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भाई लगता है आज राइटर साहब कही और बिजी है हम यहाँ 1.15 तक इंतजार ही करते रहे
Guys schedule mat bhulo yaar.Aaj ka update missing he.
Boht boht dhanyavaad bhai!dil ko chhu lene wala update tha ..
aatish ki kahani bhi bahut emotional thi ,bura laga uski past life ke baare me jaankar .
thakur aur policewale bahut harami the ..
ek gareeb pariwar ko tabah kar diya un policewalo ne .
aatish se kitna pyar karte the uske maa baap ..
aatish ko hockey chahiye thi to papa ne apne savings se uski ye ichcha puri kar di jabki maa ka kehna tha ki case ladhne ke liye paise bachane chahiye .
maa aatish ko bada insan bante dekhna chahti thi aur jab wo kamiyab hoga to apne ghar ke mandir ko chandi ka banane ki ichcha thi .par kuch kamine logo ne uski ijjat loot li aur jaan se maar diya .
aatish ko sahara mila dada ka aur usne sab sikha diya dhande ke baare me aur aakhir wo din aa hi gaya jab aatish ne apne maa baap ke kaatilo ko dardnak maut di aur tabhi se uska naamkaran ho gaya aashu se aatish aur wo building jalsa bann gayi ..
aatish apne khayalo me khoya tha tabhi veer ne uske liye trap taiyar kar liya uske hi ghar me .
jaise golu ko mara tha waisi maut aatish ko di veer ne .
aur ye baat to sahi kahi ki galti ki aatish ne jo apne hi khunkhar jaanwar ko ye nahi sikhaya ki dushman kaun aur dost kaun ..
ek kaam sahi kiya aatish ke liye veer ne ki uske aai baba ki tasveer us mandir me rakh di ..
waise ye hawkeye skill kya hai ???.
Aatish kahani ka pehla main villian tha. Villians ki shuruaat hui hai Aatish se. Dada bole toh Slogan.आतिश तो मुख्य खलनायक था ही नहीं
अब दादा इंडिया में लैंड करने के बाद कहानी जरुर रोचक और रोमांचक मोड़ पर पहुंचेगी
अब तक वीर माफ़िया वालों को ठीक से हैंडल किया है
पर अब देखना होगा कि वह कानून से कैसे उलझेगा क्यूंकि रजत उसे कानून के चक्रव्यूह में फंसायेगा ज़रूर
Yes! Situations makes the man. Aatish became like that because of his circumstances. Veer knows that what Aatish did was obviously evil and wrong but he cannot deny the immense love of Aatish' mother for him. Since, Veer didn't got any Mother's love since his childhood, he understands how it feels to not have a mother.In today's update, Aatish's family was mentioned seeing their financial condition don't know why my heart got sad, someone has rightly said that only those who do not have money can understand the importance of money, Thakur did wrong to them, snatched away the happiness of a happy family and perhaps this is the reason why Aatish is like this today, It would not be wrong to say that bad people and circumstances made a good person bad.
Aatish had to bear the punishment for mistake and this should never happen to anyone, One thing of Veer touched the heart after all, a mother is a mother, mother's love has no value, there is no one like a mother. Aatish's brother is about to come back, let's see what happens. In today's update, there was a confluence of good and bad feelings.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
Yes! Wo Aatish ka brother nahi hai. Dada hi Slogan hai. Aatish usse Dada keh ke pukaarta tha. SLOGAN ko wo pub waali ladki chahiye. Wo India ke baahar tha isliye usne Aatish ko bola tha usse pakadne kyuki tab wo ladki India me hi thi. But abhi wo America me hai. Aur Slogan India aa raha hai.shayad wo aatish ka brother nahi hai ..
leader hai .jisne astish ko sab sikhaya ..
baaki mom ke liye jo kaha wo mast laga .
Bolte hai. But Aatish ka wo bhai nahi hai. Dada hi Slogan hai. Aatish bas usse Dada kehke bulaata tha kyuki Slogan ne hi usse guide kiya tha.Dada bade bhai ko bolte hai na
Thanks a lot bro.★ Fabulous Mind Blowing Updated...
★ Maa Ke Pyar ke Naam ye update... ❤
★ Atish/ashu ka to end ho gaya ab..?
★ Dada Lega ab atish ka badla..?
★ Maa ke pyaar ke liye jo atish ne kiya wo usne Thik kiya tha un sab ko saja deke..
★ But Jo atish ne Veer ke sath kiya wo bhi thik nhi tha..?
★ Atish ne apni maa aur baap ki sari icha puri ki jo ek bete ko krni chahiye thi...
★ Aur Jo Lagav usne atish ke past ko jan ke hua tha usko bhi hua tha past ko dekh kar dukh but Usne bhi apna Dost Golu Bhi Khoya tha.
★ Aur isliye uska past ko dekh kar wo Atish ke saman Hockey, aur maa baap ki taawir ko mandir me isliye rkha Qki wo janta tha ki uski maa ki akhiri wish tho wo jo atish ne puri ki thi..
★ Isliye Usna kaha MAA to akhir MAA hoti hai chahiye kisi ki bhi ho..
★ Qki MAA ke Na hone par jo dukh atish ko tha Wo dukh Veer ko bhi tha..
★ isliye usne Wo sab wha mandir me rakh diye unki santi ke liye..
Dekhte hai Ab Aage kya hota hai..
Waiting for next update...
Thanks a lot dear!Dear werwolf bhai it's always a pleasure to read your story along with your frequent updates. The last update was mixture of emotion and cruelty. When cruelty will surpass over humanity the resultant will be always a havoc. Like Aatish when he crossed lines with veer he was totally shattered into pieces. It's a good message through your story that good and bad should not go hand to hand. Emotions were high when we learnt about the past of Aatish but his death was dealt without any remorse. Waiting for your next excavating update. Thank you Werewolf bhai
Ekdam joshila, fadu update
Bole to ekdm zalaaaasss
Ekdam rapchik
Ye veer bhidu to bohot डेअरिंग vala nikla
Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
Zalim bhyankar khtarnaak update waiting for next update kya aj update ayega
Thank you guys!Aakhir aatish ka kaam tamam ho gaya magar last me emotional kar diya .... emotional update
Thank you so much bro!!Atish ka flashback dikhaya gaya k wo kaise in sab me involved howa han uske sath galat howa but iska ye matlab to nhi k dosru k sath b wahi dohrana shiro ker do wo apne parent's ka badla lene tak to thk ta uske bad wo phyco ho gaya yani k khoon ki lat lag gayi use tuchi harkatu se logon ko moat dena nasha ho gaya uske liye lakin akhir me ant to hona hi ta to uska b howa Veer k hathu is baar us magarmach ka chara wo khud ban gaya
Zindagi 1 hud tak hi chout deti hai phir pasa palata hai or sb khatam 1 time pe hum dosru ka tamasha bana rhe hote or 1 waqt aisa b ata hai jb khud ka tamasha bante dair nhi lagti
Wo kehte hain na k
jaisi karni waisi bharni to bs phir usks b time poora ho gaya ta
Or last me jo Veer ne kiya wo koi zaraf wala hi ker sakta hai
Maa to akhir Maa hoti hai phir chahe wo kisi ki b ho
Although bohat hi baria update ta
aj k liye itna hi next intezar rhe ga
Keep going
Arre bhai debauchery bhi hoegi, yadi title me likha hai toh of course wo justify karega usse. But situation bhi toh dekhiye. Veer pehle apni gaand bachaega Aatish se ya ayyaashi karega!? Jab uska empire bann'na start ho jaega toh debauchery bhi sahi starr par se start ho jaegi. Aur ab Aatish chala gaya hai, so Veer ka main motto earn karna hi hai abhi.bilkul hindi movie ishtyle ... chalo issi ka maza lete hain ... ab debauchery vibauchery kee ummed bhi nahi hai ... koi baat nahi ...
action packed updates ... regular updates ...
ab Miss par concentrate karna hai ... yeh slogan uske peeche kyun pada hai ...
Abhi toh Veer aur likeable banega...Pure update mein last mein Mandir wala scene dil ko chhu gaya. Respect for Veer - the character.