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Update - 49 ~ The Last Day of the Year
Ab tak...
Bechaara Veer jawaab ke taur par kuch bhi nahi sunn paaya.
Par...
Nidhi na jaane kya soch rahi thi. Par uski nazre ek jagah hi tiki hui thi. Saasein pehle se thodi tezz. Aur unn aankho ke saamne uske baal the jo uske expression ko chhupaaye hue the.
Kya hone waala tha kal!? Inke iss plan me!? Toh wahi Pranjal aur Vivek ke plan me!? Aur saath hi saath... Slogan!!!! Jiski activities Veer ke palle nahi pad rahi thi.
Ab aage...
31st December...
At Morning...
Kal Shreya se jab Veer ki phone par baat hui thi toh Veer ki haami liye bagerr hi Shreya ne usse apne plan me shaamil kar liya tha. Aur tay hua tha ki aaj ki raat Veer, Shreya, Nidhi aur Juhi sabhi saath me enjoy karne jaenge aur late night tak naye saal ka swaagat kar thoda celebration kar ke hi ghar lautenge.
Veer ko uss mission ke 200 points mil chuke the par abhi tak usne unn points ko spend nahi kiya tha siwae 10 points ke. Usne Appearance me 10 points kal raat me hi invest kar diye the. Aur ab uske stats kuch iss prakaar se the.
[ Stats :
Strength - 56/100
Intelligence - 70/100
Agility - 50/100
Endurance - 50/100
Appearance - 50/100]
Veer shayad apne bache hue points ko ekdum effectively use karna chaahta tha. Shayad shop me aisi kisi anokhi skill ki talaash thi usse jo uske behad kaam aa sake.
'Show me my full status Pari!'
[Sure thing, Master!]
[Name : Veer
Age : 21
Status : Student
Stats :
Strength - 56/100
Intelligence - 70/100
Agility - 50/100
Endurance - 50/100
Appearance - 50/100
Skills :
1) Sex Protection : ON (Silver Tier Skill)
2) Basic Martial Arts Skill (Bronze Tier Skill)
3) Hawkeye (Diamond Tier Skill)
System's Internal Features :
Check-I, Check-II, Path Tracker, Past Illustration.
Relationships :
1) Suman : Loyal Slave (Favourability : 84)
2) Aabha : Familiar (Favourability : 58)
3) Sonali : Familiar (Favourability : 30)
4) Ragini : Close Friend (Favourability : 60)
5) Nidhi : Close Friend (Favourability : 52)
6) Shreya : Close Friend (Favourability : 64)
7) Juhi : Best Friend (Favourability : 85)
8) Suhana : Close Friend (Favourability : 59)
9) Sonia : Good Friend (Favourability : 50)
10) Kavya : Very Close Friend (Favourability : 80)
11) Arohi : Good Friend (Favourability : 55)
12) Bhumika : Familiar (Favourability : 20)
13) Shweta : Familiar (Favourability : 8)
System Level : Level 4
(56 EXP more to reach Level 5)]
'Hmm!! I need to earn money and need more points. Meri priority yahi hai abhi.'
[Right master!]
'So!? Umm... Miss Kaera ki favourability nahi dekh sakta kya mein!?'
[Dekh sakte ho but not now. Yadi kisi ka status nahi dekh sakte toh aap uski Favourability bhi nahi dekh paoge.]
'Hmm! I see! Alright! Let's go...'
Aaj Veer ke 2 jagah plans the. Ek toh wahi Shreya aur baaki sabhi ke saath raat ka plan tha aur dusra Ragini aur baaki sabhi ke saath.
Jab Veer ne ye baat bataayi thi ki wo raat me free nahi rahega, ye sunn ke Ragini kaafi udaas ho gayi thi. Par usne behla fusla ke Ragini ko jese tese mana liya aur din me ghoomne chalne ko keh diya. Yaha Veer ko ek aur baat jaan'ne ko mili ki Kavya aur baaki sabhi parivaar ke saath kul devi ke mandir ke liye subah nikal chuke the.
Beshaq! Veer iss achanak trip se unki thoda aascharya chakit tha par usne zyaada nahi socha. Kavya ka kehna tha ki uske Dada jii ne Veer ko saath le chalne ke liye bhi bola tha par Vivek ne beech me kood kar Dada jii ke kaan bhar diye aur wo baat wahi tal ke reh gayi.
Kherr! Aaiye, toh wahi chal ke dekhte hai ki waha kya chal raha tha iss waqt...
Iss samay subah ke 8 baj rahe the aur sabhi ghar waale do badi badi gaadiyo me baithe hue the apni aur apne gaav ki orr jaa rahe the.
Veer ke parivaar ke poorvaj saalo se uss devi mata ki pooja karte aaye the aur uss mandir ki sthaapna bhi unke poorvajo ne hi kii thi par jese jese samay guzarta gaya aur aane waali peedhi sheher se judti gayi, wo mandir dheere dheere waha ke trust me samarpit kar diya gaya.
Kaaran!? Kaaran tha ki ab Veer ka parivaar sheher me panap raha tha aur ghar ka koi sadasya roz roz mandir ki dekh bhaal ya chakkar lagaane ke liye kisi ke paas itna samay nahi tha. Toh uss mandir ko wahi ke trust me samarpit kar diya gaya. Ab uss mandir ki poori zimmedari unn trust waale logo ki thi.
Par aaj bhi, jab bhi Veer ka parivaar, khaas kar Manorath jii jab bhi waha jaate the, gaav ke sabhi log unhe bade hi aadar aur satkaar ke saath unka swaagat karte the. Yaha tak ki wo ye bhi kehte the ki ab bhi ki wo mandir unhi ka hai aur hamesha unhi ka rahega. Shayad aaj bhi unki acchi khaatirdaari hone waali thi.
Unn do cars me se, ek car me Brijesh sang Bhumika, Shweta, Kavya aur Manorath viraajmaan the.
Toh wahi dusri me Karunesh sang Sumitra, Vivek, Arohi aur Pranjal.
Dono hi car me do drivers the. Sheher se kuch ghanto ki duri par hi unka gaav tha.
Kavya : Dada Jii aapne... Veer bhaiya ko nahi bulaaya!?
Manorath : Beta mene kaha tha par Vivek bola ki aaj Veer shayad kahi aur jaa raha hai... Meri toh koi sunta hi nahi hai. Jese jese budha hota jaa raha hu, meri baato ko ab log hawa me udaate jaa rahe hai.
Brijesh : Papa jii... Aisi baat kyu keh rahe ho aap!? Hum sab aapki baat maante hai. Ab uss baare me charcha mat kariye aap. Mandir jaa rahe hai, accha mood rakh ke chaliye.
Brijesh ki iss baat pe sabhi shaant pad gaye. Wo aage driver ke sang baitha hua tha. Toh wahi peeche side ki seat par Manorath aur unke bagal se Kavya, fir Bhumika aur fir Shweta.
Bhumika : Aaj saari responsibility Nandini ko deke aayi hu Mom.
Nandini unke hotel ki manager thi. Jo sab kuch badi hi acchi tareeke se manage kar leti thi.
Shweta : Hmm! Chinta ki koi baat nahi hai. Wo acche se dekh legi.
Bhumika : Hmm! Bas koi bada client ya guest na aa jaaye. Aur aisa na ho ki kuch problem ho jaaye.
Shweta : Don't overthink! Just enjoy the day mera baccha...!
Bhumika (smiles) : Hmm!
Aur kuch ghanto ki doori tay karne ke baad hi wo pohuch chuke the apne kuldevi ke mandir.
Sabhi ka waha harr baat ki tarah bade hi aadar ke saath swaagat kiya gaya. Saath hi saath waha unke rukne aur khaane ki bhi vyavastha kii gayi.
Darshan kar lene ke baad sabhi khaana khaane me lage hue the jab Vivek aur Pranjal aapas me baith na jaane kya baatein kar rahe the.
Pranjal : Saara plan ready hai bhaiya... Bas derr hai toh usse anjaam dene kii...
Vivek : Nahi chote... Aaj nahi...! Hume wese bhi kal nikalna hai. Aaj risky hai. Kal karna... Wese bhi yaha se naashta karne ke baad hi niklenge hum.
Pranjal : Thik hai bhaiya! Kal sahi fir...
Na jaane dono kis plan ko anjaam dene ki baat kar rahe the.
***
Idhar Veer din me apne parivaar ke saath ho rahi baato se anibhigya Ragini aur baaki sabhi ke saath aaj ghoomne nikla hua tha.
Par achanak hi raaste me usse nazar aaya ki kuch ladies kisi kapde ki sale par humgama kar rahi thi.
Veer : Kya ho raha hai udhar!?
Ragini : Virodh!
Veer : Virodh!? Kesa virodh!?
Ragini : Umm... Wo dekho na... Mahila mandal jama ho gaya poora udhar. Kisi sale ki peeche ladaayi ho gayi hai. Shayad kuch ghapla kiya hai sale waale ne. Isliye aurate itni awaazein laga rahi hai.
Aur waqai! Jab Veer ne dhyaan se dekha toh usse samajh aaya ki naye saal ki sale ke bahaane kapdo ka business karne waala aadmi kuch phate aur bekaar pieces ko nikaalne ke liye ye sale rakha hua tha. Aur wo kapdo ki wrapping ko kholne nahi de raha tha.
Jab kuch aurato ne khol ke kapdo ki jaanch kii toh unhone dhaava bol diya. Ittefaaq se mahila mandal wahi se kahi aur jaa rahi thi aur ye virodh dekh wo bhi unke saath jud gayi aur poori tarah se waat laga dii uss dukaan daar kii.
Ragini (sighs) : Harr sale me kuch na kuch hota hi hai.
Veer bade hi dhyaan se sab kuch dekh raha tha aur achanak hi jese uske dimaag ki ghanti baji aur agle hi pal uske hontho par ek muskaan bikhar gayi.
Veer : Bhabhi!
Ragini : Hmm!?
Veer : Meri aap se ek request hai. Aap poori karogi!?
Ragini : Hmm? Okay! Kya baat hai!?
Veer : Kya aap... Kya aap Suman jii ko sheher ke poore taur tareeke sikha sakti ho? Mera matlab hai saare niyam kaayde, khareed-daari se leke devices ko operate karna sab kuch. Ek modern vyakti ka poora knowledge jitna apa de sakti ho... Kya aap kar sakti ho?
Ragini (surprised) : Huh!? P-Par ye ekdum se aise kyu!?
Veer : Suman jii ne mujhse hi khud kaha tha. Kyu hai na!? Suman jii!?
Suman : E-Ehhh!? Ohhh! Haa haa! Mene kaha tha...
Suman baat ko samajh forun hi haa me sarr hilaayi aur apni razamandi dii. Par uski samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki uske maalik ke dimaag me akhir chal kya raha tha.
Ragini : O-Okay! Mein apni poori koshish karungi inhe sab kuch bataane me...
Veer (smiles) : Thank you Bhabhi!
Ragini : Umm... It's okay!
Lunch ke samay, Ragini aur Veer agal bagal hi baithe the jab Veer ne Ragini ke chehre par maayusi ko turant hi bhaanp liya...
Veer : Aap pareshaan lag rahi ho Bhabhi!
Ragini : Huh!? N-Nahi toh!? Mein bhala kyu pareshaan hone lagi!?
Veer : Jhooth mat boliye! Mujhse toh bilkul bhi nahi! Vivek bhaiya ka call aaya tha na!?
Veer ki baat sunn Ragini iss baar dheere se haa me sarr hilaayi aur apne nigaahe neeche kar baith gayi.
Veer : Kya kaha unhone!?
Ragini : Wo... Wo sabhi aaj hamaari kuldevi ke mandir gaye hai.
Veer : Unhone aap ko bhi bulaaya hoga!?
Ragini (nods) : Umm...
Veer : Toh!??
Ragini ne apni nigaahe upar kar ek pal ke liye usse dekha... Unn aankho me nami jo panap rahi thi wo Veer asaani se dekh paa raha tha.
Ragini : I... Mein... Mein kabhi bhi mandir ke naam par devi ka tiraskaar nahi karti mana kar ke... Par...
Veer : ....
Ragini : Par...
Veer : Aapka mann nahi kiya zara bhi...
Ye vaakya sunn Ragini chaunki aur Veer ko ghurne lagi.
Bhala uske mann ki baat Veer ne kese bhaanp lii thi!?
Veer : Itne dino se aap ke saath reh raha hu. Thoda boht toh mein bhi aapko samajhne laga hu.
Kehte hue usne jese hi apna haath Ragini ke haath ke upar rakha toh bechaari Ragini ki idhar haalat hi bigadne lagi. Wo phati aankho se Veer ko ghure jaa rahi thi.
Uske gulaabi honth khule... Par keval halki sii hawa hi baahar nikli, koi shabd nahi.
Aur aankhein jyo ki tyo Veer par tiki thi.
Veer : I don't know ki aap kya decision logi. But aap jo bhi decision logi. Hum sab aapke saath hai. But if... Yadi aapne Vivek bhaiya se sach me alag hone ka decision liya then... I was wondering ki... Kya hum aise hi reh paenge!? I mean... Fir aap uss ghar ki sadasya nahi rahogi aur mera aur Suman jii ka aapke ghar rukna...
Wo apni baat aage rakh paata ki uske pehle hi Ragini ne apna haath uske hotho par rakh usse rok diya.
Ragini : Veer! Mein uss parivaar ki sadasya rahu ya na rahu. Tum aur Suman jii mere apne sadasya ho. Wo ghar mera akele ka nahi hai. Tum sabhi ka bhi hai. Aur kya karungi mein itne bade ghar me akele reh ke!? Bhulo mat Veer... Tum bhi... Uss parivaar se alag ho chuke ho. Toh aise me yadi mein bhi hoti hu... Toh... Aren't we the same!?
Usne muskuraate hue kaha par Veer jaanta tha. Ki uss smile ke peeche kaafi kuch chhipa hua tha. Jisse shayad vyakt karna abhi Ragini ke bas me nahi tha.
Aur bilkul wesa hi hua... Bhaavuk hote hue Ragini ne forun hi apna chehra ferr liya aur jab usne dekha ki Suman samet sabhi counter se waapas uski aur Veer ki taraf aa rahi hai toh forun hi apni aankhein mal seedhi hokar baith gayi.
Ant me unn sabhi ne thoda enjoy kiya jiske chalte Ragini ka mood kaafi hadd tak theek ho chuka tha.
Par ab samasya thi raat ki...
Veer ko Nidhi ko jo face karna tha. Wese toh Nidhi ne usse maaf kar diya tha. Par...
Pratkyash aamne saamne milna ek alag baat thi.
Aur zaahir hai ki dono ke beech awkwardness barkaraar rehne waali thi.
***
31st December...
At Night...
Veer apni bike par tha aur wo theek Nidhi ki society me hi neeche khada hua tha jab Nidhi samet Juhi aur Shreya neeche utarti hui aayi.
Shreya : Arre kya koi mehmaan ho tum haan!? Jo ek minute ke liye bhi upar nahi aa...
Par uske bol wahi tham gaye jab usne paas aate hue Veer ko dekha.
Appearance me 10 points daalne ka asar tha ye!?
Shreya (blushes) : You... You look good!
Veer (smiles) : Thanks!
Shreya (blushes) : Aisa... Aisa kya laga rahe ho aajkal huh!? Hume bhi bata do...
Veer (smiles) : It's a secret!
"Maaaaaamuuuuuuuu!!!"
Aur beshaq! Veer ko dekhte hi uski pyaari fuljhadi bole toh Juhi sarpat daudati hi aayi aur uske perr se lipat gayi. Veer ne forun hi usse godi me uthaay aur uska gaal choom liya.
Veer : Aa gayi Juhi!? Kya pehni ho aap!? Ohhhh! New jacket!??
Juhi : Hmm! Maasi ne dilaayi!
Veer : Kya baat hai!? Boht kharche ho rahe hai!?
Shreya : Kyu na honge!? Ab mein kamaane jo lagi hu.
Veer (smiles) : Hmm!
Shreya (blushes) : Wese bhi... Sab tumhari hi wajah se toh hai.
Veer aage kuch keh pata ki tabhi...
*Tuck* *Tuck* *Tuck*
Usse heels ki awaaz sunaayi dii aur usne dekha ki Nidhi ek khubsoorat sii saree pehne aur ek shawl upar daale neeche aa rahi thi.
Aaj wo itni khubsoorat dikh rahi thi ki Veer khud apne aap ko kuch derr yu taktaki lagaye usse dekhne se na rok saka.
Dono ki hi nazre mili aur pal bhar ke liye dono hi jese bhul gaye ki wo dono akele nahi hai. Aas paas bhi log hai.
Shreya : Toh chale!?
Veer : Ah! Y-Yeah! Right!
Juhi : Mein Maamu ke saath baithungi... Aage bike pe...
Shreya : Huh!?
Nidhi : Nahi Juhi! Mere saath baitho chalo. Maasi ko baithne do unke saath. Hum apni scooty me chalte hai.
Wese toh iss baat se Shreya boht khush thi ki usse Veer ke saath baithne ka mauka mil raha tha par fir bhi... Wo apni behan se bhi utna hi pyaar jo karti thi. Aur uski fiqr bhi.
Nidhi saree me thi. Aur aise me scooty chalana wo bhi Juhi ko lekar, raat ke waqt. Ye kitna kathin tha wo jaanti thi. Aur khatarnak bhi ho sakta tha.
Isliye...
Shreya : Nahi dii! Aap aur Juhi Veer ke saath baithiye! Aapne saree pehni hui hai Dii. Dikkat jaegi. Aur mera kya hai? Mein toh jeans me hu. Mein scooty se chalti hu.
Nidhi ne ek pal Veer ko dekha jo bina kuch kahe hi uske nirnay ka intezar kar raha tha aur fir akhir kaar Nidhi ne finally dheere se haa me sarr hilaaya aur Veer ke theek peeche jaake wo baith gayi.
Ye pal...
Veer ke hontho par apne aap hi muskaan laa diya. Aise hi toh ek saath baith ke college se lauta karte the wo. Aise hi toh Nidhi uske peeche yu baitha karti thi. Aaj itne dino baad ussi anubhuti ko firse mehsoos kar paa raha tha Veer. Par sabse aham baat ye thi ki iss waqt chaand bhi apne poore rang dhaaya hua tha. Poora chamak raha tha aur apni roshni bakhoobi bikhere hue tha.
Aur finally Veer aur baaki sabhi society se nikle.
Raat ka plan simple tha. Koi acchi si jagah jaake pehle thoda entertainment. Fir dinner aur ant me new year celebration ke fireworks dekhne ka plan.
Sabse pehli jagah Veer aur baaki sabhi amusement park me gaye the. Amusem park toh nahi tha, ek pradarshini lagi hui thi. Bhale hi amusement park se thoda chota tha par rides idhar bhi thi.
Juhi baccho waali rides enjoy kar rahi rhi, toh wahi Shreya uski photos utaar rahi thi. Aur wahi Veer aur Nidhi side me khade unhe dekh rahe the.
Juhi : Mummyyyyy! Mujhe wo bade waale me baithna.
Usne ishaara karte hue kaha. Uska ishaara Giant wheel ki orr tha.
Nidhi : Huh? Nahi Juhi! Bilkul bhi nahi! Darr jaogi baad me tum hi. Dekh rahi ho kitni upar tak jaata hai.
Shreya : Juhi! Wo dekho! Wo train waali me baithe apan!? Mein bhi baitha sakti hu usme toh.
Juhi : Haa chalo chalo maasi... Jaldi...!
Aur wo kheech ke Shreya ko le gayi.
Ab bache the toh keval Veer aur Nidhi.
Veer : Umm... Kya aap chalna chahogi!? Ma'am!? Giant wheel me!?
Nidhi : Huh? M-Mein!? N-Nahi... Mein nahi...
Veer : O-Okay!
Wo jawaab dete hue apni nazre jhuka liya. Par jese Nidhi ne uska expression dekh liya tha toh wo puchi,
Nidhi : Umm... Kya tumhe ride karna hai!?
Veer : Hmm? Y-Yeah! Mein kabhi baitha nahi hu inn rides me. Kabhi koi laaya hi nahi...
Usne ek feeki smile dete hue kaha toh Nidhi ko jese yaad aaya ki Veer ka bachpan kese guzra tha. Aur ye yaad karte hi wo bauhe sikode usse dekhne lagi aur ek duwidha me phass gayi.
Nidhi : O-Okay! If... If you want then... Hum chal sakte hai!
Bas fir kya tha kuch hi derr me Veer aur Nidhi dono hi Giant wheel par sawaar the. Par...
*Ding*
[Mission : Hug Nidhi! Let her know you are her support.
Rewards : ?? Points
Time limit : Before 12 A.M
Mission Failure Penalty : 50 Points Deduction.]
'What the fuckkkkkkkkk!?'
[Hahaha~]
'Mazaak chal rahi hai? No seriously!? Mazaak hai? Fuckkkk! Uss din hi mene unke haathe se thappad khaaya tha aur ab ye? Jhoote padwaane ki planning hai kya? Wtf is this mission?'
[I cannot help it master! Execute this mission properly. Aur... Haa~ iss Mission ke complete hote hi mein level up ho jaungi. But I'll be in sleep mode for loading your new resources. Toh pehle se hi wish kar deti hu. Happy new year master! Enjoy your time! Hehe~]
'W-Wait what!??? Wtf??? Sleep mode achanak kyu?'
[I told you kuch surprise hai right? So wait for it!]
Nidhi : Ummm...
Nidhi ne uska dhyaan kheecha toh Veer hosh me aaya. Giant wheel ghoomte hue upar jaa raha tha.
Aur Nidhi aur Veer agal bagal baithe hue upar se poora nazaara dekh rahe the.
Nidhi : It's so beautiful...
Veer : Bilkul aap ki tarah...
*Badump*
Nidhi (gasps) H-Huhhhh!?
Veer : Mene kabhi iss ride pe sawaari nahi kii thi. Aaj aap aayi toh ye bhi ho gaya... Thanks for agreeing.
Nidhi : It's... It's fine!
Nidhi : Veer!
Veer : Hmm?
Nidhi : Sach kahu... Toh I'm really mad at you.
Veer : ??
Nidhi : Kitna kehti rehti hu tum se. Kitna keh chuki hu pehle bhi. Don't leave your studies. Par tum ho ki sunte hi nahi. Kya karna chaahte ho aage!? Kya karoge!? Kuch plan hai ki nahi? Mein tumhe daant nahi rahi hu. Tumhari teacher bhi hu. Tumhare career ki chinta mujhe lagi rehti hai. Aur tum toh mere khaas student ho. Ek tarah se parivaar ka hissa bhi ban gaye the tum haal hi me. Toh kidhar jaana chaahte ho, koi lakshya hai ki nahi? Kya kar rahe ho abhi? Study nahi karte toh kya karte ho din bhar? Kuch socha hai future ke baare me? Kyu nahi aate ho college!? Ye saare sawaalo ke jawaab tumhe acche se pata hone chaahiye Veer.
Wo lagataar bole jaa rahi thi. Par Veer chaand ki uss roshni me keval Nidhi ke husn ko hi dekhta raha aur bas muskuraata raha.
Abhi bhi Nidhi ko Veer ke bhavishya ko lekar chinta thi.
Veer (smiles) : Aapki yahi baatein toh mera dil jeet leti hai.
Nidhi : Huhhhh!??
Veer : M-Mera matlab hai... Aapko meri itni chinta hai?
Nidhi : Kyu nahi hoegi? Akhir tum...
Kehte hue wo ruk gayi.
Veer : Akhir tum!?? Akhir tum kya ma'am!?
Wheel ekdum upar aa chuka tha jab Nidhi ne Veer ke chehre ko dekha aur uska chehra apne ekdum sameep paaya toh uske bol wahi tham gaye.
Nidhi : Kuch... Kuch nahi...!
'Fuckkk! I'm doing it. Jo hoga dekha jaega. Ek thappad aur kha lunga.'
Aur agle hi pal Veer ne Nidhi ko zorr se apni baaho me kheech liya.
Iss achanak hamle ki umeed Nidhi ko bilkul bhi na thi. Wo apni aankhein faade abhi abhi jo kuch hue usse digest karne ki koshish kar rahi thi. Aur jese hi usse abhaas hua ki iss waqt wo Veer ki baaho me thi aur Veer usse zorr se bheencha hua tha, Nidhi ki saasein tez ho gayi.
Usne apna haath upar le jaake Veer ke seene par rakha aur usse dhakelne hi waali thi jab Veer ke shabd uske kaano me pade,
"Sabse pehle toh thank you ma'am. Mujhe uss daldal se nikaalne ke liye. Fir apne saath rakhne ke liye, mera itna support karne ke liye ye jaante hue bhi ki aap khud itni pareshaani me ho. Uske baad thank you ki aapne harr hardship me mera saath diya. Aaj bhi aapko meri parvaah hai, thank you ki aap aaj aane ke liye taiyaar hui, mere saath ride me baithne ke liye taiyaar hui. Rahi baat mere aim ki... I'm leaving the college ma'am. Because I know ki mujhe kya karna hai. Thank you so much! Aap hamesha hi meri ma'am rahogi, chaahe mein college jau ya nahi. And lastly... Jese aapne mera saath diya wese hi mein bhi aapka saath dunga. I'm here for you. Always!"
Unn baato ko sunte hi Nidhi ka haath jo Veer ko dhakelne ke liye the wo ekdum se dheela pad gaya.
Dono ke hi chehre aapas me behad qareeb the. Dono hi ek dusre ki garam saaso ko bakhubi mehsoos kar paa rahe the.
Aur na jaane aise kya hua ki Veer apne aap hi Nidhi ki orr jhukne laga.
Nidhi ka attraction jese usse kheech raha tha.
Paas aate hi usse sunaayi dii... Nidhi ke tezz dhadkate hue dil ki heartbeat. Kitni zorro se dhadak raha tha uska dil.
Wo bas lambi lambi saasein liye jaa rahi thi.
Par jese hi Veer uske ekdum kareeb aa gaya, jab wo uske hontho se bas kuch hi centimetres ki duri par tha, Nidhi ne zorr se dhakka deke usse peeche dhakel diya.
Nidhi : N-Nooooooooooo!!!!!!!!
Aur ek baar fir dono ke beech me wahi awkwardness ka mahaul chha gaya.
Uske baad toh jese dono me hi koi baat nahi hui.
Dinner ke baad bhi wo dono ek dusre se baat nahi kiye. 12 bajte hi jab fireworks ka show shuru hua toh dono hi baithe zaroor the par dono ke beech me Juhi baithi hui thi.
Aur dono hi pal do pal apni nazro ko ek dusre se milaate par nateeja wahi, koi bhi kuch kehne ki haalat me nahi hota.
Aur tabhi...
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[System has reached Level 5.]
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[In-built feature ~ Translator has been unlocked.]
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[In-built feature ~ Slot has been unlocked.]
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[Quest hunt is now accessible.]
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
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romanchak update ..wo ladki slogan ko uncle keh rahi thi ,aur ye kiski baat kar raha tha steve aur wo aadmi jisko thappad maar diya slogan ne..
slogan ka data pata nahi kar paayi pari par wahi us ladki priya ka data aasani se mil gaya matlab wo koi khas nahi hai
pranjal aur vivek kya plan kar rahe hai ye dono hi jaante hai ,kahi veer ko ghar laane kw bahane ragini ko ghar bulana to nahi chahte ya kahi kuch aur plan ho unka .
shreya to apne hi khwabo me doobi huyi thi youtuber banne ke aur veer ke saath stream karne ke..
Awesome superb and mindblowing update Bhai..
Superb update bhai...
Nice update bro
★ Fabulous Mind Blowing Updated...
★ "Usne sahi kaha tha Dada... Bilkul wesa hi hua. Ye toh jaadu ki tarah hai. Usko kese...!?"
★ Ye usko kon tha jisne Veer ke bare me Slogan ko jankari di hai..
Kya wo veer ki sari suchi bata dega like 'Pari'
★ kya veer pari ko kho dega Slogan kisko janta hai jisne sab kuch wesa hi btya tha jese ghata tha..?
★ Kya vivek aur priyanjal veer ko sath le jayege apne sath gaon aur usko apne dada ki naraz me fir se gira dege but khai unko apne mhu ki na khai pde Qki ab apna veer phele se badal chuka hai..?
★ Kya veer Nidhi mam ki party me jaa payega ya cancel kare apne dada se milne jyega agr uske dada ne intive kiya to..?
★ Kya Slogan koi bhut bada khatra hai Veer ke liye jese Atish tha..
★ New Kis ke sath manyega Veer Ragini ke sath ya Apne Dada ke sath ya Nidhi mam ke sath..?
★ Dekhte hai New Pr Veer ke liya kya naye Naye Dhamake le kar aata hai...
★ Waiting for next update...
Great Review. Review started with Nidhi madam. It would have been better if the review ended with Nidhi Madam also. Mat puchna kyun please.
This story deserves this kind of review. My friend Werewolf will be surely feeling proud of himself after reading your review.
Title ka planning sayad New year planning yoga. But title ka Mystery likes to be many in number starting with Slogan, continuing with Priya (another girl for Veer) , last mission in itself and so on....
Main yeh kya kiya? Review ke upar hi review likh dala. Shame on myself
Just started reading this amazing story a week ago and I want to say ki bhai aap ko sach me characters likhna aata hai be it veer, ateesh, ragini slogan and all others they are written beautifully but my favorite is nidhi ma'am goddamn i love her character every scene with veer and her involved is so beautiful and fun to read and mujhe lgta h Sirf main hi nhi hun jiski fav nidhi ma'am h that u can see on comments feed hehehe we do love older and mature females character, don't we?
That's it and hope we get more of nidhi's time in future hehehe
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For completed 750 pages on your story thread.....
Hmm yaha slogan to sab dekh ke ek dum shant he jese usse ye sab pata tha. Par veer ki halat jarur thodi kharab hui he slogan ko dekh ke. Uska aura hi esa he ki pari tak ko thoda darr laga. Ab veer ye to na keh sakta ki mujhe pari ne bola ki tumhara pucha karu. Par veer yaha jarur ab slogan ke redar me aa chuka he. Ya pahele he hi tha. Ab baat kare uss ladki ki to wo uske pariwar ki hi hogi. Ab itna paisa he to ghamnad hoga usne khud thode kamaye he jo down to earth rahegi. Check karke bhi uske bare me koi gadbad na lagi. Ab agli baar mulakaat hogi tab hi thoda janne ko milega. Jate waqt jarur kuch baate suni usne. Ab yaha wo kon he jiske bare me steve baat kar raha tha. Jisne ye sab predict kiya tha aur hua bhi bilkul vesa hi.
Veer ke purane ghar me to manorath ji aaram farma rahe he. Wahi pranjal aur vivek apna plan bana rahe. Ab ye pranjal ne achanak devi ke mandir Jane ke kyu socha
Suhana ke sath meeting he ab veer ki. Sonia sath hogi kya waha ? Aur kaera kab aayegi?? Ye karea to thodi Taniya jesi lagti he mujhe. Jab pyaar karegi to uske jesa hi karegi
Yaha shreya jarur apne sapno me ghode douda rahi he. Vese dekha jaye to uski ichha abhi tak simple hi rahi he jo achhi baat he. Apni bahen ki khushi chahti he wo. Aur jab youtuber banegi to Q&A me veer ke bare me puchne par kya bolegi. Ab Nidhi aur veer ko kareeb lane ka achha chance he yaha new year pe. Shreya bhi chahegi wo bhi kuch time veer ke sath bitaye. Dekhte he.
Socho agar kaera aur Sonia veer ko lene uske pass aaye jab wo Nidhi ke sath ho. Kaera ya Sonia ko bhi ichha hogi ki New Year pe veer uske pass rahe. Nidhi, kaera aur sonia aur bich me veer. Halat kharab veer ki. Aur ghar jake veer kharab karega suman ki
Waiting for next update Werewolf bhai.
Ab tak ke update behtarren hai bhidu...veer ka system ka update bhadta hi ja raha hai ...or ab wo mission 5 pr pauch gya hai...and I think
Kal after 1 am
Writer bhaiya bde hi suspense waale hai kuch hungama krne wale hai slogan se bda
Werewolf broo u r totally awesome. Ap haar situation ko bht kamal tareeqey sy biyan krty hoo its an ability jo apko dosrey writers sy khas banati hy. Aisey hi likhtey rhoo. Or haam ko entertaint krty rhoo.
Fantastic update
Waiting for next update
Besabri se intezaar hai Bhai ... Aur Kitna tarpao gay
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Superbbb Updateee
Aakhir kaar Pari Level 5 mein pahonch hi gayi aur saath mein Veer ki bahot se naye feature bhi mil gaye.
Idher Vivek aur Pranjal jo bhi plan bana rahe hai usme Veer ko koi khatra nhi hai yeh jaan ke achha laga. Warna mujhe toh laga tha dono harami phir se Veer ko fhasayenge.
Dekhte hai yeh dono harami aakhir kyaa karte hai apne dada ke saath.
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Awesome fantastic update
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