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Sab ne dikkat face ki...Pichle dino jo bhasad hui forum par uss chakkar me pichle update par to review diya nahi, khair ab dono par de deta hu.
Of course. Sab dheere dheere saamne aayega. Ghar par pata chalega hi chalega kuchh na kuchh lekin ekdum se nahi... Dots dheere dheere connect hoyengi. Abhi bahut kuchh pata chal jaata agar aenn waqt par Nidhi dastak nahi deti toh... But Nidhi ne kaafi hadd tak Veer ko uss paristhiti se bacha liya. Let's see... Future me kya hota hai.Pichle update ki baat karu to I was expecting more. Bhawna Veer ka conversation yaa family ke sath confrontation, I was expecting more intensity. The scene was really good, lekin kuch aur drama hona chahiye tha. Khair maybe I'm asking too early it's not the right time for a big drama in the family. Lekin kabhi naa kabhi to hoga, when all hell will break loose. Ek to Veer ki relationship aur dusra uski ye secret chaotic life, ab relationship par to drama hoga, lekin Veer ki action packed bloody life par bhi woh sab kuch nahi chhipa sakta. Of course he can't and won't tell anything about system, lekin kuch batein to samne ayengi. Atish, Slogan, Las Vegas, Paris, China now disembowler. Everything can't be kept secret from his family.
Ab unka rishta progress karega. Juhi calling Veer 'papa' is a big move in their relationship. Nidhi ne hospital me bhi accept kar hi liya tha. Although tab Veer hosh me nahi tha. Toh, wo keval usne abhi apne tak hi rakha hua hai. But ab uski reservedness par wo feelings haawi ho rahi hai. She might blurt something out... Like telling him that yes... She loves him.So finally Juhi ab openly Veer ko papa kahegi, I wish soon it became a reality. Ye baat Veer aur Nidhi ke rishte ko bhi ek alag mod degi, woh kitna hi kahe ki ye sab sirf Juhi ke liye hai lekin isse ek pehchan unke rishte ki to banegi.
Thanks a lot man.First of all congratulations to complete a 200 update milestone on story.
It was a breather after the crashing of the site.Now If I talk about this update. Man, that was pretty good![]()
I have already told this before. There are 3 ladies in the story who are extremely possessive towards Veer. And, they are ~Sabse pehle Tej ki baat karu to. Kya hoga kya hoga jab ise pata chalega ki iska bhai kitna bada womaniser hai, Her possessive ness towards is turning into annoyance. First Suhana Nidhi aur naa jane aage kaun kaun. Kis kis se durr rakhegi Veer ko. Don't you think ek moment par aakar Veer bhi thoda pareshan ho jayega.
It was meant to be like that.Purvi wala scene BC that was damn erotic,bina kuch jyada kiye hi ache ache s*x scenes se jyada erotic tha.
Aisa isliye kyunki 99% writers ko sex scenes likhte hai, unhone khud ne kabhi wo experience nahi kiya hota.This seems very normal to anyone, that goes unnoticed. Lekin jyadatar stories me 99% sex scenes ek jaise hi hote hai, expect you. You have some more words or reference that not found in other stories.
Kabaddi hoti hai ya nahi iske baare me maine already decide kar liya hai.Veer aur Purvi ek step aur aage badh gaye hai, pehle dudh Piya tha ab smooching bhi ho gayi, aise hi raha to jaldi kabaddi bhi ho jayegi (excited to see)
Veer is still changing... Aisa nahi hai ki change complete ho gaya aur wo ab ek nayi personality me develop ho gaya hai. He's still changing... He's still calculating everything. Aur, uska complete change jald hi dekhne ko milega.Hmm Veer now has changed, now he is not protecting only but preparing to hunt down the enemy.
Nope! Not in this Post Disembowler arc. But you will... in the next arc. There will be many.Veer got 2 missions first is catching the main plotter jo Damian hai, so are we gonnna see another system holder fight soon. And second is finding the truth about Pushkar, Nik, and Gaurav.
Divya ne hi Pushkar ko maara tha. You can go and read the updates from HoK arc. Usme past darshaya gaya hai, kaise Pushkar ko peechhe se Divya ne shoot Kiya tha. Kyunki, wo Suhana ka gala daba ke use maarne ki koshish kar raha tha. So, yes... Divya killed Pushkar.Second mission se ek baat saaf hui lagti hai, Divya ne Pushkar ko nahi maara, use fasaya gaya Nik aur Gaurav ne milkar Suhana aur Divya ko trap kiya. Aur agar Divya ki goli se hi Pushkar ki maut hui bhi to sab utna sidha nahi hai jaisa Suhana ne bataya tha. Uski maut me hath Nik aur Gaurav ka jarur hoga kisi tarah.
Pata chalega agle bhaag me ki kyu Veer abhi tak police ke sampark me nahi aaya hai.Veer ne pihu ko bhi bachaya, kafi din ho gaye ab tak trisha yaa police ne Veer ko contact nahi kiya? Yarnia aur Disembowler dono hi situation me police ab tak Veer se kuch baat to karti hi. Maybe next update![]()
Bahut bahut dhanyavad. Kepe supporting as usual.Again Splendid Update, after a long wait but worth it.
Eagerly waiting for next update![]()
Zaroor. Yahi hum aane waale updates me dekhenge.Bohat sexy update. Jaha Tez ko aitraz hai Veer ke Nidhi mam ke yaha jaane ka but abhi Nidhi Veer shuru nahi hua hai coz Veer abhi Purvi ke yaha ruka hua hai aur thoda bohat uske sath intimate hua hai magar purvi kab aapne aap ko samarpit karegi yah dekhna hoga.
Abhi abhaas nahi hua hai sahi se. Jab bodh hoga tab dekhna... Kaisa toofan aayega. Suman ne warning de di hai.Ragni ek baar phir veer ke jaane se naraz Hui hai magar usko bhi veer ki jagah rakh ker dekhna hoga ki veer abhi kis frame of mind se guzar raha hai aur uske sath abhi kia chal raha hai. Shayad woh apne dukh me aur kuch nahi samjh paaa rahi hai ya woh bhi Tej ki tarah veer per apna pura haq chahti hai dekhtey hai kaha tak jaata hai veer n Ragni ka rishta.
Nik aur Gaurav dono ke baare me jaanenge hum Veer ke mission ke through. Just wait and watch.To wahi Rishto se dari hui Divya bhi hai ki Nick kia karta hai aur kahi woh veer ko nuqasan na pichaa dey. Lekin shayad ab veer khud nick ke peeche aayega coz ab usko ek sath do mission mil chukey hai aur kahi na kahi veer ko bhi ab alert hona chahiye coz last mission kar ke woh kia kho chuka hai usse sabak lekar is baar usko alert hona chahiye aur dono mission per concentrate karey coz ab woh kisi aur ko khoney ke liye tayyar nahi hai waisay bhi abhi tak Disimblower ne apni tayyari kar raha hoga doobara hamle ki ek ghayal naag ki tarah.
Dhanyavad, keep supporting.Bohat kuch hai jis ka pata next update me chalega aur hopefully jaldi padne ko milega update.
Nahi. Bhavna ko abhi Tej par shak nahi hai. Kyunki Veer aur tej dono sage bhai behan hai. Aise me wo uss baare me soch bhi nahi sakti.Tej ki jalan Nidhi ke prati clearly dikh rahi bhavna ko bho shak to hai but vo jahir nhi kr rahi.
Ragini ko veer ko etna sunaya tha use leke glani hai but kavya se Nidhi ke sath jane ki bat se Ragini ko insecurity ho rahi hai our use dhud me abhi kami dikh rahi hai.
Affair to nahi. Lekin Purvi ne apni samasya bata di hai.Arun ka shayad bahar affair hai our shayad purvi kahi salo se santusht nhi hai
Bilkul.Divya ne FBCC KO SARI DETAILS Provide kiya ek prakar se ke system holder ki jankar provide kiya hai
Nik gayab hai yani vo bhi kuch chaal chali raha hai
Balhaar ne veer ko kafi mahatv puran jankari di hai ye age veer ko kam ayengi
Veer ne adesh ko apna first target chun liya hai. Garofano our Erica veer ke liye dhanvijay our rajat ki jankari nikalne ke kam me lag gaye
Pushkar ko Divya ne hi maara hai bhai. Bhool gaye kya? Handgun se usne hi peeth par fire kiya tha. HoK arc ke updates recheck karo.SHB ke 5 tube renshu ya kahe to veer ke pas bhi hai ab
System ne veer ko 2 target bhi de diye hai i think gaurav our nik ne hi Pushkar ko mara our Divya our suhana ko us me fasaya vahi raj veer ko bahar lane system ne target diya hai.
Our system ne veer ko apna badla lene 1 month ka time diya hai
Fantastic update
Thanks a lot. Keep supporting man.Our system ne veer ko apna badla lene 1 month ka time diya hai
Fantastic update
Dhanyavad, keep supporting.Mast update bhai kasam se majha aagaya ab suru hoga asli sikar fbcc pe veer ko kuch bhi galat ka andaja nahi horaha ab to new York ka naam bhi aagaya he
Thanks man.Superb update WareWolf Sir, Worth every bit of waiting![]()
Bas dekhte jao bhai. Kya kya hota hai...Bahut shandar lagbhag sabhi scenes agaye hai balhaar ne veer ka lagbhag adha kam pura kardiya hai uske dushmanoko ko pahchane me Disembowler se bhidne veer ko thoda time diya hai system ne
Ab nikalna our gaurav ki asli band bajengi
Yes. Suspense to end tak chalta jayega Bhai. Uska koi end nahi.Bahut hi umda
Todi todi jankari sabhi ke man ki di gayi। Jise kahani me sapens ban gaya hai।
Aage aane vale time or danger hoga
Do mishan mile hai।
Suhana ka jigr huaa hai। Aage ab sabki veer ke jivan me kya roll kiska kesa hoga ab pata chalta rahega।
Thanks a lot.That was brilliant must say do mission mile veer ko unknown penalty now intresting Tej ki unsecurity bhi bahut badhiya hai