bhi haddiyo main bhi sihran doud gayi bro uska ye card rakia's blow sach main ab ise kehte hai ek game changer card and zhephers mask ye bhi utna hi important card hai matlab ek card apne aponent ko kazor banata hai or uske defence ko bhed ke use vaar karne ka mouka deta hai
Or wahi dusra card apne host ko kamzor honese bachata hai sach main inhe brahmastra kehna galat nahi hoga kya hi taqat hai in card ki but lure path bhi utna hi khatarnak hai
Saare patte ek baar me nahi khole jaate.Or blood transfusion ye idea sach main ek sanki ke dimag main hi aasakta hai but bro itna sab kuch huva but hume disembowler ka systemnahi dikha usse baat karte ab ye ek ittefaq hai ya kuch or mestory hai ye janna dil chasp hoga
Abhi bataya na upar...But bro mujhe ye ek chiz samaj main nahi aayi aapne itna kuch reveal kiya but un glass becar main kya tha ye nahi bataya aakhir wo aakritiya hai kya chizz or may bee ye disembowler wahi galelio hai jiske baare main mr.x or rebbeca baat kar rahe the
Iske baare me bhi mein pehle hi bata chuka hu. Story me bhi ek explanation hai — System holders ko cards unki pravatti ke according milte hai.Bro ek chiz batau jabse crimson ke baare main pata chala ki wo bhi ek system holder hai or jabse 1 se jyada system holder ke baare main pata chala tab se merina unki skills or card dekh ke unke liye lalach jagne lagi mera matlab hai jab main koi card ya skill dekhta tha to ye hi sochta hu ki kaas ye skill apne veer ke pass bhi hoti to kya hi maza aata but main ye baat sabhi system holder keliye nahi sochta tha bas kuch hi aise skills or card the jinke baare main socha tha main aapko bata hu
Lench of bleach?? Hein??Isme hum wahi shuruaat karenge jaha se ye silsila shuru huva tha yani crimson arc se
To sabse pehle skills : aquatic breathing ,whu su ,commando , lench of bleazh , rapid reaction, HYPER REFLEX
Sab kuchh protagonist ke paas nahi ho sakta bhai.And now cards
First : probability manipulation
Second : limb substitution
Third : shaolin's way
Forth : Mayhem
Fifth : berserk
Abhi tak ye pach hi card the jomain chahta tha ki kass ye veer pass hote but jesa ki aapne kaha ki ek hi chizz dusre ke pass ho to usme zyada maza nahi aata no doubt in 5 main se 3 veer ke paas hai jo ki main cahta tha but ab in 5 ki sankhya badh chuki hai
Mission fail hua kyunki Veer Disembowler ko maar nahi paayaJab maine update ka last scene padha to pehle mujhse samajhne main galti hogyi mujhe laga ki mission isiliye fail huva kyu ki system ne veer ko disembowler se sirf picha churane ko kaha tha maarne ko nahi isi liye mission fail huva
Ye sab raat main gas ki taqlif ki wajah se huva or thoda bahut meri weak english se bhi but subha fresh mind se akhiri hissa padha tab samjh main aaya ki ye mission disembowler ko na maarpane ki wajah se huva or main raat main ek baat sochte raha ye sala disembowler to margaya or mission main bhi sirf ek hi penalty mili but veer ne hi disembowler ko mara tha to kamse kam ye dono card to milne cahiye the
As it's mentioned before... Logo ki pravatti ke hisaab se hi unhe cards milte hai. Veer ne jaw long ko bhi maara tha. Magar Veer ko shayna's access, animal kingdom, woh dark rituals waale cards aur skills nahi mili. But Rakia's blow koi negative card nahi hai. Unless it is used on normal people. Kyunki, aam insaan ko toh woh ek vaar me hi khatam kar sakta hai.Bro sach main disembowler ke in card ka veer ji asli haqdar hai ye dono hi card veer ko powerfull bana sakte hai or main cahta hu ye use mile but aap jo sochte hai wo har baar hi sahi sabit hota hai or yaha disembowler nahi mara or veer ko uske card nahi mile iske liye bhi kuch na kuch aapne jarur socha hoga
Woh toh pehle bhi khulla hi ghoom raha thaBut bro is disembowler ko khula chodna khatre se khaali nahi hai pata nahi ab ye belagam darinda kitno ki bali chadhayega or aakhir wo us dhamake se bacha kese ye dekhna kaafi dilchasp hoga
Dhyaan rahe ki probability manipulation sirf teen baar hi fatal blows se bacha sakta hai ek din me.Bro aapko pata hai mene ek baar apke apne cards ki rating share ki thi jo mere hisab se jo mere favourite card hai unhe apni rating ke sath aapse share Kiya tha shayad aapko yaad hoga but Aaj main aapke ek baar fiir share kar raha hu kyu ki aaj ke card dekh ke meri list main kayi card replace huye
1 : probability manipulation
Mujhe ye batane ki shayad jarurat nahi ki kyu ye number 1 per hai iska kamal to humne letest update main hi dekhliya
Ye deny nahi kiya jaa sakta.2: BEOWOLF BLESSINGS
:iske baare main bhi kya bolu sabko pata hi hai story ka treadmark card hai yeto list main ye number unbreakablely disurv karta hai
Yes. Rakia's blow is very strong. But then again... Every card has its weaknesses.3 : before is shaolin's way but after is rakia's blow
Matlab aap agar fight kar rahe ho or samne wale aponent ka card jyada saktishali hai to aap uske card ko break kar sakte ho wo bhi 1 ghante keliye or system holder ki fight main card ki ek ek second pura khel hi palat deti hai
Sirf hypnosis nahi bhai. Hypnosis one of the debuffs hai jis se bacha jaa sakta hai. There are many more. Description padhne ka zephyr's Mask ka.4 : before berserk but now zephyr's mask
Matlab ye bhi aapko kisbhi koisibhi chot ki 30 %kam nukshan pahuchne degi or to or main chizz hypnosis se bhi bachayegi
You forgot many more cards. Intimidating presence bhool gaye ju... Healing factor Ava ka bhool gaye. Also, Vinona's mark is stronger than you think.5 : berserk
6 : shaolin's way
7 :mayhem
8 :vinona's mark
9; weapon master
10: limb substitution
Ye sab combat card ki suchi hai jo is story main no ke hisab se passand hai
Hume kya pata bhai ki woh mila hai ya nahi?Well brother agar ye sanki itna hi jyada inteligent hai or pwerfull bhi hai to ye ab tak rebbeca se kyu nahi mila or nahi mr .x se kyu ki ye dono to uski bahut jyada madad kar sakte hai
Mein toh kab se keh raha tha Bhai ki tum log X ke liye ready ho nahi ho.But ek baat main daave se keh sakta hu ki rebecca ise hypnotize nahi karsakti but mr x ke baare main hum kuch bhi nahi keh sakte ki aakhir wo kounsi bala hai or agar ye sanki itna power full hai to
MR X to lagta hai chalta firta mout ka soudagar hi hoga
Ye shuruwat hai.Bro jese jese ye khel aage badh raha hai wese wese anxiety badhti jaa rahi hai or veer ko bhi penalty lag chuki hai or wahi penalty jiska mujhe dar tha
Hope ki veer ke ghar ki koi ledis ya uski behno main se koi na ho khass karke bhavna to bilkul bhi nahi but shayad hume veer ke ghar main ab ek mout to dekhni hi padegi ..
Ye arc uss change ko laane ke liye hi hai.But kehte haina har admi ka din aata hai aaj ki yani ki 31 December ki raat veer ke dushmano ke naam bhale hi thi or un sabne milke veer ka nuksaan karva ke veer naam ke sher ko zakhmi bhi bana diya but kehte haina ZAKHMISHER SE KYADA KHOUFNAK OR KHATARNAAK KUCH BHI NAHI HOTA
You'll see something new...Sab ke sab apne kiye ka fal bhugtenge fir cahe wo adesh jaisinghni ho ya fir dhananjay bhanupratap shing ho ya khud disembowler hi kyu na ho ek ek ko hisab chukana hoga
Sach kahu toh khud ka ek animation banaana meri bhi khwaab tha. Aur, isliye sketching me mujhe interest tha. But unfortunately... Dream ko follow nahi kar paaya aur India me animation matlab suffering.Brother sachmin kabhi kabhi to main sochta hu ki aap ka dimag hai ya AI yaar aapki imagination ko to 21 toppo ki slami milni cahiye or bhai sach main agar is story per agar anime banti hai bhavishya mai. Or agar wo internationaly broadcast hoti hai to duniyako bhi pata chal jayega ki hum indian bhi damdar story ke sath anime bana sakte hai
Ye zyada ho gaya man.Sach main agar ye anime series chal rahi hoti is story ki to main dave ke sath keh sakta hu ki Naruto jesi anime series ko ye series dhul chata deti
Bahut bahut dhanyavad man. Aise hi saath bane rehne ka. Keep supporting.Brother aapkeliye to ab shabd bhi kam pad rahe hai but itna hi kahunga ki marvalous update umjust unbelievable thingh in the update
Fantastic
Readers ke replies dena bhi mere liye utna hi important hai jitna iss kahani ko likhna.Yah aadami nahin sudhrega are bhai bahut jyada time hai tumhare pass to update jaldi likhkar post karo na
Ham sabko pata hai ki tum bahut acche writer ho sab ka reply dete Ho blah blah blah per yaar bahut reply kar diya tumne ab update de do
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Yahi toh maqsad rehta hai apna.Review Update 195
Honestly sayingmain thak gaya hu iss story aur ju ke writing skills ki tareef karte karte.....ab to words bhi brainstorming karne par nikalte hai.
These were my reactions between this update.
After all... Arc ka peak update tha. It was bound to happen.Normally kisi update me 1-2 moments hi hote hai pure goosebumps wale. Lekin iss update me to main kya kahu.
Kaafi waqt laga tha ye sab brainstorming karne ke liye.Beowulf's blessings break, Veer ke heart ke paas attack, SHB ka secret, Juhi ko syringe ka lagana, Veer ka janzeere todkar use bachana, Woh pankhe wala scene, Veer ka hath katna, Pihu ka pakde jana, Veer ka pihu ko rescue aur Nitrogen cylinder se attack.
Man! ye sab scenes me daanto tale ungliyan dabane ka ho gaya.
Use kab se bacha ke rakha hua tha maine. Ab jaake mujhe bhi chenn mila hai ki chalo ek best moment achhi tarah se nipat gaya.And and and..... I can't forget...... Finally Juhi said Papa to Veer. I can't tell iss scene par kaisa laga. 3-4 baar sirf iss scene ko padha maine, tabhi aage badh paya. This was the best moment of this story.
Thanks a lot.Lair ka pura naksha khichte hue jo fight scene likhe hai, it was insane. Open area me fight aur closed narrow space me fight me jameen aasman ka antar hota hai, you have completely nailed it.
Yahi mera prayaas rehta hai. I want to show you guys things I imagine as vividly as I can.Everything was passing like a picture in front of my eyes.
Fight zyada derr nahi khichi iss baar ka shukra manaana chahiye. Otherwise Veer was a goner for sure.Fight to epic level thi hi, Veer ko almost sare cards use karne pade, Probability Manipulation, Limb substitution, Intimidating Presence, Bone Reaper. Ek sense me Probability Manipulation Veer ka sabse powerful card hai jisne use teen jivandaan diye, warna to khel khatam hi tha.
Yup!!!And 2 slots ka hona bhi bahut badi power hai, jisse woh alag alag combination bana sakta hai. Probability manipulation aur Bone Reaper ke combination se hi woh Disembowler ke fatal attack se bacha.
Berserk ko Veer waha istemal kar hi nahi sakta tha.Uss hathkadiyon wale scene mein, I was expecting ki Veer Berserk ka use karega yaa apna ek hath hi sacrifice kar de. And janjeer tutne ke time par laga ki Veer ab apne berserk mod me aa gaya hai, but no. It was just his stats strength and his love towards Juhi that gave him power to break the chains. And it was good. Agar berserk ka use karke ek baar ko maybe Disembowler ko maar deta tab bhi Juhi aur Pihu ko safely nikalta it was not sure.
Of course. Arsenal me woh card hai toh definitely kabhi na kabhi use hoga hi hoga.Lekin I'm sure ek din to aisa ayega jab Veer ko Berserk ka use karna padega aur koi option uske paas nahi hoga. Woh kab ayega dekhte hai.
Yes. Yahi sab toh post Disembowler arc ka hissa hai.Lekin abhi sab kuch khatam nahi hua yaa kahu kuch bhi khatam nahi hua. Mission complete hokar bhi fail ho gaya. Filhal ke liye Juhi aur Pihu safe hai lekin Disembowler abhi mara nahi aur Yarnia ke mess ke bare me to abhi pata chalna baki hai.
Agla update usi par based hoga. But you'll see something much more.Yarnia ke bhagdad me Vivek, Sumitra, Manorath, Ragini Picture se gayab hai, to jo bhi mara hai inme se hi koi ho sakta hai. Definitely Vivek ko system loved one me count nahi karega. To Ragini, Sumitra, Manorath me se koi lag raha hai mujhe.Ye suspense bhi next update me khul jana chahiye.
Exactly. Also, Juhi Pihu koi doodh peeti bacchi nahi hai. Yes they are little... But they know what happened.Baki ek nayi cheez hui ki pehli baar Veer ki power iss level par uske kisi apne ke samne aayi hai. Ab fight wagerah ko to ignore kiya jaa sakta hai, lekin hath ka katna aur use wapas jodna, it can't be ignored.
They both saw it.Ab Pihu ka to kuch kaha nahi jaa sakta, woh Veer ke piche thi aur Veer ne use pakda hua tha apne hath se naki Pihu ne Veer ko. Phir uska girna aur Disembowler ka use lekar bhagna ye sab kuch seconds ka scene tha, aisi halat, andhere aur itne kam time me mujhe nahi lagta uska koi dhyan Veer ke hath par jana chahiye.
Of course.Lekin Juhi usne to literally apne nanhe hatho se uthake Veer ka hath use diya hai. Veer bhale hi uski aankhein dhak de lekin ye baat ignore hone wali nahi hai. Abhi nahi, lekin Juhi ye to samajh jayegi ki uske bane naye papa ke sath kuch to gadbad hai.
Ye dekhna hoga.Halaki Veer Juhi ko ye baat secret rakhne ke liye aasani se mana sakta hai.
Shuruwati taur me bahut si cheezein asafal hi hoti hai. Plane bhi ek baar me nahi udd gaya tha.SHB ka experiment ek kind of half failure aur half success tha, System holder to SHB ke use se apni strength badha sakte hai, lekin Normal person par ye successful nahi hua. Iske side effects se aam log maare gaye.
Yahi toh logical explanation hai. Ye pehle bhi explain kiya gaya hai story me. Fir chaahe woh healing ko lekar ho ya fir agility ko lekar. Pari ne multiple times explain kiya hai.Aur high chances ki Juhi aur Pihu bhi nahi bachti. Lekin isse ek possibility paida hui hai. System sirf powers nahi deta balki system holder me genetically modification karta hai to aisa ho sakta hai ki system holder ke offspring me SHB ke quality aa jaye.
Arey man. Thanks a lot. That means a lot to me...Maine jitni bhi fantasy thriller kahaniya books padhi hai, I'm honestly saying kisi ne mujhe itna anxious aur excite kiya. You are the best writer in fantasy writing for me. Not just on forum but overall literature I've read in my life.
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Time lagta hai, tabhi updates aise nikal ke aate hai.It's so fucking hard to wait anymore....
but as always take your time and give another banger update.
Anxiously waiting for next update
That audacityYah aadami nahin sudhrega are bhai bahut jyada time hai tumhare pass to update jaldi likhkar post karo na
Ham sabko pata hai ki tum bahut acche writer ho sab ka reply dete Ho blah blah blah per yaar bahut reply kar diya tumne ab update de do
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