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Well Pari ne shuru se hi feelings darshaayi hai.Awsome update once again
I think pari ke paas bhi feelings hai
Aur jis hisaab se uska master means veer phele din se hi use as a part of body maan raha tha or ek hisaab se veer ka pari le liye protective & possesive hona
Pari ko acha laga isliye uska veer ki tarf aakarshit hona swabhavik hai
Awesome update bhai i think ye mission bhi veer complete kar lega![]()
Nice update bhai
Superb update bhai
SUPER UPDAtE BRO
Nice updates bro
Superb Update a twist![]()
Super update par ye pari ko kya ho rha hai aajkal khi zyada garam to nai ho gai aakhir he to machine wali hi
Fantastic updateb bhai
Mindblowing superbbb speechless update as always.........
keep posting bhai.........
waiting for next update............
Jabardust fabulous update Bhai
Super wonderful awesome update
Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai bhai...
Nice and excellent update...
Bahut hi badhiya update bro.
New character ki entry...
Maja aayega
Werewolf broo u r too awesome
Behtreen update bhai
Super update wolf bro
Dhanyavaad dosto!Wah Bahut mazaa aya ye update padhke
Amazing speculation!ye jo lady aur ladki diwali mana rahi thi, wo aur koi nahi balki veer ki mom aur bahan thi....
Ye log jo baatein kar rahe the, ya ye kahi jaaye bhaavna jis tarah se itne saalon se kuch raaz ki baatein chupati aa rahi hai.... isse to do baatein saaf hai ki veer ki bahan ko kuch bhi nahi pata apne aur mom ki atit ke bare mein aur sath hi apni family ya apne bhai ke bare mein..
aur rahi duji baat ....haalanki bhaavna aaj bhi atit ke un karwi yaadon ko yaad kar kahi kho jaati hai .... ek peeda reh reh kar uske dil ko dard deti hai... Lekin wo wapas lautne ki kabhi koshish nahi ki aur naa hi apne bete se milne ki...
Shayad bahot badi wajah us brijesh aur uski family paida ki ho ... jiske chalte baaki logo se to kya balki apne bete ka khoj khadar tak lene nahi gayi...
par mana ki wo khulke kuch bolti ya karti nahi lekin ye bhi sach hai ki wo sabhi ko dil se yaad karti hai... specially apne bete ko...
Khair uske dil mein kya dard aur peeda hai ye uske kehne se saamne aaye....
yahan sabse khushi ki baat ye hai ki dono maa beti se ek chhota sa sukhi sansar basa ke ache se jindagi jee rahi hai.... dono hi sach mein bahot himmat wali hai... specially bhaavna.
Juhi sabki laadli hai...nidhi, shreya aur juhi....
Hamesha ki tarah juhi ki maasoomiyat se bhari chulbuli bhumika best rahi...
wo jab bhi entry leti hai, puri kahani ko hi taro taza kar deti hai.... ek shaadgi charo aur bikhad jaati hai....
I disagree Naina jii! Jab bhi jitni baar bhi pics mene daali hai. Koi bhi pic nude ya semi nude nahi daali hai. Aur aisa hi aage hoega. Nude pics ki imagination mein readers pe chorrunga. Keval expressions ke gifs aur vastr pehne hue hi streeyo ki pics aaengi. Nidhi aur Shreya ki pics isliye daali gayi hai taaki readers imagine kar sake ki Diwali ke tyohaar par wo kaisi dikh rahi thi. Yaha Nidhi koi sex object nahi hai. Aur same baat Suman ke liye bhi laagu hoti hai. Bhale hi wo slave hai Veer ki. Par Veer usse slave se kahi zyaada badh ke maanta hai. Aur ye baat wo aage khud proof bhi karegi.ek aham kirdaar hoke aisi bhumika kahani meinupar se uski photo chipka diya Werewolf ne
photo daalna buri baat nahi hai.... lekin ek aham kirdaar nibhani wali ki modelling photo chipkana matlab lage ki wo mahaz is story pe model ho... Lage ki bas uska kaam itna hai ki aage jaake veer ko saririk khushi dene wali hai... uske atirikt aur kuch nahi
Naina jii ko Pari se ek obsession ho gaya hai.Sare muddo pe gaur ki jaaye to natiza yahi nikalta hai ye pari 101% koi alien hai.... Venom movie ke us kirdaar ki tarah, aur veer ke sarir ko kabza kar liya hai.... aur wo maha tharki, maha hawasi bhi hai..... veer to bas ek jariya hai.
Ye galat hai. Veer ko points ki chinta nahi thi. Wo description readers ko ye bataane me liye tha ki penalty naam ki cheez kuch hai jiske chalte wo points kho sakta hai.btw yahan bhi pari ne kamini pan dikha di.... jab veer ghar se nikla to ushe is baat se dar na tha ki kavya ya arohi mare ya jiye.... ushe dar tha 300 points aur kahi pari ushe chhod ke na chali jaaye is baat se...
pari jaa, chali jaa is story ko chhod ke
Boht boht dhanyavaad!Well sabhi pehlu mein sabhi arthpoorn baaton, kirdaaro bich huye vaartalaap ko aur gatividhiyo ko ek sathik gati ke sath samete huye hai update ke jariye writer sahab ne shabdon mein khoob roopantaran kiya hai. .
Bahot hi dilchasp update sath hi kuch arthpoorn aur manmahok kirdaaro ki bhumika thi.. aur dhamake daar action scenes bhi create huye hai....
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills
Soniya to masoom he veer ki future wife he wo.pari veer ko phasa rahi he..
Bhai tum bhi Naina jii ki baato me aa gaye!?Dekha Werewolf ...ye sauravb bhi agree karta hai... ki pari fansha rahi hai veer ko![]()
Thanks a lot bhai!read the full story tonight . puri kahani me kahi bhi boriyat feel nhi hui .. agar kahani me mujhe sabse intresting seens lge vo the pari or suhana ki conversation . especially their reactions .. veer ki family ne jo uske sath kiya vo mafi ke layak nhi hai . ha agar koi naram dil insan ho jisne kabhi kisi se nafrat nhi ki ho uski baat alag hai .. hume ye bhi dekhne ko mila ki veer ki mom abhi zinda hai jinse vo mil bhi chuka hai bs dekhna te dilchusp hoga ki . veer khud unhe dhundne ki koshish karta hai ya fir accidentally hi unki meeting ek baar fir hoti hai ... l think last update me jin unknown girl and her moms ka jikr hua hai vo veer ki mom hi hogi .....
if my guess is right to me ye janne ke liye exciting hu ki kya veer ki mom ne dusri shadi ki ? veer ki real mom ki beti veer ki cousin hai ya fir real sister ?
ye sab baad ki bate hai filhaal to ye janna dilchusp hogaWill Veer be able to save kavya and arohi or not?
Fantastic updates as always , exciting storyline , selection of fabulous characters & curious to know more .. lets see what happens next
Dhanyavaad bhai!romanchak update ..wo aurat jarur veer ki maa hi hogi ,aur shayad wo veer ke baare me hi soch rahi thi ,par apne beti ko apni pareshani nahi batayi .
nidhi aur shreya dono hi apne vicharo me khoye huye the ,aur dono ki soch bhi sahi hai waqt ke hisaab se .
shreya bojh nahi banna chahti nidhi pe uske paise branded cheejo me kharch karake .
wahi nidhi gumsum si hai kyunki wo sochti hai wo apne logo ke liye kuch kar nahi paa rahi .
veer ke message se khush ho gayi nidhi par sahi tarike se reply nahi kar paayi aur veer ko laga ki nidhi ab bhi usse naraj hai .
ye pari ke baare me itna kyu aur kya soch raha hai veer ,aisa kya kiya pari ne jo uspe doubt kar raha hai..
kisika past jaanne ke liye uski jaan leni padegi ye kuch jyada hi danger ho gaya hai veer ke liye..
ab ek naya mission aur usme bhi penalty points hai ,aarohi ko bachane ka .
kiske aadmi hai wo jo sirf aarohi ka pichha karke un dono ko pakadna chahte hai..
golu waise sahi waqt pe aa gaya aur veer ko bacha liya par kya veer ab faayda le payega us ek moment ka .golu koi fighter nahi hai to wo bhi fans jayega agar veer un asdmiyo ko maar nahi paya to .
Boht boht dhanyavaad bhai!Kuch kahaniya aisi hoti jo bahut hi acchi hoti jaise ki ye kahani jo chal rahi ..... my favorite story....... baadshah... manhoos se mahan tak.... priyaarush A love story ...ye dono kahaniya adultry me hain
murmure matlab shayad kurekure khana....![]()
Thanks Dude!Fabulous Update Bro.
* Wo Aurat koi aur nhi Veer Ki MAA hai jo veer ke bare me soch rhi thi.
* This Story my favorite Cute Love Story Nidhi and Veer. ❤
* ye GoLu Kon Jisne Veer ki madad ki khai wo uska koi bhai to nhi yha uska koi khas dost but uska to koi dost nhi tha.
Dekhte hai aage kya likha hai samaye ke garbh me......![]()
Nidhi is lobbbNidhi is very sweet and clean hearted, always helps everyone![]()
Veer doesn't knows her inner thoughts and feelings.but why is this always with herDiwali is a festival of happiness but both that woman and Nidhi are sad
Why is there sorrow in their life or they do not have the right to be happy, whatever the reason, I blame Veer
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Yeah! Even Veer thinks so...What should I say about Pari, she is hiding a lot, maybe we will come to know the truth when the time comes.![]()
The one who saved Veer in the train from that fall. Remember!?who is this Golu? I felt incomplete,
Thanks a lot! Keep supporting!As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...