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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

    Votes: 1,398 83.1%
  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 27 1.6%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 222 13.2%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 36 2.1%

  • Total voters
    1,683

Werewolf

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Werewolf

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Picchle kuch din bahut busy raha, ek baar bhi online nahi aa paya. USC ke liye story bhi adhuri reh gayi. Aage bhi kai mahine aise hi rahenge.
Logo ko review dene ka time na mil raha aur fir mere se poochte hai ki update kaahe nahi de rahe :sigh2:
Ju samjhao inn logo ko.
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Ragini ka pov hamne detail me dekha, uske emotion, uska dilemma, uski galtiya sab.

Iss update me bahut mixed reviews rahe, kisi ko Ragini pasand aayi to kisi ne bharke galiyan di. Halaki jyadatar ko ragini ka vyavahar pasand nahi aaya.
Hein? :think: Mujhe to zyadatar pasand aane waale log hi dikhe. :think:
Agar galat sahi ki baat hi ki jaye to Ragini aur Veer dono hi galat hai aur dono hi sahi.
Yahi to mein bhi keh raha hu. :approve:
Ateet ki baat karu to Ragini ko dosh de sakte hai ki usne Veer ke liye awaz nahi uthai yaa kuch nahi kiya, lekin ek nayi naveli bahu ke taur par kya woh Veer ke liye kuch kar bhi sakti thi jab Veer ka pura parivar hi use pasand nahi karta tha. Jyada se jyada woh Veer se baat kar sakti thi yaa use dilasa de sakti thi jise Veer ne khud hi thukra diya.
Yahi baat to samajhni hai. Ragini ek nayi naveli dulhan thi. Koi bhi ladki, jiski nayi nayi shaadi hui ho, wo sasural me dabb ke hi rehti hai. Kam se kam shuruwati dino me.
Vivek ki patni aur ek nayi bahu ke taur par uska response vaisa hi tha jaisa ki 100 me se 99 logo ka hoga. Use atiadarshvaad me nahi daala jaa sakta ki usne Veer ke liye Vivek se parivar se ladai kyun nahi ki.
Exactly :declare:
Kahani ki shuruaat me lagta hai ki Ragini ki galti thi ki woh Vivek ke sath sajish me shamil hui thi lekin iss update se woh purane paap bhi dhulte se lagte hai.
Kyunki humne 3rd person perspective se scenes ko dekha tha jaha baakiyon ko antagonists ke roop me pesh kiya gaya tha. Vibe to yahi thi at least. Ab humne Ragini ke swayam ka POV dekha hai.
Baat ki jaaye ab ki to haa Ragini ne Veer ko seduce karne ki shuruaat kari use apni taraf akarshit kiya, bina ye samjhe ki ye rishta ban bhi sakta hai yaa nahi.
Lekin Veer bhi koi doodh ka dhula nahi hai, use samjh aa raha tha ki Ragini usse kya chahti hai, jab Ragini ne apne pyar ka izhar kar diya tha. Veer ne ragini se aur samay manga uske bawjood Ragini ne Veer ke sath sexual relation banaye.
Veer could have overpowered her easily. Aisa nahi tha ki forcefully Ragini ne Veer kj izzat loot li ho. Veer wanted it. He was taken over by his lust. And, he really likes Ragini as well.
Ab ise galat keh sakte hai ki Ragini ne ye sab bina confirmation ke kiya, lekin Veer ko sirf isliye cleanchit de de ki woh ladka hai aur aadmi ka koi bharosa nahi, aadmi to bhawnre ki tarah hota hai jo alag alag phoolon ka ras pita hai.
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Bhanwra ek phool ko chakne ke baad dubara uss phool par nahi aata. Lekin Veer ne to Ragini ko majdhar me atka kar rakha, aur jab jawab diya to aisa ki kya kahe. Shadi nahi kar sakta lekin alag bhi nahi reh sakta.
Yup. Aur, isliye kaha...
Dono hi sahi bhi hai aur galat bhi.
Veer Ragini se pyar karta hai jo ki sach hai, lekin Veer ke jawab ka ek matlab to yahi hai ki Ragini uski rakhail bankar rahe jindagi bhar.
Abhi ke liye to kuchh aisa hi lag raha hai. Unless... Ragini makes her way to Veer's heart aur Veer use apni patni bana le.
Shuruaat Ragini ne kari lekin ye sab kis disha me jaa raha hai iska bodh to Veer ko bhi tha.

Aur Ragini ko ek baar ke liye galat maan bhi le. Lekin bakiyo ka kya. Jab Kal Nidhi, Kaera, Ava, Sonia, Arohi, Kavya ke sath Veer ka rishta aage badhega tab Veer kya karega. Ye sab bhi wahi mangegi jo Ragini ne manga hai, saaf saaf jawab, ki rishte ka bhavishya kya hoga.
Yes. Veer wahi same excuse har baar nahi de sakta. He'll have to define his relationships now. He'll have to give the clarity to all of them.
Nidhi aur Ragini ki personality me jameen aasman ka antar hai, Veer ke itne relationship ko jankaar shayad Nidhi apne kadam piche khinchegi, lekin Veer nidhi ko door jane nahi dega.

Agar Nidhi bhi Veer se yahi kahe ki baki sabko chhod do tab kya karega Veer. Tab bhi yahi kahega jo Ragini ko kaha tha. "Tumhara relation bhi to Rajat ke sath tha, tum bhi to virgin nahi ho"?
Nope. Veer har kisi ko ek jaisa nahi dekhta. Wo ye baat Ragini se bhalayi keh de magar Nidhi se nahi keh paayega. Nidhi ki wo izzat karta hai. Bahut. Aise remarks use to wo dene se raha.
Mujhe to Veer aur Nidhi ka rishta Veer aur Ragini se jyada complicated lagta hai.

Phir Kaera, Ava, Sonia naam ki trinity bhi hai. Aur Tej, Arohi, Kavya ke sath kaise manage karega. Tej to jaan ki dushman ban jayegi sabki.
Ye Veer ko nahi, mujhe manage karna hai. :laugh:
Ragini ko darr hai ki kahi woh Veer ki jindagi me dusri aurat na bankar reh jaye, bechari abhi janti bhi nahi ki woh dusri rahegi yaa tisri, chauti, panchvi, chathi, santvi pata nahi kis number par lagi hai
Dekhna hoga.
Suhana ka to pata hi nahi sonia ki vajah se apne kadam piche khinch legi yaa Divya ki tarah ek extra marital affair se satisfy rahegi.
Uska adanga Gaurav hai. :declare:
Suraj13796 once said ki ye system based fantasy story hai isme action jyada rakho and Veer ke relation ko itna footage nahi dena chahiye, true. Story ki theme system hai. But the story is about Veer's life an underdog boy.

Jiska parivar uski shakal nahi dekhna chahta tha aaj woh hi apne parivar ki backbone hai, jiska koi dost nahi tha aaj desh ke sabse Ameer uske dost hai, jise class me koi nahi janta tha use aaj desh aur duniya me jante hai, jise koi ladki bhaw nahi deti thi aaj uske ghar aur bahar ki paramsundariya uspar jaan deti hai.
Nahi. Aisa nahi hai.

Kahani system based hai lekin Veer ke relations utne hi maayne rakhte hai jitna ki kahani ka plot. Warna mein ise non erotica me daal ke sirf plot plot na dikha deta?

Kya zaroorat thi incest daalne ki, itni female characters ko daalne ki? Veer ki zindagi ka hissa hai ye. Ye utna hi zaroori hai jitna ki mainstream plot. Padhne waale sirf plot padh sakte hai agar unhe family drama me interest nahi hai to. Lekin, ye bhi hoga. Aur, dikhaya bhi jaayega. Vistaar se. Bina koi kami ke saath.

Wo reader per reader ke upar hai wo kya dekhna pasand karta hai. Kuchh chuninda ke liye na hi plot me koi badlaav kiya jaata hai, aur na hi koi herr ferr.
To kahani ki ending happy hogi yaa sad ye isi par nirbhar karta hai ki uske relationship end me kaise honge sabke sath. Agar Mr X se jeetkar bhi pyar aur parivar me haar gaya to koi fayda nahi aisi jeet ka. So yeah his relationships are very important for the story.
Ek prakar se hum Veer ki journey me hai. Use ant tak jaate hue dekh rahe hai. Uske safar me hai. System Veer se jaana gaya hai. Veer na hota to aaj ye system bhi utna interesting nahi lagta.
Kahani ki khasiyat aur sabse bada challenge yahi hai ki sabhi relationship bahut complex aur realistic rahe hai. Rahul vali story yaa xf ki 99% harem story me sari female pehle se hi hero ko share karne ko taiyar rehti hai, they agreed so easily on everything.

But this story is unique, dekhna hai kaise ju ye sab karoge Werewolf
Kiska dil tutega aur kiska judega.
I hope Nidhi aur Veer ke bich sab sahi rahe :doodh:

Fantastic Update 🙂🙂👍
Thanks a lot.

Yes. Last story me kaafi saralta se sort out ho gaya tha. Jo ki nahi hona chahiye tha. But readers se hi pareshan hoke maine kahani uss disha me mod di thi. I wanted to end things asap. Warna usme bhi relationships me kheecha taani hoti.

Lekin jo cheez waha nahi dikha paaya, wo yaha dikhayi jayegi. Lots of twists and turns awaits. Bas patience rakhne ki zaroorat hai. Keep supporting btw. Next update soon. ✨
 

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Pr Rebecca na jis system holder ko Baja ta us ka kia bna or Rebecca k peecha mister X ha kia
Rebecca ne Damian ko bheja tha. Usne fir Damian ko captain ke paas bheja jaha Captain ne uski haalat kharab kar di. Halanki, wo khud bhi chotil ho gayi iss chakkar me. :declare:
 

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Werewolf sabke apne apne thoughts h ragini ko lekr.... And TBH mai jo sb keh re wo bhi smjh pa ra aur jo ju bolre wo bhi.... Mjhe ragini ka POV justified lga sivay us point ke jaha wo boli ki veer used her physically.... Kyuki ye ek gnda remark h.... And mai chahta hu ki ragini ko ehsaas ho ki usne ye bolkr kitni bdi glti ki h ....
 
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Wolfy Sir aapne kaha tha Disembowler Arc ke ant tak hum Nidhi or Veer ke Rishte ko dekh lenge woh kis level par hoga lekin yaha matter Ragini ka jyada uljha dikh rha hai...or mujhe lgta hai abhi aage aur kuchh hone wala hai something will happen jo in dono k favour me nhi lagta jaygi...shyd jab Nidhi ka interference hoo in dono k beech...

Mujhe lgta hai ye jald hi hone wala h...
Ahm baat ye ki Veer kaise Sambhalta hai kyunki situation is already worse...
 
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