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Tomorrow!Bhai next update kb aaega
Bhai aadmi ki itni dardnaak maut se yadi tumhe thrill nahi mehsoos hua toh kya bole abNa koi thrill tha na koi suspense bs chutiyapa laga ye update bs sab milke veer ki gand maar liye......
Pari ko maalum hota toh obviously wo pehle hi Veer ko bata deti... Wo hamesha Veer ka hi bhala chaahegi.Pari ye yaha koi help bhi nahi ki use to sab pahle se malum tha
बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद भाई!जिस विश्वास के साथ आतिश दुसरों के विश्वास को तोड़ने का अहम भर रहा है.... क्या होगा जब उसका अपना विश्वास टूट जाएगा
अति भावनात्मक और दिल को हिला देने वाली अपडेट था.... प्रतीक्षा रहेगी अगले अपडेट की
Par galti nahi kar raha hu toh wo toh acchi baat hai na?Ye he adaye to dil lut leti hai teri zalim.......Har cheez ko itni bareeki se dikhaya hai ke had hai.....Thori galtiya bhi kia karo hume thori ju ko galiya nikalne ka moka to do aise kaise maza aye ga
Bilkul! Pari ko log tharki bula rahe jabki tharak wala koi kaam na kiya usne abhi tak. Iske khilaaf hum awaaz uthaenge ...Wo ek sher tha ke
“Udas Udas phirte ho sardiyo ki shamo me.....Is tarha to hota hai, Iss tarha ke kamo me”
Veer ko kia laga itna sab kuch vele baithe ko mil jaye ga koi bhi cheez bina mehnat ke nahi milti aur pari to hai bhi hmarai bohat keemti baki kuch log use tharki bol rahe hai wo bhi daikhta hu
Jab saath rehne lago kisi ke toh nazdeekiya badh hi jaati hai.Ragini ki veer ke liye yun fikar daikh ker ab lagne laga hai ke sach me veer ab akela nahi hai
Kitna negative sochta hai re veer.......aur it.e sawal itne sawal upar wala maaf kare agar main. pari ki jagha hota to khud iss ko train se bahir phenk deta
Prefix toh ussi ka dikh raha hai.Ye incest story he hai naDaikh lo you per aitbaar ke ke aage parhne wala hu warna dil to chahraha hai yanhi chor du kiu ke
Galtiya?? Chote updates de diya karunga... Wo galti me count kar lena.Beshak you itne seedhe writer nahi hk jo seedhe ring veer ko train me he giri huwi pakra de.....kia chala jata you ka agar chor ke haatho ring train me girwa dete lekin nai hume tl maje lene hai.....Sorey kuch galti mili nahi to aise he lar lia ab yaad se galtiya daalni shuru ker dena
Wo galti nehi, mental torture and readers' ka harassment yoga....Par galti nahi kar raha hu toh wo toh acchi baat hai na?
Bilkul! Pari ko log tharki bula rahe jabki tharak wala koi kaam na kiya usne abhi tak. Iske khilaaf hum awaaz uthaenge ...
Jab saath rehne lago kisi ke toh nazdeekiya badh hi jaati hai.
Prefix toh ussi ka dikh raha hai.
Galtiya?? Chote updates de diya karunga... Wo galti me count kar lena.![]()
Bhai chote update mat dena maza kharab ho jayegaPar galti nahi kar raha hu toh wo toh acchi baat hai na?
Bilkul! Pari ko log tharki bula rahe jabki tharak wala koi kaam na kiya usne abhi tak. Iske khilaaf hum awaaz uthaenge ...
Jab saath rehne lago kisi ke toh nazdeekiya badh hi jaati hai.
Prefix toh ussi ka dikh raha hai.
Galtiya?? Chote updates de diya karunga... Wo galti me count kar lena.![]()