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[Werewolf]

ऐसा कुछ भी नहीं है । आप की स्टोरी सराही भी जा रही है और लोगों के रिस्पांस भी आ रहे हैं । मैंने पहले ही कहा स्टोरी का कांसेप्ट बढ़िया होने के साथ-साथ अनूठा भी है । एक ही ढर्रे की स्टोरी पढ़ पढ़कर लोग बोर हो गए थे और यह ढर्रे से हटकर स्टोरी है ।
सबसे अच्छी बात है कि " आखिर क्यों " के बाद आप के लिखने का पैटर्न चेंज हो गया है । पहले से भी कहीं ज्यादा बेहतर हो गया है । हिंग्लिश में लिखे गए शब्द ग्रामरली परफेक्ट है । कैरेक्टर का बिल्ड अप भी बहुत बढ़िया तरह से कर रहे हैं । इमोशन और कामेडी का पुट जहां होना चाहिए , वहां अच्छी तरह से कर रहे हैं ।

और जहां लोगों के लम्बे लम्बे रेभो देने की बात है तो वैसे लोग बहुत ही कम है । गिने चुने लोग ही लम्बे चौड़े रेभो देते हैं । और यह आपको भी पता होगा । कुछ बड़े रेभो देने वाले लोग बैन हो गए हैं पर मुझे विश्वास है वो फिर से नई आई डी बनाकर वापस आ जायेंगे । वैसे छोटे छोटे रेभो देने वाले कई रीडर्स जो आप के थ्रीड पर है , वो भी बहुत ही बेहतरीन रीडर्स है । उनको हल्के में मत लीजिएगा ।

Dhanyavaad sanju bro!
Jii haa! Mere likhne ka style pehle se badal chuka hai. Akhir kyu meri pehli story thi, mujhe utna anubhav nahi tha kis hisaab se approach rakhni hai aur mene bas jo shabd mann me aate the unhi ke zariye apni kalapna ko zinda kar yaha prastut kiya tha. Par ab meri lekhni pehle se behtar hai ye mein khud jaanta hu. Dhanyavaad! Motivation dene ke liye. Banne rahiyega aise hi.

 

[Werewolf]

Ye system aka Pari toh chalu hai re baba
Mission ke bich mein aur mission mila woh bhi tharki wala
Ab dekhna hoga veer is anjan encounter ke baad kiya hoga..
I have doubts so i have two opinions
1. Ladki ke saath raslela hoga
2. Raslela ke bich KLPD hoga

Dhanyavaad bro!
Thread me aapka swaagat hai.
Keep supporting!

 

[Werewolf]

Well first of all very congratulations for the new story. Kaafi unique concept hai is story ka aur is tarah ki pehli story bhi hai ye is forum par.

Aapki writing skills bhi behatreen hain. Jis tarah aap har scene ko explain karte hain wo kaabil–e–taarif hai. So abhi tak to story bahut achhi ja rahi hai. Veer ko missions milne bhi start ho gaye hain aur uske stats bhi improve kar rahe hain.

Waise ek baat maan ni padegi Veer ke gharwale hi manhoos the, jabse ghar se nikla hai life behtar ho gayi hai uski. Ab ye club waali ladki kaun hai dekhna hoga. Saath mein bodyguards the to of course rich family se hi belong karti hogi. Shayad ye wo bhi ho sakti hai jiski car se Veer ka accident hua tha.

Bhai aap demoralized na hon , aapki story jaisa maine pehle bhi kaha ek naya concept hai joki readers ko samajhne mein shayad time lage but don't worry with your awesome writing skills you will make it an easier task for them.

Dekhte hain ki Veer ka mission kaise complete hoga aur reward mein kitne points use milenge. Again excellent story and amazing writing.

Keep Going.

Boht boht dhanyavaad mitr! ( ꈍᴗꈍ)
Thread me welcome hai aapka.
Thanks for motivating me.
Keep supporting!

 

[Bruce The Bat]

Thanks a lot bro!
Thread me aapka swaagat hai!
Keep supporting!

Swagat ek bar hi hota he bhai.
SS Hans Landa name yaad ho to.

 

[kingkhankar]

Eagerly waiting for next update-9

 

[Werewolf]

Update - 9 ~ First Time​

Ab tak...

Ladki : Heyyyy! Let's go there...

Aur wo ladki kheechte hue usse wahi ek counter ke paas le gayi,

Ladki : I want a room!

Aadmi : Jii!

Aur pal bhar me hi Veer uss ladki ke saath room me tha.

Usne Veer ko yu dhakka deke litaaya aur uske upar aake baith gayi,

Ladki : Don't you want me??

Ab aage...

Jab Veer shaam ko Nidhi ke ghar se nikla tha, uske kuch shan baad hi Nidhi ghar aa chuki thi. Wo kaafi thaki hui thi aur thake bhi kyu na? College ki bhaga daudi hi aisi rehti hai ki students kya teachers khud thak jaate hai.

Jab wo lauti toh usse Shreya dwaara pata chala ki Veer kahi gaya hua hai aur wo bata ke bhi nahi gaya ki kaha gaya hai. Bas! Issi baat pe Nidhi bechain ho uthi.

"Arre! Shreya! Tune usse roka kyu nahi? Arre puchna toh chaahiye tha at least. Uska koi friend nahi hai Shreya."

Wo bauhe sikodte hue boli. Uska aisa ravaiyya dekh Shreya bhi hairaan reh gayi. Ye akhir uski behan ko achaanak kya ho gaya? Kyu Veer ke liye wo itna tension le rahi hai?

Shreya : Arre but... Ab usne bola ki usse kuch kaam hai aur jaana hai toh mene zyaada nahi pucha. Ho sakta hai apne ghar gaya ho?

Nidhi : Nahiiiiii!!! Wo apne ghar nahi jaega. Tumhe pata hai na uske gharwalo ne usse ghar se nikaal diya hai. Toh fir kyu jaega wo ghar? Aur aisa kya kaam aa gaya usko ekdum se? Shaam ke 7:30 ho rahe hai Shreya aur abhi tak uska kuch pata nahi hai.

Shreya : Chill Dii! Aap itna kyu tensed ho rahi ho? Gaya hoga kahi. Aa jaega.

Nidhi : Arre uska phone bhi bigda hua hai Shreya. Na hi uske paas koi paise hai aur na hi koi phone, kahi bhatak gaya toh? Mere khayaal se wo bhatak hi gaya hai. Na jaane kaha ghum raha hoga abhi...

Shreya : Shit! Mujhe laga uske paas phone aur paise honge...

Nidhi : Kaha se honge? Kal se wo hamaare saath hai. Mujhe usse kuch paise de dene chaahiye the, emergency ke liye.

Uski baat sunn Shreya usse ghur ke dekhne lagi toh Nidhi ne sawaaliya nazro se uss se pucha,
"Kya hua? Aise kya dekh rahi ho?"

Shreya : Dekh rahi hu ki aap kuch zyaada hi parvaah kar rahi ho uski. Yaha tak ki aap apni life ki problems tak ko neglect kar rahi ho...

Nidhi : I'm... I'm not neglecting my problems Shreya. Mujhe pata hai mein kya kar rahi hu. And rahi baat Veer ki toh... I know how it feels... Bas isliye mein uski madad kar rahi hu. Nothing else. Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai jesa tum soch rahi ho.

Shreya : Well! If you say so...

Nidhi : Mein gaadi leke dekh ke aati hu usse. Ho sakta hai aas paas hi ho.

Shreya : No way Dii! Aap yahi rahiye, thak gayi ho aap, Juhi ke saath rahiye... Mein jaati hu dekhne.

Aur Shreya Nidhi ki scooty liye Veer ko dhundne nikal padi. Ek taraf jaha Nidhi ke mann me bechaini thi toh wahi dusri taraf Shreya ke mann me keval gaaliya hi nikal rahi thi Veer ke liye.

'Shit! Pata nahi kaha nikal gaya ye bhi bina bataaye. Iske kaaran mujhe ghum ghum ke dhundna pad raha hai. Koi baccha bhi gumta hai toh jaldi mil jaata hai par ye janaab toh... Ye dii bhi boht bholi hai. Aane do usko... Aisa maza chakhaungi na...'

Aur wo yahi sochte sochte aas paas ki galiyon me chakkar lagaane lagi. Par Veer ka koi ata pata na laga.

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Idhar Veer uss kamre me bed pe pasra hua tha aur uske upar wahi ladki baithi hui thi.

Veer uski sundarta itne paas se dekh ke hi mantramugdh ho gaya. Kya hi sundarta thi. Wo haseen chehra, poori uttamta se taraasha gaya wo badan, wo nain naksh jo ek jhalak me kisi ki jaan lele.

Aisi sundar ladki uske upar baithi hui thi. Par ye baat bhi sach thi ki wo iss waqt poore hosh me nahi thi apne. Yadi wo hosh me hoti toh kya wo ladki uske saath aisa vyavhaar karti? Shayad nahi!?

'I think I don't deserve her. She's too beautiful.'

[What the hell? Apni ahamiyat mat bhulo master. You have me inside your body. I mean... Ahem! Mein aapke andar hu. Aapki value ab pehle jese nahi rahi.]

'Really? Damn! But ye hosh me nahi hai. I don't want to take advantage of her.'

'Check'

Veer ne usse check karna hi behtar samjha. Par jese hi usne uss ladki ko check kiya. Saamne window me result dekh usse ek zorrdaar jhatka laga. Hairaani ke maare uski aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi.

Uss ladki ke sar par window khuli toh usme likha tha ~

[System is unable to access this person's identity.]

'What the hell Pari? Mujhe iska status kyu nahi dikh raha?'

[Ahem! Mein apne shabd waapas leti hu. This girl is more than I expected.]

'What do you mean Pari? Mein usse check kyu nahi kar paa raha?'

[Aisa ek hi kaaran se hota hai master.]

'Aur kya hai wo?'

[Wo ye hai ki mera level low hai. Aur ye ladki ka status lagta hai boht high hai. Jab kisi ka pad aur status boht high hota hai aur mera level low toh uss maamle me aap unn logo ki jaankari nahi dekh paoge master. Aur ye ladki kisi boht bade gharaane se lagti hai. Aapki toh lottery lag gayi!]

'Lottery lag gayi? Fuck! Meri gaand marne waali hai. Didn't you see those two bodyguards? Yadi galti se bhi isne bata diya toh mujhe zinda nahi chorrenge wo log. I'm leaving! I cannot do it with her.'

[Nahi! Master! Ye kya keh rahe ho. Aapke paas time kam hai. Aur aisi ladki aapko fir kabhi nahi milegi. Aap usse force nahi kar rahe. See! Wo khud aapke upar baithi hui hai.]

'Pari! You don't understand...'

[System is going in sleep mode. Enjoy your first time master.]

'What the hell?? Pari!? Hey!!! Fucccckkkkk!!'

Veer ko uske haal chorr Pari toh sleep mode me jaa chuki thi. Ab sab kuch Veer ke upar tha ki wo kya karne waala tha.

Tabhi wo ladki neeche jhuki aur Veer ke chehre ke paas apna chehra laayi. Uski garam garam saasein Veer ke chehre par pad rahi thi jo usse kuch galat karne par majboor karti jaa rahi thi.

Usne bade hi pyaar se Veer ke gaal par apna ek angutha firaaya aur uske chehre ko nihaarne lagi,
"You know? No one... No one has ever touched me. You are the first one."

Veer : Huh??

Ladki : Never ever I have kissed anyone.




Veer (blush) : .......

Aur agle hi pal usne jhukte hue Veer ke honth apne gulaabi hontho me bhar liye.

Dono ke honth aapas me milte hi ek zordarr jhatka dono ke hi shareer ko laga. Ye dono ki hi pehli kiss thi.

Veer ko jaha ladkiya dekh ke ignore kar diya karti thi, aaj Veer ko aisi ladki apne neeche litaaye uske honth choom rahi thi.

Ye kisi sapne se kam nahi tha uske liye. Ye adhbhut ehsaas Veer kabhi nahi bhul paega.

Shayad ab usse samajh aa chuka tha ki kyu wo ladke ladkiya neeche aise ek dusre ko choom rahe the. Ye anubhav tha hi aisa ki kisi ko bhi iski latt lag jaaye.

Veer ne jee bhar ke uss ladki ke honth chume. Wo nahi chaahta tha ki wo kabhi bhi iss feeling ko bhule. Kya pata usse aisi ladki dubaara mile bhi ya nahi?

Aaj Veer khud ko boht hi lucky maan raha tha jo aisi khubsoorti ki bala uss se chipak ke uske saath chumban kar rahi thi.

Aur isliye usne jee bhar ke uss ladki ke honth chuse. Jab dono ke honth ek dusre se alag hua toh dono ki saasein ek dum tezz thi. Ladki poori tarah se ab nashe me lag rahi thi.

Usne Veer ka haath pakda aur usse raasta dikhaate hue wo apne stano par le aayi.

"Touch me...!!"

Usne badi hi kaamuk awaaz me bola.

Ye pehli baar tha jab Veer kisi ladki ke doodh ko apne haatho me feel kar raha tha. Aur ye kehna galat nahi hoga ki ladkiyo ke doodh ab uski pasandeeda cheez bann chuke the.

Bina samay gawaaye aur bina hichkichaate hue Veer ne uss ladki ke stano ko dress ke upar se hi zorr se bheenchte hue unhe nichodna shuru kar diya.

"Aahhhhnnn... Mmmmmmmm"

Aur wo ladki lambi lambi siskiyaa lene lagi.

Veer ne usse pakadte hue apne upar se hata ke usse litaaya aur uske upar chadh gaya. Usse sharam bhi boht aa rahi thi kyuki ye sab wo pehli baar kar raha tha aur wo bhi itni sundar ladki ke saath.

Par saath hi saath usse josh bhi utna hi chadha hua tha. Ladka tha aakhir. Javaani me kadam rakh chuka tha aur ab uske andar ke jangli bhediye ko sambhaalne ke liye ek ladki chaahiye thi jo ki theek uske saamne thi.

Neeche sar jhukaate hue usne uss ladki ki gore nange kandho ko chumna shuru kar diya aur dheere dheere upar jaate hue wo uski gardan ko apni chummiyo se geela karne laga.

"Aaaaahhhnnnn!"

Usse pata tha ki ye sahi nahi hai. Kyuki wo ladki nashe me thi par wo zabardasti bhi nahi kar raha tha ek prakaar se. Wo ladki khud usse yaha lekar aayi thi.

'Sorry! But I have to do it.'

Usne mann me hi apne aap se maafi maangi kyuki wo ab iss ladki ke saath sambhog karne jaa raha tha.

Apne haatho ka istemaal karte hue pal bhar me hi Veer ne uss ladki ki wo kaali dress uske badan se alag kar dii. Aur ab uske saamne wo ladki keval ek black panty me thi.

Bra toh usne pehni hi nahi thi jis kaaran uski gori narm chuchhiyo ke darshan Veer ko ho gaye.

Apne gale me thook ka niwaala nigalte hue wo aage badha aur unn narm chuchhiyo ko usne jee bhar ke pehle dekha uske baad unhe dheere se magar pyaar se chhua aur fir agle hi pal usne apna muh khol ek chuchha muh me bhar liya.

"Aaaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!"

Ladki siski lete hue apne haatho ko Veer ke sar ke peeche lapet lii aur uske baalo me apni ungliya ferr usse apni orr kheechte hue apne stano par uska sar rakh dabaav badhaane lagi.

Jese kehna chaah rahi ho ki chuso inhe. Jee bhar ke chuso.

Aur Veer ne bhi jese uske mann ki baat sunn lii thi. Usne theek wahi kiya. Ye adhbhut ehsaas wo kabhi nahi bhul paega. Unn narm narm chuchhiyo ko usne jee bhar ke chusa, unhe nichoda, dabaaya aur nipples ke saath khela.

Kabhi wo unhe kaat'ta toh kabhi unpe jeebh firaata, kabhi muh me bharta toh kabhi daato tale daba ke usse kheechta.

Aur harr prahaar par ladki sihar ke reh jaati. Wo Veer ki gardan aise chus rahi thi maano jese khaa hi jaegi.

Pal bhar me dekhte dekhte hi dono hi nagn ho chuke the. Jab Veer ne uss ladki ki yoni ke darshan kiye toh shan bahr ke liye toh wo stabdh bas dekhta hi raha. Kya adhbhut drashya tha.

Wo chikni patli si gori choot usse uskaa rahi thi. Keh rahi thi ki aao aur chuso isse. Tabaah kar do isse.

Itni patli gulaabi choot usse har pal madhosh karti jaa rahi thi.

Veer ne porn dekhi thi, par asli me wo ek ladki ko yu nagn pehli baar dekh raha tha.

Ladki bhi usse itni nasheeli aankho se dekh rahi thi jo Veer ko bekaabu kar raha tha.



Paseene ke maare uss ladki ke baal bhi bheeg chuke the.

Veer apna chehra uss choot ke paas le gaya aur pehle usne ek baar zorr se uss madak khusboo ko sungha aur fir apna muh khol uss choot ko apne muh me bhar liya.

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaa..."

Uss ladki ki aankhein fati ki fati reh gayi aur usne apni taangein zorr se Veer ke sar par ird gird kass lii.

Aisa ehsaas usse aaj tak nahi hua tha. Wo toh jese alag hi duniya me jaa chuki thi.

Kuch hi minute ki chusaayi ke baad uski choot rass chorrne lagi aur skhalit hote hue wo ladki jhatke pe jhatke lene lagi.

'This is the time...'

Veer ne sochte hue apna lund uski choot rass se bhigoya aur uski choot ke dwaar par dastak dete huye wo apna lund malne laga. Uska lund taiyaar tha andar ki gufa ko khojne ke liye.

Apna ling choot ke dwaar par set karte hue usne ek zorrdaar dhakka maara aur uska topa jhat se choot me pravesh kar gaya.

Dard ke maare bechaari ladki iske pehle ki zorr se chillaa paati, Veer ne uske muh par haath rakh uski awaaz ko rok diya.

'Shit! Aaarghhhh...'

Halka dard toh usse bhi ho raha tha. Par uss ladki ke dard ke saamne uska dard kuch bhi nahi tha.

Kuch derr baad usne fir do dhakke maare aur Veer ka lund uski choot ki gehraaiyo me jaa chuka tha.

Halke halke aasu uss ladki ki komal palko ko bhigone lage the. Veer ko ab waqai bura lag raha tha. Wo toh iss ladki ka naam tak nahi jaanta tha. Kaha se aayi hai, kis ghar se hai, kya naam hai, kya kaam karti hai, Veer kuch bhi nahi jaanta tha.

Usse bas itna pata tha ki yadi usne abhi ye kaam nahi kiya toh wo Pari ko kho dega aur wo aisa bilkul bhi nahi chaahta tha. Pari inn kuch dino me uski zindagi ka aham hissa banti jaa rahi thi.

Kuch derr yu hi bina hile dule wo apna lund uski yoni ke andar hi rakha raha. Aur jab ladki shaant hui toh Veer ne haule haule hi apne ling ko aage peeche karna shuru kar diya.

"Aahhnnnn...mmmmmm"

"Shit!!!!! Damnnnnn..."

Choot andar se itni garm thi ki aisa lag raha tha maano Veer ka lund ussi waqt andar hi pighal jaega.

Kisi bhatti se kam nahi thi wo. Ye alaukik aur anootha ehsaas wo kabhi nahi bhul paega.

Choot itni tight thi ki uska lund badi hi mushqil se andar baahar ho raha tha.

Chut ke andar ki twacha ki deeware uske lund ko kass ke jakde hue thi aur apne taapmaan se uske lund ko kisi garam lohe ki rod me parivartit kar rahi thi.

*Thap* *Thap*

Ki awaaz kamre me fel gayi aur iss adbhut chudaayi ke baad Veer ab skhalit hone ke nazdeek tha.

'Mein andar nahi gira sakta. Kahi ye pregnant ho gayi toh dikkat ho jaegi. Shit! But I want to cum in her so bad... Noooo! Baahar Veer... Baahar!!'

Aur agle hi pal usne apna lund baahar nikaal apne veerya ki ek tezz pichkaari chorri, jo seedha uss ladki ki nangi chuchhiyo, uski chhaati, aur uske pait par jaake giri.

Apni aankhein band kar Veer iss pal ko apne dil-o-dimaag me utaarne laga. Taaki ye pal usse hamesha yaad rahe.

Jab kuch seconds baad usne neeche dekha toh ek jhatka aur laga usse.

Neeche bedsheet par aur uske lund par khoon laga hua tha. Yaha tak ki ladki ki yoni me bhi khoon laga hua tha.

'Fuck!!! Ye bhi virgin thi????? Gaya... Mein gaya ab! They will kill me.... Pariii?? Are you there?'

Par Pari ka koi jawaab na aaya.

'Shiiitttt!!!'

Usne uthte hue uss ladki ko yuhi nagn apni baaho me leke uthaaya aur forun hi bathroom me le gaya.

Ladki behosh ho chuki thi. Veer ne fatafat uski choot aur apne lund ko acche se saaf kiya. Ladki ke shareer par laga veerya bhi usne saaf kiya.

Aur usse baahar laake dubaara bistar par lita diya.

Usne khud ke kapde pehne aur sabse pehle usne bedsheet ka wo tukda faada jaha khoon laga hua tha aur uss kapde ko apne jeb me rakh liya.

Abhi wo uss ladki ko kapde pehna hi raha tha ki tabhi...

*Bang*

Ek tezz awaaz uske kaano me padi. Aur usse kuch shor bhi sunaayi dene laga.

Ye awaaz neeche se aa rahi thi.

Par Veer ke shareer ke ruye iss waqt khade hue the. Kyuki wo jaanta tha...

Ki jo awaaz usne suni...

Wo kisi aur cheez ki nahi balki...

Ek gunshot ki thi...

Iss maamle me wo kabhi galat nahi ho sakta tha. Usne pehle bhi real life me ye sound suna hua tha aur wo bhali bhaati iss awaaz se parichit tha. Wo awaaz...

Wo galat ho hi nahi sakta tha.

Wo awaaz pakke se ek gunshot ki thi...

Uske baad wo shorgul...

Zaroor neeche kuch hua tha. Aur ye shor zaroor gunshot ke baad machi afra tafri ka tha.

'Ohh! Noooo!!!'

Uske andar ek darr umadna shuru ho chuka tha. Apna thook nigalte hue usne forun hi uss ladki ko kapde pehnaaye aur wo usse dekhne laga. Usse dhyaan aaya ki uske haath me aate waqt ek bag bhi tha.

Veer ne forun hi wo bag khola toh usme bas kuch cash tha aur 2 credit cards. Aur ek choti sii diary jo ki ekdum khaali thi. Saath hi ek pen bhi tha...

Veer ne ek panna faada aur usme apna naam aur mobile number likh uske bag ke andar hi daal diya.

'I know ki jab tum hosh me aaogi tab tum mujhe hate karogi... Shaayad tum mujhe maarna bhi chaaho. Aur mein maanta hu mene tunhaare saath galat kiya hai. Isliye mein apna number chorr raha hu. Baad me tum jo chaahe mere saath karna chaahogi mujhe manzoor rahega...'

Mann me sochte hue wo uss ladki ko uthaake baahar nikalne ke liye taiyaar tha.

'Mujhe ek phone jald hi lena padega.'

Sochte hue usne uss ladki ko apni peeth par utha liya.

Par wo ye nahi jaanta tha ki neeche kya ghatna ghatit hui hai.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!!

 

[Werewolf]

Best of luck brother

Congratulations for new thread bhai

for the new story

Welcome to new post

Co

For starting new story thread...

Aakhir Kar..................
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update jara jaldi diya karo werewolf.

Awesome Updatee

Toh 18 ghante mein virginity loose karni thi. Aur shayad loose karne ke liyr ladki bhi mil gayi. Par ladki ka naam abhi tak nhi bola gaya.

TOO GOOD UPDATE

Le gyi virginity lgta hai superbbbb speechless update........
keep posting bhai.........
waiting for next update...........

Awesome update

Awesome update

Fantastic update

Ye ladki to aisa time mila jab veer ki jarurat thi kahi yaha se hii incest duniya me kadam na rakh de kyuki iski nam bhi abhi tak pata nahi dekhte hai aage

Bahut hi khubsurat update bhai

K l p d
ho gaya

Bhai bahut masstt update tha bhai. Awssmm as always.

But yeh mega update toh nhi tha. Mega update iska double hota hai. Apne usi ko lamba lamba kar diya gaps daal ke. Yeh cheating hai.

Majedaar update mitr

Aisa lagta h us ladki ko bhi system yahi leke aayi h.

Awesome update

Nice update

Intresting update Werewolf bhai
Shreya to veer ko bina tel lagaye hi lene lagi hai mama
TASK bohut intresting mila hai veer ko ab dekhte hai ki wo task kahi is pub wali ladki se pora hoga ya phir kisi aur ke sath.
And ye ladki akhir hai kon aur kya ab is ladki ki wajah se bhi veer ki life mai kuch changes ayenge?
Keep writing
Keep posting
Stay SAFE
Stay HEALTHY
Waiting for next

Awesome update bhai. Lagta hy yehi ladki veer ki verginity le gi

Awesome update bhai

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai bhai...
Nice and beautiful update...

Bahut hi mazedaar update Werewolf bhai....

Let's see did can complete his mission or not???

Mast update bro

इंटेलिजेंसी में सिर्फ दो प्वाइंट जुड़ने से ही ऐसी बुद्धिमानी वाली बात कर रहा है और कहीं बीस बाइस प्वाइंट जुट गए तो फिर क्या हाल होगा ! अपने टीचर्स का ही टीचर बन बैठेगा वीर । लड़की उसके बातों से अच्छी खासी इम्प्रेश हुई । और इतनी अधिक इम्प्रेश हुई कि उसके साथ रूम शेयर करने तक पहुंच गई ।
इसी बहाने वीर का टास्क भी पुरा हो जायेगा । वर्जिनिटी खोने के लिए लड़की भी क्या खूब मिली । पहली मुलाकात और कयामत से भी अधिक खुबसूरत । उपर से अमीर घराने से ताल्लुक रखती हुई ।
जितना भी अपशगुन था वह उसके बाप के घर तक का ही था । एक बार घर से क्या निकाला गया उसकी किस्मत ही चमक उठी । अठारह घंटे से भी कम वक्फे में एक खुबसूरत लड़की मिल गई वर्जिनिटी खोने के लिए । ये कोई चमत्कार से कम थोड़ी न है !
इसके पहले जुही ने उसे निधि का भाई बना दिया । या यूं कहें कि श्रेया के खुराफाती दिमाग ने निधि का भाई बना दिया । और सबसे अचरज वाली चीज यह है कि निधि को इससे कोई आपत्ती भी नहीं है बल्कि वो खुश होने के साथ साथ शर्म महसूस कर रही है ।
लगता है उसके मन में कभी न कभी भाई के साथ सेक्सुअल सम्बन्ध बनाने की फैंटेसी रही होगी ।

आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग अपडेट Werewolf bhai.

Mission 18 hours m virginity loose karo
Virginity k liye shayad ladki tow mil gayi ab dekhna yeh ki mission poora hota h nahi
Per ladki kon h naam jaan n ko nahi mila bade gher ki h bodyguard saath h
Dekhte yeh kon h or aage kia hota h
Bahot behtareen shaandaar update bhai

Shreya bdi mast chal wali hai. Veer kya kre ga abb.

Shreya ko lagta hoga ki didi ka chakar chal rha hai.tabhi to usse ghar par le aayi bina kisi ki parwah kiye bina

Nice update..

Waiting for next

Nice update

Next update bro waiting

Dont get upset bro it's a new concept story slowly slowly number of readers will increase please be clam and carry on bro.

Awesome update bro...waiting for next update eagerly...

धीरे धीरे कहानी अपनी रफ्तार पकड़ रही है और धीरे धीरे वीर कुछ कुछ एबिलिटी भी हासिल कर रहा है अब ये मजेदार होगा देख ने में कैसे वीर अपने कुंवारापन तुड़वाता है क्यूं की टाइम तो रेत की तरह फिसल रहा है और रात भी नशीली हो चुकी है

Superb awsm update to gud

Waiting for next one

Anyways your story was outstanding
And I waiting four upadte dear

Dear Werewolf I really appreciate your hard work of bringing a new concept story in front of us. Being a part time writer i know how hard it is to imagine something and write. Keep the good work going man. Respect and love

Do not get disheartened. So many stories here, but very few with the quality of writing like yours. It really takes time for readers to warm up. But you yourself see the followers of your last story. Now also many people including me follow and reread that story.

Wait and watch. This story will also reach great heights here.

Dheere dheere rahimana dheere dheere hoye
Mali siche sou gada ritu aaye fal hoye

2 points to sirf ungali k mile hai, ab ye majedar hoga ki varginity lose k kitne point milte hai
Aur veer ka club me wahi hai jo "dubte ko tinke ka sahara"

Nice update bro waiting for next update

Thanks bhai .

But har mahine ye warning show karte rehna karan kuch ********* ko warning bin padenhi acche story pe **** marwane ajate he ek acchi story ke halat bigadne
Udaharan-swaroop : SAAND (the legendary story of XF)

Dhire dhire sab ko samjh aayega bhai. Sab ko kahani ke shuruwat boring hi lagti he jab tak pahli he update me koi sex scene na ho.
Aapke kahani ka concept unique he. Esi kahani ko waqt lagta he logo ke dimag me utarne ke liye. Aage chal ke jab action ke scene, kuch pyaar ke pal, kuch raaz khulne ke scene, aayenge tab sabko achha lagega. Aap bas likhte rahiye kafi samay se raah dekhi he mene aapki first kahani ke puri hone ke baad.

bhai story ka concept aur sabhi chize aachi hai. Best of luck for new story.

SUPERB AWESOME FANTASTIC AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI

AWESOME MIND BLOWING EXCELLENT LOVELY FANTASTIC AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI

Superb update broo.
Waiting for next update

Bhai aaj ka upadte kaha h

To Shreya ki favourability 5 ank badh gyi hai sath me nidhi ki bhi or Shreya ne juhi ki madad se veer ko mama bna diya vhi brush karte hue ek or mission milta hai luse the virginity in 18 hours sahi hai guru iski ummid abhi to Bilkul bhi nhi thi pr veer bar pub me jata hai Bahar use ek Jabardast patakha ek amir ladki milti hai jo veer ko apne sath le jati hai andar Jnab orange juice order karte hai or life ke upar ek sandar baat Bolta hai Jisse ladki impress ho jati hai Sayad or thoda nshe me talli ho veer ko sath le cabin me le jati hai raste me unhe kuchh lafange bhi milte hai pr veer jaise taise karke unhe ek do baar Marta hai or cabin me chla jata hai... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast

Mst update

Shandar

Bhai ye to allredy hm sab pad chuke h sayd se repost ho gya bt accha update tha waitng more update
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Bhai ye to allredy hm sab pad chuke h sayd se repost ho gya bt accha update tha waitng more update

Reply thi kisi ki html code chhid gaya isliye post ki tarah aaya
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Ye system aka Pari toh chalu hai re baba
Mission ke bich mein aur mission mila woh bhi tharki wala
Ab dekhna hoga veer is anjan encounter ke baad kiya hoga..
I have doubts so i have two opinions
1. Ladki ke saath raslela hoga
2. Raslela ke bich KLPD hoga

Bro ta ho pichla update he dobara post nahe kr diya apne

Nahi bro mne pichla hi update repost nahi kiya hai.
Dhyaan se dekhiye. Kisi ne reply kiya hai mere update ko quote karke but sahi se kar nahi paaya isliye wo update uske reply me poora nazar aa raha hai.
Next update aaj raat me aaega.

OK bro wait rahy ga
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Well first of all very congratulations for the new story. Kaafi unique concept hai is story ka aur is tarah ki pehli story bhi hai ye is forum par.

Aapki writing skills bhi behatreen hain. Jis tarah aap har scene ko explain karte hain wo kaabil–e–taarif hai. So abhi tak to story bahut achhi ja rahi hai. Veer ko missions milne bhi start ho gaye hain aur uske stats bhi improve kar rahe hain.

Waise ek baat maan ni padegi Veer ke gharwale hi manhoos the, jabse ghar se nikla hai life behtar ho gayi hai uski. Ab ye club waali ladki kaun hai dekhna hoga. Saath mein bodyguards the to of course rich family se hi belong karti hogi. Shayad ye wo bhi ho sakti hai jiski car se Veer ka accident hua tha.

Bhai aap demoralized na hon , aapki story jaisa maine pehle bhi kaha ek naya concept hai joki readers ko samajhne mein shayad time lage but don't worry with your awesome writing skills you will make it an easier task for them.

Dekhte hain ki Veer ka mission kaise complete hoga aur reward mein kitne points use milenge. Again excellent story and amazing writing.

Keep Going.

Ek dam sahi bola Bhai ne halke me liya to kafi naraj bhi ho jate hai or apne sanju bhai ho jiske pass fir Kahe ki tenson ham bhi to hai yhi...

Shandar

Ye kya kiye Andy bhai ham to confujiya gye the kahi Apne werewolf bhaya ne nya update to na chhap diya...
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Eagerly waiting for next update-9

Update 9 has been posted guys!!

 

[Werewolf]

Index has been updated!!

 

[Werewolf]

Swagat ek bar hi hota he bhai.
SS Hans Landa name yaad ho to.

Arre bhai kese bhul sakte hai aapko

 

[Luffy]

Update - 9 ~ First Time​

Ab tak...

Ladki : Heyyyy! Let's go there...

Aur wo ladki kheechte hue usse wahi ek counter ke paas le gayi,

Ladki : I want a room!

Aadmi : Jii!

Aur pal bhar me hi Veer uss ladki ke saath room me tha.

Usne Veer ko yu dhakka deke litaaya aur uske upar aake baith gayi,

Ladki : Don't you want me??

Ab aage...

Jab Veer shaam ko Nidhi ke ghar se nikla tha, uske kuch shan baad hi Nidhi ghar aa chuki thi. Wo kaafi thaki hui thi aur thake bhi kyu na? College ki bhaga daudi hi aisi rehti hai ki students kya teachers khud thak jaate hai.

Jab wo lauti toh usse Shreya dwaara pata chala ki Veer kahi gaya hua hai aur wo bata ke bhi nahi gaya ki kaha gaya hai. Bas! Issi baat pe Nidhi bechain ho uthi.

"Arre! Shreya! Tune usse roka kyu nahi? Arre puchna toh chaahiye tha at least. Uska koi friend nahi hai Shreya."

Wo bauhe sikodte hue boli. Uska aisa ravaiyya dekh Shreya bhi hairaan reh gayi. Ye akhir uski behan ko achaanak kya ho gaya? Kyu Veer ke liye wo itna tension le rahi hai?

Shreya : Arre but... Ab usne bola ki usse kuch kaam hai aur jaana hai toh mene zyaada nahi pucha. Ho sakta hai apne ghar gaya ho?

Nidhi : Nahiiiiii!!! Wo apne ghar nahi jaega. Tumhe pata hai na uske gharwalo ne usse ghar se nikaal diya hai. Toh fir kyu jaega wo ghar? Aur aisa kya kaam aa gaya usko ekdum se? Shaam ke 7:30 ho rahe hai Shreya aur abhi tak uska kuch pata nahi hai.

Shreya : Chill Dii! Aap itna kyu tensed ho rahi ho? Gaya hoga kahi. Aa jaega.

Nidhi : Arre uska phone bhi bigda hua hai Shreya. Na hi uske paas koi paise hai aur na hi koi phone, kahi bhatak gaya toh? Mere khayaal se wo bhatak hi gaya hai. Na jaane kaha ghum raha hoga abhi...

Shreya : Shit! Mujhe laga uske paas phone aur paise honge...

Nidhi : Kaha se honge? Kal se wo hamaare saath hai. Mujhe usse kuch paise de dene chaahiye the, emergency ke liye.

Uski baat sunn Shreya usse ghur ke dekhne lagi toh Nidhi ne sawaaliya nazro se uss se pucha,
"Kya hua? Aise kya dekh rahi ho?"

Shreya : Dekh rahi hu ki aap kuch zyaada hi parvaah kar rahi ho uski. Yaha tak ki aap apni life ki problems tak ko neglect kar rahi ho...

Nidhi : I'm... I'm not neglecting my problems Shreya. Mujhe pata hai mein kya kar rahi hu. And rahi baat Veer ki toh... I know how it feels... Bas isliye mein uski madad kar rahi hu. Nothing else. Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai jesa tum soch rahi ho.

Shreya : Well! If you say so...

Nidhi : Mein gaadi leke dekh ke aati hu usse. Ho sakta hai aas paas hi ho.

Shreya : No way Dii! Aap yahi rahiye, thak gayi ho aap, Juhi ke saath rahiye... Mein jaati hu dekhne.

Aur Shreya Nidhi ki scooty liye Veer ko dhundne nikal padi. Ek taraf jaha Nidhi ke mann me bechaini thi toh wahi dusri taraf Shreya ke mann me keval gaaliya hi nikal rahi thi Veer ke liye.

'Shit! Pata nahi kaha nikal gaya ye bhi bina bataaye. Iske kaaran mujhe ghum ghum ke dhundna pad raha hai. Koi baccha bhi gumta hai toh jaldi mil jaata hai par ye janaab toh... Ye dii bhi boht bholi hai. Aane do usko... Aisa maza chakhaungi na...'

Aur wo yahi sochte sochte aas paas ki galiyon me chakkar lagaane lagi. Par Veer ka koi ata pata na laga.

***

Idhar Veer uss kamre me bed pe pasra hua tha aur uske upar wahi ladki baithi hui thi.

Veer uski sundarta itne paas se dekh ke hi mantramugdh ho gaya. Kya hi sundarta thi. Wo haseen chehra, poori uttamta se taraasha gaya wo badan, wo nain naksh jo ek jhalak me kisi ki jaan lele.

Aisi sundar ladki uske upar baithi hui thi. Par ye baat bhi sach thi ki wo iss waqt poore hosh me nahi thi apne. Yadi wo hosh me hoti toh kya wo ladki uske saath aisa vyavhaar karti? Shayad nahi!?

'I think I don't deserve her. She's too beautiful.'

[What the hell? Apni ahamiyat mat bhulo master. You have me inside your body. I mean... Ahem! Mein aapke andar hu. Aapki value ab pehle jese nahi rahi.]

'Really? Damn! But ye hosh me nahi hai. I don't want to take advantage of her.'

'Check'

Veer ne usse check karna hi behtar samjha. Par jese hi usne uss ladki ko check kiya. Saamne window me result dekh usse ek zorrdaar jhatka laga. Hairaani ke maare uski aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi.

Uss ladki ke sar par window khuli toh usme likha tha ~

[System is unable to access this person's identity.]

'What the hell Pari? Mujhe iska status kyu nahi dikh raha?'

[Ahem! Mein apne shabd waapas leti hu. This girl is more than I expected.]

'What do you mean Pari? Mein usse check kyu nahi kar paa raha?'

[Aisa ek hi kaaran se hota hai master.]

'Aur kya hai wo?'

[Wo ye hai ki mera level low hai. Aur ye ladki ka status lagta hai boht high hai. Jab kisi ka pad aur status boht high hota hai aur mera level low toh uss maamle me aap unn logo ki jaankari nahi dekh paoge master. Aur ye ladki kisi boht bade gharaane se lagti hai. Aapki toh lottery lag gayi!]

'Lottery lag gayi? Fuck! Meri gaand marne waali hai. Didn't you see those two bodyguards? Yadi galti se bhi isne bata diya toh mujhe zinda nahi chorrenge wo log. I'm leaving! I cannot do it with her.'

[Nahi! Master! Ye kya keh rahe ho. Aapke paas time kam hai. Aur aisi ladki aapko fir kabhi nahi milegi. Aap usse force nahi kar rahe. See! Wo khud aapke upar baithi hui hai.]

'Pari! You don't understand...'

[System is going in sleep mode. Enjoy your first time master.]

'What the hell?? Pari!? Hey!!! Fucccckkkkk!!'

Veer ko uske haal chorr Pari toh sleep mode me jaa chuki thi. Ab sab kuch Veer ke upar tha ki wo kya karne waala tha.

Tabhi wo ladki neeche jhuki aur Veer ke chehre ke paas apna chehra laayi. Uski garam garam saasein Veer ke chehre par pad rahi thi jo usse kuch galat karne par majboor karti jaa rahi thi.

Usne bade hi pyaar se Veer ke gaal par apna ek angutha firaaya aur uske chehre ko nihaarne lagi,
"You know? No one... No one has ever touched me. You are the first one."

Veer : Huh??

Ladki : Never ever I have kissed anyone.




Veer (blush) : .......

Aur agle hi pal usne jhukte hue Veer ke honth apne gulaabi hontho me bhar liye.

Dono ke honth aapas me milte hi ek zordarr jhatka dono ke hi shareer ko laga. Ye dono ki hi pehli kiss thi.

Veer ko jaha ladkiya dekh ke ignore kar diya karti thi, aaj Veer ko aisi ladki apne neeche litaaye uske honth choom rahi thi.

Ye kisi sapne se kam nahi tha uske liye. Ye adhbhut ehsaas Veer kabhi nahi bhul paega.

Shayad ab usse samajh aa chuka tha ki kyu wo ladke ladkiya neeche aise ek dusre ko choom rahe the. Ye anubhav tha hi aisa ki kisi ko bhi iski latt lag jaaye.

Veer ne jee bhar ke uss ladki ke honth chume. Wo nahi chaahta tha ki wo kabhi bhi iss feeling ko bhule. Kya pata usse aisi ladki dubaara mile bhi ya nahi?

Aaj Veer khud ko boht hi lucky maan raha tha jo aisi khubsoorti ki bala uss se chipak ke uske saath chumban kar rahi thi.

Aur isliye usne jee bhar ke uss ladki ke honth chuse. Jab dono ke honth ek dusre se alag hua toh dono ki saasein ek dum tezz thi. Ladki poori tarah se ab nashe me lag rahi thi.

Usne Veer ka haath pakda aur usse raasta dikhaate hue wo apne stano par le aayi.

"Touch me...!!"

Usne badi hi kaamuk awaaz me bola.

Ye pehli baar tha jab Veer kisi ladki ke doodh ko apne haatho me feel kar raha tha. Aur ye kehna galat nahi hoga ki ladkiyo ke doodh ab uski pasandeeda cheez bann chuke the.

Bina samay gawaaye aur bina hichkichaate hue Veer ne uss ladki ke stano ko dress ke upar se hi zorr se bheenchte hue unhe nichodna shuru kar diya.

"Aahhhhnnn... Mmmmmmmm"

Aur wo ladki lambi lambi siskiyaa lene lagi.

Veer ne usse pakadte hue apne upar se hata ke usse litaaya aur uske upar chadh gaya. Usse sharam bhi boht aa rahi thi kyuki ye sab wo pehli baar kar raha tha aur wo bhi itni sundar ladki ke saath.

Par saath hi saath usse josh bhi utna hi chadha hua tha. Ladka tha aakhir. Javaani me kadam rakh chuka tha aur ab uske andar ke jangli bhediye ko sambhaalne ke liye ek ladki chaahiye thi jo ki theek uske saamne thi.

Neeche sar jhukaate hue usne uss ladki ki gore nange kandho ko chumna shuru kar diya aur dheere dheere upar jaate hue wo uski gardan ko apni chummiyo se geela karne laga.

"Aaaaahhhnnnn!"

Usse pata tha ki ye sahi nahi hai. Kyuki wo ladki nashe me thi par wo zabardasti bhi nahi kar raha tha ek prakaar se. Wo ladki khud usse yaha lekar aayi thi.

'Sorry! But I have to do it.'

Usne mann me hi apne aap se maafi maangi kyuki wo ab iss ladki ke saath sambhog karne jaa raha tha.

Apne haatho ka istemaal karte hue pal bhar me hi Veer ne uss ladki ki wo kaali dress uske badan se alag kar dii. Aur ab uske saamne wo ladki keval ek black panty me thi.

Bra toh usne pehni hi nahi thi jis kaaran uski gori narm chuchhiyo ke darshan Veer ko ho gaye.

Apne gale me thook ka niwaala nigalte hue wo aage badha aur unn narm chuchhiyo ko usne jee bhar ke pehle dekha uske baad unhe dheere se magar pyaar se chhua aur fir agle hi pal usne apna muh khol ek chuchha muh me bhar liya.

"Aaaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!"

Ladki siski lete hue apne haatho ko Veer ke sar ke peeche lapet lii aur uske baalo me apni ungliya ferr usse apni orr kheechte hue apne stano par uska sar rakh dabaav badhaane lagi.

Jese kehna chaah rahi ho ki chuso inhe. Jee bhar ke chuso.

Aur Veer ne bhi jese uske mann ki baat sunn lii thi. Usne theek wahi kiya. Ye adhbhut ehsaas wo kabhi nahi bhul paega. Unn narm narm chuchhiyo ko usne jee bhar ke chusa, unhe nichoda, dabaaya aur nipples ke saath khela.

Kabhi wo unhe kaat'ta toh kabhi unpe jeebh firaata, kabhi muh me bharta toh kabhi daato tale daba ke usse kheechta.

Aur harr prahaar par ladki sihar ke reh jaati. Wo Veer ki gardan aise chus rahi thi maano jese khaa hi jaegi.

Pal bhar me dekhte dekhte hi dono hi nagn ho chuke the. Jab Veer ne uss ladki ki yoni ke darshan kiye toh shan bahr ke liye toh wo stabdh bas dekhta hi raha. Kya adhbhut drashya tha.

Wo chikni patli si gori choot usse uskaa rahi thi. Keh rahi thi ki aao aur chuso isse. Tabaah kar do isse.

Itni patli gulaabi choot usse har pal madhosh karti jaa rahi thi.

Veer ne porn dekhi thi, par asli me wo ek ladki ko yu nagn pehli baar dekh raha tha.

Ladki bhi usse itni nasheeli aankho se dekh rahi thi jo Veer ko bekaabu kar raha tha.



Paseene ke maare uss ladki ke baal bhi bheeg chuke the.

Veer apna chehra uss choot ke paas le gaya aur pehle usne ek baar zorr se uss madak khusboo ko sungha aur fir apna muh khol uss choot ko apne muh me bhar liya.

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaa..."

Uss ladki ki aankhein fati ki fati reh gayi aur usne apni taangein zorr se Veer ke sar par ird gird kass lii.

Aisa ehsaas usse aaj tak nahi hua tha. Wo toh jese alag hi duniya me jaa chuki thi.

Kuch hi minute ki chusaayi ke baad uski choot rass chorrne lagi aur skhalit hote hue wo ladki jhatke pe jhatke lene lagi.

'This is the time...'

Veer ne sochte hue apna lund uski choot rass se bhigoya aur uski choot ke dwaar par dastak dete huye wo apna lund malne laga. Uska lund taiyaar tha andar ki gufa ko khojne ke liye.

Apna ling choot ke dwaar par set karte hue usne ek zorrdaar dhakka maara aur uska topa jhat se choot me pravesh kar gaya.

Dard ke maare bechaari ladki iske pehle ki zorr se chillaa paati, Veer ne uske muh par haath rakh uski awaaz ko rok diya.

'Shit! Aaarghhhh...'

Halka dard toh usse bhi ho raha tha. Par uss ladki ke dard ke saamne uska dard kuch bhi nahi tha.

Kuch derr baad usne fir do dhakke maare aur Veer ka lund uski choot ki gehraaiyo me jaa chuka tha.

Halke halke aasu uss ladki ki komal palko ko bhigone lage the. Veer ko ab waqai bura lag raha tha. Wo toh iss ladki ka naam tak nahi jaanta tha. Kaha se aayi hai, kis ghar se hai, kya naam hai, kya kaam karti hai, Veer kuch bhi nahi jaanta tha.

Usse bas itna pata tha ki yadi usne abhi ye kaam nahi kiya toh wo Pari ko kho dega aur wo aisa bilkul bhi nahi chaahta tha. Pari inn kuch dino me uski zindagi ka aham hissa banti jaa rahi thi.

Kuch derr yu hi bina hile dule wo apna lund uski yoni ke andar hi rakha raha. Aur jab ladki shaant hui toh Veer ne haule haule hi apne ling ko aage peeche karna shuru kar diya.

"Aahhnnnn...mmmmmm"

"Shit!!!!! Damnnnnn..."

Choot andar se itni garm thi ki aisa lag raha tha maano Veer ka lund ussi waqt andar hi pighal jaega.

Kisi bhatti se kam nahi thi wo. Ye alaukik aur anootha ehsaas wo kabhi nahi bhul paega.

Choot itni tight thi ki uska lund badi hi mushqil se andar baahar ho raha tha.

Chut ke andar ki twacha ki deeware uske lund ko kass ke jakde hue thi aur apne taapmaan se uske lund ko kisi garam lohe ki rod me parivartit kar rahi thi.

*Thap* *Thap*

Ki awaaz kamre me fel gayi aur iss adbhut chudaayi ke baad Veer ab skhalit hone ke nazdeek tha.

'Mein andar nahi gira sakta. Kahi ye pregnant ho gayi toh dikkat ho jaegi. Shit! But I want to cum in her so bad... Noooo! Baahar Veer... Baahar!!'

Aur agle hi pal usne apna lund baahar nikaal apne veerya ki ek tezz pichkaari chorri, jo seedha uss ladki ki nangi chuchhiyo, uski chhaati, aur uske pait par jaake giri.

Apni aankhein band kar Veer iss pal ko apne dil-o-dimaag me utaarne laga. Taaki ye pal usse hamesha yaad rahe.

Jab kuch seconds baad usne neeche dekha toh ek jhatka aur laga usse.

Neeche bedsheet par aur uske lund par khoon laga hua tha. Yaha tak ki ladki ki yoni me bhi khoon laga hua tha.

'Fuck!!! Ye bhi virgin thi????? Gaya... Mein gaya ab! They will kill me.... Pariii?? Are you there?'

Par Pari ka koi jawaab na aaya.

'Shiiitttt!!!'

Usne uthte hue uss ladki ko yuhi nagn apni baaho me leke uthaaya aur forun hi bathroom me le gaya.

Ladki behosh ho chuki thi. Veer ne fatafat uski choot aur apne lund ko acche se saaf kiya. Ladki ke shareer par laga veerya bhi usne saaf kiya.

Aur usse baahar laake dubaara bistar par lita diya.

Usne khud ke kapde pehne aur sabse pehle usne bedsheet ka wo tukda faada jaha khoon laga hua tha aur uss kapde ko apne jeb me rakh liya.

Abhi wo uss ladki ko kapde pehna hi raha tha ki tabhi...

*Bang*

Ek tezz awaaz uske kaano me padi. Aur usse kuch shor bhi sunaayi dene laga.

Ye awaaz neeche se aa rahi thi.

Par Veer ke shareer ke ruye iss waqt khade hue the. Kyuki wo jaanta tha...

Ki jo awaaz usne suni...

Wo kisi aur cheez ki nahi balki...

Ek gunshot ki thi...

Iss maamle me wo kabhi galat nahi ho sakta tha. Usne pehle bhi real life me ye sound suna hua tha aur wo bhali bhaati iss awaaz se parichit tha. Wo awaaz...

Wo galat ho hi nahi sakta tha.

Wo awaaz pakke se ek gunshot ki thi...

Uske baad wo shorgul...

Zaroor neeche kuch hua tha. Aur ye shor zaroor gunshot ke baad machi afra tafri ka tha.

'Ohh! Noooo!!!'

Uske andar ek darr umadna shuru ho chuka tha. Apna thook nigalte hue usne forun hi uss ladki ko kapde pehnaaye aur wo usse dekhne laga. Usse dhyaan aaya ki uske haath me aate waqt ek bag bhi tha.

Veer ne forun hi wo bag khola toh usme bas kuch cash tha aur 2 credit cards. Aur ek choti sii diary jo ki ekdum khaali thi. Saath hi ek pen bhi tha...

Veer ne ek panna faada aur usme apna naam aur mobile number likh uske bag ke andar hi daal diya.

'I know ki jab tum hosh me aaogi tab tum mujhe hate karogi... Shaayad tum mujhe maarna bhi chaaho. Aur mein maanta hu mene tunhaare saath galat kiya hai. Isliye mein apna number chorr raha hu. Baad me tum jo chaahe mere saath karna chaahogi mujhe manzoor rahega...'

Mann me sochte hue wo uss ladki ko uthaake baahar nikalne ke liye taiyaar tha.

'Mujhe ek phone jald hi lena padega.'

Sochte hue usne uss ladki ko apni peeth par utha liya.

Par wo ye nahi jaanta tha ki neeche kya ghatna ghatit hui hai.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!!

Awesome update