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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

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    Votes: 207 13.0%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 35 2.2%

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Thank you for starting new story Werewolf bhai.
Kahani ka plot bohut hi behtarin hai
Jaha ek taraf veer ke lagbagh sabhi ghar wale usse nafrat karte hai
Wahi ek taraf nidhi jaisi teacher hai jo sirf insaniyat ke nate jitna usse ban padra utni veer ki madad kar rahi hai
And veer ko system ka sath milgaya ab dekhte hai veer kaise iska istemal karke khud ko behtar bana ta hai
Veer ki Maa to ab tak bas ek mystery ki tarah hai
Aur sabse best apki writing skills mai bohut zyada hi change nazar araha hai pichli story ke comparison mai and I am sure jaise jaise kahani agey badegi Isme aur improvements hote jayenge
Keep writing
Keep posting
Stay SAFE
stay HEALTHY
Waiting for next 💙
Thanks a lot bro!
Thread me swagat hai aapka! (◍•ᴗ•◍)
 

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Update - 7 ~ Busted

Ab tak...

Shreya : Dekho! Hum tumhe yaha rakh rahe hai kyuki meri dii badi hi bholi hai aur sabki madad karti hai. Aur hum tumhe yaha rakhne ke liye taiyaar hai. Par meri dii ke baare me koi bhi galat khayaal mat laana samjhe? Hmph! I'm watching you...

Aur wo do ungli Veer ki aankho ki taraf karte hue mud ke apni gaand matkaate hue andar chali gayi.


Ab aage...

Ek bade se bunglow me iss waqt ek bade se room me ek behad hi khubsoorat ladki apni comfortable chair par baithi hui thi. Aur kuch zaroori kaagzi kaam kar rahi thi. Ghar itna aalishaan tha ki pucho mat.

Tabhi uske room ka darwaza khula aur andar ek middle aged aadmi ne aakar uske saamne ek file rakhi aur bola,

Aadmi : Madam! Ye rahi file.

Ladki : Jii!

Aadmi : Wo... Madam!

Ladki : Hmm?

Aadmi : Wo... xxxxxxxx company hamaare saath deal karna chaahti hai. Ek bar firse mujhe unka call aaya tha.

Ladki (lambi saas lete hue) : Mene kitni baar aapko kaha hai ki unhe mana kar dijiye par aap ulta unko latka rahe ho? Mujhe nahi karni koi bhi deal unke saath.

Aadmi : Par madam isme galat kya hai? Ek acchi company hai aur ulta hume hi fayda hai. Aap bhala ye deal kyu nahi karna chaahti? Buraayi kya hai?

Ladki : Aap jaante hai na? Mein meeting ke waqt iss company ke maalik se mili thi. And, I can tell he's not trustworthy.

Aadmi : Par mujhe toh unka ravaiyya ekdum pasand aaya. Mujhe nahi lagta ki...

Ladki : Aap nahi jaante. Mein bhala kabhi galat hui hu?

Aadmi : Nahi! Par...

Ladki : Then bharosa rakhiye! Aur uss kaam ka kya jo mene aapko saupa tha!?

Aadmi : Jii... Wo mein... Jald hi details pata lag jaengi madam.

Ladki : Itna sa kaam karne me itna time lag raha hai?

Aadmi : Sheher bada hai madam. Thoda sa time lagega. Aur ab iss kaam ke liye mein CBI me toh nahi jaunga na? Par aap nishchint rahiye. Jald ho jaega.

Ladki : Hmm!

Aur wo aadmi baahar nikal gaya. Idhar wo ladki apne anguthe ko zorr se apne daato tale dabaate hue kisi soch me pad gayi. Na jaane kya soch rahi thi wo iss waqt. Par uske chehre par aasha, jigyaasa aur tanaav ke mile jule bhaav utpann ho rahe the.

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Nidhi ka ghar...

Veer ko apne ghar me laate hi sabse pehle Nidhi ne apne kapde badle aur usne apni saree utaar ke ek red night gown daal liya. Wo bhali bhaati jaanti thi ki ab wo akeli nahi hai, ek naujavan ladka bhi uske saath uske ghar me rehne waala hai par iske bawajood usne gown pehna. Jese usse vishvaash tha ki Veer koi bhi utt pataang harqat nahi karega.

Uski choti behan bhi yahi maujood thi. Yadi Nidhi chaahti toh iss waqt safety ke darr se wo Veer ko ye keh ke apne ghar se nikaal sakti thi ki ab uski choti behan aa gayi hai toh jagah nahi hai ghar me theherne ki, ya ye keh sakti thi ki ab uski behan aayi hui hai aur aise me wo Veer ko apne saath nahi rakh sakti. Wo kuch bhi keh sakti thi.

Par Nidhi bilkul bhi peeche na hati. Aur usse itna toh vishwaash tha ki Veer koi bhi galat harqat nahi karega uske saath.

Iss waqt red gown me wo qayaamat lag rahi thi. Poori aag ka shola. Veer toh bas yahi soch raha tha ki kitna bada murkh hoga Nidhi ka pati jo aisi aurat ko apne haath se jaane de raha tha.

Baahar nikalte hue Nidhi ne Veer ko nahaane ke liye kaha, kyuki itne dino se wo hospital me tha aur aise me zaahir sii baat thi ki usse ek bath ki sakht zaroorat thi. Par dikkat thi underwear aur kapdo ki. Veer toh khaali haath ghar se nikla tha. Bhala ab chaddi kaha se lae wo? Na uske paas extra kapde the, na hi wo koi Doraemon tha.

Hospital me jo kapde usse mile the wahi wo iss waqt pehna hua tha. Kyuki uski college ki dress toh khoon se pehle hi kharaab ho chuki thi. Aur abhi wo issi duwidha me tha ki kya kiya jaaye,

Veer : Umm... Ma'am mein naha toh lu but wo...

Kehte waqt uska chehra halka laal pad gaya toh Nidhi ne confused hote hue pucha.

Nidhi : Kya dikkat hai Veer?

Veer : Wo... Mere kapde? Aur underwear!? Mere paas nahi hai...

Bolte hi wo blush karne laga. Akhir usne bol bhi kese diya ye? Mann me wo khud se hi sawaal kar raha tha.

Aur ye sunn Nidhi ke bol bhi thoda ladkhada gaye,

Nidhi : Ohh! Haa! Arre... Wo... Mein bhi na... Mein ek kaam karti hu... Veer! Tum nahao... Mein shopping mart jaati hu... Aur udhar se le aaungi... Kuch kapde bhi le aaungi daily use ke liye.

Uski baat sunn pal bhar ke liye Veer ekdum maun ho gaya.

'Did she really said that? Ma'am mere liye kapde aur underwear lene jaa rahi hai?'

Aur ye sochte hi uske shareer me ek ajeeb si halchal hui andar hi andar.

Veer : Ma'am ye aap kya keh rahi ho? Aap rehne dijiye... Mein manage kar lunga...

Nidhi : Arre kya manage kar loge? Dobaara se wahi pehnoge kya? Tum ye bucket me kapde utaar ke rakh dena, mein washing machine me dho dungi.

Aur itna kehte hi wo mud ke jaane lagti hai ki tabhi usse yaad aata hai ki usne size toh pucha hi nahi.

Nidhi : Wo!! Tumhara size Veer? Kapdo ka?

Veer : Ma'am t shirt mujhe M size ki fit aati hai. Baaki...

Nidhi : Okay! Aur neeche ke liye mein lower le aaungi thik?

Veer : Jiii!

Wo fir se mud ke jaane waali thi ki tabhi usse firse kuch yaad aaya aur wo sochte hi uske gaal ekdum surkh laal pad gaye.

Wo palti aur Veer ko dekh badi hi dheemi awaaz me boli,

Nidhi (blush) : Wo... Wo... Tumhari... Underwear ka size?

Ye sawaal sunte hi Veer khud stabdh sa khada raha.
Ab bataana toh padega hi...

Usne apna thook nigalte hue sharmaate hue bataaya,

Veer (blush) : Ma'am... Wo... Mera... 85 hai...

Nidhi (blush) : 8... 85!?

Veer (blush) : 85 cm.

Nidhi (blush) : O... Okay!

Aur Nidhi tezz kadmo ke saath baahar nikal ke bhaag gayi. Veer ne ek raahat ki saas lete hue bathroom me pravesh kiya. Pehli baar koi ladki uske liye ye sab cheeze khareed rahi thi. Bada hi ajeeb sa lag raha tha usse.

Kuch derr baad...

Nidhi shopping kar ke aa chuki thi aur Veer ke liye wo kuch kapde khareed ke le aayi thi saath hi saath uske undergarments bhi. Poori tarah se jab Veer taiyaar hoke baahar aaya toh dekha ki Nidhi ke haath furti me kitchen ke kaamo me lage hue the.

Nidhi khud iss waqt bada hi sharma rahi thi. Iss se pehle usne apne pati tak ki bhi kabhi underwear na khareedi thi. Aur aaj wo pehli baar kisi mard ke liye underwear khareedne gayi thi aur wo bhi uske apne hi student ki.

Paas aate hue Veer kitchen me hi side ke platform se tik ke khada ho gaya aur Nidhi ko dekhne laga jo iss waqt roti belne me busy thi.

Veer ki aahat paa ke hi usne ek baar Veer ko mud ke dekha uske baad waapas se roti belni lagi aur dheere dheere khud hi baat karne lagi,

Nidhi : Fatafat roti sek deti hu aur Veer mene ye fry daal aur mix veg sabzi bana dii hai. Tum kha loge na? Dekho toh... Aaj pehla din hai aur mein kuch bhi special na bana paayi. Kal pakka kuch special banaungi. Tumhe kya pasand hai Veer? Jo tum bologe kal wahi banega... Aaj na jaldi me thi aur hospital se aate aate kaafi thak gayi... Thoda rest karungi na toh kal ekdum fresh mehsoos karungi... Fir kal hum sabhi eksaath special dinner karenge... Landlady ko bhi inform karna hai ki ab se tum mere saath rahoge... Yadi wo rent badhaati hai toh badha de... Wo dekh lungi mein... Uski tension mat lena tum haa?

Itna sab kuch wo bolti jaa rahi thi, uske haath itni speed me chal rahe the ki jitni baar wo roti belti uski chuudiyo ki khanak utni hi baar aur tezz shor karti. Roti belne ke kaaran uske haath ek rythm me hil rahe the aur ussi rythm se uske kaano me lagi hui baali bhi hil rahi thi.

Nidhi ko jese hi ehsaas hua ki usne itna sab bola par Veer ne koi pratikriya nahi dii toh wo palti aur Veer ko dekhi.

Aur usne dekha ki Veer keval apne haath baandhe platform se tike usse hi nihaar raha tha. Usse apne prati aise dekh uske gaalo par halki laali chhaa gayi.

Nidhi (blush) : Aise... Aise kya dekh rahe ho Veer!?

Veer : Dekh raha hu ki aap kitni mehnat karti ho Ma'am.

Nidhi (smiles) : Mehnat toh karni hi padti hai sabko. Tabhi toh zindagi chalti hai.

Veer (smiles) : Hmm!

Aur wo waapas se apne kaam me lag gayi par kuch derr baad hi uske kaano me Veer ki awaaz padi,
"Aapne itna sab kuch kyu kiya mere liye ma'am?"

Aur ye sawaal sunte hi Nidhi jiske haath abhi roti belne me lage hue the wo achanak hi ruk gaye.

Usne palat ke Veer ko dekha aur bolne hi waali thi ki firse Veer ki awaaz ne usse rok diya.

Veer : Mein jaanta hu ki aap yahi kahengi ki ye aapka ek teacher hone ke naate farz tha. Par aapne mere liye ek farz se kahi zyaada kiya hai Ma'am. Aur abhi bhi kar rahi ho. Ye sab kapde, ye mera yaha rehna, hospital me wo advanced fees, mujhe roz dekhne aana, haalchaal puchna, Kyu???

Veer ki baat sunn Nidhi ne ek gehri saas lii aur boli,

Nidhi : Kyuki mein jaanti hu tum kesa feel kar rahe ho Veer. Mein jaanti hu akelapan kesa hota hai. Kesa hota hai ghar se baahar nikalna. Kesa mehsoos hota hai. Isliye mein ye sab kar rahi hu. Aur... Bhale hi college me hamaari zyaada baat nahi hui Veer. But meri nazar apne harr ek student par rehti hai. Mujhe pata hai ki kon kesa hai. Mein jaanti thi ki tumhara koi dost nahi hai. Aur aise me tum kaha jaate? Mene wahi kiya jo mujhe sahi laga.

Veer : Aur ye jaante hue bhi ki aap ek ladke ko apne ghar laa rahi ho, ye jaante hue bhi ki aapki landlady aur aas pados ke log kya sochenge iss baare me? Ye jaante hue bhi ki aapki behan bhi yahi rehti hai aapke saath aur iske bawajood aap ek anjaan ladke ko yu rehne de rahi hai apne ghar me?

Nidhi (smiles) : Yes! Because I believe you!

Aur itna sunte hi Veer ka shareer sihar utha.

Veer : Kyuuu???

Nidhi : Tumhe kya lagta hai Veer? Tumhe kya lagta hai ki I don't know? Kya mujhe nahi pata ki log mujhe kin nazro se dekhte hai? Ghar se college, college se ghar, itne logo ki nazar mujhpe padti hai. Kuch jaan pehchaan ke toh kuch anjaan. Tumhe kya lagta hai ki mujhe nahi pata wo kin nazro se mujhe ghurte hai? Kya chalta hai unke mann me? Yaha tak ki college ke students jo na jaane kitne saal chote hai umr me...

Kehte waqt uske honth thar thara rahe the aur Veer ne notice kiya ki uski aankhein halki bheeg chuki thi.

Nidhi : I know.... I know everything Veer! I know everything.

Usne zorr se kass ke apne gown ka ek hissa bheench liya aur nazre neeche kar lii. Aaj pehli baar Veer ko khud kisi ke liye itna bura lag raha tha. Uska khud ka dil tadap raha tha Nidhi ki aisi haalat dekh.

Nidhi : But tum...

Usne nazre uthaate hue dubaara bolna shuru kiya. Aur iss waqt Veer bhali bhaati dekh sakta tha unn aasuo ko jo Nidhi ki palko par saje hue the.

Nidhi : Tumhari aankhein kabhi bhi nahi bhatki... And that's why... I believe you!

Nidhi ke bol sunte hi Veer ke shareer ke roye khade ho gaye.

Wo samajh chuka tha Nidhi kya baat bata rahi thi. Yahi ki kese log usse taadte hai aur khaa jaane waali nazro se ghurte hai. Yaha tak ki college ke students bhi jo usse aise ghurte the ki maano kabhi bhi uspe toot padenge. Par Veer ne aajtak kabhi bhi Nidhi ko wesi nazro se nahi dekha tha.

Jab jab Nidhi uss se baat karti, ya toh wo nazre jhuka ke baat karta tha ya fir uske chehre me dekhte hue. Naa ki uske shareer pe nazar maarte hue. Aur ye baat Nidhi bhali bhaati jaanti thi. Logo ki nazro aur unke iraado se wo harr tarah se parichit thi. Yahi kaaran tha ki usse Veer pe vishwaash tha. Uske iraado aur uski aankho par usse vishwaash tha.

"Dekho toh... Mein bhi na... Kya boring baato ko lekar baith gayi. Aur tum ye mat sochna bilkul bhi Veer ki tumhe ab kaam nahi karna padega. Boht kaam karwaungi tumse samjhe!?"

Nidhi ne apne aasu ko halke haath se pochte hue ek smile ke saath mazaakiya dhang me kaha, toh Veer bhi badle me muskura diya,

Veer : Aapka hukum sar aankho par ma'am.

Abhi usne bola hi tha ki tabhi Nidhi ki ungli dhoke se garam garam Daal se bhare pan par lag gayi aur uske muh se ek aah nikal gayi...

"Aaahhhh!!! Ssss.... Ouch!!!"

Aur agle hi pal Veer ne aage badh Nidhi ki jali hui ungli apne muh me bhar lii...

*Sannaata*

Ab bhar toh liii ungli muh me josh josh me...

Par ab Veer ko khayaal aaya ki usne kya kar diya.
Yadi iss waqt koi gaana Veer ki situation ko describe kar sakta tha toh woh tha~
Laude lag gaye...

Idhar Nidhi hakki bakki sii khadi Veer ko dekh rahi thi. Uski aankho me achambhav saaf nazar aa raha tha. Uska muh halka khul chuka tha.

Veer ki zubaan aur andar se muh ka garam taapmaan wo bhali bhaati apni ungli par mehsoos kar paa rahi thi. Jalan aur dard toh jese wo bhul hi chuki thi.

Dono ek dusre ki aankho me aankhe daal dekh rahe the.

Ki tabhi...

"Tururu tururu tururu ruru ruru... Aaah! Ye shaam ko late nahaane me maza hi aa jaata hai."

Shreya fridge me se orange juice ki bottle se juice peete peete kitchen me aa gayi... Aur usne jo saamne dekha...

*Phhhhhhuuuuuuuuuuuu*

Saara ka saara juice uske muh se nikal ke neeche zameen par jaa gira. Uski aankhein aisi phaili hui thi maano jese bechaari ne bhoot dekh liya ho. Muh khula ka khula...

Veer uski badi behan ki ungli apne muh me daale hue khada tha. Ab bas teeno ek dusre ko dekh rahe the aur ek khaamoshi sii chhaa gayi.

Veer : ....

Nidhi : ......

Shreya : .....

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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Sorry! Iss update se action start hone wala tha story pace pakadti but mujhe laga ek ye update zaroori tha. Ab next update se Veer apne stats badhane niklega. Like zaroor karna pasand aaye toh.

Dhanyavaad!
 
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Mai manga comics padhta hun , mai shayad story ko acchhe se connect kar paunga,

All the best for future updates
waise title me baadshah ki jagah samraath hota toh tagda lagta.... hai na?
Congratulations for new thread bhai
welcome back bhai.
New kahani ke liye dher sari badhaiya dost
:congrats: for the new story
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Welcome to new post

Co
:congrats: For starting new story thread...
Aakhir Kar..................
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:congrats:
Paramparik rishton me chudayi aur kisi aisi aithihasik parampara jo kalpanao me dubki laagade vaisi EK Kahani ka intezar he. Meri mitravar
Are bhai superb start maja aane wala fir se aapki story kaa
First of all... congrats for New story .....tum bahut late ho yr....maine to hope hi chhod di thi aaoge ya nhi.....fir se welcome yr....
Intro to bahut acha lga ....dada ji purani soch wale insan hai ...jinhone pehle hi btawara kr diya ....jisse kalah na ho ye Shi hua ....Brijesh Intro me to bilkul sidha insan lg rha hai ...pr shayad aisa hai nhi...I think ye to padh kar hi pta chalega..hero ki step mom ka character mast lag rha hai...Jha tak mujhe lgta hai iske or Veer(hero) ke relation thik nhi honge ....kyuki ye uska apna beta nhi....and behan (bhumika) stepsis iske bare me kuch keh nhi skta iska character kaisa hai....and chacha ki family ka intro bhi acha lga ....khas kar chachi or unki beto or bahu ka 😍....ab ye to aage pta chalega dono ka relations kaisa hai ....and inme bhi sabhi ke jaise lalchi log hai ya nhi...
Bhai mere kuch doubts hai Jaise hero sabhi me sabse chota age chota kaise hai... and uski maa ka intro nhi aaya.....shayad tum usse suspence rkhna chahte honge...na hi hero ka koi real sister hai agr hoti to or jyada mza aata ....
Superb Update


Nidhi ek achhi ladki hai. Jo apne student ke liye itna kar rahi hai. Jo chiz Veer ke ghar walo ko karna chahiye tha woh kaam Nidhi ne kiya.

Nidhi ko Veer ke chuwan se ajeeb sa mehsus hua. 2 saal se mard ke chuwan se durr rehne se usse ajeeb laga.

Shreya Nidhi ki behen jo ab uske saath hi rahegi. Veer ko shayad shreya pasand aayi hai. Par Shreya ko love at first sight mein believe hai jo usko Veer ko dekh ke nhi hua.

Dekhte hai future mein pyaar hota hai yaa Hawas jaagta hai
Nice update
Zabardast update
Mazedaar update bro.Lagta hai Shreya Veer ki mohabbat mein giraftaar ho jaayegi
Amazing story brooo...
Superb...
Awesome....❤



Waiting for next update
Super update hai Bhai
GOOD UPDATE
GOOD UPDATE
Awesome update
Nice update bhai do to yehi pe mil gaya veer ko abhi to bahut baki hai
Veer ke liye ab nayi jaga,nayi maal :Ho: ke saath nayi suruwat hone ja rahi hai apne kam akal ka pradarshan karke usne free ke perks se jyada apne strength enhance mein laga diya(ya phir accha hua uske liye?) Ab aage dekhte hein ye YouTuber shreya ko sacche pyar ki talash kahan jaake khatam hoti hai aur hamari nidhi madam ki veer ke liye favourability badhti hai ya fir ghattiti hai...
Bhai ek suggestion hai agar sahi lage to: nidhi ke sath hero ke koi sexual relationship mat rakhna, Nidhi ne us point pe hero ki help kari jab uske ghar walo ne hi kutte ki tarah use marna chod diya ,ab itna to obvious hai ki nidhi heroine nahi hogi story ki and Mana ki tumhari story hentai type hai but hero agar aise main nidhi ko bus ek sex partner banayega to hero bas ek hawsu darinda lagega.
Nice update
superb mindblowing fabulous fantastic speechless update...........
keep posting bhai...........
waiting for next update............
Love and romance coming soon.
Very interesting story line up👍👍👍
Keep going on
jab nidhi mam iske ghar gayee toh kya iske mata pita ke alawa koi na tha... akhir iski parwah karne waali iski chachi ne kyun na khojne kee kosis kari... itne bare pariwar ka hissa thee unke apne bhi jaan pehchan honge... aur iski so called pyari behen kavya kya usse maloom na tha kee veer ka koi dost na hain... kya iske gharwaale iske baare mein kuchh bhi na jante the jo na pasand karte the unki chhor bhi de toh jinhe iski parwah thee kya wo ratti bhar na jante the.... agar aaj tak kisi dost ko iske unhone dekha na tha toh kaise maan liya...

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missions karne par usse points milte hain aur unhi points se wo khud ko improve kar shatka hain... jitne jyada missions utne jyada points utne jyada improvement khud mein laa shakta hain... yeh proportionlly chalte hain ek doosre ke.... system ne apni urja dee veer ko jaise shock waves dete hain marte hue heart ko rejuvenate karne ke liye... its like a parastie just like venom they feed off each other... wo uski shaktiya badhati hain badle mein usse shaktiya leti hain...

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ek taraf uske apne khoon ke riste naate doosri taraf nidhi jisse theek se jaan pehchan bhi na hain uski... usne jaan bachaye aur aaj saath rahne ko keh rahi hain... bhala koi apna rishtedar itna na karta hain wo paraya ho ke... wo dil kee saaf hain lekin saaf dilwaale hi sabse jyada takleef sahte hain duniya mein... khule baal aur naseeli aankhen,,, aisi ankhen le ke chalti road pe chalti hain kisi ko ankhon mein dekhne e nasha ho gaya toh bechara khali fokat mein drunk and drive mein fas jayega... hihihi pg mara maine.. hihihih...

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wakai nidhi ne yeh tak na socha jiske gharwaalo ne hi usse ghar se nikal diya hain kaheen iss ladke ne hi kuchh galat aisa kiya ho jisse wo log nafrat karte ho aur usse apne ghar mein rahne de rahi hain... khud kee maa alag pareshani mein hain aur ek nayi mushibat mol le rahi hain... oopar se divorced mahila hain wo log tarah tarah ke baate banayenge ek anjaane ladke ko dekh ke uske saath... wahee par purush ka sparsh wo bhi ek lambe antaral ke baad kuchh soyee hue anchahe tarang utha rahi hain uske dil mein... kehne ko toh umra ka bara fasla hain lekin yeh dil kahan manta hain wo toh bas mehsoos karna janta hain...

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dekho wo aa gayee dekho na lagta hain wo aa gayee... shreya---- kaheen yeh wo toh nahin mera matlab hain hamari kahani kee heroine ... are ab bol bhi do itna kya sarmana... dak dak karne laga... /// yeh system kee maa kee ankh ek toh khud saali launda hain kee laundiya pata nahin oopar se bechare ka dil tor rahi ahin.. mana kee jahndu hain lekin koi toh dekhegi kee kya pata uske najariya change ho jaye love at first sight se love in the first fight ho jaye... kya bolte ho....

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I am becoming fan of your writing with each and every update... detailing is perfect... loved it...
mast update and sec. Update wait
Awesome update
Bhai padhna zaroor. X forum se jud kar jis ne enigma bhai ki pyaar 100 baar nahi padhi, samjho us ne kuchh nahi padha. Baki aap ki yeh story ki uthaan bata rahi hy k yeh bhi jhande garde

Awesome update bhai.
SUPERB AWESOME FANTASTIC AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI
Shreya n Veer ko warning de di h ki meri bahen door raho
Bahot behtareen zaberdast shaandaar lajawab update bhai
Nice update bro waiting for your next update....
Nice Update bro
Excellent update bhai
Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai...
Nice and awesome update...
Nice update Werewolf bhai.
Ab veer ko bhi hospital se discharge milne wala he. Aur sari formalities bhi Nidhi ne puri kar di he. Nidhi ko bhi pata he ki vaar wapis uske ghar Jane se raha. To Nidhi ne bhi achha kiya ki veer ko apne ghar me rakhne ko bol di. Ab veer uske sath rahega to uske liye bhi achha he. Bahar thokare to nahi khani padegi. Ghar jate samay Nidhi ki kamar pakad ne se Nidhi ko bhi dil me kuch to hua he. Aage chalke veer ke liye feelings badhegi.
Nidhi ke liye bhi achha hi he veer ka uske ghar rehna. Uski beti juhi ko bhi ek father figure mil jayega ya fir ek achha dost. Juhi abhi chhoti he aur usse jarurat he kisi father figure ki uski life me. Veer bhale hi best father figure na bane par usse pata he ki worst kese nahi banna.
Yaha Nidhi ke ghar pe uski chhoti behan rehne aayi he ab. Nidhi ke maa baap ne socha hoga ki Nidhi akeli rehti he aur job, bachhi ka khayal bhi rakhti he sab kaam akeli karti he to bhej diya shreya ko Nidhi ki help ke liye. Shreya ke bhi sapne he ab dekhte he veer ke sath kese rehti he wo. Veer ki halat pe daya to aa gayi he usse par mann me doubt abhi bhi he.
Ab veer ke samne ek mission bhi he ki Nidhi ke problem solve karo. Dekhte he veer kese solve karega.
Vese aapne kaha he ki kahani harem based he to ab Nidhi se hi shuruwat hone wali he.
Waiting for next update 🙏🏻.
Hmare liye masala to pahle update se hi suru ho gya tha nidhi ki chhoti Sister Shreya Ghar aa gyi hai nidhi ke yha rahne nidhi ne veer ke bare me sb bta diya hai Shreya ki dhamki bahut hi mazedar thi nidhi ke states me 10 points ki badhat hui hai Jisse veer ke andar unke prati respect or bhi badh gyi hai... Superb jabarjast update bhai sandar
Aapka pg mast tha or yah
yeh system kee maa kee ankh ek toh khud saali launda hain kee laundiya pata nahin oopar se bechare ka dil tor rahi ahin.. Bhi Jabardast hai
Mast bhai uapte bahut he jada badiya tha bhai or ek baat meri crush ka naam bhi shreya h ab to Veer ki jagah Vickey likh lo
Interesting & Funny Update.
Bahut hi khubsurat update bhai
काफी अनोखा सब्जेक्ट चुना है आपने । पहले डाउट था कहीं चमत्कारिक चीजें होने के कारण पढ़ने में वो मजा नहीं आए जो रियलिटी में आता है लेकिन इस " सिस्टम " ने तो कहानी में चार चांद लगा दिए ।
वीर की न तो शारीरिक स्ट्रेंथ है , न इंटेलिजेंट है , न चपलता है और न ही फिजिकली बढ़िया है । थोड़ी बहुत है तो वह है सहनशीलता । और वह तो होना ही था । अनेक सालों से दुखों को बर्दाश्त करते हुए सहनशक्ति बढ़ ही जाता है ।

इसके अलावा उसके पास दूसरों की भी ये सारी क्वालिटी देखने की क्षमता हासिल हो गई है । ऐसा लग रहा है वो " मिस्टर इंडिया " हो गया है जो वह सभी को तो देख सकता है पर दूसरे उसे नहीं देख सकते ।

बहुत बढ़िया कांसेप्ट का चयन किया है आपने । लेकिन क्या वो दूसरे के मन की बात को भी रीड कर सकता है ?

फिलहाल के दोनों अपडेट्स बेहद ही शानदार थे । कहीं कहीं तो हमें मुस्कराने के लिए बाध्य कर गया । नेचुरल कामेडी किसी भी कहानी में हो तो एक अलग ही शमां बंध जाता है । दर्द के साथ साथ हंसी भी जरूरी है ।

निधि के लिए पहले भी मैंने कहा , वो फरिश्ता बन कर आई है वीर के लाइफ में । उसकी जान बचाने में सबसे अहम भूमिका उन्हीं की थी । लेकिन अब लगता है वो उसके लिए लव गुरु की भी भूमिका निभाएंगी । पर इसके लिए पहले वीर को अपनी हालत सुधारनी होगी । कुछ प्वाइंट अर्जित करने होंगे ।

निधि के बाद उनकी छोटी बहन श्रेया की भी एंट्री हुई है । और पहली ही एंट्री में अच्छी खासी छाप छोड़ दी उन्होंने रीडर्स पर । उसके बातों का स्टाइल मुझे तो बहुत पसंद आया ।

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट Werewolf bhai.
जगमग जगमग अपडेट ।
Nice update bro,
Veer k liye ek neya ghar,neya log sath mey ek thikhi mirchi, dekhtey hey uskey sath kya kya hota hey
KEEP IT UP AND AS ALWAYS WAITING FOR
Waiting for next update bhai...
शानदार bhai
nice update
Thank you for starting new story Werewolf bhai.
Kahani ka plot bohut hi behtarin hai
Jaha ek taraf veer ke lagbagh sabhi ghar wale usse nafrat karte hai
Wahi ek taraf nidhi jaisi teacher hai jo sirf insaniyat ke nate jitna usse ban padra utni veer ki madad kar rahi hai
And veer ko system ka sath milgaya ab dekhte hai veer kaise iska istemal karke khud ko behtar bana ta hai
Veer ki Maa to ab tak bas ek mystery ki tarah hai
Aur sabse best apki writing skills mai bohut zyada hi change nazar araha hai pichli story ke comparison mai and I am sure jaise jaise kahani agey badegi Isme aur improvements hote jayenge
Keep writing
Keep posting
Stay SAFE
stay HEALTHY
Waiting for next 💙
Bhai ajj night me update ayega kya bhai
Are bhai veer ke her
karname per
pyar
kitne karata he
aur
sacha pyar
Waiting writer bhai
Jabardast update dost
Waiting for next update bhai...
Bhai ji waiting...
Waiting for next update broo
Aapaki sy...par update
kab aayega
:congrats: For completed 50 pages on your story thread.....
Waiting for next update Werewolf bhai....
Update kb tk doge bhai
Update 7 has been posted guys!
 

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Ab tak...

Shreya : Dekho! Hum tumhe yaha rakh rahe hai kyuki meri dii badi hi bholi hai aur sabki madad karti hai. Aur hum tumhe yaha rakhne ke liye taiyaar hai. Par meri dii ke baare me koi bhi galat khayaal mat laana samjhe? Hmph! I'm watching you...

Aur wo do ungli Veer ki aankho ki taraf karte hue mud ke apni gaand matkaate hue andar chali gayi.


Ab aage...

Ek bade se bunglow me iss waqt ek bade se room me ek behad hi khubsoorat ladki apni comfortable chair par baithi hui thi. Aur kuch zaroori kaagzi kaam kar rahi thi. Ghar itna aalishaan tha ki pucho mat.

Tabhi uske room ka darwaza khula aur andar ek middle aged aadmi ne aakar uske saamne ek file rakhi aur bola,

Aadmi : Madam! Ye rahi file.

Ladki : Jii!

Aadmi : Wo... Madam!

Ladki : Hmm?

Aadmi : Wo... xxxxxxxx company hamaare saath deal karna chaahti hai. Ek bar firse mujhe unka call aaya tha.

Ladki (lambi saas lete hue) : Mene kitni baar aapko kaha hai ki unhe mana kar dijiye par aap ulta unko latka rahe ho? Mujhe nahi karni koi bhi deal unke saath.

Aadmi : Par madam isme galat kya hai? Ek acchi company hai aur ulta hume hi fayda hai. Aap bhala ye deal kyu nahi karna chaahti? Buraayi kya hai?

Ladki : Aap jaante hai na? Mein meeting ke waqt iss company ke maalik se mili thi. And, I can tell he's not trustworthy.

Aadmi : Par mujhe toh unka ravaiyya ekdum pasand aaya. Mujhe nahi lagta ki...

Ladki : Aap nahi jaante. Mein bhala kabhi galat hui hu?

Aadmi : Nahi! Par...

Ladki : Then bharosa rakhiye! Aur uss kaam ka kya jo mene aapko saupa tha!?

Aadmi : Jii... Wo mein... Jald hi details pata lag jaengi madam.

Ladki : Itna sa kaam karne me itna time lag raha hai?

Aadmi : Sheher bada hai madam. Thoda sa time lagega. Aur ab iss kaam ke liye mein CBI me toh nahi jaunga na? Par aap nishchint rahiye. Jald ho jaega.

Ladki : Hmm!

Aur wo aadmi baahar nikal gaya. Idhar wo ladki apne anguthe ko zorr se apne daato tale dabaate hue kisi soch me pad gayi. Na jaane kya soch rahi thi wo iss waqt. Par uske chehre par aasha, jigyaasa aur tanaav ke mile jule bhaav utpann ho rahe the.

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Nidhi ka ghar...

Veer ko apne ghar me laate hi sabse pehle Nidhi ne apne kapde badle aur usne apni saree utaar ke ek red night gown daal liya. Wo bhali bhaati jaanti thi ki ab wo akeli nahi hai, ek naujavan ladka bhi uske saath uske ghar me rehne waala hai par iske bawajood usne gown pehna. Jese usse vishvaash tha ki Veer koi bhi utt pataang harqat nahi karega.

Uski choti behan bhi yahi maujood thi. Yadi Nidhi chaahti toh iss waqt safety ke darr se wo Veer ko ye keh ke apne ghar se nikaal sakti thi ki ab uski choti behan aa gayi hai toh jagah nahi hai ghar me theherne ki, ya ye keh sakti thi ki ab uski behan aayi hui hai aur aise me wo Veer ko apne saath nahi rakh sakti. Wo kuch bhi keh sakti thi.

Par Nidhi bilkul bhi peeche na hati. Aur usse itna toh vishwaash tha ki Veer koi bhi galat harqat nahi karega uske saath.

Iss waqt red gown me wo qayaamat lag rahi thi. Poori aag ka shola. Veer toh bas yahi soch raha tha ki kitna bada murkh hoga Nidhi ka pati jo aisi aurat ko apne haath se jaane de raha tha.

Baahar nikalte hue Nidhi ne Veer ko nahaane ke liye kaha, kyuki itne dino se wo hospital me tha aur aise me zaahir sii baat thi ki usse ek bath ki sakht zaroorat thi. Par dikkat thi underwear aur kapdo ki. Veer toh khaali haath ghar se nikla tha. Bhala ab chaddi kaha se lae wo? Na uske paas extra kapde the, na hi wo koi Doraemon tha.

Hospital me jo kapde usse mile the wahi wo iss waqt pehna hua tha. Kyuki uski college ki dress toh khoon se pehle hi kharaab ho chuki thi. Aur abhi wo issi duwidha me tha ki kya kiya jaaye,

Veer : Umm... Ma'am mein naha toh lu but wo...

Kehte waqt uska chehra halka laal pad gaya toh Nidhi ne confused hote hue pucha.

Nidhi : Kya dikkat hai Veer?

Veer : Wo... Mere kapde? Aur underwear!? Mere paas nahi hai...

Bolte hi wo blush karne laga. Akhir usne bol bhi kese diya ye? Mann me wo khud se hi sawaal kar raha tha.

Aur ye sunn Nidhi ke bol bhi thoda ladkhada gaye,

Nidhi : Ohh! Haa! Arre... Wo... Mein bhi na... Mein ek kaam karti hu... Veer! Tum nahao... Mein shopping mart jaati hu... Aur udhar se le aaungi... Kuch kapde bhi le aaungi daily use ke liye.

Uski baat sunn pal bhar ke liye Veer ekdum maun ho gaya.

'Did she really said that? Ma'am mere liye kapde aur underwear lene jaa rahi hai?'

Aur ye sochte hi uske shareer me ek ajeeb si halchal hui andar hi andar.

Veer : Ma'am ye aap kya keh rahi ho? Aap rehne dijiye... Mein manage kar lunga...

Nidhi : Arre kya manage kar loge? Dobaara se wahi pehnoge kya? Tum ye bucket me kapde utaar ke rakh dena, mein washing machine me dho dungi.

Aur itna kehte hi wo mud ke jaane lagti hai ki tabhi usse yaad aata hai ki usne size toh pucha hi nahi.

Nidhi : Wo!! Tumhara size Veer? Kapdo ka?

Veer : Ma'am t shirt mujhe M size ki fit aati hai. Baaki...

Nidhi : Okay! Aur neeche ke liye mein lower le aaungi thik?

Veer : Jiii!

Wo fir se mud ke jaane waali thi ki tabhi usse firse kuch yaad aaya aur wo sochte hi uske gaal ekdum surkh laal pad gaye.

Wo palti aur Veer ko dekh badi hi dheemi awaaz me boli,

Nidhi (blush) : Wo... Wo... Tumhari... Underwear ka size?

Ye sawaal sunte hi Veer khud stabdh sa khada raha.
Ab bataana toh padega hi...

Usne apna thook nigalte hue sharmaate hue bataaya,

Veer (blush) : Ma'am... Wo... Mera... 85 hai...

Nidhi (blush) : 8... 85!?

Veer (blush) : 85 cm.

Nidhi (blush) : O... Okay!

Aur Nidhi tezz kadmo ke saath baahar nikal ke bhaag gayi. Veer ne ek raahat ki saas lete hue bathroom me pravesh kiya. Pehli baar koi ladki uske liye ye sab cheeze khareed rahi thi. Bada hi ajeeb sa lag raha tha usse.

Kuch derr baad...

Nidhi shopping kar ke aa chuki thi aur Veer ke liye wo kuch kapde khareed ke le aayi thi saath hi saath uske undergarments bhi. Poori tarah se jab Veer taiyaar hoke baahar aaya toh dekha ki Nidhi ke haath furti me kitchen ke kaamo me lage hue the.

Nidhi khud iss waqt bada hi sharma rahi thi. Iss se pehle usne apne pati tak ki bhi kabhi underwear na khareedi thi. Aur aaj wo pehli baar kisi mard ke liye underwear khareedne gayi thi aur wo bhi uske apne hi student ki.

Paas aate hue Veer kitchen me hi side ke platform se tik ke khada ho gaya aur Nidhi ko dekhne laga jo iss waqt roti belne me busy thi.

Veer ki aahat paa ke hi usne ek baar Veer ko mud ke dekha uske baad waapas se roti belni lagi aur dheere dheere khud hi baat karne lagi,

Nidhi : Fatafat roti sek deti hu aur Veer mene ye fry daal aur mix veg sabzi bana dii hai. Tum kha loge na? Dekho toh... Aaj pehla din hai aur mein kuch bhi special na bana paayi. Kal pakka kuch special banaungi. Tumhe kya pasand hai Veer? Jo tum bologe kal wahi banega... Aaj na jaldi me thi aur hospital se aate aate kaafi thak gayi... Thoda rest karungi na toh kal ekdum fresh mehsoos karungi... Fir kal hum sabhi eksaath special dinner karenge... Landlady ko bhi inform karna hai ki ab se tum mere saath rahoge... Yadi wo rent badhaati hai toh badha de... Wo dekh lungi mein... Uski tension mat lena tum haa?

Itna sab kuch wo bolti jaa rahi thi, uske haath itni speed me chal rahe the ki jitni baar wo roti belti uski chuudiyo ki khanak utni hi baar aur tezz shor karti. Roti belne ke kaaran uske haath ek rythm me hil rahe the aur ussi rythm se uske kaano me lagi hui baali bhi hil rahi thi.

Nidhi ko jese hi ehsaas hua ki usne itna sab bola par Veer ne koi pratikriya nahi dii toh wo palti aur Veer ko dekhi.

Aur usne dekha ki Veer keval apne haath baandhe platform se tike usse hi nihaar raha tha. Usse apne prati aise dekh uske gaalo par halki laali chhaa gayi.

Nidhi (blush) : Aise... Aise kya dekh rahe ho Veer!?

Veer : Dekh raha hu ki aap kitni mehnat karti ho Ma'am.

Nidhi (smiles) : Mehnat toh karni hi padti hai sabko. Tabhi toh zindagi chalti hai.

Veer (smiles) : Hmm!

Aur wo waapas se apne kaam me lag gayi par kuch derr baad hi uske kaano me Veer ki awaaz padi,
"Aapne itna sab kuch kyu kiya mere liye ma'am?"

Aur ye sawaal sunte hi Nidhi jiske haath abhi roti belne me lage hue the wo achanak hi ruk gaye.

Usne palat ke Veer ko dekha aur bolne hi waali thi ki firse Veer ki awaaz ne usse rok diya.

Veer : Mein jaanta hu ki aap yahi kahengi ki ye aapka ek teacher hone ke naate farz tha. Par aapne mere liye ek farz se kahi zyaada kiya hai Ma'am. Aur abhi bhi kar rahi ho. Ye sab kapde, ye mera yaha rehna, hospital me wo advanced fees, mujhe roz dekhne aana, haalchaal puchna, Kyu???

Veer ki baat sunn Nidhi ne ek gehri saas lii aur boli,

Nidhi : Kyuki mein jaanti hu tum kesa feel kar rahe ho Veer. Mein jaanti hu akelapan kesa hota hai. Kesa hota hai ghar se baahar nikalna. Kesa mehsoos hota hai. Isliye mein ye sab kar rahi hu. Aur... Bhale hi college me hamaari zyaada baat nahi hui Veer. But meri nazar apne harr ek student par rehti hai. Mujhe pata hai ki kon kesa hai. Mein jaanti thi ki tumhara koi dost nahi hai. Aur aise me tum kaha jaate? Mene wahi kiya jo mujhe sahi laga.

Veer : Aur ye jaante hue bhi ki aap ek ladke ko apne ghar laa rahi ho, ye jaante hue bhi ki aapki landlady aur aas pados ke log kya sochenge iss baare me? Ye jaante hue bhi ki aapki behan bhi yahi rehti hai aapke saath aur iske bawajood aap ek anjaan ladke ko yu rehne de rahi hai apne ghar me?

Nidhi (smiles) : Yes! Because I believe you!

Aur itna sunte hi Veer ka shareer sihar utha.

Veer : Kyuuu???

Nidhi : Tumhe kya lagta hai Veer? Tumhe kya lagta hai ki I don't know? Kya mujhe nahi pata ki log mujhe kin nazro se dekhte hai? Ghar se college, college se ghar, itne logo ki nazar mujhpe padti hai. Kuch jaan pehchaan ke toh kuch anjaan. Tumhe kya lagta hai ki mujhe nahi pata wo kin nazro se mujhe ghurte hai? Kya chalta hai unke mann me? Yaha tak ki college ke students jo na jaane kitne saal chote hai umr me...

Kehte waqt uske honth thar thara rahe the aur Veer ne notice kiya ki uski aankhein halki bheeg chuki thi.

Nidhi : I know.... I know everything Veer! I know everything.

Usne zorr se kass ke apne gown ka ek hissa bheench liya aur nazre neeche kar lii. Aaj pehli baar Veer ko khud kisi ke liye itna bura lag raha tha. Uska khud ka dil tadap raha tha Nidhi ki aisi haalat dekh.

Nidhi : But tum...

Usne nazre uthaate hue dubaara bolna shuru kiya. Aur iss waqt Veer bhali bhaati dekh sakta tha unn aasuo ko jo Nidhi ki palko par saje hue the.

Nidhi : Tumhari aankhein kabhi bhi nahi bhatki... And that's why... I believe you!

Nidhi ke bol sunte hi Veer ke shareer ke roye khade ho gaye.

Wo samajh chuka tha Nidhi kya baat bata rahi thi. Yahi ki kese log usse taadte hai aur khaa jaane waali nazro se ghurte hai. Yaha tak ki college ke students bhi jo usse aise ghurte the ki maano kabhi bhi uspe toot padenge. Par Veer ne aajtak kabhi bhi Nidhi ko wesi nazro se nahi dekha tha.

Jab jab Nidhi uss se baat karti, ya toh wo nazre jhuka ke baat karta tha ya fir uske chehre me dekhte hue. Naa ki uske shareer pe nazar maarte hue. Aur ye baat Nidhi bhali bhaati jaanti thi. Logo ki nazro aur unke iraado se wo harr tarah se parichit thi. Yahi kaaran tha ki usse Veer pe vishwaash tha. Uske iraado aur uski aankho par usse vishwaash tha.

"Dekho toh... Mein bhi na... Kya boring baato ko lekar baith gayi. Aur tum ye mat sochna bilkul bhi Veer ki tumhe ab kaam nahi karna padega. Boht kaam karwaungi tumse samjhe!?"

Nidhi ne apne aasu ko halke haath se pochte hue ek smile ke saath mazaakiya dhang me kaha, toh Veer bhi badle me muskura diya,

Veer : Aapka hukum sar aankho par ma'am.

Abhi usne bola hi tha ki tabhi Nidhi ki ungli dhoke se garam garam Daal se bhare pan par lag gayi aur uske muh se ek aah nikal gayi...

"Aaahhhh!!! Ssss.... Ouch!!!"

Aur agle hi pal Veer ne aage badh Nidhi ki jali hui ungli apne muh me bhar lii...

*Sannaata*

Ab bhar toh liii ungli muh me josh josh me...

Par ab Veer ko khayaal aaya ki usne kya kar diya.
Yadi iss waqt koi gaana Veer ki situation ko describe kar sakta tha toh woh tha~
Laude lag gaye...

Idhar Nidhi hakki bakki sii khadi Veer ko dekh rahi thi. Uski aankho me achambhav saaf nazar aa raha tha. Uska muh halka khul chuka tha.

Veer ki zubaan aur andar se muh ka garam taapmaan wo bhali bhaati apni ungli par mehsoos kar paa rahi thi. Jalan aur dard toh jese wo bhul hi chuki thi.

Dono ek dusre ki aankho me aankhe daal dekh rahe the.

Ki tabhi...

"Tururu tururu tururu ruru ruru... Aaah! Ye shaam ko late nahaane me maza hi aa jaata hai."

Shreya fridge me se orange juice ki bottle se juice peete peete kitchen me aa gayi... Aur usne jo saamne dekha...

*Phhhhhhuuuuuuuuuuuu*

Saara ka saara juice uske muh se nikal ke neeche zameen par jaa gira. Uski aankhein aisi phaili hui thi maano jese bechaari ne bhoot dekh liya ho. Muh khula ka khula...

Veer uski badi behan ki ungli apne muh me daale hue khada tha. Ab bas teeno ek dusre ko dekh rahe the aur ek khaamoshi sii chhaa gayi.

Veer : ....

Nidhi : ......

Shreya : .....

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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Sorry! Iss update se action start hone wala tha story pace pakadti but mujhe laga ek ye update zaroori tha. Ab next update se Veer apne stats badhane niklega. Like zaroor karna pasand aaye toh.
Dhanyavaad!
Bahut hi majedar update tha jahan nidhi ne apne akeli jindagi ke baare mein veer ko batati hai aur usko bolti hai ki i trust you fir dusre kshan mein hi veer ke lode lag jaate hein veer ke munh needhi ki ungli thi magar veer ko woh ungli lode jaisa lag raha tha( is ki maa ki daal:lol1:) ab kya hoga !
 
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