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Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

    Votes: 1,423 82.9%
  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 27 1.6%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 231 13.5%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 36 2.1%

  • Total voters
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Werewolf

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Update 200 Review.
Vaise toh review jis din update aaye usi din likhne vala tha par ab jab ju ko likhne ka mood nahi hai abhi ,toh review abhi hi de deta hu,pichle update mai review nahi diya tha site crash ki vajah se uske liye maafi,us update ki bhi kuch baate yahi kar lunga.
Ragini yaha veer ke prati uske behaviour ko leke thoda sa regret feel kar rahi hai.Mujhe jis scene ke liye sabse jyada curiosity thi voh tha juhi jab veer ko papa bolegi toh voh scene kaisa likha jayega aur you didn't disappoint,mujhe laga toh nahi tha ki itni aasani se sab Maan jayenge.
Last wala scene sabse jabardast tha jisme X ki power pata padi,Do system holders ko jab voh itni aasani se sambhal pa raha hai,so we just can't imagine how powerful he is.X abhi baaki sabhi system holders jo ki introduce huye hai un sab se bahut jyada takatvar hai.overall a fantastic update.

Ab aate hai update 200 par,so as always a fantastic update Werewolf .
1.Tej being possessive of veer as she always is,usko veer ka nidhi ke saath ja ke rehna pasand nahi just can't wait to see her reaction jab use pata chalega ki uska bhai kin kin ke saath rangreliya mana raha hai,Veer ka nidhi ke saath jaana is baar bhavna ke man mai bhi thoda sankoch paida kiya hai,dekhte hai aage kya hota hai.ye dono nidhi ke baare mai soch rahi hai aur vaha asli kaand toh purvi ke ghar chal raha hai.Nidhi ke ghar vala scene probably next update mai aayega shayad.

2.Ye Arun aur purvi ke bich kya masla hai,jitna bataya gaya hai usse toh mujhe lagta hai Arun ki galti hai,dekhte hai aage kya hota hai dono ke bich.
That erotic scene, uff,the way you wrote it very few writers are able to do so nahi toh bahut se writers toh sex scene likhte time toh aah ,ahh mai hi khatam kar dete hai,but the way you write carefully describing every moment ,thats very impressive.Veer aur purvi ka rishta aise hi aage badhte rehne vala hai aur voh din dur nahi jab dono ke bich sax sux ho jayega.

3.Veer aur balhaar ki meeting se bahut kuch baate veer ko bhi janne mili ,that there is a system holder jo uske piche laga hua hai aur voh Disembowler nahi hai,dekhna hoga veer kaise pata lagata hai bahut se clues toh mil gaye hai veer ko par phir bhi Damian tak pahucha itna aasan nahi hoga.Dhananjay aur Aadesh ki fielding set hai aadesh ke liye toh veer ne plan bhi bana liya hai dekhte hai kya hota hai aane wale updates mai uske regarding par ab aadesh aur casabelle ki ulti ginti shuru ho chuki.Dhananjay ke baare mai bhi veer ko ab pata chal gaya hai,toh kya uska khatma karne veer ko gaanv jaan padega ya abhi bhi voh dhananjay Mumbai mai hi hai?
Veer ka behaviour change hua hai ,you can feel it abhi uske jaan pehchan vale logo mai se sabne ye notice nahi Kiya hai probably par dhire dhire ye changes prominent honge abhi toh subtle hai iske regarding baakiyo ka kya reaction hoga voh dekhne layak hoga.Aur voh scene jab veer beouwolf blessing on karke balhaar ki taraf dekhta hai,pure goosebumps!!

4.SHB ab renshu ke paas hai ab voh uska kya karega uska mujhe toh koi idea nahi hai,dekhte hai aage,Renshu ko shak hai ki ye vahi system holder hai jo usse bhida tha maybe this will give veer the lead to finding Damian.Ab toh sonali aur abha ko bhi veer aur Ragini ke rishte ke baare mai pata chal gaya.suman mere hisaab se will play a important role in the harem of veer,uski baato se maybe kuch convince ho jaaye to share veer,uske harem ko badhaane ke liye Suman puri koshish kar rahi hai.

5.Ab aate hai veer ke dono current missions par Pehla mission hai us system holder ko khojna jisne veer ke saath ye sab kiya,mujhe lagta hai ye bahut mushkil hone wala hai renshu ke kehne par Damian ka thought veer ke man mai bhale hi reh gaya ho par us tak pahuchna veer ke liye katayi aasan nahi hone wala pata nahi kaise pahuchega.
Ab aate hai dusre mission par pushkar,nik aur gaurav ke mission par ,pushkar ki death Divya ke haatho hui ye sabhi ko pata hai par gaurav aur nik ka isse kuch na kuch toh connection hai system faltu mission nahi deta,ab gaurav aur nik ka kya role hai pushkar ki death mai ye dilchasp baat hai,mai toh bas yahi chahta hu ki gaurav aur nik jaise chutiyo se suhana aur Divya ka picha chute jald se jald.

That's all for this review milte hai agle bhaag ke review ke saath agar likhne ka man kar jaaye toh Sunday tak update de Dena bhai,
Eagerly waiting for the next update♥️
 

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Update isi month aayega... According to Werewolf 😁 taaza taaza khabar mili h... 😆
But there is a Plot twist: The writer is secretly working at Rockstar and that’s why both GTA 6 and this upcoming update are taking centuries to release 😭🎮📝

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Developer by day, Writer by night … I’m convinced your story update is stuck in a while(True): sleep(999999) loop 😂
But hey Werewolf , no worries — we have already optimized our patience using multithreading and installed the latest version of patience.exe! 🤭😝
Waiting like a pro! 🧘‍♂️💻📚
 

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Grp me nayi ladkiyo se batein hoti hai, update ka pucho to mann nahi hai, review nahi aa rahe, chote chote review bolke satka deta hai
Jhooth bolta hai saale!? :roll:
 

Werewolf

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Vaise toh review jis din update aaye usi din likhne vala tha par ab jab ju ko likhne ka mood nahi hai abhi ,toh review abhi hi de deta hu,pichle update mai review nahi diya tha site crash ki vajah se uske liye maafi,us update ki bhi kuch baate yahi kar lunga.
Ragini yaha veer ke prati uske behaviour ko leke thoda sa regret feel kar rahi hai.Mujhe jis scene ke liye sabse jyada curiosity thi voh tha juhi jab veer ko papa bolegi toh voh scene kaisa likha jayega aur you didn't disappoint,mujhe laga toh nahi tha ki itni aasani se sab Maan jayenge.
Juhi ke muh se 'papa' toh nikalna hi tha bhai. Wo bacchi hai. Aur, usne Veer ko ab apna pita maan liya hai. Aise me Nidhi usko Veer ke ghar lekar pahuch gayi to ye toh hona hi tha. :approve:
Last wala scene sabse jabardast tha jisme X ki power pata padi,Do system holders ko jab voh itni aasani se sambhal pa raha hai,so we just can't imagine how powerful he is.X abhi baaki sabhi system holders jo ki introduce huye hai un sab se bahut jyada takatvar hai.overall a fantastic update.
Hum sirf assume hi kar sakte hai abhi. Aur, wo assumption mein readers par chhorta hu.
Ab aate hai update 200 par,so as always a fantastic update Werewolf .
1.Tej being possessive of veer as she always is,usko veer ka nidhi ke saath ja ke rehna pasand nahi just can't wait to see her reaction jab use pata chalega ki uska bhai kin kin ke saath rangreliya mana raha hai,Veer ka nidhi ke saath jaana is baar bhavna ke man mai bhi thoda sankoch paida kiya hai,dekhte hai aage kya hota hai.ye dono nidhi ke baare mai soch rahi hai aur vaha asli kaand toh purvi ke ghar chal raha hai.Nidhi ke ghar vala scene probably next update mai aayega shayad.
Well, aisa isliye kyunki Purvi aur Veer ke madhya kuchh aisa waisa hoga, iske baare me koi bhi nahi soch sakta. Akhir dono maa bete jaise hi hai ek prakar se. Wo uski maasi hai yaani maa jaisi. Par, Purvi pehle hi Veer ko stannpaan karwa chuki hai. :D
2.Ye Arun aur purvi ke bich kya masla hai,jitna bataya gaya hai usse toh mujhe lagta hai Arun ki galti hai,dekhte hai aage kya hota hai dono ke bich.
That erotic scene, uff,the way you wrote it very few writers are able to do so nahi toh bahut se writers toh sex scene likhte time toh aah ,ahh mai hi khatam kar dete hai,but the way you write carefully describing every moment ,thats very impressive.Veer aur purvi ka rishta aise hi aage badhte rehne vala hai aur voh din dur nahi jab dono ke bich sax sux ho jayega.
Purvi aur Veer ka relationship already defined hai. Samay bata dega ki unke beech kya kuchh hoga aur kya nahi. But I'm glad you liked it.
3.Veer aur balhaar ki meeting se bahut kuch baate veer ko bhi janne mili ,that there is a system holder jo uske piche laga hua hai aur voh Disembowler nahi hai,dekhna hoga veer kaise pata lagata hai bahut se clues toh mil gaye hai veer ko par phir bhi Damian tak pahucha itna aasan nahi hoga.Dhananjay aur Aadesh ki fielding set hai aadesh ke liye toh veer ne plan bhi bana liya hai dekhte hai kya hota hai aane wale updates mai uske regarding par ab aadesh aur casabelle ki ulti ginti shuru ho chuki.Dhananjay ke baare mai bhi veer ko ab pata chal gaya hai,toh kya uska khatma karne veer ko gaanv jaan padega ya abhi bhi voh dhananjay Mumbai mai hi hai?
Definitely, Dhananjay yahi kahi hi hoga. Bina Veer ko maare wo bhala kaise kahi jaa sakta hai? Usne location zaroor badal li hogi. Casa Belle me tha woh. Aur, ab pata nahi kaha hai... hum agle bhaag me dekhenge.
Veer ka behaviour change hua hai ,you can feel it abhi uske jaan pehchan vale logo mai se sabne ye notice nahi Kiya hai probably par dhire dhire ye changes prominent honge abhi toh subtle hai iske regarding baakiyo ka kya reaction hoga voh dekhne layak hoga.Aur voh scene jab veer beouwolf blessing on karke balhaar ki taraf dekhta hai,pure goosebumps!!
Exactly. Veer badal raha hai. Changes poore se nahi aaye hai but visible hai. Aur, inn signs ko sabse pehle Tej aur Arohi ne notice kar liya hai.
4.SHB ab renshu ke paas hai ab voh uska kya karega uska mujhe toh koi idea nahi hai,dekhte hai aage,Renshu ko shak hai ki ye vahi system holder hai jo usse bhida tha maybe this will give veer the lead to finding Damian.Ab toh sonali aur abha ko bhi veer aur Ragini ke rishte ke baare mai pata chal gaya.suman mere hisaab se will play a important role in the harem of veer,uski baato se maybe kuch convince ho jaaye to share veer,uske harem ko badhaane ke liye Suman puri koshish kar rahi hai.
Suman is the most loyal servant of Veer. She would do anything for him. Uski 200+ favorability use baakiyo se alag banaati hai. Rahi baat SHB ki... 5 vials hai Renshu ke paas. Dekhna hoga wo inka kaise istemal karta hai.
5.Ab aate hai veer ke dono current missions par Pehla mission hai us system holder ko khojna jisne veer ke saath ye sab kiya,mujhe lagta hai ye bahut mushkil hone wala hai renshu ke kehne par Damian ka thought veer ke man mai bhale hi reh gaya ho par us tak pahuchna veer ke liye katayi aasan nahi hone wala pata nahi kaise pahuchega.
Yahi to interesting hoga dekhna.
Ab aate hai dusre mission par pushkar,nik aur gaurav ke mission par ,pushkar ki death Divya ke haatho hui ye sabhi ko pata hai par gaurav aur nik ka isse kuch na kuch toh connection hai system faltu mission nahi deta,ab gaurav aur nik ka kya role hai pushkar ki death mai ye dilchasp baat hai,mai toh bas yahi chahta hu ki gaurav aur nik jaise chutiyo se suhana aur Divya ka picha chute jald se jald.
Mission ke through hum dekhenge ki kya baat hai. Kya raaz hai!
That's all for this review milte hai agle bhaag ke review ke saath agar likhne ka man kar jaaye toh Sunday tak update de Dena bhai,
Eagerly waiting for the next update♥️
Thanks a lot for the review. Update par kaam jaari hai. Iss month me hi jaayega. Keep supporting! :approve:
 
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