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Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.Update - 33 ~ The Festive NightAb tak...
"Jalsa me taiyaariya karo. Iss chuhe ko ab mein wo sabak sikhaunga ki ye vinti karega ki kaash ye paida hi na hua hota."
Aur itna keh ke Aatish waha se chala gaya.
Kya kaha tha usne? Ja-Jalsa? Jalsa me? Waha maujood logo ne jese hi ye suna unki aankhein fati ki fati reh gayi.
Jalsa unke Aatish Bhau ki pasandeeda building ka naam tha. Aur uss se juda ithaas ko yaad kar ke hi unke raungte khade ho jaate the.
Ab aage...
Ek bade se bangle me ek bade se kamre me iss waqt ghanghor sannaata chhaaya hua tha.
Aur do shaks iss samay ek dusre ko hairaani se ghur rahe the.
Ye aur koi nahi, Veer aur Suhana hi the.
Suhana bhauchakki sii saamne ekdum se andar aaye Veer ko dekhe jaa rahi thi. Toh wahi Veer iss waqt iss soch me dooba hua tha ki ab aage kya hone waala hai?
Aur tabhi...
*Woof Woof*
Ek baar fir...
Side me bandhe uss labrador ki awaaz se dono ko jese hosh aaya aur agle hi pal...
"Aaaahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!" Suhana zorr se chillaayi aur...
*Whooooooossshhh*
Ek takiya high speed me Veer ki khopdi ki orr udd ke aaya par reflex ke chalte usne forun hi apne sarr ko side me kar liya. Takiya uske kaano ke bagal se nikla aur...
*Bam*
Peeche bade se darwaaze me jaake bhid ke neeche gir gaya.
'Wtf??? Why is she hitting me? Fucccckkkk! Mujhe nikalna chaahiye yaha se.'
Veer : Ahahaha! I guess... wrong room!
Wo palatne ke liye hua par tabhi peeche se Suhana chillaa padi.
Suhana : Y-Youuuu... Youuu! C-Come... Back... Come back here... Come back...
Na chaahte hue bhi usse mudna hi pada.
Suhana ka chehra poora laal hua jaa raha tha. Wo aisi prateet ho rahi thi jese maano abhi qatl kar degi Veer ka.
'Wait! She... Fuccckkk! She seems pissed. Waqai! Wo waqai boht gusse me lag rahi hai.'
"... see it!?"
Veer ke kaano me kuch shabd pade. Par wo itni dheemi awaaz me bole gaye the ki usko ghanta kuch sunaayi diya.
Veer : Huh!??
Suhana (murmurs) : Y-You... Did you see it?
Veer : Huh? W-What??
Suhana : Youuuuuuuuu!!!! Don't make me repeat. Mene pucha... Did you see that? K-Kya tumne wo sab dekha? And don't you dare lie to me. Ni toh... Ni toh... Mein Cooper ko tumhaare peeche chorr dungi...
Veer : Cooper?
Suhana ne ishaara karte hue side me bandhe labrador ki orr apni nazre kari. Uska kehna tha, ki sach batao, warna wo apne doggy, Cooper ko uski gaand ke peeche laga degi.
'Wtf? That dog won't bite me right? Haha~ I mean C'mon it's a labrador. Look it's so cute...'
*Wooooooooooofffff*
'Fuccccckkkkk!!!'
[Haha]
Suhana : B-Bolo jaldi...
Veer (sighs) : I... Yeah! Mene dekha. And sorry... Aise ekdum se andar aane ke liye.
Ant me usne sach kehna hi sahi samjha. After all, he did saw it though. Ab wo jhoot nahi keh sakta tha.
Par jese hi usne ye baat kubool kii...
Agle hi pal Suhana ka chehra itna laal pad gaya aur wo teddy ko utha ke apni goad me rakh uske peeche chhup gayi.
"Ughhhuuuuu..."
'Huh??? The fuck? Is she crying?'
Apne kadam usne dheere dheere Suhana ki taraf badhaaye aur haule se usne teddy ke kaan pakad usse hataya taaki wo uska chehra dekh sake.
Aur waqai...
'Abeee... Ye... Ye toh ro rahi hai.'
[]
'Don't laugh Pari! Fuckkk!'
Veer : Umm...
Veer ki aahat paate hi Suhana ne usse aisi aankhein dikhaayi jese ek billi dikhaati hai jab koi uske baccho ke nazdeek jata hai toh.
Par...
Wo apni gulaabi gaal fulaaye, aankho me aasu liye iss waqt.
Daraavni kam... Aur cute zyaada lag rahi thi.
'Wait! Haha~ Shit! She's actually cute... Huh? Ye mein kya sochne laga? No way! Ye aurat kahi se cute nahi ho sakti.'
Wo sochna toh yahi chaahta tha par...
Suhana apne teddy ko kheench ke apna muh jese chhipaane ki koshish kar rahi thi usse dekh ke Veer ke vichaar dagmagaane lage.
'Fucccck! She's cute... I agree!'
[]
'Mene tumhe hassne ke liye mana kiya hai. Pari!!! Damn!!'
[Master! Looks like Suhana has that split personality]
'Huh? Split personality?'
[Yes! Like... Kuch log aise hote hai jinki split personality hoti hai. Like... Wo ek personality ko sabke saamne dikhaate hai. Log sochte hai ki yahi unka vyaktitv hai. Par... Ek personality unki aur hoti hai jisse wo dabaaye rakhte hai. Jinhe wo kabhi kisi aur ke saamne nahi aane dete. Kyuki wo personality wo kabhi bhi dikhaana pasand nahi karte. Unhe darr rehta hai ki... Uske chalte na jaane log kese react karenge. Aur Suhana shayad unme se ek hai. She has a split personality disorder. In fact, ye personality aur dusri personality ka mixture hi asli Suhana hai.]
'Damnnn!'
[Yeah! Toh ab tak jo aap ne uska behaviour dekha hai. Wo poori tarah se Suhana nahi thi. Aadhi Suhana ki personality ye hai. Timid, shy and cutesy type.]
'Well... I hate to agree but she does have a cute side.'
Pari usse aur samjhaati par tabhi Veer ko Suhana ki ekdum maddham sii awaaz sunaayi dii.
Suhana : Y-You... You won't tell anyone right?
Veer : I... I won't.
Suhana (surprised) : Huh? Really?
Veer (nods) : Y-Yeah!!
Aur agle hi pal Veer ko jese ek jhatka sa laga. Kyuki next second hi, Suhana ne itni pyaari muskaan dii ki Veer ka khud ka muh khula ka khula reh gaya.
Par jese ye muskaan bas kuch seconds ki hi mehmaan thi.
Suhana : Huh? Wait! Tum yaha kar rahe ho? Aur andar kese aaye?
Veer ne bina kuch kahe hi ring ka box khol ke uske aage kar diya.
Aur Suhana ki aankhein hairat ke maare felti chali gayi aur muh khula ka khula reh gaya.
Ye ring? Ye diamond ring? Ye toh wahi ring thi. Uske Mom ka b'day present jo uske Dad dene waale the par kuch din pehle hi uski galti ke chalte wo chori ho chuki thi. Par...
Par iss waqt wahi anguthi uske saamne thi.
"T-This... Ye toh wahi..."
Usne hadbadaate hue Veer se wo ring churraayi aur usse gaur se alag alag angle se dekhne lagi.
Waqai! No doubt ye wahi ring thi.
Suhana : Ye...!? Wait! Ye tumhaare paas!? Kahi tumne...!?
Iske pehle wo bolti Veer ne uske hontho pe apna haath rakh usse chup kara diya.
Suhana (surprised) : Mmphh?
Veer : Bhool ke bhi ilzaam mat lagaana mujh pe. Fuck! I almost died... Boht mehnat se isse chor se chhina ke laaya hu. Take it now.
Suhana : Huh? Wait! What? Tum... Tum isse chor se chhina ke laaye? Kaun hai chor? Tell me... And tumhe kese pata? Kaha hai wo? Ye sab hua kese?
Veer ne ek aah bhari. Wo jaanta tha Suhana aise nahi maan ne waali. Toh usne sab kuch usse bataana shuru kiya, Pari ka secret chorr ke.
Usne apni kahani ko ghumaate hue bataaya ki kese usne chor ko hotel se bhaagte hue dekha tha jab wo khud hotel se baahar nikla tha. Kese usne Jatin ka peecha kiya, kese wo uss gaanv me pohucha peecha karte karte aur kese usne Jatin ko dabocha aur ring waapas lii.
Suhana Veer ke muh se baat sunte sunte ajeebo gareeb expressions de rahi thi. Kahi wo chaunkti toh kahi wo tension me aa jaati, kahi wo raahat ki saas leti toh kahi daato tale apna angutha daba leti.
Jab Veer ne saari vardaat ka varnan kiya toh ant me Suhana ne finally ek raahat ki saas lii aur ring ke box ko zorr se bheench liya.
Halaki abhi bhi usse yakeen nahi ho raha tha Veer ki baat par. Lekin usse iss baat se zyaada khushi thi ki uske paas ring waapas aa chuki thi. Toh usne zyaada sawaal jawaab nahi kiye.
Veer : T-Toh mera kaam ho gaya. Chalta hu.
Suhana : W-Waiiiittt!!
Veer : Hmm?
Suhana : Wo... I'll remember this. So... Tell me? W-What do you want?
Veer : *frowns*
Suhana : Nahi! Mera matlab hai ki... Tum ye waapas laaye so... Haa! Wait!!!
Achanak hi wo daud ke gayi aur apne purse se na jaane kya par kuch nikaal ke laayi.
Aur Usne Veer ka haath thaam uske haath me kuch pakda diya.
Veer ne dekha toh...
Debit card!
Ek debit card tha jo Suhana ne uske haatho me usse pakdaaya. Usne surprised hote hue Suhana ko dekha toh iss baar wo fir halka sa muh fulaate hue boli.
"Wo... Wo... Ye tum ring waapas laaye uske liye. Don't think ki mein tumhe rishvat de rahi hu. It's.. It's not like that at all. Okay? It's a payment for your hardwork. Iska password hai xxxxxx, Also, mene tumhe uss din wo sab kaha uske liye s-sorry... Sonu mujh se behad naraaz thi isliye... I'll... I'll forgive you... Nooo! I mean... Aaarghh! Just take this. Aur ab sawaal jawaab mat karna."
[Take it master. After all, ye aapka hard earned money hai.]
Veer : Meri ek baat samajh me nahi aayi.
Suhana : Huh!??
Veer : Jab aap itne hi paise waale ho toh iss ring ke peeche itna kyu rona? I mean ek do crore toh aapke liye haatho ka mel hoga... So...
Suhana : Idiot! It's not about money... Paisa toh itna hai ki...
Veer : ....
Suhana : Ugh! I-I mean... Yes! Paisa hai. Yadi Dad chaahte toh uss din hi koi dusri ring de dete Mom ko.
Veer : Then??
Suhana : Actually... Baat gift ki hai. Baat hai samay ki. Last year Mom Dad ke saath tour pe gayi thi foreign toh waha unhe ek party ke dauran kisi lady ki ring pasand aa gayi thi. Fir uss lady ne bataaya tha ek behad hi mashoor shop ka naam. Iss saal Dad ussi shop se Mom ke liye ek acchi sii ring unhe dena chaahte the. But dikkat ye rehti hai ki... Diamonds me cuts lagaaye jaate hai. Good cut, very good cut, brilliant cut aise... Jisme samay lagta hai. Uske baad wo export hote hai then yaha aate hai. So it takes time...
Veer : Ohh!
Suhana : Yeah!! And Dad ne thaan liya tha ki wo wahi ki ring iss baar wo Mom ko denge. Aur unhone brilliant cut lagwaane ke liye kaha tha. Saath hi mein shape rounded rakhne ke liye. Toh it takes time... Yahi kaaran hai ki wo itna udaas ho gaye the mujhse. And now that the ring is here... Unki naraazgi ab dur ho jaegi. So... So... Thanks to you.
Veer : Ohhh! W-Well! I think I will leave now...
Suhana : Waaaaaitttt!!
Veer : Hmm?
Suhana : I-I... I'll do one more favour.
Veer : Huh? No thanks!
Wo bolte hue firse palat ke jaane laga toh fir Suhana ne uska haath thaam usse roka.
Suhana : Y-Youuu! Wait! It's... Haa! Ye... Ye isliye hai ki tum mere secret ko kisi ko na batao okay? Don't you dare say it. Even... Even Sonu ko bhi nahi pata hai iss baare me... So... So you must not... Okay!?
'What the hell??'
Suhana : So... If... If you need a job or anything like that... Then I can help you.
Iss prastaav se Veer ke mann me jese kuch aaya aur wo Suhana ko ghur ke dekha.
Veer : Are you sure!?
Suhana : Huh!? Of-course! I-I am sure. Bolo!? Job chahiye!? Mere husband IT company C.E.O hai. You just need to give interview aur bas. Interview bhi formality ke liye hi hoga yadi mein unse keh du ki tumhaari job lagwaani hai.
Veer : Mujhe toh nahi but...
Suhana : Hmm??
Veer (smiles) : Kisi ko chahiye hai... I'll call you later. Thanks for the reward. And ho sake toh Police ke beech mera naam mat aane dena.
Aur itna bol wo baahar nikal gaya.
Suhana stabdh nigaaho se keval usse jaata hua dekhti rahi. Baad me usse jese dhyaan aaya ki Veer ne call karne ke liye kaha par number toh liya hi nahi. Aur ye soch wo fir se usse bad-badaane lagi.
'He's still an idiot. Hmph! I-I will forgive him this time. Aur police... Toh wo nahi chaahta ki mein uska naam aane du? Well wo student hai toh I can guess. Hmph! I will help you this last time only...'
"Sonuuuuu!" Aur wo fudakti hui andar chali gayi jaha uski behan Sonia iss waqt bathroom me naha rahi thi.
***
Veer udhar se raaste me ghar ki orr laut raha tha aur jis cheez ka usse intezaar tha wo finally ghatit hui...
*Ding*
['Mission ~ Chase down the unknown guy and bring back the diamond ring' has been completed.]
*Ding*
[50 points have been rewarded.]
[Lifetime favour from Suhana has been achieved.]
*Ding*
[System has reached Level - 4]
[In-built function 'Check II' has been unlocked.
Description : You can now check the objects.]
'Dammmmnnn! Pari!? That's fucking amazing. Wait! Mein ab objects check kar sakta hu? Yaani kisi bhi cheez ko? Huh??'
Wo Pari se jaan'ne ke liye utaawla ho raha tha par tabhi...
[Maaaaaaaaasttttteeerrrrrrrrr!!!!]
'Huh? W-What? Kya hua?'
[Ehehehehe~]
'???'
[Ehehehehehe~]
'The fuck!? Pari? Aise befaaltu kyu khil khila rahi ho? You gone insane or what? Mujhe batao ki ye Check -II kya hai? Iska matlab hai ki mein ab koi bhi objects check kar sakta hu?'
[Yesssss! Maaaasttterrrr! Ab aap kisi bhi object ko check kar sakte ho and unka description jaan sakte ho.]
'Wow!!! This will be useful!'
Wo raaste me apni gaadi chalaaye jaa raha tha aur aaj behad khush tha. Sab kuch sahi dhang se hua. Ring bhi waapas mil gayi thi. Mission bhi complete ho gaye aur toh aur Suhana se favour bhi mil gaya tha.
Abhi wo jaa hi raha tha ki tabhi uski nazar road ke hi side me ek bade se mandir par gayi. Ye sheher ke kaafi prasiddh mandiro me se ek tha. Par iss waqt uski nazro ne mandir ke liye apna rukh nahi badla tha.
Kaaran tha...
Uss mandir me andar jaati hui...
Ek aurat!
Ek behad hi parichit aurat. Wo aurat jo uske jeevan me ek aas waapas leke aayi thi jab usne sab kuch chorr diya tha. Wo aurat jisne uski dekh bhaal tab kii thi jab uske apno ne usse ghar se baahar nikaal diya tha. Wahi aurat jo na keval uski teacher thi balki saath hi saath ek behad hi acchi dost bhi thi.
Aur jis se baatein karte waqt Veer ka rom rom khil uthata tha.
Uski apni...
Nidhi Ma'am...
"M-Ma'am..." Uske hontho se apne aap haule se wo shabd nikal pade. Wo dekh paa raha tha ki uski Ma'am ke saath hi saath Juhi aur Shreya bhi thi.
Wo teeno hi andar jaa rahi thi darshan ke liye. Bheed kaafi thi aur kuch palo ke andar hi Nidhi uski nazro se ojhal ho chuki thi.
Pata nahi usse kya soojha ki agle hi pal wo apni bike se utra aur mandir ke andar chal diya.
Mandir bhi chota mota nahi tha. Andar line lagaane ke liye do bhaag the. Beech me lohe ki jaali thi jo safed rang se puti hui thi. Jaali ke iss taraf Purusho ke liye alag line thi toh wahi jaali ke uss taraf mahilaao ke liye dusri line. Aur aise hi kayi baar idhar se udhar hote hue andar jaane ka raasta tha.
Veer Purusho ki line me lag chuka tha par uski nazre keval ek shaks ko dhundne me lagi hui thi. Wo nahi jaanta tha ki wo yaha kyu aaya hai par uske kadam jese apne aap chalte jaa rahe the bas.
Jese uske perr uski apni marzi se nahi chal rahe the.
Uski nazre bhagwaan ke nahi, kisi aur ke darshan ke liye jese tadap rahi thi.
Wo yu aas liye mandir ke andar aa pohucha par Nidhi kahi na nazar aayi usse.
Usne praarthna kari,
'Hey uparwaale! Wese mene kabhi tumpe utna vishwaash nahi kiya. Par Yadi tum meri pukaar sunn rahe ho, aur logo ki kaamnaaye poori karte ho. Toh... Toh... mein aaj tumse yahi maangta hu... Ki... Meri ma'am ki zindagi se kasht dur kar do. Please! Nahi chaahta mein ab unhe aur pareshani me dekhna. Aaj wo bhi aas leke aayi hai tumhaare paas. Chaahe toh unke dard mujhe de do. Mein yuhi peeth peeche unki hifaazat karta rahunga... Par unke paas nahi jaa sakta. Warna wo mujhe apne saath rakh lengi. Aur... Kahi mein koi paap na kar baithu. Wo nahi samajhti hai... Ki yadi wo mere saath itna pyaar se vyavhaar karti rahengi toh... Toh... Mein unka bann ke reh jaunga... Isliye... Jald se jald unke dukh dard dur kar do. Bas yahi kaamna hai meri.'
Veer ne praarthna kar kuch paise aarti ki thaal me chadhaaye aur aarti aur prasaad lete hue wo baahar aa gaya.
Prasaad ko khaane ke baad uski nazar fir ek baar kuch dur side me bani ek jagah par gayi jaha baithne ke liye patthar ki hi ek bench type maujood thi aur saath hi saath agarbatti ko fassane ki ek jagah thi.
Jis shaks ki usse talaash thi wo akhir kaar uski nazro me aayi.
Nidhi jhuk ke agarbatti uss jagah me khos rahi thi. Roz ki hi tarah wo behad hi khubsoorat lag rahi thi. Aur uss se kuch hi duri par Ek bench par Juhi maujood thi jo prasaad khaane me lagi hui thi. Uske bagal se kayi aur bacche bhi baithe hue the aur unke parents bhi. Shayad aaj chhutti ke chalte mandir me itni bheed thi warna roz nahi raha karti thi.
Ek baar fir...
Veer ke kadam apne aap badh gaye...
Par...
Wo chaah ke bhi jaa nahi paa raha tha.
Kyuki uske saamne wahi jaali jo maujood thi. Uss paar jaane ke liye usse peeche se jaana padta jaha jaali khatam hoti hai. Par shayad ab uske paas utna samay nahi tha.
Wo paas aaya aur apne haath rakh, unn chote chote jaali ke chaukor khando me apni ungliyaa fassaaye wo keval Nidhi se bas do teen kadmo ki duri par maujood tha. Aur usse hi nihaar raha tha.
Aur akhir kaar...
"M-Ma'am!?" Usne pukaar hi diya.
"Haaaah!?" Agle hi pal Nidhi jo jhuki hui thi wo jese ekdum se ye parichit awaaz sunn khadi ho gayi.
Wo awaaz sunte hi uska seena itni zorr se lambi saas lene ke chalte upar hua ki wo haafne lagi.
Veer ke saamne Nidhi ki peeth thi. Abhi tak Nidhi ne usse nahi dekha tha. Keval awaaz hi suni thi uski.
'V-Veer!?? N-Nahi! Wo bhala yaha kese...!?'
Usne apna veham samajh ke uss awaaz ko ignore karna chaaha par...
"Ma'am!?"
Ek baar fir...
Uss awaaz ne jese Nidhi ke raungte khade kar diye. Iss baar usse ek pal nahi laga. Wo forun hi palti aur...
Saamne khade shaks ko dekh uski aankhein felti chali gayi.
Fir bauhe sikudi aur fir...
Aankho me nami apne aap aa basi...
"Veer!!?"
Bas! Uske honth se yahi nikla. Aaj na jaane kitne dino ke baad wo usse dekh rahi thi. Uska letter padhne ke baad wo kitna royi thi keval wahi jaanti thi. Aur aaj uske rone ki wajah uske saamne maujood thi.
Akhir... Veer ke liye hi toh wo itne dino tak royi thi.
Par jese jese din guzar rahe the. Nidhi behad hi toot'ti jaa rahi thi. Usse Veer pe gussa raha tha. Na wo uska call uthaata tha, na uss se baatein karta tha, na hi uss din ke baad se mila tha. Inn sab ke chalte jese wo itni khafa ho gayi thi Veer se ki bas khari khoti sunaana chaahti thi usse...
Uske gaalo par apne aap ek geelapan sa usse mehsoos hua. Apne gaal se aasuo ko poch wo usse dekhi aur boli.
Nidhi : Kyu aaye ho ab Veer? K-Kyu? Tumhe toh accha lagta hai na? Apni ma'am ke calls nahi uthaana!? Unse baatein nahi karna? Hafto hafto tak chehra nahi dikhaana!? Aise rooth jaana!? Toh fir kyu? Veer? Ab... Ab kyi aaye ho? Apni ma'am ka mazaak udaane!? Kabhi nahi socha ki ma'am kya soch rahi hongi? Unhe kitni tension ho rahi hogi tumhare aisa karne se!? Huh?? Tum... Yu late late ghar aate the... Mein kuch na boli... Aur... Aur mene thoda sa uss din kya keh diya... Mene ek galti kya kar dii... Tum... *sniff* Tum yu naraaz hoke mujhse ghar chorr ke chale gaye??
Veer kuch na kaha...
Bas... Usne apna sarr jhuka liya. Jaali par yu sarr tikaaye wo bas chup chaap khada raha.
Nidhi : K-Kyu aaye ho ab Veer!? Ab... Ab tum apni Bhabhi ke ghar rehne lage ho. Mere chote se ghar me ab kaha tumhe wo aisho araam milega...?? Hai na!? M-Mein kaha tumhaari zaroorato ka kharcha uthaa paa rahi thi!? Akhir... Isliye... Isliye toh tum gaye na? Ab bhala kya zaroorat tumhe iss ma'am kii?? Padhaayi bhi chorr dij hai tumne ab shayad hai na? Toh bhala... Ab... Ab mera *sniff* mera matlab kya reh gaya.
Chaah ke bhi iss waqt wo kuch keh na saka. Ya yu kahe ki uske muh me shabd hi na bane.
Toh bhala kya jawaab deta!?
Nidhi itna bol dubaara palat gayi aur ab firse bas uski peeth hi Veer ko nazar aa rahi rhi. Wo itna chaah raha tha ki kaash... Kaash ye jaali uske aur Nidhi ke beech na hoti. Kam se kam uss kandhe par wo apna haath rakh ye jata paata ki Nidhi jesa soch rahi thi wesa bilkul bhi na tha.
Nidhi : You... You should go right? Boht kaam honge tumhe... Kaafi... Kaafi busy jo rehte ho tum. *sniff* So... Mujh par samay waste karni ki zaroorat nahi hai Veer... Kaam toh pehle dekha jaata hai... Hai na!? Y-You should go...
Itna bol usne abhi ek kadam aage badhaaya hi tha jab agle hi pal Veer ki baat sunn uske kadam wahi rukk gaye.
Veer : Parso...
Nidhi : ....
Veer : Parso... Mera janmdin tha...
Nidhi uski baat sunn ekdum sihar gayi. Aur uske aasu bhi behna jese ruk gaye the. Par wo peeche nahi mudi... Wahi stabdh sii bas sthir khadi rahi.
Veer (smiles) : Uss din kuch qareebi logo ne me mujhe wish kiya... Kavya meri behan... Sabse pehle usne kiya tha. Uske baad Shreya jii ka bhi video call aaya tha. Juhi se bhi baat hui... Aur toh koi hai nahi meri zindagii me... Ek shaks aur...
Nidhi : ...
Veer : Aap hi ho. Mein din raat aapke ek message ya call ka wait karta raha. Maana ki mene haha... Aapko reply nahi diya tha... Par mujhe laga tha harr baar ki tarah... Uss din toh aap pakka hi call karogi... Par ...
Nidhi : ......!!????
Veer : Aapki badhaayi na aayi...
Aur bas...
Uska itna kehna tha ki...
Nidhi ke aasuo ka jo baandh abhi tham gaya tha wo ek baar fir laba lab behna shuru ho gaya. Mote mote aasu uske gaalo se lakeer bana ke gir rahe the.
Na jaane kitna kuch suna diya tha usne Veer ko yu khade khade. Par... Uski ek baat na suni.
Wo bhul gayi thi ki keval wahi nahi thi jo naraaz thi. Keval Veer ki hi galti nahi thi. Bhala uska janmdin kese bhul gayi wo? Usse yaad tha. Haan usse yaad tha par kaam, vyastata, tension, aur Rajat se divorce ke chalte wo jese bilkul hi bhul gayi thi.
Aur ab jab usse iss baat ka pata chala toh...
Glaani... Keval glaani ke bhaav the. Jo pehle se hi maujood glaani ke bhaar ko aur badha chuke the.
Itna... Ki ab uss bhaar se uth paana kaafi mushqil tha.
Jab usse iss baat ka ehsaas hua toh wo forun hi palti....
"Veeeeeeeerrrrrr!!!"
Par...
"??????????"
Veer waha maujood nahi tha. Aur aaj pehli baar... Nidhi ko apne andar ek sense of loss mehsoos hua. Maano jese usne behad hi keemti kuch apna kho diya ho. Jisse paana ab shayad behad mushqil tha.
"N-Noooo!" Wo achanak hi idhar udhar bhaagte hue usse dhundne ka prayaas kari... Par...
Veer kahi nahi tha.
Aur wo bilakhti hui rote rote Juhi ke paas pohuchi. Uski ungli pakad wo forun hi mandir ke baahar jaane lagi. Iss aas me ki Veer baahar gaya hoga toh mil jaega.
Par...
Veer idhar se jese hi laut raha tha ki achanak uski shirt kisi ne peeche se pakad lii.
Palat ke dekha toh...
Shreya!!!
'????'
Shreya : Kyu karte ho aisa?
Veer : I... I'll talk to you later...
Wo jaane ke liye hua toh iss baar Shreya ne uska haath thaam liya.
Shreya : Tell me...!
Veer : Trust me! Mujhe kaam hai. Also...
Shreya : ???
Veer : Kya aap job karna chaahti ho???
Shreya : Huh??
Veer : If you want to... Then mujhe bataana. I have an offer ... Chalta hu...
Wo itna bol jaane laga.
Shreya : S-Sunoooo tohhhh....
Par Shreya ki awaaz ka koi matlab na raha.
Veer... Jaa chuka tha.
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Kuch din guzar chuke the. Aur aaj... Diwali ka itna bada tyohaar tha.
Vivek sang Karunesh aur Sumitra Ragini ko waapas se ghar le jaane me asamarth the. Aur aaj ki ye Diwali Ragini apne hi ghar me manaane waali thi. Suman, Abha, Sonali aur... Veer ke saath.
Din me wo apne ghar ho aayi thi. Toh ab raat me jaane ki zaroorat nahi thi.
Aaj wo Veer ke liye aur Suman sang baaki sabhi ke liye kayi saare kapde aur anya samaan khareed kar laayi thi. Diwali ka parv hi rehta hai khushiyo ka...
Aaj Ragini bhi behad khush thi. Ye Diwali Bhale hi wo ghar se alag mana rahi thi. Par yu Veer aur anya ke saath usse jese koi kami nahi mehsoos ho rahi thi. Thoda gham zaroor tha. Par wo jaanti thi... Ki gehre zakhmo ko bharne me samay toh lagta hi tha.
Raat ke samay sabhi taiyaar pooja khatam hone ka intezaar kar rahe the. Pooja ladies log kar rahi thi toh Veer baahar hi maujood tha.
Ki tabhi usse Kavya ka call aaya aur...
Veer : Bol Kavya!
Kavya : Bhaiya! Mein aur Arohi dii udhar aa rahe hai. Okay? Pataakhe fodenge sab milke hehe~
Veer : Arre par... Baahar pataakhe foot rahe hai. Raaste me gaadi chalaana khatre se khaali nahi hai Kavya. Mat aao...
Kavya : Nahiii! Aa rahe hai matlab aa rahe hai... bye!
Aur call end ho gaya.
Idhar Kavya full excited Arohi ke peeche baith chuki thi. Dono hi behad hi khubsoorat dress pehni hui thi.
Aur gaadi me sang baith wo ravaana ho gayi.
Par unhe nahi pata tha...
Ki iss waqt unke peeche kaun aa raha tha.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
Like karna na bhuliyo.
Fantastic mind-blowing update
Awesome Updatee
Veer ne Suhana ki itni madad ki par aakhir mein usne wapas se paise ka ghamand dikhaya. Par baad mein usse aihsaas bhi hua usne galti kardi.
Veer ne Suhana se favour ke roop mein IT company mein job ka socha hai jo woh shreya ko dena chahta hai jisse Nidhi ki thodi help hojaaye.
Mandir mein Nidhi Veer ko dekh kar bahot kuch bolgayi jo uske mann mein tha. Par aakhir mein Veer ne Nidhi ke mann mein wapas se ek glaani ke bhaav dhaal diye.
Idher yeh Kavya aur Aarohi ka pichha jarur Aatish ke aadmi hi kar rahe hai.
Yaani Veer ka next mission hone aana wala hai Kavya aur Aarohi ka bachane ka.
Zabardast update
Bahut bahut bahut badhiya wonderful fantastic update
Fantastic update
Badiya update bhai zabardast
Very emotional
Lagta h next update m thriller dekhne ko lilega...
Nice updates bro
Shaandar aur Zabardast update bhai....
This was a emotional update.
And also a nice character development for suhana
Nidhi aur veer ki bhi chemistry next level ja rahi ha.
Let's see next update ma kya hoga
Shaandar update bhai. Toh suhana se job offer shreya k liye accept kiya. Ab veer debit card se nidhi ki prob solve kar sakta hy. Aur yeh kavya aur arohi k peechhe kahin ajay to nahi aa raha
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Awesome again
Superb mindblowing fabulous fantastic update...........
keep posting bhai..........
waiting for next update.........
Super update hai Bhai
Great emotionally update
Nice update...
Osm update Bro.... Par aek sawal jab veer ke paas debit card the to usne nidhi ko kyun nahi diya jise uski problm solve ho jati....
Awesome update bhai
So finally suhana ko ring lauta Di veer ne chalo task to nipat gaya and usne debit card aur sath hi job bhi offer kar di Jo veer ne shreya ke liye soncha an shayad shreya bhi much settled ho jaye.
Nidhi se mulakat bhi hogayi itne din baad ab uske life mai bhi itni chize ek sath ghat rahi hai ke aise mai uske dimag se veer ko wish karna nikal gaya but dekhte hai ki akhir kab in dono ki sahi se mulakat hogi aaur sab gile shikve dur Honge.
Lagta hai is diwali veer ko pathako ki jaga kuch aur hi phodna padega kavya aur aruhi ke chakkar mai waise bhi ab tak kahani mai sab ka kirdar kkahi na kahi samajh araha hai but aruhi ka utna zikr nahi huwa dekhte hai ab kya hota hai.
Great writing and story getting interesting by each update.
Fantastic superb update
Superb update bro
Aik Martba phr zabardast update dia hai ...
Nice update bhai
superb awsm update to gud waiting for next update plz do cont asap
waiting for nidhi and veer scenes
Awesome update
lagta hai ye atish & Slogan ke gunde aise asani se picha nahi chhodenge kavya aur suhaana ka....
brilliant update with awesome writing skills![]()
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Mast update bhai ab sayad veer ko ye mission milega save kavya and arohi.... Emotional and khusi ke mile jule update badiya tha bhai
Update me kuch moments miss hue lage veer ne apne points kaha use kiye...
Suhana ne jb Sonia ko ring ke bare me bataya to Sonia ne kya react kiya ...
Thanks for superb update
Fantastic update...
Awesome update
Raghu to gaya lakin uske gunde ab bhi uske piche h suhana ki saadi ho gai h to ye apne ghar kyu nahi rahti
Keep posting
Mast shaandar update
Sandaar update bhai
Shandar update bhai
Awesome update...
Awesome update bhai...waiting for next update eagerly...
Superb update bro
Awesome fabulous update Bhai
शानदार जबरदस्त भाई लाजवाब
Bole to ekdm zakaassss
Rajasthan, Haryana, Punjab mein jaake dekho samajh aa jayega ki jab dimaag mein gand bhar jaaye to insaan kya nahi kar sakta.
Awesome update bhai or mujhe lagta he ki kavya or aarohi ka shayad kidnap hone wala he waiting for next update
Amazing bhai bahut hi dhaansu update tha
Nice update
उफ्फ्फ जब भी वीर व निधि का जिक्र आता है
भई कहानी में भावनाओं का लेवल अपने अल्टीमेट उच्च तम पर पहुंच जाता है
कहीं निधि अंदर से इतना ना टूट जाए के वीर को पछतावा भी हो
कहानी अच्छी जा रही है
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Superb update bhai
Nice update
Veer bechara... Pyaar aur humdardi ka maara.
सौ दर्द है.. सौ राहातें.. सब मिला दिलनशीं एक तू ही नहीं..
Awesome update bhai
Superb Update bro
Keep Posting
Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai bhai...
Nice and beautiful update...
romanchak update ..suhana ko split personality ki bimari hai ye veer ko pata chal gaya pari se .
suhana ab madadgar ban gayi hai veer ke liye .
pehli wali suhana se ye aaj wali suhana ka roop dekhke jyada maja aa gaya..
nidhi ke saath mandir me emotional baate huyi veer ki .
aur ab shreya ko job karne ki baat bhi keh di .
par ye arohi aur kavya ka pichha kaun kar raha hai har baar..
Superb story bro..
Ek raat mein puri story padh li.
Gazab likhte ho bro.nidhi ma'am ke sath thodi sa romance badhao bro.
Amazing update.suhana ka koi secret he jo koi nehnii janta but veer jan gaya he is liye wo usko job offer kar raha he..
Nidhi dukhi he veer ko leke iss liye wo usko ignore kar rahi he.kavya aur aarhoi ka picha sayad aatish k admi kar rahe hain.
Fabulous Update Bro....
Lagta hai Veer Ko Diwali me bada Dhamaka Milne wala Hai.
Kya us debit card ki shyata se rajat ke sare peese lota kr wo Diwali pr nidhi ki madad krne wala uska bacha use dila kr.....???
Bahad umda update bhai
Super wonderful awesome update
There is a lot of difference between Sonia and Suhana, one is very smart, mature and nicethe other is just the opposite, she is like a child.
By the way, Pari talks very naughty, what is the matter after all?And how do use that new power, means touching any object will give you information.
I was very sad to see Nidhi mam cryingI felt like beating Veer
Veer should not have done so
If there is love between the two then things can work out and I can forgive you
Well now there is money and job also means all the problem of Nidhi mam has been solved.
Who can follow Kavya and Aarohi is not Aatish because his target is Veer, not family.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
Superb update
Stories acchi hai
Jo log apke sath hai majburi Mai
Nahi to aise update wale stories ko nahi padtha sab chod dete .......
Muje to lagta hai ya to apke pass time nhi hai likhne ke liye badi mushkil se milta hoga apko tabhi update dete hai ....
Lekin mujhe nahi lagta aap stories kisi dusre site se copy paste karte ho
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Apne reder ko itna mat tadpao ki apka kahani padna chod de .
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Agar aap sahi writer hai to update Mai sudhar la sab jindgi Mai Kam rahta hai .
Samay nikalna padta hai ....
Mai apka uphas nahi kar raha Hun bus sujhaw de raha Hun ...
Mujhe ya kisi bhi reder ko writer ka uphas nahi udana chaiye..
Suhana ka veer ko lekr bartav pahle ek bacche Jaisa tha kisi bacche ka little secret bina uski marji ke Jan lene pr Jaisa react karta hai vaisa hi kuchh suhana ka tha or jb use yakin ho gya ki veer uska secret kisi ko bhi nhi btayega to firse behavior change ho gya usne veer ko job offer ki Jo veer ne Shreya ke liye soch kr accept kr li...
Veer ko mandir me nidhi, juhi, Shreya ke darsan bhi huye nidhi se ek mulakat krke or Shreya ko job ka bta kr nikal gya divali ki puja ke baad Kavya arohi ke sath veer ke pass ptakhe fodne masti Karne ka veer ko bta kr ja rhi hai pr Lagta hai ab veer ke martal art tecnik ko use karne ka time aa gya hai... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab
Bohat he behtareen lajawab update waiting for next update
Bhai veer nidhi ko kab tak rulaa tah rahega?
Bahot badhiya shaandaar update bhai
Veer n ring wapas ker apna mission ppora kia bahot saare rewards mile h bahot achchi baat h
Lagta h Kavya or Arohi ka peeche wahi aadmi aaj fir ker raha h
Dekhte h aage kia hota h kia yeh log pahoch pata h Ragini k gher ya nahi
Badhiya shaandaar
dear Werewolf mene kal hi apki kahani padni shuru ki hai or lagbhag 6 update read kiye .. esme koi do rai nhi ki kahani acchi nhi hai . bahut mast kahani hai but mujhe apse ek shikayat hai ki es forum me kuch mere jaise 10 th pass members bhi hai jinhe english me ABCD ke alava kuch nhi ata .. to bhla pure lambe lambe sentence kaise read kar lenge ?
mene currrant update ko bhi dekha usme bhi eglish word ne apni dhak jamai hui hai .. ab aap jis trah update me english mama ka use karte ho use google baba ki madad se trancelate bhi nhi kar sakte .. example ke tour par .... ohh shit-shit-shit , fuck pari or pichle update me vo tutlane vali suhana na jane kya kya english me badbadaye ja rhi thi .....
i know english ko aap daily routine me use karte hau but hum english me gharib log bus english read & watch karke bs hihihihies type karte rehte hai .. meri bs ek requast hai ki hinglish mam ko hi jyada tavvvaju do baki apki story apki marzi ki app meri batt ko hihihihi karke ignore karte ho ya fir english thodi kamm karte ho
thank you
ULTMATE UPDATe
ULTMATE UPDATe
Mujhe nahi pata tha Werewolf ki ju ke underworld mein connection hain aur uske through ju reader logis ko majboor karte ho story padhne ke liye... Very Bed...![]()
Superb update brooo![]()
majboor saayad aap ne nehi kiya, lekin surely aapke story ne kiya hey, it is so good. Iske chalte some credit should also go to you...Kisan is right...
Wahhhhh jabrdast mindblowing superbbb speechless update.......
waiting for next update.......
Superb update bro....
Waiting for next
bahot emotional update..!!
muze lagta hai veer ne jo apni feelings bhagwan ko batayi woh sab nidhi ko bhi batani chahiye..uske baad nidhi jo faisla le woh le sakti hai..!! dono me bahot gehra pyaar dikhta hai..!!
Bahut he badiya story he bro awsm writing skills he aap ka waitng for your next update....!!!
Superb update bro ragini mein to bahot guts aa gae hai veer ke sath hone ke hi karan shayad kya uske dill mein veer ke liye kuch khaas hai idhar veer ne martial arts skills buy kar li hai but ye suhana chiz hai jo v hai sahi hai ab dekhna hai veer diamond kaise lautata hai kyonki suahan ke lachhan dekh kar veer ki v fati padi hai agle updates ka beshabri se intazar rahega![]()
Waiting
Waiting for next update bhai
Update plz
Updated ka intezaar
zabardast
For completed 9lk views on your story thread.....
सुहाना एक शादीशुदा मैच्योर औरत थी पर उसकी हरकतें मासूम और अन मैच्योर जैसा लगा मुझे ।
शायद ऐसा ही वीर ने भी महसूस किया । बात पैसों की नहीं थी बल्कि उसके फादर की इमोशन और विश्वास की थी । इसलिए वह हीरे की अंगूठी चोरी हो जाने पर अजीब व्यवहार कर रही थी ।
इससे मैं एतफाक रखता हूं । सुहाना का रिएक्शन कोई ओवर एक्टिंग नहीं था ।
वीर ने उसे अंगुठी देकर उसका हमेशा के लिए विश्वास जीत लिया । आगे चलकर वो उसके लिए काफी फायदेमंद साबित होगी ।
लेकिन निधि मैम के प्रति वीर का व्यवहार अभी भी मेरे समझ से परे है । निधि की अवस्था हम अच्छी तरह से महसूस कर रहे हैं फिर वीर क्यों नहीं ?
उसने उसे समझने की बदले उस पर एक और आरोप मढ़ दिया । निधि ने उसके जन्मदिन पर बधाई नहीं दी ।
एक ऐसी औरत जो अपने पति की बेरहमी से पीड़ित है .... जिसका नन्हा बच्चा छीन लिया गया है......जो शादीशुदा होकर भी विधवा की जिंदगी गुजर बसर कर रही है...... जिसके सर पर अपनी छोटी लड़की और जवान बहन की जिम्मेदारी है............ उस पर हमें क्या इस लिए नाराज होना चाहिए कि उसने मुझे बर्थडे पर विश नहीं किया !
शायद वीर को " परी " ने अभी तक सांसारिक ज्ञान की बातें नहीं सिखाई । परी को इस पर विचार करना चाहिए ।
एक बार फिर से लास्ट पैराग्राफ में सस्पेंस लगाकर घटना को अधूरा छोड़ दिया आपने । बाकी रीडर्स की तरह मेरी भी जिज्ञासा बढ़ गई कि काव्या और आरोही के साथ क्या घटने वाला है ।
यह अपडेट सही मायने में बहुत ही बेहतरीन था ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग अपडेट Werewolf bhai.
जगमग जगमग अपडेट ।
Aaj k update ka intezar he..
Superb update bjai
Update thoda jaldi chahiye kitna intezaar karunga nind to ata hai lekin story padhe bina sone ko dil nahin karta
Mice update waiting for next
Waiting bhai aaj to 10.30-10.45 tak de dena
Good evening
Werewolf bhai
Bhahut aacha likh rahe ho app keep doing apka tab se follow kar raha hu jase app kahi aur likha chalu kiya tha par tab regular comment nahi kar pata tha
And coming to this story ap ek kahni ko bhahut acha dikha aur smjha re ho jo ap ka style raha he phale se
And this story is going awesomessuace
And kya build up hoga jab veer apni maa ko dude ga
Kya jalsa vohi palace he jo suman ne veer ko dikhaya upload one pic of it
Suhana kya character bhahut mystery hai
Veer ki family ka kaya hoga vo dekne layak hoga
And present villan bhau aurf astish kya hoga jab vo pendent veer ke pass dekhe ga
I am assuming this all
Lot more to write man but have very little time
And best of luck what we're you trying to achieve
Bye man
yours always
JOHN.........
Super update
Waiting update
I waiting bro
OK brother
Waiting
Update 34 has been posted.fan hogaya kya likhte ho. waiting for updates. keep up the good work