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Of course!Ding baja new mission ayega lagta hai apna hero to lagta hai super hero banega ek din superb update
Super update
Bahad umda update bhai
Ish khubsurat katha ke 700 pages puran hone ki badhai ho bhai
Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai bhai...
Nice and beautiful update...
butifuul..............................
Superb update
Bahot behtareen shaandaar update bhai
Tow agla update koyi mission se start hoga koyi ghanti baj gayi h Ding
Dekhte kia mission milta h
Shaandaar
Thank you so much guys!Nice update
Dhanyavaad bhai! Kya kare ab. Veer ka iraada Nidhi ko khud se dur karne ka nahi tha. Wo toh keval Nidhi ko hold karna chaahta tha. Par... Daav ulta pad gaya.Ye veer na Nidhi ko apne se bahut door karta jaa raha hai kahin aisa naa ho ki phir nidhi uske paas aa hi naa sake. Dekhte hai ki veer apni mom se kab mil pata hai aur wo kya reason tha ki uski mom ko dead bataya gaya tha aur uski bahan or step-sis ke baare mein bhi nahi bataya gaya. Superb update.
Normal conversation me kaha se intelligence dikhaayi degi!? Jab jab Veer plan karega, decision lega, observe karega ya fight karega. Tab dekhna... You will see the change.veer ki intelligence ab or badh gai hai ,
pahle bhi aam insan se bahut jada thi lekin vo
show kyo nahi ho rahi hai...
Ragini is not in love.nice update..!!
yeh veer aur nidhi ka jab bhi koi scene banta hai kuchh na kuchh ho hi jata hai haesha..!! lagta hai ragini bhi veer ke pyaar me pad gayi hai aur jald hi apne pati se divorce bhi lele toh achha hoga kyunki uska pati bahot harami hai..!! suhana ne bhi bahot achha kaam kiya veer ko uski maa ki detail de ke..!! ab dekhte hai veer ka agla mission kya hai..!!
Amazing update..
Mast update bhai
Awesome superbbbb speechless update..........
Keep posting bhai.........
Waiting for next update..........
Fantastic update...
Thank you guys!Very nice fantastic update waiting for next
It's classified!Pari has somelinks with veer mother???
एकदम सत्य वचन! वीर का अल्फा ट्रेट फंक्शन उसे औरतों के प्रति ज़्यादा अट्रैक्ट करवाता हैं! इसमें उसकी कोई गलती नही! बिलकुल! मिशन कंप्लीट होगा तो पॉइंट्स तो मिलने ही हैं! बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद भाई!निधि और वीर के बीच जो हुआ उसमें कुछ भी अचरज की बात नहीं है
चूंकि वह स्वाभाविक ही था
हाँ वीर की आल्फा नर होने फ़ायदा अब उसे हो रहा है एक और डेट
पर चूंकि मिशन अलर्ट पर कहानी रुकी हुई है इसलिए उत्सुकता और बढ़ गया है
हो सकता है कि इस बार जो पॉइंट्स मिलेंगे उससे वीर कोई स्किल हासिल करेगा
हमेशा की तरह लाज़वाब
Aisa nahi hoega bhai chill! Ghar par jab guests ho toh unke saamne mobile nikaal kar update likhna bhaari kaam hota hai. Update likhne ke liye ekdum akela hona zaroori hai. Shaant mahaul. Aur haan coffee saath me...Bhai update hr bar ki tarah supper dumper thi lykin bhai app 1 din delay q krty ja rahy ho mjhy lag raha hai 1 din aisa aye ga jb update week main 1 bar aye gi. Aisa na krna warna bht zulam ho jaye ga
MAST update bro
Nice updates
Jabardast update
शानदार जबरदस्त भाई
जबरदस्त भाई लाजवाब
जोरदार भाई
Amazing
Superb
Awesome update bro maza aa gaya
Waiting for the next update
Amazing
Nice updates,
Nice update bro
Thank you guys! Keep supporting!Awesome update once again bhai waiting for your next update
Mega updates bhi toh kitne frequently deta hu.Bhai kabhi kabhi aap update nahi de pate ho to uske liye kabhi surprise update bhi de diya karo ek do
Dhanyavaad bhai!romanchak update .. suman ke saath to bahut maje liye veer ne ..
ragini ko sab bata diya kuch baate chhodke par har baar chipak hi jata hai apni bhabhi se jisse ragini ko sharam aa jaati hai .
shreya ne party ke liye mana liya par ye nidhi se flirt kar raha tha jisse usne thappad maar diya ,agar usko supporter maanta hai to chipakne ki kya jarurat thi .
maa ke baare me jaankari mil gayi par ye lift wala aadmi kahi slogan to nahi ..
Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
Nice update bhai waiting for next update
Awesome update
Dhanyavaad dosto!Nixe update bhaii maza aya giea par kar ab new update ka intazar ha bhaiii wating new update
Tum hi batao bhai ki 46 updates me kitni baar sex scenes aaye hai!?Bhai story me sex bahot jaruri ho to hi dalo apni story ko sex ki jarurat nai he ye aese hi sab ko bahot achchi lag rahi he
Sahi kaha bhaiTum hi batao bhai ki 46 updates me kitni baar sex scenes aaye hai!?
Veer will enjoy his sex life too. Ladayi jhagda, hectic schedule ke alaawa bhi insaan ki life me boht kuch hota hai. It's obvious that Veer ko apni lust, frustration bhi baahar nikaalna padega. So, sex is a must. Harr insaan ki Zindagi me sex hota hi hai bro. Aur wese bhi... Meri story is not sex focused but plot focused. Toh jaha jaha mujhe lagega udhar udhar sex scenes aaenge.
Also, if there are people who don't want to read the sex part. They can totally skip it. Story me koi changes nahi aaenge. (Haa but there will be conversations in between too. So keep that in mind. )
Of course! Nidhi toh Nidhi hai...Last update was pretty awesome.... WO CHAPAAAAAAAAK wala to panga ho gya na nidhi ka sath ...... Wasa bhi nidhi itni jldi pat gya gi to us main or baki sab main kya difference rah gya ga.. She is special in specials so isliya veer ko abhi bhut lamba rasta par krna ho ja us tak jana ka liya....................... Waiting for your today's extra ordinary work...
Thanks dude!Nice story and writing skills bhai
All the best
Ayye chaapli... (Ju log ki bhabhi khatiya na khadi kar degi meri...)To Jethalalji, tabhi to Babitaji ke sath bhi masti kar rahe honge!!!!!!
WEREWOLF bro or sabi friends ko
HAPPY NEW YEAR
Happy new year guys!Werewolf bhai ajj update aye ga k nai
Happy new year to all friends.
Sharma jaati hai bechaari jaldi. Kya kare...So, Veer is back in Mumbai... Aur aate hi wahi hua jo hona tha Ragini ke sawaal uski aur Kaera ki tasveer ko lekar... Par Ragini ki to tension lene ki koyi zaroorat hi nahi hai... Bas Veer usse hug kar le wo sab bhulakar sharmaane lagegi, even 7 khoon maaf bhi kardegi...
Suman ka parivaar Raj gharaane ki sewa karta aaya hai puraatan kaal se. Itne khule vichaar hai ki pucho mat. Uska kaaran bhi wese jald hi pata lagega.Khair, aate hi Veer aur Suman ka bath tub dance bhi shuru ho gaya... Chhappak – Chhappak ki dhun ke saath... Idhar ye bhi clear ho gaya ke Sonali ko sab pata hai...
Aur uss se bhi badi baat Suman ne hi usse sab bataya hai... Matlab zyada hi modernization nahi ho gaya hai Rajasthan mein... Ya fir main tribal aadmi hoon
Yes! Of course there are things which she's hiding. But all in all, she's loyal to Veer and will never try to harm him.Par abhi bhi saaf hai ke Suman kaafi kuchh chhippa rahi hai Veer se... Joki naa jaane kab saamne aayega... I think ke nischit hi wo Bhavana ke baare mein bhi bahut kuchh jaanti hai par vachanbaddh hai wo & you know... Praan jaaye par vachan naa jaaye (iss line ko seedhe nahi padhne ka tuning laga ke padhne ka)...
*Shreya! Yes! She used to believe in love at first sight. But you see... What will happen when she realizes that her own principle which she wanted to follow is diminishing and instead she's developing feelings for Veer!? Ye dekhne laayak hoga.Idhar Veer pahuncha Nidhi ke ghar aur Kavya to lagta hai flat ho chuki hai Veer par... But ye to ek eye syndrome matlab Love At first sight mein vishwaas karti thi naa... To kya ab uska mann badal chuka hai... Jo bhi ho Debauchery list ki counting rukni nahi chahiye
Isse kehte hai greed. Dekho gaavwaalo... I mean xfwaalo... Yaha main character nipat jaaye uski koi tension nahi par bhaiya jii ko chocolate factory maangta.Wahin Juhi ko doosri baar Veer ne kuchh kaha kaan mein aur wo bhi aaram se uski baat maan gayi... Maybe wahi Chocolate Factory ka bola hoga usne... Btw. Werewolf bhai chaahe Slogan ke haathon Veer tapak jaaye, koyi dikkat nahi but Chocolate Factory khulni hi chahiye Juhi ke vaaste...
Nidhi toh Nidhi hai Ab wo itni pyaari hai ki Veer khud ko rok na saka. Aur hold karna chaaha usse par chaata mil gaya badle me.Wahin Nidhi ke saath kuchh adhik hi Fevicol ka jod dikhaane ke chalte Nidhi ne bhi ek prashaad chipka diya Veer ke gaal par... Ye to sahi hai ke Veer kuchh adhik hi pushy ho raha tha Nidhi ke saath... Aur jahaan tak main iss kahani ko ab tak samajh paaya hoon... No doubt Kaera aur Sonia badi hastiyaan hain, to hone do but Nidhi is special aur uske saath yadi Veer ka Romantic angle aayega to wo most complicated hoga... I'm sure about this... Kyonki naa to Veer abhi Nidhi ke prati apni badli soch ko accept karna chahta hai aur Nidhi to filhaal uss condition mein hai hi nahi ke apne bete ko paane ke alawa kuchh soch sake...
Hmm! Pari didn't moan. She said ohhh! Like how we generally say. Well! Pari kya cheez hai... Guessing lagaate rahiye!Jhooth nahi bolunga ek baar ko to laga ke Veer & Suman ka live show dekh kar Pari Solo Sukh ka aanand le rahi thi aur ye parmanand ki anubhuti ke kaaran moanning ki aawaz thi...
To Kya, hamari Pari madam, sachmein Tharki ho chali hain... Live Sex ka aanand le rahi thi ye to... Aur fir kehti hai ke main to aapki Pari hoon master... Ab Pari ke Raaz ya secret ko lekar koyi speculation karna mujhe sahi nahi lag raha hai... Kyonki ye ab tak ki kahani ka sabse bada Raaz laga mujhe... But, Still I would say ke shayad Pari ko specially Veer ke liye hi design kiya gaya hai... Uska kisi aur planet se hone ki baat maybe jhooth hai... Aur uska kaam Veer ko Baadshah banana hai... Kyonki jabse wo Veer ki zindagi mein aayi hai apne aap hi Veer se jude log usse milte jaa rahe hain... Chaahe fir wo Archaeologist Geeta ho ya fir Exotic Suman ..
Yes! It's Slogan!Idhar Suhana ne Geeta Ji aur unki putri ke Egypt mein hone ki baat Veer tak pahuncha di hai aur saath hi ye bhi ke wo kuchh waqt baad ek naye Archaeological project ke chalte India lautne waali hain... Maybe wahin Veer unse mil paaye... Aur kuchh naye panne khule inke past ke baare mein...
Last mein Floral Shirt dikhi, matlab usse pehne huye ek vyakti dikha jo definitely apne Slogan Dada hi the... Aur saath hi dikha “Ding” matlab ek naya mission... To aakhirkaar Veer ki dobara se band bajni shuru hone waali hai... Superb... Yahi to padhne mein maza aata hai... Villains Destroyed Veer
Aree bhai! Boht boht dhanyavaad!Mujhe nahi lagta ke ab aapki kahani tareef ki mohtaaz hai... 46 updates mein 717 pages arthat har update par 15 ke kareeb pages... Aur saath hi 1,483,800 se adhik views... Kaafi hain ye cheezen batane ke liye ke aapki kahani kis level par pahunch chuki hai... Ek baar firse shaandar update tha... Nidhi ke emotions ko jiss tarah se darshaaya gaya tha, Apni Saari ke Pallu ko thaamna ho ya honth bheenchna... Suhana ka aggressive hona ho ya Veer ka Nidhi waali harkat par reaction... Sab kuchh shaandar tareeke se describe kiya gaya tha & that makes you a special Writer...
Outstanding Update Bhai & Waiting For Next...
Eise keise bhai, thoda sa to suspense rakhna mangta na story mein! Hamare jeise chapad ganchu sahi guess karenge to keisa chalega?Yes! It's Slogan!
Thanks bro! Abhi Pari ka level badhne dijiye. Boht saare surprises milenge... kaafi kuch prepare karke rakha hai mene.Nice update Werewolf bhai.
Next update tak ka suspense de diya .
Well veer ke stats me significant changes
Yes! Sonali Veer aur Suman ke baare me jaanti hai. Rahi baat Sonali aur Veer ki. Toh ye tabhi possible hoga jab Veer khud se Sonali ko apnaana chaahega. For now he's not interested in her. Well! Suman ke pregnant hone ki iccha ke peeche ek bada kaaran hai. Baad me pata chalega.Ragini news paper pakad ke bethi he jisme wahi photo chhapi he. Ye ragini ke dil me uthal parhal machi he. Suman lagi hui he apne Malik ko khush karne me. Sonali janti he unke bare me. Par suman ko fark nahi pada. Ulta usko hi daant lagayi hogi usne. Yaha suman ki baato se laga ki sonali ko bhi ek din veer ke niche hi aana he. Veer bhi jabardasti nahi karega. Suman ki bhi achhe se bajayi. Yaha ek baat janni thi. Suman kyu pregnant hone ka sochti he veer se. Last time train me bhi usne bola tha aur aaj bhi yahi soch rahi he. Agar abhi pet se ho gayi to sewa kon karega
Juhi sabki laadli bhi hai aur smart bhi...Shreya to yaha apni date set kar chuki veer ke sath. Wahi Nidhi sab sunn rahi he dono ki baate par bolti kuch nahi. Juhi ko sath le jate to family hi lagte teeno. Aur ye pata nahi veer kese har baar mana leta he juhi ko. Vese ye bachhe bhi bade chalak hote he. Nidhi jab Pyaar me padegi puri tarah se to juhi bhi kese na kese madad karegi. Ye juhi
Iske peeche simple sa kaaran hai bro. Last time Veer jab uske baalo me clip laga raha tha. Toh wo keval Nidhi ke close tha. Uski saasein Nidhi feel kar paa rahi thi but Veer uske aage nahi badha tha. Iss baar Veer ke haath Nidhi ke nagn pait par the. Aur toh aur kass ke thaame hue the uske pait ko... Plus wo ghar me thi aur Shreya aur Juhi bhi wahi baahar. Obvious sii baat hai chaata toh padna hi tha.Yaha Nidhi ne to gaal hi laal kar diya veer ka. But ye samjh na aaya. Last time wo veer ko rokna chahti thi aur batana bhi ki usse bura nahi laga tha. Bas wo neighbour aunty ki wajah se Karna pada. Mujhe to lagta he iss thappad me thodi jealousy bhi he. Beshak Nidhi ko ye pasand na aaya hoga veer ka esa chhuna. Veer bhi flow me aa gaya. Aur gaal laal. Ab dono kese face karenge ek dusre ko next time dekhte he. Next update me Nidhi ka ek scene jarur daal na bhai
Kuch logo ke reactions aaj ke update me dekhne ko milenge... Lift waala banda aur kaun ho sakta hai? Floral shirt... Yaad kariye! Pehle bhi zikr hua hai.Aur wahi hotel me jate na. Uski step mom ko bhi to pata chale. Usne to news paper dekha hi hoga sath hi me ghar me bhi sabne dekha hoga unka reaction kya hoga. Kavya, aarohi. Nidhi ne bhi shayad news paper dekh ke hi aur Shreya aur veer ki baate sunn kar hi maybe thappad jadd diya ho.
Kuch to info lagi hath bhavna ji ke bare me. Ye suhana kaam ki he. Par jitne favour liye he wo na bhulegi wo. Sab favour ka hisab legi. Ek do favour ke badle maybe Sonia ke liye kuch maang le veer se. Dekhte he.
Yaha ab ye naya mission kya hoga. Lift to bandh ho rahi he par eye contact bhi ho chuka to kon hoga wo ?? Suhana pe humla hone wala he kya ??
Agle update ki raah dekhenge bhai