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[Mr moon knight x]

To Isme cheating kaha se hui.

Samjhe nahi ye misty ki dusri Id hai

 

[xeyan7890]

Bhai agar veer sonia ka help Kara tho keara ko bura lagega na

 

[Werewolf]

Yeah It can be said, ki Bhawna wale scene me Brijesh puri tarah se galat nahi hai, aadmi aese mamle me dimag ka istemal kam hi karta hai.

But uss pure scene ko dekhkar jab Bhawna ko Ghar se nikala tha, ye bhi lagta hai ki Brijesh ke mann me pyar jaisa kuch tha bhi nahi Bhawna ke liye, jaise wo use nikalne ke liye taiyar hi betha tha. Not given a chance to explain her.

Aur Bhawna ke mamle me Brijesh ko maaf kiya jaa sakta hai. Lekin what about Veer. Main thing here is ki usme kabhi Veer ke sath thik se vyavhar nahi kiya.

Mostly Veer ke past trauma hamne pranjal, Ragini, Kavya, Shweta ke pov se dekhe hai. Brijesh aur Veer ke past ko Werewolf ne abhi thik se dikhaya nahi hai. Agar Brijesh ka vyavhar Veer ke liye thik hota to baki ghar vale bhi Veer ko iss tarah treat nahi kar pate.

Bhawna ke ye gussa tab hai jab use Veer ke bare me sab kuch nahi pata, imagine the anger of Bhawna and Tej jab Veer ka past unhe detail me pata chalega.

I hope Werewolf soon reveal Veer's past for Bhawna and Tej and also show past of Brijesh and Veer.

Brijesh Bhavna ko ghar se nikaalne ke liye nahi baitha tha.

Jaisa ki Bhavna ne kaha ki Brijesh sirf use paana chaahta tha. Khubsurti ke liye. Unki shaadi jaldbazi me hui thi. Agar pyaar hota toh Brijesh Bhavna par bharosa karta.

Ek wo hoti hai na possesiveness kisi ke liye. Wo Brijesh me thi. Aise samajh lo ki ju kisi ladki par line maar rahe ho. Achhi lag rahi hai. But ju ko uss se sirf attraction hai. Aur, jaise hi ju ne usko kisi aur ke saath ghulte milte ya kuchh aur karte dekha. Ju ne rukh badal liya. Completely ignore. Not worth your time.

Brijesh ke saath yahi hua but in a more intense manner.

Ab isi scenario ko zara reverse kar ke dekhte hai. Let's say ki Brijesh ko phasaaya jaata. Brijesh ke bagal se koi aurat ko lita ke tasveer li jaati aur phir Bhavna ko wo tasveer di jaati. Kya hota Bhavna ka reaction?

Obviously wo krodhit hoti. Lekin, kya wo aisa decision leti? Ye jaante hue ki wo humesha hi teh tak jaati hai kisi bhi cheez ke liye. Bhavna ne Brijesh ko ek mauka diya hota apne aap ko bekasoor saabit karne ka. Jo Brijesh ne use nahi diya.

Yahi reason hai ki kyu Bhavna Brijesh ko pasand nahi karti.

Ateet hume bahut se logo ke dekhne hai. Phir chaahe wo Veer Brijesh ho, Bhavna Tej ya phir Shweta Bhumika.

Sabhi ke liye maine kuchh na kuchh soch rakha hai.

 

[kris123h]

Any update on the word count for next update

 

[kumar change]

Brijesh Bhavna ko ghar se nikaalne ke liye nahi baitha tha.

Jaisa ki Bhavna ne kaha ki Brijesh sirf use paana chaahta tha. Khubsurti ke liye. Unki shaadi jaldbazi me hui thi. Agar pyaar hota toh Brijesh Bhavna par bharosa karta.

Ek wo hoti hai na possesiveness kisi ke liye. Wo Brijesh me thi. Aise samajh lo ki ju kisi ladki par line maar rahe ho. Achhi lag rahi hai. But ju ko uss se sirf attraction hai. Aur, jaise hi ju ne usko kisi aur ke saath ghulte milte ya kuchh aur karte dekha. Ju ne rukh badal liya. Completely ignore. Not worth your time.

Brijesh ke saath yahi hua but in a more intense manner.

Ab isi scenario ko zara reverse kar ke dekhte hai. Let's say ki Brijesh ko phasaaya jaata. Brijesh ke bagal se koi aurat ko lita ke tasveer li jaati aur phir Bhavna ko wo tasveer di jaati. Kya hota Bhavna ka reaction?

Obviously wo krodhit hoti. Lekin, kya wo aisa decision leti? Ye jaante hue ki wo humesha hi teh tak jaati hai kisi bhi cheez ke liye. Bhavna ne Brijesh ko ek mauka diya hota apne aap ko bekasoor saabit karne ka. Jo Brijesh ne use nahi diya.

Yahi reason hai ki kyu Bhavna Brijesh ko pasand nahi karti.

Ateet hume bahut se logo ke dekhne hai. Phir chaahe wo Veer Brijesh ho, Bhavna Tej ya phir Shweta Bhumika.

Sabhi ke liye maine kuchh na kuchh soch rakha hai.

Perfect

 

[Werewolf]

It's controversial ki Brijesh ne Bhavna ko kaise ghar se nikala. Ek aadmi aisi situation mein kya kare? Bhavna ka woh photo kisi aur mard ke saath dekhkar Brijesh ka dil toot gaya. It's understandable ki uss moment mein Brijesh seh nahi paya. Situation aisi thi ki Brijesh ne gusse ke maare, thappad ke saath bura bhala bolkar Bhawna ko ghar se nikal diya. Iska matlab yeh nahi ki uska dimag kharab ho gaya tha,
it was heartbreak, a disturbing heartbreak. Brijesh koi shant Mahatma toh tha nahi jo photo ke peeche ki sachi baat ko calmly samajh leta.

We can see ki heat of the moment mein Brijesh ne Bhavna ko explain karne ka mauka nahi diya. But come on, uss situation mein kaun kisi ki baat sunta hai? Cheating ki feeling aisi hoti hai ki insaan ko kuch aur soojhta hi nahi.

Main yeh nahi kehta ki Brijesh ne sahi kiya, but socho, kya Bhavna ne kabhi Brijesh ko baad mein explain karne ki koshish ki? Woh bhi toh samajh sakti thi ki Brijesh ne uss situation mein aisa kyun kiya. Lekin Bhavna ne bhi toh ego pe le liya, Brijesh se contact hi tod diya, kabhi bhi baat clear nahi ki. Even now, she hasn’t tried to resolve things. But ab ki situation alag hai ab veer bhi hai to woh kuch resolve nahi karegi it's understandable, but phale woh kar sakti thi.

Agar Bhavna yeh claim karti hai ki Brijesh usse pyar nahi karta tha bas aakarshan tha, toh Brijesh bhi toh sawal utha sakta hai. Agar Bhavna ko usse sach mein pyar hota, toh kya woh Brijesh ke uss action ke peeche chhupa dard nahi samajhti? Brijesh bhi toh yeh poochh sakta hai ki agar Tej uski beti thi, toh Bhavna ne usse yeh baat kyun chhupayi? Haan, Bhavna ka situation bhi uss waqt mushkil tha, lekin kya yeh justify karta hai ki ek beti ko uske baap se chhupaya jaye?

We can understand ki Bhavna ne q Tej ko iss mamle se door rakha, aur Veer ko bachpan mein chhod diya.

Lekin Brijesh ke perspective ko bhi toh samajhna padega na? Haan, 101% Brijesh ne galti ki, Veer ko woh pyaar nahi diya jo ek baap ko dena chahiye tha. Veer usse Bhavna ki yaad dilata tha, aur is wajah se usne Veer se doori banayi. Uski saza Brijesh ko mil rahi hai, aur shayad future mein aur bhi milegi.

Lekin socho, agar Bhavna ne ek baar, bas ek baar Brijesh ko sach bata diya hota, toh shayad Veer ko aisa jeevan na jeena padta ( Khair veer ko aisa jeevan jeena na padhta to Stroy suru nahi hoti, but story se hatke sirf 1 minute ke liye character pe Focus kiya jaye to) -

Agar Bhavna ko bhi Brijesh se sach mein pyar hota, vishwas hota, toh woh usse kuch nahi chhupati. Jitna mujhe yaad hai Chhupa chhupi ka khel toh Bhawna ne shuru kiya tha na.

Bhavna : "Tumne mujhse kabhi pyaar kiya hi nahi, Brijesh! Tum bas mujhe paana chaahte the. Dono me farq hai. Agar, tumne mujhse pyaar kiya hota, toh mujh par bharosa hota."

To phir Bhavna ne Brijesh pe bharosa karke sab kuchh kyun nahi bataye? Kuchh shadyantra chal rahi thi Bhavna ko pata bhi tha, tab usne Brijesh pe bharosa karke kyun nahi bataye? Yeha pe to ussi ki baat uspe bhi lagu hona chahiye.

Halaki situation hi aisi thi, But usne bhi to bharosa nahi kiya, Uska consequence toh banta hai. Shaadi ke mantro mein bhi kaha jata hai ki patni ko apne pati se kuch bhi nahi chhupana chahiye, kuch bhi matlab kuch bhi.

bhawna " tum mujhse piyar nahi mujhe Pana chate the" yeh baat aurat tab kehti hain jab unke paas aur koi justification nahi bachta. They know deep down ki unhone galti ki. But Bhavna ka case alag hai yeha Bhawna ne cheat nahi ki, usne phele baat ko chupaye phir hit of the situation ko ego pe leli.

Brijesh ne Veer ke saath galat kiya I’m 100% agree. Lekin Bhavna ne kya Veer ke saath sahi kiya? Woh to hit of the situation tha na? Uss waqt situation aisi thi ki Bhavna ko Veer ko chhodna pada, just like Brijesh ne Bhavna ko ghar se nikala.

Dono ke decisions heat of the moment mein liye gaye.

Ab Brijesh bhi kare kiya? Usse laga uski wife ne usse dhoka diya. Phir soch samajhkar hi usne Shweta se shaadi ki, usse shelter diya, uski beti ko parivar diya. Yeha pe Brijesh poori tarah galat insaan nahi dikh raha.

Bhawna ne Veer ko chhoda, usse itne saal maa ki mamta se door rakha, Tej se uske bhai ke baare mein chhupaya. Veer ko na baap ka piyar mila na maa ka, uski wajah kon? Directly na Sahi but indirectly bhawna hi, mere hisab se.
Agar Veer Egypt nahi jata, toh pata nahi Bhawna kab Veer ko dhoondne aati ya Tej ko uske bhai ke baare mein batati.

Aur sabse khatarnak baat mere liye yeh hai ki narration se pata chalta hai ki Bhavna intentionally chahti thi ki Veer uska badla pura kare. Lekin jab Veer adult hua, tab kitna hi jaan paye hogi bhawna apne bete ke bare mein? Hardly 10% right? Bhawna ko Veer ke intelligence, strength, ya capabilities ke baare mein kuch nahi pata tha. Phir bhi woh expect kar rahi thi ki Veer uska badla lega. Jab Veer ne badla liya, tab narration mein dikhaya gaya ki Bhawna yahi chahti thi. Somewhere, aur Veer ke mu se bhi yehi nikla tha. she brought Veer to the village for this purpose. Maa ke kartavya ko toh usne poora nahi kiya, ulta Veer se expect kiya ki woh uska badla lega, kaise lega, yeh tak nahi socha. Toh kya Bhavna poori tarah sahi thi? Mere liye to Nahi.

Veer ke traumatic bachpan mein jitna haath Brijesh ka hai, utna hi Bhavna ka bhi. Aisi situation mein hum kisi ko poori tarah sahi ya galat nahi keh sakte. I call it the heat of the situation. Example lo Shweta ka, uske pehle pati ne usse dhoka diya, isliye usne doosri shaadi apni aur apni beti ki safety ke liye ki. Usne Veer ki maa banne ki koshish bhi ki thi, Lekin jab Pringal ke karam kand ne sab badal diya, tab Shweta ne jo kadam uthaye, woh sahi nahi tha aur galat bhi bhi. It’s all about perspective.


Yah to obvious hai, Jab Bhawna aur Tej ko Veer ke past ke baare mein detail mein pata chalega, tab toh gussa double hoga. Gussa bhi hoga, aur shayad guilt bhi, kyunki Brijesh Bhavna dono ne apne hisse ki galtiyan ki hain.


Werewolf Tumne mujhse kabhi pyaar kiya hi nahi, Brijesh! Tum bas mujhe paana chaahte the. Dono me farq hai.
ye baat Bhavna ne 2 baar keh diya hai ab tak, ki Brijesh usse pana chata tha bas, iske liya Brijesh ki love life ki bhi thoda sa glimpses humein dekhna hoga. Ju Agar Bhavna ke iss baat ko sahi dikhaana chate ho to Brijesh ke character Ko aur bhi girana Hoga. Already uske character ko hum gira huya dekh chuke hai Veer se uski behaviour ko leke. Lekin Bhavna ke iss baat ko sahi se baithane ke liye hamein Brijesh ki love life ko dekhna hoga. Veer ke saath uska behavior ko chhod ke woh asal mein Bhavna ke saath kaisa tha? Ye sawal reh jata hai Bhavna ki iss baat pe. Hope ju ne samajh liya maine kiya kehna chaha.

Very well put.

I agree with most of the points. But kuchh corrections aur additions dunga.

Firstly, dono hi... Chaahe Brijesh ho ya Bhavna. Dono ne hi galtiyaan ki hui hai jeevan me. Yeh satya hai. Kisi bhi dhang se mein aisa portray nahi karunga ki Bhavna achanak se sahi ho gayi aur saari galti Brijesh par thop di.

Iss se kya hoga? Bhavna aur likeable ho jaayegi? Maybe. But that's not how it happened.

Bhavna ki galtiyaan hi ye batlaati hai ki Ghar me sabse wisest hone ke bawajood usne bhi kayi galtiyaan kari hui hai. Ek saboot ki bhai wo bhi ek human hai aur mistakes kar sakti hai. Aur, kari baithi hai.

Toh, aisa nahi hoga ki Brijesh ko completely black out kar diya jaayega aur Bhavna poori white light me justice ki devi bann ke aa jaayegi. Nope.

Ab kuchh points :

1. Brijesh ki galti thi ki usne Bhavna se attraction ke chalte shaadi ki. Na ki pyaar ke chalte. Yaha pe ek cheez aur mention karunga ki jaisa ki ju ne kaha... Bhavna ne bhi Brijesh ko pyaar nahi kiya. Unki shaadi ko hardly hi kuchh saal hue the. Pyaar toh dono ko hi nahi tha. Lekin... Bhavna actually had some feelings for him. They were growing.

Proof? Bhavna never remarried. Think about it. Uski jaisi sundarta waali aurat se kaun mard shaadi nahi karta. Jab Shweta ko Brijesh jaisa achhe khaase paise waala aadmi dobaara apna sakta tha, ek ladki ke saath toh kya Bhavna me koi kami thi. No. Balki, use toh Brijesh se aur bhi raees insaan mil sakta tha. Par, kya Bhavna ne dobaara shaadi kari? Woh chaahti toh Tej ki life kitni easy bann sakti thi. Kisi se shaadi kar leti. Tej ko paalna asaan ho jaata.

But she never remarried. Kyu? Kyunki, kahi na kahi Bhavna had feelings for Brijesh. Also, she didn't want to cheat. Warna uss tasveer aur uske dobara shaadi karne me farq hi kya? Kahi na kahi wo iss baat ko hi badhaawa deta ki kitni easily move on ho gayi woh.

Another thing was that... Bhavna apne baccho ke saamne, unke liye aisi stree nahi bann'na chaahti thi ki kuchh saal ek mard ke saath phir baaki kuchh saal dusre mard ke saath. Bacche chhote the. Grow ho rahe the. Kya example set hota? So, she chose to remain single forever.

2. Regarding Bhavna ne baat kyu nahi bataayi Brijesh ko. Yes. Yeh uski galti thi. But uss moment pe use sach chhipaana hi sahi laga. Kyunki, Harikiran aur bhanu pratap kitne dangerous the ye humne dekha hai. Keh sakte hai hum ki uski galti thi yaha. Par, agar imagine kare ... Ki Bhavna ne Brijesh ko bata diya hota. Toh cheezein kaisi hoti? Mere khayal se toh aur bhi bigad sakti thi. Kyunki, Brijesh koi bahut hoshiyar aadmi shuru se hi nahi raha hai. We can only imagine kaise hote phir secenes.

3. Bhavna ne Ghar se baahar nikaal diye jaane ke baad sach kyu nahi bataaya. This is where I would disagree actually.

Laanchhan kispe laga tha? Bhavna pe. Ise ego nahi kahenge ki wo chup-chap waha se chali gayi. Ise 'swabhiman' kehte hai. Galti kisi aur ki. Naam laga bhavna ka. Ungli uthi bhavna pe. Ghar se nikaali gayi, Bhavna. Aur, ab ju chaahte ho ki wahi upat ke aaye aur sach bataaye?

Kise? Brijesh ko? Jo uske muh se kuchh bhi sunane ko taiyaar nahi tha?

Yaha par galti thi Brijesh ki. Chalo Maan liya ki usne hurt hoke Bhavna ko ghar se nikaal diya. Par, kya socha ki wo kaha jaayegi? Kaise rahegi? Nahi. Kya jab uska Mann shaant hua tab usne koshish ki uss tak pahuchne ki? Nahi.

Ego ki baat kare toh har insaan me ego rehta hai. Brijesh me bhi tha. Bhavna me bhi tha. Bhavna raaj gharaano ki descendants me se thi toh zaahir hai uska ego kitna ho sakta tha. Lekin, uske bawajood usne apne raaj gharaane ka rutba nahi dikhaaya. Thappad bhi khaaya. Beizzati bhi sahi. Laanchhan bhi lagwaaya aur waha se chali gayi.

Itna sab hone ke baad... You want her to come herself and ask for forgiveness? To explain things. She won't.

Ye wo point tha jaha agar Brijesh jaa ke use dhundh leta. Use calmly Sach bataane ko kehta. Aur, bhavna agar bata deti. Toh unn dono ke beech ka rishta bahut gehra ho jaata. They wouldn't have separated. But alas...

4. Veer ko badla lene ke liye leke jaana. I mean... Mujhe isme kuchh galat nazar nahi aata. Veer agar wo badla nahi lega toh kaun lega? Tej? Agar, Harikiran aur Bhanu Pratap na hote toh ye sab hota hi nahi.

Main aaropi the wo dono. Unki wajah se Bhavna ka poora parivar jal utha. Sab samapt ho gaya. Aise me wo badla bhi na le? Aur, Veer se behtar kaun ho sakta tha?

Yes. She wanted Veer to take revenge for her. Kyunki, wo Veer ko apna beta maanti hai. Agar, hesitation hota... Toh wo uss se pehle poochhti ki beta... Tum mere liye ek kaam karoge? Yeh ye darshata hai ki wo apne bete ko abhi bete ke roop me nahi dekhti. She's asking for a permission.

Why would she? Kya hua agar wo 20 saal alag the. All they need is to know how each of them spent the earlier 20 yrs to get to know each other. Abhi 2 saal hi hue honge Veer ko bhavna se mile. But look at their bonding.

It completely outshadowed Brijesh's bonding with Veer for 20 years. Kyu? Kyunki, Bhavna Veer se pyaar karti hai.

Dono me difference dekho. Brijesh ko Veer bhavna ki yaad dilaata tha isliye wo uss par apna gussa nikaalta tha.

Toh, kya Bhavna ko Veer Brijesh ki yaad nahi dilaata tha? Bilkul dilaata tha. She hated Brijesh after that. Wo sirf uska beta hi nahi balki Brijesh ka bhi beta hai. Uske bawajood... Bhavna ne Veer se koi paksh paat nahi kiya. These are some of her qualities.

Uske baad Brijesh ne Shweta ne sang bhi wahi kiya. Trust nahi kiya uspe. So, you can say ki Brijesh ki sabse badi problem yahi rahi hai. Indeciviness. Lack of trust. Acting without thinking.

5. Veer ko apne aap se dur rakha bhavna ne. Iske regarding humne updates me dekha hai ki wajah kya thi. She didn't just want to protect Veer but she had tej as well. Purvi khud Mumbai me hoke jab himmat nahi kar paayi Veer tak jaane ki... Toh socho bhavna kaise jaa sakti thi. Harikiran had goons all around him.

Aur, nahi... Bhavna future me Tej ko Veer ke baare me zaroor bataati. Par, tabhi jab Tej thodi aur mature ho jaati. She understands Tej the best. Wo jaanti thi ki uske muh se nikla nahi ki tej Veer ke liye daud bhaagti. And, this could put both of them in danger.

 

[monsterking]

Update - 5 ~ System Activation​

Ab tak...

Par kisi ko nahi pata tha...

Ki jab uski saasein jaane hi waali thi...

Tab uske andar ek awaaz gunji thi...

Jo kisi ko sunaayi nahi dii thi...

Aur wo awaaz ke bol the...

[System has been activated.]

Ab aage...

Veer ke accident ke kuch ghanto baad hi jab Brijesh ka phone baja tha aur screen par Veer naam jab usne dekha tha toh pata nahi kyu Brijesh ne call nahi uthaaya.

Shayad kuch derr pehle usne khud hi apne bete ko dhakke maar ke ghar se baahar nikaala tha iss kaaran vash? Ya fir wo abhi Veer ke muh se koi bhi baat nahi sunn'na chaahta tha. Kuch tha jo usse rok raha tha Veer se baat karne ke liye.

Ki tabhi uske phone par firse call aaya par ye uske khud ke vyakti ka tha.

Brijesh : Hello?

Aadmi : Saahab! Veer jii ka car se accident hua hai. Abhi wo xxxxxxxxxx hospital me bharti hai.

Aur ye sunte hi Brijesh uth khada hua. Aur forun hi hospital ke liye jaane laga.

***

Agle din Kavya college me apni soch me ghum thi.

'Veer bhaiya ka call uske baad se aaya hi nahi. Kya karu? Call back karu? Iske pehle unhone kabhi mujhe call nahi kiya fir achanak kal kyu? Kahi koi dikkat toh nahi? Kal unke beech mein call na kar saki thi...'

Aur ye soch wo call lagaati hai par call nahi laga. Kese lagta? Ward boy ne Veer ki SIM waapas se uske phone me jo daal dii thi.

Ant me Kavya uske whtsapp par message daal deti hai ye puchne ki wo theek hai ya nahi?

Idhar Nidhi din me hi Veer ke ghar gayi thi taaki wo jaan sake ki kyu uske Maa Baap ne call nahi uthaaya tha.

Jab wo waha pohuchi aur jesa ravaiyaa usne dekha Brijesh, Shweta aur baaki ghar waalo ka Veer ke prati ye dekh ke usse itna gussa aaya ki wo khud ko control na kar saki.

Nidhi ek Maa bhi thi. Uski khud ki beti abhi choti thi aur aise me wo jaanti thi ki ek parent hona kya hota hai. Aise me jab usne Brijesh aur Shweta ka behaviour dekha toh bas wo bhadak uthi.

Nidhi : Kese Maa Baap ho aap log? Aapka Beta waha apni zindagi se ladd raha hai aur aap logo ko koi chinta hi nahi hai? Yaha tak ki aapne usse apne ghar se baahar hi nikaal diya!?

Brijesh : Dekhiye Madam! Veer ab iss parivaar ka hissa nahi hai. Rahi baat paise ki toh uske medical kharcho ki bharpayi mein kar chuka hu par iske baad ab wo jaane ki wo kaha rahega kese rahega... Aur aap hamare parivaarik maamlo se dur rahe toh hi accha hoga.

Nidhi : Bhul se bhi aise Maa Baap na de bhagwaan kisi ko...

Aur Nidhi apni namm aankhe liye waha se bhaag aayi. Usse Veer ke liye waqai boht bura lag raha tha. Kaha wo khud ko badqismat samajhti thi par ab Veer ko dekh usse mehsoos hua ki kam se kam usse Maa Baap ka pyaar toh mil raha tha par Veer ko toh wo bhi nahi mila...

Na jaane kya kya saha hoga uss bechaare ne ab tak?

Na jaane kese kese din bitaaye honge Veer ne unke beech rehke?

Idhar hospital me abhi shaam ke waqt Veer ko hosh aa chuka tha.

"Arrrghhh!" Ek karaah ke saath uski aankh khuli.

Aankho se dhundhlapan hata, saamne ka nazaara nazar aaya.

Usne dekha ki wo hospital me hai. Aankhein uski jal rahi thi. Usse sab kuch jese yaad aane laga...

Kya hua tha?

Haan! Aur kal ki saari vardaat flashback ki tarah uske dimaag me mandraane lagi.

Aur usne apna sar pakad liya...

Aankho se aasu behne lage...

Abhi wo soch hi raha tha ki itne me uske andar ek awaaz gunji jiske chalte uske raungte khade ho gaye.

[Sytem has been activated. You are now the owner of the system.]

Veer (ghabraate hue) : Huh? Kaun? Kaun hai?

Awaaz se maano Veer bechaara darr hi gaya. Usne apna sar idhar udhar hilaate hue dekha par wo awaaz kaha se aayi usse kuch bhi pata na chala.

[Name the System!!]

Veer (chillaate hue) : Kaun hai? Mein puchta hu kaun hai?

Aur firse ek awaaz uske dimaag me gunji...

[Analyzing Hindi language from owner's mind...

Processing...

Process completed.

Hindi Language has been recognised.]

Veer (chillaate hue) : Kaun hai? Saamne aao... Kiski awaaz hai ye jo mere sarr me gunj rahi hai...!?

Tabhi wahi awaaz firse uske mann me gunji...

Par iss baar uske bol alag bhaasha me the.

[Shaant! Mein System hu. Aur ab se tum mere master ho.]

Veer (darrte hue) : Kaun bol raha hai? Mujhe tum dikhayi kyu nahi de rahe?

[Mene kaha na Shaant! Mein ek system hu. Meri koi physical body nahi hai. Mein tumhare andar hu.]

Veer (ghabraate hue) : Me... Mere andar?

[Haa! Kya tumhe yaad hai kal tumhare saath kya hua tha? Tumhara accident hua tha. Aur tum marrte marrte bache ho tumhe pata hai? Yadi mene samay par madad na ki hoti toh tum zinda nahi bachte.]

Veer (chillaate hue) : Kesi madad? Tum mere andar kese ho? Baahar aao...

[Arre! Itni zorr se mat chillao. Andar mann me hi kaho jo kuch bhi kehna hai. Mein tumhaare mann, dil, dimag sab se judd chuki hu. Aur tumhare mann ki baat sunn sakti hu. Aise chillaoge toh log tumhe pagal samjhenge.]

Aur uss vichitr mann ki awaaz sunn Veer apne mann me hi baat karne laga.

Veer : Meri... Meri kuch samajh me nahi aa raha hai. Ye sab kya chal raha hai?

[I know! Abhi tumhe samajhne me time lagega. Bas itna samajh lo ki mein tumhe koi nuksaan nahi pohuchaane wali. Ulta mein tumhari madad ke liye yaha hu.]

Veer : Meri madad?

Veer ne kaapte hue pucha.

[Haa! Tumhari madad! Mein tumhari madad karungi. Hamesha tum apni kismat ko koste the na? Ab mein tumhara saath dungi aur tum apni kismat palat ke rakh doge.]

Veer : Wo... Wo kaise?

[Yahi toh mera kaam hai. Yadi mera istemaal sahi se kiya. Toh tum duniya par raaj kar sakte ho.]

Veer : Sach!?

[Ekdum sach.]

Veer : Toh kya tum ladki ho? Kyuki tumhari awaaz ladkiyo jesi hai.

[Nahi! Mein na hi ladki hu na hi ladka. Mein kisi bhi gender me apne aap ko dhaal sakti hu. Mene tumhaare mann me jhaank ke dekha toh pata chala tumhe ladkiya zyada pasand hai ladko ke muqaable isliye mene apni awaaz ladki ki rakhi hui hai.]

Veer (blush) : Huh? Obviously Mujhe ladkiya pasand hai. Ladke nahi. I'm not gay...

[Yadi kaho toh awaaz ladke ki rakh lu!?]

Veer : Huh? Nahi! Nahi! Aise hi theek hai.

[Hehehe~]

Veer : ..........

[Accha! Ab apni aankhein band karo aur mann me hi kaho ~ Status]

Veer (aankhein band karte hue) : Status!

Aur Veer ke itna kehte hi uske mann me ek window khul gayi,

[ Name - Veer
Age - 20
Status - Abandoned student.

Stats :
Strength - 3/100
Intelligence - 4/100
Agility - 3/100
Endurance - 7/100
Appearance - 6/100

Talents - 0
Points - 0 ]

Ye sab dekh ke Veer ke hosh hi udd gaye.

[Baap re Baap! Tumhara toh boht bura haal hai. Itne bekaar stats mene kabhi nahi dekhe apne life cycle me. Ye kya? Zero talents? Baap re!!! Tum reh kese liye itne din? Hmm? Endurance bas zyada hai tumhara. Arre haa! Itni maar khaoge toh ye toh zaahir si hi baat hai. Hehehe~]

Veer : Udaa lo... Tum bhi mera mazaak uda lo... Ab toh mujhe aadat pad gayi hai.

[Hey! Hey! Sorry! But ab tension mat lo. Mein hu na. Mein tumhe dekhna kaha se kaha pohucha dungi.]

Veer : Aur tum aisa kyu karogi? Kya milega tumhe aisa karke?

[Mera kaam hi yahi hai. Mera kaam hai logo ko sabse sarvashreshth banaana.]

Veer : Toh tumne mujhe hi kyu chuna?

[Mene chuna nahi. Jab mein yaha se guzri toh tum hi paas me the aur mein tumhare shareer me pravesh kar gayi. Apne aap ko Lucky keh sakte ho tum.]

Veer (shocked) : Yaha se guzri matlab?

[Uss baare me mein zyaada baat nahi kar sakti.]

Veer : Toh? Toh Doctor ko pata nahi chala? Ki tum mere andar ho?

[Hahaha~ Doctor kya... Tumhaari Prithvi me rehne waala koi bhi vyakti ye nahi bata sakta ki tumhaare andar mein maujood hu.]

Aur ek aur jhatka Veer ko. Ye kya bala ghuss gayi achanak se uske andar aake?

Veer : Aur tumhe Hindi kese aati hai??

[Arre buddhu abhi toh bataya, mein tumhare mann, dimaag aur dil se jud chuki hu. Aur abhi abhi toh seekhi tumhaare dimaag se hi. Isliye jitni Hindi tumhe aati hai utni hi mujhe bhi.]

Veer : O... Okay!

[Par tumhaare stats boht hi bekaar hai. Mujhe khud taras aa raha hai dekh ke. Tumhe jald se jald apne stats badhaane honge.]

Veer : Ye? Ye stats kya hai?

[Ye tumhari asli shamtaaye hai. Tumhari strength 3 hai yaani ki jo taaqat hai tumhare andar usse yadi number se darshaaya jae toh woh 3 hai. Intelligence matlab tumhari buddhi, agility tumhari furti, endurance tumhari sehan-sheelta aur appearance tumhare physical features yaani ki chehra body haath perr ye sab.]

Veer : Aur mein inhe badha sakta hu? Toh mere asli shareer me badlaav aaenge?

[Haa!]

Veer (shocked) : Baap re! Aise me toh mein fir...

[Tabhi toh kaha ki ab mein tumhari kismat palat ke rakh dungi.]

Veer : Par wo points kese badhenge?

[Missions karke. Samay samay par tumhe missions milenge aur jese jese tum unhe complete karoge tumhe points milenge. Unn points se tum apne stats badha paoge aur saath hi saath nayi skills khareed paoge. Saath hi saath jitni uplabdhiya aur naam kamaoge tumhe points milte rahenge.]

Veer : Mein kuch samjha nahi...

[Hmm! Tumhara intelligence kam hai na isliye abhi sab kuch tumhare bheje ke upar se jaega. Bas itna samajh lo. Jese jese tum missions poore karte jaoge, mera level aur saath hi saath tumhaara level badhta jaega. Jiske chalte aur bhi anokhi skills unlock hoti jaengi. Dhyaan rahe! Yadi mission ko time limit me poora nahi kiya gaya. Toh tum hamesha hamesha ke liye mujhe kho doge.]

Veer : O... Okay!!

[Hmm! Ek aur akhiri baat. Kabhi bhi... Kabhi bhi ghamand mat karna. Jis din tumhe ghamand aana shuru hua, uss din se hi tumhara ant bhi shuru ho jaega.]

System ki baat sunn Veer ke raungte khade ho gaye. Apna thook nigalte hue usne firse kaha.

Veer : Mujhe ab bhi yakeen nahi ho raha ki duniya me aisi bhi koi cheez hoti hai.

[Duniya me aisi koi cheez nahi hai. Saari duniya me mein hi ek hu jo tumhare andar iss waqt maujood hu. Mein iss planet se nahi hu. Aur planet ke baahar kesi kesi cheeze maujood hai ye tum insaan soch bhi nahi sakte.]

Veer : .........

Iske pehle ki Veer kuch aage keh paata, Nidhi uske ward me aa gayi.

Darwaaze ki aahat se jab Veer ne palat ke dekha toh apni ma'am ko dekh kar chaunk gaya.

Veer : Ma'am!?

Nidhi : Ohh God!! Finally... Tumhe hosh aa gaya.

Aur Nidhi tezz kadmo ke saath aage aayi aur Veer ka haath thaam lii...

Veer (shocked) : Nidhi Ma'am aap yaha!?

Nidhi ne fir saari baat usse bata dii. Jab usse pata chala ki Brijesh ne uska call nahi uthaaya tha toh uske chehre par dard bhari muskuraahat aa gayi. Nidhi usse bechain bhari nazro se dekh rahi thi.

Veer : Aapne mere liye medical fees dii!?

Nidhi : Mene toh sirf advance diya tha baad me tumhaare Dad ne saari pay kii.

Kehte hue usne Veer ka haath ek baar fir thaam liya.

Nidhi (bauhe sikodte hue) : Tumhe... Tumhe bura lag raha hoga na? Tumhare Maa Baap tumhe dekhne tak nahi aaye. Jese maano unhe koi parvaah hi nahi hai tumhari.

Veer (smiles) : Isme koi nayi baat nahi hai Ma'am. Ye sab toh roz ka hai. I'm not surprised. Haha~

Uski wo fake hassi dekh pata nahi kyu, par Nidhi ko apne dil me atyant hi dard mehsoos hua. Aur usne Veer ka haath aur zorr se bheench liya.

Tabhi Veer ke andar firse awaaz gunji,

[Apne mann me kaho 'Check' aur fir iss aurat ki taraf dekho.]

System ki baat sunn Veer ne wesa hi kiya aur jese hi usne check kehte hue Nidhi ko dekha toh uske hosh hi udd gaye.

Nidhi ke sar ke upar hawa me ek window mandraa rahi thi jisme kuch shabd likhe hue the ~

[ Name - Nidhi
Age - 30
Status - Divorce pending.

Bio - Nidhi ki ek beti hai jiska naam hai Juhi. Saath hi ek beta hai jisse wo apne saath rakhna chaahti hai par uske Pati Rajat ne usse apne paas rakha hua hai. Rajat se uska rishta kharaab chal raha hai jiske chalte Nidhi akeli apni beti ke saath ek ghar me rent dete hue rehti hai kyuki wo apne mata pita par bojh nahi bann na chaahti. Uski Maa ko do din pehle hi dil ka daura pada tha aur wo bhi issi hospital me bharti hai. Nidhi ki life boht hi dukh aur pareshaniyo se bhari hui hai.

Favourability - 20
Relationship - Student - Teacher ]

Ye sab kuch Veer ko Nidhi ke sar ke upar nazar aa raha tha.

Veer (ghabraate hue) : Ye... Ye aapke sar pe...

Nidhi : Huh? Kya hua? Mere sar pe!?

[Arre Buddhu! Ye sirf tum dekh sakte ho? Baaki koi nahi.]

Veer : Nahi! Ma'am! Wo mein aise hi...

'Itna toh mein ek saal me nahi jaan paaya Ma'am ke baare me jitna abhi jaan gaya. Kya kamaal cheez hai ye.'

Usne mann me socha.

'System? Ye favourability 20 ka kya matlab hai?'

[Iska matlab hai ki wo tumhaare baare me kya sochti hai. Ek prakaar se uske mann me tumhare liye jo bhaav hai usko darshaata hai.]

'Toh ye 20 matlab?'

[Matlab ki abhi wo tumhare liye sirf 20 favourability rakhti hai. Jese jese tumhara aur uska relation accha hoega ye badhta jaega. Yadi ye 80 ke upar hai matlab ki koi tumhe chaahta hai. Yadi ye 90 ke upar hai matlab ki koi tumhe dil se pyaar karta hai. Aur yadi 100 hai matlab ki dil-o-jaan se pyaar karne waala vyakti.]

'Samjha!'

Nidhi : Veer? Kaha kho gaye?

Jab Nidhi ne chutki bajaate hue apna haath uske saamne hilaaya toh Veer jese apne khayaalo se baahar aaya.

Veer : Haa! Wo mein... Ma'am...

Nidhi (haath thaamte hue) : Just forget about everything Veer! Aur kuch mat socho. Bas tumhe jald se jald thik hona hai. Okay? And don't think tumhara koi nahi hai. I'm with you okay? Abhi tum rest karo ab. Mein ab kal shaam ko hi aaungi. Aaj mene wese hi leave lii thi. Roz nahi le sakti.

Veer : Jii ma'am! Thank you!

Nidhi : Thank you kesa isme...?? *Smiles* Take care okay?

Veer : Hmmm!

Aur Nidhi uske ward se chali gayi. Veer keval Nidhi ko jaate hue dekhta raha.

Nidhi 30 saal ki ek aisi husn ki mallika prateet hoti thi ki maano keher hi dhaa de. Par limited paiso aur din bhar ki mehnat aur thakaan ke chalte jaise uska husn poora khil ke nahi jhalak paa raha tha. Kyuki wo dhyaan hi nahi de paati thi apne upar.

Ye dekh Veer ko waqai taras aa raha tha uss par. Uski khud ki Maa yaha admit thi par uske bawajood Nidhi ne uski madad ki aur uske liye advance me paise bhi bharwae. Wahi dusri orr uske gharwale jo saari sampatti se sampann hai unhone ek shan bhi nahi socha ki wo jee raha hai ya marr raha hai.

*Ding*

Aur achaanak hi uske dimaag me ghanti baji aur uske saamne ek window khuli.

[Mission : Solve Nidhi's problem.
Reward : ?? points
Time limit : 1 year ]

'Huh? Mission?'

[Haa! Mission mil chuka hai tumhe.]

'Nidhi Ma'am ki problem? Konsi problem?'

[Ye toh tumhe khud dekhna padega.]

'O... Okay!'

[Ab tumhara safar shuru ho chuka hai. Ya toh tum yahi ke yahi reh jaoge ya meri madad paa ke ek Badshaah banoge. Toh bolo? Kesa jeevan chahiye? Ek aam aadmi ki tarah jesa ki tum abhi jee rahe the ya fir ek Badshaah ka?]

Sawaal sunn ke Veer ne socha hi nahi. Usse pata tha usse kya jawaab dena hai.

Veer (smiles) : Ek Baadshah!!!!
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!

Bahut hi mast update maza agaya padhke

 

[monsterking]

Update - 6 ~ A New Home​

Ab tak...

[Ab tumhara safar shuru ho chuka hai. Ya toh tum yahi ke yahi reh jaoge ya meri madad paa ke ek Badshaah banoge. Toh bolo? Kesa jeevan chahiye? Ek aam aadmi ki tarah jesa ki tum abhi jee rahe the ya fir ek Badshaah ka?]

Sawaal sunn ke Veer ne socha hi nahi. Usse pata tha usse kya jawaab dena hai.

Veer (smiles) : Ek Baadshah!!!!

Ab aage...

Kaafi din yu guzar chuke the. Aur aaj Veer ko hospital se leave milne waali thi. Aisa ek bhi din nahi tha jis din Nidhi usse dekhne na aayi ho. Aur aisa ek bhi din nahi tha jis din galti se bhi uske gharwalo me se koi usse dekhne aaya ho.

Kitni ajeeb baat thi.

Par thi toh sacchi baat.

Ghar me asal me Brijesh ne kuch nahi bataya tha. Veer ke accident ki baat keval Brijesh aur uski sauteli maa Shweta ko hi pata thi.

Jab Manorath ne Veer ke baare me dubaara pucha toh Brijesh ne jhuth bol ye keh diya ki Veer apne dost ke ghar me thehra hua hai.

Par aisa toh bilkul bhi nahi tha. Kyuki uska koi dost hi nahi tha.

Yaha inn kuch dino me Veer ne System ke baare me badi hi bareeki se jaana.

Usse pata chala ki jese jese wo missions complete karega ya uplabdhiya haasil karega ya izzat kamaega, apna fame badhaega wese wese usse Experience milega.

Aur yahi Experience jab ikhatta hota jaega wese wese hi uske System ka level badhta jaega.

System se usse free me 10 points bhi mile the jo System ne usse uske owner bann'ne ke liye gift ke roop me diye the. Aur Veer ab issi soch me tha ki kis stat me wo points add kare.

'Mein strength me add karta hu. Sahi rahega na?'

[Mein tumhe suggest karungi ki pehle tum apna ye bheja sahi karo. Ahem! Yaani ki apna intelligence badhao.]

'Hmph! Toh fir abhi mein add nahi karna chaahta.'

[Are you sure? Dhyaan rahe! Tum jo bhi changes karoge apne stats me wo raat bhar lenge change hone me. Matlab yadi tum apni strength abhi badhaate ho toh wo abhi nahi badhegi. Tumhe uska result agle din dekhne ko milega.]

'I see!! Hmm! Toh ek kaam karo. 7 points meri strength me daalo. 2 mere intelligence me aur 1 mere appearance me.'

[Are you sure!?]

'Haan!'

[Well okay!]

Aur tabhi ek ghanti baji...

*Ding*

[7 points have been added to strength.
2 points have been added to intelligence.
1 point has been added to appearance.]

Aur uske baad hi Veer ke stats badal chuke the. Par uska effect agli subah se usse dekhne ko milne wala tha.

Stats :
Strength - 10/100
Intelligence - 6/100
Agility - 3/100
Endurance - 7/100
Appearance - 7/100

'Good!! Wese... System!?'

[Hmm!??]

'Tumne kaha tha ki tumne meri jaan bachaayi? Kya tum ek marre hue vyakti ko bhi zinda kar sakti ho?!'

[Nahi! Mene sirf apni urja ka istemaal kiya tha. Yahi kaaran hai ki mein ek din tak shut down thi. Aur tum khud bhi behosh the isliye tumhe pata nahi chala.]

'Wow! Toh aise me toh tum mujhe harr waqt khatro se bacha sakti ho hai na?'

[Bilkul bhi nahi! Aisa sochna bhi mat. Wo urja keval ek baar hi istemaal karne ke liye praapt thi mujhe.]

'Ohh mujhe aur batao na iss baare me.'

[Pehle mera level badhao. Abhi tumhe inn baato ko jaan'ne ka haq nahi hai.]

'Okay!'

[Aur haa! Mujhse zyaada baatein mat kiya karo. Jab zaroori ho keval tabhi...]

'Kyu?'

[Kyuki bolte waqt mujhe energy chaahiye. Aur ye energy mein tumhaare hi shareer se leti hu.]

'Fuck!!! Aur tum mujhe ye ab bata rahi ho!? Tabhi mein sochu mujhe itni thakaan kyu mehsoos hoti thi.'

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Ab shaam ka time ho chuka tha aur Veer ko hospital se discharge kar diya gaya tha.

Abhi wo wahi ek bench par baitha hua tha ki Nidhi saare kaagzi kaam karte hue uske paas aayi aur bagal se baith gayi.

Nidhi


Nidhi : Veer!? Saari formalities ho chuki hai. Ab tumhe hospital se chhutkaara mila.

Nidhi ne muskuraate hue kaha.

Veer : Thank you Ma'am! Mein zindagi bhar aapka abhaari rahunga.

Nidhi : Ye tum kesi baatein kar rahe ho Veer? Ek teacher hone ke naate ye toh meri duty hai ki mein apne student ki help karu.

Veer : Fir bhi Ma'am! Aaj kal toh ghar ke apne saath nahi dete aur aapne sirf meri teacher hone ke naate itna kiya. Uske liye thanks toh banta hi hai na?

Iss baar Veer ne smile karte hue kaha. Par uski smile dekh ek baar fir Nidhi ki bauhe sikudi aur usse andar hi andar ek ajeeb sa dard hua.

Nidhi : Ab... Ab tum kaha jaoge Veer? Tumhare gharwale toh...

Veer : Hmm? Mujhe nahi pata Ma'am. Dekhta hu. Kuch na kuch kar hi lunga.

Nidhi : Nahi! Par aise kaha jaoge tum? Tumhe abhi bhi rest ki zaroorat hai. Kaha rahoge? Kya khaoge? Aur college ka kya?

Veer : College? Mujhe kuch nahi pata Ma'am. Jo bhi hoega, dekha jaega.

Wo itna keh ke waha se utha hi tha ki Nidhi ne uska haath thaam liya.

Nidhi : Nahi! Mein tumhe aise jaane nahi de sakti. Bilkul bhi nahi! Kaha jaoge aur tum? Kaha bhatkoge aisi haalat me? Tum... Tum mere saath chalo.

Veer (shocked) : Huh?

Nidhi : Haa! Aaj se... Aaj se tum mere saath rahoge.

Kitni hi asaani se keh dii Nidhi ne ye baat.

Aur kitni hi asaani se Brijesh ne wo baat kahi thi ~ "Nikal jao iss ghar se."

Dono me kitna antar tha.

Aur kismat ka khel toh dekho. Ki uske ghar se usse yu nikaal diya gaya tha aur aaj Nidhi jo ki sirf uski teacher thi wo yu usse apne ghar le jaane taiyaar thi.

Aur yahi dekh ke Veer ki aankho me aasu aa gaye. Usne Nidhi ka status dekha tha. Wo jaanta tha ki Nidhi khud kitna kasht bhara jeevan vyateet kar rahi thi.

Par iske bawajood usne Veer ko apne ghar par rehne ke liye keh diya.

Veer (namm aankho se) : Nahi! Ma'am! Ye aap... Ye aap kya keh rahi ho? Mein aapko pehle hi boht kasht de chuka hu, ab aur mujhe mushqil me mat daaliye ma'am.

Nidhi : Chup raho ekdum! Aur chalo mere saath.

Veer : Ma'am...

Nidhi : Mene kaha na chup raho. Aaj se tum mere saath hi rahoge. Aur aage ek shabd nahi kahoge tum.

Usne apna haath Veer ke hontho par rakh diya. Nidhi ke komal haatho ka sparsh apne hontho pe paate hi Veer wahi khada ka khada reh gaya. Jab Nidhi ko bhi dhyaan aaya ki usne ekdum se kya kiya usne forun hi apna haath peeche le liya aur uska haath pakad ke usse le jaane lagi.

Veer ke laakho manaane ke baad bhi Nidhi ne uski ek na suni aur usse laake apni scooty par peeche baitha diya.

Nidhi : Acche se pakad ke baithna okay?

Uske bolte hi Veer ke haath Nidhi ki patli kamar pe lipat gaye. Ek pal ke liye toh Nidhi ko bhi ek jhatka sa laga jese hi Veer ke haath uski kamar par bandhe.

Wo iss waqt navy blue saree aur kaala blouse pehni hui thi. Aur peeche se uske aadhe nagn kandhe saaf nazar aa rahe the jo harr pal Veer ko madhosh kar rahe the. Wo khule baal aur wo nasheeli aankhein jo kisi bhi waqt aadmi ko apna deewana bana de.

Thandi hawao se dono ka shareer thanda zaroor ho raha tha par saath hi saath ek ajeeb sii garmi bhi thi jo dono ke hi shareer me iss waqt kahi dabi hui thi.

'Check' Veer ne mann me Nidhi ko peeche se hi dekhte hue kaha toh forun hi Nidhi ke sar ke upar wahi window firse khul gayi.

Sab kuch same hi tha pehle ki tarah siwae ek cheez ke. Aur wo thi...

[Favourability - 30]

Nidhi ki favourability Veer ke prati 10 points se badh gayi thi. Aur kyu na badhti? Wo roz Veer se milne shaam ke waqt aaya karti thi. Roz roz yadi aap kisi se bhi baat karo, aapko thoda boht interest unme aa hi jaata hai. Aisa hi haal kuch Nidhi ka bhi tha.

Veer uska student tha aur iss se pehle kabhi bhi Nidhi ne aise apne kisi bhi student se mulaqaat nahi ki thi. Na hi itni baatein kari thi. Aur toh aur wo ab Veer ko apne ghar le jaa rahi thi. Toh bhala dono ke beech friendship gehri kese nahi hoti?

Veer ke mann me Nidhi ke prati jo respect thi wo ab kayi guna badh chuki thi.

Kitni hi asaani se usne Veer ko apne ghar rehne ko keh diya. Veer jaanta tha ki wo akeli apni beti ke saath rent se rehti hai uske bawajood Nidhi ne uspar iss hadd tak bharosa kar liya ki wo uske saath reh le. Usne ek baar bhi nahi socha ki Veer ko apne ghar par rakhna theek hai ya nahi? Usne ye nahi socha ki uske ghar ki owner kese react karegi ye dekh ke?

Aur isliye Veer ki nazro me Nidhi kisi devi se kam nahi thi.

Veer kass ke uski patli kamar ko apne dono haatho se thaame hue tha. Aur Nidhi bhi Veer ke haatho ko bhali bhaati feel kar paa rahi thi. Na chaahte hue bhi uski dhadkan normal se thodi tezz ho chuki thi.

Iss se pehle keval uske husband ne hi usse aise touch kiya tha. Aur usse hue bhi 2 saal ho chuke the. Aur aaj wahi feeling wo mehsoos kar rahi thi.

Par farq ye tha ki uski kamar ko thaamne waala iss waqt uska husband nahi balki uska student Veer tha. Jo ki uss se 10 saal chota tha.

Aur yahi baat Nidhi ko sata rahi thi. Wo nahi chaahti thi ki Veer jo ki uske chote bhai jesa hai uske touch se wo aisa mehsoos kare. Par inn sab ke bawajood uski dhadkane slow hone ka naam hi nahi le rahi thi.

2 saalo se ye pehli baar tha jab usne kisi mard ko itni paas se mehsoos kiya tha. Aur usse nahi pata tha ki ek ajeeb sii anubhooti ne uske andar janm le liya hai.

Kuch hi derr me jab ghar aaya, Nidhi ne usse dhyaan se utarwaaya aur gaadi park kii.

Wo ek flat me rent se rehti thi. Uska flat 2nd floor par tha. Veer ko lift me le jaate hue wo 2nd floor par pohuchi aur jese hi apne flat ke paas aayi toh chaunk gayi.

Flat ka taala khula hua tha. Usne forun hi bell bajaayi toh kuch seconds me hi darwaaza khul gaya.

Aur andar se uski beti jo ki abhi abhi school jaana shuru kii thi wo daudte hue aayi aur uske perro se lipat gayi, "Mummmmmyyyyy... Mummy aa gayi!"

Hairaan hote hue Nidhi soch me pad gayi. Wo toh flat me taala laga ke apni beti Juhi ko bagal waale flat yaani ki pados me chorr ke gayi thi. Fir ye sab kya tha?

Ki tabhi andar se ek aur shaks baahar aaya. Aur usse dekh Nidhi ke chehre pe hairaani, fir confusion, aur fir khushi jhalakne lagi.

Ek sundar sii ladki aage badhte hue uske gale se lag gayi, "Diiii!!"

Nidhi (gale lagte hue) : Shreya tu? Yaha?

Shreya


Shreya : Kyu?! Nahi aa sakti?

Nidhi : Mera matlab wo nahi tha tu jaanti hai.

Shreya : I know! And yes! Mein yaha. Hehe~ Aur ab se mein yahi rahungi aapke saath.

Nidhi (hairaani me) : Kyaaaa?

Shreya : Haa! Itna shocked kyu ho? Aap nahi chaahti kya ki mein yaha rahu?

Nidhi : Nahi! Mein bas ye soch rahi hu ki achanak se tum yaha.

Shreya : Hmm! Kyuki Maa papa ne khud kaha hai.

Veer khade khade itna toh jaan gaya tha ki saamne khadi ladki Nidhi Ma'am ki choti behan thi. Fir bhi usne check karna hi sahi samjha.

Veer (mann me) : Check!

Aur Shreya ke sar ke upar tabhi wahi window khul gayi aur uspe likhe shabd Veer ko nazar aane lage.

[ Name - Shreya
Age - 24
Status - Maiden in search for true love.

Bio - Shreya Nidhi ki sagi choti behan hai. Uska mann padhayi me shuru se hi nahi lagta tha aur isliye aaj wo ek youtuber hai. YouTube pe stream karte hue games khelna aur vlogs banaana usse pasand hai. Abhi zyaada subscribers na hone ke kaaran wo zyaada busy nahi rehti. Apni behan Nidhi se boht zyaada pyaar karti hai. Uska sapna hai ek boht badi youtuber bann'na. Sacche pyaar ki talaash me hai. Par koi mila nahi hai abhi. Shreya love at first sight par believe karti hai.

Favourability - 0
Relationship - Strangers.]

Shreya ke baare me jaante hi Veer thoda hairaan tha. Usse dekh ke koi nahi keh sakta tha ki wo ek youtuber thi.

'Hmm! Interesting... Interesting!'

[Sapne dekhna chorr do master!]

'Huh? Kyu??'

[Nahi degi!]

'What the..!?'

[Master aapne dekha na? Wo love at first sight par believe rakhti hai. Pehli nazar me pyaar. Aur aapko abhi dekh ke koi bhi ladki aapke pyaar me nahi padne waali.]

Iske pehle ki Veer System ko jawaab de paata. Shreya ki awaaz uske kaano me padi.

Shreya : Ye kaun hai?!

Nidhi : Ye hai Veer! Mera student.

Shreya : Ohh! Toh? Tuition shuru kar dii kya aapne?

Nidhi : Nahi! Aaj se ye mere saath hi rahega.

Pal bhar ke liye maano sannaata sa chha gaya aur tabhi Shreya ekdum se chillaayi,

Shreya : Whaaaaaaaatttt??

Nidhi : Haaa!

Shreya : Kya kaha aapne? Ye... Ye aapke saath rahega?

Nidhi : Hmm! Lambi kahani hai.

Shreya : Wait! What? But kyu? Aap aise kese kisi ko bhi apne ghar me...!?

Nidhi : Sshhh! Andar chalo pehle.

Andar le jaate hue Nidhi ne Shreya ko Veer ke baare me sab kuch bata diya, jisse sunn Shreya ka dil bhi thoda paseej gaya aur wo Veer ko rakhne ke liye taiyaar ho gayi. Abhi Nidhi washroom gayi hui thi ki tabhi Shreya uske paas aayi...

Shreya : Dekho! Hum tumhe yaha rakh rahe hai kyuki meri dii badi hi bholi hai aur sabki madad karti hai. Aur hum tumhe yaha rakhne ke liye taiyaar hai. Par meri dii ke baare me koi bhi galat khayaal mat laana samjhe? Hmph! I'm watching you...

Aur wo do ungli Veer ki aankho ki taraf karte hue mud ke apni gaand matkaate hue andar chali gayi.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
Like zaroor kijiyega yadi pasand aaye. Next update se story me action aur masala aana shuru hoega.

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Nidhi ek achhi ladki hai. Jo apne student ke liye itna kar rahi hai. Jo chiz Veer ke ghar walo ko karna chahiye tha woh kaam Nidhi ne kiya.
missions karne par usse points milte hain aur unhi points se wo khud ko improve kar shatka hain... jitne jyada missions utne jyada points utne jyada improvement khud mein laa shakta hain... yeh proportionlly chalte hain ek doosre ke.... system ne apni urja dee veer ko jaise shock waves dete hain marte hue heart ko rejuvenate karne ke liye... its like a parastie just like venom they feed off each other... wo uski shaktiya badhati hain badle mein usse shaktiya leti hain...am becoming fan of your writing with each and every update... detailing is perfect... loved it

 

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Update - 7 ~ Busted​

Ab tak...

Shreya : Dekho! Hum tumhe yaha rakh rahe hai kyuki meri dii badi hi bholi hai aur sabki madad karti hai. Aur hum tumhe yaha rakhne ke liye taiyaar hai. Par meri dii ke baare me koi bhi galat khayaal mat laana samjhe? Hmph! I'm watching you...

Aur wo do ungli Veer ki aankho ki taraf karte hue mud ke apni gaand matkaate hue andar chali gayi.

Ab aage...

Ek bade se bunglow me iss waqt ek bade se room me ek behad hi khubsoorat ladki apni comfortable chair par baithi hui thi. Aur kuch zaroori kaagzi kaam kar rahi thi. Ghar itna aalishaan tha ki pucho mat.

Tabhi uske room ka darwaza khula aur andar ek middle aged aadmi ne aakar uske saamne ek file rakhi aur bola,

Aadmi : Madam! Ye rahi file.

Ladki : Jii!

Aadmi : Wo... Madam!

Ladki : Hmm?

Aadmi : Wo... xxxxxxxx company hamaare saath deal karna chaahti hai. Ek bar firse mujhe unka call aaya tha.

Ladki (lambi saas lete hue) : Mene kitni baar aapko kaha hai ki unhe mana kar dijiye par aap ulta unko latka rahe ho? Mujhe nahi karni koi bhi deal unke saath.

Aadmi : Par madam isme galat kya hai? Ek acchi company hai aur ulta hume hi fayda hai. Aap bhala ye deal kyu nahi karna chaahti? Buraayi kya hai?

Ladki : Aap jaante hai na? Mein meeting ke waqt iss company ke maalik se mili thi. And, I can tell he's not trustworthy.

Aadmi : Par mujhe toh unka ravaiyya ekdum pasand aaya. Mujhe nahi lagta ki...

Ladki : Aap nahi jaante. Mein bhala kabhi galat hui hu?

Aadmi : Nahi! Par...

Ladki : Then bharosa rakhiye! Aur uss kaam ka kya jo mene aapko saupa tha!?

Aadmi : Jii... Wo mein... Jald hi details pata lag jaengi madam.

Ladki : Itna sa kaam karne me itna time lag raha hai?

Aadmi : Sheher bada hai madam. Thoda sa time lagega. Aur ab iss kaam ke liye mein CBI me toh nahi jaunga na? Par aap nishchint rahiye. Jald ho jaega.

Ladki : Hmm!

Aur wo aadmi baahar nikal gaya. Idhar wo ladki apne anguthe ko zorr se apne daato tale dabaate hue kisi soch me pad gayi. Na jaane kya soch rahi thi wo iss waqt. Par uske chehre par aasha, jigyaasa aur tanaav ke mile jule bhaav utpann ho rahe the.

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Nidhi ka ghar...

Veer ko apne ghar me laate hi sabse pehle Nidhi ne apne kapde badle aur usne apni saree utaar ke ek red night gown daal liya. Wo bhali bhaati jaanti thi ki ab wo akeli nahi hai, ek naujavan ladka bhi uske saath uske ghar me rehne waala hai par iske bawajood usne gown pehna. Jese usse vishvaash tha ki Veer koi bhi utt pataang harqat nahi karega.

Uski choti behan bhi yahi maujood thi. Yadi Nidhi chaahti toh iss waqt safety ke darr se wo Veer ko ye keh ke apne ghar se nikaal sakti thi ki ab uski choti behan aa gayi hai toh jagah nahi hai ghar me theherne ki, ya ye keh sakti thi ki ab uski behan aayi hui hai aur aise me wo Veer ko apne saath nahi rakh sakti. Wo kuch bhi keh sakti thi.

Par Nidhi bilkul bhi peeche na hati. Aur usse itna toh vishwaash tha ki Veer koi bhi galat harqat nahi karega uske saath.

Iss waqt red gown me wo qayaamat lag rahi thi. Poori aag ka shola. Veer toh bas yahi soch raha tha ki kitna bada murkh hoga Nidhi ka pati jo aisi aurat ko apne haath se jaane de raha tha.

Baahar nikalte hue Nidhi ne Veer ko nahaane ke liye kaha, kyuki itne dino se wo hospital me tha aur aise me zaahir sii baat thi ki usse ek bath ki sakht zaroorat thi. Par dikkat thi underwear aur kapdo ki. Veer toh khaali haath ghar se nikla tha. Bhala ab chaddi kaha se lae wo? Na uske paas extra kapde the, na hi wo koi Doraemon tha.

Hospital me jo kapde usse mile the wahi wo iss waqt pehna hua tha. Kyuki uski college ki dress toh khoon se pehle hi kharaab ho chuki thi. Aur abhi wo issi duwidha me tha ki kya kiya jaaye,

Veer : Umm... Ma'am mein naha toh lu but wo...

Kehte waqt uska chehra halka laal pad gaya toh Nidhi ne confused hote hue pucha.

Nidhi : Kya dikkat hai Veer?

Veer : Wo... Mere kapde? Aur underwear!? Mere paas nahi hai...

Bolte hi wo blush karne laga. Akhir usne bol bhi kese diya ye? Mann me wo khud se hi sawaal kar raha tha.

Aur ye sunn Nidhi ke bol bhi thoda ladkhada gaye,

Nidhi : Ohh! Haa! Arre... Wo... Mein bhi na... Mein ek kaam karti hu... Veer! Tum nahao... Mein shopping mart jaati hu... Aur udhar se le aaungi... Kuch kapde bhi le aaungi daily use ke liye.

Uski baat sunn pal bhar ke liye Veer ekdum maun ho gaya.

'Did she really said that? Ma'am mere liye kapde aur underwear lene jaa rahi hai?'

Aur ye sochte hi uske shareer me ek ajeeb si halchal hui andar hi andar.

Veer : Ma'am ye aap kya keh rahi ho? Aap rehne dijiye... Mein manage kar lunga...

Nidhi : Arre kya manage kar loge? Dobaara se wahi pehnoge kya? Tum ye bucket me kapde utaar ke rakh dena, mein washing machine me dho dungi.

Aur itna kehte hi wo mud ke jaane lagti hai ki tabhi usse yaad aata hai ki usne size toh pucha hi nahi.

Nidhi : Wo!! Tumhara size Veer? Kapdo ka?

Veer : Ma'am t shirt mujhe M size ki fit aati hai. Baaki...

Nidhi : Okay! Aur neeche ke liye mein lower le aaungi thik?

Veer : Jiii!

Wo fir se mud ke jaane waali thi ki tabhi usse firse kuch yaad aaya aur wo sochte hi uske gaal ekdum surkh laal pad gaye.

Wo palti aur Veer ko dekh badi hi dheemi awaaz me boli,

Nidhi (blush) : Wo... Wo... Tumhari... Underwear ka size?

Ye sawaal sunte hi Veer khud stabdh sa khada raha.
Ab bataana toh padega hi...

Usne apna thook nigalte hue sharmaate hue bataaya,

Veer (blush) : Ma'am... Wo... Mera... 85 hai...

Nidhi (blush) : 8... 85!?

Veer (blush) : 85 cm.

Nidhi (blush) : O... Okay!

Aur Nidhi tezz kadmo ke saath baahar nikal ke bhaag gayi. Veer ne ek raahat ki saas lete hue bathroom me pravesh kiya. Pehli baar koi ladki uske liye ye sab cheeze khareed rahi thi. Bada hi ajeeb sa lag raha tha usse.

Kuch derr baad...

Nidhi shopping kar ke aa chuki thi aur Veer ke liye wo kuch kapde khareed ke le aayi thi saath hi saath uske undergarments bhi. Poori tarah se jab Veer taiyaar hoke baahar aaya toh dekha ki Nidhi ke haath furti me kitchen ke kaamo me lage hue the.

Nidhi khud iss waqt bada hi sharma rahi thi. Iss se pehle usne apne pati tak ki bhi kabhi underwear na khareedi thi. Aur aaj wo pehli baar kisi mard ke liye underwear khareedne gayi thi aur wo bhi uske apne hi student ki.

Paas aate hue Veer kitchen me hi side ke platform se tik ke khada ho gaya aur Nidhi ko dekhne laga jo iss waqt roti belne me busy thi.

Veer ki aahat paa ke hi usne ek baar Veer ko mud ke dekha uske baad waapas se roti belni lagi aur dheere dheere khud hi baat karne lagi,

Nidhi : Fatafat roti sek deti hu aur Veer mene ye fry daal aur mix veg sabzi bana dii hai. Tum kha loge na? Dekho toh... Aaj pehla din hai aur mein kuch bhi special na bana paayi. Kal pakka kuch special banaungi. Tumhe kya pasand hai Veer? Jo tum bologe kal wahi banega... Aaj na jaldi me thi aur hospital se aate aate kaafi thak gayi... Thoda rest karungi na toh kal ekdum fresh mehsoos karungi... Fir kal hum sabhi eksaath special dinner karenge... Landlady ko bhi inform karna hai ki ab se tum mere saath rahoge... Yadi wo rent badhaati hai toh badha de... Wo dekh lungi mein... Uski tension mat lena tum haa?

Itna sab kuch wo bolti jaa rahi thi, uske haath itni speed me chal rahe the ki jitni baar wo roti belti uski chuudiyo ki khanak utni hi baar aur tezz shor karti. Roti belne ke kaaran uske haath ek rythm me hil rahe the aur ussi rythm se uske kaano me lagi hui baali bhi hil rahi thi.

Nidhi ko jese hi ehsaas hua ki usne itna sab bola par Veer ne koi pratikriya nahi dii toh wo palti aur Veer ko dekhi.

Aur usne dekha ki Veer keval apne haath baandhe platform se tike usse hi nihaar raha tha. Usse apne prati aise dekh uske gaalo par halki laali chhaa gayi.

Nidhi (blush) : Aise... Aise kya dekh rahe ho Veer!?

Veer : Dekh raha hu ki aap kitni mehnat karti ho Ma'am.

Nidhi (smiles) : Mehnat toh karni hi padti hai sabko. Tabhi toh zindagi chalti hai.

Veer (smiles) : Hmm!

Aur wo waapas se apne kaam me lag gayi par kuch derr baad hi uske kaano me Veer ki awaaz padi,
"Aapne itna sab kuch kyu kiya mere liye ma'am?"

Aur ye sawaal sunte hi Nidhi jiske haath abhi roti belne me lage hue the wo achanak hi ruk gaye.

Usne palat ke Veer ko dekha aur bolne hi waali thi ki firse Veer ki awaaz ne usse rok diya.

Veer : Mein jaanta hu ki aap yahi kahengi ki ye aapka ek teacher hone ke naate farz tha. Par aapne mere liye ek farz se kahi zyaada kiya hai Ma'am. Aur abhi bhi kar rahi ho. Ye sab kapde, ye mera yaha rehna, hospital me wo advanced fees, mujhe roz dekhne aana, haalchaal puchna, Kyu???

Veer ki baat sunn Nidhi ne ek gehri saas lii aur boli,

Nidhi : Kyuki mein jaanti hu tum kesa feel kar rahe ho Veer. Mein jaanti hu akelapan kesa hota hai. Kesa hota hai ghar se baahar nikalna. Kesa mehsoos hota hai. Isliye mein ye sab kar rahi hu. Aur... Bhale hi college me hamaari zyaada baat nahi hui Veer. But meri nazar apne harr ek student par rehti hai. Mujhe pata hai ki kon kesa hai. Mein jaanti thi ki tumhara koi dost nahi hai. Aur aise me tum kaha jaate? Mene wahi kiya jo mujhe sahi laga.

Veer : Aur ye jaante hue bhi ki aap ek ladke ko apne ghar laa rahi ho, ye jaante hue bhi ki aapki landlady aur aas pados ke log kya sochenge iss baare me? Ye jaante hue bhi ki aapki behan bhi yahi rehti hai aapke saath aur iske bawajood aap ek anjaan ladke ko yu rehne de rahi hai apne ghar me?

Nidhi (smiles) : Yes! Because I believe you!

Aur itna sunte hi Veer ka shareer sihar utha.

Veer : Kyuuu???

Nidhi : Tumhe kya lagta hai Veer? Tumhe kya lagta hai ki I don't know? Kya mujhe nahi pata ki log mujhe kin nazro se dekhte hai? Ghar se college, college se ghar, itne logo ki nazar mujhpe padti hai. Kuch jaan pehchaan ke toh kuch anjaan. Tumhe kya lagta hai ki mujhe nahi pata wo kin nazro se mujhe ghurte hai? Kya chalta hai unke mann me? Yaha tak ki college ke students jo na jaane kitne saal chote hai umr me...

Kehte waqt uske honth thar thara rahe the aur Veer ne notice kiya ki uski aankhein halki bheeg chuki thi.

Nidhi : I know.... I know everything Veer! I know everything.

Usne zorr se kass ke apne gown ka ek hissa bheench liya aur nazre neeche kar lii. Aaj pehli baar Veer ko khud kisi ke liye itna bura lag raha tha. Uska khud ka dil tadap raha tha Nidhi ki aisi haalat dekh.

Nidhi : But tum...

Usne nazre uthaate hue dubaara bolna shuru kiya. Aur iss waqt Veer bhali bhaati dekh sakta tha unn aasuo ko jo Nidhi ki palko par saje hue the.

Nidhi : Tumhari aankhein kabhi bhi nahi bhatki... And that's why... I believe you!

Nidhi ke bol sunte hi Veer ke shareer ke roye khade ho gaye.

Wo samajh chuka tha Nidhi kya baat bata rahi thi. Yahi ki kese log usse taadte hai aur khaa jaane waali nazro se ghurte hai. Yaha tak ki college ke students bhi jo usse aise ghurte the ki maano kabhi bhi uspe toot padenge. Par Veer ne aajtak kabhi bhi Nidhi ko wesi nazro se nahi dekha tha.

Jab jab Nidhi uss se baat karti, ya toh wo nazre jhuka ke baat karta tha ya fir uske chehre me dekhte hue. Naa ki uske shareer pe nazar maarte hue. Aur ye baat Nidhi bhali bhaati jaanti thi. Logo ki nazro aur unke iraado se wo harr tarah se parichit thi. Yahi kaaran tha ki usse Veer pe vishwaash tha. Uske iraado aur uski aankho par usse vishwaash tha.

"Dekho toh... Mein bhi na... Kya boring baato ko lekar baith gayi. Aur tum ye mat sochna bilkul bhi Veer ki tumhe ab kaam nahi karna padega. Boht kaam karwaungi tumse samjhe!?"

Nidhi ne apne aasu ko halke haath se pochte hue ek smile ke saath mazaakiya dhang me kaha, toh Veer bhi badle me muskura diya,

Veer : Aapka hukum sar aankho par ma'am.

Abhi usne bola hi tha ki tabhi Nidhi ki ungli dhoke se garam garam Daal se bhare pan par lag gayi aur uske muh se ek aah nikal gayi...

"Aaahhhh!!! Ssss.... Ouch!!!"

Aur agle hi pal Veer ne aage badh Nidhi ki jali hui ungli apne muh me bhar lii...

*Sannaata*

Ab bhar toh liii ungli muh me josh josh me...

Par ab Veer ko khayaal aaya ki usne kya kar diya.
Yadi iss waqt koi gaana Veer ki situation ko describe kar sakta tha toh woh tha~
Laude lag gaye...

Idhar Nidhi hakki bakki sii khadi Veer ko dekh rahi thi. Uski aankho me achambhav saaf nazar aa raha tha. Uska muh halka khul chuka tha.

Veer ki zubaan aur andar se muh ka garam taapmaan wo bhali bhaati apni ungli par mehsoos kar paa rahi thi. Jalan aur dard toh jese wo bhul hi chuki thi.

Dono ek dusre ki aankho me aankhe daal dekh rahe the.

Ki tabhi...

"Tururu tururu tururu ruru ruru... Aaah! Ye shaam ko late nahaane me maza hi aa jaata hai."

Shreya fridge me se orange juice ki bottle se juice peete peete kitchen me aa gayi... Aur usne jo saamne dekha...

*Phhhhhhuuuuuuuuuuuu*

Saara ka saara juice uske muh se nikal ke neeche zameen par jaa gira. Uski aankhein aisi phaili hui thi maano jese bechaari ne bhoot dekh liya ho. Muh khula ka khula...

Veer uski badi behan ki ungli apne muh me daale hue khada tha. Ab bas teeno ek dusre ko dekh rahe the aur ek khaamoshi sii chhaa gayi.

Veer : ....

Nidhi : ......

Shreya : .....

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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Sorry! Iss update se action start hone wala tha story pace pakadti but mujhe laga ek ye update zaroori tha. Ab next update se Veer apne stats badhane niklega. Like zaroor karna pasand aaye toh.
Dhanyavaad!

Awesome update bhai