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Naina api story ka maza ek taraf or apky comment ko read krna ek taraf. A great n experienced observation by u. It's totally awesomeye jo lady aur ladki diwali mana rahi thi, wo aur koi nahi balki veer ki mom aur bahan thi....
Ye log jo baatein kar rahe the, ya ye kahi jaaye bhaavna jis tarah se itne saalon se kuch raaz ki baatein chupati aa rahi hai.... isse to do baatein saaf hai ki veer ki bahan ko kuch bhi nahi pata apne aur mom ki atit ke bare mein aur sath hi apni family ya apne bhai ke bare mein..
aur rahi duji baat ....haalanki bhaavna aaj bhi atit ke un karwi yaadon ko yaad kar kahi kho jaati hai .... ek peeda reh reh kar uske dil ko dard deti hai... Lekin wo wapas lautne ki kabhi koshish nahi ki aur naa hi apne bete se milne ki...
Shayad bahot badi wajah us brijesh aur uski family paida ki ho ... jiske chalte baaki logo se to kya balki apne bete ka khoj khadar tak lene nahi gayi...
par mana ki wo khulke kuch bolti ya karti nahi lekin ye bhi sach hai ki wo sabhi ko dil se yaad karti hai... specially apne bete ko...
Khair uske dil mein kya dard aur peeda hai ye uske kehne se saamne aaye....
yahan sabse khushi ki baat ye hai ki dono maa beti se ek chhota sa sukhi sansar basa ke ache se jindagi jee rahi hai.... dono hi sach mein bahot himmat wali hai... specially bhaavna....
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nidhi, shreya aur juhi....
Hamesha ki tarah juhi ki maasoomiyat se bhari chulbuli bhumika best rahi...
wo jab bhi entry leti hai, puri kahani ko hi taro taza kar deti hai.... ek shaadgi charo aur bikhad jaati hai....
nidhi aur shreya...
well shreya ki baatein aur dialogue delivery thik thak rahi
lekin in do update mein nidhi ka overacting jaari hai
is nidhi ko ho kya gaya hai... ek aham kirdaar hoke aisi bhumika kahani meinupar se uski photo chipka diya Werewolf ne
photo daalna buri baat nahi hai.... lekin ek aham kirdaar nibhani wali ki modelling photo chipkana matlab lage ki wo mahaz is story pe model ho... Lage ki bas uska kaam itna hai ki aage jaake veer ko saririk khushi dene wali hai... uske atirikt aur kuch nahi
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wo kehte hai na....jab koi raah na ho,, musibat ke waqt koi madad karne wala naa mile tab kabhi kabhi angels kisi na kisi roop mein aake jarur madad karte hai.... waise ise hum insaaniyat keh sakte hai....aur golu ne ishi insaaniyat ke naate us din veer ki madad ki train mein jab veer chalti train se bahar girne wala tha us jatin ke dhakka dene pe... Aur ye sanyog kahe ya kuch aur aaj bhi jab ek taraf do gunde veer ko maarne ki puri koshish kar raha tha aur baaki do gunde kavya & arohi ke piche unhe pakadne gaya tha ...waqt ki itni kami. us samay golu phir prakat hua kisi farishte ki tarah madad karne....
Kuch to linked hai veer se ya bas ek mahaz coincidence hai... ki us raaste se jaate waqt veer ko do gundo se ladta dekh madad karne aa gaya...
lekin jo bhi ho uske aa jaane se veer ko bahot badi madad mil gayi hai...
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Hawas ki pujaran pari aur usse related mystery...
dekha main na kehti thi ki ye pari koi system bystem na hai ye jarur
100% alien hi hai .. warna iski andar feelings kaha se aati.... aur uski behavior.... plus uski emotions...
Machine mein kab se emotions aur feelings aane lagi...
Sabse important baat....agar system kisi baat ko chupane ki kare to jawab pehle taiyar rakhte hai..... na ki insaano ki tarah haklaate hai ki kahi jhuth na pakdi jaaye....
Gaur karne wali baat ye bhi hai ki uske bolne ka tarika..... Aur sabse aham baat bhala ek machine ya system kabhi hansta hai kya human ke behavior dekh
Sare muddo pe gaur ki jaaye to natiza yahi nikalta hai ye pari 101% koi alien hai.... Venom movie ke us kirdaar ki tarah, aur veer ke sarir ko kabza kar liya hai.... aur wo maha tharki, maha hawasi bhi hai..... veer to bas ek jariya hai...
Lekin asal hawasi insects lober to wo alien pari hai
Lekin bichare veer ki badkismati to dekho... ushe is baat ka ilm tak nahi
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Ye baat hairaangi wali bhi hai...sirf Arohi aur kavya ke piche hi kyun pade hai wo log....
family ke baaki members chhod kar...
Kya un logo ke liye sabse easy target hai isliye.....
Soniya aur club wali se kya connection in dono ki...?
btw yahan bhi pari ne kamini pan dikha di.... jab veer ghar se nikla to ushe is baat se dar na tha ki kavya ya arohi mare ya jiye.... ushe dar tha 300 points aur kahi pari ushe chhod ke na chali jaaye is baat se...
Aur ye kisi wajah se hua....
Sirf aur sirf us alien pari ki wajah se....
Wo to sukar hai kavya ke agosh mein aate hi us pari dwaara failaye gaye negative khayalaat ek jatke mein door ho gaye veer ke dilo dimag se aur usko apna bhai hone ka farz yaad aa gaya
Ek kavya hi last hope jo pari ke kabze se veer ko
pari jaa, chali jaa is story ko chhod ke
Warna teri to band baja dungi main
Well sabhi pehlu mein sabhi arthpoorn baaton, kirdaaro bich huye vaartalaap ko aur gatividhiyo ko ek sathik gati ke sath samete huye hai update ke jariye writer sahab ne shabdon mein khoob roopantaran kiya hai. .
Bahot hi dilchasp update sath hi kuch arthpoorn aur manmahok kirdaaro ki bhumika thi.. aur dhamake daar action scenes bhi create huye hai....
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills![]()
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Maybe ju ka naam dekh us kirdaar ka naam golu rakh diya ho Werewolf ne* ye GoLu Kon Jisne Veer ki madad ki khai wo uska koi bhai to nhi yha uska koi khas dost but uska to koi dost nhi tha.
Dekhte hai aage kya likha hai samaye ke garbh me......![]()
sath mein vodkaChalo aaz kurkure party karte
Pari apne master ke maal pe kisi aur ko haath thodi naa lagane degi. Agar golu ne koshish ki toh hosakta hai uska patta hi kaat de.
Don't know why but I feel like that woman and her daughter is Veer's mother and sisterNidhi is very sweet and clean hearted, always helps everyone
but why is this always with her
Diwali is a festival of happiness but both that woman and Nidhi are sad
Why is there sorrow in their life or they do not have the right to be happy, whatever the reason, I blame Veer
What should I say about Pari, she is hiding a lot, maybe we will come to know the truth when the time comes.Today's scene was very good, enjoyed it,
and who is this Golu? I felt incomplete, now let's see what happens next.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
are haan... us pari ko thodi ek se jee bhare... itni hawasi alien jo thehri woPari apne master ke maal pe kisi aur ko haath thodi naa lagane degi. Agar golu ne koshish ki toh hosakta hai uska patta hi kaat de.![]()
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are haan... us pari ko thodi ek se jee bhare... itni hawasi alien jo thehri wo![]()
Story ke end mein iss pari ki shavyatra jarur niklegi. Itni baddua leke woh jee nhi paayegiPari...hero ki hi mom ko dukh de rahi ho.... Bete ko hi address nahi de rahi ho...
pari jaa...chali jaa is story ko chhod ke![]()